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| Superman | Jan 16 2008, 07:50 PM |
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OK, I'll get Strarted. Alvin: You tag is simply filled with brushes, I love the shape the the side of his face, but the brushes over his face should be erased, and you should use different tequices, not just that one, which looks pretty novicey, like you don't know what your doing. Basically, work on compo, his face should be in the centerish, not the the side, Text, just slapping it on in a random place is never good, Lighting, if there is any at all, it should from be hide or in front of his, not all over the place. Final word on it is that if you are going to use the brush tequince, don't overdo it. Rand0m: I like what you did with this, you made it fairly interesting to look at, but it lacks something. I really don't like how you lowered the opacity of the crosses and text, it doesn't look good when you have the main point sorta in a blurred spot. You could always have effects over his face aswell. It's nice, but it also looks like the render is the top layer, you should work around and with the render, not just paste it on and make all the effects behind it. Jay: First off, pretty fair render. Second, you're the winner. Even if it is a fairly whored style, it looks really nice in your tag. I love how you create the focal well, and use the space in the tag to your advantage. One thing to work on is the lighting, it's hitting the dark side of his face instead of the light side, where it should be. Comments for all: Work on Lighting, and for the sake of depth you should add effects infront of, and behind the render, without destroying the render(focal). |
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