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poems by me; cus I'm bored..patially depressed..ect..
Topic Started: Jan 6 2007, 04:16 PM (53 Views)
TwoTailedWanderer
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Seeker of nostalgic bliss

He said it,
the words I feared the most
I wanted to fall there and just die,
but I knew I couldn't look weak
not in front of him
I had to look strong for him
As he turned his back,
two voices tugged at my mind
one called for me to just fall,
to breakdown and cry the night away
the other voice,
it called for me to get back up,
and fight another day
Both tugging so hard
my mind felt like it would split
I wanted to scream,
but I knew I couldn't look weak
couldn't look weak
in front of him...


I thought I found the answer
I thought it all made sense
now I've fallen back in.
lost amoungst me fear
drowning in my sorrow.
I need now more then ever a
Savior
someone to fight back my fears,
and pull me from sorrow.
I thought I could find that in you,
but time became a wall.
Where now can a find my
Savior
When you are the only one
I ever wanted to find?


I know you hate me.
You can barely stand my very site,
yet still you linger around.
Is this because you know I hate you?
Do you suffer to make me suffer?
Can hate go that far?
Both of us hate each other so,
yet we stay so close together.
We must truely want the other to suffer.
To endure such pains ourselves.
Maybe we are just fools,
caught up in dislike,
using our hate to hide from the world.
Wanting to stay shunned from society,
yet claiming that it's society who hates us.
Maybe we should give this game up,
and just accept the truth...
We are part of this game called life.
Close you eyes, take a deep breath, and the ask yourself on simple question, "Is where I am where I should be?"

I pick myself up from the fall to be knocked back down, though I know one day when I get back up there will be nothing left to knock me down. The question is simply this, "Will there be anything left of me?"

Leave me the reins and I'll steer myself to infinty, I've sold my soul to darker side of divinty. I've prayed with the wicked and danced with the damned, but in the end it's all in your hand. Tell me how you lead the lamb astray, searching for somethign in the shadow of the day. I sang, I danced, and laughed, and played. Broken and beaten as my spirit would fade. take my gun, take my knife, but please if you could only just spare me my life? I wasted my time and mispronounced the line, you sold away my soul on the edge of a dime. <-------( random ryhming I just made up of the top of my head. )

Father touched you with the hand of god. He's gripping tighter saying, "You will burn in hell they say, you will burn in hell!"
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Lucifer Sam
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Is there gas in the caaaar? Yes there's gas in the caaaaaar&

I've seen some darker poetry written on the Internet, but much of it seemed contrived, cliche, and just plain fake. What you've written here sounds extremely honest, natural, and mature...I'm not one to make a critique of figurative language though, seeing as I'm not very good with it, heh.

All that aside, it's not a good thing to be depressed for too long. I know personally that it's hard to get out of the slump. Supressing one's weaknesses to avoid ridicule...feelings of having no one or nothing to turn to...the sometimes overwhelming power of hatred...I know what they're all like. They're all things many of us can relate to. I hope you feel better soon, man.
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TwoTailedWanderer
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Seeker of nostalgic bliss

thanks! glad to know you like it. Well dun worry I've been feeling alot better then I had when I wrote them

^_^
Close you eyes, take a deep breath, and the ask yourself on simple question, "Is where I am where I should be?"

I pick myself up from the fall to be knocked back down, though I know one day when I get back up there will be nothing left to knock me down. The question is simply this, "Will there be anything left of me?"

Leave me the reins and I'll steer myself to infinty, I've sold my soul to darker side of divinty. I've prayed with the wicked and danced with the damned, but in the end it's all in your hand. Tell me how you lead the lamb astray, searching for somethign in the shadow of the day. I sang, I danced, and laughed, and played. Broken and beaten as my spirit would fade. take my gun, take my knife, but please if you could only just spare me my life? I wasted my time and mispronounced the line, you sold away my soul on the edge of a dime. <-------( random ryhming I just made up of the top of my head. )

Father touched you with the hand of god. He's gripping tighter saying, "You will burn in hell they say, you will burn in hell!"
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