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| Topic Started: Jan 8 2008, 07:04 PM (1,209 Views) | |
| Lep | Jan 8 2008, 07:04 PM Post #1 |
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Well some of you have already read most of this, so here's the link: http://www.cescfabregas.org/forum/viewtopi...?t=3909&start=0 But here's the first part if anybody wanted a preview :lol: Part 1 “Hello” he said suddenly to me, apart from that he didn’t say much else about himself. I smiled-apart from his random hello my evening had been dull; the awkward waitress had ‘accidentally’ spilt a beer all over me whilst passing the frosted glass to me, and then my friend had to rush off home, so there was no chance of getting out of here faster. “Hello” he repeated, looking in my seemingly lifeless eyes, “Oh sorry” I mumbled, feeling my cheeks beginning to glow with embarrassment “Hello” I added, before scanning him up and down “Erm..” I had started to say, slowly opening my mouth as my mind lay dazed in the strobe lighting, but I closed it as his smooth fingers stopped on my pert lips, all my attention now in his hands. “Let’s just dance” he whispered in my ear, I laughed, feeling impressed with the whole ‘mysterious guy’ thing he had going on “sure” I whispered back equally as quiet in his ear. With my consent, he led me over to a darker corner of the bar, but the strobe lights still gave me chance to catch glimpses of his dark chocolate eyes as the scanned the room, before landing on me. Of course, I would then divert my attention pretending I wasn’t looking. I never did understand that “rule” where you’d pretend you weren’t interested in somebody who you were, apparently that is supposed to help you. I sighed disapprovingly at the idea, and turned back to catch a full on stare into his eyes, dissolving into his world completely. The buzz never seeming to wear off and I clung on tighter to his arms to avoid melting into the vibrant dance floor. “Spiderman?” I asked finally, paying attention to his outfit, he responded by turning his head and appeared to smile but the mask still refused to show more. “I have to go now” he said after the current song had ended, his deep accent echoing through my hollow skull, before nodding towards a group of guys also dressed up in costume. I nodded sadly, biting my lip. Of course though, all good things must come to an end, which was the phrase my mother often used to make me feel less upset after Christmas. But my curiosity had grown during my teenage years, and I began to think what if it didn’t have to come to an end? Maybe there’s more than just a random dance during shifts with a sweet sounding guy? “But take this” he said shyly before scribbling a phone number onto a serviette, almost as if answering my thoughts. Was he good at that too? He squeezed my hand tightly before heading back to the group of people who had been beckoning him over, but not managing to grab anything which might help identify who Spiderman was. I sighed as my body tingled, feeling gutted and somewhat cold as I made my way across the thumping dance-floor. I was feeling at most gutted that I didn’t even earn a kiss from the mysterious stranger, I thought it was strange how you could meet somebody for just 10 minutes and that they could change everything. I’d met many people during my 17 year old life, but only a small few had made such an impact that my heart thumped constantly, and butterflies were born in the pit of my stomach. But, I didn’t even have a name. I slipped back inside the bar area, and hanging up my green dusty overall on the nearest peg. I took one last look over to the crowd where he had disappeared into, no sign of him but “Hey Roki” I called, my voice growing more enthusiastic as I walked slowly along the front of the bar, and down the left alley towards home. “I’m afraid you’re going nowhere” somebody growled from behind me, I shuddered as I turned around. I hope the newest part will be up soon for anybody interested :) |
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| Señorita Torres | Jan 8 2008, 07:11 PM Post #2 |
Cesc's 'Gas
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Edited by Señorita Torres, Sep 28 2009, 03:49 PM.
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| Jenna | Jan 8 2008, 07:26 PM Post #3 |
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Ohh i like, nicely done lep :D |
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| no-room-for-a-mushroom | Jan 8 2008, 07:33 PM Post #4 |
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But what about Seb...have you left him out of this fic, because i wanted to go how you's two got on at the end :D |
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| Lep | Jan 8 2008, 07:46 PM Post #5 |
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lol, that's just the first part! I'm a lot futher than that, plenty of Seb
:P :lol: aww, thanks for reading :D |
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| sienna_15 | Jan 9 2008, 05:57 AM Post #6 |
Cesc's 'Gas
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OMG that's my favourite line, so true :rolleyes: |
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| Maria | Jan 9 2008, 01:51 PM Post #7 |
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noce work Lep...like it :D |
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| OneUnited117 | Jan 10 2008, 08:03 PM Post #8 |
yagga yagga yagga yow
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Leppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! *runs around* When is the next part gonna be out? *bats eyelashes hopefully* |
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| rockstr | Jan 11 2008, 02:57 AM Post #9 |
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lep you an ur fics rule wid a capital R luv you loads rockstr |
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| Lep | Jan 11 2008, 12:02 PM Post #10 |
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Just finishing it off Nettie
:D If I'm a good girl and revise, It may be posted on Saturday
:D aww thanks Roki :D You Rock my socks with a capital R M S :D |
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| OneUnited117 | Jan 11 2008, 12:40 PM Post #11 |
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yagga yagga yagga yow
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Yaaay Lepppummmsss! :D :D Tomorrow!! :D *dances* You rule, did you know that?? |
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| Lep | Jan 11 2008, 11:54 PM Post #12 |
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:lol: yay! I rule! hahaha! I'm going to write a lot now, so I should post tomorrow, because I will be a good law student and revise :rolleyes: :lol: *joins in Nettie's dance* :lol: We're too cool B) |
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| rockstr | Jan 12 2008, 01:36 AM Post #13 |
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*joins in the dance*lol lep your a fab writer a wonderful frend a sister for life an oh yh........................... chexciiii wid a capital C.lol rockstr |
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| OneUnited117 | Jan 12 2008, 04:27 AM Post #14 |
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yagga yagga yagga yow
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lol yep you are chexiii! :D |
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| Lep | Jan 13 2008, 09:17 PM Post #15 |
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Sorry I said I would post this weekend, but I got caught up revising. I'm writing some now, so there is a chance I may finish and post, but most likely post early next week
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