--Private RP Kewlster and DaDarkDude

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--Private RP Kewlster and DaDarkDude
Topic Started: Nov 2 2009, 06:15 PM (93 Views)
DaDarkDude	Nov 2 2009, 06:15 PM Post #1
Aragimo... Posts: 15,865 Group: Administrators Member #1 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13 Activity I'll be on every two to three days Emotions Excited Favorite Quote? "i have just reviewed several thousand hours of your motion picture naratives." "Oh no, he found my porn"-Joel	Guys, this is a private RP between me and Kewlster, with the sole purpose of it being to get Kewlster into RPing, and become a... sorta a veteran. Anyways, Kewlster, post when you are ready to start.



S-mAnX	Nov 7 2009, 03:42 PM Post #2
The Last Knight Posts: 4,106 Group: Premium Member Member #6 Joined: November 17, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Roxas Favorite Quote? "Do not fear the Darkness, for it is our canvas"	Waits for no reply



DaDarkDude	Nov 7 2009, 07:24 PM Post #3
Aragimo... Posts: 15,865 Group: Administrators Member #1 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13 Activity I'll be on every two to three days Emotions Excited Favorite Quote? "i have just reviewed several thousand hours of your motion picture naratives." "Oh no, he found my porn"-Joel	I've been telling him ALL week. He still wont reply... it's annoying.



Kewlster	Nov 7 2009, 10:43 PM Post #4
Heartless Posts: 377 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13	I am waiting for you to start.



S-mAnX	Nov 7 2009, 11:01 PM Post #5
The Last Knight Posts: 4,106 Group: Premium Member Member #6 Joined: November 17, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Roxas Favorite Quote? "Do not fear the Darkness, for it is our canvas"	OMG! Slaps hand on head



Kewlster	Nov 8 2009, 04:57 PM Post #6
Heartless Posts: 377 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13	Name: Jack Clinton Age: 21 Nationality: American Bio: Jack was born and raised in America. He was very attached to his father becasue his mother died while giving birth to him. His father Richared Clinton was average working class working man how worked on a farm. Then on Jacks 14 birthday his father left to fight for america in world war2. But before his father left he promised Jack he would come back after two years but he never returend. Jack stayed with his uncle for three long and cold years worring about his father. On his 17 birthday he ran away from his uncles house and joined the army in search of his father he could feel his father was not dead. one year later he was ranked capitain. Who would think at the age of 18 he was a capitain. He was rurthless he killed contless Nazi generals. Rank: captain Apperance: Tall ,skinny,buff, and heartless. Personality: Doesnt talk much Only eager to find his father . Edited by Kewlster, Nov 9 2009, 12:02 PM.



DaDarkDude	Nov 8 2009, 05:49 PM Post #7
Aragimo... Posts: 15,865 Group: Administrators Member #1 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13 Activity I'll be on every two to three days Emotions Excited Favorite Quote? "i have just reviewed several thousand hours of your motion picture naratives." "Oh no, he found my porn"-Joel	Heh. Not bad, not bad at all. Here's how this'll be. Legaan Raiot Name: Legaan Raiot (Pronounced: Ledge-awn [like in dawn] Riot) Age: 33 Appearance: http://images.wiki.wegame.com/i/3EdrzsBU.jpg Rank: Vice Captain Employed in: American Army Biography: Legaan was a nice, caring man... until that day. He had lived abroad for a while, in a different countries, and settled down in Japan- before World War 2. When the War struck, Legaan's family was taken by surprise in a hostage situation. The kidnappers, however, were ruthless. They killed Legaan's family before his very eyes. He managed to escape back to America with the help of an Old Japanese friend, and has sworn revenge ever since. He enrolled in the army, and was a natural. It wasn't long before he became a Vice Captain. He is now participating in World War 2, and has a STRONG hatred for all Natsis and Japanese. Personality: Legaan was a very kind man. After the incident, all his emotions melted, and he has become a very strict and angry man. He has little patience and his tolerance for others is very thin. He still dwells in the past, over the nightmare that occured to him over 3 years ago, but he still carries a very deep hatred for the enemy. That's a character registry! Now, let's see how you can do. Good job for your first registration though. Edited by DaDarkDude, Nov 8 2009, 10:08 PM.



Kewlster	Nov 8 2009, 09:41 PM Post #8
Heartless Posts: 377 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13	when do we start?



DaDarkDude	Nov 8 2009, 10:24 PM Post #9
Aragimo... Posts: 15,865 Group: Administrators Member #1 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13 Activity I'll be on every two to three days Emotions Excited Favorite Quote? "i have just reviewed several thousand hours of your motion picture naratives." "Oh no, he found my porn"-Joel	Uhhh, after we edit out your disgustingly hideous application. I'm gonna make you an RP master, not an RP disaster. Now, listen up, here's what a fundamental RP registration form should ALWAYS contain, unless otherwise specified: Quote: Character's Name: Character's Age: Character's Appearance: Information Relating to the RP: (Meaning, in this, it'd be what rank in the military. In the Five Countries, what village and country, in Lord Chaos, what side, in Ancient War of Life, what planet are you from. Get it?) Character's Biography: A FULL or very interesting biography about your character. Usually includes the highlight of his or her life, any problems in his/her life, and other information that helps give depth to your character. Character's Personality: How is your character? Moody, kind? Perhaps he acts like a know it all, or keeps only to himself? This is the area to elaborate on your character's behavior. Other information: This includes any other info you may want to give about your character. Often, RPs demand you give a certain category for certain things. But, these are the fundamental basicis every registration should have. Now, let me give you an example of a good biography and a bad one. bad biography Biography: Jimmy was 10 when his parents split up. He got very mad and had no friends. He decided to move out and explore aimlessly afterwards. Now, see how that was? It seemed so... lifeless. Let me show you what YOU posted: Bio: Jack was born and raised in America. His parents died when jack was 13. When Jack turned 15 he joined the army. :: Be more specific! His parents died, huh... How? In the war? Did they take their lives out of misery? A drunk hobo walked ina bar and shot them? How did both of his parents die? Did they jump off a building together? Jigsaw got them..? You see where I'm going with this? Also, why would he join the army at 15? To cope with the anger? Met a guy he kinda really liked and decided to get close to him? You should be more specific. Now, let me show you an example with my bad biography gone good. Good Biography Biography: Jimmy had lived a happy life until he had turned 10. His parents were having problems coping with each other, and often got into arguments. One day, a month before Jimmy's birthday- they decided to get a divorce. Jimmy, being only 10, had no idea how to take the divorce, and had no way to cope with it. He then made the worst mistake of his life. He had no friends, and got angry easily,so he decided to not be a burden to anyone, and went on a journey, to discover who he really was at the age of 17. He left home without looking back, and so began his journey throughout life. Notice how the two are VERY similar. With the same concepts? But the second elaborates more, and that is why the second is pleasing to read. Now, look at yours, and think... how can you improve your biography? Well first, being in the army, you should have a couple of questions to answer: -What is his past? -Who were his parents? -Is he married? -If his parents died- how? -How is the war related to him? -Why did he decide to join the army? and so on. The list can go on forever. It's the questions you decide to answer that make your biography interesting. Now. Step 2: Always add an appearance. People need to be able to visualize your character, and it makes it all the more better- for you and them- if you get a picture, and post it as your character. With all this in mind, scan over your character again- because people hate it when you make changes in the middle of the RP, and be sure that is the template you desire. Now-- make another character (you can use the same one, just another template), and show me what you've learned. Try to use that imagination you bragged so often about in 'Carlos in the Wild'. :DD



Kewlster	Nov 9 2009, 12:03 PM Post #10
Heartless Posts: 377 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13	What do you think?



DaDarkDude	Nov 9 2009, 06:32 PM Post #11
Aragimo... Posts: 15,865 Group: Administrators Member #1 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13 Activity I'll be on every two to three days Emotions Excited Favorite Quote? "i have just reviewed several thousand hours of your motion picture naratives." "Oh no, he found my porn"-Joel	Very interesting, I'll say. Really got me thinking. However, you guy is FAR too young to be a general. Only inconsistency I see. You need YEARS of experience. my guy's got a decent 10. And he's still Vice. If you want, you should make him a lietanent (sp?) Gah, I hate how firefox took down autospell check. Anyways, yeah, everything looks awesome! Now, we move on to rules. Now, in every RP, there are flat, un-changeable rules. Here are some examples of rules that apply usually in all rps: -The only character you can control, is the character your username represents. Controlling other characters is strictly against the rules. You may only post as your character! PLEASE don't speak on another character's behalf. -Please keep the RP as realistic as possible -Please make the fights you are involved in entertaining. In other words, put in details, don't god mod, and try to make the fight at least 5 paragraphs or 2 posts, depending on the power level of the enemy. -You must have at least post 2 paragraphs (5 to 10 sentences) every post. -If your character dies, there is no revival, so, if he dies, you must register another character in the character registry, and redo everything. -DO NOT GOD MOD Those rules are all flat, unchangeable rules. Every RP has side rules sometimes, however. So be sure to ALWAYS check the rules of an rp. Get it? Edited by DaDarkDude, Nov 9 2009, 06:39 PM.



S-mAnX	Nov 9 2009, 08:49 PM Post #12
The Last Knight Posts: 4,106 Group: Premium Member Member #6 Joined: November 17, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Roxas Favorite Quote? "Do not fear the Darkness, for it is our canvas"	lol The greatest show on earth, baby!



DaDarkDude	Nov 9 2009, 11:14 PM Post #13
Aragimo... Posts: 15,865 Group: Administrators Member #1 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13 Activity I'll be on every two to three days Emotions Excited Favorite Quote? "i have just reviewed several thousand hours of your motion picture naratives." "Oh no, he found my porn"-Joel	Get out of here, prick. I'm in the middle of a lesson.



S-mAnX	Nov 9 2009, 11:24 PM Post #14
The Last Knight Posts: 4,106 Group: Premium Member Member #6 Joined: November 17, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Roxas Favorite Quote? "Do not fear the Darkness, for it is our canvas"	OK, but... Throws cloak in front of mouth I'll be back! Laughs evilly



Kewlster	Nov 10 2009, 11:57 AM Post #15
Heartless Posts: 377 Group: Members Member #2 Joined: November 15, 2007 Gender? Male Favorite KH character? Organization 13	Fuck you S-mAnX.



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