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| Skippy | Feb 3 2008, 07:13 AM Post #1 |
Comunisim is the exact definition of failure!
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Posted Image Name: Skippy age: 21 species: Hedgehog element: Earth, air, water, and fire forms: Super Form, hydro form Planet: Mycelium Hometown: Retseciel Occupation: Survivalist personality: stubborn/spazzy/funny type: Speed/power alignment: hero Team name: Team Hydro team position: leader Relationship: Married, Karalyn the hedgehog Children: Peter, Claire, and unborn child Theme: Thunderstruck - AC/DC Appeance: Dark green with blue of tips of spikes. Red chest with green and white shoes and red arms. back-story: Skippy was part of a gang called Team Nuclear when he was a child. Him and his friends Two-Bit the Hedgehog, Mike the Armadillo, Arch the hedgehog, Curt the penguin, Dally the Ant, and Guff the hedgehog (who died almost immediately after the gang was formed) fought for survival, territory, and power. Neo, Skippy’s brother, ran a shop to help support him and Skippy after their parents disappeared. Skippy and friends often hung out there. One day Neo disappeared and left Skippy $10000! Skippy either had to stay with his friends and live a harsh life even with that money. Or he could leave the planet, and start a new life. Skippy chose to leave his planet. He had said his goodbyes and had packed. When he was about to leave, Two-Bit jumped off the building. Two-Bit’s parents were drunks and he had it the worst out of all of them. So when Skippy, his best friend, was leaving he couldn’t take it. Skippy knew that he couldn’t stay after that. He wanted his friends to come, but he didn’t have enough money. So he left his home planet, forever. He later on landed on Homage where he met Spike and Karalyn. They were brother and sister. He quickly befriended the both of them. They were both top class, rich people. When Skippy shared his story of pain and sorrow. Spike and Karalyn were in shock. Skippy explained that he wanted to return someday to help his friends escape that Hellhole. But until then, Skippy was welcome at Spike and Karalyn’s home. Skippy loved it there. One time he accidentally walked into the bathroom while Karalyn was showering. He got smacked for that one. But Skippy and Karalyn started developing crushes on each other. Spike dreaded this. He told Skippy: “If you break my sister’s heart, I’ll kill you slowly and painfully.” Skippy merely shrugged and said “If I break your sister’s heart I’ll kill myself slowly and painfully.” They both laughed. Skippy and Spike were the best of friends. Skippy, the next year, surprisingly got a letter. It was from Mike. Apparently Anti-Skippy, Skippy’s science experiment for school gone wrong, had gathered a gang, and destroyed his town. Killing everyone. Skippy has filled with range at this. The rage caused his inner powers to be unlocked. He could do some small Nuclear blasts that lasted a second. Now he could do full on explosions that lasted minutes. He nearly destroyed Spike and Karalyn’s mansion. Although he killed the Buttler. And it was the good butler too. After that incident Skippy decided to leave Homage and go to Earth. Spike and Karalyn went with him because their life was bland before Skippy arrived. So they all went to Earth together. When they arrived, Skippy had asked Karalyn to marry him. They had been Dating for a year now. She agreed and they got Married with Spike as the best man, and Amanda, Spike’s Wife and Karalyn’s best friend, as the maid of Honor. After the marriage all 4 of them formed the Team Hydro. They used that name because of the Hydro Emeralds they had found when they landed. |
 
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| Trixie Prower | Feb 5 2008, 02:01 PM Post #2 |
TTFF's former Admin, current Dorky Anime Fan Girl.
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whoa neat fan chars. ^_^ |
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| Skippy | Feb 5 2008, 02:09 PM Post #3 |
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thanks Trixie, i mainly focused on Skippy's bio. |
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| Skippy | Feb 20 2008, 05:04 PM Post #4 |
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alright, i'm starting fresh. I completely changed Skippy's backstory to make sese and i deleted all the other bios. I'm not using any of them anymore. Accept for peter, but he needs to be re-made |
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| Skippy | Apr 4 2008, 01:30 PM Post #5 |
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update on them. not a big one, tho i'll rewrite his past later on |
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| Speed-X | Apr 6 2008, 11:11 AM Post #6 |
Amazing how I'm still changing in outwards behavior.
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Hmm.... Since I feel like revieweing fac chars... allow me to here. I'm pracitcing on reviewing fan chars. XP -------------- Eh... first off, his abilities seem overpowered for the reason that he apparently has the ability to control fifty billion elements.... In other words, you should definetely get rid of some of those. I don't quite support elemental abilities in teh Sonic fandom, because they're just TOO common and quite unoriginal. HOWEVER, if you were to write up a VERY detailed, realistic, and scientific explanation of HOW he got the abilities, HOW they work, then I may ease up in this part. But still... FOUR different elements?!? Even if you DO keep the elemental ability part, you should still cut them down to one or two. Second of all... another hedgehog? Do you realize how many hedgehog fan characters that are out there? X_x I'm not as edgy on this one, though. If you REALLY want him to be a hedgehog, then my high reccomendation would be to make him appear very unique; maybe give him a different eye style, a totally different quill style, ears, etc. etc. It'd be great if you could explain how he obtains/ thouroughly explain this "Hydro" form, also. It sounds interesting. n_n It'd also be uber- nice if you could explain where "Retseciel" and "Survivalist" are. On what planet are they located on, what other countries/ continents/ whatever are on that planet, etc. etc.? I'm asking this because when you make up your own locations, it's best to have a little explanation, also. Creating your own locations adds originality, as long as you have a good quality description and if it sounds... well, unique, basically. I like his personality, it seems rather different. I'm glad that you didn't rip off one of the official characters' personalities like quite a few other people would do. XD However, maybe instead of being so vague, maybe you could explain more, such as what makes him tick and such. And for the backstory... eh, I kinda don't feel like reading it at the moment, maybe I could review that part later. XD *brick'd* But, as far as I'm reading it, he seems to have befriended quite a few of your characters with unique species. I remember you spriting Moon the kangaroo and Curt the Penguin, maybe you could psot up their bios sometime? n_n Anyways, overall, your character Skippy actually isn't all that bad, all you need to do is reduce his abilities and explain a few things. Oh, and also, if you ever think about remaking his bio or feel like thinking up another fan character, remember the fan character creation guide Trixie posted up from Concept: "Mobius." They give out extremely helpful advice along with a very decent profile template. ^-^ Hope I helped, though. |
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| Skippy | Apr 6 2008, 11:17 AM Post #7 |
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thanks for the construstive critisim! i plan to eddit some stuff and explain more. so thanks. and actaully, Moon and Curt are dead, lol, ALTHOUGH i might write bios. |
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| Speed-X | Apr 6 2008, 11:27 AM Post #8 |
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Amazing how I'm still changing in outwards behavior.
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Ah, I see then. Well, it doesn't hurt to fill in bios for them even if they have passed on, just remember to take as much time as you need and think outside the box~! Oh, and you're uber- welcome. X3 |
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| Skippy | Apr 6 2008, 12:13 PM Post #9 |
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what do you mean by: "Uber- welcome"? |
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| Speed-X | Apr 6 2008, 01:50 PM Post #10 |
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Amazing how I'm still changing in outwards behavior.
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Uber usually means "very" or "super" or anything else of that kind.... |
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| Skippy | Apr 7 2008, 11:39 AM Post #11 |
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OH, okay. xD learn somethin new everyday. |
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