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| Damian's Story; Will contain romance | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 15 2010, 08:53 AM (532 Views) | |
| Wuffy :3 | Sep 15 2010, 08:53 AM Post #1 |
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PROLOUGE I sat in a field and breathed in the clean, fresh, Irish air. The sun felt warm on me fur and the wind blew gently. Twas a lovely summer day. I had nodded off to sleep when the sound of a snapping twig awoke me. "Damian" A soft voice said "Wake up." A pink furred vixen gently shook me fully awake. "mmm hi Angel." I smiled and gazed up at her. She was slim and beautiful. Her pink fur seemed to glow with the sunlight shinning on her from behind. Her gentle, green eyes sparkled and I blushed lightly. Her angelic giggled made my heart flutter. I reached up and brushed some fur out of her eyes "Is it me, or do ya get more beautiful everyday?" I replied gently. She blushed lightly "Oh,youre such a cute silver tongued devil." She said with that angelinc laugh of her's. She layed beside me and gently kissed my cheek. I blushed and returned the kiss. *********************************************************************************************************** CHAPTER ONE I walked in to the school. I wasnt nervous bout being in a new school or that I knew noone. I make friends rather quickly despite that I was called 'freak' for my two tails. I checked my schedule as I walked. "Let's see. Latin II, I hope its easy. Piano Theory, ha. Piece of cake." I thought. I was so caught up in my thoughts that I wasnt paying attention to where I was going and then BAM!!!! I hit a door. I fell to the ground. "Oi! Who the bloody Hell-" "I am so sorry." Came the angelic voice. My vision cleared and I saw a lovely pink vixen beside me. "Are you ok?" She asked. Her voice was gentle and soft and oh so beautiful. Her eyes were a dark emerald green and seemed to sparkle. Her fur was the loveliest shade of pink I'd ever seen. And that smile. Oh that lovely smile could turn the darkest night into the brightest day. I was stunned by her beauty "I am most terribly sorry." She said, snapping me back to reality. "Its ok." I said, sitting up. "It was an accident." She suddenly hugged me, causing me to blush "Oh, Im so glad you're not hurt. I dont think I could live with myself knowing that I hurt such a handsome guy." She giggled. My blush deepened. "I... Im Da... Damian O'Brien" "Im Angel Beddingfeild. Its nice to meet you Damian" She smiled and then realized she was still hugging me. She quickly let go and blushed lightly. "Are you sure your not hurt?" She asked, a hint of worry in her voice. "Aye lasss. I'm sure." I said, lieing. To be honest, I hurt like hell and was rather dizzy, but I didnt want her to know that "It takes more than a door to the face to take me down" I said jokingly. She giggled. "You have such a cute accent. Where ya from?" I blushed "I... Im from Ir... Ireland" "Really? Sweet. Ive always wanted to go to Ireland." She smiled "Your country is so awesome. And the guys are cute." By now my face was as red as a stop sign. We began to walk together. "Let me see your schedule please. I wanna see if we have any classes together." She asked. I handed the paper to her. She looked at hers and then at mine and smiled "We got the same classes! Well, except Second Period. You got AP European and I got Chorus, but other than that, we get to spend the day together." "Really?" I smiled "Yeah. Hey Damian?" "Aye?" "Can I ask ya a personal question?" "Aye. You can ask me anything." She blushed lightly "Do... do ya have a girl friend?" I blushed again "N... no..." I stuttered. She stopped walking and turned to me "Well.... I know we just met and all.... but would you.... uh.... welll.... what Im trying to ask is...." "Yes" I answered. "Y... yes?" "Aye." She gave me a tight hug. Just then the bell rang. "Crud! We're tardy!" She grabbed my hand an started to run to our first class. (More to come) |
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Buachaill ón Eirne mé's bhréagfainn féin cailín deas óg Né iarfainn bó spré léithe tá mé saibhir go leor 'S liom Corcaigh a mhéid e , dhá thaobh a ghleanna's Tír Eoghain 'S mur n-athraí mé béasaí 's mé n' t-oibhr ar Chontae Mhaigh Eo Translation of the Irish: I am a boy from Ireland and I'd coax a nice young girl, I wouldn't ask for a dowry with her, I'm rich enough myself, I own Cork, big as it is both sides of the glen and Tyrone, And if I don't change my ways I'll be the heir for County Mayo. 98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature. friends:Yeti, hagrid 430, ROFLDOCTOR,Crystal Shadow, lil kit, sunchails, Tails #1 Fan, blackjackannie, Eclipse Prower, kitsune's tails, Golden Fox, Shen, Galener The Fox Mage, Ulala, Random Smash, Shiki :3, Speed-X, 11wazzupsonic11, Jmb1, Ember, Matt Sternum pm me if you want to be my friend. [rainbow]My super epic soul mate and love <3: Dave 8-Ball <3[/rainbow] Faux Pas. The most epic comic EVER I AM BACK BABY! | |
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| Galener | Sep 16 2010, 05:02 AM Post #2 |
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Not bad. However I'd suggest that you put that the first part is a prologue to make it easier to tell that they are two different times. It also looks like you forgot a question mark when Angel was asking if Damian had a girl friend. Other than that it's not bad and I look forward to seeing more. |
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| Skylar | Sep 17 2010, 06:42 PM Post #3 |
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awesome story gmoney ;) i hope to see more whenever i return |
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| Red Fox | Sep 21 2010, 11:47 AM Post #4 |
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Hehe...wow...nice story Damian admittedly I was slightly confused with your style of writing yet other then that once I figure it out the story becomes easier to understood & has quite a depth to it. :) |
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| Wuffy :3 | Sep 22 2010, 07:19 AM Post #5 |
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Thanks Red ^^ Glad ya like it |
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Buachaill ón Eirne mé's bhréagfainn féin cailín deas óg Né iarfainn bó spré léithe tá mé saibhir go leor 'S liom Corcaigh a mhéid e , dhá thaobh a ghleanna's Tír Eoghain 'S mur n-athraí mé béasaí 's mé n' t-oibhr ar Chontae Mhaigh Eo Translation of the Irish: I am a boy from Ireland and I'd coax a nice young girl, I wouldn't ask for a dowry with her, I'm rich enough myself, I own Cork, big as it is both sides of the glen and Tyrone, And if I don't change my ways I'll be the heir for County Mayo. 98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature. friends:Yeti, hagrid 430, ROFLDOCTOR,Crystal Shadow, lil kit, sunchails, Tails #1 Fan, blackjackannie, Eclipse Prower, kitsune's tails, Golden Fox, Shen, Galener The Fox Mage, Ulala, Random Smash, Shiki :3, Speed-X, 11wazzupsonic11, Jmb1, Ember, Matt Sternum pm me if you want to be my friend. [rainbow]My super epic soul mate and love <3: Dave 8-Ball <3[/rainbow] Faux Pas. The most epic comic EVER I AM BACK BABY! | |
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| TesWolf | Sep 22 2010, 09:16 AM Post #6 |
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Great story mate! hope you do more soon! |
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| Wuffy :3 | Sep 23 2010, 08:49 AM Post #7 |
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Chapter Three The final bell rang. "Finally!" said Angel as she packed up "Hey, Dami?" "Aye, Aingeal?" "Aingeal? Whats that mean?" "Its Irish for 'angel'." I said with a gentle smile She giggled "Anyway, wanna walk home with me?" "Sure." I said with a big grin *********************************************************************************************** present day "Aingeal, you are the most important person in my life. I love you with all my heart and," I knelt down and took her hand in mine "you mean the world to me. You were there for me when my parents were dealt that most cruel hand by fate. You have always stood by me and been with me as my girl friend.... and I'd like to stand by you.... as your husband...." I pulled the ring from my pocket "Angel Beddingfeild, will you marry me?" She stared at me, speachless. Any confidence I had was quickly fading "Sea Damian. Pósfaidh mé tú!" (Yes Damian. I will marry you) she answered with tears in her eyes. I slid the engagement ring on her finger "Is breá liom tú, Angel." I said as I gently kissed her on the lips. (more to come) |
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Buachaill ón Eirne mé's bhréagfainn féin cailín deas óg Né iarfainn bó spré léithe tá mé saibhir go leor 'S liom Corcaigh a mhéid e , dhá thaobh a ghleanna's Tír Eoghain 'S mur n-athraí mé béasaí 's mé n' t-oibhr ar Chontae Mhaigh Eo Translation of the Irish: I am a boy from Ireland and I'd coax a nice young girl, I wouldn't ask for a dowry with her, I'm rich enough myself, I own Cork, big as it is both sides of the glen and Tyrone, And if I don't change my ways I'll be the heir for County Mayo. 98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature. friends:Yeti, hagrid 430, ROFLDOCTOR,Crystal Shadow, lil kit, sunchails, Tails #1 Fan, blackjackannie, Eclipse Prower, kitsune's tails, Golden Fox, Shen, Galener The Fox Mage, Ulala, Random Smash, Shiki :3, Speed-X, 11wazzupsonic11, Jmb1, Ember, Matt Sternum pm me if you want to be my friend. [rainbow]My super epic soul mate and love <3: Dave 8-Ball <3[/rainbow] Faux Pas. The most epic comic EVER I AM BACK BABY! | |
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| TesWolf | Sep 23 2010, 08:52 AM Post #8 |
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Tha's brilliant mate^^ I can't wait for the next part!^^ |
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| Wuffy :3 | Sep 27 2010, 08:55 AM Post #9 |
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Chapter 4 past: The Park "So Damian, what part of Ireland are ya from?" "Im from Garrynagran." "Cool." she said We slowed down as we walked. Their was a wee lough that was in the center of the park. Angel stopped there and gazed upon the shimmering blue water "Its real nice and peaceful here, isnt it Dami?" She asked sweetly "Aye that it is." I said, but I wasnt looking at the lake. I was looking at the pink angel that had stolen my heart. Her beauty was stunning. She turned towards me and I looked away, blushing. "Damian?" Her voice. It was so soft and sweet, like a nice harmony played on a piano "A.... aye?" why am I stuttering? I thought "Do.... do ya think I'm.... well.... do ya think I'm beautiful?" "a... aye. Ofcourse you are. Why would you think you weren't?" "Well.... Idk.... I guess it because of you..." "Me?" "Youre so handsome and cute. Im willin to lay the farm that youve dated girls far more beautiful than me." "Angel, lass, youre my first girl friend." I said, blushing deeply "I.... I am?" "Aye." I blushed deeper "Yo... youre not lyin to me, are ya?" "Not at all, my sweet bonnie lass. You are the most beautiful girl Ive ever had the pleasure of knowing." "Oh thank you Dami." she hugged me tight. (more to come) |
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Buachaill ón Eirne mé's bhréagfainn féin cailín deas óg Né iarfainn bó spré léithe tá mé saibhir go leor 'S liom Corcaigh a mhéid e , dhá thaobh a ghleanna's Tír Eoghain 'S mur n-athraí mé béasaí 's mé n' t-oibhr ar Chontae Mhaigh Eo Translation of the Irish: I am a boy from Ireland and I'd coax a nice young girl, I wouldn't ask for a dowry with her, I'm rich enough myself, I own Cork, big as it is both sides of the glen and Tyrone, And if I don't change my ways I'll be the heir for County Mayo. 98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature. friends:Yeti, hagrid 430, ROFLDOCTOR,Crystal Shadow, lil kit, sunchails, Tails #1 Fan, blackjackannie, Eclipse Prower, kitsune's tails, Golden Fox, Shen, Galener The Fox Mage, Ulala, Random Smash, Shiki :3, Speed-X, 11wazzupsonic11, Jmb1, Ember, Matt Sternum pm me if you want to be my friend. [rainbow]My super epic soul mate and love <3: Dave 8-Ball <3[/rainbow] Faux Pas. The most epic comic EVER I AM BACK BABY! | |
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