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| Susie Goes Bad: Heavy; Susie is evil! Oh no! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 12 2006, 07:06 PM (1,137 Views) | |
| JusSonic | Jul 12 2006, 07:06 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note The plot for this story comes from the same one who suggested the plot for "Rugrats Turned Wild!" Enjoy. 4...3...2...1...! Every birthday, my mom and dad would you're another year older, another year wise But I still go to school to get an education I treat each and every day like a mini vacation! All Grown Up! I really wanna shout it out! All Grown Up! I want the world to know! All Grown Up! I really wanna shout it out! All Grown Up with you All Grown Up...with...you! It is another day for our favorite Rugrats, now all grown up, as usual. They are having a field day at the library. And when I say field day, I mean outside on the field near the library. Tommy and Kimi were hanging out, as were Chuckie and Angelica. Susie is reading a book while Dil is on a 'cobra commando' mission wearing ridiculous looking clothes and a helmet is a pot. Lil is practicing for her next soccer game Phil is the only one not doing anything, except stares at Susie. 'Man. I wonder why I keep staring at her. Maybe it's because she's so nice to everyone all the time.' thought Phil. He smiles the most goofiest smile on his face. Susie happens to sees it from the corner of her eye and smirks. "You better be careful. That look may stay that way." Phil snaps out of it and chuckles. "Uh, sorry Susie." Susie laughs. "That's okay. I was just teasing." "Yeah. I knew that." Susie smirked and said. "So what's with the goofy smile? Are you daydreaming about someone?" "Uh..." Phil begins to say but decides to change the subject. "So are you always this nice?" Susie rolled her eyes and said, "Phil, you have known me ever since you were a baby and I was a kid. I am always this nice." "But sometimes you can be mean and...out of character." "Well, okay maybe mean if I had to. And when Angelica ticked me off." Susie admits. Phil chuckles as Susie continues, "But out of character? Where did you did an idea like that?" "Well, you seen to show it." Susie sighs and said, "Phil, I am still the nicest person there is and nothing could changed that." Phil smiled. 'Oh I hoped so.' Unknown to the kids, in the lair of Alan Matthews, their most hated enemy, the evil son of the Shadow Man is reading through a book, looking for something that will destroyed his enemies, or come close to ruining them. "I got it!" Alan laughed maniacally. "I found what I need!" "Found what, boss?" asked Tiger-tron, one of the Shadow Man's minions who was updated by Alan in the past. "Oh goodie! A catalog!" squealed Ultimate Tippy stupidly as he sees the book Alan was reading. "You fool! This book contains a spell that will ruined Tommy's life forever!" Alan snapped angrily. "Uh, what is it?" asked Killer Boppo. "Simple. It turns people evil." A pause as the minions looks confused or unsure. Just then, MegaRobosnail spoke up. "No offense, boss, but didn't you use that on Tommy's friends the last time so you could get them to destroy you?" asked MegaRobosnail. "I hypnotized them with my own magic, MegaRobosnail! Besides, this time I have another target in mind." "Oh cool! I loved Target! They have great sales!" squealed Ultimate Tippy again. MetalTharg knocks Ultimate Tippy down. "Quiet! MetalTharg wants to hear!" "Thank you. Now this time, it's going to be different. I will turned Tommy evil and make him a jerk, a biggest jerk in the world. By doing so, his friends, including his girlfriend Kimi, will hate him. The only way he can be changed back is with the power of love." Alan explains. "But isn't Kimi his girlfriend?" Duster Rabbit pointed out. Alan smirks. "Which is why this is perfect. Kimi will hated Tommy enough to not bother be with him again!" |
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| JusSonic | Jul 13 2006, 09:03 PM Post #2 |
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As the kids walked on their way home, Lil smirked and has a word with her 'dear brother'. "So what did you and Susie talked about?" Lil asked Phil with a smirk. "Uh, nothing. Just how nice she is." Phil blushed. Lil laughed. "Seriously, you don't need to hide it. You like Susie, don't you?" "Duh! She's our friend." Phil said rolling his eyes. "I mean more than a friend." "What?" "Come on. You have your eye on her for a while. You got to admit, you think she's rather cute, huh?" Lil asked smiling. "I have no idea what you're talking about!" Phil protested, sweating. "You're in love with her." Tommy and Kimi overheard this conversion and stops to enter it. Kimi was the one who spoke. "I can't imagined how many times you made googily eyes at her ever since she danced with ya at the party. Well, maybe when Alan paired you with me temporarily but afterwards, it's all Susie." "Come on, Phil. Admit." Tommy said with a smirk. "Oh, all right. I admit it. I liked Susie more than friend. She was so nice and was always there for us when Angelica, Alan, or any meanie try to hurt us." Phil admitted. "And other times, when I am with her, my mind is not my own." "Your mind is always not your own." joked Lil. Phil glared. "You know what I mean." "Well, tell Susie how you feel." Tommy insisted. "And don't say that she won't accept you." "Tommy's right. I also can't imagined how many times I ever heard Susie saying how cute you are at times." Kimi agreed. Phil is shocked. "She said that?" "Sure. Well, she said Chuckie, Dil, and Tommy of all people," Tommy blushed as Kimi continued, "Were cute but she talks about you most of all. Well, okay I just added 'most of all', but she talked about you." Phil is flattered. "Wow." "Go on, Phil. Do it." Lil insisted. Nearby, Alan's minions are hiding in some bushes, holding the book with the spell Alan told them to used. They see Tommy's group and smirked. "Operation: Turn Tommy Into A Jerk is under way." Long Arms chuckled. "Do you have to named every operation?" asked Beaver Jerk annoyed. "Of course! Duh!" |
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| JusSonic | Jul 14 2006, 01:04 PM Post #3 |
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"Okay." Tiger-tron said as he hands the wand to Ultimate Fiend. "You hold the wand steady while I say the words." "I thought the person holding the wand has to say the words." Ultimate Fiend said puzzled. "I can't read and hold a wand at the same time! Just hold the thing steady!" "Anyone for nachos?" Ultimate Tippy said gleely as he came up holding some nachos and a cheese spray. "Where did you get that?" asked Duster Rabbit annoyed. "There was a sale at Nacho Drum." "Shut up. We're trying to concentrate!" snapped Tiger-tron. Then he looks into the spell. "Okay, is target in position?" "Yep." said Beaver Jerk. "Okay. Time to begin." Tiger-tron clears his plastic throat and begins the inchantation. "O-nay, evil-nay, jerk-nay, kiss-nay!" Soon the wand Ultimate Fiend was holding begins to glow. Ultimate Fiend chuckled as he aims the wand at Tommy, getting ready to fire the spell. At this time though, Ultimate Tippy tries to squirt some cheese on his nachos. But his aim was off and he accidentally squirt cheese in Ultimate Fiend's eyes causing his aim to be off too. And unfortunately or fortunately, this proves to be very bad as the spell, instead of hitting Tommy, hits Susie instead, knocking her down. "Susie," said Chuckie alarmed as he and the others saw this. "Crud! Everyone ducked!" yelped Tiger-tron as he and the minions ducked won in the bush. Unaware of what just happened, Susie's friends goes over to her as she lies on the ground. "Yo Sue, are you okay?" asked Dil puzzled. Angelica sighs in annoyance and snaps her fingers near Susie's ears loudly. Susie wakes up. "Huh, what? What happened?" Susie asked with a groan. "You fell. Are you okay?" Kimi asked concerned. "I'm fine," Susie said as she got back up. She groans again. "But I think I'm coming down with a headache. I think I should go on home." "Uh, Phil, this is your chance," Lil hissed to her brother pushing Phil to Susie. "Huh? Phil?" Susie asked looking at Phil. "Heh heh. Uh, need for me to walk you home?" Phil asked sheepishly. Susie smiles and said, "Why sure." As Phil helps Susie get back home, the others looked puzzled as what just happened. "Is it just me or does it seems strange that Susie fell like that?" Tommy asked. "Nah. Carmichael's always strange." remarked Angelica. "Angelica." Kimi said annoyed that of that mean remark towards her best friend. "I wonder what happened." Chuckie asked puzzled. Meanwhile... "You idiot!" yelled Tiger-tron angrily as he hits Ultimate Tippy many times until the cup looks dizzy. "You made Ultimate Fiend missed!" "Uh, where did they go, George? Where did they go?" Ultimate Tippy said stupidly in a Larry-like joke. "Never mind the rabbits, you dope! This is terrible. The boss's going to be furious!" Suddenly Killer Boppo smirks. "Or maybe not. Did any of you see where the spell hit instead?" "MetalTharg thinks it hits that Susie girl." MetalTharg said puzzled. "Precisely. That spell is supposed to turned someone evil, right?" "Yeah." Beaver Jerk responded. "And Susie's supposed to be the nicest girl around, right?" "Get to the point, Duster Rabbit!" snapped Tiger-tron annoyed. "Well, let's see what happened when Susie is no longer Ms. Nice Girl." chuckled Killer Boppo. The others except Ultimate Tippy looks puzzled. Then they got what he's suggesting and laughs evilly. Ultimate Tippy snapped to his senses (or what's left). "Hey, Susie Goes Bad: Heavy!" laughed Ultimate Tippy in glee. |
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| JusSonic | Jul 15 2006, 11:33 AM Post #4 |
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Soon both Phil and Susie has managed to get to Susie's house. "Okay. I think I could get myself in from here." Susie said with a smile. "Thanks." Phil said. Then he pauses to think. May as well get what he said off his chest now. "Uh, Susie, I got something to say..." "No, no, I got something to say first." Susie said interrupting. "Really? What?" Phil asked curiously. Before Susie could say anything, her eyes grow red. Then she smirked evilly. "You lost those!" laughed Susie evilly as she kicked Phil down there. Phil yelped and fell to the ground groaning. Before Phil could responded, Susie grabbed the water hose with a nozzle from nearby and spray Phil and got him all wet. "Now you're all wet, idiot!" laughed Susie some more. "Now get off my property fool before I blast you off!" With an evil smirk, Susie heads inside. Phil got up, barely, confused. 'What is that all about?' thought Phil. |
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| JusSonic | Jul 16 2006, 05:58 PM Post #5 |
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Phil is not the only one who noticed and experienced Susie's strange behavior as found out the next day. By next school day, Susie is no longer the nicest girl ever. Upon arrival, Susie threaten kids to hand over money or homework or face the consequences. The kids are too scared to even refused her. Also, she flushed all the teachers' notes to every class down the toilet, down even Savannah down the stairs, and even threaten a kid with a dissecting knife while in science class. Needless to say, because of this, Susie earn herself detention for the rest of the school year. At lunchtime, Tommy and the others have a discussion about it. "What's wrong with Susie? I have never seen her this way before!" Tommy said, shocked at Susie's behavior. "Well, I did but..." "I don't get it either. When I asked Susie why she's doing this, she just kicked me in the gut and left laughing. Luckily, she didn't kicked too hard." Kimi said, sad that her best friend has done that to her friend. "Phil, what happened on the way to Susie's house?" Lil asked her brother. "Not sure. One moment she was nice, then she was liked that jerk Alan." Phil explained. Dil's eyes widen. "Of course! Why did I think of that before? She is turned evil...by aliens!" "Aliens again, Dil?" asked Angelica, rolling her eyes. "Dil is half right. Susie was turned evil, except I think the person responsible is Alan." Tommy said. "I thought he turned her evil the first time we faced him. Why is he doing it again?" Chuckie asked puzzled. "I'm not sure. But we got to find a way to changed him back to the nicest girl we ever know." "And kicked Alan's butt while we're at it! No one turned my friend evil and gets away with it!" Kimi yelled angrily. "And no one does that to my girl!" Phil agreed. The others looked on with smirks. Phil blushed. "Uh, well, you know what I mean." As Susie walks to the doors to the lunchroom with a bad girl attitude, someone pssted her. "Huh? Okay, who did that so I can beat on their hinies?" asked Susie annoyed as she turned. "Relax, Susie. I am on your side." Alan said smiling as he appears. "What do you want, moron?" Alan just smiles. "Why, let's say we have something in common. We acted very evilly towards others, including our enemies." "True enough. They are all fools to get in my way, including the teachers. I am planning on bombing their lounge any moment." Susie said with an evil chuckle. Alan laughs. "Now that's evil. Let's talk, shall we?" |
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| JusSonic | Jul 17 2006, 07:32 PM Post #6 |
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"We need to find a way to free Susie from Alan's spell." said Tommy as school ends later. "Any ideas?" "How did we get free the first time?" Chuckie asked. "Tommy told me that he loves me. And since I am the 'spreader' of Alan's spell the first time, when I got freed, so did you guys." Kimi explained. "Okay, so we need some weirdo whose Susie likes to freed her. Do we know anyone?" Angelica asked. "I do. Phil." Lil said with a smirk. "Huh? Lil!" protested Phil embarrassed and shocked at the same time. "Come on. You admit that you liked Susie more than a friend and you remember what Susie thinks of you. All we need to do is find a way to keep her steady so you can tell her and freed her." Dil pointed out. "It takes more than that. He probably has to kissed her." Tommy added. "Kissed her?" Phil yelped. "Wow." "That is, if we could find her." Kimi said with a frown. |
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| JusSonic | Jul 18 2006, 02:44 PM Post #7 |
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Unknown to the kids, Alan has got to Susie first and after a while of talking to her, Susie is interested. "So all we got to do is to get rid of those kids once and for all. I liked that." Susie said with an evil smirk. "And since it's obviously that we're going to worked together, you suggested the place." Alan pointed out. Susie laughs sinisterly. "Oh baby. I know just the place: the Toy Palace." "That is where MetalTharg was born. Sort of. Why there?" "Well, we will lured them in after hours, except change the time signs to avoid them being suspicious. Then we locked them in and finished them off like rats in a maze!" Alan laughed. "Susie, I loved how you think." Alan then thought, 'As long as you remained under the spell, that is.' |
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| JusSonic | Jul 20 2006, 04:55 PM Post #8 |
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The rest of Susie's friends gathered at Tommy's house to discuss how to free Susie from Alan's spell. "I am not sure the old locket thing that I used to revealed my love for Kimi would work for Phil. At least, not this time. We need something new." Tommy said. "Right. But how? Alan wouldn't be stupid enough to use a warehouse this time." agreed Lil. "Well, we got to do something for Susie!" Phil exclaimed. "I don't want her to stay under Alan's control!" "Right. She's our friend and she deserves better." agreed Chuckie. "Well, if anyone got any suggestions?" Angelica asked. "Hey guys!" Dil said happily as he came in holding letters. "Dil, what's with the letters?" Tommy asked looking at the letters in Dil's arms. "Oh. I found them near the mail slot as I was coming down. They are addressed to each of us." Dil said giving a letter each to the others, keeping one that is to himself. The other kids opened their letters and read the contents. "What's this? Susie wants us to meet her at the Toy Palace?" Lil asked puzzled. "And look at the hours!" Kimi added. "The store is closed during that time." "What's Carmichael up? And I mean that in a 'she's possessed' kinda way." asked Angelica with a frown. "Simple. It's a trap. Alan has Susie asks us to meet her at Toy Palace so he can destroyed. Maybe used Susie to help. I dunno." Tommy said. "So what do we?" Tommy smirks. "We set the trap off." |
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| LiL_Deville | Jul 21 2006, 05:30 AM Post #9 |
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Uh... Just Sonic, what episode is this? :confused: |
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| JusSonic | Jul 21 2006, 05:08 PM Post #10 |
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It's JusSonic. As for episode, who cares? On with story... ******** It's 10:00 PM at the Toy Palace as Tommy and his friends has arrived. The store is supposed to be closed at the time and doors locked but when Tommy tries them, he finds that they are unsurprisingly unlocked. "And yet, we are not surprised." Angelica said unamused. "What else do you unexpected from Alan?" Lil asked. The kids went in. The Toy Palace is a lot quieter. Luckily or unluckily, there is no gorilla steps being heard. "Hey Chuckie. Remember when we were trapped in here when our dads left us behind and we have some fun here?" Tommy asked his best friend. "Yeah. That is where we met that mean and ugly gorilla Tharg." Chuckie agreed. "Yeah, he is ugly, isn't he?" "Where do you think Susie is?" asked Kimi. "And shouldn't we worry about security?" "Knowing Alan he got that thought of." Indeed, inside the security room, Alan, Susie, and the bad guys watched this from the images on the TV sent in by the security cameras. "As usual Pickles, you got that right." mumbled Alan. "MetalTharg wants to hurt Pickles and red hair for calling MetalTharg ugly!" yelled MetalTharg angrily. "Calm down, MetalTharg. Let's our new friend handle this. Are you ready, Susie?" Alan asked Susie standing nearby. Susie smirks. "Ready as I am already." |
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| JusSonic | Jul 22 2006, 02:01 PM Post #11 |
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The kids goes by the Native Americans part of the store. "Man, I bet it would be cool living in here, huh?" Dil said happily. "Don't bother. You wouldn't like it. We know." said Chuckie shuttering upon remembering the Toy Palace adventures years ago. Unknown to the kids, some of the Natives American toys begin moving and seems to be aiming their arrows at them. "Hold it." Tommy said, stopping the group. "What's up, Tommy?" Kimi asked her boyfriend. The toys get aimed and prepared to fire. "Duck!" yelled Tommy as he pushed his friends in time for the arrows to missed their targets. "What the...?" yelled Angelica. "We're being attacked!" yelled Phil. Some native yells are heard as the toys came to life and are firing arrows at the groups. "Let's get outta here." yelped Chuckie. "No way! I am no coward!" yelled Angelica grabbing a broom from nearby. Then she knocked down a few Indians with the broom. "What kind of janitors would be irresponsible to leave their equipment behind?" asked Lil puzzled. "Probably two dudes who we ran into but didn't know it as babies." responded Phil. Tommy leaped forward and knocked a few toys away. One arrow hits him but to his surprise, nothing's happening. "Hey we're fighting toys. How could I forget that?" Tommy asked surprised. "You mean we have nothing to fear?" Angelica said in disbelief. "Neat toys, though." chuckled Dil as he picks up an Indian toy. "This is embarrassing." said Angelica with a groan putting the broom down. "Let's keep moving." Tommy said, gesturing his friends to moved on. |
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| JusSonic | Jul 24 2006, 04:47 AM Post #12 |
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Susie watched from the shadows as her 'friends' looked for her. She smirks. 'Time to rock.' thought Susie evilly. |
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| LiL_Deville | Jul 24 2006, 05:18 AM Post #13 |
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Okay, thanks... |
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| JusSonic | Jul 28 2006, 04:32 AM Post #14 |
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As the kids entered a part of the Toy Palace which looks like some sort of concert hall, a song suddenly begins to played. "What the...?" Tommy begins to say. "Terrific. Who knew we were coming?" asked Angelica annoyed. "Welcome, dorks. To your doom!" The kids turned to the stage and sees a surprising sight. Up on stage is their friend Susie, who looks like she was made over to be a member of the band KISS. "Whoa, rock on Susie." Dil said with a smile. "Uh Dil. Susie is under Alan's spell, right?" Chuckie pointed out. "Yeah?" "So I wouldn't say 'rock on' at a time like this." "Time for me to give you kids the performance of a lifetime...my way!" With an evil smirk, claws appeared from Susie's hands, making the kids gasped. Susie then jumped into the air and knocked Kimi down. "Kimi!" Tommy yelled running to help his girl. But Susie jumps forward and claws him down. "Since Alan wants you, you get to die first." Susie said cruelly. But then Angelica tackles Susie and punches her. "Man, if I really hate you, I would be happy to do that." mumbled Angelica. "Well, that's the mistake of being Tommy's cousin and friend." snaps Susie who suddenly slashed at her pants, making a hole in it. "Hey, those were expensive!" protested Angelica. "Duh. Your parents can get you a new one." Susie said rolling her eyes. Chuckie tries to sneak up on Susie but the African American girl somehow senses him and jumps behind him. She then grabs Susie and headbutted Angelica on the head with him, knocking the two down. "A geek and a creep, a good combination." joked Susie. |
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| LiL_Deville | Jul 28 2006, 10:10 AM Post #15 |
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Nice story! I'm becoming intrested in it, thanks and please continue as soon as possible. :D |
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