| Save Me! @_O the story; The race for the cure | |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 8 2008, 04:06 PM Post #1 |
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This is actualy an RPG that was played out in this forum. I put the RPG into story form, and am now sharing it with all of you. I love how this RPG turned out, and is a great part of Fox's life. Heres the first chapter: http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-1-97413427 They're all gonna be posted on Deviantart, and I'll update everytime I post a chapter. ^^ Edit: I changed my mind. xD I'll post them on DevART and here from now on. ---------------- Chapter 1 Sonic J is gone...his guardian has disappeared for good. Now Fox#312 is alone, without anyone to help him. He sits on a ledge on a giant mountain looking over the horizon of the great forest, wondering many questions... Who were my parents? Are they still alive? Why am I like this? As long as Fox remains uncontrolled, his fate is sealed...one day he will loose control of himself, and hurt many people. Fox knows this, the Mobius government knows this, and Sonic J knew this. But Fox cannot control himself, the government wants to imprison him forever, and Sonic J is gone. Who will help him now? Who will try and hunt him down? Right now the forest is littered with government soldiers...waiting to take Fox down. This is the Save Me RPG, and this is Fox’s story of self-discovery. ------------------- Over the forest, the sounds of rotor blades echoes through the trees. Camo, a government hired soldier fox with his skin ever changing with the environment. He is currently flying over the forest in a modified AH-64 Apache helicopter, scanning the forest with a thermal camera mounted on the bottom of his chopper. “…hmm, can't see him.” Camo said to his loley self. “…Maybe I’ll try from a bit higher.” The helicopter then rose to an altitude well above the clouds, looking for his target. “Good thing this camera can zoom, or I wouldn’t be able to distinguish him from a soldier. At least…not without attracting attention to that location, which don't want to do.” Camo continued to talk to himself, which helped him think. In the meantime a wind blew though the forest, as a blue cat with a sword on his back named Ky ran through the trees. He wasn’t aware of the happenings that were going on around him; as far as he was concerned this was just another normal day. Ky was a very heroic cat, always looking out for those in need. As fast as he possibly could, he ran up the mountain, when he noticed by chance one of those souls in need. There were GUN Soldiers all over the place, hiding in the brushes and looking under every rock. "What's going on here?" Ky thought. This was a very unusual thing for GUN to do. He stopped running and walked quietly, avoiding the soldiers. He noticed a small group had found their target, and were all standing by ready to fire. Ky looked to see, and all their guns were pointed at "Fox!" Ky thought. He’s been on an adventure with Fox before, he knew him well. He also knew his master, Sonic J, who saved Ky’s life once. "I wonder why the Gun Soldiers are after him." He said to himself. Ky slowly walked up to Fox behind the rocks, out of sight of the GUN soldiers. "…psst…hey Fox…Why are there Gun Soldiers surrounding you?" Ky asked Fox. Fox looked around puzzled. “Huh? Who said that?” He looked behind himself and saw Ky hiding. He was extremely surprised when he saw him. "Ky! What you doing all the way up here?" It was very unusual; Fox and Ky were WAY up in the mountains, far from civilization for miles. Up here, you could hardly breath the air is so thin! Fox then notices the soldiers, and slightly panics. "Oh no! They found me!" Fox started to shake, he didn’t know what to do. He stayed on the rock, biting his nails. Then, a young inexperienced soldier leaped out of the brush and pointed his gun straight at Fox. "Freeze!" He smiled victoriously, and his head turned to Ky. "thank you for keeping him occupied, we'll take it from here." The other soldiers put there heads in their hands, embarrassed by the young soldiers actions. "We were going for stealth you idiot!" The young soldier ignored the accusations. Camo in his chopper conveniently found Fox at that time. “Ah there he is, And he's with someone else. Hmm, looks like the only option is to airlift them out. Well…this is going to be awkward.” Camo starts to approach the location with the chopper. His helicopter was very advanced, able to do things normal copters couldn’t do. It was a government issued vehicle, with state of the art technology. “Gotta be careful, or I’m gonna be attacked.” But today, that technology was going to be used AGAINST the government. Camo flew in very softly, trying not to raise suspicion with the soldiers. As far as they were concerned, Camo was still with GUN. Ky was getting ready to get Fox out of there, until Camo drops a rope ladder out of the chopper, and beckons him to climb up. “I can't land here, no room. I’m here to help you, I’ll get you out of here, then I'll just jam my tracking signal and replace it with a false one showing me going to HQ.” He smiles at his own devious planning. “By the time they catch on it’ll be too late to find us.” Ky smiled, he could tell he was telling the truth. He decided to help with the plan. "You get on board the chopper and I'll distract the Gun Soldiers. I'll tell them I'm taking you to HQ while you escape." Ky said to Fox. "As for myself, I'll follow the Gun Soldiers back to HQ…making sure they don’t follow you. But once I get back to the HQ building, I'll have to run as fast as a I can and lose them. GUN will probably be after me after this stunt." Ky said. The amateur soldier looks up seeing the chopper, and not hearing a word the others were saying, just assumed it was here to take Fox away...which technically it was... "Alright Fox, INTO the chopper you go. Don't try and get away, my gun is aimed straight at your head!" Fox was stunned with the current turn of events. He looked at the soldier blankly… but soon nodded his head. Fox then started to smile a bit as all the information started to process. "…Oh no! you got me this time! I give up! I'll go in the chopper, just please don't hurt me!" Fox was almost laughing as he got into the helicopter. He plopped in and sighed with relief. The more experienced soldiers were debated what to do with the amateur, until one of them saw the chopper. He looked at it puzzled, then turned to another soldier. "...Who requested air support?" "Thank you so much!” Fox said to Camo. “You are a kind stranger. Who are you?" Camo smiled and turned to Fox. “I'm Camo, I work with GUN, HOWEVER… When we were planning on what to do with you, I strongly disagreed… but I was almost the only one… so they decided to go after you anyway. I was ordered to help those soldiers in finding you using an arial view using a thermal camera. But don't worry, I never had plans on following those orders. Now, lets get you to somewhere safe...” Camo thought hard, and Fox had a big grin on his face, so glad someone had the guts to come and save him, even after direct orders. ”I know!” Camo said with a lightbulb over his head. “That abandoned Military base! I sort of use it as a second house. It's mostly underground so they won't be able to spot us from the air. They won't even be able to see the helicopter, I have a garage for it out of sight. The only reason it was abandoned was that it isn't in a tactical position, near impossible to reinforce or re-supply if it is attacked. I doubt they will expect us to go to a GUN base, even if it is abandoned. And they don't know of my using it.” Fox lifted an eye brow at all of Camo’s reasoning. It sounded perfect! Fox only hoped it was as perfect as he made it sound…though all that Fox really was thinking about right now was the fact that he made a new friend. “But first I should activate the jammer, so they can't trace us.” Camo said, as he pushes a few buttons. But not everyone was out to save Fox from GUN. One ranger had been hired as a mercenary to capture Fox. His boss, Bang the Echidna, told him nothing except, “Fox is a threat” and sent him to the hunt. Flare, an orange hedgehog with goggles on a head full of steam, and the job in his mind, rode his orange motorbike through the forest. He was very talented on his bike; he was able to climb the mountain all the way up on two wheels! As soon as he got there, he jumped off his bike, looked around, and saw Ky standing there looking into the sky. Flare looked up with him and saw the Helicopter fly away. He looked very puzzled. Then Ky turned to the Gun Soldiers. "Should we head back to HQ?" Ky asked them. Flare glance at Ky. He realized something was up with the chopper and decided he would follow it from the forest. But two steps in, Ky noticed Flare was curious about the helicopter. He quickly stopped him and asked "Is anything wrong?" Flare grunted, then turned to Ky. Yes. I assume Fox is on that chopper. But if you read the report nothing is said about escorting him by aerial.” "That's because I requested air support.” Ky quickly responded. “I thought it would be easier seeing as though if we take him to HQ on foot, he'd most likely escape." Flare snuffed. “Really?” Flare looked around and sighed. “Why do we even need this fox?” "You're better off asking the Gun soldiers." Ky laughed. "I'm only here following orders from the Gun General." Flare crossed his arms. “All I got told is his dangerous and GUN was properly gonna’ make a stupid mistake again.” Ky sighed in annoyance. "Well he's certainly not dangerous at all, I can tell you that much. But I'd probably get thrown in a cell myself if I didn't follow orders correctly.” Flare lifted an eyebrow. “You saying this mission is for some…personal agenda?” Ky shrugged. “I’m just saying he’s just a kid. From what I’ve seen of him, he’s not dangerous at all.” Flare shook his head. “Something’s not right about this, I smelled a rat from the very start. I'm going back to HQ to see the files.” He started heading for his motorbike. “If he’s harmless like you say... I may just have to do that...” "You may have to do what?" Ky said nervously. Suddenly, a Gun soldier ran up to the captain of the GUN team who almost shot Fox. He took some deep breaths. "We've received word from HQ that the helicopter isn’t heading their way. It never arrived, and at that choppers speed it should have come within site by now." Flare and Ky heard this whole thing. “How did I know that you would make a mistake?” Flare said angrily. Caught by surprise the gun soldiers eyed each other then when they turned back to go off at Flare…he had already taken off into the forest, motorbike and all. Ky saw this chance as a perfect escape. "Time to get out of here and get to Camo and Fox before Flare does!” He took of at Sonic Speed to find Camo and Fox. "Hopefully the Gun Soldiers won't follow me..." He thought. In his vast haste, he hoped he could stop Flare in time. Flare rode through the forest as fast as could be. He eventually started to see the Chopper in the sky within his sights. He got ready some weapons to bring down the chopper…but then he remembered what Ky had said about him, and all the holes he saw in his briefing report. What if this was some kind of personal agenda? Who wants an innocent little kid dead? Flare held his hand over the fire button, riding through the forest with extreme speed…deciding on the fate of the helicopter. Accumulation of 28 posts |
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| "TrueAim" Prower | Sep 9 2008, 06:05 AM Post #2 |
Master Blacksmith Tails. HE LOOKS LORDY GOOD!
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Like I said in the PM I like story's like this and So do I like this one. I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter. |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 9 2008, 01:27 PM Post #3 |
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Sweetness! Thank you so much True-Aim! ^^ Your wish is my command, here's the next one! xD http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-2-97492968 ----------- Chapter 2: Confrontation Ky ran faster and faster and looked around himself. He smiled. "I think I've escaped them. They'll never find me here in this part of the forest." He then saw the chopper in the sky, and started to run all around looking for Flare. “I must find him before he does any harm to Fox!” But to his extreme surprise…Flare was nowhere to be found! That’s because Flare had returned to HQ. He completely disobeyed his direct orders and went back to find out exactly what was going on here. Flare never wanted to be on the wrong side of the fence on things, he was always doubtful, always looking out for the bad guys. He grabbed all the files on the mission and started reading…but Flare noticed the reason for capture was missing entirely! It was considered top classified. Now Flare was angry, he did NOT like being left out of the loop on things. He left the room and headed straight for the General’s Office, the grand General of GUN itself. As he approached the office though…he was surprised to find a couple of soldiers from the forest had somehow gotten themselves back to GUN and was put on guard duty. These especially where the soldiers he had insulted on the mountain! They pointed Flare out, and decided NOW would be a good time for some revenge. Flare was ready though; he was already steamed and pumped up for a fight. Ky could hear the sound of Gun Soldiers nearby. "What!? Their not supposed to be in this part of the forest! What are they-“ He then stopped and retracted before he ran into a group of soldiers. “I've gotta get outta here before they find me..." Ky thought. "I'm the only one that knows where Camo and Fox have gone." He quickly dashed off. “I think I should probably find Flare. If he starts investigating this case, he might end up biting more than he could chew!” Ky then started to head for HQ as Sonic speed. After several minutes of fighting, the angered, battered, and bruised soldiers pounced at Flare, who conveniently ducked. The Soldier flew over Flare and the Orange Hedgehog slid down the polished Floor. He turned his attention to the on coming punch, which he caught in his hand and then threw that soldier through The Generals door! Knocking it down and opening it up for access. As Flare walked in the other soldiers had guns pointed at his head. Flare slammed his hands down on the desk, and the General simply said, "…I told you not to come" At that moment, Ky had entered the building, having tracked Flare here. “…oh boy…this is not a good place for me to be.” Ky thought. He worked his way to the general’s office, which he found mysteriously open. He looked in the room to see Flare held and gun point. "What heck is-" Ky accidentally blurted. A Soldier with a gun turned and pointed at Ky, Flare Quickly cleared the gun from his hand with a kick, and then threw the soldier onto the Generals desk. The General grunted. "I will be talking to your captain about this." "what else is new" Flare said. Ky walked up to Flare. "What just happened?" “…A little bit of this.” Flare turned around and punched a soldier trying to sneak up on them “and little bit of this...” And then he threw the soldier he held on the desk at the wall as 3 came around the corner with guns aimed at the two. Ky was left speechless. As the soldiers were being tossed around and bombarded, a black hearted creature strutted through the room, and suddenly saw the happenings in the next room. The dastardly creature, known as Dr. Ivo Robotnik, picked up his blubbering body and observed the conflict. "Having trouble keeping your soldiers in line, General?" Everyone stopped when they heard his big booming voice. Ky freaked, and looked around for an escape route. "Dr. Robotnik!" He thought. "I really gotta get outta here before they find out I was part of Fox's escape! But the only way out is through the door, which the fat guy is blocking." He ultimately decided on hiding in a corner. Flare, who’s only known of his missions his whole life…didn’t recognize him. He was confused as to why everyone had suddenly gotten goosebumps in his presence. “…What? Who’s the guy with the weight problem?” Robotink was steamed at that statement. The General responded. "This is Dr. Robotnik. Respect this man, he's the one who provided us with the "Anti-Fox-Guns."" "A gift" Robotnik responded. "For you, and your army. If were going to stop this freak, we can't use conventional weaponry." The General looked at Flare straight in the eyes. "He's on a private contract. He provides us the means to stop this thing...you provide the muscle. Why don't you respect our guests generosity and GET OUT!" Flare bit his lip…he’s had enough. “…I would be glad to get out…if you weren't blocking the exit.” The General lifted up his hand, and the soldiers moved out of the way. Robotnik backed up, almost smiling. He took a device out of his sleeve, and as Flare came out of the room, Robotnik approached him. "I think we got off on the wrong foot soldier. You look like you’re about to go out after Fox, are you not? Flare is it? I read your reports, veeery fascinating. Here, I want you to have this." Robotnik held out the devise from his sleeve. "I was trying to give this to the General but the sooner its used the better...besides, I've known you’re superior for a long while, and I know it'll be in able hands. This thing is a "Fox tracer," a prototype I cooked up. It tracks the unique Craynitis in his blood system and brain. There’s no faster, or easier, way to find it." Robotnik’s smile was obvious...it said "evil" and "bloodthirsty" in every manner and sort. Flare just snuffed. “This is why i hate it when my captain sends me over here to help GUN, with their floors like you.” Robotnik looked puzzled. "You don't want my tracer?" Flare rolled his eyes. “Hmmm, let me have a look at it, See if its as floored as you.” Flare in all honesty did not know one thing about this…”Dr. Robotnik.” His extreme disrespect, yet cooperation, was very telling. Robotnik gave him the tracer and the smile on his face returned. "I think you will find it very useful." The tracer turned on, and it did indeed show Fox's exact location, according to Flares calculations to when he last saw him. It was very faint though, and was fading. "Oh, and by the way Flare." Robotnik got closer. "If you ever call me a floor again...I'll make you into one of my zombie slaves. I will robotisize your heart, and every tiny insignificant part of your useless corpse until you are totally, and utterly...hollow...then I'll make you do things you could never imagine, horrible thing, unspeakable things to those you care about most. Then Flare I will set you free! Scarred...and worthless." He continued to smile his evil grin, as he walked away down the hallways and out of sight…his jolly evil belly laugh filling the hallway. Flare shook his head. “…General, you really need a new sponsor.” Flare then notices Ky sitting in a corner in the Generals Room. He beckons Ky to come along. "General, that’s my partner over there, if you would please?” The General looked confused, then saw Ky sitting there himself. Flare continued. “All your guns are making him feel like a prisoner.” The General was not willing to be so kind though at the moment. “GET OUT CAT!” The General bluntly said. Ky ran out, and a soldier picked up the fallen door, inserting it into the doorframe to fill the hole. Flare sighed. “Your not gonna get out alone." "Oh well. If I just act normal eggy won't suspect a thing." He thought. "So Flare…” Ky started. “…How do you think Eggman plans on capturing this so-called “dangerous fox?”" "Properly by tricking the General to do it for him." Flare simply said. Ky took a deep breath. "…If you cooperate with me, we can make a quick escape and meet Fox at where he’s goin. I’m sure once you meet him, you’ll agree he isn’t dangerous." Flare’s ears perked up a little. He was interested in this proposal. Ky continued. "I'll tell you why I need you along the way." "Lets see I got two options.” Flare began. “Cooperate or entertain The General...” He scratched his chin in thought. “…Ok let’s get outta here" Accumulation of 27 posts |
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| Shen | Sep 9 2008, 06:30 PM Post #4 |
Cute pictutre by Misaki.
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Very expertly written CLF....Keep it up. Alos we did leave some plot gaps didn't we. xD This may sound stupid or idiotic in my part...But I know I cam in the story late &....Well what i'm trying to ask...Is when did I come in again? Last thing I rembmer form that early on is something about a cave.... |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 9 2008, 08:54 PM Post #5 |
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You wanna buy a commission. Yes you do, yeeess you do. X3
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I can't specificly say, cause I don't want to spoil it for those who don't know the story, but basicly you come in pretty late. xD Don't expect to come in for many chapters. I'll give you a heads up when your time get's close. ^^ And thank you! ^_^ I'm super ubber glad you like it |
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| Shen | Sep 9 2008, 08:58 PM Post #6 |
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Cute pictutre by Misaki.
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Now that I think about it...True it would give away a big part of the story. silly me should asked via PM. aw well...I shut up until next chapter now. |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 10 2008, 11:51 AM Post #7 |
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Rofl! It's okay Red xD Heeeeeeeeeeere's chapter 3! http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-3-97572653 Chapter 3: Excape ...you can talk now Red. :P --------------- Chapter 3: Excape Ky and flare ran through the base trying to find a way out. Ky was frantic to get away before they found out he was involved. But to their surprise, the entire base was on security lock down, thanks to Flare’s antics, and all the exits were blocked off. “*Grunt* I suppose I’m going to have to break something, no use in avoiding it now.” Ky, in his panicky state, managed to break a window open…a very very very tough window. He helped Flare find his motor cycle, and they both escaped into the forest. Ky gave a sigh of relief, and as they were speeding along, Ky got close to Flare to say something. "…The reason why I need you is because I'm trying to protect Fox, it’s as simple as that. He’s going to need all the help he can get against GUN." Ky shook his head. "Eggman must have tricked GUN into thinking Fox was dangerous but he isn't. I will stand up to anyone who tries to hurt my Fox friend." "I always knew GUN was stupid,” Flare began, yelling above the noise of the fast moving air, “but why are you telling me this? I could have you thrown in the cell." Ky smiled. "Let's just say I knew from the start that I could trust you." "You've read my reports haven’t you?" "Reports? What reports?" Flare drew his head back in surprise. "Then how did you know?" Ky laughed. "I knew your were smarter than what GUN was asking you to do. You went after Fox, I saw you go that way. But when I got there, you were gone, retreated to HQ…You hesitated when you saw Fox." Flare looked down a bit. He never really thought about it that way. “…I…don’t…” Then suddenly, the scanner on his bike went wild! Flare checked it out, and then shut it off. He grunted. "…That fat guy’s following us. I assume this device is tracking us rather then the fox" “What!?” Ky responded. He then saw the “Fox tracker” in his pocket. “Oh no, Robotnik gave that to you, didn’t he?” Flare pulled it out and was about to throw it away, but Ky stopped him. “No wait! He already found us, there’s no use. If we can find a safe spot to hide from GUN, I might be able to hack the transponder." Flare nodded quickly, then put the tracker back in his pocket…then he had another thought. “…Or we can confront them" Ky and Flare gave a look to each other, and Ky sighed. “…Let’s do it.” Robotnik sat at his computer, watching Flare and Ky running through the forest. The General came up to the Dr, almost out of breath. "Robotnik...Those two were a couple of my best soldiers...what happened?" Robotnik swinged his chair around to face the General. "It appears these two have grown compassionate towards the little disaster. I saw it in flares eyes, he’s going to attempt to help him...that’s why I placed a tracking signal in the Fox tracer." The general grew angry. "You gave him the tracer!? We needed that!" "Not to worry!" Robotnik reassured. "It was only a prototype. It only works if Fox is hyper anyway." Robotnik turned back to his monitor. The General got on the GUN transmission to all GUN soldiers. "Anyone near Flare or Ky, open fire and KILL Flare and Ky!" Robotnik with an extremely surprised face turned around glaring at the General. "What are you doing!?" As the General put away his Walky Talky, he blankly answered, "getting my tracer back." Ky kept on running but he could hear the sound of footsteps close-by. "I get the feeling we're being chased." Flare loaded his Gun, suspecting trouble. "…I got an idea that may send them in circles" "Works for me." Ky simply responded. Flare started looking around for a target. He pulled out the Fox tracer. "Most likely this is tracking us. So if we plant it on a soldier they'll track themselves." "Good idea. But how are we going to give it to the Gun Soldier if they start firing at us?" WHAM! A wire put up to trip them hit flare and Ky. Flare’s Motorcycle went flying away, and they both ended up on the ground. The soldiers suddenly came running in and powered up their lasers. Out of the trees, the amateur soldier decides to take first action...again... "FREEZE!" He fired the laser, missed completely, and the tree he hit turned into a liquid! The whole plant melted to the ground, then seeped into it like water. "…Oops." Said the young private. Flare smiled. "That loser soldier’s our ticket.” Flare rolled to the side firing a shot from his powerful gun, hitting a tree which fell in front of the soldiers. Ky managed to put the transponder into the amateur soldier's pocket before they regrouped and started firing. "I've managed to put the transponder into the amateur soldier's pocket” Ky told Flare. “What do we do now?" "um,..." Flare fired another shot managing to knick one of the soldier’s hands making them drop their gun "Well I don’t think I can take them all out, that’s more soldiers than I thought there would be." Another tree turned into water behind them. Ky lifted an eye brow. "So just basically take them all out? No problem." Ky concentrated. He made a HUGE charge in his hands, and fired a large Chaos Blast right at the soldiers…rendering the entire battalion unconscious. "…That should fix it." Ky said. "…Works for me.” Flare said, hardly surprised. “Now lets head out of the forest and over to the mountains so we don’t bump into them again" "Good idea." Ky said. He took off at full speed towards the mountains. "Hopefully Fox and Camo should be there." Ky told Flare. Flare then suddingly stopped. "…actually, Lets get to High Ground so we can spot danger before it spots us, for sure their will be troops he but un aware of us… so maybe we should deal with them incase they spot the chopper" Ky lifted an eyebrow. "Okay then." Ky got his sword ready. “Even though they're after us, we can't kill any of them. I've sworn on my life that I wouldn't kill or hurt humans without a good reason." Ky told Flare. "Well I'm allowed to” Flare snuffed. “as long as they fire first and if they do their gonna regret it" Flare loaded his Gun…he then felt a tug on his leg. He looked behind himself, and he found a little young fox standing right next to him. The little guy looked up at him with his big crazy eye, and his innocent crystal blue eye. "…Actually, my master once told me, "never kill, only protect. Your first priority is safe first, hurt later." Hi, my name is Fox!" Robotnik took the general by the collar, and looked deep into his eye. "Look now what you have done. They are going to get away because of you!" Robotnik set him down, and returned to his seat. "How do you expect me to kill this thing, if you don't let me do my job." The general was about to take out his gun...but decided against it, and rebuckled his collar instead. "I'm going to go get my tracer back. Why don't you try and find them the old fashion way...look for them!" The general walked out of the room, suddenly stopped by his secretary. "Sir!" The General put his hand in his head in annoyance. "What is it?" "Sir!" The Secretary continued. "He...HE wants to speak with you sir." The General’s head lifted up quickly then he swallowed slowly. "...Ready the room...lock all the access doors…I want no interruptions." The General walked to another part of the building, as the secretary locked all the doors behind him. A tear of sweat dwindled down the General’s face as he walked to speak to…him. Accumulation of 28 posts |
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| Shen | Sep 10 2008, 01:25 PM Post #8 |
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Cute pictutre by Misaki.
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This whole beginning part clears up a lot for me...In truth I entered this story only knowing the first part in chapter 1 of Save me....i'm learning here xD. nice work CLF! Didn't know Ky was so strong...@_@... |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 11 2008, 02:47 PM Post #9 |
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Cool! It's always good to know what's happened in an RPG your a member in. XDDDD What kind of things are being cleared up for you, for curiousity sake? Chapter 4 y'all! http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-4-97672866 Chapter 4: Reaching Camo. Flare, Fox, and Ky try to reach Camo before it's too late! ------------ Chapter 4: Reaching Camo "What the..?” Flare said confused. Ky was very surprised to see Fox here. "Fox!? What are you doing here? And where's Camo and the chopper?" Flare was only interested in Fox’s comment. “What do you suspect me to do then? Arrest them? I can’t over here, I only have jurisdictions to help GUN which I am not doing, I can’t arrest GUN soldiers!" Fox was surprised at Flares reaction to his words. "I...I'm sorry. I didn't know I said anything wrong..." Fox's blue eye started to dwell up some tears. Flare looked annoyed. "Why would GUN want him? He barely seems like he can do much." "You see?” Ky entered. “You've gotta help us escape. You seem to know GUN pretty well so you're perfect for the Job." "Your serious aren't you?" "Yes I am serious." "…well first of all, where is Camo?" Fox mumbled and was on the verge of crying "He should be just over those mountains." Ky responded "THOSE mountains?” Flare responded, realizing what mountains he was talking about. “You do realize GUN's elite soldiers train and patrol around that area? Going there’s suicidal-” Turns to Fox “-if I’m not expose to shoot them!" Ky lifted an eye brow. “Not but a couple minutes ago you suggested going to the mountains.” Flare grunted. “That’s before, this is now.” Ky shook his head confused. “…whhhaaaa!?” Fox was just about to let out his tears, but then he remembered more wise sayings his master taught him. "...Words will always be spoken...but only your actions can define how powerful those words truly are." Then Fox whipped the tears from his eye and looks up at Flare again. "Camo *sniff* is with the Helicopter, at the top of the mountain. I saw you from the peak, and decided to jump down here to meet you!” “…from the peak?” Flare said, quite not believing it. “Ky helped me and Camo escape,” Fox finished. “…and I am so grateful for it." Fox gave a great big smile. "Hmm...” started Ky. “…Well we have to get to Camo somehow, he could be in-danger." Flare scratched his head. "GUN could have him by now if he was all alone, we need to be strategic about it" "Using my speed, I should be able to past the GUN Soldiers un-noticed." Ky told Flare. "Once I reach the chopper, we should be able to escape." "Properly is our best bet. “Flare added. “…But how are we gonna get Fox past?" Ky was about to say, but then he remembered something. “…hold on…I got a better idea.” Ky then reached into his pocket and pulled out a radio. "I stole this from the amateur soldier when I gave him the tracker." He gave Flare the walky-talkie. "Try and disguise your voice to sound like the General and then tell them to head back to HQ. Your voice and his sound very similer.” Flare grunted. He didn’t like the idea of his voice sounding like the general…but he liked the plan. He turned on the Walkie Talky. "GET YOUR BUTTS BACK TO HQ! THE AWESOME HEDGEHOGS'S ATTACKING!" flare said in a like voice. Ky laughed. “The awesome Hedgehog?” Flare shrugged. Ky rolled his eyes. “I’m going ahead to see if it worked. With any luck, I’ll find Camo too.” Ky took off at Sonic speed, leaving Flare and Fox behind. The unconscious soldiers heard the yelling from the radio, waking them up. They slowly got up off the ground after being knocked off their feet by Ky. "...wh...what?" Then the soldiers realized what the transmission had said, and RAN towards HQ in a hurry. The rookie, still unconscious, stayed behind. Sometime passed, and Flare was getting ansy. "…Something’s holding Ky up, we better hide" Flare said pointing to the bush to the side. Fox complied, and they both hid in the bushes. Meanwhile, Ky was running at full speed to find Camo. "That's weird...Can't find him. He should be here." Ky kept on running then he came to a complete halt. He found his path blocked by GUN Soldiers. "What's going on? Didn't they receive the message that Flare yelled out through the walky-talky?" Ky thought. Eventually, Ky got Flare and Fox to join him, and they hid behind a rock, watching the soldiers who didn’t get the memo. “I think their radio is broken…they haven’t even flinched.” Flare loaded his gun. “If they’re the only ones, let’s take em down.” Fox put his hands innocently in front of him, and twisted his torso around playfully. "You two are great! Thanks so much! I'll take care of these guys...their just scouts." Fox ran ahead. Ky and Flare tried to stop him, but he was already heading for the soldiers. "…So now what's the plan?" Flare asked Ky. Ky lifted his hands and made a chaos ball like before. “I’ll take em out before they fire, Fox will be like a distraction.” But Ky didn’t need to fire. Fox ran right into the heart of the soldiers yelling "YEEEEAAAHAHAHAHA!!!!" Like a mad fox! He bounced off every soldier like a projective missile and everyone he hit flew into the air and into a random rock or tree, rendering him or her unconscious. After Fox was done, the spiral in his eye was spinning slightly...but stopped after Fox calmed down. "The chopper should be this way!" Fox ran ahead. Flare now looked extremely puzzled as he turned his head towards Ky. "…Harmless is he?” Ky looked at Flare with a tear of sweat coming down his forehead, looking quite sheepish. "Okay then." Ky said, responding to Fox. He quickly started to followed Fox towards Camo. Flare grunted and ran after them. He got up to Ky’s side. “You know I don’t like being left out of the loop, what’s going on here? How did he do that?” Ky shrugged. "I've personally never seen him do that. This is the first time I have even saw it with my own eyes." Ky said. He then tried to change the subject. "By the way, what are you going to do after helping us out? Surely you can't go back to GUN after all the destruction." Flare sighed as he ran. "…I'll head back to the Ranger Department and make sure I never have to work with them again…with GUN anyway." They all eventually reach the chopper site...but once they get there the surprise is...there’s no chopper. "...Wh...what? Where is it? Where’s the helicopter!?" Fox looked everywhere, and could find no signs of it, only the tracks it left behind when it landed. Fox started to panic. He started to sweat, and his breathing accelerated. "Camo? Camo?" Accumulation of 29 posts |
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| Shen | Sep 11 2008, 03:51 PM Post #10 |
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Cute pictutre by Misaki.
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I kinda remember the coptor part which means getting close to when I come in. :) As for what it's clearing up. i didn't know what Camo looked like at all. That was very confusing for me in the story. That & now I know who owned that copter i saw fly off in the roleplay. Lastly I now know how you all met. :) |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 12 2008, 02:07 PM Post #11 |
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You wanna buy a commission. Yes you do, yeeess you do. X3
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Lol, no sorry Red were not that close. XP Don't even consider it until we get to the Fox World. We got a ways to go. It's great this is clearing all this up for you! In not too many chapters, you should get to see how they meet a certain female character your familier with. They meet very interestingly at first. xD Psst, don't say who it is, I'd like to keep that under wraps. :twink08: Chapter 5 is a here todaaaaaay! http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-5-97756975 Chapter 5: WHERE THE HECK IS CAMO!? XDDD The team tries to formulate a plan to rescue Camo...erm....try. XP ---------- Chapter 5: WHERE THE HECK IS CAMO!? "Dang it!” Flare said through his teeth, almost growling. “Looks like we're gonna have to go back to HQ! That’s where we will properly find Camo." Fox looks up at Flare, almost out of breath. "Please save him! I owe him my life, we’ve gotta save him!" Flare put both his hands up to calm Fox down. "Woah now, Saving Camo isn’t going to be easy! Considering it’s on Red Alert now after we escaped from it, I think you might need to stay behind." Fox grew shaky. He was about to say something...but he just couldn't say the words. Flare continued. "I’m sorry but they’re after you, bringing you near them is like bringing you to the heart of the kill zone!” Fox sat down in the dirt and his head faced the ground…nodding slowly. "...okay..." Fox started twiddling his thumbs. "Realize when it is best to let friends help you when you cannot help yourself." Fox whispered that to himself, another piece of advice from his master. Ky tried to reassure him. "Sorry Fox but I agree with Flare." Ky put his hand on Fox’s shoulder. "If you come with us, you could find yourself ending up getting captured, and the rest of us are most likely to get captured as well." Fox suddenly looked up. “..What!?” Flare had another thought “…But we can’t leave Fox behind incase they catch him up here either…Ky what do you think?" Fox started to freak out a it. "You might get captured!? No!" Fox said as he picked himself up. "I won't let that happen! I'm not loosing you too! Not any of you!" Fox put his foot down hard. “I’m coming with you, and you can’t stop me!” Back at GUN HQ, The General was alone in his secret room. He sat in a chair, and all the lights went out. The only thing on was a giant screen, relaying a live communication...which was top secret, and inaccessible. The person on the screen appeared very grainy, and dark. The General started. "...Why have you called me?" The figure on the screen made himself obscure, and the General could not make out exactly what he looked like. The only thing that was sure was he appeared to be some sort of fox. "General...” the figure said, with a deep voice. “…too many people are becoming compassionate with our target...why are you taking so long to obtain what I desire?" The General shook his head. "I am sorry master Viex...my private contractor is not cooperating. He thinks his way is the only way, even though his...past record says differently." Viex on the screen stood up suddenly, and angrily. "A pathetic excuse, General! If I were there, I would have had him by now. I would have also killed you, but fortunately for now I need you in my place. I want that target, by any means necessary, and your going to get it for me General...alive, and soon. Or it’s your head...on my desk." The General got out of his seat. "What about the other members of the GUN? They are growing uneasy about this." Viex sat back down. "The safety of this planet is my concern General, not opinions of smaller men. You have your orders." The picture went out and the General could do nothing but shake his head. "Every time something goes wrong, he always calls to yell at me. I hate that dang 2 year old!" Fox, Flare, and Ky were arguing on what to do among themselves, they all had different opinions. "Hmm...If you could change your fur color” Ky said, “you could use that special power of yours to help us take out the GUN Soldiers. Then you'll have GUN thinking it's a different Fox." Fox's turned to Ky in confusion. "...wh...what?" "If you change your fur color,” Ky explained, “you could come along with us to see if GUN has Camo. You said you wanted to help right?” Fox stopped himself. His eyes jigged around accumulating this information. Flare glared at Ky. "how can he help if he’s powerless like you said? Is there something your not telling me?" Ky glared back. “We both saw the same thing back there, I know as much as you do. All I know right now is he has the power to help us.” "…It…might work...” Fox finally said. “At least if they caught me they wouldn't turn me over as IF I was me...but...we would have to somehow cover up my eye too, and my tongue! Those are 2 dead giveaways, always have been. I..." Fox starts tapping the ground with his toes. "...I don't like...wearing shoes either..." Ky scratched his chin in deep thought. "Hmm...Well first off you’re going to have to take a bath to die your fur. if we just paint you a different color, it'll just come off when it dries." Ky then shrugged. "I don't know about your tongue or eye but you'll have to walk around wearing no shoes." "Huh?" Fox said confused. "I'm…not wearing shoes right now, that’s the problem! If they see me without shoes on, that could get them suspecting..." Ky lifted and eyebrow. “I always thought those were your shoes, I had no idea they were your feet. You'll have to wear at least some socks though." Fox slaps his own head. "They ARE socks!" “Oh! Sorry…” Ky then took a step back. "I don't even know why I'm doing this…” He thought. “I don't want him to get hurt.... He’s safer here in the forest." In that moment, Fox walked up to Flare. “…umm…Flare?” Flare turned his head to Fox, listening intently. “…about why GUN is after me…you see-” but before Fox could continue, he is interrupted by a running robot that SLAMS his way in the middle of the group, seemingly by accident. The Robot stops, then pulls out an arm cannon pointing it at everyone. He looked shaken up by the impact. “Identify yourselves!” The robot shocked Fox, and he ran behind Ky, nervous and shaking. "Please don't hurt us!" Ky put his guard up. "Do you have some business with us?" Ky asked. "My name is Ky...Who are you?" He said. Everyone then suddenly hears rotor blades popping and swirling from somewhere. Out of no where, Camo comes flying up in the helicopter from behind the mountain! Fox looks up, gasping with excitement! "Camo!" Fox jumped up and down hyperactively. Camo gets on the loud speaker. “Oh, Hey guys! Sorry if I scarred you, I was just in my base refueling the chopper, you wouldn’t believe how-” He then notices the robot holding them off. “Whoa! Hey you, robot.” The Helicopter suddenly opened up several weapon catches with machine guns, missiles, lasers, the whole package! Hundreds of weapons coming up all pointing straight at the robot. “harm them and get blown to bits.” They were soon to get another visitor though. A blue hedgehog with red stripes was following the Robot, and once he saw him with the others, he looked determined. But was this an ally…or a villain!? One thing was for sure…something was going boom. Accumulation of 22 posts |
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| Shen | Sep 12 2008, 02:37 PM Post #12 |
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Cute pictutre by Misaki.
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Wow....unknown entered way before me. xD wow...so someone was in the story the whole time....quite a sneaky person. sorry if confusing but trying not to give anything away. |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 15 2008, 03:08 PM Post #13 |
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You wanna buy a commission. Yes you do, yeeess you do. X3
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Lol! xD Chapter 6 http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-6-98062681 Chapter 6: GUN goes too far... GUN does the unthinkable in their search for Fox. Fox fans will really like this chapter. Fans of alot of action will love the next chapter too. xD -------------- Chapter 6: GUN goes too far… The robot looked up at the sky and sees the chopper. It seems like it panics a bit and points his other arm cannon at the chopper. “No! You will not stop me on my quest!” Fox then looks at him strange. “…quest? What quest?” The robot just looks around wildly, then suddenly gets mauled by a blue hedgehog with red stripes. “Hiyaa! take that!” The Robot went flying backwards and hit the ground full force. The Hedgehog stood his ground. “It's sad that you would point your gun at a child.” The robot then shoots a beam straight at echo knocking him against a tree. It gets up slowly. “Out of my way*static*” Fox then ran closer to Camo’s chopper. “Camo, Quick! While he's weak, Use that…de…de…whatever it is that disables robots!” “Alright.” Camo quickly responded. He got some kind of missile ready. “Fire!” Camo Fires a special kind of energy missile at the robot. It overloads the mech, bringing it down to the ground offline and spurting tiny bolts of electricity. Echo stood truimphedly, then looked around to everyone else. "Is anyone hurt?" Camo brought his helicopter down, and got out taking a breather. “Whoo, there we go.” Fox ran faster than the eye could see over to Camo, and plowed him onto the ground. "I'M SO HAPPY YOU'RE ALIVE!!!" Fox hugged him tightly and laid his head on his chest like a pillow. Flare saw this and was stunned. “…how did he run that…fast!?” The General walked through his base with a mission on his mind. He was very mad, and unbelievably frustrated. He got to his office, then immediately got on the phone. “…This has gone far enough…send out all 4 of the Gargantuants, find Fox by any means necessary…and unnecessary.” He slammed the phone down, and growled at his desk. “…I’ll bring down the entire forest before I have to face Viex’s wrath again.” Hmm...Who is this robot anyway?" Ky asked Fox, as he looked down at the robot. The robot buzzed and crackled on the ground, as his systems struggled to regenerate. Camo gets back up after being mugged down by Fox. “I don't know, but more importantly, why is it here, and why did it threaten you guys?” "I'd like to know too...Maybe GUN sent him here to capture Fox." Ky said. "Eggman would be the one to have sent that.” Flare added. “…and your not telling me something about Fox ky..." Flare stared waiting for an answer. Fox looked up at Flare. "…What?" "No!" Suddenly the robot said as it slowly regenerated. His voice was loud and got everyone’s attention, even Flare got distracted. "No…Robotnik…or “Eggman,” does not control anymore this body...I...used to be one of his creations…but…he threw me away and left me for dead...he thought I was too powerful." The robot got up and leaned up against a tree. "Now I wander the world, searching for answers to my purpose…I am on the run from GUN, and I thought you were GUN agents…but now I see it’s just the opposite…we are both fugitives." The robot tried to stand on its own two feet. "I am metal 7.9, a reproduction of...something. I don't know why I was built...I just know that I am. I apologize for attacking so sudden, often I attack without thinking things through first...if I analyzed you further, I could have seen that you couldn't possibly be GUN agents...and our goals were the same." The robot scanned Fox. "Besides...who would hire one into GUN with Craynitas in their blood?" Fox was shocked. He moved backwards in surprise and embarrassment. Camo quietly said to himself, “Why, if it is running from GUN, are there no files on it in GUN's database? Not even a single reference to it…” “It’s true.” Said the blue hedgehog with red stripes. Everyone looked to him and he smiled. “I’ve been following Metal for sometime, making sure he doesn’t do anything er…stupid on his quest.” He bows. “My name is Echo. This Robot really doesn’t mean you any harm, and he really is sorry for what he’s done.” Metal nods his head and Fox smiles. Flare sighs. “Well, I guess we don’t need to infiltrate GUN's base anymore, since Camo’s okay…so what now?” Flare leans up against a tree. Ky was about to say when all the sudden another hedgehog slipped out of that very tree and fell on him. "Dang.” He said as he got up. “I hate it when I fall outta the tree, especially while I’m sleeping...um…hey people!” Fox laughed when Flare was flattened on the ground. Ky looked confused. “Who are you, and why were you sleeping in a tree?…” Before he could answer, the earth started to shake. Everything shook long and hard, and kept increasing in volume. "What on Mobius!?" Echo said, surprised. Everyone got goosebumps as it felt like the end of the world was coming. Metal flew up to take a look, and what he saw was amazing. "It's GUN! They have huge machines going through the forest...their...their taking the whole forest down!" "Why are they doing that!?" Echo replied. Fox's head lowered. "…They’re looking for me." they could hear screams in the forest, as homes are dug into the ground, thousands of acres are demolished, everything in the forest sacrificed to find this little 2 year old. Camo got steamed. “Those sound like Gargantuants! Now that is going WAY too far!! How many are there Metal?” “Meh, GUN up to it again?” The new green hedgehog said, correcting his blue shirt and whipping off his black pants. “Aw, they are so stupid. They don't think about the fact that they are doing something wrong while they do it, and they don't like to deal with the consequences afterwards." He jumped up two trees to get a look. Metal looked in response to Camo. "There's one to our left, one to our right, and one directly in front of us. There’s probably one behind the mountain were on...that makes 3, possibly 4." The robot looks down. "...May I...join your group? Something is telling me fighting along with you may unravel my past. I have abilities that may prove useful to you." Ky steps up. "I don't trust him." Fox steps further. "I do." Ky looks at Fox confused. Fox just smiles. Ky also smiles. “…if you say so.” Camo walked up to Metal’s position. “Sure, We'll need all the help we can get.” He turns to everyone else. “Now how to take out the machines…” Fox knew it was no problem for him...but he was hesitant. Just taking out the soldiers got Flare suspicious. So he decided a more tactical approach. "Got a plan Flare?" Flare straightened himself out, dusted himself off, and then cleared his throat. "…Capture one, and we'll use it against them. I doubt the soldiers are trained how to counter an attack from one of their own giant machines." Echo started punching the air. "I'm in!" Metal came down slowly. "Me to. I can hack the systems once were inside." “The problem’s getting in.” Flare continued. “do you think fire will work?” Fox got a light bulb of an idea. "If you make it hot enough, perhaps all the systems will overload! Like Camo overloaded Metal...only with heat! That autta give you enough time to get in!" Fox started jumping up and down extremely happy. He just made a plan, Fox was now very proud of himself. “We got no time to discuss.” Flare said anxiously. “any objections? No? good.” Flare leaped up onto a tree and generated a fireball in his hand. Camo got into his chopper and flew up for a look. With his zooming technology, he got a reeeeaaalll good look at the machines. “…Hey!” He said through the loud speaker. “That’s the drive system I was developing. The exhaust port is on the back between the treads, and the engine is just behind that. Causing the engine to overheat will immobilize the vehicle for a few minutes. A fireball up the exhaust port should do it Flare.” Fox had the biggest smile on his face. "That's a great idea!" Echo and Metal started down towards the machine super fast, anticipating a disabled robot once they get there. "Hm...” Said the green hedgehog as he rubbed his chin. “…I might be able to do something." He waited and bided his time. Ky came up to him real quick. “…Who are you?” “Manioc.” He just as quickly responded. Ky sighed with relief. “Just making sure.” Manioc turned to Ky. “Making sure of what?” Ky laughed, and then just ran off. Manioc was very puzzled. “Making sure of what!?” Fox watched, feeling helpless. As Echo and Metal went down the mountain to meet the soldiers head on into battle, The Fox remembered Metal mentioning a possible Robot on the other side of the mountain. He got an idea how he could help without revealing...too much if himself. "I uh...I'm going to get a better view higher up the mountain...You guys fight hard!" Fox immediately DASHED into the forest, heading for the other side of the mountain. Sure enough, there was a robot there, and Fox warmed himself up. "Ready for some PAYBACK?" Fox pulled out a bar of what seemed to be candy from his sock. The words spelled "The Ultimate Energy Bar! Caffeine included!" Fox took a small bite off the corner of the bar...as small of a bite as if he was eating only a crumb. The bar was nasty and the worst thing Fox had ever eaten, but it was what gave Fox his hyper power, and the nastiness keeps him from scarfing it down. Fox's eye began spinning, his body became ecstatic, and everything inside of him burst out with immense energy! He let out a giant scream, "YEEEEEAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!" And Fox became a living cannon ball! He launched himself off the mountain, and into the robot he went! Through every corridor, through the neck, head, chest, legs, everything! Not one piece of metal or device was strong enough to withstand Fox's massive attack. Finally, Fox took one last leap into the air and went straight down the middle. He hit the ground, causing a shock wave so large, the entire robot disintegrated into dust! Once the cloud of dust settled, all that was left was shrapnel, running soldiers, and Fox in the middle, standing victorious with his energy bar in hand. He didn't have one…scratch…on him. Accumulation of 27 posts |
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| Shen | Sep 17 2008, 11:21 AM Post #14 |
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Cute pictutre by Misaki.
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Havn't had chance to read yet CLF but will once finish this 4 page definitional essay. I really want to read this chapter. |
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| Cute lil Fox | Sep 17 2008, 01:36 PM Post #15 |
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You wanna buy a commission. Yes you do, yeeess you do. X3
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Lol, Okay, I'll be waiting anticipatingly. ^_^ In the meantime, heres the next chapter, the one with alot of ACTION! xDD http://sonicj.deviantart.com/art/Save-Me-Chapter-7-98229391 Chapter 7: The Valley of Evil They fight in an epic battle to servive. Weeee!!! :lol: Alot of Drama starting to suround Flare. ----------- Chapter 7: The Valley of Death “What the #$@% was that?" Flare said turning around. Echo arrives at the machine, to find it...still activated. "Whoa! Got here too fast!" All the GUN soldiers around the machine saw Echo and started firing at an extreme rate. Echo ran with gunshots barely grazing his skin. "YEOWCH! Stop shooting at me!" Flare hears the gunshots and looks to see the machine still active. “Oh #$@%!” While they were focused on Echo, Flare throws the fireball down the mountain, and eventually up the exhaust pipe. It caused the machine to blow out, knocking out all the gun soldiers. Flare looked at it slightly shocked. "…Was that expose to happen?" Flare asked as he saw part of the forest gone. Camo sighed. “I think they're using the system wrong, because that shouldn't have happened. Not surprised though, as they didn't have the design documents, just the ones already built.” Echo got up from eating the dirt after the explosion knocked him down. "...Right!" He picked himself up, and saw Metal flying into the disabled machine. Flare landed on the ground in front of Echo, as GUN soldiers came from the right and from the left, surrounding them with machine guns. "Again?" The soldiers fired their guns again, but this time a giant hand as big as a mansion blocked the shots! The robot was now under Metals control, and he used it to take out the GUN soldiers on the ground. But he noticed the situation he got himself into. Two giant robots on 2 sides of him, ready to take him down, not happy at all. They took giant steps and in no time were right on top of him. "…I've got this." Metal said, as he flinched the controls, made the robot pick up the other robot in front of him, and THROW it into its partner on the other side. They both got up, only partly scathed, and angry. Manioc ran over, towards them, partly teleporting. "Well, I guess I didn't do anything... sweet.” A small body bumped into Manioc. He turned around to see Fox standing next to him. “…what’s with you?" Fox was all dusty, and looked very dazed and tired. "I...got...uh...I got atta...attacked where I was...watching...its okay though I...got away." Fox fell down and went fast asleep. The two other robots at that point then started RUNNING towards them with weapons flying! Metal shouted on the loud speakers, "INCOMING FIRE!" “$#@%&, turn down the volume!“ Flare shouted, rubbing his finger in his ear. Metal was puzzled. "Guns are blazing trying to kill you, and your worried about the volume? What’s the matter with you!?" Metal steps in front of the blasts, and they all hit him...but damage his armor severely. Flare grunted. "I'd like to die in peace, got a problem?" Flare took out a few GUN soldiers, then heading to an exhaust pipe of an enemy machine. Echo came running up beside Flare. "…Who said you were going to die?" Echo smiled at the retoracle question, and then started running around to distract the robots. Flare took this opportunity and launched a fireball up the exhaust pipe. The machine blew up this time, sending Flare hurtling from the shockwaves into a tree. Echo ran over to see if he was okay, and Flare just got up and stared at him. "…One of us is gonna die…you have my word on that." Echo looked surprised at Flares words. They were so…cold…and knowing. At that moment, Camo flies in above Flare. “Not if I have anything to do about it! There's only one robot left here, so we shouldn't have too many problems now.” A voice came from the evil robot. "Activating flight mode." The exhaust pipe was retracted, and replaced with a Jet engine! The whole robot transformed into a flying fortress, and started to open hatches with bombs ready to drop. Metal started searching all over the keyboard. "Where's THAT button?" Fox was still sound asleep at this point. Manioc picked up Fox, and tried to dodge everything the enemy robot was throwing, getting hit by a couple things. "C'mon wake up!" He said shaking Fox. Flare came running up as all the weapons fire barely miss him. “What’s wrong here!?” Manioc shrugs as he runs. “He passed out! I can’t get him-“ Fox's eyes slowly tried to open, and words were formed inside his mouth. "...if cookies have ingers, could I have for a dime a hot berry...thank you so muuuuch." Fox went in and out of consciousness. Then, without seeing him, Flare and Manioc PLOWED into someone. Flare quickly pulled out his gun, but found it not to be a GUN soldier. A fox with a black hoodie, big sword on his back, and a green stripe on the top of his head, raised his hand in surrender. “Don’t shoot! I’m a friend!” Flare looked around in disbelief. “What the &#$@ is going on with the never ending number of people coming from everywhere?" The fox smells around, mystified. “…What is that high level of energy coming from?” Manioc, not knowing of what the fox was really referring too, gave a panic like response. "Uh, some thing of some sort, don't ask me, I'm just-OUCH!" A bullet cut him off. "DARN FOX WAKE UP!" He shouted in Fox's ear. Flare pointed his finger the new fox. "I’ll deal with you in a bit. I’m drawing the line here." Flare stood up and folded his arms as bullets flew past him missing. The new fox slowly pulled a chaos emerald out of his hoodie pocket, held it up in front of him and slowly absorbed the energy. “I must protect my allies.” He slowly put the energy into the sword and sends a giant energy wave through most of the G.U.N weapons. He melting them into thick liquid metal, leaving the soldiers extremely puzzled, and weaponless. The fox then quickly put the emerald back in his pocket. Surprised, Flare ducked and looked at the fox. Of course, he has to be skeptical at first. “Allies? Who said we were allies?" “Well…” the fox started. “…Currently my friend Echo is helping fight and anyone he helps, I help” Flare lifted and eyebrow. “Echo?” He got closer. “There’s something you ain't telling me, isn’t there?" “Sorry…” the fox apologized. “My name is X. Echo was my protector, friend, and more of a brotherly figure. I have been secretly helping him on his travels. He normally seeks to meet friends, so if he’s helping you, you can’t be all that bad. Besides, I haven’t had a good fight in a long time.” X laughs. Flare shakes his head puzzled. “So your following Echo, Echo is following Metal, and Metal is just wondering aimlessly!?” More bullets came hurtling from the flying machine “…I will reveal more later.” "#$&@ with this!" Flare said as he stood straight up and generated a fireball the size of an oversized pumpkin and threw it at the machines engine. The machine fell to the ground creating and explosion that took out the center of the forests trees. Everyone was stunned, and Flare was exuberantly satisfied. "And stay dead!" Everyone dodged the incoming debris form the destroyed machine. Then, even more soldiers out of seemingly nowhere re-supplied more guns to fire at the group. “AGHH!” X yelled. “Don’t they know when to give up? What are they so determined to get!?” Flare ignored them, and pulled the commander of the mission out from the machine rubble. He stood in front of all the soldiers with a gun to his head "breathe and I'll shoot him." suddenly everyone froze. X, for reasons of his own, silently disappears. All the soldiers just stare at Flare, and so does his allies. Flare is breathing hard, frustrated and desperate. "Alright, someone tell me why you want the fox and you're commander live. Don’t lie to me, and don’t make me wait, or I’ll blow everyone sky high." The commander faced Flare. "We...are not authorized…too" "Lay off commander." Said one of the soldiers. He took off his helmet, and walked forward, revealing himself to be an undercover GUN operative! He looked like a Hedgehog almost; only he was gray, had only one row of spikes on his head, and had a…unique French accent. "I am Detective Sam, the leader of the entire Fox recovery operation.” He pulled out a detective hat from his jacket and laid it on his head. He put his hands in his pockets and looked up. “…I believe I can answer your questions Flare. Let me open your eyes to what exactly it is you are protecting…essentially, the end of the world.” Accumulation of 33 posts |
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