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My poem(s); Depending on how well you think it is.
Topic Started: Jan 9 2007, 08:35 AM (54 Views)
Tails is a Legend
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"Kah-Bewm!"

I was thinking over about what Kilo had said about attempting poetry or maybe a fan fic again. It got me pondering on whether I should or should not. But of course I choose to do so , with showing you a poem I did recently and if this goes down well I'll take requests and maybe finish my fan fiction that only has 4 chapters (That are very short too) finally.

Well , I dedicate this poem to one of the most moving movies I have ever seen. You'll have to guess which one though if you really wanna know.

Weak and fragile,
The old man lays on the bench.
Gasping and wheezing,
He calls the boxer closer,
Closer to his heart.

In his last words,
He bids his loved one goodbye.
Though bruised and weary,
The boxer begins to weep.

With tear drops echoing in his ears,
And a sight full of sorrow,
The forgotten hero walks home.
Back to the old gym,
Back to where it all started.

He remembered how hard he pushed him.
The Motivation,
The love.
Sighing to himself,
The trainee must work alone.
Alone untill another chance,
That was doubtedly going to happen.


Just please , give me your thoughts.
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Aqua The Firefox
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Li Long!!

Awesome! ^_^ nice one TIAL ^_^ youre really good at writing! ^_^ oh and i no that the film is one of the Rocky films, but i cant remember which.... was it 3? xD
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"Kah-Bewm!"

Aqua The Firefox
Jan 9 2007, 10:35 PM
Awesome! ^_^ nice one TIAL ^_^ youre really good at writing! ^_^ oh and i no that the film is one of the Rocky films, but i cant remember which.... was it 3? xD

Yeah you are correct , its based right after he gets beaten by Clubber Lang and finds Mickey dieing.

Thanks btw ^_^ I wana do more if people request some..
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