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| Back to Tomorrow Part 3; The BtT series concluson! | |
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| JusSonic | Oct 31 2006, 06:21 PM Post #16 |
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The next day at Spooky's workshop, Doc's inventions were running while Tommy was asleep. Tommy woke up to the smell of breakfast made by the inventions. "Doc? Doc!" Tommy said calling for his friend. He got up and take a look around. When he sees that his friend is not around, he said to himself, "I hope you know what you're getting yourself into." He then sees the gun and belt Honest Bob gave him last night and pick it up. He paused and smirked. 'Why not? I always wanted to try this.' thought Tommy. Then he looks in a mirror and begins speaking like Robert De Niro, "Are you talking to me? Are you talking to me, Treene? Well, I'm the only one here." With a laugh he aims his gun at the mirror remarking like Clint Eastwood, "Go ahead, make my day!" He smirked. He enjoyed this. It's a pity he may not be able to do it in real life. Unless something goes wrong... Later that day, as Tommy walked around in his 1885 clothes, the town folk greet him in their usual way. "Good morning, Mr. Smith!" greeted a man. "Morning." greeted Tommy. "Here's a cigar. Anything I could do for you, Mr. Smith?" asked another man as he gave Tommy a cigar. "I'm fine, thanks." "Good luck, Mr. Smith! We'd pray for ya!" yelled out another man as he passes. Tommy continues walking when an undertaker stops him. "Good morning, Mr. Smith. Shall I interest you in a suit for tomorrow?" offered the undertaker showing a suit to Tommy. "Ah, not really." Tommy responded. Looking around, he finally spots his friend Spooky standing nearby. The boy looks amused as the scientist sniffs a flower on his jacket. Tommy can tell his friend had a good night last night. "Hey Doc. What's up?" said Tommy as he walks up to him. "Oh, uh nothing." Spooky said embarrassed. "I just came out to enjoyed the air, that's all. Lovely morning, isn't it?" "I know. Listen, we better get the DeLorean ready for loading and get outta here. We..." Tommy stops as he sees something. "Hey check this out." The reason for this is that he spots new tombstones laying out in front of a stop. After looking at them, Spooky noticed one of them is familiar. He finally figured out what. "Tommy, let me see that photo again!" Spooky quickly said. Tommy did so. Spooky checks the photograph and sees something different about the photo. "My name is erased!" Tommy smiles. "That's great! That means we're going back to the future tomorrow and you won't die!" "One problem: only my name is gone. The tombstone as well as the date are still there! We know that this photo represents what will happened if the events of tomorrow run their course." "And?" Suddenly the undertaker who offered Tommy a suit before returns and begins measuring Tommy while saying, "Hold still for a second, Mr. Smith. I need to take your measurement." "Hey, I didn't want a suit, remember?" Tommy said annoyed. The undertake made a dry chuckle as he said, "Actually, this is your coffin." "My coffin?" asked Tommy shocked. "The odds are two to one against you, may as well be prepared." As the undertaker left, Tommy is still shocked as Spooky said, "You see? That may not be my name on that tombstone tomorrow. It may be yours!" "Great Scott." groaned Tommy. "It is heavy, isn't it?" agreed the scientist. As the two walked off, Spooky sees Tommy is wearing the gun belt with the gun included. He looks worried. "Tommy, why are you wearing that gun? You aren't thinking of going against Treene, are you?" asked Spooky. "Tomorrow, I will go back with you. But I want to make sure to be prepared should Luthor comes looking for trouble. I mean, you remember what that son of a jerk called me last night." Tommy said angrily. "Tommy, you can't lose your judgment every time someone calls you a name! That's what's going to get you in that accident in the future!" Tommy stops upon hearing that and looks at Spooky, alarmed. "What? What about my future?" Oh dear. Spooky has hit forbidden territory now. You see, while he was in 2015, the scientist discovered Tommy has a sad life and it's all because of an accident that happened (or would happen if Tommy keeps this up) in 1985. Tommy was forced into a drag race after being called a baby. The boy didn't stopped in time and got in an accident with a Rolls Royce. Because of that, Tommy has broken his hand and forced him to give up his magic, the owner of the Rolls Royce pressed charges and Tommy has to sell most of his belongings including his trucks to pay for the damages. Afterwards, Tommy's life has became terrible from then on. And now, the scientist has accidentally blabbed it in front of the one who will get in that accident. "Well?" asked Tommy. Spooky sighs. "I can't say, Tommy. It will only make things worst." "Spooky, what is wrong with my future?" "Tommy, we all have to make decisions that affect the course of our lives. You've gotta do what you've gotta do. And I've gotta do what I've gotta do." After saying this, Spooky walks off sadly. Tommy wonders what his friend meant. He also wonders about the accident comment. Is his future destined to be a total disaster? |
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| JusSonic | Nov 2 2006, 05:17 PM Post #17 |
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Later that night as Tommy is making the last preparations for their trip home tomorrow, Spooky comes up to him and kneels down. He sighs. He did his thinking all day and has come to a conclusion. He knew his friend won't be happy about it though. "Tommy, I diid some thinking all day." Spooky said with a sigh. "And?" asked Tommy without looking up. "I decided not to come back to 1985 with you." Tommy stops and looked at Spooky surprised as the scientist continued. I'm staying here." Tommy paused to absorb what Spooky has said, then he said slowly and shockly, "Doc, are you crazy?" "I can't defy it anymore. I am in love with Donna." Tommy stood up as he said, "Doc, I know you love her and all but this is crazy! We don't belong here, neither of us! You know," Tommy takes the photograph of Spooky's tombstone out and shows it to the scientist. "This could still be you who gets shot tomorrow! This tombstone could still be in your future!" Spooky sighs as he said, "Tommy, the future isn't written. It can be changed, you know that! Anyone can make their future whatever they want it to be. I can't let this one little photograph determine my entire destiny. I have to live my life according to what I believe is right-in my heart." Tommy sighs as well. "Spooky, you're the scientist. Instead of thinking with your heart, think with your mind." Spooky thinks about this. He sighs as he realized Tommy is right. Neither of them belongs in the Wild West and should return to where they rightfully belong. "You're right, Tommy." Spooky said grimly. With that, he pulled a switch and the DeLorean rolled backwards onto the tracks with its tires off. It kept rolling until it stops where it is going to start being pushed at. Spooky sighs as he said, "At least I should do the right thing and tell Donna goodbye." Tommy groans. "What are you going to tell her? That you can't see her anymore because you have to go back to tomorrow? She isn't going to believe that, Doc! I mean, I have been with you through this entire mess and I still don't believe it!" Spooky sighs as he walks off and thought. Tommy groans. He realizes how much Spooky loves Donna and would even changed time just to be with her. Tommy thought of something, though he is not sure if the scientist would approve of it. "Doc...maybe, I dunno...maybe we could take Donna back with us?" Spooky turned to Tommy upon hearing that. "Back to Tomorrow?" "Yeah." Spooky thought about this. Maybe they should. After that, Donna wasn't supposed to still be alive after her accident with the cliff. Maybe they should...but no. "Tommy, like you said, I am a scientist. I got to do what's right. I warned you about using time travel for your own gain and I won't do the same thing. We will continue as planned and returned to 1985. And then I will destroyed the time machine once and for all." Spooky sighs as he walks passed Tommy. "Travelling through time turns out to be too painful." Tommy looks sadly at his friend as he walks on. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 4 2006, 11:25 AM Post #18 |
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Later that night, the two friends camped out waiting for the big day tomorrow. Tommy is fast asleep. Spooky, still awake, sat off sadly. He loves Donna but can't risk the timeline just to be with her. He sighs and gets up. He got to see her and hope to goodness that she's understand. Donna was writing on some important papers back at her home when she hears knocking on the door. She gets up and asked, "Who is it?" "It's Thompson, Donna." Donna opens the door and to her surprise, she sees Thompson outside looking very unhappy. "Oh Thompson. Did you want to come in?" asked Donna smiling. "No, I don't think I should." Spooky said sadly. "What do you mean? What's wrong?" "I've come to say goodbye." Donna is surprised. They have met a while ago. Why should he leave now? "Goodbye? Where are you going?" asked Donna. "Far away. And, well, I'm afraid I'm never going to see you again." Spooky said. "Thompson..." Spooky interrupts Donna as he continues, "Donna, we both know that I care for you very much, that I want to be with you. But I realized that I don't belong here and I must return to where I really came from." "And where's that?" Donna asked. Spooky was hesitated to answered. "I can not say." Donna pauses to think then smiles. "Well, wherever you're going, I shall go with you." After all, Donna will not be happy if the man she has grown to love isn't here with her so she could decided to quit schoolwork. But Spooky has other thoughts. "No, I can't. I wish it didn't come to this, but please understand this. I'd never forget you and...I love you." "I don't understand. What are you trying to say?" asked Donna puzzled. "I don't know if you would understand if I explain it." "Thompson, please. If you do loved me, then tell me the truth." Spooky sighs. He knew Donna will never understand and knew he would get turned away. But he said, "Very well. I am from the future." Donna looks shocked and disbelief as the scientist continued. "I have came here in a time machine I have made and tomorrow, I'm going back to the year 1985." Donna paused to somewhat absorbed it. She nodded slowly. "Yes, yes I understand." For a while, Spooky thought she understood. That is until an angry look came on her face as she slowly walks to him. "I understand that because you know I'm partial to the writings of Douglas Adams you concocted those mendacity's in order to take advantage of me!" She then slaps Spooky in the face, much to his surprise and shock. "Oh, I've heard some whoppers in my day but the fact that you'd expect me to entertain a notion like that is so...insulting and degrading!" She goes back into her house and turned to gave Spooky one last angry look. "All you had to say is "I don't love you and I don't want to see you anymore." That at least would've been respectful!" Then she slammed the door in Spooky's face. "But it wouldn't be the truth!" protested Spooky. Of course, Donna then not answered. Spooky sighs very sadly. He has blown it with Donna forever and knew that even if he tries, Donna will never see or speak to him again. Taking the flower off his suit, he leaves it on Donna's windowstill as he walks away. Meanwhile, the teacher herself throws herself onto her bed, crying to herself, believing that she has once again been deceived and lied to. And worst yet, by the guy she has sure is different than all the others. In the saloon, Spooky walks in and up to the bar. "Hey Thompson. What shall I get ya? The usual?" asked Tester looking up. "No, I think I think something different tonight." said Spooky with a sad sigh. "Sure. Sarsaparilla?" "No, whiskey." Tester looks at Spooky as if he was asked to robbed a bank for him. "Whiskey? Are you sure? You do remember what happened on the 4th of July, right?" asked Spooky. "Whiskey, Tester." Spooky said sighing some more. Tester shrugs as he takes a bottle of whiskey out and pours some into a glass cup. "Very well, but I warned ya." "Leave the bottle." Tester looks surprised but does so anyway. Before Spooky could take a drink, someone speaks up. "It's a woman, right?" This voice came from a man holding a barbed wired nearby. When Spooky didn't responded, the man said, "Just as I thought. I have seen that look on a man's face many times before everywhere. All I could say is, you can get over her." "No, Donna's different. She is one in a million, billion, or more. She was the one I wanted to love and I lost her forever." Spooky said sadly. "Well, I assure you, there will be other women you could have interest in. I have peddled this barbed wire all across the country, and it has taught me one thing for certain. It's that you never know what the future might bring." said the man with a smile. Spooky scoffed as he said. "Oh, the future, eh? Well, let me tell you about the future." As of right now, Spooky no longer cares about the disruption of the space time continuum. He already has no reason to exist so he may as well go out talking. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 5 2006, 08:33 AM Post #19 |
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The next morning, Tommy woke up by the campfire groaning. He feel like someone has been sticking a gun in him all night. That is when he realized that he swept on his gun all night. "Man, I didn't sleep well. Hey Doc? What time is it?" No answer. "Doc?" He looks around and saw to his alarm that his friend is nowhere in sight. He looks at the photo and is startled when he sees the words "Will Smith" appearing on it. He knew that he got to find his friend and get out of this timeline and fast. At the campsite where Luthor and his men were camping out, the leader kicks his men awake. Luthor is very anxious in getting to town to get his revenge once and for all. "Wake up, you idiots! I got me a runt to killed!" snapped Luthor. "But it's early, boss!" whinned a gang member. "Yeah, what's the rush?" agreed another one. "I'm hungry." snarled Luthor. He can't wait until his hunger is filled by the death of Will Smith. In the saloon, Spooky is still there, exposing the future not caring about the consequences. He speaks in a tone as if he wasn't aware that no one is around. The barbed wire man he spoke to before has since left. He hasn't drank the whiskey Tester have given him yet. "And in the future, we have no need for horses. We have horseless carriages called automobiles." Spooky explained. Old Timer 1 just laughs. They were listening to this, but did not believe a word Spooky is saying. They presumed it was the booze talking. "Oh bother. If anyone has those whatchacallthem, do people even walk or run anymore?" chuckled the Old Timer 1. "Oh we do that. But for recreation and fun." "Run for fun?" laughed the Old Timer 1. "What kind of fun is that?" Near Spooky's blacksmith shop, Tommy has arrived, got off his horse and runs into the shop, assuming his friend was there. "Doc, doc!" yelled Tommy. When he sees that his friend isn't around, he decides to make a trip to the saloon. "So how many did he have anyway?" Old Timer 1 asked Tester. "None. That is his first one today." said Tester nodding towards the whiskey in a glass Spooky has drank yet. "He likes to hold it, I guess." As the Old Timers laughed at this, Tommy ran in and sees Spooky. "Doc, Doc! What are you doing?" asked Tommy as he runs up to his friend. "I lost her, Tommy. I don't have anything left here." Spooky said with a sad sigh. Tommy knew what happened. Spooky try to tell Donna the truth and it backfired like Tommy expect it would. He feels sorry for his friend but right now is not the time to be feeling sorry. "I'm sorry to hear that. But things like that is the reason I got to take you back with me." Tommy explained to his friend. "Where?" asked Spooky sadly. Tommy rolled his eyes and begins shouting, not caring whose is in the room, "Back to Tomorrow!" Spooky soon came to his senses. He realized his friend was right as he puts his glass down. "You're right, Tommy." Spooky said nodding. "Let's go!" "Right." Tommy said with a smile, happy his friend has came to his senses. "Excuse us, everyone, but we got a train to catch." Spooky said to everyone else in the saloon. "Here's to ya, blacksmith." laughed Old Timer 1. "And to the future." agreed Old Timer 2. "Amen!" added Old Timer 3. The Old Timers raises their glasses to Spooky. "Amen to that!" said Spooky raising his glass again. "Thompson, no!" Tester yelped as he realized what is going to happened. But it's too late as Spooky drank his whiskey and put his glass down. Before anyone could knew what happened, Spooky fell to the floor, crashing the Old Timers' table doing so. "Doc!" yelled Tommy as he goes over to his friend. To his alarm, Spooky has went unconscious. Wake up, Doc! Oh man, how many did you have?" "One." Tester said shrugging. "Just one?" asked Tommy to Tester in disbelief. "Well, he never could hold his liquor." "Okay, get me some coffee, black!" Tommy said nervously. "Topy, coffee!" Tester yelled to someone as he goes to make some coffee. Tommy, still trying to wake his friend up, looks at the clock still outside the saloon. It is now 7:45. Which means 15 minutes. To freedom or death. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 6 2006, 06:07 AM Post #20 |
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Meanwhile Luthor Treene and his goons are still on their way to North Californi. As they get closer, they spotted something that made them slow down a bit. "This is far as you can go, Treene." said Marshall Stickler sternly as he points his gun at Luthor and his gang. He and his son blocks their only way into town. "I know what you got planned. There isn't going to be any trouble here!" "Stay out of my way and there will be none!" snapped Luthor. Before the marshall could do anything, the gangster managed to shoot the gun out of the marshall's hands, surprising him. The marshall is usual the one who shoots first. The gangster glares at the marshall's son. "If I were you, which I ain't, I'd dropped it!" Marshall Stickler glares at Luthor then sighs. "Do as he said, son." The marshall's son nods then drops the gun. "Now then, I am here on some personal business. And unless you don't want to live to see your son grow up, I suggest you get out of here for a few hours and leave me be!" demanded Luthor. Marshall Stickler does not want to give in to gangsters like Luthor but he did not wish for his son to get hurt either. So he nods and said to his son, "Let's go, boy." The marshall rode past Luthor and his gang in an attempt to do as Luthor said. But something happened unexpected: the marshall yells as he felt something hits his back and he fell to the ground. Luthor has shot him in the back! "Pa!" screamed the marshall's son as he got off his horse and run to his fallen father. "I lied, marshall!" laughed Luthor evilly. Then as he laughs on, Luthor and his men continues riding into town. "Pa!" cried the marshall's son as he looks at him. Marshall Sticklers does not have any time left for this world. "Remember that word, son. Discipline." said Marshall Stickler weakly. "I will, pa." With that, Marshall Stickler dies, but his advice of the word Discipline will lived on through his son and his descendants and their successors. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 7 2006, 08:05 PM Post #21 |
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At the train station, a sad and upset Donna approaches the ticket office. "Excuse me, but how far does the 8:00 train goes?" asked Donna. "San Francisco is at the end of the line." responded the clerk. Donna paused then said, "I'd have a one-way ticket, please." The clerk nods as he gets her ticket ready. Donna is going to leave North Californi forever. Leave all the misery it has given her, leave Douglas Adams, and especially leave him. Although she is still uncertain if she really wants to leave him. Back at the saloon, Tester got Tommy some coffee in which Tommy tries to make his friend drink. The boy frowns. "Darn it! It isn't working!" yelled Tommy as the coffee has failed in waking Spooky up. "You will need more than coffee if you wanna sober him up in a hurry, son." Tester explained. "What do you suggest?" Tester smirks then said to his assistant, "Topy, time to make Spooky our special wake-up juice." As Tommy watches, Tester and Topy puts a bunch of ingredients, hot peppers, who knows what into a cup. "Okay, in 10 minutes, he will be sober as a priest on Sunday." Tester said as he gets the wake-up juice ready. "10 minutes?" yelped Tommy as he spies the clock which now said 7:50. "Why is it that these things are alway so close?" Tester soon got the wake-up juice and brings it in a glass, a funnel, and a clothes pin over. "Here, put this on his nose." instructed Tester to Tommy. As the boy puts the clothes pin on Spooky's nose, the bartender succeeds in putting the funnel in Spooky's mouth. "Okay, pour this into his mouth and down his throat. Oh, and I would stand back if I were you." Tommy then proceeds in pouring the whole wake-up juice down Spooky's throat, then steps back. At first nothing happens. Suddenly Spooky's eyes opened up quickly. Then the scientist screams as he runs out of the saloon and to the direction of a nearby horse trawl and drunk his head in the water. As Tommy, Tester, and Topy came out, they see him not moving and get him out. "Oh man! He's still out!" groaned Tommy as he sees that his friend is still unconscious. "Aw, that is just a reflex action. It's going to take a few more minutes for the stuff to clear his head." explains Tester as he and Tommy dragged the unconscious Spooky back into the saloon. "Great." groans Tommy knowing that they don't have much time. Soon the 8:00 train, the one Tommy and Spooky needed to "borrowed" arrives at the station. As passengers came on, more passengers came on. A sad Donna is among them, intending on never to return to North Californi again. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 8 2006, 06:56 PM Post #22 |
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At the saloon, Tommy was still trying to revive Spooky. That is if you called slapping him reviving him. "Come on, Doc! Wake up! Come on!" Tommy pleaded in hopes to wake his friend up. "Why, Louis! I didn't expect to see you here this morning!" Tester exclaimed as he looks up. Tommy looks and sure enough, his ancestor has just came into the saloon. "I know, but something inside me told me that I should be here. As if my future has something to do with it." explained Louis. Tommy stares at his ancestor and paused to think about what he said. "He should be up any minute." Tester said, bringing the boy back to reality. "Come on, Doc old buddy. Wake up." Tommy said, trying to wake Spooky up once more. "Smith! Are you in there?" Tommy looks startled and looked out the window. Outside stood Luthor and his gang, Luthor himself getting anxious to get the gun duel to the death a-going. Tommy sees the clock and looks shocked to see that it's a few minutes to 8! As Tommy continues looking in shock, Luthor continues, "It's eight now and I'm calling you out!" "Wait, it isn't eight anyway!" protested Tommy. "It is from where I'm standing! Let's settle this once and for all!" Then the gangster smirked. "Or perhaps you don't have the guts." Tommy hesitates as he looks at the photo. He gulps as he sees a bunch of familiar words on the tombstone: "Here Lies Will Smith". Tommy is not anxious to get the gun fight going only to end up getting killed. He decided to try to get out of it as he yelled, "Look, I don't feel like this today. So...I'm going to forfeit!" "Forfeit? Forfeit" yelled Luthor angrily. Then he looks puzzled and looks to one of his men. "What does 'forfeit mean?" "Uh, you win without a fight?" suggested the gang member. "Without shooting? He can't do..." Then Luthor yelled back towards the saloon. "You can't do that! I am starting to think that you're nothing more than a guthless yella crap! And you got to the count of 10 to come on and prove I'm wrong! 1!" As Luthor begins to count, Tommy desperately tries to revive his friend once more. "Come on, Doc. We got to get out of here!" "2!" "Get going, son! I got $20 going betting on ya so don't let me down!" yelled Old Timer 1. "3!" "I got $30 going betting against ya so don't let me down!" added the second Old Timer. Tommy couldn't believed this. With his life in the balance, people are actually betting on it! "4!" "You better face it, sonny, because if you don't go out there..." "What?" yelled Tommy, interrupting the third Old Timer. "Or what if I don't go out there?" "Then you're a coward." remarked a man with an eyepatch. "5!" "And you will be branded a coward for the rest of your days. "agreed a toothless customer. "6!" "Everyone everywhere will say that Will Smith is the biggest yella belly in the rest." added Old Timer 3. Everyone else in the saloon agrees with him. Tommy hesitates. He doesn't want to be branded a coward but he doesn't want to be killed either. This is getting heavy! Outside, Luthor tries to think what number comes next. He turns to a gang member who holds up 7 fingers. Luthor nodded as he continues, "7!" "If you don't have a gun, then here." said a man. Suddenly the man slides a gun across the counter and Tommy catches it. He looks at it and looks up at everybody, who is watching to see what decision Tommy is making. Louis, Tommy's ancestor, looks concerned. "8!" "I got a gun already." Tommy said grimly. As Tommy passes the gun back, Louis looks more concerned and believed that "Will Smith" is actually going to do something foolish and get himself killed. 'And he was a fine lad too.' thought Louis in concern. "9!" As Luthor is about to finish counting, everybody stared as they watched to see what Tommy is planning to do. "10!" Luthor said finished counting. He waits to see if Tommy is coming out or not. When he didn't yet, he frowns and yells out, "You hear me, runt? I said 10, you gutless yella pie slinger!" Inside the saloon, Tommy paused then said something that will be famous in history books to come. "He's a moron!" yelled Tommy. "I don't give a care what Treene said. "And from on, I don't care what everybody else said either!" Louis smiles as he hears this. Suddenly Spooky woke up as if by magic. "Whoa!" yelped Spooky. "Spooky, are you alright?" asked Tommy in concern. "I think so. Oh, I got a headache." groaned Spooky. Relieved that his friend is okay, Tommy looks for another way out of the saloon. He turned to Tester and asked, "Hey, is there a back way out of here?" "Sure, in the back." said Tester puzzled as he points to the back door. "Thanks. Let's go, Doc!" said Tommy. As Tommy and Spooky makes a run for the back door, the customers frowns. "He's nothing more than a yella belly." sighs a customer. Louis chuckles as he said, "A yella belly, maybe. But better a coward than a fool." Unaware that Tommy is not in the saloon anymore, Luthor continues yelling, "Hey! Are you coming out or do I have to come in after ya?" In the alleyway nearby, Tommy and Spooky came out of the saloon climbing down some stairs. "You know, the one thing I missed here is Tylenol." groans Spooky as he holds his head. However, as they try to escape, one of Luthor's gang members suddenly turned his attention to the alleyway and sees them. "Hey!" yelled the gang member. The other gang members sees them and open firing. Tommy jumps into a nearby building as Spooky is forced to duck behind some barrels. The gang member who spotted them yelled out, "Freeze, blacksmith!" Spooky holds his hands out not moving a muscle as Luthor's gang runs to get him. At the train station, as the train itself pulled out of the station, Donna was seat not saying a word, sitting all by herself. Sitting behind her, the barbed wire man Spooky talk to earlier was talking to another man. "How sad. That fella I met in the saloon has the worst case of heartache I have ever seen in my days." said the barbed wire man sadly. And when he said that he didn't know how he could live the rest of his life knowing how much hurt he'd caused that little girl? I really felt for him. I really do." Donna was listening in. She wonder whom the barbed wire man was talking about. 'Could he mean Thompson?' thought Donna in concern all of the sudden. As the train moves on, she continues listening. Tommy stood up in the building he ducked in and looked out the window. To his dismay, Spooky is being forced over to Luthor by the gangster's gang. "Listen, Smith! I've planned on shooting someone today and I preferred it to be you! But...if you are too darn yella, I guess your blacksmith friend will have to do! I have a score to settle with him anyway!" sneered Luthor. Concerned, Spooky yelled to Tommy, "Don't worry about me, Tommy! Get out of here!" Although Spooky has yelled out Tommy's real name, that isn't the boy's concern right now. His concern is that his friend is finally going to ended up getting killed on Monday after all! Unless Tommy finds a way to save both himself and Spooky and soon! "You have 1 minute to decided!" added Luthor with a smirk. Tommy looks around, while thinking. He spots a stove nearby and smiles. 'Man, I have an idea.' thought Tommy. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 9 2006, 10:02 PM Post #23 |
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As the train goes on, Donna continued listening to the barbed wire man's conversion. "I have never seen someone like this man broken up over a woman like...what did he say her name was?" The barbed wire man asked, trying to remember the name. "Laura? Clara?" "Donna." The man responded. "That's it! Donna!" Donna's eyes widen, then she got up and turned to them. "Excuse me," said Donna getting the barbed wire man's attention. "Ma'am?" asked the barbed wire man. She then asked hopefully, "But does this man with cute puppy dog eyes and long white flowing hair?" "Do you know him?" asked the barbed wire man surprised. Donna turns back to the front, her heart was thumping. She then realized something. She was a fool! She has let the most important thing in her life go because of her anger! "Thompson!" said Donna. Then she jumps up quickly and pulled the string. As a result, the train stops suddenly causing everyone to nearly fall forward. As everyone tried to recover, Donna got up from her seat and runs out of the train. As everyone still on the train watches in puzzlement, Donna runs back the other way back to North Californi. She hopes she gets there before it's too late. As everyone watched on the street, Tommy has yet to show himself. Luthor looks at his watch and smirks. "Time's up, brat!" sneered Luthor as he takes his gun out and points it at Spooky's head. "Time to meet your maker, blacksmith!" Spooky closes his eyes, preparing to meet his end. It looks like he will meet his end on Monday as destined. "Hold it, Treene. I'm coming!" Luthor turned to see Tommy, wearing some sort of tunic, coming out onto the streets, the gun belt is around his waist. Luthor looks surprised but smirked. 'Well, I guess he ain't yella after all.' thought Luthor as he gets into position as if in a Western movie (though he doesn't know that). Everyone in the saloon, including Louis, came out to watch this fateful event. "Okay, draw!" demanded Luthor. Everyone watched, expecting Tommy to make the first move. But to the criminal's surprise, he instead said, "No." Luthor watches as Tommy takes the gun belt off and throws it away from him. Tommy then said, "I thought we would settle this like men!" Settle this? Like men? Luthor laughed at the idea. "You're wrong, buddy!" laughed Luthor. Before Tommy could respond, Luthor takes his gun and fires. Tommy suddenly fell back onto the street and on his back. Then he went silent. Luthor laughed in amusement. He did it. He got that little run. Everyone else watching is either shocked or disappointed. Doc Spooky, held by Luthor's gang, is one of the shocked one while Louis is the disappointed one, resulting in him turning to leave. As Luthor continues laughing, he walks up to Tommy's body, to inspect his work. But suddenly as he got closer, something unexpected happened: Tommy's foot came to life and kicks Luthor's gun right of his hands! As everyone else, especially Louis who turned back, watched, Luthor looks in shock as Tommy stood up alive and well! Luthor's shocked face turn to anger. He roars angrily as he throws a punch...only to screamed as he held his hand in pain. Tommy smirks as he removes his tunic. Under it is the top of the stove which has stopped Luthor's bullet! Tommy smirks. Watching that Western movie back in the alternative 1985 has pay off! It makes the perfect bulletproof vest. As Luthor tries to recover, Tommy takes the stove top off and whacks the criminal over the head with it. Luthor falls and gets back up. Tommy soon punches Luthor hard enough to send him crashing into a tombstone. Luthor got back up and tries to fight back but Tommy didn't give him a hand. He keeps punching Luthor Treene a few times. Soon after one big hit, Luthor groans and soon fell right into a nearby manure cart. As he fall, the manure fell right on him, much to the amusement of the crowd as they laughed at this. "That was good." sighed Louis in amusement. Soon sounds of horses approaching is heard. Sure enough, Deputy Buddy and his men came riding up. The gang holding Spooky looks nervous. "You what I think?" asked a gang member. "Luthor's going to jail?" responded another one. "Yeah!" They released Spooky and makes a run for it. Spooky trips one of them making him fall to the ground. The gang member got back up and resume running. Deputy Buddy stopped near the fallen and dirty Luthor and looked at him in disgust. "Get him out of that crap." said Deputy Buddy. He sees the gang running for it and shouted, "After them!" As most of the officers chased after Luthor's gang, the ones remaining behind removed Luthor from the manure, the criminal looks worst than wear. "Luthor Treene, you're under arrest for robbing the South Park City stage and the murder of Marshall Stickler!" announced Deputy Buddy, his rifle on Luthor. "Anything you have to say before we take you in?" As Luthor groans, he spits out some manure. He said these 3 words. "I hate manure." groaned Luthor. Spooky sees something and points, "Tommy, look!" Sure enough, Tommy sees the broken tombstone. Quickly, he takes the photo out. To the two's happiness, the tombstone itself has vanished as if it was never there to begin with! "All right!" cheered Tommy. They did it! They have saved Spooky from getting killed. Suddenly they hear a train whistle from the distance and looks horrified. "The train! Doc, do you think we could make it?" Spooky thinks quickly, "We have to head it off at Weasel Beyond! Come on!" As the two got back on their horses, a boy runs up. "Hey mister Smith! You dropped this!" Tommy sees that the boy is holding his gun belt and takes it. Tommy knows that where he's going, he will have no use for it. But what to do with it? Tommy looks up to see Louis by the saloon. Louis smiled, proud of him, unaware that he's proud of his descendant, and makes a fake punch. Tommy smiles. "Louis!" said Tommy as he throws the gun belt and gun to Louis. "It's worth $12 and it hasn't been used yet!" Louis thought about this and smiled. "Maybe I could trade it for a new hat." "You do that! You also take care of that baby okay?" "I will!" said Louis with a promise. With that, Tommy and Spooky rode off. Louis smiles. That boy has effected the lives of the people of North Californi. Yet, for some reason, Louis is still not sure why the boy is so...familiar to him. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 11 2006, 10:40 PM Post #24 |
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Donna arrives back into town, unaware of what just happened nor does she care. She just got to see him and apologized for what she did to him. She runs into his workshop. "Thompson! Thompson! Thompson!" exclaimed Donna, hoping Spooky would hear there. But there's no one around, not even that Will Smith character Spooky's with. As she continues looking, she turns to the model railroad Spooky was playing with when she came last Saturday. Then she sees some sort of model she hasn't seen nor the label. "Time machine." said Donna as she picks up the model and reads the label. 'Then...Thompson was telling the truth!' As the train continues on its way, the crew and passengers were unaware of two figures riding quickly towards it on their horses. Those figures of course was Tommy and Spooky. Spooky managed to jump onto the last carriage and turned to Tommy trying to catch up yelling, "Come on, Tommy!" "I'm trying!" Tommy yelled back. "Gimme your hand!" Tommy extended his hand and Spooky grabs it. The scientist pulled his friend onto the train though it resulted in the two falling all over each other. They managed to recover and got back on their feet. Back at the workshop, Donna quickly gets one of the horses Spooky is currently watching and beginning to rode off. She hopes to goodness that they haven't left yet, the area or time! At the train, Tommy and Spooky jumps from carriage to carriage as they make their way to the engine. "We're almost there!" Spooky said. The two soon reached the cart where logs were placed. Spooky landed carefully but Tommy landed too hard and fell on his face. After he recovered, the two make their way to the engine carefully. "Masks on!" Spooky ordered as he and Tommy puts bandannas over their mouths so the engineer, whom they have met the other day, wouldn't recognized them. As the engineer continues operating the locomotive, he hears a voice behind him. "Reach for the sky!" The engineer and his crew turned to see two figures with bandannas covering their mouths, one of them holding a gun at them forcing them to raise their hands in the air. "Is this a hold up?" yelped the engineer. The figure holding the gun looked at the other one and then he just said, "Well, a science experiment actually. Don't ask questions! Just stop the train before you hit the track up ahead!" As they reached the switch Spooky mentioned, the engineer soon stopped the train. Tommy got out and changes the points so that the train will go onto the track that will lead to the DeLorean. "Okay, Doc!" Tommy said, signaling that he got the tracks switch. Spooky points his gun at the engineers who left the engine as the scientist 'requested'. "Now uncouple the cars from the tender!" Spooky ordered. The engineers did as he asked. Spooky, smile hidden under his bandanna, starts the engine up. As the engine separated from the other cars, Tommy got on as it passes him. Once they are out of range, they removed their bandannas now that it's safe to do so. Spooky smirked as he puts on a engineer's hat and pulled a string, causing the whistle to go off. "I've wanted to do that all my life!" joked Spooky causing Tommy to laughed out loud. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 12 2006, 02:01 PM Post #25 |
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The DeLorean was waiting as the train comes up. Once it stopped, Tommy and Spooky goes to the car, takes some coloured capsules out, takes them back to the train and places them near the furnace. "What are these things?" Tommy asked curiously. "My own version of Presto logs! Compressed wood with anthracite dust chemically treated to make the fire burn hotter and longer. I use them in my forge so I don't have to stoke it. These three will light the fire sequentially, make the fire burn hotter, kick up the boiler pressure and make the train go faster." Spooky explained proudly. "Ah, I see." Donna and her horse arrives on a hill overlooking the spot where Spooky has the cars uncouple. When she sees them including the people outside looking concern r puzzled, she concluded that Spooky has been here already. When she hears a whistle, she gestures to her horse to move on, following the whistle's sound. After they're set, Tommy got into the DeLorean. Right after, Spooky got the train moving, blowing the whistle doing so. The train bumps into the DeLorean and starts to pushed it forward. As the train begins pushing the DeLorean, the two talked to each other via their walkie talkies. As they talk, they are unaware that someone on their horse is approaching hoping to catch up. "We're ready to do this, Doc!" said Tommy through his walkie talkie. "Thompson!" yelled Donna. Of course, Spooky didn't hear her as he continues speaking to Tommy. "Okay, are the time circuits on?" "Yeah!" said Tommy turning the time circuits. "Okay, now put in this date: Octobet 27th, 1985, 11 AM!" Tommy does so then sees the speed. "We're going 25 miles per hour, Doc!" Tommy announced. "Good! I am throwing in the Presto Logs now!" yelled Spooky as he throws them in the furnace, "Now there is a new gauge in the DeLorean which will tell us the boiler temperature. The color coding indicates when each log will fire. Green, yellow, and red. Each detonation will be accompanied by a sudden burst of acceleration. Hopefully we'll get up to 88 miles per hour before the needle hits two thousand." "What happened if it does?" Tommy asked in concern. "The motor will blow up!" "Terrific." Tommy said with a frown. As the train continues moving on, Donna, presence still unaware to the two, has catch up to the train and grabs hold of a rail. She then begins to climb on. "Doc, the green log is about to blow!" Tommy announced as he looks at the gauge. Soon an explosion occurred causing the train to go faster and for Donna to nearly lose her grip as she held on tightly to the bar. Tommy meanwhile continues announcing the speed to Spooky. "We just hit 35!" "Okay, I'm going to climb aboard." said Spooky as he loses the hat and begins to climb over the front of the train. "Thompson!" Donna cried out. Spooky paused, thinking he has heard something or someone familiar. But he shook it off and continues climbing. Tommy waits for Spooky saying "Come on, come on." Then he looks at the gauge and begins to yelled, "Hold on to something, Doc! The yellow log is about to exploded!" Another explosion occurred causing the train to go even faster and for Donna to landed on her behind with a thud. "Golly!" said Donna a bit stunned. Tommy continued watching the speed and gauge, the present time is 8:18 AM. "We just passed 40, Doc!" Tommy announced. As Donna got into the driver's seat, she looks out the window and yelled out to Thompson once more. "Thompson! Thompson! Thompson!" cried out Donna. But the whole commotion is causing her to not be heard. She looks around hoping to find a way for her beloved Spooky to hear her. Tommy opens up the car door and yelled to Spooky, "We just passed 45, Doc! Go for it!" By this time, Spooky has got to the front of the locomotive. He looks at where he's at. Only one jump and a climb and he's in in the time machine and on his way home, leaving the sadness behind him. Yet for some reason, he's hesitating. "50!" Tommy called out. Spooky nodded. But before he could jump, the train whistle blows all of the sudden. He and Tommy looks puzzled. Neither of them were in the driver's seat so how could that whistle blow? Spooky turned to look and is shocked as he sees a familiar face peeking out of the window waving to him. "Thompson!" "Donna!" said Spooky, squealing in delight. "I love you!" Donna shouted, smiling happily. Spooky is happy. Staring at him is the love he thought he has loved forever. And now that she declared her love for Spooky, it seems all the sadness he has endure is gone. "Doc, doc! What's going on?" Tommy called out. "It's Donna! She's on the train!" said Spooky happily. "Donna? Perfect." said Tommy to himself frowning. Not that he dislike her but this isn't the time nor the place for her to be right now. "She's in the cab! I'm going back for her!" Tommy then sees something passing outside the window and his eyes widen... The windmill: the point of no return! "Doc! We just passed the windmill! I don't think you'll make it!" Tommy warned Spooky. "Then she will have to come back with us! Just keep calling out the speed!" Spooky exclaimed. Then he turns to Donna and calls out for her, "Donna, climb out to me!" "I don't know if I can!" Donna said a bit nervous. "You can do it! Just don't look down!" Although a bit hesitated, she begins to climb out of the cab. Spooky said happily, "That's it! You can do it!" "60 miles per hour, Doc!" Tommy warned his friend. Spooky continued watching Donna as she begins to climb over to him. She stops a bit nervous once more. "That's it, Donna! You're doing fine! Nice and steady! Come on! A little bit further!" Spooky said shouting out words of encouragement. "I'm scared!" Donna said. "70!" Tommy announced. "Come on, you're doing fine. Nice and easy. All you have to do is don't look down!" Spooky continued. Donna nodded and continues climbing. As Tommy watched, he turns back to the gauge and his eyes widen with horror. "Doc! The red log is about to exploded!" yelled Tommy alarmed. Suddenly the explosion occurred causing the train to go faster and for things to go chaotic! This causes Donna to fall off much to Spooky's horror. Luckily her dress got caught on something causing her to hang upside down! "Whoa!" yelled Spooky as he nearly falls off himself. "Thompson!" cried out Donna. "Hold on, Donna!" "I can't!" She said this for a good reason. Her dress is beginning to ripped and she's dreadfully close to the ground. As this happens, the train begins to seemingly falling apart. Spooky tries to help her only to keep on slipping. Tommy thinks up a way to help them. Then he eyes the hoverboard still in the DeLorean and got an idea. "Doc, catch!" Catch? Catch what? Spooky turned and sees Tommy about to take something out of the car. Great Scott! It's the hoverboard! Now Spooky remembers why he brings certain items when he time travels. You'd never know when you'd need something. Spooky sees something ahead however and yelled out, "Tommy, watch out!" Tommy sees a sign saying that the track is unfinished and ducked back inside as the car smashes through the sign missing the boy barely. Meanwhile, Donna continued yelling out, "Thompson! Help!" "Hang on, Donna!" Spooky yelled back. Tommy sees that they are getting dreadfully close to the end of the bridge, meaning there is no time left. He got to do this! "Doc! Catch!" yelled Tommy again as he drops the hoverboard. The hoverboard itself begins floating after Tommy dropped it. As Spooky came to it, his feet catch it startling the scientist. He is not used to these floating devices yet. "Yes!" cheered Tommy. "Thompson!" yelled Donna unaware of what's happening. "Hold on!" yelled Spooky as he floats over to her. Soon Donna's dress ripped. She fell, expecting certain doom. But then she felt something caught her. He looked up to see a smiling Spooky holding her. She looks astounded but more astounded as to see that the two are on some sort of floating device! Tommy cheers as he sees the two floating off to safely, both of them smiling to each other. He then sees that it's almost time and closes the door quickly. As he puts his hat on, the DeLorean soon reaches 87 miles per hour. And when it hit 88, it begins its 'light show' as it did a few times before and soon the DeLorean disappeared, returning to 1985! Meanwhile the train itself, smoking and no way to stopped it, smashes through a "Dead End" sign. It goes on and soon ran out of track. It is send flying downwards towards the ravine itself and exploded when it reaches the bottom causing a great cloud of smoke. One thing for sure, this destruction will have a history that will be told for ages to come. |
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| JusSonic | Nov 13 2006, 09:53 PM Post #26 |
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Years has passed and, like Spooky predicted, the bridge is done by 1985. And sure enough, after three sonic booms later, the DeLorean itself appeared on the bridge, sailing safely across the ravine. Tommy sighs in relief. He is finally home, to the real 1985, the one he got to after changing his parents' history and not the one Justin Treene has created. Yep, this is the time period he has grown used to. As the car continues going, Tommy noticed something on a sign he just said. It said "Smith Ravine." Tommy puzzled then he knew right. 'Of course! The townspeople in 1885 heard about the train accident and thought Will Smith died trying to stop the train robbers! Man, this is crazy.' thought Tommy in amazement. The car travels through a level crossing AKA the railroad crossing. As Tommy goes by, the barriers are down and the usual railroad lights flashes. Tommy noticed some weird looks people are giving them. He just shrugs and waves innocently. Once the car stops as it goes beyond the crossing, Tommy stops the car and looks puzzled. Why would the barrier goes down and railroad lights flashing? He soon got his answer as he hears a train whistle. He looks and sees a diesel train coming right at him and the car! "Crud!" yelled Tommy as he quickly opens the door. He got out of the DeLorean just in the nick of time. And a good thing too for the train has collided with the DeLorean smashing it into pieces! As Tommy landed on the grass near the railroad tracks, he looks and gasps at the accident. "No, no, no!" yelled Tommy. As he got up, the train continues on its way, unaware of what just happened. Tommy runs over and stops as he looks at the remains of the DeLorean. The license plate spins around for a while before falling onto the ground. The Time Travecitor and the time circuits flashes for a few seconds before they go dead. This time forever. Tommy was silent for a moment then he looked up sadly. "Well, Doc. It's destroyed. Just like you want it." whispered Tommy. As Tommy walked back home, he is sad and happy at the same time. True, Spooky is safe in 1885 with Luthor now lock up and the scientist is happy to be with Donna. But without the time machine, not only Spooky is struck there, Tommy will never see his friend again. He finally reach home and signs upon seeing it. It is the home he remember when he left it, not the home of the Carmichaels whom he unintendally upset and/or anger when he crashed into Susie's room. No gate being locked to keep intruders out. And best of all, the whole place is not a disaster area like in the alternative 1985! Yep, it's good to be back. Tommy sees his 4x4 truck where he left it back before his trip to 2015. As he goes over to it, someone pops out and yelled in a mean tone, "Hey idiot! Get away from..." "Watch it, Justin!" yelled Tommy. Justin yelped alarmed. Justin is no longer the rich and powerful criminal in the alternative 1985 but back to his old self, waxing cars and being forced to be nice to Stu and his family. "Oh! Tommy! I, uh, I didn't recognize you in those clothes!" chuckled Justin nervously. "What are you doing?" Tommy asked. "Oh, uh, putting on the second wax." said Justin quickly. As he walks away, he notes the clothes Tommy still has on once more, giving him the thumb-ups, "Going cowboy, eh?" "Hey come on! We're going to be late!" Tommy turns and sees a sight that made him smiled. His family coming out of the house. Dil was the one who spoke. He is no longer the drunken bum Tommy saw outside of Justin's casino back in the alternative 1985 but a guy dress for the office. "Come on, dad!" said Tammy. "They won't hold your reservations all day!" Tommy smiles as he sees that his parents are back to normal. And his dad, Stu, is alive (he was killed in the alternative 1985 by Justin!) looking for his sunglasses. "Di, have you seen my other glasses? I can't find them!" "Check your suede jacket, honey." Didi said to Stu. She then turned and is surprised to see Tommy, especially in his clothes. "Tommy? What's wrong? I thought you went to the lake." "You wore that to the lake?" asked Tammy in amusement, checking out Tommy's cowboy clothes. "Man, you guys are all back to normal!" said Tommy happily. For the first time since he left the real 1985 the first time, he is so happy to see all of them. "So who are you supposed to be? Will Smith?" Dil said, laughing at his own joke. Tommy chuckled. Yep, he is definitely Louis Pickles's descendant. "Right. I gotta go get Kimi." said Tommy as he runs over to his truck and gets into it. "I really like the hat, Tommy!" said Justin quickly, trying to make up for his rude behavior from before. "Thanks, Justin." Tommy said as he begins to drive off. Tommy stops the truck in front of the Finster household. As he got out, he sighs. It's not because there are no more bars on the window. It's not because the Finster car is no longer a wreck. It's because of her. Kimi sleeping peacefully on the swing on the front porch in the same position the two left her in, unknown to them at the time, back in the alternative 1985. Tommy is so relief as he walks up. The love of his life is safe and sound like Spooky has promised. "Kimi? Kim? Kimi?" Tommy said trying to wake her up. When he sees that she didn't, he figured out the best way to wake her. He sits down, leans down...and kissed her right on the lips. That woke the fair Kimi up. As Tommy pulls back, Kimi smiles and open up her eyes. Upon seeing Tommy, she smiles. "Tommy." Then her eyes widen. "Tommy!" She jumps up and hugs Tommy. Then she frowns as she said, "I have the worst nightmare." Tommy drove the truck down a road with Kimi inside it. The truck stops at some traffic lights. Kimi obviously hasn't forgotten. She hasn't forgotten what she saw back in 2015. Of course, right now she all thinks that it's a dream. "The dream I had is so real, Tommy. It was about the future." Kimi said. Tommy sighs, knowing something Kimi does not. Kimi continued, "It was about us. And...you got fired." This surprised Tommy who looks at her. "Fired? What do you mean, 'fired'?" Tommy stops as he sees something passed Kimi. Something he hasn't visited since 2015! "Dimmsdale. Dimmsdale! This is where we're going to live!" Tommy announced at the wrong time. When he sees a concerned look on Kimi's face, he tries to cover it up, "I mean, this is where we're going to live. Someday." Kimi looks more concerned. "Tommy, it was a dream, wasn't it?" Before Tommy could respond, trying to think up another cover up, he hears some laughing and a truck pulling up next to his. He turns and sees a gang of four in a truck with the radio playing music too loudly. He sees a familiar boy behind the wheel turning to him, smirking. "Hey, if it isn't the Big P." said the boy with a smirk. "How are ya, Pickles?" "Hey Sean." Tommy said with a groan. Kimi looked puzzled. In her dream, Sean was Tommy's supervisor and the reason he got fired. And although he looks different here, she still can't shake it off. Sean looked the truck over and said, "Like the wheels. Let's see how they go. Say...next green light?" Tommy frowns. He knows a drag race when he hears one and he isn't interested into doing something stupid like crashing his brand new truck. "Forget it, Sean!" Tommy said sternly. "What's the matter? Are you a...baby?" asked Sean with a smirk, knowing Tommy couldn't resist trying to prove that he wasn't a baby. Tommy's eyes narrowed as Sean's gang laughed along with him. Kimi got concerned as she sees Tommy getting ready to get the truck going. "Tommy! Don't!" begged Kimi. She has a bad feeling about this and she probably knew why. "Hang on to something, Kimi." Tommy told Kimi sternly as he pulls a lever. Sean and his gang cheered, believing that they are going to race Tommy. "Let's go!" cheered Sean as they start their truck up. The gang gets more excited as time passes and as they waited anxiously for the next green light. Both vehicles kept having their engines rev up. Kimi is concerned. Tommy is actually going to go through this! Soon the light turn green and the race is on! Well, not really. Only Sean's truck went forward fast. Tommy has drove his vehicle into reverse and spins around. Kimi yelped as she and Tommy turned to see Sean's truck racing off, the gang inside is unaware of what just happened. "Did...did you do that on purpose?" asked Kimi on disbelief. "Sure! I am not stupid enough to race that idiot!" said Tommy with a smirk. As the two continued watching, something happened. A Rolls Royce pulled out a road stopping just as Sean's truck approached. Sean quickly turn to avoid crashing into it. Tommy's eyes widen in shock. "Jeez! I woulda hit that Rolls Royce!" Kimi is shocked. Tommy was supposed to hit that Rolls Royce! She felt something in one of her pockets and take it out. To her surprise, it's the fax from 2015 that announced Tommy being fired. As she and Tommy watched, the girl is astounded as the words "YOU'RE FIRED!" disappeared. As if it never happened. "It erased." Kimi whispered. Kimi looked at Tommy who looked nervously. Now he definitely has to tell her what happened. Tommy and Kimi walked towards the wreckage of the DeLorean. Tommy has explained everything to Kimi on the way over. Kimi has understand and promised not to reveal what she found out. "Geez, you're right. There is nothing left." said Kimi looking the wreckage over. Tommy sighs sadly. "Worst yet, Doc is never going to come back." Tommy sees something and picks it up. It's half of the photograph with Spooky standing in front of the clock in 1885 the boy himself picked up back in 1955. He sighs sadly. "I'm going to missed, Kimi." Kimi hugs Tommy to comfort him. Just then they hear level crossing bells ringing. As they hear this, they moved back. But as they looked down a direction, they see no train. When they looked the other way, there's no train that way either! "What the heck?" asked Tommy in confusion. Suddenly a flash and three sonic booms occurred knocking the two back. As they recovered, they are astounded as they see a train, that looks like the one wrecked back in 1885, appearing and stopping before them! The train itself has some weird devices and stuff on it as if a scientist made it himself! Tommy sees some familiar initials on the side of the train and looks shocked. Could it be...? He got his answer as a familiar figure pokes his head out of the cab and sees Tommy. "Doc!" cried Tommy as he and Kimi got back up. "Tommy!" said Spooky wearing 1885 style clothing. "Doc! It's really you!" Tommy said excited. "This train runs on stream!" said Spooky excited. He opens the cab door. Tommy sees another familiar figure standing next to him. Spooky smiles as he said, "Tommy, I'd like for you and Kimi to meet the family. You know Donna by now." "Hi Tommy!" said Donna waving happily. "Ma'am!" said Tommy in respect. "And these are our two boys!" As Spooky speaks, a young boy at 10 comes out at the doorway. "This is Douglas!" And another boy, 7 or 8, come out. "And Adams! Boys, this is Tommy and Kimi." Spooky's son wave to Tommy and Kimi who waved back. A familiar dog came out and barks happily. It's Spike! "Doc! I feared I've never going to see you again!" Tommy said happily. "Aw, you can't keep a good scientist down. I have to come back to get Spike. And, well, I don't want you to be concerned about me." Donna then hands Spooky a parcel. Spooky smiles as he take it. "Oh, also I came to give you a sovernir." Spooky hands it to Tommy. Anxiously, Tommy opens the parcel. Smiling, what he is holding is a framed picture that has the photo of him and Spooky standing in front of the clock back in 1885. The words "Partners In Time" is printed on the front. "It's great, Doc." Tommy said with a smile. Kimi chose this time to speak up. "Uh Doc Spooky?" She takes out the erased fax and gives it to Doc. "I got this from the future and...it's erased." Spooky looks at the fax and laughs. "Of course it has been erased!" "But what does it mean?" "It means that your future hasn't been written yet. No one's has. Your future is whatever you make it. So make it a good one. Both of ya!" Spooky explained proudly. Tommy smiles proudly as he hugs Kimi. "We will, Doc! That's a promise!" "Okay, stand back!" Spooky announced. As Tommy and Kimi stood back, Spooky closes the train doors then calls to his son, "Buckle you, you two!" "Hey Doc! Where are you going now? Back to Tomorrow?" asked Tommy interested. Spooky smirks. "Nah! Already been there!" The Spooky family waves goodbye to Tommy and Kimi who wave back. Then, as if to prove his point, the train's wheels begin to lift up. Tommy realized that Spooky has been to the future and has the train hover-converted! As Tommy and Kimi continued watching, the train itself lifted off the ground, turns around and flies towards a direction. Then it turns around and flies very fast in the opposite. Soon it broke the time barrier! And thus, the story of Tommy Pickles, Doc Spooky, and the DeLorean has come to a close. The End E.G. Daily: Tommy Pickles/Will Smith, Louis Pickles Charlie Spooky: Professor Thompson Spooky Mary Steenburgen: Donna Wakeman Thomas F. Wilson: Luthor Treene, Justin Treene Melanie Chartoff: Melanie Pickles, Didi Pickles Dionne Quan: Kimi Watanabe Finster Jack Riley: Stu Pickles Frank Welker: Old Timer 1, Gang Member 1, Engineer Jeff Glen Bennett: Old Timer 2, Tester, Gang Member 3 Rob Paulsen: Old Timer 3, Gang Member 2, Mayor Herbert, barbed wire man Billy West: Honest Bob, undertaker Carlos Alazraqui: Deputy Buddy Clancy Brown: Marshall Stickler Haley Joel Osment: Marshall Stickler's son Tara Strong: Dil Pickles Catherine Cavadini: Tammy Pickles |
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