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The Forum of Madness; The TTFF fanfic
Topic Started: Sep 20 2006, 11:35 AM (2,439 Views)
Aurorae


Oh no I am uncatious X3
I wonder who did it to me
[you]
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Trixie Prower
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TTFF's former Admin, current Dorky Anime Fan Girl.

lwow this is cool TF, i'm on edge ;D
can't wait to see what happens next ;D
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Erikku
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Run! I'm Coming For You!

Wow, look's interesting so far! I wonder if the bad guy could be Iori Yagami! o_o He wears black. I wonder what part of the story I will have.
For those who've forgotten, I am TNF!
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xBlackthornWolfx
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Great job bro. Can't wait for the next one! ;D
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Mcloud1
Aura-borialias

BTW TF, you may wanna correct that mistake I pointed out earlier.
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Riikka
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karrman people would care if someone dies...well i wont, but someone would. i don't usually mind if someone close perished. others get emotional though.

so far so good jet. wonder if i would go insane later on ;)

i love how you incorporate the history of the forum into your story. YOU ADDED THE PROFILE BUILDINGS ^^, hehehe. didn't think that convo would somehow give you ideas

your doing great with this story so far

i can not wait to hear more. as you write more, could you perhaps put more emphasis in grammar, and punctuation. did you proof the story?
no reason for one...
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Mcloud1
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No, I have a reason to say what I said, PM me for details.
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I agree with Ranma, the grammar can be improved. I see run on sentences and I see phrases that are meant to be questions, but have periods at the end.
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Splash


You can't blame his grammar problems though, he has a hard time with spelling. It doesn't have to be perfect. As long it is understandable, then that is what counts. If you can't read it and tell what they are saying, then the story is terrible, period.
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Yeah. I am not saying it needs to be perfect, but really does look better and more orgaized when everything is grammatically correct and there are few or none selling mistakes. His story is very good though, it is fun to read and it is definately fine the way it is. =)
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Shifty Powers
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I'm no hero.

I say it is good as it is now. The story is great, and it handles about us! Need more? ':D
Liberate your mind.
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Riikka
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yes i have something. your picture says image removed from photobucket XD.


anyhow I'm still anctious to see what will come next, though i have a good prediction.
no reason for one...
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Cypher
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TRIPPIN', YO!

*On edge of seat*

*Falls off*

*THUD*

Good job with the fanfic, yo.

*Passes out*
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Aurorae


Is there gonna be any updates
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Splash


Eventually. You have to wait.
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