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| Topic Started: Apr 23 2008, 01:51 PM (683 Views) | |
| azc | Apr 23 2008, 01:51 PM Post #1 |
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Hey everyone! Looks like I've found the right place for my story :D I could use some new characters so if anyone wants to be in it, let me know your characters name, description (or pic) and anything else you want. I'll have to inform you right away that Fernando is taken so choose any other footballer. |
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| OneUnited117 | Apr 23 2008, 02:17 PM Post #2 |
yagga yagga yagga yow
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Heey welcome to the forum! :D I can't wait to read your fic. I'm Nettie btw. :) If you feel like it, can you please put me with Cristiano Ronaldo? |
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| Little Fluffy Theo | Apr 23 2008, 02:22 PM Post #3 |
Mrs Fabregas
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Ah, I know this is going to be good.
;) If it's not too much trouble, can I have Theo Walcott? *Puppy eyes.* I'm Marnie, and I'm, er... brown-haired, hazel-eyed, and kinda... narrow. Make me a Gooner! :D Can't wait to read it, Anna! |
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| fabregasrulz | Apr 23 2008, 04:28 PM Post #4 |
Cesc Loon
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I will take Cesc!!!
:D Hi i am Adi umm curly hair, tall-ish and fat cheeks <_< |
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| Linda_Ridgewell | Apr 23 2008, 04:51 PM Post #5 |
Mrs. Ramsey, Mrs. Fabregas, Mrs Giovinco!!
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hey anna! i want Bojan please!!! pwitty pwiz!..am Linda, light brown eyes, not that tall,straight black hair(shoulder length) and ya!! cant wait!! :D :D |
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| sweet_dreamz32 | Apr 23 2008, 05:25 PM Post #6 |
The Guv'nor
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DAMMIT MARNIE!! I wanted Theo!!! Stick me with Cannavaro. *GREATEST ARSE IN EUROPE!!!* yeah, im short, with black hair (armpit length) hair and dark brown eyes. |
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| OneUnited117 | Apr 23 2008, 06:40 PM Post #7 |
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yagga yagga yagga yow
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Mehhh...I am blonde and tall and I have blue eyes...and the Posh haircut. If that helps |
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| plu178 | Apr 23 2008, 07:47 PM Post #8 |
cesc's window cleaner
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hmmm....can i have hleb please? I'm indian, black hair, average height, and I have brown eyes. :) |
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| Freddielicious | Apr 23 2008, 10:30 PM Post #9 |
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Me wanna have Freddieeeee!! :-) I'm short , hair till my shoulders, me likes sports!!
:P and i have hazel brown eyes and brown hair :wub: |
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| azc | Apr 25 2008, 06:42 AM Post #10 |
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(Wow you girls really know what you want
:D I'll try and put you in the story but you'll need to tell me the characters names. Anyway, here's the first chapter) Posted Image Adia and Fernando met while she's traveling Europe with her grandmother and they have an instant connection, once the summer ends they go back to their regular lives thinking they'll never see each other again. What happens when their summer romance collides with their real lives? Chapter One "What have I done?" Amazing how those four words and the action that prompted it can change everything you know and love. Change the way you view yourself, the life you lead, the people in your life, how you view them and how they view you. Adia Moore stared blankly at the people buzzing by as she sat at one of the outdoor tables of the small Madrid café she had been visiting since her and grandmother had arrived to Spain. The same question and the events of weeks past replayed, as if her brain was in some vicious loop that wouldn't let her have a moments rest. Her mother's distress, her boyfriend's anger, her own actions continued to play, asking her when she had become something she couldn't even begin to recognize. ~*~ "What can I bring you bonita?" Adia looked at the young waiter in front of her who spoke in a heavy Spanish accent; she smiled at him grateful that he had interrupted her turbulent thoughts even if he didn't know it. "Café solo, por favor." "The lady knows Spanish." The waiter smiled at her warmly as he had been doing for the last week that she had been visiting the small establishment. Adia shook her head laughing softly. "Poquito, I'm practicing." The waiter laughed with her. "And I practice my English, un café solo, I be back." Adia watched the waiter walk away. "Back…" ~*~ ** "I want you back Adia, we can go back to the way we use be, before everything when wrong." Adia looked around the apartment, unable to look straight at James as she heard the hopefulness in his voice, he knew. He knew what she had come to say when she called him, he also knew she was right, deep down he knew, but he couldn't go back, she knew that herself. He couldn't say it was a mistake when the damage was already done. "James..." She started finally looking up at him, pain flashing across his face quick, before desperation taking over, a desperation thinly veiled by false hope. "Adia, we can be happy, I…" "No, we can't," she began. "I'm sorry, but I don't want to be with you anymore." She looked at him on once more, his face hard lined with pain and anger. He hated her, at least for now he hated her and as much as that hurt her she knew that he hating her now would be better then all the more pain they would cause each other if they tried to revive their death relationship from the ruins. ** ~*~ She broke once more from her memories; she and James had not talked since. "Café solo for the beautiful niña." The young male waiter said as he placed the cup of coffee. Adia looked up at the charming smiling face of the waiter and smiled back. "Thank you." "And this is from the señor over there." He continued as he placed a long stem red rose on the table Adia looked over where the waiter had gestured, there sat a young man who had to be at the most one or two years older then her, he was looking straight at her and flashed her a warm smile when her eyes locked with his. He was well dressed in black slacks and a thin fitting dark grey long sleeve shirt. He had blond hair that laid disarray as he had just gotten up and his eyes twinkled playful as she stared a little to long, his smile grew with her scrutiny and she couldn't help the smile that played at her lips. His expression amused her and even though she would never admit it to anyone, she was always a sucker for mischievous hand caught in the cookie jar type. The waiter gave a slight bow that made her smile once more and then left. She took the rose and touched the petals softly; she looked over to the table where the young man sat only to find it empty. A surprising wave of disappointment past through her, that she quickly mentally scolded herself for. She wasn't here for that, she was here for rest, to regroup before she had to face her life once again. "Mind if I sit down." Adia looked up; there next to her stood the man smiling down at her, he was better looking then she had first thought. He had the looks that could take some ones breath away. She gestured at the other chair at her table, which he took. "Thank you for the rose, it's beautiful." "You're welcome, I've wanted to approach you before but you always seem miles away, today I couldn't contain myself anymore." Adia smiled at him. "So you've been watching me." "Yes." "So you're my stalker? Huh I always thought you had to come out with a C.D. before you get one of those." He smiled at her response. "Am I freaking you out?" "Not yet." "Well allow me to introduce myself before I do…" "Oh so you're planning to?" Adia interrupted. He rolled his eyes playfully, which caused her to chuckle. "I'm Fernando." "Adia." "I've never heard that name before." He commented. "It means Gift." "Well…" He began taking one of her hands that rest on the table and brought it to his lips. "It’s very nice to meet you… Adia." ~*~ Fernando Torres sat for the fourth day at the local café, it was a quarter to three, if the same part held up she would be arriving any minute. Everyday this week the same girl had been showing up at the same time he was usually there. The café was always slow at this time was the excuse his brain gave him for noticing her right way. That excuse was nothing but a lie. She was beautiful, that was why he noticed her right way. Shoulder length hair the color of chocolate, porcelain skin that was flawless and a body that could make any man's mind wander. However, the most beautiful thing about her were her eye, big blue eyes that sucked you right in. The first time he had seen her eyes he had forgotten how to breathe for a moment. Blue eyes full of sadness. He could tell right away, eyes like that could not hide anything. He watched her everyday knowing he shouldn't and not being able to stop himself. Just looking at her you could feel her sadness in waves. Every time her eyes glazed over he knew she was think about what was bringing her so much pain. She always had a smiled for her waiter, but that smiled always left her lips when she was left alone. He understood that, alone she had to think. It was why he always surrounded himself with people. That was why he finally approached her when she arrived, he watched for a while as she went into her world. He watched as the waiter came and went, finally calling him so he could give her the rose he had bought from the vendor that past the café. He watched her smile, as the rose was place on her table. As she looked over at him, he reminded himself to breathe, to smile back and not just stare like a small boy with a school crush. When the waiter left her table, he stood up quietly and walked over to her. "Mind if I sit down." She looked up at him and he reminded himself once more breathe, to keep breathing. She motioned to the only other chair at her table and he took it. She thanked him for the rose and he told her about wanting to come up to her and she made a crack about him being her stalker. For a moment he was afraid he had upset her. "Am I freaking you out?" "Not yet." "Well allow me to introduce myself before I do…" "Oh so you’re planning to?" He rolled his eyes and she laughed, he couldn't help but grin. She had a beautiful laugh and he was surprised at how happy he was that she was joking with him. "I'm Fernando." She told him her name and he asked about it having never really heard it before. He took her hand, trying for the moment to ignore the spark that went through him when he touched her and brought it to his lips. "Well…It's very nice to meet you… Adia." |
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| Little Fluffy Theo | Apr 25 2008, 11:07 AM Post #11 |
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Mrs Fabregas
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Wow. This is bloody brilliant, Anna! Your descriptions and the way you write everything are so spot on. It's like I'm there in the story. And the fact that you've already made Nando halfway likeable really says something, too. I can't wait for the next bit. Oh, and a double thanks, because reading this has inspired me to get on with my coursework and just finish my story. So thanks for that! I can't wait for the next update. Mooooooore! |
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| azc | Apr 25 2008, 11:11 AM Post #12 |
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback, I'm glad you liked the first chapter! Cheers! |
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| Freddielicious | Apr 25 2008, 12:20 PM Post #13 |
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I love this story :o !!! Just go with my nickname Portii and i'll have Freddie like i said in my last reply, me wanna play soccer in it !! :D :D |
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| Little Fluffy Theo | Apr 25 2008, 12:30 PM Post #14 |
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If it helps you, it's... Nettie- Ronaldo Marnie (that's me) B) - Theo Adi (who does NOT have fat cheeks)- Cesc Linda- Bojan Jessica/ Jessie- Cannavaro Priya- Hleb Portii (apparently)- Freddie That should speed up the process of finding out everyone's names. :rolleyes: |
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| azc | Apr 25 2008, 01:18 PM Post #15 |
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Haha, thanks for the help. I'll try to put you all in the story but please have patience! |
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