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| JusSonic | Sep 30 2006, 10:34 PM Post #16 |
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Kimi and Danho looked through their binoculars back at the ship, waiting for Arnda to returned with the trapped Jedi. But so far, he has yet to returned. "I have a bad feeling about this." said Kimi frowning as she puts her binoculars down. "He has been gone for a long time." "Aw, relax, Kimi." said Danho putting his binoculars down. "He's a Jedi Master and he can handled himself. He did saved Obi-Tim and Tommy from Count Christopher after all." "True..." "Besides, I am sure if football head woulda needed our help, he would have asked for it by now." C-REN explains. "Are you sure?" asked Kimi still concerned. "Travelling in this insane blizzard is a common place for a Jedi, not for a senator!" "I'd better go run a dianostic on the communication array. The weather is causing us problems." Danho said as he goes back into the ship to do so. Kimi pauses to think, then looked at C-REN and R2-SY. "Quick question: does this weather infect your sensors?" Kimi asked the droids. "No, why?" asked C-REN with a frown. "Happy happy, joy joy." said R2-SY saying no as well. "Good. Now let's go find Arnda." said Kimi as she heads out. "Now wait! You can't go alone! Not a beautiful girl like you!" protested C-REN in alarm. "No, you two will come with me." "Yay!" said R2-SY happily, sticking his tongue out. "Ugh." groaned C-REN as he followed Kimi and his fellow idiot out into the cold. Further out in the blizzard, the group continues walking while looking for Arnda. Just then, R2-SY's sensors beeped. "Beep whistle...toadstool...whistle!" called out R2-SY. "What is it, R2?" Kimi asked as he turns to him. "Gah! There are a bunch of things coming from over there!" yelped C-REN as he points to the right. "I don't see..." Kimi was interrupted as lasers came from out of nowhere, forcing the three to run for group. "I knew this was a stupid idea!" screamed C-REN.. The three managed to hide behind an ivy rock. Kimi sticked her head out while getting her blaster ready. She looks and frowns. "They are obviously invisible, but how to get them to come out?" asked Kimi with a frown. Then she smiles, coming up with an idea. She took her fur coat off and threw it far from her. Suddenly the lasers from the invisible Cluster chameleon bots came out. "Take this!" yelled Kimi as she fired at where the lasers are coming from. She managed to his a chameleon bot, destroying it. "Not happy, no joy!" yelled R2-SY. "R2 said that there are two more out there!" explained C-REN. "Two more?" said Kimi with a frown. Then she smiles and said to C-REN, "C-REN, will you get my coat for me?" "Well..." "Please?" asked Kimi giving the cute eyes to C-REN. "Aw, heck! Anything for you!" said C-REN, not resisting those eyes. He goes out to get the coat. Suddenly lasers fired at him again, missing him. The Cluster chameleon bots appeared in front of him. C-REN screams like a mad psycho, grabs Kimi's coat and makes a run for it. Kimi takes out a bomb and throws it at the Cluster chameleon bots. C-REN fell out of the way just as the robots themselves exploded. C-REN is not lucky but for a safely reason: he is buried in the snow. "Get me out of this stinking snow!" yelled C-REN, his voice muffled a bit. Kimi laughed as she takes her coat back, "Thanks, C-REN." With R2-SY's help, Kimi gets C-REN out of the snow. The dog droid glares at the cat droid laughing. "Laugh it up, you idiot! But when we get home, I will give you something to laughed about!" snapped C-REN angriloy. R2-SY's sensors picked up something and said, "Whistle beep...gangplank!" "What is it now?" asked Kimi in alert. "There's something coming!" yelled C-REN as he looked in a direction. Kimi gets her gun ready for firing. But then she sees what the 'something' was: a familiar Jedi appearing with two female Jedi. "Master Arnda!" said Kimi happily as she run up to him with the droids in tow. "Man, I'm glad you are okay." "My mission was successful and the Jedi are safe." said Arnda smiling. "We were lucky he arrived." Tootie said. "But my heart is in pain." said Arnda sadly. "What's wrong?" asked Kimi in concern. "The temple was nearly destroyed. Someone has revealed its secret location. Bu who?" R2-SY hacked into a destroyed Cluster chameleon bot, searching its memory banks. Suddenly a hologram appears from the cat droid, a hologram of a certain former Jedi. "The temple is on the planet Ilum. Destroy it when you arrived." "Christopher." said Arnda, narrowing his eyes as he glares at the hologram of the former Jedi Count Christopher. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 30 2006, 10:52 PM Post #17 |
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Elsewhere in space, Tommy's starfighter has jumped out of hyperspace, arriving above the jungle moon of Yavin 4. After looking it over, he speaks to his robot. "Did you have position?" Tommy asked anxiously. The robot responded. Tommy then said, "Well we better continue the immediate area on foot." Soon Tommy heads to the jungle moon and lands in a clearing. Tommy got out of his starfighter to begin hsi search for that rogue fighter. "Stay in here. This shouldn't last long," Tommy instructed the robot still in the starfighter. Tommy goes into the forest, looking for the attacker. After a few seconds or so, he hears firing sounds. "What is that?" yelled Tommy. He runs back to the clearing. When he arrives, he sees something that doesn't make him happy: a familiar trooper's ship landing. When it does, the door opened and the X-Clone Troopers came out, getting their weapons prepared. "Secure the area!" ordered the X-Clone Commander. "Commander." said Tommy in annoyance as he comes over. "Commander Skywalker." said the X-Clone Commander as he salutes. "General Kenobi?" guessed Tommy before the commander could say who send him. "Yes sir." "Gave you orders to follow me?" "Yes sir." Tommy frowns. His master never trusts him anymore to do things on this own. But Tommy does not know what he will be facing out on the jungle moon so having some help would make sense. "All fight, have some men protect the ships!" ordered Tommy. "The rest of you, encircle the clearing. Get ready to sweep the jungle." The X-Clones obeyed as they do their tasks, leaving some of them to protet the ships. A storm was coming beginning to rain down. In the jungle, Tommy looked high and low for the rogue fighter. The X-Clone Troopers aren't doing much lucky and after a few experiences, they won't get any luck ever again. This is because of the reasons following. One of the troopers was pushed into the bushes. Another X-Clone Trooper noticed and gets his weapon ready. But then he yelled as he was pulled down. In another area, a X-Clone was suddenly floated, hitting a tree twice before being tossed away. Another trooper sees this and aimed, but he was pulled by the leg and got dragged off as he yells. In the swamp area, another X-Clone was thrown into the water. Tommy, who was in the area as well, starting to noticed. "He're here!" yelled Tommy. In another part of the forest, a trooper's gun got crushed. The trooper himself got banged into a tree and tossed. Another one was dropped down while another was thrown into the air with a yell. During this whole attack, the troopers were either tossed, hit, or gotten rid of. Either way, they were doomed. Tommy sees a helmet falling out into the clearing he's in. "Something is not right. I can fell it." said Tommy frowning. Suddenly he hears a scream of a trooper getting dragged off to his dom. Tommy runs as faster as he could. He returns to where the ships are at. "Troopers? What's going on?" demands Tommy. He looks and sees another trooper getting back up. "Are you all right?" "Yeah, sir." nodded the X-Clone Trooper. "What happened? WHere are the others?" Before the X-Clone could respond, the X-Clones' ship exploding, killing the trooper with it. Tommy gasped. He turned but faces another explosion as his own starfighter exploded, taking his robot with it. The remains landed near Tommy. "Who is doing this? That crazy guy fighter?" yelled out TOmmy. "I am." Tommy turned to see a bunch of flames being pushed aside by a cloaked figure. The figure glares as it came closer, stopping near him. "And also," The figure removes her hood to revealed herself to be Azula, "I am a girl, stupid! My nake is Azula Ventress." Tommy glares as he said, "I don't care who you are! Taking people's lives, even if they are X-Clones, is wrong. And I won't stand for it! You're going to pay for what you did!" Azula laughed as she said, "Come, Padawan! Your fall will be my ascension to the Sith!" Azula gets her lightsabers out and turned them on. Glaring, Tommy gets his own lightsaber out with his robotic hand, the one that replaced his real one which was cut off by Count Christopher when the war started, and turned it on. The two looked at each other. Then they jumped and begins fighting, clashing with their ligthsabers as they fight. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 4 2006, 04:18 PM Post #18 |
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Azula and Tommy continued fighting fiercely. Tommy kept trying to hit Azula, only for her to block with the lightsabers she held. He continued as Azula jumped and Tommy tried slashing her, only for the wicked girl to keep blocking his attacks. She also tried attacking as the two fought fiercly to each other. Tommy lifted his lightsaber, but then Azula used the Force to knock him back to a tree. Tommy looked as Azula tried to slash him, but she only hit the tree as Tommy turned invisible and jumped out of the way. As he landed about a yard away from her, the tree Azula sliced fell to the ground while she jumped and was a few feet away from Tommy. The boy used the Force, but Azula saw it coming and blocked it barely. She looked up and saw Tommy about to jump toward her. Azula then looked to her left and used the Force to throw the broken tree pieces to Tommy, only for him to slice them. He landed on the ground, looking back as he saw the big piece coming to him. He ducked just in time for it to miss. Another piece tried hitting him, but Tommy slashed it. Then at two more pieces coming his way. He then glared at Azula. Unfortunately, he was hit by another tree piece, clashing to the tree with it. He shoved it just as Azula was jumping and preparing to slash Tommy, but he blocked it. The duel was becoming fierce as Azula tried hitting Tommy, only for him to keep blocking her every attack. Finally, Tommy shoved his saber down to the one in Azula's right hand, knocking it off of her. She glared as she tried slashing him again, but he shoved the other lightsaber off of her. Azula was mad as Tommy charged toward the evil woman. He slashed, just missing Azula as she jumped away from her. He looked up and saw Azula heading up the branches through the leaves. Tommy then looked at the first lightsaber he knocked away from her being pulled to Azula like a magnet. He saw the other one going up as well through the leaves. Tommy then flew up and landed on the huge branch Azula was supposedly on. He looked around, but saw no sign of her while Azula hid behind the tree at his level. She then snapped her fingers and the branch collapsed with Tommy falling. Fortunately, Tommy used the Force to make the vine fall and he grabbed it quickly. He then swung back up the tree, only for Azula to pass by and cut the vine. Tommy then landed on the branch. Azula was at the opposite branch, then both of them got up as they glared at each other. Azula then dashed through the connected branches as Tommy chased her. They then both jumped from branch to branch, maneuvering and switching sides as they landed at another branch each. They finally jumped to one branch and resumed their lightsaber duel, clashing their lightsabers to each other. Then, Azula kicked Tommy off, letting him fall. But he grabbed another vine and swung from her. She jumped one tree to him as Tommy swung and jumped from another tree toward her. They clashed as they landed on the tree and jumped to each other again. Once more, they clashed and jumped to different trees. Azula then jumped four trees toward Tommy. Tommy ran on the tree and then jumped toward her. As they jumped down cris-crossing different branches (and a few more trees) they were landing, they kept colliding lightsabers with each other. Then, at one jumping point, Tommy looked at Azula preparing to use her lightsabers at him. They dueled again, trying to hit each other as they each glared. The fight became more and more intense as lightsabers collided with their own. Azula dodged one of his slashes as she fought Tommy back. Then, after a while, Azula charged from behind Tommy, only for him to block her move. The two continued slashing and colliding their sabers to each other, neither one wanting to weaken. Then, the three lightsabers collided as they struggled, but shoved them down. Then, more slashing continued as Azula used the Force to shove Tommy again. He then fell near the ruins. Azula dashed, then Tommy slashed, but she jumped it and landed on the roof. Tommy turned and ran, then jumped up to where Azula was. He ran to her while Azula used the Force to lift some of the tiles and toss it to him. He slashed one, only for the other to hit him. A few more hit the boy, then he fell to the ground. Azula then used the Force to shove him. She grinned wickedly while Tommy slowly got up and glared at Azula holding the lightsabers. As rain began to pour, the two stood motionlessly, with their lightsabers as they prepared. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 4 2006, 04:40 PM Post #19 |
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The rain continued pouring down as both Tommy and Azula glared at each other. Their lightsabers sizzled under the pouring rain, creating small hints of steam. Tommy then charged and jumped up. He then tried slashing her, only for the wicked girl to block his attack. The agressive boy kept hitting her lightsabers. At that one block, however, Tommy kicked her and Force shoved her off the roof to the ground. Tommy then jumped down and landed on the ground, looking for her. He activated his lightsaber, clutching it with both hands as he looked. He looked at the entrance to the ruins and went inside, looking cautiously for Azula. Then, he stopped, listening while in the dark as he looked. He then continued walking to his left. He then heard waterdrops while glancing behind himself. Then, he turned and clashed his lightsaber with Azula's, who was in front of him. She was shoved as their long duel continued with their lightsabers clashing and the two fighting on the filling ruins. Lightsabers continued clashing all around. Tommy used the Force to shove some water to Azula, annoying and angrying her. She backed away and jumped up in which Tommy flew and followed. Azula ran up the steps, but Tommy jumped to near the bottom steps. She turned as they glared. Azula then used the Force to break the pedestal from the roof. Then she shoved it to Tommy, who ran and used the Force to shove it back. She gasped and it hit her. She pushed the pedestal away and used the Force at Tommy, who blocked it and most of his shirt was torn off. He shoved her to the top, making her hit the wall and fall to the roof ground outside with her shirt tattered. She yelped and dodged his attack as she ran. Tommy glared angrily as he chased her. Tommy continued to slash aggressively toward Azula, who was blocking him. She felt like she was weakened with Tommy colliding with her lightsabers. She dashed away from Tommy's slicing as he glared. He chased after her. Lightsabers kept colliding as Tommy looked like he was winning as they reached the very top of the ruins. Then, Azula jumped to the top as Tommy flew in persuit. Tommy aggressively continued slashing to Azula. The lightsabers continued colliding with each other as Tommy looked more furious. Tommy continued his slashes and Azula continued blocking as she looked exhausted. Then, Azula used her two lightsabers to shove Tommy's off of his hands, making him gasp. She then prepared to slash him, but Tommy held her wrists as it neared him. Then, Tommy glared furiously at Azula. Azula was forced to let the lightsaber in her left hand go as Tommy used the Force to shove her. She looked at him as Tommy, with his eyes closed, used the Force to lift the fallen lightsaber up and be placed in his hand. Tommy screamed as he ran to her. She desperately blocked him using her own lightsaber against her as they near the edge. Tommy angrily kept hitting her lightsaber. Tommy kept at it while the edge was starting collapse and with each blow. To him, it seems that Lou-Gon, Obi-Tim, and Arnda are watching him right now, shocked at what he's doing, but he doesn't care. Then, finally, with one last blow, Azula screamed and fell to the pit. Tommy glared. Then, Tommy screamed, then after deactivating it, tossed Azula's lightsaber to the pit. Sometime later, Tommy flew away in Azula's ship, away from the planet. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 4 2006, 06:10 PM Post #20 |
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Back on O-Townopolis, the Battle SIRs charged at the X-Clones only to get taken down by another Jedi named Wulf charged at them, deflecting their blasts with his lightsaber. He jumped and slashed each robot with his lightsaber and claws. He knocked down the rest with the Force. Soon the X-Clone Troopers' ships arrived and destroys the robots in the area he is in, bombs being thrown. The X-Clones came to help him out. Just then the robots freezed, being shut down. "Attention! The IG Banking Clan has surrendered!" said Obi-Tim's voice over the radio. "The Nick Republic has won! The day is ours!" Everyone in the area cheered for their win. As the Banking Clan, including Ed Hill, are being loaded onto a ship, Obi-Tim looked over the ruins in victory yet sadness. This would have been a great place to visit if the war hasn't started. Just then a X-Clone commander runs up to him. "Sir! We just discovered that a fighter that Commander Skywalker was chasing earlier is returning! May we have permission to fired?" asked the commander. Obi-Tim sees the fighter that Tommy was chasing earlier. Suddenly, he felt something familiar. "No, wait. Hold your fire." Obi-Tim said in relief and a bit of disappointment. The fighter maneuvered for a while then landed. The X-Clone prepare their weapons in precaution but put them down as a familiar figure came out of the fighter. "Commander Skywalker!" said a X-Clone trooper. Tommy went passed the trooper and approached his master. Upon seeing a frown on his face, he can tell what Obi-Tim is thinking right about now. "We're sorry, Master. You were right. It was trap, set by the Sith and I entered without thinking." Tommy said with a sigh. Tommy smiles a bit. "But the good news is, I won and survived." Obi-Tim shooked his head and said, "Despite that, that battle should never have been fought. I am concerned about the Sith's interest in you, Tommy. It is a big problem. That is why you must obeyed orders. Something like that again could..." Suddenly he is interrupted by a beeping noise. He takes out a communicator and a hologram of a Jedi struggling appeared. "Master Ozu?" gasped Obi-Tim recognizing the old figure. (Author's note: This man is from the show Kappa Mikey). "General Kenobi! I need help on planet Hypori!" yelled the Jedi Master in panic. "Hypori?" "That's right! Our forces are being wiped out and I think there is a few of us still alive!" The communication suddenly looks like it is about to break up. "They have themselves an unstoppable robot general! I can't hold for long!" "Master Ozu?" Obi-Tim asked more alarmed. "I...can't...signal...breaking...up...hunting us..." Suddenly the hologram disappeared, horrifying Tommy and Obi-Tim. On planet Hypori, Ozu fell to the ground dead as his hologram protector fell from his hands. The hologram of Obi-Tim appears, the Jedi trying to reach Ozu. "Master Ozu! Come in! Where are you..." Suddenly a big metal foot stomped on the protector, destroying it and ending the communications. At a ruined ship, a bunch of robots are firing at the remains. Frankly, there are some Jedi still in there. As they continued firing, a mechanical hand waves. "Hold fire!" boomed a metal voice. Soon the robots stopped their firing, the last two approaching a figure who just arrived. He bows his head growling. Inside the ruins of a ship, a Jedi named Parker (from that new Mr. Meaty show) run towards the ship to join the other Jedi that are there already. Jedi Masters Katara, Oblina, Ni-Gel Thorndi (Nigel Thornberry), Martin Mystery, and a freaked out man named Carl Wheezer are hiding from the enemy. Ni-Gel looks suspicious because the robots stopped firing. "Master Thorndi?" asked Parker concerned. "Get going!" exclaimed Ni-Gel quickly. The Jedi run to inside the ship's ruins. Once they are certain that they aren't being followed, they try to get some rest. "That was close." said Katara with a sigh. "Man, whoever this guy is, he's unstoppable." said Parker with a groan. "Of all times, we have never been troubled by robots before." agreed Oblina. "Maybe he's a cyborg?" suggested Katara. "Did you even get close to him?" asked Ni-Gel. "No, but I can tell by his growling. His strategy doesn't have any flaw to speak of." "Ohhhh. This is the doom. We're all goners!" whined the Jedi Carl Wheezer. "Cheer up, young lad. It may looked like we're goners but we must now despair! We must focus because we're Jedi." "Good point, old man." agreed Martin Mystery. Just then, a mechanical voice booms from the outside. "Jedi!" Alarmed, each Jedi takes a look out of a different people. The voice continued, "You are surrounded, your armies decimated. Make peace with the Force now, for this is your final hour. But know that I, General Smytus am not completely without mercy. I will grant you a warrior's death. Prepare!" Ni-Gel then hears some footsteps approaching as did the Jedi. They looked but does not see the cyborg around. "Where is he?" asked Martin. "That noise..." said Katara in precaution. "He must be coming alone. I can tell." Ni-Gel said listening carefully. "We aren't going to win this! He's going to killed us!" cried Carl. "Calm yourself, Carl. We must try to win, lad." The footsteps are getting closer while Carl sweats like a pig (so to speak). "He is close by. But where?" asked Ni-Gel turning his lightsaber on. "It's all around us." said Carl nervously. "Steady." Ni-Gel watches as the footsteps gets closer. "Steady." Just then the footsteps stopped. This made Carl even more nervous. "Steady." "I can't take this anymore!" yelled Carl as he run out into the open, his lightsaber on. "Carl, wait!" yelled Ni-Gel alarmed. Ni-Gel tries to go after him but then the enemy himself landed on Carl, crushing and killing him. General Smytus is a green like Cluster like robot with mean eyes. He stood up and smirks at the Jedi. He flung his cape out, showing his mechanical parts. "Back away!" yelled Ni-Gel. Just then, Smytus jumped up. The Jedi backed away in precaution, close together hoping Smytus will not be able to catch them off guard. As they go into the shadows, the shadows themselves disappeared. Above them is a certain robot who takes his lightsabers out. Ni-Gel looked up in time to see Smytus dropping down attacking with his lightsabers, the others getting outta the way in the nick of time. He lands on the ground and stares at the Jedi. The Jedi assaulted Smytus with their lightsabers. Despite what they can do, he was too quick for them. He managed to blocked the attacks from the lightsabers then he spins towards Ni-Gel. "Ni-Gel!" yelled Oblina. Smytus tries hitting Ni-Gel but the Jedi blocked it with his lightsaber. Oblina charged in to help the Jedi Master but Smytus blocked her attack with his saber. Smytus uses on his metal feet to fight Ni-Gel while fighting Oblina. When the Jedi tries to cornered him, he used his feet to block their attacks. He goes for his hands once more continuing the Jedi duel. He jumped at Ni-Gel but the Jedi got out of the way in the nick of time. Smytus only landed up hitting the floor. Ni-Gel tries to use the Force on Smytus but the cyborg sees what he's doing and dodged it. Smytus jumped onto a wall and got off it a while later, knocking the Jedi away. Smytus smirks evilly as Parker tries to charged him but Smytus blocked his lightsaber attacks. As Parker tries again, Smytus let his saber go on purpose and hits Parker's backside with an elbow. "You first!" boomed Smytus. Then he slashed down on Parker, killing him instantly. Katara, shocked upon seeing this, uses the Force to lift a part of the ship and throws it at Smytus along with some others. As Smytus slashed each part, Martin Mystery charged at him. But Smytus was fast as he grabs Martin Mystery by his foot, slamming it into the ground. He crushed Martin's head, killing him. He looks up to see Oblina charging at him but he grabs her with his foot and throws her into the ceiling along with the dead Martin. Soon only Katara and Ni-Gel are left standing as they both his attacks while trying to hit him with their own. "How can a robot like this know Jedi attacks?" yelled Ni-Gel worried. Smytus swings his lightsabers as if trying to make a shield. The Jedi tried to breaking through but nothing works. Smytus then kicked Ni-Gel into a pile of rubble nearby, making the Jedi lose his lightsaber doing so. Katara now finds herself fighting along against the evil robot. Fortunately, Ni-Gel recovers. Katara sees him and yells out, "Ni-Gel! Get out of here, now!" But the distraction is what Smytus needed as he knocked her lightsaber out of her hands. Katara closes her eyes as Smytus looks like he's about to slashed her. But Smytus instead decided in throwing Katara into a nearby wreckage. "Katara!" gasped Ni-Gel. Smytus turned at him with his evil eyes. Ni-Gel tried to called for his lightsaber back but the general stomps on it, stopping it. "Not so fast!" laughed Smytus as he then picks up Ni-Gel's lightsaber with his left foot. Ni-Gel groaned, then he spots a bunch of lightsabers hanging by Smytus's belt. He knew that it was the lightsabers of the Jedi he killed in combat. Quickly, Ni-Gel uses the Force to get one of the sabers from Smytus's belt. Not wasting any time, Ni-Gel turned the lightsaber on. The two glared at each other for a few seconds. Then Smytus jumped towards Ni-Gel, both fighters screaming at the top of their lungs. Back at the Jedi Temple, it was storming on the planet Coruscant as Arnda was meditating. He opened his eyes, looking very concerned. He goes to the window, looking out at the storm. With a sigh, Arnda said, "The coming storm is growing darker. The dark cloud of the Sith shrouds us all." Author's note The X-Clone Wars is getting heated up and this is only the first volume! Coming soon is the second volume as we see more of Tommy, Obi-Tim, Arnda, Count Christopher, the dreaded General Smytus, and more! So stay tuned! Also, read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 5 2006, 07:52 PM Post #21 |
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Author's note: Volume 2 begins! After this, the universe will never be the same again. Once again, I don't own the characters from the Nicktoons series or Star Wars movies. ************* A group of X-Clone troopers are in a ship rushing through the plains of Hypori. They are given a special task and they must now failed at all tasks. They prepared themselves as they approached their destination. "We're at the target, commander." informed a X-Clone trooper. "Get the jamming signals ready." ordered the X-Clone commander. "Yes sir." nodded the pilot. The pilot succeeds in pressing a button on a nearby console, creating jamming big enough to interrupt the signals. They soon arrived at their destination: the ship that Ni-Gel and his group were in surrounded by the robots. "Open the doors!" ordered the commander. The doors opened up while the troopers themselves ready themselves. They see the robots waiting as they get closer to the ruings. "We are undetected sir. We are approaching direct perimeter." informed the pilot. "Gun it!" ordered the commander. "Sir!" yelled the pilot as he does so. Like the trooper has said, the robots didn't detected the ship coming through. As the ship fly over a couple of robots, it dropped off a couple of bombs. The robots, looking at the bombs and now realizing that some one is in the same area as they were, beginning firing. Luckily none of their shots hit the ship as it approached the ruins. It then fired missiles making an opening for the commander and his trooped to jumped out of the ships, inside the ruins. The commander takes a life scanner out and sees 3 blinking lights on it. "There are 3 people still alive in that rubble." pointed the commander. "Another one in the raptors. Alright, let's move out!" ordered the X-Clone commander as he and his men with their weapons out leaved the ship. The ship took off, stopping to targeted a bunch of robots coming forward. It fired on them, destroying the ones marching forward. Inside the rubble, the commander motioned his men to the left and right. As they obeyed and goes in different directions, the remaining troops goes to an area. They heard lightsaber clashing as they approaching. When they arrived, they see Ni-Gel fighting Smytus. Ni-Gel is getting tired, making it difficult to fight the evil robot. Soon Smytus knocked the lightsaber out of his hands. Before Smytus could make the final spot, he spots something out of the corner of his eyes, as did Ni-Gel. The X-Clones. The troopers didn't waste time as they fired at Smytus, forcing the villain to jumped. The troopers kept firing on him as Smytus tries to make his escape, holding on to his lightsabers tightly. He ran up to the ceiling laughing. "Shoot him down!" ordered Ni-Gel. Smytus kept dodging and running as the X-Clone Troopers kept firing at him. Then the villain jumped to the ones closest to fighting him and then struck them down, killing them instantly. "We need back-up, now!" ordered the X-Clone commander into a communicator. Soon the ship that the X-Clones arrived in came out of nowhere and aim its weapon at Smytus. Smytus sees this and makes a run for it. He dodges the shots fired by the shot as he run, destroying any ship parts in his way. He stopped at a clearing then sees that they're firing missiles now. Alarmed, Smytus run away. Back at the ship, the X-Clone make their way back into it. "Time to go!" said the X-Clone commander. "We can't! We got to go after him!" yelled Ni-Gel. "We still have some survivors here. They will die unless we go." Ni-Gel groans but realizes that the X-Clone commander was right. With a sigh, he went into the ship as the commander fired. The last trooper entered, firing as well. The ship took off. Inside the ship, Ni-Gel goes to where the troopers are taking care of the survivors. Ni-Gel takes a closer look and gasped. "Oblina!" said Ni-Gel. Oblina looks very worst. He sees the other Jedi in bed. "And Katara! Are they...?" "They got hit badly but they will survived." explained a Medical Trooper. "Are there any other survivors?" "No, sir." Ni-Gel sighs sadly. Despite escaping, this battle still ends up as a defeat. Back in the ruined ship, Smytus ruined to picked up the dead Parker's lightsaber, putting it on his belt. As the ship with the escaped Jedi and troopers made its getaway, the X-Clone commander pressed a button. Soon the bombs they placed earlier exploded, destroying most of the robots allowing the ship to get away. When the smoke clears, Smytus goes to the hole that was made during the madness. He doesn't looked disappointed, rather a bit amused as he chuckles. "Run all you want, Jedi. You have only prolonged the inevitable." chuckled Smytus. His chuckles then turned into an evil laughter. "Oh yes, indeed." Vision sequence "What is that?" asked a little purple-haired boy as he stood in front of the tree on the planet Dagobah. THe old man, Lou-Gon Jinn, speaks up. "A noise that is calling for you, Tommy." "From the tree?" asked Tommy looking at the tree puzzled. "You must enter it alone, sprout." Tommy gulped as he said, "But I'm afraid, Master." Lou-Gon smiled as he kneeled to his and put his hand on his shoulder "Control your fear. You are the Chosen One and such you must be tested." "But what could be in there?" asked Tommy as he and Lou-Gon looked at the tree. "Only what you take with you." Lou-Gon explained. Tommy nods as he goes into the tree. Lou-Gon continues speaking, "Trust in the Force for it will help you foor your final test. Reality Arnda opens his eyes, the whole vision was just a vision. The Jedi Master pauses as he thinks about it. In a meeting later at the Council Chambers, Ni-Gel speaks of Smytus to the whole council. "That robot must be strong enough to held his own against five Jedi and we were tired too!" said Ni-Gel concerned. "He must be deal with." "I agreed." said a Jedi Council member. Rocko added, "Blimey, this Smytus bloke is changing the shape of the war." "Our numbers are going down by the day but this one!" The other Jedi nodded as another one said, "We need more knights for this." Obi-Tim paused to think then he said, "I got an idea. I know this is going to sound crazy, but since this is a time of war, we just forgot about the trials and let the Padawans became Jedi Knights anyway." "That is crazy! We can't do that to our sacred traditions!" yelled a Jedi Master named Harold (Harold Barman). "I say, in this time of need, why must we hold back the Chosen One?" Ni-Gel pointed out. "We don't know if he's the Chosen One as of yet." said Rocko with a frown. "I'm concerned. Chancellor Matthewstine has been asking anxiously for this for months now." said another Jedi with a frown. "We don't need politics in our matters!" "But we got to get him some credit, amigo," said Diego with a smile. "He is a cunning warrior and one great pilot." "But he is reckless with his gift." pointed out a Jedi. "In the past, yes." Obi-Tim said nodding, then he said, "But despite that, my Padawan did go through some difficult things more greater than the trials themselves. He did passed the trial of skill when he defeated that girl assassain on Yavin 4 and he adored an atrocous trial of reflection at Count Christopher's hands." The other Jedi agreed on this though Rocko still has some doubts. Arnda pauses in think as Obi-Tim continued, "And he has made it through very test of courage he come face to face with." "That leaves one test he has to face." said a Jedi named Larry, some sort of lobster (Larry the Lobster). "The testing the spirit one." Katara said. "The mirror." Another Jedi added. "Hey, doesn't this concern anyone?" snapped Harold. "To walk the path of the Jedi, one spirit must be strong. That requires disciplines. Besides, Obi-Tim, he has disobeyed more than once!" "Oh shut up you..." Arnda chuckles, interrupting Obi-Tim, as he speaks to Harold. "Didn't you disobey me from time to time from when I know you, Master Harold?" "Hey, at least I got a good reason to!" yelled Harold annoyed. Arnda ignores Harold as he said, "While this debate is little, we are indeed at war. We'd need all the knights we can so we could survive this. While it is true that young Skywalker's career has been 'unorthedoz', his trials are too. I trust in the Force." He sighs, then said. "He shall be a Jedi Knight." On the streets of planet Coruscant, Tommy Skywalker, with his hodd up, is walking. He didn't noticed that another hooded figure is following him. That is until he stopped and sees the figure in the reflection, though he couldn't tell. With a frown, he takes a look around, not seeing the figure. He sighs and goes on. Of course, the only reason he couldn't see the figure was that's because the figure managed to hide itself. It reappeared and continues following Tommy. As Tommy walked to an entrance, he uses the Force to hide. The figure continued walking, looking puzzled as it looked around to see where Tommy when off to. Suddenly Tommy, from an nearby alley, grabs the figure and pulled it in. He turns his lightsaber on and was about to talked when the figure removes it hood and speaks in a familiar voice, "Tommy!" Tommy gasped, turned his lightsaber on, and smiles. "Kimi." said Tommy happily staring at his wife. The two kissed each other. Once they removed their lips, Tommy sighs. "Man, I missed you." Kimi smiles and allows Tommy to rub his hand on her cheek while she placed both her hands on his. The two kissed again while outside the alley, people are placing. Tommy noticed and turned themselves away before anyone could see them. Tommy sighs in annoyance as he said, "This is ridiculous! We can't hide our love like it's something wicked!" "Tommy, you're almost a Jedi Knight, I'm positive. Then..." Tommy interrupted Kimi harshly. "And then what? You know as well as I do that Jedi are not to fall in love with anyone nor can they married!" He sighs. "Doesn't matter now." "It does matter and we knew this is going to happened." Kimi said smiling sadly as she puts her hand on his shoulder. "Hopefully things could change the war is done. But right now the Nick Republic needs you. And in Coruscant's shadows or any other city, you are more important and I will always love you." Tommy smiled, then joked. "Well you are always great in the dark." "Oh Tommy...." The two kissed once more then a voice interrupted. "Kimi! Miss Kimi!" Tommy looked out the alley and groaned as he sees a familiar dog-like droid walking through the crowd wearing a cloak and hood looking througuh Kimi. "Oh no. C-REN." said Tommy groaning as he sees his robot that he built when he was a child copming. "Kimi? Where are you, you crazy child?" yelled C-REN impatiently. Suddenly C-REN was grabbed by Tommy when he passed by and is dragged into the alley. "Don't hurt me! I am only a Separatist droid!" yelped C-REN alarmed. "Relax, C-REN. We aren't going to hurt you." said Tommy with a smirk. C-REN turned and gasped upon seeing Tommy. "Tommy? Is that you?" Then C-REN frowns as he slaps Tommy. "How dare you scared me like that!" Then he sees Kimi. "And you! You run off and scare the crud out of me!" "Calm down, C-REN. I am just having a secret meeting, that's all." said Kimi with a smirk. Tommy noticed something. "Say, C-REN. You looked different." "Must be this stupid cloak and hood I have to wear." C-REN said looking himself over. "I think he meant your new covers." Kimi said chuckling. "New cover, huh?" Tommy asked, quirking an eyebrow. "Well I have to looked good if I have to be in Kimi's service." C-REN explained. "Well then, take it off." "What? What are you, some sort of sick monkey?" yelled C-REN angrily. "No, he means take the cloak and hood off so he could see your new cover." Kimi said with a laugh. "Okay, fine, if you insist." groaned C-REN. He then takes his cloak and hood off. Tommy could see that the dog-like droid now has a golden covering all over himself. C-REN snarled as he said, "There? Happy?" "Cool. That is impressive." Tommy said impressed. Just when, Tommy's communicator beeped. Tommy activates it and Obi-Tim's hologram appeared. "Hey Tommy. Wherever you are, get back to the temple. The Jedi Council wants to speak to you." instructed Obi-Tim, unaware whose Tommy's wioth. "Fine. I'm coming." said Tommy with a groan. He sighs sadly as he turns the communiucator. He looks at Kimi while C-REN puts his cloak and hood back on. "I don't want to go." "You have to, Tommy." said Kimi though she wishes he didn't have to go either. "I love you." Tommy and Kimi kissed each other deeply as C-REN watched on. Back at the temple, Obi-Tim waited impatiently as Tommy walked up. "About time. You're late." scowled Obi-Tim. "Sorry." Tommy apologized. "When the Council wants to see you, you can't be tardy." "Oh, I supposed if I'm late for a scolding, it would matter?" snapped Tommy annoyed. "Hey, you aren't a kid anymore, you know!" Obi-Tim pointed out. "But since you are my student, you got to go by my wisdom!" "You're right, I am not a kid anymore. But as for your wisdom, you are no Lou-Gon Jinn!" Obi-Tim gasped in shock when Tommy said this. Tommy realized what he said. He knew it is wrong for him to go so. "Please, forgive me. I didn't mean to..." Obi-Tim smiles and interrupted Tommy, "I know what you mean. You aren't the only one who misses Lou-Gon. So do I." Obi-Tim puts his hand on Tommy's shoulder as he continues. "And not a day goes by that I look for his wisdom for guidance." Tommy smiled. Obi-Tim smiled back then cleared his throat. "Okay, I've done my best to past Lou-Gon's teaching to you. In our time together, you have proven to me that you are capable of all he believed you would be, Tommy. Now we must leave our role as Master and Students, and become...brothers." "Brothers?" asked Tommy surprised. Just then the door nearby opened up. Obi-Tim beckoned Tommy to enter. He does so. As he goes into the center, the door closes making the whole room dark. Suddenly, the room light up and as Tommy looked astounded, the light came from the lightsabers the Jedi Council members are holding. Tommy sees Obi-Tim in the room smiling for him. "Step forward, Padawan." Arnda request. Tommy nodded as he does as Arnda asked, then he bowed. The other Council members lowered their lightsabers as Arnda continued, "Tommy Skywalker," Tommy looked up as Arnda lowers his saber on one side then onto the other, "By the right of the Council, by the will of the Force, I dub thee...Jedi." Then he slashed Tommy's ponytail, symbol of the Padawan right off of Tommy's hair. "Knight of the Repbulic." Tommy stood up and smiled. Later, C-REN came up to Kimi n her chambers. As the girl turned, the dog droid shows a familiar object to her: Tommy's former ponytail. The senator smiled as she knew what just happened: her Tommy is now a Jedi Knight. Kimi takes the ponytail and puts it in a box next to a pendant, the same one Tommy made for her when he was a boy all thjose years ago. Kimi closes the box and hugged it happily while C-REN and R2-SY watched. Kimi turned and smiles. Meanwhile, as Tommy gets his fighter ready to go out into battle once more, R2-SY walked up to Tommy and got his attention. He turns as the cat droid shows a hologram. Tommy smiles as he sees that it is a hologram of Kimi holding Tommy's former ponytail smiling towards her husband. He begins to cry a bit as his "ghost" hand pretends to hold Kimi's hologram. Soon it is time for Tommy to leave. 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| JusSonic | Oct 7 2006, 11:20 PM Post #22 |
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At the base on planet Bosmis Korri IV, a general named Wolfgang is musing as he awaits eagerly for the enemy. "Man, I wonder how many losers they'd send. We got so much firepowers, the walls are ray-shielded! They can't take this fort! I bet they will send 50 of those loser Jedi, if they need that many. Maybe a hundred! No way they could take the base with less than that!" laughed Wolfgang. "Heck, more than that! They'd need a whole stinking army!" "Sir, I see something coming." informed a Battle SIR. Wolfgang stops his gloating and frowns "Any Jedi?" "I think so." "A thousdand?" "No." "80?" "No." "50?" "No." This got Wolfgang really frustrated. "40? Come on, how many?' "There are two coming." informed the Battle SIR. "What?" yelled Wolfgang, feeling insulted as he grabs the binoculars and looked through them. To his disbelief, there are two figures approaching. "They send two loser Jedi? Why 2?" Wolfgang got his answeer as he see something else coming. He and the robotsa looked up just in time to see the X-Clone's ships arriving firing at them. The fort finds themselved fired upon by the enemy as they take cover. Soon the two Jedi figures, as they got closer, jumped off their horses and attack with their lightsabers destroying the robots. When the dust cleared, the robots are destroyed and their destroyers are Jedi Knight Tommy Skywalker and his master Obi-Tim Kenobi. As the war rages on, Tommy continued his battles with some successes. In space one time, Jedi Pangborn's ship was losing an important fight with enemy fighters. Pangborn tries his best to dodged the enemy fire. Just when it looked like all hope is lost, a ship appears from out of nowhere and destroyed the enemy fighters. Pangborn looked and grinned when he sees that his rescuer was Tommy piloting the ship with R2-SY helping out. The boy fired at more of the enemy fighters, saving the battle that way. At the Outer Rim Sieges another time, Wulf, Oblina, and Larry was under attacked by monkey-like robots blocking their lasers. Suddenly one of monkeys fired a laser at Larry, trapping him in a bubble. Another did the same thing to Wulf and Oblina, trapping them in bubbles. Before they could finished them all, Tommy appeared and slashed at the monkey bots' legs, destroying them. Then Tommy uses the Force to send one leg towards the one, stabbing it. Tommy finished the last two off. With a smile, Tommy uses the Force to freed the trapped Jedi from their bubble cells. Tommy smiles as the Jedi cheered for more. Only a while during the war would Tommy get a break and return, secretly, to his beloved Kimi. His fighter has landed at the port at Kimi's retreat. Kimi herself is waiting for her husband in disguise. As R2-SY waves to her, Tommy got out and walked to Kimi slowly, his hood up. Kimi figured it's because that's the best way to meet in secret. But, to her surprise and shock, when Tommy removed his hood, she sees something on his face she has never seen before: a scar he has gotten during a battle. Kimi slightly touched it as Tommy looked at her sadly. But Kimi just smiles. She doesn't matter what he looks like for she will always loved him. The two hugged, hoping that their hug won't be the last one. Last, that night, the light in Kimi's room turned off and the two have...their moment. Later, in a trench on another planet, Obi-Tim was trying to sleep during a heavy rain storm. His army has been on the planet for a month now trying to lay siege on a city the enemy took control of, so far no luck. Obi-Tim tried to get some leave but the roof he is under has a leakage problem dropping some water on the Jedi. The Jedi Master frowns as he turned to the other side only to get some water dripped on him from there. With a scowl, knowing he won't get any sleep thi swya, he just stood up. "Man, I wished to be in my warm bed right now." groaned Obi-Tim. He then hears the sound of someone wearing jet boots approaching. He turned and sees Commander Tody, one of the X-Clones Commander he's in charge of, landing turning his jet boots off. "General." said Commander Tody, saluting. "Commander Tody." Obi-Tim said acknowledging the commander. "We're doing well with our siege. If we keep this up, the shield will be down in 3 months." Obi-Tim groaned as he said, "But we have been on this dumb planet for a month already!" "Good. That means we're on scheudle." Commander Tody said, not knowing the groaning as he turned his jet boots back on and jetted off. "Great." Obi-Tim said with a groan. Just them. Tommy came in carrying a bag of something. Obi-Tim is not sure he wants to know what his former apprentice has found. And when Tommy sat down, he wished he didn't know. But he goes and asked anyway, "What the heck is that?" "Lunch, duh." Tommy said with a smirk. Obi-Tim groaned as Tommy opened the bag up revealing a bunch of disgusting bugs. Obi-Tim nearly gagged as Tommy rakes a bug and chow down on it, "Geez, how can you eat that?" Obi-Tim asked. "Well, you always tell me to feed on the living Force." Tommy said smiling as he eats. "That isn't what I..." Obi-Tim, however, decides not to finish as he asked, "Where did you get that anyway?" "From the enemy camp." Tommy responded. "What? You were there? What were you doing?" asked the Jedi Master surprised. "Reconisence." "I don't get it. How did you get by their shield anyway?" Tommy slurps on a worm and removes some bugs. Obi-Tim noticed that bag is actually maps of some kind. "I found this sewer nearby." Tommy said pointing to the map. "It goes under the city." Obi-Tim just glares at Tommy. He can tell what his former apprentice is thinking. "Let me guess. We are going to use the sewer to sneak in, go to the shield generator, goes through their defenses, blow the generator up, thereby getting rid of the shield so our troops can go in and take the enemy. Did I get that right?" asked Obi-Tim. "Yep!" Tommy said proudly. "I was right." said Obi-Tim with a groan. "Let's go." Tommy said standing up. "Man, I hate sewers." said Obi-Tim groaning. As the troops fired at the shield without any success, no one saw Tommy and Obi-Tim going into a sewer hole nearby. Once they get in, they crawled through the sewers that is filled with waste. "What an incredible smell you've discovered." said Obi-Tim sarcastically. "Do you know of another way to get in?" challenged Tommy. Then they reached an area that is blocked off by rubble. "What now, Einstein?" asked Obi-Tim. "Swim under this." Tommy responded. "Oh, figure." The two hold their breath (and noses) as they go under the water and swim under the rubble. Once they reached the other side, they surfaced, much to Obi-Tim's relief. "Man! I hate sewers!" complained Obi-Tim. The two sees a ladder on a mechanical pillar nearby and begins to climbed up. They ended up in the room where the generator is at. They looked around carefully seeing the robots guarding the place. "Let's do this!" exclaimed Tommy excited. He is about to get out but Obi-Tim stopped him. "Wait, Tommy." warned his former master. Tommy was lucky for there are two SIRs nearby working. One of them heard Tommy though it doesn't know where. "Did you say something?" The Battle SIR asked the other. "Not really." responded the second one. Obi-Tim thought, then he said, "Well, there are alternatives to fighting." As Tommy watched, Obi-Tim pressed a betton from his belt, revealing miniature bombs from it. He puts it on the floor and send them in different directions via the Force. "Man, what fun is this?" complained Tommy. As the miniature bombs rolled close to the generator stopped, they go off, destroying the generator and the robots near it. The two got back into the sewers in the nick of time. Outside the city, no one knew what has happened but doesn't care as the shield suddenly disappeared. "The shield's down! Let's move!" ordered Commander Tody. As the troopers charged in to attack, no one bother to talk to two certain Jedi walking back slowly. "Good job, my friend. Good job." said Obi-Tim smiling at Tommy. On the planet Cluster Prime, two robots were doing their own version of hunting. One robot calls for another to chased after a robotic deer. The young bot chased after it until it stops upon sensing it. Suddenly the young one sees what it is: a big tank of the evil robot invasion army turning visible. The young bot gasped, then the older one grabs it and takes himt o safely. The tank opened up and a bunch of robots came out to attacked. Concerned, the good bots goes to looked for some help. Almost everywhere, the Separatists has been winning some battles as well. On another planet, the Separatists has managed to take it over, turning its people into their slaves. On another one, Bal'Demnic, its people tried to attack the Separatists with their weapons. But the army was too strong and they ended up getting crushed. On another planet, the X-Clones who survived find themselves taken captured by a big army. And another planet, Battle SIRS passed by frightened creatures who watch them go with their weapons. Meanwhile, in a secret hideaway, the count himself, Count Christopher, is currently training Smytus, the cyborg general, in a duel of lightsaber. The count manages to keep blocking his lightsaber aways despite Smytus having two. "You got to stop using the standard attacks. Use the unorthadoz." instructed Count Christopher. 'I can do what I want!' thought Smytus as he kept trying to hit his teacher, only for Count Christopher to keep blocking with his own lightsaber. Smytus tries to stand on one hand and hits the former Jedi with one in his foot but it was also blocked. Frustrated, he goes back to dueling with his hands. "Why do I tell you this so many times? Control your central line." Count Christopher instructed once more. Smytus kept slashing but Christopher kept dodging. "Good." When Smtyus charged at him, Count Christopher uses the Force to knock the cyborg into a bunch of barrels. The annoyed Smytus who then jumped and tried slashing but the count blocked it as well. "You must try to destroy my focus." informed Count Christopher with a frown. "You're holding the saber too tight!" With that said, Count Christopher managed to throw one of Smytus's lightsabers into the air and into his hand. "Now, too lightly." The count examined the lightsaber he just grabbed. "Well, I see you got yourself a new one." "And why not?" chuckled Smytus as he turns his remaining one off and puts it on his belt. "Your training has help me get so many trophies." "You shouldn't allowed your pursuit of 'trinkets' cloud your reality. Remember what I taught you, Smytus. If you are to succeed in combat against the Jedi's best, you must have fear, surprise, and intimidation on your side. If you have any element lacking, it's best to run away. You must break the enemy before engaging them in a battle of the lightsabers. Only then will you get victory and trophy." instructed Count Christopher. The lightsaber was lifted between the two. Smytus nods and takes his lightsaber back. Suddenly the robot holding Darth Shadowilious's hologram appeared, the Sith lord looking proud. "Very good information, my apprentice, and wise as well." said Darth Shadowilious smiling. "Master." said Count Christopher bowing to his Sith master. "General Smytus, what is the news from the front line?" Darth Shadowilious asked the robot general. Smytus smirked as he said, "All is going well thanks to the strategy. The Jedi and their forces are already across the Outer Rim territories trying to stop our new offense." "Good. This is now our time to strike, to begin our final operation. Are you ready for your 'secret' mission?" "Yes, Lord Shadowilious. Those fools won't know what hit them." "Then good luck." Darth Shadowilious chuckled as he thought, 'Oh yes. All is going according to plan.' Back with Tommy and Obi-Tim, the two Jedi watched the troopers getting ready to leave. Obi-Tim frowns as the storm stops. "Ironic that the storm stops when we're getting ready to leave." remarked Obi-Tim. "Sir!" yelled Commander Tody. "We're getting an important messenge from Planet Coruscant!" The two goes into a nearby tent as a device activates a hologram. The two Jedi watched as the holograms of Rocko Windu and Chancellor Matthewstine were speaking. "We're happy to hear about your actions, you two. With your command in the third army, we will get victory in this war yet." said the chancellor smiling. "There's a problem, mate. With every system we saved, another gets taken, making this war longer than expected. I think the best way to end this war is at its source." explained Rocko. "Smytus." said Tommy, narropwing his eyes upset. This evil robot has killed a lot of Jedi and his friends, taking lightsabers as trophies. He must be stopped. "We have questionable intel on this at best." "Actually, I did hear something from some new information we just got and it's very accurate." said Matthewstine speaking up. "General Smytus has been spotted going to planet Nick Jr. a bunch fo times, deep in the Outer Rim territories. He is there right now." "In that case," Rocko said, surprised that the chancellor is the only one who got the info, "I think taking Smytus down is the only way to end this conflict." "We can only hope so. You two are to leave at once." said Matthewstine with a sigh. "May the Force be with you." said Rocko. With that said, the hologram ends. Obi-Tim looks concerned while Tommy just smiles a bit. "I don't know about being send on this reconisance mission. It doesn't feel right for some reason." said Obi-Tim. "Now, don't it that way. Just think of it as...a reconisance in the Force." joked Tommy. "Oh, your favorite, I bet." The two Jedi laughed at their little joke. As the ship arrives outside planet Nick Jr. coming out of hyperspace, it heads down towards the planet. Inside one of them, Commander Tody approached the Jedi. "For some reason, the scans shows no enemy forces in the area." informed Commander Tody. "You sure?" asked Obi-Tim surprised. "Only some strange readings in Sector 8." "Better take a look at it." said Tommy. He is more hoping than ever to put an end to Smytus. "Yes sir." said the X-Clone commander saluting. In a frozen forest on the planet Nick Jr., one of the ships landed near a lake. Obi-Tim, Tommy, and some of the troopers left to take a look around. They see some little rats crawling at branches, birds cawing from a tree. Suddenly the troopers heard some rustles in some bushes and aimed their weapons at it. But then a squirrel came out. "Nah, I don't think it will hurt us, trooper." said Tommy with a smirk. "Yes sir." said the trooper, a hint of sheepish in his voice. The troops looked around, a frog seeing and hopping from them. "Something's strange here. Whatever it is is startling these creatures. And it's not us." Obi-Tim said concerned. "I feel it too." Tommy said. "A disturbance." Suddenly more rustling is heard. "I got a bad feeling about this." Obi-Tim said alarmed. "So do I!" yelled Tommy. Suddenly a big gorilla monster called Tharg came out stomping the ground. The Jedi got out of the way in time. The troopers fired at it but they only made Tharg angry and they ended up getting crushed by it. When all the X-Clone troops got killed, Tommy got upset at the gorilla. Tommy slid and charged at it screaming. It was then that Obi-Tim realized something. "Wait, hold it, Tommy!" But Tommy did not listened as he slashed the Tharg's foot making it screamed. It tried to eat him but Tommy jumped, making the thing crashed into the trees. "Tommy, wait!" Obi-Tim yelled once more. But it was too late as Tommy got to the Tharg's head and stabbed it. The gorilla gave one last scream as it fell to the ground, dead. Tommy landed, smiling in victory. But then he sees an annoyed look on Obi-Tim's face. "What?" asked the former apprentice. But suddenly they see some things coming out of the shadows. These things are wearing masks. One little kitty came out, frowning at he threw his spark down speaking angrily in a language. "Is there anything wrong?" asked Tommy confused. "I don't think you should've done that." said Obi-Tim concerned. Another of the figures lifted the mask. It is a female girl holding some sort of doll looking very upset at the two Jedi. They can tell that it isn't good. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 8 2006, 03:34 PM Post #23 |
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In the temple back on Coruscant, Arnda is in a room meditating. Suddenly he sense something horribly as he quickly open his eyes, turned around, and opened the blinds. And sure enough, outside the Separatist robots are invading the planet right now. "The city is under attack!" yelled Rocko as he runs in. "I know. We must defend it." said Arnda turning to Rocko grimly. Outside, big Separatist ships lands in some parts of the city, letting robots and tanks off. The citizens run as the enemy robot fired at anything that moves. Big monkey bots stomps on cars killing any passengers in them while multi-armed bots fires lasers. Meanwhile as Rocko gets to his ship, he is joined by fellow Jedi Pangborn. "Master Windu. The enemy's ships are leaving hyperspace! Our forces are doing the best they can but they will need our assistance!" informed Pangborn grimly. "In that case, you better go up there and take command." Rocko told Pangborn. The two goes into their fighters and gets ready to leave. "May the Force be with you." Rocko said to his Jedi friend. "And to you." Pangborn responded back. After the lids closed, the fighters go their separate ways while the troopers goes into the battlefield. Back on planet Nick Jr., the kitty and the females he is will are taking the Jedi back to their village riding on what appeared to be Oswald octopuses (Oswald the octopus). "I wonder where they're taking us." said Tommy. "Back to their village, most likely." said Obi-Tim. Sure enough, it is indeed where they arrived at. A monkey wearing boots sees them and runs off. The Jedi takes this time to looked around the village. They noticed something that concerned them. "Master, there's..." Obi-Tim interrupted Tommy. "That's what I thought. There are only women and kids there. But why?" Soon the group stops as they reached the hut. The girl and a few females lead the Jedi into a hut where some sort of personified 2-D like face (Face, the former host of Nick Jr.) awaits. As they sat around them, the females and Face speaks in some sort of language. "Looks like you interrupted the kitty's rite of passage." Obi-Tim informed Tommy. "How did you know?" Tommy asked puzzled. "I understand them. When you're travelling with Lou-Gon Jinn, you tend to learn a ferw things." "I see. What are they saying?" As the females and the Face continued speaking, Obi-Tim translated. "Something is plaguing their land. Warrior after warrior has been send to stop it but none has ever returned. They were chosing another one when you got in the way." "Sorry." mumbled Tommy in annoyance. As the Face speaks, Obi-Tim looks puzzled. "I think I heard this wrong, but the Face said you would have to journey into fire." "What?" asked Tommy alarmed. Back at Coruscant, the battle rages on. Missiles hit building, destroying some of them while some buildings only got some new holes. In one of the holes, C-REN was inside freaking out. "Aaaahh! We're under attack! Help!" yelled C-REN like a girl. Senator Kimi and the captain was in there as well. The senator herself looks like she has put on a few pounds. "Senator, we got to get you to safely." said Danho in concern. "Mo! We got to evacuate the building!" Kimi said sternly. After all to her, everyone else's safely is always before hers. "Get everyone to a shelter." "Yes madam." said the captain nodding. C-REN suddenly sees what's going on. "What? We're being attacked by idiotic robots?" The dog droid got angry and yelled, "Hey! You stupid dopes! Stop attacking us other dopes or so help me..." "C-REN, let's go!" yelled Kimi, grabbing C-REN as she, the droid, and the captain runs out of the building. Back outside, Rocko's fighter flew into the battlefield. He fired at the robot fighters destroying some. More keep showing up as he continues wiping them down. Suddenly 3 of the robots decided he's a threat and begins chasing, forcing Rocko to dodged them. He twirled to a tight opening, managing to cause his chasers to crashed into it. He got to the other time as the same time the explosoin was. Rocko, smiling, sees more enemy fighters and fires at them. After taking the last one down, he sees more of them coming at the wallaby. Suddenly more behind crashed into his fighter sending it out of control. Quickly, Rocko opened the lid and jumped out just as the fighter crashed and exploded. Rocko continued falling while looking down. Luckily, he landed on an enemy fighter. Rocko decides to take use of this by using his lightsaber to cut it partially opened, revealing some wires. Punching the opening, Rocko pulled the wires hard, causing the fighter to go out of control and blinking at the visor. THe ship reactivated itself int ime for Rocko to gained control of it. With a smirk, he begins controlling it into the battlefield. Rocko sees a missle heading his way and he uses the Force to send it into a building. Although the wallaby doesn't want to cause any property damage, he didn't have any choice. In the battlefield, the X-Clone Troopers were firing at the enemy fighters, but are having a bit of bad luck. "There's three on our tail." informeda X-Clone Trooper. He then noticed something on the target signal. "Correction, four!" "Take them out then!" ordered the X-Clone Pilot. The trooper nods as tries to hit the enemy fighters but they kept dodging. Suddenly one of the enemy fighters got sliced by an unknown figure. The same thing happened to the second one. A laser got deflected as the same figure takes the third one now. "Good shooting!" informed the X-Clone pilot. "Wasn't me." said the X-Clone Trooper confused as the enemy fighter got closer. At least, he thought at first it was an enemy fighter. But when it got closer, the trooper sees a familiar wallaby controlling it. "General Windu!" With a smile, Rocko flew away on his new ride. Pangborn flies his fighter and fleet up into space. There, a bunch of Separatist ships were flying over the planet firing at the fleetships. The good guys fired back but more Separatist ships arrived, one of them crashing into a fleetship by accident, destroying it. Pangborn is shocked. 'This foolishness has got to stop.' thought the Jedi as he flew into one of the falling fleetships where many fighters came out of. Once Pangborn landed, he jumped out of the ship, being greeted by X-Clones. "General Pangborn, this ship is lost!" informed the X-Clone Trooper Leader. Pangborn thought about this and smirks. "Well, I guess we'd better get ourselves a new one, maggot." "Yes sir." As the robots firing at the falling ship while geting fired back at getting destroyed, another ship is coming closer. Inside the falling ship, Pangborn dons a spacesuit and helmet then turned to his troops. "Get ready to board, hooligans!" ordered Pangborn. The X-Clones get ready as the ship gets closer. They waited as the door opens up. "Attack!" Pangborn yelled as they jumped from the falling ship and make a beeline for the Separatist one, Pangborn turning his lightsaber on along the way. Upon arrived, the X-Clone fires at the machines while Pangborn uses his lightsaber to make a hole in the roof. Once he's done, he kicked it down and jumped in. Upon getting inside, he attacked the robots as did the troopers who entered as well. Outside, the troopers going to the machines while some of them gets killed during their attack. Inside, the robots were working in a control room but the doors opened up and Pangborn with his troops charged in, destroying the enemy bot. Pangborn quickly get to the main controls and get rid of the robots controling the ship. Smiling, Pangborn turned the Gun Wheel. Outside, the gun stopped firing at the troopers and instead attacks the Separatist ships. Sensing that they won for won, the troopers cheered. Back on Nick Jr., the Jedi, the females, and the kids watched sitting around a circle of fire while the Face is mumbling. "What are they doing?" asked Tommy to his former master. "Summoning the spirit of fire, most likely." responded Obi-Tim. As the Face speaks, Obi-Tim translated, "'The mother weeps, she is sick. Our warriors have failed. Failed to heal the mother. Into the neverending winter, a strange comes, tell us why he has come. What is his purpose'?" The Face took some mystical grinds and throw them into the fire. As a smoke cloud forms, ever yone sees an image of some sort of ghost hand appearing. "Hoe kazette..." mumbled the Face as did the other females. "Weird." said Obi-Tim puzzled. "They are saying 'ghost hand'. What do you..." Suddenly, Obi-Tim's eyes widen in realization. He then grabs Tommy's hand, the metal one that replaced his real one, and hold it up for everyone to see, shouting, "Hoe kazette! Hoe kazette!" Everyone besides the Jedi gasped in astoundment and awe. Tommy is the only one not knowing what is going no. "What are you doing?" asked Tommy confused. "On the contrary, it's what you're going to do." Obi-Tim said smiling. Tommy is not sure he like the sound of that. Back at Coruscant, Arnda stood on a top of a destroyed ship as he sees a bunch of ships and robots coming. With a glare, Arnda uses the Force to lifted the roller bots onto the enemy fighter, crashing and destroying them. When the tanks appeared, Arnda uses the Force once more to shove everything back into the big ship from where they came from. The ship then was shoved backwards into another ship, crashing into each other. Arnda sees two more ships coming and uses the Force once more to get rid of them. "We're going ground in Sector 4!" reported a X-Clone Trooper's voice over a radio. "We need some help! We're losing ground!" The Jedi Master didn't waste time upon hearing that and uses the Force to jump onto his noble horse's back. Arnda quickly rode off into battle riding his horse. Back on Nick Jr., Tommy stood topless and embarrassed as he watches the Face takes some slugs from a basket and instructing the Jedi to hold still. It threw the slugs onto Tommy. The Jedi groans as the slugs marks him. "Is this really necessary?" asked Tommy groaning. "You should. It's part of the ritual that you got to be respectful." Obi-Tim said as he watches. When the slugs are done, the Face speaks to Tommy as Obi-Tim translated, "You must follow the wind, for it is the mother's cry. Travel her tears, they are frozen with fear. Enter the mother's mouth to awake her inner flame." Later, as Tommy gets on the Oswald to begin his big quest, Obi-Tim walked up to him. "Tommy, although you have never taken the official trials, the war itself has tested you more than they did." explained Obi-Tim. Tommy paused of this as his former master continued, "There is one trial you haven't done that Arnda has foresaw. The Force has guided us to do that final trial, the one you have yet to faced." Tommy sighed then looked at Obi-Tim as he said, "Master, I know I haven't been vewry patient, but I did prove myself." As he continued, Tommy got on the Oswald's head. "I am a Jedi Knight and I won't fail you." "No, Tommy," said Obi-Tim as he smiles. "Do not failed yourself." 'What does that mean?' thought Tommy. He then nods however and goes to go about his journey. "May the Force be with you." said Obi-Tim as he watches his former apprentice leave. Back on Coruscant, the troopers are losing very fast in Sector 4. "Sector needs some reinforcements! We are being overrunned! Repeat, we are..." The Trooper Leader didn't finished as one of the robots shot at him, killing him. As a robot attacked the leader, this leader attacked it, slammed his huge gun onto another, and destroyed it. Then he took his hand gun out and fired at more of the robots. However, the robots kept on coming. "Fall back, fall back!" yelled the trooper to his troops. "Hold your positions!" The troops sees Arnda riding in on his horse as he deflect the lasers with his lightsaber. "Keep them hold at all cost!" Arnda then uses the Force and lightsaber on the evil robots. During the battle, Rocko hops into battle to help his fellow Jedi from the fighter he was on. The fighter itself crashed into the Super Battle Robosnails, destroying them. With a smirk, Rocko shoved and punched many of the robots with his quick reflexes, making sure none of the robots would even touch him while doing so. Using the Force to retrieve his lightsaber still on the fighter, he destroy another robot with it. "Master Windu!" exclaimed Arnda. Rocko sees a bunch of robots charging then jumped next to Arnda. Using the Force, they managed to shove the whole army back. Rocko gets his lightsaber out as more came. "Attack, mates!" ordered Rocko as he, Arnda, and the X-Clones attacked the robots, gaining the advantage over the enemy. Although some has destroyed the robots, some of the X-Clones got destroyed. Inside Chancellor Matthewstine's chamber, the chamber himself is drinking some tea while the whole room shook. He hears a doorbell and ring. "Come in." said the chancellor. The doors opened and Katara, two Jedi named Fire Chief and Tito Makani came in followed by some X-Clones and guards. "Matthewstine, what are you doing here?" yelled the Fire Chief alarmed. "We got to get you to your shelter at once!" said Katara concerned. Matthewstine only smiled as he stood up and looked at the group, "But the battle is so far off." "Even so, brother, we got to follow the safely protocol and.." The chancellor interrupts with a frown, "I refused to be some coward in the face of this treacherous attack! Further more," He is interrupted by a big pounding noise from out of nowhere. As everyone looked around to see what it is, Matthewstine asked, "What is that?" Upon hearing it once more, Katara realized it and gasped, "Oh no! We got to go, now!" Suddenly the noise stops as if nothing has happened. Matthewstine smiles as he stood in front of a window saying, "There, you see? It was nothing to be concerned about." Katara gasped in horror as she sees something peeking in the window from behind the chancellor. She screams, "Chancellor!" Before the chancellor could responded, whatever it is crashed through the window into the room knocking the chancellor to the ground. As Matthewstine looked up, he gasped as he sees a wicked evil figure looming before them getting ready to strike. It is General Smytus. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 10 2006, 09:38 PM Post #24 |
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The evil robot general smirks evilly as he approaches the chancellor, smashing the broken glass doing so. But despite his evil appearance, Matthewstine stood up and only glares at the attacker. "How dare you barge into my private residence without permission?" Matthewstne. "Who do you think you are anyway?" "Uh, Chancellor, I don't think..." Katara begins to say, very concerned as she sees the mean look Smytus is giving to the chancellor. "I'd handle this." Matthewstine said to Katara, then roughly to Smytus, "I am Supreme Chancellor Matthewstine of the Nick Republic and I am not about to be pushed over by some robotic bully who just happens to..." Smytus tries to grab the chancellor but Katara uses the Force to pulled him back into the Jedi's arms in time. "Take him!" yelled Katara as she, the Fire Chief, Tito, and some troopers make their escape while the remaining troops and the guards stay behind to attack Smytus. As the troops fired, Smytus jumped at them, turning his lightsabers on and begins striking the enemy down. He continues his attack, throwing a trooper out of the building and using his foot to grab a trooper by the head and smashed him. As an empty helmet fell of, he smashed that as well. Outside, the Jedi are the elevator with the Fire Chief pressing the button to summon the elevator. They waited anxiously or nervously as they hear slashing and screaming noises from Matthewstine's residence. They hear another noise that confused them. "Did he has a chainsaw?" asked Tito confused. (Author's note: That was a joke from the commentary that indicated that the chainsaw noise was heard.) As the group looks concerned, the Fire Chief kept pushing the elevator button like a madman. "Come on! Come on, you midget elevator!" yelled the Fire Chief. "Stay behind me, everyone." warned Katara getting ready. "Of course." nodded Matthewstine staying behind katara. Everyone watched while the Fire Chief kept on pushing the elevator button. Suddenly the residence door smashed down and Smytus came running on the wall fours to the walls chasing after them. The Fire Chief uses the Force on Smytus but the robot dodged it by jumping to the other wall. Katara narrowed her eyes as Tito tried to use the Force by Smytus dodged once more by jumping. However, Katara uses the Force on the wall Smytus is about to jumped to and the wall collapses knocking SMytus down. The elevator doors opened up allowing the group to come in. Smytus recovered and chasing after them again. However Tito breaths in and out and yelled out a huge sonic wave, knocking Smytus down. Parts of the ceilingg collapses, burying Smytus under it. After he's done, Tito got into the elevator and it headed straight down. Back in the elevator, everyone waited while the chancellor looks at Tito. "He's an Hawaiian that has a bunch of big throats." explained Katara to the chancellor. "So I heard." said Matthewstine with a frown. Back upstairs, Smytus is not dead yet as he smashed his way out of the rubble in fury. He comes over, forces the elevator doors opened and looked down angrily. "No one does that to Smytus and lives! No one!" boomed Smytus angrily. As the elevator with the group continues down, elevator music is playing. They then took a look to the left and sees a familiar robot general running alongside the elevator trying to catch up. "Does that guy ever heard of stairs?" asked the Fire Chief in disbelief. One of the troopers put a missile his bazooka, aims, and fired at Smytus, making a big broken grass hole in the elevator. Smytus dodged the missile while the group coughed due to the smoke. "Note to self: forbid any missiles that smoke in elevator." grumbled the chancellor. When the elevator has reached the bottom, they run out. "We got to get Matthewstine to the shelter before..." Katara was interrupted as the group sees something, a bunch of Super Battle Robosnails surrounding them. Smytus landed in front of them, unharmed. "Attack!" ordered the robot general. The robots aimed as they marched. Tito jumped in front once more and yells out a huge sonic wave once more knocking he robots back. This time, Smytus was prepared as his metal toes clawed onto the ground, keeping him up. He stomped slowly to the group, uneffected by the sonic wave. He got close after Tito was done. "Oh boy. We're in trouble now, brother." yelped Tito as he sees that Smytus has gotten close. The group runs from Smytus who begins to go in pursuit. "Get some support now!" Katara ordered a X-Clone trooper. "We can't! They are jamming us! We can't called for support! We're on our own this time!" yelled out the X-CLone Trooper. Just when things couldn't get worst, two robot guards with electro staffs appeared and blocked them. They are Cluster Bodyguards, Smytus's special type of robot. Before they could attack, Katara quickly jumped over them. Tito, holding Matthewstine, and the Fire Chief jumped over them as well. The troopers however stay behind to attack but the Bodyguards quickly knocked their weapons away from them then knocked them off the edge to their doom below. "Don't let them escape!" ordered Smytus, lightsabers out, as he and his robots begin to chase the Jedi. Back on Nick Jr., Tommy continued his journey through a nasty blizzard. Despite this, he managed to continue going as the elder's words, translated to him by Obi-Tim, runs through his head. 'You must follow the wind, for it is the mother's cry'. After a while, Tommy is almost to where he's supposed to be at. 'Travel her tears, they are frozen with fear'. Tommy has now reached a cave, got off his ride, and entered it. 'Enter the mother's mouth to awake her inner flame'. Tommy entered a cave and looks at it in wonder. There is a bunch of drawings all around, telling stories. Tommy has to dodged heated smoke that is coming from the ground and he continues on. He soon headed inside a huge amount of steam clouding him. Tommy uses the Force to move the steay away and soon sees some drawings on the wall, what looks like the inhabitants of planet Nick Jr. 'What is this?' thought Tommy as he looked on. Suddenly he groaned as he felt something. He looks like he is having a vision as fumes were surrounding Tommy. In Tommy's vision, the people of Nick Jr. were prosperous. Until that day when a huge evil demon attacked, eating one of them. The other wome try to get away but the demon trapped them. Before he could close in for the kill, a warrior came from nowhere and killed it. The people cheered but the demon's final ounce cost the warrior his arm. A woman, the love of his life, helped him give the warrior some sort of 'ghost hand' (kinda like Tommy's metal hand). With a smile, this warrior uses the arm to dispose of a predator whjle his love cheered. He sees two birds carrying two villagers and attacked it to forced it to let go. Another predator attacked while the villagers watched the warrior disposed of it. Yes, he was considered the bestest and proudest warrior. But suddenly, his 'ghost hand' got a life of its own and begin destroying everything this warrior knew. The warrior watched in horror as the hand took the girl he loves. Suddenly the warrior himself screamed as he was split in two, one light, one dark. The dark side destroyed him and this dark figure soon formed into a figure in a body armor that is mixed with orange and black colors complained with an evil looking mask. Tommy could sworn he heard Kimi crying out, "Tommy!" Tommy, back to reality, screamed as he fell to the ground. He woke up, breathing in and out. "Man, what a nightmare." Tommy said with a groan. He paused, then said, but what if it isn't? What could it mean?" Suddenly he hears a mechanical noise and turned to see a huge machine. "So that is what I came for." Tommy said as he walks twoards it. Back on planet Coruscant, the Jedi keeping the chancellor safe kept on jumping with the Cluster Bodyguards in hot pursuit. They then fell to the platform as the evil bots begin to attack Katara. As she tries to fight them on, more of the Cluster Bodyguards chases the Fire Chief since he has the chancellor with him. Tito does his best to help his friends as they kept on running with the robots and Smytus in pursuit. "We got to keep on moving!" yelled out Katara. "What the heck do you think we're doing?" yelled the Fire Chief. They got to the entrance and jumped onto a white ship that was passing by. Just when they thought they were safe, the Cluster Bodyguards jumped to where they are and begin their attack. Katara blocked their electro staffs with her lightsaber. The Fire Chef try to hit one with his lightsaber but the Cluster Bodyguard's electro staff kept blocking his attacks. The Jedi kept on fighting while Tito kept Matthewstine safe. Katara manged to dodged the lasers fired at her while one of the robots came close to Tito. "Stay behind me, brother!" Tito yelled to Matthewstine as he uses the Force to knock the Cluster Bodyguard off the ship. Before it could go too far though, the Bodyguard uses a grappler it has for a hand and grabs a part of ship, allowing it to hauled itself back up. Back on the ship, Katara kept on striking and dodging towards the robots. During thsi big battle, more of the Cluster Bodyguards along with Smytus jumped on. With an evil smirk, Smytus hits the engines with his lightsabers. "Next stop, doom!" laughed Smytus. The ship, losing power, came crashing down. Matthewstine held on as the Jedi jumped from the ship that crashed into a nearby sign. They landed safely on the ground. As Smytus and his robots, unharmed from the whole thing, landed, the Jedi and the chancellor make the beeline for the Monorail Station, the enemy chasing after them. The chase continues at a machine that asked for credits in order for people to go on to the Monorail. The Jedi with Matthewstine jumped over it, the Cluster Bodyguards run through, and Smytus destroy the machine and anything else, all not bothering to pay. At the station, monorails were rushing back and forth. The gang only jumped in and out of the track when the monorails has went by. However, Smytus and his goons has catch up to tehm and resumed the battle. Smytus attacks the Fire Chief who is holding Matthewstine. The Jedi blocked the general's lightsaber attacks while Tito dodged the electro staff swings by a Cluster Bodyguard, trying to hit it but failed. Suddenly a monorail appeared, cutting the fight short between Tito and Smytus. As for Katara, she was blocking a Cluster Bodyguard's attacks while she is on the tracks. Another arrived and tried to attack, but Katara blocks each swing. When she sees a monorail coming, she and her attackers got out in the nick of time. For Tito, he was trying not to get hit by the Cluster Bodyguards' electro staffs. He kept blocking while dodging any coming and going monorails. Tito jumped into the tracks and out while dodging another monorail. Katara kept on fighting and dodging during her fight with a Cluster Bodyguard. She shoved herself away while struggling with a monorail blocking the robot's view. The fight seems to go on and on with the Jedi fighting the robots and dodging the monorails. The Fire Chief narrowed avoid the robots jumping away, then another monorail blocked their view. With Katara, she jumped over each monorail with a Cluster Bodyguard in pursuit. The robot kept trying to hit her but Katara kept on blocking and dodging a nearly hit by a monorail. The blocking and attacking continues on with the girl and robot between monorails as it does. Finally, Katara managed to hit the robot's left arm, slashing it. Quickly, she goes for the legs, waist, then the head. Finally her attacker fell to the ground, destroyed. After a monorail went by, another Cluster Bodyguard sees Katara who used the Force to throw the destroyed bot's remains at it but the Cluster Bodyguard managed to block the attack with his electo staff. After that, the robot went after Katara. Before it could hit her, Katara uses the Force to knock it into a nearby monorail. As Tito continued his way with the remaining Robot Bodyguards, he jumped on a top of a passing monorail. He rode on it, looking for the others. "Come on, brothers. Where are you?" Tito asked lookiing around. He smirked as he sees the Fire Chief struggling wtih his enemy. Tito quickly jumped. The Fire Chief sees Tito coming, smirked, and stops fighting. As the robot turned confused, looking to see why the Fire Chief has stop fighting, Tito destroyed the robot quickly sending it remains to the ground. "Thank goodness it's you! You're a hero!" said the Fire Chief happily "Thanks, brother." Tito said with a smile. "Very good job, everyone." said Matthewstine, a smile on his face. Katara jumped down, panting. "We got to leave, now!" Suddenly, as another monorail passed by, Katara looks shocked as she sees Smytus right behind her. Smytus begins his attack as the Jedi fights him, the evil robot blocking their attacks. He kicked Tito and the Fire Chief out of the way. With an evil smirk, he advances on Katara and Matthewstine, trapping them near a broken down monorail. "And so it ends..." boomed Smytus. "I won't let you hurt him, Smytus." said Katara with determination. She sees another monorail nearby that is working and uses the Force to tie Smytus's cape to it. No one but Matthewstine noticed. "A valiant effort, but as you can see, it's ultimately futile!" boomed Smytus. "Now Jedi...Katara, was it, prepare yourself for you are about to leave this world." "I don't think so." said Katara with a smirk. Katara threws a rock at a nearby button and soon the monorail that Smtyus's cape is tied to blasts off like a rocket taking the robot along. Katara sighed, now that Smytus is gone for now. "Good work, Master Jedi." said Matthewstine as the other Jedi recovered and returned. "It won't last for long. We got to get going!" said Katara. The group runs quickly as Katara destroys a nearby window. The group, with Matthewstine holding on, jumped out of the broken window out of the building, all the while the remaining Cluster Bodyguards just stood there and watch. Back on planet Nick Jr., Tommy was climbing up the huge machine looking around. The whole place looks like it was full of technology. He jumped around, dodging the Battle SIRs that are in the area. He managed to make his way upward without getting caught and got to the top area. As he made his way through the area, he hears a voice. "I still don't think the brain modulations are tested yet! We can't guaanteed any control of our specimens!" Tommy stops and sees masked figures (wearing the same clothes as the Darth Vader parody wore in the golf episode of Rocko's Modern Life) passed by. "I don't think Smytus cares for he is getting impatient." remarked the leader. "We got to deliver what we can ASAP." "But we're not ready yet!" pointed out a fellow masked figure as he bowed. Tommy looked concerned as the leader continues, "I don't think Smytus gives a care about us or what we think. We must get the final phase moving on the last specimen. I will perform the procedure myself." "Very well sir." Tommy turned and gasped upon seeing something. It is some sort of ugly looking cat in kid like clothes in a tube (Huckle Cat from the Busy Town of Richard Scarry). The Jedi looked and what he sees concerned his suspicion. There are other tubes filled of people, the warriors the village has send but never came back! "Oh my gosh! What are they doing to you?" asked Tommy in disbelief. Tommy hears a noise and followed it to its source: a lab. He then sees a turtle named Franklin being put into a tube. Despite his protests, the masked figures closed the lid. With a smirk, the leader pushes a button and green like slime came pouring it. The leader pulled a lever shocking Franklin and causing him to scream as the mutation ooze begins to take its effect. "No!" yelled Tommy as he runs forward. The robots sees him and attacked but Tommy uses his lightsaber and the Force to dispose of them. "Jedi!" gasped the masked figure. More robots came in to attack but they ended up getting destroyed as well. Franklin watches this as he kept mutating. The masked figure turned to the one who was concerned about the mutations earlier. "Release the specimens now!" "But they are not ready!" gasped the masked figure in horror. "Do it!" The leader shoved the minion aisde and pushed a button, opening a door behind Tommy. When Tommy destroyed the last of the robots, he turned and sees the Nick Jr. mutated residents coming on with some weird looking straps on them. Franklin gasped as the mutants growled evilly at Tommy. "Destroy him!" ordered the masked leader pointing at Tommy. Obeying, the mutants marched forward at Tommy. "Wait, don't!" Tommy yelled waving his hand forward in protest. "I came to help you! You have been altered! You got to control yourselves! Stop! I don't want to hurt you!" But his words proved futile as, while Franklin watched in horror, Tommy finds himself surrounded. Then the kitty monster, Huckle, roars as the mutants prepared to attack. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 11 2006, 05:59 PM Post #25 |
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Back on Coruscant, the troopers kept firing at the robots while standing near a robot. A trooper with some red on him jumped down and fired. They then charged firing at the enemy while some of the tanks get blown up. "Forward! Keep up the pressure on the right!" ordered the Red Trooper. "What about our left flag?" asked a X-Clone Trooper. "The Jedi has that one." Speaking of the Jedi, they continued their fight against the invading forces while Arnda and Rocko Force pushed the huge Super Battle Robosnails. Rocko run to the ones still around and attack them with his lightsaber. He destroyed a few, glares, then charges again. Arnda slashed a robot while blocking the lasers. As he looks around, Arnda speaks to his noble steed. "Best for you to leave. It is not safe for you here." Arnda said calmly. The horse nodded as Arnda jumped off and run off to escape. Arnda spun the lasers away and destroys the legs of the multi-armed bots. He kept destroying some more while Rocko block the lasers. The wallaby sees a multi-armed bot firing a laser at him but the Jedi blocked it and used the laser against some of the robots, destroying them including the one blasting at him. Nostrada jumped in and jumped his friend with blocking the lasers. "I find this strategy to be a bit strange, do you?" Arnda asked Rocko. "Yes, mate. For some reason, none of these blokes are going after the temple or Senate." Rocko responded. Arnda paused to think. "Unless...this is only a distraction?" "Of course! To hide their primary objective!" They both got it at the same time as they said, "Matthewstine!" Rocko sees a flagship with troopers and jumped up to it. Once he went inside, he begin shouting instructions. "Turn this ship around down!" ordered Rocko. "Yes sir." said the X-Clone pilot as he turned the ship around and flies to where Nixonstine may have gone to. The Jedi and Matthewstine arrives at the capsule that will take the chancellor to the shelter he will be hiding in. Although the chancellor, Tito, and the Fire Chief went in, for some reason Katara stay inside. "Get going to the bunker!" Katara ordered' "But shouldn't you come too, Katara?" asked Matthewstine puzzled. "I'd stay here and make sure they won't get you, sir." "How do we know they are still coming after us?" Katara narrowed her eyes. "Because I know." Sure enough, metal footsteps are heard coming their way. Katara turns to the Fire Chief and Tito. "Keep the chancellor safe." "I see. We hope you lived through this one, sister." said Tito nodding safely. "May the Force be with you." agreed the Fire Chief. "And the both of you." added Katara smiling. "This selfless sacrifice will be long remembered in the archives in the Jedi Order." said Matthewstine, seemingly smiling. 'Funny, he seems rather please about that.' thought Katara. But she shook whatever feeling she has off as the others got into the capsule and it took off, leaving Katara behind. She turned around, getting her lightsaber ready. Soon the Cluster Bodyguards arrived just as the Jedi has expected them to. With a smirk, she turns her lightsaber on, getting ready for battle. At the factory, the mutated Nick Jr. residents aimed their metal arms at Tommy. "You got fight this! You are being controlled!" explained Tommy in concern as held his lightsaber tightly. "You got to control yourself! I will defend myself if I had to!" Ignoring Tommy, the mutants fired at him forcing the Jedi to block the lasers with his lightsaber. Using the Force, he knocked two Nick Jr. mutants down, shocking Franklin who was still watching this. Frankliny roared as Tommy slashed the gun off of Huckle, still shoving him and two more mutants. Franklin, not wanting to watch anymore of this, begins to fight his way free. As the Jedi kept dodging the mutants' fire and Force shoving them, something happened. Tommy turned and sees Franklin breaking out of his glass priuson and chains. For a while, Tommy thought the mutated turtle is going to charge him but he only jumped on a guy named Joe, stopping him. As Tommy watched, Franklin shoved Joe and pulled the chain on his chest, making the guy screamed. Franklin turned to Tommy speaking to him. Of course, Tommy has no idea what the creature was trying to say as the mutation can only make him speaks gibberish. In order to explain it, Franklin goes over to a creature named Rupert and pulled his chain out making the bear screamed as Franklin shows Tommy while speaking in gibberish. 'Now I get it! I have to break the chains to free these guys!' thought Tommy. Tommy then breaks the chain on another Nick Jr. resident, making him scream, then the Jedi goes to do the same thing to Huckle. This continues on as more of the mutants screamed as their chains were being pulled out. Soon they are now free of the masked creatures' control. The Nick Jr. residents scratched their heads, trying to figure out what just happened. Franklin speaks to them in gibberish as Tommy watch. The mutants understood him as he nods. Now understanding what they must do, the other mutants goes to help their friends. Franklin turned to Tommy and pointed to some sort of crystal in a sphere nearby, speaking in gibberish. Tommy figured out what he's talking about. "I understand. I know what I must do." said Tommy nodding. Tommy then flew off to do his task. Katara continues her fight against the evil robots. She tried to strike them but they kept on blocking them with their electro staffs. She ran and jumped to another part of the chamber, fighting and jumping backwards. During the fighting, Katara sees a robot jumping up to her. Katara moved before this Cluster Bodyguard could hit her. The robots kept chasing Katara as she begins to get tired. She kept on trying to strike and block as she Force shoved one of them. Finally one of the electro staffs hits her in the hand, knocking her lightsaber away from her. Katara gasped as she sees the robots waving their staffs at her. Quickly, she dodged and tried to blocking with her arms, cringing in pain as she does so. She got behind one of the robots, nearly trying to hit her. Luckily she grabbed its arms, blocking the other bots' staffs. She then flipped and shoved the robot off, taking its staff. Waving the staff around, she gets ready to fight as she jumped and slashed the head of a Cluster Bodyguard. She then stabbed another and tripped a few. She kept on fighting the enemy robots, blocking their staffs with her and destroying some. Katara stabbed a robot in the chest, blocked another's staff and knocked it away and knee-kicking its head. Back at the factory, Tommy fight the robots trying to hurt him and used to the Force to jump up on each floor until he arrives to where the crystal is at. Once he gets to the area's top, he looks at the electric sphere that held the crystal he's after. The mutants meanwhile kept destroying the robots while breaking their friends out of their slime chamber prisons down below while some of them chased after their masked torturers who run from them screaming like the cowards they are. Tommy, meanwhile, jumped to the sphere's top, grabbing onto the side while sliding down it. Once he stops, he hears the crystal and sighs. He gets his lightsabner out expecting to cut it open but it didn't work. The electric barrier was keeping it at bay. "Man, I can't cut through this!" groaned Tommy as he puts his lightsaber away. He then looks at his metal hand and sighs, "I guess there can only be one way to resolved this. Though it isn't going to be pretty." Tommy slowly leaned his metal hand towards the crystal. Then suddenly he forced himself through the electric barrier screaming in pain. Using the Force, he got the crystal then, while still screaming, he broke it. Soon after the crystal was destroyed, the whole factory begins blowing up like mad as Tommy makes his escape. The mutants chased the masked figured up above while the villains try to make the escape to their shuttle. The robots fired at the mutants trying to stop them but they kept getting destroyed. Soon a huge stream came out and wiped the last robots out. With the crystal and its machine now gone, the winter is over as the blizzard disappeared and the frozen river's ice begins to melt. The sun, which has been hiding ever since who knows when, begins to makes its reappearance. Tommy came out of the factory and sees the masked figures trying to escape while some of them gets ready to fire at the mutants. This has made Tommy very angry. He uses the Force to crushed one of the figures' snouts and tossed him to the ground. The mutants stopped fighting as they watch Tommy Forced shoved another masked figure. He then Forced crusht he platform, sending the figures falling. The masked leader, looking very upset, aims his weapon at Tommy. But the Jedi sees him and uses the Force to lift the leader up. Then, to the view of the mutants around, Tommy Force choked the masked leader until he is dead. The mutants were silent as Tommy dropped the leader's remains and sighed. The Jedi looked at the mutants, waiting for their response. Suddenly, to Tommy's surprise, the mutants with guns as their arms, tored them from themselves while roaring. Then they begin to the chant to Tommy. "Hoe Kazette! Hoe Kazette! Hoe Kazette!" chanted the mutants. Tommy is impressed. 'Wow. I guess I am really something, huh?' He thought. Back at the villages, the people and Obi-Tim there sees Tommy returning with the mutants. The females were expecting to see their loved ones returning home. What they saw shocked them: mutated versions of the residents who has arrived. The villagers looked on, not sure how to respond. Franklin looked sad, fearing that his loved ones will reject him because of how he looks now. But then Bear, one of the villagers, came up to Franklin. After looking at him, he recognized Franklin, smiled as he touch his friend's hand. "Franklin." said Bear with a smile. Franklin smiled happily as he hugs his friend. Now realizing that the mutants are still the ones they thought to have lost forever, the other females run over and greeted the other mutants as well. The Face smiled. After so long, the missing warriors has returned home. Obi-Tim noticed a down look on Tommy's face. Later, as the ones who removed their guns gets new arms, the whole village are having a celebration after finally being liberated from their wicked nightmare. As Tommy stood nearby watching, Obi-Tim came up to him, saying, "You did a good thing for these people, Tommy. Very good." "I guess." Tommy said with a sigh. "Say, what else did you experienced while you were in that cave?" Tommy hesitated, not sure if he wants to talked about the nightmare that ends with some sort of wicked figure. "Well, I listened to the mother like the Face has said and...well, I saw a vision. One that scared me." "What is it?" asked Obi-Tim concerned. Tommy, not wanting to talk about it really, changed the subject, "So you think these people's lives will return to normal?" "Not right away, but it will, as long as each of them are willing to accept himself." Obi-Tim said smiling. Tommy paused to think. Could this be true? Once the capsule has stopped, the Fire Chief, Tito, and Matthewstine runs into the shelter. As they run in, the lockdown door closed behind them, the last door closing behind the chancellor. "Well, I think we lost him." said the Fire Chief with a sigh. Suddenly Tito realized something and yelled, "I don't think so brother!" Tito pushed Matthewstine out of the way turning his lightsaber on and for a good reason. Two familiar lightsabers were turned on. Quickly, the Fire Chief turned his lightsaber on as, for a shocking reason, Smytus appeared from the shadows attacked. As this happened, Matthewstine backed away into the shadows. For some reason, he was smirking rather evilly about this. The Jedi continued fighting, putting the evil robot in a saberlock. "How did you get in here?" demanded the Fire Chief. "Like I am going to tell you!" sneered Smytus. Suddenly, to the Jedi's surprise, Smytus splitted his arms, now he has four arms! Then he takes out two more lightsabers turning them. Now it's the Jedi with two lightsabers and Smytus four. Back upstairs, Katara kept on fighting the Cluster Bodyguards, unaware of what's going on in the shelter. She got her lightsaber back via the Force and begins to fight the evil robots with both it an the electro staff. She twirled around, expecting a challenge. To her surprise, after blocking some more staffs, the Cluster Bodyguards lifted their weapons and backed away into the shadows. Katara looked puzzled. Why are they leaving? Shouldn't Smytus has arrived by now? Unless... "No!" gasped Katara in a horrible realization as she used her Force to make a fast run to the shelter, hoping she is not too late. Back in the shelter, Tito kept on trying to block, but Smytus laughed evilly as, much to the Fire Chief's horror, he slashed Tito, killing him instantly. Katara runs on trying to get to the shelter on time. The Fire Chief kept on blocking but he screamed as Smytus slashed at him, ending his life forever. All the while Katara is still trying to make it the shelter. Smirking at his victory, Smytus turned all but one lightsaber off then opened up the doors. He then approached the chancellor. "You're mine now, old man!" chuckled Smytus. "I am not that old, you know, and I am not afraid of you! Besides, you don't dare hurt the Nick Republic's Supreme Chancellor!" Then Matthewstine smirked as if he knows something Smytus does not. "What would your master say?" Angrily, Smytus grabs the chancellor yelling, "Just be lucky they want you alive!" Just then, Katara runs in and gasps in horror as she sees the dead bodies of Tito and the Fire Chief on the ground. She then sees Smytus holding onto Matthewstine. "Chancellor!" gasped Katara in horror. "Ah, Katara. You're here to save me." said Matthewstine with a weak smile. "You jerk!" yelled Katara as she runs forward and tries to hit Smytus with her lightsaber. Unfortunately, the villain's armor makes it difficult for him to get hurt. Smytus grabs Katara by her wrist and neck. "Aw, poor, tired little girl..." mocked Smyus evilly as he rubs Katara's cheek. He then takes her lightsaber away as he said, "You won't need that anymore. I got something else in mind." Chuckling evilly, a bunch of cables begins to come out. Outside at the ship, Smytus is bringing his captive right into it. Inside the main controls, one of the Cluster Bodyguards sees a ship coming and fires at it. Rocko, who was in it, jumped out and landed near the ship. Smytus sees him and gets ready to attacked. But then Rocko uses the Force to crush his metal chest area, making the robot gasped. He begins to kneel on the floor and cough badly. The ship lifts off beginning to makes its getaway. Rocko jumped up trying to get to it while lasers were fired at him. He blocked them as parts of his cloak get shot, forcing him to land back onto the ground. He looks up and sees that the ship is already on its way out to space. With great concern, he headed to the shelter. Upon entering, he gasped as he sees Tito and the Fire Chief dead and Katara tied up with the cables by Smytus. "Katara!" exclaimed Rocko as he goes over to help her get freed. "I'm sorry, Rocko. I've failed." groaned Katara. She knew that her failure is going to haunt her for the rest of her days. If she has that long. On a ship, Tommy is busy working on a new metal hand while R2-SY helped him. "I was wondering where you were." said Obi-Tim as he arrives. "When I couldn't find you at the med-lab, I decided you got to be here." Tommy smiled as he puts a black glove on his metal hand. "I was just finishing up. See? Good as new." Obi-Tim nodded, then he sighs as he said, "Tommy, the most difficult trial a Jedi must face is to look inside oneself. And often, we see things that we don't like. But these aspects are not set in stone. It is our destinations that shape our destinies." Tommy paused to think about this. Could he able to fight off that evil destiny he just saw? Before he could asked, R2-SY suddenly speaks up, getting the Jedi's attention. "An urgent message from planet Coruscant?" asked Tommy surprised. R2-SY responded with a 'yes'. "Then patch it through!" R2-SY did as he was asked and a hologram of a concern Rocko appeared in front of them. "Skywalker, Kenobi! We got bad news! Coruscant is under attack! And that bloke Smytus has seized Matthewstine! You got to come back here at once! You must rescue Matthewstine!" exclaimed Rocko. "Smytus." said Tommy angrily as he narrowed his eyes. "Now that robot went and kidnapped one of my best friends! He has gone too far!" Tommy stood up and runs to the other troopers, saying, "Okay! Battle Stations everyone! Get the crews and fighters into hyperspace, now!" Back at Coruscant, the ships were fighting above the planet as Tommy and Obi-Tim will soon arrived there. What they don't know is that this battle will change Tommy Skywalker's destiny forever...and for the worst. The End. Cast list (in order of appearance) Spencer Klein: Arnda (Arnold) Alec Baldwin: Obi-Tim Kenobi (Timmy Turner) Harry Shearer: Supreme Chancellor Matthewstine/Darth Shadowilious (Stan Matthews/Shadow Man) Patrick Warburton: Various X-Clones (Mr. X) E.G. Daily: Tommy Skywalker (Tommy Pickles) Charlie Adler: Ed Hill (Ed Bighead) Rob Paulsen: Brainiac IV, Carl Wheezer Christopher Lee: Count Christopher/Darth Matrianica (The Matrianica) Grey Delisle: Azula Ventress (Princess Azula), Tootie Cree Summer: Jedi Master Susie (Susie Carmichael) David Kaufman: Captain Danho (Danny Fenton/Phantom) Dionne Quan: Senator Kimi Finisterdala Skywalker (Kimi Watanabe Finster) John Kricfalusi: C-REN (Ren Hoek) Billy West: R2-SY (Stimpy Cat) Stephen Moverley: Ozu Tim Curry: Ni-Gel Thorndi (Nigel Thornberry) Mae Whitman: Katara Christine Cavanaugh: Oblina Steven Jay Blum: General Smytus (Smytus), Jedi Tito Makani Jr. Samuel Vincent: Martin Mystery Joe Alaskey: Lou-Gon Jinn (Grandpa Lou) Carlos Alazraqui: Rocko Windu (Rocko Wallaby) Justin Shenkaro: Jedi Master Harold (Harold Barman) Jake Toranzo-Szymanski: Jedi Master Diego (Diego) Mr. Lawrence: Jedi Master Larry (Larry the Lobster) Toran Caudell: Wolfgang Clancy Brown: Pangborn Ralph Bakshi: Jedi Fire Chief Mark McMulkin: Bear Another story is done and one of my best yet! The Nicktoons or Star Wars stuff do not belong to me. They belong to Nickelodeon and George Lucas. Stan Matthews/Shadow Man is a parody of a friend named Guy. Read and review, folks! Thank you! |
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