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| Zamau | Feb 26 2008, 08:59 AM Post #1 |
Miles Tails Prower
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Prologue It was a nice day at the beach of Seaside Hill, the sea was calm and the sun was shining bright. A boat was coming, it stopped at the docks and the sailer got and began to walk home. As he was about to leave the docks he heard a noise, he turned around and saw that his boat was getting wrecked, the sailer ran towards his boat he saw it was destroyed, the sailer looked out to sea but saw nothing, the sailer began to walk back home, near the wrecked boat there was a huge shadow in the water and had something red glowing. Chapter 1 The Sea Monster The sailer was at home, he was taking to his brother about the boat. "Rocky something destroyed the boat" said the sailer. "Are you okay Bret?" said Rocky. "Yeah but Akio's boat is gone" said Bret. "He won't be happy" said Rocky. Bret ran out the house and headed for the docks at Seaside Hill. Meanwhile at Seaside Hill Zamau and Akio saw the wrecked boat, Akio got angry went towards the boat, something hit the jetty what made it shake and Akio fell in the water, Zamau jumped in to save him, Zamau and Akio swam to the shore. "Are you okay?" asked Zamau. "Yeah, thank you" said Akio. "What made that jetty shake, it's very stong to hold a car on" said Zamau. "I don't know maybe somthing big" said Akio. Bret arrived at the docks, he saw Zamau and Akio, he went over towards them. "You borrow my boat and it gets destroyed" shouted Akio. "I didn't destroy it" said Bret. "Something did I wonder what it was" said Akio. "I think there might be something in the sea" said Bret. "It's got to be huge, that was a very strong boat" said Zamau. Something came out the sea and it destroyed more boats and then it went back under, everyone in the sea got out as fast as they could. "That looked like a monster" said Bret. "I will go look for it" said Akio. "We will all go and get that monster" said Bret. "Okay whatever" said Akio. "I will go get rocky this might a tough job" said Bret. Bret ran back home to get Rocky, Akio and Zamau went to get some scuba gear and a boat. Bret came back with Rocky and saw the boat, Bret got angry. "That it? thats the boat? it's small" said Bret. "Well that thing destroyed the rest of the boats, this was all that thing didn't destroy" said Akio. "At least it has a motor" said Rocky. Someone was walking up to the boat. "Yeah but it's junk" said ? "Who are you?" asked Bret. "This is Leon a buddy of mine" said Akio. "Yeah, this is my boat" said Leon. "Can we use this boat? we are going to look for that thing, what trashed the other boats" said Akio. "It's junk it will sink, I have a better boat docked somewhere else, you could use that" said Leon. Leon, Akio, Zamau, Rocky and Bret went further down the docks to Leons boat. "This is it?" asked Bret. "Yeah it's tough and it's fast, but why do you need a boat?" asked Leon. "There is monster out there and we are gonna find it" said Zamau. "Okay final we will get that monster" said Leon. "You seen it too?" asked Bret. "Yeah it destroyed my other boat, I was on it that when monster trashed it at sea, I swam back to shore" said Leon. "Okay lets get that thing" said Bret. Bret, Rocky Zamau, Akio and Leon got on the boat, and sailed out to sea to look for the monster. As they sailed out, the monster came up from the water and destroyed the other boats further down at the docks. End of chapter Chapter 2 The Underground Base On water the boat stopped in the middle of the sea, Akio and Rocky jumped in to look for the monster underwater, Leon, Zamau and Bret stayed on the boat to look for it on top. As Akio and Rocky were looking the monster was rushing up to them, they moved just before the monster got them, they swam and hid behind a rock, the monster swam away then Akio and Rocky went back to the boat. "We found the monster" said Rocky. "It nearly attacked us, then it swam away" said Akio. "Okay so the monster is under the sea, we will get it" said Leon. On the deck of the boat, Bret saw the monster heading to an island in the distance and he told the others then they headed to the island. When the boat got to the island, Leon jumped off and went to see if that monster was around the others got off the boat too. A group of of giant lizards came out and surrounded Bret, Rocky, Zamau, Akio and Leon, the lizard went to attack them, Akio picked up one of them and threw it away. One of the lizards chased Rocky into a jungle, Rocky snapped off a tree branch and hit the lizard. Leon aimed a harpoon gun at the lizards, and the lizards ran away. "Okay this might be where that monster came from" said Leon. "I have sailed here, and I never seen this island before" said Akio. "Lets check it out, maybe there is something here we could use to stop that monster" said Bret. "Okay we will go search, Zamau and Rocky can watch the boat" said Akio. Bret, Leon and Akio went in the jungle one island, Zamau and Rocky watched the boat. Else were on the island the lizards found some glowing pearls, one of the lizards grabbed a few pearls and the pearls made the lizard faster and stronger. "We have intruders on our island" said one of the lizards. "Yes they might try to stop us from conquering thier world, we have to tell our master we have intruders on our island" said another lizard. The lizards ran back into the jungle to tell their master about the intruders. Meanwhile Leon, Akio and Bret were walking through the jungle, Akio spotted something in the distance and ran towards it, he saw it was a huge statue of a lizard in armour holding a sword and sheild. Akio grabbed the sword and the statue moved, there was some steps were what the statue was and he headed down the steps. When he got to the bottom of the stairs, his ears snapped a sudden movement above. He quickly turned his head to notice the statue getting back in it's former place. He had to find a way to get some light to turn the disadvantage to his opposite by lighten up a torch he manged to find on the walls. As the it was lit up he saw to shadows head his way and jumped and grabbed a hole on the ceiling, the two shadows were two lizards, as the lizards walked away he jumped down and followed the lizards, the lizard went in a room where there was another lizard but bigger, he hid behind the door. "Master we have some intruders here" said one of the lizards. "Who are they?" asked the Master. "We don't know, but they might try stop our plans of conquering this world" said the lizard. "Find then then bring them to me" said the Master. The two lizards were about to leave, Akio ran away, the lizards saw Akio and shouted that one of the intruders is in there base. A group of lizards came out, Akio went to attack on of the lizard with the sword, but went Akio attcked the lizard the sword broke, he just kicked the lizard and ran, one of the lizards fired a net at Akio, the net caught him and he was trapped. The lizards took Akio to the master. The Master told them to put Akio in the a cell, the lizards carried Akio to a cell, they were about to put him in but Akio got out of the net and ran off, the lizards chased him down the hall where the cells were, Akio find a ladder he climbed up at the top he saw daylight, Akio picked up a boulder and coverd the ladder hole. Akio saw that he was in a cave, Akio saw Bret and Leon he ran up to them. "Where did you go?" asked Leon. "I found a secret entrance to the lizards base" said Akio. "We didn't find anything to stop that monster" said Bret. "I think the monster is on the same side as those lizards, also those lizard are planing to conquer the world" said Akio. "There might be something in that base that might help us defeat that monster and those lizards, lets go" said Leon. Leon, Bret and Akio headed towds the base, Akio moved the boulder and then they went down the ladder. End of chapter Chapter 3 Orb Of Light In the base underground Leon, Bret and Akio were looking around if there was something that could help them against the monster and the lizards. Leon spotted some lizards coming, Akio, Bret and Leon hid, when the lizards went away they came out from hiding, Bret saw something shining in the distance, he headed towards it, when he got to it the thing shinig was a white orb, he went to grab it but he got shocked and then he screamed, Akio and Leon ran up. "Whats wrong?" asked Akio. "Stupid thing shocked me" shouted Bret. "What is it that thing?" asked Leon. "Something powerful I think, but it's gaurded by this electricity" said Bret. Akio, Bret and Leon heard a noise behind them, they turned around and saw a huge group of lizards armed with swords. One of them went to attack Bret, Bret jumped out the way, another went to attack Leon, but Leon snatched the sword of the the lizard, he attacked the lizard with the sword, the lizard fell on the ground and vanished, then he swung the sword at the orb, the electricity gaurding the orb vanished, Akio grabbed the orb and then Akio, Bret and Leon ran for the ladder to escape. At the top of the ladder there was another group of lizards waiting, they were armed with crossbow's, Akio got to the top as he saw the lizards he went down a few steps, the orb began glowing and he saw that his hand was glowing too. The lizards underground were running towards the ladder, Akio grabbed the sword and he threw it at the lizards, the sword went through the lizards and then they vanished, Akio, Bret and Leon headed up the ladder. The lizards at the top were aiming their weapons at the ladder hole, Akio jumped out, the lizards fired but the arrows missed him, he land on the ground and ran towards one of the lizards and then jumped and kicked the lizard with a great force, the lizard fell and vanished, the rest of the lizard ran away. "Whoa, that was pretty cool, whoever has the orb gets the power" said Bret. "Yeah but it dosn't last long, I think this orb might be what we need" said Akio. "Okay lets get back to the boat" said Leon - as he walked away. Outside the jungle at the boat, Rocky was digging in the sand, and Zamau was asleep, Rocky made a hole in the sand and covered the hole with sticks and leaves. Rocky woke up Zamau and they hid behind the ship. They saw Akio, Bret and Leon coming towards the ship, they stepped on the leaves and sticks and fell in the hole. Zamau and Rocky came over to the hole laughing. "Get us out of here" shouted Bret. "Well you shouldn't have left us behind, guarding the boat was boring" said Rocky. "Okay sorry, get us out" said Bret. Zamau threw down a rope, and Akio, Bret and Leon climbed out of the hole. Just after the climbed out the hole, the sea monster came up again and it grabbed huge boulder then threw it at Zamau, Akio, Rocky, Bret and Leon, the boulder missed them and made a huge hole in the island, Akio got the orb but just before he could of used it's the power the monster went away. Zamau walked over to the hole and saw something shining at the bottom, he climbed down the hole to see, when he got down he saw there lots of pearls at the bottom and they were glowing. End of chapter What do you think? |
 
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| Trixie Prower | Feb 26 2008, 11:20 AM Post #2 |
TTFF's former Admin, current Dorky Anime Fan Girl.
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I like the story concept, nice going. ^^ |
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| Zamau | Feb 27 2008, 07:31 AM Post #3 |
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Miles Tails Prower
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Chapter 3 Orb Of Light is up, and thanks for the coments. |
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