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| Mermaid and the Pokemon; Parody of another Disney film | |
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| JusSonic | Jan 24 2007, 09:30 PM Post #1 |
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This is a favor fic asked for me by Darth Ben Valor so I will dedicate this to him. Time to begin. Prologue: A Pokemon Reborn Years ago in a far away stood a castle. And inside that castle lives a prince named Ash Ketchum who is a Pokemon trainer. Despite having everything he ever wanted however, he is spoiled, selfish, and unkind to others. In fact, he thinks of no one but himself. One winter's night, an old woman arrived at the door and asked for shelter from the cold in exchange for a small red rose. Of course, the young Ash is disgusted by the woman's appearance. He frowns at her gift and told her to leave. She told him by not to be deceived by appearances for within, beauty can always be found. Despite this, Ash dismissed her once more. But the old woman's ugliness soon disappeared, replaced by a beautiful enchantress, the daughter of Trigon named Raven. Shock by his mistake, Ash tries to apologized but Raven told him it was too late for she saw there is no love in his heart. To punish him for his selfishness, Raven turned the young Pokemon into a Pokemon himself but a hideous one. She places a powerful spell on his castle and those who lived there. Ashamed by how he now looks, Ash Ketchum hide himself in his own castle. The only way he could see into the outside world is a magic Pokedex. The rose Raven has offered is truly an enchanted rose, which will continue to bloom until his 16th birthday. If the Pokemon could learn to love another, and get her love in return by the time the last pedal fell, then the spell will be broken. If not, he will remained a Pokemon monster for all time. Years has passed and the young prince/Pokemon trainer has grown into sadness and does not bother gaining hope. For, in his opinon, who in their right mind would ever learn to love a Pokemon? Author's note A sad beginning but the story has yet to begun. Read and review and I will be back for the first chapter of this Disney parody. No flames now! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 25 2007, 11:00 PM Post #2 |
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7Chapter 1: A Day In The Village Somewhere in the land lies a little house where a girl lives with her uncle and a bunch of dogs. The said girl came out of the house carrying a book in her arms. She was a beautiful sixteen-year-old girl. She had long beautiful red hair, blue eyes, lipstick that matched the color of her hair, and she wore a purple tank top, an aqua green miniskirt, a black belt with a gold heart-shaped belt buckle, and blue boots. She was none other than Ariel, formerly a mermaid who could now walk on land thanks to a spell. She is planning to return a book she borrowed from a book store in the village. As she does so, she begins to sing. Ariel: Little town, it's a quiet village Every day, like the one before Little town, full of little people Waking up to say... As Ariel goes into the village, everyone called out "hello" to her. She sees a tall rabbit wearing a yellow shirt, blue vest, blue pants, and baker wear carrying a tray. His name is Dylan the rabbit (from the movie Doogal) Ariel: There goes the baker with his tray like always The same old bread and rolls to sell Every morning just the same Since the morning that we came To this poor provincial town... "Yo, morning Ariel!" greeted Dylan in a hippie like voice as he puts a tray underneath a window. "Morning Dylan!" said Ariel happily. "Whatcha planning on doing today?" "I'm heading to the bookshop! I just finished up a neat story about a beanstalk, an ogre, and..." "That's cool." said Dylan, not really paying attention. He yells into the bakery, "Hey Florence! We got bread to sell! Come on!" Ariel shrugs and continues on her way. As she heads to the bookshop, she passed Kimi Watanabe Finster and Lil DeVille Kimi and Lil: Look there she goes, that girl is strange no question Dazed and distracted, can't you tell? Princess Peach: Never part of any crowd Zoro Roronoa: Cause her head's up on some cloud All (but Ariel): No denying she's a funny girl, that Belle! Ariel jumps on a back of a truck driven by Peter Griffin and rides it through town. Peter Griffin: Hey there! Princess Sally: Good day! Peter: How is your family? Bulma is now in front of Goku's training place. Goku was smiling silly at her. Bulma: Hello! Goku: Good day! Bulma: How is your wife? Seeing what her husband is doing, Chi-Chi hits him on the head with a rolling pin. Wendy Testaburger: I need six eggs! Principal Skinner: That's too expensive! Ariel: There must be more than this provincial life! The truck passed by the bookshop and Ariel jumps off. She came into the place where a wise old magician with a white beard and blue magician clothing is working. He turns and smiles upon seeing Ariel coming. "Why hello, Ariel." The magician said with a smile. "Morning Merlin. I came to return the book I borrowed." said Ariel smiling as she hands the book to Merlin. "I see you finished already." said Merlin with a smirk as he puts the book on the shelf. "I couldn't put it down." Ariel said as she looks through the bookshelf. "Do you got anything new?" "Not since yesterday." Ariel climbed up a ladder as she said, "It's okay. I'd borrow...this one." Ariel took a blue book off the shelf and gave it to Merlin. He looked it over and is surprised. "Why you've read this twice already!" said Merlin amazed. "I liked it!" said Ariel cheerfully as she swung off the ladder, rolling down its track. "It has far off lands, amazing battles, weird enchantments, princes in disguise." Merlin smiled as he gives to the book to Ariel. "Since you like it so much, you can keep it." "Merlin!" said Ariel surprised. Merlin has never let anyone keep a book forever before! "Keep it! I insist." "Why thank you! Thank you very much!" said Ariel happily as she left the book shoop. The Three Stooges (cartoon versions) sings as they watched her leave. Three Stooges: Look there she goes That girl is so peculiar! I wonder if she's feeling well! Women: With a dreamy far-off look! Water pours down a gutter nearby and is about to fall on Ariel but she uses a sign to keep her dry. Kyle Broflovski: And her nose stuck in a book! All: What a puzzle to the rest of us is Ariel! As Ariel goes to sit down on the edge of a fountain, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, and Ron Weasley were sitting nearby listening as she sings. Ariel: Oh! Isn't this amazing! It's my favorite part because, you'll see! Here's where she meets Prince Charming But she won't discover that it's him 'til chapter three! "Come on, students. Let's go." called out Hagrid. Harry, Hermione, and Ron, after saying goodbye to Ariel, left to followed Hagrid. As Ariel walked past a hat shop, Toot Braunstein and Xandir P. Whifflebottom are in there trying on hats. Toot: Now it's no wonder that her name means 'beauty' Her looks have got no parallel! Xandir: But behind that fair facade I'm afraid she's rather odd Very different from the rest of us... All: She's nothing like the rest of us Yes different from the rest of us is Ariel A bunch of ducks flies above. Suddenly a blast came from outta nowhere and blasts one of them, sending it flying to the ground. A wolf demon runs in the middle of the road trying to catch it with a bag. However it landed in a yard in front of him. In hopes to save face, he quickly shove the duck into his bag and goes to his boss who is blowing the smoke off his wand. His boss is a blonde haired boy in Slytherian type clothing. "Darn, Draco Malfoy, you didn't miss a shot!" said the wolf demon excited. "You got to be the best wizard in the world!" "As usual, I know." said Draco smiling proudly. "No monster could beat you and I bet a girl won't either!" Draco laughs as he said, "Very true, Koga. And I planned on getting that prize." She points to Ariel who just came around the corner. Koga looked surprised as he said, "What? The bum's niece?" "That's right. The lucky one I want to marry!" "But..." Draco interrupts Koga as he said, "The most beautiful girl in town!" "True, but..." Koga was interrupted once more. "And that makes her the best! And I always get the best." "Of course!" Koga replied quickly. Draco pushes Koga back as he begins to sing. Draco: Right from the moment when I met her, saw her I said she's gorgeous and I fell Here in town there's only she Draco, looking in a mirror nearby, brushed his hair with a spell. Who is beautiful as me So I'm making plans to woo and marry Ariel Turning around, he noticed Ariel has walked by and is leaving. As Draco goes after her, he passed the three flying pixies Yuna, Rikku, and Paine. Yuna, Rikku, and Paine: Look there he goes, isn't he dreamy Draco Malfoy, oh he's so cute Koga drools as he looks at them but Yuna knocks over a jar of water spilling it all over him. Be still my heart, I'm hardly breathing He's such a tall, dark, strong and handsome brute The pixies fainted in happiness. Draco has trouble going through the crowd as he tries to reach Ariel. Jimmy Neutron: Hello! Draco: Pardon! Father Time: Good day! Tai Kamiya: Mais oui! Amy Rose: You call this bacon? Cream the Rabbit: What lovely grapes! Wonder Woman: Some cheese! Ami: Ten yards! Tao Len: One pound Draco: 'xcuse me! Wonder Woman: I'll get the knife! Draco: Please let me through! Lupe Toucan (from My Gym Partner's A Monkey): This bread! Sylvester the cat: Those fish! Lupe Toucan: It's stale! Daffy Duck: They smell! Smarty Weasel (from Who Framed Roger Rabbit?) Madame's mistaken! Ariel: There must be more than this provincial life! Draco: Just watch I'm going to make Ariel my wife! The crowd gathered in front of Draco, completely blocking him from Ariel as they sing on. All: Look there she goes a girl who's strange but special A most peculiar mademoiselle It's a pity and a sin She doesn't quite fit in! Men: But she really is a funny girl Women: A beauty but a funny girl All: She really is a funny girl! That Ariel! As the song ended, Ariel looked up from her book and turned around. The people go back to what they were doing. She shrugged and kept on walking her way home until Draco came out of nowhere and caught up with her. "Hello, Ariel." Draco said seductively. "Hey Draco." Ariel responded. Her attention isn't on him but her book. That is until Draco takes it from her. Ariel frowns as she said, "Draco, I want my book back." Draco looked through the book and frowns, "I don't know how you read this. There isn't any pictures!" Ariel laughed as she said, "There is a thing called imagination, you know." Draco shook his head as he said, "I think you best to get out of those books and keep your mind on something more important." He throws the book and it landed in a nearby mud puddle. Ariel goes to pick it up as the boy continued, "Like me." Yuna, Rikku, and Paine, looking on from a yard behind Draco and Ariel, sighs very happily. "You?" scoffed Ariel in disbelief as she picks her book up and cleans it off. "I mean, the town is talking about it. A woman should not read. Soon she will get ideas and started to think." Draco said with a frown. Draco, you are very positively primeval." "Thank you." Draco said with a smile as he puts his arm around Ariel. How about we head over to the tavern and I will show you my trophies." "Uh, maybe another time." Ariel said. "What is with her?" Yuna said with a frown. "She's crazy to refuse a hunk like Draco." agreed Rikku. "He's gorgeous." sighs Paine as she smiles lovingly at Draco. Ariel walks a few steps from Draco as she said, "I can't right now, Draco! I got to go home and helped my uncle Fagin." Koga, who show up, laughs as he said this. "Ha! That crazy worthless bum? He's going need more than you to get where he's going!" Draco laughed along with Koga until Ariel yelled out, "Don't you dare laugh at my uncle that way!" "Yeah! Don't laugh at her uncle that way!" snapped Draco as he hits Koga on the head, hoping to stay on Ariel's side. "My uncle is not crazy or worthless! He's a genius!" Suddenly an explosion is heard. It is coming from Ariel's house. Alarmed, Ariel ran for home as Draco and Koga goes back to laughing. As she went home, the first thing Ariel does is go to the basement where she expects her uncle to be at. As she opens the door, she coughes because smoke came out. Inside the room, a box is upside down. "Uncle Fagin?" asked Ariel covering her mouth as she coughed smoke. Once the smoke clears, a man lifted the box up from the inside. He is an old man with a red snow hat, red hair, a five o' clock shadow, a green overcoat with a red t-shirt underneath, blue overalls, and black/white sneakers. The man is Fagin, Ariel's uncle. "How did that happened?" coughed Fagin as he tries to recover. "Are you all right?" asked Ariel in concern as she walks over. "Yes as usual." said Fagin with a sigh. He then frowns as he said, "But I think I have enough of this thing!" He goes over to a device nearby and kicks it. He yelps as he hurts his toe doing so. "Oh, you always say that." "What's going on down there? We heard an explosion. Five dogs came down into the basement. One of them is a white German Shepard with brown spots, most brown on his head, some grey on his muzzle and paws, and wears a red bandana. The second dog is a brown female Afghan hound. The third dog was a a light brown pit bull with some dark brown on his paws and his bottom muzzle. The fourth dog is a red haired Chihuahua with a green headband. And the last dog is a grey dumb-looking dog. Their names are Dodger, Rita, Francis, Tito, and Einstein, Fagin's dogs. "Uncle Fagin has another problem with his new invention." Ariel explained. "I mean it!" yelled Fagin in frustration. "I will never get this thing to work!" "Oh, it'd work, Fagin." insisted Dodger, "And you can win first prize at the fair tomorrow!" "Ha!" snapped Fagin as he crossed his arms. "And you may become a world famous inventor." said Rita smiling. "You think so?" Fagin asked, interested. "We'd believe you. We all do." Ariel said with a smile. Smiling and filled with confidence, Fagin said, "Okay then! Let's get this thing fixed!" He goes under a machine wearing a pair of goggles. "Francis, hand me the dog-legged clencer there, will ya?" "Dog-legged. How strange." mumbled Francis as he picks up what Fagin has asked and gives it to him. "Hey Ariel babe. How's the town went today?" asked Tito changing the subject a bit. "Well, I got a new book." Ariel said showing the book she picked up from the store. She frowns as she said, "Uncle Fagin? Do you think I'm...strange?" "'Strange'?" scoffed Fagin in disbelief as he slide out from under the machine, the goggles making his eyes very big. "My niece? Strange? Where do you get a crazy idea like that? I mean, sure you're a mermaid and King Triton's daughter but you aren't strange!" "I don't know. I guess I heard stuff." "Trust me. They talk about me too." said Fagin. He then begins to sing. Fagin: Well, I'm not odd, nor you No fam'ly ever saner Except one uncle who...well, maybe let that pass In all you say or do You couldn't make it plainer You are your father's daughter; therefore you are class Ariel: So I should just accept I'm simply not like them Fagin: They are the common herd And you can take my word You are unique: creme de la creme No matter what you do We're on your side And if my point of view Is somewhat misty-eyed There's nothing clearer in my life Than what I wish and feel for you And that's a lot... No matter what Ariel: (to Fagin) No matter what they say You make me proud I love the funny way You stand out from the crowd Fagin: It's my intention my invention Shows the world out there one day Just what we've got... Both: No matter what Fagin: Now some may say that uncles just exaggerate Ariel: That ev'ry niece's great? Fagin: You are! Ariel: And ev'ry niece tends to say her uncle's tops Fagin: She pulls out all the stops To praise him Both: And quite rightly! Fagin: No matter what the pain We've come this far I pray that you remain Exactly as you are This really is a case of uncle knowing best Ariel: And niece too! Fagin: You're never strange Ariel: Don't ever change Both: You've all I've got No matter what. As the song ends, Einstein sniffed. "That was beautiful." said Einstein smiling. As Fagin goes back to work on his machine, Ariel said, "It's true but I can't find anyone to talk to." "There's that Draco fellow. He's handsome, isn't he?" asked Fagin. "Handsome. And rude and conceited!" Dodger snapped. "Dodger's right. He isn't the man for me." agreed Ariel with a sigh. "More like a jerk." agreed Tito. "Well, don't worry long. When this invention works, everything will change." Fagin came out from under the machine. "I think I got it done. Let's see if it truly works. Stand back, guys!" Everyone else stood back as Fagin pulls on a lever. Soon the machine springs to life. As everyone watches, it begins chopping wood...like it was designed to! "Well I'd be. It works!" said Francis in amazement. "It does?" Fagin asked in amazement. He laughs. "It does! Happy days!" "You did it! You really did it!" laughed Ariel as she hugs her uncle. "Get ready, boys! Ariel, get the minicycle ready! I'm off to the fair!" declared Fagin proudly. Then a log hits him, knocking him out. Later, Ariel waves goodbye to her uncle as he and the dogs in his minicycle carrying the machine in a wagon behind them. "Bye, guys! Good luck!" cheered Ariel as she waves. "Bye, Ariel! Take of things while we're gone!" said Fagin waving back. Soon Fagin, the dogs, and their minicycle drove out of sight with the machine. Author's note I know, the dogs didn't really talk to Fagin in the movie, but it's my story so why not? In the next chapter, Fagin gets lost and ends up at a certain castle. You know what it is. BTW, the "No Matter What" song comes from the Broadway version of Beauty and the Beast. I figure if DBV puts it in his parody, why shouldn't I? Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 26 2007, 11:56 PM Post #3 |
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Author's note To respond to Phillip Clark, I did not know that. I chose Ariel because DBV asked me to. Very interesting info. Onward to chapter 2! Chapter 2: The Mysterious Castle Now while Fagin may be a genius at inventing, when it comes to getting to where he needs to go, he doesn't have a clue. Indeed this is proven when he and the dogs find themselves lost in the forest. "We should be there by now." said Fagin looking at a very old map that wasn't made for the current time period. "Shoulda watch where you're going." said Francis with a sigh. Fagin looks up and stops the minicycle. He and the dogs are at a fork in the road. "So which way are we going?" Rita asked. "We'd go this way." Fagin said pointing to the right. Tito looked and sees that the road Fagin is pointing to is very foggy, scary, and disappeared forest. Tito looks to the left and sees that the road there is more cheerful "I'm going this way, man." Tito said trying to leave but Dodger stops him. "Aw, where's your sense of adventure, Tito? It's a shortcut!" insisted Dodger. "He's right! We'd get there in no time!" exclaimed Fagin as he begins to drive down the right path. The minicycle continues going down the right path still pulling the wagon. Everyone in it looks nervous. Einstein thought he saw a shadow of a monster running through the trees. The minicycle stopped as the gang heard a howl. "I don't like the sound of that howl." said Rita nervously. "This can't be right! Dodger, where did you take us?" demanded Fagin getting scared." "Me? You're the one who..." Fagin interrupted Dodger as he sighs, "Never mind. We'd have to turn around." Fagin puts the minicycle in reverse but he accidentally bumps the wagon into a tree doing so. A bunch of bats fly out of the trees freaking out everyone. Tito screams and jumps. He lands on the pedal to get the minicycle going by, causing the minicycle itself to go faster still pulling the wagon Fagin's invention is on. The fast minicycle hits a bump and causes Fagin to fall off onto the ground. As the old man got off, the minicycle with the dogs still in it drove out of sight. "Great. Now what?" groaned Fagin. Suddenly he hears a noise and yelps, "Uh, Dodger? Rita? Tito? Francis? Einstein? Is that you guys?" Suddenly he hears some growling and slowly turns around. Sure enough, behind him are a group of shadow like beings who called themselves Heartless. And they are approaching looking very hungry. Fagin screamed and runs for his life with the Heartless in pursuit. Fagin wasn't where he was going and fell down a steep hill. When his fall was over, he got up. He sees an iron gate and fence in front of him. As he looks behind him, he sees the Heartless are almost on him. Not wanting to waste time, he run for the iron gate and yelled, "Someone let me in! HELP!" He hold the bars in panic. Suddenly the gate opens and he fell in. Before the Heartless could get to him, Fagin closes the gate quickly, knocking them back. Fagin sighs in relief then screams as one of the Heartless grabs one of his sneakers through the gate. He quickly kicks one off and got away from the gate. Turning around, he gapes as he sees that he has arrived at a castle. Suddenly lightning flashes in the sky and it started to rain. Not wanting to get wetter, he runs up to the front doors and knocked loudly. They opened up. Although nervous to go in at first, he came inside the castle and into the foyer. Fagin looks around. He sees a huge staircases and doors that seemed to go somewhere. The whole room appeared to be dark. "Hello?" Fagin called out hoping someone could hear him. Besides your usual echo, there was no answer. "Hello?" As Fagin looks around, he hear some voices. "Poor guy. He must have got lost in the woods." said a young voice. "Stop talking you idiot and he may leave!" said a big and booming voice. Looking around to see where the voices came from, Fagin continues, "Who is it? Anyone there?" "Don't you dare say anything, Roxas! Not a word!" said the big voice. "Sorry for barging in uninvited but my minicycle with my dogs in it have run off and I need a place to stay for the night," explains Fagin. "Aw, have a heart, Bowser. He's just lost." insisted the voice who is identified as Roxas. "Ssh!" hissed the voiced of Bowser. Ignoring Bowser, Roxas spoke up, "Don't worry, sir! You're welcome here!" "Who said that?" asked Fagin looking around. "Right here, sir." "Huh?" Fagin felt a tug on his overalls. He looks down. To his surprise, the voice is coming from an animal! He is a dark blond-furred lion cub with a slightly spike man, blue eyes, and a silver chain necklace with an "X"-shaped pendant. "Hello!" said Roxas the cub with a smile. Fagin is startled and jumped back, falling on his behind. "Oh, you have to do it, do you? Very typical, Roxas!" The voice of Bowser came in. He is a muscular dragon-like creature with green scales, a turtle shell on his back with a few spikes on it, a yellow umpire-like chest, yellow eyes, small horns on his head, and sharp teeth. His only clothes were his black spiked bracelets that he wore on his wrists. (Author's note: Bowser is in his Super Mario Bros. TV series form) "Oh. Hi there. I...ah, ah, ACHOO!" Fagin has accidentally sniffed in some dust and sneezed right on Bowser's face. Fagin uses his own overcoat to wiped his own nose while Bowser just wiped himself clean. "You are all wet, sir. Come on. Come sit by the fire." insisted Roxas as he led Fagin to the parlor. "Why, thank you. I'm getting sick." mumbled Fagin talking funny. "Hold it! Don't you dare!" yelled Bowser as he runs after the two into the parlor. Unknown to either of them, a huge shadowed figure was watching this. With a growl, he rushed off. "You don't know what our boss would do if he catches him here!" yelled Bowser as he runs into the parlor. Roxas ignored him. "Stop right there!" Bowser tripped and fell. When he got up, he groans as he sees Roxas allowing Fagin to sit in a comfortable armchair right near the fireplace. "Not the master's chair! Anything but that!" As he looks concerned, a yellow blur rushes off. It looks like a Raikou, one of the legendary Pokemon, but it speaks like a Pikachu. It's name is Pikachu itself. (Author's note: I will be using the form Pikachu was turned into in my Ash-Laddin story) "Oh no. I'm not seeing this." yelped Bowser covering his eyes. "I really am not seeing this!" "Pikachu!" said Pikachu the Raikou happily as he rubs against Fagin's feet. "Ah, what nice...creature." said Fagin chuckling happily. "Knock it off all of you! Don't forget who is in charge here..." Bowser was suddenly run over by a tea cart rushing in. When it stops near where Fagin's sitting, three figures revealed themselves. One of them a female echidna in tribal clothing. The second one is a little two tailed fox in sneakers. And the last one is a two-foot tall creature that looked like a dog and a koala combined. He had blue fur, except in his chest and stomach area, which were light blue, and he had big black eyes, and bat-like ears. Their names are Tikal, Miles "Tails" Prower, and Experiment 626 AKA Stitch. "Care for some hot tea, sir?" asked Tikal smiling. "It'd warm you up in no time." added Tails as he held up a tea cup allowing Tikal to pour some tea in. "Don't you dare pour any tea in! Please, don't!" yelped Bowser very concerned. "NO TEA!" As usual, no one listened. After Tails put some sugar in the tea, he hands it to Stitch who then handed it to Fagin. "Id. Here's tea." Stitch said happily. "Hello there little koala." said Fagin smiling. Suddenly the doors to the parlor slammed open. A howling wind blows in and puts the fire in the fireplace out. Tikal looks nervous while Tails and Stitch goes to hide behind her. "Uh oh." said Tails and Stitch at once. Gulping, Fagin sit in his chair scared. Were he looked at the doorway now, he woulda saw something terrible. It is a muscular and huge monster covered entirely in black fur. He has huge horns on his head, along with baggy eyewbrows, piercing amber-covered eyes, and razor sharp teeth. His only clothes are a small and white basebapp call, an unzipped blue vest, and tattered blue jeans. He was once Ash Ketchum, the spoiled and selfish prince/Pokemon trainer, now a Pokemon cursed by a spell. (Author's note: Think Eduardo from Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends, only with black fur.) Fagin is not sure what it is as he dares not look. All he saw was Ash's shadow. As Fagin continues to shake scared, Ash came in walking on all fours. He sniffed and growled, "There's a stranger in here." "Uh, master Ash. Let me explained." Roxas said beginning to speak. "This man was lost in the woods, all cold and scared, and..." He was interrupted when Ash roared angrily, his voice was like a wind. Roxas gulped and looked scared now. Bowser came out of hiding from under a carpet (which is too small for him to hide under), walked up to Roxas and said, "Master Ash, if I can just say...it's his fault! I wasn't in on the idea from the beginning! Blame him!" As he speaks, he points accusedly at Ash. "Why, you jerk!" yelled Roxas upset at Bowser's accusation. Bowser ignored him as he continues, "I try to stop them but did they listen? Heck no! They don't care and..." Ash roared loudly again, freaking the koopa out like a girl and hides behind Roxas (of course, he is too big for Roxas to covered him). Fagin looks to his right and sees no one. When he looks left however, he comes face to face with a very furious looking Ash. Fagin jumped back in fear and backed off. "Who are you? Why are you here?" demanded Ash angrily as he stood on two legs. "Please...I got lost in the woods. And..." Fagin begins to say, trembling in fear. "You are not welcome here!" "I didn't mean to!" When he apologized, his focus was on Ash and that didn't make the Pokemon very happy. "Are you staring at me?!" demanded Ash furiously. "No..I'm not!" protested Fagin trembling. "Oh, so that's it, huh? You came to stare at the monstrous Pokemon!" snapped Ash in accusation. This made Fagin make a beeline for the door but Ash got there first and blocked him. "I didn't mean to upset you or caused harm! I only wanted a place to stay!" yelled Fagin in a scare tone. "You want a place to stay? Fine! I'll give you a place to stay!" growled Ash then grabs Fagin by the shirt. "Wait! No! NOOOOO!" screamed Fagin in horror. Everyone else can only looked helplessly as their master Ash Ketchum dragged a kicking and screamind Fagin out of the room before slamming the door behind him shut. Author's note Very scary looking chapter, eh? Fagin: Yeah! Ash is going to killed me! Ash: Oh, I'm not, Fagin. Besides, I was acting. Ariel: Ash wouldn't killed you, never. Fagin: I'm not sure. Me: Don't worry, you won't die, Fagin. (to audience) Well, that's my chapter, folks. I'd be back for the next one. Until then, read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 27 2007, 11:29 PM Post #4 |
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Chapter 3: When Mermaid Meets The Pokemon Ariel was still at home the next day, unaware of what happened to her uncle. She is also unaware of two figures peeking through a bush. Draco smirked as he looks at Ariel's home. He has a big surprise for him and when she sees the suit he has on, she has to accept his proposal. "Boy, Ariel is going to be very surprised." chuckled Koga. "Yes. Today is her lucky day." said Draco smiling. He walks away, letting go of the branch he was holding. It hit Koga in the face, leaving leaves in his mouth. Nearby are people Draco has invited for his wedding. He got a priest and almost everything. He said, "I'd thank you all for coming to this great day. But I haven't proposed yet!" Everyone laughed. All except Yuna, Rikku and Paine who cried sadly, believing their chances to marry Draco are null down. As Koga arrived, Draco turned to him and said, "Okay, the moment Ariel and I came through that door, you..." "Strike up the band! I know!" said Koga as he picks up a stick and starts the band up to play "Here Comes The Bride" at a fast pace. It soon stops when Draco hits Koga over the hat with a tuba. "Not yet, stupid!" snapped Draco angrily. "Sorry." groaned Koga. Three figures came onto the scene. The first figure was a thirteen-year-old Asian girl. She had freckles, brown eyes, long raven hair with a pink strand, and she wore a green t-shirt (in which the rims of her sleeves were red, and the collar of her shirt was red, and there was a symbol on the front that looked like a red dragonfly), along with a brown wristband (which had purple gems on it) on her right wrist, along with a brown belt with a yellow belt buckle, blue jeans, and brown shoes. She was the Te Xuan Ze, Juniper Lee. The second kid was a fourteen-year-old boy. He had black hair and blue eyes, and he wore a white shirt (on which the rims of his sleeves were orangish-red, as was the collar of his shirt, and a horizontal oval shaped symbol on the front of his shirt), along with blue jeans, and red and white tennis shoes. He was June's boyfriend and the legendary halfa, Danny "Phantom" Fenton. The third figure was a well-built Asian boy about fourteen-years-old. He had black hair (which had a green rim), black beady eyes, and he wore a red zip-up sweatshirt (which had hints of yellow on it), blue pants, blue and gray shoes, and white socks. He was June and Danny's best friend, Jake Long, A.K.A. the American Dragon. All together, they are Ariel's friends. "What's going on here?" Danny asked puzzled. "Looks like a wedding, dog." Jake said. "Draco is obviously trying to get Ariel to married him again." sighed June. "Ten bucks said she won't go for it." "You're on." Danny said to Jake with a smirk. Inside her home, unaware of the commotion outside, reading the book she got yesterday. When she hears a knock at the door, she goes over to it and looks through the peephole. She sees Draco at the door making smirking faces. She cringes, then sighs as she opens the door letting Draco in. "Ah, Draco. What a pleasant surprise." said Ariel faking a smile. "Is it, right?" Draco asked with a smirk. "You are very lucky. Any girl in town would want to be you right now. Today's the day all your dreams come true, my dear." "What dreams?" Ariel asked, although she has a suspicion of what Draco's thinking. "I mean, what do you know about them?" "A lot." said Draco as he begins to sing. Draco: You've been dreaming just one dream Nearly all your life Hoping, scheming Just one theme Will you be a wife? Will you be some he-man's property? Good news! That he-man's me! With a smile, he puts his hands on her shoulder, making her nervous. This equation Girl plus man Doesn't help just you On ocassion Women can Have their uses, too Mainly to extend the family tree Pumpkin, extend with me! We'll be raising sons galore Ariel: Inconceivable! Draco: Each built six-foot-four Ariel got a bit sick, so to speak. Ariel: Unbelievable! Draco: Each one stuffed with every Malfoy gene! Ariel cringes as she covers her ears. Ariel: I'm not hearing this! Draco: You'll be keeping house with pride Ariel: (sarcastically) Just incredible! Draco: Each day gratified Ariel: So unweddable! Draco: That you are part of this idyllic scene With the song, Draco sits at the table while Ariel puts her book down. "Think of this, Ariel. A rusting hunting lodge. My biggest kill roasting over the fire. And my wife massaging my feet." As Draco puts his feet on the table, Ariel cringes thinking of the thought of massaging anyone's feet, let alone Draco's. The man continues, "And the little ones will be playing with the dogs." He smiles as he stands up, "Why I bet we can 6 or 7!" "Uh, I don't think Dodger would want more dogs to play with." Ariel said uneasily. "Not dogs! Handsome boys like me!" "Oh I see." said Ariel rolling her eyes as Draco goes back to singing. Draco: I can see that we will share All that love implies We shall be the perfect pair Rather like my thighs "Gross!" said Ariel in disgust. You are face to face with destiny! All roads lead to The best things in life are All's well that ends with me! Escape me, there's no way Certain as do re Ariel, when you marry He soon have an uneasy Ariel against the door. "So how about it, Ariel? Yes or no?" asked Draco with a smirk. "Well, to tell you the truth..." said Ariel with a gulp. She managed to get to the doorknob. She said quickly, "I don't really need you!" "Hey who does?" said Draco with a smirk as he ends the song. Draco: Me! "Thanks for stopping by!" She quickly opens the door and got out of the way just in time as Draco lost his balance. He fell out of the door and right into a mud puddle outside. Thinking this was the cue, the band begins to play as Ariel closes the door and locked it. The band stops playing when they noticed Draco in the mud puddle. Koga turns to his boss who is very upset and covered in mud. "Did it worked out?" asked Koga hopefully. Draco grabs Koga angrily and yelled, "Ariel will be my life! And no one will stop me!" He threw Koga into the mud puddled and stormed off. "Mr. Touchy." scoffed Koga. Nearby... "Well, what do you know? Look like you win the bet, Jake." said Danny with a smirk as he hands Jake ten bucks. June laughs in amusement. When the wedding is obviously not going to happened, everyone have gone home. All but Danny, June, and Jake goes over to the door. Danny knocks on it. "Who is it?" asked Ariel from behind the door. "It's us, Ariel. You can come out, loser's gone." June said with a smirk. Ariel opens the door and looks around, "Is he really gone?" "Yo, whacked boy left in a storm when you rejected him." Jake said with a smirk. Ariel came out sighing in relief then she said angrily, "But can you see what he try to do? He try to ask me to marry him! ME! The wife of that boorish, brainless..." "If you're looking for ferret, we got the idea." Danny said with a smirk. Ariel nods as she begins to sing as she begins to feed the animals. Ariel: Madame Mafloy, can't you just see it She puts a towel over her head making her look like a housewife. Madame Malfoy, his little wife She took the towel off as she kicked the bucket upset. Not me, no sir, I guarantee it I want much more than this provincial life... She, followed by her friends, run out into the fields. Ariel sings some more. I want adventure in the great wide somewhere I want it more than I can tell Ariel sits on the ground and picks a flower sighing sadly. And for once it might be grand To have someone understand She puts the flower down as she got up. I want so much more than they've got planned "Hey Ariel. Calm down, yo. I'm sure you'd find what you're looking for." Jake said assuring his friend. "Yeah. At least you did one good thing today." June said with a smirk. "What's that?" Ariel asked. "You made Jerk Malfoy fall into a mud puddle!" laughed Danny. The others laughed along with him. Suddenly... "Ariel!" The group turned and sees a familiar minicycle with a invention in a dragon rushing into the scene. The dogs are in there but no Fagin! "Dodger? Guys?" asked Ariel concerned as she and her friends go up to them, "What happened?" asked Danny. "Where's Fagin?" June asked. "Where is he?" Jake asked. "We got lost in the woods! Things got whacked man and we make our getaway!" Tito explained in panic. "Fagin disappeared in the woods somewhere!" Rita explained. Very concerned, Ariel unlocks the wagon from the minicycle and said, "We got to find him! Take me where you saw him last!" "Let us on, guys. We're coming to." June exclaimed. "Yeah. We'd search for your uncle together, Ariel." Danny said with a smile. Later in the forest, Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and the dogs rode through the forest searching for Fagin. They soon came across the same castle he stumbled onto last night. "What the heck is this place?" Jake asked in wonder. "Duh. I'm scared." yelped Einstein as he panic a bit. "Calm down, Einstein. Steady." said Ariel calming Einstein. Then she sees something beyond the gate and gasps. She got out of the minicycle, opens the gate, went in, and picks what she saw up. "It's uncle Fagin's scarf!" gasped Ariel. "Then he must be here." said Danny looking up at the castle. "It's decided. Let's go in." June said nodding. Inside the castle, Bowser walked back and forth in a pace very upset as Roxas watch. "You have to invite him, didn't you?" asked Bowser glaring at Roxas. "I mean, give him tea, sit in the master's chair, pet his Pikachu!" "Oh blame me for being nice!" snapped Roxas annoyed. Just then, Ariel and her friends (the dogs chose to wait outside because they don't like the looks of the castle) came into the foyer. "Hello? Is there anyone here?" Ariel called out. In the kitchen, Tikal and Stitch were cleaning. Suddenly a a muscular purple-furred minotaur wearing a pair of gray pants, gray boots, and a black belt with a white skull belt buckle run in. "Senorita Tikal! You won't believe this! We saw another senorita in the castle!" said the minotaur excited. Tikal sighs as she turns to the minotaur and said, "Eduardo, don't make stories up. Now is not the time for stories." "But Eduardo's right, Tikal!" Tails said as he came in. "We saw her, seriously!" "Yeah, right." scoffed Stitch rolling his eyes. Suddenly something came into the room excited. It is a blonde-furred lioness cub with blue eyes. Her name is Namine, the man. "Tikal! I just saw a girl in the castle!" exclaimed Namine excited. "I'd show ya!" "Told ya so." Eduardo said smirking at Tikal. Unaware of the newcomer, Bowser continues insulting Roxas. "You irresponsible, idiotic, fur-brained..." said Bowser. Roxas made a hand puppet as he mocks the koopa as the cub crossed his eyes. "Mr. Fagin?" a voice came out. The two stops and turned seeing Ariel and her friends passed by. "Did you see that?" gasped Roxas in amazement towards Bowser. The two then sees Ariel and her friends going down a corridor. Roxas gasped. "It's a girl!" "Which one? There are two girls." said Bowser rolling his eyes. "I can tell the Asian girl is taken by the way the black haired boy is holding her hand, but the red haired girl..." Roxas got excited as he said, "That's it! She's the one! The one we have waited for all these years! She can break the spell!" Excited some more, Roxas runs after Ariel and the group with Bowser running after him yelling, "Hey! Hold up, cub boy!" The two goes to a door Ariel's group has passed and opens it. It leads to the tower. Bowser hids behind up while Roxas begins running up the stairs. The commotion caught the group's attention. "Hello? Anyone there?" Ariel asked. She then hears Roxas running up the stairs. "Hey, there's a pair of stairs nearby." said Jake pointing to a bunch of stairs. Ariel's group goes to them and went up them. "Wait, stop! We're looking for my uncle!" Ariel yelled out as she runs up the stairs. Bowser pokes his head out from behind the door and sees Ariel's group running up to where the prisoner is being kept. As they reach the top of the tower, they try to find the person they heard. Of course, Roxas himself hid behind a pillar. "Weird. Where did he go?" asked Danny puzzled. "Is anyone here?" asked Ariel. "Ariel?" Ariel looks shocked. It's her uncle's voice! She sees that it's coming from a prison door and runs over to it. "Uncle Fagin!" Fagin pokes his head out and smiled, "How did you find me?' June feels Fagin's hands and yelped, "Geez, Fagin. Your hands are like ice!" Fagin coughs a bit. "And you're sick, man." Jake added. "We'd better get you outta here." Danny said about to go ghost. "No! Ariel, I want you to take your friends and get out of here while you can!" Fagin yelled in concern. "Who did this to you?" Ariel demanded. "Please, there is no time! You got to go, now!" "We won't leave you!" Suddenly a black furry arm came out of nowhere pulled the group away from the door. "What are you all doing here?!" It was Ash Ketchum, the one who seized Fagin last night. "Who is it? Who are you?" Ariel asked. She looked around but there is nothing but darkness to be seen. The only light came from a hole in the roof. "I am Ash Ketchum, the owner of this castle!" snapped Ash. He is hiding in the darkness and from view. "We've come for Fagin." Danny said. "You got to let him go! He is very sick!" "It's his fault for tresspassing here!" "He'd died! Let him go! We'd do anything." June insisted. "There's nothing you all could do. He's my prisoner." said Ash as he begins to walk off. "There must be something we could do." Jake sighs as it looks like he's about to give up. Ariel then thought of something. She knew she's going to regret it but it's the only way her uncle can be saved. "Wait!" Ariel called out. Ash stops and turns to looked over his shoulder. Ariel looked from her uncle, then comes into the light. "I want you to take me instead." "You?!" snapped Ash angrily as he turned away. His expression however changed as he rethinks this. He turned to Ariel in a calm voice saying, "You want to take his place?" "Ariel, what are you doing?" Danny asked in concern. "What I can for my uncle." said Ariel with a sigh. "Ariel, don't! Think about what you're doing!" yelled Fagin frantically from his prison. "If I do, would you let him go?" Ariel asked Ash. "Well...yes. But you must promise to stay here and never leave.' Ariel pauses to think about this. Not leaving would mean she would never see her family and friends again. But it's for her uncle's sake. Ariel then frowns. "Come into the light. I want to see whom I'm talking to." Ariel said. At first, it looks like Ash won't do it. But eventually he came out of the darkness and into the darkness revealing himself to the group at last. The group gasped and Ariel turned away. "Geez! And I thought Draco was horrible looking." said June in disbelief. "Ariel, you sure want to do this?" Jake asked Ariel in concern. "Ariel, please! I won't let you do this!" begged Fagin. With a sad sigh, Ariel turns back to Ash with her eyes closed. She said, "You have my word." "It's done!" yelled Ash. He storms over to Fagin's prison and open the door. As Ariel fell to her knees, feeling bad for what she done, Fagin, released, runs over to her. "Ariel, please listen! I'm old! I lived my life!" Fagin said in concern. But then Ash grabs Fagin and dragged him off. "Hey wait!" Danny yelled alarmed. "Ariel!" yelled Fagin as he is dragged away from his niece and her friends. "Wait!" cried out Ariel. But Ash refuses to listen as he dragged him out of the tower. Outside, Ash dragged Fagin out to a gummi ship waiting outside. "Come on! Spare my niece, please!" pleaded Fagin. Ash ignored him however and throw him into the gummi ship. He yelled out, "Forget it! She isn't your concern anymore!" He then turned to the gummi ship driver, "Take him to the village and leave him there!" As the gummi ship speeds off with Fagin inside, Ariel and her friends watched from the tower window. Ariel buried herself in her arms and cried heavily. Ash climbed up back to the tower's top. Roxas met him halfway. "Hey, master Ash?" Roxas spoke up. "What?!" snapped Ash angrily. He isn't in the mood for one of Roxas's speeches today. "Well, since this girl is going to be with us and all. Perhaps maybe you could offer her a comfortable room." Roxas suggested. Ash's response? He gave a fierce snarl at the cub and continued climbing up the stairs. "Okay, maybe not. Geez." said Roxas with a frown. As Ash entered Ariel's new 'room', he sees Ariel crying on the ground with her friends nearby. Ash glances at the others and said, "You're all still here? She's the prisoner, not you!" Danny glances angrily and said, "Well, can you blame us? You didn't even let Ariel say goodbye to her uncle!" "So we're staying here to make sure you don't even think of harming her." June said agreeing with her boyfriend. "Man, you couldn't be more whacked." Jake said grimly. "You didn't let me say goodbye. I'd never see him again and I didn't get the chance to say goodbye." Ariel said in between tears. Hearing this, Ash felt guilty. He let his anger once again get the best of him. It happened the day Raven enchanted him and turned him what he is today. He shoulda at least allowed Ariel to say goodbye to Fagin first. 'Man, I am just a creep.' thought Ash. Then he remembers Roxas's suggestion. He shrugs, 'Aw, why not? It's the least I can do to make up for what I did." As he is about to leave, he said, "Now it's time to take you all to your room." "Huh?" June asked surprised. "Our room?" Ariel asked looking up surprised as well. "But I thought..." "Would your rather stay in the tower?" snapped Ash annoyed, about to leave without her. "No." "Then come on." Later, Ash led Ariel and her friends through a maze of corridors. Ariel looked around in amazement. She then looked back at Ash. Remembering what happened, she shred a tear. "Well, at least it's better than that tower." said Danny with a sigh as he hugs June a bit. Roxas, who walking next to his master, frowns. Throughout the whole walk, it was silence. He couldn't stand it anymore. "Say something to her." Roxas said whispering to Ash. "But what can I say?" Ash asked. "Anything." Ash paused to think. He then said to Ariel, "I, uh, hope you liked it here." "It would be nice without the spookiness and your whacked out state." Jake commented. Roxas made a 'go on' gesture. Seeing this, Ash continued to Ariel, "Although you are now my prisoner, I won't teach you like a warden. This castle will be your home now, as is your friends. You all are allow to go anywhere as long as it's on the castle premises. Oh, and you all cannot go into the west wing." "Huh?" Ariel asked as she looked up, "What's in the west...?" "IT'S FORBIDDEN!" yelled Ash as he turns angrily cutting her short. He then clears his throat and added, "To anyone but me. Don't ask. I will not say." As the group moves on, June frowns. "There is something in the west wing he doesn't want us to see." "Whatever it is, he seems upset." said Danny agreeing. Soon they all arrived at a guest room which, despite not being used in years since the castle hasn't received guests, is very nice. Ash opened the door and let them all in. "Now, if you all need anything, just ask my servants." Ash said. "Dinner. Ask her to dinner." Roxas hissed to dinner. Ash nods and turned to Ariel. "Ariel, is it?" Ash asked. He knew this is her name since he heard it during the whole conversion about Fagin. Ariel nods sadly. Ash continued calmly, "You will...join me for dinner." He then yelled in a loud threatening voice, "THAT IS NOT A REQUEST!" He slammed the door shut making the group gasped. Ariel sadly goes over to her bed but did not sit on it. "Geez, when I ask June for dinner, I don't yell like that." said Danny frowning. "Tell me about it. He have issues, dig." Jake said in agreement. June hushed them as she looks at Ariel. The former mermaid takes out a locket and opened it. Inside are pictures with Fagin on one side and Ariel on the other. She sniffed sadly as she begins to sing. Ariel: Yes, I made the choice. For uncle Fagin- I will stay. But I don't deserve to lose my freedom in this way, you... Towards the door, Ariel yelled angrily, "YOU MONSTER!" If you think that you've done is right, well then Ariel begins to cry a bit. You're a fool. Think again. Is this home? Is this where I should learn to be happy? Never dreamed That a home could be dark and cold. I was told Every day in my childhood Even as we grow old Home will be where the heart is Never where words so true My heart's far, far away Home is too. Is this home? Is this where I must learn to believe in? Try to find Something good in this tragic place Just in case I should stay here forever Held in this empty space Oh, that won't be easy I know the reason why My heart's far, far away Home's a lie What I'd give to return To the life I knew lately But I know that I can't Solve my problems going back Is this home? Am I here for a day or forever? Shut away From the world until who knows when Oh, but then As my life has been altered once It can change again Build higher walls around me Change every lock and key Nothing lasts Nothing holds All of me My heart's far, far away Home and free Once she is done singing, Ariel buried her face in the bed and cried heavily. All her friends could do is looked on sadly, with Danny hugging June while Jake just stood there silently. Author's note Ariel and Ash has finally met but to the cost of Ariel not seeing her uncle Fagin anymore. At least her friends are there, right? Oh, DBV? I decided not to do a Danny/June/Jake triangle. I don't need its necessary. Like DBV did before me, I used more songs from the Broadway version of Beauty and the Beast. Next chapter, things will really get interesting in a few ways possible. Review away and don't forget to review my other fics. |
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| JusSonic | Jan 28 2007, 07:44 PM Post #5 |
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Chapter 4: Big Plans In a tavern back in town, most of the villagers there enjoying themselves and drinking. The only person not enjoying himself is sitting in an armchair just for him in front of the fireplace. He is fuming over what happened today. "Who does that girl think she is? She made a bad move messing with me. No one said 'no' to Draco Malfoy and I mean no one!" snapped Draco angrily. "Yeah, she has no right." agreed Koga bringing over two mugs full of soda. Can you believe what she did to me? I was dismissed, rejected, and humiliated in front of everyone and by the most beautiful girl in town, no less!" exclaimed Draco as he the mugs from Koga and threw them into the fireplace. "I just can't stand it!" "More soda?" offered Koga. "It won't help now, not after what happened today! I'm disgraced!" groaned Draco as he puts his head into his hands upset. "Disgrace? You? HA! No way! Pull together yourself, Draco." insisted Koga as he tries to cheer his boss up. He then begins to sing. Koga: Gosh it disturbs me to see you, Malfoy Looking so down in the dumps Koga tries to stretch Draco's face into a smile. Draco however punches him into a table occupied by his cronies Crabbe, Goyle, and Wormtail (the Harry Potter one). Koga got up and gestures to the cronies who cheers. Every guy here'd love to be you, Malfoy Even when taking your lumps Annoyed, Draco turned his chair away and tries to ignore Koga. There's no man in town as admired as you You're everyone's favorite guy Everyone's awed and inspired by you Koga turned Draco's chair around as Yuna, Rikku, and Paine comes over. And it's not very hard to see why! The girls then swooned over Draco as they sigh lovingly at him. No one's slick as Malfoy, no one's quick as Malfoy No one's next as incredibly thick as Gaston For there's no man in town half as manly Koga removes a belt from someone's pants causing them to fall to the ground alarming the guy. Koga then wraps the belt around Draco's neck like a tie. An annoyed Draco flexes and breaks it off. Perfect, a pure paragon! You can ask any Crabbe, Goyle, and Wormtail-y And they'll tell you who's team they'd prefer to be on! Koga dances around stepping on the cronies' heads, giving them headaches. When he drops, they grabbed him and begins swinging Koga back and forth near Draco. Koga, Crabbe, Goyle, and Wormtail: No one's been like Malfoy, a king-pin like Malfoy Koga: No one's got a swell cleft in his chin like Malfoy Koga tickles Draco's chin. Draco smirks, getting his confidence and pride back as he begins to sing. Draco: As a specimen, yes, I'm intimidating! All: My, what a guy that Malfoy! The cronies slammed their mugs together. Soon the whole tavern begins to sing. All except a cloaked figure who is sitting at a table just frowning at this. Give five hurrahs, give twelve hip-hips Koga: Malfoy is the best and the rest is all drips! Koga got so into the moment that, when Draco stood up, he accidentally threw his drink into his boss's face. Draco glares angrily as Koga hid his mug behind his back looking sheepishly. Draco then punches Koga right into his cronies' table and jumped in to wrestled with them. All: No one fights like Malfoy, no one bites like Malfoy Draco bites on Goyle's foot making him yelped in pain. Wormtail: In a wrestling match, nobody bites like Malfoy Yuna, Rikku, and Paine: For there's no one as burly and brawny Just then Draco uses the Leviation spell to lift up the bench they are still on making them giggle in delight. Draco: As you see I've got biceps to spare Koga: Not a bit of him scraggly or scrawny Suddenly the bench fell on Koga knocking him down. The girls were unharmed, lucky for them. Draco: That's right! And every last bit of me's covered with hair! Draco then shows off his hairy chest. Later, he plays a chess game with someone. His opponent won. Angrily, he knocks the chess board aside. All: No one hits like Malfoy, matches wits like Malfoy Koga: In a spitting match, nobody spits like Malfoy! Draco is chewing gum right now as he sings. Draco: I'm especially good at expectorating! Ptooey! He then shoots out his gum very fast. Crabbe, Goyle, and Wormtail hold up signs saying '10' one each. Crabbe, Goyle, and Wormtail: Ten points for Malfoy! The gum bounces across the room and knocks Koga down. Next, Draco is juggling eggs. Draco: When I was a lad I ate four dozen eggs Every morning to help me get large! He then threw the eggs into the air and caught each in his mouth. Koga tries to do this but all that happens is the eggs landing splat on his face. And now that I'm grown, I eat five dozen eggs So I'm roughly the size of a barge! Draco then swings his wand around near Koga. Then Draco blasts very fast nearly knocking his minion out of his stool. He made some holes in a barrel sending out leaks of soda which spilled into onlookers' mugs. All: No one shoots like Malfoy, makes those beauts like Malfoy Then Draco stomps on the floor loudly shaking the whole room as Koga watches. Koga: Then goes tromping around wearing boots like Malfoy Draco: I use antlers in all of my decorating! He then shows off a lot of his animal trophies he got killing animals while hunting. He even shows off a portrait of himself. All of which is above the fireplace. Then Crabbe, Goyle, and Wormtail lifted Draco's chair up. All: My what a guy! Malfoy!!!!!!! They carry Draco's chair, with him still in it, very fast. Koga runs to try to get out of the way but they dropped it on him by accident. Everyone cheered and laughed, all but the same cloaked figure. Suddenly the moment was interrupted when a familiar figure runs into the tavern, with black circles under his eyes as if he hasn't slept in days. "Someone help me!" yelled Fagin in a panic. "Fagin?" asked Moe the bartender (from The Simpsons) in surprise. He doesn't normally see Fagin in the tavern. "You all gotta help me!" begged Fagin as he goes from table to table. "He got her locked in the tower in a castle in the forest! "Who?" asked Jean-Claude (from Rugrats in Paris). "Ariel! And her friends Danny, Juniper, and Jake!" exclaimed Fagin. When Fagin mentioned Jake, the figure who wasn't involved in the singing look concerned. "We got to go there! I know the way! There isn't a moment to lose!" "Whoa, whoa, old man." said Draco trying to calm Fagin down. "Who locked Ariel up in a tower?" "It is a beast! A huge evil monstrous beast!" A pause, then the whole tavern (except for the same figure) laughs at this. Fagin is getting old in years and is known to be crazy at times. As Fagin looks concerned that no one (except, unknown to him, the figure) was listening, Crabbe came forward gesturing something big, "Is it huge?" "Very huge!" Fagin confirmed. "With a long, ugly snout?" asked Goyle with a smirk as he uses a clear mug to make his mouth look huge like a magnifying glass. "Very ugly indeed!" "And sharp, cruel fangs?" added Wormtail chuckling. "Yes, yes!" said Fagin excited, thinking the tavern believed him after all. "Can you help me?" "All right, Fagin. We'd help." said Draco. He made a gesture to Crabbe and Goyle who then grabbed Fagin and take him to the door. "Really? Oh thank you, thank you!" said Fagin happily. His happiness was short-lived, however, when Crabbe and Goyle threw Fagin right out of the tavern and into the snow. It was then that he realized they didn't believed him after all. As Crabbe and Goyle went back to their table, they laughed at Fagin's 'craziness'. "That Fagin is a loon." chuckled Crabbe cruelly. "What a joke! Always make me laugh." agreed Goyle. Draco was overhearing from his chair. After thinking it over, a plan forms in his head. A brillaint yet awful plan. "'Fagin a loon', huh? Crazy old Fagin." With a smirk, he turns to Koga and begins to sing once more. Draco: Koga, I'm afraid I've been thinking. Koga looked up, still under his chair. Koga: A dangerous pastime-- Draco: (finishing) I know, Draco pulls Koga from under his chair as he continues. But that wacky old coot is Ariel's uncle And his sanity's only so-so Draco then makes a 'crazy sign' around his head to prove his point. Now the wheels in my head have been turning Since I looked at that loony old man See I promised myself I'd be married to Ariel, And right now I'm evolving a plan! With a smirk, he then whispers into Koga's ear. Everyone else in the tavern tried to listen in. "If I..." began Draco who then continues into a low whisper. "Yeah?" asked Koga interested. "Then we..." "No! Would she?" "Guess." "Oh, I get it!" exclaimed Koga excited, getting what Draco has planned. "Let's go!" said the two together, then they begin to dance as they sing. Both: No one plots like Malfoy, Draco: Takes cheap shots like Malfoy Koga: Plans to persecute harmless crackpots like Malfoy Draco: Yes, I'm endlessly, wildly resourceful Koga: As down in the depths you descend Draco: I won't even be mildly remorseful Koga: As long as you get what you want in the end! Draco: Who has brains like Malfoy? Koga: Entertains like Malfoy? Both: Who can make up these endless refrains like Malfoy? All: (but Draco and Koga): So his marriage we soon'll be celebrating! My what a guy, Malfoy!!! As the song outside, Fagin wandered outside the town square feeling hopeless. "Will someone help me?" said Fagin is despair. Unknown to Fagin, the same cloaked figure was listening in. Whoever it is narrowed eyes, then leaves very quickly. Back at the castle, Ariel was still crying, face in her pillows, with her friends still in there. "Ariel, please. Stop crying." said Danny. "You're going to dry yourself out sooner or later." June agreed. Suddenly a knock came at the door making Ariel stopped crying to look up. "Who is it?" asked Ariel turning to the door. "It's Tikal." "And Tails!" "Stitch here." "Si, and Eduardo!" Jake comes over to the door and opened it to let the four in. To the group's surprise, Tikal, Tails, and Stitch came in with Eduardo pushing a cart. "Want some tea? It will cheer you all up." said Tikal with a smile. "A talking echidna?" asked Ariel surprised. She backed up and nearly tripped over something. "Careful!" Ariel turned and sees a purple female shadow siren (whom we'll call Vivian) with pink hair and a red and white-striped pointy hat on the floor looking at her smiling. "Who are you, dog?" asked Jake surprised. "I am not a dog. I am a shadow siren and you can called me Vivian." giggled Vivan. "Si. Vivian chooses clothes. Me am Eduardo. Senorita Tikal is my wife. Tails and Stitch are my kids." said Eduardo happily. "How is that possible?" asked June surprised. "Who knows? But it is." giggled Tails. He looks Ariel over and added, "Told ya she was pretty, Tikal!" "Tails, I told you. I am your mother. Call me mom." insisted Tikal. Tails like to call her by her real name just to tease her. "Sorry, mom." Stitch got a teapot off the cart. As Eduardo gets out a teapot, Tikal said, "Okay then." As Eduardo pours tea in the cup Stitch is holding. Tails puts some sugarcubes in it. "One lump or two?" asked Tails. "Give me a lot of lumps." requested Ariel. "Tails! Put that hammer away!" scolded Tikal. "Aww, you never let me have any fun." groaned Tails as he got rid of the hammer. Once they're gone, Stitch then hands the cup to Ariel. "Slowly now." instructed Tikal. "Don't spill." "Thank you." said Ariel with a sad sigh as she takes the teacup and drinks from it. "You all can have some tea if you like." requested Tikal as she and her family makes some more tea. "Thanks." Danny said as he, June, and Jake take their own teacups when they are done and drinks from them. "You did a brave thing what you did." Tikal said to Ariel. "We all think so." agreed Vivian a hint of sadness in her voice. Eduardo, Tails, and Stitch nodded in agreement. "But my uncle, my dreams, and everything. They are gone forever." said Ariel sadly. "Cheer up, Ariel." Jake said smiling. "Things will turned out fine." June agreed. "They're right." agreed Tikal. She then begins to sing. Tikal: I hope that we'll be friends Though we don't know you well Eduardo: But if anyone can make the most of living here Then Ariel, it's you. Both: And who knows? You may find Home here too. Ariel smiles a bit. This is the first time since yesterday that something happens that made her smiled. "Oh, look at us! We're singing when we have to get dinner ready! Let's go, Eduardo!" said Tikal as she left the room. "Coming, sweetie." Eduardo said as he followed his wife. "What a weird couple." observed Danny. "Could be more weirder. I think I may have paired up with Eduardo at one time." agreed June wondering why Eduardo looked so familiar to her. (Author's note: A reference to Darth Ben Valor's Beauty and the Beast: CN Edition which has Eduardo as the Beast and June as Belle) "Let's go, amigos!" Eduardo said to his kids Tails and Stitch. "Bye!" Stitch said as he left the room. "See ya later!" agreed Tails as he leaves too. Soon only Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and Vivian are left in the room. "Okay, let's see what to dress you in for dinner? Let's see what's in the wardrobe." said Vivian giggling as she slithered over to a wardrobe nearby. She opened it and searched through it, she threw out a green dress which June catch. "Why do I find this dress so familiar?" asked June puzzled. (Author's note: This is a reference to a Juniper Lee episode with Steven the Sandman) Soon Vivian pulls out a blue dress and smiles. She slithered back to Ariel holding it, saying, "You'd looked great in this!" "Uh, I liked it but I am not going to dinner." said Ariel with a frown. How can she eat with a monster that made her no longer see the only family she cares about? "But you got to!" gasped Vivian in shock. "Ahem." The group turned to see Bowser coming in. He cleared his throat as he said, "Dinner is served." In the dining room, Roxas, Tikal, and Eduardo watched as Ash walked back and forth very impatiently. "How long does it take for a girl to get ready?! She is supposed to come to dinner!" complained Ash, He then growled at the three, "Why isn't she here yet?" "Be patient, Ash." insisted Tikal. "Give Senorita Ariel a break. She no longer has her uncle and her freedom in one day." agreed Eduardo. "Say, master Ash? Do you think girl is the one who could break the spell over all of us?" asked Roxas hopefully. "Of course I do!" snapped Ash. He then growled, "I am no idiot." "Well, all you have to do is fall for her. She'd fall for you. And, poof, the spell is broken! We will back to normal again by midnight." "You do know, Roxas, that stuff like this don't just happened." said Tikal pointing that out. "But the rose is wilting even as we speak!" Ash groaned as he felt his hand through his fur. He said, "Oh, who am I kidding? She is so beautiful and...well, look at me!" The others looked at each other in concern. Tikal turned back saying, "You just got to let her see pass all that, that's all." "I don't know how to." said Ash turning away. Tikal frowns then gets in front of Ash saying, "Well, first up, you got to look yourself more presentable. Straighten up!" Ash quickly does so. Tikal continued, ""You got to be more like a gentleman than what you are." "Yes." agreed Roxas as he walks up to Ash who turns to him now. "You got to show her what a great smile you have. Go on, show me a smile." Ash does. Except all his smile does is show his big mean teeth. "But we can't scare the senorita to death. You impress her with your great with." Eduardo added. Ash looked at each of them as he listens in to what the others are telling him. "Be gentle." said Tikal. "Give her compliments." said Roxas. "Be sincere." Getting a headache, Ash holds his hands to his head "But above all, you got to control your temper!" said Tikal, Roxas, and Eduardo at once. The door opened up making Roxas say, "Here she is!" Ash looked up, expecting Ariel to enter. But to his annoyance, only Bowser did in a nervous state. "Hey everyone." said Bowser nervously. Ash frowns as he said, "Where is she?" "Who? Oh, Ariel." chuckled Bowser. "She's in the middle of...well, with what's going on and all. she'd..." He then noticed Ash being very impatient glaring. Bowser gulped as he finished, "She's not coming." "WHAT?!" Ash rushed out of the dining room rushing up the stairs with Roxas, Bowser, Tikal, and Eduardo rushing after him. He jumps stairs in his angry state. Soon he arrives at the door to Ariel's bedroom and pounded angrily. "I told you to come down to dinner!" yelled Ash very upset. "She isn't hungry! Leave her alone!" snapped June from inside the room. The others who arrived looked concerned or away at this. "Ariel, come out or...or...I'd break down the door!" roared Ash. "Get lost, creep!" yelled Danny now. "Uh, Ash?" Roxas said tugging at jeans getting Ash's attention. "Pardon me for saying so, but I don't think that would win Ariel's affections." "I'd agreed. Try to be a gentleman." said Bowser nodding nervously. "But she's being so DIFFICULT!" said Ash angrily as he glares at the door. "Try to be gentle." instructed Tikal softly. Ash groaned then he turned back to the door, asking, "Ariel, will you...come down to dinner?" "No!" yelled Ariel this time. Ash points at the door with a 'hm' as he glares at his servants. "Now, now, Senor Ash. Suave. Genteel." instructed Eduardo. Through gritted teeth, Ash now said to Ariel through the door, "I think it would be good pleasure if you join me for dinner." It looks like he's on edge now, including the fur. "Senor Ash, you forgot 'please'." Eduardo pointed out. "Please." Ash added. "The answer is still no!" yelled Ariel's voice. Using his temper, Ash yelled, "You can't stay in there forever!" "Yo, the chick can if she wants to!" Jake yelled through the door. "Just try me!" agreed Ariel. "FINE! THEN GO AHEAD AND STARVE!" roared Ash very furiously. He then turned to the other snapping, "Since she won't eat with me, don't bother giving her anything to eat!" He then stormed off and slammed the door very loudly, enough to cause debris to fell on Roxas. "Well, that was nice." Eduardo said sarcastically while Roxas brushed the debris off of him. With a sigh, Bowser turned to Roxas and said, "Roxas, watch this door and let me know when something happens." "Right, general." said Roxas saluting with a paw. He then walks back and forth like a guard in front of the door. "We better clean up. I don't think dinner will be for a while." said Tikal with a sigh as she, Bowser, and Eduardo goes downstairs. In the West Wing, the whole place itself looks tored up and ruined. But Ash doesn't seem to be annoyed at it right now as he stormed in. "This is ridiculous! I say please, what more does she want from me?!" snapped Ash as he comes over to his dressing table. "I mean, does she want me to beg?!" He then picks up his magic Pokedex, the same Pokedex Raven left him when he was enchanted, and demanded to it, "Show me the girl!" Soon the magic pokedex flashes and an image appeared. It is of Ariel is sitting on her bed. Vivian, Danny, June, and Jake are next to it. "Oh come on, Ariel. Can you at least give Ash a chance?" pleaded Vivian. "Why should she, after what he did to her uncle?" demanded Danny. "He's right. I wouldn't give that the thing a chance no matter what." agreed Ariel angrily. "But he isn't that bad. You just got to know him, Ariel." Vivian said. "What makes you think she wants to know him?" asked June with a frown. "Yeah he is so whacked." agreed Jake. "They're right. I don't want to know him. Heck, I don't want anything to do with him!" As he sees this, Ash sighs sadly as he looks up, "I am only kidding myself. She will never see me as anything but a monster." As he said 'but a monster', Ash puts his Pokedex down on the table in sadness. Nearby, his rose which sits under a glass top loses pedal. Ash sighs sadly as he said, "It's hopeless." Author's note Oh boy. Draco Malfoy has a plan involving marrying Ariel while the girl himself has a big fight with Ash himself. Will things get better or worst? And so is that cloaked figure from the tavern? We'd find out in the next chapter coming soon. Read and review until then. |
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| JusSonic | Jan 29 2007, 10:16 PM Post #6 |
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Author's note Okay, time for another musical number. Also I will reveal who the cloaked figure is. Don't be surprised if any of you knew who it is already. Chapter 5: Dinner for Four Later that night, the door to Ariel's room opened up and she and her friends peek out. "Okay, coast is clear." said Ariel. "Good. Let's go get some food, dog." said Jake as he walks out. "I thought that thing wouldn't let us eat." June said with a frown. "June, he only wanted to eat with Ariel. Besides," Danny said with a smile as he puts his arm around his girl. "Don't ya wanna eat with me?" June blushes and nodded. The group walked down a hallway past a curtain. None of them noticed some activity in there. "Oh no." giggled a familiar female voice. "Oh yes!" chuckled a familiar male voice. "Oh no!" Suddenly Namine run out of the curtain laughing chased by Roxas. Both laughed as Roxas caught her. "Oh yes, Namine." Roxas said with a smirk as he held. "Come on. I was burnt by you before." said Namine smirking. "Ah, that was an accident. We should never have played near the fireplacd." chuckled Roxas. He looked up and gasped as he sees Ariel and her friends going around the corner. He accidentally dropped Namine. "Crud! They are out of the room!" yelped Roxas. Looking down at Namine, he added sheepishly, "Sorry about that, Namine". A while later, a cloaked figure, the same one who is the only being listening to Fagin, came up to the gates of the castle. The figure removed its hood to reveal that it was a fourteen-year old girl with red hair in a pony tail, and emerald green eyes. She was wearing a yellow sweater with a white shirt underneath, a green skirt, white socks, and black shoes. She was none other than Jake Long's girlfriend, Betty Barrett. "This must be the place that I heard about." said Betty in surprise. She then went through the gates, and walked all the way up to the main door. After looking around, the red-haired girl knocked on the doors. Unknown to her, two familiar cubs were watching from a window. "Looks like a friend of those guys." Roxas said. "Well, let's open the door for her." Namine suggested. With a nod, Roxas pulled a lever, and the castle's door opens. At that moment, Betty came slowly in, and wandered around. In the kitchen, Eduardo was putting Tails and Stitch in a bedroom cupboard for bedtime. "Time for bed, Tails and Stitch. In the cupboard with your fellow amigos." urged Eduardo. "But we're not sleepy, dad." said Tails with a yawn as he and Stitch are put in the cupboard with their fellow siblings. "Yes, you are." "No, we're not." mumbled Stitch. Eventually, both he and Tails went to sleep. Eduardo closes the cupboard door as he smiles. "Fudge, children! I work all day for this dinner and what happened? Nothing!" Eduardo turned to see a black armored figure that looks like a cross between Darth Vader and a chef costume especially since what he's holding is a lightsaber with a purple spatula like thing glowing at the end. His name is Chef. (Author's note: Anyone remembers Darth Chef with the episode with only clips of him doing his voice?) "I made the most perfect meal in the history of this castle and now it will go to waste!" groaned Chef. "Oh calm yourself, Chef." said Tikal with a sigh as she puts a teapot she was finished cleaning onto a counter. "The long has been long for all of us. We all know it." "If you ask me, the girl was being stubborn." scoffed Bowser as he throws a napkin into a cupboard. "He did say please, after all! And the fact that her friends helped is not better!" "Let's face it. The amigo won't do much if he keeps getting all upset." said Eduardo as he goes put a few dry dishes away. "Plus, if he keeps getting all upset, he'll never break the..." Bowser quickly cut Eduardo off and for a good reason. Ariel and her friends has entered the room. "Why hello! How great to see you all up and about! Tired of the room eh?" He then shakes each of their hands saying, "My name is Bowser, king of the koopas and head of the household." "Hello?" The group turned and to their surprise, Betty came in. "Betty?" asked Jake surprised as he sees his girlfriend entered. "Jake!" said Betty happily as she goes to her boyfriend and kissed him. Jake was all red as Betty pulled away. "I'm glad to see you. When you disappeared, I got worried." "What are you doing here? Who let her in here?" demanded Bowser annoyed. "I did!' said a familiar cub rushing into the kitchen and beginning shaking hands. Bowser rolls his eyes as he points at Roxas, "This lion cub is Roxas." "Great to meet you, including the new girl." said Roxas smiling. "Betty, how did you get here? In fact, how did you even know we're here." Ariel asked. "Well, I was in the tavern with Draco making a pride out of himself as usual. Fagin came in exclaiming about some sort of 'beast'. Of course, no one but me believed him and they threw him out. I decided to go find you guys to make sure you are all right." explained Betty. "Is Fagin okay?" asked Danny. "I think so though when I left, Draco got one of his 'ideas' looks. I think he's planning something sinister." "He better not or I'd kicked his butt to the curb no matter how popular he is!" snapped June annoyed. Ariel is concerned. Whatever Draco has an idea, it usually involves trying to get her to married him. And she fears her uncle Fagin may be involved in it and she wouldn't be around to saved him! "Ahem." Bowser said as he kicks Roxas aside to get Ariel and the others' attention. "If there's anything we can do, just say so." Bowser then screamed in pain. Roxas smirked evilly as he got behind him as he claws him in the butt forcing the koopa to later rub it. "Well, to tell you the truth, we're getting kinda hungry." said Ariel. It's true. She and the others are getting hungry. "Come to think about it. I didn't have dinner yet, so I'm hungry too." added Betty. "You amigos are?!" exclaimed Eduardo excited. "You hear that? They're hungry! Get everything ready for them!" said Tikal to everyone excited. As she does, Chef, excited himself, gets the stove ready again with Eduardo and the others getting the dishes out. "Hold it, Tikal! You know what master Ash said!" Bowser protested. The last thing he wants is to get in trouble again for disobeying the master. "Oh don't be a sore head. They're hungry and I won't keep them that way." said Tikal. "Oh all right. Get them glasses of water, some bread, and..." Roxas interrupted Bowser with a look of disbelief as he said, "Bowser, I'm surprised at you. They are no prisoners. They are our guests! They should be welcomed here, not the other way around." Roxas then turned to Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and Betty and escorted them to the dining room, "Follow me, you five." "Just do me a favor and keep it down, will ya?" requested Bowser as he looks around nervously and goes to the door. "If master Ash finds out about this, we will be the next meal!" "Of course. But what's dinner without music?" Roxas let the door go as he leaves and it slammed right into Bowser sending him flying and yelling, "MUSIC?!" He then landed in a big bowl. In the dining room, Roxas got onto the table with a spotlight on him. Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and Betty watched in amusement. "Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. It's with great pride and excellent pleasure that we welcome you all tonight." said Roxas as a servant tossed him a hat and cane, both which he caught. "So relax, take a chair..." As he said this, the servants sat the five friends down in a chair each. "For the dining presents...your dinner." As the group watched and smiles, Roxas begins to sing using the hat and cane like a Broadway chorus man. Roxas: Be...our...guests, be our guests Put our service to the test, tie your napkin 'round your neck, friends and we provide the rest! A servant gave napkins to Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and Betty around their necks each. They however removed their napkins and puts them on their laps. The servants just frowns at this. Soup du jour, hot hors d'oeuvres Why we only live to serve Try the grey stuff, it's delicious Roxas held out a tray with gray pudding and the five friends each take a taste. Don't believe me? Ask the dishes! A door opens up allowing guys dressed as dishes coming out to perform. They can sing, they can dance As if this were France! And a dinner here is never second best! Roxas then gives friend a menu each which they began to read. Go on unfold your menu, take a glance and then you'll Be our guests, be our guests, be our guests! Several transformed servant brought each dish to the five friends who eats each serving. Servants: Beef ragout, cheese souffle, Pie and pudding en flambe! In one dish, Bowser came out of a pie but Roxas uses his fire spell to set it on fire burning Bowser who fainted. Roxas: We'll prepare and serve with flair A culinary cabaret! You're alone and you're scared, But the banquet's all prepared! No one's gloomy or complaining, While the flatware's entertaining! Several servants now go through a 'Busby Berlkley-esque' swimming scene. Meanwhile Roxas is elevated on a platform as he juggles some juggling sticks. We tell jokes, I do tricks With my fellow juggling sticks Soon some Thwomps appeared and begin to sing. Thwomps: And it's all in perfect taste That you can bet!!! Thwomps now goes do some sticks going over each other and giving one drink to another. All (but Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, Betty, and Bowser): Come on and lift your glass, You've won your own free pass To be our guests, be our guests, be our guests! Roxas: If you're stressed, it's fine dining we suggest! Alll (but Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, Betty, and Bowser): Be our guests, be our guests, be our guests! Get your worries off your chest Let's just say for your entrée We've an array, may we suggest Try the bread, try the soup When the croutons loop de loop It's a treat for any diner! Don't believe me? Ask the china! Singing pork, dancing veal What an entertaining meal How can anyone be gloomy or depressed We'll make you shout encore And send us out for more So be our guests, be our guests, be our guests! Bowser finally got free of the pie and is frantically trying to quiet everyone down. He tries to grabbed a servant but then the spotlight is on him. Bowser looks shocked as the servant got free and runs off. Roxas: Life is so unnerving, For a servant who's not serving! Bowser chuckles nervously as he tries to leave but (somehow) Roxas grabs him and keep him around. He's not whole without a soul to wait upon "Let go, you idiot!" hissed Bowser angrily as Roxas continues singing. Ah, those good old days when we were useful Suddenly, those good old days are gone. Suddenly it looks like salt is falling. Of course, what where Bowser's looking, two servants were spraying salt and pepper all over them. Bowser groaned in annoyance. Ten years we've been rusting Needing so much more than dusting Roxas dust the salt and pepper off of Bowser who tries to get free to no success. Needing exercise, a chance to use our skills! Bowser finally got freed except it was because Roxas let him go by accident. Bowser was send flying head first in gelatin. The koopa struggles to get out to no prevail. Most days just lay around the castle, Flabby fat and lazy You all walked in, and oops-a-daisie! Jumping on a spoon nearby, Roxas got the koopa freed sending him flying once more. In the kitchen, Tikal is excited as she and the staff are at work as she herself dances around. Tikal: It's guests, it's guests! Sakes alive, well I'll be blessed! Wine's been poured and thank the Lord I've had the napkins freshly pressed! With dessert, they'd want tea, And my dear, that's fine with me! While my sons do the cups' soft shoeing, The tea'll be bubbling, the tea'll be brewing! It'll get warm, piping hot Tikal gasps as she sees a spot on a teapot. Heaven's sake, is that a spot? Clean it up, we want the company impressed! Eduardo quickly cleans the spot off with a rag then puts it in a cart. The couple then rushed the cart into the dining room. We've got a lot to do-- The two arrived in the dining room and stop near Ariel and her friends. Eduardo: Is it one lump or two? For you our guests Tikal poured out the tea, Eduardo mixed the sugar in it in the teacups, and Tails and Stitch gives each teacups after they're done. All: They're our guests! Tikal and Eduardo: They're our guests! All: They're our guests! Be our guests! Be our guests! Our command is your request! It's ten years since we had anybody here And we're obsessed! With your meal, with your ease, Yes indeed, we aim to please Everyone now make a chorus line. While the candlelight's still glowing Let us help you, we'll keep going-- Soon they all moved to show Roxas who begins to sing. Roxas and everyone else: Course, by course Roxas puts his hat on as the others make a chorus line again. One by one 'Til you shout "Enough, I'm done!" Ariel and her friends looked delighted and excited as a chandelier came down from the ceiling and it was 5 feet above the table. Servants are standing on it being careful not to break it. Then we'll sing you off to sleep as you digest Tonight you'll prop your feet up, But for let's eat up Although very freaked out at first, Bowser calm down and begins to dance along like a child. All (but Ariel and her friends): Be our guests! Be our guests! Be our guests! Please be our guest!! The song comes to a great end with stuff flying through the air and servants, transformed of course, dancing. Bowser was dancing happily until Roxas pushes him aside to make a finishing pose. Soon the song ended as the servants bowed. "Wow! That was incredible!" said Ariel happily as she and her friends applauded. "Man, when it comes to Broadway shows, this one is a hit." said Jake agreeing. "Thank you very much." said Bowser as the others cleaned the whole place up. "It was great, really." Taking a watch out, he looks at it and yawns. "Well, is it that time already? I guess so. Time to go to bed. Off you go!" "What? And miss out on a chance to check out this enchanted castle? No way!" said June excited. "I agreed. I just got here. I gotta check this place out." Betty said smiling. "Oh come on. What give you guys the idea this place was enchanted?" said Bowser sheepishly. Then turning to Roxas angrily, he yelled, "You did, didn't you?! You fur ball!" "Why I oughta..." Roxas then pounces Bowser and the two got in a big fight. "Hey guys. Calm down." Ariel insisted. Bowser and Roxas stops fighting. Bowser was biting on Roxas's tail while Roxas was scratching his shell. The two calm down somewhat as Roxas jumped down and lick himself to clean up. "Now then, if you guys don't mind, I figure we could take a look around. Right, Betty?" Jake asked his girlfriend. "Sure! Anything with you, Jakey Wakey." Betty said seductively, making the American Dragon blush. "Of course! Let's do it." said Roxas smiling. He is about to begin the tour but Bowser grabs him by the tail. "Hold it, cub boy! That isn't a good idea! What if they were to going into places they aren't supposed to!" whispered Bowser harshly. "What would the master say if he sees the newcomer?" "Uh, come again?" asked Roxas puzzled. "Ugh. You are just an idiot." groaned Bowser. "Say, how about you lead us around?" Ariel asked giving Bowser a big smile. "Sure! You have to know a lot about this place, right?" Danny asked smirking. "Smartest koopa, I bet." added June. "To tell you the truth..." Bowser said hesitating at first turning around. But the words got him and he ended up blushing. He look back and smiles in a dorky manner, "Aw, why not?" Author's note So Betty is here and the guests has themselves a dinner. Now they're going to a tour. But what happens when a tour turns bad in a few minutes? Check out the next chapter coming soon. Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Jan 30 2007, 10:25 PM Post #7 |
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Chapter 6: The Forbidden West Wing As Ariel and her friends have their tour, Ash returns to outside their bedroom's door. He felt bad about the way he acted and decided to try once again to make amends. "Okay, Ash. Let's do this again. And this time, try not to freaked out if she refuses." mumbled Ash to himself. He then knocks on the door. To his surprise, no one answers. He tries again. Still no answer. Ash sighs sadly as he makes his way back to the West Wing. "Man, what a jerk I was." Ariel and her friends looked around as Bowser gave her the tour. He's explaining about the rooms and what they were for. Roxas and Pikachu followed behind, not bothering to listen since they heard the stories so many times before. When they reach a hall of armors, the group didn't realized that some of them has just subtracted. "And plus..." Bowser turned to speak to Ariel's group but to his surprise, they are gone. "Hey, where did you go off to?" "Oh, Ariel mentioned going up the stairs to see a place beyond the dark steps." explained Roxas as he comes up. "Oh. That's good." said Bowser with a smile. But then, his eyes widen as he remembers something, "Wait, doesn't those steps lead to..." "THE WEST WING!" yelled the two at once in horror. They then run off to find Ariel's group with Pikachu running after them saying its usual Pikas. Ash arrives in a room with a sigh. He thought of asking Ariel again later. He looks up and looks horrified as he sees a terrible sight: Ariel and her friends are at the steps leading to the West Wing! 'Oh no! They wouldn't! Oh no, they would! They're going to entered the West Wing!' thought Ash in horror. 'And who's the new girl? Never mind that! I got to beat them first!' Ash then runs off to go another way into the West Wing. Before the group could goes up the steps, Roxas and Bowser appears blocking their way. "What's up there?" Ariel asked looking up the steps. "Oh, nothing that would interest you." said Bowser nervously. "The West Wing has nothing important in things. Very dusty, dull, and boring!" Roxas nods in agreement nervously. Looking at the two and up the steps, Danny smirked, remembering what Ash told them not to go to, "Ah ha! So that's the West Wing!" Roxas looks alarmed then he glares at Bowser in annoyance, since Bowser has let slip about the West Wing. "What is it he has up there he doesn't want people to see?" asked June taking a few steps. "Oh, master Ash isn't hiding anything." Roxas said quickly, trying to cover up. "Well whatever it is, it can't be as forbidden as the dog said, yo." Jake said as he climbs up a few steps as well. Roxas and Bowser blocks the group's path again. Bowser said, "Perhaps there is something else you would want to see." "Later. I got to see this." said Betty taking a few steps, but the two servants blocked her once again. "Can you at least see the gardens or libary?" said Roxas very desperate to keep the group out of the West Wing at all costs. "You have a library?" asked Ariel seemingly interested. "Sure! We got a bunch of books you can dream of!" said Bowser, believing the danger has passed. With that, he and Roxas walked off along with Pikachu to show Ariel and the group the library as they speak about books. At least, they thought they were leading them. Although Ariel wants to see the library, she decides to take a sneak peek in the West Wing first. The group, after taking the steps, entered a dark corridor going by broken statues. "It's no wonder why Ash doesn't want anyone in here. He never seems to clean up this part of the castle." observed June. They passed a broken mirror and soon come up to a door that has a door handle with a carved face that is trying to tell them to go away. Ariel almost left but she suck up her courage, opens the door, and she and her friends went in. The room the West Wing has is a total mess. Ash Ketchum doesn't seem to care about cleaning up after himself. "Geez, this place is worser than Haley's room." said Jake in disbelief. "It looks like a monster went here. Or maybe Ash did." agreed Danny. Betty sees something and points, "What's that?" Ariel turned and gasped. What Betty pointed at is a portrait of a boy. It is of a well-built teenage boy about fourteen-and-a-half-years-old, and he had spiky raven hair, and amber colored eyes, and he wore a blue hoody with a gray hood over a black t-shirt, along with a pair of blue jeans from Arizona™, black tennis shoes, and a pair of black fingerless gloves. Plus, he wore a red cap with a black stripe and a green arch and dot on it. Ariel frowns. There is something familiar about the boy's eyes but she couldn't say for sure since there is slashes across the painting, like Ash himself has ripped it with his claws. "Who is it, Ariel?" Danny asked as the former mermaid got closer and tries to piece the puzzle together. "I am not sure. There's something familiar about him..." Ariel said in thought. Suddenly her attention was interrupted by a shimmer of light. "Huh?" Jake asked. The others turned and sure enough, there is a rose under a glass jar on a table nearby. The others got closer to take a look at that. Ariel looks in wonder at it. 'What is that? It looks so wonderful.' Ariel removes the jar and is about to touch the rose itself...when a shadow covers making her stop. The group looks and gasped. Ash is at the window! Ash quickly charges forward with a roar causing Ariel and her friends to move out of the way. He places the jar back over the rose very quickly. As Ariel and her friends back off, Ash looks at them in a furious look. "Why are you all here?" demanded Ash angrily. "I'm sorry. I'd didn't mean..." Ariel begins to say. "Since the new girl is here, I have told you that all of you are NOT to come here!" "Come on! We didn't mean any harm, yo!" protested Jake. Angrily, Ash grabs Ariel by the wrist and yelled, "Do you know what you have almost done?! GET OUT!" He lets go of Ariel causing her to run to the doors in fear, he continuing yelling, "GET OUT!" "Oh all right! We're leaving!" June yelled angrily. "And don't expect us to come back." Betty agreed angrily. As Ariel and her friends run out of the room, Ash slowly realized what they mean and try to say, "Wait, stop!" However they are all out of the room before he could stop them. With a sad sigh, he sits on the ground and puts his face in his hands. Once again, his anger has caused him very dearly. After removing his hands, he begins to sing. Ash: And in my twisted face... There's not the slightest trace Of anything that even hints at kindness And in my tortured shape No comfort, no escape He then stands back up as he continues. I see, but deep within is utter blindness Hopeless As my dream dies As the time flies Love's a lost illusion Helpless Unforgiven Cold and driven To this sad conclusion He goes to a broken mirror nearby and sighs sadly as he looks into it. No beauty could move me No goodness improve me No power on earth, if I can't love her No passion could reach me No lesson could teach me How I could have loved her and make her love me too If I can't love her, then who? Ash now goes over to a portrait Ariel and her friends looked into earlier before he yelled at them. Long ago I should have seen All the things I could have been Careless and unthinking I moved onward He goes outside and goes to the top spire of the mansion and stood on it and sings in a powerful tone of voice. No pain could be deeper No life could be cheaper No point anymore if I can't love her No spirit could win me No hope left within me Hope I could have loved her And that she'd set me free But it's not to be If I can't love her Let the world be done with me! Back downstairss, Ariel and her friends rushed by Roxas and Bowser as they run to the doors. "Hey! Where are you all going?!" yelped Roxas in shock. "I am not going to honor my promise to stay in this place any longer!" yelled Ariel as she opens the door. "Yeah! He's a monster." Danny yelled. Snow blew into the castle but Ariel and her friends run out anyway. "Wait! Come back!" cried Bowser as he runs forward. But the group closes the door making it too late. Bowser and Roxas sighs very sadly, believing that all was lost. Ariel and her friends were riding in the minicycle along with Dodger and the gang (who managed to find a place to hide or things to do while they were inside the castle) as they make their way home. They were all relief to escape the dreaded castle and its terrible owner but they aren't out of the woods yet. Literally. The group has no idea how to get out of the place and they soon ended up lost. Suddenly they heard some snarling. "What is it, Dodger?" Rita asked in concern looking around. "I think I heard that noise before." said Einstein scared. Tito screamed. The Heartless, the same ones who attack Fagin before, appeared. Seeing a new meal, they chased after them. The chase continues until the minicycle knocks into something and the gang all flew off. They got off with a groan. "Man, watch where you going." groaned Tito. They gasped as they see the Heartless approaching very hungrily. They try to get the minicycle up but it was too late as the creatures surround them. "Going ghost!" yelled Danny as he transforms into his Danny Phantom alter-ego. One of the Heartless jumps at the dogs but Danny fires a blast at it, destroying it. "Dragon up!" boomed Jake as he turns into the American Dragon. Betty turns into her alter-ego, Atomic Betty. As more of the Heartless surrounds them, Ariel, picking up a tree branch, and her friends begins fighting them off. But no matter what, the Heartless either kept getting back up or more appeared. "There is too many of them!" cried June as she punches a Heartless back. "Man, this is whack." groaned Jake as he spits a fireball at one of them. Ariel was swinging wildly but she tripped. She looks and screamed as a Heartless approached her. "Ariel!" cried her friends. The Heartless jumped at Ariel but a familiar figure came out of nowhere and grabs it. It was Ash! He roars at it, destroying it instantly. Ash then turned his attention to the Heartless and begins fighting them off. "The Pokemon is helping us?" asked June in shock. "I thought he told us to get out." said Danny dumbstruck. "Incredible." agreed Francis, shock to see just fighting. Some of the Heartless managed to sink their teeth into Ash making him roared in pain but he knocks them off. As Ariel and her group watches, Ash continues fighting them off like mad. Soon the Heartless got scared and runs off in fear. When they are gone, Ariel and her friends looked at Ash, who looked back. The Pokemon himself is in bad shape from all the fighting, with claw marks on him and his eyes half open. With a groan, he fell into the snow. "Come on, guys! Let's go before he recovers." said Dodger as he and the dogs got the minicycle off and is about to restart it. Ariel looked from Ash to the minicycle. They are free to go now but looking back at the monster who saved him, Ash looks up weakly and gave a sad look as if telling them to leave him there to dead. "No, Dodger. We can't." said Ariel with a sigh. "Say what?" asked Dodger puzzled. "We can't leave him here like that. He'd die." "Oh come on! He can defend himself!" protested Tito a little freaked as he looks at Ash. "No, Ariel's right. Come on, let's get him back to the castle." Betty said with a sigh. Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and Betty helped Ash up and put him on the minicycle. Then, with Ariel and her friends walking aside it with Ash taking up all of the minicycle, begins their trek back to the castle. In the parlor back in the castle, Eduardo puts some water in a bowl while Tikal warmed it up. Ariel put a towel in it and ringed it. As her friends, including the dogs who they convinced to come into the castle with them, watched, Ariel looked at Ash who is licking in his wounds while in his chair. "Come down." said Ariel with a sigh seeing Ash licking his wounds literally. "Don't do that." Ash just growled at her annoyed. The servants and Ariel's group backed off in concern. Ash tries to keep his arm away while Ariel tries to reach his wounds with the wet towel. "Hold still, will you?" asked Ariel annoyed. She then succeeds in putting the wet towel on Ash's wounds. The Pokemon's eyes widen up and he roars loudly freaking the others out. "That hurt!" yelled Ash at Ariel angrily. "If you woulda hold still, it wouldn't hurt so much!" snapped Ariel. "Well if you and your friends haven't run off, I wouldn't got hurt!" "If you haven't scared us, well mostly me, almost half to death, we wouldn't have to run off!" Ariel pointed out. Ash was about to say something but stops. He knew she was right. He did scared them almost half to death and he felt bad for doing so. Still, he isn't about to lose the argument yet. "Well, you shouldn't have disobey me and go into the West Wing when I told you all, except the new girl though I bet she gets the idea already, not to!" Ariel sighs with a scowl. "You should learn to control your temper." "Seriously, yo. You wouldn't be more whack." agreed Jake with a frown. Ash and Ariel looked at each other. Ariel said, "Hold still. This will sting a bit." Ash cringes as he looked away and closes his eye, getting ready for the sting. As Ariel cleans his cuts, she then said, "Oh, and thank you. For saving our lives, including mine." Ash opens his eyes in surprise and turned to her. In all his life, no one has ever thank him before. All they did was want something in return but this girl...she didn't seem to want anything for him rescuing them. For the first time ever, he felt...warm inside. "You're welcome." Ash said with a smile. Ariel's friends, the dogs, the servants, and Pikachu smiles as Ariel continues cleaning Ash's cuts up. 'Perhaps there is hope yet.' thought Roxas with a smile. Author's note Looks like things has finally patch between Ash and Ariel, including her friends. Things are going to get interesting in the castle from now on. But in the village however, something big is about to start. What could it be? Find out in the next chapter coming soon. Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Jan 31 2007, 08:39 PM Post #8 |
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Author's note To Phillip Clark, actually I have someone else to be the asylum keeper. So no to Voldey. But what I got is even better. On with the story! Chapter 7: A Changed Pokemon Back in the tavern in town, the whole place is empty. All except Draco and Koga who are having a secret meeting with a figure. This figure is a tall, thin and middle-aged man. He dresses in a dark robe of black, purple and red and also wears a large, purple hat. His name is Judge Frollo, the town's judge and owner of the local insane asylum. (Author's note: I am using Frollo who was voiced by the late Tony Jay. Surprisingly, Tony Jay also voiced Monseiur d' Arque in the actual film) "Thank you for coming on such short notice, Judge Frollo." said Draco with a smirk. "You'd better have a good reason for making me leave the asylum in the middle of the night." said Frolo. Then glancing at Koga, he added, "That wolf demon there told me you have something worth my time if I listened." "Here's part of it." said Draco handing over a bag of gold. Then he takes out an envelope as he added, "Also, the address of the gypsies you have been chasing." Frollo smirked evilly. He despite gypsies, believing them to be unholy demons that pose serious threats to society. He takes the gold and an envelope as he said, "I'm listening." "Let me get this straight: I wanted so much to married Ariel but she needs to be a little...convinced." "Yeah. She turned him down flat." joked Koga. As a result, Draco hits him with a mug. Draco continued, "Her uncle Fagin was in here a while ago making wild claims about a monster in a castle. His wild claims is a cause for concern." "Although I rarely care, Fagin doesn't seems like the type to cause harm." said Frollo in dismissal. "Let me get to the point: Ariel loved her uncle Fagin so much that she will do anything to keep him from being locked up." added Draco. "Yeah. Including marrying him." remarked Koga. He noticed Draco is glaring at him annoyed. When Draco puts his hand up, Koga held a mug up to defend himself. Draco turns his attention to Frollo and said, "And that is where you come in." He then begins to sing. Draco: When a guy like me is thwarted And denied his honeymoon Koga: When the pretty thing he's courted Refuses to swoon Draco: Then the time has come for a murky plan Koga: For which he turns to a murky man Draco, Koga and Frollo: To find that fiend where better than At the House of the Loons? Draco: (to Frollo) You'll be strapping up an inmate Koga: Very tightly Draco: Very soon And we won't bring him in late Koga: Your check-in time's noon Frollo: How sad that Fagin is not too well Draco: Prepare a five-star padded cell All: And book him in for a long, long spell At the House of the Loons Draco: Do I make myself entirely clear? Koga: It's the simplest deal of your whole foul career Draco: Put old Fagin away and she'll be in here in moments Koga: In a dreadful state Draco: She'll capitulate to me Frollo: Oh! Oh! Oh, I love incarceration! I could lock up a platoon! Draco: We'll apply your inclanation To an old buffoon Draco and Koga: Then wave one bachelor goodbye Draco: She'll be my bride Koga: She'd rather die! Koga noticed Frollo and Draco giving him an angry look. He quickly changes his tune. Than have her uncle ossify Frollo: The time's opportune The song stops for a while as Frollo thought about this. He then said, "So let me get this straight. You want me to threaten to lock her uncle in the asylum unless she agrees to marry you?" The two nodded. Frollo sighs seemingly in disgust at first. "Oh, that is despicable." Then he gave a scary cruel look and laughed evilly saying, "I love it!" Soon they finished their song. All: Then book the church, raise glasses high To the House of the Loons! When they are finished singing, Draco, Koga, and Frollo laughed evilly at once beginning their evil plan. Back at Ariel's home, frustrated no one would listen to him, Fagin decided to take matters in his own hands as he packs up what he needs for an important mission. "Well, if no one would help me. I'd do this alone!" said Fagin angrily. "I promise you Ariel, I will find the castle again and get you all out of there!" Once he finished packing, he then leaves the house, closing the door on the way out. The door opened later as Draco, Koga, and Frollo arrived, planning in seizing Fagin. But to their surprise, neither he or Ariel are around. "Ariel? Fagin?" Draco yelled inside the house. But he got no response. "Well, we failed. Let's go home." said Koga with a shrug as he turns to leave. But Draco grabs him and takes him outside. "No! I am not giving up like that! They have to come home sooner or later! We'd be ready for them by the time they do!" yelled Draco furiously. He refuses to let this chance of marrying Ariel slip through his fingers. Seeing a pile of snow nearby the porch, he slams Koga right into it and exclaimed, "You are not to move from there until Ariel and Fagin comes home!" "But...hold on..." Unfortunately, both Draco and Fagin leaves, leaving a cold Koga behind. He groans as he said, "Darn it!" He kicked a tree nearby. This resulted in a bunch of snow falling right on him. Back at the castle, the next day, things were turning out better. In the balcony, Ash, Roxas, and Bowser watched Ariel and her friends in winter clothes having fun with Dodger and the dogs. Ash has a cloth wrapped around his right arm. His clothes were as good as new since Ariel fixed them for him. As he, Roxa, and Bowser watches, Pikachu runs up happily and is hugged by Ariel. "For a Raikou, it sure sounds like a Pikachu." said Dodger in amazement. "Must be a spell or something." agreed Rita. Ash smiles warmly as he said, "Man, I've never felt this about way about anyone." He pauses then said, "She was nice to me. Perhaps I should do something for her." He tries to think, then frowns and turns to Roxas and Bowser, "Any ideas, guys?" "Oh, I don't know. Maybe flowers, chocolates, promises you don't bother." remarked Bowser rolling his eyes. "Bowser, don't be like that. Ash, if you want to give her something, it should be something she likes. Something that gives her joy." Roxas then goes to thinking then smiles. "I got it!" Later, Ash takes Ariel to a set of doors to a room somewhere in the castle. As they arrived, Ash said, "I got something to show you, Ariel." He almost opened a door then closed it as he turned to Ariel, "Oh, but close your eyes." Ariel looked puzzled. Ash added with a smile, "It's a surprise." Smiling back, Ariel closes her eyes. After waving a hand (or paw) in front of her, Ash opens the doors and led her in. "Can I open my eyes now?" asked Ariel anxiously. "Not yet." said Ash smiling. He stops her and said, "Wait here." He goes over to a set of curtains nearby as Ariel waited. As he opens them, Ariel can senses the light coming in and smiles as each curtain opens up. "Now?" asked Ariel more anxiously. "Okay...now." said Ash smiling. Ariel opened her eyes and gasped. For the room she and Ash are in is the library itself...with so many books on many shelves! "Oh my gosh. I have never seen so many books in all my life!" exclaimed Ariel happily. "You like it?" asked Ash hopefully as he goes next to her. "I loved it!" "Then it's yours." Outside the doorway, Roxas, Bowser, Tikal, Eduardo, Namine, Ariel's friends, and the dogs watched while Tails and Stitch tries to look in. "It work! I knew it would!" cheered Roxas happily. "What worked?" asked Tails puzzled. "I got to admit. The two looked very happy together." June said smiling. "Like we are, right June?" Danny asked making his girlfriend blushed. "This is incredible." said Bowser excited. "Si, you got that right." agreed Eduardo smiling. "Isn't this incredible?" asked Vivian as she, Roxas, and Bowser begins to leave. "We have never seen the girl so happy, dog." Jake said putting his arm around Betty. "I agreed. It's much better than hearing Draco's pride talking." said Betty with a smirk. If he were here to see this now... "Stitch didn't see anything." exclaimed Stitch unhappily as he and Tails goes to their parents. "Come on, you two." giggled Tikal as she and Eduardo takes their kids by the hand each, "We got some chores to do in the kitchen." "What's going on? What are they on about? Come on!" complained Tails as Tikal takes him to the kitchen. The next day, Ariel, Ash, Danny, June, Betty, and Jake are having breakfast. Today's meal is cereal. Ariel takes one crunch of her meal. She looked up and is startled as Ash is eating his meal like an animal. He looked up and sees Ariel and the others looking at him, Eduardo and Tikal nearby embarrassed while Ariel looks away. Embarrassed himself, the Pokemon clean his face off while Tails hands him a spoon. Ash takes it and tries eating his cereal with it. Of course, he has a hard time doing so since he rarely eats with a spoon before. Tails snickered at this until he noticed Tikal giving him a frown, making him stop. Ariel, smiling, decided to help Ash with an easier method. And there, things were smooth sailing. The next day in the courtyard, Ariel and her friends were feeding the birds that came to the castle often. Ash came up to her and taps her on the shoulder. As she turns, Ariel sees that Ash is making a gesture. Realizing Ash wants to feed the birds as well, Ariel gives him some birdfeed. As Ash knelt down towards the birds, Ariel smiles and as she begins to sing. Ariel: There's something sweet Almost kind But he was mean And he was coarse and unrefined. But now he's dear And so unsure, I wonder why I didn't see it there before. When Ash is clearly having trouble feeding the birds due to him just shoving the birdfeed at them, she takes a handful and gently spreads it out, making a trail. One of the birds lands in his hands making both him and her smiled. Ariel then looks away as she goes over to a tree nearby. As he looks on, Ash begins to sing. Ash: She glanced this way I thought I saw And when we touched She didn't shudder at my paw Blushing madly, he turned away from Ariel. No it can't be I'll just ignore He turned back to Ariel with a smile. But then she's never looked at me that way before. Behind the tree, Ariel takes her hood off looking doubtful once more. Ariel: New, and a bit alarming Who'd have ever thought that this could be? She looked back from behind the tree and laughs a bit. True, that he's no Prince Charming And for a good reason. She and her friends laughed as Ash is all covered with birds. Then all flew off. But there's something in him that I simply didn't see. When Ash wasn't looking, Ariel threw a snowball at him. With a smirk, Ash begins to pile a bunch of snow. "Snow fight!" laughed Jake seeing what's going on. He, Danny, June, and Jake gets some snowballs as they join in the fun. Inside the castle, Roxas, Bowser, Tikal, Eduardo, and Vivian watched happily as the whole gang played outside in the snow. Their attention is mostly on Ash and Ariel of course, with Ash dropping a pile of snow on his head by mistake. Ash laughs as he chases the former mermaid around a tree. Ariel ducks around the others and is now is trying to come up from behind. Roxas: Well who'd have thought? Tikal: Well bless my soul. Bowser: And who'd have known? Namine: Well who indeed? Eduardo: And who'd have guessed they'd come together on their own? Tikal: It's so peculiar All: We'll wait and see In the parlor, Ariel, Ash, Danny, June, Jake, and Betty were in there hangin around in front of the fireplace. As the couples (Danny and June, Jake and Betty) cuddled together, Ariel was reading a story to Ash who is listening in interest. A few days more There may be something there that wasn't there before As Ash and Ariel reads the book, the singers, Tails and Stitch included, were watching outside with smiles. Bowser turned to the others. Bowser: Yes, perhaps there's something there that wasn't there before. "What is it?" Tails asked puzzled. Tikal: There may be something there that wasn't there before. "But what is it, mom?" Stitch asked, confused as his brother. "We'd tell you when you two are older, amigos." chuckled Eduardo with a smile. Wanting to give the new 'couple' privacy, Roxas and Bowser closes the doors and leaves with the others. Author's note Great chapter, eh? Ash: Yeah. I can't wait to get with Ariel. Ariel: (giggling) Oh Ash. Ami: Hey! What about me?! Me: Oh come on, Ami, you are one of the girls Ash has an interest in, right? Ami: Yeah, but still. Me: Anyway, folks. The next chapter will have a scene seen in the special edition of the actual movie so get ready for it to appear soon. And no flames. Read and review. Ash: Yeah! Ariel is my boo, Ariel is my boo! Me: (sweatdrops) Right... |
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| JusSonic | Feb 1 2007, 09:51 PM Post #9 |
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Author's note To answer Phiilip's Clark, maybe. Anyway, on to a segment that can be found in the special edition of the actual movie. Also, I made a reference to the Christmas movie of Beauty and the Beast. Chapter 8: When We're Normal Again Time has passed. The castle was busy especially since they have to deal with situations like a rogue big-headed mouse named Brain who tries to separate the two love birds and ruined Christmas (what used to be Ash's least favorite holiday). And soon one day the servants makes plans. They watch as Bowser stands on the first step holding a pointing stick with Pikachu near a clock that said 12 hours, 36 minutes, and 25 seconds. "Now for those wondering why you're here, let me explain." said Bowser as he points to the clock with his stick. "We have 12 hours, 36 minutes, and 20 seconds to make the most perfect romantic atmosphere known to man or Pokemon." He chuckles as he said, "Or Pokemon. That's brilliant." Everyone else, however, looks confused. Then Stimpy Cat spoke up, "Duh, what?" Bowser groans heavily as he said, "Let me explain it another way." Tom the cat and Jerry the mouse bought the table with the rose under a jar very carefully. Bowser points to the rose tapping the jar too much with the stick. The servants gulped as each tap makes the jar moved a bit near the edge of the table. "If the last pedal falls from this rose, we'd all doomed!" Tom and Jerry quickly moves the table before Bowser ends up breaking the jar and rose with the stick making him toss it instead. He clears his throat as he said, "Now any questions?" No one asked any questions. Bowser smirked as he said, "Okay, you got your assignments. Half of you get to the West Wing, the other half to the East. As for the rest, come with me!" Everyone run off to do their assignments. Pikachu rushes off knocking Bowser down by mistake. Roxas, Tikal, Eduardo, and Namine helps him up. "Darn rushing fools!" scowled Bowser angrily. "Aw, lighten up, Bowser." said Roxas with a smile. "We should let de nature takes its course." agreed Eduardo. "We can all see that there's a spark between them." giggled Tikal nodding. "True, but there is no harm in flamming the flames a little, is there?" Bowser said as he and the others walked over to the side of the fireplace. "Besides, if we are to be normal again, they got to fall in love by tonight!" Roxas sighs happily as he said, "Man, to be normal again." "Being myself again." sighed Tikal in agreement. "Think what that means." Roxas then got on Bowser to switch the hands to 12:00. After he got off, the clock chimed. Bowser changed the time back as Roxas begins to sing. Roxas: I'll be cooking again Be good-looking again He smiles as he puts one around around Tikal and the other around Namine who blushes. With a beautiful girl on each arm When I'm normal again Only normal again He goes to a mirror, breaths on it, and cleans it with his paws. He smiles at his own reflection. Poised and polished And gleaming with charm He goes to Namine and hugs her, making her blush redder. I'll be courting again Chic and sporting again Tikal then sings as well. Tikal: Which should cause several husbands alarm Coming in, Tails and Stitchs sings as they stood next to Eduardo. Tails: I'll hop down off the shelf Roxas and Tikal: And tout de suite, be myself All: I can't wait to be normal again In a bedroom, two dogs named Loud Kiddington and Charity Bazaar sings as they clean it up. Loud and Charity: When we're normal again Only normal again When we're animals and things no more When we're normal again Only normal again Vivian is in front of her dressing mirror singing happily. Vivian: Aw, man. Won't it all be so swell? I'll wear lip stick and rouge And I won't be so huge "Darn it, girl. You were never big." pointed out Chef as he came in. "So?" giggled Vivian. Chef tries to get something on top of the shef as Vivian sings. Vivian: But my friend will reach the top shelf I'll exude savoir faire I'll wear gowns, I'll have hair It's my prayer to be grown up again! In the garbage, our favorite servants are in there singing. Tikal and Bowser: When we're normal again Only normal again When the world once more starts making sense Nearby, Roxas was cleaning up the minicycle up with the dogs' help. Bowser came over with his own on his head as if he has a headache. Bowser: I'll unwind for a change Roxas: Really? That would be strange This remark made Bowser a bit annoyed. Bowser: Can I help it if I'm t-t-tense? Of course, he calms down somewhat. In a shack by the sea I'll sit back sipping tea Let my early retirement commence With a smile, he threw a towel on Roxas, annoying the lion cub. After getting the towel off, he smirks evillly and wrapped it up. Far from fools with ears full of wax I'll get down to brass tacks Suddenly Bowser jumped in alarm as Roxas whipped Bowser with the towel sending him flying. And RELAX! All: When I'm normal again! Some of the servants are in Ash's room, cleaning it up as they sing. Servants: So sweep the dust from the floor Let's let some light in the room I can feel, I can tell Someone might break the spell Any day now... Shine up the brass on the door Tom and Jerry cleans the doorknob very nicely. Alert the dust pail and broom Rushing in, Eduardo gets with of the dust via broom and a dust pail making sure not to missed any. If it all goes as planned Our time may be at hand Any day now! As servants rolled out the carpets, Namine, and two girls named May the Torchic and Kari Kamiya the Gatoman goes to a window. Namine, May, and Kari: Open the shutters and let in some air As they opened the window up, Tikal was giving out instructions to a moose named Bullwinkile and a squirrel named Rocky. Tikal: Put these here and put those over there Rocky and Bullwinkle goes to do what Tikal asked as three servants swept some dust to a window. Servants: Sweep up the years of sadness and tears and throw them away Outside, the dust fell from the window and onto Bowser who is instructing more servants who had snow shovels. Bowser looks annoyed at the dust that fell on him. "Ugh. Don't we have trash cans?!" yelled Bowser annoyed. Inside, the hyenas (from The Lion King and Krypto the Super-Dog) are at work very happily Servants: When we're normal again Only normal again When the girl finally sets us all free Cheeks will bloom up again We're assumin' again We'll resume our long-lost joie de vivre In the armor room, Stimpy was very happily cleaning the armors as Pikachu rushes by happily. Stimpy: We'll be playing again Holidaying again And we're praying it's A.S.A.P. Pikachu sees a Persian named Meowth nearby and yells as he chases after the thing. It runs away like its' your usual Meowth. They run into the ballroom leaving dirl behind them as they do. All (except Pikachu and Meowth): When we cast off this pall And we'll stand straight and walk tall The hyenas chases Pikachu and Meowth out as they cleaned up the mess they have made. And we're finally normal again! In the library, the group and Ash were in there. Ariel was reading a story to Ash as he watches her, with his eyes almost half opened. When she finishes, Ariel closes the book. Ash sighs happily smiling. "Can you read it?" asked Ash anxiously. "Why don't you read it? You liked it." said Ariel as she hands Ash the book. Ash was nervous however. "Uh, all right." He takes the book and opens it. He looks at the writing and groans. "On second thought, never mind." "Wait. You mean you've never learn to read?" asked Danny surprised. For a Pokemon who lives in the castle seemingly all his life, he should have been able to read! "Well, I can read, but it was so long since the last time that...well..." Ash said chuckling sheepishly. "Let's say I may need a reminder." Ariel giggled as she said, "Let me help." She turns to the pages back to the beginning and points. "Let's start here." Ash chuckles as he said, "All right." Then he begins to read, "Okay, 'twoe...'" Ariel laughs as she said, "I think you mean 'two'." "Oh yeah. I knew that." Ash said as he sweat drops. He begins to read once again, "'Two households...'" Outside, Waffle, Gordon, and Mr. Blik cleans the windows as the servants sings again. Servants: We'll be dancing again! We'll be twirling again! We'll be whirling around with such ease Bowser was in the garden making like a traffic cop but got knocked over by a servant rushing with a wheelbarrow with plants in it. When we're normal again Only normal again We'll go waltzing thos old one-two-threes As the servants planted the plants, Kari trims the bush plants with her claws so they can looked like various animals. We'll be floating again We'll be gliding again Stepping, striding As fine as you please Once the yard work is done, Bowser puts in the final touch: a "Do Not Step On The Grass Under Penalty Of Chores" sign on it. Roxas turns a valve on nearby turning on the fountain. Like an normal person always does Bowser goes to another valve, turned that one on, turning on another fountain. I'll be bigger and wise Everyone but Vivian are in front of the fountain as they reached the last part of the sing. On that glorious day We'll shout hip-hip-hooray And we're normal Up on a seventh story window, Vivian came out onto the balcony. Vivian: AGAIN! As Vivian sings happily, she jumps off the balcony and towards a fountain below. The others sees her coming and makes a run for it. Of course, Roxas and Bowser rammed into each other as they try to make their get away. It's too late for them to get farther however as Vivian slams right into the fountain sending water flying everywhere right on everyone. A pause, then everyone laughs. Well, almost everyone. "Next time, lock that balcony window." groaned Bowser all wet. The time for the big moment is almost here. Tom and Jerry are cleaning their master up in a tub. As they shrubbed his back, Roxas walks into the room. "Tonight is the night." said Roxas anxiously as Tom dumps water all over Ash rinsing him off. "Not sure if I can do this." said Ash nervously. "Don't be worried now." said Roxas as he points to the rose under a jar nearby. "You got to be bold and daring!" "Okay. I think I got it. Bold and daring." Jerry squeaks, signaling that he's done. Ash shakes himself off like a wet dog, causing his fur to stick up. Soon Roxas, Tom, and Jerry got all wet. Roxas uses a towel to dry himself off as Ash got out of the tub and dries himself off with his own towel. As Ash goes over to a mirror, he sat down. "Think of it. Music, romanic candlelight, which I'll provide." Roxas explained to his master. The thought entered the Pokemon's mind who smiles. "And the time is right, you should confess your love to her." "Yeah. I'll..." But Ash shook his head as he signs. "No, I can't." "But you liked her, do you?" Roxas pointed out as Tom begins to groom Ash. "More than anything in the world!" "Then tell her." Tom soon finishes up and stands back making a 'ta-da' gesture. Roxas smiles as he said, "There! You look so...so..." Roxas, looking at Ash, frowns as he tries to think up what to say. Of course, his master beaten him to it. "Stupid." groans Ash and it's all because he has hairlocks and a bow in his hair. He looks ridiculous. "No, no. That isn't what I'm thinking of!" Roxas said quickly as the cat and mouse went back to work, grooming Ash the right way next time around. Bowser then came into the room, clearing his throat, and smiles as he bowed. "Your lady awaits." Bowser said with a bow and chuckle. Author's note The time has come for the romantic part of the story. Will Ash finally confessed his love to Ariel and break the spell over him and everyone else? And what about Ariel? What does he really thinks of him? Read and review, folks! |
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| JusSonic | Feb 2 2007, 11:45 PM Post #10 |
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Author's note Now for the romantic part. As for the comment about doing a sequel, I may if I could find a sequel (or a story parodying it). Chapter 9: Tale As Old As Time A while later, the ballroom is beautiful and decorated. Ariel came down one staircase as her friends sees her off smiling, the left side, but waits there. She is wearing a golden ball dress. She looks at the other stairs and sees Ash there with Roxas next to him. Ash is wearing red royal robes and the back of his hair is in a ponytail. "Go on." urged Roxas. Ash nods and clears his throat as he walks down the steps with Ariel going down the other. When they got to the bottom and in front of each other, they bowed down as they smiled. Then, in arm in arm, they walked down the final steps. Tikal and Eduardo were on one side of the staircase with Tails and Stitch looking on, all of them were smiling. Tikal then begins to sing. Tikal: Tale as old as time True as it can be Barely even friends Then somebody bends unexpectedly. In the dining room, Ash and Ariel were singing as Tom plays the violin. Eduardo then begins to sing. Eduardo: Just a little change With a smile, Ariel made a gesture meaning she wants Ash to dance with her. Small to say the least Both a little scared Smiling, the two made their way to the ballroom. Neither one prepared, Tikal and Eduardo: Mermaid and the Pokemon. Ariel smiles as she gets ready to dance with Ash who looks nervously. Ever just the same Ever a surprise Ash and Ariel danced very romantically. With a smile, Ash looks over at Roxas and Bowser who smiles in approval. Ever as before, ever just as sure As the sun will rise With more confidence, Ash resumes dancing with Ariel as Tikal continues to sing. Tikal: Tale as old as time Tune as old as song Tikal and Eduardo: Bittersweet and strange, Finding you can change, learning you were wrong Eduardo: Certain as the sun As Eduardo sings, Ariel smiles lovingly as she puts her head on Ash's hair Rising in the east Tikal: Tale as old as time, Roxas and Bowser smiles excited as they give their master two thumbs up each. Song as old as rhyme, Both: Mermaid and the Pokemon Roxas turns a switch to turn the lights down. Tikal: Tale as old as time, Eduardo: Song as old as rhyme, Both: Mermaid and the Pokemon A pair of double doors opened up as the song ends. Ash and Ariel went outside through them. Smiling, Tikal turned to Eduardo who looking at the yawning Tails and Stitch. She said, "Honey, it's past Tails and Stitch's bedtime. Off to bed with them." She kissed her husband on the cheek, making Eduardo blushed happily. Tikal then kisses her sons on the head each. "Good night." Eduardo picks up his sons and take them off to bed. The two looked through the doors smiling as he does so. Outside on the balcony, the two dancers looked out at the stars very happily. "So, Ariel...are you happy here?" Ash asked. "With me?" "I guess so." Ariel said as she looks at the night sky. Ash suddenly became concern when he notices a sad look on her face. "Is there something wrong?" Ash asked. Ariel sighs as she said, "I liked it here with you but...I miss my uncle Fagin a lot. I wish I can see again. But that's impossible." Ash looks sad as Ariel looks down. Then he realizes something and smiles, "Say, I think I have an idea." Back in the West Wing, joined by Ariel's friends, Ash picks up his magic Pokedex and shows it to Ariel. "What kind of toy is that?" Betty asked looking at the magic Pokedex. "It's how I found you guys before. This is a magic Pokedex, which has the power to show you anything, including those you wish to see. Just ask it." Ariel nods nervously as she takes the mirror. She said, "Okay...I wish to see uncle Fagin." The magic Pokedex flashes as it did before and it soon shows an image, making Ariel and her friends gasped. In it is Fagin falling to his knees coughing. "Oh man! It's Fagin!" groaned Danny as the image clears up. "He is sick! He must have got something trying to come over here. I know it!" June exclaimed in concern. As Ash looks concerned, Ariel said, "He could be dying anytime soon and he's alone with no one to help him!" "We got to do something, dog." Jake yelled. Looking at the rose, which still has 3 pedals to it, Ash sighs as he said, "Then you all must go to him." "Huh? But I thought..." Betty begins to said. "You are no longer my prisoners." Ariel looks stunned. "You mean...we're free?" Ash nodded sadly. "Well, I guess we better go and find Fagin before he freezes to death." said Danny. June nods. As Ariel and her friends prepares to leave, Ariel realizes she still has the magic Pokedex. She turns back to Ash and is about to hand it back until he stopped her. "No, take it. That way, you can always look back and remember me." said Ash sadly. Ariel, eyes filled with tears, said, "Thank you for knowing how much my uncle needs us." She then hugs him and said, "We'd miss ya." Ariel and her friends then make their leave. Roxas and Bowser came in happily, unaware of what just happened. "Good work, Ash buddy." said Roxas smiling as he and Bowser walks up to Ash, whose back is to them. "I got to admit. I have my doubts but you prove me wrong." Bowser agreed smiling too. "I let her go." Ash responded sadly. "Of course, you let them..." Roxas suddenly stopped and looks alarmed as he realized what Ash just said. "Huh?! You let her go?! As in allowing her, including her friends, to leave the castle?! But...but why?" asked Bowser in horror. "Because...I love her." said Ash sadly. Roxas nods in understanding and sadness, eyes with tears in them. "I see. Come on, Bowser. We better let everyone else know about this." As the two left the room in sadness, Ash sighs sadly. Remembering what he did, he begins to sing. Ash: No pain could be deeper No life could be cheaper No point anymore If she can't love me No hope she would do so No dream to pursue So I look to myself Despise all the things I see For I know that she cannot set me free Let the world be done with me In the library... "HE DID WHAT?!" yelled Tikal, Eduardo, Namien, Tails, Stitch, and some of the servants in shock as Roxas and Bowser told them what happened. "Yes. It's true. I can't believe it, but it's true." said Bowser with a sigh. "You mean she's leaving?" asked Stitch sadly. "Ay Carumba! This can't be! He was so close!" groaned Eduardo in disbelief. Tikal sighs as she said, "After all this time, he has finally learn to love." Roxas widen his eyes in hope as he said, "Of course! He loves her! That got to break the spell, right?" "No, no, Roxas." sighs Namine sadly. "She got to love him in return." Unknown to the group, Tails sneaks away, looking behind him as he goes out after Ariel and her friends. No one saw him leave. "And now...it's too late." sighs Roxas, giving up once more. Ash watches Ariel and her friends leave with the dogs on the minicycle in hopes to find Fagin before it's too late. Believing he will never see her again, Ash did what he can: he roared as if his hear was broken. Ariel and her friends will never forget that roar as long as they lived. "Uncle Fagin! Uncle Fagin, where are you?" asked Ariel as she and her friends looked around in the forest for him. "Man, if he dies, I'd never forgive myself, man." groaned Tito. "Why? You didn't do anything wrong." Einstein pointed out. "But I'm the one who made him get lost to begin with!" June looks and gasped. She points, "There he is!" The whole gang has finally found Fagin lying facefirst in the snow. "Oh my gosh. Guys, let me get him in the minicycle!" exclaimed Ariel in horror as she and the others get off the minicycle to go to Fagin's aid. The gang finally returned to Ariel and Fagin's home. Once they arrived, they lifted Fagin up and begins taking him into the house. Unknown to any of them, a snowman next to the porch was shivering like mad. When he sees them going inside, it crumbled to reveal a very cold Koga. It was a long time waiting for them to return but it was worth it. "Good. They're back. I gotta get Draco." said Koga as he rushes to fetch Draco...and the others. Author's note Looks like a night of romance has turned into a night of sadness as Ariel and her friends has to saved Fagin. And it will turned even worst once Draco and these 'others' show up. Things are climbing up to a climinax. Read and review folks. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 3 2007, 04:00 PM Post #11 |
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Chapter 10: Kill The Pokemon Fagin groans a bit as he closely open his eyes. As he did, he sees a familiar face he thought he would never see again. "Ariel?" asked Fagin slowly. "It's okay, uncle Fagin, I'm here." said Ariel softly as her friends watch on. "You musta been in the forest for days." June said in concern Now fully awake, Fagin smiles widely as he hugs his niece, "Ariel! I thought I'd never see you again!" "I missed you too, uncle." said Ariel with a sigh. Letting go, Fagin looks concerned. "But that Pokemon monster...how did you escaped?" "We'd didn't, sir. He let us go." explained Jake. "That horrible thing? "Well he was horrible at first but he's changed now." Danny explained. "Yes. You coulda see him. He was..." Ariel was interrupted when she hears a noise. She and the others turned and saw Ariel's bag shaking. Suddenly it opened up and the magic Pokedex came sliding out. A flash appeared and so did a familiar figure looking dizzy. He recovers and smiles. "Hello!" said Tails waving happily. "Tails?" asked June surprised as he comes over. "Well, what do you know? A stowaway?" giggled Ariel happily. "Hello little guy! Didn't think I'd see you again." said Fagin smiling. "But how did you get in there, fox?" asked Jake puzzled. Tails holds up a device on one of his wrists, "It's a shrinking device. I shrunk myself so I can stowaway in Ariel's backpack." "Oh I see." Betty said smiling. In concern, Tails turns to Ariel and asked, "Arie, why did you leave? Don't you like us anymore?" Ariel sighs as she said, "It's not that, Tails. I like you all. It's just..." A knock on the door interrupts her now. "Now who is that?" Danny asked puzzled. Ariel goes to the door and opens there. She is surprised to see Frollo standing outside. "Oh, Judge Frollo! May we help you?" asked Ariel, surprised to see the town's judge. Frollo smiles wickedly as he said, "Is your uncle Fagin home?" "Well, yes." "Good. I have come to collect him." "Say what?" asked June surprised as she and the others came over to see what's going on. "What is this?" Francis demanded. Frollo smirked as he steps aside. He said, "Don't worry. We'd take good care of him." Behind the judge is your typical angry mob standing next to a truck with familiar words on it: "House of Loons". Ariel gasped in horror and exclaimed, "No! My uncle Fagin is not crazy! How many times do I have to insist on this?!" "Then tell us why he's raving like a nutcase!" shouted Koga making the crowd yelled in agreement. Near the porch, Draco was standing crossing his arms as he smirks evilly. Frollo's men, Skulker, Huntsman, Infantor, and Skeeter (the mummy from Juniper Lee) comes out of the truck. "Wait! We can't let you take him!" protested Betty. Fagin appeared, confused. "Ariel?" "There's the nutcase! Hey Fagin, How big was this beast?" mocked Koga laughing. "Well...I think he was big, More like 8 to 10 feet tall!" Fagin exclaimed. This resulted in the mob laughing and pointing at Fagin. "But it's true!" "Take him away." Frollo ordered as Skulker and Huntsman grabs Fagin. "Let me go!" cried out Fagin as the two dragged him over to the truck. "No, stop! We won't let you take him!" Ariel cried out, grabbing Frollo's arm. But he got out of her grip and walked off. "He's telling the truth! We all saw him!" protested Danny. "Yeah. I was in the tavern when Fagin first mentioned it and even I saw him!" agreed Betty. "How should you know? You are friends of a niece of a mad man." sneered Demyx in the ground. Ariel looks like she's about to lose hope. Then Draco appeared and put his hand on her shoulder. "There, there, Ariel. Poor you, shame about your dad." Draco said secretly. "Draco, I know you're a creep and all but even you of all people know the dog is not crazy." Jake said to Draco. "You got to do something. If you have any respect for me at all, help me!" Ariel begged. Draco thinks of this and smirks. This is the chance he was looking for. "Tell you what: I'd clear this whole misunderstanding up." Draco said with a smile. "Oh thank you." "If..." "If what?" June asked. She and the others are concerned about the 'if' part. "If Ariel here marries me." Draco said smirking at Ariel smirked. Ariel and her friends gasped. 'So this is what he was planning!' thought Betty in horror. "What?" exclaimed Ariel in disgust. "You know what to do. Just say it." said Draco with a smile. "Never, you jerk!" yelled Ariel. "Whatever." said Draco with a shrug as he walks away. "You creep, Malfoy! This was your plan wasn't it?! You bribed Frollo to lock Fagin up unless Ariel marries you!" yelled Danny angrily. "Dog, you are whacked!" Jake agrees angrily. "If Ariel cares for her uncle at all, despite all his crazy ravings about some beast in the forest, she has to give in eventually." Draco explained evilly. "My uncle is not crazy!" At this time, Ariel has run back into the house and came out holding the magic Pokedex Ash has given her. As everyone looked at her, she continued, "And I can prove it!" She then said to the Pokedex, "Show me Ash!" The mirror flashed once more then Ariel holds up the magic Pokedex. The crowd gasped as they see a sad Ash in the image. "See? I told you so! There's the Pokemon thing. I tried to tell you but you won't listen!" said Fagin in triumph as Skulker and Huntsman let him go in shock. "Is he dangerous?" asked Ami in concern. "Heck no! Sure he looks horrible looking but he couldn't hurt a fly. He's too gentle and kind." June explained. "He is our friend." Ariel said as she sighs happily as she looks at Ash's image. Draco frowns deeply as he looks at Ariel's emotion. He walks up and said angrily, "If I didn't know any better, I say you have feelings for this monster." "He's no monster, Malfoy, you are!" Ariel yelled at Draco angrily. Draco was furious. She knows what Ariel's feeling, he can tell. 'She is in love with this monster! I am losing the one I wanted to married to Pokemon! Well, if I can't have her, then either would this thing!' thought Draco in fury. He then seizes the magic Pokedex and yelled out, "She and her friends are crazier than Fagin! They think this Pokemon is their friend?! I have been everywhere and I know what Pokemon monsters can do! This thing could come to the village and make off with your kids!" The crowd gasped. Dodger exclaimed, "What?!" "He will come get them in the night!" "No! Draco's lying!" Betty shouted in horror. "Yeah man! Don't believe him!" shouted Tito. But it's too late as the crowd's fear becomes to overcome him as they seems to only be hearing Draco's voice. "We're not going to be safe until his head is cut off and mounted on my wall! I say we KILL the Pokemon!" shouted Draco angrily. Everyone shouted out in agreement as Leroy begins to sing. Leroy: We're not safe until he's dead, Demyx: He'll come stalking us at night! Helen Lovejoy: Set to sacrifice our children to his monstrous appetite! Anakin (the evil one) puts his hand on his wife Padme's shoulder. Anakin (the evil one): He'll wreak havoc on our village If we let him wander free Draco then takes a torch from Wormtail as he shouted. Draco: So it's time to take some action, boys It's time to follow me! Draco throws the torch in a nearby haystack, setting it on fire making the crowd cheers. Draco then prance around it warning of the 'dangers' of the horrible Ash. Through the mist, through the woods Through the darkness and the shadows It's a nightmare but it's one exciting ride. Say a prayer, then we're there At the drawbridge of a castle, And there's something truly terrible inside. As he sings, Draco chases around Koga like a monster. He finally caught Koga and shows his sidekick Ash's image once more exaggerating a lot. It's a Pokemon, He's got fangs, razor sharp ones Massive paws, Killer claws for the feast, man Hear him roar, see him foam, But we're not coming home, 'Til he's dead, good and dead, kill the Pokemon! Ariel suddenly runs forward and kicks Draco in the side, yelling, "I won't let you do this!" Furiously, he grabs Ariel by the arm saying, "If you aren't with us, then you're against us!" Yelling at some of his men and the officer, he said, "Bring the old man, his friends, and the dogs!"" "Hey let her go!" yelled Danny as he, June, Jake, and Betty runs forward. Suddenly Skulker, Skeeter, Huntsman, and Infantor jumps them. After a struggle, the four good guys finds themselves in special shackles that prevents them to transform or use their powers. Goyle, Wormtail, and Leroy grabs Dodger and the other dogs, the latter struggling helplessly to escape. Koga and Crabbe opens the cellar doors, allowing Chad Dixon and Cree to throw Fagin in the cellar who yelled, "Let me go!" "We can't allow them to warn the monser!" yelled Draco as he throws Ariel in the cellar. Skulker, Skeeter, Huntsman, Infantor, Goyle, Wormtail, and Leroy throws Ariel's friends in the cellar. Draco then closes the cellar doors and locked it. "Let us out!" yelled Ariel as she slams into the doors trying to open them without success. "We will get rid of that Pokemon and save our village! Who's with me?!" Draco yelled towards the crowd. Koga, Crabbe, Goyle, Wormtail, Leroy, Demyx, Anakin (the evil one), Huntsman, Chad Dixon, Cree, Skulker, Skeeter, Infantor, and a couple minor baddied yelled out 'I am' from the crowd. (Author's note: Sorry folks but I refused to use good guys in this.) As Tails looked shocked from inside the house, the town people begins to sing. Crowd: Light your torch, mount your horse! Draco then puts a cage on as he sings. Draco: Screw your courage to the sticking place Crowd: We're counting on Draco Malfoy to lead the way! As they sing, Draco leads the angry mob through the woods towards the village. Draco is going to use the magic Pokedex to help him and the mob find the castle. Through a mist, to a wood, Where within a haunted castle, Something's lurking that you don't see every day! As the mob walks through the village, those who aren't going bid them good luck. It's a beast, One as tall as a mountain! We won't rest 'Til he's good and deceased! Sally forth, tally ho, Grab your sword, grab your bow Praise the Lord and here we go! "Once we get to the castle, we will take it over and bring back his head!" yelled Draco angrily. 'Once that thing is dead, Ariel should be as good as mine.' Back in the cellar, Ariel and her friends try to look for another way out of the cellar. "I got to warn Ash! Oh this is my fault!" groaned Ariel then she turned to the others. "Guys, what are we going to do?" "Now, now. We could think of something." said Fagin in concern calming his niece down. "Darn that Huntsman! If these shackles weren't on us, I could go American Dragon on those doors and Draco's butt!" exclaimed Jake angrily. "Isn't there another way out of here?" asked June. "Unfortunately, Fagin didn't think of putting in another cellar door." said Rita with a sigh. "We're struck down here." Tails watched through the cellar window from outside very sadly. He got to do something but what? Tails turned and saw something that made his eyes widen in excitement. It's Fagin's invention still left on the hilltop by Ariel and her friends. "All right!" said Tails excited as he flies with his two tails over to it. Meanwhile, the typical angry mob walks through the forest to Ash's castle as they continue singing. Mob: We don't like, what we don't Understand, it frankly scares us And this monster is mysterious at least! Bring your guns, bring your knives, Save your children and your wives, We'll save our village and our lives, They then go to a tree and cut it down. Picking it up, they carried it as they make their way to the castle once more. We'll kill the Pokemon! Lightning flashes. Back in the library in the castle, the gang there is still feeling down about what happened. Tikal watches Bowser pacing back and forth in frustration. "I knew it all this time! We were faucet heads to let our hopes up!" groaned Bowser. "Perhaps you're right." said Roxas with a sad sigh. "Maybe she shouldn't have come in the first place." "Roxas, how can you say that?" asked Namine, shocked at what Roxas just said. Stitch come in and asked, "Hey, anyone seen Tails?" "Pika pika!" Pikachu saw something out a nearby window that made him yelled out in concern. "What's wrong, little Amigo?" said Eduardo puzzled. "What, could it be?" Roxas asked, his eyes widen in hope. "Could Ariel be back?" asked Tikal hopeful as well. The group goes to a window smiling excited. But when they looked out however, they saw to their horror that it is neither Ariel or her friends. It's the mob. "Holy cow! It's intruders!" yelled Roxas in shock as he sees them. "Your typical angry mob!" agreed Bowser alarmed. Tikal sees Draco in front holding a familiar object. "And they got the magic Pokedex! They must have use that to find the castle!" Thinking quickly, Bowser shouted out orders, "Warn master Ash!" As he continued to do so, he is unaware that the others are running out of the room while Tikal and Eduardo heads to the West Wing to warned Ash. "If they want a fight, then we'd give it to them! Who's with me?" Hearing a door close, he turns and sees everyone gone. He groans. "Great. At least the angry mob got a leader. Makes me wonder if I was an angry mob leader at one time." (Author's note: Another reference to DBV's Beauty and the Beast: CN Edition) Ouside, it was raining hard but the mob's focus is on one thing right now. "Take what you can get but I want to kill the Pokemon myself!" roared Draco as he and the mob goes on. Inside the castle, the servants rub downstairs to the main doors singing and planning, if necessary, to do battle with the mob. Servants: Hearts ablaze, banners high! We go marching into battle, Unafraid, although the danger just increased! Outside, the mob is carrying their tree towards the doors, intending on using it. Mob: Raise the flag, sing the song Here we come, we're fifty strong And fifty guys can't be wrong, Let's kill the Pokemon! Back inside the castle, Tikal and Eduardo goes into the West Wing where Ash, in a different outfit, is at staring outside the window sadly. "Excuse us, master Ash?" said Tikal. "Leave me in peace. I don't want to be disturbed." Ash said with a sad sigh. "But Senior Ash, we and the castle are under attack!" Eduardo cried out in a panic. Outside, the mob is bashing the doors with their tree shouting out 'Kill the Pokemon' two times. At the main doors, the servants kept blocking the door but the intruders is almost getting their way in. "Oh man, this is not working." groaned Roxas in concern. "Roxas, isn't there anything we could do?" asked Namine worried. Roxas pauses to think. Then he smiles getting an idea. "Hey! I know!" "Kill the Pokemon, kill the Pokemon!" shouted the angry mob as they continued bashing at the doors. They are almost opening it. Ash looks at the rose back in the West Wing as Tikal and Eduardo tried to talk to him. "We got to do something, master Ash." said Tikal worried. "Does it matter anymore?" sighs Ash sadly. Without Ariel, there is no more reason for him to do anything, let alone lived. After his years of cruelness before Ariel's arrival, he has this coming for a long time. "Just let them come. I don't care anymore." Outside, the mob is almost getting the doors opened. "Kill the Pokemon, kill the Pokemon, kill the Pokemon!!" yelled the mob repeatedly as they continue bashing the doors with the tree. Finally the doors gave way and they barged right into the castle. Author's note The final battle begins here. Will Ariel, her friends, uncle Fagin, and the dogs get out of the cellar in time to saved Ash? Will Draco get his revenge? And are the servants ready in time? Find out in the next chapter coming soon. Read and review, folks! |
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| JusSonic | Feb 4 2007, 03:10 PM Post #12 |
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Chapter 11: Rumble in the Castle As the mob stormed into the castle, all they could find is a dark and empty foyer. What they don't know, as the mob walks in, that some familiar heroes are hiding being random objects ready to strike. The good guys poked their heads out as some of the villagers walked by curiously and cautionly. Suddenly Roxas jumped out and yelled, "NOW!" The lights got turned on and the servants jumped out. The villagers suddenly find themselves attacked by a bunch of animals and weird objects. Stitch growled as he punched and kicked Leroy making the evil thing yelped in pain. The good Stitch then grabs Leroy and throws him out the doors. "And stay out!" snarled Stitch. Meanwhile, Rocky flies in and punches Chad in the stomach while Loud and Charity threw water baloons on Cree, getting her all wet. During the battle, Draco slipped by the servants and head upstairs looking for the object he came to killed: Ash. Back at Ariel's home, Tails got Fagin's invention started. "All right!" cheered the two tailed fox as he got in the seat and pulled a string, making a whistle blow. "Let's go!" exclaimed Tails as he drove the thing towards the cellar doors. "What in the door?" asked Fagin surprised when he heard a familiar whistle. He and the whole gang looked out the window and looks alarmed as they saw something heading towards the cellar doors! "Everyone, down!" yelled Danny as he and everyone else dove for cover. Fagin's device cut the cellar doors to pieces and fell right through, making an explosion. As everyone got out of their hiding spots, Tails was hanging upside down on a string. "This is so cool! You gotta try this thing!" Tails said with a smile. "Tails, good work!" Betty said smiling. "You think you could get these off?" June asked pointing at her, Danny's, Jake's, and Betty's special shackles. Tails got himself free, takes out a screwdriver and smirked. "Leave the shackles to me." The battle resumed at the castle. The hyenas were throwing food at Demyx who is blocking each shot with his sitar. "Time for the water all to dance." sneered Demyx as he is about to make a song. "Hold it up there, Elvis wannabe!" Demyx looks up to see Tikal and Eduardo standing near an cauldron. Eduardo wearing clothes like he's a 19th century dungeon guard while the other kids (except Stitch) were holding boiling cups of tea. "Now!" yelled Tikal as she and her whole family dumped cauldron and cups of tea right onto Demyx. "Ouch! Ooh!" yelled Demyx burning in pain as he runs off. Tikal and Eduardo smirked. Grabbing a sword, shield, and magic staff, Gordon, Mr. Blik, Waffle, and Stimpy clashes weapons with Skulker, Huntsman, Infantor, and Skeeter. Upstairs, Draco kicks a door opened and looks in. Seeing no trace of Ash the Pokemon, he continues on. The Catscratch trio and Frollo's men still battled until Tom and Jerry managed to trip the bad guys sending him flying into another room. There, Namine, Vivian, May, and Kari wasted no time and do a makeover on all of the bad guys. Later, Skulker, Huntsman, Skeeter, and Infantor came out of the room running in horror. They now looked like ugly looking girls in dumb looking clothing. "I am not that kind of mummy!" screamed Skeeter as he and Frollo's other men ran off screaming like girls. Meanwhile, Roxas backs away in fear as Koga, smirking evilly, held a torch towards him, planning on burning him alive. What the sidekick didn't know though that Bowser has got to the top of the stairs wearing a hat like Napoleon's and blue clothes. Seeing Koga, he rode down the stairs' banister very fast holding a spiked beetle in front of him. At the bottom he jumped and landed near Koga spiking the wolf demon's butt with spiked beetle's spike end! This cause Koga to jumped up holding his butt screaming in pain. Out in the forest, Ariel, Fagin, Tails, their friends, and the dogs are in the minicycle (a lot of them surprisingly) as they quickly make their way back to the castle. 'Please hold on, Ash.' thought Ariel worried. Back in the castle, Wormtail laughs madly as he pulls on Namine's fur making her scream. Roxas sees this, gasps, and looks angrily. "No one does that to Namine!" yelled Roxas as he runs forward. Suddenly a Keyblade appears in his mouth and it points it at Wormtail's butt yelling, "FIRE!" A burning inferno shot out of the Keyblade sending Wormtail's butt on fire. "OUCH!" screamed Wormtail as he runs off and letting go of Namine. Smiling, Roxas quickly catches the lioness in his paws. The two smiles at each other and blushed. Koga and some of the other villagers meanwhile chases Pikachu right into the kitchen where he has the Raikou corner. "I got ya now, you freak." Said Koga evilly as he and the other villagers approached menacingly. Suddenly the drawers opened up making sharp objects appeared out of it. The stove turned on and Chef holding his lightsaber/spatula laughs madly like some sort of evil Sith. Koga and the other villagers screamed in horror and ran off. With too many odds against them, the villagers quickly evaded the castle and run off into the night towards the safely of the village. Inside the castle, the servants cheered as Tikal and Eduardo hugged each other. On the porch, Bowser yelled at the retreating villagers, "And stay out if you know what's good for you!" Roxas runs up and hugs Bowser by his foot, making the koopa annoyed at this. But he decides to ignore it for now since they rid the castle of the intruders. What they don't know, though, is there is still one intruder inside the castle, out to killed Ash... Author's note The other villagers has retreated but all that's left now is Draco Malfoy. And once he finds Ash, the final showdown begins. Who will win? Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 5 2007, 10:49 PM Post #13 |
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Author's note Okay, folks. The showdown is now. Thanks for my reviewers who reviewed so far. Also, keep an eye out for my Kingdom Nicktoons II story already in progress. Chapter 12: A Test Of Love Upstairs, Draco was searching all over the place for Ash. Either he doesn't know that his minions has been defeated or he doesn't care they were defeated. His focus is still on finding Ash and killing him. He soon found what he's looking for in the West Wing. Ash was sitting on a bench looking down sadly. The rose itself is down to its last two pedals. "There you are, you filthy Pokemon." said Draco evilly as he gets his wand out. Ash looks up sadly but made no attempt to defend himself. Instead he just looked away. Not wasting time, Draco fires a spell at Ash's back making him roar in pain. With an evil smirk, Draco charges and pushes Ash out the nearby window, smashing it, sending the two on the balcony. Outside, Ash tries to get up but Draco kicked him like mad. Soon, Ash finds near the edge as Draco walks up. "What's the matter, you dumb Pokemon? Why don't ya fight back?" mocked Draco. He chuckles evilly as he said, "What? Are you too soft-hearted to do so? Coward!" Ash sighs as he thought, 'What's the use in fighting back? Without Ariel, I am useless. I may as well let him killed me back.' "Normally using the Killing Curse is frown upon by the Ministry of Magic. But in your case, Pokemon, they can make an exception!" said Draco pointing his wand at Ash who just laid there. He is about to use the Killing Curse when... "No!" Ash's eyes widen in surprise. He looks down and saw something that gave him hope: it's Ariel on the minicycle, Fagin, the dogs, and her friends are next to it. "Ariel!" said Ash happily. "Draco! Don't do it!" yelled Danny. "He's defenseless, leave him alone!" June agreed. Draco was about to do the spell but suddenly without warning, Ash grabs the wand and kicks him away with the villain still holding it. Shocked that Ash has suddenly regain his strength, he recovers enough as he faces an angry Ash growling fiercely at him. 'This creep invaded my home and try to killed me. Now it's payback.' thought Ash as he gets ready to do battle. On the bridge, Ariel got out of the minicycle saying to the dogs, "My friends and I are going up there. Dodger, you and the other dogs stay with uncle Fagin." "Right, Ariel." said Dodger nodding as Ariel, Danny, June, Jake, and Betty runs to the doors, getting them open. "Be careful, you five!" called out Francis in concern. On the roof, Draco fires spell after spell at Ash but the Pokemon kept dodging. Draco slipped at one time. Ash saw a chance and he lunged at him roaring. On the stairs, Ariel and her friends run up them, hoping to get to the roof and help Ash before something happens. "Man, if Draco kills Ash, I'm going to killed that creep myself!" snarled Jake angrily. "Me too but first I will break every bone in his body!" agreed Betty. On the roof, Draco managed to kick Ash off of him. After getting back up, he sees something that he presumed was Ash and shot the Killing Curse at it, destroying it. But to his annoyance, it was only a gargoyle he just blasted at. "Come on and fight, you cowardly monster!" exclaimed Draco as he walked around looking for Ash. "Tell me, were you in love with her?! What makes you think she would want a freak like you, when she could have someone like me?!" Ash was hiding in the shadows. Hearing enough of what the evil wizard is saying, he snuck behind Draco. Before he could pounce, Draco quickly turned and fires a spell at him making him dodged. Draco went back to firing spells that Ash kept on dodging. "It's over, Pokemon! Ariel is MINE!!!!" Draco roared furiously. Upset at this, Ash snapped at him sounding like he's saying 'mine' and knocks him back, making Draco losing his wand in the progress. Soon the Pokemon grabs Draco by the neck and held him over the mansion's edge. Draco looked down and gulped. If Ash dropped him, he will be send to his doom in seconds. "Hey, come on! I didn't mean to do this!" yelped Draco in a cowardly way. "I was only doing this because I was jealous, honest! Don't killed me! I'd do anything!!!" Lighting flashes, showing Ash with his furious look. He looks angry enough to actually let Draco fall. But then his look of fury then to a look of compassion. 'No. I woulda killed him if I was my old self but I am not like that anymore. I am not a killer.' thought Ash. Instead of letting him go, he set Draco on the roof gently. Then he growled in his face, "Get out and never come back." With that, he let his enemy go. A voice rang out like an angel, "Ash!" Ash turned and sees something on the balcony: Ariel and her friends looking at him. "Ariel?" said Ash smilng. Forgetting Draco, he climbs up the side of the roof and headed towards the balcony. Draco looks down and is furious. Then he sees something in his hand that made him smirked. 'I am not over yet.' thought the wizard evilly. Once Ash got almost to the balcony, he said softly, "Ariel?" Ariel held out her hand and Ash takes it to allow Ariel to pull him up. Ash smiles as he said, "You came back." Ariel smiles, soon the two looked each other in the eyes passionately. The others looked on smiling, happy for the two. Suddenly, Ash roars as if something has ripped through his back and into him. Ariel and her friends gasped in horror then looked past him. Sure enough, there is Draco with a look of sanity on his face plunging a knife deep in Ash's back. "You shouldn't have let me lived, you filthy Pokemon!" yelled Draco madly. Suddenly Ash whacks at Draco making him lose his balance. He waves his arms and try to gain balance, but it was no use. "I knew I shoulda bought my broomstick!!!!" yelled Draco as he finally fell off. Ash would have fell too if Ariel and her friends hasn't caught him in time. Draco Malfoy, the one that no one is better than, fell screaming unable to stop his fate. Soon he disappeared. The wizard is gone forever. Danny, June, Jake, and Betty looked as they saw Draco falling to his death while Ariel has gotten the now fatally wounded Ash over the railing of the balcony. "Man, that fall would kill him." remarked Ash. "Tell me about it." agreed June, not sorry for Draco's death. "At least we won't hear about him bragging about himself anymore." said Betty with a smile. "You go, girl." said Jake putting his arm as he smiles at Betty. Then he and the others looked sad as they see Ariel standing over the fatally wounded Ash. Roxas, Bowser, and Tikal came to the window in concern. They looked shocked as they saw their fallen master, Ash Ketchum. Roxas and Bowser's eyes widen as far as they can be while Tikal gasped, putting her hands over her own mouth. As Ariel laid Ash on his back on the balcony, she put her hand on his face gently. Ash opens his eyes and smiles as he saw Ariel. "You...you came back." Ash struggled to say. "Of course, I did. My friends and I did." Ariel said, trying to keep from crying. "I wouldn't want them to..." "Aw man, Draco got ya good." groaned Jake noting the wounds. Ariel cries and said sadly, "It's all my fault! If only I would have got here sooner, you wouldn't suffered like this!" "Perhaps...perhaps...perhaps it's for the best." said Ash, gasping with pain. "Come on, don't say that. You would be all right." Danny said, tears in his eyes. June hugs him looking sad and crying as well. "They're right. We're together now. Everything will be all right." said Ariel as Ash coughed a bit. "One good thing though..." said Ash weakly as he smiles and put his hand on Ariel's cheek. "At least...I get...to see you...one more time." Ariel smiles as a tear rolled down her face. Suddenly she feels Ash's hand dropping and sees Ash laid down as he closes his eyes. Ariel and her friends gasped shocked. They couldn't believe what has happened. June and Betty cried over Danny and Jake's shoulder eachs, while their boyfriends comforted them. "No. No, please! Don't leave me, Ash!" said Ariel. Her eyes were filled to the brim with tears. Then she buried her face in Ash's hairy chest and sobbed. "I love you." After Ariel said this, back inside the West Wing, the last pedal from the rose fell onto the table. Roxas, Bowser, and Tikal watched this happened and sighs sadly. The three looked away as Roxas's eyes is filled with tears and he puts his paws over his eyes. Tikal shed a tear while Bowser puts his head on her shoulder, trying to comfort her like a friend. They didn't want to believe it but it's true. Not only did they lose their master and friend, they lost their only hope of becoming normal again. Author's note A sad end to a chapter, eh? Eduardo: WAAAAAHHHHH! Senor Ash is dead!!!! Ash: Oh no, I'm not. Come on. June: Besides, remember the Beauty and the Beast: CN Edition story Darth Ben Valor did? Eduardo: Yes? Danny: But we won't spoiled it so not to spoiled the last chapter of this one. Me: That's right, folks. The story is not done yet. I mean, I wouldn't let Ash died, would I? Until the next and last chapter, folks, read and review. No flames. You can send any reviews in sadness but no flames! Bye now. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 6 2007, 10:14 PM Post #14 |
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Author's note The last chapter is finally here, folk. The happy ending!!! Chapter 13: A Restored Ash All was quiet except for Ariel's crying. Her friends turn to leave so to leave Ariel alone. As the mermaid continued crying in the lifeless Ash's hairy chest, something amazing happened. The rain begin to sparkle and Ash is suddenly covered by fog. Ariel stops crying and backed in amazement as Ash is being lifted into the air like magic. Her friends turned back and looked surprised at this. From the window, Roxas, Bowser, and Tikal stops grieving and looked on in awe. "Awwww." said the servants with a smile. I said 'awe'. A-W-E. "Oooh!" said the servants correcting themselves. "That's better. As Ash floated in mid-air, his cloak wrapped around him and suddenly his hands glowed and transformed into human ones. The hood of Ash's cloak came up covering his entire hand. Soon the whole body glow and in a flash, someone appears to have taken Ash's place inside the cloak as it lay back onto the ground. "Who is that guy?" asked June startled as she held onto Danny. "Not sure. There's something familiar about him though." said Danny startled as he, Jake, and Betty was. Ariel came over to the figure but backed away when the figure, still hooded, stood up and looked at his own hands. "Is this happening? Or this a dream?" The figure asked himself. The voice doesn't seem gruff like Ash's anymore. He then smiles as he realizes it isn't a dream at all. He pulls his hood down and turned to Ariel. He doesn't look like Ash the Pokemon but a well-built teenage boy about fourteen-and-a-half-years-old with spiky raven hair, and amber colored eyes. Plus, he wore a red cap with a black stripe and a green arch and dot on it. Ariel looks puzzled as if she has never seen him before. The boy smiles as if he knew what she was thinking. "Ariel, it's me." The boy said as he came to Ariel, smiling. Ariel looks puzzled but then she looked into his eyes. It's the same eyes as the boy in the portrait and Ash's! She smiled in happiness as she finally put two and two together! "Ash! It is it you!" Ariel said happily. The boy, now revealed to be Ash alive and well, and Ariel smiles at each other. Then they leaned forward and kissed each other deeply. Suddenly fireworks went off all around. The shimmers of lights restore light to the castle as night became day. The scary castle soon turned into the peaceful looking one it really was. The plants became alive again. Roxas, Bowser, and Tikal came running up, happy that their master is alive. Suddenly Roxas transformed. He is now a well-built fifteen-year-old boy with piercing blue eyes and blond hair that seemed to be standing up. He wore a black t-shirt underneath a white jacket, green pants with white at the bottom of his legs, and gray, black, and red sneakers. "Roxas!" exclaimed Ash happily. Next Bowser transforms now. He is now a muscular seven-foot tall monster stood on a floating disc. He had red scraggly hair, baggy red eyebrows, red eyes, a green face, a tan snout, two horns, yellow skin, a tan umpire-like chest, and green shell with a white rim and seven spikes with orange-yellow rings around them on his back. He also wore a spiked collar, spiked bracelets and spiked shoulder bands. "Bowser!" said Ash happily. "Wait, he was a monster before he became what he was before Ash changed back?" asked Jake confused. "Who knows? Maybe the author of this story is trying something new." said Betty said with a shrug. "What?" Now Tikal changed. She is still the same except her clothes' colors is looking more royal. "Tikal! Man, look at us!" said Ash happily as he hugs them. "Tikal, Tikal!" said Eduardo happily as he and Pikachu came running up. Tails and Stitch is on Pikachu's head. Suddenly the change happens again. After that, Eduardo is still the same except his clothes is now a black short-sleeved jacket with red rims, dark blue pants, white boots, and a black belt with a pewter-colored skull belt buckle. Stitch now had two extra arms, two antennae, and three quills trailing down his back. He also was also wearing a red shirt with red pants, and a black belt. Tails looks the same except for a pair of goggles resting on his forehead. Pikachu, meanwhile, changes back into its real look: He's a yellow mouse-like creature, and he had pointy ears, with them partially black, and black eyes, and a lightning bolt-shaped tail. "Si, everyone is back to normal!" exclaimed Eduardo happily. "Oh my goodness!" laughed Tikal as she picks her sons Tails and Stitch up. "It's a miracle!" laughed Roxas happily as Pikachu said its name happily. In the ballroom, all the servants are transformed back to normal as well. Everyone is there. The villagers, the ones who didn't invaded the castle, now realized the truth and apologized for their behavior and for believing in Draco's lies. They are allowed to the castle. Danny, June, Jake, Betty, Fagin, and the dogs are there too, Fagin dressing up nicely. The center of attention, Ash and Ariel are wearing the clothes they wore the other night. Smilng lovingly, the two kissed as they danced. "Man, young love is cool." said Roxas as he smiles and watched happily. "Oh Roxas." Roxas turned and sees a familar girl waving happily to him. She is a blonde-haired fifteen-year-old girl who also had blue eyes. She was wearing a white sleeveless, short-skirted gown and light blue sandals. It is Namine back to her normal self. With a mischievous smirk, he begins to walk over to him but Bowser appeared and stop him. "Well, Roxas, since this is finally over, let bygones be bygones, eh?" asked Bowser with a smile. "Aw, why not? I told you she would break the spell." said Roxas with a smirk. "What? Are you kidding me? I think I told you." "You moron. I told you." This made Bowser angry as he shouted, "You did not, you furred brain idiot!" He pushed Roxas back annoying the former lion cub. Getting his Keyblades out, he yelled, "Bring it on, dragon breath!' He jumped Bowser and the two got into a brawl. Namine giggled as she shook her head while watching. "Oh brother." said Namine with a smile. Nearby, Tikal, Eduardo, Tails, Stitch, Fagin, Danny, Jake, June, and Betty watched Ash and Ariel danced happily. Fagin wiped a tear away as he smiles. His little niece has finally grown up and found true love. "Mom? Dad? Do you think they would lived happily ever after?" Stitch asked his parents. "Si, young Amigo. They will." Eduardo said smiling. "Like other wonderful tales." said Tikal agreeing with her husband. Tails pauses, then frowns. He asked, "Do I still have to sleep in the cupboard?" The others laughed at this. As Ash and Ariel continued, everyone begins to sing. All: Certain as the sun Rising in the east Tale as old as time, song as old as rhyme Mermaid and the Pokemon! Ash and Ariel smiles lovingly at each other as they kissed once more. Tale as old as time, song as old as rhyme Mermaid and the Pokemon! And plus, as Tikal and Eduardo said is correctly, Ash and Ariel lived happily ever after. The End. Author's note What a story, eh? Ash and Ariel has gotten together, everyone is back to normal, and all is well (well except for one dead wizard). I dedicated this story to Darth Ben Valor who asked me to do this. I thank my reviewers who reviewed this story. And now for the final reviews, so no flames. Also, check out my other stories, including Kingdom Nicktoons II and JusSonic's Raven already in progress. Thank you and good bye. |
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