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| The Sleeping Te Xuan Ze; My parody of Sleeping Beauty | |
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| JusSonic | Aug 3 2006, 07:38 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note I am making another Disney parody after the success of my other ones. This one features an OC made by my pal tervaco, who gave me permission to use him. Like always, I don't own the characters in this story. They belong to their creators respectively. -------------------------- A long time ago in a kingdom far away, there is a ruler of a nation named Michael Lee and his wife. For a while, they wanted a child and after a long time of waiting, their wish was granted. A daughter was born and they called her Juniper. Chorus: Juniper Lee No one knew how they came by just a name but her birth has given their lives great joy and happiness. A while later, Michael Lee declared a holiday so that anyone, despite how poor they are, can come and pay respect to the newborn princess. And so, the story bvegins on that joyful day... Chorus: Joyful day Joyful day -------------------------- As oure story begins, the crowd, made up of subjects, poor people, friends, families, weirdos, etc. goes to the palace to meet the new infant known as Juniper Lee. While they do that, they sing this joyful song. Crowd: Joyfully now to our princess we come, Bringing gifts and all good wishes too. We pledge our loyalty anew. Hail to the princess Juniper! All of her subjects adore her! Hail to the King! Hail to the Queen! Hail to the princess Juniper! Health to the princess, Wealth to the princess, Long live the princess Juniper! Hail Juniper! Hail Juniper! Health to the princess, Wealth to the princess, Long live the princess Juniper! Hail to the King! Hail to the Queen! Hail to the princess Juniper! Inside the castle later, the crowd gathers, some of them are looking into Juniper Lee's crib as her parents, Michael and Mrs. Lee, looks on proudly, welcoming their guests. And on this great and joyful day, everyone celebrate this great birth. And Michael Lee and his wife welcome their long time friend. "From the fire casting city of Fircole, James Fields and young Chris." The announcers said, announcing James and Chris's arrival. Two figures enters the room. The first one was a tall man in a blue shirt and black pants with a beard on his face and a great expression. His name is James Fields. With him is a young boy who is looking kinda nervous while holding his gift to Juniper Lee. His brown hair was cut extremely short, like a military cut, and h wore a red button down collar shirt and khaki shorts. His name is Chris, Jim Fields's son. James comes forward and hugs Michael. "I must say, today must be a great day for you, isn't it Michael?" James asked with a smile. "Of course. And when the other great day comes, it will united our kingdoms and end all future promises." agreed Michael. Yes, these two wanted so much for their kingdoms to united. So today, it was announced that young Chris is betrothed to Michael's newborn daughter. As the young Chris brings forth his gift, he loons, unknowingly, at his future bride. "Well, I guess we could be friends one day, I know." Chris said with a shrug. "Now arriving, the heroes of this land, Danny Phantom, Jenny Wakeman, and the American Dragon Jake Long. Three figures floated and flies into the room. One of them is a fourteen-year-old boy, who had snow white hair, green eyes, a black jumpsuit, white gloves, white boots, a white belt, and some sort of "D" symbol on his chest. The second figure is some of blue cute like robot with pointy ears and a teenager/fighter body. She smiles as he holds hands with Danny. Her name is Jenny Wakeman AKA XJ9, Danny's girlfriend. The last figure is a muscular red dragon. He had black hair (which was lined with a green rim), a yellow-striped chest and stomach, and blue claws. When he lands, he transforms into a fourteen-year-old well-built human boy with the same hairstyle and black beady eyes. He is Jake Long, the American Dragon. "Yo, the JL dog is in the house!" announced Jake like a rapper. "Do you have to do that?" Jenny asked with a frown. "Hey, it's my thing, yo." The three sees the cradle and goes to it. They smiled upon seeing the cradle. "Awww, she's so cute." cooed Jenny. "Yeah, makes me wants to have one of my own someday, right Jenny?" Danny asked, smiling at his girlfriend. Jenny blushed. After they are done admiring the child, they turned to Michael and his wife. "Michael and Mrs. Lee, we have come bearing gifts to the young princess, a single one. No more, no less." Danny announced. Then he walks over to the cradle and waves a hand that glows. "My gift will be the gift of beauty." With that said, Danny Phantom has given Juniper Lee the gift of beauty. An offscreen chorus begins to sing. Chorus: One gift, beauty rare Like full of sunshine in her hair Lips that shame the red red rose She'll walk with springtime Wherever she goes When that done, Jenny steps forward to give her gift. "Young Juniper Lee, I will give you the gift of song." said Jenny happily as she holds out her hand that is glowing, thanks to a power her boyfriend Danny has given her. As the princess gets her gift song, the chorus sings again. Chorus: One gift, the gift of song Melody her whole life long The nightengale's her troubadour Bringing her sweet serenade to her door Now it's Jake's turn to give his gift. He steps up to the cradle and holds up an amulet that is glowing. "Yo, girl. My gift will be..." Suddenly the door of the castle swings open much to the surprise and shock of everyone. A big explosion occurs in the center, along with lightning, thunder, and toon sound effects. As the smoke begins to cleared, everyone sees new figures in the room. One of the figure is an average human being with black gloves, black boots, black clothes, black top hat, black cape, black bowtie, black spectacles, and a black cane. People cringes as they see him. With him are five clothed weasels. The grey one who was smoking four cigarettes at once was Wheezy. The one in strait jacket with spiky hair and eyes that looked hypnotized was Psycho. The stupid-looking one with his tongue hanging out of his mouth, wearing a T-shirt that was too small, equipped with a bludgeon with a large nail through it, and with a propeller hat on his head was Stupid. The weasel dressed in green, and that had his hair slicked back was Greasy. Finally, the pimp-styled weasel--the leader of the five--was called Wise Guy (I can't say the real name in a rated G fic). "Judge Doom?" gasped Danny shocked. "What's the ugly gargoyle doing here?" demands Jake angrily. "Quiet." Jenny sshed in precaution. Judge Doom smiles as he begins to speak. "Well, you seem to have quite a bunch of guests for this affair, Michael Lee. The royals, the kids, the toons, and...well, even the pathetic rap star wannabe dragons as well." Angry at Judge Doom's remark, Jake tries to harge but Danny holds him back. "Let me get to the point of my visit. I recently learned of this a while ago. I am surprised that I am the only person in the kingdom who didn't get invited." explained the judge. "You didn't get one because no one wants you, whacko!" snapped Jake Long. "Hey, I oughta blasted ya." snapped Wise Guy pointing a gun at Jake's head. "Cool it, Wise Guy. I can see what the dragon has meant." Judge Doom then chuckled. "This is awkward. And here I thought I was overlooked. In that case, I think I shall take my leave." "You are not mad?" asked Mrs. Lee surprised. "Of course not. But to show that I am the fairest judge in the land..." "Ha!" snapped Jake, rolling his eyes. Judge Doom ignored Jake's remark as he continued, "I shall give a gift to the young child as well. Upon hearing this, Danny, Jenny, and Jake stood in front of the cradle to prevent Doom from trying anything. "Wheezy, my toon crystal if you may." Judge Doom said holding out a hand. "Here you go, boss." coughed Wheezy as he gave a crystal to Judge Doom to proceeds to put it on the top of his cane. 'Uh oh.' thought Danny in worry. He knew that the toon crystal will give anyone, even Judge Doom, the power to cast many spells, even dangerous ones. He does not like where this is going. Judge Doom begins to speak once more. "Listen everyone! It is true that the young Juniper Lee will indeed get hrace grace and beauty. And she will be loved by those who know her. But..." Judge Doom uses the toon crystal to conjured up an image of a crystal. "Before the sun sets on her 16th birthday, she will poke her finger on a Quartz Crystal..." Then, to the horror of everyone else but the weasels, Doom shows an image of Juniper, all grown up, lying still in bed, seemingly, dead. "And DIED!" Mrs. Lee gasped in horror and grabs her daughter, holding her protectly. Judge Doom laughed evilly at this along with his weasels. "Bye bye. Hee hee hee hee!" chuckled Psycho madly. "Seize that judge!" yelled Michael, calling for his guards. The guards begin to close in on Judge Doom but Judge Doom taps his cane on the ground. "Stay back, fools!" yelled Judge Doom. Another explosion has occurred making the guards back off. When all is clear again, Judge Doom and his weasels has disappeared, laughing sinisterly which faded. Everyone looks concerned. They don't know what's going to happened to Juniper Lee now. Danny sees the worried looks on the Lees' faces and spoke gently, "Hey. Calm down you two. Jake hasn't gave his gift yet." "Then there's a way to stopped Doom's curse?" Michael asked hopefully. "Sorry, Mike. I can't." sighed Jake sadly. "Our powers are great, but they are no match for the powers that Judge Doom possessed." explained Danny sadly as well. "But Jake can help. He may be able to change the curse." Jenny said happily, nodding to Jaker. "Now hold on!" protested Jake startlled. "Do your best, Jake. We're counting on you." Her boyfriend Danny agrees. "Come on. The worst you can do is failed." "Why must you say that?" mumbled Jake with a groan as he goes up to Juniper still in her mother's arms. His hand glows as he begins to give the young baby his gift. "Sweet princess, if through this wicked judge's trick a crystal should your finger prick, a ray of hope there still may be in this, the gift I give at thee. Not in death but just in sleep the fateful prophecy you'll keep, and from this slumber you shall wake when true love's kiss the spell shall break." said Jake in a weird tone of voice. 'Boy, those lessons from gramps really helped.' Chorus: For true love conquers all Author's note With Judge Doom's curse set and Jake's countercurse also set, Danny, Jenny, and Jake need to find a way to keep Judge Doom's prophecy from coming to passed. But how? Find out in the next chapter coming soon! |
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| JusSonic | Aug 4 2006, 06:38 PM Post #2 |
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Despite this hope from Jake Long, however, Michael Lee is concerned for his daughter's life. And so, he has issued an order that all quartz crystals in the kingdom be destroyed. And so it was done, as every quartz crystal people can find are thrown into a fire to be melted away. In a castle tower, Danny Phantom watches this from the window with a concerned look on his face. "Man, this is crazy." groaned Danny. "Come on, Danny. Sit over with me and have some soda." Jenny insisted. She and Jake, back in his dragon form, are on a bed nearby drinking some soda. Danny sighs and comes over to Jenny and sits next to her. "I don't feel like soda right now. I'm depressed." Danny told Jenny. Jenny smiles and said, "Will this help?" Jenny embraces Danny and kissed him deeply on the lips. Danny, with a smile, kissed her back. The two have been a couple for a few months now. Danny and Jenny first met while Danny Phantom was in Tremorton chasing down an evil ghost. Jenny found him and mistake him for a villain. The two fought for hours until they realized that they are on the good side. They become friends soon after, fighting villains and ghost side by side. Jenny found out about Danny Phantom's true identify and, as a true friend, kept it to herself and those trustworthy. Danny and Jenny hanged out a lot. Afterwards, they started to go on dates, thinking them to be a 'just friends' dates at first. But soon, the two fell in love with each other. Danny and Jenny shared their first kiss during the same time they met Jake Long. It may looked weird for a human, who no one knew is a halfa, to be kissing a robot, but people expected it sooner or later. For Danny, kissing a robot doesn't bothered him because Jenny's lip were so...warm for him, as if only he can be able to kissed her. Danny and Jenny break off their kissing and smiled at each other. "Better?" Jenny said softly, brushing Danny's hair with her hand. "Yeah. I am still concerned about the Lees and their daughter though." Danny said, getting back to the subject at hand. "Don't worry. I am sure things will turned out fine." Jake scoffs at this. "Yeah right. A bonfire can't stopped Judge Doom. Heck, even my dragon fire couldn't bring the playa hater. I know, I try." "But what would stopped him?" Danny asked in a frown. "Maybe if we try to talked with him?" Jenny suspected. "Talk?" Danny asked surprised that his girlfriend would suspected. Then again, she is a teenager struck in a robot's body after all. "With Judge Doom? That's crazy." Jake said with a frown. "He can't be all bad." Jenny said with a shrug. "Jenny, you're talking about a guy who killed Eddie Valiant's brother Teddy. He even try to dipped Toon Town just to put up a stinkin' freeway! He is bad, treut me." Danny told Jenny sternly. "Man, I wanna turned that whacked judge into a toad, put that toad into a bag, throw the bag into the deepest ocean, and throw that ocean in the farest space." Jake complained angrily. "Jake, that is not nice!" Jenny said, shocked at Jake's attitude. "I may not liked Judge Doom either but our powers don't work that way. We only used them to defend our friends, families, and everyone else from villains, not killed them." Danny agreed. "And to bring joy and happiness to others." "Well, that would make me happy." snapped Jake. "We got to find a way..." Danny stops to think, then smiles. "I got it!" "You got it?" "What, Danny?" Jenny asked interested. "Not here. Even walls has ears." Danny said looking around. Danny then floats around a corner and waved to Jenny and Jake. "Follow me, quick!" Jenny and Jake followed their friend around the corner. Then they walked up to a wardrobe and Danny opens it, waving his friends inside. Once they got in, Danny enter last and closes the wardrobe door. He turns on the light that is inside. "Okay, my idea is to turned her into a flower!" Danny announced proudly. "Judge Doom? No offense, Danny, but I don't think Doom would let you near him to do that." Jake pointed out. "Besides, he has to be a girl for you say her." "Not Doom, Juniper Lee!" "Wow. I bet Juniper would be a nice flower." Jenny said happily. Danny smiles. "It's perfect! A flower can't prick its finger. It doesn't have any!" "You're right." Jenny said hugging her boyfriend. "She will be safe." Jake pauses to think, then frowns. "Unless Doom send down his Dip." Danny and Jenny gasped in realization. Dip is Doom's nastiest weapon. If anyone were to be touched by it, the person will dissolved into nothing, never to be seen again. "Darn it. I forgot he has that." Danny said with a groan. "He always ruined your plans." Jenny said to Danny sadly. Danny turned from Jenny and frowns. "And he expects us to try that." "But what can we do that Doom won't expect? He knows everything." Jake said. "Oh, he doesn't know everything. Doom has no idea about love, kindness, or helping others. To tell you the truth, I don't think he is very happy at all." Jenny explained. Upon hearing what Jenny has said, Danny brighten up. "That's it!" Danny exclaimed excited then turns to Jenny. "Jenny! You're a genius!" Danny then kissed Jenny on the cheek, making her blush. "Uh, why was I a genius?" Jenny asked while blushing. "I know what we can do that Doom won't expect at all!" Danny pauses to think, then speaks to himself. "Okay, let's see...we got to do this right to make it work. Now, one of the Kids Next Door's former bases is still there. We can use that. While Michael and his wife won't like the idea, they will have to accept that it's the only way to save June..." "June?" Jake asked puzzled. "Short for June." "Wait, yo. What are you up to?" Danny turned and explained. "We're going to tell Michael and Mrs. Lee about 3 pleasants, one of which are engaged to be married, who will raised a foundling child deep in the forest. "Well, that's nice of them." Jenny said, not knowing where Danny's going with this. "But who are they?" Jake asked. Danny smirked. "Turn around." Jenny and Jake did so...and sees themselves! They are actually looking in the mirror in the wardrobe. They gasped. "It's us!" Jenny exclaimed in realization. "Wait, you mean us?" Jake asked surprised. "Take care of the baby?" "Of course!" Danny said with a smile. "Oh, I always wanted a baby to take care of." Jenny said happily. But then she remembered one part of what Danny has said and gasped. "Wait, 'engaged'? Do you mean...?" Danny smiles and gets on one knee. Jenny's metal heart pounds as Danny takes out a box and opens it. Inside is a very important ring. "Jenny, will you married me?" Danny asked hopefully. Jenny smiled widely and then hugged Danny. "Oh Danny! Yes! Yes I will! I love you so much! I will married you!" This got Danny excited and have him kissing his new fiancee. "Uh, about the baby?" Jake asked interrupting the moment. Danny and Jenny stopped kissing so Danny could say, "Oh yeah. Almost forgot." "Do we have to feed it?" Jake asked curious. "And wash it, dress it, rock it to sleep. Oh, this will helped prepare for my future." Jenny said, sighing happily that she can practice taking care of a baby with her future husband. "But can we do it?" Jake asked. "Well, mortals can do it, I don't see why we can't." Danny said with a smile. "Wicked! And with our abilities and magic, this will be easy, dog." "Right." Jenny agrees. "Hold it! No magic, powers, or whatever. I'd take possession of everything to do with those if you don't mind. Oh, we better changed to avoid suspicion." Danny said. Then he transforms back into his human. He has turned into a fourteen-year-old boy with black hair and blue eyes, and he wore a white shirt (on which the rims of his sleeves were orangish-red, as was the collar of his shirt, and a horizontal oval shaped symbol on the front of his shirt), along with blue jeans, and red and white tennis shoes. He transforms into Danny Fenton. Upon transforming, he gives an exo-skin to Jenny. "Wear this, Jenny." Danny requested. Jenny did as Danny requested. Once she wears it, she now looks like an everyday human girl with black hair, a pink skirt, green socks, and pink shoes. She turns and smiles at Danny. "How's this, Danny?" Jenny asked Danny. Danny is impressed. With or without exoskin, he is still in in love with the robot who won his heart. "Great. Now hand over the stuff." Danny said putting his hand out. "Hold it. You want us to live like mortals for 16 years?" protested Jake, trying to hide his stuff. But Danny managed to zapped him, changing the dragon back to his human self. As Jake fell to the ground, Danny took all of his magical stuff. Jake got up and continued, "But we don't know how to! We've never done many things without magic!" "And that's why Judge Doom won't expected it." Danny pointed out. "It's the perfect job for us." "But who will wash and cook?" "We can do it, I know we can." "I can take care of the baby!" Jenny offered happily. "Wait, I still need your amulet, Jake. Hand it over." Danny told Jake reaching for the amulet but Jake keeps dodging. The two keeps fighting until Danny trips Jake and grabs the amulet. Jake groans in defeat. After making sure that all the possessions that has to do with magic, powers, etc. has been taken, Danny continued. "Okay, let's go and tell the Lees at once." Danny opens the wardrobe door and got out. He closes the door and locks it, forgetting about Jenny and Jake. "Danny!" yelled the two from inside the wardrobe. Upon realizing his mistake, Danny unlocks and reopens the door to revealed an annoyed Jake and Jenny who came out. "Sorry." Danny said sheepishly. "Well, you need more than sorry to have me forgive you, Danny Fenton." snapped Jenny annoyed. Her fiancee kissed her full on her now human mouth. As Danny pulled away, Jenny smiles. "Okay, you're forgiven, love." Danny smiles then leaves the room with Jenny and Jake following. Later, Michael and his wife watched sadly as their only beloved possession, their daughter June, disappeared into the night by her new guardians. Jenny was seen holding her last. Years has passed since that sad day. And the kingdom has since become sad and loney for Michael and his people. But when the day of June's 16th birthday draws near, the entire kingdom begins to cheered up and rejoice. They knew that as long as Judge Doom's lair, the Dark Fortress, continued to thundered with his anger and frustration, his curse has yet to be fulfilled. In the fortress itself, Judge Doom meanwhile is very upset as he speaks to his weasels and his henchmen, a bunch of identified looking troopers called Clone Troopers that he borrowed from the now Emperor of Coruscant Palpatine a while ago. "Amazing! It has been 16 years and no one has seen her!" yelled Judge Doom in frustration. He glares at the leader of the Clone Trooper, the one who's supposed to be searching. "Are you certain you have looked everywhere?" "Positive, sir. No trace." explained the Clone Trooper leader. "We must have looked everywhere and must have missed the recently declared Te Xuan Ze." added another Clone Trooper. "Did you seareched the towns, woods, and mountains?" asked Judge Doom. "Everywhere, including the cradles." explained the Clone Trooper leader. "Cradles?" asked the judge, eyebrow quirking in interest. "Yes sir. Every last one." Judge Doom chuckled then turned to the weasels. "You hear that? All these years they were looking for a baby." "What morons." chuckled Wise Guy. "Si. They should know that the senorita has grown up by now." agreed Greasy. Judge Doom begins to laugh. Thinking their master wanted them to laugh as well, the Clone Troopers laughed along. Suddenly Judge Doom angrily fires a bunch of blasts at the Clone Troopers, driving them off. "Idiots! Choke artists! Fools!" yelled Judge Doom continued to blasting the troopers. On orders not to fight their master, even though he was attacking them, they left the throne room in terror. After the troopers has left, Judge Doom groaned and turned to the weasels. "Why do the best troopers has to turned out to be idiots?" asked Judge Doom. "We're idiots and you haven't blasted us." said Stupid stupidly. "Don't tempt him!" hissed Wise Guy annoyed. "Yeah. We just got lucky." said Wheezy coughing like mad. "All these years and not even my best has found them! Unless Juniper Lee is found soon, my curse will not be fulfilled!" yelled Judge Doom. "Upset again, Domonic?" Judge Doom turned and sees another weasel coming in. It is a girl weasel coming in. Doom narrows his eyes. "Well, Sarah, my sister. And didn't I requested not to say my real name in public?" Judge Doom asked. "Well, the other weasels aren't actually public or smart, you know. No offense, Psycho." Sarah Weasel said, adding to the insane weasel. "None taken." Psycho said chuckling. Sarah and Psycho were in love for quite a while. "Anyway, Doom, I know you are upset about not getting an invite, but like I said before, that is no reason you put a curse on the Lees' baby to get back at them." "My sister, please understand. This isn't about getting an invite. No, years ago, I made a plan that will ensure that there will be no more Te Xuan Zes." Judge Doom chuckled. Like Doom mentioned before, Juniper "June" Lee has been declared the new Te Xuan Ze, the protector of all magical creatures. Once June has returned home and married her betrothed Chris Fields, she will make sure that the balance between magical and nonmagical beings remain intact. "What do you mean?" asked Sarah, narrowing her eyes. "I will explained later, Sarah." Judge Doom then turned to the other weasels. "I got a task for you. You are my last hope now." "What is the task, boss?" Wise Guy asked interested. "Search high and low. Look for a girl of 16 with long raven hair with a pink strand and lips as red as the rose. Go and do not failed!" Judge Doom ordered. "Yes Judge Doom." said the weasels at once. "If you don't mind, I think I will tagged along to make sure my boyfriend, our cousin Greasy, and the others make it back alive." Sarah said coming forward. Judge Doom smiled. "If you must." Sarah leaves the room with the weasels heading towards their truck. Sarah knew that her brother is up to something. And whatever it is, it is not good. Author's note 16 years has passed and Judge Doom send out the Toon Patrol, including Sarah, to find Juniper Lee. But where is June and what are her new guardians up to? Sarah Weasel is an OC made by Julayla Beryl, a friend of mine. She's letting me borrowed her. Also, Domonic is the name Julayla made up to be Judge Doom's real name (Yeah, I know it's really Baron Von Rotten, but it could be Doom's stage name for all we know). Also, Julayla is a Sarah x Psycho, which is why I put that couple in. Also, to answer tinyrocket's review, yes I am a Danny x June to the core, but I liked other couples too, including June x Chris (tervaco's original character). Since that's the case and I liked Danny x Jenny (thanks a friend of mine Stuperman for introducing me to that couple and kImIcOoLgIrl for making me like it further, I paired Danny with Jenny. Anyway, please read and review. No flames. Thank you. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 5 2006, 10:31 AM Post #3 |
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For 16 years, no one knew what has happened to the missing princess but a trusted few. Deep in the forest, Danny, Jenny, and Jake continued their plan carefully. As they lived like peasants for 16 years, to raised the child like their own and named her Hikari. The young girl, opening a window that goes to her room in the strange place that used to be a KND next door base, has grown over the years. She is currently now a 15 year old with freckles, brown eyes, long raven hair with a pink strand, and she wore a green t-shirt (in which the rims of her sleeves were red, and the collar of her shirt was red, and there was a symbol on the front that looked like a red dragonfly), along with a brown wristband (which had purple gems on it) on her right wrist, along with a brown belt with a yellow belt buckle, blue jeans, and brown shoes. She is currently singing and happy. Danny and Jenny, meanwhile, have continued their engagement for 5 years during their taking care of youg Hikari/June. In the fifth year, the two has decided to get married, though their marriage must be a secret one to avoided detection by Judge Doom and his minions. And so, it was done and Jenny became the new Mrs. Danny Fenton. Today, on June's 16th birthday, her guardians Danny and Jenny Fenton and Jake Long are planning a party in secret and a special surprise for her. Downstairs in the former KND base, the three are currently looking over a book of clothes. Although they haven't changed a bit, Jenny is now wearing Danny's wedding ring. "How about this one? She'd looked so awesome in it." Jake said, pointing to a dress. "I picked this one." Danny said pointing to another dress. "She'd looked beautiful in it." Jenny said, smiling at her husband. Danny chuckled and kissed Jenny on the lips before continuing, "Now then, we need to make some changes to it." "Cool!" Jake exclaimed. "Let's not forget the pretty bow." Jenny reminded the two. "And the shoulder line." Danny added. "It would be awesome when we make it red." Jake said excited. "Now hold it. It's going to be black and white." "Now you hold it." Danny ignores Jake and continued, "Okay I think we picked the right outfit for her." "We should find a place to get Hikari out of the house so we can do this in private." Jenny said, reminding the two. "Oh yes. We'd think of something, my love." Just then, they hear Hikari coming downstairs and hide the book just as she came down. She sees them and smirks. "What are you three up to?" Hikari asked interested. "Us?" Jake asked nervously. "Up to?" Jenny continued. "Something?" Danny chuckled nervously lastly. "Well, the fact is that, uh, we, uh..." Jake sees a basket nearby, grabs it, and exclaimed, "Need you to get some berries!" "Yeah, berries." Danny quickly agreed. "Berries?" Hikari asked puzzled. "Yes, we're making a pie later so we need you to get some berries for us." Jenny added as, after Jake gave Hikari the basket, she begins to pushed the girl out. "But I picked berries yesterday!" "Well, we ran out." Danny said quickly. "So why don't you get some more? We'd hold down the fort until you get back." Jenny said, desperate to get Hikari out of the house. "Go on! Take your time!" Soon the three in getting Hikari out of the building. As she turns out to looked puzzled, Danny continued, "Don't hurry back right away. Take your time like I said." "Don't go too far or even leave the area." Jenny added. "And don't talk to strangers, not even anyone you liked!" Jake continued. The three has made sure that Hikari does not talked to anyone but the residents of the forest, who has no idea who she really is. "Bye!" said the three at once as they quickly closed the door. Hikari looks puzzled then smirks. 'I get it. They are planning a surprise party. Well, who am I to ruined it for them? Plus, I planned to come out anyway.' thought Hikari as she turns to leave. She then frowns. 'Though it's still not fair that I can't talked to anyone...' What Hikari doesn't know that she's going to talked to someone very soon. Back inside the building, the three breaths a sigh of relief as they goes back to the book. "Does she suspects anything?" Jake asked worried. "Nah. We've done this for 17 years. She's going to loved this." Danny said with a smile. "This is totally wicked. A real birthday party for Hikari, or June." "And a real birthday cake. I haven't seen much of a cake since our last anniversary, Danny." Jenny said giggling, making Danny blushed. "And we can get her a dress a princess like her would ever wanted." Danny said with a smile. "As soon as I transformed, I can get our stuff and we can begin, yo! DRAGON..." "Hold it!" Danny yelled, stopping Jake from transforming into his American Dragon form. "Jake, don't do it." Jenny protested. "We can't use our magical abilities or magic, meaning no turning into your dragon form, remember?" Jake frowns. "But 16 years is almost over and I'm getting impatient, dog! I think it's safe to use magic now!" "We can't take any chances in case Judge Doom or his men are still looking for June." Danny pointed out. "But I never even made a cake!" "Not to worry, Jake old pal." "I'd make it." Jenny said with a smile as she goes over to the counter nearby. "I have seen mom do it a few times before. It's easy." "You?" Jake scoffed in disbelief. "Come on, give her a chance. She practiced to be the perfect housewife since before our marriage. To me, she already is because she's so beautiful to me." Danny said with a smile. Jenny blushed upon hearing this. "Yeah, but..." "I'd make it a 15 layers cake with black and pink, and some forget mes not..." Jenny begins to say. "And I'd worked on the dress." Danny said, getting some supplies out. "Wait, you'd never sew and she'd never cooked!" protested Jake in shock. "Oh come off it. It's easy and you know it." "I just need to followed the book." Jenny said taking a cookbook and ingredients out. Danny leads Jake to a footstool nearby and made him stand on it. "Oh you can be the dummy." Danny said. "Hey, what's with the dummy talk, yo?" snapped Jake in annoyance. "I mean use you so I can make the dress." "I still say we should use magic." Jake said with a frown. Danny ignored Jake and throws a white coated sheet over Jake and begins cutting with sisters. Meanwhile nearby, his wife Jenny puts all the ingredients in front and begins reading the cookbook. "Okay, I need flour, 3 cups." Jenny said beginning to read. Jenny looked around. "Now where are those cups? Oh, here they are." Jenny takes out 3 cups of different sizes and use them to pour the flour into the bowl. "1, 2, and 3." As Jake watched from his place on the stool, he sees Danny making a circular hole in the sheet. "Uh, what's that for, Danny?" Jake asked pointing at the hole. "We need a hole for the bottom." Danny explained. "Right, for the feet to go through" Jenny added as she continues on cooking. Jake sees the colors of the paper and frowns. "Hey, wait a minute! This is black and white!" "Yeah, cool huh?" Danny asked with a smile. "But I wanted red!" "Come on, you know we decided on black and white." "No, you decided black and white!" Jake snapped in annoyance. Jenny continues reading the cookbook but she is actually making a mess more than cake. "'2 eggs, fold into gently'? Jenny said puzzled, reading from the cook. "Fold?" Then she shrugged. "Oh well." Jenny puts 2 eggs in the bowl and fold themed as she read from the book. She ends up breaking eggs though. Back to the sewing progress, Jake is completely hulled in the black and white cloth. "Hey I can't breathe, yo!" Jake yelled, gasping for air. To save his friend, Danny cut the cloth over the top, giving the human-dragon some air. Jake looks at the dress from inside and groans. "This is totally awful." Jake said with a groan. "Only because it's on you." Danny joked. "Next comes yeast and tsps." Jenny continued reading. She looks puzzled. "Tsps?" "It means 1 teaspoon, Jenny." Jake told Jenny. "Oh, I knew that." Danny begins to measures the dress. He sighs. "Hikari has grown in the past 16 years, hasn't she?" Danny asked. "Yeah, it seems like only yesterday that we brought her here as a people." Jake agreed. "Just a little baby." Jenny sighs happily. Then Danny notices a tear forming in Jake's eyes. "Why, Jake! You're crying." Danny said surprised. "What's wrong?" Jenny asked, noticing as well. "Well, it's just that when she goes home and be a princess again, we won't have a Hikari anymore." Jake said sadly. "Jake..." "Jake, we need this day would come." Danny reminded Jake. "But why does it have to come so soon?" Jenny said sadly. Danny sighs. "Well, we did have her for 16 years." "16 great years." sighed Jake. The three stopped working and thought about all the good times they have with Hikari. They raised her like they were their own daughter (or niece in Jake's case). They wished they could keep her but knew that they can't. Still, despite June going back to her rightful place as princess, she will always be in their hearts. Then Danny straighten up. "Man, what are we doing? We are acting like babies while we're supposed to be working! We got to get this done before she gets back! Soon the three goes back to working on the party. Somewhere in the forest, Hikari is walking through the forest, picking berries and singing as she does. Also living in the forest are the Care Bear Family, friends of Hikari. "Hey, it's Hikari." Friend Bear said, hearing Hikari's singing. "Come on! I can't missed this." Bright Heart said. The others run in to listened. Swift Heart Rabbit pushed Bedtime Bear out of a tree nearby. When he landed, the bear woke up. "What?" Bedtime looked around and sees Hikari who smiles at him. "Oh hi Hikari,. The others smiled as they walked alongside Hikari and listened to her singing. Unknown to Hikari or her friends, someone else is in the forest, a young handsome man. He wore khaki shorts, a black t-shirt, and red button down shirt over that. His hair was as short and his glasses reflected the sun. Around his neck hung a black cord with a yin-yang pendant dangling from it. He is Chris Fields, older than when he last saw Juniper Lee. He is currently riding a white dragon with green hair and red eyes. The dragon’s head was the size of Chris's body and its teeth were razor sharp. His name is Haku. Chris is currently riding on Haku in the forest when he hears Hikari's singing which is faintly heard. "Hey, what's that, Haku?" Chris asked turning to the direction of the music. "Hmmm. It appears that someone must be singing. I did not anyone lived in this part of the forest." Haku observed. Chris continued to listened and smiled. "It sounded beautiful. What is it? We got to go see it!" "Actually not. I got orders from your father to let you ride around for a while then return home. We cannot disobeyed so you can find out the source of that singing." Haku told Chris sternly. "Come on, do it for me!" Chris begged, his innocent making him look like a curious puppy. "I'm sorry, but no." "Maybe for an extra bucket of wheat," Chris said. This catches Haku's interest. "And maybe some...candy?" Haku smiles. The dragon very much enjoyed candy. "Okay, you got a deal." "All right! Let's go!" Haku soon flies towards the singing. They continued to looked in some parts of the forest, listening to the singing. But as Haku flies in one direction, he didn't watch where he was going. And it resulted in Chris bumping into a branch and falling off Haku. Haku stops as he hears Chris's yells and some splashing. He turns and looks surprised. Chris has fallen into a pool of water nearby. As Haku looks on, Chris looks back annoyed and throws some water at Haku. "No candy!" Chris scolded Haku. Author's note So it looks like Chris is in the area. Would he meet June? Would the three guardians get the party done right (do you really need an answer to that)? And what of the weasels? What would happened when they come closer to their target? Find out in the next chapter coming soon! |
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| JusSonic | Aug 6 2006, 06:43 PM Post #4 |
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Somewhere back in the woods, young Hikari, unaware of Chris Fields's arrival, pick berries while her Care Bear Family friends helped out. "Hey Hikari. How about you sing that song you always enjoyed?" asked Baby Tugs hopefully. "Yeah, it's nice." Baby Hugs agreed. Hikari giggled then begins to sing. Hikari: I wonder, I wonder, I wonder why each little bird Has a someone to sing to Sweet things to A gay little laugh melody. I wonder, I wonder, If my heart keeps singing Will my song going in To someone Will find me And bring back a love song To me! The group stops at a meadow and sees a castle in the distance. "That was a good song, Hikari." said Cheer Bear with a smile. "Yeah. Maybe someday you can go to that castle and sing." agreed Treat Heart Pig. Hikar groans and walks away. "It's not fair. They always treated me like a child." Hikari said sadly. "You mean your guardians?" asked Tender Heart Bear following in curiousity. "Yeah, Uncle Danny, Aunt Jenny, and Uncle Jake. They don't want me to meet anyone ever. I'm all grown up now. And no offense, but I wanted to see someone other than you guys." Hikari told her friends sadly. "No offense taken, we understand, child." Grams Bear said. Hikari smirks. "But you know what? I fooled them! I did meet someone!" "Really?" asked Good Luck Bear surprised. "You must have good luck on your side if you meet someone your guardians didn't knew you met." "Yeah, who is it?" asked Proud Heart Cat. The others chattered on, insisted that Hikari tell. Hikari smiles. "Okay, okay. Well, to tell you the truth, he's...a handsome guy. Tall, handsome...." Then Hikari sighs happily. "And so romantic." "What did you do?" asked Friend Bear. "Oh we walked and talked together, share secrets, that kind of things. Then before we could say goodbye, he takes me in his arms, and..." Hikari sighs happily. "Then what?" Grumpy Bear asked very anxiously. Hikari frowns. "I woke up." "Awww...." said the Family disappointed. "Yeah, I was having a dream." Hikari said sadly. "But if you dream more than once, it's bound to come true." True Heart Bear pointed out with a smile. "That's right. And maybe someday, you could meet your handsome 'prince'." said Noble Heart Horse in agreement. "But I have seen him so many times. I'm starting to lose hope here." Hikari said sadly. Baby Hugs and Baby Tugs looked on sadly. They wished they could do something. Baby Tugs turned and looked excited. "Look over here, Hugs!" Baby Tugs poking on his sister's shoulder and pointing. Hugs turned and sees a wet pair of clothes nearby. She sees a smile on her brother's face and smiles back. "Oh, goody goody gosh! This is a great idea, Tugs!" Baby Hugs said excited. Baby Tugs nodded and then he runs over to Grumpy, Playful Heart Monkey, and Lotsa Heart Elephant and told them his idea. They followed the cubs over to where the wet clothes are at. By the same pond he fell at, Chris sat on a side of it. He has put his hat, cape, and shoes by a tree nearby to dry off while Haku keeps watch. Chris is currently thinking. "I am still thinking about that voice, Haku. Can't get it out of my head." Chris said with happy sigh. "There's something strange about that voice though, Chris. It's too beautiful to be real." Haku said. Unknown to Chris and Haku, Hugs, Tugs, Grumpy, Playful Heart, and Lotsa Heart grabs Chris's almost dry clothes and begins sneaking off with them. "Maybe you're right. For all I know. It's probably a wood sprite." Chris sighs. Haku then sees the animals running off with Chris's things. "Hey! What are you doing?" Haku yelled at the fleeing Care Bear Family members. Chris turned and gasped as he sees the said animals running off with his clothes. "Hey! Come back with those!" yelled Chris uselessly as they proceed in running off with them. Once they are away from Chris, the CBF members get ready to get to work. Hugs and Tugs got in Chris's shoes while the hat and cape is being put on Grumpy who frowns. "Why do I have to wear the hat and cape?" complained Grumpy. "Because you never complained, Grumpy." giggled Playful Heart. Lotsa Heart conjures up a cloud car and he and Playful Heart got in. The cloud car floats up as the two grabs Grumpy and lifts them. Together, the whole group approaches Hikari and friends. While Hikari is busy humming to herself with the others watching, a voice calls out. "Hello." Grumpy's voice said. Hikari turns and begins to laugh at the sight of Grumpy in Chris's hat and cape while being lifted by Playful and Lotsa. Tugs and Hugs hops to make it looked like he was walking. "What is Grumpy doing?" Brave Heart asked Tender Heart puzzled. "Ssh. This is going to be interesting." Tender Heart said with a smile. "Why, it's my dream guy." giggled Hikari as she got up and walked up. "Hello, handsome." "Uh, hello." Grumpy said nervously. Hikari begins to hums a bit as she walks around the disguised Grumpy. "You know, I'm not to supposed to speak to strangers but we met before." Hikari said with a smile. "Uh, do tell." Grumpy requested. Hikari begins to dance with her 'dream girl' as she begins to sing. Hikari: I know you I walked with you Once upon a dream I know you The gleam in your eyes Is so familiar a gleam During Hikari's song, Chris and Haku arrives on the scene, catching up to the culprits. Chris gapes as he sees Hikari and smiles. "Who is that? She's so beautiful." Chris said with a warm smile. "Hmmm. She must be who was singing." Haku observed. "Maybe we should forget your stolen clothes and head back to home, Chris. Chris?" Chris didn't hear Haku as he looks on with a smile. Haku soon realized that Chris has became love stricken for the mysterious girl. Unaware of Chris and Haku's appearance, Hikari continued singing. Lotsa Heart and Playful Heart flies around helping Grumpy to dance while the young cubs tries to keep up. And I know it's true That visions are seldom all they seem But if I know you I know what you'll do You'll love me at once The way you did Once upon a dream When Hikari wasn't looking, Chris steps in and pulled Grumpy and the others away and replaced them with himself, dancing with Hikari. Hikari didn't noticed because she was still singing. But if I know you I know what you'll do You'll love me at once Chris: The way you did Upon hearing that, Hikari stops singing and looks confused. She then sees Grumpy and the others tangled up in bushes, Grumpy chuckled nervously. Once upon a dream Hikari turns and sees Chris. She jumps in alarmed. "What? Who are you?" Hikari asked alarmed as she tries to back away. But Chris held on her hand and smiles. "I'm sorry if I startled you." apologized Chris. "Oh, it's not that. It's..." "Because I'm a stranger?" asked Chris with a smile. "Well, yes. And I'm not supposed to talked to them." Hikari said nervously. "Oh but we aren't strangers. We met before." insisted Chris. "What?" Haku narrows his eyes. He doesn't like where this is going. Chris laughs. "Once upon a dream, remember?" Then he begins to sing. Chris: Of course, You said so yourself: Once upon a dream! [sings] I know you I walked with you Once upon a dream I know you The gleam in your eyes Is so familiar a gleam Hikari slowly smiles and slowly falling in love with Chris. Soon the two begins to dance around a lake as Haku and the others tries to keep up. Chorus: And I know it's true That visions are seldom all they seem But if I know you I know what you'll do You'll love me at once The way you did Once upon a dream Once the song is over, the two stops dancing long enough to enjoyed the view. Haku is very concerned. "I don't like this." Haku said. "Oh let them fall in love. It's only right." insisted Love-A-Lot Bear. "It's not that they couldn't fall in love. It's just that they shouldn't." The Care Bears looked puzzled. What is the dragon speaking of? Chris, falling deeply in love with the mysterious girl, embraces Hikari. "Tell me, what's your name?" Chris said Hikari quietly. "Hmmm?" asked Hikari dreamly. "Oh that. My name is..." Suddenly Hikari snaps out of it, her eyes is widen in horror. "No! I can't! I...I got to go. Goodbye!" Suddenly Hikari got out of a shocked Chris's arms and runs off. "Wait!" cried Chris. "Will I ever see you again?" "Never!" cried Hikari. "Never?" asked Chris hurt. Hikari hesitates a bit then say, "Well, maybe someday." "Tomorrow?" asked Chris hopefully. "Actually I think tonight would be better!" "Great! Where can I think you?" "The building in the glen!" yelled Hikari as she runs off. 'The building in the glen.' thought Chris with a smile. "'I'm definitely interested in seeing her again." Haku, on the other hand, is not sure if that's a good idea. Back at the building, Jenny is almost done with the cake. And when I say done, I mean the cake melting while she tries to put the candles on it. Jenny tries her best to keep it up especially with a broom. "I'm done. What do you guys think?" Jenny asked turning to her husband and fellow friend. The two, like Jenny, are almost done with what they're doing. Unfortunately, the dress looks ridiculous, even when it's on Jake. The American Dragon is almost up to here. Danny hears Jenny and turns. He gapes upon seeing the cake. "Oh. Uh, the cake's...great." Danny said, trying not to hurt his wife's feelings. "Well, once I get it baked, it should do fine, Danny." Jenny insisted. "Great. So what do you think of the dress?" Jenny sees the dress and tries her best not to giggle at the sight of Jake in the dress he's in. "Well...it doesn't looked like what is in the book, that's for sure, honey." "You think I should put in some ruffords?" "I guess so. What do you think, Jake?" Jenny asked her friend. "Should we..." "I say enough, yo! DRAGON UP!" Jake then transforms into the American Dragon, ripping the ugly dress off of him. "Jake! What are you doing?" asked Danny in shock. "What we should have done before! We got to think of Hikari and what she's say when she sees this mess! I say we used what we shoulda used in the first place! I'm getting our magic stuff now!" Jake yelled stomping off. As Jake heads upstairs to get the stuff, Jenny turns and sees the cake melting all the way to the floor. Jenny sighs. "He's right. This isn't working for us." Jenny then removes her exo-skin, going back into her robot self. "Besides, I worked better as a robot anyway." "Got them! Good as new!" exclaimed Jake as he walks downstairs with the magical stuff. "Whoa, Jake! Be careful with those!" Danny begins to think. Then he spoke up, "Okay, lock all the doors! Jenny, close the windows!" Jake and Jenny runs all over the room, locking all the doors and closing the windows. "GOING GHOST!" yelled Danny. Then he transforms into his Danny Phantom self. "Okay, make sure all cranny are plucked up! We can't take any chances now. Okay, love robot, take care of the cake." "Right, ghost darling." Jenny said giggling. The two always have pet names for each other, even before they fell in love. "This is wicked, and I..." Danny interrupts Jake. "Clean up this mess. I'd take care of the dress." Danny notices Jake not doing anything. "Well, get going." Jake scoffs then uses his amulet to cast a spell on a bucket, mob, broom. The three came to life and begin to walk on their own. "Okay, you three! Danny said clean this room up, dogs!" ordered Jake. The items obeyed and begins cleanign up the place. As they do, Danny is nearby working on the dress. "Now this is a dress fit for a princess." said Danny proudly as he looks at the great work he did so far. As Danny continues working, his wife Jenny uses her magic to bring ingredients to life and begins instructing them. "Eggs, flours, and milk," Jenny said, showing a book to the ingredients. "Do what the book said. I put the candles in last." The ingredients and obeyed and begin making a cake on their own. Things turned out very fine for the three so far. That is until Jake sees the dress. "Oh man, black and red?" groaned Jake in annoyance. Then he points his amulet. "Make it red!" Jake send a spell at the dress changing it red. Danny, who was still working on it, looks annoyed as it happened. "Jake! Make it black and white!" snapped Danny as he zaps the clothes with his ghostly powers changing them back to black and white. Jake begins to dance a bit then points his amulet. "Make it red!" Jake yelled. Jake turns the clothes back to red. "Black and white!" yelled Danny in annoyance changing the colors back. "Red!" Jake yelling firing his spell. But his spell was a bit off and he hits Danny instead changing his clothes red. This was the last straw. "THIS HAS GONE TOO FAR, DRAGON MAN! TAKE THIS!" yelled Danny firing a zap at Jake. The spell hits the American Dragon changing him black and white. In annoyance, Jake fires back. Soon the whole two went into a color war. Jenny, still working on the cake, was the only one not in the middle of it. Unknown to the three however, some of blazes of colors went through the chimney, which they forgot to plugged up. Somewhere in the forest, the weasels ride through it in their paddy wagon. "We're lost! We can never find them!" Stupid complained. "Oh shut up, Stupid. We can find them sooner or later!" snapped Wise Guy. "But boss, he's right. We have searched this forest for hours and haven't found that Asian girl." protested Wheezy coughing while driving. "May I asked why do you even worked for him?" Sarah asked with a frown. "You know what kind of freak my brother is." "Hey, he's our boss and he takes care of us, cousin." snapped Greasy. "Yeah, he lets us stay in his fortress, didn't he?" Psycho asked. "True, but still..." "Watch out!" Psycho yelled in panic, seeing something in the road. Wheezy yelped and nearly fell off the road. He stops the paddy wagon. "What the blazes happened?" demands Wise Guy. "As usual, you idiotic weasels never could watch where you're going." The weasels looked out of the paddy wagon. In the middle of the road stood a purple cat that stood on its two legs. He has an evil smirk on his face and sharp like claws. The weasels knew him and they don't liked him. His name...is Katz. "What do you want, Katz?" demands Wise Guy in annoyance. He doesn't like Katz because the cat is considered the judge's favorite since he can do things that the weasels were unable to do. Sarah doesn't like him because of his cruelty and evil. "Your master and my partner Judge Doom is not sure that you would be able to find Princess Juniper Lee. So he send me to make sure you find him." Katz explained. "I'm not surprised. My brother never could trusted us to do anything right." Sarah said rolling her eyes. "Yeah. Couldn't he let us do our own assignments without your ugly mug?" asked Wise Guy in agreement. "He doesn't looked a cup." Stupid said confused. Wise Guy hits him to shut him up. "So far you weasels has yet to find her. I can tell. I, on the other hand, have great suspicions that the princess is here and is being watched by those three heroes Danny Phantom, Jenny Wakeman, and Jake Long." Katz said. "With me, you can find them sooner than later." "Senor Katz, are you suggesting we would be at this for all time?" demands Greasy. "Precisely." "Ooh! Look. Pretty colors." Stupid said pointing to the guys. The weasels and Katz looked and sees some fireworks in the sky. "My, what is that?" Katz asked as she got into the paddy wagon. "Wheezy, follow that trail!" orders Wise Guy. "Right boss." coughed Wheezy as he drove the paddy wagon in the direction of the commotion. They soon got closer to the paddy wagon and hid it so no one could find it. Stupid looks out one of the windows of the paddy wagon. One of the color spells flies down and nearly hits him. "Ouch!" yelped Stupid as he fell back into the wagon. "What happened?" Sarah asked. Katz smiles evilly. "Offhand. I think we just found her." Back inside, the 'war' continues until both Danny and Jake hits the dress at the same time. Soon the dress now looks liked it was mixed with red, black, and white. Danny and Jake steps up to it, Danny looking very crossed. "Look what you done now!" yelled Danny at Jake angrily. "What I done? Look what you done!" yelled Jake back. "Guys, listen!" Jenny said quieting them down. Indeed, the three stopped talking when they hear some familiar singing coming towards the building. "Dude, it's Hikari!" exclaimed Jake. "Enough of this. Change back and let's get ready." Danny said, changing back into his human self. Jake and Jenny agrees. Jake changes back into his human self while Jenny puts her exo-skin back on. They hid all their magic stuff and goes to hide. Jake stops long and looked at the dress. "Make it red." Jake whispered as he zaps the dress, changing it to red before he goes hide. Outside, Hikari heads towards the house looking excited about today. "Uncle Danny!" said Hikari excited. Inside, as the three hides, Danny yelps as he sees that one of the mops is still mopping. "Hey, who left the mop running?" asked Danny alarmed. "Stop mop!" exclaimed Jake zapping the mop, changing it back to normal in the nick of time, making it fell to the ground motionless. Hikari opens the door and came to him. Unknown to him, Doom's weasels and Katz peek into the building, interested. "Uncle Danny? Aunt Jenny? Uncle Jake?" Hikari called out into the building. Where are you?" Hikari called. Then she stops upon seeing her dress and cake. She looks surprised. "Oh!" "Surprise, surprise, surprise!" said Danny, Jenny, and Jake happily as they jumped out. "Happy birthday, Hikari." Jenny said wiht a smile. "Oh, thank you!" said Hikari more happy than ever. "This is the best day of my life so far! It's great! Wait until you meet him!" "Wait, him?" Danny asked alarmed. "Hikari!" Jake gasped in shock. "Did you meet a stranger?" "Of course not! He's no stranger! We met before." Hikari said smiling warmly. "You did?" Danny asked nervously. "Where?" Jake asked. "Once upon a dream." said Hikari with a smile. She takes Jenny's hand and begins to dance with her while singing. Hikari: know you I walked with you Once upon a dream... "Wow, she's in love." Jenny said surprised to Danny and Jake. "What?" gasped Jake in horror. "Oh man. This is bad." Danny said with a groan. Hikari hears this and stops dancing. "What do you mean? I'm 16 now. I should go out with whoever I want." Hikari pointed out. "It's not that, Hikari." said Danny with a sad sigh. "It's just...you're already betrothed." Jenny added. "Betrothed?" asked Hikari surprised. "Since you were a baby." explained Jake. "To Chris Fields, a fire caster." Jenny concluded grimly. "Okay, that sounded...ridiculous. Besides, why can I be betrothed already? Shouldn't I be a princess or something?" Hikari said with a frown. "But you are, a princess." Jake said sadly. "You are Princess Juniper Lee and we aren't your uncles and aunt. We are the heroes known as Danny Phantom, XJ9, and the American Dragon." Jenny explained. "No way! You're lying!" protested Hikari in shocked. Danny sighs sadly then transformed into his ghost ghost. Then Jenny removes her exo-skin to revealed her robot self. Hikari looks shocked at each exposure. But it wasn't until Jake transformed into his American Dragon self, that she finally understood. "You mean...I am really Princess Juniper Lee?" asked Hikari, now June, in horror. "Yes and tonight, we are returning you to your dad, Michael Lee." Danny said, hanging his head down in shame. Outside, the weasels chuckled madly. "It's the princess and those heroes." Wise Guy said with a grin. "Get the judge." "No, you idiots stay here and make sure that they returned to the castle. I'd take care of everything." Katz smiled as he walks off. Sarah frowns. Why is it that Katz always so interested in not giving any credit to her fellow weasels? "Tonight?" June gasped back inside the building in horror. "But...I can't! I promised to meet him here tonight!" "June, I'm sorry. But you must never see that boy again." Danny Phantom said sadly. "No! I don't believe it! It's not fair!" cried June a bunch of tears as she runs upstairs to her room. Jake watches and sighs sadly. "Man, I was hoping she would be happy." In Hikari's room, the former Hikari herself jumps onto her bed and cried to herself, believing that she will never see the boy she has come to love again. Author's note So June has fallen in love with the boy she has no idea she was betrothed to at first. And now that she know who she really is, she thinks she will never see him again. But is that true? 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| JusSonic | Aug 7 2006, 04:47 PM Post #5 |
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Michael Lee sighs as he looks out the window of his castle. He is concerned and for very good reason. "My daughter has yet to returned home James." Michael said with a frown James Fields is currently at the table eating some food. He chuckles at what Michael just said. "Well it isn't sunset yet so why worry?" asked James. He takes a bite out of a chicken leg and smiles. "Good food as always." James notes that Michael is still concerned and continued, "Come now, what is it to be worrying about? The battle's over and your daughter is as good as here." "I know." Michael sighs. "But it has been 16 years since I have seen June and I am concerned that Doom may got her by now." "Well the judge didn't make a move yet so let's say that he doesn't know where your daughter is and we keep it at that." James insisted. "Now it's time to celebrate with what I saved for 16 years!" James claps his hands and a yellow-skinned man fat man in a pink shirt and green pants came in very drunkenly. His name is Barney Grumble and he's holding some wine for James. "Here's the wine you wanted, James. BURP!" said Barney then burped. "Thank you," James chuckles as he fills two cups with wine. He gives one cup to Michael and holds his own up to make a toast. "Now! To the future!" "The future." Michael said going along. Barney drunkenly takes a guitar out and begins to play a song as Michael and James sings. James: Skumps! Michael: Skumps James: A toast to this night Michael The outlook is rosy James: The future is bright Both: Our children will marry, our kingdoms unite. Skumps, Skumps, Skumps! "What is Skumps? Must be beer? BURP!" said Barney as he drinks some wine without Michael and James knowing. "Very good as usual. Now to the new home!" announced James happily. This caused Michael offguard. "Wait, new home?" "Well, our kids must have a place of their own to stay in and raised their own kids, isn't that right?" James asked with a smile. "I supposed in due time." "I know! To the home!" James said raising his cup again to make another toast. "Skumps!" Barney continues playing again as he drinks like a mule. Michael: Skumps! James: A toast to the home Michael: One grander by far than a palace in Rome James: Let me fill up your glass, That glass was all foam. Both: Skumps, Skumps, Skumps! Barney hiccups a bit then collapsed. "Well, that's done! Time for the plans! The plans!" James yelled out. One of James's servants rushed in holding some plans for a home. James takes it and shows it to Michael. "Very good place, eh? Nothing too fancy. It has 40 bedrooms, dining room, honeymoon cottage, what they need, it's there." "I see. Are you working on it already?" asked Michael with a frown. This made James laughed. "Already? It's already done! Tomorrow, the love birds will moved on!" "Now hold on, James! They aren't married yet!" protested Michael in shock. "Well tonight will solve that problem. To the wedding!" exclaimed James happily holding his cup again to make another toast. "You're rushing things, James. I haven't seen my daughter June yet and now you're taking her away from me?" James frowns as he glares at Michael. "Well, you want Chris to married your daughter, correct?" "Well, yes." "And you want to see our grandchildren, correct?" Michael looks puzzled. "True. But..." "Then what's your problem, Michael?" laughed James. "You're getting on in years! To the wedding!" "Be reasonable, James! June didn't even know about the wedding yet!" protested Michael. "And?" "Well, it would come to a shock when..." James misunderstood when he interrupts angrily. "Shock? My son Chris a shock? What's wrong with my boy?" "I only meant..." "Are you suggesting that your daughter will not liked my son?" demands James upset. "Now hold on!" Michael begins to protested. "Maybe my son doesn't like your daughter!" "Again hold on!" snapped Michael, getting more annoyed with James's attitude. "Maybe my grandchildren doesn't want you got a grandfather, did you think of that?" "Why you old unreasonable, stupid, old windbag!" yelled Michael angrily. "Unreasonable, poumpus...?" This crosses the line. James grabs a fish nearby and waves it at Michael angrily. "Prepare for battle!" "This means war, James!" yelled Michael using a plate to defend himself. The two begin to fight each other with fish and plates for what seems to be a long period of time. Soon they stopped as they realized what they're doing. They paused for a bit and laughed. "My, this is...silly, isn't it, Michael?" chuckled James embarrassingly. "What is it we're fighting about anyway?" "Oh nothing. I think we were fighting for no good reason." laughed Michael back. "To tell you the truth, I think our kids will meet and when they do, they are bound to fall for each other." "I hope so. As for our grandchildren, I will have my best woodcravers work on the cradles first thing tomorrow." said Michael with a smile. "Very good! King size, I hope." said James in delight. "To the woodcravers!" James is about to make a toast when he hears a snoring and winding combined noise. He looks under the table and sees Barney sleeping drunked. "He never could keep his liquor." said James with a smirk. Suddenly a trumpet is heard outside. "Approaching Chris Fields, the fire caster!" yelled an announcer. "Chris's back." said James with a smile. Outside the castle, James runs outside to greet Chris as he rode in on Haku. "Chris, Chris! Slow down, Haku!" Haku slows down just in front of James. "You have returned from your ride I see. Come on, we got to put you in something more suitable. Your future wife will be here any moment and you don't want her seeing you like that." "I wouldn't go there, James." warned Haku. "Doesn't matter what she thinks. I've met her, dad." said Chris happiyl as he got off Haku. "You have? Where?" asked James puzzled. "Once upon a dream!" Chris begins to danced with his father singing. Until James cut the song short. "Now hold it, hold everything!" yelled James alarmed. "What's this dream nonsense? Did you fall asleep while you were out?" "Oh, but I wasn't dreaming! I really met him!" said Chris excited. "Here we go." Haku sighs with a groan. "You did?" asked James surprised. "You met Princess Juniper Lee? This is incredible! We must let Michael know about this!" "Hold on. Who said it was Juniper?" asked Chris laughing. "But you said..." Chris interrupts his father with a smile as he said, "I met the girl I wanted to marry. Don't know her name but she's the nicest peasant girl I have ever met." "Peasant girl?" yelled James in shock. "You're joking!" James turned to Haku in hope. "Tell me he's joking." "I'm afraid he isn't. I saw her myself." sighs Haku. "What? Chris, you can't do this! You can't give up everything you knew just for some peasant girl! I won't allow it! You're supposed to be married whom you are betrothed to!" snapped James to his son angrily. "Ahh, this is the 21st Century, dad. Get with the times." Chris said with a smirk. "But I am still your father. And such. I want you to come to your senses." "And marry the girl I love." said Chris with a smile. "That's right." James smiled, thinking Chris has come to his senses, though not the way he wanted. "Thanks dad! I have to find him! Come on, Haku!" yelled Chris as he got on the dragon. Haku groans but rode anyway. "That's right. Go marry the boy you..." James suddenly stopped as he horribly realized what Chris just said. He turns and yelled uselessly, "No! Chris! Come back! Chris, Chris?" But it's too late, Chris has since come out of hearing range leaving a horrified James behind. "Oh no. What am I going to tell Michael?" asked James with a groan. Author's note This is going to be trouble. Chris plans to married the girl he just met, not realizing that it's really June. And James is concerned on what to tell Michael. Things are heating up now. 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| JusSonic | Aug 8 2006, 04:06 PM Post #6 |
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Later that night, Danny, Jenny, and Jake left the forest very cautiously towards the castle. They planned on bringing June back home without any problems. The girl in question is behind them wearing a cloak and her new dress, not speaking a word. They managed to get in unnoticed and into a room of the castle. "All right, in here." Danny told June as the sad girl came in. As June is the last to come in, Jake closes the door and sighs sadly as he looks at the depressed June. "Lock the door, Jake." Danny instructed, "Jenny, close the curtains. We need to make sure no one would know she has returned yet." Jenny closes all the curtains until the room is as dark as a tomb. "Okay, June, if you sit over here." Danny instructed to June to a table with a mirror on it. June takes her cloak out and sits down in the front of the table, still without a word. "Now, our last gift for you." Danny said as he waves a hand. A crown appears and Danny takes it. "The symbol of your royalty, which you should wear in grace and honor, as it is your rightful and royal duty." June didn't respond as Danny puts the crown on her head. Jenny and Jake looks concerned. "Aren't you happy, June?" Jenny asked hopefully. June looked at herself in the mirror. Soon she begins to break into tears and put her head into her arms on the table. "June, I..." Jenny begins to say but stopped as she sighs sadly. "Come on. I think she wants to be alone for a while." Danny said as he heads to the door. As June remains behind still crying, the three left the room, Jake is the last one out, closing the door. He frowns. "Aw man. It's that boy she met." Jake groaned. "He totally messed things up, pals." "I agree. I mean, things were fine until he came in." Danny's wife agreed. "How can we take care of this new problem?" Danny notices his wife is looking at him. He sighs sadly. "I don't know, Jenny. I don't know." Inside the room, June is still crying. As she does, the fire in the fireplace nearby goes out. Something appears from it and became some sort of light. June looks up and sees it. She got and walks towards it as if in a trance. Back outside, his guardians did not know what was going on as they spoke amongst themselves. "I don't know why she has to marry some guy she hasn't met yet. Personally, if I wanted to married, say, Rose, I would see her first." Jake said with a frown. "I don't like it either Jake but we don't have a say in the matter." Jenny sighs. Back in the room, a wall behind the fireplace opens up and the light goes beyond on it. June continues following it, still in a trance. "Maybe we should tell Michael about the boy?" suggested Jenny. "He may find a way to fix this." "Yeah, why not?" agreed Jake. Danny was about to respond when he hears a faint noise. "Hold it! What's that?" Jenny uses her radar function and gasps. "June's no longer in the other room!" Jenny announced in horror. "Doom!" Danny yelled in horror. The three run back into the room and sure enough, to their horror, they see that June is no longer around. "Oh no! Why did we leave her alone?" groaned Danny. The three then sees June walking through the fireplace. "Hikari, Hikari!" cried the three as they ran after her. But the wall reappears, stopping them before they could catch up to Danny. Behind the fireplace in a passageway, June is still following the enchanting light walking up a bunch of stairs. Back in the other room, the three tries pushing the wall open with no light. Danny then fires a zap at the wall, destroying it. The three run into the passageway. "Hikari, Hikari! Where are you Hikari?" called the trio. But there are a lot of passageways going off the fireplace and they didn't find the right one June used right away. Meanwhile, June continued following the light until she reaches a part of the castle which is the tower. As June watched, the light then turned into a quartz crystal. For some reason, the crystal is calling to her. June, with curiosity, goes towards it and reached out to try it. The trio finally found the stairs and runs up it yelling "Hikari! Don't touch anything!" The last word is in echo. Back in the tower, June holds her hand back in hesitation. But then a strange voice calls out to him. "Touch the quartz crystal, touch it I say!" ordered the voice. Obeying the voice, June touches the quartz and, in a flash of light, she pokes her finger on it. The trio runs up the stairs in hopes they reached June in time. Unfortunately, when they get to the top of the stairs, they see something in front of them that made them gasped in horror... Judge Doom. The evil judge smirked evilly as he said, "My, my. We meet again, young heroes. You think you could keep the princess hidden from me for long? You think you could defeat me, the greatest and terrifying judge of all time?" Judge Doom laughs as he continues. "You thought wrong. Looking for your princess? Well, here she is right now!" Judge Doom moved aside to reveal June on the floor laying face down. The trio gasped again. June is now in a deep sleep, the same sleep they tried to avoid. As they watched on, Judge Doom disappeareds laughing at his victory. "Hikari!" cried Jenny as she and the other two run over to him. They try to wake him up but to no prevail. "Oh, Jenny." cried Danny as she uses Jenny's shoulder to cry on. "It's all myself." "We're all to blame." said Jenny sadly as she comforts her husband. Jake shred some tears also as he looks at the now deep sleep Juniper Lee. Author's note Oh no. The heroes has failed and now June is trapped in a deep sleep. The only way they can break the curse over her if June gets true love's first kiss. But what will Michael and everyone else if they find out? With Chris looking for the peasant girl, still not knowing it is June, will he returned and be the one to kissed June? And what will Judge Doom's next move be? 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| JusSonic | Aug 9 2006, 04:29 PM Post #7 |
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Inside the castle, as the sun itself is about to set, James approaches Michael and his wife sitting on their thrones. The man is nervous. How is he going to explain that their plan to married their children together won't work out? "Uh, Michael. I got something to tell you." James said to Michael nervously. "Can't. I'm waiting for June." Michael told James. "But it's about Chris!" "Oh yes. Where is he? He must be here." "Let me tell you! He's..." Michael interrupts James, "Go fetch him at once. Sundown is almost here." "But..." Suddenly a fanfare souns interrupting him. Outside the castle, the announcer speaks before a bunch of people as the sun finally set. "The sun has set! Please welcome the return of Princess Juniper Lee!" exclaimed the announcer happily. The crowd cheers, believing that the worst has not come to passed. Too bad it did. Inside the tower, the heroes are crying near June, sleeping in her bed. They have set up the bedroom for her for they couldn't have the heart to take her to very own. As June sleeps, she holds a flower in her hands. The three heroes sighs and looked out the nearby window in happiness. "Poor Michael and his wife." Jenny said sadly. "When they find out, they will be so heartbroken." Jake agreed. Danny pauses to think the smiles. "Maybe they don't have to." "What do you mean, Danny?" asked Jake puzzled. ""Simple. We will put everyone in the castle in a deep sleep. It will only broken at the same time June wakes up from his sleep." Jenny smiles. "That's a good idea! That way, they won't have to know!" "Come on, we got a job to do!" Danny Phantom then went invisible, Jenny turns her invisible function on, while Jake casts a spell to make himself invisible. They soon get to work. They fly around the castle casting a sleeping spell on everyone. No one notices as they fell into a deep sleep. That way, when June wakes up, everyone else will acted like nothing has happened. In the throne room, everyone is being put to sleep. Jake notices that Barney is looking around drunkeningly and confused. Jake casts the sleeping spell on him and he fell back under a table sleeping. As Danny casts a sleeping spell on Michael, Mrs. Lee, and James, Chris's father begins to mumbled, "I spoke to Chris earlier. You couldn't believe what he told me. He has fallen for some sort of...peasant girl..." Danny begins to fly off but stopped when James mentioned the words 'peasant girl'. "Peasant girl?" said Danny surprised. Under curiosity, he flew back to James and spoke to him while still invisible, "Yes? The peasant girl? Who is she? Where did he meet her?" "It's just some peasant girl." James mumbled to no one in particular since Michael and Mrs. Lee has fallen asleep and Danny is still invisible. "Come on, tell me! Where did he meet her?" "Once upon a dream." mumbled James as he finally fell asleep. "Once upon a..." Danny gasped. "Hikari! Chris!" Danny, remembering what Hikari told him, Jenny, and Jake earlier and put two and two together with James's story. Quickly, Danny flew back to Jenny and Jake who got their work done. "Well, we did it." Jenny said as she become visibile again. "We put everyone but us to sleep. Now we need to find June's true love." "That's why I'm here!" exclaimed Danny as he became visibile again. "I just found out who that boy June has met!' "Huh? Who?" Jake asked puzzled. "It was Chris Fields!" "What?" shouted Jake and Jenny at once, both shocked at hearing this new piece of info. "We got to get back to the building!" Danny yelled as he ran out of the room with Jenny and Jake following. Meanwhile Chris, unaware of what happened at Michael's place, has arrived at the building on Haku, whistiling 'once upon a dream'. When they arrived, Chris got off. "I do hope you know what you're doing, Chris." Haku sighs. "Trust me. My dad will understand." Chris points out as he goes to the door. He then knocks. "Come in." said a voice. "Must be one of her guardians." said Chris with a shrug as he opens the door and went in. "Hello?" asked Chris to the darkness but no one answers. Suddenly the door slams close. "Get him!" yelled a voice. Chris is alarmed as several of Clone Troopers attacked him, his hat fell to the floor. Chris tries to fight them off with his fire casting attacks but soon they took him down and tied him up. As the Clone Troopers brought Chris to his knees, he sees someone coming towards him. It is Judge Doom, followed by Katz and his weasels. Doom looked at Chris and smirked. "Well, how ironic. I was looking for a peasant and I got a fire caster instead." chuckled Judge Doom. "Judge Doom! What is the meaning of this? I didn't commit no crime!" demands Chris angrily. "You were breaking and entering." explains Katz with a smirk. "I thought the boss invited him in." said Stupid stupidly. "Whatever crime we arrested him for, the boss will explained, right boss?" Wise Guy asked Doom. Sarah frowns but did not speak up. "Indeed. Take him to my Dark Fortress but don't be too rough on him. I got plans for our guest." Chris growled as the Clone Troopers takes him away. As they take him outside, he gasps as he sees Haku seized and chained up. "What crime did he committed, brother?" Sarah asked Judge Doom. "Nothing." Judge Doom said with a smile. "But why did we arrested him?" asked Psycho confused. "Silence! I refused to be questioned!" The weasels went silent but Sarah didn't. "Look, Domonic, this is getting ridiculous! What are you up to?" demands Sarah. Judge Doom whacks Sarah to the floor with his cane. "Never questioned me or called me by that name again!" "Hey! You can't do that to my other cousin, cousin!" Greasy gasped in shock. "Silence! We must leave now!" Katz chuckled as Doom leaves with him in tow. The weasels helped Sarah up. Sarah glares at her brother. 'He is up to something.' thought Sarah. Danny, Jake, and Jenny arrives back at the building later. But when they came in, they gasped upon seeing something on the floor. "Chris's hat!" exclaimed Danny as he picks the hat off. "Judge Doom!" Jenny cried. "That playa hater got him!" announced Jake. Danny narrows his eyes. "Then there's one thing we got to do. We got to go to the Dark Fortress." "Not there, Danny! No one goes there and came back again!" Jenny pointed out in terror. "We got to and we must." Danny said. The three looked determined and concerned at the same time. The Dark Fortress is said to be inescapable, impossible to escaped. But they got to go there. If not for Chris's sake, but for Hikari/June's. Author's note Doom kidnapped Chris Fields. The heroes must now brave the evil of the Dark Fortress to rescued Chris and get him back to the castle to free June from the sleeping spell. But Judge Doom has a big plan in store and he isn't about to let the heroes win that easily. The final battle and chapter is coming soon! |
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| JusSonic | Aug 10 2006, 08:35 PM Post #8 |
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Danny, Jenny, and Jake arrives at the domain of Judge Doom's Dark Fortress. Despite its evil looking look, they have to brave it if they were to save Chris. They swallowed whatever fear they have and went in, sneaking around quietly. Whenever a guard comes their way, they hide to avoid being seen. This continues for a few minutes or so until they arrived at a view overlooking a dining room. They looked and sees the Clone Troopers, helmets off to revealed they are indeed all alike, eating and celebrating. "I didn't know they were all twins." Jenny said surprised. "Why do you think they're called clones?" Jake asked. "Sssh." Danny said as he points at a table. There is Doom at his table eating along with Katz and his weasels. "Oh boy! This is fun! I can't wait to do whatever you want us to do next, boss." Wheezy coughed. "Indeed." Judge Doom said nodding. Katz looks in a view in the toon crystal and smirks. "Hey Doom. Check this out." Katz said pointing to the crystal. Doom looked and smirked. "Well, well. Michael and his whole castle is asleep. Seems like those heroes did more than hide the princess from me." "Make us wished that Chris kid can see this." said Stupid. "That is an idea. I shall go to the dungeon and cheer him up." Doom said standing up. "We'd go with you, cousin!" said Greasy. "No, no. You stay here and have fun. I will only take Katz with me." "Why does you always picked him over all or one of us?" asked Psycho with a frown. He is still annoyed that Doom has once again picked Katz. "Come on. Just stay here. Doom's conversion will be boring. No need to ruined your fun, right?" Katz pointed out. "I guess you're right." Doom and Katz leaves the room. Frowning, Sarah got up and begins to follow. "Hey, where are you going?" asked Wise Guy. "I'm following my brother." Sarah explained. "He doesn't want us to come!" "Well, I'm going anyway! He's up to something and I will find out what. You can stay here and party if you like. I'm going." Sarah then turns and leaves the room going after her brother. "Wait up, sweet heart!" yelled Psycho getting up and following his girlfriend. "Wait for me, senorita cousin." agrees Greasy following. "Suddenly this party got boring. May as well see what Doom's doing." Wheezy coughed as he leaves after. Wise Guy and Stupid glared at each other, Stupid more stupidly. Wise Guy sighs. "They win." Wise Guy said getting up, following his fellow weasels with Stupid in tow. Unknown to any of them, Danny, Jenny, and Jake begins to followed as well. As the heroes followed, they avoid being seen by Doom, Katz, the weasels (who are avoid being seen themselves), and the Clone Troopers. Soon Doom and Katz came to a cell and Doom opens it. The weasels stops and hides to listen from the door. Meanwhile Jake casts a spell on himself, Danny, and Jenny so they could fly into a hole which leads into the cell. When they arrived, they see something that made them gasped. It's Chris, chained to a wall. Doom approached him. "Enjoy your stay, young Fields?" Judge Doom asked with a smirk. "Why am I here? I didn't commit any crime like I said before!" snapped Chris. "And when I get free, I will burned you to the ground!" "Try it and you'd be the one who gets burned." mocked Katz. "Now, now, Chris. Don't be like that. You should be lucky." Doom said with a smile. "Why's that?" Chris asked with a frown. "You got a bright future ahead of you. You are going to be in a real life fairy tale as the main star." As everyone watches and as the weasels listened, Doom uses his toon crystal to show an image of Michael's castle. "Here you see is the castle of Michael Lee. In the yondest tower is where the princes Juniper now lies." Doom now shows June asleep in her bed. Chris's eyes widen in surprise as he recognizes her. "That's..." Doom interrupts. "Yes, the same maiden who won your heart before. She didn't know who she was until recently. She was hidden so I won't find him." "She is beautiful, isn't she?" Katz said as Chris looks at June longingly and hopefully. "Hair anyone would killed to have, lips that shame the red, red rose. In ageless sleep, she gets repose." "Let me go. I got to go to her." Chris demands. Doom chuckles. "Oh you will. Once your 'sentence' is up in about, say, 100 years? Speaking of which, 100 years has rolled by and the gates opened up and the great fire caster is free to go on his way on his dragon!" Doom now shows another image to Chris. To the fire caster's shock, it shows a future version of Chris leaving the Dark Fortress riding on Haku, but Chris looks very old and Haku doesn't look so well either. The next words Doom has is in sarcasm, "A valiant figure, straight and tall, to wake his love with love's first kiss, and prove that true love conquers all." This upsets Chris enough to stand up and tries to go at Doom but the chains keeps him now. Doom and Katz laughs at this. "You dark-hearted gargoyle!" yelled Jake as he tries to charge at Doom. But Danny pulls the American Dragon away back into hiding. And just in time as Katz hears him and turns but did not see him, Danny, or Jenny. He does narrows his eyes in suspicion. "Very strange." mumbled Katz. "Come, Katz. Let's leave our guest with these new thoughts." Doom said as he takes his leave. Katz follows, leaving a depressed fire caster in his wake. The weasels hears Doom leaving and goes to hide. Doom leaves the cell. And Katz is the next to come out, Doom relocks the door. "What a great day. For the first time in 16 years, I will sleep well." Judge Doom said with a smile. "With the Te Xuan Ze and the castle asleep and the fire caster in my hold, I will begin the plan I was waiting a long time for." "Oh yes. The one where you caught chaos in the land, right?" Katz said remembering. "Yes. With no Te Xuan Ze to keep the balance, I am able to do what I couldn't because of the balance. I shall poured my Dip and makes this world a big nightmare for Chris when or if he leaves. Seeing the land he has last seen so beautiful now a waste land will be enough to killed him and enough so the Te Xuan Ze will never wake up again." "That's it? He's going to Dip everything?" asked Sarah in shock. "Well, that's nothing new or something to be concern about." Wise Guy said with a shrug. "And what shall we do with those weasels?" asked Katz. "They are no use to me anymore. They will be the first to be dipped." Judge Doom said with a smirk. The other weasels gasped. Luckily, Doom and Katz didn't hear them. "I knew it." Sarah said upset. "I can't believe it!" said Wheezy coughing. "He's dipping us!" "I love potato dip!" said Stupid. Wise Guy hits him. "And once all is done, I will take over what's left. My goodness. What a fine day that would be." Judge Doom chuckled then the chuckle turns to an evil laugh as he leaves. Katz followed but take a glance at the cell as he leaves. Back inside the cell, once they are certain that Doom and Katz are gone, Danny, Jenny, and Jake flies down to the cell floor and grows back to normal. Chris is startled upon seeing them. "What?" Who..." Danny interrupts Chris. "No time to explain." Danny then zaps Chris's clocks on the chains while Jenny and Jake gets to work on the cell door. Soon Chris is free. The fire caster smiles as he rubs his hands and got up. "Cool! Now I got to saved June!" Chris exclaimed. "Wait, Chris. The path to true love may still be blocked by obstacles." Danny warned. "You must face those obstacles alone. I shall armed you with these weapons." Dannyh waves a hand and a sword and shield appears in Chris's hand, much to Chris's surprise and delight. "The Fire Sword and Fire Shield, weapons of the fire casters. These weapons will helped triumph over evil." "Darn it!" yelled Jake in frustration. Jenny and Jake tried their best but so far, the cell door won't opened. "We can't get this thing opened! Man, we are so..." Suddenly Jake hears a click and the cell door opens. "What?" asked Jenny in surprise. Danny, Jenny, Jake, and Chris leaves the cell and are startled to see Doom's weasels outside. "Weasels!" Chris yells, getting his weapons ready. "Hold it! We aren't going to hurt you mugs!" protested Wise Guy. "Oh yeah. Tell us another one. You're working for Judge Doom." snapped Danny, hands glowing. "You got to understand." Sarah said, stepping up. "Who are you?" Jenny asked puzzled. She hasn't seen this weasel before. "My name is Sarah, I am Domonic's sister." "Domonic?" asked Jake also puzzled. "That's Judge Doom's real name, the one he doesn't want anyone to say in public. Look, we wanted to help you escape the Dark Fortress." "Yeah! Because Doom is going to use the Dip to dipped everything, including us!" explained Psycho. "He wants to use the Dip to do what?" asked Danny alarmed. "With the senorita Te Xuan Ze asleep, there is no amigo to keep the balance so he can use his Dip without any problems. We wouldn't have you amigos if we didn't know Doom is going to dipped us all." explained Greasy. "Come on! Let's get before Doom finds catches on." Stupid said pointing towards a direction. Although reluctant to trust the weasels, especially one they haven't seen until up to now, they decided to go along. The group runs a hallway. But as they turned a corner, Katz is there waiting for them. "Jailbreak, jailbreak!" yelled Katz as he runs off screaming. "Stupid, you idiot!" Wise Guy yelled. "Anyone, move!" yelled Danny as he and his friends the other way. As they run up a bunch of stairs, they stopped as laser fire is send at them. They see the Clone Troopers charging at them and so the fight begins. Danny blasts some of the Troopers, Jenny punches and kicks some out of the way, Jake burns some with his dragon fire, the weasels uses their toon tricks, while Chris fights them off with fireballs, Fire Sword, and Fire Shield. Soon the heroes managed to get outside and run off. They found Haku chained to the ground. As they runs towards, the Clone Troopers fires energy balls at them. "Look out, Chris!" yelled Danny as he zaps the energy ablls turning them into harmless soap bubbles. Next, the Clone Troopers fires arrows but Jenny uses a spell to turned those into harmless flowers. During this, Jake flies over and breaks Haku's chains, freeing him. "Thank you, fellow dragon." said Haku, then with a roar, he spits out flames of his own at the Clone Troopers, destroying some of them. "Let's get outta here!" Psycho screamed. Chris got on Haku and begins to fly away with Danny, Jenny, and Jake flying right after. Near the other exit out of the room, the Clone Troopers use desperate measures and begins to dumped a bunch of Dip downward. But Danny zaps the Dip making a rainbow, making a path for the group to get through. "You won't escaped!" yelled Katz shaking his fists. "You weasels will be destroyed for your treachery once I get Judge Doom!" "Not on my watch, cat!" yelled Jake as he now chases after Katz. Jake spits flames and fires spells at Katz as the evil cat but Katz keep dodging. Jake is frustrated as he sees that Katz is almost to Doom's tower of the Dark Fortress. Thinking quickly, Jake goes in another direction. "Judge Doom!" yelled Katz as he is almost to the judge's door. But Jake came out of nowhere and zaps Katz. Katz looks shocked as he is turned into stone. Jake smiles in triumph. Then he flies off. With all the commotion the battle has cause, it's enough to get Doom out of his tower. "What's going on out here?" demands Judge Doom angrily. "Katz, tell those fools..." Doom stopped startled as he sees that Katz is now a statue. "What?" Doom looked from his tower and gasped in horror as he sees that Chris on Haku is almost onto the fortress gates. "No! Close the drawbridge!" yelled Doom alarmed. The drawbridge is now closing on Doom's orders. "Watch out, Chris!" yelled Danny. Chris smirks. "Uh, I'm on a dragon, remember?" Sure enough, Haku speeds forward and he with Chris on it make it out the drawbridge with Danny, Jenny and Jake still following. "Now why didn't we fly over the wall?" asked Jenny puzzled. "Because of Doom's spell that keeps people from climbing or flying in." explained Sarah. "Oh." "Ha! Let's see Domonic catches us now!" laughed Wise Guy. Wise Guy has spoke too soon however. Judge Doom activated his Dip cannons and begins firing Dip at random trying to hit them but the heroes managed to dodge it. Instead, Dip landed on the ground making big puddles, threatening to destroy anyone who even goes into it. Judge Doom growls as he sees that the heroes are almost to Michael's castle. "Si! My cousin is crazy!" yelled Greasy as some Dip nearly came close to hitting them. "When did you figure that out?" yelled Sarah. "Recently, where have you been?" asked Wheezy confused. "Hurry, Chris!" Danny yelled as he flies towards the direction of Michael's castle. Doom frowns as he puts the toon crystal on top of his cane. "A forest of thorn shall be his tomb. Born through the skies on a fog of doom. Now go with the curse and serve me well, Round Michael's castle cast by spell!" chanted Judge Doom making an evil spell. Soon a black cloud appears over the castle. As lightning strikes everywhere, a bunch of thorns appeared blocking the whole castle. Chris, Haku, the heroes, and the weasels stopped short. Judge Doom laughed at this. Chris looks on this for a moment. His face became filled with determination and he begins cutting away with his Fire Sword. "We must helped Chris make it through!" said Haku as he begins clawing at the thorns. Danny, Jenny, Jake agrees and got to work, blasting, firing, and destroying the thorns. Chris got caught on some thorns but Jake spit fires at them, setting the boy free. Chris glances at the tower for a moment then continues on. Judge Doom watches in horror as Chris and his allies finally made it through and are approaching the castle. "NOOOOOO! THIS CAN'T BE!" yelled Judge Doom in some sort of squeaking voice. Then, making a noise like a rocket, he zips towards the castle. Before Chris could even coming closer on Haku, Judge Doom appears in an explosion, blocking his way. "Doom!" yelled Haku. Judge Doom begins to laugh a very wacky laugh. "Now you shall deal with me, young fire caster, and all my TOON POWERS!" screamed Judge Doom. The evil judge exploded once more. As everyone watches, Judge Doom's skin fell to the ground. "What the...?" Chris asked in precaution as he sees the skin. "Oh no. I think I know where this is going." said Sarah concerned. As the smoke clears, Chris's group sees that the skin is actually a human costume. The real Doom standing before them is a weasel just like Sarah and the other weasels. He's darker violet, his bangs are bent and upward, making it look spikey, demon red eyes, slants of an egyptian. "Holy dragons, he's a weasel!" yelled Jake alarmed. "Surprise?" giggled the weasel Judge Doom. "Not really." Danny said shaking his head. "Only turning the land into a waste by using Dip got to come from a weasel." Danny then added to his new weasel friends. "No offense." "None taken." Wise Guy said worried. "When I killed Eddie Valiant's brother, my voice sounded just...like...this!" screamed Judge Doom in his squeaky voice. Soon Judge Doom bounces up on springs and fires blasts at Chris who blocks it with his Fire Shield. Chris fights back with his Fire Sword, getting in a few hits but Doom just shake it off with a laugh. He turns one of his arms into an anvil and knocks Chris away. Doom fires most blasts putting the thorns on fire. With an evil giggle, he turns his arm into a buzzsaw has a keychain with an eye on it and slashes at Chris, knocking him off Haku. Haku charges at Doom but the weasel blasts Haku down with a blast, knocking the dragon unconscious. "Haku!" screamed Chris alarmed. "Worry about yourself!" mocked Doom as he goes after Chris who was forced to retreat. Chris stops long enough to hit Doom with his Fire Sword before retreating again. But now the heroes are up against a wall. "What now?" screamed Greasy like a coward. "Up here!" yelled Danny. He grabs everyone and flies them up the wall. As they got to the top of it, they were startled when Doom uses his springs once more to end up on their level. As Chris fights on, the others runs but they were stopped by a cliff. As they looked down, they see Dip at the bottom of it so if the fall doesn't killed them, the Dip will. "We're struck, man!" yelled Jake in horror. "I refused to give up." Sarah said. "And neither does Chris." said Jenny as she sees Chris still fighting the evil weasel. The fire caster manages to blocks one of Doom's attacks but Doom then turns his arm into an anvil and knocks the shield away from Chris. As Chris watches, the shield falls over the cliff and dissolved in the Dip below. Doom laughs madly, then he turns his arm back into a buzzsaw and begins advancing on Chris, his eyes spinning like mad. "I have enough of this guy!" yelled Danny. Then after getting determined nods from Jenny and Jake, they combined their powers into Chris's Fire Sword as Danny say, "Now sword of truth fly swift and sure, that evil die and good endure!" Before Doom could make a blow with the buzzsaw, Chris, with a yell, throws his sword, hitting Doom right in the chest. Doom screamed in pain. With a groan, he fell towards the group. The cliff begins to collapse but Chris, Danny, Jenny, Jake, and the weasels got away as the evil judge fell towards the Dip. As the heroes landed in safely and sighs in relief, they hear a splash and some screams. They looked down and sees Doom AKA Domonic the weasel screaming in terror as he begins to dissolved in his own Dip. "AAAAAAHHHH! AAAAAHHHH! AHHHH! I'M MELTING! I'M MELTING! OH WHAT A WORLD, WHAT A WORLD! I'M MELTING! OH NO....!" screamed Doom as he dissolved. "Geez, haven't we heard enough of that boring old phase?" asked Wise Guy in annoyance. "I liked it." Stupid said with a smile. Wise Guy scoffs. As they continued to watch, Doom screams and continues to dissolved until the last of him, the buzzsaw, dissolved in the Dip. His screams faded. Doom is gone forever. And the heroes are glad for that. With Doom now gone, the thorns around the castle, the Dip, and everything else disappeared. After checking to make sure that Haku is all right, the heroes entered the castle. Chris is surprised to see that everyone is asleep. Danny explains that they cast a sleeping spell on everyone so no one will find out about what happened to June. They make their way to the tower and arrived at the top. Chris sees June asleep. He smiles and comes over to her. Danny, Jenny, Jake, and the weasels watched on, hoping Chris's kiss will wake June up. As they watched, Chris leans down and gives June a warm kiss on the lips. Everyone else watches in hope. Soon June's eyes opened. Upon seeing Chris, her true love, again, she smiles. "He did it!" cheered Greasy. "The Senor did it!" "Yay!" said Stupid happily. Danny and Jenny hugged each other, so did Psycho and Sarah. The couples looked at each other and kissed. Now that June's spell is broken, the heroes' spell on the castle begins to wear off. Everyone woke up, unaware of what has happened. "Uh, what?" asked Michael waking up at the same time as his wife and James Fields. "Man, I got to lay off the wine. Anyway, what were you saying?" "Saying?" James asked puzzled. Then he remembers and continued, "Oh yes. Well, this is the 21st century after all and..." "You said that already." "Anyway, to come to the point. Chris told me earlier that he wanted to married..." Suddenly James is once again interrupted by another fanfare and music is played. As everyone looked at the staircase, Danny, Jenny, Jake, Haku, and the weasels watched from the balcony. Soon at the top of the staircase, a couple appeared. It's June and Chris, smiling at each other as they walked down the stairs arm in arm. "It's June! She's here!" said Michael happily. "Chris?" said James confused upon seeing his son holding June's arm. He wipes his eyes to make sure but upon seeing this again, his mouth gapes opened in shock. Didn't Chris say... Once Chris and June reaches the cottom, they go to the thrones and kneel down. June smiles, tears in her eyes, as she runs up and hugs her mother, whom she haven't seen in years. James, on the other hand, is still confused. "Chris, what does this mean?" James begins to asked his son. "I don't..." June interrupts as she comes over and kisses James. June lets go, smiles, and goes over to her new husband, leaving James still confused. "I...I..." Soon the song 'once upon a dream' begins to played. Up in the balcony, Danny and Jenny looked at each other. Danny makes a 'may I have this dance' gesture to his wife. Jenny smiles and accepts. The two dances in the balcony. Psycho and Sarah got the idea and danced as well. "I still don't get it." sighs James still confused. He shrugs and watches the couple as June and Chris danced while looking at each with love in their eyes. Up in the balcony, Danny kisses his wife and said, "You danced wonderfully. I loved you, you know that?" Jenny smiles then begins to cry. Danny then asked, "Jenny? What's wrong?" "Oh, it's just...I loved a happy ending." sighs Jenny happily. "So do I." agreed Wheezy coughing. "Duh, yeah." said Stupid nodding. "Plus Doom isn't around to boss us around anymore, Senors and Senoritas." said Greasy in agreement. "I got to admit for the first time ever: I enjoyed working with the good mugs." said Wise Guy smiling. "Well, I do say..." Danny stopped talking and dancing as he sees June's dress. "Hey! Who made those clothes red? Black and white!" Danny zaps June's dress and it changes to black and white. Chorus: I know you, I walked with you Once upon a dream "No way! Make it red!" yelled Jake using his amulet to changed the dress back to red. "Darn you, Jake!" yelled Danny annoyed. "Here we go again." said Jenny, her eyes rolling. Chorus: I know you, I walked with you Once upon a dream As if by magic, the castle dissolves as if Chris and June are dancing on clouds. June's dress keeps changing thanks to Danny and Jake's argument from black and white to red to back. Chorus: And I know it's true That visions are seldom all they seem But if I know you I know what you'll do June and Chris smiled and kissed each other on the lips passionately, not noticing the dress keeps changing colors. And they all lived happily ever after. Chorus: You'll love me at once The way you did Once upon a dream The End Author's note Story is now done! Great Disney parody, huh? I liked to thanks tervaco for letting me used of Chris Fields and for introducing me to June x Chris, Julayla for use of Sarah Weasel, the creators of the shows and movies involved, and my reviewers for reviewing this. Thanks again and don't forget to review this once more! |
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