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| Nicktoons Wars Episode IV: A New Nicktoon; The Nicktoons Wars begins once again! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 27 2006, 06:07 AM (1,065 Views) | |
| JusSonic | Nov 27 2006, 06:07 AM Post #1 |
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Author's note Okay, after a while folks, it's time to parody Episode IV of the Star Wars trilogy with Nicktoons Wars! Let's do this... A Long Time Ago In A Nicktoonly Galaxy Far, Far, Away... NICKTOONS WARS EPISODE IV: A NEW NICKTOON It is a time of civil war as rebel ships from who knows where have managed to get their first victory against the evil Nickless Emprie. During one of their battles, rebels spies has gotten their hands on secret plans to the Empire's ultimate weapon, the Cancel Weapon, which has the power to destroy planets with a push of the button. As of right now, Princess Molly of Alderaan is being pursued by wicked agents of the Nickless Empire while on her away back home on her ship that now has the plans that could save her people and finally restore freedom to the galaxy... |
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| JusSonic | Dec 3 2006, 07:07 PM Post #2 |
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The space above the planet Tatooine was peaceful and calm. That is at first. But then a ship flew above it very fast being pursued by a big ship in a middle of a laser dogfight (so to speak).The big ship belongs to the forces of the Nickless Empire who is winning so far. Inside the small ship itself, rebels was scrambling around getting ready for battle. As they do, two robots are trying to walk through a bouncing pasageway. One of them is a golden-plated dog-like droid and the other is a dumb-looking cat-like droids. Their names are C-REN (Ren Hoek) and R2-SY (Stimpy Cat). Both are old and battered-looking C-REN yelped as the ship got hit by another blast. "Argh! Darn those idiots! They destroy our reactor! Now we're going to get destroyed. This is crazy!" groaned C-REN. He notices the rebels rushing by the two and stopping to take positions at the main passageway. They get ready to fire as soon as they can as they aimed at the door ahead. C-REN groaned. "We are doomed!" "Duh...beep whistle click...joy joy." said R2-SY in concern. "That's right. No way the princess can get out of this one." said C-REN with a sigh. "Beep beep...mudskipper!" Just then some noises are heard, getting the concerns of the rebels and the robots. "I don't like the sound of that." groaned C-REN. And he's right. As of right now, the Imperial ship has overtaken the rebels' ship and drawing it into its dock. Nervously, the rebels kep ttheir weapons at the door. Suddenly the door exploded open and a bunch of white-armored troopers came in. They are Nickless Troopers, soldiers of the Nickless Empire. Soon both sides exchange heavy fire. Nickless Troopers dodged the laser shots while some of them got hit. Same thing with the rebels who either dodged, avoid, or got injured. The robots yelped as one blast hits near them. "Stupid idiots! Watch where you're firing!" yelled C-REN. A laser almost got him making him yell. "I was kidding!" Afterwards, the surviving rebels make a run for it as they soon realized they are outnumbered. As they did, the surviving Nickless Troopers moved aside to let someone in. It is a figure in a body armor that is mixed with orange black colors. He is wearing a mask and looks like some sort of robot. He is feared and known eveyrwhere as the evil Dark Lord of the Sith. His name is Nick Traitor. The cyborg like Sith looks around at the damage. He then makes a command... "Don't let any of them escape. And find me the plans!" boomed Nick Traitor. Nearby, a young Asian girl is installing something into R2-SY. Once she did, she then begins recording some sort of message. "R2-SY!" yelled C-REN as he runs around avoiding the madness as best as he could. "R2-SY, you idiot! Where are you?" He then spots his friend at the end of an alleyway in an alcove. The dog-like droid thought he saw someone with him but due to the smoke, it is hard to see whom it is. Whoever it is, she finishes adjusting on the little droid's face and send him on his way. R2-SY walks dumbly towards his impatient friend. "About time! Where were you?" snapped C-REN angrily. "Duh...beep whistle...Ren." answered R2-SY. "Never mind that! Those troopers are getting close! If they catch us, they will send us to a pound and put us to sleep! Or worst, they could..." C-REN was interrupted when R2-SY walked by him and runs down a hallway. "Hey! Where are you going?" R2-SY farts in his own way. "Get back here!" yelled C-REN as he runs after R2-SY. Soon the battle was order and the surviving rebels were taken away by the Nickless Troopers. One Imperial Officer was send to investigate the computer banks. He returns to Nick Traitor, who is holding the injured form of Captain Snap. "Bad news, jerk. I have check the main computer. But the plans isn't in it." explained the Imperial Officer. Nick Traitor glares at the officer then he speaks to Snap, "All right, you chalky fool. Where are those transmissions you intercepted? Where are the plans?" "Hey, back off, ugly! We didn't intercept nothing!" protested Snap as he gasps a bit. "We were on a diplomatic mission to Alderaan. That is it!" "If that's the case, where's the ambassador?" demands the Sith. Snap refuses to say any more, so Nick Traitor squeezes his throat too hard and soon he could speak no more. Disgusted, Nick Traitor throws the chalky captain to the floor, dead. "Commander, I want you to tear this ship apart if necessary to find those plans! Also, find me any passengers! I want them alive!" yelled Nick Traitor. After nodding quickly, the frighten troopers runs off to do as the Sith lord has ordered. The same girl who was with R2-SY earlier is hidden in an alcove right near some troopers who are searching. She is a young Asian like girl with purple-haired. She frowns. 'I got to do my best to get R2-SY more time to escape and get the plans to the rebels.' thought Molly. For someone who is a member of the Imperial Senate, a somewhat updated version of the once great Nicktoonly Senate, she is definitely not of the bad guys. One of the troopers looked around then spots someone in a passageway. "We found one! Set for stun!" ordered the trooper. Molly didn't have time to waste as she quickly fire a shot, hitting the trooper that spotted her. As the trooper fell, Molly tries to make a run for it, but one of the other troopers hits Molly making her fall. Luckily for her, it was a paralyzing ray. The troopers goes to check on her. "She's alright, only stunned." informed the second trooper. "Inform Lord Traitor we have a prisoner." R2-SY didn't stopped running until he searches an area of the ship where the escape pods were at. Robots were forbidden to use them but right now, that isn't a factor. He got one open and got in. "Hey you!" yelled C-REN as he runs into the area. "You and I know robots aren't permitted in there! Get out you stupid idiot or you will get blasted!" R2-SY say a few things to C-REN, annoying him. "Don't give me that crud! Now get out before someone sees you!" R2-SY then say something else, that ended up confusing C-REN. "What secret mission? What plans? I have no idea what you're talking about! Now get out before..." An explosion occurred alarming C-REN. He quickly jumps into the escape pod. "Move over, fatso!" Once his friend is in, R2-SY pulls a lever, closing the escape pod's door. Soon the escape pod itself blasts out of the ship into space. Inside the Imperial Star Destroyer itself, a group of Imperial pilots and a captain are looking out the viewscreen. Their orders are to destroy any escape pods that contain anyone trying to escape. "There's another one!" said a pilot as he spots an escape pod and gets ready to fire at it. The captain looks at a monitor that can tell if there's any lifeforms on escape pods or not and said, "Hold it. Don't bother. There is no life forms on that. Musta short-circuited. Let it go." Too bad the captain did not realized that letting it go is a bad idea. Inside the escape pod, unaware that they were spare a cruel fate, C-REN looked out the window in amazement. "That's funny, the damage doesn't look as bad from out here." said C-REN in amazement. "Duh...happy happy...joy joy." said R2-SY in agreement. "Is this thing even safe?" The escape pod continues on its way flying towards the planet Tatooine below. Back on the rebels' ship, Molly scowled as she is being lead off by the troopers. She is bound and shoved by her captors. She scowled further as she is forced to stop in front of the most familiar figure in the galaxy. "Well, well. Nick Traitor." said Molly frowning at the Sith Lord. "Figures you would pull a traitorous stunt like this! Wait until the senate hears about this. When they find out you attack a diplomatic..." "Can the so-called anger, princess!" snapped Nick Traitor, interrupting Molly. "There is no mercy mission this time. You passed directly through a restricted system. Several transmissions were beamed to this ship by Rebel spies. I want to know what happened to the plans they sent you." "I have no idea what you're talking about, creep! I am a member of the Imperial Senate on a diplomatic mission to Alderaan!" "Bah! You are part of the Rebel Alliance and a traitor! Take her away!" As the troopers take Molly away, a concern commander walked by Nick Traitor as he walks away. "Sir, I am not sure if we could hold her. When this comes out, it will caused nothing more than sympathy for the Rebellion in the senate." informed the commander. "I know the rebel spies are link to her, I am never wrong! She is our last hope now to finding their base!" said Nick Traitor roughly. "Well, she may died before she tells you anything." "I will be the judge of that! Now I want you to send a message informing the senate that everyone on board this ship was killed!" "Lord Traitor," said an officer as he runs up to the Sith Lord who looked at him. "The plans for the battle station isn't on this ship. We check. And we can't find any transmissions. One escape pod did launch off during the fighting but there's no one on board." Nick Traitor pauses to think on this. Then he said, "Perhaps she hid the plans in the escape pod. Expecting someone to find them?" Then to the commander, "Send a group down to the planet below to get them and see to it personally. There will be no one to stop us this time!" "Yes, sir." nods the commander as he walks off to do what Nick Traitor has said. Nick Traitor has a good reason not to go down to the planet below. It is Tatooine. He has very personal reasons but he never told anyone. At least, anyone who doesn't live to tell about it. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 6 2006, 07:20 PM Post #3 |
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Down on Tatooine below, C-REN and R2-SY exit the escape pod and walked across the desert wasteland. Of course, it is very hot and C-REN is sweating oil. "How did we get into this crap? What are we, glutton for punishment?" complained C-REN. "Duh...happy happy...joy joy." responded R2-SY. "Ugh. I must get a rest before I fall to pieces." He groans as he looks around. "I have no idea what this place is, but I hate it already!" Suddenly R2 made a noise and makes a beeline for the rocky desert mesas nearby. "Hey! Where are you going, you stupid?" demanded C-REN annoyed. R2-SY responded quickly but C-REN just frowns. "That place is too rocky! No way in heck are you making me go over there! The way I am going to much easier!" R2-SY made a long whistle. "What makes you think anyone is living over there?" asked C-REN still not believing for a second that there is anyone living over there. "Duh...beep whistle...duh!" responded R2-SY. "Don't get that way with me! Besides, what plans or mission? ARGH! I have enough with you! Go ahead! Go the way you want to go! You will break down in a day, you useless junkyard!" C-REN yelled as he kicked R2-SY. He then turned in the opposite direction, walking away. "And don't bother coming to me for some help! I won't give you anything!" R2-SY yelps and tries to get his friend's adventure. C-REN, however, kept on going. "I am not going on any more of your idiotic adventures! I am not going that way!" snapped C-REN angrily as he storms away. 'He will regret going that way. I will find something going this way.' Turns out C-REN was wrong. As he kept on going, all he keeps finding is a bunch of sand that seems to go on for miles. C-REN is getting more hot and tired than ever. "That fat idiot!" groaned C-REN as he turns around to look at the now distant mesas. "This is his fault! He tricked me in going this way! Well, not that he'd do any better." Just as the dog droid looks like he's about to give up on hope, he sees a glint of a reflected light. After looking closer, C-REN realizes that something is coming. "Yes! Praise the gods! Something's coming!" cheered C-REN, believing it to be a rescue. He yelled out the coming object. "Hey! Over here! Help!" What C-REN doesn't know that it isn't the welcome wagon he's about to meet. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 9 2006, 06:39 PM Post #4 |
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R2-SY looked around where he's at. He moves around very cautiously at the rock canyon. The whole place is quiet. Too quiet. R2-SY stopped when he thought he heard something. When he is certain it was nothing, he continues on. Before the cat robot could get too far, something jumps in front of him and zaps him making him scream in shock. He groans a bit before falling back, deactivated. Whatever it is observed him. It is some sort of cloaked monk like guy. He nods and yells to something nearby. The monk's fellows monk rushed onto the scene then they picked the robot up by their shoulders and begin to carry off with him. They took the little robot out of the canyon to a big llama-shaped tank waiting nearby. They dropped him under some tubes and places a disk on it. It's a restraining bolt so the robot couldn't get away. The monks stepped back allowing the tube to suck the little robot right into the tank. Cheering happily at their new fine, they climbed up nearby ladders into the tank itself. After R2-SY groaned and woke up, he turns a light on and looked around. He sees that he is inside some sort of scrap room with robots either messed up, abandoned, stolen, etc. Either way, they are either unkind or mean-looking. This freaks R2 out a bit. R2-SY crawls around the whole room, looking for someone familiar to him. The robots he sees pays no attention to him. Just then a voice yelled out, "R2?" R2-SY turned and sees a happy yet messed-up C-REN running towards. Once he came over, he hugs the little robot and groaned, "Oh it is you! This is crazy! I thought it was a rescue but now we're doomed!" "Duh...whistle beep...joy." remarked R2-SY. The troopers check the part of the desert where the escape pod was at. Some of them are riding rhinos looking for whatever could be in the pod when it landed. Further investigations turned up no trace of the stolen plans. "Something got to be in the pod. The tracks go off in this direction." said the trooper pointing to the tracks going to a direction. "Look, sir!" said another trooper holding out some parts nearby. "Droids!" The first trooper nodded. Now that they know what they're looking for, it will be only a matter of time before they find them...and destroy anyone who tries to stop them from doing so. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 12 2006, 10:48 PM Post #5 |
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Meanwhile as the tank crawls throughout the desert, it soon stops at a location. Inside the tank, C-REN noticed and whacked R2-SY, who was sleeping, yelling, "Wake up, stupid! We stop!" The other robots noticed that they stopped and made quite a commotion. Just then, a hatch at the far end opens up and the monks came in. "We're doomed." groaned C-REN. "They're going to melt us down! I know it!" "Duh...whistle beep beep...duh." remarked R2-SY. C-REN yelped as a monk comes near him with a blaster, "Don't shoot! I'd go peacefully! Will this crap ever ended?" Outside, the robots are being lined up by the monks who are getting them ready to sell. The tank has stopped near a homestead. As the monks clean up the robots up, two figures came out of a dingly-side building of the homestead. An orange haired man in a messed-up coat came out followed by a purple-haired boy in a white coat and such. A monk approached the and speaks in a language. The man nodded and said, "Okay, let's see what you guys got." Before the boy could followed, a voice yelled, "Tommy? Tommy Skywalker Jr.!" Tommy Skywalker Jr. goes to a hole that forms the homestead and looked in. A brown-haired twin-like woman is standing in the courtyard. "Hey Tommy, tell Dil that if he gets one of those translating droids, it got to speak Bocce." The woman told him. Tommy Jr. smirked and said, "We may not have a voice, Aunt Lil, but I will tell him." As Tommy Jr. turned around and goes to the line, his uncle Dil is looking over the robots. He rejected some. Then he stops in front of C-REN. "Let me guess, you're programmed for etiquette and protocol, right?" asked Dil boredly. "Aw heck! That is my main function!" said C-REN proudly. "I have..." "Forget it. I have no use for a protocol droid." said Dil shaking his head as he begins to walk off. "Hey, you dope! You won't need a protocol droid! At least, not in this crappy place. I have been programmed..." Dil interrupts C-REN with a frown, "All I need is a robot that can at least understands the binary language of moisture vaporators." "Ha! Vaporators? I know about those! I once worked on programming binary load lifters." said C-REN proudly. "They are very simplier to your vaporators." "Okay, can you speak Bocce?" asked Dil. "Yep, and many other languages..." "Okay, I'd take him and him." said Dil pointing to C-REN and another robot. He turns to his nephew saying, "Tommy, make sure these robots are clean up before dinner." "But I was going into Tosche Station to pick up some power converters..." whinned Tommy Jr. in protest. "You can mess with your pals later. Just do what I ask!" Tommy Jr. groaned then he sighs as he said to C-REN and the robot, "Let's go, guys." As the monks started loading the robots back in the tank, R2-SY cried in fear, not wanting to be separated from his long time friend. He tries to follow C-REN but a monk jumps in front of him and stops him with a control box. C-REN turned and frowns. Although he doesn't give a care, he secretly wishes he can do something for his friend. Looks like his wish has come true. Before Tommy Jr. and C-REN were almost to the garage, the robot who were with them exploded, alarming them. Tommy Jr. looked the robot over then speaks to his uncle who is paying the head monk, "Uh, Uncle Dil?" "What, Tommy?" asked Dil turning towards him. "This R2 unit has a bad motivator. Look!" said the boy pointing at the robot. Dil sees the robot then glares angrily at the monk. "What is this? Some sort of con artist trick? I have friends in high places, you know!" As the head monk argues with Dil, R2-SY waves and jumps up and down getting attention. C-REN notices. Now is the time. "Uh, hey," said C-REN to Tommy Jr as he points at R2-SY. "That R2 unit is in good condition and he won't blow up." Tommy Jr. paused to think then he called out to Dil as he points at R2-SY, "Hey, Uncle Dil, how about that one?" Dil sees R2-SY then turned back to the head monk, "Okay, we'd exchange the broken down robot for that one." Wanting to avoid a lawsuit. the head monk quickly agreed to make the switch. As the other monks take the broken down robot back into the tank, R2-SY eagerly runs over to C-REN and Tommy Jr. "Well, he may be stupid but you will be happy with him. I'd worked with him before and well...he's care-free." said C-REN with a bit of disgust. Tommy Jr. chuckles then he said, "Come on, let's go." C-REN glares at R2-SY annoyed as they followed Tommy Jr., "Just be glad I help you at all, stupid! Why I stick my butt out for you, I don't want to know!" |
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| JusSonic | Dec 16 2006, 06:42 PM Post #6 |
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Once Tommy Jr., C-REN, and R2-SY got to the garage, the boy starts work on cleaning them up. He puts C-REN in a tub fill with oil while R2-SY is resting with a cord from a battery on its face. "Thank the maker whoever he is." sighs C-REN as the tub with him begins to lower. "It's great to be clean after all that cruddy sand I pick up out here." Tommy Jr. pays him no attention as he plays with a model of a ship. He wishes for someday to leave the farm and live a life of a pilot. But then he remembers why he couldn't and throws the ship with a groan. "This stinks! Mikey is right. I will never get out of this place!" groaned Tommy Jr. Mikey Darklighter is a friend of his who once works for the Nickless Empire. Mikey was his best friend who uses to lived on Tatooine until he got accepted at the Academy. Mikey visited recently and surprised Tommy Jr. by telling him he is going to joined the rebels to fight the Empire. Tommy Jr. thought that to be impossible since not even the Empire could find out where they are hiding. "You want us to help?" asked C-REN. "Try altering time, speed up the harvest, or get me off his heckhole!" snapped Tommy Jr. at C-REN. "Hey, what do you think I am? A wizard? I'm a robot and I can't do those things! At least, not on this planet." C-REN looks around. He has no idea where he is or any knowledge. "Err, where are we anyway?" "Well, if there's a bright center to the universe, you're on the planet that it's farthest from. IM Tatooine." sighs Tommy Jr. as he goes to unplug R2-SY. "So this is Tatooine, sir?" "Please. Call me Tommy." said the boy. "Okay, sir Tommy." Tommy laughs. "Just called me, Tommy okay?" "Fair enough. My name is C-REN, Human/Cyborg/Hoek relations and this idiot is R2-SY." C-REN said nodding towards R2-SY. "Hey." said Tommy Jr. to R2-SY who greets him in his usual way. After Tommy Jr. unplugs him, he begins to clean up R2-SY. As C-REN got out of the tub and cleans himself up, the boy notes a few scratches on R2-SY. "Looks like you guys have been through a rough time. Let me guess, you have been through some battles, right?" "Ha! We're lucky we're still alive after that idiotic moronic stuff with the Rebellion!" snapped C-REN. Upon hearing that, Tommy Jr. looked up surprised. "You knew of the Rebellion against the Nickless Empire?!" "Well, that is how we came to be here." "Neat. How many battles you were in?" Tommy Jr. said interested. Suddenly, these robots aren't so pathetic as he used to thought. "Don't know and I don't care. I only translate stuff, not tell stories. Besides, no one cares about them anyway." C-REN said with a frown. Tommy Jr. notes a small fragment on R2's neck joint and uses a large pick to remove it. "Well, you got something jammed in here. Tell me, were you on a cruiser or..." Tommy Jr. finally got the fragment loose, however, sending him back. As he got up, he sees that the little cat robot is showing some sort of hologram. Tommy Jr. sees that the hologram is that of a girl. His mouth hangs open in awe as he sees this as the hologram say, "Help Me, Obi-Tim Kenobi. You're my only hope". "Whoa! Who is that?" Tommy Jr. asked in awe and perhaps a little lovestruck. "Duh...beep whistle...happy happy?" R2-SY say innocently sheepishly as the hologram keeps saying the same message over and over." "What is what?" snapped C-REN annoyed as he slaps his partner. "You idiotic cave creep! He asked you a question! Who is that?!" R2-SY whistles innocently, pretending not to know. It's not that he's rude or anything but he made a promise to the girl whose message he has recorded not to let anyone but the right person know about the message, which last part is playing over and over again. After R2-SY say something to C-REN, the robot groans and said, "He said it's nothing to concern about. Just a malfunction and to ignore it." Tommy Jr. did not care enough to ignore it as he became fascinated by the girl in the hologram. "Who is she? She's beautiful." whispered Tommy Jr. "How should I know? Maybe she's a passenger on our last voyage. I think she's important." C-REN said as he looks at the messenge himself. The captain is attached to..." "There's got to be more to this message." Excited, Tommy Jr. goes towards R2-SY in hopes to get more of the message out, but R2-SY backs out making whistles and protests. "Oh, let him see that message!" snapped C-REN at his partner in annoyance. "He's our new master now! Stop getting us in trouble, you can trust him!" R2-SY whistles a long message to C-REN, who just frowns. "Idiot!" "What did he say?" asked Tommy Jr. "Something about being property of some guy named Obi-Tim Kenobi who is supposed to lived around here. This message was for him but I think he's just being more stupid than usual. I have no idea what he's talking about and besides, our last master is Captain Snap. He is probably being eccentric or something." "Obi-Tim Kenobi?" asked Tommy Jr. as he looks on in thought. "Does he mean old Chin Kenobi?" "Eh?" asked C-REN looking up puzzled. "Well I don't know anyone named Obi-Tim Kenobi, but there is a hermit named Chin Kenobi. He is very strange and keeps to himself out in the desert." explained Tommy Jr. "My uncle doesn't like him for some reason." He looks at the hologram, that is still repeating itself and sighs happily. Then he looks concern, "I got to find out who she is. She got to be in trouble or something. I got to see the whole thing!" "Happy happy...whistle beep whistle...joy joy." explained R2-SY. "He said that the restraining bolts those monks put on him is messing with his record system." explained C-REN. "He suggested on removing it and he may play the whole message back." Tommy Jr., who isn't really listening to what C-REN is saying because he is looking longingly at the girl, is not sure he wants to restore the restraining bolt because it's the only thing to keep robots from escaping. But he wants to see the whole message so... "Aw, why not. You are too small to run from me anyway especially when I take this off." Tommy Jr. say as he takes out a bar and uses it to remove the restraining bolt. "Okay, here we go." When the boy turned however, the hologram has disappeared. Tommy Jr. looks shocked. "Hey, what gives? Bring her back! I want to see the whole message!" "Duh...beep whistle...joy?" asked R2-SY innocently asking what message. "The message you have in you, you idiot!" yelled C-REN angrily as he whacks the little robot upside the head. "Tommy! It's time for dinner!" called Lil from the dining area. "All right, I'd be right, Aunt Lil!" Tommy Jr. called back. He groans as he gets up. "Sorry about that, he is always a stubborn son of a gun." C-REN remarked as he glares at R2-SY. "I got to go to dinner, guys." said Tommy Jr. as he hands R2-SY's restraining bolt to C-REN. "See if you could get him to play the message again, okay? I should be back soon." As Tommy Jr. leaves, C-REN growled as he glares at R2-SY, "You reconsider playing that message for him!" "Happy...whistle...happy?" asked R2-SY in concern. "No! He doesn't like you!" A beep made C-REN frowns and turned away. "And I hate you too!" Inside the dining area, both Dil and Lil have sat down preparing to eat by the time Tommy Jr. arrived. "You think, that cat robot we bought was stolen." said Tommy Jr. as he sat down. Dil just grumped. "So? Those monks would steal anything not nailed down. Besides, what gave you an idea like that?" "Well, I found a message in it while I was cleaning it. He said to belong to some guy named Obi-Tim Kenobi." After Tommy Jr. said this, Lil looks concerned as did Dil who managed to control himself. Tommy Jr. then said, "You think he means old Chin? Or could this Obi-Tim be related to him?" "Forget it!" snapped Dil angrily. "That Chin guy is a crazy nut anyway! When tomorrow comes, take that cat droid to Anchorhead and have it memory erased! That will be the end of it. It belongs to us now!" "But what if this Obi-Tim comes by looking for him?" Dil sighs as he said, "He won't. He doesn't exist anymore because he died the same time as your father." "He knew my dad?" asked Tommy Jr., surprised upon hearing this. All his life he never knew his parents because he spend his whole life living with his aunt and uncle. He was always told they died when he was born. "Look, I said forget it! Right now, all you should think about is getting those robots ready for tomorrow. I want them on the south ridge working on those condensors." Dil told his nephew sternly. "Right." Tommy Jr. said nodding. He then remembered something and smiled. "Those bots should turn out fine. In fact, it reminds me of the deal we made. You know, the one where if I stay on for another season? And if those robots turned out fine, I can send my application to the Academy this year." "Wait, you mean the next semester before the harvest?" asked Dil alarmed. "Uh yeah?" "But the harvest is when I need you the most! It's only one more season. The way I figure, when we earn enough from the harvest, I can hired some more help. You can go to the Academy next year." Tommy Jr. groans as he just toys with his food. Dil sighs sadly as he said, "Seriously, you must understand that I need you here." "But it's a whole another year!" exclaimed Tommy Jr. in frustration. He hates it when his uncle just keeps him around. He has a future, he doesn't want to lose it! "It's only one more season." Dil insisted. Tommy Jr. scoffed as he got up. "Sure. You said that when Gonard and Mikey left!" "Where are you going?" asked Lil in concern. "Nowhere! I will finish cleaning those robots up!" snapped the boy as he storms out of the dining area. Lil sighs in pity as she said to her husband, "You can't keep him here forever, Dil. Most of his friends are gone. This Academy means so much to him." "Look, I can make it up to him next year, I promise." insisted Dil as he goes back to eating. "Our nephew is no farmer. He has too much of his father in him." When she said this, it concerned Dil a whoel lot. "That is what troubles me." As Tommy Jr. walks up almost outside the homestead, he looks at the twin suns that are disappearing from a distant dune range. After watching for a while, he sighs as he goes back into the homestead. As he enters the garage to finished what he intends on doing, he notices that the robots are nowhere in sight. He takes out a control box like the ones the monks has and pushed a button. Suddenly a familiar robot yelled out as he got out from hiding. "Oh there you are." Tommy Jr. said with a smirk as he spots C-REN. "What are you doing back there?" "You can't blame this on me! Don't deactivate me! I told him not to go but he insisted! Keeps on blabbing about his 'secret mission'." yelled C-REN. "Oh no!" said Tommy Jr. in shock. R2-SY has escaped! Tommy Jr. runs out of the garage followed by C-REN. When the two goes to the entry of the homstead, Tommy Jr. takes out a pair of electronic binoculars and uses them to looked around. "That R2-SY is always a pain in my butt!" whinned C-REN. "His kind always can go out of hand. I don't understand them at all!" "Oh man. I am so stupid to let him make me take that restraining bolt off!" groaned Tommy Jr. as he puts the binocualrs. "He is nowhere in sight!" "Well, let's go after him then!" "Can't. It's too dangerous with those Tusken Raiders around." said Tommy Jr. frowning. Tusken Raiders are masked creatures who are known to attack anyone who disturbs him or whenever they feel like it. "We will have to wait until morning." "Tommy! I am turning the power off for tonight!" yelled Dil from the homestead plaza. "Okay. I'd be right there." Tommy Jr. yelled back. He groans. "Man I am going to get it. That little cat is going to cause me a lot of trouble." "I say. When we find him, I'm going to kick his butt! Then I'd killed him again!" yelled C-REN in frustration. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 17 2006, 08:18 PM Post #7 |
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The next day, Dil walked around looking for Tommy Jr. "Tommy? Tommy?" called out Dil. When he got no answer, Dil heads to the kitchen where Lil is cooking breakfast. "Hey Lil. You know where Tommy is at?" Dil asked his wife. "I don't know. Something about getting some things done before he works. I guess he must have took the robots with him. I haven't seen them in a while." Lil said with a shrug. Dil frowned. As he left, he remarked, "Well, he better get those units in the south range repaired by midday or all heck will break loose." Tommy Jr. and C-REN are in a landspeeder, searching the desert for R2-SY. C-REN was driving. "Hey, my scanner's picking up a robot. Must be our friend." said Tommy Jr. looking at the scanner. "Go faster." As the dog like droid did so, neither he or Tommy Jr. sees a figure lurking over a rock mesa. The creature takes out a rifle and aims it at the landspeeder. However, another figure stops him, taking the gun away before it was fired. The two speaks in a language getting in argument. Eventually, the second figure won as they left and get on two Bison like creatures waiting nearby. After saying 'yip, yip', they fly off. Once C-REN parks the landspeeder, he and Tommy Jr. runs up and runs up near R2-SY. "Hold it! Where do you think you're going?" asked Tommy Jr. chuckling in amusement. "Duh...beep whistle...duh!" explained R2-SY. "Oh shut up about that Obi-Tim nonsense and that stupid mission!" yelled C-REN angrily. "Master Tommy Jr. is your rightful owner now. Just be glad he didn't have you blasted into pieces right here!" "It's alright, C-REN. We gotta go." Tommy Jr. said as he begins to walked off. Suddenly R2-SY looked alarmed and yells and duhs like crazy. "What's wrong with him?" asked Tommy Jr. in concern. "He said some freaks are coming from the southeast." said C-REN very scared. "Tusken Raiders! Or worst! We better check." groaned Tommy Jr. On top of a ridge, Tommy Jr. is scanning the canyon with his binoculars. So far, he only spotted two Bisons. C-REN tries to see the scene. "Well, I see two Bisons but no..." Tommy Jr. cut short as he sees a figure going near the Bison. "Wait. It's Tusken Raiders alright. There's one of them now." Suddenly something got in the way of his view. He and C-REN looks up as a Tusken Raider is in front of them making a warcry. C-REN yelps and backs up, only to fell down the cliff he climbs up on. The Raider takes out its deadly warclub and tries to hit the boy with it. Tommy Jr. managed to block the blow with his gun. However it got smashed to pieces in the progress. The boy scrambled backwards and soon finds himself trapped as the Raider stands over him with its weapon raised and yells out its warcry again. R2-SY, expecting something to be wrong, was forced to hide in the shadows of a small alcove nearby. Sure enough, he sees that he's right as the Tusken Raiders arrived, bringing an inert Tommy Jr. with them. After they throw Tommy Jr. to the ground, the Raiders begins to search through the landspeeder, hoping to find something useful for them, throwing stuff they consider useless out. Suddenly they stop as a howling noise is heard. They looked around alarmed and was forced to run off ln terror leaving Tommy Jr. and the vehicle alone. As R2-SY looked alarmed as the noise that scared off the Raiders got closer, he sees that the noise suddenly slows down when a figure wearing a cloak and hood that covers the face appeared. The figure checks Tommy Jr., inspecting for injuries. When it is assured that the boy is okay, the figure removes the hood. The figure is revealed to be an old man with a white beard and buck-toothed teeth. He senses that he is not alone as he turned and sees C-REN. He chuckled as he said, "Come on out. I won't hurt you." R2-SY, realizing that this man was no threat, came out of hiding. He makes his concern about the poor boy. The man smirked. "Not to worry. He's okay. See?" The man put his hand on Tommy Jr.'s forehead and he soon slowly awakens. "You better rest easy, Tommy. You have a rough day. You are fortunate to still be alive." Tommy Jr. blinks his eyes as he looks at the man. He then recognizes him. "Chin? Chin Kenobi? Man, I'm glad to see you!" Tommy Jr. said in relief. Although his uncle doesn't like Chin, Tommy Jr. is always glad to see him. Whenever his aunt and uncle doesn't see him, at least. "This place is very rough and not to be travelled lightly. But you got to have a good reason to come out here though." said Chin nodding. "Actually I do have a good reason." said Tommy Jr. He explains as he nods towards R2-SY. "This robot here is looking for his former master. I have never seen this much devotion in a robot before! He claims to belong to someone named Obi-Tim Kenobi. Do you know him? Any relative of yours?" The man chuckled as he ponders his beard. "Well, well. Obi-Tim Kenobi. Now that's a name I haven't heard in a long time. A long time." chuckled Chin. "You won't find him, that's for sure. Uncle Dil told me he was dead. I think he knew him." "Nah. He isn't dead. Not yet anyway." "Do you know him?" The man smirked as he points to himself, "Well, duh! He's me!" Tommy Jr. and R2-SY looked amazed and/or surprised as Chin, now revealed to be Obi-Tim, continued, "I haven't use the name of Obi-Tim Kenobi since, oh before you were born." "Well, looks like R2-SY does belong to you then." said Tommy Jr. with a shrug. "Weird. I don't recall owning the droid." Tommy Jr. thought he sees a smile and a look of recognization at the little robot on his face but he decided he imagined it. Obi-Tim looked up and frown. "Better get inside. Those Tusken Raiders must be easily startled, but they will be back and in bigger numbers." said Obi-Tim as he stood up. As Tommy Jr. gets back up, R2-SY made out some cries and concerns. This caused Tommy Jr. to remember something. "Oh crud! C-REN!" yelled Tommy Jr. The boy, the man, and the robot found C-REN nearby at the bottom of the ridge he fell off of. The dog-like robot groaned as they got near. "Where am I? Geez, this is stupid." groaned C-REN. "You think you could stand? We better get into hiding before those Tusken Raiders get back." said Tommy Jr. "I don't think so. Go without me! No need to worry about me!" Tommy Jr., however, will have none of that. Especially R2-SY who beeps his concern. "No way! What kind of talk is that?" said Tommy Jr. frowning. "Come on. They're on the move." warned Obi-Tim as the two picked up C-REN and begins taking him to where Obi-Tim lives at. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 19 2006, 08:48 PM Post #8 |
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The dwelling where Obi-Tim lives at is a big mess. But it is still home that provide warmth and comfort and that's that. As Tommy Jr. works on C-REN's arm, he listens as Obi-Tim tell stuff about his father, the original Tommy Skywalker, that he didn't knew before. He just laughed it off though. "That's crazy! My dad didn't fight in the wars! He was a space freighter's naviagtor!" Obi-Tim smirked however as he said, "That is what your uncle wanted you to think. He didn't approve of your father's ideals and wanted him to stay and be a farmer instead of fighting in the wars like I have." Tommy Jr. turned and look astounded. "You fought in the X-Clone Wars? You? Of all people?" "Yes. I was a Jedi Knight, like your father." Tommy Jr. sighs sadly. "I wish I knew him." "He was the best darn pilot I have ever seen in my life, and a kick butt warrior. You were a great pilot yourself from what I have heard and seen." Tommy Jr. smiles in approval when Obi-Tim said that. Obi-Tim sighs sadly as he said, "And he was a good friend. Oh, that reminds me of something..." Obi-Tim got up and goes to a chest near the other end of the room as Tommy Jr. finished fixing up C-REN. As the old Jedi Knight goes through the chest, he said, "Your father said he wanted his son to have this. I wanted to give this to you before but your uncle wouldn't allow it. He feared you might follow old Obi-Tim on some darned-fool idealistic crusade like your father did." Obi-Tim chuckled at that. "I think I will shut myself off for a while." C-REN told Tommy Jr. "Go ahead. I won't need ya for a while." Tommy Jr. said before the dog-like robot turned himself off completely. Obi-Tim comes over and gave the boy some sort of saber like device. He looked it over and asked, "What is it?" "It is called a lightsaber, a weapon always used by the Jedi Knight. It isn't clumsy and random as a blaster, I assured you." explained Obi-Tim. Tommy Jr. decides to try it out and pushed a button on the side of the lightsaber. A beam came out of it. Tommy Jr. looked amazed as he swings it around, being careful not to hit anyone or anything with it. As he does, the Jedi Knight continues, looking grim as he does,"It is an important weapon in a whole new world. For over a thousand generations the Jedi Knights were the guardians of peace and justice in the Old Nick Republic. Before the dark times, before the Nickless Empire." Tommy Jr. turned the lightsaber off, absorbing what Obi-Tim has said. He looks serious as he begin to ask, "Tell me. What happened to my father?" Obi-Tim looked at the young man very sadly, "You see, I used to have an apprentice by the name of Nick Traitor. He used to be my pupil until he turned evil and helped the Nickless Empire hunt down and destroyed the Jedi Knights. Sadly, he betrayed and killed your father." Tommy Jr. looked sad as Obi-Tim continued, "Only a few Jedi are alive, including me, but even I am not for certain now. Nick Traitor was secluded by the dark side of the Force." "The Force?" asked Tommy Jr. puzzled. He hasn't heard anything like it before. "Well, the Force is what gives a Jedi his power. It's an energy field created by all living things. It surrounds us and penetrates us. It binds the galaxy together." As Tommy Jr. pauses to think, R2-SY makes some noises to get attention. Obi-Tim smiles as he got up and goes over to him. "Now then, we'd see if we can't figure out what you are and where you're from, my little friend." said the Jedi Knight as he fiddle with the robot. 'Oh, right. In the midst of things, I forgot why R2-SY was here to begin with.' thought Tommy Jr. Then he spoke up. "I saw part of the message before. Now..." "I think I got it." said Obi-Tim interrupted Tommy Jr. as the hologram that Tommy Jr. saw before appeared once more. This time, the beginning was different. "General Kenobi, years ago you served my father in the X-Clone Wars. Now he begs you to help him in his struggle against the Nickless Empire. I regret that I am unable to present my father's request to you in person, but my ship has fallen under attack and I'm afraid my mission to bring you to Alderaan has failed. I have placed information vital to the survival of the Rebellion into the memory systems of this R2 unit. My father will know how to retrieve it. You must see this droid safely delivered to him on Alderaan. This is our most desperate hour. Help me, Obi-Tim Kenobi, you're my only hope." said the girl's message. Soon the hologram disappears, meaning that is all the girl has to say in the message. Obi-Tim pauses to think while Tommy Jr. stares on dreamly at where the girl used to be. Just then, his dreams was cut short as Obi-Tim spoke up, "Well, if you want to come with me to Alderaan, we better get you training in the ways of the Force." "What? No way!" protested Tommy Jr. alarmed as he stood up. "I can't go to to Alderaan! I get home! My uncle is going to killed me!" "Tommy, I need your help and so does the girl in the message. I can't continue fighting the good fight forever. I need someone to continue on." explained Obi-Tim with a frown. "Look, I can't involve! It's not that I like the Nickless Empires, heck, I hate those goons! But I can't do anything about it. It's a long way from here." Obi-Tim sighs as he said, "That's your uncle talking, not you." Tommy Jr. groaned as he glances at R2-SY. "Man, how am I going to explain this to him?" "Simple. Don't. Learn the way of the Force, Tommy." Tommy Jr. paused and sighs, "Look, all I can do is take you to Anchorhead and see if you can get a ride to Mos Eisley or wherever from there." 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| JusSonic | Dec 20 2006, 10:40 PM Post #9 |
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Somewhere in space lies a huge space station. This isn't any normal space station. This is the infamous Cancel Weapon, which has the power to destroy planets with a push of a button. In the conference room somewhere in this space station, Imperial senators and governors alike are having a meeting, discussing their latest situation. "Until this space station is ready, we are open to attack." said Commander Roger Klotz with a frown. (Note: Yeah, I am using characters I used already. Got a problem?) "The Rebels are more dangerous than you realized thanks to their fully-equipped status." "Ha! You may think they are dangerous, but only to your fleet, not to this station." sneered Admiral Zhao with a smirk. "If the Imperial Senate keeps supporting these rebels..." "They won't anymore." The group in the room turned as a man came in followed by Nick Traitor. This man is well known through the Nickless Empire and before its formation. Heis name is Governor Plasmius. The generals stood and bow in respect before sitting back down. As Plasmius sat down at the head of the table, he continued, "They won't be a problem to us anymore. I got word that our beloved emperor Visaru has dissolved the council...literally. No more of the old Nick Republic will be found." "That's crazy!" said Roger in disbelief. "How will the emperor keep control now?" Plasmius chuckled. "Simple. The regional governors now have direct control over territories. Fear will keep the local systems in line. Fear of this battle station." "And the rebels? If they managed to get the plans to the Cancel Weapon, they may, however unlikely, find a weakness to use it to their advantage!" "Never you mind." Nick Traitor said joining in. "We will get those plans back soon." Admiral Zhao glared at the Sith Lord. He has never liked this guy during the time he knew him and he doesn't like him now. "Even if the rebels do get the data they needed, they won't stop this station! We now have the most powerful weapon ever. We better use it while the getting's good!" If the Sith Lord could frown, he did a good job not showing it. "Don't be too proud of this technological terror you've constructed. The ability to destroy a planet is insignificant next to the power of the Force." Zhao rolled his eyes as he snapped, "Don't try to scare us with that stupid old magic, Traitor! Your devotation to that old religion didn't help you any! Heck it didn't even help you get those plans back and find the rebels' hidden b..." Zhao suddenly was interrupted when he felt his throat being choked, making him gasp for air. Nick Traitor did not like his backtalk and is using the Force to choke him. "I find your lack of faith disturbing." boomed Nick Traitor as he continues. "Nick Traitor, enough. Release him." ordered Governor Plasmius. "Very well." The Sith Lord said as he turns away releasing Zhao. Zhao crashed onto the table, managing to get some air in. The governor chuckled in amusement as he added, "Let that be a lesson to you, Zhao. Never challenged the Emperor's second in command. He will give us the location of the rebel base. By then, when this space station is finished, we will crush the Rebellion once and for all!!!" |
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| JusSonic | Dec 22 2006, 05:16 PM Post #10 |
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Back on planet Tatooine, Tommy Jr. was driving the landspeeder to take Obi-Tim to where he (Tommy Jr.) needed to go. As they continue on, they spot something and dropped. To their surprise, it is a destroyed llama tank with dead monk bodies lying around. They look around after they got out. "Looks like the Tusken Raiders did so. You can even see the sticks they use and the tracks." said Tommy Jr. in disbelief. "I've never seen them hitting something this big before!" "They didn't but someone wants us to think they did." said Obi-Tim grimly as he take a good look at the tracks. "These tracks are side by side. The Tusken Raiders always ride separately so no one can guess how many they are." Tommy Jr. took a look at the llama tank's number. He looked horrified as he recognized it. "I have seen these numbers before! These must be the same monks who own us C-REN and R2-SY!" exclaimed Tommy Jr. "See these blast points?" asked Obi-Tim pointing to some blast marks on the side of a tank. "This is too accurate even for the Raiders. No, my only conclusion is that the Nickless troopers are responsible for this." "But why would they killed monks?" asked Tommy Jr. puzzled. Then after seeing the robots, he suddenly got a big thought. "Maybe...they are after C-REN and R2-SY. If that's the case, they could find out whom the monks sold them to. And..." He then got a horror look on his face. "It could lead them back...home!" Tommy Jr., horrified, run to his landspeeder. "Tommy, wait! It's too dangerous!" warned Obi-Tim. But it's too late as the boy drove off quickly back home. The boy hopes to get there before the troopers do and warned his uncle Dil and aunt Lil. As he arrives, however, he realized that he was too late as he sees smoke coming from the homestead. The whole place is trashed and set on fire. As Tommy Jr. stops the landspeeder stops and got out, he runs calling, hoping that his aunt and uncle are still alive. "Uncle Dil! Aunt Lil! Uncle Dil!" called out Tommy Jr. 'Please, please. Don't let the worst come to pass.' But then as he got closer, he stops and looks horrified. He sees two remains of two figures that were obviously slaughtered by the Nickless troopers. Tommy Jr. did not need to go further to see whose remains they are... Uncle Dil and aunt Lil. He is stunned and didn't speak. An upset look came over his face. Princess Molly lies in her cell, waiting her fate. She knew what her captors have in store for her. But no matter what, she will refused to talk. Instead, she tries to figure out a way to escape. But her thoughts were interrupted as her cell door opens letting in a certain Sith Lord and his men to come in. "Now, your highness, it's time we talk about the location of where your friends are hiding." boomed Nick Traitor. As the Sith Lord step aside, a robot floated in and approaching the prisoner. Molly gasped as she sees that the robot is holding some sort of needle. She knew what it is. And her torture is not going to be pretty. Obi-Tim and the robots were burning the remains of the monks when Tommy Jr. came in. As the Jedi turned, the boy got out of his landspeeder and approaches him. Obi-Tim can tell what has happened by the look on the boy's face. "I'm sorry, Tommy. You wouldn't be able to do anything even if you were there. You would have been killed and your robot friends would be in the Nickless Empire's hands by now." explained Obi-Tim grimly. Tommy Jr. looks up in determination. "I want to go to Alderaan with you. There is nothing for me here now. I want to learn the ways of the Force like my father did and become a Jedi." Obi-Tim smiles. He didn't want a disaster to occurred for this to happened. But he is glad that Tommy Jr. has decided to train to be a Jedi after all. It's what he has planned all these years after all. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 23 2006, 12:56 PM Post #11 |
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The Jedi, the boy, and the robots are currently zooming across the desert. Soon they stopped at a cliff, got out, and looked. They see the city they are planning to go to. "There it is. Mos Eisley spaceport. The best place for scum and villanly. Better watch yourself." warned Obi-Tim to Tommy Jr. who just give have a determined smile. Later, the group zooms into the city via landspeeder. They passed many interesting creatures and sights, especially some funny ones. As they journey along, they were forced to stop by figures they try to avoid beforee: the Nickless troopers. "Okay, how long did you have these droids?" asked a trooper glaring at C-REN and R2-SY. "Oh, for 3 or 4 seasons." said Tommy Jr. with a nervous grin. "They are up for sale if you want them." joked Obi-Tim. "Let me see your identification." demanded the same trooper. Tommy Jr. looks nervous. Just when he thought all is lost, Obi-Tim smiles and waved a hand in front of the trooper. "You don't need to see his identifcation." said Obi-Tim calmly. The troopert, looking he is in a trance of some kind, said to the other troopers in a monotone voice, repeating what Obi-Tim has said, "We don't need to see his identification." Tommy Jr. looks astounded as Obi-Tim continued, "These robots are not what you're looking for." "These robots are not what we're looking for." "He can moved on with what he is doing." "You can moved on with what you are doing." "Go ahead." Obi-Tim said to Tommy Jr. "Go ahead." said the trooper waving Tommy Jr. to move on. Still astound, Tommy Jr. then proceeds in driving the landspeeder pass the troopers, escaping danger altogether. The group continued on until they stop in a parking lot in front of a bar in Mos Eisley. A monk shows up and looks at the speeder in interest. "I hate those monks. Pathetic pests." said C-REN in disgust, remembering that monks were the same people that capture him and R2-SY in the first place. After Tommy Jr. shoo the monk away, he turned to Obi-Tim, "I don't get it. How did we get by those troopers? I thought we were dead there for a minute!" Obi-Tim chuckled as he said, "The Force have a strong influence on the weak-minded. Very easy to get out of bad scapes." Tommy Jr. nodded, still astounded, then he glances at the bar, "You sure we can find a pilot here?" "The best freighter pilots can be found here. Though be careful. This place can be rough." "No problem. I'm ready for anything." said Tommy Jr. in determination. "Let's go." C-REN said to R2-SY as he, R2-SY, and the humans go into the bar. None of them noticed a sign nearby that said, "No robots". Inside the bar, the whole place is packed with the meanest, weird, exotic, disgusting looking figures to roam anywhere. At first, the sight is horrifying. At least, to those who first go there anyway. As Obi-Tim goes to an empty spot at the bar, Tommy Jr., C-REN, and R2-SY didn't get much further in when a bartender named Skulker sees them and yells out, "Hey! We don't serve their kind here!" "Huh?" asked Tommy Jr. puzzled, wondering what the bartender meant. "Your robots!" snapped Skulker glancing at C-REN and R2-SY. "Make them wait outside! We don't want them in here!" The customers listening agreed annoyed. Tommy Jr. chuckled nervously then said to C-REN, "I think you and R2 better wait for us outside. We don't need to cause trouble." "From the looks of this dump, I have to agree." remarked C-REN as he and R2-SY left to go wait outside. As the customers goes back to their drinks, Tommy Jr. heads in. Obi-Tim meanwhile is talking to a girl robot, who somehow managed to get in without being thrown out. Tommy Jr., meanwhile, goes to the bar and try to have a conversion with Skulker who pays him no attention. The boy sighs and waits for Obi-Tim to find a pilot (hopefully). Suddenly a creature pushed him annoyed. This creature is some sort of Sasquatch yelling in a language. Tommy Jr. chuckles and tries to ignore him, because he is obviously drunk. Suddenly a guy with a big red bowl like head grabs Tommy Jr., remarking, "Hey, Sasquatch doesn't like you!" "Well, sorry." apologized Tommy Jr. "I don't like you either!" "Sasquatch hates idiotic kids!" agreed Sasquatch angrily. "Watch yourself, kid. My name is Dr. Glowface. Sasquatch and I are wanted men. Heck, I even have the death sentence in 12 systems!" snapped Glowface. "Okay, okay. I'd be careful." said Tommy Jr. nervously. "You'd be dead!" Obi-Tim, at this time, decided to get into the conversion, saying, "Look, this boy isn't worth it. How about I buy you a drink?" Roaring, Sasquatch pushed Tommy Jr. down. Deciding to join in, Glowface pulls out a blaster, planning to shoot Obi-Tim. "No blasters! No blasters!" yelped Skulker as he ducks behind the counter. Just then, Obi-Tim quickly moved and suddenly Sasquatch yells in pain as his arm got cut off. It fell to the floor useless. Glowface just yelps as he backs off after getting some injuries. Obi-Tim smiles, showing his own lightsaber to a stunned crowd. Soon, the Jedi put his lightsaber away as Tommy Jr. looks on at his friend, amazed. Soon the action has faded, the whole bar going back to normal. As Obi-Tim goes to help Tommy Jr. up, he glances at the girl robot he was talking to saying, "Come. Jenny here is a first-mate on a ship that can help us." Outside, C-REN and R2-SY were waiting for Tommy Jr. and Obi-Tim to be done. They looked concern as a creature came out and goes to two Nickless troopers walking by. "I don't like this." said C-REN with a frown. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 25 2006, 08:44 PM Post #12 |
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Back in the bar, as the band played, Jenny Wakeman AKA XJ9 takes Tommy Jr. and Obi-Tim to a table where an African American like man wearing a beanie and space pilot outfit awaits them. "Here they are, the people I told you about." Jenny said as she sat down. "Hey. My name is Tucker Foley, pilot of the Phantom Falcon." said the man with a smirk. "Jenny here said you want a lift to Alderaan." "I still don't get how she could be here and not thrown out by now." Tommy Jr. said looking at Jenny puzzled. "It's amazing how holograms that effect certain people would do." Jenny said with a smile. "That depends on how fast the ship is." said Obi-Tim, returning the subject to the ship. "Fast? Don't tell me you haven't heard of the Phantom Falcon?" laughed Tucker in disbelief. "Should I have?" "Heck, it made the Kessel run in 12 parasecs!" If Obi-Tim expects the story to be a fib, he sure doesn't show them though he does smirks as Tucker continued, "I can outrun those Nickless Empire jerks. Not your bulk cruisers, the real thing! She's depending for ya, old man. Now, what will the cargo be?" "Passengers. Just me, the boy, two robots, and no questions asked." asked the Jedi sternly. "Trouble with the locals?" asked Tucker, eyebrow quirking. "Let's say we want to keep away from the Imperial guys as we can." "Well, for stuff against that is going to cost ya extra. For this, I charge ya...$10,000." "$10,000?!" yelled Tommy Jr. in disbelief. "Man, with that money, I woulda bought my own ship!" "Oh, and you think you could fly it?" asked Tucker with a smirk. "Yeah, I am not a bad pilot myself!" snapped Tommy Jr. angrily. "Let's go, Chin, this is a waste of our time!" "Calm yourself, Tommy." Obi-Tim said calming the boy down. Then as he speaks to Tucker, "We don't have what you need now, but tell you what. We can pay you $2,000 and $15,000 when we get to Alderaan." "$17,000?" exclaimed Tucker in amazement, very interest. As he thought of this, he smiles. "Consider my ship your teleportation! When you're ready, I will be at dock 94 ready for take off." "94, right." Obi-Tim said nodding. "And I think you better leave now." Tucker said noticing something past the two. "Seems your work has caught the attention of an interesting party." Obi-Tim and Tommy Jr. turned to see Skulker talking to two Nickless troopers who just came in. Skulker points to the direction of the booth the two are at. As the troopers goes to check it out, Obi-Tim and Tommy Jr. managed to escape. Tucker gave them an innocent smile. After the troops left, Tucker laughed. "Man, $17,000. These guys are desperate than I thought. This will get me outta trouble for sure. Jenny, get the ship ready. I'd join you eventually." Tucker told Jenny. "Right, Tucker." said Jenny as she gets up to leave. Outside, Obi-Tim and Tommy Jr. leaves the bar, discussing how to get the $2,000 they need to pay Tucker. "You'd better sell your landspeeder." Obi-Tim said to Tommy Jr. "May as well. I am not coming back to this dump." said the boy in disgust as he and the Jedi walked away. As Tucker gets up and tries to leave, a cat-like figure in a bounty hunting uniform came out of nowhere and points a gun at him. "Well, well. Going somewhere, Solo." mocked the figure as he forces Tucker to sit back down before sitting down himself. "Oh, hello Blikdo (Mr. Blik). Listen, I am about to go see your boss Skrawl and tell him I got his money." explained Tucker. "Forget it, buddy! You should have pay him off when you have the chance! Skrawl has put a price on your head so high, everyone will be after you to get it." Blikdo smirks as he said, "I am so glad I found you first." "This time I got his money!" protested Tucker. "Give it to me now and I may forget I saw you." "Of course, I don't have it now. Tell Skrawl that..." "Skrawl has it up to here with you!" interrupted Blikdo. Unknown to the bounty hunter, Tucker pulls out a blaster and points it at his enemy under the table. Blidko continues, "He doesn't like it when idiots dropped everything they have at the first sign of an Imperial cruiser!" "Gimme a break! I have no choice! Even I get boarded sometimes!" snapped Tucker. "Tell that to Skrawl! If you're lucky, he may just take your ship." Tucker glares. "Over my dead body." "That's the idea. Man, I have been looking forward to this for a long time." laughed Blikdo evilly. "Guess what? You're going to wait longer." Blikdo fires at Tucker but he misses. Suddenly an explosion occurred and Blikdo fell to the table dead. Everyone else looked at this in shock and/or amazement. With a smile, Tucker got up and takes his leave. He stops by the bar and hands Skulker some money. "Sorry about the mess." joked Tucker as he leaves. Skulker sighed as he glances at Blikdo's dead body, "This happens every day." |
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| JusSonic | Dec 26 2006, 12:30 PM Post #13 |
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Back on the Cancel Weapon, Plasmius got his report from Nick Traitor. Unforutnately for the Sith Lord, the princess did not give it to the mind probe. "It appears she is very resistant than I thought her to be. It will take a while before we can get anything out of her." informed the Sith Lord. "Sir," said an Imperial officer as he approaches. "We just got the final check-out. Everything's a go. Where shall we go to?" Plasmius thought about and smirks evilly. "I think I know of a way we can get her to talk." said Plasmius. "In other words?" asked Nick Traitor. "Time we show her the full power of the Cancel Weapon." Plasmius then turned to the officer and said, "Set course for Alderaan." "Yes sir." The troopers are searching around the streets when they could find no trace of Obi-Tim or Tommy Jr. in the bar. C-REN and R2-SY run into a building to hide. As they see the troopers approaching, C-REN whisper to R2-SY, "Lock the door!" The door closes just in time as the troopers approached. One of them checks it and finds it lock. "This door's locked. Move on." ordered the trooper. As they go on, C-REN opens the door a bit to peek out. "Darn it! I would rather be with Master Tommy than you! I bet this is all your fault!" hissed C-REN at R2-SY angrily. After the cat-like droid spoke up, the dog-like droid responded angrily, "Watch your language!" Obi-Tim and Tommy Jr. leaves the used landspeeder lot when they sold the landspeeder. Tommy Jr. looks at the money they got and sighs in annoyance. "Well, ever since the XP-38 came out, landspeeders like the one we sold aren't in demand." said Tommy Jr. "It will have to do. Come on." Obi-Tim said. As he and the boy left the lot, they are unaware that a figure in the shadows is watching them. As they walked away, the figure silently came out and started to follow them. At the docking bay where the Phantom Falcon is parked at, a gruesome chalk-like creature is outside with a group of bounty hunters "Solo, I know you're in there! Come out, Solo!" yelled the creature angrily. "Hey don't get yourself in a washer, Skrawl. I am right here." Skrawl and his men turned and sees Tucker coming in with Jenny. Tucker smirks as he said, "I was waiting for you." "Oh, do you?" said Skrawl, narrowing his eyes. "Hey, I know better than to hide." Skrawl sighs as Tucker comes up to him. The two walked as Skrawl puts his arm around the pilot as he said, "Tucker, my boy, you disappoint me. Why didn't you pay me back yet and why you have to go and fry poor Blikdo?" Tucker slaps the arm off as he snapped, "Look, the next time you want to see me, do so yourself! Don't send anymore of these goons!" "You know I can't make exceptions even for you! What if everyone who smuggled for me dropped their cargo at the first sight of a Imperial ship? It's bad for business and you know it." Skrawl told Tucker. "Hey, even I get boarded sometimes!" As Tucker walks behind Skrawl, the creature yelps because Tucker steps on his tail. Tucker continues, "I don't have a choice, okay? Look, I got a charter right now. I will pay you back, including a few extra. Just give me the time, please!" Skrawl smirks. "You were always the best, Tucker! So for an extra 20%..." "15, don't push it!" "Okay, okay, 15! I will give you the time you need to pay me back. But I'm warning you. If you don't pay back soon, I'll put a price on your head so large you won't be able to go near a civilized system." Then Skrawl laughs at this. Tucker frowns as he goes to the ramp of his ship. He turns and said sarcastically, "You're a man after my own heart, Skrawl." As Jenny follows Tucker up the boarding ramp, Skrawl yelled out, "Let's go!' As Skrawl and his men left, a armor wearing bounty hunter glares at Tucker. He smirks. He has been waiting a long time to get Solo. And when the time does come, Truman Fett (Truman X) will get him. After all, he has been a bounty hunter a very long time. The bounty hunter smirked under his helmet as he left. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 27 2006, 11:40 AM Post #14 |
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Tommy Jr., Obi-Tim, and the robots, the latter managed to escape capture and reunited with the two humans, walks down the street until they found the docking bay Tucker told them about early. Jenny is waiting for them there. "We should do well if his ship is as his boasting." said Obi-Tim with a smirk. As the group approaches the docking bay and enter, the figure that was silently following them stop nearby, takes out a radio, and speaks into it. In the docking bay, Jenny lead the group in. It's there where they first lay eyes on the Phantom Falcon. Tommy Jr. got a bunch of words to describe it upon seeing it. "What a hunk of junk!" said Tommy Jr. in disbelief as he eyes what is more than a trashy ship than a great one. "Hey, watch it!" snapped Tucker as he comes out. "She'll make point five beyond the speed of light. She may not look like much, but she's got it where it counts, kid. I've added some special modifications myself." "Time to go, guys." said Jenny a bit impatient. "Well, we're in a hurry so unless you have other things to do, get on, now." Tucker said nodding to the ship. Not needing a second invite, the group goes passed a grinning Tucker into the ship itself. Inside the Phantom Falcon, Jenny herself got in the pilot's chair and start things up. Outside the docking bat, Nickless Troopers the figure has called approached the figure itself. "Which way?" asked one of the troopers. The figure points to the direction of the docking bay itself. The trooper then say to his men, "Okay, set your weapons to stun!" The troopers run inside the docking bay. One of them yelled out, "Stop that ship!" Tucker sees them and runs inside just as the Nickless Troopers open fire. One of them yelled out, "Blast them!" Tucker duck out long enough to shoot out some blasts himself, forcing the troopers into safely. He ducks back in and closes the entrance just as the engines to the ship started. "Jenny, get us out of here!" yelled Tucker as he runs to the cockpit and sits in his seat as Jenny gets the ship ready to make their escape. Hearing this, the group buckled themselves in. C-REN mumbled, "Crud. I always forget that I hate space travel!" The Phantom Falcon lifted itself out of the docking bay. The troopers at a check point hear the general alarm and only turned long enough to see the ship making its escape into the morning sky. As the Phantom Falcon makes its leave from Tatooine, Tucker punches in Alderaan's coordinates into the computer. "Tucker, we got company!" exclaimed Jenny, pointing to the radar. Tucker looks and sure enough, he sees what it is. "An Imperial Cruiser! Man, who knew our passengers are hotter than I thought? Jenny, hold them off until I get the ship ready for lightspeeder!" Tucker exclaimed. "Right." nodded Jenny as she begins to do so. As the ship begins to fly off, two Imperial ships are on its tail big time. Obi-Tim and Tommy Jr. make their way to the cockpit to see what's going on. "Better keep an eye out! Two more are trying to cut us off!" yelled Tucker. "Well, why not just outrun them? Isn't this ship fast enough?" asked Tommy Jr. rolling his eyes. "Watch it or you'd be floating home, kid! We will lose them once I make the jump to hyperspace! I know a few tricks. We'd use those to lose them." Suddenly the ship shakes as an explosion occurred. "Now we're having fun." Tucker said sarcastically. "How long before we make the jump to light speed?" asked Obi-Tim. "We need to wait until we get Alderaan's coordinates into the navi-computer." explained Tucker. Tommy Jr. jumps as the ship begins to rock violently because of the lasers hitting it. "But they're gaining on us! We got to..." "Traveling through hyperspace ain't like dusting crops, boy! Without precise calculations we could fly right through a star or bounce too close to a supernova and that'd end your trip real quick, wouldn't it?" Tucker told Tommy Jr. harshly. Suddenly a red warning light begins to flash right after another laser hits the ship. "What now?" asked Tommy Jr. concerned. "Lost our defector shield! Buckle yourself up, we're going into light speed!" yelled Tucker. As Obi-Tim and Obi-Tim does so, Tucker pulls a lever nearby. The galaxy brightens and the stars became streaks as if they are becoming fast. And they did as the Phantom Falcon went into hyperspace, escaping the Nickless Empire's forces. Author's note The heroes are on their way to Alderaan. But what awaits them there? What is Governor Plasmius's plans to force Molly into telling them where the rebels' hidden base is? And will the plans in R2-SY arrived safely? Find out more in the next chapter coming soon. |
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| JusSonic | Dec 28 2006, 12:19 PM Post #15 |
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Planet Alderaan floats there peacefully, unaware of anything around it. Heck, anyone living on it did not know that a huge space station is now looming over it right now. In the control room of the ship, Governor Plasmius, standing before a window showing Alderaan, waits patiently as Nick Traitor and his men are bringing in their 'guest'. Admiral Zhao himself came in and bow before Plasmius. "We have arrived at Alderaan, sir." said Zhao. Plasmius turned and sees Molly being 'escorted' in by Nick Traitor and two troopers, hands bound. Molly looks up and smirks, "Well, well. Governor Plasmius. Figures someone is pulling Traitor's strings. I thought I smell something when I came aboard." Plasmius tries not to frown. He has encounters with the princess before, each time is not pleasant. But he isn't about to let this encounter ruined his mood. "Charming to the last. You do not believe how hard it is signing the order to have you executed for treason." Plasmius said with a smile. "I would find it hard to believe you want to handle this yourself." Molly said sarcastically. Ignoring that remark, the governor continued, "Before you are to be killed, princess, you are to be guest of a ceremony that will make this battle space station operational. Soon, no one will oppose the emperor Visaru any longer." "The more you do so, Plasmius, the more systems will slip through your fingers." "Not after we show what the Cancel Weapon can do. But maybe you can provide us of a planet to be destroyed first." Plasmius then smirks evilly as he glances at Alderaan. "Now, since you refused to tell us where your rebel friends are hiding, perhaps another planet I have chosen will do for the test. In any case, the planet I have chosen is your home planet of Alderaan." Molly gasps in horror. She has lived on Alderaan as long as she can remembered. She doesn't want it to be destroyed! "No! You can't! You know Alderaan is a peaceful planet with no weapons since the X-Clone Wars! Don't destroy them!" pleaded Molly. "Well, perhaps another target would be better? You know what I mean, so name it!" Molly hesitated. Plasmius can tell she doesn't want to betray her rebel friends, yet she doesn't want her home world to died either. Frowning, Plasmius got in her face as he continued, "I am losing patience, princess, so I will ask one more time. Where is the rebel base?" Molly looked at her home world. After a long look, she sighs and lowers her head as she said, "Dantooine. They are on Dantooine." Plasmius smiled and said to Nick Traitor, "See? She can be reasonable." He then turned to Admiral Zhao. "Zhao, when we're done here, we will strike Dantooine next. You may fired when ready." "What?!" gasped Molly in horror. They're going to destroy Alderaan anyway?! "You shouldn't have trust me, princess. Dantooine is too remote to make an effective demonstration, but we will deal with your rebel friends soon enough." Plasmius said with an evil smirk. "No!" gasped Molly as she looks at her planet, maybe for the last time. In the blast chamber, the operatives there are getting ready to fire. A button is pushed that switches on a panel of lights. A hooded Nickless soldier pulls a lever. Another lever is pulled. Another soldier pulls yet another lever. Soon a bank of lights on the panel and wall begins to light up. Soon someone pushed a button nearby. Soon a beam came out of the Cancel Weapon and send it at Alderaan itself. Upon impact, the planet exploded, killing everyone on it. Alderaan is no more... |
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