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| Back to Tomorrow Part 2; The sequel to my BttF parody | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 12 2006, 12:48 PM (1,062 Views) | |
| JusSonic | Aug 12 2006, 12:48 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note After a while of waiting, I finally started on my sequel to my big hit "Back to Tomorrow", the parody of the Back to the Future movies. I apologized that I kept you people waiting for so long. I will begin now. ************* Tommy headed outside and opened the garage door. What he saw inside surprised him. It's the 4x4 truck he saw yesterday...except this time it is in his garage! Tommy went inside and looked at it admirably. You see, yesterday before everything, Tommy's life, let's face it, was terrible. He felt himself like a total loser, his father Stu Pickles is a wimp who always let Justin Treene, his lifetime bully, pushed him around, his mother Didi is a woman who eat pills to relieve depression and nags about how boys and girls dated nowadays, and even his brother Dil and his sister Tammy were going nowhere fast. Yep, Tommy's life sure stinks. That is before he went back in time! A friend of his, a scientist and whom is labeled the town nut, Doctor Thompson Spooky, has made a time machine, one that is made from a DeLorean! He got the idea after getting a vision years ago in 1955. Of course, in order for time travel to work, Doc Spooky needed plutonium. He managed to trick a group of a Libyan Nationalists and split for it. However, the terrorists has other ideas. The fiends has somehow tracked Doc Brown to the Twin Pines Mall (now the Lone Pine Mall) parking lot and shot him right in front of Tommy. Tommy himself barely escaped using the DeLorean. And after going up to 88 MPH, he landed in the year 1955. Tommy's troubles did not ended there though. During his trip in 1955, he unintentally prevented his parents from meeting, which threatens to erased himself, Dil, and Tammy out of existence. Tommy managed to get help from the 1955 version of Doc Spooky and managed to get them to fall in love all over again. Of course, it results in Stu punching out Justin when he wasn't supposed to. Since plutonium hasn't been found yet, Tommy and Doc Spooky used another way to get Tommy home to 1985: by harnessing the lightning that is destined to strike the clock at the North Californi and make it stopped running forever. Of course, Tommy also tried his best to warned Doc of what's going to happened in the future, but the old man wouldn't listened, fearing by doing so will changed the future for the worst. When Tommy got back though, it wasn't. Back in 1955, Tommy wrote a note that warns Doc Spooky and the scientist, upon finding it, tears it up. But Doc taped it back together now and kept it. Heeding the warning, the second time around, Spooky wore a bullet-proof vest saving himself from an untimely end. But that's not the only changes Tommy has found. When he got home, things has changed for the better. Stu is now a rather nice looking and good built man author who just got his new book published, Didi is no longer eating pills and looked just as good and as thing as she did the last time Tommy saw her in 1955. Justin has changed jobs, now working in a Automotives and Details service which includes waxing cars. He also no longer bullies Stu around like he used to. Even Dil and Tammy changed their ways. Tommy didn't realize it then but now he knows why. Because he has changed the past thanks to his interference, everything that was bad for him is now good. His parents changed, his siblings changed, everything changed. He wondered how things could get better. What he heard answers him. "Hey mister. Care to give me a ride?" Tommy turns and smiles as he sees Kimi coming up to the garage smiling at him. "Kimi." said Tommy with a sigh as he goes over to her. "Man I missed you." "What, did you missed me for a week or something?" asked Kimi puzzled. "Yes." said Tommy knowing that the week comment meant his week in 1955. "Are you all right?" asked Kimi. Tommy looks to the door to his house and sees his parents smiling as they watched Tommy. When they realized that he just saw them, they went inside. Tommy smiles. "Yeah. I am all right." Tommy said. The two looked at each other and leans forward about to kiss. Suddenly familiar noises, to Tommy anyway, occurred and the two turned just in time to see the DeLorean pulling into the driveway and knocking over some trashcans. The two approaches and to their surprise, Doc Spooky got out, wearing strange looking clothes and strange looking shades. "Tommy! Thank goodness I found you! You must come with me!" yelled Doc Spooky as he runs over to Tommy and Kimi. "Where?" asked Tommy, worried since Kimi is witnessing all this. Doc Spooky lifts up his shades. "Back to Tomorrow." Doc Spooky responded. Doc Spooky got the trash cans back up and goes through them, taking out some trash. "Okay, this is a stupid question but what are you doing?" asked Tommy. "I got to get fuel." Doc Spooky responds as he carried the garbage over to the car and puts it in a device Tommy never seen before called 'Mr. Absorber'. "No thanks, Doc. No offense but Kimi is here and we're going to take the new truck out." Tommy said, not interested in any more time adventures since he got back from his last one. "In that case, let her come with us. What we're about to do involves her as well." Doc Spooky responded. "What do you mean? What's going to happen to us in the future? We become jerks or something?" asked Tommy. Doc Spooky hesitates. Tommy wonders if the doc knows something he doesn't. Of course... "No, not way, no how. You and Kimi are fine. But as for your kids...they aren't!" said Doc Spooky. Tommy and Kimi looked at each other in shock. They got kids??? Tommy and Kimi got inside the DeLorean with Doc Spooky who pulled out. Tommy sees that the road up ahead is closed. "Uh Doc. Bad news. We don't have enough roads to get up to 88. You may have to..." Tommy begins to say. Doc Spooky laughs. "Roads? Trust me. Where we're going, we won't need them." Doc Spooky said as he pulls down his shades and flips a switch Tommy also never seen before. Unknown to the three in the DeLorean, however, Justin has choose that time to come out of the house, holding a matchbook he's working on proudly. "Hey Tommy! Tommy, where are ya? I got to show you these great matchbooks I got printed for my auto detailing!" Justin said looking around. He turns and gaped in surprise as the DeLorean's wheels begin to lifted up. "A flying DeLorean?" As Justin watches, the flying car blasts down the street, turns around and soon begins to blast off...into Tomorrow. Justin jumps back startled and looks and sees a trails of fire behind in the sky. "What the heck is going on here?" Justin asked suspiciously, narrowing his eyes. Tommy and Doc Spooky does not know how Justin witnessing this departure will change Justin's life forever. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 14 2006, 02:50 PM Post #2 |
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Tommy could only blink his eyes as the same old flash he experienced before happens again, and soon the whole sky is filled with flying cars and floating road signs. Suddenly he and Kimi screamed as a taxi is about to collided into them. Doc Spooky swerved out of the way, dodging it. "What was that?" Tommy asked, almost getting a heart attack. "A taxi cab." explains Doc Spooky as he kept on flying. "What? But aren't we flying?" "Of course! But all cars of the future fly now. Well, almost all of them." Tommy looks histerical. It's time for answers. "Okay, Doc. What's going on here? Where are we? Heck, when are we!" Doc Spooky lifts his shades up to viewed the time displays. They are near the front panel of the DeLorean. One shows what time he's going, what time he's in now, and what time he left from. "As of right now, we are descending towards North Californi, at 4:29 pm, on a Wednesday, October 21st, 2015." announced Doc Spooky. "2015? Man, we're in the future." Tommy exclaimed in surprise. "Future? What are you talking about? How can we be in the future?" Kimi asked confused. Tommy chuckled sheepishly. He forgot that Kimi didn't experienced the time travelling he did. Oh boy, how can he explains this to her? "Well, I am not sure if you're going to believe this or not, but...you're in a time machine Doc Spooky made from a DeLorean." Tommy explains. Kimi gasps as she looks on ahead. "And this is the year 2015?" "October 21, 2015." pointed out Doc Spooky. "Man, you guys weren't kidding! Tommy, we can be able to see our future." Kimi said excited. She turns to Doc Spooky and continued, "So, Doc, you said were married, right?" "Uh, well..." Doc Spooky said nervously, smiling a bit. "Is it a big wedding?" Kimi asked eagerly, pressing for more information. "To tell you the truth..." "Tommy, we're going to see our own wedding." Kimi said excited, turning to her boyfriend. "Cool." Tommy said chuckling. "I wonder what my wedding dress looks like. I bet we got a big house with a bunch of kids! Hey Doc, how many kids..." Kimi turned and a bunch of lights flashes at her from a gadget Doc Spooky is holding which is making a bunch of noises. Kimi is interrupted as she fell unconscious. "Doc, what are you doing?" Tommy gasped in shock. "Not to worry. It's a sleep knock'er outer, a device that will put a person out for a certain amount of time. I have to do it because she was asking too much questions and you of all people know it's too dangerous to tell anyone about their own future." explained Doc Spooky. "When we return back to 1985 and she wakes up at her home there, she'd think this whole time travelling thing was a dream." "What? Why did you bring her if you're intending on doing that?" asked Tommy in disbelief. "I have no choice! She saw the time machine and I can't leave her to tell anyone about it. Even if she could be trusted, she may slipped even by accident. Relax, we don't need her for my plan." Tommy looks at Kimi in concern and sighs. Doc Spooky has never let him down yet. He just hopes nothing happens to Kimi while she's out and that once whatever Doc Spooky got planned is done, they can put this time travelling thing behind them...for now. "Well, you're the doc, Doc." Tommy said with a smirk. "Here's our exit." announced Doc Spooky turning the DeLorean down a skyway exit. They passed a sign saying "Welcome to North Californi. Wilson Fox II Mayor. A Nice Place To Live. Fly safely and use ejection seats to save yourself". The time machine descended down towards North Californi. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 15 2006, 08:54 PM Post #3 |
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To avoid detection, Doc Spooky lands the DeLorean in an abandoned alley filled with junk no one wants anymore. It is pouring rain as he lands the thing. "Okay, first off, you got to get out and change your clothes." said Doc Spooky, opening the DeLorean. "But it's raining, look!" Tommy protested pointing to the rain coming from the sky. Doc Spooky glances up, then at his watch. "5 more seconds..." As Tommy waits for some reason, he's surprised that the rain stops in 5 seconds, like Doc has said. The doc smirks as he got out and looks into the now clear sky. "Amazing, right on time as usual. Too bad the post office isn't as look as the weather service though." said Doc Spooky with a sigh. Tommy got out and goes down the alley the DeLorean. He's amazed. He is actually in the future of his town. He looks around astounded. When he turns around, he is startled at something. Doc Spooky is peeling off his own skin! "Sorry if I startled you, Tommy. I am actually wearing a disguise and you wouldn't recognize me if I didn't have it on." explained Doc Spooky as he continues to peeled the skin off. "I went to one of those rejuvenation clinics and got a major overhaul. They removed my wrinkles, did some hair repair, changed the blood, and that added a bunch of good years in my life. They also replaced my spleen and colon." Doc finally got the skin mask right off and smiles. "What do you think?" Tommy smiles at Doc Spooky's new face. He looks just like himself back in 1955. "That's great, Doc." Then he took another look down the alley again. "Man, this is the future, huh? I gotta check this out." "Later time. We're on the clock here." insisted Doc Spooky as he gets a bag out. "So tell me, what am I liked in this time period? Did I become a cool rich rock star?" asked Tommy eager for some info. That only made Doc Spooky frowns. "Tommy, we can't let anyone, especially you, know too much about your own destiny." "All right, all right. I get it." Tommy pauses, then said, "But am I rich?" Tommy!" said Doc Spooky annoyed. Tommy decided to stopped while he's ahead as the doc points to the bag. "Get your shirt off, and put the jacket and shoes that are in this bag on." As Doc Spooky puts the bag down and Tommy does what he said, the scientist got some binoculars of the future, that looked like a thin camera from a point of view, out of the DeLorean. "We got a mission to do!" exclaimed Doc Spooky as he runs down the end of the alley. As he arrives there, he uses his binoculars to check things out. At first, he was using it to check women out. But then his attention is on a familiar looking boy walking past her. This boy looks like Tommy, except with a futuristic hat, jacket, and shoes. The boy laughs weirdly as he goes into a phone booth. Doc Spooky puts his binoculars down and smiled. "Right on schedule." Tommy begins to put the shoes on, the shoes that looked oddly like the ones the boy Doc Spooky was looking at were wearing. As he puts them on, he looks surprised as they laced up instantly without him doing anything. "Cool! Power laces!" Tommy said with a smile as he looks at his shoes. Tommy gets the jacket out and puts it on. He frowns because the jacket is a bit too big for him. As Doc Spooky returns, a beeping noise is heard. Tommy looks around trying to figure out where that beeping's coming from. "Uh, Doc. I think you got me the wrong size. This doesn't fit." complained Tommy as he glances at his new jacket. Doc Spooky presses a button on a part of Tommy's jacket. Suddenly the jacket changes so it can fit Tommy. "Size adjusting, fit." mumbled a computer voice from the jacket. "Make sure you pulled out your pants pockets." instructed Doc Spooky. Tommy does so as the doc continues, "All kids liked having their pants inside out here." Doc Spooky takes a hat out of the bag and hands it to Tommy. "Put this on." Tommy does so. Spooky smiles. He looks like that certain boy he was viewing. "Good. Now you looked like your son." "What?" asked Tommy startled. "Help me with Kimi." said Doc Spooky as he goes over to the side of the DeLorean Kimi is at. With Tommy's help, they lifted her out of the car. "So what am I supposed to do?" asked Tommy curiously. "Get her feet." instructed Doc Spooky. Tommy does so and the two managed to moved Kimi near a bunch of discarded discs. "Okay, now what?" Tommy asked again. "In 2 minutes from now, you go around that corner into the Cafe 80s." explained Doc Spooky. "Cafe 80s?" "One of those theme restaurants but not very good. At least they got good food." Doc Spooky takes out a $50 bill from his pocket and gives it to Tommy. "When you get there, buy yourself a Pepsi." Tommy looks surprised. 50 for a Pepsi? Oh well, he has seen stranger things. Tommy pockets the 50 as Doc Spooky continues, "Stay and wait for a guy named Dustin." "Dustin." Tommy repeated to make sure he doesn't forget the name. "Dustin wants to ask you to do something for tonight. Tell him you aren't interested in what that idiot's up to. No matter what he tries to do or what he say, tell him to forget it!" "Right. Got it." "When you're done, return here and wait for me." Doc Spooky then got a serious expression on his face. "Whatever you do, don't speak to anyone, touch anything, do anything, or anything else that could destroy what we got planned!" This made Tommy confused. "I don't get it! I thought this has something to do with my children!" Doc Spooky sighs, then gets a newspaper out. "I wanted to avoid showing you this but now you'd have to see how serious this is. Look what will happened to your son!" Doc Spooky shows a newspaper. Tommy gasps in horror as he sees the front page. There is a kid in the front page photo being taken away by police. The headline reads "Youth Jailed", with a sub headline, "Tommy Pickles Jr. Arrested For Theft". "My son?" asked Tommy in disbelief as he takes the newspaper and looks at it. "Oh man, he looks liked me. 'Within two hours of his arrest, Tommy Pickles Jr. was tried, convicted, and sentenced to 15 years in the State Penitentiary"? Tommy looks shocked as he looks at Doc Spooky watching. "2 hours?" "Now that they got rid of all lawyers, seeing how useless they really are, the justice system works swiftly in the future." explains Doc Spooky. "Oh man, this is heavy." groaned Tommy. "It gets worst from there. Next week, your daughter Molly will try to break him out of there and she gets 20 years!" "I have a daughter?" asked Tommy alarmed. "Yes!" said Doc Spooky sternly as he points at the article. "This event starts a chain reaction that will permanently destroyed your whole family!" "But how can we stop something that..." Tommy stops as he eyes the dateline of the newspaper. "Wait, this is tomorrow's newspaper!" "I know. I already went ahead in time to see what will happened next. After some careful calcuations, this one event is the one that started it all. That's why we're here, to make sure it never happened!" Doc Spooky hears a beep. It's coming from his own watch. He looked at it and his eyes bugged out. "Darn! I'm late!" yelled Doc Spooky, grabbing the newspaper and running back towards the DeLorean. "What are you doing?" asked Tommy. "To intercept the real Tommy Jr. of course! That way, you can take his place without him coming in to ruined things! Remember, Cafe 80s, a guy named Dustin, say no!" "But what about Kimi? You think it's safe we leave here there?" Tommy asked glancing at his still unconscious girlfriend. "Not to worry. This shouldn't take too long." Doc Spooky assured Tommy as he got back into the DeLorean. Doc Spooky got back out again, remembering something. "Oh, and be careful of the Dustin character, will ya? He's got a few short circuits in his bionic implants." Doc Spooky makes a loopy sign with his finger spinning near the side of his head to show his point. For that reason, Tommy is uncomfortable. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 16 2006, 09:35 PM Post #4 |
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Tommy leaves the alley and takes a look of the future for the first time. Everything has changed in the past few years. "The future." said Tommy amazed as he looks around. The cars are flyings, technology is being used more than often, the whole place is clean, and so forth. There is a "no landing" printed on the road. As Tommy enters, he nearly gets hit by a flying car. Tommy moves so it could passed. He sees cars entering and leaving the sky via skyway. One of the few things that changed is the courthouse. The courthouse has since been turned into a mall, the parking lot has been turned into a lake with tropical plants with a man fishing there. The only thing that hasn't changed about the courthouse is that the clock, that was struck by lightning and stopped forever back in 1955, is still there. Betty and her group has succeeded in keeping the clock where it is. In fact, the ledge that Doc Spooky broke back in 1955 is still there as well. Tommy is amazed. He turns and sees a movie theater called "Imamax". The movie that is playing there is called "Reptar IX: The Re-Return!" directed by Jusstared Soniccraft. (Author's note: The director's name is a combination of both Staredcraft and mine's name, the guys who made the original Back to Tomorrow) "Welcome to Texaco." Tommy turns and sees the gas station from his time has changed as well. It now has two levels, one for the driving cars and the other for the flying. "You can trust your car to the system with the star. Checking oil and landing gear now..." As Tommy watches, he didn't noticed that a dinosaur appears from behind him and leans forward, getting ready to bite him. Tommy turned and yelled like heck as Reptar is about to bite into him. Just when it did, though, Reptar disappeared. Tommy calms down and notices that he's getting weird looks from passerbyers. He now realized that he screamed for nothing by a hologram of Reptar. "Well, he's still fake in real life, that's for sure." Tommy chuckled sheepishly. Tommy hears some music and turns just in time to see a holo-billboard image like thingie playing. Tommy sees an African American man who looks like Wilson Fox, the man Tommy met in 1955 who was destined to become mayor of North Californi. "Hello! This is Wilson Fox III for Fox Hover-Conversion Systems! You may not know this, but when my grandfather was mayor of North Californi, he was concerned about traffic problems." As Wilson Fox III speaks, a flying car hologram appears next to him. "But now, you don't have to! I will turn your car into a flyer for the sky! For only $39,999.95! So come see me, Wilson Fox III, at one of our stores! Keep them flying!" Tommy, while listening to the holo-billboard walks over to a store nearby that is yelling antiques. There are a bunch of items, some which were made after 1985. One of them catch his eye: a magazine about sports which is called "Black's Sports Magazine 1950-2000". 'That looks interesting.' Tommy thought. He then sees his destination, the Cafe 80s, which is next door and walks over to it. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 18 2006, 07:37 PM Post #5 |
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Tommy enters the Cafe 80s where Lou's, the old man he met back in 1955, cafe used to be at via a pair of swinging doors. Now, as Tommy enters, it's like he time-travelled without a time machine and return to 1985 or later. The whole place is decorated with a bunch of 1980s, some he didn't recognized, probably from after 1985. Behind the counter, the TVs are showing shows Tommy seen before and some he didn't, including episodes he didn't see yet. Two people are cycling on exercise bikes nearby. Unlike the restaurants Tommy know of, the only waiters are video waiters. In other words, TVs that hanged around the ceiling taking orders from customers via famous people of the 1980s. One of them, using the image of Michael Jackson, is speaking to a customer. "...or you might want to go south western with our la bamba fajita tortilla pita. It's got a hot salsa, avocados, some natural mix with your choice of beans, chicken, b..b..beef or pork....." said the Michael Jackson video waiter. Tommy comes in forward, still astounded by the place. Doc Spooky is right about one thing about this place: it isn't well done but at least it serves food. As he goes up to the counter, he is greeted by a video waiter who is using the image of 1985 president Ronald Reagan. "Welcome the Cafe 80s, where it's always morning in America even in the aftern..n..noon. Our special today is a grilled..." The video waiter is interrupted as the image went into a split-screen. Next to Reagan's half is terrorist Ayatollah Khomeini, or his image anyway. "No! You must have the hostage special!" yelled Ayatollah. "No! The grilled..." The waiters got into a heated argument seemingly ignoring Tommy. That is until he yells out. "Hey guys!" Tommy yelled causing the two to stopped. "All I want is a Pepsi." The video waiter complices to Tommy's request and a Pepsi in a futuristic bottle appears from a counter. Tommy takes and looks at it. "Pepsi Perfect, huh? Man, the future rules." Tommy said with a smile. "Hey Pickles!" Tommy looks startled. That voice sounds scarily familiar. He turns slowly. The voice came from an old man wearing a red green and brown pants. In his hands is a cane with some sort of fist gold symbol on top of it. The old man chuckles sinisterly. "I have seen you before. You're Tommy Pickles's kid, right idiot?" "Justin!" Tommy gasped surprised. Standing before him is the 2015 version of his father's former lifetime bully. Except it looks like the years didn't go too well on the old guy. Justin Treene ignored Tommy's surprised gasp, got up, and walks over to Tommy waving a cane at him. "You're Tommy Jr." remarked Justin. He then smirked. "What a shame, being named after a complete idiot." "What does that mean?" Tommy demands annoyed by his remark. Justin rolls his eyes and then knocks Tommy on the head using his cane, doing the same thing he used to do to Stu. "Hello! Hello! Anyone home? Huh?" asked Justin. "Hey! Cut it out!" yelled Tommy, getting headaches by the cane. "Think Pickles Think! You know your old man, the big loser?" "Loser?" Tommy gasped alarmed. His father Stu was no longer a loser thanks to Tommy's interferring in 1955. Did time changed back? "Yeah, loser with a captail 'L'." Justin said with another smirk. "Come off it! I should know that Stu Pickles is not a loser!" "No, not Stu! Stu hasn't been a loser in years! Not since 1955 anyway. No, I am talking about his kid!" As Tommy looks on confused, a car landed outside of the Cafe 80s and a gang got out of it. Tommy didn't noticed as he kept listening to Justin, "Your pop, Tommy Pickles Sr.? The guy who pulled the dumbest mistake in his life and messed it up forever?" "I did?" Tommy asked astounded. Realizing where he is, he corrected himself, "I mean, he did?" "Hey Gramps!" Tommy looks in the direction of the doors. Entering the Cafe is a tough looking kid in futuristic clothes as if he's a future tough guy. He has a gray metal hat on his head, nasty looking shoes, and a black shirt. For some reason, Tommy noticed that he looks like Justin back in 1955. Justin obviously knew this kid as the newcomer continues, "I wanted 2 coats of wax on my car, not 1!" Justin cringes as he turns to face the tough kid. He calmly said, "Come on! I put the 2nd coat on already!" The kid rolled his eyes in annoyance. "With your eyes closed maybe!" "Do you two know each other?" Tommy asked with a frown, still not seeing the connection. Justin frowns deeply and hits Tommy on the head with his cane again, this time the boy dodges it. "Hello! Hello! Anybody home?" yelled Justin in annoyance as he glances at the kid. "What? You think Dustin called me gramps just for the heck of it?" "He's Dustin?" gasped Tommy in shock. The Dustin character Tommy must face to save his son is this guy, Justin Treene's own grandson? "Get your butt out here! I ain't paying you to gawk!" snapped Dustin angrily. "Hey kid, say hello to your grandma for me." Justin said with a smile. Even at his old age, he still has a thing for Tommy's mom. "Get out here!" yelled Dustin as he grabs his grandfather out of the cafe through the doors. "Take it easy!" Dustin goes in for a few seconds and glares at Tommy. "And Pickles! Stay in here or else! I am not done with you yet!" yelled Dustin as he leaves the Cafe once more. |
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| Spongefan912 | Aug 19 2006, 12:36 AM Post #6 |
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| JusSonic | Aug 19 2006, 09:52 AM Post #7 |
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Tommy looks in disbelief. Of all the peop-le Tommy has go through to save his family's skin, it has to be someone who is either Justin or related to Justin in general. Justin has bullied Stu back in his teen years and come to think about it, Justin's kids more often than not bullied Tommy, Dil, and Tammy. And now, Dustin, Justin's grandson, is bulling Tommy's own son. 'Let's face it. It's fate. The Treenes will always bullied the Pickles.' thought Tommy with a sigh. "Hey, I got this baby working!" Upon hearing that, Tommy turned and sees that two kids are at an old fashion (well, this is 2015 after all) arcade machine. The machine has the game "Wild Gunman" on it. "My dad told me about this." said the other kid with a smile. "Wild Gunman. Cool." Tommy said with a smile as he stood up. "How do you play this thing?" asked the first boy with a frown. "Allow me." Tommy said as he takes his hat off and throws it on top of the machine. "I kicked butt at this." Tommy takes your usual arcade game and gets ready as the first round begins. As the video game bandits appeared and gets ready to fire, Tommy was quick on the draw and shot the video game bandits dead. After that, the words 'crack shot' appeared on the screen. Tommy smiled but the kids are less than impress. "You have to use your hands for that?" asked the first boy in disbelief. "That's a baby toy." waved the second boy in dismissal as he and the other boy left. "Baby's toy?" Tommy asked shocked at this announcement. "Man, things has changed in years." "Pepsi Perfect!" Tommy turned and his eyes widen. Someone has entered the Cafe 80s, someone familiar... His own son! "Crud!" yelled Tommy as he jumps behind the counter. "Pepsi." repeated Tommy Jr. nervously. "Didn't you already order one?" asked the video waiter puzzled. Before Tommy Jr. could respond, especially with the confused look on his face, Dustin came in, this time followed by goons: Compo (a tech bully with technology on bits of him), Witchy (a mean girl with spiked yellow hair), and Weasel (a crazy like bully). The leader himself is a bit ticked off. "Hey Pickles!" yelled Dustin. Tommy Jr. turns upon hearing that and looks confused as Dustin continued yelling, "Didn't I tell you to stay in here?" "Hey Dustin, guys! How are ya?" asked Tommy Jr. chuckling, kinda like what his grandpa Stu did back in the 1950s. He adjusts his jacket by himself because the jacket is broken at the moment. "Pickles." sneered Dustin as he and his goons got close. Tommy, the original one, watched as he is kinda watching a futuristic version of Justin picking on Stu back in 1955. "What?" asked Tommy Jr. puzzled. "Pickles!" "What?" "Your shoe's unbelted!" said Justin pointing down to Tommy Jr.'s shoes. As Tommy's son looks down gullible, Dustin punches the boy in the gut knocking him onto the counter. Tommy is disbelief. 'Why couldn't he do something? No kid of mine would allowed a Treene to pushed him around.' thought Tommy as he watches on. Dustin then pulls Tommy Jr. back up and set him down. "Now then, Pickles, did you think about my offer for tonight?" asked Dustin. Tommy's heart almost froze. They're talking about the same night Tommy Jr. gets caught and arrested! "I am not sure, Dustin. I mean, it sounds kinda dangerous to me. I did think about it, honest." said Tommy Jr. nervously. "What's wrong, Pickles?" asked Witchy with a seductive smile as she touches Tommy Jr.'s face, making him nervous. "Got no scrote?" Tommy Jr. yells in pain as Witchy digs into his 'private area'. He got knocked onto the counter again much to the original Tommy's disbelief. "He's a wimp." Tommy groaned. Tommy Jr. recovered, sort of, and got back up as Dustin speaks. "So Pickles, are you with us or against us?" "I'm still not sure. Maybe I should asked dad first." chuckled Tommy Jr. nervously. "Your father?" laughed the gang at once. Dustin makes a wrong answer noise then said, "Think again, Pickles!" Dustin grabs Tommy Jr. and throws him over the counter. Tommy yelps as his own son landed next to him, almost unconscious. Dustin and his goons laughed at this. "Okay, you win! I'd do it! Just don't beat me." groaned Tommy Jr. softly. Luckily, Dustin or his goons didn't hear him. "Shut up so I can saved you!" hissed Tommy annoyed. Luckily, Tommy Jr. went unconscious and didn't hear him. "Keep pedaling you two!" snapped Dustin pointing at the cyclists who stopped for a sec. Everyone stopped what they're doing to watch this. 'Well, Tommy Pickles Jr. is out. Time for Tommy Pickles Sr. to stepped in.' thought Tommy taking his son's hat and putting it on. Dustin looks surprised as Tommy, not the Tommy he knew unknown to him, stood up with a determined look on his face. As he and his goons watched, Tommy hops over the counter. Dustin's surprise wore off and he grabs Tommy, holding a fist to his face. "Now, am I going to hear the right answer or what?" asked Dustin with a smirk. Suddenly Tommy frowns and pushed Dustin away, much to the bully's surprise. "Since when did you became the physical type?" asked Dustin chuckling evilly. "Forget it, Dustin! I won't do it." said Tommy. "What? You won't do it?" asked Dustin surprised and disbelief. "What? You're deaf and stupid? Forget it!" snapped Tommy as he walks away. "What's wrong Pickles? Are you a baby?" sneered Dustin. Tommy stopped and frowns. If there's one thing he does not liked to be called and that's a baby. Compo knew that too as he plays a baby sound effect on one of his technology things, seeming mocking Tommy. Tommy turns and glares at Dustin angrily. "What did you called me?" demands Tommy. "A baby, Pickles." said Dustin hiding a hand behind his back, the baby sound effect being played again. Tommy throws the hat away and stomps up to Dustin. "No one calls me..." Tommy stops as Dustin takes out a billy club from behind his back. Tommy finished sheepishly, "....a baby." Dustin roared and charges at Tommy, billy club swinging. Tommy got out of the way in time and Dustin ends up smashing the Ronald Reagan video waiter instead. Dustin recovers and stood in front of Tommy angrily. Much to Tommy's shock, Dustin grew taller (probably because of his bionic implants), kinda like his grandpa in 1955. "All right, moron!" yelled Dustin. "Look!" yelled Tommy, pointing to nowhere in particular. Tommy hopes Dustin is like his grandpa and he would looked. Tommy smiles as Dustin turns to looked. Tommy throws a fist, but to his surprise, Dustin catches Tommy's fist in his hand, stopping it. Dustin smirks evilly. 'Okay, so he isn't like his grandpa. I can still do this!' thought Tommy quickly as he kicks Dustin 'down there', making him groaned. Tommy quickly pushed the big guy right onto his gang, knocking them all down. Knowing Dustin will get up soon, Tommy decides to get the heck out of there. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 20 2006, 01:12 PM Post #8 |
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Tommy runs out of the Cafe, passing Justin waxing Dustin's car. He looks around for a way to escaped. Then he spots two girls riding on strange looking scooters. "Hey girl! Wait!" yelled Tommy as he runs up to the girls and take one of them off a scooter. "Hey!" protested the girl. "I got to borrow your..." Tommy stops for a sec as he saw that he isn't a scooter at all. It is some sort of kiddie toy with no wheels but is floating. Tommy sees some words written on it. "Hoverboard?" "Where is he?" Tommy looks up to see that Dustin's goon has came out of the Cafe 80s looking for him, the voice coming from Compo. Now wasting any time, Tommy removes the handlebars from the hoverboard and hands it to the girl. "Here." Tommy said making a run for it. "There he is!" yelled Weasel pointing at Tommy. Tommy throws the hoverboard down and it floats in front of him. He smiles. 'Well, if this is anything like a skateboard.' thought Tommy as he quickly jumps on a hoverboard. Soon Tommy begins to hovers off, riding it like a skateboard. "He's on a hoverboard!" yelled Weasel. "Get our boards!" yelled Compo running to fetch the gang's hoverboards from Dustin's car. "Get Pickles!" screamed Witchy. Tommy manages to get a hang of the hoverboard. That is until he wasn't watching where he was going and almost collided with some people and rocks. "Whoa!" yelled Tommy as he moves out of the way only to fall off the hoverboard. He's bruised but okay. "Get him!" yelled Compo as he, Witchy, and Compo got on their own hoverboards and gave chase. "Crud!" yelled Tommy as he got back on the hoverboard and made off with Dustin's goons in pursuit. "Almost on him!" yelled Witchy, as she and the other two are almost on Tommy. Luckily a Jeep lands in the street at the right time. Tommy quickly grabs the back of the jeep. Weasel tries to grab Tommy but he misses. As this happened, Justin took time off from waxing the car to look at this town. "There's something familiar about this." said Justin with a frown. He can't remember but he recognized this scene from somewhere before. Something about a punk kid who ticked him off many years ago... Dustin, recovered from the blow Tommy has gave him, stormed out of the Cafe 80s with bat in hands. He looks around, planning on killing a certain Pickle. That Pickle in question is about lose his grip from the Jeep. Luckily, he grabs onto a rope dangling from the back and hold onto it while trailing behind like he was water skiing on air. He laughs as he turns to see that he is losing Dustin's goons as he is nearly hovering the crowd as the Jeep turns a corner. Tommy looks just in time as he is near Dustin's car and the man himself is about to swing his bat at him! Tommy dodges just in time causing Dustin to missed and break one of the headlights of his car in anger. Tommy looks amused but lost it when he turns and sees that he is about to collided into another car! Tommy screamed and barely missed it. But his hand slips from the rope and he is send hovering towards the pond. He hovers above it and kinda 'jumps' across it. But he stops just before he is almost to the other side near the courthouse. He looks puzzled as he realized that the hoverboard isn't moving. Tommy tries frantically to moved it. He then hears Dustin's goons laughing at him. "Pickles, you clown!" sneered Compo causing Tommy to turned. "Huh?" asked Tommy puzzled. "Those boards don't do squat on water!" "Unless you have power." laughed Weasel in agreement. Dustin looks on in anger as his gang laughs at Tommy's misfortune than he heads back to his car. Tommy looks frantically as he tries to keep on moving but his hoverboard still won't moved over water. Back at Dustin's car, the man himself grabs a box from it and moves forward with his goons following. He stops a bit and opens the box. A very mean looking hoverboard pops out with a growl, running on jet power. "Hook on!" yelled Dustin. Dustin's goons hooked some lines from Dustin's hoverboard to their own. Tommy, seeing this, is still trying to get the hoverboard moving. Dustin got on his hoverboard, it makes pitbull noises as he does. Dustin waves his bat in the air, like a general about to lead his troops into battle. He looks at Tommy and smirks evilly. "Time to strike you out!" yelled Dustin. Dustin's hoverboard roars and took out with Dustin on it and Dustin's goons and their own hoverboards behind it. Tommy tries his best to get moving but it was no use. He sees that Dustin is almost on him getting ready to strike with his bat. Tommy thinks quickly and fast. Just before Dustin is about to get close to attack Tommy, the purple-haired boy quickly jumps off the hoverboard and went into the water. Dustin didn't react in time as his hoverboard crashed into a rock of the other shore and send him and his gang flying. As they screamed, they smashed right into the front window of the Courthouse Mall, shocking passer byers. Tommy pops out just in time and gasped as he sees the damage Dustin's group has caused. "Holy geez!" yelled Tommy in shock. Tommy looks around and grabs the hoverboard and make a swim for it before anything else crazy happens. Back at the Cafe, Justin shook his head in disgust as he views what happens. "Idiots." mumbled Justin as he walks off. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 21 2006, 02:56 PM Post #9 |
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Soon, Tommy left the Courthouse Mall via the underground entrance. He glances as he sees the police arriving and people gathering to see what's going on. He sighs in relief then hears some beeping. Tommy sees a button, the same old Doc Spooky pushed to adjust the jacket to fit Tommy earlier, flashing and pushes it. Suddenly the jacket acts like it is in a hair dryer. "Drying mode on! Jacket drying!" Soon the jacket stops. "Jacket now dry." Sighing, Tommy sees the girl he borrowed the hoverboard from and goes over to her. "Hey kid. Thanks for the hoverboard." Tommy said holding out the hoverboard so he could return it. But the girl just smirked and held up Dustin's discarded Pitbull hoverboard. "You can have it! This baby is mine now!" "Let's go!" giggled the other girl as she and the first girl left. Tommy looks disbelief and looks at the hoverboard. What is he going to do with it now? 'Oh well. I can take it home and ride it. As long as I keep it hidden and no one knows about it, it's mine.' thought Tommy. "Hey kid!" Tommy turns to see an old in a white shirt and black pants approaching Tommy, pointing towards the clocktower. "Can you hand over a couple bucks so we can saved that clocktower?" What? They're threatening to tear down the clocktower again? Oh well, weird things has happened. "Uh, no thanks." said Tommy, dismissing as he walks off. "Come on, kid! That clock is very important!" protested the old man following Tommy. "I said no." "Lightning hit that clock 60 years ago! Oh, I will never forget that day. Even though I wasn't there, I still won't forget it. November 12, 1955. Because why?" As they continued to talk, they passed Justin about to reentered the Cafe 80s. The old man sees and yells at him, "Because old man weasel try to cheat me outta 300 bucks for fixing his car!" Justin cringes and glares at the old man, "Aw, shut it, John." "You know your car was filled with horse crap, Justin! Back them I was a mechanic! I am your stinking stable boy!" snapped John. "Do me a favor and stay in the present, not the past!" snapped Justin as he went back into the Cafe 80s. John frowns as Tommy chuckles. Tommy then said, "Let me guess. He chased down kid and crashed into a manure truck." John sighs. "He never could get over it. Anyway, kid, back to the subj..." "Hold on." Tommy said seeing something. He sees some sort of Sports hologram starting. He looks in disbelief as he reads it. "Chicago Cubs wins the World Series against Miami?" "Yeah. No one thought they could after so many darn years." John said with a shrug. "It was a 100 to 1 shot. Man, it makes me wish I could go back to where that season begins and puts a bunch of money on the Cubs." "Actually I meant..." Tommy stops when he heard what John just said. "What did you just say?" "I said I wish I could go back to where the season begins. Put money on the cubs." explained John. As John leaves, forgetting to reasked Tommy for a donation, Tommy looks on in thought. He got an idea. One that could helped him. Or make things worst. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 22 2006, 07:11 PM Post #10 |
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Tommy returns to the antique store and purchase the item he was looking at before he entered the Cafe 80s: "Black's Sports Magazine 1950-2000". He smiles at it as the saleswoman was speaking. "This book you just purchased has a great feature called a dust jacket. Before dust repellent paper was invented, books uses these to protect the cover." explains the saleswoman. Then she smiles as she holds up a machine. "Also, if you're interested in dust, there's still Dust Buster." "Uh, no thanks." Tommy said as he finished making the purchase then walked outside. Tommy smiles as he takes the magazine out of the silver bag it was put in. "This is going to be great." Tommy said with a smirk. "Tommy!" Tommy turned and sees Doc Spooky hovering near the shop in the DeLorean. "Hey Doc!" said Tommy as he puts the magazine back and hides the silver bag. "Hold on. I'd landed the DeLorean." Unknown to Tommy and Doc Spooky, Justin has chose that time to exit the Cafe 80s. He looks up and gapes as he sees the DeLorean. For some strange reason, he recognized it. "Well, what do you know? A flying DeLorean." chuckled Justin. "I haven't seen one like that in," Justin frowns as he remembers something, "30 years." Suddenly Justin was pushed aside by someone. He turned to see who it is and looked startled. Tommy Jr. has regain consciousness. "Sorry about that." mumbled Tommy Jr. as he goes out into the road. He jumps back as a car nearly hit and beeps its horn at him. "Can't you see I'm walking here?" Justin looks alarmed as he looks back from Tommy Jr. to the kid with Doc Spooky. "Two of them?" gasped Justin alarmed. Something's up and Justin's going to get to the bottom of it. And maybe use it to his advantage... At the DeLorean, Tommy pets Spike, whom he hasn't seen since his return to 1985. "Good to see you again, Spike." Tommy said with a smile, then to Doc Spooky, "Where was he?" "Oh, I put him in one of those suspended animation kennels. Spike has no idea I left his side." explained Doc Spooky. As the scientist got out of the DeLorean, he saw something that startled. "Tommy! What in the name of Sir Isaac H. Newton happened?" Tommy looked and sees that Doc Spooky is talking about the scene at the courthouse. "Oh yeah. Well, you see, Doc, my son got here and things went nuts." "Your kid?" asked Doc Spooky. He groans and sat back in the DeLorean. "Great Scott! The sleep knock'er outer!" As Doc Spooky continued, neither he or Tommy noticed Justin sneaking behind the DeLorean listening in. "I was afraid of this! Because I used it on Kimi, I didn't have enough power to knocked your son out for the hour needed!" "Calm down! I said no to Dustin." Tommy explained. He then notices something on the paper and points. "Doc! Look! Something's happening to the newspaper!" As Doc Spooky looks, the newspaper article suddenly changed from "Youth Jailed" to "Gang Jailed". The picture changes from Tommy Jr. being arrested to Dustin and his gang being arrested outside of the courthouse. Out of curiosity, Doc Spooky stood up and looked at the scene via his binoculars. Sure enough, like in the paper, Dustin and his gang are being taken away by the police as a newspaper robot takes a photo for the newspaper tomorrow, the same one Tommy and Doc Spooky now have. "Let go of me, you jerk!" yelled Weasel struggling uselessly. "I was framed! You can't do this to me!" yelled Dustin uselessly. "Of course!" said Doc Spooky smiling as he puts the binoculars. He laughs then continues, "Thanks to this hoverboard accident, Dustin goes to jail. Because of that, your son won't go with him tonight and that robbery will never take place! History, the future of this timeline, has now changed and this is the proof!" Tommy looks amazed. It's surprising enough he changed the past of his present. Now he changes the future of his future! The doc can tell Tommy is amazed as he continued, "Tommy, we have done it. Although this isn't what I have in mind, it worked anyway! Come on! Let's get Kimi and go home!" Tommy looks excited and goes to get his stuff. He put his hoverboard in while the doc wasn't looking. But when he goes to put the magazine in the bag in, the magazine fell out and landed at Doc Spooky's feet. This didn't go unnoticed. "What is this?" Doc Spooky asked as he picks up the magazine and looked at it. "Oh, that? Well, nothing, just something I thought I could take home as a sovernir." explained Tommy. Doc Spooky frowns. This magazine is a sports almaniac. While it isn't a problem to anyone, the fact that it has details from the future is bad enough. "Tommy, this isn't what I called good reading." Doc Spooky said, scolding Tommy. "Oh come on. It's only a little info about the future." explained Tommy. Then he smirked. "Besides, who knows? We may make some money off the side." That was a bad choice of words as Doc Spooky frowns deeply. "Tommy! I did not make the time machine as a gambling device! The intent here is to gain a clear perception of humanity. Where we've been, where we're going. The pitfalls and the possibilities. The perils and the promise. Perhaps even an answer to that universal question, why?" Tommy looks startled. "Come on! I think that is all good! But what's wrong with making some money?" "I can't take any chances of you doing something stupid! This goes in the trash!" Doc Spooky goes to a moving bin near the alleyway, the same one they hid Kimi. Before he throws the magazine in though, he spots something down the alley and gasped. "Great Scott!" yelled Doc Spooky. He waves to Tommy and the boy followed the scientist to a corner and looked around it. To Tommy's shock, two cops are looking over Kimi. "Pickles, Kimi Watanabe Finster. 1234 Takworst Ave., Dimmsdale. Age: 47." said a cop named Officer Tress using a scanner on Kimi via her thumbprint. The other cop, Officer Stacy, whistled. "Now that's one heck of a facelift!" "What's going on?" whispered Tommy shocked. "They're using her thumbprint to check her ID." explained Doc Spooky. "Because her thumbprint hasn't changed over the years, they think Kimi is the Kimi of 2015." "We got to saved her!" "How? Tell them we're time travellers?" scoffed Doc Spooky. "They could have us send to the asylum before we're finished!" As the two looked on, the cops finished checking the unconscious Kimi. "Well, she has no criminal records, she's clean. We'd better take her home." said Officer Stacy picking Kimi up and taking her to a nearby cop car. "To Dimmsdale?" laughed Officer Tress in disbelief. "By the time we arrived, it will be dark." Doc Spooky nods and got an idea. "Okay, they will take her back to your home, your future one that is. When they dropped her off, we'd picked her up and return to 1985." "Hold it, hold it." Tommy interrupted in shock, shock at the thought of seeing where he'd lived one day. "You mean I'd see where I'd lived someday and see myself very old?" "Tommy, we can't let you see yourself. That could resolved in..." Doc Spooky gasped in realization. "Oh no! Now that you mentioned, Kimi could see her future self! If that happens, what happens soon after could be very bad." Tommy looks very worried. "How is that bad?" "Well, I am hoping for one of the two options. 1, when she does see herself, she'd freaked out and passed out. Or 2, the encounter could create a time paradox, the results of which could cause a chain reaction that would unravel the very fabric of the space-time continuum and destroy the entire universe!" Doc Spooky explained in horrible. "How can that be?" "Well, what if Kimi dies soon after? Then you would never married her or have kids. Then there will be no reason for me to bring you to this timeline and save your son! And...well, you get the idea! That is one bad scenario. Luckily for us, it will only be limited to our galaxy." "Well, that's a relief." said Tommy in disbelief. As the two continues watching, the police car took off to Dimmsdale with Kimi in it. "Come on! We better get to Kimi before her future self does." explained Doc Spooky. He looks up to see a sign. It's giving out some bad news about the skyway making him frown. "Darn it! I shoulda known! Skyway's jammed! That's bad news when it will take us forever to get there!" Doc Spooky then looks at the magazine then to Tommy, "And one more thing: this thing stays in this timeline. I didn't make the DeLorean as a time machine for a gambling scam, I made it so I could go through time!" That said, Doc Spooky throws the magazine in a nearby trash barrel and left. Tommy sighs. It's a shame he would watch his shame of stopping his life from becoming what Justint old him, but he couldn't go against what Doc Spooky said. "All right." said Tommy with a sigh as he follows after his friend. Unknown to the two once more, as they left, a familiar figure came out of a nearby door, goes over to the barrel, and picks up the magazine. Justin smirked. "Well, Doc Spooky made a time machine, did he?" That gave the old man an idea. A very evil idea. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 23 2006, 05:12 PM Post #11 |
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Back in 1985, Dimmsdale was just starting out, a home estate for those who wish to have a great future. But over the years, it has turned from a fine neighborhood into a nightmare zone, a place for criminals to hide in. The cops arrived at the place and lands outside a house. The cops came out and looked around in disgust. "Why would anyone want to lived here, especially Mrs. Pickles? Dimmsdale is nothing but a breeding ground for tranks, lobos and zipheads." said Officer Tress in disgust. "I know. They should get rid of this place. But it isn't our place to say." said Officer Stacy with a sigh. "Come on." They got Kimi out of the car and brought her over to her house. The two pressed Kimi's thumb to a panel next to the front door and it opens up. A computer voice is heard, "Welcome home, Kimi." "Huh?" The voice stirred Kimi, waking her up. "You're okay, madam. You just got a little tranked but you should walk again in no time." said Officer Tress with a smile. "Though we think you should reprogram. In this place, it's dangerous to come in without lights on." said Officer Stacy precautionly. "Lights on?" asked Kimi puzzled. As if to obey a command, the lights turn on instantly. The cops helped Kimi onto a couch and sat her down. "Now be careful in the future, okay?" said Officer Tress. "Future?" asked Kimi. "Have a nice night, Mrs. Pickles." said Officer Stacy, saluting as she and her fellow cop take their leave. After they left, closing the door behind them, Kimi took a look around in disbelief. This is her home, her home in the future. Kimi notes that a window curtain is showing stuff like a TV. "Broadcasting beautiful views 24 hours a day: You're tuned to the Scenery Channel." mumbled a computerized voice. "So, this is the future." said Kimi as she got up. She notices some photos nearby and take a look. To her disbelief, she found one that has her wedding. However, it isn't the perfect wedding she expected. Herself from the future and the Tommy of the future are standing in front of a Las Vegas church, trying their best to looked happy. Stu and Didi are nearby, trying to do the same. The scene looks like they just eloped. "Oh no. Our wedding was in the chapel of love?" gasped Kimi. "Mom?" Kimi dropped her photo and looked up. Someone's coming from upstairs. "Mom, are you there?" "I gotta get out of here." said Kimi. She makes her way to the front door. But to her shock, there is no door knob in sight. As she looked frantically for a way to opened the door, a doorbell rings. "Mom?" said the voice again. It's getting closer. Kimi thinks quickly, sees a closet nearby, and runs to hide in it, closing the door doing so. And just in time as an Asian girl came from upstairs. She is Molly, Tommy and Kimi's future daughter. Molly looks around puzzled. "Mom, is that you?" asked Molly looking around. She hears the doorbell again and goes to answer it. She opens it and smiles. "Grandpa Didi!" said Molly happily. Coming in is Tommy's mother Didi, only years older, grey hair, and wrinkling skin. But she is still better than ever. "Molly." cooed Didi as she hugs her granddaughter. Molly looks from Didi and looks surprised. "What happened to grandpa?" Didi rolls her eyes as she came in. "He threw his back out again." Sure enough, there's Stu, Tommy's father and Molly's grandfather, on a hovering device floating upside down. But he is also in good health as well. "Hey pumpkin." greeted Stu as he came in. "How did that happened?" asked Molly in disbelief as she looked back and forth. "On the golf course. Accident." chuckled Stu sheepishly. "Are your folks home? I brought pizza for everyone." said Didi holding up some sort of small packet that is supposed to be holding pizza. "Who is going to eat something that small?" joked Molly. "I will!" volunteered Stu. "Darn this traffic!" yelled Doc Spooky frustrated as he and Tommy tries their best to make it through the skyway towards where Dimmsdale is at. "Kimi, the old Kimi, should be home by now! We better get there before she does." Doc Spooky pauses as he looks through his goggles. They are rear display goggles, which shows the back of the DeLorean. "Anything wrong?" asked Tommy puzzled. "For a while, I thought I saw a cab following us in my rear display. Strange." said Doc Spooky with a frown. Back at the future Pickles home, Didi is flipping the channels on the window curtain TV. "Why is this thing broken? I thought your father has it fixed by now." complained Didi as she keeps changing the channels. Molly sighs and said, "Ever since the scene screen repairman called Daddy a baby and Daddy kicked him out, no one was brave enough to come fixed it for us. This keeps happening to every repairman who keeps calling Daddy that." Didi sighs sadly as she lifts the window curtain TV up revealing the real window. Kimi listens in as Didi speaks, "This thing has worn out. You know what your father's problem is, Molly? He loses it everytime someone calls him a baby? I mean, how many times we heard that, Stu? Mom..." "...I can't let them think I'm a baby." Stu said at the same time as Didi. "Well, you're right on that one." agreed Stu. "30 years ago, your dad tried to prove he wasn't a baby. And because of him losing his temper, he got into that automotive accident." "The Rolls Royce, right?" asked Molly, hearing this story a bunch of times already. "Automotive accident?" said Kimi in disbelief as she continues to listened in. 30 years ago? That happened in 1985? But when? And why does she has a feeling she's involved somehow? Outside the Dimmsdale place, the DeLorean landed in a No Landing Zone. Once it did, Doc Spooky got out. "Let's find Kimi, Spike." Doc Spooky told his dog who got out. "Man, this is Dimmsale! I lived here! This is so cool!" Tommy said excited as he got out. "Tommy, stay here and changed your clothes. We need your help, we'd let you know." said Doc Spooky as he heads into Dimmsdale. "But Doc..." "Tommy, please! We can't let yourself see you. Your future self, that is. Come on, Spike." Tommy frowns as Doc Spooky and Spike heads into Dimmsdale but he gave in and sat back into the DeLorean. He begins to changed back into his regular clothes, while saying, "Dimmsdale? This is great." Nearby, a taxi cab landed. Apparently, Doc Spooky was right in thinking it was following the DeLorean as Justin came out of the cab, bringing a familiar magazine with him. "$174.50." said a computerized voice from the taxi. "That's $174.50, sir." said the taxi driver. "Here." mumbled Justin as he presses his thumbprint on a gadget and pay his fee. "Be careful. This place could rough." "Give me my receipt!" snapped Justin taking his receipt. As the taxi flies off, Justin goes to hide behind a recycling station nearby and watches the DeLorean. He is also watching for his first chance of beginning his big plan. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 26 2006, 08:46 PM Post #12 |
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Back inside the Pickles' home, Kimi listened in near a doorframe as she listened to Didi. She is horrified as she heard what will happened to Tommy back in 1985. "When that happens, it has changed your father's life forever." Didi explained to Molly, unaware that Kimi (the past one) is listening in as well. "If your father woulda known better and haven't try to prove he wasn't a baby and caused that accident, he would never lived the sad life he's living now," As Didi continues, Molly causes some sort of fruit holder to come from the ceiling above a kitchen table, "the owner of the Rolls Royce wouldn't have pressed charges forcing Tommy to sell most of his belongings including the truck to pay for the damages, your father wouldn't have broke his hand and make him give up on his magic. And then your father wouldn't spent the rest of his life feeling that everything was his own fault." As Kimi listens in, she is unaware that Tommy Jr. has passed by, just arriving home. Her son sees her and smirks. "Nice pants, mom." remarked Tommy Jr. as he heads into another room. "While your mother could defy it all she wants, the true reason she even married your father to begin with because she felt sorry for him." Didi said with a sad sigh. "Mom?" gasped Kimi in shock as she sees her own son. "She's a sweet girl, she deserves better than this." As Kimi watches, Tommy Jr. sat down in front of a TV which is showing a painting on display. "Okay, get rid of that." Tommy Jr. ordered. The image disappeared as he continues, "I want channels 18, 24, 63, 109, 87 and the Weather Channel." The screen splits into the channels he has asked for. Tommy Jr. smiles as he watches. "Welcome home, Tommy." said the same computerized voice from before. "Guess what, dad's home!" said a familiar voice. "Lord of the manor." Kimi turned and looked surprised. Now entering is her own boyfriend and future husband, Tommy Pickles, now older than when she last saw her. He is wearing a business suit and is carrying a suitcase like he just came back from work. Kimi hides back into the closet before Tommy could see her. "Hello, hello!" said Tommy trying to sound happy or something. "King of the castle." continued the computerized voice. "Hello." Tommy frowns as he notices something. "What the...?" As Kimi watches, Tommy pushes a button on the wall. A computerized voice said, "Lithium mode on." "Good. Crazy kids." mumbled Tommy. He then heads into the den. He smiles as he sees his son. "Hey sport." Tommy called. But his son ignored him and continued watching the TV. "Watching the boob tube as usual?" Tommy Jr. still ignores him. Tommy sighs and heads into the kitchen. As Kimi watches, Tommy smiles as he sees his mother. "Is that my mom, is that my mom?" laughed Tommy. "Tommy!" said Didi happily as she hugs her own son. "Hey princess." Tommy said to Molly, who is reading a teen magazine. "Hey champ." Stu said smiling. "Dad?" asked Tommy surprised as he sees that Stu is upside down in his chair. "What happened to you? Did your back went out again?" "Go easy on me, son. I was on the golf course." Stu said sheepishly. "Man, you messed up with your backswing again, did you?" "It wasn't his fault. Some jerk in a flying car came out of nowhere and hit him. He almost was killed." Didi explained. "And I was 2 under Par." agreed Stu. "This whole world has either come worst or good, I don't know what." Didi said with a sigh. She changes the subject. "How was work, Tommy?" Tommy chuckles as he puts his things away. "Great as usual. That promotion should arrived anytime now. Now you're here, let's get some food. I'm hungry." Tommy then heads back into the den and said, "Tommy Jr., get to the table. Dinner time." "But I'm watching TV, dad." protested Tommy Jr. "You know that when your grandparents are here, you are to sit at the table like the rest of us. Here, put these on." said Tommy as he hands a pair of glasses to his son. Tommy Jr. groaned as he got up and take the glasses. "But these glasses stink! I can only watch two shows on these." "You should be lucky." Tommy said, shaking his head in disbelief as Tommy Jr. went into the kitchen. "When I was your age, if I wanted to watch two shows at once, I just put two TVs next to each other." Back outside, Tommy has since put all his 1985 stuff back on. He sighs as he looks around. He looks surprised. "Whoa." said Tommy as he got back up. He sees a dog on a leash...held by a robotic lead. "Well, maybe a quick peek won't harmed..." Tommy goes to take a closer look. Unknown to him still, Justin was watching when this happened and smirks. "Bad move, idiot." chuckled Justin evilly as he grabs the bag with the magazine in it and heads to the DeLorean. He got in, unseen by Tommy, closes the doors, and gets the DeLorean moving. He pulls the car into reverse, knocking down a bunch of boxes doing so. This remain unseen by Tommy, however. Justin turns the DeLorean around and flies off on his evil mission... |
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| JusSonic | Aug 27 2006, 07:56 PM Post #13 |
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Back in the Pickles kitchen, she opens a packet and takes out a pizza, a very small one. "Cool! Pizza!" said Tommy Jr. with a smirk. "Wait. It's not ready yet." Tommy told his son. "When it is, can you shove it in my mouth?" "Now don't be a wise guy!" "Oh man, I'm getting the lame channel." groaned Tommy Jr. as he watches two channels on his TV glasses. Didi puts the pizza in a machine, closes it, and speaks into it. "Hydrate Level 4 please." The machine begins to stired. 4 seconds later, it dings. Didi opens it up and takes out the pizza, only it's bigger. "Is it ready?" asked Tommy Jr. impatiently. Didi smiles as she puts the pizza, half pepperoni, half peppers on the table. "Here's your pizza." said Didi happily as she and everyone else took a slice. Tommy Jr. eats a slice as he continues watching TV on his TV glasses. Molly, meanwhile has another pair of phones that acts like a telephone. "Man, as usual, mom, when it's cooking pizza, you're the best." chuckled Tommy as he eats his slice. He sighs. "Man, I missed those good old days." "Well, we would have continue doing so if we were to throw a party." said Didi as she takes a slice and goes over to Stu. "Mom, we got to stop throwing parties for Uncle Louie. Everytime we try to, it turns out he never made parole." Tommy said, rolling his eyes. "He'd get out, one of these days. Stu, you better rotate so your stomach won't turned as you eat." Didi said as she hands some food to her husband. "Okay, fore!" joked Stu as he does so. "Hey Molly, can you hand over the kelp?" Tommy asked his daughter who is talking on the phone. "Heck no! Nub off!" snapped Molly annoyed. "Molly, watch your mouth. You can't speak to your father that way." scolded Didi annoyed at her granddaughter's attitude. "Seriously, Tommy, you shoulda shown her some matters." "Try to, didn't work." Tommy sighs. "I'm on the phone, keep it down, will ya?" asked Molly as she goes back to speaking on the phone. "Molly." "Tea please." joked Tommy Jr. Molly sighs in annoyance then speaks into her phone glasses. "Sorry, I'd have to talked to you later." Then she hangs up and scowls. "Is it okay to start eating before..." Tommy interrupted his mother as he yells at Molly. "Molly! Will you give your dad some stinkin' tea?" Molly rolled her eyes as she does so. Didi tries again. "I'm worried about Kimi. Why isn't she home yet?" Ironically, Kimi is home but 1) it isn't the 2015 Kimi and 2) she's still hiding. Tommy only shrugs at this as he pours himself and his son some soda. Molly helps herself to a Pepsi. "Not sure, mom. It's hard to keep track of my wife nowadays. She shoulda been back by now." "Fruit please!" yelled out Tommy Jr. The fruit thing came down again and Tommy Jr. helps himself to some fruit. "Thanks." Didi looks concerned. "I thought you and Kimi were doing fine." "If you mean we're getting alone, sure. We're liked a couple of teens." suggested Tommy while chuckling. Just then, Tommy Jr.'s viewing is interrupt by a ringing on his glasses. Molly took a look at her phone glasses. "Dad, phone. It's Sean." said Tommy Jr. rolling his eyes. Molly sighs in annoyance as she looks up. "Dad, he wants to talk to you." Tommy pauses then sighs. "Okay, I'd take it in the den." Tommy heads back to the den as his son hits the fruit holder saying, "Retract", causing it to go back up. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 28 2006, 06:56 PM Post #14 |
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Back in the den, Tommy heads to a TV screen. "Okay, I am in here." Tommy announced The image on the screen changes to an image of a red-haired familiar kid who smirks at Tommy as he speaks to him on a videophone. "Hey, if it isn't the Big P. How are ya, Pickles?" remarked Sean. "Hey Sean." Tommy said, rolling his eyes. "Sean?" asked Kimi surprised. Sean was a kid she and Tommy knew back in school. He likes to bully them and their friends around. And he always liked to get on Tommy's nerves a lot by calling him a baby. What does he want? Kimi watches from the closet as he and Tommy talk. "So did you check out that offer I told you about earlier?" Sean asked with another smirk. "Well, I did. But..." Tommy said hesitating. "Oh come on. What are you scared of? If this works, you will never worried about money problems again!" "And what if it doesn't, huh? I could get fired for doing it! You and I know that it's illegal and..." Tommy stops and frowns. He can tell that Sean is calling from the office. He knew how their boss, Mr. Yamaguchi II, the son of the late original Mr. Yamaguchi, feels about personal calls. "What if Mr. Yamaguchi watching us right now?" "Oh calm down. He can't even find the tea in his cup! All you got to do is put your card in the slot and I'd take care of the rest." insisted Sean. "Forget it." Tommy said as he turns around and gets ready to leave. "Oh, well. Maybe you want people think you're...a baby." Tommy stops and frowns deeply. Kimi gulps. 'This is it. Tommy, please. Don't give in!' Kimi has insisted time and again that Tommy shouldn't lose his temper when someone calls him a baby. Tommy turns around and yelled, "No one calls me a baby, Sean, no one!" "If you aren't a baby, go ahead and prove it!" sneered Sean. That did it. Tommy will show him. Tommy will show Kimi, his parents, his kids, he'd show them all. He is no baby! "Okay, fine!" snapped Tommy as he takes out a card. "Here's my card!" He then puts the card in a nearby scanner. "Scan it! I'm in!" As Tommy puts the card away after Sean's done scanning, Sean chuckles. "Wise choice, Pickles. I'd see you tomorrow." Sean's face disappeared, replacing it with a phone company's logo. "Thank you for using AT&T." said a computerized voice. Tommy smiles as he turns to leave. 'Yep. I've finally made it through without getting in trouble. That comes to show...' "PICKLES!" A yelling voice interrupts his thinking, making Kimi jumped. Tommy turns and looks shocked as he sees a very angry Japanese man on the screen. "Oh! Mr. Yamaguchi II-san! Konnichi wa!" said Tommy nervously as he bows in respect. "You have dishonor me, Pickles. I have seen your scan you just interface. I thought you as a son and this is how you thank me? You are dismissed!" said Mr. Yamaguchi II upset. "Dismissed?" Tommy gasped in horror. "Please sir! It isn't my fault! It's Sean's! It was his idea!" "And you cooperated! It is illegal and you know it!" "Please, sir, you got to understand!" Mr. Yamaguchi II sighs sadly. "I'm sorry Tommy. Read my fax." The boss pushes a button nearby and the words "YOU'RE FIRED!" appeared on the screen as he leaves. "No, I can't be fired! I'm fired!" groaned Tommy in horror. Throughout the whole house, fax machines printed out the same words "YOU'RE FIRED!". Near Kimi, the same fax is printed out. Kimi takes the fax and looks shocked. Tommy looks at a copy he just picked up and groaned. "Oh man, this is heavy. How can I explain this to Kimi?" Kimi looks sadly as her boyfriend/future husband sits in a chair nearby. She felt sorry. She wished she could do something. Suddenly her focus is interrupted by a tap on the window and hears someone whispering her name. She turns and sees Doc Spooky and Spike at the window. "Doc! Oh, I am happy to see you." Kimi said happily and sadly at the same time. "Kimi, head to the front door. I'd meet you there." Doc Spooky instructed. "How can I? There's no doorknob!" "There's plate nearby. Push your thumb on it." "Plate?" Doc Spooky sees something and he and Spike hides. Kimi breathes in and out and begins to leave the closet. As Kimi sneaks over to the front door, she sees Tommy on the chair trying to play the guitar. From how Kimi hears it, he is doing terribly. He has definitely damaged his hand. Kimi wondered if she could do something about that do. Kimi hears Didi coming from the kitchen and hides before she could be seen. "Tommy, what is this fax?" Didi asked her son curiously. "Oh, it's nothing. Nothing. Just a joke me and Sean were playing." Tommy chuckled nervously. He doesn't have the heart to tell his own mother that he has just been sacked. "But I heard yelling!" "Come on, you and I know that it's a joke. Just calm down, there's no yelling at all!" Kimi decides to get out of there. She just made it to the front door. "Welcome home, Kimi." Kimi stops and looks confused. Why would the house be greeting her home when she's about to leave? She soon got her answer. The door opens and a woman bringing in groceries just came in. Kimi saw her and looked. The woman looks back. To Kimi's shock and horror, she saw herself, a woman with grey hair and looking very terror. The woman saw her and is horrified herself. "I'm young/old!" yelled the two at once. Then they did what Doc Spooky was hoping for... They fainted. Doc Spooky arrives just in time to catch Kimi of 1985 before she could hurt herself. "This fax said you're fired!" protested Didi as she and Tommy came out of the den. "Oh!" Doc Spooky managed to dragged 1985 Kimi out of there just as the two came in. What Tommy said that made him said 'oh' was that he just saw his wife on the floor, fainted. "Oh my goodness!" gasped Didi loud enough for everyone in the kitchen to hear her and appeared to see what's going on. Tommy goes over to his wife, unaware that he just missed Doc Spooky and 1985 Kimi, and checks her. He sighs as he sees that his wife is fine, just fainted. 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| JusSonic | Aug 29 2006, 07:55 PM Post #15 |
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The DeLorean lands on the road with a bump. Once it's does, the door opens and Justin came out, holding his chest as if he was in pain. Tommy hears the DeLorean arriving and was about to investigate when he hears the Doc called for him. "Tommy! Come quick!" Tommy runs to help Doc. Meanwhile as Justin gets out of the DeLorean, he is having trouble getting his cane out as it is struck on something. He keeps pulling until the cane broke hitting him in the chest, making his pain worst. He groans and walks away. Unknown to Justin, he left two things in the DeLorean, one of which is by the DeLorean's brakes. Unknown of this, Tommy and Doc Spooky carries the unconscious Kimi to the DeLorean. "Just as I expected, Kimi saw herself and fainted. She's okay though. Time we return to 1985. Then when do, I'd destroyed the time machine!" Doc Spooky announced, a hint of grim in his voice. Tommy is shocked. Doc Spooky works hard on his time machine and was proud of it. "Destroyed it? But what about all that stuff you talked about? The whole humanity, where we're going and why?" Doc Spooky sighs as he opens the DeLorean doors and he helps Tommy puts Kimi in the car. "Despite that, time travelling is too risky now thanks to this incident. And I only time travelled because I was behaving like a responsible adult! I mean, what would happened if someone irresponsible gets his or her hands on the time machine and use it for their own evil?" Unknown to the two, nearby Justin collapses into a car. He groans and fell to the ground. Still unaware of this, Doc Spooky continues as he puts some trash in the Mr. Absorber device. "It's sad really. There's one place in history I always wanted to go to and that's the Wild West. But now, time travelling is too dangerous." Once he's finished, Doc Spooky looks on in thought. "Perhaps I should devote my life to study that other great mystery of the universe...women." Tommy chuckles. He remembers seeing Doc Spooky's 1955 self looking at a Playboy magazine and acting like some sort of lustful teenager. It's interesting how the scientist would deal with just a subject like women. Spike senses something, walks for a bit, then begins to barked at a direction. "Spike, come on, boy." Doc Spooky whistled as Tommy got back into the time machine. "Let's go home. Come in, boy." Spike stops barking and got into the DeLorean. Unknown to Doc, Spike was barking at Justin who was nearby. Justin looks up as the DeLorean lifts up and flies away, preparing to get ready to return back to 1985. No one in the DeLorean saw Justin groaning and disappearing, as if he never existed in 2015... Tommy watches with the unconscious Kimi on his lap as Doc Spooky inputs October 26th, 1985, 9:00 PM in the time panel. "Hang on Tommy and Spike. We're about to go for temporal displacement." said Doc Spooky. Then he frowns. 'Funny. Did I just saw another date, other than when we last 1985, in the Last Time Departed panel? Oh well. Must be a malfunction.' As Tommy held onto to Kimi, Doc Spooky goes up to 88 mph and soon the same time effect that happens to the DeLorean riders before happens again. The skyway vanishes replacing it with open sky. Tommy and Doc Spooky looks around. "Well? Are we back?" asked Tommy. Suddenly Tommy yells as a jumbo jet flew past very fast, missing them. "Yep, this is definitely 1985." nodded Doc Spooky. Doc Spooky landed the DeLorean on a rode and he drove normally all the way to Kimi's house. Once the DeLorean stops, Doc Spooky and Tommy got out and took Kimi out of the DeLorean, followed by Spike. Doc Spooky sees the swing and said, "Let's put her there. I'd take you home and the next morning, you can come back in your truck and wake her up." The two carries Kimi to the swing and sets her there. "And if she wakes up and sees that it's dark, she's believed that the whole time travel thing was nothing but a dream." "Are you sure?" Tommy asked concerned. "You think it's safe to leave her on her porch?" "We have to. That way, the disorientation will convince her that it's a dream." Tommy sighs sadly as the two begin to walked away. "I wonder when she'd wake up." "Not sure. She got freaked out back in 2015. It could be minutes, maybe hours. Bring some smelling salts with you tomorrow." Doc Spooky explained. "Right." "Let's go, Spike." Doc Spooky said as he and his dog walks back to the DeLorean. Tommy continued following, then stops to take a look at Kimi. Doc Spooky added, "Don't worry, she'd be fine." Tommy nods, but as he leaves, he noticed something else, something unusual. "Since when did Kimi's parents put bars on their windows?" asked Tommy, noticing the bars. Then he sees the car which is a total wreck. "And what happened to their car?" |
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