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Tommy Phantom; A AGU/DP x-over
Topic Started: Nov 18 2006, 01:42 PM (1,201 Views)
JusSonic
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Author's note
This story is a request asked to me by nicktoons841 and has nothing to do with my other AGU stories that involved Alan Matthews. Okay, let's do this!

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In the lab somewhere in his garage, Stu is working on something he has been working on for weeks. He smirks as he lifts his mask thingie up.

"I'm done! After so many weeks, I'm done!" chuckled Stu then he laughs madly. He smiles. "Oh, this is so good. I got to tell everyone!"

Of course, the only people he told was his family. They came downstairs as Stu led them.

"So Uncle Stu. What is this great invention you spoke of?" asked Angelica boredly. She wanted nothing more than to go back to talking to her friends on her cellphone.

"One that can change the way we viewed the living and dead once and for all!" Stu explained.

"Cool!" said Dil with a smirk. Dil has always have an interest in the dead.

"Here it is!" Stu said pointing to a portal nearby.

The others just stared.

"What is that?" Tommy asked puzzled.

"I called it a ghost portal! With it, we can view a world unseen. In other words, a world inhabited by ghosts!" Stu explained.

"Uh, dad. No offense, but when people died, they either go to heaven or heck. I mean, there's no such thing as ghosts."

"We don't even know if that ridiculous thing works." Angelica said frowning at her uncle's invention.

"Hey, I think it'd work! I would be thrilled if this thing can show us ghosts!" Dil said, believing his dad's invention would work.

"Whatever, Dil."

"Di, what do you think?" Stu asked his wife hopefully.

"Well, since you put your heart into it, I am sure it would work." Didi said with a smile. In truth though, she doesn't think it would work like Stu's other inventions that sometimes failed but she lie so to not hurt his feelings.

"I'm glad you think so!" Stu said smiling. "I can't wait to test this thing."

"Typical, dad. Typical." Tommy said rolling his eyes.
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The next day, Chuckie and Kimi came over to the Pickles' home.

Chuckie knocked on the door. "Hello? Anyone home?"

Tommy opened the door. "Hey guys."

"Hey Tom."

"Can we come in?" asked Kimi.

"Sure, but Angelica's here too." Tommy replied. The Finsters came in anyway.

"So I heard from your brother, Dil, that your dad made a ghost portal." Chuckie said.

"It's true." replied Tommy.

"Let's check it out!" Kimi shouted.

Tommy squirmed. "Gee, I don't know. I don't think it works anyway."

"Aww, too bad Pickles." Angelica said, coming down from upstairs. She heard everything. "Infact, to prove to your friends, I dare you to go into the ghost portal!" Chuckie and Kimi gasped.

"Nice try, Angelica! I'm not gonna do it!"

"Then I dare you too. Besides, mom and dad won't be back in 2 hours."

Tommy sighs. "Fine, but just as long Kimi and Chuckie come with me."

"Why?" asked Chuckie.

"You're gonna be a witnesses."

"Fine." Kimi said.

"Do that, and I'll give you 10 bucks." Angelica said, holding out a 10 dollar bill.

The four went into the garage. Tommy opened up a curtian that reveals the portal.
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"Well, there it is." Tommy said nodding towards the portal.

"Incredible." said Chuckie in amazement.

"If it works." remarked Angelica.

"Okay, I'm going on." Tommy said but Kimi stops him.

"Whoa, whoa, Tommy! First you better put on some proection. I mean, what if the portal does work." Kimi said pointing out.

"Wise idea." Tommy said. He found a black and white costume nearby and puts it on. He then shows it off to the others. "What do you think? Do I looked cool or what?"

"Hold on." Kimi said. She takes a logo from nearby and sticks it right on the outfit. It is a 'T' symbol. Kimi smiles. "Now it's cool!"

"Coolness is not the issue! Going into the portal is!" snapped Angelica.

"Right." said Tommy nodding. He goes inside the ghost portal and looks around. "Geez, so far it's...interesting."

As Tommy continues looking around, he is unaware that he's close to a panel that has an on and off button. Not until his hand unknowingly is near the 'on' button. When Tommy walked forward, he pushed the 'on' button by accident! The portal is suddenly turned on making Tommy screamed.

"Tommy!" yelled Kimi and Chuckie alarmed as this happened.

"Well, what do you know? It does work." Angelica said astounded.
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(a/n: This is in the tune of the ORIGINAL Danny Phantom theme song.)

He's a Phantom
He's a Phantom, Tommy Phantom Phantom

Purple hair changed to white
Black now green eyes
Not so deranged

He's gonna catch them all cuz he's Tommy Phantom

Bullies don't stand a chance
Senses all work
Wait 'til he does the chores

He's gonna catch them all cuz he's Tommy Phantom Phantom Phantom

Going into another world
His whole town scared
Now everyone he'll find
Picking on someone
You can't see him once
If they are large or small or big or tall

He's gonna catch them all cuz he's Tommy Phantom
He's gonna catch them all cuz he's Tommy Phantom
He's gonna catch them all cuz he's
[whisper] Tommy Phantom



Cut back to the garage, and Kimi grabs Tommy before he falls down. Tommy then phases through.

"You're a ghost..." Kimi whispered.

Meanwhile, in Amity Park, Danny, Sam and Tucker are hanging out as usual. Until...

"AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Danny screamed on the top of his lungs.

"Okay, ow." Sam said, taking her hands off where her ears were.

"Dude, what was that about?" asked Tucker.

"I don't know. It's like I sensed something." replied Danny.

"And you just screamed it out loud?" said Sam annoyed.

Danny sighed. "Just forget it."

They reached it to Danny's house. They went inside. Then they heard a louad noise.

"Not again." Tucker groaned.

"Danny's dad, of course." says Sam.

"Come on, guys." Danny said. Danny, Sam and Tucker went downstairs and saw Danny's dad, Jack, working on the ghost portal...again. "What is it this time?"

Jack turned around. "Relax, Danny! I'm just upgrading. It hasn't worked in a while." he explained.

Danny sighed. "Whatever, dad." he said as the teenagers left. Jack decided to take a break and followed them. However, they didn't know the portal showed an image of the AGU! world...
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Back in Stu's garage...

"Tommy is a ghost?" asked Angelica in shock as she looks her cousin over. "How did that happened?"

"Must be because of that portal." Chuckie said alarmed.

"What happened?" groaned Tommy as he stood up. Of course, standing isn't the word for it now. It's more like he's flying.

"Tommy!" gasped Kimi. "You could fly!"

"What?" Tommy asked. He then looks down and sees he's a few feet off the ground. "Whoa! I can fly!"

"Okay, this is getting creepy for me. I'm outta here." remarked Angelica as she turns to leave but Tommy flies in front of her scaring her. "AHHHH! Don't do that!"

"Hey, I won our bet, Angelica. Hand the money over." said Tommy with a smirk.

Before Angelica could respond, Chuckie noticed something in the ghost portal. "Hey guys! Check this out!"

The others walked/fly towards the portal and looked at it. It is showing the inside of Danny's lab.

"Hey. What is that? Someone's lab?' asked Tommy in wonder.

"I don't know." added Kimi.

"Well, don't just float there, Pickles! Go in there and see if it's safe!" snapped Angelica as she pushed him in.

"Hey, don't push!" protested Tommy. He then goes inside.

"I think this is a bad idea." said Chuckie in concern.
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The purple haired guy woke up. Everything was completely different.

"Man, check out these thick outlines." remarked Tommy. He turned to his friends, from the other side of the portal. "Don't worry, it's safe!"

"Should we trust him?" Angelica asked Kimi and Chuckie.

"Relax, Tommy's our friend. He will never lie to us." said Kimi. The rest went inside. After they did, the portal closed up.

"Great...now how are we supposed to get back?!" exclaimed Chuckie.

"Chill, Chuck. It's not like anything bad will happen." Tommy said.

"Dad? Are you down there?"

"Who was that?" Angelica asked nervously.

"Tommy, return to yourself, back, now!" shouted Kimi.

"Okay, I'll try." he said.

Danny, Tucker, and Sam came into the lab. No one was down there. That's because the pre-teens and teen hid in the closet, under table, and above the ceiling where Tommy hid.

"Hello? Anyone in here?" Tucker called out.

"Must've been a false alarm." Sam said.

"That's strange, I heard someone talking. Down here." Danny stated.

Tommy was listening in, the only one who did. However his hands started to sweat from hanging on the ceiling, then fell down. Fenton, Manson, and Foley are shocked to see this.

"GHOST!" Danny yelled. "Oh no, I'm starting to act like my dad again, am I?"

"Uh, hi?" Tommy waved nervously.

"Fine, we'll come out too!" Chuckie, Kimi and Angelica came out from their hiding places. Angelica was the one who spoke.

"Who are you all?" Tucker asked.

"And what are you doing in my parents' lab?" demanded Danny.
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"Well you see, that's a funny story." Tommy said beginning to chuckle.

"That depends on how funny it is." Sam remarked in her usual way.

Tommy nods nervously then, along with Chuckie, Kimi, and Angelica's help explains how Angelica dare Tommy to go into the ghost portal, how Tommy was zapped into it and how they got sucked into the portal right into the lab and all that.

"So Tommy is a ghost now?" asked Tucker puzzled.

"Tucker!" yelped Sam all of the sudden.

"I guess so." Kimi said with a shrug.

Danny groans. "Aw geez, not another halfa."

"A halfa?" asked Chuckie puzzled.

"Half mortal, half ghost."

"So I am not dead." Tommy said in surprise.

"Well, kinda half dead. Just be lucky you weren't killed at all." Danny pointed out.

"Well, that's great and all but if I am a halfa, how do I turned back into my human form?" Tommy asked in concern.

"Let me ask. It took a while to figure that one out by myself."

"You're a halfa too?" asked Angelica surprised now.

Danny nods then turns into his Danny Phantom self to prove his point.

"How did that happened?" Tommy asked.

"Later. First of all, we need to get you to your human self."
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"But I have no idea to get back into my 'other' self."

"Well, maybe you need a battle cry, or somethin'."

"Like you do." Tucker told Danny.

Danny glanced at him. "Yeah, like I do. Just say something like 'Goin' Ghost and return back to your old self. Or go back to being a ghost again."

"Why do I need to be a ghost again?" asked Tommy.

"Believe me, you do."

"Okay...," Tommy thought hard. "Go, Tom, Go!" Then he transformed back into his old self. "Ahh, great to be me again. Although I really do like the flying."

Danny sighs. "Tommy, I have a lot to teach you about." he said as he also went back into his human form.

"I wonder if Lil, Phil, Susie and Dil will believe this..." Chuckie muttered to himself.
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Back in the garage in the AGU world, Phil and Lil has came to pay Dil a visit. He's in the garage looking the ghost portal over.

"Hey Dil!" Lil called Dil, getting his attention. "Where's Tommy?"

"Not sure. I thought I heard him a while ago but so far he isn't in here. In fact, nothing interesting in here except dad's ghost portal." Dil said nodding towards the ghost portal.

"Your dad's what?" Phil asked puzzled.

"Ghost portal! He made it to see worlds unknown!"

"Oh please. There's no such thing as ghosts." Lil said rolling her eyes.

"Is true! Hold on. I bet I could make it work!" Dil said as he check the portal. Unlike Tommy, he found the on and off button, pushed the 'on' button and jumped back.

But nothing happened.

"See?" Lil said with a smirk.

"But it had to work! It had work!" Dil said in disbelief.

"Since when does any of your dad's inventions?" Phil remarked. Dil just glared.

Back in the DP universe...

Danny, Sam, and Tucker bought their new friends upstairs to the Fenton household. In the kitchen was Danny's sister Jazz reading a magazine, Jack cleaning one of his guns while Maddie was eating.

Jack looked up and noticed Tommy, Chuckie, Kimi, and Angelica, "Danny! What did I say about bringing strangers into the house?"

"They aren't strangers, dad. Just new...friends of ours. Yeah." Danny said quickly.

"Oh, Danny got himself some new friends." Maddie said seeing the other kids. "Finally! I mean, how nice. Who are they?"

"Uh these four are Tommy Pickles, his cousin Angelica, Chuckie Finster and his sister Kimi." Tucker said introducing the kids.

"And how did they get into the lab without me knowing?" Jack demanded suspiciously.

"We bought them downstairs while you aren't looking, dad, to, uh...show them around." Danny said quickly.

Jack glares at the kids susipiciously. But soon his suspicious was set aside as he said, "Well, it's nice Danny has new friends while then the usual weirdos he hangs with. No offense, Tucker and Sam."

Tucker and Sam just stares at him.

"Mom, dad, my new friends are just visiting from...out of town." Danny continued. "Mind if I show them around Amity Park?"

"Sure Danny! We won't mind." Maddie said smiling.

"You and your friends better not have broken anything while you were down there!" Jack added sternly.

"Nothing was broken, Mr. Fenton." Sam said quickly as she and the other kids left the kitchen. Jazz got suspicious however and followed after them.

"Danny!" Jazz said as she runs up to her brother. "These kids...I didn't see them with you when you went downstairs. I know, I saw you. Okay, what happened this time?"

Danny groans. "Jazz, this you are not going to believe."
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"Okay, what is it?"

Danny and Jazz went up into Danny's room.

"You see, Jazz, the four Tucker introduced are from...another universe."

Jazz stared at him. Then she couldn't help but laugh. "Ha ha ha ha! You're joking, right?"

"Jazz, I'm serious!" snapped Danny. "Also, as Tommy entered into the lab, he became a halfa, like me." His big sister stops laughing as she gasps. "Go ask him if you don't believe me."

"Okay, I will." Jazz said as she left the room. She found Tommy, alone, and went over to him. "Tommy, is it true?"

Tommy turns around and gets startled. "Oh, I didn't see you there!"

"Sorry."

"What did you say?"

"I said, 'Is it true that you're half ghost and that you and your friends are from another universe?'"

He nodded. "It's true. I guess Danny told you."

"He did."

"Promise me, don't tell anyone else, 'k?"

"Okay."

Just then Sam, Tucker, Chuckie and Kimi found them.

"Come on, we're gonna be late!" said Sam.

"Be late for what?" Tommy asked.

"Danny's parents said that you and friends can come with us, to explore Amity Park," Tucker explained. "But only..."

"Only what?"

"If Jazz comes along."

Everyone looks at her. Jazz sighs. "Well, I got nothing else to do anyway."

"Great, let's go slowpokes!" Kimi told them as she ran downstairs.
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Soon Danny and his friends has shown Tommy's gang around Amity Park. The whole place is a new adventure for them. Though to them, bullies and anything else Danny's home has is nothing new to them. Tommy barely got Angelica away from the popular Paulina and her groupies. Despite the whacked and depressed look sometimes, Tommy, Chuckie, Kimi, and Angelica are impressed with Amity Park.

At Nasty Burger, the group is eating some burgers while talking.

"Man, this place is great." Tommy said with a smile.

"One of the fewest times someone said that." joked Sam.

"Why's that?" asked Kimi.

"Well, although it seems boring, Amity Park has been known for a special attack." Jazz added.

"Attacks?" asked Tommy. Suddenly something came out of his mouth confusing him. "Should I be concern?"

"Yes." Danny said with a frown.

"Beware, foolish humans!"

"Ah, no. Not again." Danny said with a groan as he turns. A familiar ghost in overalls speaks out.

"It is I, the Box Ghost, here to terrorize you all! Beware!" boomed the Box Ghost as he causes boxes to come to life and send them flying at the customers.

"Geez, who is that dweeb?" yelled Angelica as she ducks one of the Box Ghost's boxes.

"Dweeb isn't the word we woulda used! More like a pest." remarked Tucker as he dodges another box.

"Aren't you going to do anything, Danny?" Tommy asked his new friend.

Danny smirks. "Nah. I have my fill of this goon. Plus, this will be your first fight as your halfa self."

"Oh great." Tommy said with a frown.

"I'd helped ya though your fight though." The ghost boy added.

"Even greater."
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Tommy hid under the table. He said his battle cry (as a call it) and transformed into his ghost half.

"Gasp! Another halfa!" Box ghost said shocked.

"Ain't that obivious?" said Sam unimpressed.

"Time to take you down, slug!" Tommy yelled.

"Now, use your ghost energy blast and hit him!" called Danny.

Tommy couldn't find it in either of his hands, but green ectoplasm came from out of his butt. "Well, this may not be right, but it's close!" he aimed the energy at the Box Ghost, knocking him down.

"Oh, you think you're so tough?" the ghost said as he raised up some boxes. "Face the rarth of 'Nasty Burger Meats'! I'm the Box Ghost."

The Box Ghost aimed his boxes at Tommy, but he phased through. However, the boxes hit Angelica instead. She growled angrily.

"Ooh, my two favorite things! Meat and hot girls!" Tucker said.

"You think I'm hot?" asked Angelica.

"Okay, not really, but still, meat!"

Angelica growled again and threw some meat in Tucker's face.

Back with the fight, Tommy had some trouble standing up still.

"Tommy, concentrate!" Danny told him. The kid did as so, finding his balance. Then he hit and punched and hit the Box Ghost. "To your left! Aww, to the right! Left now!"

"You know, I can't really concentrate if you keep yelling like that!" snapped Tommy.

"Sorry."

"Now to finish it off..." he said to himself. Tommy suddenly knocked the Box Ghost out of the park! Well, fast-food resturant anyway. Tommy transformed back into his human form.

"Well that was easy." said Chuckie.
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Later, as the madness dies down, the kids finished eating while at the same time Angelica got all the meat off of her.

"Geez, now I really wish I hang out with Paulina." groaned Angelica.

The others laughed.

Back in the AGU world...

"Work, darn you, work!" yelled Dil frantically as he tries his best to get the ghost portal working.

"Face it, Dil. It's not going to work." Lil said rolling her eyes.

"What is?" The kids sees Susie coming into the garage.

"This ghost portal Dil's dad has made." Phil said with a smirk pointing at the garage.

"Oh really? What happened?" Susie asked in interest.

"Well, I thought I heard Tommy in here. But when I came in, he isn't around. I was trying to show off dad's invention to Phil and Lil. However it doesn't work."

Susie sees something and laughed.

"What's so funny?" Dil asked puzzled.

"Try looking at the obvious." Susie said pointing.

Dil sees what Susie's pointing out and sees why the portal wouldn't work...

The portal was unplugged.

"Oops." laughed Dil sheepishly. "I guess I overlook that."

Dil comes over and plugs the ghost portal back in. Phil came over and sees the "on" button Dil has pushed earlier.

"So what this button do?" asked Phil puzzled as he reached for the "on" button.

"Phil! Don't!" yelled Lil alarmed.

But she was too late as when Phil pushed the "on" button, a flash was before his eyes.

Later...

"Huh? Where are we?" asked Phil confused as he and the others looked around. Everything was so different.

"We are in someone's lab!" exclaimed Susie amazed.

"Intense!" squealed Dil in delight.

"Darn it! I told you not to push that button." Lil scowled at her brother.

"Hey! How did you kids get in here?"

The four sees Jack and Maddie in the lab with them, all puzzled and suspicious.
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"Um, who are you supposed to be?" asked Phil.

"We're Danny's parents!" snapped Maddie.

"Who's Danny?" Lil questioned.

"GHOSTS!" Jack shouted, took out his net to catch ghosts with, and hit it at Phil, Lil, Susie and Dil.

"Hey, get us outta here!" shouted Susie.

Meanwhile, the others are at the park.

"Ah, a nice day to relax in another universe." sighed Chuckie, lying on the ground.

"Come on, Tommy. We need to train some more." Danny said.

Tommy groaned. "For how much more?"

"I don't know. Until you really get into the hand of it."

"Gee, I wonder what your world is like?" Sam wondered.

"Let's just say...it doesn't have any ghosts." replied Kimi.

"And boring." Tommy added. Danny pulled him away as Tommy yelped.
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Back in the lab, Dil, the twins, and Susie were in fear as they are between a coffin with soikes in it about to close on it.

"Okay! One more chance! Who send you ghosts?" demanded Jack.

"We are not ghosts!" yelled Lil alarmed.

"Yeah! We just came here by accident!" protested Phil.

"A likely story!" scoffed Jack not believing it.

"Now wait a minute, Jack. Maybe they're with that kid Danny introduced us. What's his name? Tommy?" Maddie said.

"Tommy!" Susie said surprised.

"You know him?" Jack asked in suspicion.

"He's my bro!" Dil exclaimed.

"Ha!"

"Look, Jack. Just wait until Danny comes back with Tommy and the other kids. Then Tommy will decided whenever or not these kids are his friends and brother." Maddie insisted.

Jack paused then frowns, "Oh, all right. We'd wait." Then to the kids, "But I am keeping an eye on all of you!"

"That's I'm scared." Phil said nearly wetting himself as he glares at the coffin that just been shut down.

Meanwhile, Tommy is still learning from Danny and appears to do so quickly.
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