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| Contest: " Tails and his friends on Summer Vacation " | |
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| LostronXyv | Jun 13 2010, 05:02 AM Post #1 |
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" Necessity is the first cousin of invention. "
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"Tails and his friends on Summer Vacation." " Gah! " Typically a nice sunny day. To begin the first day of summer that is, but not a great day to start as Tails, a young orange two-tailed fox with an I.Q that is higher than normal children, removed himself from the harden cold floor. His radio-alarm clock went off, featuring the Mobius Radio Station, or MRS, of a guy who seemed to be in his early 20s talking about the first day of summer. " Goooooood Morning Mobians! Today is June 20th, 2010, and today is HOT! I mean so hot, some of you may need to shed off more fur than usual! I mean we're expecting a heat ray to be at the high 90s! Yeah, you all heard me! Start up your Extreme Gear, or put on a bathing suit, today is going to be a warm welcome for the start of summer! Now how about we play some tunes while you get your friends, family, bosses, loved ones, and every other person, and let us begin the dawn of summer! This is ' Believe In Myself ' to get you all started! " The voice had faded within the first few seconds of the song. Tails had always loved this song. He always imagined the song just to be about him. He shook his head as he stood up, tipsy by the looks of it. A dream that was very unusual for him, something about Cream and him being alone on the beach. He thought about his dream in deeper thought and blushed slightly. Strange feeling he had. As the minute past, Tails approached his daily hygiene- shower, teeth, comb- the usual self-respecting person would do. Slipping on his socks, he rushed down his staircase and began to start the summer breakfast. He had planned this breakfast since late May, and was hopeful that he could do it before company arrived. It would be an omelet, three sides of bacon, two sausages, toast, chocolate milk, and a comic book. His dream basically. He placed the omelet in the pan, placing cheese inside it and flipping the other half of the omelet over it. Meanwhile, the bread was toasting, as the bacon and sausage were cooking. While he was waiting, he made his chocolate milk with fresh milk and choco-powder. He got the plate and placed, probably the best breakfast he ever made, onto it in such an organized fashion. Something you usually see at a breakfast-oriented restaurant. Waiting for it to cool, he trotted over to a bag that had his favorite comic book. " Rise and Fly! " Tails had such a joyful child-charm smile that would make any parent give him what he wants regardless. As time passed, as he devoured his epic breakfast, reading through, it was 10:23am. He expected his visitors to come in a few minutes. He finished and washed the plate and cup in his dishwasher. He finished up his comic and placed it on top of the fridge and just as he was about to put shoes on, his door bell had sounded. Looking through the peep-hole, Tails silently uttered 'Yes!' and quickly opened the door. It was the famous hedgehog everyone knew as Sonic. Tails' life-long friend and probably considered older brother. Sonic wasn't alone at the door. The typical shriek of Amy would be heard, and Knuckles waved to him. Sonic was slim today, his blue fur was pretty much perfect. " Ready little buddy? We're taking a vacation and heading to the beach! " Sonic winked and smiled. Tails' movements showed joy and immediately placed on his shoes. He rushed out the house, locking it and ceased in front of Amy and Knuckles. Amy had already changed into her bathing suit, though she is wearing mini-shorts. Knuckles looked like he was ready to dig. He seemed to be ready for digging at the beach for treasures rather have fun- typical. Sonic however, he had on his same gear like every other day. Since he is Aqua-phobic, he was probably planned on to run around the large Emerald Coast Beach. Amy looked irritated looking at Sonic, but she ignored it with a smile. " Now we just need Cream and Cheese and we're good! " Amy joyfully stated. Tails smiled at the thought of Cream coming as well, but a spark-thought rushed through him. " Wait, what about Shadow? " Amy crossed her arms and did all the talking, interrupting Sonic's thoughts. " That no-good hedgehog doesn't want to come. He says ' he doesn't want to be around in public parading myself in front of people whom I don't consider allies. ' He's so selfish sometimes... " Tails rolled his eyes at the typical Shadow answer. " Alright, enough talk lets go! " Knuckles marched. He already seemed irritated. Tails wondered. " Is Rouge coming? " he asked. As they walked, Knuckles looked back at him. " Rouge? Hah. You'd be lucky to find her flying over the beach. Bat-girl wanted to work for the first day of summer, but she ain't taking my emerald. " Tails giggled to himself. He always loved the typically and predicable natures of his friends. It's what makes them so close to each other, so says Tails. As they continued to walk to Creams house, they noticed other people heading to the beach. Stocked like pack-mules, they marched down the sidewalk to the Emerald Coast. All of them were relieved as the MSR was heard through people's mobile radio. The song that was playing ' Azure Blue World, ' the considered song to play at Emerald Beach. After the song ended, they had already arrived at Cream's house. Tails went with Sonic to the door as Amy and Knuckles waiting at front. Sonic pressed the door bell and few seconds came, Vanilla, Cream's mother, answered. She smiled as Cream ducked under her mothers hand and hugged both Sonic and Tails. Cheese approached from over Vanilla and smiled. " We'll be back like around 6-7pm, if that is alright with you. " " Why, of course Sonic. She has been aching to go. " Vanilla's voice was soft and quiet. As if she didn't want her daughter to go, but she knew it was for the better- especially when she noticed Cream standing next to Tails. It was a long walk but they reach the beach. Of what they thought would be an epic fun time, was now turned to a crowded mess of a vacation. The horizon shown people of all shapes and sizes, species and hybrids and such. Knuckles' mouth opened as Amy's ears drooped. Sonic was clueless, as Cream was glum. Tails looked blankly at first but shook his head. " Hey, come on! I'm sure if we head further west, there was bound to be an open area! " His optimism persuaded the crew as they marched further west. After many minutes, they had finally found an open area. It was under the boardwalk and the water there was ripe blue and warm. Amy pulled off her mini-shorts to show her bottom bikini and ran into the water. Cream ran in, holding Tails' wrist and both began to play with Amy in the water. Knuckles dug around underneath for treasures, as Sonic just smiled at them. " Hey Sonic! Come on! It's not that deep for you to drown! " " Na, I have my own way to cool off! " With that, he ran off to the west at amazing speed. Amy shook her head. " Will... Mr. Sonic be back? " Cream asked. Amy nodded. " Of course! He's not that heartless to leave us in the water, and besides we have Knuckles! " Tails nodded and smiled at Creams' smile. They flocked in the water having fun, cooling off. Sonic returned back to the spot after 40-some minutes with a radio. MRS was playing once more with a very beach-like theme. Amy smiled and began to sway with the beat as Cream followed. Tails watched them as he returned to dry sand. Knuckles reappeared from underneath with a rusty penny and a broken golden tooth. Both Sonic and Tails looked stupefied. " What? It's still treasure! " Knuckles barked, holding them as if it was his children. Sonic and Tails both chuckled as the day past. All of them were around a campfire- Sonic, Amy, Tails, Cream, and Knuckles. Laughing at the tales they had encountered. Laughing at the relationship of Knuckles, making him feel as an outcast, but laughing away his embarrassed troubles, Amy forcing Sonic to eat what she made and forcing him to put a bracelet on she made herself from sea-shells- as everyone leers making Sonic feel uncomfortable. So typically, Sonic jumped up and ran. " Wah! Sonic! Get back here and put on my bracelet I made for you!!! Ahhh! " Amy chased him, flailing her arms like a 4-year-old. Knuckles shook his head and followed them grumbling to himself. The time had come. Tails noticed the ones left on the circle was Cream and himself. Cream brushed her hand against Tails' hand, immediately feeling a warm spark throughout his spine. Cream leaned her head against his shoulder, memorized by the flame's sparks and color. Tails looked at her first, then looked at the flame as well. The flame looked beautiful, though ominous in it's own way. As the mood shifted from laughter to silence, Cream cuddled closer to Tails, as if she was sleeping and he was the pillow. She placed her lonesome hand on his hand, warming it by her touch. Tails didn't ignore it, and held her hand with passion. Slowly moving their heads to face each others eyes. Both of their eyes reflected part of the flame, making their eye color merge in such beauty that it was as if the flame had combined with the Chaos Emeralds and create something better than a flame. It was diminishing as they got closer to each others lips. As soon as the flame went out and darkness took over, as the radio stopped in silence, all to be heard was nothing... But a "chu." Summer Vacation was looking up for everyone. Tails now knew this would be the best vacation now. The next morning Tails had awaken in a very excellent slumber. The radio was tuned to ' This Machine, ' a reminder of Shadow and Rouge. He sighed as they weren't there to be with their 'friends,' though he did use 'friends' lightly. Tails walked outside in his socks and opened the mail box. Nothing but science news and mathematics. As he trudged over to his door, rubbing his eye removing of what the sandman gave him, he noticed something. A dark figure on his roof overlooking the suburbs. Jumping off and landing on his feet, Shadow stared at him in his usual glazed blank stare. " Your friend, Amy sent me here to greet you. " Tails' eyebrow rose. Amy sent him? Just to greet? " Why, Shadow? " " Something about you wanting to see everyone during Summer Vacation. I wanted to deny but her irritable attitude forced me. " Shadow looked down. As if he knew he was lying to himself. The familiar eyes and emotions he felt at the ARK from Amy to Maria urged him to do anything. Tails smiled at him. " Well, Yeah! I wanted to know what you were planning to do for Summer Vacation! If that is such a problem. " Shadow shook his head. " It's not. I don't intend to talk about my life and my future. " There was a silence. " Amy also wanted me to see Rouge if she could come along for a visit. That bat-girl is never is the acquaintance type, though she is pretty smart. She send me a letter containing a fellow hello, I suppose. " Shadow gave the letter to Tails. It was a black letter with Rouge's insignia sealed. The address was unknown. " Gee, Thanks Shadow! See, you can say hello all you want! It's not a crime. " Shadow nodded and began to walk off. " So you can't tell me where are you going? " Shadow didn't respond, a basic 'No' was in the mind of Tails. He didn't sadden, Tails just giggled quietly and went inside. He began to think to himself as he flocked around in his kitchen. " What a day... I can't believe that this vacation started off so well! I can't believe I saw everyone- well, mostly everyone. Wish we could have hung out more. I guess that's the typicality of everyone. My dream though... how did it come true? With me and..Cream... we.... " He became distracted as he noticed he was in his workshop, bumping into his plane. " Oops, guess I dosed off. Well.. " He paused and gathered his tools. " Back to work. " End. Personal Comments: I really wanted this to be a heart-warming story, but I didn't want it plain and simple like others. I basically dug deep, as in I wanted to reference every Game up to the point of Sonic Next-Gen. Also Sonic X with the bracelet. I used foreshadowing a lot in here- I guess I'm good with that. ^^. I think I captured most of the characters usual expressions and what they would actually say. I captured Amy with flying colors. XD. Overall, I think I did pretty good. Haven't wrote a lengthy piece that is over 1.7k words in a while. I tried to use some of my poetic descriptions in this and usual daily life that people take for granted. Anyway, sorry about it's length >.<. Even if I don't win- I still had fun with this. Heck- that was my intentions. I always love to write about Sonic Characters. So hope you all had a blast reading it. I hope I can write more of these pieces as exceptional as I did in my opinion. Now- back to my poetry! EDIT: Let me know when you see any typos. I want to fix them all before judging. >.<. Ult Zerda~~ Edited by LostronXyv, Jun 26 2010, 09:03 AM.
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| AugieD | Jun 13 2010, 01:23 PM Post #2 |
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"I wanna fly high!"
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This story has been accepted as an entry to the writing contest. |
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| Skylar | Jun 14 2010, 11:58 AM Post #3 |
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I'm bordering on insanity. Why fight it?
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That's awesome, Ult! Hopefully I'll make mine soon as well. |
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