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| Back to Tomorrow Part 2; The sequel to my BttF parody | |
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| JusSonic | Aug 30 2006, 05:40 PM Post #16 |
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The DeLorean arrives in the area of North Californi where Tommy and his family lived at. As they head in, a bunch of stray dogs run across the road. No one noticed it as the car stops by Tommy's house. The street looks different as trash is dumped everywhere and there are houses that are either abandoned, boarded up, or have "For Sale" signs near the front where they should be families living. But again, no one noticed as Tommy got out of the DeLorean. "I'd be at my lab dismantling this thing if you need me." said Doc Spooky. "Right. See ya." Tommy said nodding. After the door is closing, Doc Spooky drove off. Tommy sighs as he heads to the gate near his house which he uses opens to get to his room whenever he came home late. It has been a long day, or time. Tommy is sad that the doc has to abandoned his dream of time travelling because of the dangers it's just proven but Doc Spooky is right. There are some risks. Tommy arrives at the gate and begins to opened it... Only to find, to his surprise, that he couldn't. "What the...?" Tommy begins to asked. He sees a padlock on the gate. "That wasn't there before! Darn it. Dil must of put it there as a joke in case I decided to come home early. Man, I don't have time for this." Tommy climbs over the gate then goes to the window that belongs to his bedroom. He slowly opens the window and begins to climbed in, expecting to use his dresser to avoid falling. Except there is no drawer near the window and he trips and fell right onto the bed and got a big scream. "Huh?" yelled Tommy in shock as the screaming continues. He looks up and sees a familiar African American girl screaming in fear. "Mom, dad, help! There's a prowler in here!" "Susie? What are you doing in my room?" yelled Tommy surprised. Susie is one of his friends, but right now, Susie doesn't seem to realized him as she continues yelling. "Okay, calm down, Susie! Okay, okay?" Suddenly the bedroom door bursted open, the lights turned on and someone yelled, "Freeze, sucker!" Tommy turned and sees Randy Carmichael at the door. He is horrified as he sees that Susie's dad is waving a baseball bat threatingly. "Wait, Mr. Carmichael! I don't want any trouble!" protested Tommy horribily. Susie's dad probably thinking he's trying to do something terrible to her. "Well you got trouble now, you piece of trash!" yelled Randy as he swings at Tommy with the bat. Tommy dodges and Randy ends up trashing Susie's stuff. His wife Lucy and his other kids are by the door, horrified and cheering (the cheering comes from the kids for their dad). "What are you doing in here with my daughter?" demands Randy angrily as he turns. "Listen, I just got the wrong house!" protested Tommy. "You're darn right you got the wrong house!" yells Randy as he charges at Tommy and tries to hit him again. But Tommy dodges and Randy ends up more of Susie's stuff. "Get him, dad!" cheered Buster Carmichael. "Listen! This is just a mistake!" begged Tommy, trying to get through to Susie's dad, as he stood near the dresser. As usual, it did not work. "You're darn right you made a mistake!" Randy tries to hit Tommy, only to ended up trashing the dresser. Tommy decides to get the heck out of there as he runs out of the room chased by the still furious Randy, his kids Susie now included cheering him on as they give chase. Tommy managed to run out of the house and keeps on running down the street. He could hearing Randy's yelling as the man and his family stood on the front yard watching him escaped. "That's right! You keep on running and you tell that realty company I'd never sell, you got that? We aren't going to be terrorized!" yelled Randy waving his bat threatingly again. "Randy, I think we should get bars for the window." Lucy suggested with a sigh. "No way. I am not treating my family as criminals and I'd never will!" Susie shuddered, trying to get over what just happened. Yet, for some reason, that intruder seems to have known her... Tommy kept on running, not wanting to look back in case Randy is still chasing him. When he's certain that he isn't, he slowed down. Tommy looks around and looks shocked. His whole home is not the home he remembers. Cars are trashed, houses are being sold, there are trash everywhere. He shudders as he coulda sworned he just heard a gunshot and some screaming somewhere. He sees two murder victims outline on the road as he walks on. "Oh man." groaned Tommy as he walks on. What coulda been worst? He just got his answer as he saw something that made him look shocked. Behind a fence nearby hides a building that looks like it was burned down years ago. To Tommy's shock, as he got closer, that building is none other than his school, with bits of it missing. Although he didn't like school that much, he didn't want this to happened. "Oh man, this is crazy." Tommy said, shaking his head as he walks on. Tommy runs down a street as a bunch of cop cars rushed by, on their way to something. "This got to be the wrong year, it's got to be." said Tommy hopefully. Tommy is certain that there's no way the Carmichaels would moved into his house, the school burned down, and everything else happens Tommy sees a newspaper on the front steps of a house nearby, comes over, and takes it. He sits down and looks at the front page, hoping that he is right. To his shock, the dateline reads "October 26th, 1985." "No, this can't be." said Tommy horribly. Suddenly he hears a sound of a gun click and a voice saying, "Drop it!" Tommy did as the voice commands and turns aroud. Standing before him is a familiar bald figure wearing a nightshirt and a bullet-proof vest. The figure is pointing a barrel gun right at him. The figure narrows his eyes as he said, "So you're the son of a jerk who keeps swiping my newspapers, eh? You will regret that, hooligan!" "Mr. Pangborn! Mr. Pangborn, it's me Tommy!" Tommy said. Mr. Pangborn is the vice principal of his school, the one who proceeds Mr. Stickler who was vice principal when Stu went to school. Mr. Pangborn was a former wrestler and not a guy you want to messed with. He can be nice as long as kids don't messed with him. For some reason, though, Pangborn doesn't recognized Tommy as he kept his gun on Tommy. "Who?" demands the former wrestler. "Tommy Pickles! You know, from school!" cried Tommy. "I've never seen you before ever, but you looked like a hooligan to me!" "That's right, that's right I am a hooligan." said Tommy chuckling. He hopes he could refreshen the vice principal's memory. "Remember? You gave me and Chuckie detention last week!" Pangborn frowns. "How could I've given you detention last week? The North Californi school burned down 6 years ago! I have recently retired from my wrestling career and was about to consider a job there when it happened! Now you hooligan to the count of 3 to get off my porch before I blow those things off!" Pangborn aims his gun at Tommy's 'aforementioned area' as he begins to count. "1..." "Please Pangborn! At least tell me what's going on here!" begged Tommy. "2..." Tommy screams as he puts his hands on his 'aforementioned area'. Before Pangborn could finished, a car turns a corner and is coming towards Pangborn's house. It is being used by a bunch of gangsters. "Eat this, Pangborn!" laughed one gangster as he and his gang begins firing on the house. Pangborn ran inside and Tommy ducks just in time to avoid being hit by the bullets. All the gangsters could do is destroyed a bunch of flower pots. Once they drove past, Tommy got up and runs from the porch. Pangborn run out of the house and porch and fires at his attackers. "Eat lead, hooligans!" yelled Pangborn as he goes into pursuit. Terrified, Tommy makes a run for it. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 31 2006, 09:20 PM Post #17 |
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Tommy arrives in the courthouse square of North Californi. Except it isn't the North Californi he knew very well. Tommy walks over a "Welcome to North Californi. A Great Place To Live" that has been changed to North Crappiforni and is filled with bullet holes. As he looks around in horror, he bumps into someone. This someone is a familiar hobo who looks out of his car. "Watch where you're going, crazy drunk pedestrian!" yelled the hobo. "Bret." Tommy said in shock looking at the bum he knew all his life. Bret looks at him puzzled then goes back to what he was doing. Tommy does the same thing as he looks around. The whole courthouse square has changed for the worst. There are strip clubs all around, adult book stores, and such that are considered illegal in North Californi. Bikers are everywhere, either riding on motorcycles, drinking, or doing whatever they want. Tommy sees a toxic plant nearby and police cops driving a tank around. But what shocks him the most is the courthouse, which is now a high rise casino/hotel building with big chimneys polluting the air. The clock, the same one that was struck by lightning and helped Tommy returned to 1985 to begin with, has been removed and replaced with extra stores. That isn't what shocked Tommy though. What shocked him are the words on the building: JUSTIN TREENE'S PLEASURE PARADISE" with a neon image of the man himself smoking a dollar bill like a cigar. Tommy looks stunned. Justin Treene? The same guy who Tommy last seen as a automotives and details owner/worker, now a billionaire? This can't be. There's no way he coulda became famous over night. Tommy decides to come over for a closer look. As he does, he sees 3 thugs forcing a bum out. Tommy is shocked. They may looked different and Tommy may not have seen them in a while (or years as the case may be) but he knows those 3 thugs anywhere. They are none other than 2-B, Greasehead, and Dum-Dum, Justin's goons who used to hanged with him back in 1955! They are different now than they were then. 2-D's glasses are now like a Hollywood star's glasses, Greasehead's head is even greasier, and Dum-Dum is dressed like a cowboy. They are all wearing suits. As Tommy watched, they threw the bum out of the building. "Don't come back in here for drinks again! I don't care if our boss is your dad! You stay lost!" yelled 2-D. With a smirk, he and the other went back in. The bum got up and starts yelling in a familiar voice, "Come on! You humorless lugs can't take a joke?" "Dil?" gasped Tommy in horror. Dil Pickles turned around. He looks terrible. His red hair looks messed, he has a 3 o'clock shadow, he is wearing bad looking clothes and his hands looked like they were cut. He also appears to be drunk as he smiles and came over to Tommy. "Yo, Tommy! What's happening, bro? Man, you looked messed up, did you sleep in your clothes again last night?" joked Dil. Tommy chuckled. 'Same old Dil, I hope.' Then he frowns and yelled, "Dil! What happened to you? What happened to the town and what's going on here?" "When did you come back?" Dil asked, seemingly to be ignoring the question Tommy has asked him. "Back? From where?" Tommy asked confused. "Hey, if you don't know, why should I?" laughed Dil. This made Tommy more confused. Dil continued, "Come on, let's get a drink of beer." "Dil," said Tommy as he grabs his brother by the clothes and looks at him sternly. "Where are mom and dad? I need to see them." Tommy realized he must have said something wrong as Dil looks angry and pushed Tommy away. He yelled, "Dad? Dad? Man, I thought I could still trust you, but you have fell to his evil control like everyone else! And since when are you and mom talking again?" "'Talking again?' asked Tommy shocked. Isn't he and his mother always talking? Dil shook his head in disgust as he turns to leave. "Whatever." "Wait! If you can't tell me where's dad is, then where is mom?" yelled Tommy. "Well else, there?" yelled Dil pointing. "Where?" "In there!" Tommy realized that his departing brother is pointing at the casino/hotel. Now more determined to find out more, he goes closer. As he goes up the steps of the casino/hotel, he sees a museum to the right of the main entrance. He sees a TV playing and goes to hear it. Music plays as an announcer on the TV speaks. "Hello and welcome to the Justin Treene museum," announced the announcer, "dedicated to North Californi's number 1 citizen and America's greatest hero, the one and only Justin Treene! We may have heard the legend, but what do we really know of the one called Justin Treene? Inside you will see how Justin Treene became one of the most richest and powerful men in America." As Tommy continues to watch, he sees an image of Justin driving away from a big house in a very expensive car. "Learn the great history of the Treene family, which starts with his great grandfather Luthor "Psychopath" Treene, the fastest but most dangerous man in the Wild West." Tommy sees a photo of a cowboy who looks almost like Justin. "Check out Justin's humble beginnings as well as the trip to the races on his 21st birthday made him a millionaire overnight." Tommy now sees a racehorse then Justin after his win with the money on the TV. A newspaper appears saying "North Californi guy got lucky and win at races. "See more of his winning streak," Another newspaper appears on the TV which said "Justin Wins Again", that gave him his nickname "The Luckiest Man Ever." As Tommy continues watching in disbelief, he is unaware that a cop just saw him and is speaking into his radio. Tommy continues watching the TV, "See how Justin uses his winning streak to create the legendary empire called Justinco." Tommy now sees Justin standing smiling outside one of his own plants. "See in 1979, Justin managed to get gambling legalized," Another newspaper said "Gambling Legalized Thanks To Justin, "as well turned North Californi's former Courthouse into a beautiful casino/hotel." On the video, Justin said, "I got one thing to said: God blessed America." Tommy sees pictures of beautiful women, Justin in some of them, as the announcer continues, "Meet the women who shared in his passion as he looked for true love. And see Justin's happiest moment as in 1973, he fulfilled his lifelong dream by marrying his sweetheart..." Tommy's heart frozen as he sees a picture of a familiar woman. His heart frozen further as the TV shows Justin's wedding day as the announcer concluded, "Didi Kropotkin Pickles." Sure enough, Tommy can see Justin leaving the church with his new bride, Tommy's own mother. A reporter spoke out, "So how do you feel now Mr. Treene?" Justin smirks. "Well, 3rd time is the charm." To Tommy's horror, he watches as Justin kisses Didi like some sort of pervert. "No!" yelled Tommy in horror and disbelief as he backs away. "No!" Tommy backs away until he was grabbed. He looks and sees that Justin's goons just grabbed him! "Come with us, you're coming with us upstairs!" snapped Greasehead. "Let me go!" demands Tommy. Dum-Dum sighs in annoyance and said, "Look, we can either do this the easy way or the hard way." Before Tommy could respond, 2-B hits Tommy on the head knocking him into unconscious. Before Tommy's sight went black, he could hear 2-B's remark, "The easy way." |
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| JusSonic | Sep 1 2006, 07:51 PM Post #18 |
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A while later, Tommy woke up in a bed, a bit dazed. THe room is dark so it's hard to tell where he's at. Although his eyes are a bit groggily, he can sense someone in the room with him. "Mom, mom is that you?" groaned Tommy. The last time this has happened to Tommy, he was in his mother's bedroom back in 1955. He hope that isn't the case this time. "Calm down, son. You have been asleep for 2 hours now." sighed Didi's voice. Tommy is a bit relief. "Oh man, I have this terrible nightmare. It was scary." "The point is you're all safe now, back on the 27th floor." Tommy's eyes opened in shock and alarm. This was no dream, it was like last time! 27th floor!" yelled Tommy as he sits up suddenly. The lights are turned on. Tommy turns and looks shocked like the last time this happened. "Mom? Is that you? It can't be." Tommy said in disbelief. Tommy's mother Didi looks different than the last time he has saw her. Not only is she a lot thinner but she looks like some sort of rich millionaire's wife and her 'things' are big like she just went under surgery a weeks ago. "Of course, it's me. Are you okay?" Didi asked concerned. "Yeah, I'm fine. It's just...I didn't expect you to be so..." Tommy hesitates on what to say next, especially with her mother's 'things'. "Uh...big?" "It's all right, Tommy. Are you hungry? I can get room service if you want." Didi offered. "Room service?" asked Tommy as he looks around. The room he's in is none of the rooms he's familiar with. Either he's in a hotel suite or he has no idea what's going on. Just as Didi got on the phone and is about to make a call, an angry voice yells from outside the room. "DIDI!" Didi drops the phone and groans. "Oh no, it's your father." "My father?" asked Tommy puzzled. Stu would never yelled like that. But who else could be his father? Suddenly the doors to the room slammed open and to Tommy's horror, his question has been answered in the form of a very angry Justin Treene storming into the room. Justin, unlike his images on the TV Tommy saw earlier, is wearing a business suit and a very mean expression on his face. He has dyed hair unlike earlier. Justin's goons are with him. Justin sees Tommy and glares at him angrily saying, "You're supposed to be in Switzerland, you little son of a jerk!" "My father?" gasped Tommy in horror. "Don't tell me you got kicked out of another boarding school?" yelled Justin as he rolled his eyes. He glares at Didi as she swallows a depression pill, something Tommy sworn she has given up the last time he swallowed her. "Darn it, Didi! I am getting sick and tired of blowing my cash on him and those other two kids of yours all because they can't do anything right!" "Like you care!" snapped Didi as she storms out of the room, followed by Justin, Tommy, and the goons. "We could afford it! We could have at least done the right thing and use the money to make our children's lives a happier one!" "Whoa, whoa, whoa! Get this through your head, okay? Tommy's your brat, never mine! Not even a cent in the world can do crud to that bum!" snapped Justin. "Stop it, Justin, just stop it!" Justin smirked as he glares at Tommy. "Look at him. He's an even more pathetic idiot than his old man was." Didi looks at Justin furiously as she said, "Never, ever speak that way about Stu again! You're not even half the man he was!" Suddenly Justin punches Didi, knocking her to the floor. Tommy gasps. "You son of a jerk!" yelled Tommy as he tries to charged the fiend. "Hey, not so fast!" yelled 2-B as Dum-Dum and Greasehead grabs Tommy, holding him back. As Didi groans, Justin smirks and comes over to Tommy who glares furiously at him. "Typical. You're always were a hothead, never controlling yourself." sneered Justin. "Want to go at me? You think my men can stand against the likes of you?" "If so, why are they holding, jerkhead!" snapped Tommy. That was a bad move as Justin just punched Tommy in the stomach making him yelled out in pain. Didi looks on in horror as Justin laughs at his own step-son's pain. "Darn it, Justin! That's it! I'm leaving once and for all!" yelled Didi as she got back up and walks up the stairs. This doesn't concerned Justin as he just sneers. "Go ahead, Didi. But think of this! How will you find the money to pay for your clothes, jewels, and depressions pills? And what about that cosmetic surgery? Who's going to pay that off?" "You want me to get these 'things', not me!" snapped Didi as she got to the top of the stairs and points at her 'things'. "You want him? You can have them!" This upsets Justin now as Didi turns to leave. "I'm warning you. Take one step out that door and I'd assured you that I will not only make your life a living heck, I will do the same to your kids! And I will start by cutting them off!" Didi stops upon hearing this and runs to the banister, alarmed. "You can't!" "Oh no?" asked Justin with an evil smirk. "Watch me. Let's see, first your daughter Tammy. All I have to do is cancelled out her credit cards and we'd see how she'd pay off her debts to the bank." As Justin continues, he walks up the stairs to Didi. "And your stupid son Dil? I'd see that his parole gets taken away and he'd get his butt thrown back in prison! And as for Tommy..." Justin stops and smirks as he sees that Didi has seen the point as she refused to argued further. "Well, how would you like all your brats in the slammer like your baby brother Louie? One happy jail-bird family?" Tommy watches as Didi thought sadly at this. To Tommy's disbelief, Didi sighs and said, "All right, you win. I'd stay." Didi walks down the stairs defeated. Smirking that he has won, Justin glares at Tommy. "As for you, kid, I'd be back in a hour! If you aren't gone by then, you're dead this time!" Justin then leaves the room. His goons got up from where they're at and followed him like they always do. As they leave, Didi came down and sighs. "He was right, I was wrong." Didi said sadly as she walks passed Tommy. Tommy is stunned. His mother never took stuff from Justin before. Now she's allowing Justin to abuse her? "Mom, what are you saying? How can you defend him after what he done?" Tommy yelled as Didi sat down and ate some more pills. Didi sighs as she said, "I had it coming. He may be a bigger jerk than I could remembered him but he's my husband and your step-father. We have to respect him so he could continue taking care of us." "Respect? Your husband?" yelled Tommy still in disbelief. "I don't believe this! How can you married that jerk? How could you leave dad for...him!" "Leave dad?" asked Didi puzzled. "Are you okay, Tommy?" "No! No I am not okay!" yelled Tommy as he sat down still confused. "Ever since I got here, I couldn't found out what the heck is going on and why no one bothered to tell me anything!" "Oh, I knew they hit you harder this time." groaned Didi as she fruns her hand through her son's hair. "Mom, please, tell me," Tommy said, beginning to begged, while holding her hand. He got to know. "Where's my real father? Where's Stu Pickles?" Didi looked sad as Tommy mentioned this. "Tommy, Stu, your father was in the same place he was in the last 12 years." Tommy smiles as Didi takes another pill. Maybe he could get an answer or so. "Wood Park Cemetery." Tommy's face fell into a horror look. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 2 2006, 12:47 PM Post #19 |
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Tommy runs through the cemetery in a panic, hoping that what his mom said wasn't true. He looks at the gravestones, not finding what he doesn't want to find. However when he turns, he looks stunned as he, unfortunately, has found it. A gravestone nearby that said those shocking words Tommy didn't want to believe. "No, no!" yelled Tommy as he kneels down in front of the gravestone, pushing away some plants. But the truth is there: 'In Loving Memory of Stu Pickles, Born April 1st 1938, Died March 15th, 1973'. Tommy is still in shock. "This can't be! 'March 15th, 1973?'" That's the same year Didi married Justin! "No, please, no, this can't be! This can't be! It can't be..." Unknown to Tommy, a shadow appears on the gravestone. The boy did not noticed until Tommy hears a twig snapped and he turns around alarmed. For a while, he thought it was Justin or one of his men. Luckily for him, it isn't. "I'm afraid it is true, Tommy, all of it." said Doc Spooku sadly as he and Spike came over, the DeLorean is parked outside the cemetery. "Doc." said Tommy as he got up. "When I found out what happened to your father, I knew you would come here so I waited." "So, you knew what happened?" asked Tommy as he glances at his father's gravestone. "You know what happened on March 15th, 1973?" Doc Spooky sighs. "Yes, I know." Doc Spooky took Tommy back to his garage. Tommy is shocked when, after he arrived, that Doc's home was a mess as if a tornado went through it, a major tornado. But Doc Spooky has no time to explain that now as he opens a book labeled 'North Californi Telegraph Archives March 1st-April 30th, 1973.' He turns to a newspaper clipping that horrified Tommy. The front page has the photo of his dead father Stu with a headline labeled "Stu Pickles Murdered: Local Author Was Killed." "I went to the library to find out the source of all this madness." explained Doc Spooky. "I discovered that the whole place was boarded up and shut up. So I broke in and 'borrowed' some newspapers." "Oh man, I don't get it." said Tommy with a groan as he continues to looked at the newspaper clipping explaining his father's murder. "How is this happening? It's like we're in heck or something!" "No, it's North Californi, though now I think of it, heck woulda been a lot better than this place." said Doc Spooky with a frown. He hears a whine from Spike. He sighs and comes over. "I know, the lab's a mess, Spike." Doc Spooky turns over Spike's basket that was knocked over. Spike jumps in after the basket was turned over. "There you go." He turns back to Tommy as he returns to the subject at hand. "It's come to my conclusion that the space-time continuum has been seriously altered to make this new temporally venced sequence resulting in this alternative reality." "Say what?" asked Tommy puzzled. "Let me demonstrate." Doc Spooky picks up a blackboard nearby and takes out a chalk. "Now let's say, not literally, that this time represents time." Doc Spooky draws a line on the blackboard, then draws 1985, an F representing Future, and a P representing Past. As Doc Spooky explains, Tommy pulls out the newspaper clipping that has his father's murder and looked at it, "Now then this is our 1985, the future, and the past. Before this point of time, which is 1985, somewhere in the past, the timeline skewed into this tangent, creating an alternative 1985," Doc Spooky drew a tangent on the board and writes '1985A'. "While it is alternative to you, me, and Spike, no one else could be able to tell the difference." "I still don't get how it coulda happened." Tommy said. "During my research, I discovered something very important." Doc Spooky goes into the DeLorean and takes out something, which he holds up to Tommy. A very familiar silver bag. "You recall this, right? It's the same bad which you brought the sports magazine which all that info in. The receipt is still inside, that is how I am able to find out." "But where did you find the bag?" Tommy asked, with an uneasy look on his face. Doc Spooky sighs. "It was in the time machine. I didn't figured out how it got there, until I found...this." Doc Spooky holds up an something. Tommy looks shocked as he takes it. He recognized that object anywhere. It was on a top of a cane. held by a familiar man...the same man who did that knock knock joke on Tommy...back in 2015!" "Holy cow. It's the top of Justin's cane, the old Justin from the future!" Tommy exclaimed. "Yes! It was in the time machine because Justin was in the time machine with the sports magazine!" Doc Spooky said grimly. "Holy jeez." Tommy said in shock as Doc Spooky goes back to the blackboard. "You see, while we were busy in the future, Justin got his hands on the sports magazine, stole the time machine, and went back to somewhere in the past and gave that book to his younger self." Doc Spooky then takes a book that has the article of Justin winning his millions at a horse race. The doc chuckles sarcastically as he said, "It said here that Justin got his first million betting on a horse race in 1958 and he got called lucky. Ha! Lucky my foot! He only got his million because he knew because he got the results in the sports magazine! That is how he became rich in the first place! Here's a magnifying glass to confirm the truth further." Doc Spooky gave a magnifying glass to Tommy, who uses it on the photo. Yep, there it is, a very familiar magazine called "Black's Sports Magazine 1950-2000", right in Justin's pocket. The truth was under everyone else's noses and they didn't realized it! "It is the sports magazine." said Tommy in disbelief, then he yelled out in anger. "That son of a jerk stole my idea!" He slams his fist onto the table. "He musta been listening when I..." Tommy stops and looks horrified. No, it wasn't Justin's fault. True, he did changed the timeline, but he wouldn't have been able to, have Tommy haven't brought that magazine in the first place! The timeline has changed and everyone's lives has been ruined, all because of Tommy's foolish attempt to changed his own life! "It's my fault. It's all fault. I wished I haven't brought that dumb book. Now everyone's suffering because of me." groaned Tommy. "It's in the past now. You didn't know this would happened." said Doc Spooky with a sigh. "Future. All in the future." Tommy pointed out. "Whatever! Now you see what happens when time travel got misused and why I must destroyed the time machine. Of course, we got to get this problem taken care of before I get to that." Doc Spooky sighs. Tommy pauses, then shrugs. "Okay, no big deal. All we have to do is go back to tomorrow and prevent Justin from getting the time machine to begin with." "We can't, even if we could!" Doc Spooky said as he continues demonstrating. "If we try to go to the future, it will be the future of this reality. In which Justin is corrupt, powerful, and married to your mother, and in which this has happened to me!" Doc Spooky shows another newspaper to Tommy. To Tommy's shock, on the front page is a photo of Doc Spooky in a straitjacket being taken to an insane asylum by doctors with the headline "Doc Spooky Committed-Nutcase Inventor Declared Legally Insane." More side stories liked "Justinco To Build New Dioxin Plant" and "Nixon To Seek 5th Term" are on the front page as well. Tommy is horrified. The rest of the world is changed back to history changing. Spike whines as Doc Spooky continued, "No, our best bet to repair the present is to go into the past, where the timeline skewed into this tangent. In order to put things back to the way we know them and return to our reality, we got to know the right date, as well as how, where, and when young Justin got the sports magazine." Tommy looks on in determination. Everyone suffered because of his mistake and so did his friend. Tommy knew that it's his fault the timeline got messed up and he's going to fixed it. "I'd have to asked him." Tommy said. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 3 2006, 06:28 PM Post #20 |
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A cowboy looks up and glares at his enemy, a rival cowboy. This cowboy is quick on the draw and the shot connects, knocking the first cowboy into a bunch of barrels. With an evil smirk, the other cowboy keeps on firing until he's out of bullets. The other cowboy thinks he has won. But to his shock, the first cowboy got back up and walks forward. The first cowboy took something from under his coat: a metal like object that has stopped all the bullets from connecting! "Bullet-proof vest!" laughed Justin as he sat in his hot tub with two beautiful girls. The whole cowboy thing was actually a Will Smith movie they were watching. "Greatest movie ever, the guy is a genius!" Justin laughs some more but suddenly, the TV is suddenly turned off, startling him and the girls. "What the heck?" Justin turned and almost jumped out of the hot tub as he saw Tommy near the hot tub, holding the remote. "Oh, geez!" "Party's over, Justin." said Tommy with a stern look as he throws the remote into his hot tub. He added to the girls, "Sorry about that, ladies." "How did you get pass my security? I gave strict orders not to let you back up here!" yelled Justin angrily. "Never mind that. We got something to talk about." "If you want cash, forget it! Now you got 15 seconds to get out of my sight and off of my building!" snapped Justin as he reaches over to a button that summons security. "No, not security. Black's Sports Magazine." said Tommy, saying the last part slowly. Justin's eyes widen in horror. Then he frowns. "Well, you've heard, the party is over." After Justin got dressed and dismissed the girls, he lead Tommy into his office. "Okay, kid, tell me, what else do you know about that book?" asked Justin as he walks over to a painting of himself behind his desk. "First things first. I want to know how you came across it. How, where, and when." Tommy said demandishly. "Okay, sit down." Justin notices that Tommy didn't. "I SAID SIT!" Tommy quickly sat down in a nearby chair near the desk. As Justin turns back to the painting, he moves the painting revealing a safe behind it. As he begins to enter the combination, he continues, "November 12th, 1955, that was when." November 12th, 1955?" yelled Tommy in shock. "But that's the day I went..." Justin stops and looks at Tommy, expecting him to continue. Tommy knew that explaining time travelling will be even dangerous, even in an alternative 1985. Tommy quickly said, "Uh, that was the day of the famous North Californi that stops the clock at the clock tower." "Good, you know your history." said Justin nodding as he turns back to the safe, continuing to opened it. "I will never forget that Saturday. I went over to the shop to picked up my car because I crashed it in a race days before." Tommy scoffed. "Race? Yeah right, didn't you crashed into a manure truck?" Justin turns back, surprised. "How did you know about that?" "Uh, my dad told me...before he died." Tommy fibbed. Justin nodded. "Oh, I guess that is how." He then goes back to what he was doing as he continues. "As I was minding my own business, some old man with a cane shows up." Justin succeeds in opening the safe, then he takes a box out. "He claims to be a distant relative of mine. I don't see the resemblance." Tommy smirks. Justin wouldn't have because he is too stupid to realized that it was himself he was talking to. As Justin puts the box on the table, he continues on, "He asked me if I wanted to be rich, so I took up his offer. So he gave me this." Justin opens the box and takes out a familiar magazine: the Black's Sports Magazine. It's appeared wrinkle and old with age but is still readable. Tommy notes that the dust cover is missing. "He told me that his book can tell me the result of every sporting until the century ends. All I got to do is bet on the winner and I will never lose." Justin explained showing the magazine. He pulls it back as if Tommy wanted to take it. He smirks. "Of course, being the suspicious figure that I am..." 'Yeah right.' thought Tommy. "I asked if there was a catch. He said 'no catch, just keep it a secret'." Then Justin puts the magazine back in the box and takes the box back to the safe. "After that, he disappeared and I haven't seen him since." 'I know. He went back to 2015 to returned the DeLorean so Doc and I won't expect.' thought Tommy. He sees a plate full of matchbooks with Justin's casino/hotel's name on it. Deciding that he may use it one day, he takes one and pockets it. As Justin closes the safe and covers it again with a painting, he sat down in his own chair. "Oh, one more thing. He told me that some day that some crazy guy who calls himself a scientist or a kid may come by asking about this book. And if any does..." To Tommy's shock, Justin pulls out a gun from out of nowhere. The evil man smirks as he aims it at Tommy, getting ready to fired. "Funny. I never expected it to be you." "Well, you forgot one thing." said Tommy. He points to something. "What the heck is that?" Justin turns around. 'Good! The moron still falls for it!' thought Tommy as he quickly grabs the plate of matchbooks and throws it at Justin. Justin turns just in time to see and ducked it. Tommy got up and makes a run for it. Justin sees and fires at him but missed. "You're dead, you little young of a jerk!" yelled Justin as he pushes a button nearby to called security. He runs out of the room and fires at Tommy again. He keeps missing everytime. Tommy runs out of the other room into the hallway. He sees an elevator opening nearby and runs to it. But unfortunately, Justin's goons came out and saw him. "Hey! There he is!" yelled 2-B pointing. "Get him!" yelled Dum-Dum. Tommy dodges them and runs to the stairsway. In the next room are two flight of stairs. Tommy smiles as he runs down one of them. He then jumps to the next flight and goes up them. He hides behind a set of stairs just as Justin's goons enters the stairsway and runs down the first stairs Tommy has use, unaware of what he done. When they run down, out of sight, after him, Tommy, now at the top of the other stairs, jumped back to the first set of stairs, then runs towards the door going into the roof. Justin enters the stairsway and looked down. He then hears a door slamming open and turns just in time to see the roof door closing. Tommy runs across the roof but stops at the edge. He looks and sees that it's a long way down. He frowns. There's no other choice but to go back the other way, it seems. "Go ahead, kid!" Tommy turned and sees Justin, cornering him. "Jump! I will tell those idiots you got tired of how I runned things around here and committed suicide!" "What if I don't?" demanded Tommy. Justin smirks as he points his guns at Tommy again. "Lead poison will do nicely." "I don't think you would want to risked that. I mean, the police will track that bullet to that gun." Justin laughs at this. "The police? Yeah right, in case you've forgotten, I own them! Besides," said Justin with an evil smirk, "They weren't even smart enough to track the bullet that killed your own man!" Tommy is shocked and angry. Justin? He killed Stu? Well, it's obvious. Justin hated Stu ever since he punched him out and won Didi's heart. "Why, you son of a..." Tommy said walking forward. He stops as Justin gets ready to fired. "Poetric justice, I guess. Two Pickles with the same gun." chuckled Justin evilly. Tommy sees no other way out now. It's either jumped or be shot at. Tommy looks down from the roof. Then he did what Justin never dream he would do: he jumps off, disappearing from sight. "Man, he's an idiot." chuckled Justin evilly. "Better than that idiot Stu, though." Justin walks forward chuckling to himself, expecting to see a falling kid. But then he stops as he sees something that made his mouth gaped open in shock. Tommy, alive...and standing in mid-air. "What the heck?" yelled Justin shocked. He didn't have time for a doube-look as something hits him. He fell to the roof floor, knocked out. "Good work, Doc!" cheered Tommy. Doc Spooky has opened the door and it did the rest. The scientist has been waiting in case Tommy has to resort to jumping off the roof. As Tommy smirks at the unconscious Justin, he climbs back in the DeLorean. "Doc, you aren't going to believe this. We have to go back to 1955!" "You're right, I don't believed it!" yelled Doc Spooky in disbelief. Doc Spooky closes the door and flew away from the corrupted casino/hotel. Inside the DeLorean, Doc Spooky puts in the date as Tommy explains, "You've heard right. November 12th, 1955." "It's amazing that old Justin will even choose that date." Doc Spooky said in thought. It could mean that, that point in time inherently contains some sort of cosmic significance. Almost as if it were the junction point for the entire space-time continuum." He pauses, then said with a shrug. "Of course, it could be just a coincidence." Suddenly the time panel flashes in and out, showing another date, "January 1st, 1885." Doc Spooky frowns and hits the time panel, changing it back to the right destination. "Darn it! Got to get that thing fixed!" said Doc Spooky in annoyance. "Okay, the time circuits are on, it's time for us to go." "Wait, go?" asked Tommy alarmed. He just remembered and protested, "We can't go back right now!" "Afraid so." "But...what about Kimi? What about Spike? We can't leave them in this heckhole!" Tommy said frantically. He definitely doesn't want to leave Kimi in a world destroyed by Justin. Who knows what would happened to her especially from what he has seen or witnessed? "Don't worry. If and/or when we succeeded in our mission, this evil 1985 will changed back into the real 1985, changing around Kimi and Spike. They should be fine and will have no memories of this wicked place." "But if we don't?" Tommy asked. Doc Spooky looks grimed. "We must succeed." |
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| JusSonic | Sep 4 2006, 05:04 PM Post #21 |
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November 12, 1955 A boom appeared in the sky as the DeLorean appears above a familiar billboard. It's the same billboard that spoke of Tommy's neighborhood that has yet to be built yet. The DeLorean lands behind the billboard. Tommy got out of the car once it landed and looks around amazed. "This is awesome, it's like I was here yesterday!" said Tommy. "You were, you were." Doc Spooky said with a smile. Tommy, of course, came here yesterday to do some thinking to find a way to get his parents together. The two came out of the billboard as the doc checks his watch. "Okay, sunrise should be in 22 minutes. Your task is to find young Justin and followed him. Now sometime day, the old Justin will arrived to give the young Justin the sports magazine. Whatever you do, you cannot get in the way. We got to let old Justin thinks he has triumphed so he can bring the DeLorean back to 2015, the one we were in." "Right." Tommy said nodding. "Once old Justin has left, get the sports magazine no matter what. Both our futures depend on it!" "Don't remind me." Tommy said with a groan. Doc Spooky went back to the DeLorean and takes out a walkie talkie and a pair of binocular. "Take a walkie talkie so we can stay in contact at all times and the binoculars that you can use to spy on him. Meanwhile, I'd stay here to try to repair the time circuits. That way, I can be sure that no one will try to steal the DeLorean." "Right. Old Man McKensey still lived down that way." Tommy said with a chuckle, glancing down the road opposite the one going to North Californi, recalling the incident when he first arrived. "He would go crazy if he sees the DeLorean again." "Also, I don't want my other self seeing me." Doc Spooky continued. "Your other self?" "Yes. As of right now, there are now two of me here and two of you." Doc Spooky walks towards and up and down the road as he continues. "The other me is the Doc Spooky of 1955, the other me that helps the other you gets back to 1985." He stops for a bit. "You remember the lightning bolt that hit the clockhouse, right?" "How could I forget it?" Tommy responded. "That won't happened until tonight. So whatever you do, you can't let your other self see you. That could caused one of those paradoxes I told you about. Hold on, let me get you some money." Doc Spooky takes out a suitcase and opens it. In it are various money bills from different time periods. Tommy whistles as Doc Spooky from some money from 1955 and give it to Tommy. "I always have to be prepared. Now go get yourself some 50s clothes." "Right on it!" exclaimed Tommy as he then runs down towards North Californi. "Something inconspicuous!" yelled Doc Spooky after him. "I'm here, Doc." said Tommy into the walkie talkie as he arrives at a street sometime later. "This is Tommy over." The clothes he's wearing isn't so inconspicuous at all. He is dressed like some sort of foreign agent. But it's the best Tommy could think of and Doc Spooky isn't around to mentioned that to Tommy. "Did you find Justin's house?" Doc Spooky's voice came from the walkie talkie. "I found the address." Tommy then looks through the binoculars at a house. There are garden ornaments on the front yard. On a fence in front of the house are signs that said "No Trespassers", "Violators Will Be Prosecuted, "This Means You", and so forth. "It's the only Treene in the book but I am not sure I found Justin's place. It looks like some old lady lives here." "Justin!" Tommy hold that front as a familiar figure came out of the front door of the house. A rather big and tall teenager walking red shirt is walking off. "What?" mumbled the teenager annoyed at the voice that just spoke. "Where are you going Justin?" demands the voice. Justin turns around and yells back, "I'm going to get my car, grandma!" "When are you getting back? My feet hurt and I want you to rub my toes some more!" complained Justin's grandma. "Ah, stuff it." mumbled Justin annoyed. As he walks down the sidewalk, a red ball rolls near him. He grabs it and walks away. 5 kids run up to him. "Hey, give us our ball back!" whinned the kids. "What ball?" Justin asked innocently. "That ball." "I have no idea what you're on about." said Justin with a smirk. "Give us our ball back!" whinned the kids again. "Oh, this ball?" Justin asked, holding the ball up. "Yeah!" Justin holds the ball to the kids tauntingly as Tommy follows, avoiding beeing seen. "You want this?" asked Justin. "Yeah!" exclaimed the kids. Then, with an evil smirk, Justin throws the ball onto a roof of a nearby house. "Well, go get it!" laughed Justin evilly as he walks away, leaving the kids unhappy and stunned. 'Red shirt, bad attitude, bad with kids, that's Justin alright.' thought Tommy. Then he speaks into the walkie talkie. "Doc, it is Justin's house. I'm on him." |
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| JusSonic | Sep 5 2006, 06:49 PM Post #22 |
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Tommy followed Justin into the Courthouse Square in North Californi. Tommy sighs in relief at the real Courthouse Square, not the one that was turned into a war zone by Justin back in 1985. Tommy dodges, avoided being seen by Justin who knocks down a ball being played by some kids. He then walked over to a shop where his car, all repaired from the chase days earlier when he and his goons chased Justin. As Tommy watched, a young mechanic came up to Justin. "Good work, John." Justin said with a smirk. "All her all fixed up like you requested, Justin, but for some reason, I couldn't get it started. Is there a killer switch on it or something?" John asked, looking over the car puzzled. Tommy looks at John. There's something familiar about that mechanic... 'Of course! He's the same old man who try to get a donation for the clocktower from me back in 2015, only he's years younger here!' thought Tommy in realization. John also spoke ill of Justin because the jerk try to cheat him outta 300 bucks for fixing his car in November 12th, 1955. And now, here it is, happening in front of Tommy. Tommy watches on as Justin gets into his car. "Well, you gotta have the right touch because no one but me can start this baby." said Justin with a smirk. That is half true. Justin lost the keys to the car sometime ago and has to start it by hotwiring the thing. John made some calculations and came up with a total. "Okay, your total comes $302.57." "300 bucks?" yelled Jusstin shocked as he got out of his car. "For a couple of dents? That's bullcrap, John!" "No, it's horsecrap." corrected John, annoyed by Justin's attitude like everyone else did. "And your car was filled of it! I have to pay Old Man Hones to take it all away." "Ha! And he probably resold it so I should get something for that!" snapped Justin angrily. "Oh, you want something for it? Fine, how about we called Old Man Hones and if he could give you a refund!" "It's 300 bucks, John!" yelled Justin as he and John goes into a nearby shop. "I am only charging you for..." "If I catch the jerk who made me crashed my car, I'd killed him!" Tommy chuckles softly. It's always great to make Justin angry. As long as he doesn't have a gun and as long as he doesn't catch you afterwards. While Justin and John were in the shop, Tommy sneakly climbs into the back of the car and uses a sheet to covered himself. Unknown to Tommy, the other man Tommy is looking for is also on the scene: old Justin. The old man is behind a tree watching the scene with his younger self and John. Justin chuckles and turns, missing Tommy who just climbed in, in amusement. "Oh yes. The manure." chuckled old Justin as he walks away. Meanwhile a while later, Justin and John came out of the same shop, carrying 4 cans of Vasoline still talking. "4 cans of Vasoline is more than enough." argued John some more. "4 cans for a $300 job?" said Justin in disbelief. "I can't even have lunch in the shop anymore! It's making me sick." groaned John looking at the car in disgust. "I should be getting a case or more out of you for a 300 buck job." snapped Justin as he throws the cans into the back of the car. Each can hits Tommy hard making yelped in pain. Luckily, Justin did not hear him. "It smells worst than our bathroom!" protested John. "Yeah, sure." said Justin, rolling his eyes. "Thanks to that horsecrap, that smell will never go away in a million years!" yelled John as he walks away. "Whatever." mumbled Justin as he opens his car door. "This is the last time I ever do you a favor again!" With that, John got on the back of the shop's truck which drove off. Before Justin could get into his car, he hears some giggling. He turns and sees a familiar figure. It's Didi, her younger self, with a friend with some sort of box. Didi takes out a dress and looks at it happily. Tommy takes a peek out and recognizes it as the same dress his mom will wear tonight to the dance, the same dance where his parents will fall in love and get back together. Justin smirks and runs over to them. "Well, lookie what we got here." chuckled Justin as he looks over Didi and the dress. "Good dress, Didi, but wearing nothing suits you better." Justin lifts up Didi's skirt but Tommy's future mom pushed him away and walks off annoyed. "Justin, go take a long walk off a short pier, okay?" snapped Didi angrily. "You know, Didi, my car just got fixed. I figured I could let you have the honor of going with the best guy to the school's dance tonight." Justin said with a smile. "Forget it, I'm busy!" snapped Didi. "With that?" "Combing my hair." "That's as funny as a screen door on a battleship." laughed Justin rolling his eyes. "'Screen door on a submarine, you dork.' mumbled Tommy, rolling his eyes as well. Screen door on a submarine! Justin is always getting those sayings wrong! "Okay, if you must know, someone already asked me to the dance." snapped Didi in annoyance. "Who, that idiot Stu Pickles?" asked Justin with a smirk. "I'm going with Cloud Strife, got it?" She actually meant Tommy. She saw the name on his undershirt when he was half-dressed in her room the day Boris, his grandpa, hit him instead of Stu. Since Tommy can't use his last name in 1955, Cloud Strife will have to do. Justin, of course, remembers that name and the guy who owns it and grabs Didi angrily. "Cloud Strife? Forget it, Didi! You're going me!" He yelled. "Let go of me!" snapped Didi. "Get it through your head, Didi. You're my girl!" "I wouldn't be your girl even if you have a million dollars!" yelled Didi. With that, she kicked Justin in the shins, making him let go. Then Didi hits Justin with the box. While Justin's recovering, Didi and her friend runs off. "Hey, come back!" yelled Justin trying to go into pursuit. He is stopped by a car who moved to avoid him. Angrily, Justin yells after the fleeing Didi. "Yes you will, Didi! It's you and me, Didi! It was meant to be! Someday you're going to marry me, Didi! Someday you're going to be my wife!" Tommy shuddered as he recall that wicked 1985 where Justin's words came true. He sees Justin returning to his car. Suddenly he hears some chuckling and looked up. Sure enough, there is old Justin in the driver's seat of the car obviously waiting for young Justin. "Always have the way with women, huh?" asked old Justin with a smirk. Young Justin looks confused. He doesn't recognized himself years older but he doesn't liked him anyway. "Hey! Get out of my car, old man!" yelled young Justin. "You want that girl, Justin? I can make that dream come true." offered old Justin. "Who are you? Mr. Matchmatcher?" asked young Justin, rolling his eyes in annoyance. "Get in the car, idiot." sighs old Justin. Justin looks annoyed. "Who are you calling idiot, idiot?" snapped young Justin. He may called people that but no one calls him that back. To his surprise, old Justin starts the car. "Huh? How did you do that? I thought I am the only one who can start that thing!" "Just get in, Justin. Today is your lucky day." said old Justin with an evil smile. Young Justin held onto the car in fear as old Justin drove very fast back to his place. As old Justin drove up the driveway to the garage, the young version freaked out. "Hey! Be careful! Watch where you're going! You break this and you're dead, old man!" yelled young Justin. Soon the car made its way into the garage, okay. But young Justin is still freaking out. "This cost me 300 bucks!" "Forget the car for once, will ya?" asked old Justin annoyed. Geez, he have a bad attitude back then. "One more thing. How do you know where I lived?" asked young Justin, calming down somewhat. "Well, you could say we're related. As of which, I got a little gift for you. Something that can make you very rich. You want to be rich, right?" asked old Justin smiling. "Oh yeah, sure. That's rich. You want to make me rich?" asked young Justin rolling his eyes in disbelief. 'Well, so much for the agreeing part of Justin's story.' thought Tommy in amusement as he watches this. "You see this book?" asked old Justin. Tommy watches as old Justin holds out a very familiar sports magazine. "This books has stuff on the future. It tells the results of every sports event until the end of the century. Football, baseball, horse races, boxing, every sport you can think of, it's in there. I want you to have it." "Oh yeah, sure, that's cool. Thanks a million." said young Justin taking the magazine, obviously not believing a word his old self has to say. As he flipped through it, he remarked. "Now why don't you make like a tree and get out of here?" Old Justin frowns and hits himself (the young version) on the head. "It's leave, you idiot! 'Make like a tree and leave'! You sound like a moron when you get those sayings wrong!" yelled old Justin. "Then leave and take this thing with you!" snapped young Justin as he throws the book into the back where Tommy is at. Old Justin seizes the book then said, "You don't get it, do you? With this book, money is in this grasp! Let me show you." Suddenly a sound of the radio is heard. For a while, Tommy thought in a panic that Doc Spooky is trying to reach him and the Treenes would hear it and he would be discovered. But then he realized that old Justin just turned the car radio on to a football game already in progress. "UCLA trail 17 to 16! It's 4th and 11 with only 18 seconds left of this game. I'd say it's all over for UCLA!" boomed the announcer on the radio. Old Justin smirks as he looks through the magazine. He said, "Bet you a million bucks UCLA wins it 19 to 17!" "Are you crazy? He said it's over! You lost that one, pal!" laughed young Justin. "Oh really?" Old Justin turns the volume up as the game continues. "Here comes Decker with the kick, it's up, it looks good folks, it looks very good, field goal! UCLA wins 19 to 17!" Young Justin looks at this information, wide eyes. He looks at his old self amazed and disbelief. "Okay, how did you do it? How did you figure out what the score is, huh?" asked young Justin. "It's in this book, Justin. Just bet on the winner and you will never lose." assured old Justin. With a smile, old Justin gave the sports magazine to young Justin who looks at it in wonder. "Okay, I'd looked at it." said young Justin. Then the younger version of Justin Treene throws the magazine back into the backseat. Before Tommy could take a chance of grabbing it, old Justin seizes it. "You fool! Don't leave this lying around where someone could find it!" yelled old Justin as he and his younger self got out of the car. "Do you have a safe or something?" Young Justin looks blankly. Old Justin sighs as he continues, "No, I didn't think so. Well, find a safe! Keep this magazine locked up! And until then, keep it on you like so!" "Hey!" protested young Justin as the old man stuffed the magazine into the younger version's back pocket. "And don't let anyone know about it!" explained old Justin as the two gets ready to leave. "Oh one more thing, someday, a kid or some wild-eyed guy who claims to be a scientist will come asking for this book..." As the conversion continues, young Justin closes the garage door and walked away with the old man. Once he is certain that it's safe, Tommy got out of the car and tries to opened the door. But to his annoyance, young Justin has locked it! "Darn it!" groaned Tommy. He looks around the garage but the windows in there are either too high or too small for him to get in. "I'm struck." Tommy takes out his walkie talkie and speaks into it. "Doc! Are you there?" "Tommy, I'm here. What is your report?" asked Doc Spooky responding. "Justin is gone! He got the book now and the old man is gone too! I'm locked in Jusitn's garage! Get the DeLorean over here and get me out! The address is 1809 Maple Street!" "You know I can't let anyone see the DeLorean in daylight! But I'd get over there somehow." responded Doc Spooky. "Doc, wait! Doc Spooky!" yelled Tommy. Unfortunately, Doc Spooky has turned his walkie talkie off. Tommy groans and hits the door. "Great." |
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| JusSonic | Sep 6 2006, 07:40 PM Post #23 |
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Later that night, Justin walks out of the house and heads to the garage. His grandma's voice yells out to him. "Justin! Where are you going now?" Justin rolls his eyes and yelled back. "I told you! I am going to the dance!" "When are you coming home?" Tommy is watching this from inside the garage. He yelps. "The dance?" Tommy knew that tonight is when Justin is going there as well. He looks around but sees no place for him to hide. He has no choice. "I'd get home when I get home!" yelled Justin as he continues his walk to the garage. "Don't forget to turn off the garage lights!" responded Grandma Treene. Tommy jumps into the back of Justin's car and hides. And just in time as the bully unlocks the door and opens it up. He got into his car and turns it on. Tommy looks and sees that Justin is bringing the sports magazine with him. It's on the dashboard. He ducked just as Justin turns to look behind him as he pulled out in reverse. Soon Justin is out of the driveway and drives off towards his destination, the school. As he drives on, he didn't noticed a figure in a hat and clothes that looks like they were recently brought riding on a bike towards his home. This figure drives up the driveway and towards the empty garage. "Tommy? Tommy?" asked Doc Spooky. He has to spend all that time walking to North Californi, buying himself some clothes and a bike to rent, and pedal his way all the way here only to find that the boy he came to pick up is not even around!" Tommy! Darn it! Where is that kid?" Doc Spooky groans as he pulls the price tag off his head. Justin drove his way towards the dance, a song being played on his radio. Tommy looks as Justin is about to drive into a tunnel. After he's certain he is safe, he gets his walkie talkie out. "Doc, doc, come in, Doc!" Tommy said into his radio. Doc Spooky stops his bicycle upon hearing Tommy's voice on his walkie talkie. He gets his out. "Tommy, are you there?" asked Doc Spooky anxiously. "Doc!" Tommy called out. Suddenly static comes from both the walkie talkie and the radio and it's all because Justin drove into the tunnel. Alarmed, Tommy turns his walkie talkie off and ducks as Justin turns back with a confused look. He turns and then adjusts his radio. "Tommy?" asked Doc Spooky into the radio. But no answer. Tommy must have been cut off. Before the doctor tries to make contact again, he looks up and gasped. "Great Scott!" exclaimed Doc Spooky surprised. He now sees where he is at. The Courthouse Square near the clocktower, a ladder near the cables, a familiar cab under the doors, everything in place. The night of the storm and when Doc Spooky first saw (in 1955 anyway) the DeLorean go Back to Tomorrow! He looks astounded as he got closer. He lifts up the cover and sees the DeLorean. "Oh my gosh." said Doc Spooky shaking his head. He sees his own coat and looked inside the pocket. Yep, there is Tommy's warning to him about his forecoming death back in 1985 and he survived thanks to that warning in the letter. The scientist knew that it's best to leave the letter in there. As soon as it's safe to talked again and the static's cleared up, Tommy turns his walkie talkie on again. "Doc, come on in, doc!" called Tommy. Once hearing Tommy's voice again, Doc Spooky gets his walkie talkie out and responded, "Tommy? What just happened? I went over to Justin's place but you are not there." "I guess you've missed me. I am in the back of Justin's car. He's on his way to the dance at the school right now." responded Tommy. The scientist looks concerned. "Tommy, we may have to stopped this whole mission. It's getting too risky." "Calm down, Doc." said Tommy as Justin's car left the tunnel. "Justin has the magazine on his dashboard. Once we get to the school, I'd grabbed for it." "Tommy, whatever you do, do not let your other self see you!" warned Doc Spooky in worry and concern. Unknown to the scientist though, a familiar figure just came out of the DeLorean and is adjusting on the 'weather experiment'. The scientist didn't see him as he continues speaking with Tommy. "What do you mean, 'my other self?' asked Tommy puzzled. "Don't you remember? You are at that same dance with your mother!" snapped Doc Spooky. "Oh yeah, that. This could be heavy. "Heavy, why are things this heavy?" mumbled Doc Spooky to himself. Then he speaks into the walkie talkie again. "Tommy, you cannot let your other self see you. The consequences of that happening will be terrible!" "Excuse me, sir? You in the hat?"" Doc Spooky turned and quickly turned back in a panic. In his conversion, he has forgotten that he, his 1955 self, just came out of the DeLorean to do some adjusting. He quickly pulls his hat down as he speaks in a low tone to avoid being recognized. "Uh, are you talking to me?" asked the 1985 Doc Spooky "Yes, you. Can you do me a favor and get me that 5/8ths wrench from that toolbox." said the 1955 Doc Spooky pointing to the toolbox. "5/8ths? You mean 3 quarters, right?" asked 1985 Doc Spooky as he gets the wrench and give it to himself without showing his face. "Why, yes." said 1955 Doc Spooky surprised as he takes the wrench. "Tell me, are you working on a weather experiment here?" "Yes, I am. How did you know?" asked 1955 Doc Spooky puzzled. 1985 Doc Spooky chuckled slightly as he pulls on a cable carefully. "Oh, I have some experience in this area so I just took a lucky guess." "To tell you the truth, I was hoping to see some lightning. But the weather man said there isn't going to be any rain." said 1955 Doc Spooky with a frown. "Trust me, there's going to be rain, lots of it. Wind, thunder, lightning. The way I figured it, it's going to be one heck of a storm." chuckled 1985 Doc Spooky. "Why thank you. Nice talking to you. Maybe someday we would run into each other in the future." said 1955 Doc Spooky as he goes back to work. "Or the past." mumbled 1985 Doc Spooky sheepishly as he goes back to his bike. He got on it and ride away awkwardly, ringing his bell. 1955 Doc Spooky took a look and looks puzzled. 'There's something familiar about him.' thought 1955 Doc Spooky puzzled. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 7 2006, 05:59 PM Post #24 |
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A while later, Justin stops his car as he just arrives at the school. He got out and and begins to walk off. Tommy was about to get the sports magazine when he sees Justin turning around and coming back. He hides just in time as the bully and takes the magazine. Then he turns around and goes back towards the building. Tommy groans, then he got out and followed Justin in. The two entered the doors Tommy exited the last time (or next time in any case) he was here. Justin then walks into the gym while Tommy stays outside and watches Justin. Marvin Berry, the guy who will ended up cutting his hand later in helping Tommy out of the trunk Justin's goons will throw him into, and his band are performing. A saxophone player is soloing a great beat. Everyone is dancing. Justin turns and Tommy ducks just in time to avoid being seen. When Justin turns again, Tommy got his walkie talkie out. "Doc, doc, come in!" Tommy said into the walkie talkie, trying to call his friend. He sees something and takes a look through his binoculars. Sure enough, there he is. Stu Pickles, his father, alive and well (for now), dancing by himself. Tommy sighs. He is happy to see his father who he hasn't seen since he left the real 1985. And Tommy fears he would never see him again unless he and Doc Spooky fixed the mess Justin has caused thanks to Tommy. For now Stu is waiting to meet up with Didi and Tommy, to do the plan he and Tommy thought of earlier, unaware of what's going to happen instead. Tommy breathes in and out and enters the gym, avoiding the dancers as he walks on. Luckily, no one bothered or even see him. He stops and looks through his binoculars. There's Justin with his goons, in their 1955 looks, by the punch bowl drinking liquor, which is illegal to have in school, and pouring the stuff into the punch bowl, obviously planning to spike it. Justin chuckles as he reads a very naughty magazine. Tommy looks down and sees the sports magazine in Justin's pocket. Greasehead spots something and nudges Justin, making the bully turned away. Tommy sees what Greasehead just saw, a very familiar rather small bald man gaving Justin and his gang suspicious look. It is Mr. Stickler, who was vice-principal and loyal discipline user of the school back in 1955. After his run-in with a crazy Pangborn back in the alternative 1985, Tommy is glad to see a vice-principal who won't shoot at him for once. Suspecting that Mr. Stickler knows what they're doing, especially when the vice-principal is walking towards them, Justin and his gang make their way out of the gym. Tommy pulls his hat down and follows them. Outside on some steps, Tommy spots Justin and his goons talking while the leader is reading something and 2-B holding some liquor. As Tommy hides, the man himself is talking. "Any of you idiots know where that Cloud Strife is at?" asked Justin angrily. He is obviously still holding that grudge against Tommy, something he'd attempted to do later. "How should I know? I am not his secretary." said Greasehead with a shrug. "Find him! He cost me 300 bucks for my car and I'm going to take it out of hide!" snapped Justin. "Now go!" "Right! Here's some liquior, Justin." said 2-B, offering Justin some liquor which he takes. As the gang walks off, 2-B continued, "You're coming?" "I'm reading!" snapped Justin, not looking from what he's reading. 2-B shrugged then left with Greasehead and Dum-Dum, each member passing Tommy as they leave. Luckily, they didn't see him. With Justin now alone, Tommy begins to sneaks forward. As he does, a familiar car catches his attention and he looks through his binoculars. Yep, there he is, his past self, with his mother's 1955 self, himself parking the car. 'Well, as long as I stay away from myself, I can avoid any problems.' thought Tommy in amusement as he turns his attention to what he's doing. He sees the sports magazine is in Justin's pocket. Trying to get it by approach is risky, especially with the obvious. Thinking, Tommy jumps off the steps towards the steps leading into the basement. Justin hears this and turns, but doesn't see anybody. With a shrug, he goes back to his reading. Tommy walks up the basement stairs nearly to Justin's level. He reaches up and is about to grabbed the magazine. "Well, Mr. Treene." Justin jumps and hides what he's reading as he turns around. Tommy looks and sees Mr. Stickler approaching the teenager. "How nice of you to be here." "Well, it's great to see you too, sir." lied Justin. Mr. Stickler sniffs and frowns. "Are you drinking liquor, Treene?" "Of course not! I don't know because I am not allowed to drink it." "I see. And what is this?" Mr. Stickler takes something from behind Justin and looks at it. As Tommy watches, he looks shocked as he sees that the vice-principal has just seized the sports magazine. He looks through it in amusement. "My, my. Sports stuff, I see. Homework, I presume?" asked Mr. Stickler. "Not really. I am not at home." joked Justin. The vice-principal doesn't find that joke amusing as he pushes the teenager. "You're attitude is getting on my nerves, Treene! Watch yourself or I'd have you where I finally want and that's detention!" He hits Justin with the magazine and scowls, "Hooligan!" Then Mr. Stickler walks away, taking the magazine with him. Justin just shrugs and walks the other way. Tommy groans. Now he has to followed one of the people he least respected in school to get the magazine back. Or at least someone who is in Pangborn's job. Tommy follows the vice-principal. But Tommy was forced to stop, ducked, and walked slowly as he walks by the familiar white car. "Geez you smoke too?" asked past Tommy as he spat the pill out. "Tommy you're beginning to sound just liked my mother." Didi sighed irritably. Past Tommy seemed a bit shocked at the comment, then shrugs it off. "Yeah, sure." As Present Tommy walked back the white car unseen, Didi continues, smiling happily. "Someday, when I have kids of my mine, I'd let them do what they want no matter what." "Man, wouldn't I liked to see that in writing." sighs past Tommy a bit annoyed. "You're telling me." mumbled present Tommy in agreement. When he's certain that he's safe from being seen, he continues following Mr. Stickler right into one of his least favorite places: the school. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 9 2006, 12:42 PM Post #25 |
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Going to the vice-principal's office during school hours is something Tommy prefers to avoid. What's worst is going there at nighttime after hours. But Tommy has to go there to get the magazine back. Tommy found Mr. Stickler's office with a sign outside with Mr. Stickler's name on it, including a word 'Discipline' on it. Mr. Stickler puts that word there a while ago and it stay up there even when Mr. Pangborn became vice-principal. Tommy looks inside to see Mr. Stickler pouring himself a drink. The vice-principal puts the magazine on the table as he drinks. Tommy has to find a way to get the magazine. He knew it's too dangerous if he were to come in and asked Mr. Stickler for the magazine, especially when it may effected the space-time continuum doing so. Tommy quietly opens the door and crawls inside towards Mr. Stickler's desk. The vice-principal didn't noticed luckily. Tommy looks at the desk then towards the magazine. He moves a flag out of the way, then he reaches forward to get the magazine. A slam is heard. Tommy was so focuses on the magazine that he forgotten the door which slowly closes during the progress. When the door is closed, Mr. Stickler hears it and got up. Tommy ducks just in time as Mr. Stickler goes to the door and opens it. He looks around wondering what happened. He closes the door and turns. He sees no one by his desk. He looks puzzled, then he shrugs and goes back to sit behind his desk. Tommy, meanwhile, has managed to avoid being seen by him by hiding under his desk, which isn't a very easy place to hide but it works, nevertheless. As Mr. Stickler looks out the window, he hears something and looks out it. Tommy took this time to make the grab for the magazine again. But then the vice-principal moved back and crushed Tommy's hand with his chair. Tommy cringes and does his best to avoid yelling. Doing so will let Mr. Stickler know that someone is in his office, someone who isn't a student. Mr. Stickler finished his drink as Tommy does his best to avoid giving himself away. Mr. Stickler puts his cup down and leans forward, unknowingly freeing Tommy's hand. Tommy removes his hand and holds it cringing in pain. The vice-principal soon got up and takes the magazine. Tommy looks on, fearing that he has to continued following the bald-headed vice-principal. But to his surprise, Mr. Stickler, as he opens the door to his office, throws the magazine in the trash can as he leaves. Tommy is surprised. Once Mr. Stickler is gone, Tommy crawls out of the desk, runs to the trash can, and grabs the magazine. "Yes!" said Tommy happily. With a smile, he flicks through the pages starting with the back. But to his horror, instead of some sports info, there are "nasty" pictures of girls. He gasped. "No!" In a panic, Tommy goes to the cover. Sure enough, the magazine is actually the very naughty magazine Justin was readng earlier with the words Ooh La La on it. "Ooh La La? Ooh La La?" Tommy groans. Now he knew what happened to the dust cover back in 1985A. Justin has uses the dust cover to switched magazines! He threw the magazine and dust cover away and gets his walkie talkie out. "Doc, Doc, come in!" yelled Tommy in the walkie talkie. As Tommy stood by the window waiting for Doc Spooky's answer, he is unaware of something going on outside, something that will changed his life forever. "Hey you jerk! Keep your friggin' hands off..." A pause, then, "Oh." "Doc, where are you?" yelled Tommy into the walkie talkie, still unaware of what's going on outside. "Tommy, what's going on?" responded Doc Spooky. "I messed up! I really did!" "Where's the magazine?" asked the scientist. "I don't know, Justin must still have it on him! All I got is the stupid cover!" cried a panic Tommy. "Then where is Justin?" asked Doc Spooky. "I don't know!" "That's it Pickles. You asked for it, now you got it." said a familiar voice outside, but Tommy doesn't hear it. "Tommy, do you have any idea where he might be?" asked the scientist. "He's probably somewhere else by now!" responded Tommy. "Tommy, our future depends on you finding Justin and getting that magazine back!" "I just wish I knew where..." Suddenly Tommy hears a familiar voice interrupting him. "Justin, knock it off! Let him go! You're going to hurt him!" Tommy turns and looks out the window. Sure enough, he sees his future father Stu getting his hand twisted by Justin, with Didi begging Justin to stopped. "Of course!" exclaimed Tommy excited, then into the walkie talkie. "Doc, I gotta go, I just found my chance! I can't missed this! My dad's about to punched out Justin!" Tommy then runs out of the office. Besides not missing his next chance to getting the magazine back, there's another reason why he couldn't missed the most turning point in his family's history. Tommy runs out of the school's doors and run to behind a nearby car. And just in time too. He watches as Stu, angry at what Justin just did to Didi, punches Justin, ramming him into Doc Spooky's car and onto the ground. Justin is unconscious. "Yes!" cheered Tommy silently. Tommy's past self arrived, along with some other students. Past Tommy looks stunned for reasons present Tommy knew. "Whoa, Deja Vu." Present Tommy said impressed while smiling. He arrived too late to see his father punched out Justin, a bully who picked on Stu since school. Now that he has seen it this time, it gives the boy more reason to respect his former wimpy father. Tommy ducks so his past self wouldn't see and recognzied him. Stu couldn't believed it as he looks at his hand as if it's someone else's. He turns to Didi. "Are you okay?" Stu asked Didi. Did gave Stu a new look: a look of seeing a hero...and a look of love. Stu helps Didi up. Smiling, the two walked hand in hand back into the gym. As the crowd looks on, past Tommy looks at the photo of himself and his siblings. Past Tommy looks shocked then pushed through the crowd and runs off. Present Tommy knew it's because he saw Dil disappearing and run to get the band back onto the stage. 'Well, past Tommy is out of the picture. Time for present Tommy to stepped in.' thought Tommy as he walks forward. He pushed through the crowd while saying, "Okay, move back, everyone, move back. I know CPR, yeah, CPR." He kneels down next to Justin. "CPR? What's that?" asked a student puzzled. Tommy quickly realized that CPR hasn't been invented yet. But there's no time to think about that as Justin quickly recovers and sees Tommy. Even though he's in disguise, he recognized him. "You!" yelled Justin angrily. Quickly Tommy punches the bully, putting him back into unconsciousness. Tommy finds what he's looking for in Justin's jacket: the infamous sports magazine. "He's fine!" Tommy exclaimed as he got up and run off. "Hey, did you take his wallet?" asked the student shocked and astounded, then to the other students. "I think he took that guy's wallet!" |
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| JusSonic | Sep 10 2006, 03:44 PM Post #26 |
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As Doc Spooky continues work on the DeLorean, Tommy made contact with him once again. "Doc! I got great news! I got the magazine!" Tommy responded. Doc Spooky hears this and smiles. "Thank goodness." said the scientist. Then he takes the walkie talkie and speaks into it. "That's great, Tommy! Once I filled up the fusion generator, I will head over and meet you on the gym roof!" "Okay, 10-4, Doc!" Tommy said with a smile as he turns a corner back at the school. Unfortunately, he run into the last 3 people he wanted to run into and who gave himself, past and present, trouble earlier: Justin's goons who has escaped from Marvin Berry's band! "Hey! It's him!" 2-D yelled pointing at him. "He's in disguise!" added Greasehead alarmed. "Guys, what's that?" yelled Tommy pointing at something. Justin's goons turned, like their boss would. Then Tommy pushes them, knocking them all down. 'Good, they are gullible just like their boss.' thought Tommy as he makes a run for it. Justin's goons got back up. "After him!" yelled 2-D as he and the other gave chase. Back at the billboard for Tommy's home, Doc Spooky got the DeLorean flying but hits the billboard doing so. "Darn it!" yelled the scientist trying to make a turn. Unknown to him, he turns the time circuits on while doing so. The bump has caused the time circuits to turn to "January 1st, 1885, 12:00 AM", the same date that flashed earlier (or later in 1985A's case). But the scientist didn't see this as he flies off, pulling off a flag pennant with one of his wheels as he goes. Tommy runs into the gym while dodging Justin's goons. As he runs in, he saw a great sight. While Marvin Berry, the guy who cut his hand getting past Tommy out of the car trunk earlier and the same guy past Tommy replaced playing the guitar, was singing on the stage, Stu and Didi kisses while dancing. That kiss results in saving past Tommy from being faded from existance. As Marvin concludes the song, Stu waves to past Tommy who waves back after a while of almost disappearing. Tommy smiles. This sight is one of the most romantic moments in his family's history, past, present, or future. Tommy hears the gym doors slamming open and turned just in time to see Justin's goons entering. Tommy gets under the table, losing his hat in the progress. He quickly grabs the hat and pulls it under the table as Justin's goons near. "Yeah...let's do another one!" Marvin said on stage smiling as everyone applauded. Well, almost everyone. "Where is that idiot? I know he came in here!" snapped Greasehead looking around. "Something...something that really cooks huh?" Past Tommy wondered as he put the guitar back on. 2-D hears that and sees Tommy on stage. He points while yelling, "Hey! How did he get up there???" "Heck if I know, but when he's done, he's dead." snarled Greasehead. "Man, how did he changed his clothes so fast?" asked Dum-Dum in disbelief. Present Tommy watched in shock as Justin's goons run to the side of the stage where past Tommy's going to exit after he's done playing the song. Past Tommy didn't noticed as he continues what he's sayign, "...an oldie...where I come from." Then he turned to the band. "Ok, guys, listen. This is a blues riff in "B." Watch me for the changes, and try to keep up ok?" Past Tommy then turned around and started to play Johnny B. Goode. As he does and everyone on the dance floor begins to dance, Justin's goon waits in the darkness. "Oh man." groaned present Tommy as he sees this. He gets his walkie talkie out and contacted Doc Spooky, who is still on his way to the school. "Doc, come in!" "Tommy, come in." responded Doc Spooky. As the song continues, Tommy speaks into the walkie talkie as he glances at his past self. "Doc, we're in big trouble! Justin's goons chased me into the gym and now they're going to jumped...me!" "Then what are you doing? Get out of there." said the scientist, unaware of what Tommy meant at there. "Not me! The other me, the one on stage playing Johnny B. Goode!" Tommy explained. Doc Spooky gasped on his end, then continued, "Great Scott! If they jumped you, your other self will ended up missing the lightning bolt at the clocktower. You won't return to the future and we will have a major paradox!" "The same one that could destroy the universe?" asked Tommy in disbelief. "Yes! Tommy, you got to stop those guys at all costs without being seen by yourself or your parents!" Doc Spooky exclaimed, pointing out that Tommy's parents saw him on the stage and the consequences if he was seen. "Oh great." Tommy said as he looks on. Back outside, some of the students slapped Justin. This woke him up. "What the heck?" yelled Justin. He got up and confronted the kid who thought Tommy has stolen Justin's wallet. "Where is he?" "Who?' asked the student. "Cloud Strife!" "Who?" "The guy in the hat! Where is he?" demanded Justin frustrated. "Oh, he went that way." said the student pointing to the direction of the gym. Angrily, Justin runs off without saying thank you. The student yells after him, "BTW, I think he took your wallet!" He turns back to the other students. "I think he took his wallet." Back in the gym, present Tommy walks forward and watches himself still playing. Past Tommy: Go Johnny go, go, go; Johnny B Goode. 'So, this is what it's like intending your own concert.' thought Tommy impressed. "I am good." Tommy, however, went back to the mission at hand as he sees Justin's goons still waiting getting stuff to use as weapons on past Tommy. Tommy sneaks backstage and thinks of a way to stopped Justin's goons. Approaching is once again out of the question so he has to think of something else. Past Tommy: Go, go, go Johnny go, go; go Johnny go, go, go; go Johnny go, go; Go Johnny go, go, go; Johnny B Goode That something else just occurred as Tommy looks up and sees a bunch of sandbags above the goons' head. If Tommy could get up there and untied them... 'I got to do it.' thought Tommy as he climbs a ladder up to a rigging above the stage. As he does, he managed to avoid being seen by Marvin Berry who went back stage to make an important call. Tommy begins to crawl across the rigging, being watchful to avoid falling or being seen. Luckily, the latter is easy to avoid since everyone is too busy dancing or performing to notice a kid on the rigging. As present Tommy continues to crawl across the rigging, past Tommy is doing a Chuck Berry movement across stage. Then he starts to go into other few "gags" and the band members really start to get confused looks on their faces. During this time, present Tommy got to a part of the rigging where ths sandbags are at and begins to reach towards the rope that supports them. "Come on." mumbled present Tommy. Past Tommy plays a little while making little steps backwards. Then he starts to jump in the air and do a few power chords. After that he started hitting the handle of the guitar and doing Heavy Metal Riffs. Then he started to play with the guitar on the back of his head, this really got the band members looking at him strangely. Then he slide across the stage, after that he laid on his back, played, and moved himself backwards on the ground. Soon most of the band members had stopped playing and things were quieting down...except for past Tommy of course. Past Tommy got up, moved over to one of the speakers, kicked it down, then he did a short slide and ending with a sustained high-pitched note and had his eyes closed. Luckil, by this time, present Tommy has reached the rope and untie the sandbags, setting them loose. Justin's goons were too busy focusing on past Tommy to noticed the sandbag falling towards them. Until the sandbags hit them and knocked them all down. When past Tommy opened his yes and looked out on the danc efloor he noticed everyone was looking at him strangely and Mr. Stickler took his hands off his ears. Past Tommy got up and laughed nervously as he handed the guitar to Marvin. Present Tommy meanwhile uses the other end of the rope to landed softly on the stage lifting the sandbags up temporarily. "I...I guess you guys aren't ready for that yet." Then he made a little chuckle. "But your kids are going to love it." Justin's goons recovered and starts to get up. But present Tommy dropped the sandbags on them again, knocking them out cold. With a smile, present Tommy left the backtstage. 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| JusSonic | Sep 11 2006, 07:20 PM Post #27 |
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As present Tommy walks out of the backstage and climbed down the stairs that his past self will climbed down very soon, he speaks to Doc Spooky via walkie talkie again. "Success, Doc! They're down and we're clear." Tommy said proudly. "Good! I will be on the school's roof in 1 minute." responded Doc Spooky. "Okay, I'd be there." Past Tommy leaves through the door. Meanwhile, his past self exits the stage from the side door as he prepares to make his leave to get to the clocktower on time. Just then, he sees Didi at the bottom of the stairs waiting for him. "Didi!" said past Tommy surprised as he goes down to her. "Tommy, that is very good...music." Didi said, still not sure if it's really music or not. It was fine until past Tommy went crazy. Outside, present Tommy stops and decides to listen in on his past self's conversion with his mother. He smiles as he watches through the door's window. "Uh, I hope you don't mind but Stu said he's going to take me home." Didi said, smiling at Stu who comes up to her and past Tommy. "Great! Good idea! I have a feeling you two liked liked each other." Past Tommy said with a smirk. "Same here." Present Tommy was so busy focusing on the conversion that he didn't hear someone approaching. "Hey idiot!" Tommy turns and sees an angry Justin approaching. He is bruised but he's still fine...and still ticked off. "You think you could fool me in that get up? Okay, enough is enough! Let's go, right now!" Present Tommy frowns and said, "Forget it." He turns and begins to walk away. Besides the fact that he doesn't want a fight to get his past self's attention and may caused another possibility for a paradox, he has to go and meet Doc. "Hey, what are you doing? Get back here!" snapped Justin as he looks shocked at present Tommy leaving. Back inside, past Tommy is about to leave himself but stopped. He thought of something then turned back to his parents. "Oh, and one more thing..." Past Tommy begin, going into a request of his parents taking it easy on one of their kids (AKA Tommy) if and/or when he burned the living room rug by accident. Present Tommy is still walking off when Justin yelled out, "What are you? A baby?" Present Tommy stops upon hearing that and frowns. Justin chuckles evilly. "Just as I expected. Nothing but a dumb baby." Being called a baby is bad enough, but having 'dumb' added is a big insult. Present Tommy turns around and slowly walks back to Justin. "No one, calls me a ba..." Present Tommy was suddenly interrupted when his past self opens the exit door very fast and slamming them on him, knocking him down. Luckily, past Tommy is too busy making his quick exit to get to the courthouse on time to stopped and apologized so present Tommy being seen is not a problem. Justin looks surprised as he held the door opened and as past Tommy left, but luckily, he didn't see his face. He looks confused as the past self left then turned his attention back to the present Tommy as the boy fell down, his hat falling in the progress. Justin closes the door and looked at Tommy. Then he sees something exposed out of Tommy's jacket. It's the sports magazine. "What in heck?" said Justin, slowly angry. He grabs the magazine before Tommy reacted and glares angrily. "Now you go and steal my stuff?" Angrily, Justin kicks Tommy in the stomach making him yelp. "And this one is for my car!" Tommy gets kicked in the stomach very hard this time. Satisfied, Justin turns around and heads back to his car. Tommy groans as he watches Justin leaving with the sports magazine he worked so hard to get back again. Tommy stood up, not bothering to get his hat back, and goes after Justin. But the bully has since got back into his car and drove off very fast. Tommy groans, then climbs up some nearby stairs leading to the school's roof. Up there, Doc Spooky is busy trying to get the flag pennant off. Tommy arrives. "Doc, bad news! I messed up! Justin took me down and grab the magazine!" exclaimed Tommy. Doc Spooky gasped then looked around as Tommy resumes. "It's my fault! I just have left sooner!" "Never mind that! Where did he go?" Doc Spooky asked frantically. "East down the River Road Tunnel." Tommy said pointing. "Get in!" As Justin drove down the road to the tunnel, the DeLorean is flying above him. Tommy opens the door, hangs on to avoid falling out and looks at Justin via his binoculars. "There he is, Doc. Let's land on him! We can cripple his car." Tommy announced. Doc Spooky doesn't like the idea. "Tommy, this time machine is important to us right now. If we do that, we may ended up crashing and we can't risk getting struck here." "So what better idea do you got?" "I have one." As Justin continues driving, while listening to the radio, he is unaware that the DeLorean is flying closely behind him now. "Repeating tonight's earlier weather bulletin, a severe thunderstorm is heading for North Californi." announced the announcer on the radio. Tommy opens the door and got out putting his leg through the strap on his hoverboard being careful not to fall. Then, after getting his balance, he hovers after Justin's car, being careful not to be seen. Meanwhile, Justin's radio is getting messed up and he tries to adjust it. As he does, Tommy looks back and gives a thumbs up to Doc. The scientist nodded and flew the DeLorean upwards. Justin turns around just in time to missed the DeLorean. He turns back, concentrating on the road. Meanwhile, Tommy continues moving around the car until he ends up on the left side of it. During this whole thing, the announcer now goes to sports. "For you sports fans out there, there was a lot of action today in college football. Here's what happened in the top 10. UCLA narrowly defeated Washington 19-17." As the announcer continues, Tommy sees the sports magazine in the back. "Michigan State crushed Minnesota 42-14." Justin frowns, reaches into the back, and takes the magazine before Tommy could grabbed it. "Ohio State beat Iowa 20-10. Michigan blanked Indiana 30-0." Justin looks through the magazine and is surprised to see that the results on the radio matches the results in the magaqzine. "Darn it!" groaned Tommy. "Son of a jerk." mumbled Justin impressed. As the announcer continues announcing the sports results on the radio, Justin sets the sports magazine next to him. Tommy sees his chance and slowly opens the car door. As Tommy slowly reaches for the magazine, the sports announcer goes back to repeating the weather. Justin turns his head at that moment, sees Tommy, and turns to tface he front again. Suddenly he did a double-take. "You again?" yelled Justin as he grabs for the magazine. Tommy grabs for it as well and the two played a game of Tug of War with it. "Let go of the boy!" During the fight, Justin manages to kicked Tommy causing the sports magazine to go flying right onto Justin's windshield. "Let go of my car!" Tommy refuses as he just continues to hold on. Justin drives around in circles but Tommy still held on. The car passed a sign saying "Tunnel ahead". The car soon approaches the tunnel. With an evil smirk, Justin drove towards the tunnel's edge in attempt to force Tommy off. He then drove back onto the road. Justin looks and doesn't see Tommy. His car may be dented but at least his thorn in his side is gone. "Good riddance." said Justin with a smirk. He then reaches to grab the magazine when he sees something in his car mirror. He adjusts it and sees, much to his annoyance, Tommy hanging onto the back of his car. Tommy makes his way back towards the magazine but Justin is waiting. Suddenly the bully elbows Tommy then punches Tommy. The boy quickly dodges another blow from Justin. Honking is heard and the two turned to see a truck coming from the opposite direction. Justin quickly moved (he can't afford another 300 bucks!) to avoid it as Tommy quickly moved his legs up to dodged. Dodged his legs up? Tommy looks and sees that his legs is moving upwards thanks to the hoverboard. 'Oh duh! I forget that this hoverboard can hover everywhere...well, except water.' Tommy quickly use this to his advantage. He uses the hoverboard to escape then makes the grab for the sports magazine again. He lets go of Justin's car and land/hover in the middle of the road. He doesn't have time to celebrate through. Justin stops his car at the other end of the tunnel and turns it around to face Tommy. The bully smirks evilly as he revs up his car to make his charge. Tommy turns to see the end he and Justin came in some distance away. Putting the sports magazine inside his jacket, Tommy begins to hover for it. He manages to get away of Justin's car so far. But the bully soon set the foot down and charges after the boy. Tommy yelps and begins to hover faster. Justin laughs evilly. Tommy is almost to the end of the tunnel but Justin is almost on him. Just when it looks up all hope is up for Tommy, as he reaches the end of the tunnel, a flag pennant drops down and Tommy grabs it. The pennant is being held by the DeLorean driven by Doc Spooky. Doc quickly pulls Tommy up, nearly dodging Justin whose looks up in shock and disbelief. "Go doc!" cheered Tommy. "Hang on, Tommy!" called out Doc Spooky. Justin is so mesmerised by the whole ordeal that he didn't noticed the truck that he just passed in front of him. That is until he looks. "Crap!" yelled Justin as he tries to avoid it. But, like before, it was too late as the car smashed into the back of the truck. And worst yet, a bunch of familiar stuff fell out of the back right into the car and its driver. It is the same manure truck Justin crashed into before! Tommy laughed in amusement as he, with Doc Spooky in the DeLorean, flies off. Justin groans as he spits out some manure. "Manure! I hate manure!" yelled Justin, angry that his car is wrecked once more. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 12 2006, 08:00 PM Post #28 |
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As the lightning storm which will bring forth events in North Californi is on its way, Doc Spooky flew the DeLorean above Tommy's home's billboard sign and dropped the boy off. "What's up, Doc?" Tommy said to Doc Spooky via walkie talkie as he steps off his hoverboard. He grins. "I always wanted to do that." "Everything's fine, Tommy, except this weather is too miserable to make a landing so far. I'd turned and try again. Do you have the book?" "Yeah." Tommy said, taking the magazine out. "It's in my hands right now." "Good! Burn it!" "Right." Tommy looks around and spots a pail behind the billboard. Tommy grabs the hoverboard, heads over, and puts the magazine in it. He then takes out the matchbook he took from Justin's office back in 1985A. Tommy pauses. It would be a shame to destroy the only thing that could keep his life from being terrible like old Justin hinted back in 2015. 'But it's my fault that this magazine was the reason North Californi got, or will be, destroyed by 1985.' thought Tommy. 'I can't do that either, no matter what much I want my life to get better.' Tommy takes a match out of the matchbook, lights it, and use it to set fire to the sports magazine. As Tommy watches, the magazine goes up in a flame until there's nothing left of it but the ashes. Tommy sighs as he looks at the back of the matchbook which shows the name of Justin's casino/hotel. But then, something strange happens. The writing itself begins to change. As Tommy watches, it changes from the name of Justin's casino/hotel to "Justin's Automotives and Details." Tommy looks startled. That's the name of Justin's work back in the real 1985, and Justin was working on some matchbooks...back in the real 1985! Tommy, excited, takes out the newspaper clipping with the article about his father's murder on it. He frowns as he sees that it hasn't changed any. But wait...before Tommy's eyes, the article changes from "Stu Pickles Murdered: Local Author Was Killed" to "Stu Pickles Honored: Local Author Was Awarded." The article explains about the award Stu has won...in the real 1985! Excited, Tommy calls Doc on the walkie talkie. "Doc, doc! The newspaper has changed! My dad is alive! Everything must be back to normal!" In the DeLorean, upon hearing that, Doc Spooky takes the newspaper that shows his tragic fate of being confined to an asylum. Suddenly the headlines, along with the article, begins to changed. The headline "Doc Spooky Committed-Nutcase Inventor Declared Legally Insane," along with the side stories like "Justinco To Build New Dioxin Plant" and "Nixon To Seek 5th Term" soon changed as did the picture which now changed to Doc Spooky shaking hangs with officials. The headline now reads "Doc Spooky Commended" and the side-stories now said "Mayor Fox Vetoes Zoning Bill" and "Reagan To Seek Second Term." Doc's attention is on the headline with him. Commended? Oh yes, now he remembers. There he was, being awarded and congratulated by the officials of the univerisity he used to worked at for all his best years of working there. He smiles and said to himself, "Mission has succeeded." "Does that mean Kimi and Spike is okay?" asked Tommy through the walkie talkie eagerly. "That's the right! The ripple effect has happened, this time for the best! Our tomorrow has returned! We can now go home!" said Doc Spooky happily. "Right, let's get our butts back to tomorrow..." Tommy was interrupted as a lightning bolt nearly hits the DeLorean and hits a tree, bringing a branch down. "Doc, are you okay?" yelled Tommy. "That was close. Almost got send to the other side by that one." chuckled Doc Spooky. "Well, be careful, okay? Or you will get struck by lightning..." Tommy has spoken too soon as another lightning bolt struck...this time the DeLorean! As Tommy watches in horror, the DeLorean spins around very fast and accelerate. Suddenly, in a flash, it disappears, leaving fire trails upwards in the sky. As everything went clear, Tommy looks up stunned. "Doc?" Tommy asked still stunned. He spoke into the walkie talkie, hoping to get an answer. "Doc, come in, Doc." No answer. "Doc, do you read in? Come in!" Something familiar came falling down. But to Tommy's horror, it isn't the DeLorean. It's the pennant that saved his life. And now it fell to Tommy's feet, smoking after the lightning struck. "No," Tommy whispered horribly. Soon it begins to rain but Tommy didn't take notice. "He's gone, the Doc's gone!' Tommy is horrified for two reasons. Besides the fact that his friend may be gone forever, he is also struck in 1955 with no way home! Well there is, except that ride is being used as of right now! He can't believed it! Just when things turned out right, it turned to wrong again! As Tommy stood in the road still stunned, he sees some lights and turns around. A car is approaching. For a while, Tommy fears that it could be Justin who has found him and is out for revenge for his car crashing into the manure truck the second time. But no, instead it is a mysterious car who soon stopped almost in front of him. As Tommy watches, a man wearing a trenchcoat and hat came out, mysterious and sinister. What he did caught Tommy off guard. "Mr. Pickles!" called the man. "Huh?" asked Tommy alarmed. The man approached. "Are you Tommy Pickles?" Tommy is shocked. How can this guy knew his name? Did he messed up during the mission. He looks nervously as he said, "Uh, yeah?" The man nodded and reaches into his coat. "I got something for you." For a while, Tommy thought he was getting out a gun. But instead, he pulls out some sort of brown envelope. "A letter!" "What?" Tommy said surprised as he takes the letter. "A letter for me? What kind of threat is this?" "A threat? Oh no!" chuckled the man with a smile. "I am with Western Union. Actually we at the office was hoping you could helped us with this mystery. For 70 years, we have that in our possession." Tommy looks shocked, then begins opening the letter as the man continues as he gets an umbrella from his car, "You see, Western Union was asked and given instructions for that letter to be delivered to someone who matches you description and goes by the name of Tommy, at this exact location, at this exact minute, November 12th, 1955. We have a bet to see if this Tommy Pickles kid was to be here. Sadly, I lost." The man chuckled as he frowns. "70 years did you say?" asked Tommy in disbelief. "Yeah, 70 years, 2 months and 12 days to be exact. Here, sign on line 6 please, here you are." said the Western Union Man, giving a clipboard for Tommy to sign. As Tommy signs the clipboard, he looks puzzled. Who 70 years ago would even know that he was here? Unless... After he's done signing, he takes a look at the letter and immediately look at the bottom. He gasped as he sees a familiar name. "It's from the Doc!" said Tommy happily as he runs to the car. The Wester Union Man follows trying to keep Tommy dry with his umbrella. Tommy reads the letter, "'Dear Tommy, if what I was hoping is right, you will get this letter once you see the DeLorean get hit by lightning. First off, let me tell you that I am all right. I am living these past 8 months in the year 1885. The lightning bolt...'" Tommy stops as he suddenly sees the year at the bottom. "1885? September 1885!" Suddenly Tommy begins to run off. The Western Union Man stops him. "Hold it! What's going?" asked the Western Union Man. "He's alive! Doc Spooky is alive! He may be in the old west but he's alive!" said Tommy excited. "But wait, do you need any help?" Tommy looks determined. "I know one man who can help me now." He turns and begins running back to North Californi. Hopefully, the man he's looking for is still there by the time he arrives...and by the time he leaves. Doc Spooky, the 1955 version, sees the DeLorean coming. He knew what he must do what he is going to do and quick. He connects the cable back to the one on the courthouse. He then begins to slide down the rope very fast, yelling as he does so. He lands on the ground hard. The DeLorean is almost up to 88 mph. Eventually when it hits 88, the DeLorean begins its light show again about to starts its time travelling once again. Doc Spooky quickly removes the cable from the branch and rushes over to the one at the lampost. Meanwhile, the clock turns to 10:04...and the lightning hits it hard, right on cue! The electricity from the lightning travels down the cable right to the lamppost just as Doc Spooky connects it in time. He is jolted back on his bottom once more as it does. Soon the DeLorean came under the lampost, the hook hits the cable...and lightning enters the Time Travecitor and soon the DeLorean disappears, leaving tracks of fire behindA! Doc Spooky looks at his happening stunned. The time machine, which he will make in 1985...it worked! He got up and looks around in wonder. When he's positive that the time machine indeed disappeared, he begins to dance and yells in delight. He looks at the Courthouse, the clock now no longer working, with delight. And he knew he got another good reason to be delighted again years later. With a smile, Doc Spooky turns and goes back to his car. Suddenly a voice calls to him. "Doc, doc, doc!" "What?" asked Doc Spooky not turning at first. "Doc!" Doc Spooky finally turns around and yells in horror. Before him is Tommy, the same kid he send back to 1985! He mumbles still in horror. "Doc, doc, calm down. It's me, Tommy!" said Tommy, the present one, as he tries to calm the past version of his friend down. "It can't be! I just send you Back to Tomorrow!" exclaimed Doc Spooky in disbelief as he looks around, wondering if he has done anything wrong. Tommy sighs as he said, "I know. You did send me Back to Tomorrow, Doc, but I'm back. I'm Back from Tomorrow." Doc Spooky looks up and said, "Great Scott!" Then he fainted and fell to the ground. Tommy looks alarmed and tends to him. "Doc? Come on, Doc! Oh great!" groaned Tommy. What is he going to do? What if Doc Spooky dies because of his shock? Then he won't be able to invent the time machine. Then Tommy wouldn't go back to 1955 in the first place and changed his future. Then Justin wouldn't have a reason to changed 1985! And it will caused that major paradox the scientist has warned Tommy about! 'Oh man, this is heavy.' thought Tommy as he continues to try to revive his old friend. To be concluded... Cast list E.G. Daily: Tommy Pickles, Tommy Pickles Jr. Boy 2 Charlie Adler: Dr. Thompson Spooky Melanie Chartoff: Didi Kropotkin/Pickles/Treene Thomas F. Wilson: Justin Treene, Dustin Treene, Grandma Treene Dionne Quan: Kimi Watanabe Finster/Pickles, Molly-Marie Lulu Pickles Clancy Brown: Mr. Stickler, Vice Principal Pangborn Jack Riley: Stu Pickles Billy West: 2-D Maurice LaMarche: Dum-Dum, computer voices, video waiters Frank Welker: Greasehead Tom Kenny: John Tara Strong: Compo, Dil Pickles, Boy 1, Girl 2 Charles Fleischer: Weasel Grey Delisle: Witchy, saleswoman Tress MacNeille: Officer Tress, computer voices Jeff Glen Bennett: Taxi Driver Stephen Moverley: Mr. Yamaguchi II Cree Summer: Susie Carmichael Ron Glass: Randy Carmichael Kath Soucie: Buster Carmichael Cheryl Carter: Dr. Lucy Carmichael Greg Lee: Bret the hobo, Wallet Guy Phil LaMarr: Wilson Fox III, Marvin Berry Nora Dunn: Officer Stacy Catherine Cavadini: Girl 1 Pamela S. Adlon: Sean, kids |
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