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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 25 2006, 05:29 PM (239 Views) | |
| Riikka | Oct 25 2006, 05:29 PM Post #1 |
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its pure crud but o well updated version: Beneath what's seen with a glance There lies a heart shot with grief. It tries to please all in front, Giving into all that fight. you Hand him this world you love, Killing your soul wen'st it's gone; Watching their smiles grow wider, As your's falls into vast abyss. Would you rather hide your thoughts Than voice your cares with a friend, Letting his strengths become yours, Holding you up when in need. I have become weary of this, And wish nothing but to sleep; Close my eyes, disown the world, Accepting only my dreams. No matter where my soul has gone You, like all, can always find A face that's willing to listen; That'll give you what you need. |
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| Jet Prower (TF) | Oct 25 2006, 06:21 PM Post #2 |
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It sounds good pal, it must be good, because I don't understand it one bit, I stink at understanding poetry. ^_^ |
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| Riikka | Oct 25 2006, 06:57 PM Post #3 |
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thanks for reading it jet. its a failure, for a major reason, but thanks for reading it. |
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| Erikku | Oct 26 2006, 04:12 AM Post #4 |
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Pretty good, I think I understand it. :) |
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| Riikka | Oct 26 2006, 12:40 PM Post #5 |
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what did you get out of it? |
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| Midori | Dec 12 2006, 08:24 PM Post #6 |
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Jet has given me permission to reply in this topic ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ZOMGs I love this poem this is amazing this isnts crud sillys I especially love the last two stanzas, becuase guess understand them very well, ands can relate but i cant express how much i LOVES that last stanza xD! Definitly nice job *thumbs up and a hug* |
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| Ranger Flare | Jan 11 2007, 03:27 PM Post #7 |
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Could you maybe explain it to me, cause i have no idea what it means... |
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| Tails is a Legend | Jan 11 2007, 05:01 PM Post #8 |
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| Riikka | Jan 11 2007, 05:10 PM Post #9 |
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this got more replies o.0 i should post the slightly updated version..... and i will gladly explain it in a minute hahahah one day more and this would have been a bump! SWEET! |
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| Maxwell The Pirate | Jan 11 2007, 05:21 PM Post #10 |
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Its good. I wont go into more detail....mainly because theres always that slim chance that what I get out of poetry is completely, utterly, terribly wrong from the actual idea. But yeah! Looks good! |
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| Riikka | Jan 11 2007, 05:31 PM Post #11 |
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thank you very much for the reply, foxton. it means i dont have to edit the last post i made ;). well what i get from this is that a person is questioning another. he is asking why that person gives lets others walk over him. he may want to just make everyone happy, but not everyone can be happy. that being that when he makes the rest happy, he slowly dies from the growing load of depression packed onto his back. the speaker goes on to ask why the person wont just let him be his stregth, or help him in need. so he says he is tired, filled with frustration. he just wants to sleep, and to forget about the world that plaques him with its realities. in the end he reassure that no matter how far gone he is, he will always listen to the person, and help them in any way. thats what i got, but what did you guys get from it? |
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| Shifty Powers | Jan 11 2007, 09:21 PM Post #12 |
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Mmm, nice poem indeed. You have to re-read it one-two times to understand it. You already explained its meaning, so... I don't know what to say more. ^^; |
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| Riikka | Jan 11 2007, 09:24 PM Post #13 |
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ah, but shifty, that would only be my interpertation of the poem. poetry can be seen many ways. |
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| Shifty Powers | Jan 12 2007, 08:34 AM Post #14 |
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Well, but your views and mine are so similar. ^^; But, okay, I'll say mine. As Riikka said, it handles about a person, who wants everyone in his surroundings to be happy, and does everything to make them happy. But, he forgets himself, slowly gets tired, and falls into depressions. Because not everyone can be happy. |
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| Riikka | Jan 12 2007, 12:05 PM Post #15 |
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so you see it as one person. iteresting way to see it. i agree with it :) |
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