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The Forum of Madness; The TTFF fanfic
Topic Started: Sep 20 2006, 11:35 AM (2,440 Views)
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Ryan Prower
Sep 23 2006, 06:43 PM
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Sep 23 2006, 06:01 PM
That's good people.  In stories, you want to make predictions based on known info.  Everyone has a prediction, and now you just have to wait for the next part to see if you are correct or not.

I know I am right. I asked him and he said yes

Yup, both of us got it ^_^
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Nice story TF!

However, it sorta makes me feel left out to see I wasn't there for Karrmann's death..as I care about him a lot. But oh well..it's your story. I know I will have a different part. ^^
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Riikka
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think sasuke killed karr....


splash walks in calmly XD

and i get closer to the dead body :P

i figured i would be wittier, and have a massive vocab ;) hahahaha.

TF this is a great chapter. try not to use a name so many times at the start of a new sentence. doing it so much, so fast kinda took my attention away till i read on more.

love this chapter. blows the first one out of the water, creating a massive wave of anticipation in its wake.
no reason for one...
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You should've kept that thought to yourself until the next chapter :lol:
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Riikka
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its a prediction. i only voiced it :P

i have no idea if im right.
no reason for one...
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Splash


Yes, RP and NU, I know. :) Please don't spoil it though.
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xBlackthornWolfx
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I won't. I promised I wouldn't tell
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"It's" Probably gonna be reveiled in the next 2 chapters
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Mr J
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Jiggles the random knight

Oh I've worked it out XD
What do you think of me? I want to know. :(
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DashXFox
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"Get down on all 4 worthless ones"~Dark Dash

Nice story bro it's different since it isn't script like you usually do...
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Awesome Signature Coming Soon
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Jet Prower (TF)
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I'm Jet Prower.

The Forum of Madness!

Chapter 3: The big guy!

At the end of the alley was standing Splash. He took his sunglasses off and started to walk down the alley towards the crowd. The others watched as he calmly made his way down the alley and was not freaked or seemed worried at all. He was super calm and unmoving at the moment. Splash looked down at the sheet and pulled it back seeing the dead Karrman and shook his head. “Shame, I wonder who could have killed him?”, asked Splash. “Your guess is as good as mine.” said Shifty, “And I even partially saw the killer ,yet still did not recognize him.” Splash knelt down my the body and started examining it. He looked it over very thoroughly examining every detail of the body looking for any clue for him to go by. The others just sit back and watch curiously.

Splash stood back up after a bit and turned to the group. “I found some very interesting things with this body.” said Splash. “What did you find out Splash?” asked Ranma curious to hear. Everyone paid close attention to Splash now. “Well, it’s the kill points on him. They were not bullets, they were cuts and stabs. Which means the killer is using a kunai or shuriken as his weapon. Not many people around these parts still use that weapon. There are some that do, but most cuts would be made by a sword and not these. That is a major clue right there to find out who did this.” said Splash confident in his response. “Whoa! You got all of that from just looking at a few cuts Splash!.” said Shifty kind of surprised and amazed at the same time. “It’s the texture of the cuts, they clearly show to be made by that particular weapon.” said Splash. “Man Splash, that is very perceptive of you.” said Ranma. “Thank you pal, but I still can’t tell the killer from just the murder weapon. I need more to solve the case.” said Splash. “Why don’t you take his body to the castle and let the knights examine it.” said Ranma. “Oh Splash, would you please do that. I really want to find out what happened to Karr.” said Koda looking up at Splash still a little sad at over what was happening. Splash looked back and nodded showing that he would do that for her. Koda smiled back at him and walked back over to Shifty and he put an arm around her to comfort her some. “Splash, you go ahead with the body, I am going to keep Koda calm for awhile.” said Shifty. Splashed nodded, “Sure, I’ll take care of that.” said Splash.

Ranma suddenly got a thought he just had to ask because it was kind of important, since he has seen the inside of the castle and knows his way around and the patterns of the knights well. “Splash, who is going to examine him?” asked Ranma. Splash suddenly thought of that too, because not all staff are at the castle at al times. They spread out around the city just like the mods. They had lives too, and they were going to live them. If someone was wanting to get in touch with them, they had to come find and ask them where ever they were. Plus, not all admins are on duty at all hours of the day. Some of them come close, but they are rarely there all day long.

“That really is a good question man, let’s see, Ryan and TF are probably busy at this time of the day and hard to get in touch with. There is no telling where Ray is, he could be anywhere around this city. Our best bet is either getting in touch with Sunshine or getting the queen herself.” said Splash. Ranma sat and though along with Shifty and Koda on what he just said. “I would more than likely think you should try Sunshine first before you bug the queen. She is a very busy girl.” said Koda. Everyone around all nodded agreement with Koda’s statement, because it was true. “Very well, I shall take the body to Sunshine for now, maybe I will get lucky and run into some of the others too.” said Splash. “Just be careful Splash.” said Shifty. “Don’t worry, I will.” said Splash. He walked over and picked up the body but did keep it covered ,and carried it down the ally and sat it in a nearby car. He got in, waved, put his sunglasses back on and drove away towards the castle.

Shifty still holding Koda lifted her up some and was trying to dry her tears. “Come on Koda, let’s go get you a snack or something to drink so we can get your mind off of what happened.” said Shifty. Koda smiled back at him and nodded a simple yes and they walked out of the alley and down the street to a nearby café to grab a drink. Ranma turned and went back into the city and tried to act as if nothing happened so no one in the city would suspect anything. Nightstalker did the same. He just went back to his profile house and went to sleep for awhile to try and forget what he saw, or at least not tell anyone about it.

The city was going on as normal as if nothing happened, and to most everyone in the city there was not any problems at all. They had no idea of the drama unfolding on the city right under them. They were totally oblivious to any bad things that might happen to them or to the people around them. Boy are they in for a surprise when things start to occur in rapid motion. People had never had any reason to suspect anything ,because this was a peaceful city. But, like any place in the world, there were bad people too, and they often strike when you least expect it, or when the person they are after, least expects it.

In the Sonic information district, a very popular area of the city that held a lot of the Sonic info archives that many new people find valuable, Yamanaka Ino was standing out back of one of the buildings taking a break. She was just looking around getting a breath of air, after working so hard in the archives helping all the new citizens through the archives. It was a much needed and earned break. As she was drinking her soda, she thought she heard something. She looked around, but saw nothing ,so she just dismissed it as a cat or something running around. She continued on with her Soda and enjoying her break when all of a sudden something banged her in the head. She dropped her soda and feel out cold. Out of the shadows emerged a guy wearing black clothes with evil looking eyes. He quietly walked over to her and checked to see if she was fully knocked out. After checking, he gives an evil grin and laugh and then bends down and lifts her onto his shoulder. He looks around to make sure no one was watching him. He then jumped off into the shadows again carrying Ino away with him.

………….To Be Continued.
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Very nice job, bro! It's very interesting. This is the kind of story I'd enjoy reading. =)
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Splash


Me in the story now? I'm quite honored to be in it.

A very active imagination you got there, TF. Although it wouldn't really happen in reality. :P I find it interesting, imagination is key to making a good story. I love it so far.
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Lisa
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see 'ya. ♥

Lisa loves this! ;D This is so exciting! ^^ Great job, TF! :TailsSmile:
Bye, Everyone. (:
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Mcloud1
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Hmmm, I noticed a goof in that chapter. Koda seems to actually give a crap about me, which obvisouly is not true.
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