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Elemental Masters; The History of the Avatar - part 1
Topic Started: Dec 6 2006, 12:42 AM (386 Views)
Loner18
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Planning to make a manga with a background history based on the Avatar.
I wroth this fan fiction to help me decribe the history of the Avatar(from my point of view) for my manga.
Instead of writhing the hole darn thing in one page, i decided to deviding it in parts.
How many? I don't know, but at leats it gives me a breather.
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Water...Earth...Fire...Air...

These are the four elements that brought this world to life and still today, these elements are still essential in our daily lives.

For as long as humanity can remember, many people dream'd to be able to control these elements for whatever purpose it was.

Eventualy, people who were travelling around the world to find a new place to call home, met unique creatures who were able to manipulate water, earth, fire and air by bending the laws of nature and physic.

Some of these creatures were highly spiritual and there for, able to communicate with anykind of creatures.

Intrigue and hoping to help those travellers, these creatures shared their bending knowledge to these travellers.

Able to master these bending abilitys, the travellers returned to their respectable homes and shared their experience and knowledge to the peoples.

These knowledge brought humanity into a new era where humans were now able to bend the elements.

At that time, there were only four types of benders: Waterbender, Earthbender, Firebender, Airbender.

Has time passes, the benders were able to create many citys with their own skills or with the help of others.

However, has luck would have it, Humanity was not perfect, has one could easily create, the other could easily destroy.

Many of these benders used their skills to prove who is the mightiest warrior in the world by fighting other benders.

Others were about having their own land.

The Earthbenders, thinking they own the world because of their earth bending abilitys, created the Earth Kingdom and started to take over other lands and destroying small village.

The Earthbenders tryed to take over a bigger village, but at last was in vain for this village was own by Firebenders.

Smaller in forces than the Firebenders, the Earthbenders retreated and returned to the Earth Kingdom to gather more warriors.

Realising this, the Firebenders started to take over other village in order to amplify their forces, this action led to the creation of the Fire Nation and became near equal in power with the Earth Kingdom.

Earth and fire were now at war.

The war lasted for over 55 long years, but in the 15 years remaining in the war, faith struck again.

The war was led into a non-bending village has the two power struggle were trying to take it over.

This, ofcourse, started an intense battle between the two forces, their were many deaths, some were soldier and others were villagers caught in the crossfire.

When the battle ended, the village was completly destroyed and among the debris, one was able to survive.

A 5 years old boy named Omashu.

During these poor years, Omashu moved from village to village in hope of finding a home, safe from the war.

Unfortunitly, the war was spreading and eventualy, their were no longuer a safe places for him to live.

This lasted for 10 years.

At 15 years old, Omashu had enough and decided that the best way for him to live away from this tragic and terrible war was to live with the Water Tribe.

But the Water tribe was living in the South Pole and he was from the North side of the world.

To achieve this goal, Omashu would need to travel through the Earth Kingdom and the Fire Nation to reach the South ocean.

For this to work, Omashu decided to find a master to teach him earthbending for defensive purposes.

After finding a master, he was able to learn earthbending in a short amount of time in which baffled his teacher.

Next, to help him sail through the treacherous waters and to defend himself against the Fire Nation, he would need the help of an Airbender.

The nearest Air Temple from his present location was the North temple.

After surviving the climb of the mountain, he was able to reach the Air Temple only to have his request rejected since the Air Nomads don't want any part of this war, even if Omashu's intention are noble.

Waiting and walking around the Air Temple hoping to find a new answer, he started to watch young Airbenders playing around using their airbending skills.

Amaze by this, Omashu ask one of the kids how he was able to do it.

The kid answer'd him and tell him he should try it too.

Encourage by the other kids, Omashu gave it a shot and succeeded, with ease.

Omashu was now able to Airbend.

The Elders of the Nomads were highly impress by is learning capabilitys, one of them believed that Omashu chakra is highly sensitive and extremely flexible.

After that, Omashu continued is quest and headed toward the Fire Nation, however it wouldn't be easy.

To be able to move around Fire Nation terratory, he will have to make the Firebenders believe is a Fire Nation soldier, but for that he will need to learn firebending.

Able to find a Fire Nation uniform, he was able to cross the border.

During is travel, he met a young female Firebender who was one year older then him.

Unlike him, she couldn't wait to fight in the great war, which he found pretty sickening that someone could think like that.

Trying to avoid her, she spoted him walking away with is damaged uniform.

Curios, she rush to go talk to him, this led into an unconfortable conversation for Omashu.

Strangely enough, the two started to spend much time together and a bond was form.

However, one day, Kara ask Omashu if he could spar with her, this was it, do or die.

Omashu couldn't say no to her, but he had no knowledge on how to firebend, the only thing he could do is by observing his opponent and try to figure out the secrets of firebending without asking.

He ask her to attack him first so he could train his dodging skills.

She accept and start attacking him.

During that time, Omashu kept watching her motion, her steps, her expression, her breathing, anything that could help him know the secrets of firebending.

Kara was getting impatient and wanted him to strike back.

Omashu had no choice but to firebend, he started concentrating and remembering Kara's attack, and then.......he strike!!

A huge fire ball was released from Omashu and nearly hit Kara.

Shakeng but impress, Kara ask Omashu to continue.

From that moment, Omashu was able to firebend.

Every day since then, They've kept on training each other, learning new firebending skills and trying to surpass one of another.

Months passed, Omashu was starting to forget about why he started this quest, all he could think of was been with Kara.

One day, while he was walking around Fire Nation Capital he came across Kara who was with her father.

when he saw the face of Kara's father, he was shocked.

It was the same men who attack his village when he was 5 years old.

Disturbed, Omashu return to is quaters with is instinct telling him to continue what he started.

Omashu didn't want to leave Kara behind, but he had no choice, it was time for him to leave.

While leaving the capital, a patrol of Firebenders spoted him.

Because he was not wearing his Fire Nation uniform, the Firebenders consinder him a spy of the Earth Kingdom and the hunt was on.

Eventualy, the Firebenders were able catch up with him and forced him to fight.

The Firebenders were completly overwhelm by Omashu's bending talent and power.

He continued runnin toward the shores only to be stopped by Kara herself.

Feeling betrayed, she charge toward him with blind rage without thinking twice.

However, she was no match for him.

Using his earthbending, he was able to trap her.

Before he leave, Kara ask him what he was.

He approach her has if he was about to kiss her and start whispering to her hear, then leaved her alone.

Her father arrived on the scene and freed her, he then ask her who he was.

She tell him:"He's a victime of war".

After leaving the Fire Nation and sailing through the ocean, he was able to reach the Water Tribe.

Omashu was surprise on how he was welcome when he arrived, Has if they were expecting him.

He was welcomed by a waterbending master and told Omashu that it was time for him to learn waterbending.

He ask why.

The master replied that he will get his answer once he's learn waterbending.

Doing what the master ask, he started learning waterbending and succeeded.

A giant owl started hovering over the Water Tribe's palace and ask to meet Omashu.

Omashu arrive to the palace and the owl decended to land.

The owl tell him that for some time now, he's been watching him for a while.

The owl also says that the reason why Omashu is able to learn the four bending element with ease is because of is chakra.

Normal benders have strick chakra that are attracted to one type of element while in Omashu's case, his chakra is so flexible that is able to bend all four elements and because of its sensitivity, he can learn them with ease.

The reason why the owl wanted to meet him was to bring him to his library and to start learning from his researche in order to revealed is true potential, but for that he needed to learn all the elements before.

The owl add that is destiny is even much greater than he think.

Confuse, he accept the owl's request.

The two fly toward the library and for 5 years, study'd inside these walls.

With the knowledge he gain, he left for the center point where the two forces will collide in hope of stoping it.

The Earthbender and the Firebender started to charge when suddenly, Omashu appeared before the impact.

He order the two forces to cease this war immediatly, but they restarted their attack.

Realising that words won't work, Omashu unleashed is full power, turning himself into a giant bright blue spirit with all four elements flowing through his body.

With his immense power, he split one continent into two and the 55 year old war finally ended.

Omashu was able to end the war but with a high price, to unleash is full power he needed to sacrifice everything that he was, even is life in order to become a new entity.

Omashu was no more.

Later, Kara, onboard a Fire Nation ship, was looking for Omashu only to find his lifeless body.

Shocked, Kara broke in tears and hugged him firmly, at that moment she went into a trance.

She start seeing vision of people with great power and then she hears the voice of Omashu.

Omashu-"These are the many lives i will be reborn into. Eventualy one will take the storch and he will be the greatest. He won't be part of my rebirth cycle, but i'll be part of him one day. That person will be the one who glows in a golden aura."

When she awoked, her father was next to her, trying reconfort her.

A week had passed and the entire Earth Kingdom, Fire Nation, Water Tribe and Air Nomads joined once again to celebrate the passing of a great hero and the birth of his citadel situated in the rocky mountains where is birth village once stood.

At that moment, humanity felt what they have long lost, peace.

And from afar, the owl was watching and gave is final words to those willing to listen.

Owl-"And so begins, the Avatar cycle."
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