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Susie Goes Bad: Heavy; Susie is evil! Oh no!
Topic Started: Jul 12 2006, 07:06 PM (1,136 Views)
JusSonic
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"This is your chance, Phil!" Tommy yelled. "I'd grabbed her and you'd tell her how you feel."
"I am not sure if I could, Tommy." Phil said very nervously and scared all of the sudden.
"And you will never, either!" Susie snarled as she punches Tommy to the floor then kicked him 'down there'. Kimi gasped, then with an upset look, she charges Susie.
"Best friend or no, no one does that to Tommy." Kimi yelled.
"Until now." Susie smiles as she grabs an action set box from nearby and throws it at Kimi. It smacks Kimi right in the chest, stunning her. Then Susie takes out a hockey stitck and slams Kimi with it.

Back with Alan and his minions, the villain himself smiles.
"She has them on the ropes." Alan declared. "It's only a matter of time."
"What time? Dinner time?" asked Ultimate Tippy stupidly.
Alan just fires a blast at Ultimate Tippy sending him flying to the wall.
"Good call, boss." Tiger-tron said, congratulating Alan.
"Thanks."
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JusSonic
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Phil begins to sweat. Here he is, the only one who can freed Susie, and he just watches as her former friend has taken the others down. And now it's his turn.
'May as well get this over with.' Phil thought. Then he spoke, "Susie, can I say something before you killed me?"
"Hmmmm....how about...no!" Susie laughs as she pulls out a knife.
"I loved you, Susie!" Phil yelled out. "Yes, I loved you for as long as I know you. You were the nicest person I have known and you always watch out for us. Please, don't let Alan controlled you anymore please."
It looks like Phil's words has work but suddenly Susie snaps and slashes at him, ripping a hole in his shirt.
"You should watch out for me, fool!" snarled Susie.
Suddenly Dil appeared from behind and grabs Susie, keeping her from moving
"Dude, if you wanna saved her, I suggested you do it now!" Dil yelled.
"What do you want me to do? Saying the words didn't worked!" protested Phil horrified.
"But you have to to do it! You know what you got to do, do it!"
Susie soon got freed, grabs Dil by the hair, and slams him down hard. Then she kicks him repeatedly.
"That's show you, you idiotic brother of Pickles!" snarled Susie.
"Oh Susie."
Susie turned just as Phil quickly grabbed her and did the impossible: he kissed her deeply on the lips. Susie looks shocked and tries to get free. But suddenly she relaxed and kissed Phil right back. Soon, the two let go, Susie's eyes blinking.
"Phil?" Susie asked puzzled.
"Yeah, Susie?" Phil asked hopefully.
Susie looked around, seeing her friends that were taken down. She groans.
"Aw man, tell me that I didn't went evil again and try to killed my friends." Susie said with a groan.
Phil laughed. Susie is back to normal.

"No fair! She almost have them!" Ultimate Tippy yelled in disbelief.
"Stupid Deville. Stupid true love kiss." Tiger-tron groaned in agreement.
"So what now, boss?" MegaRobosnail asked Alan. "Shall we destroyed them?"
Alan didn't say a word. He just turned the monitors up, got up from his chair, and left the room.
"Well, he didn't say much, did he?" Ultimate Fiend asked in amazement.
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Later, as the kids left the Toy Palace, they finished explained what has happened to Susie.
"Oh no. Did I really take you guys down hard?" Susie asked with a groan.
"You got that right, Carmichael." Angelica sighed in annoyance, still dusting herself off.
"I...I didn't mean to. I'm sorry." Susie said sadly.
"Don't blame yourself, Susie." Lil said putting a hand on her shoulder.
"Yeah, blame that jerk Alan instead." Kimi agreed.
"We knew that you weren't responsible for those actions. We are still your friends and even if you were to lose it again, we will still helped you." Tommy added.
Susie smiled. "Thank guys." Then she frowns in worried. "But what would my parents say? I got a school year's detention for stuff I couldn't stopped myself from doing. They will be so mad."
"Relax. We can tell them that you weren't yourself." Chuckie told Susie. "They may not believed it but hey."
Susie nodded then she looks at Phil. "Uh, will you excuse us, please?"
Tommy smiles. "Okay. It's time for us to go home anyway."
"Right. Phil, don't stay out tonight or it's trash collecting for you." Lil said with a smirk, knowing how much Phil likes trash as a baby.
"Yeah, well, I will save you the most disgusting parts!" joked Phil back.
As the others leave, Susie begins to walked with Phil, Susie begins to speak.
"Listen, while I was still under Alan's control, I coulda sworn that you told me that you loved me." Susie said.
Phil looks nervous. "Well, I got to do what it takes to freed you. I mean..." Then Phil sighs. "Actually I do loved you, Susie. You were our best friend and one of the cutest girls I have ever known. I...I just wish you could..."
Susie sshed Phil then with a warm smile, she leans forward and kissed Phil warmly. Phil looks shocked but hugs her and kissed Susie right back. Then the two parted.
"I love you too, Phil." Susie whispered happily.

Unknown to Phil and Susie, the others didn't leave but were watching.
"And another couple is born." Kimi said smiling.
"No fair, Kimi. You and Tommy got together, Chuckie and Angelica got together, and now it's Susie and Phil. I am the only girl here without someone." Lil complained.
"Well, you always have me." Dil said with a smirk.
"What? Oh no. You back off." Lil warned Dil.
Dil smirks and begins to make kissing sounds. This begins to freaked Lil enough to the point of running away while Dil runs after her trying to kissed her. Tommy, Kimi, Angelica, and Chuckie laughed as Dil continues chasing Lil around.

The End

Cast list
Kath Soucie: Phil DeVille, Lil DeVille
Cree Summer: Susie Carmichael
E.G. Daily: Tommy Pickles
Dionne Quan: Kimi Watanabe Finster
Nancy Cartwright: Chuckie Finster
Cheryl Chase: Angelica Pickles
Tara Strong: Dil Pickles
Andy Berman: Alan Matthews
Rob Paulsen: Tiger-tron
Danny Mann: Ultimate Tippy
Jeff Glen Bennett: Killer Boppo
Frank Welker: MegaRobosnail, Long Arms
Michael Bell: MetalTharg
Billy West: Duster Rabbit
Wally Wingert: Beaver Jerk
Tress MacNeille: Ultimate Fiend

Author's done
Story done. This one is a Phil x Susie story so any Phil x Kimi fans or anyone who pairs Susie up with anyone fan are disappointed, then I'm sorry. Once again, this idea came from one of my commentators at deviantART. Read and review and be fair. Thank you.
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Bravo, bravo! :party:
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