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| Razzleberry | 18 Feb 2015, 02:42 PM Post #1 |
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So I'm working on a ship for a certain group I plan to release at one point, and I was a little deadpanned in the midst of it. So- I need a little help. Parliament of Intactiles Flagship: XR34 "Asgard" Unit Type: Odin-class Carrier Unit Number: X34-0000 Unit Name: The Asgard Manufacturer: Parliament of Intactiles R&R Division: Skithblathnir User(s): Parliament of Intactiles Overall Length: 4023.36 meters Max. Width: 1609.34 meters Max. Height: 804.672 meters Overall Weight: 10 million metric tons Propulsion: Sub-Light: Seven XR2 Borlin Fields: S81/X-DFR FTL: Mark X Macethor/Z-PROTOTYPE #78720HDS Powerplant: Neutron Star housed in personal pocket dimension, a smaller hydrogen core to siphon energy from the star. w/ Six nuclear fusion reactors, water cooled. Equipment and Design Features: Sensors Armaments: Six MR-232 M.A.C.(Magnetic Accleration Canon), 300 M4A2 Archer Missile Pods(24 missles per pod) 250 M7 Rapier Missle Pods(30 missles per pod), 1000 omnidirectional highcaliber live ammunition turrets, 250 pivoting railway acclerator plasma bolts(rechargable) HAVOK Nuclear Missiles(10 mounted, 5 deployable) Hardlight Acclerated Mass Driver(One) Weapons, Defenses, and Other Systems Déjà: The main Artificial Intelligence for the Asgard, she is built into the central processing unit and can control any part of the ship. Created after the image of the original leader of the Parliament of Intactiles, codename Mortlock, she has a very high intelligence and can process information instantly. Her skill at piloting the Asgard is next-to-none. The Hive: The main datacore of the Asgard, linked directly with L.O.K.I. back at the P.O.I. Valhalla. Containing all the information gathered from the expansive databank. Any kind of comments/advice would be welcomed! |
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| Vanza | 19 Feb 2015, 12:55 PM Post #2 |
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I know you stated you're looking for advice/guidance or comments, I'm just wondering to what end? That can go a couple of different ways to be honest. I could state the obvious and point out wording mix ups or areas that feel incomplete, or question some of the choices that went towards making this ship. In any case, U-TIC's fortress goes by the name Asgard. There might come wreck this
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| Razzleberry | 19 Feb 2015, 01:10 PM Post #3 |
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Mostly anything specifications, what I should add/take away. I mostly need help thinking of different defenses the ship could have. If you wanna cut apart the writing, please, feel free. I'm always looking to improve! As for Asgard, bring it
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