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| The Team Riders Story! 8D; ...I suck at titles! 8D | |
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| KK the Fox | Feb 24 2008, 12:25 PM Post #1 |
...I want a cookie. 83
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...I don't have a decent title yet XDDD; So yeah, this is the Team Riders story I'm writing as a part of my big Team Riders project! 8D YAY! Edit: before I forget 83; KK belongs to me 83 Max belongs to Lisa 83 Axl belongs to axldarkix on DA (I don't think he comes here anymore o.o; ) And more characters to come 83 Soooo... here's chapter 1? 83; Chapter 1: An Unexpected Alliance It was an ordinary day in Future City; hover cars whizzed through the air as citizens followed their daily routine. Registrations for the Fourth Annual Ex. World Grand Prix were taking place in the lobby of the Rosemary Hotel. Here, a pink vixen stood at one of three sign-up desks. Her long hair was pulled back into a ponytail and held in place by a red scrunchie, with four bangs escaping and neatly laying just above her eyes. She was wearing a white tank-top and red pants which had a thick white stripe going down the sides. She also wore a red vest, and on her feet were white shoes with a red stripe on each. In her gloved hands she held a red and white air board. Her bright blue eyes were fixed on the Omochao sitting at the desk who typed her information into the computer. “Well, KK, everything seems to be in order. To complete your registration, I’ll just need to know the name of the team you’re in,” the Omochao said, looking up from the computer screen. “Uh… What?” KK asked in surprise. “Surely you have a team to compete with?” “Uh… I guess I must’ve missed the bit about needing a team to compete when I read that flyer…” KK responded with a nervous laugh. “Well if you don’t have a team, then I’m afraid you can’t enter.” KK’s heart sank. She loved building and racing Extreme Gear, and she had been looking forward to her first real tournament. But she was also determined and slightly stubborn, and she knew that this one minor setback wouldn’t stop her. Since she normally paid attention to details, she figured that there must be at least a couple other racers who also missed the same fine print. After five minutes of watching the sign-up desks, she spotted a red fox with shaggy black hair getting told that he also couldn’t compete because he didn’t have a team. He let out a disgruntled sigh as KK slowly walked over and leaned against the desk. “Missed the fine print?” she asked with a slight smile. “Yeah, pretty much,” was the reply from the red fox as he scratched the back of his head and gave an embarrassed chuckle. Realizing that she never introduced herself, KK stuck out her hand. “My name’s KK, by the way.” “I’m Max; nice to meet you,” he answered with a grin and shook her hand. “Got any other friends who race? If you and I team up, we only need one more person.” Max thought for a moment. “Come to think of it, I told my friend Axl about the race and he said he would join. I doubt he saw that flyer though…” He looked around for a minute and quickly noticed a silver-gray fox with bangs that covered his golden eyes. Max smiled and waved at him. “Hey, Axl! Over here!” Axl turned in the direction he had heard his name be called, and saw Max waving at him. “Hey, Max!” he called back with a grin and walked over. “Um, Axl, did ya know that we need a team to compete?” Max asked with a nervous smile. Axl blinked in surprise. “…You never said anything about that…” “Heh heh… Yeah, about that… I guess it was written in fine print…” Max explained with a nervous smile. “Well, that’s three of us. Guess we’re a team, then?” KK said as she crossed her arms. “Oh, right! Axl, this is KK,” Max said with a quick hand-motion to the pink vixen. “Nice to meet yo-“ Axl started to say when he was cut off by an announcement on the intercom. “Attention, racers. Registration for the Fourth Annual Ex. World Grand Prix will close shortly.” “We’d better go and sign up,” KK mumbled and the three foxes went back to the registration desk. They gave their information to the Omochao but were soon startled by a somewhat unexpected question… “Team name?” the Omochao asked. The newly-formed trio frantically glanced at each other as they tried to think of a name. KK locked herself in deep thought for a moment, before saying the first idea that came to mind… “Team Riders.” Max and Axl looked over at her with confused expressions. “What..?” they asked in unison as the Omochao typed the name into the computer. “Welcome to the races, Team Riders.” The Omochao said politely, handing them two hotel room keys. “These are the keys to your hotel rooms, where you will spend tonight. They’re located on the second floor. Dinner for all the entrants will be held in the convention room at six p.m. Tomorrow’s race will start at noon, but be there a half-hour early.” “Thanks,” Max said as he took the hotel room keys and the three racers walked to the elevator. “Team Riders?” Axl asked, smirking at KK. “Well, it was the only thing I could think of, and besides, I didn’t see either of you thinking of anything better!” KK shot back as they all stepped in the elevator and Max pushed the button that would take them to their floor. “I’m just saying-“ Axl began when Max interrupted. “C’mon, guys, let’s just find our rooms,” Max said as the metal elevator doors opened, and the trio stepped out into the long hallway, where they soon found the doors to their rooms. “If it’s alright with you two, I’d like to take a quick look at your boards before tomorrow’s race.” KK said as she pulled a pocket knife out and found the screwdriver attachment. Axl and Max exchanged a questioning glace and a shrug before looking back at KK and nodding. “Uh, sure,” Max answered and used a key to open the door to one of their hotel rooms, allowing them all to enter. KK propped her own air board against the wall and then took Max’s from him. She placed it on a table, and used the screwdriver to remove a small panel from the bottom of the board, which allowed her to look into its interior as Axl and Max watched curiously. “Hmm…” KK studied the board’s mechanics closely. “It has a pretty good air tank and can handle corners well, but it’s too slow.” “So… you’re a mechanic?” Max questioned as KK began to tinker with the air board. “Well, sorta. I specialize in Extreme Gear,” she replied, without looking up from her work. “So you’re an Extreme Gear geek, then? Axl asked with a smirk. KK suddenly froze, her screwdriver held poised over the interior of the board. She slammed the tool against the table and spun around to face him. “WHY, YOU-“ Max’s eyes widened. “Oh, snap…” Axl merely snickered. “Well someone has a fiery temper…” “Oh yeah?! Well I’ll show you how fiery I can be!” KK growled as flames appeared in her hands. Max sweatdropped, anxiously wondering how he could stop the two from arguing. “Uh, maybe we should try acting like a team instead of fighting with each other…” KK smirked as the flames disappeared from her hands. She grabbed her air board and looked at Axl. “On second thought, I have a better idea. You, me, the racetrack. Now.” Axl laughed. “You do realize that I’ll cream ya, right? I’ve never lost a race.” “Neither have I, so this should be interesting. That is, unless you’re too chicken…” she replied with a grin. “You’re on!” Axl said and they both dashed out the door, leaving a dumbfounded Max staring at where they once stood. He blinked and let out a small sigh. “Nobody listens to me…” he mumbled, before leaving the room and closing the door behind him. “Wait up!” he yelled and rushed after the rivaling teammates. |
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| DragonFlame | Feb 26 2008, 02:37 AM Post #2 |
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Heh! Maybe time to give you comment ay! First of all, i happen to wonder why some members choose to write their full appearence in the beginning of the story. Though it is good to know how the caracter look i suppose. While the story is interesting. And rivalry team mates makes everything so much cooler. If all in a team can cooperate, what fun is there to leave out. Great, cant wait to see more from you. ^_^ |
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| KK the Fox | Feb 26 2008, 07:49 AM Post #3 |
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...I want a cookie. 83
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Yay 8D I like to be as descriptive as possible. ^^; I mean I posted the story on DA and I knew anyone who's seen my page would know what KK looked like (and Axl, Max, and Star who will be entering next chapter 83) but I guess it doesn't hurt to describe the characters. 83 As for the rivalry, yep, KK and Axl are preeeetty competitive. xD I didn't think they would actually be all "OMGyayteam" the same day they met, and I figured with KK and Axl's competitive streaks they'd make good rivals as well as teammates. 83 Thank you~ 8D |
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| DragonFlame | Mar 7 2008, 01:41 PM Post #4 |
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Hey hey! I might be your only fan, though dont give up on this story. I liked it so far what i have seen. Keep em coming KK! :TailsAngel: |
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| KK the Fox | Mar 7 2008, 09:02 PM Post #5 |
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...I want a cookie. 83
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xD; I actually have to wait for my contest on deviantART to finish; that'll determine the final 3 teams to be added to the Ex WGP 4. Then I'll be able to finish chapter 2. 83 |
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