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| JusSonic | Oct 12 2006, 06:05 PM Post #16 |
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Chapter 14: Ash vs. Pete At the ends of the earth, which is a snowy wastleland, the pillar Ash and his friends are in crashed land, rolling down a bit before it stops. Ash came out, shivering, not because of the cold. "Pikachu? Guys?" Ash yelled out looking around. "We're right here, Ash!" Ash sees his friends buried in a bunch of snow nearby and goes to get them out. "Guys, are you all right?" "Yeah, we're fine." Dodger said shivering. "Pikachu." Pikachu said shivering as Ash held him. "Oh man. This is all my fault, guys. I should have freed Mario when I have the chance. Finally he got everyone out of the snow as he sighs, "I really messed things up now." "Don't give in to that, Ash. You still got a chance to put things right." Sora said. "You're right." Ash said in determination. "I must return and fix everything." "How? We're trapped at the ends of the earth and it's a thousdand miles walk back to Toon Town!" Danny pointed out. Ash groans but tries to walk through the snow. Suddenly he sees something frozen like an ice cube nearby. "Bloo! Eduardo!" yelled Ash as he runs over to them. He sees that the two imaginary friends and their Gummi Ship are pinned by the pillar and begins digging. "Start digging, guys!" The others did so. But as they are almost there, they hear a noise. They looked up and saw that their digging has cause the pillar to come loose and is rolling toward sthem. "Run!" yelped Tito as Ash's group maeks a run for it. But then they were stopped by a cliff. "What now?" Francis yelled. "Hold on! Going ghost!" Danny yelled. As the others watched, Danny transforms into a boy with a black and white costume with a DP on the front of it. He has glowing green eyes and white hair. He is now Danny Phantom. "Grab on!" The others grabbed him just as the pillar is getting closer. Danny and the others went invisible, which resulted in the pillar going through them and rolling off the cliff. "All right!" cheered Tito as they went visible. "Great job, ghost boy." Sora said with a smile. "We still have another problem, everyone." Rita said as she points out that Bloo and Eduardo are still frozen solid. "No problem, dog! Dragon up!" yelled Jake. Soon he transforms into a red dragon with green hair. He is now the American Dragon. He spits out flames onto the frozen imaginary cubes and quickly they thawed out. "Huh? What? Where?" yelled Bloo alarmed. Eduardo sees Ash and the others and exclaimed happily, "Senior Ash! Senior Danny! Friends!" He runs over to hugged them like mad. "Oh! I am so happy that you weren't hurt!" "Eduardo, not now!" yelled Ash as he and the others got free from Eduardo and jump back into the Gummi Ship. "To Toon Town, at once!' Eduardo got in just as Bloo started the ship off. The Gummi Ship blasted off very fast back to Toon Town. Toon Town itself now looks like an evil city covered by evil red clouds. And the palace isn't a great sight as it used to either. Inside, Emperor Pete is sitting in a throne made in his image, watching Mr. Blik stuffing Mickey, dressed like a puppet on strings, with a bunch of cats treats. Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty, wearing slave clothes Emperor Pete forced them to wear, watching this in horror. Ami is the only one being chained to the emperor's throne. "Does Mickey want a cat treat? Does Mickey wants a molting bad cat treat?" laughed Mr. Blik evilly as he stuff the cat treats down Mickey's throat without any regrets. "And here's some more!" "Save some for me!" said Waffles happily. Gordon groaned, expecting this. "Pete! Make him stop!" cried Ami as she is forced by Pete, who pulls on her chain, to walked up to him holding an apple. Emperor Pete smirks and gives the signal for Pete to cease. Mr. Blik paused then stuff another cat treat down Mickey's throat before he back off. The evil villain laughed then looks at Ami, "You know, my dear, I hate for you to be miserable and reduced to this." Emperor Pete takes a bite out of the apple, then continues spitting out since his mouth's fill, "Someone beautiful like you should be with someone greater." "Oh, we're not beautiful?" mumbled June a bit jealous. "Like the most powerful emperor on Earth?" As he said this, Emperor Pete made a crown appear and presents it to Ami. "So how about you accepted my kind offer and you and I can ruled Toon Town, king and queen." "Never!" yelled Ami as she grabs a cup of wine and throws the whole thing at Emperor Pete's face. Angrily, the villain pushed Ami to the ground. "I'd teach you some respect!" yelled Emperor Pete as he raised his hand as if he's about to slap her. Ami gets ready for the impact but a thought came to Emperor Pete's head, making him smirk. He turns to Mario, sitting nearby, looking sadly. "Say plumber boy. I decided on my last wish. I wish for Ami Onuki to fall madly in love with me." Ami gasped in horror, as did the other girls. The boys, Bloo, and Eduardo has arrived back in Toon Town and make their way back to the palace on top of the mountain. Back there, Mario describes a problem to Pete. "Uh, master, there are a few addendas, some quid pro quo-" "Quid pro quo?" Waffles asked confused. "Is that Pig Latin?" "If it is, Pete is the perfect defintion." remarked Gordon. "Dont't alk back to me!" snapped Emperor angrily. "Do as I say, slave!" Ami and the girls looked hopefully thinking that it is all over. But then they looked up and gasped as they sees Ash, Sora, June, and Betty in the window, making a signal. "They're alive." Ariel whispers in joy. "What are they doing?" June asked in a whisper puzzled. "I think they want Ami to distracted Pete." Betty whispered, puzzled herself. "I think I know what to do. Just don't be surprised when I do it." Ami whispered. Then having taking a deep breath, she then speaks to Pete in pretend seduction, "Oh Emperor Pete." Emperor Pete and Mario stop arguing as they looked at her. Ami gave Pete a pretend flirting smile as she puts the crown. I"ve never realized how handsome you are." Mario's jaw dropped in surprise. The girls were surprised too but they figured that Ami is only pretending to love Emperor Pete. The villain puts Mario's back jaw up as he smirked, "Well, that's more liked it." The emperor walked forward as he said, "Tell me more about your beloved emperor." Although disgusted, Ami hide it as she walks over saying, "You're tall, well-dressed..." "Mama mia. What's going on?" asked Mario confused. He didn't grant the wish for Ami to fall in love and he isn't allowed to anyway. "Mario, look over there." Betty said pointing nearby. Mario turned and to his happiness for the first time since Ash has broken his promise, he sees Ash and his friends jumping to the floor. "Ash! Buddy!" Mario said a bit too loud. Ash, his friends, and the girls hushed Mario. Nodding quickly, he and the girls run over to the boys. June, Ariel, and Betty quickly hugged Danny, Sora, and Jake very happily and longingly. "Oh Sora. I thought I've never see you again." said Ariel happily. "Same here, Ariel. Same here." said Sora with a smile. "Listen, Betty. We're sorry we lied to you, dog. We feared you won't like us the way we were." Jake told Betty sadly. "Sssh." Betty said smiling. "To tell you the truth, Ami, Ariel, June, and I already liked you boys." "You do?" Danny asked surprised. "Sure! You may be commoners and all but you are nice and welll...aw, heck with it. We've loved you anyway." June said smiling. "Great. But right now, we need to save the love fest and focus on stopping Pete." Ash said interrupting the moment. "I'd loved to help but I can't!" said Mario groaning. "I'm working for Emperor Psychopath now." He changed his head into Emperor Pete's to prove his point then back. "Hey relax. I am a Rattata, remember? I will improvise." Ash said with a chuckle. "Need some help?" June asked with a smirk. "Sure. We'd need all the help we can get." Sora said with a smile. The boys and the girls begint o sneak around and hide behind Emperor Pete and Ami, the villain's back to them. Ash looked and sees that Emperor Pete has left the black box on his throne. Emperor Pete didn't noticed as he anxiously asked Ami, "What else?" "Your hair is so...twisted." said Ami as she puts her arms around Emperor Pete and twists his hair. Unknown to the villain, Ami is actually signaling Ash to move. Ash smirks as he begins to make a move. His movement didn't go unnoticed by someone else other than his friends though. Mr. Blik, Gordon, and Waffles spots Ash. Mr. Blik begins to shouted out, "Hey Pete! The..." But Mr. Blik was interrupted as Pikachu and the dogs tackled him and covering his mouth. Rita noticed Gordon and Waffles not doing anything and asked, "Aren't you two going to warned Pete?" "Nah. He's a jerk. Let him get his butt kicked." remarked Gordon with a shrug. "Except where is his butt?" asked Waffles confused. "Yeah." agreed Einstein, confused himself. "I don't think you two need to know." said Francis with a sigh. Unaware of what's happening, Emperor Pete asked Ami, "And the Rattata?" "What Rattata?" asked Ami pretending not to know Ash. Meanwhile Mr. Blik continues to struggle with Pikachu and the dogs. The struggle causes a bowl to fall onto the ground. Emperor Pete turns to look, but Ami turns his head back and did something she regret doing to him: kissing him full on the lips. Ash was almost onto the black box when he sees Ami kissing Emperor. He looks shocked and a bit disgusted. Even the others find this disgusting. "Yuck!" said Tito in disgust. "Aye! And not appropriable." agreed Gordon. Emperor Pete's lips departed Ami's, the lattered secretly disgusted. The villain smirks as he said, "That was..." Suddenly Emperor Pete sees someone's reflection in Ami's crown. He is shocked to see it is of Ash. He turned around just in time to see Ash making his move for the black box. He yelled out, "YOU!" Emperor Pete zaps Ash away with a bolt from his scepter before he could get to the black box. "How many times must I killed you, Pokemon boy?" yelled Emperor Pete angrily. Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty quickly jumped the villain but he managed to knock them all down. Ash, Danny, Jake, and Sora grabbed Emperor Pete, holding him. "Get the black box!" yelled Jake. The girls quickly makes the run for the black box. But Emperor Pete has escaped from the boys' hold and zaps Ami, Ariel, June, and Betty with his scepter, putting them all in a hourglass. "Your time is up, girls." mocked Emperor Pete evilly. The sand in the top part of the hourglass begins to fall onto Ami and her friends. The emperor is planning to drown them in sand!" "Ami!" yelled Ash. "June!" yelled Danny. "Ariel!" yelled Sora. "Betty!" yelled Jake. "Good going, Pete!" cheered Mr. Blik. But then Gordon grabs a cup nearby and hits him over the head with it, knocking him out. "That's it! I'm tired of being the bad guy! Get the black box!" yelled Gordon. "Pika!" Pikachu yelled in agreement as he, the dogs, Gordon, and Waffles make a run for the black box. "Don't toy with me!" snapped Emperor Pete as he zaps the animals with his scepter turning them all into stuffed animals! "Oh man! He got Pikachu, the dogs, and those cats that used to be with Pete!" groaned Danny. "Eduardo, let's go!" yelled Bloo as he and Eduardo makes a charge for the black box, both of them holding their respectable weapons. "Face reality, you two!" mocked Emperor Pete as he zaps Bloo and Eduardo making them disappeared from sight. He laughs as he sees Ash, Sora, Danny, and Jake making a charge for the black box. "Get the point?" Suddenly a couple of weapons poke out of the ground blocking the black box. Emperor Pete grabs the black box and laughs. Ash removes a sword while Sora removes a Keyblade. They charged towards Pete with their weapons, while Danny's hand glows with energy and Jake flies at the villain. "Things are heating up!" boomed Emperor Pete as he spits out fire, surround ing the boys with it. "Are you too scared to fight me, you cowardly lion?" demanded Ash holding his sword up. "'Lion,' am I? Well, lee's see how lion-like I can be!" Emperor Pete laughs as he begins to transform. The fire disappeared as Emperor Pete turns into a vicious lion. With a roar, Pete charged at Ash and the boys who dodged his attacks two times. As he attacks the third times, Ash and Sora hits him with their weapons, Danny blast him with an attack, and Jake shoots out fire, making him scream. The Mario cheerleaders cheered nearby waving 'A' sweaters shotuing, "Rickem, rockem, rackem, ryan--stick that sword into that lion!" "You stay out of this!" snapped Pete the lion at Mario. Mario now holds up a small pennant with a 'P' on it saying boredly, "Pete, Pete, he's our man, if he can't do it, GREAT!" Mario yelled at the end. With Pete distracted, the boys runs for the hourglass as the girls are continuing to have sand poured on them. But before they could get too close, Pete jumps to blocked them and knocked them away, making Ash and Sora losing their weapons. "Ash!" cried Ami from the hourglass as the sand is halfway near her and the other girls' shoulders. Quickly, the boys jumped ons ome gems and slides across the floor, allowing Ash and Sora to get their weapons back as Pete pursues them. The boys turned a corner by jumping off the gem. The lion trips and crashed through a wall, the front half hanging from outside. Sora charges and stabs Pete in the back with his sword, making him scream. The boys, thinking they have won, runs back to the hourglass. "Hang on!" yelled Sora getting ready to strike with the Keyblade. Suddenly Pete came from out of nowhere and grabbed the boys. The girls, Mario, and Mickey watches in horror as Pete begins to squeeze the life out of the boys. "You pathetic fools! You think you could stop me, the most powerful emperor on Earth!" boomed Pete as he continues to squeeze. "Squeeze them, Pete." laughed Mr. Blik, the only minion on Pete's side now. "Squeeze them like a..." Mario was nearby and elbows the black cat out of the way. "Withour your plumber friend, you have no hope whatsoever!" boomed Pete some more. Ash then got a thought as he looks at Mario. He smirked. "Mario? Mario!" said Ash with a smirk. He then yelled out at Pete, "Mario has more power than you ever have!" What?" demands Pete the lion angrily. Danny, Sora, and Jake got the idea as Danny continued, "He's the one who gave you your powers. He can always take it away." "Uh guys? What are you doiung? Why are you bringing me into this?" asked Mario nervously. "Let's face it, Pete. Without him, you're second best." said Sora with a smirk. "Yeah!" agreed Jake. Pete paused to think. He soon realized that they're right. If Mario could give him his powers, someone could always have them removed. Finally he said, "You boys are right. The plumber's powers exceeed my own." Then he smirks as he eyes Mario. "But not for long. Mario looks nervous as Pete advances on him. Mario quickly said, "Come on. The boys are talking nonsense. Just too many hits in the head by the lion." Mario has his hand turned into a lion's head and hits his own head with it. Ignoring Mario, Pete yelled out, "Plumber! For my final wish, I wish to be an all powerful being like you are!" Soon the girls' hands are the only ones seen as the sand is about to covered all of them. Mario sighs sadly as he said, "Oh all right. Your wish is my command." Then he said to the boys sarcastically, "Way to go, guys." Mario zaps Pete with the Keyblade. The villain soon transforms from his lion into a huge like demon. He laughs madly as he said, "Yes! Now I have the power!" Pete releases the boys. They got back up and runs over to the hourglass. Sora smashed it, freeing the sand and the girls. "Absolute power!" exclaimed Pete as he crashed through the roof. Chaos begin to spread as the boys and the girls lay down to avoid being blown away. "What have you guys done?" asked Betty in shock. "Trust us." said Ash with a smirk. As everything happened, unknown to Pete, a black and gray box appeared on the ground. But the villain is too busy conjuring to see this. "The universe is mine to command!" laughed Pete madly. "Hey Pete, did you forget something?" Pete looked down and to his surprise, he sees another box being picked up by Ash. The Pokemon trainer smirked as he said, "You wanted to be a powerful being like Mario? You got it!" "What?" yelled Pete in horror as yellow bands appeared on his hands. "And everything that goes with it, dog!" shouted Jake with a smirk. "Now, get in your box, Pete!" ordered Ash holding the box. "No! No!" yelled Pete as he begins to get suck right into the black and gray box, fighting a useless battle. Sensing trouble, Mr. Blik begins to make a run for it yelling, "I'm outta here!" But Pete grabs him and begins to pull him in with him. "Hey let go! You're the powerful guy! I don't want to be struck in there!" "Phenomenal cosmic powers!" Ash said. Soon the villains are sucked right into the box. It closes. Ash smirked as he finished, "Itty bitty living space." "Ash! You genius!" laughed Mario as he slaps his friend on the shoulder. With Pete now defeated, things are turning back to normal. Pikachu, the dogs, Gordon and Waffles changed back to their old selves. "Wheee! That was fun! Let's do it again! Spleen!" said Waffles happily. "What is with him?" asked Francis puzzled. "You don't want to know." sighed Gordon. Soon Bloo and Eduardo appeared, both confused. "Ay Caramba! What just happen?" asked Eduardo. "I don't know, but I felt like being suck out of existance." remarked Bloo with a groan. Pluto and Butch jumped into Mickey's arms as the girls walked over. Suddenly the group are transformed back to normal. Pete and Butch, both big again, knocked Mickey right onto the floor. Soon the whol epalace reappeared back in its rightful place in Toon Town. Ash smirked as he held the black and gray box, the newest residents are arguing in there. "Get your claws out of my face, Mr. Blik!" snapped Pete from inside the black and gray box. "Oh shut up, you moron!" snapped Mr. Blik angrily. "Don't tell me to shut up!" "I'd take it from here." said Mario with a smirk as he takes the black. Mario puts a baseball cap on and begins to wind up like a pitcher. "I think 10,000 years in the Thousand Year Door should chill them out!" Mario finally let go and throws the black and gray box out into the desert. "Bye, Mr. Blik!" Gordon said, waving goodbye. "We'd come to visit!" said Waffles waving happily. Soon the black and gray box disappeared from the sight and so did Pete and Mr. Blik. The boys smirked at this. Then they looked sadly as they see the girls looking at them. They walked over and held their hands each. "Ami, I'm sorry for lying to you about being a celebrity. And the other guys are sorry too." Ash said to Ami sadly. Ami nodded in understanding. "We know why you did. "I guess this is goodbye." With Ash's secret out, he and the other boys knew that they can't stay in the palace anymore, especially with the girls they loved. Mario looks on in shock. "Ooh! That stupid law!" groaned Ami turning her back for a sec. "It's not fair!" She turned back sadly. "I love you." "And Betty, Ariel, and I loved Jake, Sora, and Danny." agreed June sadly as each girls looked at their respectable lovers. "Uh, hey Ash. You know, since you still got your wish, you can wish yourself into a celebrity again." said Mario handing his black box over to Ash. "What?" Ash asked in shock. "What about your freedom?" asked Sora. "Yeah, you'd be struck making wishes forever, dog." agreed Jake. "Hey, what's a lifetime of service? This is true love here. You four can't find girls like them for a zillion years. I know, I did." Mario insisted with a sad smile. The other boys, Ami, and the girls looked at Ash as he thinks about this. He sighs sadly as he said to Ami, "Ami, I do love you, but I got to stop pretending to be someone I'm not." "Heck, so do we." agreed Danny sadly as he looked at June, Sora looked at Ariel, and Jake looked at Betty. "I understand." Ami said sadly nodding along with the other girls. The boys and girls looked at each other as if for the last time. Ash turned back to Mario saying, "Mario, I wish for your freedom." "One prince wish coming up, and..." Mario stopped as he realized what Ash really said. "What?" Ash smiled sadly as he held Mario's prison up. "Mario, you're free." Suddenly the black box lifted up to Mario like magic. Suddenly a flash appeared then the black box fell to the ground uselessly. Mario looked stunned as he picked his former prison up. "I'm free?" asked Mario in disbelief. Then he smiles as he said, "I'm free!" Excited, Mario hands the black box back to Ash saying, "Quick! Wish for somethign crazy! Ask for the Nile!" "Uh, I wish for the Nile." asked Ash dumbstruck. "No way!" laughed Mario crazily. He jumps all over the palace shotuing, "I'm free! Mama mia! I'm free!" "Wow! He looks happy!" Waffles said amazed. "After being trapped for so long, I don't blame the lad." agreed Gordon as he watched. Mario then begins to pack things into a suitcase. "Mama mia! I'm going to take a vacation! I'm going around the world!" Mario stops as hee sees the boys looking very sad. Mario, knowing what they're thinking, goes over to him. "Mario, I'm going to missed you." said Ash with a sigh. "Us too." agreed Sora with a sad smile. Mario smiles and hugged his former master and his friends. "Hey, no matter what people has said, you and your friends are still celebrities to me." Mickey paused to think about this, then stepped forward saying, "Gosh. He's right. you and your friends have definitely proven your worth as far as I'm concerned. There's that law though." "Mickey?" asked Ami. Mickey did his trademark laugh as he said, "Hey, am I king or am I king? Time for a new law. From this day forth, Ami and her friends are allowed to marry anyone whom they deemed worthy." Ami, June, Ariel, and Betty smiled happily then runs into their loves' arms. "HIM!" I choose..." Ami stopped as she and Ash smiled at each other. "I choose you, Ash Ketchum." Ash chuckled as he said, "Aww, call me Ash." "And I choose you Danny." June said to Danny with a smile. "Cool." said Danny with a big smile. "I choose you, Sora." said Ariel smiling at Sora. "Whoa." said Sora smiling back. "Take a guess, Jake." giggled Betty. "Word!" said Jake excited. The boys and girls were about to kissed when Mario, wearing a Hawaiian shirt with golf clubs and a Goofy hat, begins to hugged them. "Mama mia! This is a moment! Group hug everyone!" Mario grabs everyone including the dogs and hugged them tightly. "Mind if I kissed the Pikachu?" Mario kissed Pikachu and got shocked. "Mama mia! That is so much static!" "Too much hugging..." Waffles said, gasping for air. With a laugh, Mario lets everyone go and flies up into the air. "Well, I can't stay around this place any longer! I'm outta here! Bye, bye, you lovebirds, Hey Bloo, Eduardo, ciao! I'm history! No, I'm gameology! Mama mia! I don't care what I am! I'm free!" cheered Mario as he makes his leave. Everyone watched as Mario flies up into the sky and disappeared from sight. Later that night, as fireworks expoded over a nightscape, Ash, Ami, Danny, June, Sora, Ariel, Jake, and Betty, all couples together at last especially Ash andf Ami, are flying in the Gummi Ship with Bloo and Eduardo once more, singing the last song. Ash: A whole new world Ami: A whole new life Boys and girls (with offscreen chorus): For you and me! Chorus: A whole new world! The couples kissed once more as Bloo and Eduardo fly them off into the moonlight. Suddenly the moon turned and laughed madly. Just then, the film is 'grabbed off the projector' and mario appears, as if looking at the audience, with a big grin. "Made ya look." joked Mario. Mario drops the film back to normal with the normal moon. Weirdness out of the way, the story ends. The End Author's note Great story, especially with the couples I've grown to liked! This story is dedicated to Darth Ben Valor (who requested this), Neros, and more of my friends! Please read and review this! No flames! Thank you! |
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| kimicoolgirl | Oct 13 2006, 10:55 AM Post #17 |
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I'm kool! Mostly.
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Yay, it's over! Great work! :) |
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