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AJP's Last Stand; One last adventure
Topic Started: May 27 2006, 09:53 AM (618 Views)
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He's been written of the Chaos Saga, his return to Chaos Era might not even happen. So Andrew decideds to go on adventure without PhilShadow47's approval.

Summery: Why did Andrew decide to go to Japan? Was it to be with his half siblings? Was it to help Hiro? Or was it something Helena told him. Whatever his reason is, He dosn't plan to go in peace. Andrew Jonathan Pickles in what might be his last apperance in his final stand.

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Ok First off, How the hell did this end up here?

I though I posted it outside of any sub-board. :o

Anyway, Just want to let all you out there know that Andrew is the only other character in this story, the rest of the characters and added just for this story.

Another thing that should be noted is that this Andrew seems more like a futuristic ninja cum lone vigilante. So Andrew won't be wearing a cape and suit like always. Oh no.

This Andrew wears a long trench coat, his shirt and tie as well as pants. He dosn't wear a hat, His weapon of choice is not his lightsaber but a sword that he carries on his back called "the Demon Blade" I wonder if this can be move to somewhere for General Fan Fics since no AGU characters will appear in person, they will be mentioned but no appearances and I feel funny posting a story with no AGU characters in them.
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Since this story can't be moved I decided to just throw Kimi into this. Don't expect her to be the main focus though.

Her story is that she tries to convice Andrew to return home.

Stay tuned as I'm started the first few chapters (it's a very short story) soon.
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Here's something like a sample, tomorrow is the actuall story.

Prologue

When we last left Andrew he had arrived in Japan, his home of Tokyo. Andrew was now at home (yes, he lives alone), he did some housekeeping before the doorbell rang, it was a deliveryman at the door. Andrew signed for whatever it was and brought it. It was a legendry sword called the Demon Blade, Hiro left a note for him written in Japanese. Andrew was enjoying life in Japan. Later that night Andrew had a visitor.

“Are you Akira Wantanabe?” the man asked

“Who wants to know” Andrew said

“I am Hiroshi Takahashi, I am from Masashi Manufacturing. There is something I need to discuss with you, It is very important” the man said

“Very well, Come on in” Andrew said and let the man in. Andrew talked with the man.

“What do you mean strange?” Andrew asked

“Ever since we started work on the Diablotron, strange things have been happening. People that I spoke too say they hear noises, then screams before they know it. They disappear” Hiroshi said

“And you want me to investigate this strange happening?” Andrew asked

“Yes” he said

“Very well, I’ll be over later tonight” Hiroshi said and left. Andrew went to get dressed for his adventure.

Andrew arrived at Masashi Manufacturing, He looked through the glass ceiling to one of the levels, he didn’t exactly have an appointment for 1:15 in the morning. He opened the window and jumped through and landed on his feet, he moved along the hallway as quiet as a mouse, there was nothing of interest thus far but Andrew could sense something. He didn’t trust this company or what it dose. He opened on of the doors and found that it was filled with file cabinets, Andrew then looked though the files, it seems as though they were manufacturing household appliances like showers, soap dishes even shavers. They seemed legit so why would they need something like the Diablotron, a device that he knew nothing about. He turned on the computer and sent and e-mail to Michelle and logged out. He then left the office and continued on his way and soon found a trail of what looked like black ooze, he got out his night vision binoculars and turned on the flashlight feature and saw that it was black ooze but red ooze (A/N: I can’t say blood in general fan fics, hell I can’t even kill anyone), he followed it and soon came to the room where the Diablotron was, he then saw what it was

“Oh my” Andrew said as he looked at it, it looked like a nuclear warhead only very much bigger, there on the floor covered in ooze was someone, she was moving and she was Danielle.

“Danielle? What are you doing here” Andrew asked as he got the ooze of her

“Fighting other ghosts, and you” she asked

“I’m investigating the strange noises coming from this building” Andrew said

“Well I’ve taken care of that, Danny gave me this crazy thermos” Danielle said and showed it to him

“Danielle in your honest opinion, what would a company like this keep something like the Diablotron” Andrew asked

“I really don’t know, I thought they make showers and stuff like that” she said and walked with him until security appeared

“Hands Up” he said

“Hold on” Danielle said and grabbed Andrew and she went intangible and flew them out and returned to normal

“Something tells me there’s more to this than meets the eye” Andrew said as she flew him home.


(A/N: See you tomorrow for the actual story)


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Ok, This first chapter you actaully learn alot about Rebecca and Andrew. Even though there is no Rebecca in this story you learn a bit, Now on with the First Chapter.

Chapter 1: Here’s Kimi

(A/N: The only reason she is here is because the story is in All Grown Up General Fan Fics, So hence why she’s here)

Kimi was old enough to go to Japan on her own, she when looking for Andrew. When she asked around people seem to know him very well and directed her to his house, but he wasn’t home. So she had to come back later, but each time she came Andrew wasn’t home. So she decided to try at night and sure enough he was home and he let her in.

“Come home? I’m not there’s something that I need to do before I can do so” Andrew said

“And what’s so important that you have to do alone” Kimi asked

“Look, It’s not that I didn’t want the Freedom Fighters or The Chaos Team here. It’s just that I have to do this alone, something like soul searching” Andrew said

“I don’t think being on your own for that is such a good idea” Kimi said

“I know what I’m doing Kimi, Anyway how did you get here?” Andrew said

“I came here on my own, I thought I’d stay for a while. Life back at Sacramento is going to take a while to get back to normal, I mean they do have to clean the town will all the dead bugs” Kimi said

“I take it you need a place to stay, you can use the guest room. We’ll talk some more in the morning” Andrew said and Kimi went off to the guest room, Andrew on the other hand stayed awake. He knew something was up with Masashi Manufacturing, Andrew then decided to call his ninja acquaintance and Freedom Fighter, Eric Matsuda. No sooner when he called him, he was at his front door

“How did you get here so fast?” Andrew asked

“It easy when you have Ninja Power” he said, ironically he sounded just like Andrew only his voice wasn’t eerier but mysterious, like a Ninja’s.

“You took the bus, after all you live near the Hajin Mon Village” Andrew said

“That works too” Eric said and came in, it was being to rain, which seems to happen whenever the two meet (strange).

“So you want me to investigate Masashi Manufacturing” Eric asked

“Yeah, they asked me to investigate some mysterious disappearances but I think it’s a cover up” Andrew said

“I will go now and investigate, I will return with the answers you seek” Eric said and left to go and investigate as he open the door an iris kunai flew in and landed on the wall

“Ayane” the two said and went to read the scroll

“The answers you see are hidden in an ally in the city of Shibuya. Your journey will begin, remember the path of the ninja is a long one” the message read

“So there must be another kunai here in Shibuya. We better go find it” Andrew said and the two left but came back

“You could at least reminded me to bring an unbralla” Andrew said and got two and left.

When they arrived in the city Andrew looked around, their first stop was Cerulean Tower, it’s the tallest building in the Shibuya Station area, sure enough they saw the kunai imbedded in the wall and they read it.

“She wants us to take the train to the capital city. Masashi Manufacturing main office is there as is a lot of other business. Guess we have to take the trains” Eric said

“Oh I ain’t going on no trains, remember the gas attacks. I was involved in those freaking attacks, remember I was the clown on the stretcher” Andrew said

“And what was I?” Eric asked

“Annoying” Andrew retorted

“Yeah, And I was almost dead if I didn’t crawl on top of you” he said and some people looked at them

“We’re not like that” Andrew said and the two kept quiet and went to the station and took the train. The Bullet Trains were fast and they soon arrived at the Capital City, Shinjuku.

“I used to live here with Hiro” Andrew said

“I remember, I used to come over and play with you” Eric said and once again people looked at them

“Boy, Toyko really has changed. They never judged us before” Andrew said and Eric sighed, then another Kunai flew past them and landed at their feet, Andrew picked it up and read it.

“She wants us to go to the Kabukicho, from there the path becomes clear. Speaking in metaphors again is she” Andrew said

“Hey, Isn’t Kabukicho the city where Rebecca grew up before moving to Las Vegas?” Eric asked

“Yeah her dad was part of the mafia and her mom was a…OH MY GOSH!!!!” Andrew exclaimed finally connecting the dots after 17 years.

“I knew it a long time ago. Her dad was part of the mafia, after his wife gave birth to Rebecca he got mad and killed her after that he left the mob and went to hide in the U.S where he remarried and then was killed by the mob there. Then her mom remarried” Eric said

“Good thing I didn’t bring Rebecca here or this whole adventure would had been better off in Fan Fiction.net” Andrew said

“Yeah. Rated R for Rebecca” Eric said as they walked to Kabukicho

(A/N: And there you have it, the first of what is set to be one of the shortes stories I ever done here. See when you strip away all the excitement and edgey content i've done for sometime now (inculding off-line) it's quite hard for me, I did G rated stories before. But not in a long time so I hope you bare with me.

I'm actually going to spoil the fun by saying that this story has a sequel under The Chaos Era and it will be it's first special called "Return to Japan". So check for that.

Anyway now to learn more about her when we go to the area of Kabukicho where she grew up before moving to Las Vegas. She did return to her hometown when she was...you guess it 13.)
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Well there's not much about Rebecca's past in this one, but Andrew's life is in this one. I also added Kimi again, this is after all AGU Fan Fiction and she is a legit character. So here it is Chapter 2.

Chapter 2: Lost in Kabukicho

“What do you mean we’re lost” Andrew said

“I mean we’re lost, I moved out of Shinjuku about the same time as you” Eric said

“Ok. Let’s see, we’re down a dark ally. Both our lives are at stake and we are lost in Kabukicho, Japan’s number one red light district” Andrew said

“Can you even say red light district in G?” Eric said

“I’ll ask Luke later, but right now we need to get out of here alive for me to do that” Andrew said and they continued walked

“Path becomes clear. Ha, this place is so dark I can barely see anything” Eric said as they tried to figure out where to go, soon they managed to get to a well lit area and there was a kunai scroll. As they were about to reach out and grabbed it, they purposly spoke Japanese to them and most of their sentenses had a cuss word in it, Andrew and Eric replied before attacking them (A/N: No one can die in G rated stored, but these same thugs will be taken care off in PG-13 in it’s sequel). After knocking them out cold, Eric and Andrew got the scroll and ran like two scared 12-year-old girls about to get…well I can’t mention it in G rated stories. They made it safely out of the dark ally way, now they could read the scroll in peace.

“She says that we’re close, now we just need to take the bus to…oh you have got to be kidding? Shinjuku ni-chôme” Eric said indisbelief

“What goes on there?” Andrew asked

“I’ll whisper it in your ear and then your going to exclaim Oh my gosh” Eric said and whisped in his ear

“Oh my gosh!” Andrew exclaimed

(A/N: If you live in Japan then you know why, if not wait for the PG-13 sequel. Alterntival you could always go to Wikipedia and type “Shinjuku ni-chôme” or click this link)

So like it or not the two were off on a bus ride to Shinjuku ni-chôme, it was obvious that people would give them looks as they boarded the bus and left, especially in that area.

“I remember this area, we met here” Eric said

“Yeah” Andrew said

“No I mean right here, where we’re standing” Eric said

“And like I said, yeah. Now let’s find the scroll and get to Mashsi Manufrating before I freak” Andrew said and they went in seach of the scroll which really wasn’t that far at all. It was in the ally behind them. They got it and Eric read it

“Your close to Mashsi Manufracting, the building is located in Nishi-shinjuku. The business district” Eric said

“So to the bus again” Andrew asked

“Might as well” Eric said and they waited for the next bus and took it to Nishi-shinjuku. Once they arrived The government of Tokyo building was the first thing they saw along with a kunai scroll, Andrew read it

“Ayane says it’s not very far, just 5 miles due west” Andrew said and they walked the 5 miles and arrived at the building to find that it was closed and another Kunai scroll was there

“Ayane has cleared a path for us at the back” Eric said and they went there, they went through all the open doors and knocked out guards till they made it to the lobby

“Now where too?” Andrew asked and Eric pointed to a lift. It looked like any other lift only this one had iris petals on the floor of the lift, it formed a number on the floor, 16. The two knew it as Ayane’s handy work and they went in. The doors closed and they went to the 16th floor and from there they were on their own.

Meanwhile, At Andrew’s house Kimi was looking into the sky. She wanted to go and check on him but he had left, it was raining heavily now so all she could do now was sleep, which she did. Watching for a tree was a girl, she looked like a splitting image of Andrew and Angelica, She watched over Kimi. Kimi didn’t even notice her. Back at Masashi Manufacturing, Eric and Andrew were looking around for anything incriminating, they were looking threw the office when Andrew decided to use his e-mail and found that Michelle and replied

“Oh my” Andrew said and showed Eric what she said about the Diablotron

“We need to stop the prototype and we need to do it now” Eric said

“I saw it back at Shibuya, The branch there had one but it was scheduled to be moved here” Andrew said

“Then we need to go look for it, But where is it” Eric said and looked through the computer

“Someone’s coming” Andrew said

“Behold Ninja Power!” he said and the two went and hid. Eric then went invisible and Andrew he used his emerald and teleported to the air vent and watched from a safe distance. It was only the janitor so he wasn’t much of threat, the two later reappeared and went to look for it, and then they found it. On the top floor, so the two went up to the roof and found it there along with the plans

“We need to disarm it, Akira toss me the first thing you see and I see what I can do with it” Eric said and tossed him the first thing he saw

“Something less PG-13” he said and tossed him a hammer

“Let’s get to work” he said and went off to work on the Diablotron.

(A/N: Like I said it's a very short story, so maybe the next few chapters are going to be the last ones. There are only about 4 or 5 chapters. So see you later tonight with more.)

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This is just the second last chapter, Chapter 4 however isn't going to be very long.

Chapter 3: Escaping

Eric disarmed the weapon, now it all about escaping. The two began running down the hallway as quietly as possible, they evaded guards till they came to a dead end, they jumped off the barricade and smashed through the glass ceiling, they knocked out any guards that came their way before running off, as they moved down the hallway Andrew noticed something. It was a scepter; he had seen this one before. Rebecca and Mace own one and now Andrew did, Andrew knew what the scepters do so he took it and ran off with Eric to the lift. They got in and rode it too the lobby

“Once we’re down expect the unexpected” Eric said, the doors opened and they walked out and saw the strange girl that looked like Andrew and Angelica

“You!” Andrew said as the two looked at each other. The girl said nothing, she shot a grapple hook, Eric took her hand and they rode up to the roof, Andrew teleported to the roof. When he got there, the girl had already left.

“Who was she? Your clone” Eric asked

“I fear so, let’s get the heck out of here” Andrew said and the two ran to a ladder and climbed down and they took off. The two then had a long journey to Shibuya. When they arrived it was about 6 in the morning

“I must leave. A ninja can never be seen in the day” Eric said

“Thanks buddy. I really apprecaite your help, if you ever need me. You just holla” Andrew said and Eric left

Andrew then went back inside and tried to get a few hours rest, he woke up later. Kimi was still around.

“Kimi, I apreciate all your concern. But I think it’s best you get going, you shouldn’t be wasting time here, the Freedom Fighters need you” Andrew said and Kimi left for Sacramento. Andrew now had the scepter, he could return home. If he wanted too, He decided to pack his bags when the phone ran. It was Sally.

“Andrew. I don’t know what the heck you did but you not safe, I’m telling you this now. I don’t know what Helena told you to do there but you better get out of there” Sally said

“Got it, I’ll get the first flight home” Andrew said and hung up. Minutes later Hiro called, the two talked. Hiro told him to keep the sword his adventure was just beginning.

“Dad. I saw this girl” Andrew said

“Hmm Andrea, I though she died by the hands of J6. It is wonderful to know that she’s alive, she might have become the first Dural either that or The Ultimate Female Life Form” Hiro said

“You mean I’m not the only one?” Andrew asked

“That my son, is for you to solve on your own. Now I must go, be good and take care of Kimi” Hiro said and hung up. Andrew sighed, he just couldn’t get the image of the girl out of his head he went to his room and did a search

“Search, Charlotte Pickles” Andrew typed and her profile came out on screen, Andrew then looked though his birth records and there he saw on his

“Andrea Melissa Pickles. A.K.A Akira Wantanabe Pickles” it read

“I’m not alone…she’s my…twin” Andrew said, he was devestated but stunned. Did she know who he was, was she friend or foe. Andrew wounldn’t know the only thing he knew was he had to get out of there before she found him. Later that night Andrew went to the air port as he needed to finish some of Hiro’s accounts. At the air port he went up to the counter to get a flight to Sacramento.

“Sorry sir, our only flight to Sacramento, California, U.S.A is coming at 3AM tonight” the receptionist said

Andrew looked at his watch “10PM” it read

“That is the only other one way back” Andrew asked

“Yes sir unless you want a two way trip, that plane is going to leave in 2 hours” he said

“Give me the one way…how much is first class” Andrew asked

“800 yen” he said and Andrew paid for his ticket and left

Andrea came in line at the counter beside him, Andrew didn’t even notice her

“Can you get me a one way ticket to Sacramento, California. First Class please” she said politely.

Andrew had his ticket, but he had nothing to do for 6 hours, so he decided to go window shopping. He looked at all the things at the airport, he then had dinner and waited. The was about the only other time he could relax at the airport, most of the time he’s running all over the place it was nice to sit back and relax and mingal with the “humans” and he would call them. Soon it was time to catch a plane back home so Andrew boarded the plane, Andrea followed far behind not losing sight of him.

“Hey, you look just like that assassin Akira Wantanabe” a man tol her

“Tell me something I don’t know” she replied and sat down not taking her eyes of Andrew.



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Chapter 4: Welcome Home

Andrew after a long flight, Andrew had arrived home to Sacramento. It brought back some memories coming to Sacramento; only this time Andrew knew where to go unlike his last time here. He got off the plan and Andrea followed him, after getting through security. Andrew then left the airport, Andrea followed him. He was still oblivious to the fact Andrea was tailing him. Andrew made it back to his place, no one was home but he had the keys and he went back home to his room and put his things there

“It’s nice to come back home, Japan was fun but Sacramento. This is my home, this is the Chaos Home” Andrew said and went to take a shower, unbeknown to him. Andrea had followed him in, she too had a suitcase with things and she came in to one of the empty rooms and put her things there and went to Andrew’s second bathroom and took a shower. Andrew came out later and so did Andrea, both didn’t even acknowledge each other, till they saw each other in the hallway. Andrew glared at her, Andrea however was scared after all the two were split up at birth and this was the first time they were meeting each other

“Akira Wantanabe Pickles, but you can call me Andrew” Andrew said and extended his hand

“Nice to meet you, I’m Akira Wantanabe, but most people call me Andrea” she said

“So are you really my twin sister?” Andrew asked

“Well, This man called Hiro told me about you when I was a little girl growing up in the village. Now that I’m old enough I though I should go an find you” she said

“Hiro’s my father. Maybe a blood test will clean that up, I’ll get Michelle to test you…Once I give them a surprise of a life time. Now follow me valley girl” Andrew said and she followed him

“I’m not a valley girl” She said as they left.

(The End)

(A/N: See, Short Sweet and to the point. Now all we need to do is wait for RAW to be over, And Andrew's fate will be determined.

You might be wonder what's with another person added to the Pickles Family. I will explain every thing, it's quite long winded so bear with me here.

Orginally, off line. Andrew's name was Akira Wantanabe Finster. I wanted him to have a full blood tie to Kimi to make things intresting, however I had just learnt what a half sibling was so I changed his name from Finster to Pickles since Angelica was the only person that could fit Andrew's personality.

Hiroko and Sakoda were Finsters too as they were adopted and Sakura was adpoted by Drew and Charlotte. Andrea didn't even appear in off line fan fiction till after I played "Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic" and that was in 2005. So Andrea never got much exposeure. Andrew was orgnially called Andrea Joanne Pickles, I nixed the Idea when WWE Superstar Bradshaw changed his persona to JBL and I evoled Andrew a week after the change to his name Andrew Jonathan Pickles.

Well History lesson over, if you lucky I'll post my off-line work as a sample to what I do. I can do it at anytime, if you like the sample I might post the full version...provided I even finished it.)
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