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Tommy and Lil's Arbaian Night; My parody of the movie Aladdin
Topic Started: May 1 2006, 07:05 PM (1,312 Views)
JusSonic
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Author's note
This parody idea actually was made maybe a year ago. A friend of mine, an author named American Pride, asked me to do a parody of Aladdin with his favorite couple in the roles of Aladdin and Jasmine. After my previous work, The Little Trainer, I finally am beginning work on this. So here it is and enjoyed.

Tommy and Lil's Arabian Nights

Somewhere in a desert faraway, a mummy like figure dressed and speaks like a cowboy, is riding a camel to a destination. His name is Skeeter Khommen-Gettit (from The Life and Times of Juniper Lee) and this mummy begins to sing.

Skeeter: Oh I come from a land
From a faraway place
Where the caravan camels roam
Where it's flat and immense
And the heat is intense
It's barbaric, but hey--it's home!
When the wind's at your back
And the sun's from the west
And the sand in the glass is right
Come on down,
Stop on by
Hop a dragon and fly
To another Arabian night!

Arabian nights
Like Arabian days
More often than not
Are hotter than hot
In a lot of good ways

Arabian nights
'Neath Arabian moons
A fool off his guard
Could fall and fall hard
Out there on the dunes.


Skeeter and his camel arrives at their destination: a desert town. The camel is out of breath and stops. Skeeter nevertheless got off. He sees a young boy who looked about nine years old walking. He had a really round head and wore a blue snow hat with a red poofy ball on top. He also wore a brown snow coat, red scarf, blue pants, red gloves and black shoes. His body looked like it was made from construction paper. His name is Stan Marsh. Skeeter jumps in front of them and stops him.
"Hello, hello there!" Skeeter greeted Stan. Stan looks at him funny. "Good evening, little boy! Come closer!"
Stan shrugs and got closer. Unfortunately he got too close that he steps on Skeeter's foot by accident.
"Too close, too close!" yelps Skeeter as Stan backs off.
"Dude, you told me closer!" Stan said, rolling his eyes.
Skeeter recovers and continues. "Now, welcome to Toon Town! Town of mystery, enchantment, and the best stuff to buy this side of river Nile, come on down!" Skeeter quickly sets up shop as he said this.
"Dude, I am not interesting in buying anything!" protested Stan.
"Just a few sec." Skeeter begged. Stan sighs in annoyance but stay as Skeeter shows off a product. "Take a look at this baby! A combination hookah and coffee maker, also make great fries." Skeeter demonstrates by making fries with them. Stan rolls his eyes as he continues. "And it guarantee that it won't break. And.."
Skeeter taps the product on the side of his table too hard and it break into pieces.
"Heh, heh. This needs to go back to the shop." Skeeter chuckles nervously as he puts it away. He then pulls out some Tupperware. "Well, now. Look at this. I have never seen one of these before."
"Dude, it's Tupperware." Stan pointed out.
"So I see. It's also the famous Dead Sea Tupperware, listen..." Skeeter opens the Tupperware a bit and raspberrys. "And it's still good!"
Stan groans and begins to leave. But Skeeter stops him again.
"Whoa, kid! I can see that it's something rare you want, yes?" Skeeter asked with a smirk.
"Dude, I..."
"Of course you do! Well, what if I tell you that I came just a thing. Or in this case things? Interested in...these?"
Skeeter pulls out seven shining yellow balls, each with a different number of stars on them from 1 to 7.
"Dude, those are metal balls." Stan pointed out once again.
"Now, now. Don't be fooled by the appearance. Remember, what they say, it's not what's on the outside that counts, but what's on the inside." Stan begins to leave again but Skeeter interrupts his departure. "These aren't any original metal balls! These are the famous Dragon Balls!"
Stan stops and turns, interested all of the sudden. "Dragon Balls?" He asked.
"That's right. It once changed a young man's life, a young man who liked these Dragon Balls are more than what he seemed." Skeeter then begins to whispers. "A Chaos Emerald in the Life."
"Dude, who is this kid? What are these Dragon Balls?" Stan asked, pressuing Skeeter.
"So you want to hear the tale, right?" Skeeter asked with a smirk. Stan nodded as Skeeter takes some sand out. "It all begins on a dark night..." Skeeter throws the sand into the sky, seemingly forming stars. "Where a blue scarred man waits, with a dark purpose."

As Skeeter's tale begins, a man waits nearby a car for someone somewhere in the desert. He was blue-skinned, scarfaced man wearing a dark blue lab coat. Near him is a black feathered duck with a white collar standing on two legs. The man is about to lose his patience when someone on a two wheeler rides up to him. It is a boy wearing a orange parka. He got up and looked up at the blue-skinned, scarfaced man.
"About time, Kenny McCormick!" scowled the man. "You're late!"
"Give me a break, Dr. Drakken! I have to sneak out of the house! I am still living with parents, you know!" protested Kenny McCormick, his words are almost hard to hear thanks to his mumbling.
"Never mind. Do you got it?"
"I have to trade all the money I didn't let my parents on about for it but I got it." Kenny then takes out a half of a stone dragon statue from his pocket. Dr. Drakken reaches for it but Kenny pulls out. "Hey! Treasure first, doc!"
Suddenly the duck swipes the half dragon statue out of Kenny's hand before he could blink.
"Hey!" protested Kenny.
The duck then hands the half dragon statue to Dr. Drakken. The evil doctor smirks and takes out another half of the dragon statue.
"Trust me, my orange parka friend. You will get what you deserved. Right, Daffy?" Dr. Drakken said.
"Get what you deserved! Woo-hoo!" said Daffy Duck hopping up and down.
As Kenny and Daffy watches, Dr. Drakken puts both halves of the dragon statue together and it begins to glow. Suddenly the dragon statue flew out of his hands and headed into the desert.
"After it!" ordered Dr. Drakken.
Dr. Drakken and Daffy got into the car, Kenny on his two wheeler, and the trio chased after the flying dragon statue. They followed it until the statue reaches a sand dune. It then separated into two again and plunged right into the dune. There are two glowing lights from out of it. Suddenly the dune begins to rise up and soon the dune transforms into a big dragon like cave witht he glowing lights for eyes. The car and two wheeler stops stops as it approaches and everyone got out.
"Yes! At last!" Dr. Drakken said with glee. "After all this time of searching! The Cave of Shenron!"
"The Cave of Shenron! Woo-hoo!" Daffy repeated.
"Oh my..." Kenny begins to say, staring at the Cave of Shenron in shocked.
"Okay, kid." Dr. Drakken said, speaking to Kenny. "Remember our deal. Get me the Dragon Balls. You can keep the treasure but the Dragon Balls are mine!"
Kenny nodded and heads to the Cave of Shenron's entrance.
"Woo-hoo, the Dragon Balls! Woo-hoo, the Dragon Balls!" Daffy repeated. Then, when Kenny was out of earshot, Daffy whispered harshly into Dr. Drakken's ear. "Geez, where did we get this despicable kid?"
Dr. Drakken sshs him. Daffy isn't supposed to let anyone know that he can speak like a normal human. No one but Dr. Drakken that is. But right now, Dr. Drakken isn't in the mood to talk.
Kenny reaches the cave and is about to entered. But then the cave begins to roar and Kenny was blown back. He looks up and gasps as the Cave of Shenron begins to speak.
"Who disturbs my slumber?" demands the Cave of Shenron.
"Uh, just me. Kenny McCormick, a poor kid." Kenny said nervously.
"Know this. There's only one person who can entered here. One whose worth lies far within. The Chaos Emerald in the Life." boomed the Cave.
Kenny looked nervously and turned to Dr. Drakken, looking for some help.
"Don't stand there! Just going!" snapped Dr. Drakken, waving the boy on.
Kenny hesitated but moves on anyway. He reaches the entrance once more and got in. He reaches the step and puts one foot down, closing his eyes, waiting for something to happened. When nothing did at first, he breaths a sigh of relief. Before Kenny can continue, however, the Cave of Shenron roars again. Kenny screams in terror and turns to run away. But the Cave's entrance closes and the dune begins to fall back to normal. Soon the two dragon statue halves fell out.
"Find the Chaos Emerald in the Life." boomed the Cave of Shenron as it disappeared.
During the fall, sand fell onto Dr. Drakken and Daffy. The duck spits out sand angrily and yells. "I can't believe it! This is despicable! We will never find those stupid Dragon Balls at this rate! Forget it!" Daffy grabs the discared dragon statue halves and gave them back to Dr. Drakken. The duck groans as he pulls out his feather. "Great, I'm molting here. This is despicable!"
"Oh calm down, Daffy." remarked Dr. Drakken as he puts the dragon statue halves away. "Kenny probably wasn't the worthy type anyway."
"Oh, what a surprise." Daffy said sarcastic. "This is amazing. I'm going to die from that surprise! Ooh, boy. What now? We got a big problem and..."
Dr. Drakken rolls his eyes and holds Daffy's beak shut, stopping him. The evil mad scientist then recalls what the Cave of Shenron.
"Hmmm. There's only one person who can entered the cave." Dr. Drakken said. "I got to find the Chaos Emerald in the Life."

Author's note
First chapter done. In the next one, you'd see who will played Aladdin and Abu. Trust me, folks. This is another good one. Until then, read and review!
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Okay, time for another chapter of this new story. There's some things to do here so let's get busy.

Chapter 2: The Purple Haired Rugrat

The next day in Toon Town, a young purple-haired kid runs across a rooftop holding a loaf of bread which he just stole. He has stopped at an edge and almost lost his package. He looks down and hears a yell behind him.
"Stop, thief!" The boy turned to see a man with a mustache and in a ridiculous looking pilot outfit approaching him with his men, holding a sword at Tommy threateningly. They are Dick Dastardly, captain of Sultan Iroh's guards, and his men. "I will have your head as a trophy when I'm done with you, Rugrat!"
Tommy Pickles cringes. He hates being called Rugrat. It makes him sounded...like a child. He looks over the edge and at his loaf of bread.
"All this for bread?" Tommy joked as he jumps off the roof. He continues to fall until he lands on two rope with clothes hanging to dry. He skied down collecting clothes as he goes. But before he could get to the end of the line, a woman saw him, screams, and closes the shutters to a window at the end of the rope. Tommy slams into the shutters and continue falling. Luckily for them, his fall was broken by a bunch of awnings and a bunch of clothes around him. He got up, removed the clothes, and looks at his bread in triumph.
"There he is!" Tommy looked and sees that Dick's men has spotted him.
"You won't get away that easily!" yelled another one.
"'Easily'?" Tommy scoffed in disbelief.
Tommy hears some chuckling and turns to see Susie Carmichael, an African-American girl, chuckling at him along with some friends of hers. Tommy chuckles nervously then turns to see Dick at the end of the alley he's in giving instructions to his men.
"You two go that way! You, come with me! We'd get him yet!" snarled Dick Dastardly.
Quickly, Tommy pulls a blanket over him and walks to Susie and company.
"Morning, Susie." Tommy said.
"Getting in trouble early, are we Tommy?" Susie asked with a cringe.
"Trouble? No way." Tommy joked. "The only way you get into trouble if you get caught.
"Gotcha!" yelled Dick as he grabs Tommy and held him up, removing his disguise doing so.
"Now I'm in trouble!" yelped Tommy.
"And this time..."
Dick didn't have time to finished as his hat is pulled over his eyes and tied down tight, blocking his view. The captain lets Tommy go so he could get his view cleared.
Tommy smirked as he sees a familiar pal of his dancing on Dick Dastardly's head. It is an orange like creature with pointy ears, stripes like a certain beloved Pokemon, and a tail that changes sometimes. His name is Ling-Ling (from Drawn Together), Tommy's Asian battle monster friend and partner in trouble making.
"Great work, Ling-Ling!" Tommy said congratulating his friend.
"Captain is a baka as usual." Ling-Ling agrees, speaking in his Japanese tongue.
"Come on, let's get!" Tommy exclaimed as Ling-Ling jumps down and the two try to escape. As another one of Dick Dastardly's men blocked him and tries to cut him and Ling-Ling down with a sword, Tommy begins to sing.

Tommy: Gotta keep...one jump ahead of the breadline
One swing ahead of the sword


Ling-Ling raspberries the guard as Tommy pulls the guard's pants down. The guard angrily swings at Ling-Ling but misses and destroys a fish barrel, causing fish to piled out.

I steal only what I can't afford

"And that's everything!" joked Tommy as he and Ling-Ling makes their escape with the guard, pulling a fish over his lower body by mistake thinking they are his pants, chases after them.

One jump ahead of the lawmen
That's all, and that's no joke
These guys don't appreciate I'm broke!


Tommy and Ling-Ling runs up a bunch of barrels and knocks one down on the guards, hitting them like bowling pins.

Guards: (one at a time) Riffraff! Rugrat!
Scoundrel! Take that!


They throw a bunch of stuff at Tommy and Ling-Ling who dodges them quickly and got to a top of a platform.

Tommy: Just a little snack, guys!

The guards angrily shakes the platform in hopes to knocked the boy and his friend down.

Guards: Rip him open, take it back guys!

Tommy: can take a hint, gotta face the facts

Tommy jumps off the platform as if to commit suicide, but Ling-Ling hanging on a pole grabs him and they performed like acrobats.

You're my only friend, Ling-Ling!

The two ended up in a girls' harem. The girls there, Angelica, Savannah, and Nicole, aren't happy to see them.
"Who?" asked the girls and then they begin to sing.

Girls: Oh, it's sad Tommy's hit the bottom
He's become a one-man rise in crime


As this happens, Ling-Ling eats a bunch of Sushi nearby like a sumo. Tommy, swirls by Nicole, is knocked into Angelica's annoyed mother Charlotte.

Charlotte: I'd blame parents, except he hasn't got 'em!

Tommy: Gotta eat to live, gotta steal to eat
Tell you all about it when I got the time!


Angelica pushed Tommy and Ling-Ling out the window, making their exit.

Tommy: One jump ahead of the slowpokes
One skip ahead of my doom


Outside, a wrestler named Pangborn is flexing to the crowd as Dick and his men ran by. They didn't know that Tommy and Ling-Ling are hiding behind Pangborn because they are matching his mistakes. That is until they made a mistake.

Next time gonna use a nom de plume.

"There he is!" Dick yelled, spotting him.
The chase led through a bunch of sheep.

One jump ahead of the hitmen
One hit ahead of the flock
I think I'll take a stroll around the block.


In the chase, Tommy and Ling-Ling were chased by the guards through a bunch of sheep (like I said) and jumped over Homer J. Simpson sitting on a bed of nails. The guards jumped over him as well (though the fat one slipped and landed on Homer, making him scream). Ling-Ling, later, is making around with a bunch of jewelery until an angry shopkeeper named Mr. Lancer spots him.

Mr. Lancer: Stop, thief! Vandal!

"Ling-Ling!" yelled Tommy as he grabs the battle monster and runs off.

Namine: Scandal!

The guards now cornered Tommy in front of a door.

Tommy: Let's not be too hasty

The door opens and the World's Oldest Woman (from Histeria!) came out and hold Tommy happily, much to Tommy and the guards' disgust.

World's Oldest Woman: Still I think he's rather tasty

Tommy got a bit ill and got free. Then he puts his arm around a guard like they are pals.

Tommy: Gotta eat to live, gotta steal to eat
Otherwise we'd get along!


"Wrong!" yelled the guards as they pounced him, making a fighting dust cloud. When the cloud clears, Tommy and Ling-Ling has got away. Well almost when Dick spots them getting away hiding under barrels.
"Get them!" yelled Dick pointing at the two who ditched their disguises and run off.
The two runs over a pile of flaming coals very easily. The guards run across the coals, hopping up and down in pain as they went across, after Tommy and Ling-Ling. They passed a guy named Zoro Roronoa who is showing off his swords. Ling-Ling runs back, grabs a sword from a surprised Zoro, and jumps in front of the pursuing guards slashing at them like a mad Asian thing.
"He got a sword!" yelped a guard.
"Aie! Stay back or Ling-Ling will turned you into bits!" Ling-Ling threatened in Japanese holding the swords.
"You morons! We all got swords!" yelled Dick as he holds up his sword.
"Right!" yelled the guards holding up their swords.
Ling-Ling sheepishly drops the swords and ran back to Tommy. Of course, the two finds themselves surrounded with guards running from left to right. Luckily, a rope trick is being performed nearby and the two climbs up the rope quickly causing the guards to collide with each other.

Tommy: One jump ahead of the hoofbeats!

Crowd: Vandal!

Tommy: One hop ahead of the hump!

Crowd: Rugrat!

Tommy: One trick ahead of disaster

Crowd: Scoundrel!

Tommy: They're quick--but I'm much faster

Crowd: Take that!

The chase ended with the guards chasing Tommy and Ling-Ling up a staircase into a room. Tommy grabs a rug from nearby.

Tommy: Here goes, better throw my hand in
Wish me happy landin'
All I gotta do is jump!


Tommy and Ling-Ling quickly jumped out the window with the rug. The guards jumped after but all they did is fell right out. Their landing was broken: unfotunately with fertiziler sold at "Crazy Harry's Bunch of Smelly Stuff".

Meanwhile, Tommy and Ling-Ling uses the rug as a parachute to land to safely in a nearby alley. Once they landed, the two congratulated each other.
"Again good work, my little friend!" said Tommy happily. He breaks the bread in two and gave one half to Ling-Ling. "And now we eat!"
Ling-Ling greedily begins to chow down. Before Tommy could eat, however, he sees two young children named Kirby and Tiff digging through trash. He can tell that they're hungry from the looks of them. The two saw him and runs to hide. Tommy looked at them, his friend, and Ling-Ling.
"Whatcha looking at Ling-Ling for? Ling-Ling ain't giving away bread!" snapped Ling-Ling as he chows down on his bread.
Tommy sighs, got up, and goes over to Tiff and Kirby. The two moved back, scared of Tommy. Tommy smiles and holds out the bread.
"Here, you need it more than I do." Tommy insisted.
The two smiled and takes the bread Tommy has offered. Tommy walks off, happy at his good deed. This made Ling-Ling feeled guilty about his selfishness as he could barely swallowed his food. With a sigh, he walks over and holds out his bread to the kids.
"Here. Ling-Ling full already." Ling-Ling said.
Kirby takes the bread happily and pets him on the head. Ling-Ling giggled, liking this. Suddenly a fanfare interrupts the moment.
"What's this?" Ling-Ling asked as he and Tommy walks over to a crowd gathering outside the alley. Tommy and Ling-Ling (as he climbs on Tommy's head) can see that a parade is going on. He sees a red-haired freckled kid with glasses and braces, princing clothes included is riding on a horse. His name is Chuckie Finster and he is on his way towards the palace.
"So, is he on the way towards the palace?" asked a bored Mac.
"Another suitor for the princess." said Bloo with a shrug. "I'd give him a few seconds."
Tommy jumps as Tiff and Kirby runs out into the street. Unfortunately, they run right in front of the Chuckie's horse scaring it.
"Out of the way, you brats!" yelled Chuckie as he got out a whip to hit them with.
Before the whip could hit Tiff and Kirby, Tommy jumps out and stops it with his hands.
"Hey, show some manners you jerk! If I were rich like you, I could use them!" Tommy snapped.
"I'd show you some manners!"
Chuckie then knocks Tommy right into a nearby mud puddle. The crowd laughs at Tommy's misfortune. Ling-Ling runs over to helped his friend up as Tommy glares at the departing Chuckie on his horse. He smirks.
"Hey, Ling-Ling! Check it out! A horse with two butts!" joked Tommy.
The horse looks back annoyed while by an annoyed looking Chuckie.
"Oh yeah? Well, you're nothing more than a Rugrat!" snapped Chuckie. "You were born one and you'd died like one! And the only people who would missed you at all would be your stupid fleas!"
This made Tommy mad and he got up and charges after Chuckie. But by then, he has made it into the palace and the doors closes in Tommy's face. Tommy frowns at the doors as Ling-Ling walks up to him.
"I'm not a Rugrat! And I don't have fleas!" Tommy yells, knowing that it's useless now. He groans. "Come on, Ling-Ling. Let's go home."

Later that night, Tommy and Ling-Ling walked home as Tommy sings sadly.

Tommy: Riffraff, Rugrat.
I don't buy that.
If only they'd look closer


The two finally got home which is a mess but at least it got a good view with a curtain covering it.

Would they see a poor boy? No siree.

Ling-Ling got into his madeshift bed and gets ready to sleep for tonight.

They'd find out, there's so much more to me.

Tommy pats Ling-Ling on the head then goes over to the curtain. He pulls it opened. The view shows a beautiful view of not just the city but the palace itself. He sighs.
"Someday, Ling-Ling, things will get better." Tommy said with a smile, looking at the palace. "Someday we'd be rich, live in a palace, and will no longer have any problems whatsoever."

Author's note
Chapter 2's done. So whatcha guys think? I hope you liked this chapter because the next one will be better as. Anyway, review this story but no flames, okay?
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Before I start on the next chapter, I liked to comment on the reviews I got.

Neros Urameshi: (2 of his reviews) Glad you like whose I chosen as Jafar and Iago, Neros. Of course, the story was suggested by a friend of mine who is a Tommy/Lil fan. I thought the previously T/L story I did Tommy and Lil's Love Adventure was my only one, but I guess I was wrong. Don't take it personally, I liked T/L but I enjoyed T/K better. As for the other review, before I started to do this by myself, it was a co-write story and the same pal of mine has put Chuckie in the mean prince's role (I'm guessing as a reference to C/L, but that's just me). Personally, I would have chosen someone else to do it but I got to stick to what I remember. Don't worry, it won't happened again. No offense to any Chuckie fans because I don't hate him.

spoon_lord15: Thanks for liking my story. Again, I would have chosen a better jerk as well. See above.

Now then, onto the show!

Chapter 3: Wedding Law

The next day...
Sultan Iroh (This is Uncle Iroh from Avatar: The Last Airbender) was having tea in his chambers when an upset Chuckie storms in.
"This is the most humiliating day of my life!" yelled Chuckie as he went passed the king to the exit.
"Prince Chuckie? Leaving so soon?" asked Iroh disappointed. He was hoping he would stay longer this time in hopes...
"Let's see anyone marry that girl now!"
Iroh can that see that Chuckie has a big hole in his pants, showing his underwear.
As Chuckie left, Iroh groans.
"Not again." said Iroh still groaning, then he sighs. "Lil."
Iroh heads to the courtyard knowing that his granddaughter Princess Lil DeVille is there. Iroh has been taking care of her granddaughter since her parents passed away and her brother Phil went away on a trip. Iroh took over his old Sultan duties and waits until the day Lil and her new husband takes the throne. Of course, there's one big problem: getting Lil a new husband.

(Author's note: Like Darth Ben Vader did in his Aladdin parody, I have Lil into another 'relation' role, except Lil is the granddaughter)
"Lil, Lil!" Iroh calls for his granddaughter. He sees her by the fountain sitting. He goes over.
"Lil." Suddenly an orange like dog-type Pokemon blocks him and snarled, holding what is obviously a part of Chuckie's pants that was ripped off.
"Growlithe!" yelled Sultan Iroh in annoyance as he grabs the ripped part from Growlithe. The two played a game of tug of war until Iroh pulls back and lands on his behind, winning sort of. He looked at the part, got up, and frowns. "No wonder Prince Chuckie stormed off."
"Grandpa." Lil giggled as Growlithe comes over to her. "Growlithe was playing with him. Isn't that right, Growlithe?" Lil is speaking to Growlithe in a cutey tone of voice. "You were playing with that sometimes mean, geeky, overdressed Prince Chuckie, aren't you?"
Growlithe barks happily as Lil pets him while giggling. But she stopped as she sees that Iroh is giving her an upset look. She clears her throat and stood up. "Ahem."
Iroh sighs and said, "Li, you got to stopped turning away any prince or whatever I can find in short notice who comes here. The law said that..."
Lil said the next words at the same time as her grandfather as the two goes over to a bird cage and she takes out a dove, "You must be married to a prince."
"Before your next birthday." Iroh concluded.
Lil sighs sadly. "Grandpa, the law is wrong. Even my parents knew it before they died."
"You got 3 days left you know."
"I don't want to be forced into something I don't want." Lil said as she pets a dove. "Besides, if I want to marry, I want to be married out of love."
"Lil, it's not just the law," Iroh said as he takes the dove from Lil and puts it back in the cage. "I am your only guardian left but even I won't be around forever. It's not just the law, I just wanted to make sure you have someone to care and provide for you, that's all."
Lil groans as she goes back to the fountain. "Grandpa, be reasonable. I never did anything on my own before." Lil swirls around in the water, petting the fish that are in there. "Heck, I don't have any real friends."
Growlithe growled in annoyance as Lil added. "Except you Growlithe." Growlithe smiles and went back to whatever he was doing. Lil continued.
"Plus, I have never even been outside the palace."
"Well, there's a good reason, Lil. You're a princess." Iroh reminded her.
Lil frowns and slapped the water hard. "Then maybe I don't want to be a princess anymore, did you ever think of that?"
Iroh groans and glares at Growlithe. "He forbids you to have any daughters or granddaughters!"
Growlithe looks puzzled as Iroh stormed back inside the palace. Lil pauses for a minute, then goes back to the bird cage, opens it, and lets all the dove goes. Lil sighs happily as she watches them fly away to freedom.

"I have no idea where she gets such ideas." said Iroh with a sigh as he plays with a model of Toon Town, especially its model sun/sphere. "Her parents weren't that picky."
A shadow looms over him and Iroh jumps back. He looks and sighs in relief.
"Ah, Dr. Drakken." said Iroh as Dr. Drakken came in with a smile on his face, Daffy is by his side. "My most trusted adviser and psychiatrist. I may need of your assistance.
"That is what I am hired for." Dr. Drakken responded as he bowed.
"I am having trouble with my granddaughter Lil. She still refuses to take a husband. I'm at my wit's end." said Iroh with a sigh.
"Woo-hoo! Wit's end!" Daffy responded pretending to be 'normal' again.
Iroh smiles and takes out some crackers. "Have some crackers, pretty duckie!" said Iroh happily.
If there's one thing Daffy despites and it's cracker, especially the salty dull ones Sultan Iroh has. But he was forced to stand still and let the sultan stuffed the crackers in his mouth. Daffy groans as he tries to forcefully eat it. Dr. Drakken laughs, mostly at Daffy's misery.
"Well, as usual, dumb animals are your faves." joked Dr. Drakken. Daffy gave him an angry glare. Dr. Drakken continues. "Now then, Sultan, I think I know a way to solve this problem of yours with Lil."
"You're the only one who can helped, Dr. Drakken." said Iroh nodding.
"Of course, it's going to cost you." Dr. Drakken said as he glares at the Chaos Emerald Iroh is wearing on his ring that is on his finger.
"My ring? But...it has been in my family for years."
"Well, I am going to need it to help get a necessary suitor for your granddaughter Lil, don't I? Look over there!" Dr. Drakken said pointing. Iroh turns and Dr. Drakken takes out a hypno ray and turns it on. As Iroh turns back, Dr. Drakken hits him with a beam and Iroh got a hypnotized look on his face. "Don't worry, all will be fine."
"All will be fine." said Iroh in a trance.
"Now, if I could have that Chaos Emerald..."
"Here, Dr. Drakken." said Iroh as he removes the Chaos Emerald ring and hands it to the mad scientist. "Everything you want, is fine with me."
"Thanks. You are very helpful." said Dr. Drakken as he grabs the ring from the sultan. "Now while I go find a solution, why don't you go off and have fun?"
"Yes. Why not?" asked Iroh as he turns back to the model still in a trance.
Dr. Drakken and Daffy took this time to exit. Once they are out of the room and exit, Daffy spits out the cracker in anger.
"That is despicable! I can't take it anymore! If I have to eat more of those despicable dull crackers, he's going to get it!"
As they entered a room, Dr. Drakken pushes a hidden switch. A wall slides backward to reveal the hidden entrance to Dr. Drakken's chambers/lab.
"Oh shut up, Daffy." mumbled the mad scientist as he and Daffy walked into the entrance, it closing behind them.
"And then I'd tackled him to the ground and killed him again!" Daffy continued sending out his anger and frustration.
"Well, when I get the Dragon Balls, I will be the new Sultan and remove that old idiot." remarked Dr. Drakken as they reached the next door to the lab.
"And then I'd stuffed the crackers down his throat and see how he likes it! Woo-hoo!" laughed Daffy evilly.
The two goes through the door and Dr. Drakken closes it behind them with a slam.

Later at night, someone is running through the garden wearing a cloak. This figure reached the palace walls and begins to climb it. Suddenly the figure felt a tub from behind. This figure looked again and sees a sad Growlithe, tugging on her cloak sadly. The figure is actually Lil.
"Oh, I'm sorry, Growlithe." Lil sighed sadly as she kneels down to pet Growlithe for what seemingly to be the last time. "But I don't want to stay here and have my decisions made for me. I'll miss you."
Lil pets Growlithe once more and begins climbing up the wall again. A sad Growlithe helped her up. She reached the top and looks down to see Growlithe whimpered sadly.
"Goodbye." Lil whispered as she disappears over the wall. Growlithe lays down, looking sadly at the wall where Lil went over.

Author's note
Another chapter done. If anyone asked about Iroh, he's another suggestion by the same person who wants me to do the T/L story. Whatcha guys think? I hope you liked it. Chapter 4 should be coming soon. So until then, review but no flames.
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In this chapter, Tommy and Lil finally meets and in a nasty situation as well.

Kimi: To tell you the truth, I'm used to you writing T/K by now.

Me: Not to worry. When I get this done, I have more time to think up other stories that could included you and Tommy, especially Nicktoons Wars Episode III: Revenge of Visaru."

June: Visaru?

Danny: The villain Staredcraft made up.

June: Ah.

Me: Also, to those who wondered what's going on with Kingdom Nicktoons II, I will get to it once I get a game script. Anyway, onto the story...

Chapter 4: The Destined Romantic Meeting

The next day, Tommy and Ling-Ling are up to their old tricks again. They are on top of an awning of a fruit stand getting ready for their next theft.
"Okay, now Ling-Ling." Tommy instructed.
Ling-Ling nods and then hangs over the edge with his tail. In the stand, a muscular seven-foot tall monster calls out to the crowd holding a melon. He had red scraggly hair, baggy red eyebrows, red eyes, a green face, a tan snout, two horns, yellow skin, a tan umpire-like chest, and green shell with a white rim and seven spikes with orange-yellow rings around them on his back. He also wore a spiked collar, spiked bracelets, spiked shoulder bands, and an open lab coat. This monster'/shopkeeper's name was Bowser Koopa and he doesn't know Ling-Ling's around at first.
"Step right up folks and taste the best melons ever made!" Bowser called out. "Your tongue will thank you for the rest of your life!"
Bowser hears some giggling and turns to see Ling-Ling grabbing a melon and hanging around.
"Hey! Put that down!" Bowser yelled.
"Try me, mud for brains." mocked Ling-Ling in Japanese.
"Why you!" Bowser puts the melon he's holding down so he can come over and tried to steal the melon Ling-Ling's holding onto away. "Get lost, you little orange rat!"
Unknown to him, during the struggle, two hands reached down, grabs the melon Bowser was holding onto and disappeared with it. Bowser won the tug of war.
"Ha!" said Bowser in triumph. He goes back to the front and put the melon on top of the stack where the other melon was at. He then looks confused then turns to Ling-Ling.
"Bye!" Ling-Ling said as he disappears to the awning where Tommy, the obvious other melon, greets him.
"Good one, Ling-Ling!" said Tommy with a smile. He cuts open the melon and gave a half to Ling-Ling. "Breakfast time!"

In the crowd nearby, Lil still in disguise looks around. As she passed by a few shops, some shopkeepers called out to her.
"Pot! Get a pot here! Pots best in brass or silver." called out a shopkeeper named Jumba Jookiba.
"Sugar dates, sugar dates and figs!" called out another shopkeeper named Huey Freeman. "Sugar dates and whatever these things are!"
"Hey lady. Want some jewelry? A pretty necklace for a pretty necklace." called out a shopkeeper named Dr. Fred Edison (from the game Day of the Tentacle).
Lil smiles, charmed by the shops. But then she jumps as a skunk shopkeeper named Pepe Le Pew shoves a fish into her face.
"Fish. Fresh fish, madame!" said Pepe. "We catch 'em, you buy 'em."
"Uh no thanks." Lil said walking backwards trying to get away from not just the fish smell. However she accidentally jumped into a Digimon fire eater named Agumon, making him swallowed his fire by accident.
"Oh, I'm so sorry!" Lil apologized.
Agumon belched and spits out flames, disgusting Lil doing so and knocking down her hood.
At the awning on the fruit stand, Tommy sees her. He begins to looked at her funny, IM he falls in love with her. He has a weird grin on his face as he stares at her.
"I'm sorry again." Lil apologized as she walks away.
"Wow." Tommy whispered happily as he continues to stare at Lil.
Lil puts her hood back up and continues on her way. Ling-Ling notices the weird grin on Tommy's face because of the obvious.
"Uh, Tommy? Hello?" asked Ling-Ling waving a hand in front of his friend.

Lil stops at a fruit stand and sees a young kid named Baby Gonzo (from Muppet Babies) trying to reach for an apple. He is obviously hungry and Lil knows it. He looks up sadly at Lil.
"Oh are you hungry?" asked Lil gently. She takes an apple and gave it to Baby Gonzo. "Here, you can have this."
"You better pay for that." Lil turns and sees a frowning shopkeeper, a ghost in a bounty hunter costume named Skulker, looking at her. Baby Gonzo runs away scared.
"Pay?" Lil gasped. In her flight from home, she has forgotten to take some money with her.
"No one steals from Skulker's cart and gets away with it!" boomed Skulker angrily.
"I'm sorry. But...I don't have any money at the moment."
"Thief!" yelled Skulker grabbed Lil by the wrist and pinning the same hand she have given Baby Gonzo the apple with to the table, trapping her.
"Wait! Listen! Let me go to the palace and talked to the sultan!" begged Lil.
"Do you know what I do to anyone for stealing?" yells Skulker as he takes out a cutter, intending to cut Lil's hand right off.
"No, don't!" Lil screamed, her eyes widen in fear.
The cutter drops but then Tommy jumps in, stopping it.
"Oh, thank you so much for keeping an eye on her! I have been looking for her!" Tommy exclaimed. He turns to Lil and begins to scolded her. "How could you run off on me like that, young lady?"
"What are you doing?" Lil whispered to Tommy harshly.
"Play along." Tommy whispered suggestively.
"You know her?" Skulker asked with a frown.
Tommy made a pretend sad sigh and said, "Yep, unfortunately. She's my sis. And unfortunately, she's crazy."
Tommy waves a finger around his ear, making the crazy sigh. Lil looks offended.
"She claims to know the sultan!" snapped Skulker.
"Oh, that claim?" Tommy chuckled as he looks at Ling-Ling in his attempt to pick a pocket from an unexpecting spectacular. "She thought the Asian thing there is the sultan."
"What?" asked Ling-Ling surprised.
Lil, now realizing where's Tommy going at, kneels and bows to Ling-Ling.
"Oh, great and powerful sultan. How may I served you?" Lil asked, acting crazy.
"Ah." Ling-Ling now realized what Tommy's trying to do and played along as well. "Well, you can feed me food and shine my boots." Ling-Ling pats Lil on the head.
Skulker looks at this in a suspicious puzzlement. Tommy takes an apple from the cart. "Sad, isn't it, but no harm done." Tommy said as he gives the apple to Skulker. Tommy then Lil's hand and begins to walked off with her. "Come, sis. Time to see the doctor.
"Oh, hi doctor. How are you?" Lil asked, still pretending to be crazy, to a Reptar they're passing.
"Not him." Tommy hissed to her still playing. He glances at Ling-Ling. "Let's go, 'Sultan'."
"Well, I'd be here to served you all morning!" said Ling-Ling in Japanese as he bows. Unfortunately, a bunch of stuff fell from his morning (how when he has no pockets, I do not know), including some apples from Skulker's cart.
"What?" Skulker turned suddenly. Ling-Ling grabs what he could, including the apples, and runs after Tommy and Lil. Skulker realized that he has been had.
"Come back here!" Skulker yells uselessly to a fleeing and laughing trio of Tommy, Lil, and Ling-Ling.

Author's note
Nice chapter, eh?

Lil: I thought so too.

Kimi: (scoffs) Please. You only are because you are paired up with Tommy.

Lil: Jealous are we?

Me: Please, no fighting, especially in the author's note. Now then, Dr. Fred Edison, one of the shopkeepers, is the mad scientist seen in Maniac Mansion and Day of the Tentacle, both PC games. Betcha no one uses him yet.

Dr. Fred Edison: Darn right!

Me: Anyway, time for me to go. Review this and no flames. I'd be back with another chapter as soon as I can. Until then, this is JusSonic signing off again!
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Sorry for the delay, folks. But I was busy with other details. But I assured you that I will still have time to work on this. Anyway, on with the story.

Chapter 5: Arrested!

In Dr. Drakken's lab, the evil mad scientist is at work looking for the Chaos Emerald in the Life. Daffy is running on a gear in a bizarre machine cooking up a storm. Literally as a storm is brewing from the top of the machine.
"Hey, no offense or anything, but can't we wait for a real storm for once?" asked Daffy almost out of breath.
"Stop your complaining and run faster!" snapped Dr. Drakken as he places Iroh's Chaos Emerald ring in the machine.
"Yes, oh scarred one." Daffy saluted then runs faster.
As he does, a lightning bolt hits the Chaos Emerald ring, melting it into the hourglass below. The sand inside begins to swirl like magic.
"Okay, sands of time! Reveal who can entered the Cave of Shenron!" Dr. Drakken demands. The sand in the top of the hourglass reveal the Cave of Shenron. As it falls through in a storm, it creates an image, an image of Tommy and Ling-Ling climbing up a ladder somewhere in Toon Town, followed by Lil still disguised. Dr. Drakken smirked. He knows who the girl is even though he has no idea of the boy's or the creature. But still...
"There he is, Daffy!" Dr. Drakken laughs as he glares at Tommy. "My Chaos Emerald in the Life."
"Him?" snapped Daffy as he lets go for a sec. "That's the kid we are waiting for?"
But Daffy made a mistake letting go as he fell and is sucked into the gear. He begins bouncing around like mad. Dr. Drakken doesn't seem to noticed or cared.
"Well, time for him to get invited to the palace...dungeon that is." Dr. Drakken said with a smirk. "What do you say?
Daffy's bouncing ends up with him slamming into a wall, all of his feathers fell out.
"You're despicable." mumbled Daffy as he fell to the ground.
Dr. Drakken laughs evilly as he looks at the hourglass at Tommy and Lil again.

Tommy and Ling-Ling has reached the top of the ladder and waits for Lil to followed.
"Almost to my home." Tommy said to Lil.
Lil got to the top, but accidentally trips and fell. Luckily for her, Tommy was her to catch her in his arms. The two looked at each other as if for the longest time. Lil let go and blushed.
"Well, thanks for saving me from that creep." Lil said.
"Ah, never mind." Tommy said, blushing as he grabs onto a pole. "So, first time in the market?"
Tommy uses the pole to pole vault to the next building. He turns to Lil, still on the previous building, waiting for an answer, tossing the pole to her.
"Well, isn't it obvious?" Lil asked.
"I've never noticed you until now." Tommy said with a sigh as he stares at her, still love-struck. Lil blushes, returning the look. Tommy came to his senses and spoke up. "The truth to the matter is that Toon Town isn't safe."
Tommy lays a plank between the buildings, expecting Lil to walked on it to cross over. But when he leans down, Lil pole-vaults over with the pole Tommy has gave her. Tommy and Ling-Ling's jaws dropped as Lil smiles, tossing the pole back.
"I'm learn quickly." Lil joked.
Tommy nods. "Okay, this way."
The two enters Tommy's home, dodging beams and planks doing so.
"Watch it." Tommy said, helping Lil dodged a beam. "Be careful here."
"So you lived here?" Lil asked looking around.
"Yep, all our lives, me and Ling-Ling. We come and go whenever we wanted to." Tommy said proudly.
"Fabulous."
"Well, it isn't much." Tommy goes over to the curtain and revealed the palace view. "But we got a great view here. The palace looks cool, huh?"
Lil groans at the sight of the palace and sit down. "Yeah, it's...great."
"Man, I wished I can see what's living there like. You have servants and valets to ordered around..." Tommy said in amazement.
"As well as people telling you where to go and where to dressed." Lil continued.
"Not here, though." Tommy grabs an apple from Ling-Ling who was about to eat. Ling-Ling looks annoyed as Tommy continued. "Always looking hard for food and escaping the guards..."
"Not allowed to make your own choices." Lil continued.
"Sometime you can feel so..."
"You're just..."
"Trapped." Tommy and Lil said at the same time.
They looked at each other as they realized what they just did. They blushed madly, realizing how good they are for each other. But Tommy recovers and breaks the look. He grabs another apple from Ling-Ling, who was about to eat it, and passed it to Lil.
"So where did you come from?" Tommy asked, changing the subject.
Lil groans and said, "Who cares? I ran away and I refused to returned!"
"Why's that?" Tommy asked, taking a bite from an apple and gave it to Ling-Ling, who scowls at this.
"Stupid baka." Ling-Ling mumbled angrily in Japanese. He smirks as he sees that Lil hasn't taken a bite out of the other apple and sneaks towards it.
Tommy walks over and sat next to Lil.
"My grandfather wanted me to marry." Lil said sadly.
"I'm sorry to hear that." Tommy said in disbelief. He dislikes people being forced into something that don't want to do, especially when one person is this girl. Before Tommy could respond, he sees Ling-Ling trying to steal Lil's apple. "Ling-Ling!"
Ling-Ling yelps and runs away, climbing on a higher point, yelling at Lil in a bunch of Japanese too fast for anyone except Tommy to translated.
"What is he saying?" Lil asked annoyed.
Tommy knows what Ling-Ling but realized that he doesn't dare repeat it. "Uh, he said..." Tommy thought of something and said, "That isn't right."
"What?" Ling-Ling asked startled.
"Oh really?" Lil asked with a knowing smirk.
"Well, sure." Tommy nodded.
"Anything else that he said?"
"Only that he wishes to find a way to help."
"Yeah right." Ling-Ling mumbled as he turns around with a huff.
"Well, tell him that's sweet." Lil said sweetly.
The two looked at each other in some sort of trance and learned towards each other about to kiss. But before they could, a voice interrupts.
"There you are!" Tommy and Lil turned and is shocked to see that Dick Dastardly and his men are at the entrance to Tommy's place.
"They've found me!" Tommy and Lil said at once. They looked at each other puzzled. "They're after you?"
"Oh no. My grandfather must have send them." Lil groaned as the guards come closer.
"Do you trust me?" Tommy asked. Lil turns and sees that he is at the edge of his window holding out his hand.
"What?"
"Do you trust me?"
Lil hesitates but takes Tommy's hand. "Yeah..."
"Then jump!"
Tommy and Lil jumped out the window to escaped the guards, landing in a bunch of salt below. The two get away and attempted to escape but finds Dick Dastardly waiting for them.
"We got to stop meaning like this." said Dick with a taunting smirk. "People would think we're pals, Rugrat."
Suddenly Ling-Ling pulls Dick's hat over his head again in attempt to blind him as yesterday. Tommy and Lil tried to escape before but finds more of Dick's men blocking their way out. Dick Dastardly angrily grabs Ling-Ling and throws him into a nearby vase. The guards seized Tommy. The boy is helpless against him.
"You're going to the dungeon, boy." Dick laughed evilly. "You didn't think you could escape me forever, right?"
"Get your hands off of me!" Tommy yelled as the guards begin to take him away.
"Let him go, Dick Dastardly!" Lil yelled punching Dick in the arm.
But Dick laughs and throws Lil to the ground, not realizing who she is at first. "Well, what do we got here? A Rugmouse! And who are you tell me what to do?"
Lil got up angrily and removed her hood. "Because the princess orders it, that's why!"
Dick and his men gasped at this and bowed down, forcing Tommy to do so as well.
"Princess Lil." Dick Dastardly said, shivering.
"The princess?" Tommy asked, looking up in disbelief.
"The princess?" Ling-Ling repeated, looking out the vase he was tossed into in Japanese in disbelief.
"What are you doing out of the palace and with this Rugrat of all people?" Dick asked in disbelief.
"Does it matter why I'm out here?" Lil snapped angrily. "Let him go at once!"
Dick hesitates and spoke up. "Although I was ordered to followed orders from the royal family, especially you, I'm afraid that Dr. Drakken, who has the same powers as your grandfather, gave me the order to bring him in." The guards dragged Tommy away, Dick bowing before he leaves. "Perhaps you should talk to him about it."
"Oh I will, all right." Lil said, narrowing her eyes angrily.

Back at the palace, Dr. Drakken is about to leave his chambers/lab. Looking around to see if the coast is clear, he begins to slide the door quietly.
"Dr. Drakken!" yelled Lil as she storms inside the room before the mad scientist could finished.
"Oh, Princess Lil." Dr. Drakken said seeing her.
Daffy is on his way through the door, but Dr. Drakken closes it shut, pinning the duck inside the door frame.
"Ouch! Hey Dr. Drakken. I'm stuck!" Daffy called out.
Dr. Drakken ignored Daffy and continued, hiding the door from view. "So what brings you all the way to see me?"
"Don't played stupid with me!" Lil snapped. "You know what you did! Dick and his men has arrested a purple-haired boy from the market on your orders!"
"You got to understand, when your grandfather couldn't do it himself, I have to make sure no harm is done in Toon Town. Besides, I have to do it. The boy was a criminal."
"And what was his crime?" Lil demanded suspiciously.
"Can't breath here." Daffy said, turning blue.
Dr. Drakken thinks up a lie and thought it up quick. "Kidnapping you, of course! I noticed that you were missing. Luckily, a loyal citizen reported him to me and I send the guards to bring him in."
Hey, doc, if you could just..." Before Daffy could finished, Dr. Drakken kicked the duck right back through the door, closing it all the way. Daffy hits a wall inside the secret passage. "Ouch! That hurts!"
"That's the most terrible lie I have ever heard! He didn't kidnapped me, I ran away!" Lil yelled.
"Oh no." Dr. Drakken said walking away from Lil in a pretend shock. "That's terrible! If only I have known sooner!"
"What do you mean?" Lil asked puzzled.
Dr. Drakken turned back to Lil with a grin. "Unfortunately, I already ordered his sentence and it was done already."
"Sentence?" Lil asked concerned for the worst.
"Death." Dr. Drakken said in a sinister voice. Lil gasped as he continued. "By beheading."
"No." Lil said in horror as she sits down. Dr. Drakken smiles and spoke in pretned sympathy as he puts his hands on her.
"I'm really sorry, princess." Dr. Drakken said.
"How could you?" Lil hissed angrily at the mad scientist. She got up and ran from the room crying.
Once Lil has left, Daffy has reopened the door, came through, closes the door, and breaths in and out and he goes to Dr. Drakken's side. When he got there, he spoke normally.
"So how was it?" Daffy asked interested.
"Oh, she took it...rather well." said Dr. Drakken looking in the direction of the door Lil has left through.
The villains has evil grins on their faces.

Out in the courtyard, Lil is by himself crying in grief. Growlithe arrived. Although he's happy to see that she returned, he feels bad for her and goes over to comfort her. Lil looked up.
"Oh, it's all my fault, Growlithe." Lil said with a sniff. "I didn't even asked him for his name."
Lil continues to cry as she hugs her pet.

Author's note
Don't worry folks. Tommy isn't really dead. It's a lie from the mad scientist. Jafar did in the movie so I had to here. Next up is the Cave of Wonders parody plus I revealed who is playing the Magic Carpet. See you soon!
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Okay, the Cave of Shenron chapter is here. And check out Dr. Drakken's disguise. Hint: The disguise Dr. D is using is also voiced by John DiMaggio.

Chapter 6: The Cave of Shenron

Unknown to Lil, Dr. Drakken was lying and Tommy isn't really dead at last. But in the dungeon under the palace somewhere, Tommy looks like he's dead already. He struggles to get freed but is chained tightly to the wall.
"Oh man, she was the princess and I didn't realized it. I don't believe it. I must have sounded so stupid to her." Tommy groaned.
"Hello, Tommy! Up here!"
Tommy looked up and smiles as he sees Ling-Ling from an overhead window. The Asian thing crawls down to where Tommy is at very fast.
"Ling-Ling, all right! Quick, get me out of these things." Tommy said.
Ling-Ling frowns and said. "No way, baka! Not after you neglected me for that princess!"
As if to prove his point, he pulls out a cloth, puts it over his head, and imitiated the princess giving Tommy the cutey eyes. He throws the cloth to the ground and scowls.
"I'm sorry, okay? She was in trouble." Tommy then sighs happily. "But she was worth it."
"Whatever." Ling-Ling mumbled as he jumps onto Tommy's shoulders, takes out a bunch of lockpicks, and works on getting Tommy free from his chains.
"Well, you shouldn't have to be upset at me over her anymore because I won't be seeing her again anytime soon. I'm a Rugrat and there's a law. She has to marry a prince." Tommy explained. Ling-Ling finally got his friend free and Tommy rubs his hand. He sighs sadly. "She deserves one."
"Yeah, well, let's get out of here." Ling-Ling said in Japanese.
"Man, I'm a fool." Tommy said as he sits down in a slump.
"You're only a fool if you give up like that."
A sinister voice called out from the shadows. Tommy and Ling-Ling turns and sees some sort of white-haired man in some sort of leader like clothing in a corner nearby. Tommy and Ling-Ling looks puzzled as they have never seen him before.
"Who are you?" Tommy asked.
"Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Brother Blood." Brother Blood stood up and goes over to Tommy. "A lowly prisoner like you, perhaps. But together, we can be more."
"What do you got in mind?"
Brother Blood smiles and continues. "You see, there's a cave out in the desert, the Cave of Shenron. Filled with treasures beyond your wildest dreams." As if to prove it, Brother Blood takes out a bunch of diamonds, emerald, rubies, etc. and show them to Tommy and Ling-Ling, who looked at them in awe. Brother Blood puts the treasure away and turns his back to the two. "It will be enough to get even Princess Lil's attention, wouldn't it?"
Tommy and Ling-Ling looked at each other, unsure how to respond. But should they looked at Brother Blood carefully, they would have seen a black duck peeking out of the back of the man's clothing.
"Hey, Dr. D! Mind hurrying it up? It's hot back in here!" complains Daffy sweating madly.
Brother Blood (AKA Dr. Drakken in disguise) punches Daffy right before into the clothing as Tommy speaks up.
"But the law said..."
Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken interrupts. "You obviously haven't heard of the golden rule. Whoever has the gold makes all the rule." The figure then gives Tommy a smile, a hideously bad mouth is shown.
Ling-Ling looks puzzled as Tommy responds. "So why do you need me? Why share all the treasure you wanted with me?"
"Someone with strong legs and a strong back could be able to get it, right?" Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken said as he nods at Tommy.
"Okay, I'm game. But one problem: we're struck in this dungeon." Tommy pointed out.
"Ah, but you're mistaken. Things aren't always as they appeared." Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken then pushes a brick and an opening is revealing, showing a hidden exit. With another smile, Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken holds out a hand. "So what do you say?"
Tommy looks at Ling-Ling who just shrugs.
"Uh, okay?" Ling-Ling asked in Japanese.

The desert is a bit windy tonight as Tommy, Ling-Ling, and Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken heads to the place where Dr. Drakken has last called forth the Cave of Shenron. The disguised villain made the same way as before to called it forth. Tommy, who is carrying a bag given to him by Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken, and Ling-Ling, who is hiding behind Tommy in fear, looks at it as the Cave of Shenron spoke.
"Who disturb my slumber?" demands the Cave of Shenron.
Tommy is startled. The purple-haired boy then summoned up courage and spoke up. "It is I, Tommy Pickles."
The Cave of Shenron looks at Tommy carefully. Unlike what happened to Kenny before, nothing bad happens as the Cave spoke.
"You may proceed. But know this. Do not touch anything but the Dragon Balls!" boomed the Cave of Shenron.
The Cave opens up with a roar. Tommy and Ling-Ling can see a bunch of stairs leading down.
"Okay, remember, kid." Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken yelled over the roar. "Get me the Dragon Balls! Then we shall talked about your reward!"
Tommy nods then speaks to Ling-Ling. "Okay, let's go, Ling-Ling."
Ling-Ling shivered in fear but follows Tommy down the stairs anyway.

The staircase looks like it's a long way down and one trip could mean instant death. But Tommy and Ling-Ling were careful going down and soon came upon a room at the bottom of the stairs. Tommy looks astounded. The whole room is filled with treasures as far as the eye could see. Ling-Ling looks around, money signs in his eyes.
"Well, what do you know?" Tommy asked.
"A whole bunch of gold!" Ling-Ling said in a Japanese glee.
"With a bunch of this stuff, I can be richer than Sultan Iroh." Suddenly Ling-Ling makes a run for it and is about to grabbed for the nearest treasure. Tommy stops it. "Ling-Ling!" Ling-Ling stops before it could take anything. Tommy goes over to carefully. "We can't touch anything, remember? We got to find the Dragon Balls."
Tommy moves on. Ling-Ling looks at the treasure sadly then folllows Tommy. Unknown to the two of them, something is spying on them. It is a muscular red dragon who is looking at the two visitors curiously. The dragon moves out of his hidden spot and follows the two quietly. Ling-Ling's ears perked up as he senses that they're being followed.
"Huh?" Ling-Ling asked.
Ling-Ling turns. The dragon hid before Ling-Ling could see him. The Asian creature looks puzzled but continues following Tommy. The dragon resumes following him again. Ling-Ling turns and the dragon hid again, but the latter forgotten to hide his tail. Ling-Ling sees it in alarmed and runs to Tommy, tugging on his pant leg.
"Tommy, Tommy!" Ling-Ling exclaimed.
"Ling-Ling, knock it off. We're on a mission here." Tommy said not turning around.
Ling-Ling is a bit peeved but resumes following anyway. The dragon follows once again. As Ling-Ling turns again, the dragon jumps to the other side of him. With a smirk, he grabs Ling-Ling's tail and pulled on it too hard. Ling-Ling jumps and turns going into a fighting stance, missing the dragon again as he goes behind Ling-Ling once more. Ling-Ling sits down with a frown, wondering what the heck is going on.
The dragon begins to giggled and laughs a bit too loudly. Ling-Ling turns and sees him. Ling-Ling and the dragon jump scared and run away. Ling-Ling tackles Tommy, knocking him to the ground.
"Ling-Ling! Are you crazy?" Tommy yelled alarmed.
Ling-Ling doesn't respond as he turned Tommy's head quickly. Tommy sees the dragon, peeking from behind the treasure and looks astounded.
"Yo, you got to put a leash on that thing." The dragon said annoyed.
"A magic dragon." Tommy said astounded getting back up. "Come out, I'm not going to hurt you."
The dragon got out, still cautious, and moved to Tommy.
"Who are you?" Tommy asked.
"My name is Jake Long, the American Dragon, yo. Sorry if I startled your dog friend, but I was only joking around. Sorry about that, dog." Jake Long said to Ling-Ling.
"LING-LING NO DOG! LING-LING GOING TO BEAT YOU WHERE THE SUN WON'T SHINE!" Ling-Ling yelled at Jake in Japanese, waving a fist at him.
"Ling-Ling!" Tommy yelled at his friend. Tommy sees that Jake is walking away sadly. "Don't go!"
"Why?" Jake asked turning around.
"Maybe you can helped us. I have never seen a cool dragon like you before." Tommy said commenting.
"Really? Oh cool!" Jake flew back to Tommy and hugs him and Ling-Ling happily.
"Whoa! Okay, okay! We're pals now!" Tommy laughed. Jake puts the boy and his friend down as Tommy continues. "Do you know where we can find a set of Dragon Balls?"
"Oh yeah! I know where they are! Follow me!" Jake said he flies towards a direction.
"Come on!" Tommy said as he and Ling-Ling follows Jake Long, the American Dragon.

The trio goes through a long cave until they entered a giant underground cavern. Jake points to a big pillar with stairs going up to the top of it. The stairs and pillar are surrounded by water with stones used as steps. A beam of light shines on top of the pillar. Tommy sees the light and begins to step on the stones.
"Stay here, Ling-Ling." Tommy instructed Ling-Ling as he continues going across the stones 'bridge'.
"Aw, blast it." mumbled Ling-Ling. Ling-Ling turns for a sec then his eyes widen a bit. Nearby is an Asian like statue holding the biggest jewel Ling-Ling has seen in his life. Drooling madly, Ling-Ling begins to walked over to it.
Unaware of this, Tommy has reached the stairs and begin to climbed them quickly.
Jake turned around for a sec and gasped as Ling-Ling is heading to the jewel.
"Ling-Ling, hold it, dog!" Jake yelped as he grabs Ling-Ling by the tail trying to keep it back. Unfortunately, his grip begins to loosen and he won't hold on for any longer.
Still unaware, Tommy has got to the top and, sure enough, sees seven shining yellow balls, each with a different number of stars on them from 1 to 7. With a smile, Tommy picks up the balls and starts putting them in his bag. The last ball he has picked up is a 4 star one.
"These are them?" Tommy asked in wonder. "These are what we came down here to..." Tommy stops as he sees Ling-Ling grabbing free of Jake's hold and is about to grabbed the jewel on the Asian like statue. "Ling-Ling, no!"
But it's too late as Ling-Ling grabs the jewel. Suddenly the room begins to shake.
"Fools!" yelled the Cave of Shenron, his voice booming throughout the cave.
"Oh no." Ling-Ling groans, realizing what he just did.
"You have touch the forbidden treasure!" Chuckling nervously, Ling-Ling lets go but both the jewel and statue begins to melt into lava. "Now you will never again see the light...of day!"
Tommy grabs the last Dragon Ball as flames roared up to where the Dragon Balls used to be. Tommy makes the beeline down the stairs but they turned into a ramp, making him slide down them very fast. He soon flies into the air. As he begins to fall, he gasps as the water turned into lava. Before he could meet a melting end, Jake Long appears and catchs him.
Ling-Ling runs across the rocks but gasps as they begin to exploded into lava. Ling-Ling screams like crazy as the rock he's on is about to exploded. Luckily, Jake flew over and Tommy grabs him just in time when the last rock Ling-Ling's on exploded.
"Let's get outta here, Jake!" Tommy yelled to his dragon friend.
"On the double, player!" Jake answered.
The trio begins to flew back through the caves dodging walls and falling debris doing so. Ling-Ling begins to panics, grabs Tommy's head, and covers his eyes.
"Ling-Ling, this is no time to freaked out!" Tommy removes Ling-Ling and sees that they are about to collided into a wall. Tommy gulps. "Okay, start freaking out."
Luckily Jake dives and heads into the treasure cave. The lava poured out after them, engulfing all the treasure in the room. The trio soon arrived back at the entrance.

Outside the Cave of Shenron roared in anger and is about to close. Jake and his passengers are about to get to the top when a boulder drops on Jake's tail knocking him to the floor. Tommy and Ling-Ling jumps, grabbing onto a rock wall, almost to the entrance. As Tommy holds on to dear life, he looks up to see Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken at the top, within reach.
"Help me! Give me your hand!" Tommy said extending his hand.
"Give me the Dragon Balls first!" demands Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken reaching his hand out, expecting Tommy to hand them over.
"I can't hang on for long!"
"Give me the Dragon Balls and I'd get you out!"
Tommy groans but holds up the bag holding all the Dragon Balls. As he hands it up, Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken grabs for quickly.
"At last!" The villain laughed madly as he holds the bag above his head. "Yes! Ha ha ha ha! At last!"
Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken looks down to see that Ling-Ling is helping Tommy out of the entrance. But the villain kicks the little guy aside and grabs Tommy by the wrist.
"Hey, what do you think you're doing?" Tommy demands.
"Oh giving you your reward." Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken said in a smirk. Then the villain spoke in his normal voice as he pulls out a dagger. "Your eternal reward."
Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken is about to stabbed Tommy when Ling-Ling came out of nowhere and bites him on the wrist. The villain yelled in pain and drops Tommy who fell back into the cave. Dr. Drakken grabs Ling-Ling and throws him in. The two fell to what seemingly to their doom. But luckily Jake Long got free from his boulder prison and catches the two in time. Tommy, however, hits the wall too many times on the way down and went into unconsciousness.

Back up above, the Cave of Shenron roared one last time before sinking back into the sand where it came from. All is calm once more.
Dr. Drakken laughs madly as he ditches his disguise.
"They're mine! They're all mine!" Dr. Drakken said in glee. But when he opens the bag he expected the Dragon Balls to be in and reaches into it, he felt nothing but air. "What?" Dr. Drakken looks in. "Where are they?" Dr. Drakken searches frantically but couldn't find them. "No. NO!"
Dr. Drakken's last shocked 'no' echoes into the night.

Author's note
Looks like Dr. Drakken got his...for now. The story doesn't end here as Tommy and Ling-Ling meets up with the figure that comes from within the Dragon Balls. For those who has seen the Dragon Balls series and seen the hint from the summary, you've known who it is. So stay tuned for the next chapter!
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Okay, the moment you all have been waiting for. I revealed who the parody of the Genie is! And in a funny way too!

Chapter 7: The Saiyan of the Dragon Balls

Iroh has went to Lil's room to check on her. He sees that she is on her bed crying to ourself with Growlithe aside her sad.
"Lil?" Iroh asked. Lil looked up and sees him coming in. "Lil, what's the matter?"
"Dr. Drakken has done something...terrible." Lil said, sniffing a bit.
Iroh comes over and hold his granddaughter's hand.
"There, there. We can make things right. Now tell me what happened." Iroh said gently.
Lil nodded and begins to explain.

Back inside the collapsed Cave of Shenron, Tommy is still unconscious from all that has happened. Ling-Ling and Jake are trying to revive him.
"Hey, Tommy! Wake up!" Ling-Ling called in concern.
"Come on, man. Don't faint out forever on us!"" Jake called as well.
"Oh man." Tommy groans as he gets up. Ling-Ling and Jake are relief that their friend is all right. "Is everyone alright?"
"Yeah. But I hope you'd like staying down here. The entrance is sealed up." Jake said pointing to the ceiling.
Tommy looked up and sure enough, the entrance is sealed in.
"We're trapped." Tommy said. He got upset and shake his fist at the entrance uselessly. "That jerk Brother Blood!" He sighs sadly. "Well, it doesn't matter now. He got away with the Dragon Balls."
"Ah, but Ling-Ling doesn't think so." Ling-Ling said with a smirk.
To Tommy and Jake's surprise, Ling-Ling pulled out something from out of nowhere, or in this case somethings, the seven Dragon Balls that were in the bag Brother Blood/Dr. Drakken stole from them!
"Why you little...how do you do it?" Tommy asked in amazement as he takes the Dragon Balls.
"Ling-Ling fast and strong holder." Ling-Ling said proudly.
"Man, I wonder why that guy wanted these. They looked like a bunch of worthless metal balls to me." Tommy said looking the Dragon Balls over.
"Oh, that isn't the case, yo. There's more to them than meets the eye." Jake insisted.
"Wait, I see something written on each ball but they are hard to make out."
Tommy then begins to rub the Dragon Balls. Suddenly the Dragon Balls begin to shine and everyone jumped back, Tommy still holding onto the Dragon Balls. Then something came out of the Dragon Balls roaring. When all is clear, Tommy can see some sort of figure. This figure is a man with spiky black hair, big muscles, and a orange karate outfit. There's a symbol on the back that means "King Kai". As the man appeared, it hold his neck with a groan.
"Man! 10,000 years in those things can be painful!" whined the man. The man then grabs Tommy onto a nearby rock. "Hang on, will ya?" As everyone watches in surprise or disbelief, the man takes his head off, literally, and spins it around yelling while doing it. As the man puts his head back, Jake helps Tommy down.
"All right! Great to be out of those things again!" The man suddenly makes a microphone appeared and the cave suddenly turns into some sort of talk show with the man interviewing Tommy. "Hello, great to be back after all these years! Hey kid. Tell me, where you're from? What's your name?"
The man sticks the mike in Tommy's face who looks still in disbelief. He nervously said, "Uh, Tommy Pickles."
"TOMMY!" A neon light appears with Tommy's name lighting up with chase lights. As the man continues, the sign changes to reflect the man's next line. "Welcome to the show, Tommy Pickles! All right if I call you Tom? Or Pick? Oh! How about 'Laddi'?" The man disappears and then changes into a dog with a kilt. "Like 'here boy' Come on, Laddi'!"
Tommy and Ling-Ling looked confused. Tommy said. "Man, I must have been messed up during my fall."
"Hey, all right if I smoke?" The dog explodes in smoke freaking out Ling-Ling. The dog changes back into the figure. "Oops, sorry about that little guy, hope I didn't messed the fur."
"Hey, Goku!" Jake said finally speaking up holding out his hand.
"Hey Jake! Great to see you!" Goku said high-fiving Jake's hand. "Haven't seen you in a while! How have you been?"
"Same old, same old. Actually got something new here with the kid and his dog, yo." Jake said pointing to Tommy and Ling-Ling.
"LING-LING IS NO DOG!" Ling-Ling yelled angrily.
Goku ignored Ling-Ling and sized Tommy up. "You know, you are smaller than my last master, Tom." Goku holds his stomach up embarrassingly. "Or is it because I am getting bigger? Hey, am I getting fat in my old clothes?"
"Hold it. I'm your master?" Tommy asked in surprise.
Goku slaps a diploma in Tommy's hand and puts a mortarboard on his head and shouts. "He got it! He has gradulated! What do you want of me?" Goku changes into a certain blockbuster now governor star. "The ever impressive," Goku now puts himself in a cube, "the long contained, "Goku now become a puppeteer with a dummy on his hand, "the often imitated," Goku now ditches the dummy as he continues, "but never duplicated..."
Tommy and Ling-Ling watches as Goku spins around making clones of himself doing so, repeating the word 'duplicated' as well. When he stops, Goku makes like a ring announcer and said...
"Goku, the Saiyan...of...the Dragon Balls!" Goku now speaks like a certain TV show host as his clones applauds behind him. "Right here from the Dragon Balls, we got a very good show for your wish fullfillment!"
"'Wish fullfillment?'" Tommy asked interested.
"Absolutely! You get 3 wishes from yours truly. And no fair asking for more!" Goku turns into a slot machine, arm pulls down, and 3 Gokus appear in the window. "That's right, 3!" Now 3 Gokus came out of the slots wearing sombardos speaking Mexican. "Uno, dos, tres." Now Goku turns into a certain mustached funny guy with the glasses. "No copies, exchanges, or refunds." A white duck in a sailor suit on a rope came down holding the sign 'refunds'.
"Well, I'm definitely dreaming." Tommy jokes to Ling-Ling.
"Master, you don't know what I'm giving you here! So why don't you just ruminate, whilst I illuminate the possibilities."
Goku lights up as he begins to sing.

Goku: Well Histeria got those lots of thieves

A bunch of thieves appeared and surrounded Tommy with their swords raised.

Garfield had a thousand tales

To Tommy's surprise, Goku appears in Tommy's shirt.

But master you in luck 'cause up your sleeve
You got a brand of magic never fails!


Goku then sticks his arms out and punches the thieves away. Next, a boxing ring appears with Tommy being massaged by Goku.

You got some power in your corner now
Some heavy ammunition in your camp


Goku then turned into a bunch of fireworks and exploded like mad.

You got some punch, pizzazz, yahoo and how
See all you gotta do is rub those Dragon Balls


Goku appears inside the Dragon Balls, grabs Tommy's hand, and made the hand rub the Dragon Balls.

And I'll say
Mister Tommy Pickles sir
What will your pleasure be?


Goku made a table and chairs appeared out of thin air, then write a bunch of things down on a notepad like a waiter.

Let me take your order, jot it down
You ain't never had a friend like me
No no no!

Life is your restaurant
And I'm your maitre' d!


Goku gives a dish to Tommy. Tommy removes the lid and is startled to see that Goku has transformed into chicken. Then Goku turns back to normal but blow his ear up to hear Tommy.

C'mon whisper what it is you want
You ain't never had a friend like me.


Goku then turns into 4 of him.

Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service

The Gokus gave Tommy a shave, haircut, and manicure.

You're the boss, the king, the shah!

Tommy now appears in a great big chair, surrounded by the treasure and fanned by beautiful women, Ling-Ling and Jake impressed.

Say what you wish, it's yours! True dish
How about a little more Baklava?


Goku then appears and dumps a bunch of baklava all over everything. Next, Tommy is jumping from a column 'A' to column 'B'

Try some of column 'A'
Try all of column 'B'


Tommy falls but is saved by a cushion by a giant Goku.

I'm in the mood to help you dude

Goku opens his mouth and his tongue turns into stairs. Soon a mini-Goku came out dressed like a magician.

You ain't never had a friend like me

Soon the little Goku begins to change with the big Goku's giant hands. When they're finished, the hands surrounded little Goku and squashed him into nothing.

Can your friends do this?

Goku takes his head, make copies of it, and spins them around.

Do your friends do that?

Goku tosses the heads to Tommy who juggles them with delight and spins them like basketball before sending them back to Goku. Goku then proceeds to try and pull himself out of a hat.

Do your friends pull this out their little hat

Goku then turns himself into a white rabbit. Then he turns into a dragon.

Can your friends go poof!

Goku the dragon spits out flames which turned into 3 cute girls who danced around Tommy.

Well looky here
Can your friends go Abracadabra, let 'er rip
And then make the sucker disappear?


Just when the boy is having too much fun, the girls disappears much to his disappointment. Goku then imitiated Tommy, so to speak.

So don't you sit there slack jawed, buggy eyed
I'm here to answer all your midday prayers


Goku then turns into a certificate which rolls up and surrounds Tommy.

You got me bona fide, certified
You got a saiyan for a charg? d'affairs!
I got a powerful urge to help you out
So what you wish I really want to know


Goku takes a list translated in different languages out of Tommy's ear and uses it to dry himself as if he just step out of the shower.

You got a wish that's three miles long, no doubt
So all you gotta do is rub like so, and oh!


Mister Tommy, sir, have a wish or two or three

The dancing girls reappeared and disappeared, leaving only one smiling one behind. Tommy smirks aand leans to kissed her, but the girl turned into Goku who giggles much to Tommy's shock.

I'm on the job, you big nabob
You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend


Goku then brings 4 dancing elephants into existance.

You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend

Soon 4 dancing camels appears courtesy of Goku's magic. Soon the big finale begins.

You ain't never...had a... friend... like...me!

As the big finale resumes on like mad, Ling-Ling tries to grab as a bunch of gold as he can.

You ain't never had a friend like me!

Goku turned into a cyclone to wrapped the song up and zaps everything away. Soon everyone is back in the boring empty cave except themselves and Goku with a neon "APPLAUSE" sign on his head. Ling-Ling looks startled to see that all the gold he collected is now gone. He scowls.
"Well, go ahead. Tell me what you want." Goku insisted.
"So I can have any wish I want, right?" Tommy asked.
"Well, not really. There are a few provisos, a couple of quid pro quos."
"What?"
"He means there are wishes he cannot grant." Jake explained.
"Yes, what the dragon man said. First off, I can't kill anyone." Goku then slices his head 'off' and holds his head in his hand. "So don't think of asking." Goku puts his head back on as he continues. "Second, I can't forced someone to fall in love with someone else." Goku's head turn into a giant pair of lips which kisses Tommy before changing back. "Aww, aren't you so special?" Goku then finishes it off by turning into an ugly looking corpse which got up and scared the crud out of Tommy and Ling-Ling. "And finally, I cannot...bring people...back from the dead." Goku grabs Tommy and shakes him like crazy. "It's not a great sight, I won't do it!" Goku then changes back to normal and smiles. "But other than that, everything else is fair game!"
Tommy pauses to think. He can think of what he wanted first: out of the cave. But how to get it for free without wishing? He looks at Ling-Ling and smirks, plotting.
"Provisos? Like limits on stuff including wishes?" Tommy scoffs along with Ling-Ling. "Some great Saiyan he is." Goku frowns as Tommy walks away with Ling-Ling. "He can't even bring people back to life. Heck, I am not even sure if he could helped us out of this cave. May as well find another way out. Come on, Ling-Ling."
Tommy and Ling-Ling pretends to leave but Goku puts a giant foot down in front of them, stopping them.
"Oh, hello? Remember me? The guy you woke up from the Dragon Balls?" Goku asked in annoyance. "Did you wake me up by activating the Dragon Balls? And just when we get to be pals, you're leaving me? No way, no how!" Goku is really getting ticked off, much to Tommy and Ling-Ling's amusement. "You're getting your wishes, so SIT ON IT!"
Tommy and Ling-Ling fell onto Jake who catches them.
"Another rule, never make Goku mad, yo." Jake said in amusement.
Goku takes a form of a steward pointing out a bunch of exits with a bunch of arms.
"In case of emergencies, the exit is here, there, here, there, here, there, everywhere! So keep your hands and arms inside the dragon at all times!" Goku called. "We're gone!"
Goku, Jake, and the dragon's passengers fly up to the ceiling very fast. And soon after, they exploded out of the sand fly out into the distance, escaping the Cave of Shenron.

Author's note
That's right! Goku is in the story!

Goku: All right, finally!

Me: Like it?

Goku: Delighted!

Me: Well, guess what? You get a bigger role later on.

Lil: Don't forget me telling Iroh about what that creep Dr. Drakken did what I thought he did.

Me: Oh, I won't. Anyway, to you viewers, review this story but no flames! I will see you again with another chapter soon! Adios until then!
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Chapter 8: Plots, Wishes, and Dreams

The next day, Dr. Drakken, still recovering from his loss of the Dragon Balls, is summoned to the throne room by Iroh. Both the mad scientist and Daffy, pretending to be a duck again, watch as the Sultan berates Dr. Drakken because of what Lil has told him. Iroh may be upset about Lil leaving the palace on her alone but even more upset by what Dr. Drakken did.
"Dr. Drakken, of all the lowest things you have done, this is the lowest! If it weren't for the fact of your loyalty to me all these years..." Iroh breaths in and out before he continues. "Well, next time you want to sentence someone, talk to me about the prisoners before having them beheaded!"
"Look, it was a mistake and it won't happen again." Dr. Drakken said in fake sincerity.
"It better not." Iroh turns to his granddaughter Lil who is watching the whole conversion. "Now then, let's bygones by bygones and forgive and forget, please."
"Again, I apologized for what I did. I hope we can still be friends." Dr. Drakken said as he takes Lil's hand to kiss it. But Lil yanks it away quickly.
"Well, there's one bright side of me being forced to find a husband. When I get married and become queen, I will finally have you tossed out of here!" snapped Lil to Dr. Drakken angrily.
"Good. That's settled." Iroh said with a smile. "Now then, Lil, time to return to finding you a proper suitor." Iroh stops and sees Lil leaving the room. "Lil? Lil!"
As Iroh leaves the room, Dr. Drakken scowls angrily.
"If only I haven't lost those Dragon Balls, I wouldn't be force to pretend again!" Dr. Drakken hissed.
"'I will finally have you tossed out of here'." Daffy said, mocking Lil. Daffy scowls. "Now we got to kissed up to that idiot and that idiot's daughter for the rest of our lives!"
"No, Daffy." said Dr. Drakken as he and his sidekick heads to a window to view Sultan Iroh speaking with Lil. "Not until she finds that idiot husband. Then she'd have us banished." The mad scientist gasps and hold his neck. "Or maybe even beheaded!"
"Eeeew!" said the two villains in disgust.
Daffy then brightens up. He got an idea.
"Wait, I got an idea! What if you become the idiot husband?" Daffy suggested.
"And what if you become my duck dinner?" snapped Dr. Drakken, thinking Daffy has offended him.
"No, I mean you marry the princess." As Daffy explains, Dr. Drakken brightens up to the idea, sort of. "And then you become the new Sultan."
"Hmmm." Dr. Drakken said in thought as he goes back to the throne. "Marry the brat and I become Sultan. That idea can work."
"Yeah! And later, we can 'accidentally' dropped grandpappy and his lovely daughter off a cliff. Kersplat!" Daffy laughed as he dives into the floor imitating what he suggested.
Dr. Drakken laughs evilly. "Your evil mind works wonderfully!"
The two laughed as they begin their latest scheme at taking over the throne.

Somewhere at an oasis in the desert, Jake is about to dropped his passengers off after escaping the Cave of Shenron, Goku still speaking like a steward.
"We hope you enjoyed your trip on Air Dragon. Don't stand until the dragon comes to a complete shop." Goku said in a steward like voice. Jake soon drop letting Tommy and Ling-Ling. "Bye-bye. Buh-bye." When the two got off, Goku changed back to normal and laughs merrily. "Now, what do you think of me now, Mr. Wrong Kid?"
"Cool. You have shown me a thing or two." Tommy said with a smirk. "Okay, now on to my 3 wishes."
"Wait a minute, 3?" Goku laughed while showing 2 fingers. "You got 2 left, remember?"
"Ah, but I didn't wished to get out of the cave. You did that by yourself."
Goku soon realized what Tommy meant and did an Anime face fault. He got up, an embarrassed Anime mark on his head showing.
"Man, that's embarrassing." Goku said. Then he frowns at Tommy. "Okay, okay. You got that for free, but no more. Understand?"
"Okay them. Now..." Tommy begins to think as Goku and the others relax nearby. "Man, there's so many to think up. I got to think up the right ones." Tommy turned to Goku. "Say, what would you wish for?"
Goku looked surprised. His respond?"
"'Wish for'?" Goku pauses to think. "Wow, no one asked me that question before. Well, the truth is..." Goku frowns and waves a hand in dismissal. "Ah, forget it."
"Come on, tell me. I won't laugh." Tommy insisted.
Goku sighs and said, "Freedom."
Tommy looks surprised, his eyes lowering on the Dragon Balls. "You mean you're a prisoner?"
Goku sighs again and rolls up the sleeves of his arms, showing some sort of Dragon Balls marks on his hands.
"These are the symbols of a slave. My imprisonment comes with my job." Goku grows big, his voice booming. "A whole lot of power!" Then Goku shrinks down, seemingly struck somewhere in the Dragon Balls. "But little living space."
"Man, that's awful." Tommy said sadly.
Goku reappears out of the Dragon Balls and agrees. "Yeah, I just want to be free. Not to do the usual: Poof! What do you want? Poof! What do you want? Poof! What do you want?" Goku poofs in and out in front of Tommy a few times before he stops. "All I want is to be my own person, my own master. That's better than all the magic and treasures everywhere!" Goku smiles then frowns. "Aw, who am I kidding? I need to face reality that it's not going to happen."
"What do you need to get free?" Tommy asked.
"Well, the only way I can finally get out of this whole thing if my master wishes me out. But then again, what's the chance of it happening?"
Tommy wishes he could do something to help Goku. Then he smiles. There is something.
"Say, maybe I could wish you out?" Tommy suggested.
"Oh sure, right?" Goku said, rolling his eyes. Goku's head then turns into that of a certain Goomba from a certain Mario game.
Tommy slaps Goku in the head to change it back before he continues. "No, seriously, that's a promise. Once my 2 wishes are done, I can use the 3rd one to set you free."
Tommy holds out a hand, expecting Goku to shake it. The Saiyan hesitates at first, but then he shrugs and shakes Tommy's hand.
"Well, if you're wrong, at least I can still dream." Goku straighten himself up and yells. "Okay, let's make some magic!" Goku turns into a magician and tosses some cards around before changing back. "Now tell me, what do you want out of life first?"
Tommy rubs his head blushing as he responded. "Well, there is this girl..."
"Whoa, whoa, whoa!" Goku said holding up a sign with a cross over a love symbol. "No making someone fall in love with someone else, remember?"
"Truth, but Goku, this is a certain girl I'm talking about! I mean, she's smart, fun, and..."
"Pretty?" Goku guessed.
"Beautiful! Man, she got these great eyes, her hair, and whoa, check out her smile." Tommy said, sighing happily.
Goku made some sort of French cafe appeared. As Ling-Ling and Jake sit in the background, Goku said, "Ami. C'est l'amour."
"But unfortunately she happens to be a princess. I mean, the only way I can ever get a chance with her if..." Tommy's eyes brighten up then he turns to Goku. Maybe... "Say, can you turned me into a prince?"
Goku takes out a book that said 'book of Royals' and reads through it.
"Let's see..." Goku takes out a chicken wearing a crown out of the book all of the sudden. "A chicken a'la king? No." Goku throws the chicken away and continues reading. "Uh, Outer Space King Aliens?"
Suddenly Goku felt a bite on his finger and pulls out two figures. One of them is a purple tubby alien with four yellow eyes, a yellow t-shirt with red leaves on it and blue shorts with a white stripe on it. The second figure was a koala-like creature with bat-like ears, blue fur, a light blue chest and stomach, and big black eyes. The latter is biting Goku's finger.
"Ahhhh! What is evil genius and Experiment 626 be doing in this story?" Dr. Jumba Jookiba demands.
"Naga Ichikba!" Stitch snaps angrily.
"Sorry about that, guys." Goku said, sweatdropping as he send them back into that other story. He continues reading. "Caesar's salad?" He yelps as a dagger comes out and tries to stab him. "Et tu, Brutus?" The dagger disappeared. Goku finally find what he's looking for. "Ah, the prince formula." Goku smiles then turned to Tommy. "Well, is that an official? You know what to say?"
"Goku, I wish to become a prince!" Tommy exclaimed.
"All right!" Goku cheered. He became another certain late night host making woofing noises, then he turns into a fashion designer. "Okay, kid. Who did your clothes? Those are so 1990s. What are we looking at? Weirdo? Okay, let me find something."
Goku takes Tommy's measurement, then with a snap of his fingers, Tommy is now into prince clothing. Tommy looked into a mirror nearby impressed.
"Now you can't be an original prince without transportation. Oh, Asian Boy? Over here!" Goku said calling to Ling-Ling.
"What? Oh no! You stay away from Ling-Ling!" Ling-Ling shouted. He tries to get away and hide behind Jake but Goku hits him with magic and forced him over. Goku then brought in a game show set with Tommy standing behind a podium with the nickname "Tom" on it."
"Here it is! The best way to make your entrance into Toon Town! Here's your very own...camel!" A door with Goku's head opens as the Saiyan transformed Ling-Ling into a camel, spitting out doing so. "Careful, he spits."
Goku frowns. "No, that's not going to work." Goku then turned into a nice looking horse. But that's not enough. "No, not it either. Let's see...what can I get you?" As Goku tried to decide, he keeps changing Ling-Ling into things like animals and a car before changing back into himself. Goku finally got it. "Okay, got it! Here's your Dumbo, jumbo!"
Goku hits Ling-Ling with magic and the little guy has now turned into an elephant much to his shock. Jake yelps as Ling-Ling the elephant is stepping on his tail and he tries to get it out.
"Man, this is not radiant!" Jake complained.
"And you can keep your things in the trunk if you like!" Goku said proudly.
Ling-Ling sees himself in a reflection of water nearby. He yelps and climbs into a tree nearby. Of course, it can't support his weight so it bended back causing him to hang on and looked at Tommy upside down.
"You look good, Ling-Ling." Tommy said astounded.
"Forget you! You don't weigh a lot and have to watch out for baka mice!" snapped Ling-Ling as he glares at Goku.
"We're not done yet, folks! Hang on to your hat, kid, because you will be a star!" Goku said happily as he shoot out fireworks getting things ready for the young boy's new beginning.

Author's note
Two stories were referenced here. The Goomba Goku changed into is Goombario from the Paper Mario. I am referencing Kingdom Hearts: The Nintendo Version because he is parodying Pinocchio and the Pinocchio parody is the Shy Guy's Toybox world from the same game.

Jumbaa and Stitch is an obvious reference to Darth Ben Valor's The Little Dragon story where they parodied Sebastian.

Check this story out and no flames, yo.
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Okay, I am now sending in a new chapter! And like last time, I will reference another one of DBV's stories.

Tommy: Since I have seen Aladdin, I know what it is.

Me: Don't spoiled it yet. Anyway, I also finally starting on Kingdom Nicktoons II!

Everyone: All right!

Kimi: Finally! A story with me with Tommy! What do you think of that, Lil?!

Lil: (scoffs) Just be glad we're pals.

Goku: So does this mean Drakken gets her?

Dr. Drakken: No, you smelly monkey! That was only a plot!

Goku: (smelling himself) Phew! I do smell! Sniff me, do I smell?

(Dr. Drakken sniffs Goku and faints, falling to the floor)

Me: Man, he's hard to wake up. Enjoy the show while we, not really, try to take wake Dr. D up.

Chapter 9: Prince Tom Li

Back at the palace, Iroh is playing with his plastic toy animals, balancing them as high as he goes. In the pile of toys, there is a muscular monster with purple fur, yellow eyes, a purple snout, two huge horns on his head, very sharp teeth, black claws, a unibrow, and a purple tail that looked like that of a devil's, only it was bent. He wore gray pants, gray boots and a black belt with a belt buckle that looked like a skull.
"Ay Carumba! This is the best cameo you be getting me, Senor JusSonic, just because I parody the Beast in Senor Darth Ben Valor's story?" Eduardo asked trying to keep the toys balance.

(Author's note: Quiet!)

"Who said that?" Iroh asked looking around. When Eduardo went silent once more, Iroh went back to what he was doing. The sultan has managed to put the last toy on top, then he sits down and sighs happily. But just then Drakken storms in, follows by Daffy.
"Sultan Iroh!" Dr. Drakken's yelling causes the toy to collapsed and a certain Imaginary Friend pretending to be a toy to be send screaming to the floor. Iroh did not noticed and turned to the mad scientist as he continues, holding up some sort of scroll. "I know of a way to fixed this problem with your granddaughter!"
"Woo-hoo! The problem with your granddaughter!" Daffy repeated doing his pretend bit again.
"Really? Please tell me." Iroh said hopefully.
"Right here in a scroll I just found." Dr. Drakken then opens the scroll and read it. It said and I quote, "If the princess can not choose a husband by the time of her appointed day, then whoever in charge, which is you right now, must choose one for more."
Iroh frowns as he takes out a cracker, trying to feed it to Daffy who backs away quickly. Iroh pulls the cracker back and frowns. Daffy is relief.
"But Lil hates those guys I have chosen for her. Why should I select someone she doesn't like?" Iroh asked. Then he stuffs the cracker into Daffy's relief mouth, ending his happiness.
"Don't worry. I found another way. There's more to this." Dr. Drakken resumes reading, or something like that. "If the right man cannot be found, then the princess must married..." As Dr. Drakken 'looks' on, he smirks. "Well, what do you know?"
"What? What?"
"She has to married...the royal adviser. Why, that's me." Dr. Drakken said proudly.
Iroh frowns and tries to take a look at the scroll. "But didn't the law say that a princess can only marry a prince?"
Dr. Drakken takes his hypno ray, pushes Iroh back, and hits the sultan with a beam, giving him the hypnotized look again. Dr. Drakken then said,"You are desperable, you need my help."
"I am desperable, I need your help." Iroh repeated in his trance.
"Now you will order the princess to marry me."
"I will marry...the princess...to..." Suddenly Iroh snaps out of his trance and frowns at Dr. Drakken. "But aren't you a bit old for her?"
"The princess will marry me!" snapped Dr. Drakken putting him under once more.
"The princess will...marry..." Suddenly trumpets are heard outside, breaking Iroh out of his trance again. "What? Whose that? Where is that magic coming from?"
Iroh then runs to the balcony looking outside and to a view of the city. Iroh looks and smiles.
"Dr. Drakken! You got to see this!" Iroh said calling Dr. Drakken, followed by Daffy, out to the balcony.
As they watched, a parade is being performed in the city of Toon Town. They are led by some sort of spiky hair man dressed as a major. It is actually Goku but no one knew that. Soon the parade plays a song just for the crowd and everyone else.

Marchers: Make way for Prince Tom Li!

Everyone, including Bowser, Kirby, Tiff, Baby Gonzo, and some random characters like Sora, Ariel, Juniper Lee, Danny Fenton, etc., turned to looked at the parade.

Swordsmen: Say hey! It's Prince Tom Li

Some girls dressed for Harlem throws flowers on the ground. Goku then begins to mingle in the crowd.

Goku: Hey, clear the way in the old bazaar,
Hey you, let us through, it's a bright new star,
Now come, be the first on your block to meet his eye!
Make way, here he comes,
Ring bells, bang the drums.
You're gonna love this guy


Goku pounds on a confused Skulker's chest like a drum then he holds him and points. Ling-Ling the elephant marches through town, Tommy (Tom Li) riding on his back.

Prince Tom Li, fabulous he, Tom Li Anaheim!
Genuflect, show some respect
Down on one knee


Goku then magically causes Dick Dastardly and his men to bowed down. The captain looks and coulda sworn that Ling-Ling is smirking at him.

try your best to stay calm
Brush up your Sunday Salaam


Daffy is dancing to the song but stops when Dr. Drakken gave him a death glare.

And come and meet his spectacular coterie.

Goku 'wheelbarrows' six cartoon guys onto Ling-Ling's trunk. They have to stand on each other's shoulder to shake Tom Li's hand.

Prince Tom Li, mighty is he, Tom Li Anaheim!
Strong as ten regular men, definitely


The men fell onto Tom Li but Goku secretly fires a bolt that results in Tom Li carrying the men like an acrobat. Then Goku turns into an old guy and whispers to Kronk (from Emperor's New School.

He faced the galloping hordes

Then Goku turns into a kid and plays with a toy sword as he sings to the Kids Next Door.

A hundred bad guys with swords

Goku now turned into a big guy and hold Snoopy and Garfield as he continues.

Who sent those goons to their lords, why Prince Tom Li!

As Lil came onto another balcony, she watches a bunch of servants came in carrying golden camels.

Servants: He's got seventy-five golden camels

Goku suddenly appeared as a parade announcer.
"What do you that, Tiffany?" Sean (Goku) asked.
Now some women rode in with a bunch of beautiful peacocks.

Women: Purple peacocks, he's got fifty-three!

Tiffany (Goku again) the other parade announcer appears.
"Beautiful, Sean. Love the feathers." agreed Tiffany.
As Goku continues singing, a bunch of servants is carrying a gorilla parade balloon down the street.

Goku: When it comes to exotic type mammals

Then Goku changes into a leopard then a goat as he sings to Kirby and Tiff from earlier.

Has he got a zoo, I'm telling you

When Goku disappears, Tiff and Kirby looks delighted.

It's a world class menagerie!

Next Goku appeared next to Angelica, Savannah, and Nicole, who rejected Tommy earlier. Goku is dressed like a girl as he sings. Goku sings at the same time as they did.

Goku, Angelica, Savannah, and Nicole: Prince Tom Li, Handsome is he, Tom Li Anaheim
There's no question this Tom Li's alluring
That physique, how can I speak
Never ordinary, never boring


Tommy tries to shows his muscles, but don't got any. Goku zaps him some big muscles, which results in Angelica, Savannah, and Nicole being really impressed.

Weak at the knee
Everything about the man just plain impresses
Well, get on out in that square
He's a wonder, he's a whiz, a wonder
Adjust your veil and prepare
He's about to pull my heart asunder
To gawk and grovel and stare at Prince Tom Li!
And I absolutely love the way he dresses!


Tommy smiles and throws a kiss to the girls, causing Angelica, Savannah, and Nicole to faint. Lil, from where she's at at the palace, scoffs and went back inside.

Chorus: He's got ninety-five white Persian monkeys!
(He's got the monkeys, let's see the monkeys!)


Some servants holds up a bunch of monkeys on trees as Dick's henchmen danced stupidly.

And to view them, he charges no fee!
(He's generous, so generous)


Tommy throws a bunch of coins to the street, causing the citizens to run over to grab some.

He's got slaves, he's got servants and flunkies!
(Proud to work for him)
They bow to his whim, love serving him
They're just lousy with loyalty to Tom Li! Prince Tom Li!


Back inside, Iroh runs to the doors to the throne room to let Tom Li in, but Dr. Drakken block his way and smirks. But then the doors bursts opened, with Ling-Ling leading the way, and crushing Dr. Drakken and Daffy in the doorway.

Prince Tom Li!
Amorous he! Tom Li Anaheim


Goku slides down Ling-Ling's trunk and lands next to Iroh.

Goku: Heard your princess was a sight lovely to see!

Dr. Drakken got himself, looking a bit squashed to say, and growls angrily.

And that,good people, is why
He got dolled up and dropped by
With sixty elephants, llamas galore
With his bears and lions
A brass band and more
With his forty fakirs, his cooks, his bakers
His birds that warble on key
Make way for Prince Tom Li!


A bunch of stuff is shown. Then Tommy flies off Ling-Ling's back on Jake and goes down to Iroh. As the song ends, Dr. Drakken and his men forced everything else but Tommy, Ling-Ling and Jake out of the room. Once the room is empty, Dr. Drakken slams the doors shut and frowns.
"My, my! That is spectacular!" Iroh said applauding.
Tommy speaks to Iroh in a deep voice. "Yes, it is, isn't it? Sultan Iroh, I have come from far for your daughter's hand in marriage."
"Oh yes! Prince Tom Li Anaheim! I'm happy to see you!" Iroh said, shaking Tommy's hand. He nods to Dr. Drakken. "This is my royal adviser and psychiatrist Dr. Drakken. He's happy too."
Dr. Drakken frowns. There's something familiar about this Tom Li but he can't put his finger on it. But he doesn't care right now.
"Whatever. Anyway, Prince A-dum-dum..."
"Anaheim." Tommy said correcting Dr. Drakken.
Dr. Drakken rolls his eyes. "Fine. You can't just come in without the sultan's invite and expect to..."
"My goodness! Look at the creature!" Iroh said looking at Jake in awe.
"I'm a dragon, yo. But I am a nice dude as long as you don't step on my tail, player." Jake responed.
Iroh smiles then speaks to Tommy. "Say, might if I go...you know..."
The sultan nods to Jake, signaling that he wants a ride.
"Of course! Let me help you." Tommy said as he helps Iroh right onto Jake.
"All right! Hang on!" Jake said.
But Dr. Drakken steps on Jake's tail stopping him from taking off. Daffy is standing nearby.
"Hold it! I don't think this is a good idea!" protested Dr. Drakken.
"Oh, nonsense, Drakken! Let me have some fun!" Iroh, while holding on to Jake, kicks Drakken's leg away, and the dragon made a fast take off. Jake's tail knocks Daffy down to the ground, knocking his bill right off.
Iroh screams in delight as Jake flies him all over the place. As he does, Dr. Drakken glares at Tommy.
"Okay, question: where did you come from again?" Dr. Drakken asked suspiciously.
"Farther than you can travel, I bet." Tommy said with a smile.
"Try me." scowled Dr. Drakken.
Daffy got back up, holding his bill in his hand. Suddenly he hears some delighted yelling and turns to see Iroh on Jake flying his way.
"Watch out, duckie!" Iroh called out.
"Mother." Daffy said with a gulp. Then, bill still in hand, runs away with Jake and Iroh chasing him. "Get away! Get away you dumb dragon! In all of humanity!"
Jake zooms by Daffy, no longer chasing him. Daffy sighs in relief. But he is still running which means he's also not looking where he's going. He comes to a complete stop: by slamming into a pillar and falling to the floor. Mini-Irohs circled his head saying 'have a cracker, have a cracker'.
"This is despicable." groaned Daffy.

Meanwhile, the real Iroh begins his landing.
"I'm going to land! Watch me, Dr. Drakken!" Iroh said happily. Jake comes to a complete stop and Iroh slides off, with a whee.
"Enjoy your ride?" Dr. Drakken said with a scowl.
"I enjoyed it! I got to do it again sometime!" Iroh said smiling.
"How about wait until my head's cleared up?" Jake mumbled as he walks over to Ling-Ling then falls. Ling-Ling catches him.
Iroh turns to Tommy. "You are an impressive youth, and a prince." Iroh then whispers to Dr. Drakken. "If this works out, you may not have to marry Lil after all."
"There's something I don't like about him, sir!" Dr. Drakken hissed angrily.
"Calm down. If there's one thing about me that is true, it's that I am an excellent judge of character."
"'Excellent judge of character'." mumbled Daffy as he recovered and put his bill back on. "Right, sure. Ha!"
As the conversion continues, no one notices Lil coming in, overhearing this.
"Lil is going to like you, that's for sure Tom Li." Iroh continued.
"I know I'm going to like Princess Lil." Tommy agreed.
"Forget it! Your highness, I must speak on the behalf of your granddaughter!" Of course, Dr. Drakken still doesn't know that Lil is in the room. Lil is furious upon hearing what Dr. Drakken has said and what he said next, "He is no better than those others Lil has put down! What makes him think he is worthy of her? Huh?" Dr. Drakken glares at Tommy. "Try that, kid!"
"You forgot that I am Prince Tom Li Anaheim!" Tommy laughs as he pricks Dr. Drakken's ponytail (I think he got one) and make it spring into different directions. "Allow me to see her for myself. I promise that she will be at my 'mercy'."
"How dare you!" Lil hissed finally making her presence noticed. Everyone turned and are surprised as she continues. "You dare to decide my own future? I am no trophy at a fair here! Nor a prize to be won!"
An angry Lil storms out of the room. Tommy looks upset, Dr. Drakken is a bit peeved, while Iroh is sheepish.
"Uh, do not worry about her, Tom Li. She should cool down eventually." Iroh then begins to show Tommy around. "I am sure things will turned out okay.
As they left, Dr. Drakken's eyes narrowed.
"Well, time to say goodbye to Prince A-dum-dum..." hissed Dr. Drakken evilly.

Author's note
Oh no! Looks like Dr. Drakken is out for Tommy's head. Plus, Tommy as a prince shows no impression on Lil. How would he win her now?

Daffy: Well, continue on and find out!

Sora: I am glad you included me, Ariel, Danny, and June in this.

Kronk: And me as well!

Numbah 1: And me and my fellow operatives

Everyone else: You rule!

Angelica: Though isn't it a bit strange that I swoon over my cousin?

Me: You're not related in this parody, trust me. Anyway, for those paying attention, Eduardo's cameo is a reference to another one of DBV's stories which is Beauty and the Beast: CN Edition where Eduardo parodies the Beast.

Eduardo: Si! One of my best roles.

Me: And of course, Beast made a cameo as a toy in the "Prince Ali" song sketch. The Sean and Tiffany characters Goku transformed into is referenced to Goku's voice actor Sean Schemmel and Bulma's voice actress Tiffany Vollmer. And Anaheim is a town in California where my buddy Staredcraft used as Tommy and Kimi's home in his Detective Kimi series.

Tommy: And my new name 'Prince Tom Li'?

Me: I made that up. Anyway, to those reading this. Thanks for reading and I will come out with the next chapter coming soon. Please review and no flames.
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This chapter is a romantic one, so you all know what to expect. Anyway, moving on...

Chapter 10: Tom Li and Lil's date

Later that night, Lil stood at her balcony looking at the stars. In the courtyard underneath, Tommy and his friends are there. Tommy is still upset while his pals do whatever.
"Man, now what? Lil doesn't want to talk to me." Tommy said with a groan. "What was I thinking making that prince wish?"
Nearby, Ling-Ling tries to open a fruit with his new elephant paws but only succeeds in crushing it, squirting juice in his eyes. He groans and throws the fruit in a nearby pile of fruit he has crushed already.
Goku on the other hand is playing a game of chess with Jake.
"Your move, Jake!" Goku called.
Jake nodded and soon make a bunch of moves, knocking one of Goku's black pieces fall off.
"Ha! Took out another one of your players, Goku!" Jake said in pride.
"Great move." Goku then transforms into the never get respect guy. "I don't believe it. I am losing to a lizard."
"Goku, can you help?" Tommy asked interrupting.
Goku then transformed into some sort of gangster and spoke like one when he speaks to Tommy. "Now listen carefully, sparky, here's the plan. If you want the dame to get on the phone with ya. you got be a straight shooter. You got it, sparky?"
"I have no idea what you're talking about." Tommy said confused.
Goku turns back into normal, except he's wearing a mortarhead. He make a blackboard appears and points to some words with a stick. "Tell her the...TRUTH!"
Tommy kicks at the blackboard, causing it to disappeared, in protest. "Forget it! If I tell her that I'm not really a prince and just your regular Rugrat," Tommy groans as he continues, "She'd hate me."
Tommy puts his hat on. Suddenly Goku is on his head, lighting up.
"A woman enjoys it when a guy makes her laugh!" Goku said. Tommy groans and pulls a chain on Goku, turning the light off. Goku appears holding the true turban, looking at Tommy sadly. "Kid, I was joking. But seriously, you got to be yourself."
"Nah, I'd saved that like never." Tommy said, taking his turban back. "Okay, when I see her, all I got to do is be smooth, cool, and confidant." Tommy demonstrates doing so. "Okay, how do I look?"
"Like a prince." Goku sighs sadly as Tommy got on Jake. The dragon with Tommy riding on him fly up to Lil's balcony.

Lil is back inside her bedroom, lying on her bed, Growlithe next to her. She sighs, still depressed. Not just because of what happened earlier, but because of the boy she's grown to like's death.
"Lil!"
Lil and Growlithe looks up, the Pokemon growls angrily.
"Who is it?" Lil demands suspiciously.
Back on the balcony, Tommy approaches.
"It's me, Prince Tom Li," But then Tommy remembers and speaks in his disguised voice. "I mean, Prince Tom Li Anaheim."
Lil looks out through the shades of her windows and frowns.
"Get lost." Lil said with a scowl as she turns and walks away.
"Wait! At least give me a chance!" Tommy tries to walked forward but Growlithe pounced towards him causing him to back off, right near the balcony's edge.
"Leave me alone!" Lil snapped.
"Whoa, whoa! Stay back, doggy!" Tommy said waving Growlithe back.
Over the edge, Jake and Goku are viewing this.
"Uh, how is he doing?" Goku asked concerned.
"I said, he's a dead goose, yo." Jake said, making a cutting signal over his throat.
"Come on, down Growlithe. Nice Growlithe!" Tommy insisted as he takes his hat off to brush Growlithe away.
Lil has chosen this time to take another look. But when she looked at him, she looks puzzled. The prince has purple hair and a familiar look.
"Hold it." Lil said coming out. Growlithe stops and goes to his owner. "Don't I know you from somewhere?"
'Oh boy. She still remember me,' Tommy thought as he puts his hat back on and speak up. "Uh no. I don't think so."
"That's weird. You kinda reminded me of a boy I met back in the market a while ago."
Tommy chuckled nervously. "I have no idea what you mean." As he speaks, a bee is buzzing around him. Tommy tries to swat it away as he continues. "I have servants who goes to the market for me. Heck, they even have servants who go for them so you couldn't have seen me.
Lil frowns in disappointment. "Maybe you're right."
The bee begins to speak to Tommy quietly. It is actually Goku.
"Listen, don't talking about yourself and talked about her!" Goku insisted. "Tell her about one of her features, anything."
"Uh, Princess Lil? You're very..." Tommy tried to think up what to say but is coming up with nothing.
"Wonderful, glorious, magnificent, punctual!" Goku said throwing out words.
"Punctual!" Tommy said.
"Punctual?" Lil asked, offended.
"Sorry." Goku said sheepishly.
"Did I say that? No I mean beautiful!" Tommy quickly corrected himself.
"Phew. That was close."
Lil thought about this and smiles. "Yeah, and that I'm rich too." She then begins to walked to Tommy seemingly seductively.
"Yeah." Tommy said, staring at Lil in a love-sick gaze.
"I am the granddaughter of Sultan Iroh."
"I know."
"A prize any prince wants to marry." Lil is now getting closer.
"Yeah. Good for a prince like me." Tommy said absently.
"Whoa, whoa! Warning!" Goku protested.
"Right, a prince like you." Lil said putting a finger on Tommy's chest and poking all the way to his head. Then she frowns angrily and pulls Tommy's hat over his head very fast. "And every jerk who come here!"
Lil accidentally knocked Goku causing him to divebomb downward.
"Mayday! I lost attitude!" yelled Goku, his behind on fire and dressed like some sort of bee pilot.
Lil then begins to walked away again.
"Lil, please!" Tommy pleaded.
"Go jumped off the balcony!" snapped Lil glancing for a sec.
"Now what?"
"Look, you got to go after her! Stop her! Want me to sting her?" Goku suggested flying around.
"No! Now buzz off!" Tommy said swatting at him again.
"Okay, I'd go back into my Dragon Balls for now. But remember, bee yourself." Goku said. Then he goes back into the Dragon Balls Tommy has hidden in his hat.
"Forget that!" Tommy snapped loudly.
"Excuse me?" Lil said turning around angrily, thinking Tommy was talking to her.
"Uh, you're right about that!" Lil looks puzzled as Tommy sighs disappointedly. "You aren't any prize to be won. I was a fool to think that now. You have to be free with your own choices." As Lil and Growlithe looked at each still puzzled, Tommy begin to climb on the rail of the balcony. "I guess this is goodbye."
Suddenly Tommy jumps off much to Lil's horror.
"No!" Lil cried running forward.
Suddenly to her surprise, Tommy's head poke up from over the edge. "What? Did I missed anything?"
"How?" Lil asked amazed. She looks over the edge and is surprised to see that Tommy is riding Jake. "How did you do that? What is that?"
"His name is Jake Long, my magic dragon." Tommy said proudly.
"Yo, great to meer your greatness." Jake said, shaking Lil's hand.
"Well, he's nice, I can give you that." Lil said with a smile.
"Say, what about I can give you a ride? We can get out of the palace, see the world, and be back before you knew it. You know you want to." Tommy suggested.
"I don't know. Is this safe?"
"Sure. Do you trust me?"
Lil's eyes widen. She has heard those words. She looks at Tommy. "What?"
"Do you trust me?" Tommy asked holding out a somewhat familiar hand extend.
Lil pauses then get a sly grin on her face. She takes Tommy's hand. "Sure".
Lil then got on Jake and the dragon flies up quick, forcing the two into sitting positions. Lil looks and sees Growlithe looking back, looking confused. She looks alarmed as she can see that they are now flying over the palace wall and into the night sky. Tommy smiled and hold her as he begins to sing.

Tommy: can show you the world
Shining, shimmering, splendid.
Tell me princess, now when did you last
Let your heart decide?


Jake flies down over the town, stopping to pick a flower. He gives it to Tommy who then gives it Lil. Lil accepts it with a smile on her face.

I can open your eyes
Take you wonder by wonder
Over, sideways, and under
On a magic dragon ride


Jake did as Tommy sung about, flying fast into the clouds.

whole new world!
A new fantastic point of view
No one to tell us no
Or where to go
Or say we're only dreaming


During this song, Lil sees Toon Town disappearing from sight, Jake flying in and out of the clouds. She then begins to sing.

Lil: A whole new world
A dazzling place I never knew
But when I'm way up here
It's crystal clear
That now I'm in a whole new world with you!


As they continued to sing, the two catch a cloud. Then Jake circles a bunch of clouds, giving them a swirly look.

Tommy: Now I'm in a whole new world with you!

Lil: Unbelievable sights

The two on Jake join a bunch of flocks, one with a head of a duck named Donald quacks in shock at the sight of them.

Indescribable feeling
Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling


Jake did some somersaults and flips, causing Tommy and Lil to go into a free fall, but the dragon catches them in time.

Through an endless diamond sky

Now they zoomed above the clouds, where stars glow at night.

Lil: A whole new world!

Tommy: Don't you dare close your eyes

Lil: An hundred thousand things to see

Tommy: Hold your breath--it gets better!

Lil: I'm like a shooting star,
I've come so far
I can't go back to where I used to be!


The ride flies over a river then to the Great Pyramids. They wave at a worker named Mario Mario working on a sphinx. He waves back but chisel too hard, causing the front section of the nose to fall off.

Tommy: A whole new world!

Lil: Every turn a surprise

Tommy: With new horizons to pursue

Lil: Every moment, red-letter

They now passed a bunch of wild horses running, Lil petting a young one.

Both: I'll chase them anywhere
There's time to spare
Let me share this whole new world with you


They now passed through Ancient Greece. Tommy grabs an apple from a tree nearby and then passed it very familiar to Lil. Lil is now sure that Prince Tom Li is the same boy she met in the market.

Tommy: A whole new world

Lil: (smiling) A whole new world

Tommy: That's where we'll be

Lil: That's where we'll be

Tommy: A thrilling chase

Lil: A wondrous place

Both: For you and me!

Jake is flying over a lake as Tommy and Lil hold on to each other, in a romantic moment. The reflection of the moon is in the lake.

Later, the two arrives at Chinese in time for the Chinese fireworks that are going up and exploded into the sky. The two and Jake are viewing this from a rooftop.
"This is so wonderful." Lil said with a sigh.
"Yeah, I thought so too." Tommy agrees.
Lil looks at Tommy. Now is the time for him to spill the beans. "It's sad that Ling-Ling can't make it."
"Forget it, he doesn't like fireworks." Tommy remarked, not realizing what's going on.
"Tommy, no!" Jake hissed in protest, realizing what Lil's doing.
Tommy didn't hear Jake and continued. "Ling-Ling's also freaked out by the dragon rides." Tommy noticed that Lil's eyes widen, upset. Tommy's eyes widen in shock as he realized what he just said. "Uh, I mean...oh man."
"You are the boy from the market, aren't you?" Lil shouted as she takes off Tommy's hat, exposing his hair.
"Lil, I'm sorry!" Tommy said.
"Do you think I'm stupid to not realized it later?"
"No!"
"That I wasn't smart enough to figure it out!"
"No! I mean. I was hoping you won't. I mean, that isn't what I meant!" protested Tommy.
"Who are you? Tell me the truth." Lil demanded.
Tommy gulps nervously. How is he going to get out of this one? He looks at Lil, who is waiting impatiently for an answer.
"You want the truth?" Tommy asked looking at Jake, who nodded. "Uh, here's the truth. The truth is...I dressed like a commoner to go into markets to escape the prince's life!"
"Oh man. That is so no good." Jake groans in defeat.
"But I am a prince, really!" Tommy exclaimed, the feather on his head falling from his head.
"Why didn't you say so sooner?" Lil asked, now convinced of Tommy's 'truth'.
"Come on. You find it strange that royalty goes out into cities in disgusse, don't you?" Tommy chuckled nervously.
Lil knew that this was true, since she did that herself. She smirked'
"Not really." Lil joked as she flicked Tommy's feather up, then cuddled up with Tommy. Tommy smiles happily.
"Man, I am not to feel at this point. Concern or disbelief." Jake said as he looked on in either way.

Author's note
Did you love this chapter? I sure did. Tommy and Lil's first date. But more of the plot unfolds in the next chapter so stay tuned! Review but no flames!
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Get ready because things really heat up in this chapter.

Sora: Say, I got a question.

Me: Shoot.

Sora: Well, I heard you made some KH Versions of Sleeping Beauty and The Little Mermaid and that they're at the Freedom of Speech Fan Fiction Archive place, right?

Me: Yeah.

Sora: The question is, are you doing another one?

Me: Maybe.

Sora: Oh come on!

Me: I won't say yet but I could make another KH version. Okay, on to the story.

Chapter 11: Dr. Drakken's Treachery

Right after the fireworks were done, Tommy and Jake returned Lil to the palace. Jake stops near the edge and helped Lil off. Then Jake descends to below the balcony and so did Tommy. Tommy and Lil looked at each other happily.
"Good night, my handsome prince." Lil said with a happy sigh.
"Good night, princess." Tommy responded.
The two looked at each other and leaned forward to kiss. But Jake bumped Tommy up and their lips connected a bit early. But despite that, they enjoyed the kiss as if in a dream. Lil moves back, smiles at Tommy, turns around, and walk back to her room. Tommy looked and grins widely as Lil turned and looks at him before going back in.
"ALL RIGHT!" cheered Tommy happily as he falls back and off Jake. Jake catches him and descends to the ground. Tommy smiles and looks at the stars. "Man, for the first time ever, things have turned out all right."
Tommy begins to dream but his dreams were cut short when a bunch of hands grabbed him. Tommy suddenly finds himself in the hands of Dick Dastardly and his men.
"Hey, what are you doing?" Tommy demands angrily but a guard tied a gag around his mouth, muffling his words. "Ling-Ling! Ling-Ling!"
Tommy turned and looks shocked as his 'elephant' Ling-Ling was in a net hanging from a tree.
"Hold him!" Dick ordered. Tommy felts a bunch of shackles and such being put on his feet and hands. Jake tries to help Tommy but one of Dick's men grabs him and ties him to a tree.
"Sorry to say this, but you have stay here for too long, Prince A-dum-dum." Tommy looked up and sees Dr. Drakken standing nearby with an evil smirk. Tommy realized that Dr. Drakken is behind this and yells, but can still only muffled. Dr. Drakken turns and gives out a command as he leaves. "Make sure no one finds him ever again."
Before Tommy could think, one of Dick's men hits him on the head and his view turns to black.

Dick laughs sinisterly as he and his men throws Tommy's body over a cliff into a raging ocean. Once he hits the water, he woke up and tries to move. Unfortunately, the guards has since tied his feet to a big rock which lands at the ocean's bottom hard. Tommy's hat floats to the ground and he sees that the Dragon Balls are still there. Tommy floats over and tries to rub the Dragon Balls. But suddenly he fell unconsciousness once more. He fell to the floor but luckily for him, the Dragon Balls were unsettled by his movement and they all rolled down. Tommy's hands managed to rub them. The Dragon Balls begin to shine. Suddenly Goku appears with a bath brush, rubber duckie, and a night cap. It looks like he was trying to take a bath!
"Man, just when I thought I could settle down tonight, someone made a call!" Goku complains as he squeaks his duckie. "Hey Tom?"
Goku looks around and then he gasps upon seeing Tommy unconscious.
"Tom? Tom!" Goku exclaims as he swims over. "Kid, wake up! No way you can't get a free wish this time! The only way I can saved you if you make a wish! You got to say, 'Goku, I wish you can saved me'! Got it?" Tommy doesn't respond at first. Goku yells in a panic. "TOMMY!"
Goku shakes Tommy like mad. Tommy's head nods up then falls.
"Okay, that'd work." Goku remarked. Then Goku transforms into a submarine and make the usual noises. "Up scope!"
Goku speaks like a German. Up above, something pops out of the water very fast and lands on the cliff. It's Goku putting down Tommy. Tommy wakes up and spits out water out of his lungs.
"Man, don't do that to me again!" Goku yelled.
"Goku?" Tommy said, seeing his Saiyan pal. "Uh, well..." Tommy thinks up of how to thank Goku. He couldn't find one so he hugs Goku instead. "Thanks, pal."
"Well, you are a good pal of mine." Goku said with a smile as he picks Tommy up. As he begins to fly Tommy back to the palace, he mumbles. "But don't expect me to give you any of my food."

At the palace, Lil is brushing her hair, humming the song she and Tommy sang oh so well on their date. She is unaware that something has happens to the 'prince' she has grown to love. Just then, there's a knock at the door.
"Come in." Lil said dreamily.
"Lil." It was Iroh who came in in some sort of daze.
"Oh grandfather." Lil said happily as she stood up and twirls around. "I have a great time earlier! I am so happy!"
"I'm glad you are. And you will even more. Lil, I have picked out your husband." Iroh responded.
"What?"
"You will marry...Dr. Drakken."
The other door to the room opens and Lil gasps as she sees Dr. Drakken with Daffy smirking evilly at her.
"So what you think? Speechless? That's what I want in my new wife." Dr. Drakken said.
"You can't make me marry you!" Lil yelled angrily. She turned to her grandfather and speaks to him gently. "Grandfather, I loved Prince Tom Li and I want him to be my husband."
"Oh, forget him! He left!" Dr. Drakken laughed.
"Maybe you should check your schedule, doctor. You're scheduled for a big appointment!" Everyone turned and to Lil's happiness and Dr. Drakken and Daffy's shock, Tommy is standing by the doorway to the balcony with an angry look on his face.
"Prince Tom Li!" Lil said happily.
"Hey! How did he ge..." Daffy begins to say but then remembers that he's not supposed to talk like a normal human. "I mean, woo-hoo?"
"Why are you back?" Dr. Drakken said, struggling to get over his shock.
"Oh quit the act, Doctor." Tommy yells as he goes up to Dr. Drakken. "Why don't you admit that you try to have me killed?"
"What? Oh Sultan, don't believe him!" Dr. Drakken insisted as he goes next to Iroh, using his hypno ray on him again. "He is speaking nonsense! He is nothing more than a liar!"
"Nothing more than a liar." Iroh said in a trance.
Unknown to Dr. Drakken, however, Tommy can see the hypno ray the doctor failed to hide.
"Grandfather, what's wrong with you?" Lil asked confused.
"I know what's wrong!" Tommy yells as he grabs the hypno ray from Dr. Drakken. To the villain's horror, Tommy throws the ray to the ground, destroying it. Suddenly Iroh blinks his eyes and is out of Drakken's spell at last.
"Huh? What's going on?" Iroh asked confused.
"Your highness, I know you probably liked Dr. Drakken by now but he's really controlling you all this time with this!" Tommy said holding up the destroyed hypno ray for the sultan to see.
"What? How...but..." Iroh then looks furious at Dr. Drakken. "Drakken! You traitor!"
"Oh come on. Can't we talked about this?" Dr. Drakken asked nervously as the three advanced on him angrily.
"Guards! Guards!" Iroh yelled out.
Seeing no reason to pretend any longer, Daffy spoke out. "Well, we're goners. Forget about it! We may as well pay for our own funerals here! This is despicable!
Dr. Drakken looks like he's about to lose hope, but then he notices something in the hat Tommy's holding. A set of familiar looking seven shining yellow balls, each with a different number of stars on them from 1 to .
'The Dragon Balls!' thought Dr. Drakken triumphantly. 'Of course! That explains everything! I know who this kid really is!'
Dr. Drakken tries to make a move but the guards appeared and seized him and Daffy.
"Arrest him at once!" Iroh ordered.
"I am not done with you yet, purple hair!" Dr. Drakken yells as he takes out a vial.
Before anyone can do anything, the villain throws the vial to the floor and a red cloud covers him. When it disappears, both Dr. Drakken and Daffy has disappeared.
"Find Dr. Drakken! He cannot have gone far!" Iroh yelled as the guards run out in search of the villain.
"Lil? Are you alright?" Tommy asked in concern as he holds Lil.
Lil smiles and said. "I am now."
The two leaned forward to kiss again but Iroh got in between them, all upset of what he just learn.
"I can't believe it! Dr. Drakken, my most truster adviser, trying to overthrow me this whole time! This is the most horrible thing I have ever experienced! How can I..." Iroh stops talking and then sees Tommy and Lil. He notices the looks the two gave each other. "What? Can this be true? My granddaughter has finally found a suitor???" Lil smiles and nods. Iroh responds happily, "Yes! Happy days! You brillaint boy, I could kiss you, but I'd let Lil do it. You two must be wed at once!" Tommy and Lil got excited as Iroh continues. "Yes, you two will be happy together and prosperous today. And my young friend, you will be the next sultan!"
"Sultan?" Tommy asked alarmed all of the sudden.
"That's right. Someone like you, a young fine upstanding lad, someone with your unimpeachable mortal character is the thing this kingdom needs." Iroh explains.
Tommy looks worried, and for a bunch of reasons. What would happened when everyone finds out the truth? And Lil? What would happened when she finds out?

Dr. Drakken and Daffy has managed to escape the guards and entered their chambers/lab, safe for now.
"We got to get out of here!" Daffy yells as he goes to get pack. Unknown to him. Dr. Drakken is still by the door, an evil grin on his face. "I'd get all our things and we'd get out of here when the time is right!" Daffy heads to his bed and throws a bunch of things in a suitcase nearby. "We only need what we need! Weapons, inventions, the food..." Daffy then stops to looked at a picture of himself and Dr. Drakken. He frowns. "You think I should take this? I looked despicable in this."
Suddenly Daffy turns as he hears Dr. Drakken laughs wildly. The duck groans.
"Oh boy, he lost more than the throne now." Daffy goes up to the mad scientist and slaps him hard. "Hey doc! Knock it off!" But then, Dr. Drakken grabs Daffy by the throat. "Hey! I don't mean knock my head off!"
"Daffy, you idiot! I just found out that Prince Tom Li is no prince! He is that ragged purple-haired brat Tommy Pickles! He has the Dragon Balls which explains his riches and how he escaped death the second time!" Dr. Drakken yells.
"Why that despicable..."
Dr. Drakken interrupts Daffy and continues. "And you're going to get them!"
"What?" Daffy asked in shock.

Author's note
Uh oh. Dr. Drakken now knows Tommy's secret and he's out to get the Dragon Balls. Even worst, Tommy is concerned about what would happened when the secret's out. Would he be forced to break his promise to Goku? And will Dr. Drakken get the Dragon Balls?

Toot Braunstein: Uh, DUUUUUUHHHHHHH!

Me: Get out here, fatty! (kicks Toot out) Anyway, watch for the next chapter coming obviously very soon. Until then, review as usual.
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Well, here it is, chapter 12, a chapter that is the turning point of the story as Tommy is forced to make a decision.

Goku: Which does not make me happy.

Me: We know. Anyway, let's begin...


Chapter 12: A Broken Promise

The next day is the day Iroh announces Lil's decision to the crowd and everyone is happy about it. Everyone but the bad guys and one certain fake prince.
"Oh man, they want me to be the sultan." Tommy groaned as he looks out the garden. It's not because he doesn't want the job. It's because of what would happened when the truth comes out.
Tommy sighs and heads back inside. As he does, Goku comes out of the Dragon Balls happily.
"Hurray! Cheers for the conquering hero!" Goku cheered, not noticing Tommy's depressed state. The Saiyan becames a one-man band and performs a song. But he stops when he sees that Tommy just walked off sadly. Goku changed back and frowns while scratching his head. He smiles as if coming up with an idea and goes to Tommy.
"Hey Tommy! You just won the princess's heart What are you going to do now?" Goku asked, making like a reporter.
But Tommy just sighs and goes to his bed and lay down on it sadly. This confuses Goku then he goes up to Tommy with a script and whispered into his ear.
"Uh, this is the part where you free Goku. Remember?" Goku reminded him.
"Goku, I can't." Tommy said, finally answering him.
"Oh yes you can! It's simple! All you do is say," Goku then moves Tommy's head and uses him as a puppeteer's puppet, "'Goku, I wish to set you free'."
Tommy slaps Goku away and got up. "I'm serious, Goku! I'm apologized for what I'm going to say next, I really do! They want to make me sultan. No, correction. They want to make 'Prince Tom Li' the sultan." Tommy groans and turned back to Goku. "Without you, I'm just Tommy Pickles."
"But you won, Tommy." Goku said surprised.
"All because of your help! The only reason I'm popular in everyone's eyes is because of you! What would happened if they find out the truth?" Goku looks shocked as Tommy turns around and whispers to himself. "And Lil. If she finds out, I'd lose her." Tommy sighs as he turns back. "Goku, I'm sorry. I can't do this by myself. I...I can't set you free."
Goku looks stunned and heartbroken. He nods understanding and frowns.
"Oh geez. With all your lying to everyone else, I was thinking you didn't included me in your game." Goku said sarcastic. "I understand your game now. Now if you excuse me, master," Goku said the 'master' part in disgust. "I got to go be by myself in the Dragon Balls....for the next 10,000 years!"
Goku goes back into the Dragon Balls in anger. Ling-Ling and Jake watches this from a window nearby sadly.
"Oh, poor Goku." Ling-Ling said sadly.
"Man, he got dissed again." Jake agreed.
"Goku, I'm really sorry." Tommy pleaded as he holds the Dragon Balls while speaking into the Dragon Balls. But the Saiyan of the Dragon Balls just raspberries from out of nowhere. Tommy looks furious and puts all the Balls under a pillow. "Fine! If you're going to be that way! Then stay in those metal balls!"
Tommy then noticed that Ling-Ling and Jake were watching stunned. He frowns.
"What are you two looking at?" snapped Tommy.
"Uh, nothing. If you don't want us, we can leave." Jake said sadly. Then he and Ling-Ling turns to leave.
"Wait, guys! I'm sorry. Ling-Ling, I..." Tommy groans as both Ling-Ling and Jake left. "Oh man. I'm losing my friends every few seconds. Oh man. Goku's right. I got to tell Lil the truth."
Tommy knew doing so would give Lil another reason to be furious at him again and she won't be the only one. But Tommy knew that he can't lie forever. But then a familiar voice called for him.
"Tom Li! Oh Prince Tom Li! Can I see you?" asked the familiar voice.
'Lil'? thought Tommy. Tommy puts his hat again and heads for the door. He said, "Well. May as well get this over with." Tommy enters the garden. "Lil? Where are you?"
"In the menagerie, hurry." called Lil's voice.
"Coming!"
Tommy walks past a pond next to the building he's staying. Two flamingos are there gazing. But if Tommy has stopped to looked closer, he would have seen that one of the flamingos' beaks is a fake and is actually standing on stilts.
Daffy smirks evilly as he watches Tommy leaves. His talent of imitating other people's voices has played off. He fooled Tommy with Lil's voice.
"Heh heh." Daffy chuckled evilly. But Daffy stops when the other flamingo, a real one, looks at him, love-stricken, obviously mistaking him for another flamingo. He duhs a bit. Daffy frowns and trips it.
"Find someone else, pinkie!" Daffy snapped as the flamingo fell into the pond.
Daffy then ditches his disguise and runs into Tommy's room. He searches the room and found the Dragon Balls under Tommy's pillow.
"Woo-hoo! Dr. Drakken is going to be happy to see you!" Daffy laughs looking at the Dragon Balls. Then he begins to imitated Drakken's voice. "Good work as usual, Daffy." Daffy went into his normal voice. "Aw, go on." Daffy then uses Drakken's voice again. "No, really! On a scale to 1 to 10, you are a hundred!" Daffy laughs in his normal voice. "Aw, doc. You are making me blush! I'm embarrassed!"
Daffy continues to laughs and woo-hoo as he runs off to give the Dragon Balls to Dr. Drakken.

Author's note
Now Dr. Drakken's going to get the Dragon Balls and Tommy's dreams are turning into nightmares! Will Tommy survived his problem or will Dr. Drakken set him up for a fall? Find out in the next chapter, coming soon! Review and no flames!
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This chapter is where it all comes to head. Tommy's lie expose, Dr. Drakken takes over, and Goku gets a new master (and guess who it is?). Things get heated up here folks, so let's go! This shows why 13 is the unluckiest number.

Chapter 13: Dr. Drakken, The New Ruler

A crowd gathers before the palace as Iroh makes his announcement to the people at the platform overlooking the city.
"What's going on?" one of the Powerpuff Girls names Bubbles asked.
"Iroh has an annoucement he's going to tell us." Professor Utonium explains.
"If it's about Lil not getting a new husband, forget it." Buttercup said rolling her eyes.
"I have great news, people of Toon Town! My granddaughter has finally chosen a suitor!" Iroh yelled out.
"You were saying?" Blossom asked, smirking as the crowd cheers wildly.

Behind the curtain near the platform, Lil peeks out at the crowd. She wonders where her new fiancee's at.
"Lil!" Tommy said walking up a bunch of stairs.
"Prince Tom Li! Where were you? I was looking all over for you." Lil said.
'Looking all over for me? But I was looking all over for you.' Tommy thought confused. But he decides to say it and instead said, "Listen, I got something important to tell you."
"Whatever it is, it has to wait. Everyone came for grandfather's announcement!"
"But Lil, please listen..."
Lil kissed Tommy and said, "Good luck!"
Before Tommy could protested some more, Lil pushed Tommy out onto the platform with Iroh. Tommy gulps as he sees the turnout.
"It is Prince Tom Li Anaheim!" Iroh announced.
"Oh great." Tommy said with a groan.

In Dr. Drakken's lab, the villains looked at this unseen by anyone.
"How despicable! They wouldn't be cheering if they knew that that kid is a fake!" Daffy said in disgust.
"Let them cheer. They would be doing something else in a few minutes." Dr. Drakken said evilly as he rubs the Dragon Balls.
Goku came out, back to the two. He doesn't know what has happened and he is still anger.
"Tommy, if you called me out just to apologize then you got..." Goku turns and is startled when he sees that it isn't Tommy he's speaking to. "Oops. Wrong guy." Goku goes to Dr. Drakken's eye level and looks through the script, frowning. "Weird, I don't recalled any change of casting in the Tommy Pickles role."
"Silence, monkey!" Dr. Drakken yells as he throws Goku to the ground and steps on his face. "I am your new master now!"
"An evil scary looking guy for a master. I was afraid of this." Goku said with a groan.
"Well, get use to it! For my first wish, I wish to rule on high, as the new sultan!"

Outside, the celebration was cut short when black clouds appeared over the castle. The castle shakes scaring everyone off. Tommy and Iroh ducked as the roof came off
"What the...?" Tommy begins to asked.
"What's going on?" Iroh begins to asked. But just then his hat of royalty begins to lift off. Iroh tries to grab for it but his whole body is lifted up by an invisible hand and all of his clothing but his underwear were stripped from him. Before anyone knew it, Dr. Drakken appears, wearing Iroh's sultan clothing, that now fit for him. Dr. Drakken laughs evilly.
"Now who's the boss?" Dr. Drakken boomed evilly.
"Drakken, you vile betrayer!" Iroh yelled angrily.
"That's Sultan vile betrayer to you!" snapped Daffy, appearing wearing a royal outfit.
"You can't win, Drakken! I will put an end to this!" Tommy yells as he takes his hat off and reaches into it. But to his shock, the hat is empty. "The Dragon Balls!"
Tommy suddenly returns that he left them under a pillow back in his room, without thinking. Suddenly Dr. Drakken laughs at him sinisterly.
"Not this time, A-dum-dum!" Dr. Drakken laughed pointing to something.
Tommy, Iroh, and Lil looked up and gasped in horror. Goku appeared, giant-size, and picks up the palace as if it was a toy and lift it up high.
"Jake!" Tommy yelled for Jake.
"Oh man. This isn't good!" Jake yelled as he appeared and Tommy got on him. The two flew up to Goku's head.
"Goku! Stop!" Tommy yelled in protest.
"I'm sorry, Tommy." Goku said sadly. "The blue guy is my master now."
To Tommy's horror, Goku puts the palace onto a nearby mountain. Tommy realized what has happened in horror. In his anger, he has allowed Dr. Drakken to get his hands on the Dragon Balls! Unfortunately, Iroh and Lil doesn't know about that.
"Drakken, you cease this right now!" Iroh ordered.
"Uh, hello? See the clothes? I'm in charge now, you old geezer! My order is the new order now, and my first order to you two is to bow down to me!" Dr. Drakken demanded evilly.
"Never, you freak!" Lil yelled.
"Oh why am I not surprised?" Daffy asked sarcastically.
"Okay, so if it's not me as a sultan you can bowed down to, let's see you cower to a guy with a whole bunch of powers!" Dr. Drakken yelled. he then turns to a sad looking Goku. "Saiyan! For my second wish, I want to be the most powerful being on the face of the Earth!"
Goku groans but points his finger, getting ready to do the wish. Tommy tries to stop him but he failed and a bolt Goku, returning him back but more powerful than ever. Dr. Drakken laughs as he shackles with a whole much of powers.
"Ladies and morons, please welcome the all new and powerful, Dr. Drakken!" Daffy said, introducing Dr. Drakken like a host.
"Now then, as I was saying, time for some humiltation!" Dr. Drakken laughed. He then hits Lil and Iroh with a spell forcing them to bow. He turned and see Growlithe charging at him angrily. The mad scientist however zaps Growlithe and changes him into a smaller version of himself. "Down, puppy." Dr. Drakken smirks then forces Lil to him. "Oh, and Lil? There's a new friend and an old friend of yours I'd like for you to meet."
"Drakken, get your hands off her!" Tommy yelled as he and Jake flies towards Drakken and Lil as the villain begins to sing his version of 'Prince Tom Li's' song.

Drakken: Prince Tom Li
Yes, it is he,
But not as you know him.


Drakken then zaps Tommy with a spell and knocks Jake away. He then brings Tommy closer to the palace ground.

Read my lips and come to grips
With reality


Drakken then brings the two closer, so to speak.

Yes, meet a blast from your past
Whose lies were too good to last
Say hello to your precious Prince Tom Li!


Then Drakken zaps Tommy and changed him back to his normal old self. Lil looks in shock at this. Daffy laughed.
"Or how about his real name 'Tommy Pickles'?" mocked Daffy.
"Tom Li?" Lil asked in shocked.
"Lil, I try to tell you." Tommy said as he comes up to her sadly. "I..."
But Drakken interrupts Tommy and pushed him down as he continues to sing.

Drakken: So Tom Li turns out to be merely Tommy Pickles

Ling-Ling tries to attack Dr. Drakken but the villain zaps Ling-Ling and changed back into his Asian old self.

Just a con, need I go on?
Take it from me
His personality flaws
Give me adequate cause
To send him packing on a one-way trip


With a wave of his hand, Tommy and Ling-Ling were suddenly picked up by an invisible hand and they were suddenly forced into an abandoned pillar.

So his prospects take a terminal dip
His assets frozen, the venue chosen


Alarmed, Jake quickly flew into the pillar as Dr. Drakken continues.

Is the ends of the earth, whoopee!

Dr. Drakken pretends he is swinging a golf club like a pro and at the same time, the pillar Tommy, Ling-Ling and Jake are currently in begins to launch like a rocket. Goku watches sadly as the pillar disappears from sight.

So long,

"Bye and don't hurry back!" laughed Daffy.

Ex-Prince Tom Li!

As the song ends, Dr. Drakken laughs sinisterly like a mad man. His shadow covers Lil and Iroh who looks at the villain cowardly.

Author's note
Dr. Drakken has taken control! Now Tommy must return to set things right. But how can he fare against a villain with a whole bunch of powers? The final battle begins in the last chapter coming soon!
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Here it is, folks! The final chapter of my Aladdin parody! This is the big one so here we go!

Chapter 14: The Last Wishes

The pillar Tommy, Ling-Ling, and Jake are in crash landed in a snowy wasteland, which is obviously the end of the earth. The pillar rolls down a bit and stops. Tommy came out, shivering, not just because of the cold.
"Ling-Ling? Ling-Ling!" Tommy yelled out for his pal. He hears some shivering from a nearby pile of snow and begins to dig. "Oh man, this is all my fault! I should have freed Goku when I have the chance!" Tommy has finally dig a shivering Ling-Ling out and holds him tightly. "Are you okay, Ling-Ling?"
"Besides nearly freezing to death, yeah, I'm okay, Tommy-san." Ling-Ling answered in shivering Japanese.
"i'm sorry, Ling-Ling. I messed up this time." Tommy said with a sigh. He looks up with determination. "I got to find a way back and fixed everything!"
But both Tommy and Ling-Ling knew that it's a long walk, and I mean long walk back to Toon Town and who knows what would happened, besides them freezing to death, during that time? But despite that, Tommy walks through the snow. But he steps on something and looks. He gasps as he sees what it is.
"Jake!" Tommy exclaimed as he sees his dragon friend frozen like an ice cube. Tommy sees that Jake is pinned by the pillar. He tries to pulled Jake out but Jake's tail is caught tight.
"Start digging, Ling-Ling!" Tommy exclaimed as he and his friend begins to dig Ling-Ling out.
They continued digging until they hear a noise. They looked up and saw that their digging has caught the pillar to come loose and is rolling towards them! Tommy and Ling-Ling runs away only to be stopped by a cliff. They turned back to see the pillar rolling towards them like mad. Tommy then sees the window of the pillar and begins to time it. He grabs Ling-Ling and slides into place. Sure enough, his calculations were right. While the pillar rolls over him, he managed to get in the window at the right moment. The pillar went by Tommy and Ling-Ling and rolls off the cliff.
"All right!" Tommy cheered triumphantly.
Ling-Ling, on the other hand, is scared stiff. "Never do that to me again, baka!"
"Yo, guys!" Tommy and Ling-Ling turned and sees that Jake has finally managed to get unfrozen.
"Jake! You're unfrozen!" Tommy said in surprise.
"All dragons can do that as long as their tails aren't blocked." Jake explained.
Tommy and Ling-Ling quickly got back on Jake.
"Back to Toon Town!" Tommy ordered.
Jake nodded and begins to fly, with Tommy and Ling-Ling holding on, at his highest speed back to Toon Town.

The town of Toon Town is now covered by evil red clouds. And the insides of the once great palace isn't a great sight to see either. Dr. Drakken sits in a throne made in his image and watches as Daffy stuffed Iroh, dressed and made to be like a puppet, with a bunch of bad crackers. Lil watched this, wearing slave clothes, in horror while she was chained to Drakken's throne.
"Hey, does Iroh want a cracker? Iroh wants a bad despicable cracker?" laughed Daffy evilly as he continues to stuff the crackers down Iroh's throat. "And here's more! Woo-hoo!"
"Drakken! Make him stop that!" Lil cried as, while being forced by Dr. Drakken who pulls on her chain, she walks up to Drakken holding an apple.
Dr. Drakken smirks and gives the signal to Daffy to cease. Daffy paused for a bit, then stuff another cracker down Iroh's throat then back off.
Dr. Drakken laughs then glares at Lil. "You know, my dear, I hate to see you miserable and reduced to a slave, like this." The mad scientist takes an bite out of the apple, then continues. "Someone beautiful like you should be with someone better off. Like say, the most powerful man on the face of the planet?" With a wave of the hand, he made a crown appeared and presents it to Lil. "So how about it? Be my queen and we can ruled this place together!"
Lil's eyes glared angrily as she grabs a cup of wine and throws it, cup and all, at Drakken's face.
"I'd rather die!" Lil hissed angrily.
This made the scientist furiously and he pushed her down.
"I'd teach you some respect!" Dr. Drakken yelled as he raises his hand up as if to slapped her. Lil gets ready for the impact but the villain stops, smiling evilly. He glances at Goku, sitting nearby, looking sadly. "Oh, Saiyan? I got one more wish for you to grant me. I want Princess Lil to fall madly in love with me."
Lil's eyes widen in horror. This can't be good.

Tommy and Ling-Ling arrived at Toon Town riding on Jake. Then they see the palace and flew up to it.

Back at the palace.
"Uh, one problem, master." Goku begins to point out. "There are a few addendas, some quid pro quo-"
Dr. Drakken interrupts Goku harshly. "I don't know what they mean but they are back talk! Stop it now and do what I say, monkey!"
Lil looks at this hopelessly, fearing the mad scientist may get his way. But then Lil looks up and gasps as she sees Tommy in the window, making a signal. He obviously overheard Drakken and signal for her to distract her. Lil knew she would hate what she has to do next but whatever Tommy has in mind, she has to do it.
"Oh Dr. Drakken." Lil said in pretend seductance as she stood up. Dr. Drakken and Goku stopped arguing and turned to her. Lil gave the mad scientist a pretend flirting smile as she puts the crown on. "I've never realized until now how handsome you are."
Goku did an Anime drop in shock. But Dr. Drakken stood him up and smiles.
"Now that's better." Dr. Drakken said evilly as he walked forward. "Tell me about myself."
Lil on the inside is in disgust as she continues. "You're tall, well-dressed..."
Goku watches as Lil begins to comments on Drakken's 'appearance' as the villain watches over to her. He sees something from the corner of his eye: Tommy jumping to the floor with Ling-Ling in tow. That made him happy for the first time since Tommy has broken his promise.
"Tom, pal!" Goku said happily.
"Shh!" Tommy said hushing Goku.
Goku went quiet then runs over to Tommy quickly. He whispers. "I'm sorry, Tom, but I can't help you. The psycho from heck is my master now." Goku changes his head to Dr. Drakken's to prove his point then back.
Tommy chuckled then said, "I'm a Rugrat, remember? I know what to do."
Tommy begins to sneak around and hides nearby Dr. Drakken and Lil, the villain's back is to Tommy. Tommy sees that Dr. Drakken has left the Dragon Balls at the throne.
"And?" asked Dr. Drakken very anxiously.
"Your hair is so...twisted." Lil said as she puts her arms around the villain and twists his hair. But in reality, she is signaling Tommy to move. Tommy smiles and begins to move.
But his move didn't go unnoticed as Daffy spotted him.
"Dr...." Daffy was interrupts as Ling-Ling tackles him and covers his bill.
"And the Rugrat?" Dr. Drakken said, not hearing Daffy.
"What Rugrat?" Lil lied.
Daffy struggles with Ling-Ling until the struggles causes a bowl to fell to the ground. Dr. Drakken turns to look, but Lil turns him back and did something she regrets doing him: kissing him full on the lips.
Tommy was almost to the Dragon Balls when he sees the love of his life kissing Dr. Drakken. He looks shocked and a bit disgusted.
Even Ling-Ling and Daffy looks disgusted at this display.
"Yuck!" Ling-Ling said disgusted.
Dr. Drakken's lips part Lil's, the latter very disgusted, and the villain smiles.
"That was..." Dr. Drakken stops as he sees something in Lil's crown. Tommy making his move for the Dragon Balls! The villain turned quickly and exclaimed, "YOU!"
Dr. Drakken quickly hits Tommy with a bolt and knocks him before he could grabbed the Dragon Balls.
"Do I have to killed you so many times to get you out of the way?" snapped Dr. Drakken furiously.
Lil attacked Drakken but the villain knocks her to the ground. Tommy jumps Drakken from behind and holds him.
"Get the Dragon Balls!" Tommy yelled.
Lil makes the run for the Dragon Balls but Dr. Drakken got free of Tommy's hold and then hits Lil with a spell, trapping her in a hourglass.
"Your time is up, princess." Dr. Drakken mocked.
Soon the sand on the top part of the hourglass begins to fall on Lil. It is obvious that Drakken intends to drown her in sand.
"Lil!" Tommy cries in horror.
"Good going, Dr..." Daffy was interrupted again as Ling-Ling hits him on the head with a cup, knocking him out. Ling-Ling makes the run for the Dragon Balls.
"You're made in Japan!" Dr. Drakken laughs evilly as he zaps Ling-Ling with a spell turning him into an oddly familiar stuffed toy from Japan.
"Ling-Ling!" Tommy yelled out.
"I'd get them, Tommy!" Jake said making a flying charge for the Dragon Balls.
"Hear my little scales!" Dr. Drakken mocked as he zaps Jake. The poor dragon find himself turned into a bunch of dragon scales.
Dr. Drakken laughs sinisterly then sees Tommy making another run for the Dragon Balls. But Dr. Drakken has managed to make Jedi weapons known as lightsabers stick in the floor blocking his power.
"May the fool be with you." Dr. Drakken mocked once more as he grabs the Dragon Balls away and laughs. Tommy managed to remove a green blade lightsaber out of the floor and charges towards the villain with it. Dr. Drakken just smiles and said, "Burn, baby, burn!"
Drakken then spits out fire, causing a ring of fire to surrounded Tommy. Tommy holds the lightsaber in his hand bravely.
"Are you scared to fight me, you cowardly dronehead?" Tommy demands.
"'Dronehead', am I? Well, let's see how dronehead-like I can be!" Dr. Drakken laughs as he suddenly begins to transform. Before Tommy's eyes, Dr. Drakken has transformed into a kaleesh cyborg with barely any flesh inside the huge cybernetic parts. His mask looked like that of a skull and he wore a huge cape that was gray on the outside, but red on the inside. In this form, he is known as General Grievous.
General Grievous smiles then takes out four lightsabers in four arms out and charges at Tommy. He swings at Tommy two times, missing each time. General Grievous attacks on the third time and Tommy hits it hard with the lightsaber he's holding.
Goku cheerleaders, nearby, wearing 'T' sweaters begin to cheer.
"Rickem, rockem, rackem, read--stick that lightsaber into that dronehead!" The Goku cheerleaders cheered.
"Stay out of this!" General Grievous yelled at Goku angrily.
Goku waves a small pennant with a 'D' on it boredly.
"Drakken, Drakken, he's our man, if he can't do it, GREAT!" Goku said, snapping at the end.
Thanks to Goku's distraction, Tommy runs for the hourglass where Lil is continuing to have sand poured on her. But before he could get close to the hourglass, General Grievous jumps, blocking him and knocks him away, making Tommy lose his lightsaber doing so!"
"Tommy!" Lil cried as she watches from the hourglass where the sand is about halfway near her shoulders.
Thinking quickly, Tommy jumps on a gem and slides across the floor grabbing his lightsaber doing so. General Grievous pursues the hero once more. Tommy manages to turn a corner by jumping off the gem he's riding on. The villain meanwhile slips on the gem and crashes through a wall, the front half hanging outside the palace. Tommy then charges at the back and stabs it, making General Grievous screams in pain.
Thinking he has won, Tommy removes his lightsaber and runs to the hourglass once more.
"Hang on, Lil!" Tommy called getting ready to slash with the lightsaber.
But before he could strike, General Grievous appeared out of nowhere and grabbed him. Lil, Goku, and Iroh watches as the villain begins to squeeze Tommy tightly with his four arms, laughing evilly.
"You fool! You think you could stopped me, the most powerful being on Earth?" General Grievous boasted as he continues to squeeze.
"Squeeze him, Drakken!" Daffy said, cheering General Grievous/Dr. Drakken on. "Squeeze him like a..."
However Goku was nearby at the time and he elbows the duck out of the way.
"Without your Saiyan, you're hopeless!" General Grievous boomed.
Tommy then has a thought and sees Goku. Tommy smiles.
"Goku? Of course, Goku!" Tommy whispered to himself. He then begins to laugh.
"What's so funny?" General Grievous demands.
"You're the hopeless one! Goku has more power than you do!" Tommy said laughing.
"What?" demands the transformed villain angrily.
"Remember, he gave you your power. With another wish, he can take it away!" Tommy pointed out.
Goku doesn't like what Tommy's saying. He begins to get nervous. "Uh, Tom? What are you doing? Keep me out of this."
"Even with all your best, Goku is still better than you are." Tommy said, ignoring Goku.
General Grievous/Dr. Drakken pauses to think. The boy is right. If Goku can give him his power, someone else could have it removed.
"You're right. His powers are greater than mine." General Grievous said in thought. He smirks as he eyes Goku. "But not for long."
As he still holds onto Tommy, General Grievous advances on a nervous Goku.
"Come on, don't listen to him! He obviously got too many hits in the head by a robot!" Goku protested as his hand turns into a snake and he hits his own head with it.
General Grievous ignores Goku and then said, "Monkey! For my final wish, I wish to be an all powerful Saiyan!"
Meanwhile, only Lil's hand is shown as the sand is about to covered all of her. Goku sighs sadly.
"Oh all right. I'd do it." Goku said, then to Tommy sarcastically. "Thanks a bunch, Tom."
Goku then grants the villain his final wish. Dr. Drakken transforms out of his General Grievous form and soon became a being just like Goku. He laughs madly.
"Yes! Now I have the power!" boomed Dr. Drakken.
With Dr. Drakken no longer holding him, Tommy grabs something from the floor, runs over to the hourglass, and smashed it, freeing the sand and the princess.
"Absolute power!" Dr. Drakken exclaimed. The villain crashed through the roof of his palace and chaos begins to spread. Below, Tommy and Lil lay down trying to keep themselves from blowing.
"What have you done?" Lil asked Tommy shocked.
Tommy smirks and said, "Trust me."
Unknown to Dr. Drakken, another set of Dragon Balls, like Goku's only the the stars are darker. The now Saiyan Dr. Drakken is too busy conjuring to noticed.
"Everything is at my fingertips!" boomed Dr. Drakken madly.
"Oh, Drakken, did you forget something?" Tommy asked shyly.
Dr. Drakken looks down and is surprised to see another set of Dragon Balls being picked up by Tommy.
"You want to be a Saiyan? You got it!"
"What?" Dr. Drakken yelled in horror as Dragon Balls marks, the same symbols of a slave that are on Goku's hands, appeared on his hands.
"And everything that goes with it!" Tommy said smirking again.
"No! No!" Dr. Drakken yelled as he begin to get suck right into the Black Star Dragon Balls.
"I'm outta here!" Daffy yelled as he begins to run away. But Dr. Drakken grabs him and begins to pulled him in with him. "Hey, let go! You're the Saiyan, not me!"
"A whole lot of power." Tommy said. Soon, both the villains are sucked completely right into the Black Star Dragon Balls. Tommy finished, "But little living space."
Goku laughs as he slaps Tommy's shoulder. "Tom, you little genius!"

With Dr. Drakken defeated, everything begins to go back to normal. Ling-Ling changes back into himself and the dragon scales changed back into Jake.
"Man, I felt like being used in someone's collection, yo." Jake said dizzily.
The little Growlithe jumps into Iroh's arms as Lil walks over. Suddenly, the three are transformed back to normal, Growlithe, now big again, sending Iroh to the floor and crushing him.
Eventually, the palace itself reappeared back in its rightful place in Toon Town.

Tommy holds the Black Star Dragon Balls as its newest residents begin to argue.
"Get your bill out of my face, Daffy!" Drakken yelled from inside the Black Star Dragon Balls.
"Oh, shut up, you moron!" Daffy snapped angrily.
"Don't tell me to shut up!"
"Let me deal with them." Goku said as he takes the Black Star Dragon Balls from Tommy. Goku puts a baseball cap on and begins to wind up like a pitcher. "Maybe 10,000 years in the Cave of Shenron should calm them down!"
With that Goku throws the Black Star Dragon Balls far into the desert until they disappeared from the sight.
Tommy laughed as the villains are gone. But then he looks sad and looked at Lil who looks back at him sadly. He goes over to her and held her hands.
"Lil, I'm sorry I lied to you about who I am." Tommy said sadly.
"I know why you did." Lil nodded in understanding.
"I supposed we should say goodbye, huh?" Tommy knew that now that his secret's out, he can't stay in the palace and be with the girl he loves anymore. Goku peeks out, shocked at this.
"Stupid law!" Lil said angrily turning her head back for a sec. "It's not fair!" Lil turned to Tommy sadly. "I love you."
"Uh, hey, Tom. I got an idea. You just got your last wish, you know. I can turned you back into a prince." Goku suggested handing over the Dragon Balls.
Tommy looks shocked. "But what about your freedom?"
"Aww, I can always keep my eternal service. This is love we're talking about. You won't find another girl like her even in a zillion years, Tom. I should know."
Tommy begins to think. If he lets Goku changed him back into a prince, he can be with Lil but that means Goku would be a slave forever. On the other hand...
Tommy sighs sadly as he speaks to Tommy. "I do love you, Lil. But I can't pretend anymore to be someone I am not."
Lil nods sadly. "I understand."
Tommy and Lil looked at each other, as if saying their last goodbye. Then Tommy turned to Goku, the Dragon Balls in hand.
"Goku, I wish for your freedom." Tommy said.
"Here's your prince wish, coming..." Goku stops as he realized what Tommy has said. "What?"
Tommy smile sadly as he holds the Dragon Balls up to Goku. "Goku, you're free."
Suddenly a transformation has occurred as the Dragon Balls lifted up to Goku's level. Suddenly the symbols on Goku's hands has disappeared. Then the Balls fell to the ground useless, In disbelief, Goku picked his former prison up and looked at them.
"I'm free?" Goku asked in disbelief. Then he smiles widely and said, "I'm free!' Excited, Goku hands the Dragon Balls back to Tommy and said. "Quick! Wish for something crazy! Ask for the Nile!"
Tommy looks dumbstruck but said, "I wish for the Nile?"
"No way!" Goku laughed maniacally. Then he jumps all over the place. "I'm free! I'm free from the Dragon Balls at last! Man, I need a vacation after this, which I'm going to take!"
Excited, Goku begins to pack everything into a suitcase. "I'm going to see the world, folks!"
Goku however stops when he sees that Tommy is looking very sad. Goku knows what Tommy's thinking. First he lost the girl, now his newest friend.
"Goku, I'm going to missed you, pal." Tommy said with a sigh.
Goku smiles and hugged his former master. Then he said, "Hey, even if you aren't one for real, you are always a prince to me."
"He's right." Iroh said as he steps forward. "Despite your lies, you have proven you worth as far as I'm concerned." Iroh then frowns. "There is still that law to worry about."
"Grandfather?" Lil asked.
Iroh chuckled and said, "Don't forget that I'm the sultan and can changed the laws if I must. I declared that from now on, the princess can marry whoever she deems worthy."
Lil smiles widely and runs into Tommy's arms.
"HIM! I choose him!" Lil said excited. The two lovers smiled at each other. Lil then continued, "I choose you, Tommy."
"Heck, call me Tom." Tommy joked.
The two begin to kissed when Goku begins to hugged them, wearing a Hawaiian shirt with golf clubs and a Goofy hat.
"Man, this is a great moment! Big group hug everyone!" Goku then grabs everyone, including Growlithe, and hugged tightly. "Mind if I kissed Ling-Ling?" Goku kissed Ling-Ling, much to the little guy's disgust and spits out a hairball. "Eew, gross!"
"Hey, it isn't Japan to me either!" snapped Ling-Ling annoyed.
Goku lets everyone go and flies up into the hair.
"Well, I'd loved to hang out some more but I'm outta here! Bye, bye, you two! Jake, if you're in China, look me up because I may be there! I'm history! Heck, I'm cartoonlogy! Aw, forget what I said! I'm free!" Goku laughed merrily.
Everyone watched happily as Goku flies up into the sky and disappeared from sight.

Later, fireworks exploded over a nightscape. Tommy and Lil, now engaged, are flying on Jake once more, singing the last song.

Tommy: A whole new world

Lil: A whole new life

Both (with offscreen chorus): For you and me!

Chorus: A whole new world!

The couple kissed once more as Jake begins to fly them into the moonlight. Suddenly, the moon turned and something begins to laugh madly. Just then, the film is 'grabbed off the projector' and Goku appears as if looking at the audience with a big grin.
"Made you look." joked Goku.
Goku drops the film back to normal with the normal moon. Okay, that oddness is out of the way, our story ends.

The End.

Author's note
What do you guys think? I'm a Tommy/Kimi fan but remember, this is a request and besides, I may do a T/K movie parody someday. Anyway, what do you guys think? Please review and no flames! Thank you for those who reviewed this. Have a nice day!

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