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| Topic Started: Jan 25 2008, 08:41 PM (1,431 Views) | |
| rockstr | Jan 25 2008, 08:41 PM Post #1 |
Cesc's Teammate
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okie i no i strted a fic in the other forum bt never got round to updating it after like 2 updates lol (sorry dnt kill me)i jus got reallllllly busy, bt i thought if i strted it here again i cud carry on wid it as i hav finnally strted to write the next part to it.lol most of u hav read the 1st part bt for those who havent here it is. an the next update will be next week. so here it is (again) Rock music filled the room, the sound of electric guitars and drums traveled to the ears of all the beautiful chicks in the room, who were waiting for their ‘’men’’ to arrive. It was the last day of the footballing season and players from all over the globe were arriving to the holiday villa in the heart of Spain before going off on their own holidays with their partners. I put down my electric guitar as my song ‘’missing you from the heart’’ came to an end. I stood on the stage for a moment looking down at everyone in the huge room. Girls were laughing, drinking and basically just being girls and enjoying themselves. Everyone seemed happy but deep down like me I knew they were missing their partners. Not long to go girls I thought. I stepped down off the stage and walked towards the backroom where all my best friends were getting ready making themselves look pretty. Personally I felt their was no need, as if they weren’t beautiful already. To me they were beautiful no matter what. As I walked towards the backroom a girl came up to me and said ‘’ that was brilliant, I especially loved your solo part’’ cheers I thought, I was well made up. I realized she was Sarah ashworth. Girlfriend of Manchester uniteds Gary Neville. Weird some might say how can those to be so cool with each other? Their partners are arch rivals: LIVERPOOL V MAN U. yeah they were rivals on the pitch . but off the pitch it was different. I guess you get the picture of how life is off the pitch here! I walked towards the room and opened it. My best friends all stopped and looked at me. ‘’hey Roki’’ said Kati who looked stunning in a tank top, mini skirt and black eye make-up. ‘’we’ve been enjoying your music its well fab’’ she said.’’ Thanks Kati ’’ I replied giving her a hug. Everyone looked amazing. Jo came out of the toilet wiping her hands on sum loo paper.’’ Guys do do you think that Sheva will thin I look nice? She paused taking a deep breath ‘‘and hi Roki’’ I laughed. Jo always looked beautiful her only problem was she couldn’t see it. ‘’of course Sheva will think you look amazing’’’ said Adi finally looking up from her mobile phone. ‘’ Adi do you ever put that thing of yours down?’’ laughed Priya who was painting her toe nails. Adi chucked a cushion on Priya’s head, nail varnish spilled everywhere. ‘’Adi’’ screamed Priya who chucked the cushion back at Adi who knocked over a glass of water with her elbows. The water landed on the CD player causing sparks and put Kylie’s ‘’can’t get you out of my head’’ to an end. ‘’ Adi Priya I was listening to that ‘’ said Lozzy, who looked breathtaking in a black halter neck and pair of hot pants. She was doing a French plait on Charlottes, who was reading a copy of OK magazine. Charlotte had beautiful shoulder length hair and amazing blue eyes. She didn’t say anything even with the CD player busting and Adi and Priya chucking cushions. She didn’t even say anything when Lozzy pulled really hard at her hair showing her frustration at Kylie’s song ending. What on earth was charlotte reading in that bloody magazine? ‘’ hahahaha who cant you get out of your head Lozzy? I teased. ‘’yeah tell’’ said Kati and Jo joined in to protesting ‘’tell tell tell tell’’ ‘’ no one’’ replied Lozzy immediately. She looked around at the unconvinced faces. ‘’oh ok its well erm…’’ ‘’is it someone by the name of Mr. Cesc fabregas’’ laughed Marnie who was posing in front of the mirror. She was so like her partner Freddie, both stunning models. Marnie could strike a sexy pose even when she was snoring at 3am in the morning. ‘’oooooooooooooh cesc’’ mimicked Adi suddenly her phone beeped 3 times in a row signaling 3 text messages with a single breath. Adi read her messages smiling at her self ‘’ who is it?’’ asked Priya ‘’ ok ms nosy one is from Sonia she says she’s on her way’’ everyone cheered Sonia’s wicked, funny and beautiful as well as caring and kind. ‘’ and the other 2?’’ asked Priya again ‘’that’s for me to know and for you to wonder about darling Priya’’ laughed Adi before she started texting again. ‘’ I bet it’s that kaka of hers I here her texting all night she’s always laughing to her self as well’’ revealed Priya. ‘’ not true’’ said Adi hitting Priya on the head with a cushion again. ‘’ so Lozzy’’ Jo said ‘’ what’s happening with you and cesc?’’ Lozzy finished doing charlottes hair who was still reading her magazine. Lozzy came and sat on the floor. All the girls came round and sat in a circle. Jo and Kati sat beside me. You with us friends when one of us needs help or something’s wrong we stick by each other ready to do what we can to help. Even Adi put down her phone and charlotte closed her magazine and came and sat down in the circle. ‘’well’’ started Lozzy ‘’ its just well erm’’ she couldn’t finish her sentence off when we heard laughing from outside. Suddenly the door opened and 4 girls stood in the doorway. They looked like the fantastic 4. All wearing at least one item of metallic. The first was a beautiful blonde who sent boys knocking in to lamp posts. Annet came an gave us all a hug. The 2nd girl was more mousy brown/blonde. Wearing a minimum make-up yet looking sensational we all knew our Sonia was back. The other 2 girls both strawberry blonde. One with blue eyes the other with green both stepped in to the room one of them had a matching Liverpool necklace to mine. My fellow scouser Stace was back in town. She looked like something out of charlottes magazine so neat and beautiful. Lastly the 4th girl entered the room. This girl was magical long curls blue eyes and was wearing a beautiful dress almost one of the princesses in a fairytale. This could only be Hana. The 4 girls sensed something was wrong and immediately sat in the circle. Lozzy burst in to tears’’ What’s wrong’’ asked Annet. No body knew. We all sat their wondering what made our sweet darling Lozzy cry. On the plane: Hollie got on the plane looking around and the 1st thing that crossed her mind was where is the eye candy? She looked around pretending to be lost. Suddenly she stopped and looked a male sitting by the window. He was stunning. Yes thought Hollie his hot. She walked up to him so glad their was only 2 seats on that side. ‘’ excuse me’’ said Hollie in her sweet voice’’ I get travel sick would you mind letting me sit near the window’’ ‘’that’s only if you don’t mind’’ she added quickly. The man opened his mouth to speak’’ of course m’aam’’ he said. His voice was deep and sassy. This could only be a sexy Spaniard thought Hollie. He got up and helped Hollie put her suitcase in the area provided. She sat down and put on her belt. Result thought Hollie. She smiled at herself. ‘’hi im Fernando Torres’’ said Fernando ‘’ but you can call me nando’’ was he trying to chat Hollie up? Who could blame him Hollie was tall slim blonde with eyes and lips so sexy they would have made the pilot crash the plane. ‘’im Hollie’’ said Hollie. Fernando took her hand and kissed it. They started talking laughing almost as if they had known each other for years. ‘’are you single?’’ asked Fernando suddenly. Hollie’s stomach tightened. She really fancied Fernando but was she ready for the next step. She remembered what one of her best mate Roki had once said.’’ Enjoy life be free you only live once’’’’ yes I am’’ said Hollie smiling. She noticed relief if nando’s face. Does he fancy me? Thought Hollie she certainly fancied him even though they’d only known each other 4 a few hours. Nando seemed perfect to Hollie. He was sexy caring funny and most of all he listened to her. Her type of guy if like to put it that way. Suddenly the flight landed an hollies stomach was tightening up even more. She didn’t want 2 say goodbye. ‘’by the way im a footballer’’ said Fernando. ‘’oh my god’’ said Hollie ‘’ im going to the footballers holiday villa’’ ‘’so am I’’ said nando. Both of them beaming. Maybe this was more than a coincidence thought Hollie. Maybe this was meant to be. They went and collected their cases and stood near the entrance not knowing what to say but more not wanting 2 say goodbye. ‘’well I guess…err....’’ began Hollie. ‘’nando nando’’ suddenly came a women’s voice from behind. Nando and Hollie both turned. A woman in about her late 40’s was walking towards them calling nando’s name. She dressed quite young for her age. Miniskirt, low top and make-up and hair done to perfection. This must be his mum thought Hollie after all nando is only 22. The women came up and kissed nando, then turned to Hollie.’’ And who is this sweet adorable little friend you have picked up nando?’’ asked the women. ‘’hi you must be Fernando’s mother im Hollie’’ said Hollie stretching out her arm. The women shook hollies arm. Nando just stood there not saying anything but why was he sweating? The women laughed ‘’im nando’s partner’ said the women. Silly me thought Hollie but she smiled ‘’oh you mean like business partner or like agent’’ asked Hollie smiling. She couldn’t take her eyes off nando he looked so sexy. She wanted him. But she was distracted by the women’s laugh. The women laughed louder this time and kissed nando again. ‘’ no darling’’ said the women ‘’I mean partner as in lover’’ part 2 Hollie stood there not knowing what to say or do. She couldn’t believe what she was hearing LOVER!!!! What the hell was the world coming to? Thought Hollie. ‘’erm Hollie this is Marylyn’’ said nando ‘’ Marylyn this is Hollie’’ ‘’yeah you just said that nando you silly boy’ snapped Marylyn. Surprisingly she was smiling at the same time. A cruel cold creepy smile. ‘’hello’’ said Hollie smiling even though inside she was burning. Why was Hollie feeling so disappointed and jealous, did she actually like nando, did she think she had a future with him. But I thought he liked me thought Hollie. Her thoughts were cut short when Marylyn asked ‘’ so Hollie darrrrling where are you off to now?’’ ‘’im going to the holiday villa to meet my friends’’ said Hollie. ‘’ ooh we are off their to, what a coincidence’’ said Marylyn sarcastically raising her pencil thin eyebrow as if Hollie had purposely set this up. ‘’erm why don’t you come with us’’ said nando. Hollie’s heart started doing summer saults. ‘’you can come in our car it makes perfect sense’’ said nando. Hollie smiled but out of the corner of her eye she saw the dirty look nando’s girlfriend gave him. She hates me I no it thought Hollie. Nando was such a funny confident man on the plane but in front of Marylyn he was like a kitten who was in trouble. ‘’err ok’’ replied Hollie knowing it was a big mistake. She hated getting nando in trouble. ‘’come on’’ ordered Marylyn ‘’ our car is here’’ she snapped. Does she think we’re dogs thought Hollie. Why isn’t nando saying anything? Why is he so scared of Marylyn? Question after question popped into hollies head just like in a game of ‘’ who wants to be a millionaire’’. The 3 of them walked to the car. And what a car it was. A beautiful silver convertible. Nando went first and opened the door for the 2 ladies. Hollie went to sit at the back. Nando started to get in after her but Marylyn snapped ‘’ nando go at the front me and Hollie are going to have a nice girly chat.’’ Hollie knew this was a polite way off saying “sit at the front you coward I don’t want you and this bitch together” why does she hate me so much though Hollie as nando continued to receive deadly dirties from Marylyn. Why was she so mean, how was it that a Beautiful and amazing person like nando was with this evil control freak of a woman. Did he love her? Marylyn was pure evil and Hollie knew it. Marylyn was just like hollies idol Marylyn Monroe, both stunning blondes with bodies to die for, but this Marylyn was an evil. She was as cold as ice. Nando looked at the mirror and caught Hollie’s eye while Marylyn was checking for the phone in her bag. Hollie smiled at nando but only just because Marylyn looked up and glared at nando. Hollie looked down feeling uncomfortable what was happening to her. Why did she feel so close to nando even though they had only just met, why did she want him to leave Marylyn, why did she want to touch nando, hold him and want him to be hers. hollie tried to shake of the answers to those questions, but she couldn’t. Hollie something was happening to her, something beginning with the letter ‘’L’’. But I can’t do anything thought Hollie nando’s with her. Hollie continued to look out of the window as disappointment, pain and sadness dominated her body, mind and heart. rockstr |
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| plu178 | Jan 25 2008, 08:48 PM Post #2 |
cesc's window cleaner
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yay!!You're re-starting it. Can't wait for the next update :) |
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| Lep | Jan 25 2008, 10:49 PM Post #3 |
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:lol: yay!! I was reading through my texts the other day, and you were talking about your fic so I had been wondering what had happened!! Read it all again, can't wait for more! :) |
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| OneUnited117 | Jan 26 2008, 03:27 AM Post #4 |
yagga yagga yagga yow
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I can't wait for the update!!!!!!!!!! :blink: :blink: |
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| rockstr | Jan 26 2008, 03:18 PM Post #5 |
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lol leppie i aint txted u in ages. will do wn i top you'll again on mon. am jus writing the next part to the fic an will post on tuesday nite!!!! rockstr |
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| Super_Swede | Jan 26 2008, 06:37 PM Post #6 |
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yay roki's fic is back!!! :celb: can't wait to see what happens!! :D |
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| loz4arsenal | Jan 27 2008, 04:25 PM Post #7 |
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Yay roki's fic returns!!!!! lol i cant wait for the update! |
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| obsesion | Feb 1 2008, 02:55 PM Post #8 |
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I absolutely love your fic, roki. I always loved it and I can't wait for the updates :wub: . ;) |
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| rockstr | Feb 2 2008, 12:55 AM Post #9 |
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okie girls sorry its a bit late then planned. hope you like it Part 3 ‘’ What’s wrong Loz? ’’ I asked as soon as all the girls had sat down. But lozzy was still crying, so upset that she couldn’t speak. Everyone waited for lozzy to speak in her own time, the room was silent. Nothing, nothing could be heard apart from lozzy’s cries. Looking to break the silence an impatient Adi whispered ‘doesn’t Becks look so gay in that picture?’’. At that exact moment lozzy started to cry harder. I couldn’t stand it anymore ‘’ lozzy tell us what’s wrong, we want to help’’ ‘’yes’’ agreed Lep, ‘’Loz what is it?’’. Finally lozzy stopped crying, but still tears ran down her cheeks. ‘’ its Ryan’’ began lozzy her head bowed down. Ryan and Loz have been going out for over 1 and a half years and were totally loved up. Lozzy loved him more then she loved her D+G bags, and that’s saying something. But what had Ryan done to upset her that much? Or did something happen to him? ‘’ what’s wrong Loz , is Ryan ok? ‘’asked Malty. Lozzy looked up ‘’ yeah his okay, his more then ok’’ she replied.’’ Then what is it ?’’ asked Stace looking confused. She wasn’t the only one. Loz continued ‘’ I…..I…..I…. walked in on him yesterday’’ she cried. ‘’doing what?’’ asked Adi. ‘’ he was in bed’’ continued lozzy. Everyone was confused, then all of a sudden a million questions attacked Loz at the same time. ‘’with who?’’ ‘’when?’’ ‘’doing what?’’ everyone talked over each other. Nothing could be heard properly. Lozzy’s head was spinning, blocked and banging from all the crying , she couldn’t take it anymore. Her heart was broken , her head wasn’t right everything was moving, the whole room, she had to say something. ‘’ I caught him in bed with robin’’ said lozzy. Tears running down her cheeks again, her eyes blood-shot red. Everyone stopped talking , gob smacked. ‘’what do you mean in bed with robin?’’ I asked every bit of me was confused, same with all the other girls. ‘’ oh for goodness sake do I have to spell it out for you, don’t you get it?’’ screamed lozzy ‘’ his gay’’ and with that she burst in to tears again. rockstr |
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| OneUnited117 | Feb 2 2008, 03:35 AM Post #10 |
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:huh:
:blink: :wacko:
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:o Robin's gay?! :o Wowww! First he's with Gunnersaurus aka Adi, now with Ryan?! Busy man!! Not to mention his namesake in fish form is pregnant...what a busy man. I am sorry for Loz, though. Is this the part where some fantastically gorgeous Spaniard comes and sweeps her off her feet? :P lol! Loved the update and I really can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Lep | Feb 2 2008, 09:56 AM Post #11 |
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Robin can't be gay
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:( Poor Lozzy, how dare ryan :angry: Loved the update Roki-pops :D |
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| obsesion | Feb 2 2008, 11:14 AM Post #12 |
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Poor Loz. What an idiot. Grrr, men :angry: ! |
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| Super_Swede | Feb 2 2008, 11:40 AM Post #13 |
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Gay?!?!?!?! holy guacamole!!!! hope Lozzy'll be ok |
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| rockstr | Feb 2 2008, 06:21 PM Post #14 |
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hey guys robin isnt robin van persie his jus a randomn named character lol wn i was writing it i was watching hollyoaks an john paul was talking to robin so i jus got the name from der. dnt worry robin isnt robin van persie.lol rockstr |
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| OneUnited117 | Feb 2 2008, 06:40 PM Post #15 |
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Oh, lol! Phew! I thought you meant Robin as in RVP. I was worried, lol! :rolleyes: :P Can't wait for more. By the way, men are idiots. |
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