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| Ash-Laddin; My second Aladdin parody | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 23 2006, 07:29 PM (1,837 Views) | |
| JusSonic | Sep 23 2006, 07:29 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note This parody is another suggestion by my pal Darth Ben Vader, who I am dedicating the story to. Enjoy it because I know he will. Ash-Laddin In desert somewhere, a male beagle was riding a camel to a destination. He had white fur, a black spot on his back, black ears, black beady eyes, and he was wearing a stylish Italian black collar studded with gold. This beagle was none other than Snoopy. As he rides on, he begins to sing. Snoopy: Oh I come from a land From a faraway place Where the caravan camels roam Where it's flat and immense And the heat is intense It's barbaric, but hey--it's home! When the wind's at your back And the sun's from the west And the sand in the glass is right Come on down, Stop on by Hop a carpet and fly To another Cartoonian night! Cartoonian nights Like Cartoonian days More often than not Are hotter than hot In a lot of good ways Cartoonian nights 'Neath Cartoonian moons A fool off his guard Could fall and fall hard Out there on the dunes. Snoopy and his camel got to their destination: the little town of Alabasta (from the show One Piece though it's a country, not town). The camel runs out of breath and stops. Snoopy got off. He then sees a pink hedgehog named Amy Rose walking by an dstops her. "Ah, hello there!" said Snoopy excited. Amy looks at him as he continues, "Good evening, little pink hedgehog! Come closer!" Amy shrugs and got closer. She got too close as she got into Snoopy's face literally. "Too close, too close!" protested Snoopy. Amy sighs in annoyance and walked back a bit. Snoopy recovers then continues, "Now welcome to Alabasta, city of mystery, enchatnment, and the best stuff to buy this side of the river Nile, come on down!" Snoopy step up shop as he said this. "No thanks. I am not interested." said Amy, rolling her eyes. "Please! Just a few sec!" Snoopy said as he takes out a machine. "Take a look at this! A combination hookah and coffee maker, make Julienne fries!" Snoopy demonstrates by making fries with the thing. "And it will not break, it will..." Snoopy taps the product on the side of his table too hard and it breaks into pieces. "Doesn't break, huh?" asked Amy Rose with a frown. "Still needs work." said Snoopy as he got rid of the product, then takes out some Tupperware. "Well, look at this. I have never seen one of these intact before. This is the famous Dead Sea Tupperware. Listen." Snoopy opens the Tupperware up a bit then makes a raspberry. "Still good!" Snoopy noticed that Amy Rose is leaving and stopped her. "Wait! Don't do! I can see that it's something exceptionally rare that you want. Well, I believe you would be most rewarded with...this." Snoopy takes out a black box (I got this idea from Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Door) and shows it to Amy Rose. "What's so great about a black box?" asked Amy Rose bored. "Don't be fooled by its appearance, young one. Like they say, it isn't what's on the outside that counts, but what's on the inside." "Uh huh. I'm leaving." Amy Rose said as she begins to leave. "This isn't any original black box! It won't changed a young man's life, a young man who liked this box are more than what he seemed." Amy Rose stopped suddenly interested as Snoopy continued, "The Pokeball In The Rough." "Really? Who is this guy?" asked Amy Rose. "So you want to hear the tale?" asked Snoopy with a smirk. As Amy Rose nodded, Snoopy take some sand out. "It all begins on a dark night," As he said this, Snoopy throws the sand into the sky, seemingly forming stars. "Where a dark man waits, with a dark purpose." As the story begins, a man on a horse waits for someone out in the desert. He is huge black cat like creature with a big head and wearing blue and red armor. He is none other than Pete. With him are three cats. One of them is black with devil like horns, the other is white and orange cat, and the last one is dumb looking gray like cat. They are Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles. Soon someone arrives on very on foot and stopped. That someone is a short 10-year-old boy with blown back blonde hair, and who wore a purple sweater with a green stripe around the chest section. He was Dash Parr, a Super who had the power of super speed and super reaction. He looks at Pete who frowns. "About time, see? You are late!" snapped Pete annoyed. "Sorry about that. This desert sand isn't good to run on." Dash explains. "Do you have it?" "I have to beat down a couple of guys to get it, but here it is." Dash said as he takes out a crystal star half. Pete reaches for it but Dash held it back and smirks. "The treasure first." Suddenly Mr. Blik was quicker than Dash as he grabs it from the boy's hand. "Hey!" protested Dash. Pete chuckles as Mr. Blik hands the medallion over to Pete. "Not to worry, kid. You will get what you deserved." chuckled Pete. "Meow!" laughed Mr. Blik. Pete takes out another half of the crystal star and puts both halves together. Once together, the crystal star begins to glow. Suddenly it flew out of Pete's hands, flies around, and goes off into the desert. "Follow it!" Pete ordered as, once Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles got on, he followed on horse with Dash running a bit behind. The chase continues until the crystal star reaches a sand dune. It then separated into two again and plunged right into the dune, making glowing eyes. Suddenly the dune begins to rise up. As Pete, the cats, and Dash stopped, horse or otherwise, the dune has now turned into a big door with the crystal star halves acting like eyes or something. It opens up like a cave and shows some stairs leading down. "There it is! After all these years. The Thousand Year Door!" laughed Pete as he looked at the door. "Meow!" said Waffles stupidly. "Whoa." Dash said amazed at this. "Okay, remember our deal." Pete said, speaking to Dash. "You go in and get me the black box. The treasure is yours but the box is mine." Dash rubbed his hands in glee as he goes to the Thousand Year Door. "The box, the box!" laughed Mr. Blik madly. When Dash is out of earshot, Mr. Blik frowns and whispered harshly to Pete, "Geez, where did you dig this brat up?" "Quiet, Mr. Blik." warned Gordon, speaking normally as well. "Yes, quiet, see! And you too, Gordon," agreed Pete. Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles aren't allowed to let anyone that they can speak like normal humans. No one but Pete but right now the big guy is not in the mood to listen. Dash reaches the Door and is about to enter. Suddenly the Door roars and Dash was blown back. The kid looked up confused as the Door begins to speak. "Who dares disturbs my slumber?" demands the Thousand Year Door. "Uh, just me, Dash, a humble Super." chuckled Dash nervously. "Know this. Only one person can come in here. One who worth lies far within. The Pokeball In The Rough!" boomed the Thousand Year Door. Dash looked nervously and looked towards Pete. "Well, what are you waiting for? Go on!" snapped Pete, waving Dash on. Dash gulped but moves on. He reaches the entrance once and got in. He reaches the step and sets one foot down, closing his eyes doing so. When he sees that nothing has happened. He sighs and is about to move on. But the Door roared again. Dash yells and is about to run. But not even his speed saves him as the Door closes, locking Dash in. The dune begins to turn back to normal, making the crystal star halves fall out. "Seek out the Pokeball In The Rough!" boomed the Thousand Year Door as it disappeared. During the fall, sand fell onto Pete and the cats. When all is calm, Mr. Blik spits out sand in anger. "Wow! Let's do that again!" said Waffles stupidly. "I can't believe it! I can't belive this!" yelled Mr. Blik angrily as he goes over to grab the discarded crystal star halved. "We are never going to get our hands on that stupid black box! Just forget it!" As Mr. Blik gave the halves back to Pete, he pulled out his fur mumbling, "Great! I am so upset that I'm molting!" "Aw, be patient, Mr. Blik. Dash is obviously less than worthy." explains Gordon. "Oh, that is a big surprise!" snapped Mr. Blik sarcastically in Gordon's race. "This is amazing! I think I am going to lose all 9 lives from that surprise! What are we going to do? We got a big problem here, abig..." Pete suddenly grabs Mr. Blik's mouth, shutting him up. "Finally! I thought he never stop talking!" said Gordon with a smirk. "Do it again!" Waffles cheered. Pete ignored Gordon and Waffles as he thought what the Thousand Year Door has said. "Yes. Only one can entered the Thousand Year Door." said Pete in thought. "I got to find this one, this Pokeball In The Rough." Author's note Who is the Pokeball In The Rough and will Pete find him? Sorry to make Dash the thief who got killed in the beginning but Wormtail made him a bad guy in his Lion King parody (he also made June a villain too! What's with that? She isn't a bad guy, people!) and I still annoyed about that so-called Dash x June coupling. Anyway, until next time, read and review! |
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| kimicoolgirl | Sep 26 2006, 06:11 AM Post #2 |
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| JusSonic | Sep 27 2006, 05:10 PM Post #3 |
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Author's note Sorry for the delay, folks. Back to business. Chapter 2: The Pokemon Rattata The next day in Toon Two, a little boy was running across the rooftop with a loaf of bread he just stole. He is a well-built teenage boy about fourteen-years-old wearing a backpack. He had black spiky hair, and he wore a red baseball cap (which had a black stripe going down the middle from the back to the front, and there was a green arc over a green dot on the front), a blue hoody with black sleeves and a dark gray hood, along with blue pants and black and dark blue sneakers. This boy was none other than Ash Ketchum. Ash Ketchum stopped at an edge and almost lost his bread. He looks down then hears a voice behind him. "Stop, thief!" Ash turned and sees two Hammer Bros. lead by their leader approaching him, holding their weapons at Ash threateningly. Their leader is a muscular king koopa monster that was seven feet tall and seemed to be leaning over the other side. The top of his head was green and he had a tan colored snout and white sharp teeth. He also had scraggly red hair, two red baggy eye brows, two horns on his head, a spiked collar, spiked wristbands, and spiked shoulder bands. He also had sharp claws on the ends of his fingers and toes. His skin was an orangish-yellow and he had a big green turtle shell on his back with light orange spikes on the shell. He also had a tan umpire-like chest and stomach. His eyes were blood red. This guy was none other than Bowser, king of the Koopas. "I will have your hands for a trophy, Rattata!" yelled Bowser. Ash cringes. He hates being called Rattata. It makes him sound...dirty. He looked down tthe edge again then at his loaf of his bread. "All this for a loaf of bread?" joked Ash. Then before Bowser and his men could close in, Ash jumped off the roof falling. He landed on two ropes with clothes hanging out to dry and skied down them collecting clothes as he goes. Before he could get to the end of the line, a woman named Muriel Bagge sees him, screams, and closes shutters to a window at the rope's end. He slams into him and falls once more. This time, his fall was broken by a bunch of awnings and a bunch of clothes around him. After he got up and removes the clothes, he looks at the bread in triumph. "There he is!" yelled one of Bowser's Hammer Bros. from the rooftop. "He won't get away so easy!" yelled the other one. "You think that was easy?" asked Ash in disbelief as he looks up. Ash hears some chucklign and turns to see Kimi Watanabe Finster, Lil DeVille, and Susie Carmichael nearby chuckling. As Ash chuckles sheepishly, he turns and sees Bowser at the end of the alley he is in giving instructions to his men. "You two, that way! The rest of you, come with me! We'd find him!" snarled Bowser. Ash sighs as he puts a blanket over himself. He walked over to the three girls. "Morning ladies." Tommy said politely. "Getting into trouble earlier today, Ash?" Kimi asked with a smile. "Trouble? No way! The only way you could get in trouble if you get caught." "Gotcha!" yelled Bowser as he appeared from out of nowhere, grabs Tommy and held him up, removing his disguise. "I'm in trouble!" yelped Tommy. "And this time..." Bowser didn't finished as he is suddenly electrocuted by an unknown attacker, making him let Tommy go. As Tommy landed, he smiles upon seeing a yellow furred Pokemon nearby laughing in Pokemon talk. "Good work, Pikachu as usual!" Ash said congratulating his friend. "Pikachu!" said Pikachu with a smile. "Come on, let's get outta here!" said Ash as he and Pikachu makes a run for it. One of Bowser's Koopa Troopas blocked him and tries to attack him and Pikachu with a spear. Ash begins to sing. Ash: Gotta keep...one jump ahead of the breadline One swing ahead of the sword Pikachu raspberries the Koopa Troopa making the guy angry. Ash quickly pulled his shell off revealing his plain white t-shirt. The Koopa Troopa swings at Pikachu but missed and destroys a fish barrel, making fish fall out. Ash: I steal only what I can't afford "That's everything!" said Ash as he and Pikachu runs from the Koopa Troopa. The Koopa succeeded in putting a fish around himself thinking it is his shell and chases after them. Ash: One jump ahead of the lawmen That's all, and that's no joke These guys don't appreciate I'm broke! Ash and Pikachu runs up a bunch of barrels and knocked one down onto Bowser's men, knocking them all down. Bowser's men: (one at a time) Riffraff! Rattata! Scoundrel! Take that! They throw a bunch of stuff at the two who dodges them quickly and got onto a top of a platform. Ash: Just a little snack, guys! Bowser's men threw swords at Ash and Pikachu who dodges them. Next, the men shakes the platform, trying to tossed the two off. Bowser's men: Rip him open, take it back guys! Ash: I can take a hint, gotta face the facts Ash jumps off the platform as if trying to commit suicide but Pikachu hanging on a pole nearby by his tail grabs him and they make like acrobats. Ash: You're one of my only friends, Pikachu! The two ended up in harem where Misty, Erika, and Sabrina are all. "Who?!?" asked the girls looking at Ash and Pikachu in annoyance. Girls: Oh, it's sad Pikachu's hit the bottom He's become a one-man rise in crime Pikachu smirks as he downs a bottle of ketchup, getting some on his face. Ash is swirled by Sabrina and smacked right into an annoyed Chi-Chi. Chi-Chi: I'd blame parents, except he hasn't got 'em! Chi-Chi swings a broom at Ash and misses. Ash smiles as he goes by the girls and sits next to Pikachu near the window. Ash: Gotta eat to live, gotta steal to eat Tell you all about it when I got the time! With an annoyed sigh, Misty pushed Ash and Pikachu out the window, making their exit. Ash: One jump ahead of the slowpokes One skip ahead of my doom Outside, a strongman named Zangief (from the Street Fighter games) is flexing to the crowd while Bowser and his men ran by. Ash and Pikachu was behind Zangief matching his moves while hiding. Of course, they were discovered when they made a mistake. Ash: Next time gonna use a nom de plume. "There he is!" yelled Bowser as he stopped his men and pointed to the fleeing thieves. Ash: One jump ahead of the hitmen One hit ahead of the flock I think I'll take a stroll around the block. During the chase, Ash and Pikachu were chased by Bowser's men through a bunch of sheep and jumped over Scoutmaster Lumpus sitting on a bed of nails. Bowser's men jumped over too but a Sledge Brother accidentally landed on Lumpus making him screamed. Later, Pikachu is wearing jewerly while admiring himself in a mirror. An angry shopkeeper named Sokka (from Avatar: The Last Airbender spots him. Sokka: Stop, thief! Vandal! "Pikachu!" yelled Ash in annoyance as he grabs the Pokemon and runs off. Yolei Inoque: Scandal! Ash and Pikachu find themselves cornered at a door by Bowser's men. Ash: Let's not be too hasty The door opened and Toot Braunstein came out and holds Ash, grossing Bowser's men out. Toot: Still I think he's rather tasty Ash managed to get free then puts his arm around a Hammer Brother like they're pals. Ash: Gotta eat to live, gotta steal to eat Otherwise we'd get along! "WRONG!" yelled Bowser's men as they jumped him making a fighting dust cloud. When the dust clears, Ash and Pikachu were gone. However Bowser sees feet under beneath two barrels that are walking away. "Get them!" yelled Bowser as Ash and Pikachu ditched the barrels and runs off. Ash and Pikachu uses a pole to jumped over a pile of coals. Bowser's men just run across, getting hot feet hopping up and down in pain doing so. The two two thieves runs by a turtle named Leonardo (pick any version of the show) doing sword tricks. Pikachu runs back, grabs a sword from a surprised Leonardo, and jumps in front of Bowser's men, slashing at them. "He got a sword!" screamed a Goomba as he and the other men backed off in fear. Bowser slaps himself in annoyance and takes his weapon. "You idiot! We all all got weapons!" "Yeah!" yelled Bowser's men in rwalization as they get their weapons out. Pikachu chuckles as he puts the sword down and runs after Ash. The two thieves runs themselves surrounded by Koopa Troopas running from left to right. A rope trick is performed nearby and Ash and Pikachu climbs up it just in time for the Troopas to crashed into each other. Later, Ash and Pikachu is still getting chased. Ash: One jump ahead of the hoofbeats! Crowd: Vandal! Ash: One hop ahead of the hump! Crowd: Rattata! Ash: One trick ahead of disaster Crowd: Scoundrel! Ash: They're quick--but I'm much faster Crowd: Take that! Bowser's men chased Ash and Pikachu up a staircase into a room. With a smirk, Ash grabs a rug from nearby as he and Pikachu goes to an open window. Ash: Here goes, better throw my hand in Wish me happy landin' All I gotta do is jump! Ash and Pikachu jumped out the window with the rug. Bowser's men jumped after but all they did was fall. They landed right onto a bunch of manure sold by one Biff Tannen. Three kids and five dogs waited in an alley as Ash and Pikachu floated down. One of the kids was a well-built fifteen-year-old boy. He had blondish brown spiky hair, blue eyes, and wore big yellow and black shoes on his feet, a crown pendant on a chain necklace that he wore around his neck, along with black fingerless gloves, and a black short-sleeved zip-up sweatshirt with a hood with dark gray shoulder guards over what looked like a midnight blue shirt with red hoody-like pockets on the front of his shirt, along with a black belt, and big black baggy pants. The big pockets on his pants were red. There were also two yellow intersecting diagonal straps across his lower body. His name was Sora. The second kid was a fourteen-year-old boy with black hair and blue eyes, and he wore a white shirt (on which the rims of his sleeves were orangish-red, as was the collar of his shirt, and a horizontal oval shaped symbol on the front of his shirt), along with blue jeans, and red and white tennis shoes. He was Danny Fenton AKA the legendary halfa Danny Phantom. The last kid was a boy about thirteen-years-old. He looked Chinese and had black beady eyes and black hair that was lined with green. He wore a red zip-up sweatshirt, blue pants and blue shoes. This was Jake Long, A.K.A, the American Dragon. Jake also seemed to be holding a pair of binoculars. As for the dogs, one of them a white German Shepard with brown spots, most brown on his head, some grey on his muzzle and paws, and wears a red bandana. The second dog is a brown female Afghan hound. The third dog was a a light brown pit bull with some dark brown on his paws and his bottom muzzle. The fourth dog is a red haired chihuahua with a green headband. And the last dog is a grey dumb-looking dog. Their names are Dodger, Rita, Francis, Tito, and Einstein. Ash is kinda looking after them while their friend Fagin was away on a trip. "Good work, Pikachu!" said Ash as he high-fived his little friend. "Yo, Ash!" called Tito as he and the others came over. "Hey Ash! We'd glad you made it, dog." Jake said with a smirk. "For a while, we thought Bowser and his goons have caught ya." added Danny. Ash laughed. "No way! That moron and his troops would never catch me in a million years! But enough about that, did you guys..." "Yep! Stole it and got away with it!" Sora said proudly as he, Danny, and Jake takes out the food they have stolen. "All right! Now we feast!" cheered Ash as he, Sora, Danny, and Jake split up the food and gave it to Pikachu and the dogs keeping some for themselves. "Boy, it has been long since I have food." Einstein said as he eats. "My friend, you always seem to have food on the brains." said Francis. "Yo, leave off Einstein, okay Frankie?" Tito said. "It's Francis!" Francis snapped at Tito. He hated being called Frankie especially since Tito does it almost all the time. Before Ash could eat into his meal, he sees some kids nearby digging through trashcans. Their names are Loud Kiddington, Charity Bazaar, Toast, Pepper Mills, Froggo, Aka Pella, Lucky Bob, and Cho-Cho. "Dude, there is no food in here." said Toast sadly as he digs through the trashcan. "No food, now. Hiyo." said Lucky Bob sadly. Cho-Cho turned and got scared upon noticing that Ash is staring at them. The other kids sees this and backed away nervously. Ash sighs and looked at the others. Pikachu looked at Ash, frowns, and eats his food. As he looked at the others, he sighed, got up, and comes over to the kids with his food. "Yo, whatcha going to do us, homie?" Aka asked nervously. "Here, take these." Ash said holding his food out to the kids. "You want us to have those?" asked Charity surprised. "Yes. You kids need these than I do." Smiling, the kids take Ash's offering. Smiling at his good deed, Ash walked back. Sora, Danny, and Jake looked on and thought about this. "Eh, I'm done, yo." said Jake with a shrug as he got up and goes over to give the kids his meal. "Me too." agreed Sora as he comes over. "What the heck. I ated earlier." said Danny with a shrug as he did what his friends as done. As the kids came over, Pikachu looked guilty about his selfishness that he could barely swallow his food. "Pika, Pika?" Pikachu asked the dogs. "Oh why not? No need for them to do hungry." said Dodger with a smile as he, the other dogs, and Pikachu came over and offered their meals to the kids. "Here, take it." offered Rita. The kids takes the meal. With a smile, Froggo petted the Pokemon and dogs by the heads. "Gee, this is nice." said Einstein happily. "It's nice to know that we're willing to go hungry to help others out." agreed Francis. "Pika, Pika." said Pikachu happily as he got petted by Froggo. A fanfare sounds. "What's that?" asked Dodger. In curiousity, the dogs and Pikachu followed Ash and the kids over to a crowd gathering outside the alley. As Pikachu climbs onto Ash's head to get a closer look, they looked to see what the commotion is all about. "Hey, check that out!" Tito said pointing. He is pointing to a teenage boy about sixteen-years old. He has short black hair, a round nose and wore a crown, a red long-sleeved shirt, a red king’s cloak, gray shorts and gray boots. He is Stu-Pi-Doh! Champion, King Chad and it looks like he is running on a Stu-Pi-Doh! creature right. "Looks like he's on his way to palace." Dodger said observing King Chad as he goes passed. "Another suitor for rock star Ami Onuki. She will most likely would rejected him like the others." Francis added. "If we're lucky." Rita scoffed. As Ash and his friends watched, they jumped as the Histeria! kids run by into the streets playing. They accidentally run in front of King Chad's ride, scaring the creature. "Get out of my way, you brats!" yelled King Chad angrily as he gets a whip out, intending to hit them with it. "Hey!" yelled Sora as he, Ash, Danny, and Jake jumped in. Sora uses the Keyblade to stopped the whip. "You jerk! If I was rich like you, I could afford some matters!" snapped Ash angrily. "Grrr! I'd show you some manners!" yelled King Chad as he pushed Ash into a nearby mud puddle. The crowd laughed at Ash's misfortune while King Chad begins to ride off again. As Jake helps Ash up, Ash glared angrily at King Chad on his creature. He smirked and said, "Hey guys! I didn't know there is a monster dork with two rear ends!" As Ash's friends laughed, the creature stopped, offended by the remark. King Chad looked back annoyed and grunted. "You are nothing more than a worthless Rattata! You were born a Rattata and you will die a Rattata! And only your fleas will mourn you!" snapped King Chad as he rode towards the palace. The insult made Ash furiously and he runs after King Chad. But by then, he has made into the palace and the doors closes in his face. As the others walked up to Ash, Ash looked at the doors in a frown. "I am not worthless! And I don't have fleas!" snapped Ash uselessly. "Aw, forget him, Ash. He's a jerk anyway." Danny remarked. "Let's go home." said Sora, putting a hand on his friend's shoulder. Ash sighs. "Okay, then." Later that night, Ash, Pikachu, and the dogs are on their way back to their own home. Ash sings sadly as they do. Ash: Riffraff, Rattata. I don't buy that. If only they'd look closer Soon the seven got home. It is a big mess but it got a view with a curtain covering it. Ash: Would they see a poor boy? No siree. Pikachu, Dodger, Rita, Francis, Tito, and Einstein got into their made-shift beds and gets ready to sleep for tonight. Ash: They'd find out, there's so much more to me. As Ash pats his friends ont he head, he sighs as he goes over to the curtain. He pulled it and revealed a beautiful view of the palace and easy. "Someday, you guys, things will turned out better." Ash said smiling at the palace. "We'd be rich, live in a palace, and will never have problems again. Author's note Chapter done. Ash have a tough day but will things get better? Find out in the next chapter soon. Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 28 2006, 04:57 PM Post #4 |
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Chapter 3: Ami's Wish The next day at the palace was normal as usual. That is if you consider an angry prince storming into a chambers normal. "I have never been so insulted in all my life!" yelled King Chad. The suitor passed a three-foot tall humanoid mouse with big black ears, and dressed in red shorts underneath a red cloak, along with big yellow shoes, white gloves, and a blue wizard's hat (which had three silver stars and a silver crescent moon on it). He is King Mickey Mouse, the ruler of Toon Town and Ami's guardian. "Gosh, King Chad, are you leaving already?" asked Mickey. "Good luck marrying that brat off!" snapped King Chad as he leaves. As he does, Mickey sees two big holes in his pants, showing his underwear. 'Not again!' thought Mickey as he groans. He sighs. "Ami." Mickey goes out into the garden looking for Ami. He has been taking good care of Ami ever since her parents passed away and Yumi was away with her suitor General Grievous, a cyborg general. Mickey find the relationship strange since Grievous is a cyborg but Yumi loves him so Mickey accepted it since Yumi has to find a suitor and she accepted Grievous anyway. The remaining problem is that Ami has yet to find a suitor. "Ami, Ami!" Mickey said, calling for her. Then he spots a girl about fourteen years old sitting by the fountain with some friends of hers. She had long pink hair, pink eyes, and two hairpuffs along with a flower on her head. She wore a yellow and orange patterned dress, along with a white belt and white boots. This was Ami Onuki. With her are her friends who are all girls. The first girl was a thirteen-year-old Asian girl. She had freckles, brown eyes, long raven hair with a pink strand, and she wore a green t-shirt (in which the rims of her sleeves were red, and the collar of her shirt was red, and there was a symbol on the front that looked like a red dragonfly), along with a brown wristband (which had purple gems on it) on her right wrist, along with a brown belt with a yellow belt buckle, blue jeans, and brown shoes. She was the Te Xuan Ze, Juniper Lee. The second girl was a beautiful sixteen-year-old girl. She had long beautiful red hair, blue eyes, lipstick that matched the color of her hair, and she wore a purple tank top, an aqua green miniskirt, a black belt with a gold heart-shaped belt buckle, and blue boots. She was none other than Ariel, formerly a mermaid who could now walk on land thanks to a spell. The last girl was a girl with a red hair in a ponytail with a green headband, green eyes, with a white shirt, yellow sweater with green stripe in the middle, green skirt, white socks and white-black shoes and bracelet. Her name is Betty Barrett. "Ami!" said Mickey as he got closer to them. Suddenly two dogs jumped in front of him and snarled. One of them is a tough-looking pug dog and a yellow-furred dog with long black ears and a black tail. They are Butch the bulldog and Pluto. The two are holding what are obviously parts of King Chad's pants that was ripped off. "Butch! Pluto! Darn it!" yelled Mickey as he grabs the ripped pant parts from the two dogs. They played a game of tug of war until Mickey pulls back and lands on his behind, winning. As he looks at the ripped pants parts, he frowns. "So this is why King Chad stormed off!" "Aw, come on, Mickey. Pluto and Butch were only playing with him." said Betty with a smirk. "Weren't you, you two?" asked Ami to Pluto and Butch in a cutey tone of voice. "You were playing with that overdressed, self-absorbed King Chad weren't you?" Ami pet the dogs, they are enjoying the moment. Ami and the girls giggled at this. But when they noticed that Mickey is giving them an annoyed look, they stopped. Ami clears her throat and stood up. Mickey said, "Ami, you got to stop turning away any suitor who comes to called! The law said that..." "You must be married to a rich prince, sutiro, or whatever." said Ami at the same time as Mickey as the two comes over to a bird cage and Ami takes a dove out. "By your next birthday." concluded Mickey. "The law is wrong." Ami said with aishg. "You only got 3 days left." "Mickey, you know Ami doesn't like to be forced into things like this." June explained. "Yes, if I want to get married, I want it to be for love." said Ami as she pets her dove and smiles. Mickey sighs, takes the dove from Ami, and puts it back into the cage. "Ami, it isn't just the law. I may be your guardian but I won't be around forever. Your parents are gone and Yumi isn't here. I just want to make sure you are taken care of, provided for." "You got to understand. Ami never did anything by her own before." Ariel explained. Ami agrees as she goes back to the fountain and swirls around in the water, petting the fish. "She's right. I don't even have any real friends." "Hey!" protested the girls while Butch and Pluto, who were sleeping, looked up and growled in annoyance. "Except you guys." Ami said smiling. Upon hearing that, Pluto and Butch smiled and goes back to sleep. Ami resumed, "I also, except for concerts, never even set foot outside the palace walls!" "That's because you're a rock star!" Mickey pointed out. Ami scoffs angrily and splashed the water hard, "Then maybe I don't want to be a rock star anymore!" "Ooooohhh!" Mickey said with a groan. Then he glares at the dogs. "Disney forbids you should have any girls to looked after!" As Mickey left, Pluto and Butch looked puzzled. Ami pauses, then she returns to the bird cage, opens it, and let all the doves go free. Ami sighs happily as they fly away to freedom. "Ami, you aren't the only one who has to deal with Mickey's law." June said as she, Ariel, and Betty walked up. "Yeah. He won't let us date anyone besides rich people!" Ariel agreed. "For once, I want to meet the guy of my dreams, someone who likes me for who I am, not because we're your friends." Betty sighs sadly. "Same here, same here." Ami said groomily. Back inside the palace, Mickey sighs as he plays with a model of Toon Town, especially its model sun/sphere. "I don't know where she get these ideas. Heck, even Yumi wasn't this picky." As he plays, a shadow looms over him, making him jumped in startled. He looks up and sighs in relief as he said, "Oh Pete. My most trusted captain of the guards besides Bowser." Sure enough, there is Pete towering above Mickey with Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles on his arm. "I really need your help right about now." said Mickey with a sigh. "My life is but to serve you, boat boy king." said Pete as he bows. Mickey was once a boat boy on a river boat and Pete likes to called him that sometimes. "It's this whole suitor thing! Ami does not want to choose a husband! I am at my wit's end!" "Meow!" said Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles at once, pretending to be normal cats once more. Mickey chuckles happily as he takes out some cat treats. "HAve some cat treats, pretty kitties!" If there's one thing Mr. Blik hated, it's cat treats, especially the dry molty ones the king has. But he was forced to stand still and allowed the mouse to stuffed his, Gordon, and Waffles's mouth with the treats. Gordon doesn't like the treats either but ate them anyway though Waffles is the only one enjoying his snacks. Pete laughed and said, "You really has a way with dumb animals!" Mr. Blik glared angrily at Pete because of his remark. The captain of the guards clears his throat as he continues, "Now then, maybe I could get you a solution to this problem of yours, see?" "If anyone could help me, it is you as always." Mickey said with a sigh. "Of course," Pete said as he eyes a ring one of Mickey's fingers. "It will require the use of your mystic blue diamond." "My ring?" gasped Mickey as he looked at his ring, then to Pete. "But it has been in my family for years!" "Still it is necessary to find Ami Onuki her suitor." said Pete as he takes out some sort of scepter with some sort of Heartless symbol on it. Then he turns the scepter to Mickey and it begins to glow. The room suddenly darkens as Pete's voice slows down and deepens. Mickey finds himself in a hypnotized state. "Don't worry. Everything will be fine." "Everything...will be...fine." said Mickey repeated in his trance. "The diamond?" Mickey nods as he takes the ring off and hands it to Pete. "Here, Pete. Anything you want will be...fine." Pete smirks as he grabs the ring from the mouse and pulls his scepter back, the room seemingly returning to normal. "You are very gracious, boat boy king! Now while I go look for your solution, you go play with your toys, see?" Pete said as he pushes Mickey back to his playthings. "Yes. That will be...very good." Mickey said nodding in a trance. Pete and the cats took their leave. When they are out of earshot, Mr. Blik spits out the cat treats in disgust. "I can't take it anymore! If I have to choke down on those disgusting molty cat treats,..." As they entered another room, Pete pushed a switch. A wall slides backward revealing the entrance to Pete's lair. Mr. Blik throws imaginary punches as he said, "...bam! Whack!" "Oh calm down, Mr. Blik." Gordon told his brother as the cats and Pete went into the entrance, it closing behind them. "Then I'd grabbed him by the neck and do it again!" Mr. Blik yelled, ignoring Gordon, sending out his anger and frustration. "Soon, I will be king and not that boat boy!" remarked Pete as he and the cats reached the next door leading to the lab. "And then Mr. Blik can shoved the treats down the mouse's throat, right?" asked Waffles stupidly. "Yeah! Ha ha!" laughed Mr. Blik as the group goes through the door and Pete closes it behind them with a slam. Later at night, int he garden, four figures are running wearing cloaks. They reached a palace wall and begins to climb it. The first three figures made it over the wall. Before the last one could, this figure felt a tug at her cloak. The figure turned and sees Butch and Pluto, both sad as they tugged her cloak sadly. That figure is actually Ami. "Oh, I'm sorry, you guys." said Ami sadly as she pets the two dogs. "But I can't stay here and have my decisions made for me and neither does June, Ariel, and Betty. I'd missed you." "Hey, Ami! Are you coming?" called June. Petting the two dogs for what maybe the last time, Ami begins to climb up the wall again. The sad dogs helped her up. As she reached the top, Ami looked down to see Pluto and Buthc whimpering sadly. "Goodbye." said Ami as she and her friends disappeared over the wall. Butch and Pluto lays down, looking sadly at the wall Ami has went over. Author's note The girls has run away very sad but soon they will be happy when they meet four certain boys in the next chapter. Who are they you ask? (Do you really needed to ask?) And what is Pete up to? Read and reviews! No flames. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 29 2006, 05:59 PM Post #5 |
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Chapter 4: Three Different Ways to Fall In Love The next day, on top of an awning of a fruit stand in the marketplace, Ash and his gang of thieves are at it again. "Okay, Pikachu, go!" ordered Ash. "Pikachu!" said Pikachu with a smirk as he dips over the edge with his tail. In the stand, an African American propreitor named Chef is calling out to the crowd holding a melon. "Step right up, children, and have a taste of these great melons!" Chef called out. Your taste buds will do more than sing!" "Pika, Pika Pi!" shouted Pikachu too loudly as he grabs a melon. Chef hears him and turns around. "Hey! Let that go, boy!" "Pika Pikachu, Pika Pi!" laughed Pikachu at Chef taunting the proprietor. "Why you!" yelled Chef as he sets the melon he's holding down so he can come over and tried to get the melon back around the Pokemon. "Get away from here, darn you!" During the struggle, two pair of gray dog paws grabs the melon Chef was holding and takes it out of sight. Soon Chef finally managed to get the melon back. Chef returns to the front and put the melon on top of the stack. He looks puzzled as he realized that he has done this. He turns to the Pokemon who smirks at him. "Pika Pika!" waved Pikachu goodbye as he swings back up. Back at the top of the awning, Ash and the others smiled while Einstein set the melon he stole down. "Good work, Pikachu!" said Sora with a smile. "Pikachu." Sora uses his Keyblade to cut the melon in pieces. The thieves take a piece. "Now we eat!" said Danny as he bites into his melon piece. Meanwhile in the crowd, Ami, June, Ariel, and June, still disguised, are looking around. As they do, shopkeepers called out to them. "Pot! Get a pot here! No finer pot in brass or silver!" called out Mr. X. "Sugar dates, sugar dates and figs! Suger dates and pistachios!" called out a shopkeeper named Willy Wonka. "Would the ladies like a pretty necklace. Pretty necklaces for a pretty lady or two." said Nack the Weasel. The girls smiled, charmed by all this. But they jumped back as a fish is shoved into their faces. "Fish! Fresh fish!" boomed a shopkeeper named Don Karnage. "We caught 'em, you buy 'em!" "Uh, no thanks." said Ami as she and the other girls stepped back. But they accidentally bumped into a fire eater named Zhao, causing him to eat his fire. "Oh, we are so sorry!" apologized Betty. Zhao belched and spits out flames, disgusting the girls and making their hoods falled down at the same time. At the awning nearby, Ash, Danny, Sora, and Jake suddenly see the four girls and looked at them funny. They smiled widely as the girls put their hoods back. "Again, we are sorry." apologized Ariel as she and the others left. "Wow." said the four boys at the four girls. Each boy is staring at a particular girl. Danny is staring at the Asian girl Juniper Lee. Sora is staring at the beautiful Ariel. Jake Long is smiling widely while staring at Betty. But Ash is mostly staring at the rock star herself, Ami Onuki. "Pika? Pikachu?" said the Pokemon trying to get the boys' attention. "Yo, guys! Are you at home?" asked Tito waving a hand in front of their hands. "Well, what do you know? Our boys are in love with those girls." said Dodger in amusement. "Just like you and Rita, correct?" asked Francis with a smirk. "Francis!" said Dodger and Rita while blushing. The girls stop by a fruit stand and sees a small child named Tuff (from the Kirby Anime) trying to reach for an apple from the stand. Tuff is hungry and the girls know it. "Aww, are you hungry?" asked Ami gently. Tuff looked at the girls sadly and nodded. With a smile, Ami takes an apple and gives it to Tuff. "There you go." As the girls watched Tuff running over, an angry voice is heard behind them. "You better be paying for that!" The girls turned and sees an angry shopkeeper named Ganondorf glaring at them. "Pay?" gasped June alarmed. In their hurry to leave the palace, they forgot to take some money with them. "No one steals from my cart!" snapped Ganondorf angrily as he approaches them. "Oh, we're sorry. But none of us have money." said Ami nervously. "Thieves!" yelled Ganondorf as he grabs each of the girl's hand, especially the one Ami gave Tuff the apple with, and pins it to the stand. "Wait! Let us go and we will go to the palace and talked with King Mickey!" protested Betty in fear. "You know the penalty is for stealing?" yelled Ganondorf as he takes a sword and gets ready to chopped the girls' hands off. "No, wait! Please!" begged Ariel. Before the sword could go down, Ash, Danny, Sora, and Jake came out of nowhere and stopped it. "Oh thank goodness! Thank you so much, sir, for finding them!" said Sora with a smile. Ash turned to the girls and begins scolding them. "We were looking for you four!" scolded Ash annoyed. "Uh thanks, but what are you four doing?" asked Ami with a frown. "Just played along." whispered Danny. "You know these girls?" asked Ganondorf with a frown. "Sadly yes, dog. These are our sisters. It is sad to say but they are whacked, yo." said Jake making a crazy sign much to the girls' annoyance. "They claimed to know King Mickey!" "Oh please!" laughed Ash. The other boys laughed as Ash points to Tito picking someone's pocket. "They think that Chihuhua is King Mickey." "Say what, man?" asked Tito in confusion. The girls suddenly realized what the boys are suggesting and then they kneel to Tito. "Oh great King Mickey. How may we serve you?" asked Ami as she and the girls bowed to him. Tito looks confused until he sees the other dogs and Pikachu signaling to play along. "Well, in that case man, you can feed me!" He then pat the girls on the head each. Ganondorf looked in a suspicious puzzlement while Ash picks an apple from the cart. "Sad, isn't it, but no harm done." said Ash as he tosses the apple to Ganondorf. "Now come on, girls, we're going to see the doctor." said Jake as he, Ash, Danny, and Sora begins to walked off with the girls. "Oh, hello, doctor. How are you?" asked Ariel, still pretending to be crazy, to a cow. "No, not that one!" said Sora to Ariel with a hissed. "Come on, 'King Mickey'." Ash said to Tito as the group begins to leave. Tito then makes a bow. "Thank you so much for this moment, man! This is like..." Suddenly a bunch of stuff, including what he stole from Ganondorf's cart, fell from his person. "Oops!" "What?" yelled Ganondorf as he turns around. "Quick! Grab we can get and run!" yelled Rita as she, the other dogs, and Pikachu grabs what they could, including the apples and runs after the kids. Ganondorf now realized that he has been tricked. "Come back here, you thieves!" yelled Ganondorf uselessly as the laughing group of kids, Ash holding Ami's hand, Danny holding June's, Sora holding Ariel's, and Jake holding Betty's, ran off. Author's note Now both groups has met and love is in the air. How long will it last when Pete gets his plan begin? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 30 2006, 04:49 PM Post #6 |
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Chapter 5: The Pokeball In The Rough In Pete's lair, the villain is brewing up a storm, literally. Gordon, Waffles, and Mr. Blik are running on a gear to get a machine working with the storm being brewed at the top. "Wheeee! This is fun!" laughed Waffles merrily. "And tiring. No offense, Pete, but couldn't we wait for a real storm?" Gordon asked Pete getting tired. "I don't want to hear any complaining, see? Now keep running, faster!" snapped Pete as he places Mickey's ring in the machine. "Yes, oh evil one." Mr. Blik said as he and the other cats run faster. Soon a lightning bolt hits the ring, melting it into an hourglass below. The sand inside it begins to swirled around. "Now, sands of time! Reveal to me the one who could enter the Thousand Year Door!" requested Pete. The sand in top of the hourglass reveals the Thousand Year Door. As it falls around to the bottom, it creates an image of somewhere in Toon Town. Sure enough, he sees Ash climbing up a ladder, leading his friends, Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty still in disguise. Of course, Pete isn't fooled by the girls' disguises but he doesn't care as he concentrates on one person. "There he is, our Pokeball in the Rough!" laughed Pete as he looks at Ash. "That's it? That's the bum we're waiting for?" Mr. Blik yells in disbelief. "He got a Pikachu! Spleen!" cheered Waffles putting his hands in the air excited. But he tripped, knocking Mr. Blik and Gordon around, the three ended up sucked into the gear and bouncing around the place. Pete, however, does not care as he looks at his scepter with a grin. "I think it's time we give him an invite to the palace, what do you three think?" Pete asked the cats. The cats themselves slammed onto the wall, all the fur has fallen out. "Swell." groaned Mr. Blik. "Spleen! Let's do that again!" cheered Waffles stupidly. "No way." groaned Gordon. Pete laughs as he glares at the hourglass with Ash and his friends. At the top of the ladder seen in the hourglass, Ash and his friends got to the top of it. "We're almost there." Danny said to the girls. All the girls got to the top, but accidentally trips. Ash grabs Ami, Danny grabs June, Sora grabs Ariel, and Jake grabs Betty. The four boys and girls looked at each other as if in a trance. Then the trance was broken as the girls got out of the hold and blushed. "Well, uh, we'd liked to thank you for saving us from that creep." Ami said smiling. "Forget it." said Ash smiling as the boys each grabs a pole. "So is this your first time here in the marketplace?" Sora asked as the boys uses the pole to get the next building. They turned to the girls, who are still on the previous building and throws the poles to them. "Isn't it obvious?" chuckled Ariel smiling. "Well, you fine girls do stand out like a stray dog, dogg." Jake said with a smiloe. The boys sighs as they stared at the girls, still love-struck. The girls stared back returning the look. Ash came to his senses and puts a plank between the building as he said, "The truth is that the Toon Town is not safe." Suddenly, the girls uses the poles to jumped over to the next building, surprising the boys. "Wow!" Tito said in amazement. "That is impressive." said Francis nodding. "We learned quickly." joked Ami as they tossed them the poles. "I see. This way." Ash said nodding. The group enters Ash's house, dodging beams and planks doing so. "Watch it, be careful." said Danny helping June dodged a beam. "So do you guys lived here?" Ami asked Ash smiling. "Nah, just me and Pikachu." "What about the dogs?" Ariel asked, referring to Dodger, Rita, Francis, Einstein, and Tito. "Ash is kinda looking after us while Fagin is on a trip. We lived here until he gets back." explains Dodger. "And Ash is so nice." said Einstein smiling. "Anyway, Pikachu, the dogs, and I come and go as we wanted to." said Ash proudly. "Fabulous." Betty said smiling. "Well, it isn't much." said Ash as he goes over to the curtains and moved it to reveal the view. "But it got a great view!" "That view impresses me everytime I see it." Jake said smiling. "Isn't it great or what?" Danny said smiling. Ami groaned as she looks at the palace, then sits down. "Yeah, it's great." "Man, I wondered what it will be like to live there. Have servants and valets and such..." Ash said with a smile. "And people who tell you where to go and how to dress." Ariel said with a frown. "Not like here though." Sora said with a sigh as he grabs an apple from Pikachu was about to eat it. Francis got annoyed. "Now behave, Pikachu." said Rita. "Yeah, don't be a jerk, Frankie." agreed Tito. "Francis!" snapped Francis. "We always have to look for good and ducking Bowser and his men." said Danny with a sigh., "You are not allowed to make your own choices." said June with a groan. "Sometime you feel so..." "You're just..." "Trapped." said the boys and girls at once. They looked at each other and realized what they just said. They blushed, realizing how good they are for each other. Ash is the first to recover as he grabs another apple that Pikachu was about to eat. "So where are you from?" Ash asked as he rolls the apple down his arm and tossed it to Ami. Ami grabs the apple and frowns. "Does it matter? I ran away and I am never going back." "How come?" asked Sora taking a apple from his apple and give it to Francis, annoying him further. Einstein got a bit hungry then he sees that Ami hasn't bite in her apple yet and sneaks over to it. Ariel sighs sadly as the boys and girls sit next to each other, Ash sitting next to Ami, Danny next to June, Sora next to Ariel, and Jake next to Betty. Ariel said, "Ami's guardian wanted her to marry someone." "That's terrible, dog." Jake said in disbelief. The boys hated when they see someone being forced into someone they don't want to do, especially Ami. Danny noticed that Einstein is about to bite into Ami's apple and yelled out, "Einstein!" Einstein yelped and runs off, knocking Pikachu down doing so. Pikachu got up and jumps onto a higher point, yelling, "Pikachu, Pika Pika! Pika Pi! Pikachu!" "What is he saying?" Ami asked puzzled. "Uh, he's saying," Ash said, trying to think of something. Then he smiled and said, "That's not fair." "Pika?" Pikachu asked confused. "Oh really." Ami said with a smile. "Does Pikachu has anything else to say?" "Only that he and the dogs wished that there is someway to helped." Danny said with a smile. "Yo, these boys are really impressing the girls, man." said Tito. "Could be." Dodger said with a smile. "Pikachu." Pikachu said rolling his eyes. June smiled and said, "Well, you can tell him that that's...sweet." The boys and girls looked at each other as if in some sort of trance. Then they leaned forward to each other about to kiss. Suddenly a loud voice interrupts the moment. "There you are!" The group turned and are alamrmed upon as they see Bowser and his at the entrance of Ash's place. "They're after me!" yelled Ash and Ami at once. They looked at each other shocked. "They're after you?" "Oh no, Ami's guardian must have send them!" said Betty with a groan. "Do you girls trust us?" asked Sora. The girls sees that the boys are at the edge of Ash's window holding out their hands. "What?" June asked. "Do you trust us?" The girls hesitated, then Ami takes Ash's hand, June takes Danny's, Ariel takes Sora's, and Betty taking Jake's hand. "Yes." said Ami nodding. "Then jumped!" yelled the boys at once. The boys and girls jumped out the window to escape Bowser's men. They landed in a big pile of salt below. As they got up, they try to escaped only to be blocked off by Bowser. "We keep running into each other, don't we Rattata?" Bowser mocked as he looks at Ash. Suddenly Pikachu and the dogs came from out of nowhere and attacks Bowser trying to distract him. The boys and girls tried to attack but Bowser's men are blocking the only way out. Bowser angrily grabs Pikachu and the dogs and throws them into a nearby vase. There is a splashing noise in there. "Okay, whose been spitting in the vases?" demands Dodger annoyed. Bowser's men seized Ash. Ash is helpless against them. More of Bowser's men kept Danny, Sora, and Jake from helping Ash. "Take him away! He's going to the dungeon!" laughed Bowser. "Let go of me!" yelled Ash as Bowser's men begins to take him away. "Let him go!" yelled Ami punching Bowser in the arm. "Ooh! Look at this! A mousettata!" laughed Bowser as he throws Ami onto the ground, not knowing who she is. Ami got up angrily as she and the others girls removed their hoods. "Let go by the demand of Ami Onuki!" yelled the rock star. Bowser and his men gasped and bowed down, forcing Ash and the other boys to do so as well. "Ami Onuki!" yelped Bowser alarmed. "Ami Onuki?" gasped Ash as he looks up. "Ami Onuki?" said Danny surprised. "Then those other girls..." "Are her friends Juniper Lee, Betty, and Ariel?" said Sora surprised. "Whoa! I am in love with Betty. Who knew?" said Jake surprised. "Pikachu?" asked Pikachu looking from the vase he and the dogs are in. Bowser, shocked, speaks up. "What are you and your friends doing outside of the palace? And with this Rattata and his gang?" "Does it matter? She asked you to let him go!" yelled June annoyed. "So do so now!" agreed Ariel and Betty. "Well, I would, but my orders come from Pete." explained Bowser as he bowed and as his men takes Ash away. "He tell me to get only him. Why don't you take this up with him?" Ami narrowed her eyes angrily and said, "Believe me, I will." Back at the palace, Pete is coming out of his secret chambers. When he is certain that no one is watching, he exits and begins to slide the door quietly. "Pete!" yelled Ami as she storms into the room. "Oh! Ami!" said Pete surprised as he turns around. The cats are about to come out but Pete closes it shut, pinning them inside the frame. "Ouch! Uh, Pete? We are struck!" yelped Gordon. Pete ignored Gordon while blocking the door from view. "How can I be of service to you?" "Bowser and his men has just seized a boy from the marketplace on your orders!" snapped Ami angrily. "You got to understand, the mouse wants me to make sure that there is peace in Toon Town. Plus, the boy was a criminal." explained Pete with a smirk. "And what was his crime?" "Can't...breath..." gasped Waffles searching for air. "Kidnapping Ami and her friends, of course." said Pete "truthfully". "Pete if you could just..." Before Mr. Blik could finished, Pete kicked the cats right through the door, closing it all the way. Inside the secret passage, the cats slammed into the wall. "Ouch! That hurts!" "He didn't kidnapped us! We ran away!" snapped Ami angrily. Pete gave out a pretend gasped of horror as he walked away from Omi. "Oh no! That's terrible! If only I have known!" "What do you mean?" asked Ami puzzled. Pete turned and smiled, "Sadly, his sentence has already been carried out. "What sentence?" "Death." Ami gasped in horror as Pete continued, "By beheadinging." "No." said Ami in horror as she sits down. Pete smiles as he spoke in pretend sympathym putting his hands on her. "I am really sorry, Ami." said Pete. "How could you?" Ami whispered angrily at Pete. Then she got up and ran from the room crying. When Ami is gone, the cats got the door opened again, came out, closes the door, and breaths in and out as they go back to Pete's shoulder. When they do, they spoke normally. "So, how did it go?" asiked Mr. Blik. "I think she took it...rather well." said Pete looking in the direction of the door Ami left through. Pete and Mr. Blik smirked evilly while Gordon just frowned and Waffles smiled stupidly. In the courtyard, Ami is by herself crying sadly. The girls, Pluto, and Butch came over, all are feeling bad for her. Pete and Butch whimpered sadly for their mistress. "Ami, what's wrong?" asked Ariel sadly. "The boy is gone. Pete has him beheaded." said Ami with a sniff. "No way! That jerk." gasped June in disbelief. "Oh, it's all my fault, you guys. I...I didn't even know his name." "You thought you have it rough? We don't know the name of his friends either!" said Betty groaning. Ami hugs Pluto and Butch, sadly. This was a sad day. Or was it? Author's note Is Ash really dead? Or is he still alive? What does Pete and Mr. Blik knows that Ami and the girls doesn't? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Oct 1 2006, 06:23 PM Post #7 |
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Chapter 6: The Thousand Year Door Somewhere in the dungeons of Mickey's palace, a familiar boy is struggling to escaped his chains but is chained tightly to the wall. It is Ash. Pete was actually lying and have Ash thrown in the dungeon. Ash gave up trying to escape his chains and looked disbelief at what he just learned. "She was rock star Ami Onuki. I don't believe it. I must have sounded so stupid to her." groaned Ash. "Yep. You are stupid, all right." Ash jumped and turned. He smiles as he sees Danny as his halfa self Danny Phantom, has arrived, with Sora, Jake, Pikachu, and the dogs. "Guys!" said Ash with a smile. "Man, I am glad to see you. Sora, use your Keyblade to get me out of these." "Right." said Sora as he gets his Keyblade out. "Oh man. You are so stupid. You got yourself way off guarded the moment you set eyes on Ami." Tito laughed. "Pika, Pikachu, Pika Pi." said Pikachu as he takes out a cloth, puts it over his head, and imitated Ami giving Ash the cutey eyes. "Geez, Ash, she was in trouble." Ash protested, then he sighs happily. "She was worth it." "And so was June, Betty, and Ariel." said Danny sighing at the thought of Juniper Lee. "Yeah." said Sora and Jake at the thoughts of Ariel and Betty. "Unfortunately, we won't see those four again. We are commoners and there's a law. Ami has to married a prince or someone like one. And only her friends can date rich people." explained Ash. Sora finally uses the Keyblade to free Ash from his shackles. Ash rubs his hands. The boys sighed, knowing that they will never see those girls they fell in love with ever again. "Dog, we are a bunch of fools." Jake said sadly. "You are only fools if you give up." "Huh? Whose that?" asked Einstein. The group turned to see a figure in a dark cloak and a hood covering his face coming out of the shadows nearby. The group looked puzzled as they have never seen him before. "Who are you?" Ash asked. "Just a lowly prisoner like you. But together, we can be more." said the figure. "I don't know about this Dodger." Rita said in concern. "He sounds like someone you can't trust." Francis said with a frown. "Francis, quiet." Ash told Francis then turned his attention back to the figure, "We're listening." "There lies in the desert lies a door, the Thousand Year Door, a cave that has treasure beyond your wildest dreams." To prove it, the figure takes out a bunch of diamonds, emerald, rubies, etc. and shows them to the group who looked at them in awe. "Pika Pika." Pikachu said in awe. "Now that's impressive." said Danny amazed. "That is fine jewelry, man!" said Tito greedily. "I figured you would liked them." said the figure smiling as he puts the treasure away and turns his back to the grouo. "There is more than enough to impress Ami Onuki and her friends." The group looked at each other, not sure how to respond. Unknown to them, a certain black cat peeks out of the man's clothing. "Hey Pete! Would you worry it up? I am dying back here!" complained Mr. Blik sweating madly. The figure, who is really Pete, pushes Mr. Blik back into his clothing just as Ash spoke up. "Uh thanks but unfortunately, the law said that Ami can only married a..." Pete interrupts. "You probably don't know about the golden rule. Whoever has the gold makes the rules." Pete gave Ash a smile, a hideously bad one. "So why do you need Ash to get the treasure?" Sora asked. "Well, I needed someone with strong legs and a strong back to go after it." "Well, you got us convinced. But the problem is, it's out there and we're in it, dog." Jake pointed out. "Ah ah ah. Things aren't always what they seemed." Pete pointed out. "And besides, Jake, have you forgotten about Danny's ghost powers?" Einstein said. "Pikachu." Pikachu agreed. Pete smiles and hold out a hand. "So, do we have a deal?" The group looked at each other, then shrugged. Tito, however, is excited. "Let's go for it, man!" said Tito excited. Later, the desert gets to be a bit windy as Ash, his friends (Danny back to his human self), and Pete made their way to where the villain has called the Thousand Year Door the last time. After doing the same thing once more, Ash looks at the Thousand Year Door as it approaches. Danny, Sora, and Jake are staying near by, the dogs are hiding behind the boys in fear, while Pikachu hides in Ash's backpack. "Who disturb my slumber?" said the Thousand Year Door. Ash gulped, summoned up courage, and said, "It is I, Ash Ketchum." The Thousand Year Door looked at Ash carefully. Soon, unlike the last time, it spoke, "You may proceed. But know this. Touch nothing but the black box!" Soon the Thousand Year Door opened up with a roar. The group sees a bunch of stairs leading down. "Remember, boy," Pete called out over the roar, "Get me the black box. Then we will talk about your reward." "Well, ready guys?" Ash told his friends. "Right, Ash." Danny said nodding. "Right behind ya, dog." Jake nodded. "I really don't know about this, Dodger." said Rita with a sigh as she and the other dogs followed Ash, Sora, Danny, Jake, and Pikachu still in Ash's backpack down the stairs. "I'm sure it will be alright, I hope." said Dodger. The stairs is very long and looks like it would take forever to go down. It is also a long way down and one trip could mean instant death. Francis tripped at one time and stopped upon landing on Tito. "Get off me, Frankie!" snapped Tito as he got freed. "It's Francis!" snapped Francis annoyed. "Will you guys chilled?" asked Dodger annoyed at the two. Soon they all reach the bottom and enters a room. They looked astounded as they see a whole bunch of treasure as far as the eye could see. Tito looks, money signs in his eyes. "Wow! Look at all this." Ash said in amazement. "Wow, with all this treasure, we could be richer than King Mickey." agreed Sora with a smile. "Treasure!" laughed Tito as he runs for it and is about to grab the nearest treasure. "Tito, no!" yelled Dodger as he grabs Tito. "Hey, let go of me, man! Let me at it!" "We can't touch anything, dog!" Jake reminded Tito. "We got to find that black box." "Pikachu." agreed Pikachu. "If we could find it in this place." said Danny as the group moves on to go look for the black box. Tito looked at the treasure sadly but follows the others anyway. Unknown to them, two figures are spying on them. One of them is a blue blob-like imaginary friend holding a staff. The second figure looked pretty muscular and was covered in purple fur (except for his light purple face and snout), and had two huge horns on his head, yellow eyes, sharp teeth, and a unibrow. He was dressed in only one pair of gray cargo pants, which were held up by a black belt with a skull belt buckle, and a pair of gray pants. He is holding a shield. The figures' names are Blooregard Q. Kazoo AKA Bloo and Eduardo. "Well, well, I wonder what we got here." Bloo said as he looked on the group. "Hmmm, must be treasure hunters." said Eduardo curiously. "Let's follow them!" Although a bit nervous, Bloo and Eduardo quietly followed the gang. As they got closely, Pikachu's ears perked up as he senses something. "Pika?" asked Pikachu puzzled. Pikachu turned and sees no one there. Bloo and Eduardo managed to hide behind he could see him. Puzzled, Pikachu moves on. Bloo and Eduardo came out and followed the group once again. Pikachu turned and the two hide again. However Pikachu notices a tail that Eduardo has forgotten to hide. Alarmed, Pikachu runs to the others, tugging on Ash's leg. "Pikachu, Pika Pi!" cried Pikachu pointing. "Not now, Pikachu. We got to keep moving." Ash said, not bothering to turned around to see what Pikachu's pointing at. "Yeah, we'd looked at it later." Sora agreed. Pikachu looks annoyed but continues anyway. Bloo and Eduardo came out of hiding and resume following. Upon sensing them again, Pikachu turned, but Eduardo grabs Bloo and jumps to behind Pikachu. Chuckling, Bloo grabs Pikachu's tail and pulled it too hard. Pikachu turned and got into a fighting stance, missing the two once more as they got behind him again. Pikachu sits down and frowns, not knowing what's going on. Bloo giggled a bit at Pikachu's confusion. Eduardo begins to laughed. However, he was laughing too hard and Pikachu finally saw them. "Pika!" yelled Pikachu as he runs from them. "AAAAAAHHH!" yelled Bloo and Eduardo as they run away alarmed. Pikachu knocks Ash down to the ground. "Pikachu?" asked Rita surprised. "Pikachu, what is with you?" Ash asked alarmed. Pikachu turned Ash's head quickly to the direction of Bloo and Eduardo. The Pokemon trainer finally sees the two looking behind some treasure and looked astounded. The others turned and sees them too. "My gracious!" gasped Francis. "Hey, what the heck is that all about?" Bloo yelled annoyed. "Check it out! Imaginary friends, dog!" Jake said amazed. "Yeah." Ash agreed as he got back up. "Come on out, we won't hurt you." Bloo and Eduardo came out, still cautious, and goes to the group. "You sure little yellow thing won't hurt us?" Eduardo said worried as he looks at Pikachu. "Awww, the little rat can't harmed us in a million years." Bloo said cruelly. This made Pikachu upset. He yells out his name very loudly and hits Bloo with a thunderbolt. "Pikachu!" yelled the dogs. Bloo is okay though he is blackened like ash. He fell down. "I'm okay." Bloo said in a daze. "Pika, Pikachu! Pikachu!" yelled Pikachu. "Pikachu got a point. That blue ruffian called him a rat and he was offended." Francis said with a frown. "Not nice." Einstein said with a growl. "Please excue Senor Bloo," apologized Eduardo as he picks him up. "Perhaps I should go so not to offend dogs and Pikachu as well." "Wait, don't go!" Sora protested. "Maybe you two could help us." suggested Ash. "We can?" asked Eduardo surprised. "We can?" asked Bloo who managed to recovered. "Sure. We've never seen imaginary friends like you two before. You're two cool cats." said Jake in a rapper like way. Eduardo rushes forward and grabs all of Ash's group, hugging them while crying. "I am so happy! I got new friends!" cried Eduardo happily. "Uh, sir? Need some air..." gasped Tito trying to breath. "Pika!" agreed Pikachu hardly breathing. "Me sorry." said Eduardo letting the group go. "Eduardo don't know own strength sometimes." "Thanks, Eduardo." said Ash getting back up. "We're looking for a black box. Do you know where it is?" asked Danny. "Sure, we know where it is!" said Bloo as he is blue once more. "In fact, we'd take you to it!" "All right! Let's go!" said Einstein happily. "Let us get the Gummi Ship out first. This place is very big after all." Bloo waves his staff and soon a Gummi Ship appears. Bloo called out like a conductor, "All aboard for the Bloo Express!" "Please don't be calling it that." said Eduardo with a frown. Nevertheless, they all got on and soon the Gummi Ship took off. The group foes through a bunch of long caves until they reached a giant underground cavern. The Gummi Ship stopped and they all got out. "There it is!" Eduardo said pointing to a big pillar with a bunch of stairs going up to it. The stairs and pillar themselves are surrounded by water with stones used as steps. A beam of light shined on top of the pillar. Ash sees the light and begins to step on the stgones. "Wait here, guys." said Ash as he, Danny, Sora, and Jake walked across the stones 'bridge'. "This shouldn't take long." Danny added. As the others waited, Tito looked around very bored. Suddenly his eyes widen upon seeing a big statue holding the biggest jewel Tito has ever seen. Drooling madly, Tito begins to walk over to it. Unaware of this, Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake has got to the stairs and begins to climbed them quickly. Francis turned and gasped, "Oh no!" "What's wrong, Francis?" Rita asked. "I believed our little friend is about to do something stupid and dangerous!" Bloo, Eduardo, and the other dogs turned and gasped as they see Tito is heading to the jewel. "Young burrito, stop!" yelled Eduardo as he and the others run to try to stopped Tito. "Don't touch that thing!" yelled Bloo. Soon he and the others jumped Tito and tries to keep him back. But it looks like Tito is getting himself free. Still unaware, the four boys has reached the top of the pillar and sees a black box awaiting for them at the top. Ash picks it up and looks it over. "This is it?" ashed Ash laughing as he puts the black box in his backpack. "Man, this is what we came down here to..." Sora interrupts Jake as he sees the action going down downstairs. He gasped as he sees that Tito is about to get free and is about to grabbed the jewel. "Tito, no!" Too late as Tito got freed and grabs the jewel. Suddenly the room begins to shake. "Infidents!" yelled the Thousand Year Door, voice booming all over the place. "Oh, man!" said Tito realizing what he just did. "You have touch the forbidden treasure!" Chuckling nervously, Tito puts the jewel back but then both it and the statue begins to melt. "Now you will never again see the light...of day!" The boys backed away as flames roared up to where the black box used to be. Ash and the other boys run down the stairs but they turned into a ramp, forcing them to slide down it very fast. They went soon thrown into the air. They looked down and sees that the water has turned into lava. Danny knew that he won't have any time to changed into Danny Phanton and saved himself and the others. But before they could landed in it, Bloo and Eduardo rushed by in the Gummi Ship and catches them, the dogs in there. "We told you not to touch anything!" Francis yelled at Tito. "Gimme a break, man! I loved jewels!" protested Tito. "Wait, where's Pikachu?" Ash yelled looking for his little friend. "Down there!" said Danny as he sees the little Pokemon running across the stones but gasped as they exploded into lava. Pikachu cries as the last rock he is on is about to exploded. Fortunately, the Gummi Ship flew over and Ash grabs him just in time as the last rock Pikachu was exploded. "Let's get outta here!" Jake yelled. "Eduardo, big speed now!" Bloo ordered Eduardo. "Si!" responded Eduardo as he speeds the Gummi Ship. The ship itself begins to fly throughout the caves with the lava chasing after them. The group dodges walls and falling debris doing so. Pikachu screamed as he grabs onto Ash's head and cover his eyes. "Pikachu!" yelled Ash as he tries to get his friend off. "This is no time to panic!" Ash finally got Pikachu off and sees that the group is about to collided into a wall. "Okay, start panicing." said Jake, sweat dropping. Bloo, luckily, puts the Gummi Ship in a dive and flies into the treasure cave. The lava poured out like mad, engulfing all the treasure in the room. The group soon returns to the entrance. Outside, the Thousand Year Door roared in anger and is about to close again. The heroes in the Gummi Ship was almost to the top when a boulder smashed onto the Gummi Ship knocking it to the door. Ash, Sora, Danny, Jake, Pikachu, and the dogs jumps. Ash grabs onto a rock wall with the others holding onto him, almost to the entrance. Ash is at the top holding for dear life. He looks up and sees Pete at the top within reach. "We need your help! Give us your hand!" yelled Ash extending his hand. "First give me the black box!" said Pete reaching his hand out, expecting the black box. "We can't hold on for long! Give us your hand!" Sora asked alarmed. "Give me the black box!" Not wanting an argument, Ash removes his backpack with the black box in it and hands it up to Pete. Pete grabs it quickly. "Yes, it is mine!" laughed Pete holding the backpack over his head. "Yes! Ah ha ha ha ha! It is mine!" After he puts the backpack into his cloak, Pete looks and sees Pikachu and the dogs helping their human friends out of the entrance. But Pete kicks them aside and grabs Ash by the hand, with his friends still holding on to him. "Hey, what are you doing?" asked Danny holding onto Sora who is holding onto Ash with Jake holding onto Danny. "Giving Ash his reward." said Pete with a smirk. Then in his normal voice, he pulls out a dagger, "His eternal reward." Before Pete could stabbed Ash, Pikachu and the dogs jumped him. Pikachu bites Pete on the wrist, making him yelled in pain and making him let go of Ash. Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake soon find themselves falling back into the Thousand Year Door's cave. Pete manages to grabbed Pikachu and the dogs and throws them in. The heroes looked like they are about to fall to their doom. But fortunatey Eduardo managed to get the boulder off the Gummi Ship, allowing Bloo to fly up quickly and catch the flying heroes. Ash, however, hits the wall too many times falling and went unconscious. Back up above, the Thousand Year Door roared one last time before sinking back into the sand from where it came from. All is calm once more. Pete stares then he laughs madly as he removes his hood. "Yes, it is mine! It is all mine!" laughed Pete happily. He is about to grabbed the backpack from his cloak when he realized something: there is nothing but air in there. "What? Where is it?" Pete reached himself frantically only to discovered that the backpack with the black box is not on his person. "No. NO!" yelled Pete shocked, his last no echoing into the night. Author's note Looks like Ash and his friends got the last laugh as Pete has lost the black box. But did Ash and his friends survived? Find out in the next chapter! Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Oct 2 2006, 06:10 PM Post #8 |
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Chapter 7: The Great And All Powerful Plumber Back at the palace, Ami is crying to herself with Pluto and Butch nearby looking at her sadly as she sits on her bed. "Ami?" Ami looks up and sees Mickey coming in, concerned. "Is something the matter?" "Mickey," Ami sniffed. "I'm afraid Pete has done something...terrible." "There, there, there." said Mickey gently as he sits down and takes her hands. "We can make things right again. Now tell me what has happened." Back inside the collapsed cave of the Thousand Year Door, Ash is still unconscious from the events that occurred. His friends are trying to wake him up. "Pika, Pikachu?" Pikachu said, crying in hopes to wake Ash up. "Ash, wake up, man!" yelled Tito. "Not too loud! You may knocked him out again!" protested Dodger. "I'm up." Ash said with a groan as his eyes slowly opened. "Ash, you're alright!" Danny said excited. "What happened?" "Well, the cave collapsed, the jerk who double-crossed us took the black box, and now we're all left for dead in here." explained Sora with a frown. Ash looks up and sure enough, he sees that they're all trapped. "We're trapped!" Ash said. Then angrily, he shakes his fist at the entrance uselessly. "That double-crossing two-faced jackal!" "Forget it, Ash. Whoever he is, he's long gone with that box." said Jake groomily. "I don't think so." Dodger said with a smirk. "May we introduce you to....your backpack." With a smirk, Dodger takes out something from out of nowhere. Ash looks surprised to see that it is his own backpack he left the black box in. And after opening, he sees that the box is still in there! "Why you little thieves!" laughed Ash in delight as he takes the black box out of the backpack. "I don't see why that ruffian would try to killed you over a black box." said Francis looking the box over. "Oh, that box is more than just a box, I guaranteed it." said Bloo with a mysterious smile. "Hey, I think I see something written here, but it's hard to make out." Ash said as he rubbed the box. Suddenly the box begins to shine and everyone jumped back as the box opened up. Something came out of the box with a roar. When all is clear, the group sees some sort of plumber that had brown hair and a mustache and wore a red hat with an “M” logo that was beginning to fall down to his face because of the sweat pouring from his pores. He had blue eyes that shone with passion. Plus, he wore a red long sleeved shirt, white gloves, blue overalls, and brown shoes. He was a mere twenty years old. His name was Mario and he is holding a Keyblade like Sora does. As he appeared, the plumber holds his neck in pain. "Mama mia! Ten thousand years will give you a bad neck pain!" groaned Mario. Suddenly he grabs Mario and hangs him on a nearby rock. "Hang on, wll ya?" As everyone watches, Mario takes his head off, literraly, and spins it around yelling while doing so. As the others helped Tommy down, Mario puts his head back on. "Yeah! It felt good to be outta there!" said Mario excited then he looks at the others. "Okie dokie, which one of you rubbed my black box?" "I did?" asked Ash a bit nervously. Suddenly Mario made a microphone appeared and the cave turns into some sort of talk show. "Hello everybody! It's great to be back! Tell me kid, where are you from?" Mario sticks the mike in Ash's face. "What's your name?" "Uh, Ash Ketchum." Ash responded. "Ash Ketchum!" A neon light appears with Ash's name lighting up in chase lights. The sign changes to reflect Mario's next line. "Hi, Ash Ketchum. Welcome to the show. Can we call you 'Ash' or 'Ketchum'? Or how about 'Ashley"? Then Mario transforms into a dog with a kilt. "Like 'here boy'. Come on Ashley!" "Uh, is it just me or did I hit my head harder than I thought?" Ash asked in disbelief. "We must have all hit our heads because we are seeing this." said Danny. "Hey, you smoke? Mind if I do?" Suddenly Mario explodes, freaking Pikachu out as he changes back to his normal, if you called it normal, self. "Oh sorry about that. Hope I didn't cringe the fur." "Mario!" said Bloo and Eduardo. "Hey, Bloo, Eduardo! Haven't sen you two in a long time! Slap me your hands, boys!" Mario said as he high-fived Bloo and Eduardo. "Ha ha!" Mario looks at Ash and sized him up. "Hmmm, you are a lot smaller than my last master." Mario then lifts his beer gut. "Either that or I am getting bigger. Am I getting fat after eating all that pasta?" "Wait, Ash is your master?" Sora asked surprised. "That's right!" laughed Mario as he slaps a diploma in Sora's hand and puts a mortarboard on his head. "He can be taught! Now Ash, what do you wish from me," Mario transforms into Arnold Schwarzenegger and speaks like him too. "The ever impressive," Then he puts himself in a cube, "the long contained," Now Mario has a puppet on his hand and uses a puppeteer voice, "the often imitated," Mario ditches the dummy as he said, "but never duplicated..." The group watches as Mario spins arouind making clones of himself as he repeated the word 'duplicated'. When he stops, Mario makes like a ring announcer. "Super Mario of the black box!" Soon Mario makes like a certain TV show as his clones applauds behind him and speaks like him too. "Right here from the black box. We got a very good show for your wish fulfillment. Thank you!" "'Wish fulfillment'? What's that?" asked Einstein. "It's very simple, little dog! Ash gets 3 wishes from me! And he can't asked fo rmore!" Mario turns into a slot machine, arm pulls down, and 3 Mario appears in the window saying, "That's right, 3!" The 3 Marios came out of the slot wearing sombardos speaking Mexican. "Uno, dos, tres." Next, Mario transforms into Groucho Marx as he passes the group. "No copies, exchanges or refunds." A duck appears hanging by a rope holding the sign 'refunds'." "Now I know I'm dreaming." Ash said with a smirk. "Pikachu." Pikachu agreed. Mario smiles as he said, "Master, I don't think you quite realize what you've got here! So why don't you just ruminate, whilst I illuminate the possibilities?" Mario lights up as he begins to sing. Everything that happens, Mario does with his Keyblade. Mario: Well Ali Baba had them forty thieves Thieves appears and surrounded the group witht heir swords raises. B]Scheherazadie had a thousand tales[/B] Soon Mario appears in Ash's shirt. But master you in luck 'cause up your sleeve You got a brand of magic never fails! Mario sticks his arms out and punches the thieves away. Next, Ash appears in a boxing ring being massaged and helped out by Mario and the others. You got some power in your corner now Some heavy ammunition like an ox Mario turned into fireworks and crazily exploded. You got some punch, pizzazz, yahoo and how See all you gotta do is rub that box Mario appears in the box, grabs Ash's hand and made him rubs the black box. And I'll say Mister Ash Ketchum sir What will your pleasure be? Ash and his friends themselves at a restaurant table with Mario nearby writing down orders like a waiter. Let me take your order, jot it down You ain't never had a friend like me No no no! Mario pokes Bloo and Eduardo while laughing as he continues. Life is your restaurant And I'm your maitre' d! Mario gives a dish to the boy. Ash removes the lid and he and the other boys startled to see that Mario has transformed into the chicken. Mario goes back to normal but enlarges his ear to hear Ash. C'mon whisper what it is you want You ain't never had a friend like me. Mario makes 4 clones of himself. Yes sir, we pride ourselves on service The Mario gives Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake a shave, a haircut, and manicure. You're the boss, the king, the shah! Ash and his pals are in a great big chair, surrounded by treasure and fanned by beautiful women. The dogs and Pikachu looked impressed as is Bloo and Eduardo. Say what you wish, it's yours! True dish How about a little more Baklava? Mario then dumped a bunch of baklava all over everything. Now Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake are jumping from column 'A' to column 'B'. Try some of column 'A' Try all of column 'B' The boys fell but are saved by a cushion courtesy of a giant Mario. I'm in the mood to help you dude Mario opens his big mouth (literally) and his tongue turns into stairs. A mini-Mario come down it dressed like a magician. You ain't never had a friend like me Mini-Mario now begins to dance with the big Mario's big hands. When they're done, the hands surrounded little Mario and squashed him into nothing. Can your friends do this? Mario takes his head off, makes copies of it, and spins them around. Do your friends do that? Mario hands the hands to Ash who juggles them. Sora, Danny, and Jake juggles them as well. The four spins them like basketballs before sending them back to Mario. Mario then proceeds to try to pulled himself out of a hat. Do your friends pulll this out their little hat Mario transformed into a white rabbit then a dragon. Can your friends go poof! Mario the dragons spits out flames which then turned into 3 cute girls dancing around the 4 boys, making them blush a bit. Well looky here Can your friends go Abracadabra, let 'er rip And then make the sucker disappear? After a bit of dancing and when the boys are having too much fun, the girls disappeared, disappointing them. Mario imitated Ash, so to speak. So don't you sit there slack jawed, buggy eyed I'm here to answer all your midday prayers Mario turns into a certificates which rolls up and surrounded Ash. You got me bona fide, certified You got a plumber for a charg? d'affairs! I got a powerful urge to help you out So what you wish I really want to know Mario shows a list translted in different languages out of Ash's ear and uses it to dry himself off as if he stepped out of the shower. You got a wish that's three miles long, no doubt So all you gotta do is rub like so, and oh! Mario has Ash's rubbed the black box once more then continues the song with people bowing before Ash. Mister Ash Ketchum, sir, have a wish or two or three The bowing people disappeared leaving a giggling dancing girl in their place. Ash smiles and leans to kiss the girl, but the girls turned into Mario who giggles freaking Ash out. I'm on the job, you big nabob You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend Mario made 4 dancing elephants appeared. You ain't never had a friend, never had a friend Next, 4 dancing camels appeared thanks to Mario. A big finale begins. Mario: You ain't never...had a... friend... like...me! As the big finale resumes on like mad, Tito grabs a bunch of treasure like mad. You ain't never had a friend like me! Mario turned itno a cyclone to wrap the song up and everything disappeared. Soon the cave is empty once more except for themselves and Mario with a neon 'APPLAUSE' sign over his head. Tito realizes that the gold he collected is gone and he scowls. "So what do you want, oh master?" Mario asked with a smile. "Let me get this straight. You're going to grant Ash any 3 wishes, right?" asked Jake. Mario turned into William F. Bucklet and said, "Ah, almost. There are a few provisos, a couple of quid pro quos." "What does that mean?" Rita asked. "Pika?" Pikachu asked. "It means there are some wishes that Mario cannot granted, no matter how you want them." Mario explained. "Si. Mario cannot be forced or pressured in granting those kind of wishes or hey may exploded." Eduardo agreed. "Right. Rule number one, I can't kill anybody." Mario said, then he went small and jumps forward, fell down, and disappeared as a video game sound effect as if someone lost a life is heard. (Author's note: Just imagined the lost a life sound effect as if you're playing Super Mario Bros. for the NES.) Mario reappeared and said, "So don't ask. Rule number two, I can't make someone fall in love with somebody else." Mario's head turns into a giant pairs of lips which kisses Ash before changing back and said in a cutey kinda voice. "You little punim there." Next Mario lies down, then transforms into a zombie like creature as he stood up, "And rule number three! I cannot...bring people...back from the dead." Mario grabs Ash and shakes him like mad. "It's not a pretty picture. I won't do it!" Mario then turns back to normal and smiles as he said, "Other than that, all is fair game." "Wow. Any wishes except those. Man, it is hard." Tito said with a frown. Ash, Danny, Sora, and Jake talked it over. They knew what they want first: to get out of the cave. But they need a way to get it without wishing. The four looked at Pikachu and the dogs then smirked. "Provisos? Like limitations on wishes?" said Ash as he scoffs along with the other boys, Pikachu, and the dogs. "Some all powerful plumber he is." suggested Sora as he and the others walked from Mario who looks annoyed by this. "I dunno, you guys. I don't think even get us out of this cave." said Danny with a hidden smirk. "We will have to find another way out. Let's go, dogs." said Jake as he and the others pretended to leave. Suddenly Mario puts his foot, his giant one, down a bit annoyed. He said, "Excuse me? Are you lookin' at me? Did you rub my black box? Did you wake me up, did you bring me here? And all of a sudden, you're walkin' out on me?" The group looked amused as Mario is getting more ticked off. "I don't think so! Not right now! You're getting you wishes so SIT DOWN!" Ash, Danny, Sora, Jake, Pikachu, and the dogs got back into the Gummi Ship as Bloo and Eduardo prepares to drive it. "You shouldn't have made him upset." said Bloo with a smirk. Mario then takes a form of a steward pointing out a bunch of exits with a bunch of arms. "Okie dokie! In case of emergencies, the exit is here, there, here, there, here, there, everywhere!" Mario said laughing. "So keep your hands and arms inside the Gummi Ship at all times! Because we're outta here!" Ash, Mario, and the Gummi Ship's passengers flew up to the ceiling very fast. Outside in the desert, they all exploded out of the sand flying into the distance, finally escaping the Thousand Year Door. Author's note Our heroes has escaped the cave of the Thousand Year Door. So what will Ash's three wishes be? Find out later! Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 3 2006, 05:32 PM Post #9 |
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Chapter 8: Desires and Plots The next day back at the palace, Pete is standing in throne room, still hasn't recovered from the loss of the black box. He and the cats, pretending to be normal cats once more, listened to Mickey who is very upset at what Ami has told him. The rock star herself is watching this, very crossed, as Mickey was yelling at Pete. "This is an outrage, Pete! If it weren't for all your years of loyal service..." Mickey calms down somewhat, then he continues, "From now on, you must discuss the prisoners with me, before they are beheaded!" "I assure you, boat boy king, it won't happened again." said Pete in fake sincerity as he bows. "It better not!" Mickey then turns to Ami and said, "Now then, let's put this whole thing behind us, please?" Pete smiles as he takes Ami's hand, "Once again, I apologized for my bone-headed mistake, Ami." Pete tries to kisses Ami's hand but the rock star pulled it away. "At least there is one good thing about me being forced to marry." said Ami dryly as she glares at Pete angrily. "When I do get married, I will have the power to get rid of you!" "Good, that's settled." Mickey said with a smile. "Now then, Ami, it's time to get back to finding you a husband." Mickey realized that Ami has left the room. "Ami? Ami!" Mickey runs out to followed Ami. When left, Pete scowls angrily. "Oooh, if I only I have gotten that black box..." snarled Pete. "'I will have the power to get rid of you'." said Mr. Blik impersonating Ami. Then he frowns. "Great! Now we have to kissed up to that idiot and his idiot daughter for the rest of our lives!" "Watch it with the idiot talk, Mr. Blik!" protested Gordon annoyed. "No, Mr. Blik." said Pete, ignoring Gordon as he and the cats goes to a window to viewed Mickey speaking with Ami. "Not until she gets that idiot husband. Then she will have us banished." Mr. Blik gasped as he said, "Or worst, beheaded!" "Eeew!" said Pete and Mr. Blik in disgust. "Actually you two would be beheaded. Waffles and I are the innocent bystanders here." Gordon pointed out. "If Pete and I fall, we all fall, Gordon!" Mr. Blik snapped annoyed. "Too bad we couldn't find a way to use this to our advantage, like having someone we know married Ami so we can take over Toon Town that way." Waffles said stupidly. "Waffles, that is the most..." Mr. Blik, hearing what Waffles has said however, interrupted Gordon. "Wait! I got it! I got it, Pete! What if you were the idiot husband?" "What?" yelled Pete angrily grabbing Mr. Blik by the neck. Mr. Blik got free and continued explaining, "Let me be more specific. You married Ami. And then, you get to controlled Toon Town." Pete thought about this and smiles as he goes back to the throne, "Marry the rock star. I become the king. The idea has merit." "Yeah! And then we would dropped the mouse, the pretty rock star, and the rock star's friends off a cliff." said Mr. Blik evilly then he dives onto the floor imitating what he suggested. "I loved how your foul little mind works!" laughed Pete. Pete and Mr. Blik laughed as they begin their latest scheme of taking over the throne. The only one not excited is Gordon and Waffles is too stupid to understand anyway. Somewhere at an oasis in the desert, the Gummi Ship arrives dropping off their passengers. Mario is making like a steward once more. "We hope you enjoyed your travel needs on Air Gummi. Please don't stand until the Gummi Ship has come to a complete stop." said Mario as Bloo and Eduardo stops the Gummi, letting Ash and his friends get off. "Bye-bye. Buh-bye!" When they all gotr off, Mario changed back to normal and smirks. "So, what do you think of me now, Mr. Doubter?" "Well, you sure show us." Danny said smiling. Ash chuckles, then speaks up, "Okay Mario, about my three wishes..." "Does my ears deceived me?" laughed Mario. "Three? You are downed by one!" Mario shows 1 finger but Ash chuckles, moving the finger as he said, "Ah, but I didn't actually wished to get out of the cave. You did that yourself." Mario pauses to think, then his jaw dropped. He turned into a sheep as he said, "Mama mia. Do I feel sheepish?" He glares at Ash as he said, "Okay you baaaaad boy, but no more freebies." "It's a deal." Ash begins to think as Mario and the others relax a bit. "Three wishes, three wishes. Man, they are tough." Ash turned to Mario. "What would you wish for?" Mario looks surprised at this question. "Me? Wow. No one ever asked me that question before. Well, in that case..." Mario pauses to think then sighs. "Aw, forget it. You would think it's dumb." "Come on, tell us!" Sora insisted. "Yeah, we won't laughed." Rita insisted. "Pika, Pika!" agreed Pikachu. Mario sighs as he said, "Freedom." "Whoa, man. You're a prisoner?" asked Tito looking at the black box. "Come with the job, the whole powerful plumber thing." Mario grows big, his voice booming. "Phenomenal cosmic powers!" Mario then shrinks down, seemingly struck in the black box. "Itty bitty living space." "Wow. That's terrible, dog." Jake said sadly. Mario came out of the black box and nods. "Yes, to be free. Not going: Poof! What do you need? Poof! What do you need? Poof! What do you need?" Mario poof in and out in front of the group a few times before he stops. "To be my own master, such a thing would be greater than all the magic and all the treasures in all the world!" Mario then groans as he sat down. "Mama mia. I must be kidding myself. It will never happen. I need to face reality more." "What do you mean?" asked Ash. "Well, the only way Senor Mario can finally be free if his amigo master wishes himself out. You could probably guess how many times that happened." Eduardo said with a frown. "Like never! Some people can be so greedy." Bloo said frowning. "You used up 3 wishes without wishing Mario." Eduardo reminded Bloo. "So?" Ash thought of this. Once again, someone being forced into something they don't wanna do. He then got an idea and said, "Say Mario, what if I wish you free?" "Yeah, right." said Mario, rolling his eyes then transforms his head into Pinocchio, his nose growing. Ash pokes the nose back changing Mario's head back to normal. "No, that's a promise! Once I make my first two wishes, I will use my last wish to set you free!" said Ash smiling as he holds out his hand, expecting Mario to shake it. Mario pauses to think, then shakes it with a sad little smile. "Well, here's hoping." Mario then laughs as he turns into a magician. "Okie dokie! Let's do some magic!" He throws some cards around before changing back. "Now tell me, Ash, what do you most of all?" Ash blushed while rubbing his head. "Well, you see, there's this girl..." "Whoa, whoa, whoa!" interrupted Mario holding up a sign with a crossover over a love symbol. "I can't make people fall in love! Did you forget?" "I know. But it's just...she's smart, fun, and..." "Pretty?" Mario guessed. "Beautiful! She got these eyes that can hypnotized you...her hair...and wow, her smile." Ash sighs happily. "He isn't the only one in love. Danny, Sora, and I are in love with her friends." Jake said happily. "Man, that Betty is beautiful as well." "I can't stop thinking about June." Danny said smiling sheepishly. "Ariel." Sora sighs happily. "As you can see, all these four boys are in love with four certain girls." explained Francis. "That's putting it milely, Francis." Tito said. "It's Frankie." Tito smirked as Francis suddenly realized what he just said! "Gah! I meant Francis!" yelped Francis, then he glares angrily at Tito. "Blast you, Tito!" Tito laughed at this while Einstein stares. Ash sighs as he said, "But the problem is, she is the rock star Ami Onuki and she and her friends are stricted to a law made by King Mickey." "You know, the only way we could even get to be with them if..." "Danny, wait!" Ash said an idea spotting in his head. He turns to Mario as he said, "Mario, can you make me a famous celebrity?" Mario takes out a book that said 'Celebrity Cookbook' and reads through it. "Let's me see. Chicken a'la king?" Mario takes out a chicken wearing a crown out of the book. "No." Mario got rid of the chicken and continues reading. "Dragon King?" Mario yelped as he felt a bite and he pulls out a little red dragon from the book. "Yo, man. What's the big idea?" snapped Mushu annoyed. (Author's note: This is a reference to my The Little Trainer story that also has Ash/Ami in it) "Hey Mushu." Ash said waving to his dragon friend. "Hey Ash, Sora, Danny, Jake. Now if you guys don't mind...get me out of this story, man!" snapped Mushu annoyed. Mario send Mushu away then resumes reading, "Caesar's salad." Mario jumped back as a dagger comes out and tries to stab him. "Et tu, Brutus!" Once the dagger is gone, Mario found what he is looking for. "Ah, here we are. To make a celebrity." Mario smiles then turned to Ash. "Is that the secret word? You know what to say!" "Mario, I wish for you to make me a celebrity!" Ash said with a smile. "All right!" Mario said excited. He transforms into Arsenio Hall and makes 'woof' noises. Then he becomes a fashion designer. "Okay, who did you clothes? Those are so Game Boy-ish. These clothes say...mama mia, lame! Let's work with something here." Mario takes Ash's measurements, then with his Keyblade, Ash is now in celebrity like clothing. Ash looks into a mirror very impressed. "Ooh, I liked it! I really do! What it's missing two things. What are they?" Mario asked thinking. "Hey, how about some clothes for the celebrity's rich friends?" asked Jake excited. "Okie dokie!" Mario said with a smile as he zaps the three boys with his Keyblade. Soon the boys are in celebrity rich friends like clothing. "All right!" Sora said smiling at his new wardrobe. "June is going to be so impressed." Danny agreed. "All right!" cheered Jake. "Now it needs one more thing: transportation! Excuse me, Pokemon? Over here!" Mario said calling for Pikachu. "Pika!" yelped Pikachu as he tries to hide behind the Gummi Ship but Mario zaps him with his Keyblade and brought him over. Mario brings in a game show set with Ash standing behind a podium with 'Ash' on it. "Here it is! What better to make an entrance into Toon Town then your very own...camel!" A door with Mario's head opens as the plumber transforms Pikachu into a camel, making him spit out in annoyance. "Careful, they spit." "You think Ami would be impressed if he rode in like that?" asked Einstein looking Pikachu over. "Mama mia! The dog got something! That ain't going to work!" Mario then turns Pikachu into a beautiful horse. Mario frowns. "No, not that either. Let's see..." As Mario tries to decide, he keeps chaning Pikachu into things like animals and a car beginging changing him back. Mario brightens up and said. "Hee hee, I got it! Time for one of the legends to be coming to life!" With one zap of the Keyblade, the little guy has turned into one of the Legendary Pokemon Raikou much to his shock. He landed on Bloo, crushing him. "Get off of me!" yelled Bloo with a yelp. "Now you can't complained you didn't catch one of the Legendary Pokemon." Mario said with a smirk. Pikachu, now a Raikou, looks into a puddle of water and sees himself in the reflection. He yelps and climbs up into a tree nearby. Of course, he is too big so it bended back causing him to hang on and looked at Ash upside down. "You look good, Pikachu." Ash said with a smile. "One more thing: it wouldn't be your friends don't get a ride of their own. So..." Mario said glaring at the dogs. "Now hold it! Don't you dare!" protested Francis as he backs off. Before the dogs could make a run for it, Mario zaps them with his Keyblade and soon they transformed into different Legendary Pokemon. Dodger has transformed into a Entei, Rita has transformed into a Suicune, Francis has been turned into a Groundon, Tito has turned into a Latios, and Einstein has became a Articuno. "My goodness!" yelled Francis as he looks at himself in horror. "Wow! Check me out, man!" Tito said looking at himself impressed. "Wow. I feel cold." said Einstein stupidly. "You looked great and beautiful, Rita. Or should I say, Suicune?" said Dodger smiling at Rita. Rita blushed as she said, "You really think so?" "You all looked great!" Danny said with a smile. "Wow. They looked really neat." said Eduardo impressed. "Yeah. Really." groaned Bloo as he recovered from being crushed by Pikachu the Raikou. "Okie dokie! He got the outfit, he got the rich friends, he got the Legendary Pokemon, but we're not done yet!" said Mario happily as everyone turned to watch him shooting out fireworks out of the oasis. "Hang on to your hat, Ash! We're going to make you a star!" Author's note Looks like Ash could be getting his wish to be with Ami. But if Pete has his way, Ash may lose his chance! Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Oct 7 2006, 01:15 PM Post #10 |
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Author's note Sorry for the wait, folks, but I have other stories to work on (as usual!). Anyway back to this! Chapter 9: Prince Ashi Back at the Toon Town palace, Mickey is playing with his plastic toy animals, balancing them high as he goes. One of the toys is of that of a familiar cyborg. Grievous gave that toy to him before he left with Yumi (plus, for not calling him Grievie). With a smile, Mickey puts the last toy on top, not making the toys fall at all. He sits down, happy with what he did. Suddenly Pete storms in, followed by the cats causing all the toys to falled down. "King Mickey!" yelled Pete holding some sort of scroll. "I have found a solution for this problem with Ami!" "Meow!" agreed Gordon as he, Mr. Blik, and Waffles got on one of the arms on Mickey's throne. "It's in this here scroll." Pete opens the scroll and reads it. "It said, 'if the proper suitor is not chosen for the rock star by the appointed day, then the one in charge, the king of Toon Town, must choose for her'." Mickey took some treats and tried to give it to the cats, especially Mr. Blik who backs away. Mr. Blik and Gordon looked relief though Waffles is disappointed as Mickey pulled the treats back frowning while saying, "But Ami hates those guys who come here and I don't think her friends like the rich people I arranged for them to date! How can I choose someone she hates?" Mr. Blik and Gordon's relief ending when Mickey stuff the cats' mouths with the treats. Waffles looks happy as he eats his without problem, though Gordon and Mr. Blik may disagree. "Donm't worry. There is another solution. I found some more." said Pete reading, or pretending to. "'If the suitor cannot be found, then the rock star must marry....'" Pete 'looks on' and smirks. "Well, look at this." "What? Who?" Mickey asked anxiously. "She has to married...the captain of the guards. Why...that's me." Pete said smirking. Mickey frowns and tries to take a look at the scroll. "But the law said that only a rich prince or someone like that can married Married. I was certain of it!" Pete pushed Mickey back as he gets his scepter out. "Desperate times called for desperate measures." Mickey finds himself under Pete's control once more as the scepter glows putting Mickey under once more. "Desperate measures." said Mickey repeatedly in his trance. "You must order Ami to marry me." "I...will order...Ami to..." But then Mickey snaps out of it and frowns at Pete. "But you are too old for her." "Ami Onuki will marry me!" yelled Pete putting Mickey under the scepter's control more. "Ami Onuki...will...marry..." Suddenly a trumpet fanfare is heard, breaking Mickey out of the trance again. "Gosh! What? What is that music?" Mickey runs to the balcony overlooking the city of Toown Town. Mickey looks and laughed his trademark laugh. "Ha ha ha ha! Pete! You got to come see this!" said Mickey happily. Pete, reluctantly, goes out onto the balcony followed by Gordon, Mr. Blik, and Waffles. As they watched, there is a parade going on in Toon Town. They are led by some sort of major like guy. Of course, it is actually Mario dressed like a major. The parade plays a song for the crowd and everyone else. Marchers: Make way for Prince Ashi! Everyone including people Ash and Ami has met before, turned to looked at the parade. Swordsmen: Say hey! It's Prince Ashi! Harlem girls throws flower on the ground while Mario begins to mingle with the crowd. Mario: Hey, clear the way in the old bazaar, Hey you, let us through, it's a bright new star, Now come, be the first on your block to meet his eye! Make way, here he comes, Ring bells, bang the drums. You're gonna love this guy Mario pounds on Ganondorf's stomach, making the proprietor confused as Mario holds him and pointed. Pikachu the Raikou, Dodger the Entei, Rita the Suicune, Francis the Groundon, Tito the Latios, and Einstein the Articuno marches or flies through town. Ash (Prince Ali) rides on Pikachu, Danny rides on Entei, Sora rides on Rita, Jake rides on Francis, while two random servants rides on Tito and Einstein. Prince Ashi, fabulous he, Ashi Pallet! Genuflect, show some respect Down on one knee Mario, using his Keyblade, forces Bowser and his men to bowed down. Bowser looks up and is confused as Pikachu waves at him. Now try your best to stay calm Brush up your Sunday Salaam Gordon, Waffles, and Mr. Blik was dancing to the song but was forced to stopped when Pete gaves at them annoyed. And come and meet his spectacular coterie. Mario 'wheelbarrows' six cartoon guys onto Pikachu. They have to stand on each other's story to shake Ashi's hand. Prince Asji, mighty is he, Ashi Pallet! Strong as ten regular men, definitely The men fell onto Ashi. Mario uses the Keyblade so that Ashi could hold the men like an acrobat. Mario then turns into an old guy and whispers to Grandpa Simpson. He faced the galloping hordes Next, Mario turns into a kid playing with a toy sword as he speaks with the Peanuts gang. A hundred bad guys with swords Now Mario turns into a big guy and holds Ed, Edd, and Eddy as he continues. Who sent those goons to their lords, why Prince Ashi! Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty came out onto the balcony to see the parade. A bunch of servants come in carrying golden camels. Servants: He's got seventy-five golden camels! Mario pops in, dressed like a parade announcer. "Don't ya think they looked lovely, June?" asked Mario. Next, women rode in on floats with a bunch of beautiful peacocks. Women: Purple peacocks, he's got fifty-three! Now June (Mario), the other one, appears as a female announcer. "Fabulous, Harry. Love the feathers." said June. As Mario continues singing, servants are seen carrying a big gorilla parade balloon down the street. Mario: When it comes to exotic type mammals Mario changes into a leopard and a sing as he sings to the Histeria! kids. Has he got a zoo, I'm telling you Mario disappears as the H! kids laughed in delight. Chorus: It's a world class menagerie! Now Mario appeared next to Misty, Erika, and Sabrina who rejected Ash earlier. Mario is dressed like a girl as they sing. Mario sings at the same time they did. Mario and the girls: Prince Ashi, Handsome is he, Ashi Pallet There's no question this Ashi's alluring That physique, how can I speak Never ordinary, never boring Ashi and his pals tried to show muscles but they don't got any. Mario uses the Keyblade to give them some, really impressing the girls. Weak at the knee Everything about the man just plain impresses Well, get on out in that square He's a wonder, he's a whiz, a wonder Adjust your veil and prepare He's about to pull my heart asunder To gawk and grovel and stare at Prince Ashi! And I absolutely love the way he dresses! Ashi, Sora, Danny, and Jake blew kisses to the girls, making them faint. Ami, une, Ariel, and Betty, fron their balcony, frowns annoyed. Ami scoffed and went back inside, followed by the girls. Chorus: He's got ninety-five white Persian monkeys! (He's got the monkeys, let's see the monkeys!) Servants are holding up monkeys on trees while Bowser's men danced stupidlyh. And to view them, he charges no fee! (He's generous, so generous) Ashi and his friends throw some money onto the street making the citizens runs over to grab some. He's got slaves, he's got servants and flunkies! (Proud to work for him) They bow to his whim, love serving him They're just lousy with loyalty to Ashi! Prince Ashi! Back inside the palace, Mickey runs over to the doors to the throne to let Ashi in but Pete blocks his ways, smirking. But the doors burst opened, the parade with Pikachu leading the way, entering. The doors crush Pete and the cats. Prince Ashi! Amorous he! Ashi Pallet Mario jumps down from Pikachu and lands next to Mickey, smirking. Mario: Heard your rock star was a sight lovely to see! Pete got himself free, a bit squashed and a lot of anger as he growls. And that,good people, is why He got dolled up and dropped by With sixty elephants, llamas galore With his bears and lions A brass band and more With his forty fakirs, his cooks, his bakers His birds that warble on key Make way for Prince Ashi! As they sing, a bunch of stuff is shown. Ashi then flew off Pikachu in the Gummi Ship driven by Bloo and Eduardo. As they picked up Sora, Danny, and Jake along the way, they goes down to Mickey. As the song ends, Pete and his men forced everything but Ash, Sora, Danny, Jake, Pikachu, the dogs now Pokemon, Bloo, and Eduardo out of the room. When the room is empty, Pete slams the doors and frowns. "Wonderful! That is wonderful!" said Mickey as he applauds. Ash then speaks to Mickey in a deep voice. "Thank you. King Mickey, I have come from far to ask for Ami Onuki's hand in marriage." "Prince Ashi Pallet! Why of course, I am very delighted to see you!" said Mickey as he shakes his hand. He sees Ashi's friends and added, "Oh, and these must be your friends, right?" "Yes, my rich friends who are friends to a celebrities. Their names are Roxas," Ash pointed to Sora (Roxas), "Dexter Douglas," Then he points to Danny (Dexter Douglas), "And JL: AD, the rapper guy." Now he pointed to JL: AD, AKA Jake Long. (Author's note: Roxas is Sora's Nobody from Kingdom Hearts II and what name Sora uses in another one of my Aladdin parodies. Dexter Douglas AKA Freakazoid is the main character from Freakazoid voiced by David Kaufman, who also did Danny Fenton/Phantom. You can guess where I got JL: AD from) "Yo, what up, king?" Jake said pointing his thumbs up. "Hey Ashi, is there any other girls Mickey may kept an eye on?" asked Danny. "Say, Ami does have some friends staying there. Their names are Juniper Lee, Ariel, and Betty Barrett." said Mickey with a smile. He noticed Pete nearby frowning and said, "Gosh! How rude of me! This is my captain of the guards, Pete! He is delighted too." "Outrageous." said Pete with a frown. There is something familiar about Ashi and his friends but he doesn't know or care as he steps forward, "Anyway, I'm Afraid Prince Pal-head..." "Pallet." Ash said correcting Pete. "Whatever. You can't just parade in here uninvited and expect to..." Mickey pays Pete no attention as he awes the Gummi Ship. He does his trademark laugh as he said, "Gosh! A Gummi Ship! I haven't seen one of these in years! Does it still work?" "We got here, didn't we Senor Mickey?" said Eduardo with a smile. "Say, want to go on a joyride? You know you want to." Bloo said smirking at the king. "Gosh, really? That would be great! That is, if it's okay with..." Mickey looks at Ash and his friends hopefully. "Why sure, your majesty! Allow us!" Ash said with a smile. Sora and Danny helped Mickey into the Gummi Ship. "Get ready for a blast!" said Bloo with a smirk. Bloo's attempt to hit the launch button was stopped when Pete puts his hand over the button, the cats are on his shoulder. "Boat boy king, I must protest! This is..." Mickey interrupts Pete with a scowl. "Oh, lighten up, Pete! Learn to have a little fun!" Mickey pushes Pete's hand out of the way and pushed the launch button, causing the Gummi Ship to fly off very fast. The event pushed Pete back and causes the cat to go falling off and slamming right onto the floor. Mickey laughs in delight as Bloo and Eduardo flies him all over the place. The Gummi Ship flew under Francis, scaring the crud out of him. "How rude!" yelled Francis as he glares at the Gummi Ship. "Lighten up, Frankie!" laughed Tito in delight making the 'Groundon' glares at the 'Latios'. As Mickey continued having fun, Pete gave a suspicious look at Ash as he comes over. "Uh, tell me where you are from again?" Pete asked. "Much farther than you've travelled." Sora said with as mile. Pete doesn't buy it. "Try me." As Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles recovered, they hear Mickey shouting out, "Look out, kitties!" They turned to see the Gummi Ship heading their way. "Oh crud!" screamed Mr. Blik as he, Gordon, and Waffles makes the run with it with the Gummi Ship chasing them. "Hey watch it! Watch it with that dumb thing!" screamed Gordon. "Wheeee! This is fun!" said Waffles in delight. The Gummi Ship flew past the cats, no longer chasing them. As Gordon and Mr. Blik sighed in relief, they, along with Waffles, weren't watching where they were going and slammed right into a pillar. They fell to the floor, Mini-Mickeys in Gummi Ships circled their heads saying 'have a cat treat, have a cat treat'. "Why sure. I'd loved to have one." said Waffles dazed and stupidly. "Out of the way! We're coming in for a landing! Watch this, Pete!" laughed Mickey. Soon the Gummi Ship came to a complete stop with a thud. Mickey got out laughing his trademark laugh. "Gosh! That is so much fun! That is the most fun I've have in a long time!" Mickey said happily. "Si, but too much for these amigos." said Eduardo with a groan as he and Bloo got out very dizzily and walked over to Pikachu and the dogs. Eduardo fainted and Einstein catches him. Bloo got sick and 'gave' on the floor. "Hey watch the fur." yelled Dodger. "Gosh, this young Ashi and his friends are impressive youths. Plus, they are rich and celebrities." said Mickey smiling at Ash and his friends. He then whispered to Pete, "If we're lucky, you may not have to marry Ami after all." "I don't trust the boy!" snapped Pete angrily. "Nonsense! I have one thing I pride in myself, Pete, and it's my excellent judge of character." "'Excellent judge of character'" mumbled Gordon as he, Mr. Blik and Waffles recovered. "Yeah, sure...not!" snapped Mr. Blik as he glares at the scene. "Spleen!" said Waffles happily. As the conversion continues, no one notices Ami and the girls coming in, overhearing this. "Ami will like this one and I'm sure her friends will like his friends." Mickey continued. "I'm sure we'd liked them especially Ami." said Ash with a smile. "No! I would like to intercede on Ami's behalf!" snapped Pete. As he said this, Ami, still in the room, looked furious. Her friends got mad too as Pete continued. "This boy is no different than the others! What makes him think he is worthy of the rock star?" Ash laughed as he pricks Pete's fur and make it spring into different directions. "Mickey, I am Prince Ashi Pallet. Just let her meet me. I will win her yet." Ami couldn't take it any more as she snarled, "How dare you." Everyone turned and is surprised to see Ami and her friends are in the room looking very upset. "All of you! Standing around deciding Ami and our future?" June yelled in agreement. "We are no prizes to be won here!" snapped Ariel. "Yeah, nor are we trophies for the stupid prince and his stinking friends!" said Betty. As Ami and her friends stormed out of the room, Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake looked stunned and upset, Pete is a bit peeved while Mickey looks kinda sheepish as he did his trademark laugh. "Gosh. Well, don't worry about Ami or her friends. You should give them time to cool down. I am sure things will turned out alright." said Mickey as he begins to show Ash's group around. As they left, Pete's eyes narrowed angrily. "I think it's time to say goodbye to Pal-head and his friends." snarled Pete angrily. Author's note Uh oh. Pete, now intending to get the throne, now plans Ash and his friends' demise. And with Ash and his friends trying their best to win the girls over, it may be their fate yet. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Oct 8 2006, 05:45 PM Post #11 |
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Chapter 10: Boy Girl Date In the courtyard later that night, the girls sighs as they stood at the balcony watching the stars. Down below, Ash is trying to deal with his latest problem. "What are we going to do, guys? Ami won't let me talk to her." Ash said with a groan. "What was I thinking trying to pull off with this stupid celebrity wish?" "You thought you're unhappy? June, Ariel, and Betty doesn't want to speak with us!" Danny said sadly. Sora and Jake nodded in agreement. Nearby, Pikachu tries to drink some ketchup from a bottle and kept squishing some in his eyes. He frowns and throws the empty ketchup bottle into a pile of empty bottles. "Alas, you've never get better at getting ketchup from bottle, my friend." Francis said sadly. Nearby, Mario is playing a game of chess with Bloo and Eduardo. "Your move, guys." said Mario smirking. Bloo whistled into Eduardo's ears. After nodding, Eduardo did a bunch of moves which ended up knocking one of Mario's black pieces right off the board and to his win. "Good move." said Mario amazed. Then he transforms into Rodney Dangerfield. "I can't believe it. I am losing to imaginary friends." "Tough luck. That's $200 bucks you owe us." said Bloo waving his arm out expecting Mario to pay off. "Mario!" Ash called. "I'm going to need your help." Mario turns into Jack Nicholson and speaks to Ash, "Okay, sparky, here's the deal. You and your pals want to court the little ladies, you got to make like a straight scooter. You follow me?" "Not really." Sora said confused. Mario turns back to normal wearing a mortar head this time. He has a blackboard appears and points to some words with a stich saying, "Tell her the...TRUTH!" "No way!" yelled Ash as he kicks at the blackboard, making it disappeared. "If I tell her that I am not really a prince, just that Rattata kid she met in the streets, she'd laugh at me me." "Yeah and I am not sure telling Betty and her pals is a good idea, dog." said Jake concerned, worrying what would happened if he and the others tell the other girls. Ash puts his hat on, it turns into Mario, lighting up like a lamp. "Ha ha! A woman likes it when a guy makes her laugh!" laughed Mario. Ash frowns and pulls a chain on Mario, turning the light off. Mario appears holding Ash's hat and sighs sadly, "But seriously, Ash, you got to be yourself." "No way! That's the last thing I want to be!" Ash said as he puts his hat back on. "Okay, my pals are going to see Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty. When we do, we'd act smooth, cool, confidant." "So how do we look?" asked Danny as he and the others demonstrated for Mario, Bloo, Eduardo, Pikachu, and the dogs. Mario sighs as he said, "Like celebrities." With that said, the boys got into the Gummi Ship, as did Bloo and Eduardo. The two imaginary friends get the Gummi Ship ready for lift up and flies up to the balcony. In Ami's bedroom, the girls are hanging around with Pluto and Butch nearby. Ami sighs, a bit depressed. "Still thinking of that street boy?" asked Ariel noticing what Ami's thinking. Before Ami could responded, a voice from outside called out, "Ami!" The girls and dogs looked. Pluto and Butch growled viciously "Who is it?" Ami asked curiously. Back on the balcony, the boys got on it and approaches. "It's us, Prince Ashi..." Ash stops as he remembered what he's doing and speaks in his disguise voice, "I mean Prince Ashi Pallet and his friends." The girls looked out via the shades and frowns. "Get lost. We don't want to see you, any of you." snapped June as she and the others turns and walks away. "Wait, June!" Danny yelped speaking in his normal voice. "Give us a chance!" Before the boys could followed, Pluto and Butch pounced forwards, making them back up, right near the balcony's edge. "Just leave us alone." Ariel called from Ami's room. "Whoa, whoa, down dogs!" chuckled Jake nervously. Down below, Bloo and Eduardo are watching. Mario comes up to see how they're doing. "So how they're holding up?" Mario asked curiously. "Ay Caramba. These amigos are dead." Eduardo said groaning. Back on the balcony, Ash takes his hat off in hopes to brush the dogs away. "Heel doggies. Take off, good doggies." Ami and her friends looked out. When they see them, they looked puzzled. There's something familiar about him. "Hold it." said Ami as she and the other girls came out. Pluto and Butch stops and goes to their mistress. "Uh, yeah?" asked Sora a bit nervous. "Have we seen you somewhere before?" Ami asked a bit puzzle. "Oh man. They must still remembered us." Sora said, whispering to the others. "Uh, no! Of course not!" said Ash quickly as he puts his hat on. "That's weird. You kinda reminded me of the boy I once met in the market." "And your friends reminded us of the friends he has." Betty said looking at Jake trying to see if she could recognized him. "No, of course not, dog!" said Jake nervously. "We've never been to the marketplace." said Ash as a bee buzzes around him. As Ash tries to swat him away, he continued. "I have servants who goes to the market for me, Roxas, Dexter, and JL: AD." "Yeah, they also have servants who go for them so you probably haven't seen us before." Danny added. "Hmmm. I guess you're right." June said, a bit disappointed. The bee begins to speak quietly to Ash. It is actually Mario. "Mama mia! Enough about you! Talk about her! She's smart, fun, the hair, the eyes, anything! Just pick one!" Ash nodded as he said, "Uh, Ami? I think you're very..." Of course, the Pokemon trainer couldn't think of anything. "Wonderful, gloriuous, magnificent, punctual!" said Mario throwing out words!" "Punctual" "Punctual?" asked Ami, offended. "Punctual?" asked Danny, June, Sora, Ariel, Jake, and Betty at once. "Sorry." said Mario sheepishly. "Uh, I mean beautiful!" Ash said quickly. "Nice safe." The girls thinks of this and smiles. "Yeah, well I am also a rock star too." Ami said seductively as she and her friends walked over to the boys. "Yeah." said Ash smiling, looking love-sick at Ami, while his pals looked at June, Ariel, and Betty. "The young girl Mickey is looking after." June added. "I know." Danny said smiling. "A fine for any prince, celebrity, or whatever to marry." said Ariel as she and the other girls get closer. "Yep, right. Right. For a guy like Ash." Sora said absently. "Warning! Warning!" yelped Mario trying to warned the boys. "Yeah, a guy like Ash." Betty said as she and the other girls put a finger on each boy's chest, Ami on Ash's, June on Danny's, Ariel on Sora's, and Betty on Jake's, and poked all the way to their heads. But then they angrily pull the boys' hats over their heads very fast. "And every other stuffed, swaggering, moron I've met!" yelled Ami. Ami accidentally knocked Mario causing him to divebomb downward. "Mayday, mayday!" cried Mario, his behind on fire and dressed like some sort of bee pilot. "Ami, please!" protested Ash as the girls walked off once more. "Go jumped off the balcony!" snapped Ami angrily. "You got to do something, Ash." Sora told Ash in concern as he watches Ariel storming away. "Stop her! Stop her! Want me to sting her?" Mario the bee asked flying around. "No! Buzz off!" snapped Ash trying to swat him again. "Fine. But remember, bee yourself." said Mario with a sigh as he goes back into the black box Ash is currently hiding in his hat. "Yeah right!" snapped Ash out loud. "Excuse me?" yelled the girls at once as they turned, thinking Ash was talking to them. "Uh, he said you're right." Danny said quickly. Ash plays along and sighs disappointedly. The girls looked puzzled as he said, "You are no prize to be won. You should be allowed to make your own choices." The boys got on the balcony's rail as the girls, Pluto, and Butch looked at each other puzzled. "Well, I guess we should go now, dogs." said Jake. Suddenly the boys jumped off, much to the girls' horror. "No, wait!" cried Betty as she and the other girls runs forward. But then, the boys' heads poke up from over the edge. "What? Did you girls called?" asked Sora suddenly. "How?" asked Ami surprised. All the girsl looked over the edge and sure enough, they see the boys are riding in the Gummi Ship operated by Bloo and Eduardo, "How are you guys doing that?" "It is a Gummi Ship." Ash said proudly. "Our operators are Eduardo and Blooregard Q. Kazoo." Danny said introducing the drivers. "But you lovely ladies can called me Bloo." said Bloo as he and Eduardo shake the girls' hands. "Well, they are very nice." Ariel said smiling. Ash thought up an idea and said, "Say, how about we give you girls a ride? We can get out of the palace, see the world and all that." "I don't know. Is this thing even safe?" asked June. "Sure." laughed Ash as he and the boys held out their hands. "Do you trust us?" The girls's eyes widen. They recognized those words before as they looked at them. "What?" asked Ami suspiciously. "Do you trust us?" Ash repeated. Ami pauses, then she smirks as she takes Ash's hand, saying, "Yes." June take Danny's hand, Ariel takes Sora's hand, while Betty take Jake's. The boys helped the girls into the Gummi Ship. As they all sat down, Bloo and Eduardo got the Gummi Ship going and flies up very quick. The girls looks and sees Pluto and Butch looking back confused. They now became amazed as they see that they're flying over the palace wall and into the night sky. As they do, the boys held the girls as Ash begins to sing. Ash: can show you the world Shining, shimmering, splendid. Tell me Ami, now when did you last Let your heart decide? As the Gummi Ship flew through Toon Town, Eduardo stops to pick a flower each then gives it to the boys who then gives it to each girls. The girls accept the flowers smiling. I can open your eyes Take you wonder by wonder Over, sideways, and under On a magic Gummi Ship ride The Gummi Ship did as Ash sing about, flying into the clouds. A whole new world! A new fantastic point of view No one to tell us no Or where to go Or say we're only dreaming Ami smiles as she sees Toon disappearing from sight, Bloo and Eduardo flying the Gummi Ship in and out of the clouds. She then begins to sing. Ami: A whole new world A dazzling place I never knew But when I'm way up here It's crystal clear That now I'm in a whole new world with you! The boys and girls catch some clouds as the ride continued. Bloo and Eduardo circles a bunch of clouds, giving them a swirl look. Now Danny and June begins to sing. Danny: Now I'm in a whole new world with you! June: Unbelievable sights The group in the Gummi Ship joins a bunch of flocks, as one of them named Zazu squawks in surprise upon seeing them. Indescribable feeling Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling The Gummi Ship did some somersaults and flips, causing the boys and girls to go into a free fall before Bloo and Eduardo catches them again. Through an endless diamond sky Now they are above the clouds where the stars are glowing very beautifully. Sora and Ariel sings next. Ariel: A whole new world! Sora: Don't you dare close your eyes Ariel: An hundred thousand things to see Sora: Hold your breath--it gets better! Ariel: I'm like a shooting star, I've come so far I can't go back to where I used to be! The ride continues flying over a river then to the Great Pyramids. The boys and girls wave at a worker named Professor Oak working on something. He waves back but he hammers to hard, causing the front section to fall right off. Now it's Jake and Betty's turn to sing. Jake: A whole new world! Betty: Every turn a surprise Jake: With new horizons to pursue Betty: Every moment, red-letter The ride passed a bunch of wild horses running. Ami smiles as she pets a young one. Now all the boys and girls begin to sing. Boys and girls: I'll chase them anywhere There's time to spare Let me share this whole new world with you They passed through Ancient Greece. Ash grabs an apple from a nearby tree and rolls it down his arm to Ami. Now she and the other girls are certain that these boys, especially Prince Ashi, are the same ones from the market. Boys: A whole new world Girls: (smiling) A whole new world Boys: That's where we'll be Girls: That's where we'll be Boys: A thrilling chase Girls: A wondrous place Boys and girls: For you and me! The Gummi Ship flies over the lake as Ash and Ami, Danny and June, Sora and Ariel, and Jake and Betty held onto each other each, having a romantic reflect. The moon's reflection is in the lake. Later, the group arrives in China just in time for the Chinese fireworks that are exploding into the night sky. The whole group, plus Bloo and Eduardo, are looking at thia via a rooftop. "Wow. This whole thing is so magical." said Ami happily. "Yeah." said Ash smiling, day-dreaming. June looks at the boys, deciding it is now time for them to spill the beans. "It's a shame that Pikachu and the dogs are going to miss this." "No way!" laughed Danny, not realizing what June's doing. "They hate fireworks! Heck, Tito don't like flying either." "Amigos! No!" yelped Eduardo trying to stop them. But it was too late as the boys, upon seeing the upset look at the girls' faces, realized what Danny just said. "What Dexter meant to say was..." Sora said nervously, but he couldn't find another way to say it. "Whoa." Ami angrily grabs Ash's hat and shows his hair. "You are the boy I've met in the market, aren't you! And your so-called rich friends? These are the same friends we've met as well!" "Ami, please! We're sorry!" "Do you think we're so stupid?" Ariel snapped, a bit angry and hurt. "No!" protested Sora. "That we wouldn't figured it out?" asked Betty frowning. "No! Well, uh, we hope you wouldn't." said Jake nervously. Then he said quickly, "But that isn't what we meant?" "Who are you guys? Tell us the truth." Ami demanded. The girls nodded in agreement. "The truth?" Ash said nervously as he turns to Bloo and Eduardo, who just sigh. "Go ahead. Tell her. It's too late to back out now." Bloo said. "The truth is...the truth is..." said Ash trying to think. Then he got it. "We sometimes dressed as commoners to escape the celebrity pressure life!" "D'oh!" groaned Bloo and Eduardo slapping their own hands. "But Ash is really a celebrity and we're his friends." Danny said quickly. The girls looks confused. But they actually bought it as Ami said, "Why didn't you tell us before?" Ash smiles as he said, "Well you know, celebrities going out into the city in disguise, sounds pretty weird, huh?" Ami knew that this was true since she, Ariel, June, and Betty did that themselves. All the girls smirked. "Nah. Not really." said Ariel as she flicked Sora's feather up. Then the girls, Ami next to Ash, Ariel next to Sora, June next to Danny, and Betty next to Jake, cuddled up with them. The boys smiles as they hugged the ones they loved. "Well, they got off easy." Bloo said in disbelief. "Si." agreed Eduardo as he continued to look mystified Author's not There you have it. The boys and girls have their first date. But when they get back to the palace, will they stay happy for long? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Oct 9 2006, 06:11 PM Post #12 |
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Pete's Marriage Plot Soon, after the fireworks were over, the boys returned to the palace to take the girls home. Bloo stops near the edge to let the girls off. The Gummi descends to below the balcony and so did the boys. The boys and girls looked at each other happily "Good night, my handsome man." Ami said smiling at Ash. "Good night, my beautiful rock star." Ash said smiling back. The boys and girls looked at each other. With a smirk, Bloo whispered into Eduardo's ear. The bull thing nodded and pressed a button causing the Gummi Ship to go a bit higher. Suddenly Ash ends up kissing Ami, Danny is kissing June, Sora is kissing Ariel, and Jake is kissing Betty. But none of them mind as they close their eyes and enjoyed the kiss very passionately. When they're done, the girls moved back, smiled at them, and walked back into Ami's room. As the boys looked, they smiled widely as the girls gave them one last happy look before going back in. "YES!" cheered the boys at once as they fall back and out of the Gummi Ship. Bloo and Eduardo catches them as they all descended to the ground. The boys smiles as they looked up at the stars. "Dog, this is a great night, you guys." Jake said smiling. "I actually kissed Ariel." Sora said, his heart pounding a bit. "You guys." Ash said smiling. "For the first time ever, things has turned out all right." But then a bunch of hands came from out of nowhere and grabbed the four boys, pulling them up. They find themselves being taken captive by Bowser and his men. "Hey, what are you guys doing?" demanded Danny but a Koopa Troopa puts a gag around his mouth as did the other guards did to Ash, Sora, and Jake. "Pikachu, guys!" muffled Ash calling for his friends. But to his dismay, the 'legendary Pokemon' are bunch hanged in a tree in a bunch of nets. "Hold him!" ordered Bowser. The boys suddenly find themselves being shackled and chained as such ended up on their hands and feet. Bloo and Eduardo charged to helped their friends but the Sledge Brothers jumped on them, trapping them. The boys hear a chuckle and looked up to see Pete approaching with an amused look on his face. "Sorry, Prince Pal-head and company. You have outlived your welcome, see?" The boys realized that Pete was behind this and yelled, but they are still muffled. As Pete turns to leave, he gives out a command. "Make sure they are never found!" Suddenly the Hammer Brothers. hits Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake on the heads knocking them unconscious. Bowser laughs evilly as he and his men threw the tied up four over a cliff into the raging ocean below. When the four hits the water, they woke up and tried to moved. Unfortunately, Bowser has made sure that their feet are tied to big rocks that landed on the ocean's floor. Ash's hat floats up. The Pokemon trainer looks and sees that the black box is still there. He and the boys floats over. When they got close, Ash tries to rub the black box. But then the boys went unconsciousness again and fell to the floor. Of course, the black box was unsettled by the movement and it came out of the hat into Ash's hands, which managed to rub it. The black box shined again and out popped Mario with a bath brush, rubber duckie, and a night cap. He was about to step into the shower when this happens. "Mama mia! It never fails! Try to step into the shower and someone rubs the black box!" Mario complains as he rubs his black box. "Hey Ash?" Mario looks around and gasps upon seeing Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake unconscious. "Guys!" yelled Mario as he swims over. "Ash, wake up! You can't cheat me this time! The only way I can save you if you could make a wish! It's a simple. Just say, 'Mario, I wish for you to save me'. Got that?" When Ash didn't respind, Mario yells trembling, "Come on Ash!" The plumber shakes Ash like mad. Ash's head nods up and down. "I'd take that as a yes." said Mario with a shrug. Then the plumber transforms into a submarine and makes the usual noises. "Mama mia! Up scope!" As Mario speaks like a German, he grabs the four boys and goes fast towards the surface. Mario the submarine pops out of the ocean very fast and landed back on the cliff Bowser and his men, who has since left, threw the boys from. As Mario puts the boys down, they wake up and spits out a bunch of water out of their lungs. "Yo, what's down, dogs?" groaned Jake. "Ash, don't ever do that to me again!" said Mario concerned. Ash looked up and is surprised as he sees his plumber friend. "Mario? Uh, well.." Of course, Ash couldn't think of a way to say thank you so he, along with Sora, Danny, and Jake, hugs Mario who hugs back. "Thank you." Sora said with a smile. "Awww, I am starting to like you guys." Mario said with as mile as he picks the boys up. As he begins to fly them back to the palace, he remarked. "Not that I am picking out curtains or anything." Back at palace, unaware of what happened to the boys she and the other girls have grown to love, Ami is brushing her air humming to the song she and Ash sang on their date. The girls looked on, thinking dreamily of the other boys. Then a knock came at the door. "Come in." said Ami dreamily. "Ami." The girls sees Mickey coming in, in some sort of trance. "Oh Mickey." said Ami happily as she stoods up and twirls around. "June, Ariel, Betty, and I have a great time tonight!" "We are so happy." Ariel said dreamily. "I'm glad you four are. I have good news, Ami. I have picked a suitor for you." Mickey responded. "What?" said Ami surprised. "You will marry...Pete." Suddenly the other door to the room opens and there stood Pete with the cats on his shoulder smirking evilly at them. The girls gasped as the captain of the guards speaks. "Speechless, girls? I thought so. That is what I want in a wife. Shame it is only Ami though." Pete said with a smile. "Ami will never marr y you! You can't make her!" yelled June angrily. "Yeah, Mickey. Ami wants to marry Prince Ashi. She chose him." Betty insisted. Pete laughed as he said, "Sorry to burst all your bubbles, see, but the boy and his friends has left." "Better take another look at your crystal ball, Pete!" Everyone in the room turned and to the girls' happiness and Pete and the cats' shock, Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake are standing bytthe doorway to the balcony looking very crossed. It was Ash who spoke. "Prince Ashi!" Ami said happily. "How in the blazes...." Mr. Blik begin to say but Gordon hits him forcing him to say, "I mean, meow?" "Well, this is a surprise!" said Pete both shock and surprise. "I didn't expect you four to come back!" "Drop the act, Pete!" snapped Danny as he, Sora, Ash, and Jake comes over to him. "Tell Mickey the truth, fatso!" snapped Ash. "You try to have me and my friends killed!" "What? That's ridiculous!" insisted Pete as he stood next to Mickey, using his scepter on him again. "The boy is speaking nonsense! He is obviously lying!" "Obviously lying." said Mickey in a trance. What Pete didn't know is that Sora noticed the scepter and sees what it is doing to Mickey. "Mickey, what's gotten in you?" asked Ami confused. "I know what's wrong!" yelled Sora as he grabs the scepter from Pete. Before the villain could do anything, Sora smashes the scepter onto the ground, destroying it. Mickey blinks his eyes and is now out of Pete's control at last "Gosh! What's going on?" asked Mickey confused. "King Mickey, Pete has been controlling your actions with this." said Sora sternly as he hold the destroyed scepter up to Mickey's eyes. "Yeah! He probably did the same thing to Bowser and his men to get them to try to killed us!" Jake said in realization. "What? Pete?" gasped Mickey in shock. Then looking angrily at Pete, he yelled, "You...you traitor!" "Now, now, Mickey! This is very hard to explained!" chuckled Pete nervously as the group advanced on him very angrily. "It is easy to explained! You were controlling Mickey so you could make him marry Ami so you could seize the throne!" said Waffles stupidly. "Waffles!" yelled Gordon shocked. "Guards, guards!" yelled Mickey. With a groan, Mr. Blik speaks normally, "Well, we're dead. Forget about it. Get us all a grave, Pete. We're dead." Just when Pete looks like he's given up, he notices something in the hat Ash's holding, a very familiar black box, the one he thought he lost. Pete's eyes widen. He now realized who the boy and his friends really are. Pete tries to make a move but Bowser's men has arrived and seized him and the cats. "Arrest Pete at once!" Mickey said ordering Bowser's men. Pete quickly takes a vial out and yelled out, "This isn't over yet, see?" Suddenly Pete throws the vial to the floor, making a red cloud covering him. When it dissolved, Pete, Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles has made their escape. "Find them! Search everywhere!" yelled Mickey as Bowser's men runs out in search of Pete. "Ami? Are you and the other girls alright?" asked Ash holding Ami in concern. The other boys held June, Ariel, and Betty to make sure that they're okay too. "Yes." said Ami smiling. As the boys and girls looked at each other, they lean forward to kiss, but Mickey got in between Ash and Ami, all upset. "I can't believe it! Pete, my most trusted captain of the guards, plotting against me all this time! This is terrible! How can I ever..." Mickey stops talking and then sees Ash and Ami. He noticed the look the two gave each other. "Gosh! Can this be true? Ami Onuki has finally found a suitor?" Ami looked at King Mickey and nodded happily. Mickey makes his trademark laugh. "Ha ha! Praise Disney! Ashi, you brilliant boy, I could kiss you! No, I will let your future wife do that!" "And in case you wanted to do know, Ariel, Betty, and I have chosen our boyfriends and hopefully future husbands." said June as she smiles at Danny. "I choose Dexter." "Roxas." Ariel said smiling at Sora. "JL: AD." Betty giggled as Jake held her. "Well, this is a great day, isn't it?" Mickey said laughing once more. "Well then, Ashi and Ami will be married at once! Yes, they will both be happy and prosperous. And Ashi will be the new king of Toon Town!" "King?" asked Ash alarmed all of the sudden. The boys noticed a concerned look on his face. "Yes, a fine upstanding youth like yourself, a person of your unimpeachable moral character is exactly what this kingdom needs!" Mickey explained. Ash however is very concerned. What will happened when everyone finds out the truth about him, Sora, Jake, and Danny? And Ami? What would happened when she and the other girls find out? Pete and the cats has managed to escaped Bowser's men and got away to their secret chambers. "Lads, we gotta get outta here! Time for us to pack, lads!" yelped Gordon as he, Waffles, and Mr. Blik goes to get pack. Unknown to the cats, Pete is still at the door with an evil grin on his face. "We'd travel light! We'd bring the weapons, toys, everything!" As Waffles packed, he stopped to looked at a picture of himself, Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Pete and looks puzzled. "Can we bring this picture? I think I made a weird face in it." "You always do!" Mr. Blik pointed out. Suddenly the cats hear laughter. They turned and sees Pete is laughing wildly. Mr. Blik groans as he said, "Oh great! He finally lost it!" The cats goes over to Pete and slaps him hard. "Hey, Pete! Get a grip!" yelled Gordon trying to knock some sense into the former captain of the guards' head. But Pete grabs the cats by the throat. Gordon gasped, "Good grip!" "You idiotic cats! That Prince Ashi is no celebrity, see? He is nothing more than that Pokemon kid Ash Ketchum!" snapped Pete. "And those friends he's with are his friends who went with him in the Thousand Year Door!" "Wow! I thought they were dead!" cheered Waffles stupidly. "And here's more: the Pokemon kid has the black box!" "Why that miserable..." Mr. Blik begins to yelled. "And you three are going to fetch it for me!" "Us?" yelled Gordon in shock. Author's note Ash is now engaged to Ami and his friends Danny, Sora, and Jake are now boyfriends and future husbands to Ami's friends June, Ariel, and Betty. But what would happened if the girls and everyone else were to find out the truth? And now that Pete knows what's going on, he will do all he can to get his hands on the black box no matter what! Read and review! |
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| kimicoolgirl | Oct 10 2006, 06:12 AM Post #13 |
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Oh, please do continue!
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| JusSonic | Oct 10 2006, 03:50 PM Post #14 |
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Chapter 12: Promise Broken The next day when Mickey is going to announce the engagement, Ash stood in front of the guest house he and his friends are staying at the palace while looking out into the garden. Ash is very concerned although his friends weren't at first. "Oh man, they want me to be king?" asked Ash with a groan. "What's wrong with that? You get to be with Ami?" Danny pointed out. "Well, yeah, but what if they find out that I am not really a celebrity? And what about Ami?" "But I am sure Ami would understand..." Sora begins to say. "And what about June, Ariel, and Betty? What would they say when they find out that you aren't really what you claim to be?" Ash added. "Oh, I guess you got something, dog." said Jake feeling down as is the other boys. The boys heads back into their room concern. Suddenly Mario appeared happily. "Hail the conquering hero!" Mario said beginning to sing, not noticing the boys' down looks. The plumber became a one-man band and begins to perform. But then he stops when he sees the boys walking off sadly. Mario changed back and looks confused as he scratches his head. With a smirk, he goes up to the boys and holds his hands out like he is some sort of news reporter. "Ash Ketchum you have won the heart of the fair Ami Onuki! What are you going to do next?" asked Mario. But Ash and his friends just sighs and goes over to the bed. They lay down on it sadly. Still confused, Mario goes up to Ash with a script and begins to whispered, "Your line here is 'I am going to free Mario'." Mario pauses to wait. "Any time." "Mario, I can't." said Ash sadly. "Yes you can! It's simple! All you got to say is," Mario moves Ash's head like a puppet saying, "'Mario, I wish you free'." "Mario, he's serious!" snapped Danny knocking the plumber away from Ash. "I'm sorry, Mario, I really am. But they want to make me king. No, they want to make Prince Ashi king!" Sora sighs as he said, "Without you, he is just his 'Rattata' self." "But he won!" Mario said surprise. "All because of you!" Ash yelled at Mario. "The only reason people think I am somebody is because of you! What if they find out that I am not really a celebrity!" Mario looks shocked as the boy turns around and whispers to himself. "What about Ami? I'd lose her." "Not to mention we'd lose Betty, June, and Ariel if they find out, dogs." said Jake sadly. Ash turned back with a sigh. "Mario, I'm sorry. I can't do this without you. I...I can't set you free." Mario looks stunned and heartbroken. He nods in understanding as he frowns. "Okay, okay I understand. Mama mia, you lie to everybody else. Hey, I'm starting to feel left out." Mario said sarcastically. "Now if you excuse me, master!" Mario said the 'master' part in disgust then goes back into his black box. Pikachu, the dogs, Bloo, and Eduardo watch this from a nearby window sadly. "Poor Senor Mario." said Eduardo sadly. "I knew it. Another jerk who just make 3 wishes and not bothering freeing our pal, even by promise. What is this world coming to?" asked Bloo in disgust. Ash sighs sadly as he picks up the black box while saying, "Mario, I'm really sorry." But the plumber of the black box raspberries him from the black box making the Pokemon trainer angry. "Okay! If you want to be that way, fine!" Ash angrily puts a pillow on the black box, covering it. "Just stay in there!" Ash's friends looked at this stunned. Ash sees Pikachu, the dogs, Bloo, and Eduardo and snapped, "What are you guys looking at?" "Oh, well excuse us! We were just leaving!" snapped Bloo back as he left. Eduardo, Pikachu, and the dogs looked sadly then left as well. "Guys, wait! Pikachu, I'm sorry!" Ash protested but he groaned as they left. "Oh man, what am I going to do?" "Well, what you should in the first place." Sora explained, pointing out that he, Danny, and Jake are still around. "Sora's right. You know what to do." Danny said nodding. "You're right. Heck, Marios's right. I got to tell Ami the truth." Ash said nodding. "And we will tell the other girls the truth about us as well, dog." Jake said nodding as well. "It will mean the girls will be furious at us again. And they won't be the only ones." "It doesn't matter. True love will find a way. It always does." Sora said. Ash knew that it's true. He and his friends can't lie forever. Before he could say something, a familiar voice was heard. "Ashi! Oh Ashi! Can I see you?" asked a familiar thought. "Ami." said Ash as he puts his hat on. "Let's go guys." The other boys followed Ash out of the guest house and into the garden, Ash called out, "Ami, where are you?" "Out in the mengerie, hurry. June, Ariel, and Betty are with me too!" Ami's voice said. "Coming!" The boys walked past a pond next to the guest house where four flamingos are at. Unknown to them, three of the flamingos' beaks are fake and are standing on stilts. "Heh, heh, heh, heh, heh." Mr. Blik said chuckling in his flamingo disguise, impressed that his ability to impersonate people's voices has work. The cats hear another chuckle and turns to see the real flamingo looking at them, love stricken, obviously mistaking them for female flamingos, as he duhs a well. "Sorry, but we're not interested!" snapped Gordon as he trips the flamingo knocking it into the pond. "Have a swim!" said Waffles stupidly. The cats ditches their disguieses and goes into the boys' room. "Now it got to be here somewhere." said Mr. Blik looking around. "How about in the black box that is not fully covering by that pillow?" asked Waffls pointing to the same pillow Ash hid the black box under. The cats goes to look and sure enough, Waffles was right. "Aye, good eye, Waffles." said Gordon impressed. "But? Who's talking?" asked Waffles looking around. Mr. Blik laughs evilly as he hold the black box. "Pete is going to be happy to see you!" Then he begins to impersonate Pete. "Good work, Mr. Blik. You are the best." Then Mr. Blik goes into his normal voice. "Aw, thanks for the kind words." Mr. Blik goes back to Pete's voice. "No, no, no! You really did! On the scale of 1 to 10, you are a 11!" Mr. Blik laughs in his normal voice as he, Gordon, and Waffles leaves with the black box in hand, "Aw, Pete. You are making me blush! I'm embarrassed." "Someone here needs to get a life." remarked Gordon. "Aye!" said Waffles stupidly. Then he realized. "Wait! I mean, spleen!" Author's note Oh crud! Now Pete's going to get his hands on the black box and when he does, all heck will break loose! What would happened? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Oct 11 2006, 07:05 PM Post #15 |
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Chapter 13: Pete's Evil Wishes The people of Toon Stood stood before the palace as Mickey makes the announcement on his platform overlooking the city. "People of Toon Town, I am happy to say that Ami Onuki has finally chosen a suitor!" exclaimed Mickey happily as the crowd cheered for this. Behind the platform's curtains, the girls takes a look at the crowd. "I wonder where Ashi is?" asked Ami puzzled. "Ami!" The girls turned to see the boys running up the stairs. "Prince Ashi! There you are! The girls and I were looking everywhere for you!" exclaimed Ami. "'Looking all over for us'?" asked Sora surprised. "I thought..." "Ami, we got something to tell you, June, Ariel, and Betty." Ash begins to speak up. "Come on! You're about to go on!" said Ami as she shoved Ash towards the curtain. "But Ami, please listen..." Ami kissed Ash interrupting him and said, "Good luck!" Before Ash could say anything esle, Ami pushed him right onto the platformw ith Mickey. The boy gulped as he sees the crowd. "Prince Ashi Pallet!" said Mickey introducing Ami's new sutior. "Oh boy." groaned Ash. In Pete's chamber, the villains looked at this whole thing in amusement and annoyance. "Look at that miserable fake getting all the glory!" snapped Mr. Blik angrily. "They wouldn't be cheering if they knew who he really was!" "Let them cheer." said Pete smirking evilly as he hold up the black box and begins to rub it. Soon Mario came out, back to the four, still upset. The plumber did not know what happened as he yelled out, "Look, Ash, I am getting sick and tired of..." Mario then turned and startled as he sees that it isn't Ash he was speaking to. "Mama mia. You aren't him." Puzzled, the plumber took out the script while at Pete's eye level. "Mama mia, the role of Ash and his friends are now played by a big ugly cat looking guy and his felines who looks like rats." "Hey, that hurts!" yelled Gordon annoyed. "Silence, slave!" snapped Pete as he throws Mario to the ground and step on his face. "I am your new master, see?" "An evil guy for a master. I was afraid of this." groaned Mario. "Plumber boy, for my first wish, I wish to rule up high, as the king of Toon Town!" Outside, the celebration was cut short when black appears from out of nowhere over the palace. As the ground shakes, the crowd runs off in fear. The roof came off forcing Ash and the king to duck. "What on earth?" yelled Ash alarmed. "Gosh, what's going on?" asked Mickey. Suddenly his hat of royalty begins to lift off. Mickey tried to grab for it but his whole body is lifted up by some sort of magic force. Soon all his clothes but his undies were removed. Suddenly, from out of nowhere, Pete came out wearing Mickey's clothes that are now suited just for him laughign evilly. "Well, if it isn't the former boat boy king." mocked Pete evilly. "Pete, you vile betrayer!" Mickey yelled angrily. "That's King vile betrayer to you!" mocked Mr. Blik as he, Gordon, and Waffles are wearing royal outfits. "Does this outfit makes me look fat?" asked Waffles concerned. "Not really, Waffles." Gordon said assuring his brother. "Oh yeah? Well, let's see if you are still king after this!" snapped Ash taking his hat off and reaches into it. But to his shock, the black box is not in there! "The black box!" In his hurry to meet up with Ami and the girls, he left it back in his room! Laughing evilly, Pete pointed remarking, "Sorry! Finder keepers, Prince Pal-head!" Ash, the other boys, Mickey, Ami, and the girls looked up and gasped. There stood Mario, giant-size, picking up the palace and lifting it up high. "Bloo! Eduardo!" yelled Ash. The imaginary friends flies over in the Gummi Ship and Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake got in. They fly up to Mario's head. "Mario! Stop!" protested Danny. "Don't do this, dog!" yelled Jake. "I'm sorry, guys." Mario said sadly. "I got a new master now." Mario then puts the palace onto a nearby mountain. "Oh man!" groaned Ash. In his anger, he realized, he has let Pete get his hands on the black box. Unfortunately, Mickey and the girls don't know about that. "Pete, you stop this right now!" yelled Mickey. "You forget who is in charge now, see? The order is my new order now and my first order is for you and the girls to bowed down before me!" laughed Pete sinisterly. "We will never bowed down to you!" June yelled angrily. "Why am I not surprised?" Mr. Blik asked sarcastically. "Because you've..." "Don't say it, Waffles!" Mr. Blik said interrupting Waffles. "Well, then, if you can't bowed before me as the king, then you will all cowered before an all powerful Emperor!" Pete yelled. Then he turned to a sad-looking plumber. "Mario! For my second wish, I wish to be an all powerful Emperor!" "Mario! No!" yelled Ash as he and the other boys tried to stop him. But it was too late as Mario zaps Pete with the Keyblade. Pete laughed evilly as his appearance has transformed. His head has a yellow horned helmet with a white ponytail sticking out of it and his outfit now changes into a green suit with silver like buttons with a P on the front, spiky armor, white gloves, and black shoes. Pete has transformed into Emperor Pete, completed with a new scepter. "Ladies and gentlemen, please give a Toon Town welcome to Emperor Pete!" said Waffles happily as Mickey and the girls watched on in horror. "Ah, much better! Now where were we? Oh yes! Abject humiliation!" Emperor Pete zaps a spell at Mickey and the girls from his scepter forcing them all to bow. He hears some growls and sees Pluto and Butch charging at him. Pete raises his scepter however and laughed, "Down, doggies!" Emperor Pete zaps the dogs, turning them both into puppies, both landing on the ground with a small woof. Emperor Pete smirked and looked at Ami. "Oh, Ami," said Emperor Pete as he lifts her chin with his scepter. "I got someone I'm dying to introduce you and your friends to!" "Pete! Stay away from her!" yelled Ash as he, the other boys, Bloo, and Eduardo flies towards Emperor Pete and the girls as the villain sings his own version of 'Prince Ashi's' song. Emperor Pete: Prince Ashi Yes, it is he, But not as you know him. Emperor Pete zaps Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake with his scepter, knocking the Gummi Ship away. He then bring the boys closer to the ground. Read my lips and come to grips With reality Emperor Pete brings the boys and girls closer to each. Yes, meet a blast from your past Whose lies were too good to last Say hello to your precious Prince Ashi! Emperor Pete then zaps Ash, Sora, Jake, and Danny and soon the boys are changed back to their real selves. The girls looked shocked as Mr. Blik laughed at this. "Or should we say, 'Ash Ketchum'?" laughed Mr. Blik sinisterly. "And his friends Sora, Jake Long, and Danny Fenton!" Gordon added. Although he didn't want to, he doesn't want to messed with Emperor Pete, especially with his new powers. (Author's note: Pete and the cats heard the other boys' names on their way to the Thousand Year Door BTW) "Prince Ashi!" said Ami in shock. "Ami," said Ash with a sad sigh as he and the other boys come overs to Ami and the other girls. "We try to tell you. We're..." But Emperor Pete interrupts Ash and pushed him, Danny, Sora, and Jake down as he continues to sing. So Ashi turns out to be merely Ash Ketchum Pikachu and the dogs tried to attack Emperor Pete but the villains zaps them changing them back into their real selves. Just a con, need I go on? Take it from me Emperor Pete then begins to float the boys, Pikachu, and the dogs up smirking evilly at them. His personality flaws Give me adequate cause To send him packing on a one-way trip With a wave of his scepter, Ash, Sora, Danny, Jake, Pikachu, and the dogs are swept right into an abandoned pillar. So his prospects take a terminal dip His assets frozen, the venue chosen Quickly, Bloo and Eduardo flew the Gummi Ship right into the pillar as the villain continues. Is the ends of the earth, whoopee! Emperor Pete pretends to be a golfer swinging like a pro with his scepter. As Emperor Pete swings wildly, the pillar Ash and his friends are in begins to launch off like a rocket. Mario watches sadly as the pillar disappears from sight. So long, "Bye! See ya!" Waffles said waving goodbye stupidly. Ex-Prince Ashi! As the song ends, Emperor Pete laughs evilly like a psycho. His shadow covers Mickey, Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty who looks at the villain cowardly. Author's note Oh no! Emperor Pete has taken control! It's up to Ash and his friends now to set things right! But can they beat a villain with a whole bunch of new powers? Read and review as the final battle is coming soon! |
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