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| JusSonic's Treasure Planet; A parody of the Muppets and Disney stuff | |
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| Movie-Man | Sep 29 2006, 12:34 PM Post #16 |
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| JusSonic | Sep 29 2006, 05:07 PM Post #17 |
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| JusSonic | Sep 29 2006, 06:58 PM Post #18 |
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The pirates journey through the forest with the treasure they have found, unaware of what's happen to Spaceball 2. "Now that the treasure is ours, time we return to the ship!" boomed Grievous. "The treasure is ours!" cheered Nagini. "Let's get on our ship!" said Draco with a smirk. As they reached the beach where their escape pods are at, they see something unexpected in the sky. "Hey, what's that?" asked Crabbe pointing. "It's Spaceball 2!" gasped Goyle as the ship itself came into view. "What are they doing?" asked Coconuts confused. "There is no one on board!" Grounder said in concern. With a frown, Grievous takes out a telescope and looked through it. Sure enough, there doesn't seem to be anyone working on the ship. The pirates are scared for a very very good reason. "It's coming for us! It's the ghost of Count Dooku!" yelled Crabbe and Goyle at once. "He's coming to killed us!" screamed Kronk like a girl. The pirates screamed and run away like cowards. Grievous is still behind looking at them furiously. "Come back here, you cowards!" Grievous yelled, shaking his metal hand at him angrily. He turns to looked at the ship in fury. There are only two kids who would dare challenged him. "Sora....Daniel." On the spaceship, the crew, who managed to avoid being seen, are looking for Tommy and Kimi. Betty looked out a window and points. "There! It's that Tommy Kid with Ninjetta!" said Betty. The crew looked out and sure enough, there are Tommy still holding Kimi, about to take their big fall. "Steer us towards cliff, young turtle." Jumba instructed. "Aye, aye, sir!" said Bowser Jr. saluting as he does so. "Grumpy! We're going to need a net!" exclaimed Bright Heart to his bear friend. "Right!" said Grumpy as he runs to get it. Back on the planet, Grievous goes to his trembling men and starts yelling, "You idiots! Get going! I am not losing the treasure now!" The pirates obeyed and runs back to the treasure. Back on the spaceship, Bright Heart and Grumpy gets the net into position as the rope holding Tommy begins to break. "Hold it steady!" insturcted Sora. "Careful!" added Danny. Kimi looked up sadly as the rope is going to break soon. "Goodbye, Tommy. I loved you." said Kimi sadly. "Me too." said Tommy nodding. Suddenly the rope broke and the two begin falling downward yelling. "We've got you!" yelled Tucker. "Don't worry!" Riku added. "Oh, ho, ho! Yes!" said Bright Heart with a smile. However they just fell to the front of the ship, making the good guys gasped. "No!" yelled Kairi as she and the others run to that side of the ship, expecting a bloody mess. But to their surprise, they see that Tommy and Kimi are okay and are in the hands of some surprising saviors. "Lou, you old fool! We're heroes! We've saved Tommy and Kimi!" Said Grandpa Brosi in amazement. "Well, it's too late to save this story." remarked Grandpa Lou. The old people laughed while Tommy and Kimi looked somewhat embarrassed. "Hey, Tommy!" said Sora waving. "Hey you two!" Danny said with a smile. "And welcome board your lady girlfriend." Numbuh 1 said with a smiled. Goofy and Donald looked and gasped. "Look out!" Everyone looked and see that they are about to collide into the beach. The good guys run to the back as Bowser Jr. tries to get the ship back under control. As the pirates, forced by Grievous, returned to the ship, they looked and run back just as the spaceship collided with the beach. Try as he might, Bowser Jr. couldn't stopped it. After a big bump, Tommy and Kimi fell from the old people's arms and into the forest. The two got up a bit peeved. "Well, that was exciting." said Kimi sarcastically. Back on the spaceship, the Kids Next Door gets their weapons and Tommy's lightsaber. "Tommy is going to need his lightsaber! Alf, Betty, and Jake! You get the natives!" Numbuh 1 said to the said three. "Right!" said Alf, Betty, and Jake. "Kids Next Door, Battle Stations!" yelled Numbuh 1 as he and the other Kids Next Door jumped off the spaceship. As Alf, Betty, and Jake got off and goes to get the natives, the KND fights off the evil pirates with their home made weapons. Gizmo fights Numbuh 3 off with his machinery. He grabs and laughed but Numbuh 4 came from out of nowhere and destroys Gizmo's backpack. Then he kicked the pirate unconscious. "Don't attack my girl, ya bum!" snapped Numbuh 4 angrily. "Oh, Numbuh 4! Does this mean that you like me?" giggled Numbuh 3 as she hugged Numbuh 4 happily, making the boy blushed. "Any of my experiments not be fighting, do so now!" yelled Jumba loud enough for the experiments to hear him. Sure enough, his experiments arrived as they begin to fight the pirates. Meanwhile, Danny, Sora, their friends, and Bowser Jr. jumped off the ship and goes into battle. "Going ghost!" yelled Danny as he transforms into Danny Phantom. Tommy and Kimi finds themselves under assault by Grounder trying to drilled Tommy in but kept missing. "Tommy, catch!" yelled Numbuh 1 as he tosses the lightsaber to Tommy. The boy grabs it, turns it on, and cuts Grounder's drills right of. "Ha ha!" laughed Tommy. Suddenly Kimi jumps in and punches Grounder down onto the ground. "Okay! No more Ms. Nice Guy!" yelled Kimi angrily. As Tommy watched, Kimi charges at Dr. Wily holding a piece of gold, "No one maroons me and gets away with it!" With some karate screams, she kicks Dr. Wily in the chest. Then she attacked Scratch, kicking him down. Homer screamed like a girl while Coconuts chases after him, trying ot hit him with his explosive coconuts. "Run all you want, you can't escape coconuts!" mocked Coconuts. "It's you who should be running!" yelled Minnie as she jumps in and hits Coconut with a Keyblade. His coconuts went up, blewing the robot into pieces. "Phew. Thanks, nice mousey." Homer said in relief. Dash runs around and knocks his enemies down like they are nothing to him. One of the pirates tries to assault Stitch but Angel headbutts him right into a wall. "Thanks, Angel." said Stitch smiling. "Yeah, Stitch!" said Angel smiling back. Tommy and the Kids Next Door reunited to fight off the evil pirates. "Glad to see you five alive!" yelled Tommy over the fighting. "The same to you, Tommy!" agreed Numbuh 2. Count Olaf, Flotsam, Jetsam, and Ganondorf glares at they confront Rikochet, Buena Girl, and the Flea. "Let's see you defeat us you little brats!" snarled Count Olaf as he gets his sword out. "Yes." challenged the eels. "We will! Pulverizing Pinball!" yelled Rikochet as he turns into a giant pinball suddenly knocking Count Olaf down. "Buena Bulldozer Of Truth!" Buena Girl called out as she turns into a bulldozer and knock Ganondorf down before he could attack. "Taste the wrath of the Flea's stench!" yelled the Flea as he gives out his stink. The eels gasped in horror as they fainted. Meanwhile, Captain Kuro, Crabbe, and Goyle attacked Danny and Sora. Sora fends off the pirates with the Keyblade while Danny shoots out blasts. During the battle, Crabbe and Goyle accidentally hit Captain Kuro with their lightsabers. "Watch it, you idiots!" snapped Captain Kuro angrily at the two. "Sorry!" apologized Crabbe and Goyle as they go back to 'work'. Goofy glares as he is confronted by the mummy Skeeter. The goof got into a stance. "Mi casa es su casa!" said Goofy in weird talk. "I will make Egyptian food out of you! Come on!" demands Skeeter. "De Soto! Hiyah!" yelled June as she jumps out of nowhere. "Not you again!" yelped Skeeter. He was too late to try to get away as June kicks him, then, with Goofy's help, she threw a bunch of starfish at him, pinning him to the ship. "Cucaracha!" yelled June, then she smirks. "Ha!" "Hi! Are you in this story too?" asked Patrick to Skeeter from where he pinned the mummy at. "Come on, Kuro, they are just kids!" snapped Grievous as the pirates continues Danny and Sora. Kuro charges Sora but Danny grabs the Keyblade holder and went invisible, making Kuro go through them. They went normal and Danny hits the pirate with a blast, knocking him out. The two turned to Crabbe and Goyle who are freaked out about this. "Uh, Uncle, uncle!" yelped Crabbe. "Uh, we're dead." said Goyle quickly as he and Crabbe fainted. With shrugs, Danny and Sora goes over to help the other fight the pirates. Soon, Alf, Betty, and Jake returns, Betty in her Galactic Guardian form while Jake is American Dragon again. "Eh, what's going on, Doc?" asked Bugs. "Like this party has already started!" said Michelangelo with a smirk. "Then let's make this party some real time, yo!" Jake said, then he said, "Let's do this!" Cowabunga!" yelled Michelangelo as he, the leaders, and the other naitves goes into battle. Author's note The tide has turned. Will the good guys win this round? 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| Movie-Man | Sep 29 2006, 07:22 PM Post #19 |
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Ok good but it keeps giving me this Diese Seite ist vorübergehend nicht erreichbar. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 30 2006, 05:12 PM Post #20 |
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| JusSonic | Sep 30 2006, 05:53 PM Post #21 |
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As the story continues, Bowser Jr. yelped as he runs into Fawful. "Finkrats!" laughed Fawfkul as he gets his lightsaber ready for battle. "Help me, Eddie!" screamed Bowser Jr. as he fights off Fawful with his lightsaber. Inside the ship, Bright Heart and Grumpy get sa cannon ready for firing. "Okay, ready Grumpy?" called out Bright Heart. "Ready, Bright Heart!" said Grumpy his finger over a button. "Fire!" Grumpy presses the button and the cannon went off, sending a cannonball at a tree. Fawful stopped as a tree, destroyed by the cannonball, crashed onto him, knocking him unconscious. Bowser Jr., unaware of what happened because he has his eyes closed, opened his eyes and sees Fawful defeated. "Eddie! You have great swordplay!" Bowser Jr. told Eddie impressed, thinking Eddie has defeated Fawful. "Good job, Grumpy!" Bright Heart told his friend with a smile. Tommy and the Kids Next Door are fighitng off Anti-Cosmo, Anti-Wanda, Draco, and Kronk. Suddenly the good guys looked and gasped as they see the Elric brothers charging. "Look out, you guys!" yelled Tommy alarmed. But alarm turned to surprise as Edward and Alphonse suddenly gave the smackdown to the attacking pirates knocking them unconscious. "Why thank you." Tommy said surprised. "But aren't you two supposed to be fighting against us?" "Are you kidding? We loved you guys!" said Alphonse. "Besides, I am have it up to here with their short jokes!" said Edward annoyed. "You ain't the only one, bub." agreed Numbuh 4. Meanwhile, some of the good guys succeeded in taking down the other pirates. Speedy Gonzalez runs around the Headless Horseman distracting him while Ren Hoek pushed the pirate off his horse. Greasy chases after Big Fat Ugly Bug-Faced Baby Eating BG. "I am only looked like a woman!" yelled the pirate with a scream. Banzai finds himself captived and forced to a tea party by a delighted Numbuh 3. Numbuh 1 looks around. "Cowabunga!" Numbuh 1 turned to see Nagini jumped towards him. He got out of the way in time for the snake to crashed into a tree and falling to the ground. "Come on and fight!" Do you want a piece of me?" groaning Nagini. "Yo, dude." said Michelangelo appearing as he backhanded the snake back into the tree, knocking him unconscious. "I am the only one who says that, dude." Meanwhile, Kimi punches and kicks Really Really Big Man. Then, Kimi kisses the pirate, making him faint. She then turned to Grievous. "And as for you..." She stopped as Grievous gets his lightsabers out and points each at her, making her gulp. "Grievous!" The cyborg turned and sees Tommy standing up a tree nearby glaring. Then he jumps off and begins to bounced up higher each time he lands. Then with some quick moves, he knocks Grievous's three lightsabers away from him. Tommy lands and slashed at Grievous like a crazy man. "Why don't you picked on someone your own size?" demands Tommy. Grievous growled then assaults Tommy with his remaining lightsaber. The two fights on for a few seconds. Then laughing, Tommy begins cutting off the buttons of Grievous's coat, alarming him. Grievous angrily swings his sword at him again but Tommy blocks it. Then he jumped off a cut Grievous's hat in half. The pirate looks embarrassed. "Not bad for a kid!" joked Tommy with a smile. "Tommy, Tommy, he's our man! If he can't do it, no one can! Yay!" cheered Babs Bunny, Shirly the Loon, and Fifi La Fume via their cheerleader oufits. Tommy shows off his lightsaber skills, smirking. Grievous only rolled his eyes and said, "Excuse me?" "Huh?" Unfortunately, the lightsaber slips from Tommy's hand and lands between Skeeter's leg from where he's at still trapped, making the mummy gulped. Numbuh 1 groaned in annoyance just as Nagini got up again. Of course, Numbuh 1 backhanded him this time, knocking the snake out again. Tommy looks embarrassed as he said, "Uh, well, I got slippy hands, and you see..." Tommy was interrupted as Grievous points his lightsaber to Tommy's neck. The boy gulped as he said, "I never said violence could solved anything anyway." "Really? Well, allow me to disagree, captain." mocked Grievous. Before Grievous could go in for the key, the cyborg finds himself pinned by Sora's Keyblade and Danny's glowing hand. "Kill Tommy and you'd have to kill me!" said Sora with a stern look. "Same here!" agreed Danny. Suddenly one by one, their friends came over, pinning their friends on the cyborg captain. "Kill them and you'd have to killed us!" said Riku pointing his Soul Eater at Grievous. "Yeah!" agreed Tucker, Sam, Monroe, Ray-Ray, Kairi, Mickey, and Minnie. "Kill Sora and Danny's friends and you'd have to killed me." said Lilo with Stitch nearby growling. "Kill Lilo and you'd have to killed me!" Dash said with a frown. "Kill Dash and you will have to killed me!" said Goofy pointing this shield at Grievous. "Kill Goofy and you'd have to kill me!" said Bowser Jr. pointing a sword at Grievous's neck. "Kill Bowser Jr. and Eddie and you, uh, have to negotate strenuously." said Donald a bit nervous. Grievous tried to make a getaway but his escape has must blocked of by Kimi and the natives. "Going somewhere, Grievie?" asked Kimi with a smirk as the natives, Alf, Jake, and Betty pointed at the cyborg with their weapons. Seeing that he finds himself surrounded, Grievous nodded and turns his lightsaber off. "Well, Sora, Daniel, it seems your little family has come together against me." said Grievous with a sigh. He gives up his last lightsaber, making the heroes and tourists cheered happily. The heroes rounded up Grievous and his pirate henchmen and locked them in the prison area, to be expecting trial when they returned home. "We'd doomed!" groaned Gizmo in a miserable way. "Well, I got to say that I feel better about myself!" said Crabbe getting an annoyed look from his fellow pirates. "And I think I leanred a valuable lesson." said Goyle agreeing with Crabbe. "Why you idiots!" yelled Draco angrily. "Get them! Finkrats" yelled Fawful as he and the other pirates attacked the two angrily. "Ouch! Ouch! What did we do?" yelped Crabbe as he and Goyle get pounded. In a separate cell, as suggested by Sora and Danny, Grievous is in there with a sigh. Then he remembered something and took out the keys he has stolen a while before still on him. He chuckled evilly as he waits. Late that night, the good guys were fast asleep. Sora and Danny were sleeping at the main deck went something woke them up. They got up and checks to see what it is. The noise came from the escape pod area. When they arrived, they gasped as they see a familisr cyborg loading two treasure chests into his pod. "Grievous!" yelled Sora and Danny at once. Grievous turned as he sees that he has been caught. He narrowed his eyes as Sora reached for the alarm button. "Are you two going to sound the alarm on me?" He asked. "We might." said Sora with a frown. "You got to return to Earth to stand trial." Danny said sternyl. Grievous chuckled as he gets out a blaster. "Sorry you two. I don't like to be hanging or executed." Grievous glared at the two, expecting them to sound the alarm. They just stay where they're at. Grievous glared some more as he said, "Come on, you two. We're shipmates, right? Gentlemen of fortune, together? Give us one more chance, please?" Sora and Danny did not respond but only glared. Sora reached closely to the alarm button while Grievous prepares to fired. But then the cyborg sighs sadly as he puts his blaster down. "Aw heck, you two. I could never harmed either of you." said Grievous. Both Sora and Danny coulda sworn that they are seeing him crying. "You're both honest, brave, and true. You didn't learn that from me, I suppose." "No, we've learned it from our friends, Grievous." said Sora, tears forming from his eyes. "Our girlfriends, Tommy, the Kids Next Door, and our true friends. Now...go and take that escape pod, Grievous. I never want to see you again, ever!" said Danny as he cries. "That goes for me too." said Sora nodding. Grievous looked deeply effected by this outburst. With a sigh, Grievous finished up loading and gets into the escape pod. He stops as he takes out something. "Oh, Sora? Catch!" Grievous throws something to Sora who caught it. Sora looked and looks surprised as he sees that it is his compass, the one his own parents passed down to him and that Grievous stole back on Treasure Planet. "It is a shame, really. We would have made a great team, you two and I." said Grievous. With that said, Grievous closes the door and launched the pod. Sora and Danny sighs as they watched the cyborg, who is both their friend and enemy, leave from their lives forever. "Well done, you two." The two turned to see Tommy and the others appearing. Tommy was the one who spoke. "Sora, your parents woulda been proud. Danny, your father woulda been proud." "Ariel and I are both proud of you." said June smiling. She came over and kissed Danny, who kissed her right back. "Yeah." agreed Ariel as she kisses Sora who kissed right back. "Uh, Numbuh 5 don't want to ruined this moment," said Numbuh 5 as she and the other KND members appeared. "But did Grievous took pod 13?" "Yeah, I think so." said Danny as he stopped kissing June. "Why?" "Aw man! I messed up that pod! The oxygen tank has went wrong and the engines has been out of order for a while! Who knows what would happened if not treated?" groaned Numbuh 2. "Aww, what would happened?" said Numbuh 3 smiling. Suddenly an explosion is heard. The group looked as they see a flaming escape pod, Grievous's, heading back to Treasure Planet. "You have to asked." Numbuh 4 said shaking his head. Back on Treasure Planet, Grievous tries his best to swooped the water of the ocean he crashed landed in out of his escape pod, trying to save himself and the treasure. But he realized that it is futile now. His only option now is to swim to the island the treasure was buried on and be marooned there...for the rest of his life. Author's note Story's almost done! One more chapter and this story's history! Read and review! |
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| Movie-Man | Sep 30 2006, 06:12 PM Post #22 |
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Oh, it works; thank you. So in return, would you like to work on a parody I have in mind with me? |
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| JusSonic | Oct 1 2006, 12:10 PM Post #23 |
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Epilogue: The next day, some of the Smurfs, Tigger, and Baby Gonzo are having fun twirling Bowser Jr. around on the helm. "Ahh! Hey, knock it off! This isn't fun!" screamed Bowser Jr. as he keeps getting spinning around. "My turn! Woo woo woo woo woo!" laughed Tigger as he spins Bowser Jr. around next. Sitting in a chair, Tommy and Kimi kissed each other as the Kids Next Door came by. "We're ready to continue the voyage, captain." said Numbuh 1 saluting. "Good. Where to do, Captains Sora and Danny?" Tommy asked his friend with a smile. Sora smiles as he and Danny faced the window of space. "To wherever the galaxy can take us!" Sora exclaimed. "Right! To Zanzibar to the fight Zanzibarbarians!" agreed Danny. "And meet the Zanzibabes!" exclaimed Tucker happily. "Oh brother. Here we go again." remarked Donald then he laughed. Dash watched as the couples on the ship kissed each other and danced. He groans. "Aw, man. I didn't get a single girl during this whole trip." said Dash with a sigh. "Hi." Dash turned to see Jake Long's sister, Haley. Haley smiles as she said, "You're cute. Wanna danced with me?" Then Haley kissed Dash on the cheek making him blush. "Then again." As the Peanuts gang performed, the heroes and the natives danced as the spaceball Spaceball 2 continued on its voyage back home or wherever. No matter where the galaxy takes them, they have each other and will help each other for the rest of their lives. Meanwhile, some tourists has found some of the treasure lost by Grievous and teleported it back into the ship. The End (Carribean music) Chorus: Love power Love power Love power A little love power Stronger than the hurricane And softer than the summer rain Love power What kind of power A little love power It can lift you up Lift you up when you get low And make your life bright as the rainbow Whoa-oh There ain't no sun in the morning sky Whoa oh-oh-oh-oh Breeze ain't blowing and the bird don't fly Whoa oh-oh-oh-oh Then someone kind reaches out a hand And smiles a warm sweet smile And then your heart come to understand What make the world spin Where do magic begin Someone to believe in Feel so good when everybody feels Love power There's no higher power A little love power Nothing in the world Stronger than the hurricane And softer than the summer rain Oh, love power Everybody, feel it A little love power Oh-oh-oh-oh Lift you up when you get low And make your life bright as the rainbow Whoa-oh So many people they feel so bad Whoa oh-oh-oh-oh Yeah, they make the money but they still so sad Whoa oh-oh-oh-oh Nobody told them that it ain't that stuff That makes life worthwhile 'Cause even if you've got enough You got less than nothing till you know for certain Enough to put your faith in It feels so good when everybody feels Love power People, can you feel it A little love power Lift you up when you get low And make your life bright as the rainbow Let me tell you now Whoa-oh Feel the inspiration Hey Don't it feel like heaven It make the soul and the spirit strong When everybody come and every single one They hear the song now Oh, love power A little love power Stronger than the hurricane And softer than the summer rain Can you feel it, oh Love power What kind of power A little love power It can lift you up Lift you up when you get low And make your life bright as the rainbow One love Lift you up when you get low And make your life bright as the rainbow Back on the island on Treasure Planet, Grievous is eating some bananas while listening to a Jinjo left behind. "So, Grievie? Can I call you Grievie?" asked the Jinjo. Grievous did not respond as the Jinho continues. "Stop me if you heard this one. Why does the ocean roar?" Grievous did not bother to respond. Jinjo then said, "Give up? You would too, if you have crabs on your bottom and oysters in your bed!" Grievous rolled his eyes as the Jinjo laughed. "Get it? Oysters? Bed? Man, I loved that one! I'm telling you. I got a million more like that one!" The Jinjo said still laughing. Grievous just groaned. He would rather have prison time than to suffered to this! But now, he has a more dreadul feeling that he is really is going to be here for a long long time time. Was I dumb Or was I blind Or did my heart just lose its mind Why'd I go and throw Our perfect dream away Oh, looking back I'll never know How I ever let you go But destiny could see we deserve To have another day Love led us here Right back to where we belong We followed a star and here we are Now heaven seems so near Love led us here [Love led us here] Ooh I confess It's sad but true [Sad but true] I lost myself when I lost you But I held your memory Through each lonely night Oh, let's forget What's gone before [What's gone] Now we both know so much more [So much more] And we've been given another chance To make it work out right [Make it work] Love led us here Right back to where we belong We followed a star and here we are Now heaven seems so near Love led us here Now I know that life can take you by surprise And sweep you off your feet Did this happen to us Or are we just dreamin' [Dreamin'] We followed a star and here we are Now heaven seems so near Love led us here So take my hand And have no fear We'll be all right Love led us Here Author's note Good story! The last songs came from the credits. I hope you enjoyed this story as I did making it. Read and review! |
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