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| Jet Prower (TF) | Dec 20 2006, 10:26 AM Post #1 |
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(this story is my new one and can have some language in it. There may even be some very mature scenes with things involving violence, blood and sex. If you want to read the chapters with the things such as sex in them, I'll post telling it is done, but you have to pm me for it since I am not allowed to post it any other way. So, I hope this is a good enough warning. Enjoy and reply to it reviewing me.) Disclaimer: I do not own any official characters involved in this fanfic, such as Shadow, Sonic, or any other Sega characters, Any fan characters such as Darkness or any kids or other characters that I think up are all copyright to me and are not to be used without my permission. If I give you permission, you must give me full credit and I almost must have knowledge or I will report my finding immediately. ~~~~ Crimson Darkness Written by: Tails Fanatic ~~~~ Authors Notes: This is my first fanfic to write that involves these kind of things in them, but I am not a newbie to writing, I have written other stories and have read many of this type on here. Please, do not post a review if you are going to bash me or the opinions of my girlfriend as she has a hand in some ideas, but the majority of this is me though. Please enjoy it though, I have worked really hard on this. ~~~~ Chapter 1: Wonderment Shadow stood on a nearby hill looking down at the nearby city of Station Square. Shadow rarely went into the city though unless he needed to eat, then it was essential for him to enter, but otherwise he just wandered around the place not getting to close to notice he was nearby. He did this to many cities. Shadow would approach and just stand nearby and not enter. He felt not to welcome because of things he had done in the past. Shadow, at one point in time, had been really evil and done many wrong things when he listened to all of what Dr. Eggman had told him to do to be comfortable in the world. Shadow, upon hearing that someone might could bring him peace and help him complied with the doctor and willingly did the things the doctor commanded him to do. Shadow would break into buildings and willingly kill people just to fulfill his missions and get what the doctor asked him to do in hopes that his full memories of everything in his past was clear to him. Shadow’s memory was in many fragments and he only remembered bits and pieces of things from his past. The things he did remember were not too good to remember. One really bad one was of him running with a girl down a long corridor from some armed soldiers who were wanting them dead. Shadow and the girl that he knew for some reason as only Maria, ran down the hall for the escape pods. As the two of them got there, Shadow was placed in one but before he could protest it was closed without Maria in it. Shadow began yelling for Maria to get in the pod and not do this to him. She then spoke softly to Shadow as he looked at her through the glass of the tube he was trapped in. “...For all the people who live on that planet... give them a chance to be happy. Let them live for their dreams. Shadow, I know you can do it. That's the reason that you were brought into this world. Sayonara, Shadow, the Hedgehog..." With this, Shadow was released and sent to the earth, but not before he witness one of the soldiers from GUN shoot Maria, killing her. This really hurt him and haunted him always. This was the end of his memory at the moment. Shadow today was feeling hungry and was thinking he better go into the city to see about what he may find to eat. As soon as he entered the city, just as always, eyes immediately started staring at him cautiously. People had learned that he was not attacking people now, but they were so cautious that no one would associate with him. He barely got service at the places he went to, for most would not serve him. Simple fast food was usually the way to go since most of them did not care who it was as long as money was given. Shadow quietly sat alone in the back of the restaurant as he ate the burger he had ordered for himself. He sat there and stared out the window, out into the darkness and lit up nightlife of the city with a small frown on his face, but not big enough for other to worry about him. It wouldn’t have mattered anyway since he was the only one in the place since it was getting close to midnight as he sat there eating. It didn’t bother him, since he had grown used to it. Shadow did like his privacy but it sometimes seemed to be a bit too much sometimes. He hardly ever talked or did anything since he had left Eggman to go out on his own, since he no longer trusted the doctor after he had betrayed him so many times. Shadow had his own thoughts and was done with the doctor controlling him like this. When Shadow had decided he had paid a visit to the doctor that he would not soon forget. ~~~~ Shadow entered Eggman’s base as if nothing was wrong. The doctor let Shadow come walking up thinking this was just Shadow returning from one of his tasks that he sent him on, and he was just in need of a rest. Unknown to Eggman though, Shadow had his won motives with he was walking inside the base. “I am tired of the doctor telling me what to do all the time. I have grown tired of him and will show him what I think of his bossing me around and telling me what to do. It is time I live my own life and not his orders. This no longer brings me happiness, thus this is not what I must have been destined to do.”, thought Shadow as he was entering the base. He had been pondering to do this for many weeks now, and after all that time he finally is going to take his stand and fight back. Eggman was sitting going over his next scheme to conquer the world and not have Sonic interfere in it, when suddenly the door was bashed in off its bolts and thrown across the room into a pile of rubble. The doctor turned around so fast he nearly twisted his neck in such shock. “What the ****!” yelled Eggman as he saw the destruction to his door. He then was even more confused when he saw who had caused the destruction. “SHADOW!!!! WHAT’S THE MEANING OF THIS!” yelled the doctor really furious at the hedgehog at the moment. Shadow had an evil grin on his face as entered the room walking towards Eggman. As he got closer and closer, the grin started going away and was being replaced by a mad like scowl that showed the hedgehog meant serious business now. Eggman, normally calm around Shadow was actually kind of worried at what he was seeing. He tried to keep calm and at least find out what this was all about. Shadow now stood but just a few feet from the doctor staring him down. “Doctor, I have made a choice. I am not going to listen to your bidding anymore. From now on, I do things my way and no your way. I have a purpose for being in this world and after a while of doing your bidding, I know this is not it. You may have given me shelter, but that is not what I want. I can take care of myself. So, I’m out of here, but first, I think I’ll have a little fun with your precious base.” said Shadow Before Eggman could do anything Shadow was throwing chaos spears around destroying all of his machines. “NO! Shadow stop this at once!” yelled the doctor furious at what he was seeing happening around him. Shadow threw a chaos spear into the machine behind the doctor and Eggman was sent flying across the room and into one of his hard metal walls. Once Shadow had finished destroying everything he saw that looked important in the room, he walked over and picked the front half of the doctor up off the ground to make him look at him. He could pick him all the way because of Eggman’s girth, but this was good enough. Eggman looked up into Shadow’s eyes that were filled with hatred for the doctor. It was obvious this may not end to pretty for him. “Well doctor, looks like you are beaten. I knew you were truly a wimp all this time. I have been working my *** of for nothing. You are not even worthy of my time.” said Shadow. He then pulled back his fist and punched the doctor hard in the stomach and then punched him in the jaw knocking the doctor clean out with blood coming off of his lip since Shadow had split the doctor lip wide open. Shadow then released his grip on the doctor and he fell to the ground unconscious with a small patch of blood forming around the doctor’s face. Shadow then turned and walked out where the door had used to be and left the base and was heading for the country side with no resistance at all, mostly because on his way out, Shadow destroyed all robots and weapons in his site. He was going to be sure the doctor could not retaliate for a long time. Shadow had made quite sure of that as he headed off into the distance to be on his own. Unknown to Shadow, Eggman was waking up now. His lip was still bleeding some and there were some huge bruises on his stomach from where Shadow had punched him. “That **** hedgehog, look what he did to me and my base. It’s ruined.” said Eggman furious right now. He then looked up in shock. “Oh My God! Please don’t tell me he hurt my latest project.” said Eggman. He ran over to a raggedy looking bookshelf and removed one of the books and it started to turn. On the other side of the shelf was a huge tube with something inside of it. It was another hedgehog, just with one major difference, this one was a female. Eggman was relieved to see that the inactive girl was not damaged at all. The same could not be said for the rest of his base though, it was totally ruined. He could either move to another base or rebuild. He was tempted to just move on, but this project may die if moved or activated before it was ready. On the bottom was a list of her progression and her name. It simply read, Nocture. “At least Shadow missed damaging Nocture. She is only a few weeks until her growth is far enough along so that I can activate her. This may not be Shadow’s DNA used to make her, but the DNA I got will be good enough.” said Eggman. He picked up his forms and looked them over as he examined her through the tube and the liquid she floated in. “Good, good, you are growing nicely, you will be ready soon.” said Eggman as he placed the folders back and shut her back into her dark area behind the bookcase to continue developing. “This will be my most brilliant plan ever. Using the DNA of the one they call Amy Rose, my new Project: Nocture will go out and take care of her, kill or capture makes no difference to me, but with her gone and in my possession, Sonic will have no choice but to surrender to me. This plan is perfect. Screw Shadow, he was not essential to the plan anyway. Soon, my plan will go in effect and with that hedgehog out of my way, I shall finally be able to start on my plans for global conquest and I can finally start my Eggman Empire that I have wanted for so long. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” laughed Eggman evilly as he started making robots to begin work on cleaning and repairing his base. ~~~~ Shadow sat in his seat eating his burger still reflecting on how he got to this position he was in. He lived and slept where ever he could. He ate when he had the money to, and just wandered from city to city not really having anywhere to go to. He was basically all alone with no where to go looking for his place to belong. Shadow hasn’t even had contact with Sonic or any of the others since he left Eggman’s base. This brought his spirits down even more because he couldn’t even spar or fight with the blue hedgehog. It actually made him feel livelier to occasionally have a fight with someone, but if he fought now with anyone other than the ones he knew, he might become a fugitive and he was still trying to get people to trust him, which was not going to well at all. Just then someone entered the fast food joint. It was someone that Shadow was not familiar with. It was a female Black hedgehog. Her bangs on the top of her head were a dark red, and also the bottom half of her hair on her head had that same darkish red color to it. The rest of her body was black with occasional grey in parts. She was wearing a blue dress and skirt with a pair of long blue boots on her feet. She also had a power ring wrapped around each of her arms at her wrist. She looked familiar to someone he had seen in the past, but it was definitely not her though. Shadow watched at the hedgehog walked over to cashier to place and order and get something to eat. She ordered a burger just like he had and she soon got her food and started to find a place to sit. That is when she finally noticed him there and actually made her way over to him. Shadow wondered why she would actually be approaching him and not running away or to eat at another corner of the restaurant, but none the less, she was heading straight for him. She was soon there at his table looking down at him. “Um, hi there, Shadow isn’t it?” asked the girl inquiring of him. Shadow kind of fiddled one of his fries around and then looked up to her. “Yes, that would be me.” said Shadow answering her plain and simple. “Do you mind if I sit with you here? There is no one else here and I hate sitting alone.” said the girl. Shadow sometimes didn’t like strangers, because you never know what you could be getting yourself into if you start talking with just any body that walks up, but him not having a decent conversation with anyone in a few weeks, was kind of taking its toll on him. So a conversation may not be so bad. “I guess you can sit.” said Shadow nodding to her. “Why thank you.” said the girl taking a seat across from him. “So, what brings someone like you into this place at such a late hour of the night?” asked the girl. Shadow just looked around the place now not really wanting to answer but he couldn’t help it. “I’m just here for a meal and then I’ll be on my way.” said Shadow eating some of his fries in front of him. He had already finished his burger and half of his drink, so he was almost ready to go. “By the way, my name is Darkness, if you even wanted to know.” said Darkness smiling at Shadow as she began eating some of her burger. Shadow continued eating some more acting as if he had not heard and then looked up. “I see, Darkness huh, nice name.” said Shadow actually commenting her some. “Thank you Shadow, yours is a nice name too.” said Darkness smiling happily at him. Shadow usually didn’t complement people like that. Maybe there was something about this girl that didn’t annoy him or something, because all was not going nuts at her sitting there with him. He then looked up again. “Why are you out so late?” asked Shadow inquiring. “I’m a bit of a night owl. I prefer to do things late, so as to avoid a lot of the rush. Plus, I like looking at the city all lit up at night.” said Darkness. Shadow had never really paid much attention to all the lights outside in the city. He was usually only concerned with food and nothing else, so he could be in and out of the city as quickly as possible. “I see, at least you have a good excuse, better than mine would ever be.” said Shadow. Darkness seemed confused at this as she continued eating. “You seem a little depressed about something Shadow. You care to talk about it?” asked Darkness taking a sip of her drink. Shadow was not going to tell her the truth about everything, especially his visions or memories, because people always thought of him as insane when he told anyone about what was going through his mind. Some things were just better left unsaid. “Yes, I do have things on my mind, but I would rather not mention them and burden you with my problems.” said Shadow. He hated saying his feelings so much. They hurt him and burdening someone else with them was not something he wanted to put on another person. “Are you sure? I’m always willing to listen if you want to talk to me.” said Darkness a little concerned for him. “I’m perfectly fine. I just really do not know you good enough and my problems are really complex, and like I said, It would just be to much of a burden for you to listen to all of my problems.” said Shadow sighing some as he was finishing the last of his fries. “I understand. You don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to. I have my share of private matters that I wouldn’t tell you about, so I know to respect a person’s privacy.” said Darkness. Shadow looked just then surprised that she agreed with him. Most people when they notice he seems to have a lot on his mind, they press and press him trying to help him, but not this girl. She wasn’t pushing him at all. She was giving him his space and letting him do things the way he wanted to do them. This was a relief to him, because he could relax a little more with her around him. Shadow looked down just at this moment and saw that all his food was gone which really gave him no reason to still be sticking around. He then started putting everything back into a pile on his tray looking like he was getting ready to get up and just leave Darkness sitting there. “Are you leaving Shadow?” asked Darkness looking at him piling his stuff on his tray. “I’m finished with my meal, so there is no reason for me to hang around any longer than I need to.” said Shadow. He was starting to stand up and make his way to the garbage to get rid of his trash so he could leave. He hadn’t noticed though that Darkness though had gotten up not to far behind him seeming to almost follow him. Shadow noticed her waiting to dump off her stuff in the trash behind him. “What are you doing? Your not finished.” said Shadow. It was true, she barely ate any of her food, only a little bit of her fries and few bites of her burger. “I’m not that hungry. I um, ate earlier.” said Darkness. Shadow wondered why she stuttered some, but just ignored it and moved aside so she could dumb her garbage into the trash. After Darkness dumped it into the trash, she walked over to Shadow. He was already walking out the door though. He was trying to get out as fast as he could though. Darkness followed him outside. He was almost just trying to walk off, but he turned to her as he was walking. “ See ya.” said Shadow as he was about to run off into the darkness of the city and then beyond. “Shadow wait!” yelled someone behind him. He turned to see Darkness holding her hand up to him trying to halt him from going anywhere yet. Shadow turned back to her to see what was the matter. “Yes, what is it Darkness?” asked Shadow staring at her wanting to know kind of quick from the tone of his voice. Darkness walked back over towards him then looking concerned. “Um, Shadow, where are you staying that night at? It is late, and from the looks of the sky, I don’t think it will be nice out for long.” asked Darkness worried for where he could be staying. She was right about one thing though, the sky had many dark clouds in the sky. It was going to be storming any minute now and if Shadow was out wandering the country side, he would get soaked. “I don’t know, but I will find a place so no need to worry about me ok.” said Shadow as he was about to turn and run off again but his arm was grabbed by Darkness. Shadow turned and looked at her wondering what she was doing. “What are you doing?” asked Shadow. Darkness looked up at him. “I know this may seem odd, but I have a guest bed at my house. If you want, you can come over to my apartment and you can sleep on it. It is a fold out couch into a bed, but it would be better for you to be on that than out here in the pouring rain and getting soaked.” said Darkness. Shadow then looked up to the sky and also noticed all the storm clouds above him. She had a point, the last time he had been outside when it looked like this, he was cuddled in a hallow tree and was freezing half to death as the rain poured hard down outside as he was huddled there miserable. he basically had two choices, stay out here and relieve that miserable moment, or go home with this girl he really doesn’t know and sleep in a comfortable bed, something he had not done in a long while. Shadow kind of missed sleeping in a bed. The last time he slept in one was the night before he decided to betray Eggman and go out on his own. He now was sleeping where ever he could, in trees, in bushes, or on benches, anywhere was good, but an opportunity to sleep in a bed with covers and pillow was something that was hard for him to refuse, especially considering the circumstances he was under at the moment. He then made his choice. “Well, I usually don’t do this, but considering the circumstances, I would rather not be outside during this storm. I’ll come home with you and sleep on your couch.” said Shadow. Darkness looked happy now that she was going to be able to help him some. Shadow then turned around ready to go with her instead of just running off like he had been planning on doing. “Do you mind walking?” asked Darkness to Shadow. Anyone that knew Shadow knew he wasn’t much of a walker, so anyone could have seen this coming. “I would rather run there instead of walking, plus it looks like it is about to start raining any second now.” said Shadow. Darkness suddenly remembered that he liked speed so she could understand why he would want to run and not walk. “Ok, but I can’t run that fast. You may have to carry me.” said Darkness to Shadow. The thing that Shadow didn’t know though was Darkness was fibbing a bit here. Darkness could run slightly fast, but she thought “Why not since you don’t get a chance to be around someone like this every day, so why not ask.” Shadow hearing that she was not that fast, decided he would have to carry her if she could not run as fast as him. Shadow bend down some and gently picked her up into his arms. “Tell which way to go.” said Shadow holding Darkness in his arms. Darkness gently wrapped her arms around Shadow and laid her head down onto his shoulder. She was quiet comfortable with the position she was in. “Just follow the road down some and it is the apartment with the bus stop across the street from it.” said Darkness. Shadow didn’t know why, but he didn’t mind holding her there in his arms. It made him feel like he was really strong and she was so weak. Shadow then took off running holding Darkness close to him. Darkness held on tight to him so that she would not fall off. Shadow ran down the street at high speed. There were really no cars out at this hour, so he only flew by like one or two cars on his way to her place. He soon saw a bus stop and made a quick stop. Darkness felt him stop but she didn’t let go though. She was kind of liking being in his embrace and felt as if she didn’t want to leave it. She knew she would, but it felt so good to her that she continued to hold onto him happily. “Um, you can let go now.” said Shadow trying to make her let go so they could go into the house. At that moment there was a loud burst of thunder ,signaling to them that it was about to start pouring out here, kind of startled Darkness as she clung onto Shadow a little tighter obviously frightened by the thunder. Shadow could feel her fear as he still held her in his arms. He gently lowered her to the ground and gave her a pat on the back. “Your ok, it’s only thunder. Come on, let’s go in before you get soaked by the rain.” said Shadow letting her go. Darkness smiled as Shadow said these words to her. He seemed to care at least a little bit so she willingly nodded letting him go and started walking up her four steps to her house up to her front door. She fiddled in her pockets looking for her keys and eventually found them in her back pocket and unlocked the door to her apartment and went inside. Shadow walked into the apartment behind Darkness as she entered in front of him. Her apartment was about an average size for an apartment in the city. Her apartment was made up of four rooms like any apartment is usually made of. There was her living room, made of her couch bed, two chairs to the side of it, a coffee table in the center, and a medium size tv by the wall viewable from the couch. There was a kitchen that was attached to the living room so you could see into the living room from the kitchen because they were basically the same room. There was a refrigerator with a freezer on top of it, a stove and oven combination, many cabinets and a small pantry for her to store things in. There was her bedroom, which he didn’t go in but for a second on his way to the bathroom when he got in. Her bedroom had a dresser with clothes all inside of it that he didn’t see. There was a large bed with black covers and red pillows looking out from the covers at the top. It was obvious she was the decorator since her things matched her appearance, mainly her bed. Her bathroom was not that big though. Just big enough to get what was needed done in there. There was a bathtub with no shower. There was a spray attachment that you could use, but it looked like she preferred a bath over it since it was not attached. There was a toilet, a sink and a medicine cabinet for private things that Darkness used. After Shadow came out of the bathroom and headed back into the living room, some rain could be heard string to the hit outside the windows. It was obvious that they had made it home just in time because any later and they would be stuck out in that. Shadow was happy to be inside a nice warm home. He had not been in a regular house ever. He had only been in rooms on the Ark that he barely remembered at all and sleeping in the rooms that Eggman provided for him to sleep in, so this was a welcome change to him. Darkness gave a small yawn as she sat on the couch seeming to wait on him to come out of her bathroom so she could get herself ready for bed herself. Shadow walked over and sat on the couch next to her. “You look tired.” said Shadow. Darkness gave another yawn as she sat there her eyes a little heavy. “I am, I had a really busy day and night, so I am exhausted” said Darkness. “Then you should go to bed. I can pull out the bed here, you get some rest, I’ll be fine in here by myself.” said Shadow. Darkness really couldn’t argue with this, because she knew he could handle himself without her. “Ok Shadow, the blankets and pillows for the bed are in the small closet over there.” said Darkness as she got up stretching. “Goodnight Shadow.” said Darkness as she headed into her bedroom to go to sleep. “Goodnight Darkness.” said Shadow as he got up to make his own bed. Shadow turned and removed the cushion on the couch and pulled out the bed after he moved the coffee table out of the way. It was a plain bed, but he was not picky. It was a bed and it was a lot more comfortable than a tree or the ground. Shadow walked over and opened the closet and found the covers and pillows and he walked over and placed them on the bed. After Shadow had had a bit of struggle trying to put them onto the bed he got himself a small drink of water and walked back over to the bed and calmly got into the bed and lay down. Shadow looked really relaxed now under the covers and head laying n a pillow. He really missed this feeling and was so glad he agreed to come here, because it was really coming down outside now. It wasn’t long though before Shadow was fast asleep on the bed. He was breathing calmly and he was really warm under his covers. The rain was continuing to pour which helped him sleep even more, because rain falling against a house late at night could put almost anyone asleep and he was no different there. In the next room, Darkness was fast asleep under her covers happy that she was home. Suddenly though there was a very loud burst of thunder that startled her massively waking her up quickly. She was kind of afraid of thunder and really didn’t want to be alone at this moment. That was when she remembered that Shadow was in the other room. She didn’t know how he would react, but she had to ask. She quickly got up and ran out of her room and into the living room. Darkness walked over to Shadow and gave him a gentle shake to wake him up. “Shadow, Shadow, are you awake?” asked Darkness trying to wake up. Shadow didn’t take much to wake up, but was obviously not happy about it since he woke up grumbling. “What is it Darkness?” asked Shadow. Darkness looked at him shivering some a little scared from the thunder and lighting going on outside because of the storm. “Cccan I sleep with you, please” said Darkness looking innocently at him. Shadow looked up and saw the look on her face. It was a face of terror and timidity. Shadow really didn’t want to share but the face she was giving him he didn’t think he could resist. Shadow finally looked up to her. “I guess you sleep here Darkness.” said Shadow scooting over to make room for her. Darkness lay down in the bed right next to Shadow and got under the covers and started sharing the pillow he was using. Darkness started smiling now, because she felt a lot safer that she was next to him. She felt more secure since there was a strong man here all next to her. Shadow then tried to go back to sleep without saying anything else. He didn’t care if there was a girl in his bed, all he cared about was getting some sleep. Darkness though was not falling asleep though. She just kind of stared at Shadow happy that he was there with her. That was when she gave him another small shake which made him open his eyes again to look at her. “What is it now?” asked Shadow. Darkness just looked at him with her head not that far from him. “Do you want to chat some Shadow instead of sleep Shadow?’ asked Darkness. ~~~~ TF- Hope you enjoyed the first chapter, don’t worry, it is going to heat up soon. I wonder what Darkness wants to talk about with Shadow. There will be much more to this story later on, so stick around if you want to discover the fate of Shadow and other surprises that may be coming his way. |
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| Twister Prower | Dec 20 2006, 10:55 AM Post #2 |
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aww... so cute, I wonder, will tyhere be any hanky panky? |
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| Berry "Blue" Foxxy | Dec 20 2006, 12:24 PM Post #3 |
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TTFF's #1 ShadAmy Hater. WOOT! Karin Maaka^^
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OMFG you posted it!? xD YAY! *hugs TF* |
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| Scurge The UW3 | Dec 22 2006, 09:49 AM Post #4 |
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good story you seemed to catch Shadow's persanalty prety good so good that you almost think you are Shadow himself |
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| Jet Prower (TF) | Dec 24 2006, 12:49 PM Post #5 |
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(Here is the next one guys, please review.) Crimson Darkness Written by Tails Fanatic ~~~~ TF- Here is the next chapter everyone. I do wish I got some reviews to know how I’m doing in this. I will write when I can. I am getting ideas all the time so these will come out when I am through thinking and get to actually writing. Enjoy my work everyone. ~~~~ Chapter 2: Tortured Soul Shadow opened his eyes when he heard Darkness start trying to talk to him. He gently changed his direction in the bed so that his head was now facing her as it lay there on the pillow. “I would rather be sleeping Darkness. What is it you want? I already let you sleep in this bed with me.” said Shadow. There was a bit of a silence from both of them for a bit as they looked into each others eyes before there was anymore speaking. “I was wondering if you just wanted to talk about things, since well, I don’t think I can get back to sleep at the moment with all that lightning and thunder outside. I’ve always been afraid and with it going on, I’m not going to sleep anytime soon.” said Darkness. Shadow just looked over at her as she lay there and talked about her fear of thunder and lightning. He could understand kind of, but since it had never terrified him, he didn’t know what to quite make of it. Some thunder has startled him before, but he was not terrified like she seemed to be. The hedgehog figured since the girl wanted to talk, it was doubtful that he was going to get any sleep with her like this. He had been kind enough to let her sleep in the same bed as him, be he really didn’t know what to talk about since he had not talked with someone for this long like this. He was out of practice and really hoped if he did talk, he could think of at least something to say. “Fine, what do you want to talk about?” said Shadow as he adjusted himself in the bed for a conversation that he really was unsure on how it would go. Darkness adjusted herself too and looked right at him. “Where have you been all this time Shadow? I used to see you in the news all the time, but in the past few months, you have not been in it once. Where have you been?” asked Darkness staring right at him. Shadow tiled his head back breaking eye contact with her and looking staring at the ceiling now. He was starting to have a few doubts about this now. “I don’t think I should. I really don’t feel too good about bringing up my past in a conversation. I am constantly trying to forget a lot about my past, so I try not to dwell on it by talking about it.” said Shadow just staring at the ceiling and following a small crack in it across the room. Darkness looked at him worried by the way he was acting. “Did something happen to you in these last months Shadow? You are not acting the same as you used to from the looks of the videos I have seen about you on tv.” said Darkness. She saw how he was now staring at the ceiling and looked so concerned about him. Shadow’s eyes turned and looked at her worried face after the question she had just asked him. He felt really bad about this, because he figured this was not the right thing to be doing. He was in so much pain in his mind from past events in the few months since he ran off from Eggman. His mind was really working on him and it was starting to take its’ toll. “Shadow, come on, just tell me. You don’t have to be scared of me.” said Darkness again trying any way to comfort him. He sighed some this time and turned to look at her again. “I have been treated really badly for the past few months.” said Shadow sighing some and pulling the covers closer around him trying to make himself feel better any. Shadow was just sitting cringing some because of his past when a hand suddenly is softly placed on his should. He looks up suddenly and sees Darkness has put a hand on his shoulder. He was startled by it at first, but finally got used to it and seemed to relax just a bit. Darkness’ touch seemed to be having a slight affect on him. Shadow finally gave a small smile and touched his hand to hers giving it a small pat and gently moved it off of him. “Thanks, I needed that. I guess after all I have been though these past few weeks I am not that crazy about talk it at all since some of it was not that great.” said Shadow. His sigh had gone away and a plain expression came onto his face showing that he was at least comfortable now and not freaking out. Darkness smiled glad that she was at least able to do something for the hedgehog she had invited in. She was so happy that she had brought him home and let him sleep here. Not only was she getting a person to talk to and keep her company during the storm, she seemed to be helping him relax some. And from the looks of him from what she had already seen, he really needed it. “I’m not going to force you to tell me Shadow, but maybe talking about it will help you get over what happened to you. If you hide everything within, it will eventually build up and you may drive yourself into a depression that would be hard to get out of.” said Darkness giving him a small speech. She was hoping that her word would help him enough that he would eventually open up to her, but she would be glad if he would at least tell her something. He wouldn’t have to tell her everything, but something would be good, because it would be a breakthrough at least. Shadow took all of this inside and thought it over. He then nodded to her suddenly and smiled. This was something that she was not expecting. Had she just gotten through to him? From the way he was acting it would seem like he was relaxing now and seemed comfortable with her presence now. “Are you going to talk Shadow? I just want to help you is all.” said Darkness. She reached out and put her hand back onto his shoulder once again calming him and relaxing him back down. Shadow just continued looking at her and then finally started speaking. “None of it is easy to talk about.” The hedgehog lay back on his back looking at the ceiling trying to get comfortable as he talked. Shadow started to look nervous then as he looked like he was stumbling with the words to say. “Take your time Shadow, I am not rushing you. Go at your pace.” said Darkness. She had small smiled on her face gave him a gentle rub on his arm closest to her. It worked too because he soon was in total relaxation as she rubbed his arm. “Alright, I’ll tell you about what has been going on with me for these past few months, but I have to warn you, a lot of it is not going to be to pretty.” said Shadow. Darkness didn’t care and continued slowly rubbing his arm. “I don’t care, just go ahead, I’m here so don’t feel alone as you speak. This will let me know the best way to know how to comfort you.” said Darkness giving him a smile. Shadow gave her a small smile back before turning to the ceiling again. He was going to look at the ceiling during the story, because he though if he looked anywhere else, he may either lose it or break down into a sob and he didn’t want that, because the stuff he was about to tell was miserable to him and stuff he wished to forget. He then finally began to speak to Darkness. ~~~~ ~Flashback~ Shadow had recently left the base where he had just beaten Eggman and torn the place to shreds. He looked back and grinned evilly at what he had just done. “**** that Eggman, he got what he deserved. I could have killed his sorry ***, but I am in no mood to get blood all in my fur. If he tries anything else against me, I’ll strangle his big, fat neck and twist his head off until snaps off and leave him a huge lump of dead **** all over the floor if he ever comes near me or my life again.” said Shadow in anger towards the person that had brought him so much anger in his life. The black and crimson colored hedgehog then sped off towards the nearest city, which just happened to be Westopolis. As the hedgehog neared the city, he stopped and looked it over. The last time he had been here, he was not really welcomed and he figured things would not be the same, because no one will have known about him breaking ties off with Eggman unless the doctor announced it to everyone, and he doubted the doctor was going to do that, because that would help Shadow and Eggman would want him to suffer for this. Shadow quietly walked into Westopolis to see how welcomed he would be. But the second the hedgehog was a bit in the city and some of its citizens got a good look at him, there was panic and screaming for the police going on all around him. The black hedgehog tried to tell someone that he was not here to make trouble but the police saw him holding the man and though he was about to harm him and fired in his general direction as a warning. Shadow released the man and headed down an alley way and down other side streets as he heard the police roaming around the city looking for him. GUN troops happened to be in the city too so they were on the look out for the black hedgehog too. Shadow was in a hidden alley way sitting on the wet ground waiting until the activity settled down before he would look for a way back out of the city. Shadow was waiting there when suddenly there was a rustle and someone standing there next to him holding a knife at him. “You don’t move! Give me everything you got and you can live.” said someone next to him. He looked up and there was tall rough looking rabbit covered in rags and holding a knife in his hand at the hedgehog acting like he would stab him. Shadow got back to his feet and looked at the rabbit across from his and just turned his other cheek and started to walk away from him without a concern. The rabbit then lunged at Shadow with intent to stab him, but suddenly the rabbit was hit with kick right in his gut that knocked the wind right out of him. He then received an upper cut to the chin and was sent flying into a wall hard knocking him out and probably breaking his jaw at the same time too as he fell limp letting go of the knife. “Pitiful.” Shadow said. He then took to the streets and headed quickly out of the city before anyone could spot him. He turned and took one look back and at the glowing city and headed off into the hills of the night. He didn’t know where he would sleep, but wherever he could find though would have to do for now. Shadow had to for about a week either sleep on the ground under a tree or up in the tree depending on how he felt and the temperature of the air around him. He had no money and had lost a little weight too. He was barely eating much, because he had no money to buy food for himself. He was relying mostly on tree fruit to keep him nourished, but it was getting close to winter so there was not much left. He had to find a better way because soon all food would run dry and he would not have any food and maybe starve to death if he didn’t do anything soon. Shadow had stumbled one day across a newspaper from one of the nearby small towns. He picked it up and started reading it. He came across one thing that did give him a bit of interest. It was an article for something called recycling. You were to bring many thinks to this center in the town and they would pay you for it, not much, but it would be enough to at least feed him he figured. After discovering a bit more about this recycling he had started spending a bit of time at the nearby dump rummaging though trash looking for things to take to the place, just so he could give them a bag of it for just a few cents, but that few cents would keep him fed and alive and that was what mattered. not his personal hygiene, just the fact that he would live. The hedgehog knew he had the strength to just mug someone or even kill someone for their money, but he was trying to improve his reputation some and that would not help him at all. It would only convince many more that he was a bad person and make more people want to catch him, so this was all he could do for now to help himself. Shadow was earning a bit of money to feed himself from these trips back and forth from the dump and the town, but it was far too little for him to buy a place to stay, so outside was still his residence. He didn’t mind most of the time because outside was a pleasant and quiet place to be at time, but at others though, outside could be the worse place in the whole world to be. On some nights, it would begin to rain, at first Shadow would just climb up into the tree to escape the rain, and this worked sometimes, but not all of time though. If the rain was going hard enough the tree was no protection at all and he would start getting wet. He would quickly run off and try and find a safe place to stay. This was not an easy task to do when it is pouring down rain and you are soaking wet, more so at night. During daylight hours, Shadow could usually take shelter in a store or some place like that where he was trusted. A lot of store in the smaller towns would allow him in to stay, because he was usually a customer and not going to hurt them, so he was welcome to stay for awhile. Night though brought a different thing to him though in the fact that no one usually opens up there doors to a stranger at the dead of night in the pouring rain. At night usually his only escape would be inside a hallow tree, there were no bridges since it was mostly a river less area he was hanging out in, so fishing was out too. A tree trunk was the best thing to stay in, but it was really unpleasant to say the least. Shadow would be hunkered up in a ball at night kind of cold because of the temperature drop the rain brought. He usually would stare out at the rain and frown as he lay there cold and miserable. This was one of the worse feelings he had ever felt in his life. He was free yet so alone. He would lay there so miserable, rain or not, with no one around to talk to or even comment about. The only talk he usually ever had was with the people at the recycling center or the people at the local stores that knew him as a regular. Other than these people, no one ever spoke to the hedgehog. He was all alone with no one at all there to comfort him or give him company. He was alone. He had one day when he was about to come out of the tree caught a glimpse of a blue blur coming towards where he was. He knew immediately who this was. It was Sonic the hedgehog. He could not let the blue hedgehog see him or trouble may start, because Shadow still did hate him some. He knew a lot of this was still because of the things Eggman had told him about the hedgehog, but he had thrown a lot of those aside, but he still hated the hero for his own personal reasons. He stayed still and hidden and soon the blue blur was gone and he felt safe for a little bit and relieve, but then he seemed to feel alone yet again. After another week of being in these little country towns, Shadow finally departed the area in search of a new area to reside around. He had soon come across Station Square. This city was not as big as Westopolis, but it was still a big city to him. He was hoping things would go better around here and hoped there was not a repeat of what happened to him during his visit to Westopolis. As the hedgehog entered the city, he was greeted with the same stares that he received last time, but no one was running at him or screaming. Everyone just stared and were talking to each other wondering what the black hedgehog would be doing here in the city and why he was not already tearing it to pieces. A police officer soon approached Shadow and stood there defensively seeing if he was going to attack him or not. When Shadow did he loosened his guard and started to speak to the hedgehog. “So, Shadow the Hedgehog huh, what brings you here and also, why are you not going crazy as we all have seen in the past.” The officer looked really interested to know why someone he had seen act so crazy and destructive in the past, was acting like this and not attacking anyone. Shadow just looked up at the person knowing he could just take him down and do what he wanted, but he decided he better play it safe if he wanted free roam of the city. “I have come here not to make trouble. I am here just to eat and try and find refuge. You people don’t have to worry about me, I will not cause any trouble.” said the hedgehog trying to be as honest as he could. The officer looked really confused at the hedgehog’s response, “But why? Aren’t you working for the evil doctor Eggman?” asked the officer. This sparked Shadow’s attitude off but he was going to try and keep his cool though. “I don’t work for that ******* any longer. I am a roaming doing things my own way, not what that man tells me to do.” said Shadow with his hand in a fist obviously really mad at thinking about the doctor right now. The officer hearing this backed up a tad just to give the hedgehog some space, and then looked down at him again to speak more. “If you truly are not going to attack us, you are free to roam the city, but any funny business and the city police will come after you and call GUN in too, but if you behave, we will not have a reason to do that.” said the officer to the black hedgehog before him. Shadow just gave a small nod and started to walk away and into the city. He understood what the officer meant and would try not to cause trouble. He knew that he would have to go back on the run if he started making trouble, so for now, trouble was not an option he could consider at all if he wanted to survive at all. The city was not that much better than the country was because there were lots of people around here. He had lost a lot of the feeling of being alone on the outside, but it still remained inside, because he knew that the people all knew him from things they had seen from the past, but he didn’t know any of them, so he didn’t have anyone still to talk to. He had places to eat now so he was not going to starve, but finding a place to stay was hard, because everywhere required money to be able to live there, and Shadow barely had enough to feed himself one meal a day. Usually that was all fast food, because all of it was really cheap there, even if it was not the best food in the world, it would keep him alive and nourished to keep going on. Shadow was mostly stuck out on the streets sleeping or going out of the town and sleeping in trees again. He hung around this city though, since this city was not as aggressive as others were towards him. He was able to live without fear of people trying to get him, but no one in the city would ever let him stay in any house without money. Shadow tried desperately to find a place to sleep, but no one was going to let him stay there. He was going to have to make do still with where ever he could. Eating with money he got from recycling still since it was the only way he knew to get the money he needed to eat other than hurting people, but he couldn’t do that or risk getting kicked out of the city. He was going to have to make do with his life for now, until something came up that would help him or he would be like this for a very long time and he did not want that at all. ~End of Flashback~ ~~~~ Darkness was in total shock at heading all of this. It was such a horrible and sat story that she almost cried at one point. She understood why Shadow had had such a hard time getting ready to tell it now. It was a horrible story, and it obviously had affected his mind some being all alone and living on the streets for awhile like that. Shadow looked stressed out now and really upset and depressed. “My goodness Shadow, I had no idea that you have had such a hard past few months. You poor dear, you must be hurting inside so bad.” said Darkness looking at the sad looking Shadow. He gave a small nod and turned away from her again looking really depressed and alone like he has felt for these past months. That was until he felt an arm start to wrap around him. Shadow shook a tad in fright when he felt someone touching him, but suddenly the touch was felt easy and relaxing. It seemed to be soothing his soul just a bit as he felt a type of comfort he had never felt before. He eyes turned and there was Darkness with her arms wrapped lightly around him hugging close to his back. Shadow was really confused by this action. No one had ever really hugged him since the girl from his past, Maria. He had not felt comfort and ease like this for such a long time. He didn’t know how to really react to it, but his body was starting to get so relaxed, signaling to him that this was a good thing for him. Darkness held Shadow in an embracing hug holding his back close to her body. She could feel him tense up at first, but then he was starting to relax as she held on to him. She could tell what she was doing was having the desired affect she was wanting it to have. She lay her head near on of his shoulders and held on ever so softly. Shadow felt relaxed but confused at the same time. “Darkness, why are you doing this to me?” he asked her in a low voice. She gently rubbed onto his chest fur as she kept her arms around him. “I’m trying to comfort your soul. After all of what you want through, you need a loving friend to heal your tortured soul Shadow.” said Darkness. Shadow did feel hurt and alone inside. He had not talked with anyone in a long time in any long and good way. He had not had anyone show him any things that looked like care at all. It felt really good and didn’t push her off. He had grown to like this and actually started smiling as she continued to hold him in her comforting embrace. “You feeling better Shadow?” asked Darkness as she continued to hold Shadow so lightly. She felt all his muscles relaxing and him seaming to get more comfortable too “I really like this Darkness, it feels so good and I for some reason am so relaxed.” said Shadow as he then turned himself around so he was facing her now and looking at her face to face. Darkness looked into his eyes and could see a lot of sorrow and misery in those eyes. He seemed to be calling out for help from the look those eyes had on her. She continued hugging on to him to give him as much comfort as she possibly could and he was willingly wanting it because it felt really good to feel someone showing him care instead of anger and hatred that he was used to so often. “Shadow, I can tell from your eyes that you have had some hard times in your life, but just think now though. I’m here. I will be your friend. You will not be alone anymore and you don’t have to be scared to open up to me, because I will never judge you. I only want to help you get over what ever is bothering you. So, just relax and be at peace Shadow. I’m here now.” Darkness said all this and then leaned over and gave Shadow another hug and he just seems to fall into her arms in total relaxation. Shadow’s eyes looked heavy as he remained in her embrace and lat there continuing the hug. “Thank you Darkness. You really have helped me some. You have no idea how much I have been through. It has been really hard you know?” said Shadow not letting go of her yet. Neither one of them seemed to want to let go of the other one, because both of them were totally relaxed in the others arms. Finally Darkness let go of Shadow but remained close to him still so that he could feel her presence still close to him. He looked up after the hug ended and smiled at her. He was glad she was still there with him, because she really was making him feel better and more relaxed after all that had happened to him over these past few weeks. “Shadow, I’m glad I brought you here tonight so that I could help ease some of your pain, and thank you for letting me be near you here during this storm. I don’t know why it scares me, but it does, but not when you’re here with me though.” said Darkness now snuggling up next to him. Shadow didn’t push her away though. He let her be close to him. He had to admit, this girl was helping him and bringing him the care and comfort he had been wanting. Maybe tomorrow they could see if they could do more things and become pals, because this really felt good to him and he really didn’t want her to leave him, because he liked this feeling, and he hadn’t felt like this in a long time. He was glad he was though, because he liked it a lot. Soon the two of them started falling asleep next to each other. First Shadow fell asleep looking relaxed against his pillows and warm under his covers. Darkness saw him fall asleep and wrapped her arms back around him softly seeing him smile in his sleep. She lay her head close to him and fell asleep herself. That is how they spent their first night together. Arms were wrapped around each other and feeling really safe with no concerned for the storm outside anymore, just the two of them and total relaxation. ~~~~ TF- Hope you enjoyed the chapter. Darkness really seems to be doing Shadow some good. He has had a hard life, but what could become of his life now that Darkness is in it. 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| xBlackthornWolfx | Dec 24 2006, 07:18 PM Post #6 |
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Great job bro. I don't really see anything to inprove on. It's very well written. Your very good at expressing Shadow's feelings. Keep up the good work. ^_^ |
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| DashXFox | Dec 26 2006, 04:24 PM Post #7 |
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Awwww that's really cute Bro^^ I was expecting something dirty but i guess you haven't gotten there yet xD Im glad i have a real gf cuz i know how all that feels^^ except sleeping haven't gotten the time to do that.. anyways i hope Nocture doesn't see this xD know what i mean xD not that she exists yet but still xD Good job Big Brother^^ Your writing is superb! But im just gonna slowly take back the comic title xD |
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| Riikka | Dec 29 2006, 09:46 AM Post #8 |
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i stopped at "Shadow entered Eggman’s base as if nothing was wrong." overall i liked how you developed shadow's character, as one that was alienated from society. he was there, but shunned away. the part that built that up a lot was the fast food part. where he is looking out of the window, into the darkness through the lights of the night life. oh wow. every sentence in the first two paragraphs and the first sentence of the third, all start with the word shadow. hmm the first paragraph also seems choppy and redundant. i would recommend editing a few sentences here and there. on a lighter note, i love the imagery i get from the forth paragraph. just as the pod bursts away from the ship, he looks to see the guard run up, the cold touch of the bullet chilling her :). thats what i pictured from your writing ^_^. it was a good paragraph. towards the last paragraph i read, you fell back into using shadow to start many sentences. there was also in a few spots of the writing, words that seemed odd, when read. perhaps rereading it once, would show you what i mean. overall the first bit was good (to the first ~~~~). good enough to let me want to read more when i get time. hmm that was another thing i liked. though its a wall of text, i can pick a spot to stop because you strategically placed ~~~~ in key areas, where the tone, mood, or where it jumps. it makes it easier to read. ^_^ nice job jet, and i'll read the rest of the first post later. _______________________________________________ i read the second part, and it was ok. i did not however get a clear picture of nocture. i am assuming she is a baby at that point though |
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| Cosmo X Tails LOVER | Jan 3 2007, 01:22 PM Post #9 |
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I definatly think this is extreamly cute, and its such a great read Format: 4.3/5 Story: 5/5 Direct Read: 4.1/5 Concept: 5/5 Attention To Detail: 3.9/5 Total: 4.46/5 AWSOME JOB PAL MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! (oh dont forget to send me the dirty stuff xD) |
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| Berry "Blue" Foxxy | Jan 5 2007, 06:48 AM Post #10 |
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I loved the 2nd chapter i can't wait for more and hey! Cosmo X Tails LOVER! xD |
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| Riikka | Jan 5 2007, 03:34 PM Post #11 |
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i read some more, and got to the wanting to run rather than walk to darkness' house. um, shadows character seems to be a tad different, but not really like a change different...just different. heh, shadow...darkness. close names xD. anywho i liked it, and will read more later. |
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| Melody the Hedgehog | Jan 5 2007, 08:36 PM Post #12 |
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Excellent story so far Tails Fanatic. 10/10 :3 The story to this so far is very interesting. Please continue on. |
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