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| JusSonic's Treasure Planet; A parody of the Muppets and Disney stuff | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 13 2006, 04:56 PM (1,704 Views) | |
| JusSonic | Sep 13 2006, 04:56 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note This story parodies the Muppets movie (the film) and Treasure Planet (the name) Somewhere in space exists a big and mysterious planet filled with forest, beaches, and oceans. No one knew of its existance but a few. And one of those few has just landed on that planet with his men. "I was Count Dooku's first mate that voyage...three days east of Torch in the Zebes system. That man is a man, who had white hair, a short white beard, and wore a burghandy shirt, black pants, black boots, and a brown cape. A lightsaber (only it looked like it was bent) hung from his belt. As he watches, his henchmen carries out treasures chests and marches. "Count Dooku knows of a big abandonded plant, where he buried the treasure. A song plays as Count Dooku and his men gets ready to take the treasure to where they will buried it. "Gold and blood, that is Count Dooku's trademarks. He has left both behind him that day. Chorus: Shiver my timbers Shiver my soul Yo ho, heave ho There are men whose hearts are as black as coal Yo ho, heave ho Norbert and Daggett: And they sailed their ship 'cross the ocean blue A bloodthirsty captain and a cutthroat crew Edward Platypus: It's as dark a tale as was ever told Of the lust for treasure and the love of gold Chorus: Shiver my timbers Shiver my sides Yo ho, heave ho There are hungers as strong as the winds and tides Yo ho, heave ho Fred Flintstone and Barney Rumble: And those buccaneers drown their sins in rum Donkey Kong: The devil himself would have to call them scum Imps: Every man aboard would have killed his mate For a bag of guineas or a piece of eight Edward Platypus: A piece of eight Squidward: A piece of eight The Roaches (from Tiny Toon Adventures): A five, six, seven, eight Jinjos (from the Banjo Kazooie series): Hulla wacka, ulla wacka Something not right Many wicked icky things gonna happen tonight Hulla wacka, moolah wacka Space man beware Pepe Le Pew and that female skunk: When de money in de ground Dere's murder in de air Jinjos: Murder in the air "One more time now." called out a single Jingo. Chorus: Shiver my timbers Shiver my bones Yo ho, heave ho There are secrets that sleep with old Davy Jones Yo ho, heave ho Ekans and Arbok: When the mainsail's set and the anchor's weighed There's no turning back from any course that's laid After their trip, Dooku and his men arrived at a cave and they begin digging. All except Dooku who looks on. Murrays (Monkey Island): And when greed and villainy sail the sea You can bet your boots there'll be treachery Chorus: There'll be treachery The men continued digging, sweating and tired as they do. Dooku smirked evilly and takes out his lightsaber, getting ready for something. Chorus: Shiver my timbers Shiver my sails Dead men tell no tales Without warning, Dooku jumps and attacked his men. Later, Dooku left the game in satisfaction. That's right. 15 men went to that planet that day and only Dooku was the one who returned... Author's note Great setup so far. In the next chapter, you will see who plays who in the story. Also, more than one person is parodying Jim Hawkins. See the Treasure Planet in the title for more. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 14 2006, 06:12 PM Post #2 |
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Years has passed since that day. In an inn somewhere, a skeleton wearing a black robe is telling the story to a group of patrons. His name is Grim. As he continues, the patrons looked bored or not listening. "And then, I came and got that Count Dooku. Meaning he died before we could returned and digged up the treasure on that planet." explains Grim. "No one knows to this day who has Count Dooku's map." "Now isn't that a story worth the hearing?" The patrons said the same time as Grim. "It was great the first dozen times." mumbled a patron named Randy Marsh. "I'd drink to that." agrees Barney Grumble before he belched. "The question is, who has the map now, mon?" demanded Grim with a smirk. "I don't know. That Danny kid." said Barney looking around. A woman in a bright blue suit looks up from where he's working. Her name is Maddie Fenton, a worker at Chi-Chi's, the owner, inn. "Speaking of my son, where is Danny?" asked Maddie. Suddenly, the doors were flunged opened. As everyone turned, a boy was brought in by a police officer. The boy is fourteen-year olds with black hair and blue eyes, and he wore a white shirt (on which the rims of his sleeves were orangish-red, as was the collar of his shirt, and a horizontal oval shaped symbol on the front of his shirt), along with blue jeans, and red and whit etennis shoes. His name is Danny Fenton aka, unknown to his mother, the legendary halfa Danny Phantom. He is brought in by a yellow skinned fat man in police uniform called Police Chief Wiggum. "Excuse me, does this kid belong to anyone?" asked Wiggum as he held out Danny. "Danny!" cried Maddie surprised as she runs over to her son. "What was he doing?" "Oh, he was seen hover-boarding in a forbidden with a bunch of goons." "Danny, how many times do I have to tell you not to wrong with people like that?" Maddie said, scolding her son who cringes. "Do you want to get send to prison?" "The leader double-dare me, mom!" protested Danny. "I'd let the boy since that is his first offense, but his hoverboard will be confiscated. One more stunt like that and he's going to jail." Wiggum salutes Maddie as he left. "Have a good day, Mrs. Fenton." After Wiggum left, Danny sighs as he came in. A thirteen-year-old Asian girl joined him. She had freckles, brown eyes, long raven hair with a pink strand, and she wore a green t-shirt (in which the rims of her sleeves were red, and the collar of her shirt was red, and there was a symbol on the front that looked like a red dragonfly), along with a brown wristband (which had purple gems on it) on her right wrist, along with a brown belt with a yellow belt buckle, blue jeans, and brown shoes. She was the Te Xuan Ze and Danny's girlfriend, Juniper Lee, or June as she prefers to be called. "Danny, why can't you ever just say no and stay out of trouble?" asked June with a sigh. "Come on, June. I wanted to be tough for you." Danny protested again. "Danny, you're my boyfriend and I loved you but you got to stopped pulling stunts like this. How are we going to go on dates if you insist on getting grounding each time you get into trouble?" Danny didn't answer that. Grim spoke up as he points, "Who has the map now? Some bloodsucking no good mortal or maybe it's our very own, Sora?" The others laughed as three other workers were picking up bottles and empty plates. One of them is was a well-built fifteen-year-old human boy, and he had blondish spiky hair, blue eyes, and necklace. He was wearing black fingerless gloves, a black short-sleeved jacket with a hood with dark gray shoulder guards over what looked like a midnight blue shirt with red hoody-like pockets on the front of his shirt, along with a black belt, and big black baggy yet short pants, and big yellow and black shoes. The big pockets on his pants wer red. There were also two yellow insecting diagonal straps across his lower body. His name is Sora, the Keyblade holder and Danny and June's friend. The second figure is a a duck. He had blue eyes, a yellow bill, orange legs and feet, and white feathers. He wore a midnight blue shirt with a zipper going downt he middle, yellow wristbands, a small blue cape of some sort, and a blue hat with a few zippers on it. He is the kids' friend, Donald Duck. And the last figure was a six-foot-tall dog humanoid, and he had black fur, a tan muzzle, two buck teeth, and he wore a funny yellow hat, red goggles, a green turtle neck, a black vest, white gloves, yellow cargo pants, a black belt, and yellow shoes. This was none other than the kids and duck's friend, Goofy Goof. Sora laughed at Grim's comment. "If we have that map, we won't even be in here serving you, Grim Bones." "Hyuk, yeah! We will be sailing at the deep vastsa of space on a five year mission: to boldy go where no man or animal has gone before!" agreed Goofy. A girl giggled. He is a girl with long red hair, crowning her pretty head, matched her bright red lips. Her shirt was yellow and her shorts were green while her sandals were aqua green. Her warm and happy eyes were bright blue. She is Ariel, the workers' friend and Sora's girlfriend. "Have you been watching Star Trek again?" asked Ariel smiling. "Gawrsh. Guess I was." chuckled Goofy. "Nah! If I have it, I will traded it for a good meal for once." said Donald. He goes up to Grim's table and sees that he hasn't finished. "Hey are you going to eat this?" "Nah. You could take it, mom." said Grim. Then he looked sternly. "Beware the evil cyborg! He is the most fearsome of them." "Don't worry, we'd keep watch on him." said Danny. "Yeah, if he's delivering a pizza." laughed Donald. He continues laughing until Grim hits him with a mug. "He is nothing to laugh at, mom! Even Count Dooku gears him!" Grim yelled, getting everyone's attention now. "The moment he shows up, find me quickly and I'd dispatch him!~" "Sure. We'd do that, Grim." Sora said nodding. "Heck, I am not afraid of no evil cyborg." Juniper said smiling, getting into a fighting position. "One leg, two heads, couple of dozens, if anything weird..." Grim interrupts Goofy by grabbing his nose and glares. "Like I said, the cyborg is nothing to laughed at, mon! The evil cyborg brings forth...death! Which means more work for me!" Grim lets Goofy go as an old Asian woman comes in, bringing in stuff. She looks kinda tired and annoyed. She is Chi-Chi, the inn owner. "It's closing time, everyone! Pay your bills and leave." Chi-Chi called. She drops the stuff near a drunken cow. She glares at it. "Drunk again, are you?" The cow moos drunkeningly. Chi-Chi frowns and continues, "Look at this place! How did this place gets to be just a pigsty!" "Hey, watch it!" yelled a bunch of cartoon pigs nearby, offended by the remark. "Sorry, no offense." Chi-Chi said apologizing before going on to announce the closing time. "Here you go." Grim said leaving some money for the drinks. "I'd be in my room." Grim also has a room at the inn. "Thanks." Sora said as he collects the money. "So what was Grim doing?" Danny asked since he arrived too late. "He's telling us the story, Danny." June explains as she helps clean up. "That again? Come on, no one has seen the map. It can't be true." "But what if it is?" Ariel asked. "What if the map does existed?" "Then I'd take you with me to go find me." Sora said smiling. Ariel blushes. As the customes left, Chi-Chi called out to them. "Remember, come back tomorrow for the special which is roast suckling..." The pigs stopped and looked puzzled. Chi-Chi concluded. "...potatoes." The pigs nodded in satisfaction and left. With a sign, Chi-Chi closes the door. As Chi-Chi goes in, the group is still cleaning up. "What a day." said Chi-Chi with a sigh. "It's no problem so far, Chi-Chi." Maddie said with a smile. "You should talked! I have to deal with the roughhousing and anything else that happens here." grumbled Chi-Chi as she begins to walked upstairs. "Everyone, after you are done in here, go into the kitchen and clean up, I have left table scraps for dinner as usual." "And Danny, you will have to work since you didn't do any chores all day." Maddie said with a frown. "Mom!" Danny said with a groan. "Oh, yes. One more thing," Chi-Chi glares and yelled, "Last time you had all forgotten to turn the lantern off! If you forget again, there will be no table straps for a week!" The group groans as she continues walking upstairs. Later, Sora, Donald, and Goofy were standing on each other, with Donald on top trying to turned the lantern off. Danny, Ariel, and June were nearby watching. "Stop stepping on my ear!" yelped Sora. "Sorry!" protested Goofy. "Steady, steady!" said Donald, continuning to try to turn the lantern off. Danny sighs as he kicked a rock. "Man, I hate my life." "If it makes you feel better, I hate your life too." said June with a sigh. "So do we." said Sora, Goofy, and Ariel sadly. "If I have a life, I'd hate it." remarked Donald. "I think we should do the right thing and ran off like my dad did when he was trying to catch ghosts." said Danny with a sigh. "I mean, he sailed to Mobis when he was my age and became a first mate." "Run off and leave everyone?" asked Ariel in disbelief. "Everyone? Who's that? My mom thinks I'm the biggest jerk ever." said Danny with a sad sigh. "You're lucky. I'm an orphan." Sora agreed sadly. "But you got us, right?" Goofy asked hopefully. "Yeah. We're family." agreed Donald. He finally managed to turn the lantern off, then he, Goofy, and Sora fell to the ground. Danny, June, and Ariel came over. "Some family we are." June said with a frown. "Face it, Donald. We don't looked alike." "Okay, okay. So you and Sora are humans, Danny is a ghost child, Ariel is a mermaid, I am a duck and Goofy is a..." Donald said, trying to remembered what Goofy is. "A dog." Goofy answered. "Yeah, but we're still family." "Still, I wish our lives are great like in Grim's adventures." Danny said, looking ahead with a smile. "Going through the universe and searching for a bunch of treasure!" "Yeah, discovering new civilizations and weird stuff!" Sora said proudly as he takes a compass. "Like this compass that was passed to me by my parents before they died!" "Off to Zanzibar to fight the Zanibarbarians!" Ariel said with a smile. "Here we go again." said Donald rolling his eyes. Everyone else, however, is getting into it. "To the southwest is Toon Town!" said Goofy laughing with his trademark laugh. "To the southeast, multi-armed Psychopaths and their major wigs of death!" June exclaimed excited. "To the northwest, dirty dishes!" Chi-Chi yelled from inside the inn. Everyoned looked confused. "How does she do that?" Danny asked confused. Sora sighs as he and the others come in. "Come on, I'd washed." "I'd dry." Donald said. "I'd break." Goofy said. "Don't you always?" asked Ariel with a smile. As the group works inside, Sora begins singing. Sora: I look around here and I want to cry "You aren't the only one." said June with a sigh. Danny: I feel like the world is passing me by. "It is." pointed out Goofy. Sora: And I just can't help but wonder Am I doomed to wash and dry Danny: And is it a curse I'm under to do it till I die? "Oh, I hoped not! I haven't married you yet!" June said with a frown. "And I wanted to married Sora." Ariel said in agreement." Danny and Sora blushes. Then the two got excited and jumps on a table. Sora: When I could be an explorer "Sure ya could." said Goofy with a laugh. Danny: Sailing off to distant lands "Hey, be careful!" yelped Donald as he keeps Sora from falling off the table. Sora: Instead of spending every afternoon Danny: just getting dishpan hands The two got off with a sad sigh. Sora and Danny: My future looks like nowhere that I want to be Group: There's gotta be something better Something better Sora and Danny: There's gotta be something better than this for me "Now you're talking!" said June excited. Goofy: If it's weird and wild let's go and find it. (laughing) The crazier, the better is what I say "That's true." said Ariel agreeing. Donald: To tell the truth I really wouldn't mind it "Like what?" asked Sora. Donald: If we found someplace with ten square meals a day! The others laughed as they pretend to have a sword fight. Group: Let danger call my name Donald: (freaked out) If it does, I'm gonna hide! Sora and Danny: We'll put my courage to the test Goofy, June, and Ariel: And we'll be by your side. Donald: (singing in synch) They'll be by your side! Sora: There's gotta be something better than this Others: Something more than this Danny: I know that there's so much out there to see Others: To see Spra and Danny: And I know this life I'm living can't be my destiny Others: Destiny! All: There's gotta be something better Something better... Sora and Danny: There's gotta be something better than this for me "And me!" said Goofy happily. "Hey what about me?" asked Donald. All: There's something better than this for you and me! The song ended as they repeated me. Once it's done, Grim comes in very annoyed. "Enough singing already! I have enough of it at the Keeper of the Reaper trial!" yelled Grim. "Rum! Get me rum!" He sliced the bottles with his scythe making everyone run for cover. "I got the horror! Get me rum!" "Geez, you are a glutton for that stuff, are you?" asked June in annoyance. Danny sighs as he steadies Grim. "Okay, okay. But this is the last time." "Don't get him anymore rum!" yelled Chi-Chi from somewhere in the inn. "How does she do that?" asked Grim confused. "We have been asking that for years." Sora said with a shrug. Suddenly Grim did a 'ssh' and good reason. Some walking noises is heard from behind the entrance of the inn. Everyone hide or stay put as Ariel walks over to the door in precaution. Then she opens it... Author's note Uh oh. What is going to happened? Will it be a friendly welcome or a scary appearance by someone unknown? And is the story about Count Dooku's treasure real more? See more coming soon! Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 15 2006, 10:44 PM Post #3 |
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At the doorway is a figure in sunglasses coming in with a walking stick. He is a green alien with tentacles on his face wearing a muscle shirt and black pants. "Ha ha! Grim! It is me! Gorrath!" yelled the alien as he come in. He walks waving his stick blindly not facing anyone. "I know you're here, Grim..." Gorrath yells as he blindly fell over a chair. He got up annoyed. "You coward! Trip me, will ya?" "What is that?" Danny whispered from where he's hiding. "It looks like some sort of blind fiend." whispered Donald. Grim waves his hands, trying to keep them quiet, but Goofy misunderstood. "Actually I think they prefer 'visuall challenge fiend'." corrected Goofy. "I heard that! That's someone here!" yelled Gorath swiping at a direction. "Maybe over here!" He keeps on walking and then he grabs a moose's head. "Ah ha! Grim! I know that ugly mugs of yours anywhere!" "Excuse me, sir?" Ariel asked coming forward. "The bar's close." "Yeah, so if you don't mind..." June begins. Suddenly Gorrath turns and grabs Ariel and June, alarming them. "Ah ha! Two pretty girls, eh? Take me to Grim, my pets!" "Hey, who are you calling pets?" yelled June angrily. "This is the wrong place sir. There is no Grim here." lied Sora as he comes forward. Gorrath laughs. "I may be visually challenged but I can see that you are lying!" Grim gets his scythe out, getting ready to strike. But Gorrath hears him. He yells like a ninja as he spins towards Grim and knocked his scythe down. "Holy cow!" yelped Grim. "So, Grim, there you are. I know it's you. You think you could get away with it, eh? You keep it all for yourself and leave your shipmates with nothing." Gorrath said, a hint of anger is in his voice. He sighs as he continues. "We don't like that Grim, not all. Which is why we should give you...this!" With a laugh, Gorrath puts a note in Grim's hand. Still laughing, he managed to make his way towards the door and trips. He balances himself and continues walking, tripping over a cat and breaking stuff as he leaves. "Watch where you're going, you stupid cat!" yelled Gorrath as he disappears into the night. Once Gorrath's gone, Danny, Sora, and the others looked at Grim as he tembles in fear at the paper. On the paper is a black spot in the middle. "Oh no...the black spot!" cried Grim in fear. The skeleton screamed as he runs upstairs. Confused, the others joined him. "Hey, what's going on?" A few figures came out of their rooms. One of them, the one who spoke, is a three-foot tall mouse humanoid with big black ears, a black nose, a red shortsleeved zipped-up jacket with black short sleeves, white gloves, red cargo shorts, and big yellow and black shoes. His name was Mickey Mouse, Goofy and Donald's friend. The second figure was a sixteen-year-old human boy. He was a bit more muscular than Sora, and he had long silver hair, green eyes, and he wore a black zipped-up tank top underneath a white vest, blue jeans, and blue shoes. His name was Riku. The third figure was a fifteen year old girl with auburn hair that extended to her shoulders, blue eyes, and she was wearing a white casual t-shirt, a white and blue-plaid mini skirt, long blue socks, and black shoes. Her name was Kairi, Sora and Riku's best friend. The fourth and fifth figures are an excited looking boy with black hair sticking up, a red and black shirt with some sort of fist symbol, blue pants, and black shoes. The brother's name is Ray-Ray Lee. The dog is a pug dog named Monroe. The sixth and seventh figures is an African American glasses wearing geek and some sort of black haired Goth girl. Their names are Tucker Foley and Samantha "Sam" Manson, Danny's friends. "I thought I heard some noises down here." said Monroe puzzled. "We just got a visitor and Grim is all freaked out about it." explained Sora. The group, joined by the others, goes into Grim's room. They see the skeleton packing his things in a suitcase in a bug hurry. "What's going on? What is the black spot?" Danny asked. "It's a sign of pirate's death sentence!" yelled Grim. "They're coming to killed me tonight!" "But aren't you dead already?" Tucker asked with a frown. "Never mind that. Let's help him packed." June said with a sigh. As the others helped Grim packed, the skeleton continues, "It's my old chest that they want!" "Underwear." said Goofy, putting a pair of undies in the suitcase. "But I'd trick them! I'll shake out another rump and strangle them all again!" Everyone else looks confused. "Uh, what does that supposed to mean?" asked Sam puzzled. "It's mine! I'm going for that treasure myself! And no cyborg son of an alien is going to..." Before Grim could finished, he screams as he feels his chest. He fell onto the bed hard. "Grim Bones!" yelled Sora and Danny in horror. "He died? And this is supposed to be a kiddie's story!" cried out Donald in shock. "Huh?" asked Goofy confused. Suddenly Grim wakes up gasping and looks at Danny and Sora. "Sora, Danny! You two has always kind to me, mostly you Sora!" cried Grim. "Oh great. Even he doesn't like me." groaned Danny. Does anyone think he's a troublemaker? "Take the map!" "What map?" asked Sora alarmed. "The map to Count Dooku's treasure of course! Don't you get it? I'm his first mate, we all were! Gorrath and me! My own mates...they will get me for sure. And they will killed anyone who gets in their way!" Grim explained. "Just so I know, is it going to hurt?" asked Ray-Ray. Riku sighs in annoyance and said, "Yes, Ray-Ray. Getting taken now and maybe gutted alive by a bunch of evil pirates definitely hurt!" "Yeah, mon. Like the dog said. So quick, get the map out of my chest!" yelled out Grim. The others then begins searched Grim's luggage. "Gosh. It's got to be in here somewhere." said Mickey searching through the suitcase. "Hey, guys, look!" laughed Ray-Ray as he puts some Groucho Marx glasses on his way. "Ray-Ray!" said June with a frown. Ray-Ray laughs as he continues searching. Soon Danny pulls out a scroll from the map. The others stopped searching as he unrolls it. Danny gasped as he sees a planet with descriptions, markings, and stuff. "Whoa." Sora said, looking at the map. "It is the map of Treasure Planet." Danny said astounded. "Cool! We're going to be rich." said Ray-Ray with a smirk. "Or dead." gulped Donald nervously. "Beware...beware..." yelled Grim frantically. "The evil cyborg, right?" asked Ariel. "Yes, but also, beware of running with scissors or any sharp objects. It's all good and fun until someone loses an..." Suddenly Grim yells once more and stops moving. "Grim Bones!" cried Kairi checking him. Although he's a skeleton, Kairi sees sure enough that he has no pulse. "He's gone!" Donald gulped again and calmy said at first, "We're standing in a room," Then he yells out, "NEXT TO A DEAD GUY!" Everyone else realized this and begins to yelled in fear as they ran out. "What's going out here?" asked Maddie as she came out of the room. Before anyone could explained, the door slammed open. Everyone looked and sees a bunch of toons, video game characters, etc. in pirate clothing led by Gorrath storming into the inn. "Oh Grim! Trick or treat!" laughed Gorrath. "Don't try to hide, Grim! You know what we want!" yelled a fox named Swiper. As the evil pirates invaded, Goofy and Donald run down to the powder room while the others run in the direction of Chi-Chi's room while dodging the invading pirates. "Where are you Grim Bones? Where are you Grim?" yelled Swiper as he knocks the tables down looking for Grim. "You can't hide for long!! In Chi-Chi's room, the inn owner is waken by a loud bang on her door. "What is it? Can it wake until morning?" groaned Chi-Chi as she goes to the door. She opens it and to her surprise, Sora, Danny, June, Ariel, Riku, Kairi, Mickey, Sam, Tucker, Ray-Ray, Monroe, and Maddie runs into the room. Riku closes the door and locked it. "Oh my! What's going on?" gasped Chi-Chi. "We're being invaded!" explained Riku. "Wait, where's Donald and Goofy?" asked Tucker looking around. Back downstairs, Gorrath swipes at things at random trying to find Grim while the other pirates trashes the place. Gorrath opens up a clock and crashes in it, falling backwards onto the floor. In the powder room, Goofy and Donald quickly filled a gun with powder. "Good thing I remembered where this gun was." Goofy said filling the gun with powder from a bag. "As well as the powder." said Donald, then he sneezes. "Where does Chi-Chi keeps the bullets?" asked Goofy. He and Donald goes searching. Goofy, still holding the powder, is unaware that he is still pouring, right onto the floor. Swiper came out of Grim's room, making his report to Gorrath. "Grim is gone, so to speak, and the map isn't on him!" said Swiper. "So, those little girls must have it." said Gorrath with a growl, then he points with his stick. "After them!" The pirates yelled in agreement and begin searching rooms, trashing the inn some more. Back in the powder room, Donald found a bag labeled 'bullets'. "Goofy, I found the bullets, see?" said Donald holding up a bag of bullets. As Goofy came forward, Donald is unaware that he is holding the bag upside down. ANd when he did, all the bullets fell out. Donald sweat drop. "Oops." Upstairs, the group hears banging on the door. "Open up in there!" yelled a pirate. "We want the map and we'd killed anyone who gets in our way!" "Chi-Chi, is there a back stairs somewhere?" asked Ariel. "Sorry. I didn't think to put up any." Chi-Chi said with a groan. Danny sighs and said, "Look like I've have to do something I've never wanted to show mom." "What?" asked Maddie alarmed. "Going ghost!" Suddenly, in front of everyone, Danny entirely changed. His skin turned a bit more tan, his eyes were now green, and his hair was now as white as snow. His clothes now were a black jumpsuit, white boots, a white belt, and white gloves. There was even a "D" symbol on his chest. He became his alter-ego Danny Phantom. "Whoa!" Sora said surprised. "Cool!" Ray-Ray said happily. "Danny, you're the ghost boy?" asked Maddie shocked that her son has kept this from her until now. "Never mind that, madame! Danny, if you still have invisibile mode...get us out of here!" yelled Monroe. "Come on, men! Bust this door down!" ordered the same pirate from outside. "Okay, everyone, hold on to me!" Danny instructed. "Right." Mickey said as he and everyone else but Chi-Chi held onto Danny. Danny went invisible and he got everyone out. As Chi-Chi is the only one still in the room, the door slammed opened revealing some vicious angry. But Chi-Chi became even more vicious. She charges and kicks some of the pirates. "Get out of my inn, you tatooed miseries!" yelled Chi-Chi as he continues knocking a few pirates back. "Can't I get a good night sleep tonight? You come here, you!" Chi-Chi grabs a pirate and slaps him silly. In the powder room, Goofy looks on the floor for the bullets but it's no use. "Gosh! This gun is useless! You lost the bullets!" cried out Goofy. "Hey, you're the one losing the powder!" snapped Donald pointing out that the powder is still pouring of the bag with a candle he is holding. Suddenly the powder door slammed open and the pirates stormed. "The map! Tell us where it is or die!" demands Swiper angrily. Donald and Goofy screamed and run off, losing the powder bag and candle doing so. "Get them!" yelled Swiper as he and the pirates chases after them. The candle, meanwile, dropped on a trail of powder creating a trail of fire as if lighting a dynamite fuse. The pirates see this and screamed in terror and run for their lives, along with Donald and Goofy. The trail kept following as the good and evil guys switched sides as if in a cartoon. After a while or so... "Stop!" yelled Gorrath causing the pirates to stopped. The other pirates gasped for two reasons. 1 is that the inn workers are no longer with them. And 2, the trail of powder ends at the bag Goofy was holding. And that bag is what Swiper is standing over as the trail of fire came to an end. "Oh man." groaned Swiper as he snaps his finger. Soon the powder exploded, and so did the rest of the inn. Swiper was send flying and crashed into the roof. "Ouch!" Outside, the others dodged the explosions as they run out. "We're here. Where's Goofy and Donald?" asked Sora. "Geromino!" cried a familiar voice. The group watches as two figures exploded out of the inn and landed right in front of them. It is Goofy and Donald all blackened and charred. Goofy laughs while Donald hops around in pain. "Are you two okay?" asked Mickey. "Wow! What an exit! Right out a brick wall!" exclaimed Ray-Ray excited. "I am in just great pain!" yelled Donald trying to put out any fire on himself. Back inside the inn, the pirates run to escape as Gorrath walks around, unaware of what's going on especially with his cane on fire. "Hey, is something burning in here?" asked Gorrath as he walks around blindly. Back outside, Maddie is shocked. "Oh no. Our home is gone." said Maddie shocked. "What are we going to do now?" asked Sam groaning. "Well, we can't go home so..." Sora said smiling as he holds up the map. The others looked excited though Donald just frowns. "Oh no, forget it! I am not going on some dumb treasure hunt! I'm staying right here!" yelled Donald staying put. "Oh great idea, Donald." said Danny sarcastically. "Then you can see what burned vicious evil pirates looked like!" Donald thought about that and chuckled nervously, "On second thought, hey what are we waiting for?" "All right!" cheered Ariel happily. "Come on, let's go guys! Riku said in agreement. "Wait, how about Chi-Chi?" pointed out Kairi. "Yeah, she's still in there!" June said realizing this. Suddenly Chi-Chi crashed through a window knocking down a pirate. "I am okay, everyone! Don't worry about me! Just run for it, including you Maddie!" yelled Chi-Chi as she kicks the pirate in the guts. Everyone looked shock and yelled at the same time... "HOW DOES SHE DO THAT?" Everyone, not wanting to wasted anymore time, runs from the scene. Chi-Chi looks at the inn still burning in disgust. "Who is going to clean this up?" demands Chi-Chi. Author's note With the inn gone, the heroes begin an adventure that could lead them to treasure...or a confrontation with the evil cyborg Grim warned them about. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 16 2006, 08:50 PM Post #4 |
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The next morning, the inn group were in a back of hay carrying thing pulled by a man on a horse somewhere in a town all asleep. Soon they woke up from last night's madness. "Man, what a night." said Donald yawning. "You sure about this, Danny?" Maddie asked her son in concern. They barely survived being attacked by pirates. "I'm sure about it, mom." assured Danny. "Here it is!" said Sora pointing. He and the others got off the hay carrying thing and goes up a building Sora just pointed at. "'Koopa and Son, Master Ship Owner'." said June, reading the sign. "Yep, this is definitely the place." Sora goes up to the door and knocked on it. "Mickey, is that you?" Mickey turns and sees a three foot female black mouse approaching. She had on a pink bow, a pink dress, and pink high-heels along with the Divine Ross Keyblade on her shealth. Her name was Minnie Mouse, Mickey's girlfriend. "Minnie!" Mickey said happily as he goes over and hugged her. "Gosh, what are you doing here?" "Well, I heard that the inn got attacked and I was worried. I was in this area of town when I spotted you." explained Minnie. "What are you doing here?" "Same to get a ship from these people, Minnie." Goofy explained. "Now hold it! Do ye lads think we should believe that some idiot is going to give us a ship just because we show him Grim's map?" asked Monroe skeptically. "Hey, we need to try it, Monroe." Danny said. "Yeah, don't ruined it for us, fat guy." remarked Ray-Ray. "I am not fat!" yelled Monroe in annoyance. The door opened. A yellow creature with a purple witch's attire and a gold wand with a red jewel on it came out. Her name is Kammy the Magikoopa. "Yeah, what do you want?" asked Kammy. "Oh, we are here to speak to the ship owner, Mr. Bowser Koopa?" explained Sora. "We need a spaceship for a voyage." concluded Danny. Kammy frowns and said, "Sorry. That idiot Bowser is somewhere who knows where trying to kidnapped the princess again and trying to destroy those Marios. He said he will be back when Ash Ketchum begins the newest Pokemon master." "When will that be?" asked Ariel. "10 years from now." "Well, we try." said Tucker sadly as he and the group begins to leave. "Actually, now that I think it, his son Bowser Jr. is here." interrupted the Magikoopa. Sora smiles. "Great! We'd see him then!" Inside the office of the building, a young koopa with black beady eyes, a blue bandana around his neck, and black wristbands is looking at the map carefully with a magnifying glass. He is Bowser's son, Bowser Jr. "Well, after searching this thing carefully, it turns out that this thing is indeed a treasure map." said Bowser Jr. in conclusion proudly. "You think so?" asked Danny with a smile. "Sure! Eddie told me so!" Everyone looks confused. Then Bowser Jr. points to his pointing finger. "Eddie is the guy who lives in my finger! He is so smart and fun! He even was Ms. America 4 times!" Bowser Jr. seems to be listening to his finger then said, "Thank you twice!" "I smell a bozo..." Donald said whistling to the others. "I know." said Sam with a frown. Suddenly a door explodes and a bear came flying in and got struck into a wall. He is a blue bear in a green vest and has a rainy symbol on his tummy. His name is Grumpy Bear. A purple furred raccoon in a labcoat came in. His name is Bright Heart Racoon. "Good work, Grumpy!" said Bright Heart with a smile. "Now we know that is definitely too much gunpowder." "Ohhh, how did I talked myself into these things?" asked Grumpy with a groan. Bright Heart sees that they got visitors and chuckled, "Grumpy, quit fooling around! We have company!" Grumpy got himself out of the wall as Bowser Jr. speaks, "Ah, good timing! Everyone, this is Bright Heart Racoon and his assistant Grumpy Bear. They do research stuff and development for my dad." "Hello, everyone." Bright Heart said waving. "Hi." Grumpy said in his usual way. "We were to meet with your dad, Bowser Jr." Ash said with a frown. "Yeah, we need a spaceship for a galactic voyage." agreed Danny. "Galaxy? What is a Galaxy? Do you know what that is, Eddie?" asked Bowser Jr. confused as he speaks to 'Eddie'. June sighs in annoyance as she said, "You know the galaxy? That big, black, space thing?" Bowser Jr. finally got it and laughed, "Oh! The big, black, space thing! Yeah! I knew that!" Bright Heart checks the map and said, "I know what's going on. You're planning to sail to this planet and dig up the treasure." "That was the plan." Goofy explained. "But we better keep quiet about it. There are pirates looking for this map." Mickey explained in precaution. "And they want to kill us for it!" Ray-Ray said excited. "Is that cool or what?" "Not really." Minnie said with a frown. "Pirates, eh? That settles it!" Bowser Jr. said with a smile. "We'll use one of my dad's spaceships and I will finance the voyage for the treasure myself!" "You'd do that?" said Kairi happily. "Sure! What are rich, half-wit sons for?" "I can think of various good reasons." joked Riku. The next day, on the day of the beginning of the voyage, the others waits near the docks as Maddie hugged her son goodbye. It was one of those touching moments. "Goodbye, Danny! I hope you have a great journey!" Maddie said crying. "I'd do fine, mom. And when I get back, I'd changed, you'd see. I'd keep an eye on Sora and the others, I promised." promised Danny. "Come on, Danny! Let's go! Riku said impatiently. After kissing his mom goodbye, Danny rejoined their friends as they walked on ahead. They reunited with Bright Heart and Grumpy, prepared and dressed for the voyage, as they continue. "Well, we're at the docks," announced Goofy. "We're at the docks? No wonder I'm sea-sick." said Tucker with a groan. "Even when we're not at sea, you're sea-sick." joked Sam. "Hey everyone!" said Bowser Jr. as he approaches them. "Good morning, Bowser Jr." welcomed June. "There she is...the Spaceball 2!" Bowser Jr. said pointing to the ship. The group looks astounded. The ship they will be using is the biggest, most longest spaceship ever. "We're using that ship? I thought it was destroyed when they try to take the air from planet Druidia!" said Minnie in amazement. "Oh, we made that ship and are now making a backup." explained Bowser Jr. "Let's go, everyone!" said Mickey excited. As everyone got on, two old men speak on front of the ship. "'Take a cruise,' you said. 'See the world,' you said." said an old man named Grandpa Boris sarcastically. "Oh leave me alone!" said Grandpa Lou with a groan. "Now here we are struck on the front of this stupid spaceship!" "Well, look at the bright side." said Grandpa Lou with a smirk. "We could be stuck in the audience." The old men laughed. On the ship, Bowser Jr. smiles as he speaks to 'Eddie'. "Well, Eddie, the ship is provisioned, the crew is all here, and the captain should be here in an hour. You have been very busy." said Bowser Jr. as he walks off. "Geez, what a loon." Monroe said with a grown. "Hey, there goes Danny and Sora." Goofy said pointing to the mentioned two as they walked up to the helm of the ship. They go there and joined there. "Wow! It's the boat steering thing." said Ray-Ray with a smile. June laughs as she hugs her boyfriend Danny. "It's called the helm, Ray-Ray." "Oh, I knew that." Riku smirks, then said to Sora, "How does it feel, Captains Sora and Danny?" Sora laughed as he said. "It feels great!" "It feels like we're finally going to have an adventure!" Danny agreed. "Yeah." agreed Donald, then he said, "I'm starving. Where's the kitchen?" Donald heads out to find the kitchen. The others groaned and followed him. In the kitchen below, Sora, Danny, and company enters. The room itself was very foggy but they can tell that a figure is in there because of the singing. Figure: Drink up me 'earties, yo ho. we kidnap and ravage and don't give a hoot Drink up me 'earties, yo ho. Yo ho yo ho, a pirate's life for me. (Author's note: The song came from the Pirates of the Carribean ride) They see that the figure who was singing is nearby peeling potatoes covered in steam. As they approached, their steps alerted him to their presence and he turns. Since it is foggy, only his eyes were seen. "What is this? Stowaways!" yelled the figure taking out a lightsaber and turning it on. Everyone gasped as they backed way. "You know what we do to stowaways on this ship? He slashed and fried them!" "No! I am too young to be fried!" cried Tucker in fear. "Oh my!" gasped Minnie. The figure growled, then he smirked and laughs. "Huh? First he tries to killed us now he's laughing?" asked Ariel puzzled. "Sorry. I love to do that to the newcomers when they come down here. Let me guess, you must be the new cabin boys and girl." said the figure smiling. "Oh yeah, that's us." Sora chuckling, calming down. "Are you hungry?" "Sure, haven't eaten in a while." Donald said a bit hungry. "Well, in my gallery, you always welcome ot help yourselves!" "Yes!" laughed Donald happily as he runs off. He sees a turkey and drools. "Oh thank you!" "Hey, leave some for me!" yelled Ray-Ray as he runs forward. "Move over!" yelled Monroe. As Donald, Ray-Ray, and Monroe begins stuffing themselves, the figure turns to the others. "What about the rest of you? Here!" The figure, somehow, threw a bunch of apples to the others. "Thanks!" said Goofy laughing as he takes a bite out of his name. "My name is Mickey Mouse, the others are Minnie, Goofy, Riku, Kairi, Tucker, Sam, and the three eating that turkey over there are Donald, Ray-Ray, and Monroe." Mickey said, introducing everyone but Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel. "Yo!" said Donald, mouth full. The figure turns and smiles at the four who has yet to be introduced. "And you two must be the Keyblade holder Sora and the known troublemaker Danny." "Yeah, that's us." chuckled Danny nervously. "And these two fine ladies must be your girlfriends Juniper Lee and King Triton's daughter Ariel. My, these are beautiful in person." The girls blushed as June said. "Thanks sir." The figure laughed as he said, "Please! You don't need to called me 'sir' just because I am the ship's cook! You may called me...General Grievous. At your service." "But we're only cabin boys and girls, Grievous." pointed out Minnie. General Grievous looks sternly and said, "General Grievous, to his friends. And trust me, any friend you can trust is worth his weight in gold. There are many dark-hearted fiends in space." "You mean pirates?" asked Sora in concern. "Pirates! Ha, that's rich!" A boa constrictor appeared on Grievous's shoulder and speaks English while some hisses were added. "What an imagination! Gimme a mouse!" "Everyone, this is my boa constrictor Nagini. Raise him since he was a little snake!" Grievous said proudly. "The best snake any man could asked for!" "Pieces of eight, pieces of eight!" Goofy looked confused. "Gawrsh! Don't pirates have talking parrots as parrots?" Grievous scoffed as he said, "What movie were you watching?" Then Grievous said to Nagini. "Nagini, go and looked for some stowaways!" "Yes, sir." said Nagini. Then he slivered off. Grievous turned to the others and said, "Now then, time for me to give you all a cook's tour of this ship." Ray-Ray, Monroe, and Donald groans. They just finished off the turkey and they are now stuffed. "If you are going to be the cook on this big ship, I am going to need bigger pants." said Ray-Ray groaning. Grievous laughed as he came out of the steam. Everyone gasped. General Grievous is mostly a robot with flesh organs inside him, and wore not only lightsabers, but a huge cape to cover most of his body. He looks puzzled at the group gaping at him. "What's wrong?" Grievous asked. "General...you're a...a..." June begins to say while trembling. Grievous realized what June's trying to say as he looks at himself. "Oh, my whole body? Lost my real one due to an accident, My body was mostly replaced with robot parts. To tell you the truth, there are many more people who lost parts of themselves and worst in the service of the Galactic Federation." Grievous chuckles he reaches up to his mask. "Why, look what a cannibal took from me, in exchange for my own life!" Grievous opens his mask, freaking everyone with his looks. "Ahhh!" screamed June and Ariel alarmed. "Hey, stop scaring our girlfriends!" yelled Sora and Danny in annoyed. Grievous closes his mask and smirked somehow. "Oh you are a fine pair of lads and lassies, that you are." Grievous chuckled in amusement. "Right. Just don't do that again." Minnie said with a groan. "On hands on deck!" yelled a voice from above. "Come on, someone's calling us." Tucker announced. As everyone heads out of the kitchen, Grievous glared. "Oh yes, bright as lights, the lot of you." said Grievous. Author's note The heroes got their new ship and met new friends, but can General Grievous be trusted? And who is the captain of Spaceball 2? BTW, Spaceball 2 doesn't existed. I made it up as a 'sequel' to the original Spaceball 1 that was in my favorite Mel Brooks film Spaceballs. Read and review! Bye now! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 17 2006, 09:08 PM Post #5 |
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As the group heads up to the deck, they see the crew members preparing the Spaceball 2for the voyage. "All hands on deck!" yelled a voyage. The group sees five figures shouting out orders. The first one was a bald british boy named Nigel aka Numbah 1. The second was a fat aviator pilot named Hoagie aka Numbah 2. The third one was a Japanese girl named Kuki aka Numbah 3. The fourth one was a blonde Australian named Numbah 4. And the last one was an African girl named Numbah 5. "Hurry up, you lazy grow-ups! The captain will be here any moment now!" yelled Numbuh 4. "Come on, Numbuh 4! Don't be mean to them!" Numbuh 3 insisted. "Hey, this is one of the chances I get to bossed grown-ups around! Don't ruined it for me, Kuki!" "Who are those kids?" asked Sora. "Those are the Kids Next Door, Sector V! They are the 2nd-6th commands of this ship! Very adventurous kids." explains Bowser Jr. A trumpet is heard and Numbuh 2 gasps. "The captain's coming!" On the streets outside the spaceship, a small pod is racing through the streets, with a man blowing a trumpet to call for the people to run out of the way. On the street, Numbuh 1 gives out orders. "Make way! Any one in the way will suffer the captain's wrath!" yelled out Numbuh 1. "Gosh, is this captain bad-tempered?" asked Goofy puzzled. "Ha! More than that! That man is a waging volcano, tormented by inner demons the likes of which mere mortals cannot fathom!" explained Numbuh 5. "He got demons? Cool!" exclaimed Ray-Ray excited. "Demons are not cool, Ray-Ray." June pointed out. As the pod races on, the Griffins were almost run over as they got out of the way. "Maniac!" yelled Peter Griffin, shaking his fist at the rushing pod. Soon the pod stops outside the spaceship's entrance. As everyone watched, the pod door opens up and a spiky, white-haired muscular man came out and gave a frown. He wore a yellow jacket over a white t-shirt, along with black pants and black boots. He was Scar. Sora, Danny, and his group gulped fearing that this man may be their captain. But to their surprise, Scar moves aside to let someone out. A young purple-haired kid came out. "Hey, everyone!" said Tommy waving hello. Sora, Danny, and their friends relaxed though they looked confused at the same time. "That's our captain, the raging captain? He's only a kid like us!" Danny said confused and disbelief. "Hey, maybe he get really hopping mad." laughed Tucker. The Kids Next Door gave Tucker a glare but then salutes the captain as he came aboard. "Welcome aboard, Captain Tommy Pickles!" Numbuh 1 said saluting. "Greeting, Numbuh 1." Danny said nodding as he puts a hand on the side rails. Then he walks on. Numbuh 5 checks the side rails and notices that there's dust on it. "Whoa, there's dust here." Numbuh 5 observed. "I knew it! He's furious!" yelled Numbuh 1 angrily. He then turned to a man in a tall suit of armor nearby. "You there!" "Who me?" asked the man innocently. "You are supposed to make sure you dusted this place top to bottom! 30 slashes from my licorine whip, then you walked the plank!" "He didn't say that, Nigel." Numbuh 2 pointed out. "That's right. I am not angry at anything." Tommy said, overhearing everything. Numbuh 1 just frowns. Tommy turns and sees Danny, Sora, and company. "Well, you must be the new cabin boys and girls, right?" Tommy asked them. "Yes sir." said the group nodding. "Whhich one of you is Sora and which one of you is Danny Fenton?" asked Tommy looking around. "I am Sora sure, and this is Danny Fenton." Sora said, nodding to the halfa friend. Tommy smiles. "My parents knew your parents, Sora, and my dad knew your dad, Danny. They were great people, and they should be proud of where you two are now." "Thanks!" Sora said with smile. "I guess." Danny said mumbling sadly. As Tommy walks off, Grievous arrives and smiles. "Well, this is going to end up tyo be a pleasant everyone, yes sir." Grievous explained. "Yes, sir. Yes, indeed." Mickey suggested nervously. As Grievous left, Monroe spoke up. "Uh, evil cyborg, you guys. Remember, cyborg." "Remember what Grim said." Sam added. "Oh, come on, you guys. Grievous maybe a general but he's only a cook." Sora said, not worried. "Yeah, what harm could he do?" agreed Danny. "I don't know." Kairi said with a frown. Riku looks around and said, "Hey, did anyone see Ray-Ray around?" The others turned and to their surprise, they see the young boy has set up a booth and is selling tickets near the ship's entrance to families, tourists, etc. Right now, he just sold a whole bunch of tickets to Lilo, Stitch, and their ohana. "Thank you for travelling 'Ray-Ray's Spaceball Tours!' We put the space in Spaceball Tours!" called out Ray-Ray. "Thanks." Lilo said, getting her ticket. "Come on, little girl and all my evil experiments. We must be getting on board." Jumba said, rushing everyone onto the ship. As they left, Ray-Ray called out, "Next!" "Ray-Ray, what are you doing?" asked June in annoyance as she and the others arrived. "What? Oh, this? Well in case the treasure map ended up being a dud, this trip isn't a total loss, finanically speaking." chuckled Ray-Ray in amusement. Later, Tommy feels the wind and smiles. "The mass is us with today. Everyone, this voyage has begun!" called out Tommy. "This voyage has begun!" Numbuh 3 called out very happily. "Raise the doors!" Numbuh 4 called out. As soon as all the tourists has pay, they all went inside as the doors were slammed shut. Everyone held on as the ship begins to take off into space. Once it is safe, everyone but the tourists went to work. The tourists just looked around, excited. The Kids Next Door keeps shouting out orders. "Keep this ship clean! Anyone caught messing around will be hit by bubblegum bombs on sight!" yelled Numbuh 1. "I didn't say that either, Numbuh 1." Tommy said hearing this and frowns. Numbuh 1 just grumbled as Tommy said, "Set this ship in motion." "Everyone, set this ship into motion!" Numbuh 5 called out. "Has anyone seen my camera?" Pleakley said looking around for his camera while crossdressing as usual. "Here it is, Pleakley." Experiment 625 AKA Reuben said holding up Pleakley's camera. Outside the ship, many civilians, including Maddie, were waving everyone on the spaceship goodbye. "Goodbye, Danny! I'd missed you even if you were that ghost boy! Come home safely!" waved Maddie happily. Fortunately, no one heard that 'ghost boy' comment. As the ship leaves the planet and heads off into adventure. Inside the ship, the crew were hard at work as they sing. Crew: When the course is laid and the anchor's weighed A sailor's blood begins racing With our hearts unbound and our flag unfurled Anti-Cosmo: We're underway and off to see the universal worlds Crew: Underway and off to see the universal worlds Tommy was singing along but stopped when he got a disapproving look from Numbuh 1. Numbuhs 2-5 just sang along though. Crew: Heave ho, we'll go Anywhere the wind is blowing Kronk: Manly men are we Crew: Sailing for adventure in the galaxy The Kids Next Door give out instructions to Grievous who is keeping the sails from getting loose. "Safely with ship, General Grievous." instructed Numbuh 1. "And don't get sloppy because they are singing." added Numbuh 4. "Aye aye, sir!" saluted Grievous. Crew: Danger walks on deck We say what the heck We laugh at the perils we're facing Goofy: Every storm we ride is its own reward Donald: (concerned) And people die by fallin' overboard Crew: People die by falling overboard Heigh ho, we'll go Anywhere the wind is blowing Hoist the sails and sing Bowser Jr.: Sailing for adventure on the big, black, space thing. Everyone looked at him confused. Bowser Jr. noticed and said, "What?" Nearby, Nagini, and three mean wizard bullies name Draco Malfoy, Crabbe, and Goyle are plotting as they sing. Nagini: I love to see 'em cry when they walk the plank Crabbe and Goyle: We prefer to cut a throat Draco Mafloy: I love to hang 'em high and watch their little feet Try to walk in the air while their faces turn blue During the song, the Kids Next Door were overhearing and were glaring at them. Crabbe and Goyle saw them and nods to Draco and Nagini, who quickly looked innocent. "Just kidding!" chuckled Crabbe and Goyle nervously. Four: It's a good life on a big huge boat Crew: There are distant lands with burning sands That call across the oceans Tourists: There are bingo games every fun-filled day Angel (Experiment 624): And margaritas at the midnight buffet Crew: Margaritas at the midnight buffet Sora, Danny, and their friends laughed as the crew continued singing and the tourists just danced. Crew: Heigh ho, we'll go Anywhere the wind is blowing Grandpa Lou and Grandpa Boris: Should have took a train Crew: Sailing for adventure on the bounding main Soon Sora, Danny, and Grievous begins to sing as well. Sora: The salty breezes whisper Who knows what lies ahead Danny: I just know I was born to lead The life my father led Grievous: The stars will be our compass Wherever we may roam And our mates will always be Just like a family And though we may put into port The galaxy is always home "Very good singing voice, Eddie! Youa re improving!" Bowser Jr. told 'Eddie' proudly. He listens and smiles. "You're welcome! Crew: We'll chase our dreams standing on our own Over the horizon to the great unknown Heigh ho, we'll go Anywhere the wind is blowing Bold and brave and free Sailing for adventure "It's nauseating!" Ray-Ray exclaimed excited. Crew: Sailing for adventure "So exhilarating!" Mickey and Minnie said excited. Crew: Sailing for adventure "We're all celebrating!" cheered the tourists as they threw stuff around, some of it getting on Tommy who looks amused. Crew: In the galaxy! Everyone laughed as they finished singing. Spaceball 2 sails off into galaxies unknown. Author's note So Spaceball 2 is under way and Tommy is introcuced. But what else is waiting for our heroes on their adventure? Find out in the new chapter! Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 18 2006, 07:46 PM Post #6 |
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Inside the ship, Numbuh 3 blows the whistle too loudly near Numbuh 4. "Geez, why do you blow that stupid Rainbow Monkey whistle?" demands Numbuh 4 annoyed. "Because you're cute, silly." giggled Numbuh 3. "That isn't a reason! I think." Numbuh 1 ignores Numbuh 4's remark as he takes out a list, "Okay, time for roll call everyone. When I say a name, please confirm that you're here." Numbuh 1 reads the first name on the list. "General Grievous?" "Aye, aye, sir!" said Grievous saluting. "Edward Elric?" "Aye!" called out a short guy with a prosthetic automail arm and leg. "Gawrsh! That guy is short!" commented Goofy. "Who are you calling short, freak?" yelled Edward Elric angrily. "Calm down." Numbuh 1 said, then he goes back to the list. "Gizmo? "Right here, barfbag." remarked a strange looking kid that looks like a technology bad kid. "Mr. Crocker?" "Here!" laughed a very insane teacher-like guy with black thinned hair, glasses, and bad looking teeth. "Flotsam and Jetsam?" "Aye." hissed two eels that could stand for some reason. "Nagini?" "Here!" hissed Nagini. "Draco Malfoy?" "Aye." called out Draco Malfoy. "Alphonse Elric?" "Aye." said the big suit of armor Numbuh 1 was threatening to walk to plank early. "Whoa. So you're Alphonse Elric." said Numbuh 2 impressed. "You got the same as that short guy. Relative?" "My brother." explained Alphonse. "I heard that! Stop calling me short!" protested Edward some more. Numbuh 1 clears his throat and moved on. "Really Really Big Man?" Numbuh 1 resumed the roll call. "Aye aye!" responded a big superhero guy (Author's note: This character is from Rocko's Modern Life). "Really Really Old Man?" "Aye aye." muffled a very old version of Really Really Big Man barely. Kronk has to move him. "Really Really Dead Man?" Kronk picks up a dead version of Really Really Big Man and did his voice. "Aye!" Tommy looks shocked and got a bit uneasy. "Cool!" said Ray-Ray with a smile. "Yet, creepy." added Monroe. "Crabbe and Goyle?" resumed Numbuh 1. "Huh?" asked Crabbe and Goyle confused. "Headless Horseman?" A pause, then no respond. Numbuh 1 looks over the crew. "Headless Horseman?" Numbuh 1, Tommy, and hthe others looked around and soon they see a headless knight on his black demon horse saluting. Tommy looks uneasy as Numbuh 1 resumed. "Big-Fat-Ugly-Bug-Face-Baby-Eating BG?" called out Numbuh 1. Tommy looks shocked. Then a beautiful woman called out. To the other's surprise, she spoke in a man's voice. "Aye!" called out the said pirate. Numbuh 1-5 and Tommy's mouths opened in shocked. Numbuh 1 recovered and resumed the roll call. "Fawful?" called Numbuh 1. AS green skinned creature named Fawful said, "Aye, aye!" Tommy nodded, seemingly calmly, then spoke to Sora, Danny, the KND, and the others. "Uh, everyone? Can I see you in my cabin...right now?" The others looked at each other, then shrugs and went into Tommy's cabin. As soon as they went into Tommy's cabin, the captain discusses the new crew. "Who hired these weirdos?" yelled Tommy in disbelief. "This is undoubtedly the worst bunch of cut throats, villains, and scoundrels I ever seen, so who hired them?" "Wasn't me! I am not old enough to handle recruits!" protested Ray-Ray, "You aren't old enough to handled tours, kid." added Donald with a scoff. "But who else hired those goons?" asked Numbuh 5. Everyone else looked at each other then they all pointed to Bowser Jr. who then points to 'Eddie'. "Your finger hired the crew?" asked Tommy still in disbelief. "Don't be stupid! The man who lives inside my finger, Eddie. That's who hired the crew." Bowser Jr. then listens to 'Eddie' again then added, "Ahhh. And he relied heavily on the advice of our great cook and general, General Grievous." "A cyborg chef? And a guy who lives in a koopa's finger?" asked Sam in disbelief. "Bingo!" Tommy groans, then he said, "Man, I am so worry about this voyage." "Look, we'd make sure that they all stay in line. That way, there won't be a chance of any mutiny or anything like that." Goofy assured everything. "I quite doubt that, Goofy." Minnie said in concern. Tommy then looks at Sora and Danny seriously, "Now Sora, Danny, I know Grim gave you the map for safe keeping but I hoped you'll give it to me for safekeeping." "Don't worry, we'd keep it safe." Danny said nodding to the map hidden in his pocket. "Like my compass." added Sora. "Map, what map?" Everyone in the room jumped as Lilo and Stitch appeared. "What the...?" yelped Donald alarmed. "Hello." Stitch said waving hello. "How long have you two been down there?" asked Riku concerned. "Long enough to hear something about a map. Is this a treasure hunt?" asked Lilo eagerly. "Yes, unfortunately." Kairi said. "Who are you?" Ariel asked. "My name is Lilo and this is my friend Stitch." Lilo answered. "Lilo, you can't tell anyone that we have a map to Count Dooku's treasure." Sora said sternly. "Yeah, if anyone else finds out, anyone who could be a bloodthirsty greedy pirate, we will all be in danger." June said. "Don't worry. We won't say a word." Lilo said with a promise. "I won't say thing." agreed Stitch. Then the door to the room opened. Grievous came in with a bunch of wine. "Sorry to interupt this meeting, everyone, but I have come with a treat for all of you." said Grievous as he gave some glasses to the others, then poured some wine in them. "This is my special brand of alcohol, laid down by the brothers of Springfield, U.S.A. We shall make a toast to this great voyage!" "I'm sorry, General, but drinking is not allowed on this voyage." interrupted Tommy sternly. "Most of us in here are underage and the parents on this trip will get furious if we let minors drink." "Well, rules are rules." said Bowser Jr. tossing his wine out the nearby window. "But sure, it's a tradition for the officers to toast to the success of this voyage!" protested Grievous. "That is true." agreed Bowser Jr. pouring some more wine into his glass. "We got to set a sample for this questionable crew, Grievous. There will be no alcohol or drinking during this trip." Tommy said in disagreement. "Oh, right." agreed Bowser Jr. tossing the wine out the window again. Grievous smirked and said, "Oh but sir, I can vouch for the crew. You could sail to heaven and back with these people." "Right." agreed Bowser Jr. pouring once more. "I disagreed on that." Kairi protested. "I have to agreed with Kairi and disagreed with you." Tommy added. Bowser Jr. shrugs and tosses the wine out the window again. Someone screamed outside and the group turned to see some angry teenagers and a dog outside looking in. They looked like they were in the middle of playing a game. "Hey, man! Watch it with that stuff! It's peeling the paint off the shuffleboard court!" yelled a teenager named Shaggy. "Yeah! Rufflewoard course." agreed Scooby-Doo. "Sorry." said Bowser Jr. sheepishly. "Let's go, gang." mumbled Fred Rogers as he and the others leave. "That show him." said Daphne Blake. As the tourists left, everyone stared at Ray-Ray. "What?" asked Ray-Ray innocently. "Can't we get games for this ship?" "Anyway, Grievous, that's that. This conversion is over." Tommy told Grievous sternly. The cook nodded in understanding as he takes his wine out. "I understand sir. Not to worry. I will tend to my duty and see to it that every alcohol is thrown overboard at once." said Grievous as he gets ready to leave. Tommy turns to Sora and Danny and said, "You two can leave if you want to, Sora." With a smile, Sora and Danny left. June and Ariel goes to joined their boyfriends. Before the others can joined them, the door closes in front of them. Tucker scoffs as he said, "Oh fine! Guess he doesn't want to hang together with a bunch of humans, a duck, dogs, a mouse, a koopa, a raccoon, a bear, and a..." Tucker looks at Stitch, not sure what he is. "Alien lifeform?" Lilo said. "Your dog is an alien?" asked Goofy surprised. "I'd explained later." Later that night, as the spaceship continued its voyage, there is much excitement on the dance floor as some of the tourists danced. The Peanuts gang, Charlie Brown and Lucy on guitars, Linus on the saxophone, Schroeder on the electric piano, and Snoopy on the drums, performed for the tourists as they danced. Someone named Peter Parker is taking pictures. "Say cheese." said Peter holding his camera up. "Cheese!" said a couple named Ash and Ami as they posed for a picture. After the picture is taken, the couple left. Peter talks to a worker named Lazlo. "Cute couple! On the dance floor, Stitch dances with Angel, doing great dancing with her. The two smiled and danced some more. Up in the huge air dome, Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel hanged out together. "Oh, Danny. Isn't this romantic?" sighed June hugging Danny. "Is this what you want in a date, June?" asked Danny with a smile. June nodded. She and Danny looked at each other and kissed each other on the lips. "Man, what a good voyage so far, heh?" Sora asked his girl. "Yes." said Ariel with a smile as she leaned forward and kissed Sora on the lips. Sora kissed back. "My, my. What a lovely moment." The couples stopped kissing as Grievous comes up. "I apologized if I startled you. Thought I may seen something to cheered me up after what happened earlier." "Oh yeah. Sorry your presentation didn't work out." said Sora. Grievous smiled (if that's possible), pats Sora and Danny on the back, and said, "It's all right. Tommy and the Kids Next Door sail by rules and law. That's what being a captain is all about." Grievous then looked at the stars above and all around them. "I, on the other hand, sail by the stars." "Stars?" asked June puzzled. "Sora, see if you could find north there for me among the stars." Grievous said to Sora. Sora smiled and takes his compass out. "Oh that's easy." Grievous suddenly smirks the compass and holds it. "But what if you don't have a compass?" "Hey, give that back, Grievous! It was my parents who passed it down to me!" cried Sora trying to reach for his compass back. "Give it back! It's the only thing that reminds him of them before they died!" Ariel protested. Grievous chuckled and gives the compass back. "Sorry. I was only joking." Grievous told the four. He paused, then said, "Tell me, did anyone have a parent who left them?" "That's me, Grievous." Danny sighed sadly. "My dad left me when I was seven years old. Haven't been the change after that which partly explains my troublemaking attitude." Grievous looked sadly (so to speak), then looked at the sky. "My dad left me to space when I was eight. First mate he was." said Grievous. Danny looks shocked. "My dad was a first mate too." Grievous pauses to think about this and chuckled. "Really? By the powers of anything possibile, what a coincidence!" Grievous laughs then points to a star at the north. "Now pay attention. That is Polaris, the north star. Even near the No-L 9, that's north." "North." Ariel said understanding. "We must be heading southwest then." said Sora in thought. "You are very bright, young man." Grievous said. "Thanks." Grievous pauses as if in ponder, then he said, "Though I couldn't helped by wonder. Why are we sailing southwest?" Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel didn't answered as Grievous continued, "You know, the scuttlebutt among this crew is that we're sailing for buried treasure," Danny gulps as he held the map tightly inside his shirt, "And someone on board has got a map." Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel did not answered as Grievous stared. The cyborg cook just shrugged as he said. "Of course, it isn't my business after all. I am only just a cook. Matters, such as this, are left to the captain and the Kids Next Door. They run the ship, not me." "Oh please," chuckled June in amusement. "You could run as captain on this ship." "Yeah, you got experience." agreed Danny." Grievous said mysteriously, "Maybe someday you four, someday, maybe I will." The five paused, then laughed together. Down on the dance floor, the Peanuts gang finished their song. They chuckled and smiled. Author's note Does Grievous expected something? Can Lilo and Stitch be trusted with the map's secret? And what is a scuttlebutt anyway? Find out more in the next chapter coming soon. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 19 2006, 05:43 PM Post #7 |
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In his chamber, Tommy didn't intend the dance or any other activities. He is far too busy working or other stuff. One of those stuff right now is him looking at a picture of someone, someone he knew long ago. Someone he had let down. 'Oh, Tommy. My love for you is alot deeper than the deep...blackish...galaxy.' said a familiar voice in Tommy's head. Tommy sighs and shred a tear. He has loved her and he had left her. He hasn't seen her since that day and expects that he will never see her again. As Spaceball 2 continues on its big journey, the crew is hard at work. Tucker, Sam, Goofy, and Donald were working hard. They hear a noise and see three go-karts speeding by. Danny and June were in one, Sora and Ariel with in the second, and Grievous is in the third one, having fun with the kids. "Hey, Sora! Hey Danny!" called out Sam. "Looking good, guys!" called Donald. Of course, Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel didn't seem to hear them as they continued racing with the cyborg general. "Hey Grievie!" called out Goofy. Suddenly Grievous stops and fires a blast at Goofy, missing and making the goof yelped. "Never called me Grievie!" yelled Grievous, then he speeds off. "Gosh, sorry." said Goofy sheepishly. Tucker scoffed and said sarcastically as he glares at his departing friends, "Well at least four of us are having fun." "Aw, come on, Tucker. It's not all bad." Goofy said smiling. "Fawful told me later that he'd throw a line out the back and let me drag along the bottom." "That's keel-hauling, Goofy." Sam pointed out with a frown. "What's that?" Goofy asked puzzled. Then he noticed a concerned look on Donald's face and begin to talked to him before Sam could explain, "Hey, what's wrong, Donald?" "I don't know about this crew. I have a feeling that they're watching us, getting ready to pounce." said Donald in concern. Unknown to the four, four shadowy figures came out of the shadows, about to do just that. Tucker laughed and said, "Aw, don't let a figment of your imagination get to you, Donald." Suddenly the four was grabbed and muffled by the shadowy figures and were taken away. "This is a figment of my imagination?" yelled Donald as he is tied up in a torture room somewhere in the room being 'questioned' by his and the other three's kidnappers: Nagini, Draco, Crabbe, and Goylew. Nagini smirked as he said, "Now then, tell us where the map is or we'll tear you limb from limb!" "Ha! Never!" Tucker, tied up himself, yelled angrily. "Now, now. There could be alot of consequences." Donald said, chuckling nervously. "I mean, well, you know...wha...if...they asked real nicely?" "In your dreams!" yelled Draco. "Torture the stupid guy!" ordered Nagini. Crabbe and Goyle laughed stupidly as they pulled a nearby big wheel. Goofy, who is tied up in a stretcher, is stretching. To their surprise, Goofy isn't yelling in pain but laughing in delight. "Gawrsh! Do it to me, some more!" Goofy laughed. "How could he laughed at a time like this?" Sam asked in disbelief. "Goofy gets hurt or tortured like that all the time." Donald said in a sigh. As the others looked on, Goofy is stretched to the point that he looks like the longest guy ever. "Gawrsh, I am taller now! This is great! I could try out for the NBA!" exclaimed Goofy excited. "Aw, forget it. He likes it too much!" Draco said angrily. "Let's torture the duck." Nagini said sinisterly as he glares at Donald. Donald gasped horribly as Crabbe takes out a sharp object covered with fire. "What? Nooooooo!" yelled Donald in horrible as Crabbe comes near Donald holding the very hot object. "That's the stuff, Crabbe!" Goyle laughed stupidly. "Don't please!" yelped Donald trying to get away from the hot object as Crabbe gets nearer with it. "I have a very good recipe for roast duck!" laughed Nagini with an evil giggle. Suddenly the door slams opened and the Kids Next Door came in. They looked in and looked alarmed. "What is this?" demands Numbuh 5. "Who gave you morons permission to use my torture chamber?" demands Numbuh 4. The other KND members looked at him puzzled, then he said, "What? Can't every KND member has one?" "Come on, we were only joking." chuckled Nagini sheepishly as Crabbe hids the sharp and hot object. "Yeah, only a joke." agreed Goyle. Crabbe nodded. Suddenly his hand turned red and he screamed, dropping the object. "Ouch!" cried Crabbe as he held his hand in pain, blowing on it in hopes to cool it down. "What's wrong?" Goyle asked in concern. "My hand is burned from that sharp hot object I was trying to burn the duck with!" Crabbe yelled out. "You idiot!" yelled Draco as he sees that the Kids Next Door are now on to them. Later, Danny, Sora, June, Ariel, Donald, Sam, and Tucker looked on as they see Goofy's arms and legs going around wildly as the goof laughs stupidly. Tommy looks at this with a frown. He then glares at Nagini, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle being held and watched by the Kids Next Door. "Numbuh 1, I want those four locked up for the remainder of the voyage!" ordered Tommy. "Yes sir! Move you four!" yelled Numbuh 2 as he and the other KND members takes the four awayu. "Let us go!" demands Nagini as he, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle are taken away. "Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel? I want to see you four in my cabin." said Tommy. As the mentioned four heads to Tommy's cabin, their other friends arrived. Monroe looked alarmed upon seeing Goofy. "Blimey! What happened here?" The dog asked. "We were being tortured by Nagini, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle. Goofy got stretched very far. Bright Heart and Grumpy are fixing him right now." explained Sam. "Cool!" Ray-Ray squealed. "Ray-Ray, that isn't cool. They coulda been hurt." Riku said to Ray-Ray with a frown. Goofy is tied up by Bright Heart and Grumpy as they get ready to get the goof back to normal. "Are you ready, Goofy?" Bright Heart asked Goofy with a smile. "Yep." Goofy said nodding. "Tie it, tighter." "Is this going to worked?" asked Grumpy concerned as he tied a rope that is holding Goofy tighter. "Sure! This is what I called the 'window shade' cure." explained Bright Heart. Bright Heart cut the rope and suddenly Goofy was send flying up and twisting around. He then is send flying back down and landed on Grumpy. Goofy stood up, back to normal. "Gawrsh, that was great." said Goofy with a smile. "Ooh, why do these things always happened to me?" asked Grumpy as he stood up with a frown. Inside Tommy's cabin, June noticed the same picture Tommy was looking at every night. "Hey, whose this Asian girl?" asked June pointing at the picture. "Uh, no one." said Tommy quickly as he takes the picture away. "Listen, I hope you reconsider giving me the map, considering what just happened to your friends. "Look, we can hold onto this map! Honest!" protested Danny. Tommy sighs sadly, then he said, "I have hope that it wouldn't come to this, but as captain, I order you to give me the map." Danny hesitates but sighs. He takes the map out of his shirt and gives it Tommy. Tommy activates a nearby intercom and speaks into it, "Numbuh 5? Can you come in here, please?" Numbuh 5 came in and said, "What's up, captain?" Tommy hands the map over to her and said, "Lock that map tight and good." "Okay, Tommy." Numbuh 5 said nodding. He then goes to a nearby safe, opens it with a key, puts the map in there, closes the safe, and locks it. "It will be safe in there." "Well, at least that trouble is out of the way." said Tommy with a smile. Unknown to him, Sora, Danny, June, Ariel, and Numbuh 5 however, a familiar cyborg is peeking in through a window. 'So, I knew that my reports from the surviving pirates who escaped the inn destruction was right. Those kids do have the map. I must find a way to get to it, even if I have to use trickery or the last resort to do so...' Author's note The map is safe, or is it? Grievous will be more determined to get the map now. But how will he do it? Find out in the next chapter as things goes a bit nuts! Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 20 2006, 08:45 PM Post #8 |
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Two weeks has passed since the voyage has begun. Unfortunately, the ship's power, including the lights, has broken down. While the engineers are hard at work trying to fix it, the crew sits around doing something or nothing. But most of the crew are very very bored sitting in the dark. "Man, it has been, what, two weeks since we left the planet?" asked Tucker with a groan. In the kitchen, Sora and Danny are helping out Grievous, trying their best not to get poor. In the main area, though, everyone is getting a bit on edge or something. "Five days since the ship stops running." said Monroe getting a bit nervous. The nature in the room begins to get more and more boring and intense. Suddenly, Edward Elric begins to get intense. "Madness, madness. I got the madness." Suddenly Edward Elric jumped up and yelled, while dancing insanely, "I GOT CABIN FEVER!" "I got it too!" laughed Gizmo madly. "Cabin fever!" laughed the crew insanely as they go into a song. Banzai the hyena: I got cabin fever It's burning in my brain Smoke comes out of Banzai's ears as he said this. Kronk: I got cabin fever It's driving me insane Kronk lifts his hat off revealing some birds. Some of the crew members danced like loons. Crew: We got cabin fever We're flipping our bandannas Been stuck at space so long that we have simply gone bananas Soon the scene changed as everyone in the main have dressed in party clothes, mad clothes, you named it. Mr. Crocker is dressed in a congo dress rattling two rattle thingies. Suddenly, Dash (from The Incredibles) grabbed June and danced with her, much to her annoyance. Crew: We, we, we got cabin fever We lost what sense we had We got cabin fever We're all going mad The room then, as if by magic, became a country square dinging room as Skeeter the mummy (from Juniper Lee's show) plays a fiddle. Skeeter: Grab your partner by the ears Lash him to the wheel Do-si-do, step on his toe Listen to him squeal Allemande left Allemande right It's time to sail or sink Swing your partner over the side Drop him in the drink June is forced to danced with Dash some more as the room keeps changing. Anti-Wanda: (surprisingly smart) We've got cabin fever. Anti-Cosmo: No ifs, ands, or buts. Anti-Wanda: We're disoriented. Anti-Cosmo: And demented. Both: And a little nuts. "Let go of me!" yelled June trying to get free from Dash. Dr. Wily, Dr. Scratchensniff, and Count Olaf: Ach du lieber Volkswagen car Cow: Yodel-lay-ee-hoo Doctors and count: Saur braten viener schnitzel Unda a vunder bar Cow: Yodel-lay-ee-hoo Rikochet, Buena Girl, and the Flea came down the stairs as they sing. Rikochet, Buena, Girl, and the Flea: We were sailing, sailing The wind was on our side The three stopped in front of a coffin. it opened up and up rose Really Really Old Man. Really Really Old Man: And then it died. Speedy Gonzalez: I got cabin fever I think I lost my grip Ren Hoek: I'd like to get my hands on whoever wrote this script "Si!" agreed Greasy Weasel. Just then Fawful appeared, dancing while in a congo dress. Fawful: I...was floating 'neath the tropic moon And dreaming of a blue lagoon Now I'm as crazy as a loon Crew: Cabin fever has ravaged all aboard This one small vessel has become a floating psycho ward We were sailing, sailing heading who knows where And now though we're all here We're not all there The crew then run around going actually nuts, especially Donald and Goofy. Bananas were thrown as were boomerangs. June is still trying to get a dancing Dash away from her. "Cabin Fever! Ahh!" exclaiemd the crew happily. Suddenly the lights came back on and the ship starts moving again. The crew reverted to normal, all confused. "Power now back on. Voyage has continued." boomed a voice over the intercom. "Huh? What was I doing?" asked Goofy confused. "Man, I felt like just a fool." groaned Grumpy as he goes back to work. Dash looks confused. Angrily June grabs Dash and kicks him into the wall, knocking him unconsciousness. "That's for dancing with me, twerp!" yelled June angrily. (Author's note: No offense to Wormtail96. I really don't like the Dash x Juniper Lee coupling. I just don't see it) In the prison area, Nagini, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle were in a cell yelling. "Come on, let us go!" yelled Nagini. "We didn't mean it!" agreed Draco. "We were only kidding!" The group sighed then they looked up to see Grievous entering. "Hey, Grievie! Get us out of here!" said Nagini excited. But then the cyborg grabbed Nagini and growled, "Never called me Grievie!" "Sorry." said Nagini sheepishly after the cyborg let him go. "Hey guys. What was that song that just happened?" asked Crabbe puzzled as he looked up to where there was singing a while ago. "What are you talking about?" asked Draco frowning. "You know: Cabin Fever! Ahh!" said Goyle. "You see, Grievous? You got to get us outta here!" exclaimed Nagini. "Yeah, these two idiots are getting more stupider than usual." agreed Draco, glancing at Crabbe and Goyle. Just then, Sora and Danny entering, bringing in a bowl of bread and water for the prison. "Okay, here's your bread and water for today. Not that you goons deserved." remarked Danny as he gives the prisoners their meal. "What? But I ordered the shrimp scampi!" protested Draco. Sensing an idea, Grievous gets in the prisoners' faced and yelled, "Well, it's more than you deserve, you villainous cowards!" The prisoners yelped as they backed away. Grievous shivered as he spoke, "Oh Sora, Danny. I think I should have been locked away as well, for allowing thieves like them aboard. I mean, it chills to me to think that they try to killed your friends for no reason." "Oh man. This wouldn't have happened if the map was locked up tight!" groaned Sora. "Sora!" gasped Danny in alarmed. "Excuse me?" gasped Grievous surprised. Of course, he only pretended to be surprise. "Are you telling me that you have the treasure map?" Of course, Grievous knew but he got to get the two's trust before he figures out what to do next. "Well, we did but Tommy and the Kids Next Door took it and locked it in a safe in the captain's cabin." said Danny with a sigh. "I see. Who has the kid?" "Well, the Kids Next Door do. They barely let it out of their sights. The only way anyone could steal it if they were caught off guarded." explained Sora. He looked up and looks concerned, "But you got to keep the map a secret, please!" Grievous chuckled and said, "Don't worry, you only told me." Grievous then points to the door. "Go on. You have the rest of the day off." "Thanks, Grievous." Danny said with a smile. "I knew we could trust you despite that cyborg warning we were given." Sora explained. As Sora and Danny left the prison, Grievous paused to think. "I knew! Those brats do have the map!" yelled Draco. "So what are you going to do, boss?" asked Nagini. Grievous smirked evilly. "Simple. What I have to do." Later that evening, the spaceship flies on as foghorn noises were made. The Kids Next Door were in the pod room inspecting things. They went by Fawful who was steering and making the foghorn noises. "Steady as she goes." Numbuh 3 said cautiously. "Good evening, Kids Next Door." Grievous said as he appeared. "Oh, hey Grievie!" Numbuh 5 said with a greeting. "Please, don't called me that. It's very annoying." "What are you doing out here?" asked Numbuh 1 puzzled. "Going for a walk. You know, it's a very quiet night...too quiet I think, like a night of death. This reminds me of the night we flew around Planet Namek. It was a terrible sight. Half of the crew were killed due to bad escape pods." explained Grievous. "Bad escape pods?" asked Numbuh 2 puzzled. "Leak air, bad engines, the rest. You know, it happens almost all the time. A little used up oxygen tanks that isn't too good with bad engines and can only worked for a few hours or so. We didn't know until it was too late. But it appears that they seemed to be...how can I say it?" "Unsafe?" Numbuh 5 asked, finishing Grievous. "But the pods can't be unsafe! I checked them over and redo them a dozen times!" protested Numbuh 2. Grievous smiled. "Oh I am not saying that we have bad pods nor are our lives in dangers." "Still, we got to make sure, especially with Numbuh 2's work." Numbuh 1 said frowning. "Hey!" protested Numbuh 2. The Kids Next Door goes to a escape pod, opens it up, and looked inside. "Let's see....the pods seems to be okay. No crayons or bugs or stuff." Numbuh 3 said happily. "Of course...until you get it out into space." Grievous pointed out. "Very well. We will take this pod out for a test drive and be back in no time." said Numbuh 1 as he and the other KND members got in. "Say, I wonder...if there's anything I could hold for you while you're gone. Toys, comic books, weapons...maybe...keys?" "Oh yeah," said Numbuh 5 as she and the Kids Next Door members gives out their personal items, including the keys, to the cyborg, "Gotta make sure nothing happened to them." "Yeah, otherwise Kuki here will go nuts if anything happens to her rainbow monkeys dolls and I don't wanna see it!" Numbuh 4 explained. "Of course." said Grievous. "Farewell." said Numbuh 1. He then closes the door and oushed a button, launching the pod out of Spaceball 2. Once the KND left, Grievous smirked evilly as he looked at the keys to the safe. "Farewell...for good!" chuckled Grievous evilly. Author's note Now with Grievous with the keys, it will only be a matter of time before he gets the map. Will the others figured out his plan or is it too late? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 21 2006, 09:19 PM Post #9 |
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The next day, word of the Kids Next Door's disappearance has spreaded. A voice cried out, "Kids overboard!" Kronk goes up to the captain's cabin sadly and knocked on the door. Tommy, in his PJs, came out. "What is it?" asked Tommy puzzled. "I'm sorry, sir, but the Kids Next Door must have fallen overboard," Kronk then show a shocked Tommy the Kids Next Door's personal belonings, "And all we could find are these!" "No." said Tommy shocked. On the front deck later, Tommy takes the stand in front of a mourning crew, Sora, Danny, and the others looking very sad. The only one not mourning is Grievous (and only because his mask blocked his emotions). "My friends, it looks like that the deep vasts of space and claimed more loyal officers and friends." said Tommy, beginning the eulogy. Back in the prison, Crabbe turned the keys Grievous has given them in the cell's lock. "I got it!" exclaimed Crabbe excited. The door then opened, lettingt he prisoners out. "After you, Crabbe!" Goyle offered. "No, after you." "Will you two come on!" yelled Nagini as Draco grabbed the two idiots and dragged them out of the cell. "Even if they are kids, they fought well against the forces of Father and his Ice Cream Men very bravely." continued Tommy sadly. In Tommy's cabin, the prisoenrs came in. "Split up and looked for the map!" ordered Nagini as he and the other begins searching. "It should be in a safe!" "You mean that safe?" asked Crabbe pointing to the obvious safe in front of Nagini. Nagini sighs in annoyance and said, "Draco?" Draco then whacked Crabbe over the head. Tommy wiped a tear as he continued, "May you always be loyal and true, Numbuh 1, Numbuh 2, Numbuh 3, Numbuh 4, and Numbuh 5. Rest in peace, my friends. Ahem." "Ahem>" said the others. Back in Tommy's cabin, Draco turned the key and the safe opened up, revealing the map inside. "All right!" said Goyle excited as he grabs the map, "Let's opened it!" said Crabbe eagerly. Draco grabs the map and yelled, "No, we got to take it Grievous! Let's go!" The four closes the safe, relock it, and runs out of the room with their possession in hand. The next day, Sora and Danny's friends are inside one of the barrels eating some apples to helped recovered from yesterday's tragedy. "Man, there's a worm in my apple." said Sam feeling something in her apple. "That's my a worm, that's my tail!" exclaimed Mickey as he pulled her tail from Sam's apple. Ariel noticed a puzzled look on Goofy's face and said, "What's wrong, Goofy?" "It just so very strange." said Goofy with a sigh. "About what? The Kids Next Door dying like that?" asked Minnie. "That and my pants feels like that there are starfish in them." Monroe looked into Goofy's pants and said, "Well, no wonder! There is a starfish in there!" Monroe pulled out a pink dumb looking starfish out of Goofy's pants. "Uh, am I in the right story?" asked Patrick looking around stupidly. Monroe sighs, takes out a wand, and made Patrick disappeared. "I think Goofy may have a point, sort of. The Kids Next Door don't easily get killed like that." said Kairi with a frown. "Are you suggesting that they could be alive?" asked Donald. "Well..." Just then, Sora and Danny appeared from outside the barrel. "Hey guys!" Sora said happily. "Sora, Danny!" June said happily to the two, happy mostly to Danny. "We missed you guys! Come on, climb on in!" "Can't. We got chores to do. Besides, how can you all fited in there?" asked Danny puzzled that a barrel can fit all of his and Sora's friends. "This is one of those cartoon things, Danny. You won't understand." Monroe explained. "I don't understand myself." Ray-Ray remarked. "Come on in, Sora! June and I wanna be with you two? Please?" Ariel pleaded, giving Sora the puppy-dog look, one of the looks Sora has grown to loved her for. Sora smiled and climbed into the barrel, along with Danny. To their surprise, the barrel could fit them too. "Hey, this barrel can fit all of us!" Sora said amazed. "Yeah, cool!" Danny agreed. "You know what's cooler?" June asked with a smirk. "What's that?" "This." June then kissed Danny on the lips very romantically. Ariel then joined in, kissing her boyfriend Sora. Both boyfriends kissed back. "How cute even in an apple barrel." said Mickey with a smile. Suddenly they heard familiar voices from outside the barrel. "Okay, here's the plan!" said the first voice. "I say we killed that purple-haired boy now!" demands the second voice. "Then we deal with that idiot koopa!" "Can I used him for turtle wax?" said the last two voices at once. The group inside the barrels looks concerned as they peeked out of the barrel. To their surprise, Nagini, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle are in the kitchen, plotting. "Hey, who let those four out of prison?" asked Donald more quietly. "Oh hey Grievie." Crabbe said turning to someone. He and the other three jumped in alarmed as Grievious came in, a bit annoyed. "I told you four, it's Grievous! And I am an easy man. A gentleman of fortune, to say the most. But it makes me sick at heart to sail with the likes of you!" Sora and Danny smiled as the four plotters shivered in fear. Grievous then continued, "Now listen here! If anyone even thinks of mutiny before I give the word, I will throw you out the airlock and send into space like I did with those troubling Kids Next Door!" The group in the barrel, especially Danny and Sora, looked shocked as they hear this. Grievous smirked as he continued, unknowly letting the group in the barrel hearing him, "Let Tommy Pickles steer us closer to the planet," Then to make things worst, he pulled out a familiar object: the treasure map! "I got Count Dooku's map to Treasure Planet. When the time comes, we'll killed them all!" "That's what I said!" said Nagini quickly. "Didn't we said that?" asked Goyle confused. "Yeah, killed them all!" laughed Draco madly. "Planet ho!" yelled a voice from up above. "Let's go, everyone!" said Grievous as he turns and leaves the kitchen. "Yeah, planet ho!" agreed Nagini as he, Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle followed their boss. When they left, everyone got out of the barrel, more shocked than ever. "Gawrsh!" yelped Goofy in fear. Sure enough, Spaceball 2 has finally arrived at the mysterious Treasure Planet, home of Count Dooku's treasure. Groups prepared the pods to go to the planet. "Okay, let's get ready to land on that planet!" ordered Tommy, trying to keep control. Unknown to the captain, the prisoners sneaked into a nearby escape pod without him seeing them. Sora, Danny, and their friends arrived soon after and runs to Tommy. "Captain!" yelled Sora in horror. "Please, call me Tommy!" Tommy said with a smile. "Tommy, we got to talk!" Danny insisted. "I'm busy, you guys. Maybe later." "But there won't be a later! Grievous is planning a mutniny!" Sora explained. "And he got the treasure map!" added Danny. "I see." Tommy said in thought. He paused, then called out, "General Grievous?" "Yes sir!" said Grievous saluting as he gets his pod ready. "I want you take the crew ashore at once! We'd need food, water, and provisions! Take as long as you want!" Tommy ordered, to Sora and Danny's shock. "Very good, sir." "What are you doing?" asked Sora, shocked at what Tommy has said. "I'd explained later. Get the others, Bowser Jr., Bright Heart, and Grumpy to my cabin, pronto!" Tommy quickly said. Realizing that Tommy has got a plan, the two nodded and run off to find the said names. Back in the escape pod, Nagini smirked at Grievous, who got into the pod, as it is getting ready to depart. "This is good break for us, the captain letting us go alone, especially since he probably don't know we got the map and all. It's like getting the treasure on a silver platter." said Nagini with a smile. "I know. Never trust a silver platter." Grievous said evilly. Quietly, Grievous takes out one of his lightsabers and throws it beyond his reach. He then sees Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, and Stitch passing by. "Hey, Sora, Danny!" Grievous called out, getting their attention. "We got room for a few more! Come with us!" "Can't. Tommy needed to speak with us." Danny said, not sure if he wants to go with Grievous now that he knows what he got planned. "Yeah." Stitch said in agreement. Grievous sighs in a pretend sigh. "What a shame. I'll missed you two and your girlfriends." "Watch it, Grievie." June said to Grievous upset. "Grievous." said the cyborg as he puts his seatbelt. He then spots the lightsaber he 'lost' and said, "Oh yes. I dropped my lightsaber while coming in here. Please give it to me?" "Well, I guess so." Sora said with a shrug picking up the lightsaber. He figures Grievous isn't trying to pull anything. Lilo however is suspicious. "Are you sure you want to do that?" asked Lilo. Sora ignored her as he, Danny, Ariel, and June goes to Grievous's escape pod. Lilo and Stitch followed, both suspicious. Sora is about to give the lightsaber to the cyborg. "I think you need to come closer. I can't reach it from here." said Grievous with a secret smile. The six got closer, but to their surprise, Grievous and the former prisoners grabbed them and dragged them inside. Grievous quickly closes the pod doors and got the escape pod shot into space. In Tommy's cabin, unaware of what happened to Lilo and Stitch, Tommy explains his plan to the others. "The plan is simple. Once all the pirates are on the planet, we will leave and returned in a year or so thanks to the automatic tracking system. By then, all the fight will be left from them." explained Tommy. "That's a great idea!" said Bright Heart with a smile. "Now I get it!" agreed Minnie. "Nice plan, Tommy." added Ray-Ray. "Uh, one problem though." said Donald in concern as he looks out a nearby problem. "What?" Goofy asked. "The pirates got Sora and Danny!" yelled the duck pointing out the window. The group looked out the window, then to their horror, they see Grievous's pod with Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, and Stitch in it heading for the planet. Meanwhile, a flying machine is being flown by tourists while one of them is hanging by a gravitional rope. "Hey, I'm getting tired!" yelled the tourist. "What did you say?" asked one of the tourists in the machine. "I'm getting tired!" "He said go faster!" said the tourist to the driver who then makes the machine go faster, making the hanging tourist yelled out in terror. Author's note Oh no! Grievous got the map, Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, and Stitch! Now the good guys' friends must go to the planet to get the hostages back! But Grievous got more in store. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 23 2006, 12:46 PM Post #10 |
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Down on Treasure Planet, General Grievous and his pirates has landed and stopped near a lake near the forest laughing while some of them were shoving the captives. Meanwhile, music were played by the Peantus gang nearby. There was a dispute. "Hey, Charlie Brown. Whose side are we on anyway? The pirates or the purple-haired captain?" asked Linus as he temporarily stops playing the sax. "Aw, just play the gig, Linus." Charlie Brown said with a sigh. " Yeah, no reason to get involved with Weird-Lo and her politics." agreed Lucy. "Politics, politics!" yelled Snoopy as he plays the drums. As the band continued to play, the evil pirates laaughed at the captived six as they knocked them to the ground. Then they picked them back and removed their blindfolds. As Sora, Danny, June, Ariel, Lilo, and Stitch watched, they see Grievous in front of them, dressing himself like some sort of pirate captain. "Ah, Sora, Danny, June, Ariel, and that girl and her alien friend." said Grievous with a smile. "Grievie!" Lilo yelled angrily. "That's Grievous!" snapped the cyborg annoyed. "Let us go!" demands June angrily. "Yeah, why are Stitch and I got grabbed as well?" demands Lilo. "Simple. You saw through my 'plea' and I can't have you or the trog alerts your friends though they may have known already." explains Grievous. "Watch it with the trog talk!" snapped Stitch annoyed. "Now, now. It's all good and fun. I am happy to announce that I wish to invite you six into our...enterprising, how can I say it, company. You get all benefits afterwards." "Benefits?" said Sora in disbelief. "We don't need your stupid benefits, Grievous!" snapped Danny. "I think you better take me up on my offer because it's one time only. Keep refusing, I'd be forced to um..." Grievous holds up the captives' blindfolds evilly. "'Terminate' our relationship." "Can you keep June alive? That way, I still get a chance with her." Dash said with a smirk. Danny angrily kicks Dash, knocking the boy down. "Stay away from my girl!" yelled Danny angrily. "Grievous, we thought you were our friend, someone we looked up to like a father. But now, we know the others were right!" yelled Sora. "You and your friends are nothing more than murdering pirates!" yelled Ariel in agreement. "Pirates?" yelled Grievous angrily as the others watched on. He glared and chuckles, "Pirates, eh? Oh, Ariel. If that what you and your friends are thinking...you're dead wrong." Grievous coughed a bit as he begins to sing. Grievous: When I was just a lad Looking for my true vocation My father said Now, son, this choice Deserves deliberation Though you could be a doctor Or perhaps a financier My boy, why not consider a more challenging career The other pirates begin singing as Coconuts, Grounder, and Scratch (Dr. Robotnik's henchmen from the Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog cartoon) held Sora, Danny, and the others down. Pirates: Hey, ho, ho You'll cruise to foreign shores "Sing it everyone!" ordered Grievous. Grievous: And you'll keep your mind and body sound by working out of doors "Show them how you practice!" cheered Grievous some more. Dash recovered and sings along as well. Dash: True friendship and adventure are what we can't live without Pirates: And when you're a professional pirate Nagini: That's what thejob's about "Okay, upstage everyone! This is my only number!" yelled Grievous as he begins sing while smirking at the captives. Grievous: Now take Don Karnage The Spanish all despise him As he said this, the pirates turned in disgust. Grievous: But to the British he's a hero and they idolize him As he said this, the pirates bowed to Grievous. Grievous: It's how you look at buccaneers That makes them bad or good And I see us as members of a noble brotherhood Some of the pirates carried Grievous (barely) as they sing and danced some more. Pirates: Hey, ho, ho "Oh I loved this!" chuckled Crocker madly. Pirates: We're honourable men "Poetry in motion!" exclaimed Grievous. Pirates: And before we lose our tempers we will always count to ten Grievous: On occasion there may be someone you have to execute Pirates: But when you're a professional pirate Crabbe and Goyle: You don't have to wear a suit The other pirates looked at two confused. The two noticed and Crabbe asked, "What?" "Move it, you two." mumbled Draco in annoyance as he sings next. Draco: I could have been a surgeon I like taking things apart Nagini: I could have been a lawyer but I just had too much heart "That's because you keep eating them!" laughed Crabbe stupidly. Draco hits him as Goyle sings next. Goyle: I could have been in politics 'Cause I've always been a big spender Crocker: (in a Marlon Brando voice) And me, I could have been a contender The pirates laughed as Nagini glared at Crocker with a frown. Grievous sings now. Grievous: Some say that pirates steal And should be feared and hated I say we're victimsof bad press It's all exaggerated We'd never stab you in the back As Grievous said this, someone fell down with a knife in his back. Grievous: We'd never lie or cheat When a pirate wasn't looking, another one swiped his money from his pocket. Grievous: We'rejust about the nicest guys You'd ever want to meet As the pirates hummed some more, Grievous smirked as he said, "Look at us, lads! We're a festival of convivality!" "Yeah! Congeniality!" laughed Goyle. "That's convivality, stupid!" snapped Nagini. "Isn't that what I said?" Back at Spaceball 2, Tommy got into an escape poid along with Donald, Goofy, Riku, Kairi, Mickey, Minnie, Sam, Tucker, Monroe, Ray-Ray, Jumba, and Pleakley as he gives instruct to those still on the ship. "You guys guard this ship while I'm gone. We shall returned once we get Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, and Stitch back." instructed Tommy. "We're on it!" exclaimed Bowser Jr. "Good luck!" Bright Heart said. Tommy closes the door and launched the pod to the planet. He turned to the others. "Thanks for coming along, you guys." Tommy said. "Are you kidding? Sora, Danny, June, and Ariel are like family to us!" Kairi said with a smile. "And little girl and 626 and ohana to me and Pleakley here." added Jumba with a nod. "Right! We got to get them back!" agreed Pleakley. Back on the planet, Grievous turned to the captives with a glare. "Tell us the truth, you six. Do you really think that the captain and his idiots are going to share the treasure with the likes of us?" asked Grievous. When none of them answered, he turned around, "No? And we were the rightful owners, Count Dooku's own crew, who shed our blood getting it here!" Grievous turned around. "Join us, donate Sora's compass to the treasure hunt and we will give you six a full share!" Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, and Stitch just stared as Grievous and the pirates sing once more. Pirates: Hey, ho, ho It's one for all for one And we'll share and share alike with you And love you like a son We're gentlemen of fortune and that's what we're proud to be And when you're a professional pirate Grievous: You'll be honest brave and free The soul of decency You'll be loyal and fair and on the square And most importantly Grievous and pirates: When you're a professional pirate You're always in the best Of company The song ends as Grievous smirked. Suddenly a noise like a cannon from Spaceball 2 were heard. "Down lads!" ordered Grievous as the pirates put him down. "Ha! See that? Tommy is coming to rescue us already!" said Danny with a smirk. "You are going to get your cyborg butt kick, stupidhead!" yelled Lilo. "Yeah!" agreed Stitch. Grievous doesn't seem concerned as he said, "Don't get your hopes up yet! I have taken the liberty of hiding a few of my best men aboard the ship. If another round follows, that means they have taken Spaceball 2 and I am the new captain. Now." The pirates and the captives waited. To Sora's group's dismay, another shot is heard making the pirates cheered. "Oh no." Ariel said sadly. "Looks like Grievous gets to be captain after all." added Sora with a frown. Back on Spaceball 2, the others and the tourists who stay behind on the ship were taken by surprise as the pirates jumped them without warning and tied them all up. "Darn it! How unfortunate our firearms weren't loaded!" said Bright Heart with a groan. "Good thing too. We could have shot someone." agreed Bowser Jr. making Bright Heart looked up in disbelief. Back on the planet, Grievous has the captives released. He smiled. "I'm afraid we are what you have now, you six." Grievous told to the captives who are sad. "Tell you what? I can make things better by having you help us digged the treasure up? What do you say? 50/50?" "Well..." June said reluctantly. "We will need your compass, Sora." Sora is shocked at this demand. "No, you can't!" Grievous glares. "I'd take it if you give it up or not!" The pirates glared at Sora, getting ready to strike if he even refused once more. Sora sighed, takes his compass back and hand it over to Grievous. "Come on! Time is wasting!" ordered Grievous. The pirates cheered as they followed the leader, taking the six captives with them. Ona beach on another part of the planet, Tommy and his rescue team were walking. "It's getting dark, you guys. We better camp here and continued tomorrow." said Tommy. "I don't wanna sleep here." said Donald worried. "Don't be scared, Donald." Minnie told Donald gently. "Who said I was scared? Right now I am somewhere between bed-wetting and near-death experience scared!" "Yep, you're scared." Monroe said with a shrug. "Scary duck!" laughed Ray-Ray. "Shut up!" snapped Donald in annoyance. "Come on, let's get some sleep. Good night everyone." said Tommy as he turns the lantern off. Everyone went to sleep. All but a certain duck and one-eyed alien. "You can't sleep either?" asked Donald to Pleakley. "Who can when there's a chance of something scary and evil coming to get us." said Pleakley shivering. "Well, we can do this. No need to be afraid." Before the two could try to get to sleep, they hear some growling notices. As the two looked around, they didn't a pair of eyes, smoke or red, glaring at them. "Uh, Mickey is that you?" chuckled Donald nervously. "It sounds like you got a cold there. I'd light a match, okay?" Pleakley said. Pleakley soon lit a match and suddenly a group of natives made up a frog, a pig, a whatever, a group of small blue creatures in white clothing minus a white bearded guy called Smurfs, a bear, some sort of tiger with a bouncing tail, a rabbit, a black feathered duck, a fat orange cat, a green sliming like ghost, three chipmunks, three small ducks, and a turtle surrounded them lead by brown furred alien with black alien eyes, a strange snout bang, and wearing a yellow shirt with flowers. They are the cast of Cartoon All-Stars To The Rescue led by Alf! Donald and Pleakley screamed, waking the others i[ as they were taken captived. Author's note The rescue team looks like they will need to be rescued now and the treasure hunt begins. BTW, the natives are parodied by the cast of that Cartoon All-Stars To The Rescue special made years ago. They consist of... Alf (parodyhing Spa'am. Garfield The Chipmunks The Smurfs Baby Kermit Winnie the Pooh Slimer Bugs Bunny Michelangelo (1980s TMNT version) Baby Piggy Baby Gonzo Huey, Dewey, and Louie (Donald's nephews) Tigger Daffy Duck Until next time, read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 26 2006, 06:51 PM Post #11 |
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Author's note Sorry for the delay. Have problems with my monitor. Back to the story, yo! Somewhere else on the planet, the pirates with their captives are on their quest to find the treasure. Along the way, they forced Sora into reading the map while Grievous uses the compass. As they came to one part of the map, Crabbe and Goyle yelped. "Boss, look!" yelped Crabbe as he and Goyle pointed. The other pirates looked and gasped as they see skeletons hanging in a nearby tree. Grievous however just laughed at this. "Count Dooku has hung them there after killing them, so he could mark the trail to the treasure." Grievous said in amusement. "The count always did have a crazy sense of humor." "It got to be a sign! This place is cursed!" yelped Goyle. "Yeah!" agreed Crabbe. "You would think that, because you two are idiots!" snapped Grievous rolling his eyes. Then he speaks to Sora, "Now, Sora, where to from here?" Sora sighed as he checks the map. "'On a heading of degrees, walk 15 paces from where the dead men hang high'." The other pirates looked nervous as Grievous checks the compass. He nods and points in a direction. "That way!" yelled the cyborg. "Are we gonna go? Are we gonna go?" repeated Crabbe and Goyle. "Come on!" yelled Nagini as Draco dragged them two along as the group and captives followed the pirate leader. Tommy, Goofy, Donald, and the others find themselves tied to wooden stakes in the middle of a village. They are confronted by Alf, along with a red-haired girl in galactic guardian clothing, and a boy about thirteen-years-old who looked Chinese and had black beady eyes and black hair that was lined with green. He wore a red zip-up sweatshirt, blue pants and blue shoes "Greetings outsiders." boomed Alf. "My name is Alf, high priest of the natives. These two are Jake Long, American Dragon and second high priest and Betty Barret AKA Atomic Betty and high priestress." Alf chuckled, then said, "You may not know this but Jake and Betty are so in love with each other!" "Alf!" exclaimed Betty and Jake blushing. "Figures. Another couple in love." Monroe remarked. "What's wrong with that? I think it's so romantic." Kairi said smiling. "I mean, this is like Danny and June all over again! An American loving an Asian bit!" "I'm Canadian!" snapped Betty annoyed. "Like cowabunga, dude. How did you get to be so cool?" asked Michelangelo sarcastically. "What do you mean?" Riku asked puzzled. "Like, you have tresspassed on sacred planet! That is a bogus no-no!" "Yeah. Unlike you have a big plate of lasagna, I may changed my mind by sacrificing you." Garfield said with a smirk. "But we didn't bring any food!" protested Tucker. "Well, your loss." "Anyway, for tresspassing, you people shall suffer the wrath of our queen...Ninjetta!" boomed Alf. "Oh great. Captured by a crazed alien and cartoon characters and sacrificed hideously before a pageon altar." Donald said groaning. "Are we lucky or what?" said Ray-Ray smirking. "I don't called this lucky!" yelped Pleakley. "This is an opposite of a good thing! This is not right! This is..." Bugs whacked Pleakley in the eye with an mallet. "Ouch!" "Eh, silence, smelly sailor man!" Bugs remarked. Goofy sniffed Pleakley and gagged. "Gawrsh, you do stink really." "Great. I have been insulted by cartoon characters!" complained Pleakley. "Look whose talking." joked Bugs, pointing at Pleakley. "Enough, Bugs. You people went and violated our sacred planet for too long! Time for you all to pay the price, yo!" remarked Jake. "Now hold it. My name is Tommy Pickles and we mean you people no harm!" protested Tommy. "Yes. Evil genius embrace all creatures of different nationalities." agreed Jumba. "How do you explain your evil experimenting then?" snapped Pleakley. "Hey! Be quiet, you!" yelled Betty as she hits Pleakley in the eye this time. "Good work, Betty." said Jake smiling as he kisses Betty, making her blushed. "Thanks." "Okay, bring forth...Ninjetta!" called out Alf. "Not good." said Kairi. "I agreed." Riku said nodding. Nearby, Daffy hits the bong with a hammer, startling Baby Kermit, Baby Piggy, and Baby Gonzo, shaking them up. "Geez. I hated it when that happens!" groaned Baby Kermit. "Why do I have the feeling that I am going to start in another parody like this someday?" asked Baby Piggy. Soon the Jinjos begins to chanted as the other natives, Smurfs, Tigger, Pooh, Slimer included, danced around. Jinjos: Ninjettal Ninjetta Ninjetta Ninjetta As the dancing continues, some of the Smurfs chanted near Donald, freaking him out. Goofy on the other hand is starting to like this and sings along. "They are crazed monsters!" yelped Minnie. "Yet not bad dancers." Mickey said in observe. (Author's note: The reference is almost from The Wild) Jinjos: Ninjetta Ninjetta Ninjetta Ninjetta Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Near a platform, tourists were enjoying themselves and watching the 'show' while hanging with some of the friendly natives. "I loved these tropical floor shows! They are so exotic!" Marge Simpson said smiling. "Yep. And this food is to die for." remarked Homer as he eats like a pig. Soon a big elephant came in, carrying the Ninjetta in her float like thingie. The chanting continues. Jinjos: Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Tommy and the rescue team was suddenly set free and was brought forth to the steps Ninjeta will walked down and forced to bowed down by the natives. Jinjos: Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka Ninjshakalakalaka All: Ninjetta! The natives bowed as 'Ninjetta' opened up her curtain on her floating thingie. She revealed herself to be a purple-haired Asian girl in teen like clothes and her girl is in two pigtails. She has a French purple poodle by her side. "Hey everyone!" 'Ninjetta' said greeting. Tommy looked up and gasped upon seeing 'Ninjetta'. The girl didn't see him at first as she and Fifi are getting off their float. "Come, Fifi!" said 'Ninjetta' to her poodle. Suddenly Slimer flew by freaking Fifi up. It caused her to accidentally tripped 'Ninjetta', knocking the two down the stairs as the natives watched. 'Ninjetta' got up and glared angrily at Slimer. "Slimer! You ruined my entrance!" yelled 'Ninjetta' at the ghost. "Sorry." Slimer giggled stupidly. "Ninjetta..." said the natives repeatedly again. 'Ninjetta' turned and yelled at the natives, "Knock that off!" The natives were repeating then was cut short. They looked down, embarrassed. 'Ninjetta' turned to face the prisoners. Tommy stood up to looked at her stunned. "Greeting, outsiders! My name is Kimi Watanabe Finster, deserted on this planet, martial arts expert, and queen of this..." Kimi stopped and gasps as she sees Tommy at last. The two walked towards each other confused and blushing. "Tommy? Is taat you?" Kimi asked. "Kimi?" Tommy replied. Suddenly Kimi frowns angrily and yelled out, "Hi-yah!" She ended up kicking Tommy, sending him flying towards the gong, landing near Daffy. This made the tourists cheered wildly. Daffy looked as Tommy get back up looking sheepishly. "Heh heh...old girlfriend." Tommy chuckled sheepishly, then he fainted. "Tied them back to the stakes!" yelled Kimi as she storms off. Back with the pirates, their quest seemed to be done as they approached the same cave Dooku said to buried his treasure years ago. The entrance is covered by vines. "This must be where Count Dooku hid it!" Grievous said in glee. "I just have a thought. What if Crabbe and Goyle are right? What if this is a cursed place." yelped Nagini while shivering. Grievous growls as he takes his lightsabers out. He yelled, "I'd show you what I think of your curse, you mewing, little, lily-livered, toffee hearted, little snake!" Grievous then succeeded in cutting the vines that covered the cave entrance. When all the vines are gone, the group went in. "'Treasure burried here'." said Sora reading the map. He looks and sees that there are treasure chests that hasn't been covered by dirt yet. "Hey, we didn't have to dig it up!" said Anti-Cosmo impressed. "Come on, the treasure is ours!" cheered Nagini. Grievous however looks concerned as he takes his lightsabers out. The captives looked concerned too as the pirates run for the chests. But to their surprise, when they opened the cjests up, there is no treasure to be found! The looks of confusion and surprise gave way to looks of fury. "There is no treasure here, Grievie!" Nagini yelled at the cyborg. "You brought us all here for nothing!" "Yeah!" yelled the other pirates. "And now, we're going to hang for mutiny!" "That's right!" snarled Scratch. "Yeah!" yelled Grounder and Coconuts. "I say we shall killed him, the captives, and any one who doesn't want to killed!" said Draco. "Wait a minute! I don't want to killed June!" protested Dash alarmed. "Kill them all!" "Forget it! Deal's off!" yelled Dash as he frees the captives from their ropes. Before the pirates could get closer, Grievous jumps in front waving his lightsabers around. "Run for it!" yelled Grievous. "What?" asked Ariel surprised. "Why are you doing this for us?" Danny asked. "Because I like you Danny and Sora. I wasn't lying about that, was I?" Grievous said, smirking under his mask. "Let's get going!" Lilo yelled, unaware that Crocker has sneaked out of the cave. "Get him!" yelled Count Olaf, sword at ready. "Run now!" yelled Grievous. As the captives with Dash made their escape, Grievous fights his angry pirate henchmen with his lightsabers. Back at the village, Tommy and the others has since been tied back to the stakes. Alf, Betty, and Jake returned. "Okay, take the purple-haired captain away! Ninjetta wants to speak to him!" ordered Alf. "Huh?" asked Tommy as the natives released and takes him away. "Hey, what about us?" asked Sam. "Yeah." agreed Tucker. "You are staying for dinner!" Betty explained. "What?" yelled the others in shock. "Hey, it isn't that. We're just going to feed you." Jake explained. "Oh." said the prisoners in release. "Then I turned into my dragon form and eat you, all stuffed, up, yo." The others screamed while Tommy is being taken away. In a cooking area nearby, an African American man wearing a red shirt and a chef's hat is singing. His name is Chef (from South Park) Chef: I'm gonna make love to you, woman gonna lay you down by the fire As Chef sings, the VeggieTales turned and shrugged seemingly to the audience. "Well, how else are we going to get a chef for this parody." said Bob the Tomato with a shrug. "Yeah." agreed Larry the Cucumber and the other VeggieTales. "Shut up, boys!" snapped Chef as he hits the VeggieTales with a spoon. As the natives' captives watched, they groaned. "Oh, I wished I was back home right now eating table scraps." said Donald with a groan. "Guess what? We're going to be table straps!" Mickey explained. "This is the worstest thing that has ever happened to me!" yelled Pleakley as he walks forward. Then he realized something, especially at the ropes. "Hey! I am cut loose!" "Guys!" The others yelled, not enough to alarmed the natives. They turned and sees Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, and Stitch nearby. "Sora, Danny, Ariel, June, Lilo, Stitch!" said Goofy excitedly. "You're here! The natives got Tommy!" explained Minnie as she is cut loose. "We know. Come on, we need some help, and he will be one of them!" said June pointing to Dash who waves. "You? He's one of the pirates!" yelled Riku getting his Soul Eater out. "Whoa, whoa, Riku! He's one of the good guys now!" Sora said, stopping his friend from doing any damage to the Super. "We don't have time for this!" Come on!" June said as she and the others make the escape from the village. Author's note With everyone nearly reunited, how can they saved Tommy from his old girlfriend who is very crossed with him? Why is she crossed with him? As for Grievous, what will happened to him? Tune in to find out! Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 27 2006, 06:52 PM Post #12 |
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Back with the pirates, Grievous is tied down by cyborg proof ropes while the other pirates either glared at him or mourn their loss. Some of the pirates got killed by Grievous during the fight but they finally managed to captured and subdue him. Kronk cries as he holds the remains of a fellow dead pirate. "Oh, Man, Man, Man." Kronk whimpered. He checks the pirate over then gasped. "Really Really Dead Man is dead! Grievie stabbed him with his lightsabers!" "It's Grievous!" snapped the cyborg annoyed. "But Really Really Dead Man has always been dead." Flotsam pointed out. "Yes. That is why he is called Really Really Dead Man." agreed Jetsam. Kronk soon realized this, then shrugged. "Oh." Then he dropped Really Really Dead Man. "Will you idiots get out of here so we can do this!" yelled Nagini as he chased the two off. Then he glares at Crabbe and Goyle. "Crabbe, Goyle!" "Yeah?" asked Crabbe stupidly. "Give it to him!" Goyle looked at Grievous confused then said, "But it isn't his birthday!" "Oh yeah!" The two pirates went over and hands some sort of paper to Grievous. "Here, this is for you." Grievous looked at the paper. Sure enough, it is a familiar black spot on a piece of paper. Although amused then angry, the general decided to use this to his advantage. "The black spot?" said Grievous in pretend anger. "Yeah!" snapped the pirates angrily. "You dare to give me the black spot?" Crabbe and Goyle suddenly looked nervous as they pointed to Draco and Nagini. "They told us too!" "Quiet!" snapped Draco as he hits the two boys. "And worst yet, it was drawn from a page from the Bible. You dare to tear a page from the Holy Scriptures just to make a pirate's death sentence?" yelled Grievous in pretend anger. Under his mask, he smirks evilly as the pirates trembled in fear. The cyborg then roared. "Ooh, the red hot gates of Heck are crepeing open! Satan is heating his pokers for you, you blaspehmous heathens!" The pirates screamed in fear. "Fall down on your knees..." The pirates did so. "And beg for deliverance from damnation!" "Forgive us, we're sorry!" cried the pirates while begging for forgiveness. 'Works everytime.' thought Grievous, then he said. "Very well. You are all forgiven." The pirates cheered happily. Then Grievous yelled, "Now untie me so we can go find the treasure!" The pirates cheered some more as they untied Grievous. The cyborg smirked. 'Now where's the treasure is for real?' thought Grievous. Then he remembered something. There is someone else on the planet, someone he hasn't seen in years. It's time he pay that someone a little visit... Meanwhile, Sora, Danny, and their friends has arrived at the spot where they parked the pod. "Okay, it should be here!" Riku exclaimed as they arrived. Suddenly to their alarm, the escape pod took off from where it landed and is heading back towards Spaceball 2. The group looks and sees Crocker at the wheel laughing madly at them. "Crocker, that insane creep!" yelled Ray-Ray upset. "So what are we going to do now? Fly towards the ship?" Kairi asked sadly. "Unless we have pixie dust and are at specific flying places, which we aren't." Sora pointed out. "Also, going up to a ship full of evil pirates to save Tommy is not a good plan unless we get more help." Donald pointed out. The group looked like they are going to give up when June sees something and pointed, "Hey look!" To their surprise, a escape pod is heading towards the planet. As they watched, the pod landed. The doors opened up and a familiar five came out. "The Kids Next Door!" exclaimed the group alarmed. "Hi everyone!" Numbuh 3 said waving. "Ha! Told ya the pod was safe!" Numbuh 2 said with a smirk. "Where are we and what in bloody heck is going on?" Numbuh 4 asked impatiently. The group explained what has happened since the Kids Next Door were assumed dead. When they finished, Numbuh 1 frowned. "I knew Grievous was not to be trusted." said Numbuh 1 with a sigh. "Come on. We got to get to Spaceball 2 now!" Danny said. "Wait for us!" The group looked and to their surprise, they see Alf, Jake, and Betty running up. "Oh great! Not you three again! Look, we don't want to become dragon food! Is that so hard?" Sam yelled in annoyance. "Hey, it's not that dog. We need your help. The queen and her posse are in trouble." Jake said. "Huh? You mean Kimi and Tommy?" asked Ariel surprised. "What happened to them?" Mickey asked. "It all started when we left that outsider with Ninjetta." explained Alf as he, Jake, and Betty got in with the others into the escape pod and it took off towards the spaceship. A few minutes ago... Earlier, in a forest almost away from the village, the tourists were looking around while Miss Information gave out some information. "We're walking, we're walking. And we're stopping for a photo opp. Here is the actual jungle location for the movie JusSonic's Treasure Planet. Okay, we're moving on. Stay together, people." said Miss Information as she and the tourists moved on. Nearby where the tourists left, Betty and Jake were spying on Tommy and Kimi's conversion. "Yo, Betty. You sure we should do this? We could get in trouble if Ninjetta catches us." Jake said in concern. Betty sighs as she holds her boyfriend's hand. "I know but I can tell that these two have a past together and are likely still be in love together. I am hoping that they may make up or something." As the two continued watching, so did Tommy and Kimi's conversion. "Of all the backwater, no-class piles of sand in this universe, you have to wash up on mine!" yelled Kimi angrily. Tommy looked sad as he said, "Kimi, I am very sorry." "Sorry? Sorry doesn't work this time, pal! You left me standing at the altar!" yelled Kimi some more. "Gimme a break! I was on a ship heading to Madagascar. And some penguins gave me cold feet." "Oh, that figures being a filmmaker and all." Kimi groaned, rolling her eyes. "You realized what embarrassment you have put me through? My mother came all the way from France after checking out her old workplace and I was wearing her white lace dress! And the cake was filled with lemon custard! Not to mention the embarrassment that, as I said before, you put me through!" Kimi begins to cry sadly. Tommy puts his hand on her shoulder and said, "Kimi, fate has brought us together again." Tommy paused, then said sheepishly, "Well actually buried treasure and pirates brought us together..." Kimi suddenly slapped Tommy's hand off and exclaimed, "Don't you get me started about pirates! After you ditch me, I took up with this guy Count Dooku! He was very wise, unlike you!" Tommy looked shocked and disbelief. "Wait, you and Count Dooku?" "Well, he was a pirate, I was a lady, you know the story." Kimi said sheepishly. Then she begins to cry, "But despite being wise, well, you know what he did? After we arrived here, he marooned me! ME!" Kimi cried loudly this time. Tommy looked shocked at this, but more shocked at what he did to her in the first place. "Oh no, what have I done? This is my fault!" Tommy groaned as he kissed her cheek while she wiped the tears off. Suddenly the two hears some snickering and kissing noises. They turned and sure enough, a familiar cyborg was smirking along with his laughing pirates. "Bravo, Pickles." chuckled Grievous. "Very touching reunion, isn't it Kimi? This seems to be your day for renewing old...acquaintances." Kimi smirked a flirty smile and said, "Oh, hello, Grievie." "It's Grievous and you knew that since we got 'involved'!" "What? Him too?" yelled Tommy in disbelief as he points at the cyborg. "Well, if you married me!" snapped Kimi as she punched Tommy in the arm. "What does that have to do with anything?" "You know I needed commitment!" Nearby, Jake and Betty is seeing this and looked concerned. "We better get Alf and the natives, right now!" Betty said. "Right. DRAGON UP!" yelled Jake as he transformed into the American Dragon. Unaware of this, Tommy continues speaking with Kimi, "How could you do it?" "Didn't you hear me? I said..." Tommy interrupts Kimi with a frown. "I mean how could you do it? The guy is a cyborg for..." Suddenly Grievous gets his lightsabers out, turning them on cutting Tommy off. "Who cares about my involvement with Finster? Now Kimi, tell me, where is the treasure!" Kimi gulped, then she sees Jake and Betty arriving, getting ready to attack with Alf and the natives. Kimi smirked and turned back to the cyborg general. "Maybe I don't have to tell you." remarked Kimi. Grievous frowned and said, "Don't play games with me, Kimi. I am not a patient man!" Suddenly a zap hits a rock near Grievous. Everyone turned to see Alf, Jake, Betty, and the natives. "Stop! Give up, weak and tiny pirate men or die like flity dogs!" yelled Alf waving his club in the air. "Boy, what big words." said Betty. "Thanks." Annoyed, Grievous takes a blaster out and fires at the cub, destroying it. "Yikes! He got a blaster!" yelped Theodore Seville. "By my calculations, I think we won't survived this encounter." observed Simon Seville. "Oh come on!" protested Alvin Seville. "We can take them! They are just..." Alvin is interrupted as the other pirates get their blasters out, pointing at the natives. "Pirates? Uh...bye bye!" The natives, except Alf, Betty, and Jake, run off like cowards. "Hey come back, yo!" protested Jake trying to call them back but they didn't returned. "Oh brother." groaned Kimi. "I should have taught them how to handle pirates with blasters. "Now once more, Kimi. Where is the treasure?" demanded Grievous as he gets closer with his lightsabers. Kimi looked up and smirked. "Ha! You are all fooled! There is no treasure! It was a clever ruse! Ha!" Grievous smirked and noticed the necklace Kimi is wearing. "If that is the case, where did you get your necklace? The one made out of Spanish Doubloons?" Grievous said nodding towards the necklace. Kimi looked down, then up. She said nervously, "Uh....shopping channel?" The pirates paused for a bit, then laughed. Then some of the pirates grabbed Tommy. "No!" gasped Kimi. "Let them go!" yelled Betty as she, Alf, and Jake were about to charged the pirates. But Kronk fires a big blaster at them, sending them all flying into the air. Present "We landed safely. Since we won't be able to saved the two like this, we decided to skip Jake's meal and come get you guys." explained Alf as the escape pod is still on its way to the escape pod. "Plus, sacrifices make my stomach hurt, yo." added Jake nodding. "Okay, first things first. Get the ship back. Then we rescued Tommy." Sora said nodding. Author's note With Tommy and Kimi captured by Grievous and his pirates, the heroes are in a race against time. Can they get Spaceball 2 back? Will Kimi be forced to tell Grievous where the treasure is at? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 28 2006, 08:39 PM Post #13 |
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The pirates are at the main deck keeping watch. They didn't noticed that the gang has returned to the spaceship via escapoe pod and managed to snuck aboard. "Say, boys," Donald said to his nephews. "I've never got to asked. How did you three ended up on Treasure Planet anyway?" "We got lost during a Woodchuck Field Trip and never found the group." explained the boys at once. "I see." The heroes sneak around the spaceship. Soon, they find Bowser Jr., Bright Heart, Grumpy, and some of the tourists struggling while Bowser Jr. yells at his usual friend. "Please Eddie! Do something useful! Save us!" Bowser Jr. yelled at Eddie in a panic. "Bowser Jr.!" The gang looked alarmed then were smiling as Sora, Danny, and the others arrived. "Sora, Danny, everyone else! You came to save us!" said Bright Heart smiling as Lilo unties him. "Maybe I should have have him live in my finger." Bowser Jr. said with a shrug. "Well, you saved us but what about the pirates?" Grumpy said with a worry. "Don't worry. We got a plan." Sora said as he begins to explain. Lilo and Stitch checked the main deck and sees that the extra pirates are still there. They went back down below as the others begin their plan. "Man, I looked awful in this!" said Numbuh 4 in disgust. Sora's plan involves dressing the Kids Next Door like zombie-like old people. "Are you guys sure this would work?" asked Numbuh 2. "By my calculations, pirates are very superstitous of ghosts or zombies." Bright Heart explained as he put the final touches on Numbuh 1. "Jake, Betty, are you ready for your part?" Danny asked Jake and Betty who are dressed in pirate outfits. "Postive, dog!" said Jake, then to Betty, "Good luck, Betty." Betty kissed Jake and said, "You too." As the pirates resumed guards, suddenly Jake and Betty ran out screaming. "Run! They're back!" cried Betty in horror as she runs past. "They have come back to haunt us all!" yelled Jake. The pirates looks confused. A pirate named Drago Wolf said, "What are they talking about?" Suddenly the pirates hears some groaning and growling. They turned and gasped horribily. The Kids Next Door has came in in their disguises as ugly old zombies. (Author's note: Just imagined their disguises the zombie old versions (and make Numbuh 1's up) from "Operation: Z.E.R.O.) "Boogie, boogie, boogie!" laughed Numbuh 2. "We are the zombies of the Kids Next Door and we have come to haunt you all until the end of time!" laughed Numbuh 1. The pirates backed away in fear, then Numbuh 3 cried out, "Boogie!" The pirates screamed in fear as they all abandoned ship via airlocks or windows, jumping towards their doom or lake. When all the evil pirates has abandoned ship, the rest of the good guys came laughing. "Man, did you see the look on their faces?" laughed Ray-Ray. "Ay. Moronic pirates they are." agreed Monroe. "That'd teach them to robbed us of our ship!" said Riku with a smirk. "Don't mess with us!" agreed Kairi. "Good job, Kids Next Door!" Mickey said, congratulatings the KND members as they got rid of the disguises. "Good thing it works. I am sweating and looked stupid in these old costumes!" complained Numbuh 4 as he takes his disguise off. "Well, this is what it is like on a ship." Alf said impressed as he looks around. "It's nothing. You should see the ship I was in when I crashed landed on Treasure Planet." Betty said as she and her boyfriend remover their pirate disguises. "Well, nothing should go..." Suddenly a lightsaber appears near Lilo's neck, interrupting her. Someone grabs her. "Lilo!" cried Stitch alarmed. The others turned and sure enough, they are shocked as they see Mr. Crocker is still on the ship, holding the lightsaber near Lilo's neck. The others tried to charged butr Crocker laughs madly. "You come here and she'd died!" laughed Crocker madly. "Crocker! How could you do this?" demanded Dash angrily. "We know you are a pirate, but this is a low holding a girl like her hostage!" "Ha ha ha! There's more to that! If you heard that Grim's story, you don't know the whole thing! You see, I....was Count Dooku's co-captain!" boomed Crocker. "What?" said the girls alarmed. "That's right! When Dooku died, I planned to get the map and get the treasure but I lost it! I should have been the captain of the mutiny pirates, not that fool Grievie! I would have had the treasure for myself so I can fund my search for....FAIRIES!" Crocker yelled doing his crazy twitch. "But thanks to Grievous and you, I couldn't become captain!" "Let go of Lilo, Crocker, or else!" yelled Riku getting his Soul Eater out. "Do what he said or else!" Minnie said holding her Keyblade out. "Try it and I will do her in! I have the advantage here!" laughed Crocker. Suddenly a bunch of wind passed by and to Crocker's surprise, he doesn't have Lilo anymore. She is now in Dash's good hands, much to her annoyance as the Super is also excited about holding her. "You were saying?" Dash asked with a smirk. "No!" yelled Crocker as he charges but suddenly Goofy knocks his lightsaber away with his shield. Then Donald calls down Thunder to knocked the pirate unconscious. "Are you all right, sweetie?" Dash said, smirking at Lilo. Suddenly Lilo punches Dash in the face, making him put Lilo down. "Eew! Don't touch me again!" yelled Lilo angrily. "First June, now this. Why?" groaned Dash. (Author's note: Sorry, Wormtail, but I can't paired Lilo with Dash. Neros Urameshi would be upset at me if I did) Later, Crocker finds himself, tied to a rocket, conscious again. "For trying to hurt our friends and associating with pirates, we decided to launch you into space!" said Tucker. "So long and good riddance!" remarked Sam. Jake Long turns into his Amwrican Dragon form and blows a fire on the ruse. Soon the rocket fired, sending a screaming Crocker into space, never to be seen again. "Well, he's taken care of, what now?" asked Kairi. "Any ideas, Sora? Danny?" June asked her friend and boyfriend. Sora looks thunderstuck. This is a first time people turned to both him and Danny for help. "Uh...check the air boards leftover?" suggested Sora. "Check the air boards leftover!" ordered Numbuh 1 as some of the good guys go to do just that. "All full!" called out Goofy checking the extra air boards. "Weight anchor!" called Danny excited. "We're on it!" yelled Tucker as he, Ray-Ray, and Monroe run over to the space anchor pulling thing. "Now, let's get our destination ready!" called out June. "And Bowser Jr." Ariel said, turning to the little koopa. "Now, Ms. Ariel, I..." said Bowser Jr. nervously, thinking she will make him do something crazy. "You take the helm." Upon hearing that, Bowser Jr. smiled. "All right! Move over, Eddie! I'd take the helm!" "Hurry, you guys!" said Tucker as he pushed on the wheel to help get the space anchor up. "We're doing the best we can!" said Ray-Ray annoyed as he and Monroe held onto the wheel, not moving their feet as they are held high above the spaceship floor. Back on the planet, Kimi watched in horrible as Tommy is being hung upside down towards the rocks below. Grievous and his men are nearby enjoying this. "I hope he can fly!" crowed Draco as the other pirates laughed. "No! Don't hurt Tommy!" protested Kimi. She may be angry that he left her at the altar, but not that angry. "I will spare him. You know what I want." Grievous said. "No! Don't tell him anything, Kimi! He'd killed you too!" yelled Tommy, trying to convince her not to talked. "Now for the last time, where is the treasure?" snapped Grievous. Kimi looks as Grievous raises his lightsaber into the air about to slash the rope that will send Tommy to his doom. Before he could do the evil deed, Kimi yelled out. "Stop! I'd talked! The treasure is at my place! North trail, split-level huts, the one with the Japanese lawn furniture, you can't miss it!" said Kimi, giving out the details. "Now you let them go!" Grievous smirked and picked Kimi up. Suddenly he opens his mask and kissed her with his real face. As the pirates laughed, Grievous set Kimi down. Kimi spits out in disgust. "Now I know why I don't kissed him anymore!" yelled Kimi. Sure enough, like Tommy has warned, Kimi finds erself tied upside next to her old boyfriend about to await her doom. "You know, I am now seeing the pattern in the men I date." Kimi said with a frown. "Well, look at the bright side. The past is behind us." Tommy gulped as he looks down. "And the future below us." Kimi begins to cry sadly. Tommy comforted her as he said, "It's okay, Kimi. We're together again." Kimi smiles, while she's still crying, "Yes. Despite it all, we have each other." Kimi begins to cry again. Tommy sighs. "Don't cry for me, Kimi." "Huh?" asked Kimi as she stopped crying and looked puzzled. As the ropes are slowly burning cut by a candle the pirates has left behind, Tommy begins to sing. Tommy: Was I dumb or was I blind Or did my heart just lose its mind Why'd I go and throw Our perfect dream away Kimi smiles as she begins to sing as well. Kimi: Looking back I'll never know How I ever let you go But destiny could see we deserved To have another day As the ropes continued to burn, they now sing at the same time. As they do, Grievous and his men just arrived at Kimi's place and is delighted upon finding the treasure, lots of it hanging around. Both: Love led us here Right back to where we belong We followed a star and here we are Now heaven seems so near Love led us here Meanwhile, the pirates cheered and threw the gold all around, going happy nuts. Tommy: Now I know that life Can take you by surprise And sweep you off your feet Kimi: Did this happen to us Both: Or are we just dreaming As Tommy and Kimi sings some more, the pirates celebrated some more. Both: Love led us here Right back to where we belong We followed a star and here we are Now heaven seems so near Love led us here As the ropes continued burning, Tommy held his hand out for Kimi to take. Tommy: So take my hand Kimi smiles as she takes Tommy's hand, both are smiling to each other. Kimi: And have no fear Both: We'll be all right Love led us Here Suddenly the candle burned Kimi's ropes causing her to fall and screamed. Luckily, Tommy grabs her just in time. Kimi screamed, then stopped. She looked up and sees that Tommy has saved her. "Tommy! You have saved me!" said Kimi happily. "Yeah, but who's going to save us?" yelped Tommy, knowing that his ropes is going to get loose very soon. Author's note Looks like one couple is about together, but unless Sora, Danny, and their friends saved them soon, they may not be together alive for long! Read and review as this story continues! |
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| Movie-Man | Sep 29 2006, 01:03 AM Post #14 |
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Um JusSonic, do you have any problems using Freedom of Speech Fan Fiction? The website isn't working on my computer. |
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| Kimi12715 | Sep 29 2006, 05:47 AM Post #15 |
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Is that an insult to this message board, to JusSonic or am I misunderstanding? |
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