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| Nicktoons Wars Episode III: Revenge of Visaru; The circle is complete until Episode IV | |
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| JusSonic | Jun 3 2006, 06:24 AM Post #1 |
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Author's note This is it. The chapter I bet you people has been eager to see. The one that sorta ends the Star Wars movie saga last year but will continue the Nicktoons Wars saga right now. *************** A Long Time Ago In A Nicktoonly Galaxy Far, Far, Away... NICKTOONS WARS EPISODE III: REVENGE OF VISARU War is happening everywhere! The Nick Republic is struggling because of attacks by the Separatists' leader, Count Christopher. There seems to be heroes on both sides and evil spreading every few days. In a shocking move, an evil robot leader named General Smytus has gotten into the capital of the Nick Republic and kidnapped Chancellor Matthewstine, leader of the Nicktoonly Senate. As the robot armys trie to escape the capital with their precious 'cargo', two familiar Jedi heroes goes on a mission to rescue Matthewstine... |
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| JusSonic | Jun 4 2006, 07:19 AM Post #2 |
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Above the planet of Coruscant, the Nick Republic ships blasted on the Separatists in hopes to keep them from escaping with the Chancellor Matthewstine (Stan Matthews/Shadow Man). The Separatist ships fired back in hopes to escape. During the fighting, two familiar Jedi starfighters arrived and goes towards a Separatist ship. They outmanuever avoiding robot control ships and lasers. Tommy Skywalker, the one controlling one of the ships, is glad to be home. He and his master, Obi-Tim Kenobi (Timmy Turner) had been in the Outer Rims fighting the Separatists, getting farther away from home almost every day. But when news Matthewstine begin kidnapped spread, Tommy wasted no time in getting back. Not because the Chancellor was a good friend of his, because of something else. The war has seem to injured Tommy grimly. He now a grim version of himself, with a scar going across one of his eyes that he got during a battle. At any moment, Tommy could...but the young Jedi chose not to think of that as he continues fighting. His robot R2-SY (Stimpy Cat) helps Tommy out while Obi-Tim's robot is helping him in his ship. Tommy looks and slightly chuckled as he sees his master's ship rocked violently. He targets an enemy ship and destroys it. "No robot can outfly you, master. And there's no one way to get to Matthewstine." Tommy remarked. "Never mind that and looked out for the robots!" pointed out Obi-Tim. The two ships fly in unison as four enemy ships attacked them. Thanks to some great moves by the Jedi, two enemy ships crashed into each other. Obi-Tim tried to keep control of his ship as he thinks up a plan. "We got to split up!" Obi-Tim instructed. 'Always had to do things his way.' thought Tommy with a groan. "Break left, fly through the guns on that tower." Obi-Tim flies to the left of a tower on a Nick Republic ship with the enemy ships on his tail. "Do you have to make me the bait?" Obi-Tim asked in annoyance. "Hey, I'm coming behind you, aren't I?" joked Tommy. Obi-Tim did some manuevers but the enemies keep on him like glue to a stick trying to hit him with lasers. "Tommy, they're all over me!" Obi-Tim yelled. "Hold on! R2, lock on him..." Tommy instructed his robot friend "Duh....whistle beep...dah." replied R2-SY. Tommy then flies in and destroys one of the robots chasing Obi-Tim. "Cool!" Tommy cheered happily. Tommy then destroys the final robot, much to R2-SY's annoyance. "Duh bah...whistle...bah bah!" snapped R2-SY. "Oh grow up." Tommy laughed. "I'm going for the deck." Obi-Tim called out. "Good move. I need room to be around." Obi-Tim sighs. Ever since Obi-Tim has known and trained him, Tommy loves to be independent. And that ain't all. Tommy thinks he's better than anyone else and sees things differently. Same thing Obi-Tim went through when he was training. He just hopes Tommy doesn't do anything foolish that could get him killed. Or worse. Obi-Tim heads towards the surface of an Irken Trade Federation battleship, ships that belong the Irken Trade Federation, the same ones who attacked Naboo years ago that results in Obi-Tim finding Tommy and Lou-Gon's (Grandpa Lou), Obi-Tim's master, death, and has to goes through enemy fire. Another robot ship is after him and that ship is followed by Tommy. "Go right, hear that? Go right! Don't let him get a handle on you! Lock on, R2!" instructed Tommy. "Bah...." obeyed R2-SY as the crossfires locked on the enemy ship. "I don't like the hang of this! Just blast him!" Obi-Tim yelled as he gets nervous as the ship is getting awfully close of getting him. As Obi-Tim flies through a narrow gap between two towers of a battleship, the enemy ship got lucky and hits one of his wings. "Darn it!" yelled Obi-Tim. The robot asked if it could do some repairs. "Forget it. I have to shut it down." "Almost on him..." Tommy said as he aims carefully. Tommy drops in from behind the robot and blasted it. "Happy, happy! Joy, joy!" said R2-SY stupidly. "We got him!" cheered Tommy excited. "Next time we do something stupid like this, you be the bait!" snapped Obi-Tim. 'Though I got to admit, he's a good shot.' Obi-Tim speaks again. "Let's get to that ship the Chancellor's on and get with it. His robot replies in agreement. "Get a scan on General Smytus's (Smytus) ship, R2." Tommy instructed. The name of the robot general makes Tommy furious. The fiend has slaughtered Jedi and ally alike. The robot is somehow an expert in the use of the lightsabers and always steal lightsabers from any Jedi he ambushed and/or killed. He's the same villain who kidnapped Chancellor Matthewstine and is trying to make off with him. During Tommy's thinking, R2-SY did a scan and gave a readout to Tommy. "Uh oh. Smytus's ship got vulture droids surrounding it." said Tommy in worry. Obi-Tim looks and groans. "Yeah I see it. Interesting. Not!" General Smytus's battleship is up ahead. Vulture droids, batlike ships controlled by some sort of vulture like robots, are around it, under orders to destroy the enemy. They get into their final modes, lift up, and goes after the Jedi. "Let's do this, master." Tommy said, inching for a shot of them. "No, Tommy. More than our lives is at stake here. We got to get some help. Weird Ball, are you around?" Obi-Tim asked in an intercom. "Copy, Red Leader." said a voice on the other end. Weird Ball is a X-Clone made by the people of Kamino. The X-Clones are clone of the late bounty hunter Xango Jett, made for as an army for the Nick Republic. They did so well at the battle of Geonosis and were used during the times of the X-Clone Wars, previously the X-Clone War. Obi-Tim always feel uncomfortable because of the obvious but got over it eventually. "Mark my position. Get your squad behind me." Obi-Tim instructed Weird Ball. Weird Ball, an X-Clone in his white helmet and black uniform, responds in his ship in space. "Yes sir. We're getting ready to be in attack position." obeyed the X-Clone. The X-Clones were made since birth to obey orders from their superiors, especially Chancellor Matthewstine. Near Smytus's ship, the shield went off, allowing 6 more robot tri-fighters outs to engage the enemy, joining the vulture droids. "Now we're having fun." said Tommy sarcastically. "We got 10 vulture droids ahead of us." "Oh boy...whistle...oh boy." said R2-SY in concern. "Add 5 more robot tri-fighters to the list." Obi-Tim added. "I'm doing this my way right now. See ya." Tommy said. 'Again?' Obi-Tim then responded. "Be careful, Tommy." "Who me?" 4 X-Clone Fighters goes into formation behind the Jedi. "I'm on your right, Red Leader." called out Weird Ball. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 5 2006, 04:47 PM Post #3 |
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"Watch out!" Tommy yelled out in warning. "Jooooooyyyyyyy!!!!" yelled out R2-SY as 5 robot tri-fighters flew by at high speed nearby. "5 more coming!" Obi-Tim exclaimed. 4 more vulture droid fighters arrived. Heck broke loose in a bread basket. Obi-Tim and Tommy continued flying in unison, keeping an eye on each other's back. R2-SY meows. "Here we go!" Tommy called. The Jedi ships separate and ended up being behind the robot destroying them. "Okay, now for..." Obi-Tim began to say. "Hold it. 4 more coming." Tommy called out. "Oh goody." Obi-Tim said sarcastically, then saying normally, "Okay, just stay with me and...help me, will ya?" "Coming." joked Tommy amused as to how his master can get into big predicaments. "Hurry! These are guys are on me like fleas on R2-SY." Obi-Tim exclaimed. Quickly and amazingly, Tommy swings in behind the robot tri-fighters and blow them up until one is left. "Duh happy....whistle beep beep...not happy!" yelled out R2-SY as they blased through the remain. Tommy glances behind him. "4 more? Man, this is not my day." remarked Tommy with a groan. "Tommy, 4 more are..." Tommy interrupts Obi-Tim. "No duh!" "4 more..." "I said no duh!" Obi-Tim sighs and said, "Break right and go high." "Forget that. I'm for low and left." Tommy said. Obi-Tim shakes his head. "He still hasn't learn much." mumbled Obi-Tim. Sure there has been some disagreements but he is a strong fighter and a fast learner...too fast that is. Tommy goes low and skim across a Irken Trade Federation battleship while R2-SY tries to get a word or whatever across. "Joy...whistle...happy!" exclaimed R2-SY. "Hold up, R2. Obi-Tim I am going to go through the needle." Tommy explains. "Hey, too dangerous, you know. Remember, one of the Jedi rules? Stay alive." Obi-Tim protested sternly. "Sorry, got to. How about you take care of a few for me, won't ya old pal?" joked Tommy, knowing Obi-Tim dislikes jokes about his age. "I'm not old!" snapped Obi-Tim but he decides to after the vulture robot chasing Tommy anyway. "Keep me steady," Obi-Tim instructed his ship robot. "Hold on, not yet...go left!" Obi-Tim fires, wiping out 4 vulture robots. Tommy goes to a trench which ends in a conning tower with a small slit between two main struts. "Tommy, what are you doing? You won't get through there! That's too tight!" Obi-Tim called out. "Duh...yeah." agrees R2-SY nervously. "Hey we got through this before, R2. There shouldn't be any worry, right?" said Tommy with a smirk. "If you're going to do it, use the Force and think yourself through so the ship could followed." Obi-Tim instructed, having to go through one of Tommy's ideas once more. R2-SY yells in a shout. His message readout saying "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" Tommy laughs. "Scream again." Tommy managed to get through the gap. His pursuer didn't as the vulture robot fighter crashed. "Told ya." Tommy told both Obi-Tim and R2-SY. 'He made it.' thought Obi-Tim amazed. His apprentice, no scratch that fellow Jedi since Tommy has to become one because the war needed more Jedi Knigths, has a skill when it comes to flying. He's honored to fly aside him. For now though, Obi-Tim isn't flying aside as he fires on enemy ships, destroying them. A X-Clone Fighter got hit and was destroyed, killing its pilot inside. Obi-Tim soon pulled aside Tommy, leaving the X-Clones to deal with the robots. "There's too much for us to handle!" said Weird Ball concerned. "Right. Helping out and get those guys off my back." said a X-Clone pilot. "We got to help them." Tommy said. "No! They're doing what they're doing so we can do our job! Let's get our butts to the command ship!" Obi-Tim yelled out. Tommy knew Obi-Tim is right. Besides, Matthewstine is on that ship and he got to be rescued. As another X-Clone Fighter got destroyed, one vulture robot fighter send out missiles at the Jedi. "Missiles coming!" Tommy forewarned. The two separate again with missiles chasing each one. Tommy managed to do a move to caused two missiles to crashed into each other and exploded. Two more chased Obi-Tim. The Jedi Master managed to pull a serious move to caused one of the missiles to overshoot. "That was close!" Obi-Tim said in relief. Too close. Obi-Tim forgot the other missile which explodes next to him, causing his ship to rock. Obi-Tim's robot yells as debris fall around them. "They're coming around." Tommy called out. "Get to work. Nothing too fancy." Obi-Tim instruced his robot as it went to work. "R2, surge all power units. Get the reverse thrusters ready." Tommy instructed R2-SY. Tommy managed to spin his fighter causing the missiles to collide and exploded. "Got them!" Tommy exclaimed. Two more missiles go after Obi-Tim. "Man, I wish robots are the main drivers!" Obi-Tim complained. The Jedi Master hate flying. Obi-Tim shudders and his ship begins to plummet towards a surface of an Irken Trade Federation ship. The trailing missiles fly into what is debris and exploded. 5 silver balls appeared and ended up on the ship. They opened up and small cockroach robots appeared, crawling like...cockroaches. "Oh great! Tommy!" Obi-Tim yelled out to Tommy as he sees the cockroaches. "I see them. Cock Roaches." Tommy said, eyeing the Cock Roaches. They are bug like robots that can crawl on ships and messed things up. They can't be killed by magic or nuclear bombs. One Cock Roach begins to rip Obi-Tim's ship a new one and got into the wiring, causing sparks to fly. Another one goes after Obi-Tim's robot. "Watch out! You got..." Too late as the Cock Roach claws off the robot's head, causing it to fly out into space. "Oh man. They are turning my controls off!" Obi-Tim said with a groan. "Move right so I can get a perfect aim at them." Tommy suggested. "Uh, you do remember the mission, right? Save Matthewstine? I'm running out of ideas." "Not me." Tommy fly towards Obi-Tim's left side and angles his ship so he could fire at the Cock Roaches. He soon managed to wiped out two Cock Roaches, Obi-Tim's wing in the progress. "What are you..." Obi-Tim said yelping in shock. Is Tommy trying to shoot him down? "Steady." Tommy instructed. "Tommy, stop shooting! You're not helping!" "You're right, stupid idea. Go right and ease over. Steady!" Obi-Tim looks around and groans. His cockpit is hard to see through and he knows why. "My cockpit's all fogging up! They're all over me, Tommy!" Obi-Tim explained. "Go to the right." Tommy repeated. "I can't! Stop it or you'd get us both killed! Just go, Tommy. You can't do any much here!" "I am not leaving you, master. We're friends to the end." Obi-Tim is touched. Tommy, despite the arguments, is always a true friend to Tommy. Though he does have his doubts... Tommy got his ship near Obi-Tim's and tried to knock the Cock Roaches, 5 left, off. He got one left but damaged Obi-Tim's ship doing so. Another one tore a piece off of Obi-Tim's ship causing flames and smoke to come out, blocking more of Obi-Tim's view. Tommy has finally managed to knock 3 off. The fourth one has enough and jumped onto Tommy's ship. He advances on R2-SY. The little cat droid got a drill out and tangles with the Cock Roach. "My controls are gone, I can't see...what a good day." Obi-Tim said sarcastically. "Get him, R2! Watch it!" Tommy said cheering for his little friend. "Go for the eye! He got a weakness on the eye!" Obi-Tim added. R2-SY strike the drill right in the Cock Roach's eye, knocking it clear off the ship. "Good work, R2!" Tommy cheered. "Yeah." Obi-Tim agreed. "Come on, Obi-Tim. There's the command ship right ahead. Let's go for it!" "Uh....the shields?" Tommy realized this and said sheepishly, "Oops! Oh yeah." Tommy goes ahead of Obi-Tim's wrecked and out of control ship and blasts the shield generator causing it to exploded. "I got a bad feeling about this." Obi-Tim said, mumbling a said too often quote. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 6 2006, 04:28 PM Post #4 |
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Soon the door for the shield drops down as Obi-Tim crashed onto the the bar. As everything gets sucked into space, blast doors begins to close. Tommy managed to fly in just before they could lock him down. Obi-Tim turned his lightsaber on and got out just as his fighter exploded. The Battle SIRs (SIR Units) charged at the hero with lasers flying. Tommy got out of ship and begins destroying the robots with his own lightsaber as he goes over to where Obi-Tim is at. R2-SY jumps out of the fighter with a joy and lands on the floor. He follows Tommy. "R2, if you could find the Chancellor." Obi-Tim called out over the noise. "Get into the computers." Tommy added. R2-SY goes over to a wall socket just as the Jedi finished destroying the bots. They followed the cat droid and destroyed more robots as R2-SY searches. Soon a hologram of the battleship appears. "Okay, here he is." Obi-Tim said pointing to a spot. "The signal is coming from that tower." Tommy looked up and frowns. "He's here." Tommy said upset. "Who's here?" Obi-Tim asked looking up. "Count Christopher (The Matrianica)." Obi-Tim can see a bit of rage in Tommy's eyes. Count Christopher used to be one of the Jedi but he left the order and started the Separatist movement. He helped them in making the robots and even helping Purple Gunray (Tallest Purple) in the attempt of killing Senator Kimi Finisteridala (Kimi Watanabe Finster). Plus, it was at the battle of Geonosis where many Jedi were killed. Tommy never forgave Christopher for that and probably never would. "Well, we better be careful. This could be a trap." Obi-Tim said in precaution. "So what are you suggesting?" Tommy asked Obi-Tim with a smirk. Obi-Tim smirked back. "We make it go off." As the Jedi turned to leave, R2-SY begins to follow. The Jedi stopped him however. "Hold it, R2. Get back to the ship. We may need you there." Tommy told R2-SY. "Hold this," Obi-Tim said as he gives a comlink to R2-SY who accepts it with a duh. "In case we need you, we'd let you know." At the bride of the Irken Trade Federation ships, Irkens were at work trying to make an escape. A green beetle like Cluster like robot with mean eyes came in followed by two Cluster Bodyguards. His name is General Smytus. "Sir, we got reports that the Jedi have arrived." reported an Irken captain. Smytus smirked evilly. "Just as Count Christopher say they would". The Jedi continued fighting off Battle SIRs and Mega SIR Destroyers, advanced versions of the Battle SIRs as they make their way to the elevator. As Obi-Tim pushed the button like an impatient waiter, Tommy hold the robots off. "You know, at times like this I wonder why these guys even existed." Tommy said with a scowl. Eventually the doors opened up and the Jedi jumped in. The door slides shut. The Jedi relaxed. "Put your weapons!" boomed a voice. The Jedi turned to see that the elevator is filled to the brink with Battle SIRs. "Weapons down now!" ordered the Battle SIR leader. The Jedi looked at each other, shrugged, then wrecked the robots like there's no tomorrow. As R2-SY hangs around the ship, he sees two Super Battle Robosnails (Robosnail) entering the room. He quickly hides behind the Jedi starfighter. As the elevator with the Jedi begins to move up (and plays very annoying elevator music), it unfortunately or fortunately stops all of the sudden. "Did you press the stop button?" asked Obi-Tim. "Not me. I was nowhere near it." Tommy reply. "Well, I didn't either." "We better get out of here then. And I know of a way how." Tommy turns his lightsaber on. "Whoa, whoa, Tommy! We just then to go on, not get out! I'd contact R2." Obi-Tim turned his comlink on and speaks into it. "Hey R2, you there? Activate elevator 31174!" Meanwhile Tommy is still cutting a hole in the ceiling. As the two Super Battle Robosnails checked out the starfighters the Jedi left behind, Obi-Tim's voice distracted them. "Hey, what's that?" asked a Super Battle Robosnail looking around. R2-SY hide to get out of sight. "Nothing. Get back to work." say the other Super Battle Robosnail. In the elevator, Obi-Tim is concerned as he has yet got a response from their little friend. "R2?" Obi-Tim repeated. A thunk is heard. Obi-Tim turned just in time to see Tommy jumping up. The Jedi Master saw that Tommy has cut a hole in the elevator ceiling and is now leaping out of it. "Always on the move." Obi-Tim said rolling his eyes. "So impatient". Obi-Tim once again tries to make contact with R2-SY. The little cat droid gave a quiet reply. Back in the hangar, R2-SY does his best to avoid being heard as the Super Battle Robosnails stop looking at the ship to see where the voice is coming from. R2-SY plugs into a computer interface as he gets his instruction. "Okay, are you hearing me?" asked Obi-Tim's voice over the comlink. "Good. Here's what you need to do..." Outside the elevator, Tommy jumps up to a elevator entry door as the elevator itself dropped suddenly. As the elevator disappears, Tommy tries to hang on as sparks flew around him. Back in the elevator, Obi-Tim is losing his lunch (and everything else) as the elevator falls down. "No, no! Not down, up!" Obi-Tim yelled in the comlink frantically. As Tommy continues to hang on the entry door, it opens up. Tommy looks up to see 2 Battle SIRs aiming their weapons at them. "Don't move!" ordered a Battle SIR. "Roger, roger!" agreed the other one. "How can I? I am hanging for my life here!" protested Tommy. "Exactly." replied the first Battle SIR. "Oh man. Where is Obi-Tim?" As R2-SY continues getting Obi-Tim's instructions, the Super Battle Robosnails overheard. "There it is." said the robot as it and its ally goes over to where R2-SY is at. "R2-SY, are you hearing me? I want up, not down!" yelled out Obi-Tim's voice. Obi-Tim is now flying as the elevator continues falling down. "Darn it! Stop this elevator!" Obi-Tim yelled frantically. Suddenly the elevator stops and the Jedi fell to the ground with a thud. "Thank you." mumbled Obi-Tim. "Hey you!" R2-SY sees that the Super Battle Robosnails has found him and are advancing. He quickly plug into the interface again and made the elevator go up. As the elevator goes up again, Obi-Tim does so too. "Finally." mumbled Obi-Tim. R2-SY finds himself grabbed by a Super Battle Robosnail who poke fun at him as the little cat droid swipes at it and its ally. "Stupid kitty." mocked the first Super Battle Robosnail. Tommy looks down as the elevator goes flying up very fast. As he looks at the Battle SIRs still pointing their weapons at him, Tommy quickly moved up into the shaft. Before the robots could attack, the elevtator slices them in two. Tommy lands back inside the elevator where Obi-Tim is at. "Enjoy yourself?" remarked Obi-Tim. R2-SY starts farting (yes, farting) all around on the Super Battle Robosnail causing them to cough. "What the heck just happened?" asked Tommy to Obi-Tim in the elevator. "Well, R2-SY just had..." Tommy interrupts Obi-Tim with a glare. "No hairball jokes! R2 is doing the best he can!" "Was I going to make a hairball joke?" asked Obi-Tim innocently. "I know you were. Don't try me. He's trying!" "I wasn't going to make a joke!" R2-SY then turns his fart rockets on and caused the fart to exploded, setting the robots (but himself) on fire, escaping the grip doing so. The two two robots fell, totally on fire. R2-SY then rolls away singing 'happy, happy, joy, joy'. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 7 2006, 06:12 PM Post #5 |
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The elevator the Jedi are in stops at a floor in the battleship. As the Jedi comes out, they see that they're in Smytus's room (they can tell by the weapons lying around). They soon spotted Supreme Chancellor Matthewstine, getting older but younger by the day, strapped in a chair at the end of the room. As the Jedi got closer, they see a feared look on Matthewstine's face. Obi-Tim bows. "Chancellor, it's a honor to see you again." "Did you hurt you, sir?" Tommy said worried. Matthewstine is a good friend of his and he'd take down anyone who harmed his friends. "Count Christopher." said the Chancellor as he points to behind the Jedi. Obi-Tim and Tommy turned and sees a familiar face on a balcony above an elevator that just closes: Count Christopher, hairy and older than when they fought him last. When Tommy and Obi-Tim fought him back on Geonosis, he almost killed them. As the count sneered at the Jedi, 2 Super Battle Robosnails are nearby, getting ready to attack if necessary. "Tommy, we shall take him together this time." Obi-Tim whispered to Tommy. The time on Geonosis, Tommy was impatient to face the former Jedi. "Funny, I was going to say the same thing." joked Tommy as Count Christopher jumps down to their level "You should leave and get help! He's a Sith and no one is a match for them!" warned Matthewstine. Obi-Tim looked at the chancellor and chuckled. "Sir, you insult me. Sith is what we do best." Obi-Tim joked. The Jedi takes their robes off and turned their lightsabers on, getting ready for battle. The count just glares. "I think you put your swords down, Master Jedi. We don't want to make a mess in front of your Chancellor now, do we?" said the count, a smirk on his face. "This time, you won't escaped!" yelled Obi-Tim as he and Tommy charged towards Christopher. "You'd never learn." sighed the count as he got his lightsaber out and begins a big battle with his enemies. "I must say, I have looked forward to this." "So do I. My powers doubled since we last fought." Tommy told the former Jedi sternly. Count Christopher just smiled. "Good, that makes the fall doubled as your pride." The count jumped at him, making the two jumped back. "Kenobi, you should do better than that. Your moves are clumsy and predictable." The count mocked Obi-Tim. As the battle rages on, both the experienced Jedi (Obi-Tim and Christopher) got very tired. The count soon learned the hard way that Tommy become stronger when he's furious. He charges towards Count Christopher with a fury of lightsaber strikes. Count Christopher uses the Force to knocked Obi-Tim back as he blocks Tommy's swings. The two battled up the stairs and towards the upper level. Tommy jumped over Count Christopher, surpising him. As soon as Obi-Tim recovered, he ran up the stairs in an attempt to help Tommy, destroying the two robots that fired at him. Suddenly Count Christopher uses the Force to grab Obi-Tim while kicking Tommy away at the same time. The Jedi Master gasps as Count Christopher chokes him via Force. With a smirk, the villain throws Obi-Tim to the floor. Then he causes a piece of the balcony to fall onto Obi-Tim, knocking the poor Jedi out cold. Tommy got up and is shocked. Then his shock turned to anger. "You...no one does that to my friend!" Tommy yelled furiously. The count didn't have time to block as Tommy spins and kicks him back the main floor. Tommy jumps down and attacks him, restarting the fight. "Surely you know what you're doing. I sense fear in you, my young friend. Even if you have anger and hate, you have no idea how to use them right." remarked Count Christopher. Tommy glares. "But I can use them!" The fight became more intense as Tommy kept up the attack. Count Christopher begins to sweat in worry. He can't lose to someone he defeated back on Geonosis, can he? Finally before Count Christopher could realized it, Tommy has cut both the Sith Lord's hands right off including the one that held Christopher's lightsaber. Tommy grabs the now discarded lightsaber. As the count fell, Tommy held both the lightsabers to the villain's neck. The villain's face widen in horror, as if begging for mercy. Nearby, Matthewstine smirked then speak up. "Well done, Tommy. You have defeated him. I knew you could. Now finish him! Destroy him!" ordered the Chancellor. Tommy looks surprised while Count Christopher looks at Matthewstine in both horror and shock. "I can't killed him! It's...it's not the Jedi way!" protested Tommy. "Do it!!" The count has only a few seconds left to looked at the Chancellor before Tommy did the unthinkable: cut his head right off. The head of the now dead Count Christopher rolls away as an explosion rattled the ship. Tommy looked shock at what he done. "I...I killed him." Tommy said in horror. "It may as well be for the best, Tommy. He is too dangerous to keep alive. Don't forget that it was because of him that this war has started." The Chancellor reminded Tommy. Tommy sighs, then drops Christopher's lightsaber as he goes to Matthewstine. "Still, he was unarmed. That wasn't right." Tommy pointed out. The he raises his hands over Matthewstine's chair and causes the restraints to come off. "I really shouldn't have done that." Matthewstine got up and rubs his hands. "It's only fair. He cut off your arm, you cut off his hands. An eye for an eye, you know that. Plus, this isn't the first time you wanted revenge. I should know, you told me about your mother and those Tusken Raiders." Tommy groans in sadness. Years ago, before the war even started, Tommy and Kimi went back to his home planet of Tatooine to find Tommy's mother, Didi, who Tommy has images of her dying. They met up with Tommy's new family who helped Didi free from slavery and it is where Tommy reunited with his old pal C-REN (Ren Hoek). But unfortunately when he and Kimi arrived, they discovered that Didi was captured by Tusken Raiders. Tommy rushed to rescued her, but by the time he arrived, it was too late. She died right in his arms. It was her death that made Tommy very furious. So furious that he couldn't think when he get the next move: killing off the Tusken Raiders, including the women and children! Tommy has since never spoken about this to anyone except Kimi and the Chancellor (and maybe C-REN and R2-SY). And ever since that day, Tommy forbids himself from returning to Tatooine for fear that the memory of Didi's death will returned. Tommy's thoughts were interrupted as Matthewstine spoke up. "We best be leaving before more of them arrived." said Matthewstine. As the ship begins to list to one side, Tommy runs over to Obi-Tim still trapped and unconscious under the broken balcony piece. He uses the force to lift the piece off of him, moved it to one side, then checks on his master. As the Chancellor goes to the elevator, he glances and frowns. "Tommy, this is no time for this. We must leave now." warned the Chancellor. "He's okay. Just unconscious." Tommy said in relief after checking Obi-Tim. "Leave him or it'd be too late." Tommy looked up at Matthewstine then puts Obi-Tim over his shoulder and carires him over to the elevator. "Then his fate will become ours." Tommy said sternly. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 8 2006, 08:48 PM Post #6 |
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Back on the bridge, Smytus, unaware of Count Christopher's death, gave orders all around. "Get ready to attack!" ordered Smytus. "All weapons ready!" said an Irken pilot. "Fire!" Out in space, the X-Clone Troopers fired at Smytus's battleship. They get hit back, some get destroyed in the battle. Inside Smytus's quarters, Tommy pushed the button to call for the elevator while holding Obi-Tim. As Matthewstine comes over, the Jedi calls for R2-SY. "R2! Get the elevator up here now!" Tommy yelled into his comlink. "Duh." responded R2-SY via comlink. "Where are you anyway?" An explosion is heard. "On second thought, just get the doors opened!" Suddenly the ship shifts to one side as the elevator doors opened up. The Chancellor fell while Tommy struggles to get to the doors and looked in. The elevator is nowhere in sight. "R2? Can you copy?" Tommy said into the comlink again. Back on the bridge, the windows are blown apart causing stuff to fly out into space. "Get the reverse stablizers workings!" yelled another Irken pilot. In the main hangar, as the ship rolls around, stuff are either flown out into space via the metal doors that opened up or thrown against the walls. R2-SY is having trouble keeping his balance as he is sliding towards danger or whatnot. The elevator shaft rotates, turning it into a hallway (at least, for a while). Tommy hold onto the doorframe while holding onto Obi-Tim. Matthewstine held on as well. R2-SY is about to be thrown into open space. He moves around boxes and destroyed fighters. One of the Battle SIRs gets destroyed by the electric shield that went up. As more Battle SIRs arrived, they fired at the cat droid who dodges the lasers while screaming like a girl. "Magnetize, magnetize!" yelled an Irken pilot in panic back on the bridge. R2-SY screams as a starfighter is about to collide into him. Fortunately for him, he fell into a pile of broken Battle SIRs parts and the fighters goes over him. And it doesn't help that the battleship is falling towards Coruscant during the whole situation. "That's it." said Tommy as he jumps into the now hallway elevator shaft while hanging onto Obi-Tim. "We can't wait any longer. We better be fast at this. Come on, Chancellor." Matthewstine got into the elevator shaft and run with his friend down it like a hallway. As the ship begins to rolled again, the two (three if you count the unconscious Obi-Tim) has to jumped from one side of the shaft to the other. Back on the bridge... "Get the emergency boost engines online!" ordered Smytus. An Irken pilot gulped and nodded. "Yes sir." Suddenly back in the elevator shaft, the whole thing is moving right side up again, forcing the runners to run very fast. Tommy manages to cut a control box, causing all of the doors to opened up. But then the elevator went into an angle, causing him and Matthewstine to slide down the shaft. Tommy managed to grab the wires from the control box and hanged on, Matthewstine hanging onto his leg. Now three people are left hanging in the dangerous elevator shaft. Obi-Tim begins to groan. "Any calls while I'm gone?" joked Obi-Tim with a groan. "Well, let's put it this way. You aren't missing anything." Tommy joked back. Obi-Tim looked and sees that they're back in the elevator shaft hanging above a bottomless shaft. As R2-SY beeps on the comlink, the ship begins to roll causing the shaft to move like crazy. When they hear a noise, they looked up and sees the elevator coming at them very fast. "Well, there's our ride." joked Obi-Tim. "Too fast we can't catch it right now!" "R2, turn the elevator off!" Tommy yelled into the comlink. "No time for that! We got to jump!" Tommy let go and three fell very fast. But the ship tilts again and they went sliding again. With the elevator catching up with them at a fast pace, it's a deadly race to the finish. The shaft went horizontal. The Jedi takes their grappling hooks out and throws them. They managed to catch something. As the elevator gets dangerously close to getting them, they managed to swing into a pair of open elevator shafts and swings into it just as the elevator goes by them painlessly. The group landed in the elevator lobby with a thud. "Well, that's enough excitement for one day." said Obi-Tim as he got back up. "Now let's leave this dump." "I have to agree." said the Chancellor as he dusts himself off. "R2-SY, are you there?" Tommy said into his comlink again. Back in the main hangar, when things calm down a bit, R2-SY's periscope came out. As he looks around, he jumps out of the pile and walked on. Back on the bridge, one of Smytus's Cluster Bodyguards gave a report to his master. "Sir, we found the Jedi and the prisoner." reported the Bodyguard. Smytus smirked evilly. "Good. Set the trap." As the Jedi and Matthewstine heads down the hallway to the main hangar, a bunch of shields appeared, trapping them inside it. "Ray shield!" Tommy said surprised. Obi-Tim groaned. "I don't believe it. The most obvious trap in the world. We are smarter than this!" "Not this time, I guess. This is the oldest trap ever. And...I got distracted." "Oh, excuse me for getting the blame all of the sudden." Obi-Tim said sarcastically. "Hey, you're the master, not me! I'm a pawn in this game of life!" snapped Tommy. "Well, unless you got any brilliant ideas..." "I got one." Matthewstine said interrupting. "Perhaps if we were to let them take us, they could bring us to General Smytus. Since Count Christopher is killed by Tommy Skywalker here, we could find a way to get us free." "You killed Christopher?" Obi-Tim asked in shock. "Well...he was too dangerous to stay alive, right?" Tommy pointed out nervously. "Yeah, but we could have used him as a tool to stopping this war before it continues on than it already has!" Tommy sighs and continues. "Look, calm down. All we got to do is be patient." "Oh, now we're patient!" Obi-Tim said rolling his eyes. "I mean, R2-SY should arrived soon and turned the ray shields off... Suddenly the droid in question is send flying out a nearby door and slams into the wall. He looks dizzy and groans. "What did I tell you?" Tommy told Obi-Tim in triumph. "I say...look out?" Tommy looked and sees what Obi-Tim means. A bunch of robots has entered the hallway and surrounds them. R2-SY recovers and spits at a Super Battle Robosnail. "Why you!" The robot punches the cat droid down. "Spit this, weak robot!" "Anyone got any other ideas?" Obi-Tim asked Tommy and Matthewstine. The two just gave him a glare. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 9 2006, 09:34 PM Post #7 |
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The Jedi, Chancellor, and R2-SY are brought onto the bridge where Smytus awaits them with a cruel grin. "So we meet at last. Or was it again? Bah who cares! Obi-Tim, the negotiator, your rescue was in vain." Smytus said laughing. A Battle SIR comes up to Smytus and gave him the Jedi's lightsabers. "Sez you." snapped Obi-Tim. "And Tommy Skywalker. Funny, I thought someone with a rep like yours is older than you are." "So you're General Smytus, leader of the robot armies. I thought someone with your rep would be shorter." Tommy joked. "Don't ticked off the robot, Tommy." Obi-Tim said in precaution. "It matters not!" Smytus chuckles as some departments came out. There are lightsabers hanging in them, each one taken from a Jedi Smytus has killed during the wars. "Your lightsabers will make perfect additions to my collection." "No way. We won't let you get away this time!" Obi-Tim exclaimed. "R2, now!" Tommy shouted. Suddenly R2-SY runs around like crazy, zapping, farting, etc. doing so. Although Obi-Tim's hands were tied, he managed to use the Force to get his lightsaber back from Smytus. He turns it on and got his hands free. He then set Tommy free as well. "Destroy them!" Smytus yelled furiously. Tommy uses the Force to get his lightsaber back and began fighting the robot who are firing at them. As chaos goes throughout the room, the Jedi finds themselver fighting the Cluster Bodyguard who blocks their attacks with their electro staffs. Matthewstine was seized and taken away by 2 Battle SIRs" "Get at your stations!" Smytus ordered all around as the battle begins to get more intense. Obi-Tim fights one of Smytus's Cluster Bodyguards. But no matter what, the electro staff keeps blocking his lightsaber swings. Obi-Tim got hit a bunch of times and got send across the room. He managed to recovered and quickly cuts off the Bodyguard's head. Despite this, the Cluster robot kept attacking. "What are ya? The Headless Moron?" joked Obi-Tim in disbelief. Meanwhile, Tommy finds himself dealing with the other Cluster Bodyguard. Quickly Tommy cuts it in half, destroying it. He looks up and sees the Battle SIRs taking the Chancellor away. Tommy goes attack and wrecked the robots, saving Matthewstine. "Thank you as always, Tommy." Matthewstine said with a smile. "Hey, what pals are for?" Tommy responded. Obi-Tim managed to get rid of the other Cluster Bodyguard, sending it remains to the floor. Suddenly alarms sounded all around and the bridge begins to panic. "Sir! We're losing orbit! All our aft control cells are dead!" said an Irken pilot in panic. "You're losing brain cells! Stay on course and keep the ship in orbit!" snapped Smytus. Smytus turns just in time to see the Jedi destroying the last of the robots and advancing on him. Smytus grabs one of the Cluster Bodyguard's electro-staff and faces them. Tommy, so eager to avenged the lives of the Jedi Smytus has killed, jumps to behind the robot general. "You can't win this fight, Master Kenobi." sneered Smytus. "Sir, we're breaking up!" screams the same Irken Pilot from before as he stood up. "Not now!" Obi-Tim uses this distraction to jumped at the general as Tommy jumps from behind. But Smytus turns and throws the electro staff at the window, breaking it. Soon the vacuum of space causes anything not nailed down to be launched into space, including the destroyed robots and screaming Irken pilots. Smytus is among those being sucked out. But this was his plan. He fires a cable and grabs the battleship. He swings and lands on the side of the ship. Inside the bridge, Obi-Tim, Tommy, and Matthewstine held on for dear life. Soon a blast shield covers where the window used to be, stopping the sucking. "Well, that sucks." remarked Tommy. The Jedi turned and sees more Battle SIRs charging in. Annoyed, Obi-Tim fights the robots destroying them. Tommy destroyed some as well. Matthewstine looked astounded at the carnage. Soon when the room is removed of all the enemies, another alarm sounds. "The hull's breaking up!" exclaimed Chancellor Matthewstine. Back outside, Smytus climbs all over the outside of the battleship. He uses a row of escape pods and entered the airlock. With an evil smirk, Smytus opens an escape pod he intends to use. "Let's see them escape this." Smytus remarked. Smytus flipped the launch switches for the other escape pods, sending them into space. Now knowing that the Jedi has no other escape, he pushes the switch for the one he'd used and jumps in just in time for the hatch to close and the pod to launched. The robot grins as he makes his escape. Back at the bridge, Tommy checked the computer for the ship. He frowns. "That jerk Smytus! He must have launched all the escape pods!" Tommy yelled in frustration. "I figure he would. Can you land this?" Obi-Tim asked his former apprentice. "What, you mean land what's left of this ship? What am I, 10?" Tommy sits in the pilot seat and sees the back half of the ship breaking away via image screen. "Well?" Obi-Tim asked. "I say, buckle yourselves in and pray for mercy!" Tommy exclaimed. Not needing a second invitation, Obi-Tim and Matthewstine got into two seats and buckled themselves in. As Tommy struggles with the ship, parts of it begins to break off. R2-SY goes to Matthewstine's controls and helps in flying (though he isn't a good one). "Steady. Attitude: 18 degrees." Tommy said. "Duh duh...whistle beep...happy." R2-SY said. "Pressure rising. We've got to slow this wreck down. Open all hatches, extend all flaps, and drag fins." "Temp steady. Hatches open, flaps extended, drag fins..." Obi-Tim said helping out. A noise is heard. "Okay, we lost something." Tommy responded. "What? Our minds?" joked Obi-Tim weakly. "Well, at least we still have half of the ship." "Now we're really picking up speed . . . I'm going to shift a few degrees and see if I can slow us down." "Be careful, will ya? Man, is it getting hot in here?" Obi-Tim asked sweating like he's on Tatooine again. "How's the speed?" Tommy asked. "Too much, but we're in the atmosphere." "R2!" Tommy said to his robot friend as he points to something. "Get that and gets us level." "Duh!" R2-SY obeyed. "Keep us steady!" Obi-Tim reminded. "Lost our heat shields! Hope we got our sunscreen on!" "Oh good. Here comes the fireships." "Attention. Keep steady. We're here to help." said a fire chief over the intercom. "There's the landing pad. Hang on!" Obi-Tim called out. "This is going to get hot!" Tommy agreed. As the ships continues to heat up, it makes it way to a landing platform in the city on Coruscant. On the platform, fire trucks, emergency vehicles, whatever waits for the ship. As the fireships spray on it, the ship crashed landed on the platform. Not a pretty sight but at least they survived. "The Jedi-5 has landed." said Obi-Tim with a sigh of relief. "If anyone make another joke like that, remind me to hurt someone." said Tommy with a groan. "That I will, Tommy, that I will." Matthewstine said, secretly smiling in agreement. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 10 2006, 05:11 PM Post #8 |
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After getting out of the wreck, the Jedi took the Chancellor to the landing platform for the Nicktoonly Senate. A bunch of senators including Alderran senator Chas Organa (Chas Finster), Tommy's buddy SpongeBob Binks (SpongeBob) the yellow sponge from Naboo, and Tommy's creation and prototype droid C-REN (Ren Hoek) are waiting for them. As Matthestine, R2-SY, and Tommy got out, Tommy notices that Obi-Tim has stay inside the ship with fellow Jedi Master, Rocko Windu (Rocko Wallaby). "Aren't you coming?" Tommy asked Obi-Tim. "Who me? Nah, politics freaked me out. I have to talk to the Council right now. Besides," Obi-Tim then smirked. "You're the poster boy, not me." "But this operation was your plan which you led. You got to take the bows." "But who saved me those the Cock Roaches? Who killed Count Christopher while I was down? You did, that's what. Plus, you even saved the Chancellor what I was still down while carrying me on your back and got the wreck to safely and..." "Okay, okay! No need to flatter me further!" Tommy laughed. "But still, you trained me. You should get the speeches about you. "Speeches? Please, those things are endless. Face it. You're the hero now and you should deserve your shot with the politics." Obi-Tim said pointing out. "All right, if you insist. Oh, you owe me and not because I saved your butt for the tenth time. "Ninth. What happened on Cato Nemoidia doesn't count. Later." Tommy smiles and walked off. As he did, Matthewstine and a group goes to Rocko Windu. "Crikey, you're all right, Chancellor." Rocko Windu exclaimed. "Yes though not for long. Although your Jedi saved me and killed Count Christopher, General Smytus is still on the loose." Matthewstine said grimly. "So? He always run and hide. He may be a tough robot but he's still a coward deep in, mate." "Ah, but you forget that although the count is dead, Smytus is the leader of the robot armies. And the Senate will keep the war going while he's still at large." Rocko knew that Matthewstine is right. But still, there's something about him he doesn't like. But he has to go with the flow for now. "All right, the Council will see Smytus as the highest priority." Rocko said nodding. As Tommy walks towards the Nicktoonly Senate building with the group led by Matthewstine, Chas talked with him. "We don't know how to thank you, Tommy. The Nick Republic owe you much." Chas Organa said with a smile. "Thanks. While what the Separatists did was bold, it was stupid and it cost them Christopher. Obi-Tim and I took advantage of that stupid move very well." Tommy said. During this conversion, R2-SY and C-REN has a conversion of their own. "You are so lucky you didn't get killed, you idiot!" C-REN snapped at R2-SY annoyed. "But Ren...beep..." R2-SY protested. "Aw, shut up. I need a tune up." As the group passes through a hallway, a figure is following in secret. "Maybe with Count Christopher gone, the war will come to an end and stops Matthewstine's crazy security measures." Chas added. "Crazy maybe but as long as Smytus is still alive, the war will continue. Even Matthewstine knew that." Tommy said with a sigh. Suddenly Tommy stops and senses something. The figure. He smirks. "Will you excuse me, please?" Tommy asked Chas taking a glance at the shadowly figure. "Of course. I will do what I can to help the Nicktoonly Senate." Chas said with a smile. As Chas continues on with the group, Tommy quickly goes behind the columns. He sees the figure and smiles. The figure came into the light and smiled. The figure is actually Senator Kimi Finisteridala, the senator of Naboo and, secretly, Tommy's wife. Kimi has changed since Tommy has seen her left but nothing the boy couldn't handled. Tommy hugs his wife and kissed her deeply. "Oh, I'm happy you came back." Kimi said with a smile, a hint of love in her face. "I missed you so much." Tommy said groaning. "I feared that you were dead. I hear things and I refused them to be true. I..." "Sssh. It's okay, Kimi. I'm here. Man, it feels like we were apart for a millennium thanks to this stupid war. I was out in the Outer Rim when I heard about the Chancellor's kidnapping. I didn't wish it to happened but if it haven't, we would never have returned to each other." Kimi sighs. Tommy leans forward to kissed her again but Kimi stops him. "Tommy, not here." protested Kimi. "Why not? I'm getting sick and tired of lying to everyone! I don't give a care if they knew we're married! C-REN and R2-SY knew so why can't we tell?" Tommy demands angrily. "Tommy, don't be like that! You helped the Nick Republic so much, helping them in stopping this war. I love you more than anything but I can't let your life as a Jedi end all because of me." "I may have gave my life to the Jedi Order, but that doesn't mean I can't give my life for you!" Kimi smiles flirtly. "Now, now. Don't be impatient. We will still have time for 'us time' later." Tommy laughs and hugs her. Kimi always knew how to play with his mind. But he senses something. He looks at her. "Kimi, what's wrong? Why are you trembling?" Tommy asked suspiciously. Kimi looks nervous. "I'm, I'm still happy to see you. That's all." Tommy looks furious. "That isn't it. There's more. Well?" "Nothing. Really." Tommy is very upset. She's obviously hiding something and he doesn't like it. "You're scared for some reason! Tell me!" Kimi begins to cry and respond. "It's just...you were gone for 5 months. And things got bad for me. I was so alone. It's just..." "You found someone else, did you?" Tommy yelled angrily. Kimi looks shocked. "Tommy! How could you think that? I would never betray you no matter what! But still you don't trust me. My feelings for you are still the same!" Tommy chuckles sheepishly. Man, he was stupid. "I just don't want to lose you, that's all." Tommy said. "I will never stop loving you. My only fear at this point is losing you." Kimi sighs sadly. "Well, if it isn't someone else, then what's going on?" "Something wonderful has happened." Kimi smiled. Tommy looked down and noticed that her stomach has gotten larger. Tommy's eyes grew wider. Could Kimi possibly be... "I'm pregnant." Kimi said with a sad smile, confirming what Tommy suspected. "You...you're pregnant?" Tommy couldn't believe it. He never expected it to happened but it did! He's going to be come a dad. He holds Kimi happily. "This is great! "No it isn't! I mean, what are we going to do now?" Kimi asked fearfully. Tommy knew what Kimi has meant. When word of this spreads around... "Aw, let's forget it and enjoy the moment. Right now, this moment is one of the happiest in my time." Despite the reassurance, Kimi is still worry. On a planet of Utapau, Battle SIRs waits for General Smytus who arrived via an Irken ship. As he got off, one Super Battle Robosnail approaches him. "We got the planet under control, sir." The robot informed him. "Excellent. And the Separatist Council?" asked Smytus with a smirk. "Follow me." "Later. I got...something to intend to." Smytus takes a nearby elevator to an upper level. He enters a conference room and presses a few buttons on the table. As Smytus bows down, a hologram of a dark figure with a cloak and hood that covers his face appears. It is the hologram of Darth Shadowilious (Stan Matthews/Shadow Man). "Lord Shadowilious." Smytus responded. "Smytus, you better move the Separatist leaders to Mustafar." The evil one advised. "Will do, my lord." "The war is coming to an end and victory will be show, I promised." "But what about Count Christopher?" The dark figures smirks. "Not to worry. While Count Christopher's death was devastating, it is an important loss. For soon, I will have myself a new apprentice. Someone more powerful than Darth Martrianica. Oh yes, soon. Very soon." Darth Shadowilious and General Smytus laughed at once. Author's note Things are heating up now. Tommy has found out that he's going to be a father. But will this endanger his position in the Jedi Order? And what is Darth Shadowilious up to now? And how was Count Christopher's death important? Secrets are revealed, someone dies, and the fate of Tommy Skywalker will be sealed. Found out in the next part coming soon. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 11 2006, 03:54 PM Post #9 |
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Tommy struggles in his sleep that night. In Tommy's dream, Kimi is on a hospital table screaming in pain while giving birth to her child. And the worst of it all is that she's going to die. "Help me, Tommy!" screamed Kimi. Tommy wakes up alarmed as the Kimi in his dream dies. Tommy starts to sweat for a bit then looked next to him. Kimi is asleep next to him, alive and well. Tommy has decided to stay with her tonight and managed to convinced the Jedi that he is on a routine patrol tonight. No one questioned it though Arnda (Arnold) and Obi-Tim has some doubts. Tommy sits up on the side of the bed and breaths in and out. 'It's just a dream.' thought Tommy in relief. But then he got a fright. He dreamt of his mother's death years ago, what if... Kimi woke up a while later with a yawn. She looks and is surprised to see that Tommy's gone. "Tommy?" Kimi asked as she got out of the bed. Kimi goes looking for her husband and soon finds him on the veranda overlooking the city. Tommy is deep in thought. Kimi goes next to him and takes his hand. He didn't noticed at first. "Tommy, what's wrong?" Kimi asked concerned. "Not much." Tommy said with a sigh. Tommy turns and sees a familiar wooden pendant around Kimi's neck. He smiles and points to the pendant. "I remember when I made that for you when I first met you as a boy many years ago. You were beautiful back then and still are now." Although Kimi woulda blushed at this comment, the look on Tommy's face made her keep to her concern. "Tommy, are we ever going to be honest with each other?" Kimi asked. "Well, I have a bad dream," Tommy admitted. "Bad?" "Remember the dream of when my mom was killed?" Kimi nodded as Tommy continued. "This time, it is of you." Kimi's eyes widen in horror. "What...what happened?" "It's just a dream." Kimi gave Tommy a look that said 'no lying', then Tommy sighs. "In the dream, you die while giving birth to our child." "And our baby?" Kimi asked hopefully. Tommy sighs. "I don't know. I didn't see much." Kimi pauses then said, "Well, it's like you said, only a dream. Doesn't mean it's going to happened, right?" Tommy looks at Kimi sternly and holds her. "I can't let the dream of your death happened just like my mom's! It will never happened!" The two hugged then part. "Speaking of the baby, when news of its birth spread, it will change our lives. The queen would probably won't let me remained a senator and you will be removed from the Jedi Order if the Council were to discovered this." Kimi said in concern. "You think I didn't know? I was frightened every few seconds." Tommy groaned. "Will Obi-Tim help us?" "I'm not sure. I haven't told him." Tommy looks at Kimi suspiciously. "Did you?" "No, but he's your mentor and best friend. He's going to know sooner or later." "I know. He's like a father but a father whose on the Council! Please, despite knowing how good the truth is, don't tell Obi-Tim anything!" Kimi looks frightened now. If she and Tommy keep this a secret, it may changed things to turned from bad to worst. But still... "I won't, Tommy." Kimi sighed. "We don't need his help. Our baby should be a blessing, not our problem." Tommy said. The next day, Tommy is still concerned about his nightmare. He's worried that if the one about his mom's death would happened, so would Kimi. He doesn't want to tell anyone because of the obvious. So he decided that there's only one person he could tell without giving away too much details: the foot-headed respected member of the Jedi Council Arnda. The two sat in the Jedi Master's room, deep in thought. "So you have these...visons lately?" Arnda said. 'Does he expect anything?' Tommy thought in concern. 'No, can't be. He would have shown or tell me if he does.' He spoke. "My visions are of pain, suffering, and the worst of all, death." "Tell me, is it of you or someone you know?" "Well, someone..." "Close to you?" Arnda guessed right. Tommy nods. Arnda sighs. "Beware your feelings, Skywalker, and of when you sense the future. The fear of loss is the path to the dark side." 'Fear of loss.' Tommy thought annoyed. When he first met the Council, they wouldn't accept him because he has fear in him, the fear of losing his mother. Not to mention much anger during his years as a slave. He was lucky when they 'saw the light' and let Obi-tim trained him. Still, Tommy has experienced loss too many times already and he doesn't want to experience it again. "I can't let my visions come true, Master Arnda." "Death is how life works, Tommy. You should be happy for those who transform into the Force. You shouldn't mourn them no matter how much you want to nor should you miss them. The attachment that comes from this always ended up in jealously. That is the shadow of greed." Arnda explains. "What can I do?" Tommy asked worried. "Just train yourself of letting go of everything you lost." Tommy frowns. He shoulda expected that Arnda is a waste of time. Still, does Arnda expect something or is he toying with him? |
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| JusSonic | Jun 12 2006, 04:32 AM Post #10 |
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Tommy should kicked himself in the pants. He was supposed to be at the Jedi meeting at the briefing room. He was busy thinking about his dream and what Arnda has told him. He knew the meeting was over is when he got closer to the briefing room and see several Jedi leaving. By the time he arrived, only Obi-Tim remains behind to turned off the holograms, electric charts, maps, etc. "I was wondering if you were going to show up at all. You missed the briefing." Obi-Tim said in disapprovement. "I don't have an excuse. I was held up." Tommy apologized. "Well, you aren't missing much. The Outer Rim sieges are doing well. The planets under Separatist control have fallen." "So what's the big deal?" "The Nicktoonly Senate is going to give more powers to our friend the Chancellor." Tommy doesn't like how Obi-Tim said 'friend'. It makes it sound more like enemy. "And that is a bad thing? It would make the war easier to end." Obi-Tim sighs in annoyance. "You should be careful of Matthewstine." "What do you mean?" "Well for one, he wants to see you." Tommy is looking forward to that. Matthewstine has treat him like a son more than Obi-Tim has. But... "What does he need me for?" "He doesn't want to say." "That's weird. He always inform the Jedi Council whenever the reason is." Obi-Tim looked stressed now. "Everything is weird and it's making me uneasy. Including the Jedi Council's relation with the Chancellor." "Well I do know that the Jedi Council is concern about Matthewstine's power, mine included. But why should we mistrust each other? Aren't we fighting to save the Nick Republic?" Tommy asked sternly. "The Force is growing dark and we can be affected by it. Be wary of your feelings." For some reason, this caused more suspicion in Tommy. Tommy is by the Chancellor's side as Matthewstine himself is overlooking the construction of some parts of Coruscant that got destroyed during the Separatist attack. Matthewstine sighs. "Tommy, this afternoon, the Nicktoonly Senate is going to give me direct control of the Jedi Council." Matthewstine informs his young friend. This surprises Tommy. "You mean the Jedi won't report to the Nicktoonly Senate anymore?" "No. From now on, they will report to me. The Nicktoonly Senate themselves are unfocuses as it is on the war. Soon this will bring an end to things." "I don't know. The Jedi Council may see things differently." Matthewstine looked at Tommy as he resumed. "There are times when we must all endure adjustments to the constitution in the name of security." Tommy frowns. "Still, I don't think the Jedi Council will want anymore amendments changing." "Yes, but still, for the sake of the Nick Republic, this war must be won." "Everyone knows that." Matthewstine goes to his desk and sighs again. "Tommy, I have known you since you were a boy. I have given you advise over the years when you were lost, so to speak. I am proud of what you have done so far. You won battles that the Jedi Council thought were lost and you saved my life. So I hope you can trust me when I tell you this." "Tell me what?" Matthewstine looks at Tommy grimly. "I'd need your help." "With what?" Tommy asked. "Even though they helped us in the past, I have grown afraid of the Jedi. The Council looks like they are looking for more control. They're shrouded in secrecy and obsessed with maintaining their autonomy . . . ideals. I find simply incomprehensible in a democracy." Tommy looks surprised again. How could the Chancellor distrust the ones who saved his life? Then again, Tommy has shown distrust towards the people who he admired over the years now and again as well. "Sir, with all due respect, I think the Jedi has served the Nick Republic well." Tommy said trying his best to defend Obi-Tim and the others. "You know as they say, actions speaks louder than words. You are all I depend on in the Jedi now." "Meaning what? I don't get it." Tommy said puzzled. "I want you to speak for, see for, and hear for the Nick Republic itself." Tommy thought about what the Chancellor's suggesting. But what is it? "Let me be more specific." Chancellor Matthewstine said with a smile. "I want you to be my personal representive in the Jedi Council." Tommy looks shocked. He always dreams of being on the Jedi Council but not like this. But then again, it's always a honor of being in the Council either way. "Sir, I'm honored. There's a problem though. The Council won't liked it. They elect their own members and won't take this easily." Tommy warned. Matthewstine gave Tommy another smile. "Oh let's say, they will need you more than ever." |
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| JusSonic | Jun 13 2006, 07:23 PM Post #11 |
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Soon the word has spread of Tommy's being Matthewstine's representative and it goes to the Jedi Council who aren't happy at this suggestion. Tommy on the other hand is still eager as he stood before him, Obi-Tim, Arnda, Rocko, another Jedi Master, and holograms Ni-Gel Thorndi (Nigel Thornberry) and another Jedi Master, both are out on missions at this time. "Although we don't approve of the idea, we agreed to your appointment to the council as the Chancellor's personal representative." said Rocko. "Thank you. I will do myself not to let you down." Tommy said with a smile. "You do realized that we don't take this idea lightly." Arnda said with a frown. "This move by Chancellor Matthewstine is a disturbing one." "Yes, sir." "There's one other thing. You are on this Council, but we do not grant you the rank of Master." Rocko told Tommy sternly. Tommy looks shocked and furious at the same time. "What? But...that's not fair! How can you not make me a master? I am more powerful than all of you put together! And yet someone gets to be in the Council and not me a master?" Tommy demands angrily. "Stop it and sit down, Tommy." Rocko told Tommy, upset at Tommy's tone. Tommy sighs sadly. He make an unforgiving outburst. But still... "Excuse me, master." Tommy goes in one of the empty chairs of the Council. The others are embarrassed by this. Ni-Gel decides to speak at this point. "Well, my friends, we have checked all the systems in our Nick Republic but we still haven't found General Smytus." Ni-Gel said. "He got to be hiding in one of the systems beyond our own. We got to search them." Arnda said. "Uh, isn't that going to take time especially since we don't have that many ships to used?" Obi-Tim pointed out. "We can't removed any from the front line." Rocko agreed. "But we can't let the robots regroup either. It could prove deadly to us." "You got to contact our spies, Master Kenobi, and wait." Arnda told Obi-Tim. "And the attack on the good Cluster bots?" Ni-Gel asked. "We got to send them sone help." Rocko agreed. "We can't lose that system. It's important to us." Obi-Tim added. "I know that place. Give us time and we can kicked those robots, the good ones, out of there." Tommy said with a smirk. "Uh, newsflash, Tommy. You have to watch here and keep an eye on the Chancellor." Rocko said sternly. "Also, Obi-Tim is assigned to find Smytus." "Let me go to the good Cluster bot world. I am friends with many of them." Arnda said. "Then it's decided, Arnda will go to Cluster Prime to help the good Cluster Bots and takes a bunch of X-Clones with him to assist him. May the Force be with us all." The others on the Jedi Council nodded. But Tommy is very disappointed by the outcome. This isn't what he expected. As Tommy and Obi-Tim walked through one of the hallways of the Jedi Temple, Tommy is furious. "I can't believe this! I was put on the Council and yet they don't have the nerve to make me a Master! This is an insult! This has never happened in Jedi history before!" Tommy exclaimed furiously. "Calm down, Tommy. You got a great honor. You are on the Council at your age, it has never been done before. Look, the truth is that you're close to your friend the Chancellor. The Council is concerned that Matthewstine is getting too close in our affairs." Obi-Tim explained. "I didn't asked to be put in the Council." "But isn't that what you wanted? You got to be in the Council in the first place because of your friendship with the Chancellor!" "That doesn't have anything to do with this." Obi-Tim paused then resumed. "Desptie what happened, you are in a delicate situation." Tommy looked at his master as if Obi-Tim has stabbed him with a lightsaber. "Don't you mean divided loyalties?" "Remember when I told you of the problems between the Chancellor and Council? I thought you understood me yet you didn't. You walked right into a trap of your own design." "The only trap I got into is because the Council was upset that I was the youngest to serve!" protested Tommy. "Tommy, you are talking of jealously and pride. They are not Jedi thoughts, they are dangerous and dark ones!" warned Obi-Tim. "You should know of my abilities and skills. I know where my loyalties are at." Obi-Tim glanced around then resumed. "I hope so for our sake." "What do you mean? Is there something you're keeping from me?" Tommy asked suspiciously. Obi-Tim sighs. "Tommy, the only reason the Council even let you in is because Matthewstine trusted you." "And?" "Tommy, I don't want to be the bad side, not this once. I never even wanted to see you being put into this." Tommy is puzzled. What does his master mean? "Situation?" Tommy asked. Obi-Tim takes a deep breath. Then he said, "The Council wants you to report on all of the Chancellor's dealings. They want to know what he's up to." Now Tommy's certain that he has been stabbed through with a lightsaber. In his opinion, he was lightsaber-stabbed in the front! "What? They want me to spy on Matthewstine? You're speaking of treason!" yelled Tommy. "Tommy, this is war we're at now. The Jedi Council wants to keep the rights of the Nick Republic alive, even though the Chancellor doesn't." Obi-Tim said really wishing he doesn't have this conversation. "If that's the case, why didn't they tell me earlier?" "The assignment can't be on the record. They wanted me to tell you about this." Tommy can't believed this. Is the Council expecting Matthewstine of being the true evil here? No. He doesn't want to believe it. "Matthewstine is not evil! He was my friend ever since I first got here! How can you suggest that I betrayed him after all he done for me?" Tommy asked hurt. "Which is why you got to help us. We are loyaled only to the Nicktoonly Senate, not to its leader whose stay in office even after his terms expired." Obi-Tim pointed out. "The Nicktoonly Senate wanted me to stay, remember?" "Tommy, use your feelings. Something's not right." "You're telling me to dos something that is not in the Jedi Code, Nick Republic, mentor, and friend! How can you asked me of this?" Tommy demands. Obi-Tim looks at his former apprentice in sadness. "Because the Jedi Council asks you too." Later, a Jedi gunship is heading to a X-Clone platform where a bunch of X-Clones are getting ready for battle. Arnda is in the gunship, along with Obi-Tim and Rocko, the latter two are seeing the Jedi Master off. "I am worried about Tommy. He doesn't like his assignment." Obi-Tim said showing his concern. "He is under the eye of the Chancellor as it is. He got much anger in him, I can sense it. He take too much pride in his powers." Arnda said with a sigh. "It's dangerous, putting the two together. I don't think he could handle it. I don't trust him." Rocko precautioned. "Don't worry, he should do fine. I trust him with my life." Obi-Tim said, not concerned though the rest of him is. "I wish that makes two of us." Obi-Tim looks at Rocko in shock. Surely, he can't have... "Have you forgotten that he's the Chosen One? The one who can destroy the Sith and bring the Force back into balance?" Obi-Tim said. The prophecy. Rocko has thought little of it recently. It is said that one person will bring balance to the Force. Lou-Gon has found a highest count of midichlorians in Tommy and believed him to be the One. But Tommy's impatient, anger, and pride has put doubt in the eyes of the Jedi Council. "Well, the prophecy did say that." Rocko said in confirmation. "But a prophecy can be read wrong at times too." Arnda pointed out. This made Obi-Tim more worried. What if Lou-Gon was wrong? Could Tommy be the Jedi's downfall? "No. Tommy hasn't let me down, despite some times and he won't now." Obi-Tim said trying to reassured them, and himself. "I hope you're right. Well, here's my stop. To the Cluster Prime planet I go to help the good Cluster bots battled the evil robots." Arnda said as the gunship came to a stop on the platform. Arnda got off the gunship and heads to his troops. Obi-Tim and Rocko bowed to him before getting back on the gunship which launchs off again. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 14 2006, 04:52 AM Post #12 |
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Captain Danho (Danny Fenton) has returned Kimi back to her apartment sometime later. "Thanks, Captain." Kimi told her friend. "You're welcome, M'Lady." Danho said as he bowed. "Have a good rest." As Captain Danho got back into his speeder and left, Kimi has a talk with her handmaidens and C-REN who were waiting for her. Once they left, C-REN spoke up. "So what can I do?" asked C-REN. "Get the security bots on the works. Can't risk anything now." Kimi said. As the dog droid like, Kimi turns to watch the sunset. It is so beautiful. It would be more beautiful if... "Beautiful, right?" Kimi looks startled and turned. She sighs as she sees that it's just her husband. "Oh, Tommy. You startled me." Kimi sighs. Tommy sat next to her on the bench. "So how are you feeling?" Tommy asked. "Oh, the kid is keeping me wide awake. He's kicking." joked Kimi. "What makes you think it's a boy?" Tommy asked with a smirk. "My motherly intuition." laughed Kimi. The baby kicks again causing Kimi to rub her belly once more. "You know, with a kick like that, it got to be a girl." joked Tommy. Tommy and Kimi laughed altogether. It is a great moment for them. Of course... "I heard about your appointment, Tommy. I'm proud of you." Kimi said smiling. Tommy scowls in annoyance. "Even if I am one of them, they won't make me a Master." "You got to be patient. They will recognize your skills sooner or later." "It's taking longer. They think think I'm a Padawan. They are scared of my power, that's the problem." Kimi looks at her husband in pity. She knew he was this way in years, but not this way. "Tommy..." Tommy interrupts Kimi. "What's wrong with the Jedi Order recently? Is the war destroying what we know about the Nick Republic?" "I don't know. I am beginning to think we're on the wrong side here." Kimi said with a sigh. Tommy gave Kimi a suspicious look. How could she say that after all she and/or the Nick Republic did. "What do you mean?" Tommy asked suspiciously. "I am beginning to think that the demoncracy we're fighting for no longer exists and all of the fighting is for nothing.And that the Nick Republic are the real evil one here." "What?" Tommy demands angrily as he stood up. "Now you're sounding like a Separatist all of the sudden? How dare you!" Kimi trembles at the sound of Tommy's voice. "Tommy, this war represents a failure to listen...Now, you're closer to the Chancellor than anyone. Please, please ask him to stop the fighting and let diplomacy resume." "Hey, I am no one's errand boy and I won't continued to be one! Give that idea to the Nicktoonly Senate as you should do!" Tommy yelled furiously. Kimi looks at Tommy in shock. She has never seen him like this before either. "Tommy, what's wrong?" Tommy sighs. "It's nothing." "Please, don't lie. Let me help you." "How can you help me when I'm trying to help you?" Tommy and Kimi looked in each other's eyes for a few seconds then Tommy said. "There are things you probably aren't telling me, is there?" "Well, at the same time, there are things you aren't tellng me." Kimi responded. As Kimi smiles deviously, Tommy felt embarrassed by her own question. She continued. "Hold me...like you did by the lake on Naboo, so long ago...when there was nothing but our love...No politics, no plotting...no war." Tommy laughs. "Yes madam!" |
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| JusSonic | Jun 15 2006, 07:25 PM Post #13 |
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Later that night, Tommy got out of his speeder and heads into the opera house, a place where people gathered to see great plays. Matthewstine has asked for him to come there because he got some important informtation. Tommy wonder what it could be. Whatever it is, he hopes it could convinced the Jedi Council to see from his POV. Tommy enters the audience box where Matthewstine is watching a play with his associates Jean-Claude Amedda (Jean-Claude) and another pal of his. Matthewstine must have a sixth sense because he turned upon Tommy's entrance. "Ah, Tommy. Glad you could come on short notice." Matthewstine said with a smile. "You wanted to see me?" Tommy asked. "Yes. Come closer." Tommy does as the Chancellor continues. "Our X-Clone Intelligence Units has discovered that General Smytus is at the Utapau system." For this reason, Tommy got excited. "That's great! We can now get him and end the war." "How odd that the Council didn't asked you to do the assignment. I always considered you the best choice, but then again, they don't always make the right choices, correct?" "Well they try." "Please sit." The Chancellor then turned to his associates. "We need to be alone." The others nodded and left the box. Tommy sat down as the Chancellor resumes. "You should know, I can't be able to defend on the Jedi Council. They will included you in their plot if they haven't already." "What do you mean?" Tommy asked puzzled. Matthewstine sighs as he continues. "You should know what I suspect by now. The Jedi Council wants the Nick Republic. They're going to overthrow me first chance they get." Tommy is shocked. Matthewstine has always depend on the Jedi in the past. Now he's accusing them of treason? "Sir, I..." "Search you feelings, Tommy. You know, don't you?" "Well..." Tommy hesitates for a bit then continued. "I do know that they don't trust you, that's for sure." "Or the Nicktoonly Senate, the Nick Republic, or any demoncracy whatsoever." Matthewstine said grimly. "Recently my trust in them has been...disturbed." "Really? Did they want you to do something you know is wrong?" Matthewstine said with a smile. When Tommy looked down sadly, the Chancellor knew that he got his answer. "They want you to spy on me?" "With all due respect, it wasn't my idea." Tommy responded. "It never was when the Jedi Council gives the assignments. You should remember what you learned when you first started: All those who gain power are afraid to lose it. The Jedi feared this as well." "But don't they use their power for good?" Matthestine chuckled. "Good is a point of view, Tommy. And the Jedi point of view is not the only valid one. The Dark Lords of the Sith believe in security and justice also, yet they are considered by the Jedi to be..." "Evil?" Tommy said. Matthewstine nodded. "Yes. From the Jedi's POV. The Sith and the Jedi are similar in almost every way, including their quest for greater power. The difference between the two is the Sith are not afraid of the dark side of the Force. That is why they are more powerful." "But we do know that the Sith use their passion to give them what they want. They think only about themselves. "Oh? And the Jedi don't?" That question puts Tommy in an spot. "The Jedi care about others, you know that." Matthewstine sighs in annoyance. "Maybe that is what they want you to believe, correct? If that's the case, how is it they want you to do something you know is wrong?" "I'm not sure it's wrong." Tommy protested. "Have they asked you to betray the Jedi code? The Constitution? A friendship? Your own values? Think. Consider their motives. Keep your mind clear of assumptions. The fear of losing power is a weakness of both the Jedi and the Sith." The Chancellor notes that Tommy is deep in thought because of this question. As he thinks, Matthewstine brings up another subject. "Tell me, ever heard of the sad story of Darth Pariah the Dark?" "No. I don't believe I have." Tommy said puzzled. "I didn't think so. Most Jedi never heard that story or tell it. It's an old Sith tale about a legendary Sith master. Darth Pariah the Dark is so powerful and wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life. With his power and knowledge over the dark side, he can keep those he loved from dying ever again." Tommy looks astounded. A power to stop death. "He can do that?" "Of course. The dark side of the Force always opens doors to things that many considered unnatural." "What happened to him?" "Well, he became too powerful that he became afraid of losing all his power. And that became his downfall for after he taught his apprentice everything he knew, his apprentice has killed him while he was asleep." Matthewstine sighs in somewhat pity. "He never seen it coming. Sad that he could keep others from dying yet he can't himself." "Is it possible to learn this power?" Tommy asked Matthewstine hopefully. 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| JusSonic | Jun 16 2006, 09:19 PM Post #14 |
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Arnda was on Cluster Prime, leading his X Clone forces to assist the good Cluster bots against the evil invading robot forces. As the battle progresses, Arnda was having another mission with the Jedi Council via hologram transmission. Arnda listens as Tommy explains what Matthewstine has told him. "So Matthewstine expects Smytus to be on Utapau, eh?" Ni-Gel said, who is still using the hologram from where he's at. "How odd that our agents did not tell us this." "How the Chancellor found out this info without us knowing, that's a big question. The problem is that we have spoken with the baron of that planet and he said no one was there." Rocko said in concern. "A message was intercepted from the Utapau's chairman." Tommy explained. "Despite any suspicions, we better take advantage of this new info. We got to capture General Smytus so that this war will finally end. We must do this very quickly." Arnda said. "All in favor?" Obi-Tim asked. "Aye." said the other Jedi. "And I will go after Smytus. The Chancellor suggested it so." Tommy said proudly. Tommy quickly realized that what he say got a disapproval from the Council as they just glared at him. "Tommy, you know that Council choose who will go and stay, not the Chancellor." Rocko said Tommy annoyed. "He's right. We alone should make this decison." agreed Ni-Gel. Tommy groans but didn't say anything anyway as the others continued. "I think a Master should handle Smytus's capture or defeat." Arnda said. "Someone with more experience." "After much thinking, I think that the best person to do this...is Master Kenobi." Rocko said nodding to Obi-Tim. "But the last time he didn't do so well against Smytus!" Tommy protested in shocked and anger. He can't believe they would passed him up again. After seeing the dirty look Obi-Tim gave him, Tommy added, "Hey I was only saying the truth." "Oh geez, and here I thought it was a lie." Obi-Tim said sarcastically. He sighs as he spoke normally. "Still, I got to do this because I do have more experience." "In that case, I choose Obi-Tim." Arnda agreed. "As do I." nodded Ni-Gel. "All in favor?" Arnda asked. "Aye." said the other Jedi Council members except the obvious one (Tommy). "Okay, this meeting is adjourned." Rocko said, ending the meeting. The boy looks very angry as Rocko speaks to Obi-Tim. "Take as many X-Clones as you can. If what the report say is true, you may face a whole lot of robots." Rocko told Obi-Tim. On Cluster Prime, Arnda turns his hologram device off and goes to the edge of an platform. An X-Clone commander, Commander Gree is there. "Sir, the robots have turned their generators on." reported Gree. "Okay, let's do this." Arnda said nodding. "Very good, sir." The battle begins. A good Cluster bot roars as the good Cluster bots rushed out to fight the enemy robots. The robots faced back facing the opposite army. During the fierce battle, one good Cluster bot got on a tank, places a bomb on it, and got off just as the bomb itself goes off, destroying the tank. |
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| JusSonic | Jun 17 2006, 07:43 PM Post #15 |
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Later at another landing platform where a bunch of X-Clones, weapons, and a ship are ready for departure, Obi-Tim has arrived with Tommy seeing him off. The boy is obviously still disappointed over the Council's decision. "You know, you seriously should think of allowing me to come along for this one." Tommy told his master about the 10th time already. "Well I would but the info could be wrong and we went there for nothing so I thought I could saved you the disappointment." Obi-Tim told Tommy. He halfly wants Tommy to come to help too but wasn't there if Tommy was willing to let himself to submit to any disappointment should Smytus not be there. As Obi-Tim gets ready to leave, Tommy stops him. "Uh, Obi-Tim?" Obi-Tim stops and faces Tommy who looks somewhat guilty. ""I know I disappointed you. I wasn't appreciative of your trainings over the years. I was a jerk and I'm sorry. The Council just make me mad sometimes. Our friendship means anything now." Obi-Tim smiles. "You are strong and wise, Tommy. I'm proud. I have trained you since I have known you as a boy. Everything I taught you know already. And you have become a greater Jedi than I expected and you saved me more times than I expected." Tommy's face brightens upon hearing Obi-Tim's comments, good ones, about him. "You should be patient though. The Council will make you a Jedi Master before you know it." Obi-Tim turns to leave down the ramp but turns again to say some more. "Don't worry about me. I got enough X-Clones to helped me on this. I can deal with this without you. No offense." "Not taken, though there's always a first time." Tommy said with a smirk. Obi-Tim laughs then leaves. "May the Force be with you, Obi-Tim." Tommy said, bidding his master farewell. "And May the Force be with you. Goodbye, Tommy." Obi-Tim said nodding. 'Why do I have the feeling that it sounds like a final goodbye?' Tommy thought puzzled. But he shakes it off as he sees Obi-Tim gets into the Nick Republic battle cruiser and watches it lift off and flies off into space. On the cruiser later, as it is on its way to Utapau, a bunch of X-Clone Troopers are at attention, getting ready to get on the landing crafts. Obi-Tim is next to his fighter speaking to some X-Clone Commanders, each with their helmet off and each resembling their 'father', the late Xango Fett. As a hologram of Utapau is shown by a robot, Obi-Tim explains the plan. "Most of the cities are on the far side, so we shouldn't worry about any innocent people getting hurt in the action." explain X-Clone Commander Tody, a X-Clone Obi-Tim serves with a few times before. "I'd do my best to keep them distracted until you arrived. Don't take too long though." Obi-Tim said. "Oh please. Does it look like I disappointed?" Obi-Tim and Tody laughs. "Try Cato Nemoidia, for one." Obi-Tim said with a smirk as he got into his fighter. "That was an accident. Besides, Tommy was late, remember?" Commander Tody reminded the Jedi Master. "Well, I'd try not to wreck all the bots before you arrived." "Cool. Save some for us." Obi-Tim got his fighter ready and then begins to lift off. His fighter goes into space and then blasts off to Utapau. |
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