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| JusSonic's Raven; Parody of the movie Shrek | |
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| JusSonic | Jan 21 2007, 11:17 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note This is a parody of one of the greatest movies ever, only I reverse genders here to make it interesting, hence the Raven name. Also, I will debut two of my favorite couples. Who are they? Read on and see! Prologue: A Raven's Tale In darkness, a storybook was lay down. Then it was opened by itself telling a story as someone reads it and turned the pages that shows the story. "'Years ago, in a place far away, there lived a handsome prince. Sadly, this prince fell under an enchantment that no one could explained. Many brave female heroes try to free him from the spell but they all failed. And so, to this day, the prince is currently waiting in the highest room int he tallest tower, waiting for her true love, and true love's first kiss'." A pause, then whoever is it laughs as it ripped the page out of the book. "Yeah right! Not going to happened! What a bunch of crud!" The story, and person, is coming from a outhouse somewhere in the woods. As the toilet was flushed, whoever was talking came out of the house. It is a sixteen-year-old girl with purple hair, a purple hood, a red jewel connecting her hood, a black outfit, a string of red jewels around her waist and purple boots. She flies over and stops glaring at her forest home and the place she is staying in. It isn't much but to the girl known as Raven, it is home. "JusSonic Presents" Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed She was lookin' kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb In the shape of an "L" on her forehead JusSonic's Raven The years start comin' and they don't stop comin' Fed to the rules and hit the ground runnin' Didn't make sense not to live for fun Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb She uses her powe to scoop up some goo. Then after taking her clothes off (no pervert jokes!), she places it top of a homemade shower nearby. She then bathed herself whistling slapping some mud onto the ground. "Tara Strong as Raven" So much to do so much to see So what's wrong with takin' the backstreets You'll never know if you don't go You'll never shine if you don't glow Raven then uses slime to blushed her teeth. Once she's done, she shows her teeth to a mirror. It shatters upon seeing her. "Lara Jill Miller as Juniper Lee" Hey, now You're an all-star Get your game on, go play Hey, now You're a rock star Get the show on, get paid And all that glitters is gold Only shootin' stars break the mold Once Raven dressed herself up, she throws a big energy blast into a pond nearby, killing all the fish in there. She smirks as she takes one out. "David Kaufman as Danny Fenton/Phantom" It's a cool place and they say it gets colder You're bundled up now but wait till you get older But the meteor men beg to differ Judging by the hole in the satellite picture Raven uses her power to get some mud out. Then she takes a slug nearby. She uses the slug goo to make a sign warning anyone to keep out. She places it in front of her home and smirks. Later, she went into her home, cooking up a big meal for herself, and herself only. Not that she's expecting visitors anyway. "Jennifer Hale as Princess Morbucks" The ice we skate is gettin' pretty thin The water's getting warm so you might as well swim My world's on fire How 'bout yours That's the way I like it and I'll never get bored Meanwhile in a village, a mob is formed making a plan. A plan to get a certain daughter of Trigon. Hey, now, you're an all-star Get your game on, go play Hey, now You're a rock star Get the show on, get paid And all that glitters is gold Only shootin' stars break the mold As the song continues, villagers grabs their weapons, whatever they can use. Raven meanwhile set fire to her dinner in order to cook it. She smiles. While in the villagers, the villagers set fires to their torches. After talking a while, they stormed the forest...all the while the cloaked girl herself is, after eating, sitting down on the couch for some peace and quiet. Of course, that was interrupted when she hears a familiar sounds outside. She looks out and sure enough, there is the type-cast mob arriving with their usual weapons. Raven groans. 'Can they for once leave me alone? How many times do I have to put up with this? They do this ever week!' She teleported out to do what she usually do: get rid of her 'guests'. Hey, now, you're an all-star Get your game on, go play Hey, now You're a rock star Get the show on, get paid And all that glitters is gold Only shootin' stars break the mold The villagers walked quietly through the bushes, not planning to let Raven know they have arrived, although she has seen them already. They stopped right in front of her home. "Is she in her?" asked a man in concern. The other man he was speaking to nodded. The first man smirked and steps forward. "Let's get her!" "Whoa, are you crazy?" said the mob leader quietly stopping. "Don't you know what she'd do to you if she catches you?" "Yeah! She's grind your bones to make her bread." agreed another man. "Oh really?" The mob turned and gasped as they see who spoke: Raven herself floating before them. She is a least amused as she continued, "I think you mistaken me for a giant." She floats forward slowly as she continues, "Now me, a half demon if you will, they are much worst. She can make a suit of your skins." "No!" yelped one of the mob members in fear. "Shave your liver and squeeze the blood from your eyes." Raven pauses to think, then she continues, "Actually it's quite good on bread." "Stay back, demon! Back!" yelled the mob leader nervously as he waves a torch at her. "I warned you!" Raven rolled her eyes and lifts up a hand. Suddenly the torch is blown off without her going near it. The mob gasped in disbelief. "Now then..." Then Ravcen roared and released her demon side making the mob screamed in horror and fear. (Author's note: Remember the Nevermore episode when Dr. Light got on Raven's bad side?) Then after a while, Raven stops and waits as the mob continues. They soon stopped and shivered. "Uh, aren't you supposed to run away or something?" asked Raven, frowning. The mob did that. They run off screaming horror, leaving Raven's home altogether. Raven, although she rarely did, laughs at this. She exclaimed, "Never tresspassed again! Got it?" Raven paused to think. They seem to come earlier this time. They usually come at the end of the week. It's the middle of it. Raven then sees a piece of paper on the ground and picks it up. It has a picture of a creature on it and some words. "'Wanted, Demons, Freaks, Toons, etc.'" Raven said reading the paper. So this is what it's all about. The mob was trying to turned her in for some cash. Raven rolled her eyes and throws the paper onto the ground. She floats back to her cabin. She figured it is none of her concern and she shouldn't bothered to deal with whoever pursuing the demons, freaks, toon, etc. alike. What Raven didn't know that she will soon be proven wrong. Author's note Like the prologue, folks? I hope so. Don't bash me for using Raven in the title role. I wanted to try something new. Besides, when's the last time I put a girl in a male role? Sit back tight because a new chapter may be coming soon. So stick around. Read and review. And no flames. Bye now! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 23 2007, 11:48 PM Post #2 |
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Chapter 1: The Team Meets "Okay, it's full! Take it away!" The next morning, not too far from where Raven lives, a coach with prisoners rolls away while a sad group of members of Kids Next Door are being taken away by the Koopas. It was by order by Princess Morbucks, the ruler of a nearby kingdom, that the land be rid of the demons, freaks, toons, or whatever roamed it. And she offers rewards for anyone who turns any in. "Move it!" snapped a Koopa soldier as he forces the Kids Next Door members to move. At a table nearby, a figure was sitting writing what the people bring in to him. He was a seven foot tall, muscular koopa monster who had sharp teeth, with yellowish-orange scale-like skin, and a big green shell with orangish yellow spikes on his back. The top of his head was green and he had a tan-colored snout. He also had two small yellow horns on top of his head and some big claws on the ends of his hands and feet. He also had scraggly red hair, baggy red eyebrows, death red eyes, a spiked collar, spiked wristbands, spiked shoulder bands and some sort of shell pad on the front of his body. His name was Bowser. "Next!" boomed Bowser as the next person comes in, turning in three students of Hogswarts, one of them having glasses and a lightning scar on his head. In the line a mean teenage girl is turning in a frigntened little dog on a leash. She was a brown collie with black mane with a pink strap with a green bandana with a pink firefly on it. Her name was Juniper Lee. She gulps nervously as she sees Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, and Ron Weasely fights with some Hammer Brothers and lost. The three watch helplessly as their broomsticks are snapped in halves. "Your flying days are over, you brats!" sneered one of the Hammer Brothers. "Okay, you get 20 gold coins for the wizards and witches." remarked Bowser as he hands 20 gold coins to a big man who just frowns at his reward. "Next!" "A chance to get rid of my bloody nephew Potter and this is what I get." mumbled Uncle Vernon Dursley said as he leaves. June then sees three cats in a cage each. One of them is black with devil like horns, the other is white and orange cat, and the last one is dumb looking gray like cat. "Get me out of here! This cage is squeezing me!" yelled Mr. Blik as he struggles against the bars uselessly. "Whee! This is fun!" cheered Waffle stupidly. June groaned then she turned to her captor, "Come on! Don't hand me over to them! I am the Te Xuan Ze! At least change me back and I won't beat you up this time!" "Quiet! At least you'd be outta my hair!" snarled Vicky angrily as she pulls on the leash. "Next!" called out Bowser. A plumber that had brown hair and a mustache and wore a red hat with an “M” logo that was beginning to fall down to his face because of the sweat pouring from his pores comes forward. He had blue eyes that shone with passion. Plus, he wore a red long sleeved shirt, white gloves, blue overalls, and brown shoes. He was a mere twenty years old. His name was Mario. "Well, well, if it isn't faucet-head." Bowser said chuckling at the sight of his enemy. He eyes the two things Mario is turning in. One of them is a girl about nine-years-old years old. She had long raven hair, brown eyes, a round nose, and she wore a red short-sleeved gown with blue sandals. The other is a koala-like creature with bat-like ears, blue fur, a light blue chest and stomach, and big black eyes. Bowser said, "And what are you turning in?" "This-a Hawaiian girl and her-a alien." said Mario sadly. "He isn't an alien, he is my dog!" protested the girl known as Lilo. With a sigh, Mario takes out a glass of water and throws it on Stitch, Lilo's dog. Stitch screams and goes nuts, accidentally wearing his extra arms and other alien features. Stitch realized what happened and yelped, "Oops." "Okay, 6 Gold Coins for the witch and her trog." Bowser said writing it down. "Take them away!" "Father, please! Don't let them do this!" cried Lilo as Bowser's man grabs her and Stitch and take them away. "Naga Ichika!" protested Stitch as he struggles helplessly as he is taken away. Mario glares angrily at Bowser. "Mama mia. You are-a so cruel to force-a me to give up-a my adopted daughter!" Bowser smirks as he said, "Hey, either that or forced to lose your home. Next!" Mario sighs as he leaves with his money and a thought of guilty. Vicky comes in forcing June near the table. "What is this?" Bowser asked looking at June with a frown. "This dog is really the Te Xuan Ze." said Vicky with a smirk. "Right." Bowser said rolling his eyes. He has seen some weird things. Agent kids, wizards, witches, talking cats, aliens, demons, whatever. But a dog who is the Te Xuan Ze is something new to him. "Well, that is good for 3 Blue Koopa Coins. That is, if you could prove it. "Of course!" laughed Vicky as she removes the leash. "Start talking, brat!" June did not but stares. She refuses to say anything because she knew what would happened afterwards. Bowser just pauses then frowns, "Well?" Vicky chuckles nervously as she said, "She is nervous. This is her first time here, really." She grabs June as she said, "She loves to talk!" She then angrily yells at June, "Talk, you stupid..." "I've heard enough! Guards!" said Bowser signaling his men to go take Vicky and June away from the table. "No! She can talk, really!" insisted Vicky. Then, trying as she might, she takes June's mouth and tries to make it looked like she's talking. Unfortunately, she does a bad impression doing so, "'I can talk! I love to talk! I'm the talkingest Te Xuan Ze dog you ever seen!" Bowser pauses then sighs, "Get her away from me." Bowser's men didn't need a second invite as they move in and begins to take Vicky away. "No, wait! She can talk! I mean it!" yelled Vicky. As she struggles to escape, one of her legs kicked a cage with a Namek in it from a half-Saiyan boy named Gohan's hands. The cage fell on June and sprinkled her with something. To everyone and June's amazement, she begins to lift up. Which means one thing... "Whoa! I can fly!" yelled June in amazement. "She can fly!" exclaimed Gohan amzed. "She can fly!" yelled Mickey, Donald, and Goofy being held by Saix, who looks shocked and amazed at this. "She can talk!" yelled Bowser shocked as he realized Vicky was telling the truth this whole time. "Darn right, ugly! I'm a flying, talking Te Xuan Ze dog! You may seen a pig fly, heck maybe a house fly! But I bet you didn't see a dog fly!" yelled June as she begins to flies away from the area. Well, she tried to. But whatever is sprinkled on her begins to wear off as June feels herself beginning to fall. "Oh boy." groaned June as she fell onto the ground. She got up and groaned. "Seize her!" Bowser yelled pointing at June. Bowser's men lunges at June. They almost got her but she got out of their clutches. She then runs off with Bowser's men in hot pursuit. June runs into the forest as fast as they can. She can hear Bowser's men yelling as they chased after her. She didn't bothered to look as she kept looking back. Suddenly she bumped into something and fell back. She looks up and gasped as cloaked wearing girl turned around and glares at her. "Oh boy." groaned June nervously. Raven frowns. She was busy putting up a new 'Keep Out' sign when this dog bumped into her. She then hears somethign and looked up to see Bowser and his men running towards them. June hid behind her. Bowser sees Raven and yelled out, "You there...paranormal, girl!" "Yes?" Raven asked giving a Goth stare. As Bowser steps forward, his men took a look at her and looks nervously. "Wait a minute. Isn't that Raven, Trigon's daughter?" asked one of his men whispering. "You mean the half demon who has dark magic at her command?" responded another one more nervously. Bowser, not hearing his men whispering, takes a piece of paper out and reads it, "By order of Princess Morbucks, I am allowed to place you and the dog under arrest so I can take you to a designated resettlement facility." As Bowser finishes reading, Raven floats up, making him very nervous. Her glare seems like it is trying to get him and trying to swallow his soul. After a few more seconds, he realizes who she is and fears she will attacked any moment. "Is that so? You and what army?" Raven asked dryly. Bowser turned, expecting his men to back him up, but to his shock, the only things behind him were the weapons they left behind when they run away in fear. Bowser turned and chuckled nervously. "Uh...boo." Raven said. Bowser screamed and runs off after his men. As he runs off, Raven scoffed, turns around, and heads b ack to her room. June looks amazed. She has just been saved by a half-demon. No monster, let alone a demon, has ever done that for her before. She chuckles before running after June. "Hey can I say something? What you did back there was so cool. It would amazed my brother Ray-Ray if he was here." said June grinning. "Are you talking to..." Raven turned to face June but the dog seems to have gone. "Me?" Raven turns around then almost jumped out of her cloak in alarm yelling as June appeared in front of her like magic! "Yeah I was talking to you! You were really great back there, did I tell you that? Those creeps think they were so cool. Then you show up and boomed!" As Raven floats off, June follows as she continues, "They tripped over themselves like they were in a room full of Micro Machines! That makes me feel great." "Oh, that's great, really." said Raven sarcastically trying to ignore her. "It is so cool to be free." "If that's the case, why don't you find your own friends and celebrate your freedom with them?" As Raven floats off, June pauses to think about this. She frowns. She does have friends but she don't think they'd recognized her what she looks like now and they probably forgotten her by now. "Well, my friends aren't around right now." June looked back and cringes. "And no way in the Underworld am I going back there!" She pauses, smiles, and follows Raven once more. "Maybe I could stay with you. After wall, you're magical powerful Goth like being with those powers I heard of. With you by my side, we can scare the snap out of anyone who messes with us." Raven rolls his eyes as she stops. She turns around and releases her demon side once more. She hopes doing so would make the little dog run away in fear and leave her alone. To her shock, June just stares and shrugs, "Okay, that was scary. Not that I think it is." Raven, groaning that her attempt to frightened her off has failed, turns around and tries to avoid the little dog as she continues, "One more for sure. If your demon self doesn't freak people out, your body odor would. You need some shampoo or something because you stink!" Seeing Raven leaving, she tries to catch up popping out of a log like magic, "You know, you almost made me lose all my fur. It reminds me of the time..." Raven casts a spell to silence her mouth. But to her annoyance, June kept talking even though she is silence. Giving up, Raven removes the spell, allowing June to continue, "I really ate some bad mushrooms Monroe has gave me. I smell pretty bad after that, let me tell you!" "Why are you following me around?" snapped Raven. She growls as she flies away. "Simple." June said. She then sighs as she begins to sing... June: Cause I'm all alone. There's no one here beside me. My problems are all gone, There's no one to deride me. But you gotta have frien... Raven interrupts June singing by yelkling, "Will you stop that?!" She uses her power to lifted up June to her level. She glares as she said, "It's a wonder you have any friends at all by the way you sing!" June just smiles as she said, "That is what I liked about you. You are a true friend. Only they can be cruelly honest...sometimes." Raven drops June and said, "Look, dog, look at me! What am I?" June looks Raven up and down. She shrugs as she said, "Really blue?" "No! I'm a half-demon! Daughter of Trigon! You know, get the weapons, torches, and stuff'! Doesn't that concerned you?" "Nah. I am the Te Xuan Ze so I am used to that stuff." June said smiling. "Really? You are used to it?" asked Ravens surprised. "Really, really." "I see." June pauses then she said, "I like you. My name is Juniper Lee. I am the Te Xuan Ze turned into a dog. What's your name?" Raven pauses then she said, "Raven." "Raven, huh? You want to know what else I liked about you, Raven?" asked June as she follows Raven up to a hill. "You are one of those people who don't care of people think of you. I like and respect that. You're cool." The two stopped as they reached a top of the hill that overlooks Raven's woods and home. June notes the home and frowns, "Geez, what a dump. What kind of weirdo would live in that place." "I do. It's my home." Raven said offended. As Raven moves on, June looks sheepishly as she said, "And what a lovely home indeed! I loved how you decorate the place. Nice budget you used." She stops and comments on the boulder. "I really like that boulder. Nice." As they get near the house, June stops to notes a bunch of "Keep Out" signs Raven has floated by. "Let me guess: you don't entertain much?" June asked Raven as she is about to go into her home. "I prefer peace and quiet." Raven sighs in annoyance. "Same here. That is another thing we have in common. I hate it when someone gets in your face. You try to give them a hint to leave but they don't buy. That the awkward silence happens." As June said this, sure enough, an awkward silence did happened. Raven glares at June. June pauses, grins sheepishly. Then she said, "Okay if I roomed in with you?" "What?" Raven asked surprised. No one has ever asked her to stay at her home before! Not anyone who wants to live to regret it anyway. "Can I stay here, please?" Raven seems to smiled as she said, "Sure." "Really?" June asked smiling. "No." Raven said annoyed. "Oh come!" yelped June as she jumps up and grabs Raven by the cloak. "I can't go back out there! You don't know what it's like to be considered a freak, demon, whatever!" Raven gave a 'actually I do' look. June pauses, then she continues, "Okay, perhaps you do. But it's that reason why we must stick together. You got to let me stay here! Come on!" Raven groans then she gave in. "Fine, fine. But one night only." "All right!" cheered June as she runs into Raven's home. "Hey!" yelled Raqven as she follows June into her home. She glares as the dog jumps up and down on a chair. She yells out, "Get out of my meditating chair!" June ignores Raven as she said, "This is going to be hard core! We can stay up late, tell stories about boys, and in the morning, I will make us pizzas!" Raven just glares even more annoyed. June looks around as she said, "Say...where do I sleep?" "Outside!" yelled Raven in a loud tone of voice as she points outside. June, getting the hint, got off the chair and heads to the door. "Oh, I get it. It's okay." June sniffed as she wlaks out. "I don't know you and you don't know me. So it's outside for me, I guess. Here I go." June finally got outside sniffing as she passes Raven. She turns and said, "Good night." Raven then slams the door on June's face. Outside, June sighs as she lays down. "I guess I can get used to the outdoors. I am a dog, I was born outside. I will be out here by myself, you know. By myself, outside." Raven groans as she walks through her home as June begins to sing sadly. June: I'm all alone. There's no one here beside me... Author's note Raven and June has met though not as friends. Things may change soon enough. Read on and review. No flames. |
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| JusSonic | Jan 25 2007, 08:02 PM Post #3 |
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Author's note About to do chapter 3. To acosta perez jose ramiro's review, let me explain. In one episode of Juniper Lee, Ray-Ray has to impersonated June for a while which also means disguisng his voice to make him sounded like her. So imagined June acting like Ray-Ray if you will. Also, June's dog form is courtesy of Julayla Beryl. Chapter 3: The Rotten Small Princess Later that night, Raven was sitting at the table eating dinner all by herself using some goo as candlewax. As she eats her meal, she glances at June looking in from outside. Raven sighs. Secretly, she felt bad for being mean to June and don't like eating alone. But again, she prefers quiet and privacy to company so it works for her. June, meanwhile, stops looking in the window and sat down on the doorstep sighing. She can smell the food from where she's at and she's getting very hungry. As Ravenc ontinues to eat, she hears a noise. She frowns as she puts her food down. She got up and exclaimed, "Didn't I say for you to stay outside, June?" "But I am outside!" Raven looked and to her surprise, June was shouting through the window from outside. The paranormal girl looks surprised. If June is outside, then what...she then hears more noises and begins looking around to see what's making them. Raven looks and sees shadows coming from a nearby room. She went in and looked around. At first, she couldn't find who was making them. That is... "Well, everyone, it's far from where we live but we don't have a choice, do we?" Raven looks on the table and sees an old round mouse wearing glasses talking. He is speaking to his family as they looked around as well. They are known as the Mousekewitzs. "It's not home but it will have to do." sighs Mama Mousekewitz in agreement. "I liked this bed! Can I sleep here?" giggled Tanya happily. "Got you!" yelled Raven as she grabs at Tanya but she got out of her grap and ends up on her shoulder. She was chewing on her hood. "Eew. This food tastes awful." said Tanya spitting out in disgust. "That's because it's not food. It's a scary girl's hood." giggled her brother Fievel. Very annoyed, Raven grabs the Mousekewitz family and yelled out, "What are you doing in my home?!" Suddenly something bumped her from behind forcing her to dropped the mice. She turned and sees a coffin with a purple-haired kid apparently asleep in it. Little babies and kids in weird looking clothes are next to him waving innocently. (Author's note: I am referencing to the Snow parody of one of the Rugrats: Tales from the Crib except Tommy will be in the Snow White role this time) "What are you doing?!" yelled Raven as she shoves the coffin back. "Dead kid off the table!" "Where can we put him?" asked Phil with a frown. "Yeah, the bed's taken!" agreed Susie. "What?" Alarmed, Raven goes to a curtain hiding his bedroom from view. She moves it and gasps in shock, and for a good reason. "What?" asked Pete wearing old lady's clothes sitting in his bed. Raven's eye lit up angrily as she uses her powers to forced Pete out of her bedroom and dragged him to the door. "I live alone in the woods, I even put up signs! I am a half-demon!" yelled Raven as she opens the door and throws Pete out. "What do I have to do to get some privacy?!" Raven looked outside and gasped. Outside is a big nightmare coming true. "No, no, NO!" yelled Raven in horror. In front of her home, a bunch of demons, freaks, toon, etc. are camped ltierally out front! There seems to be more than what she just saw. The Catscratch are in front of a fire trying to keep warm, a hero named Link is playing his ocarina to the delight of his friends, and a half-giant named Hagrid is directing wizards and witches to land. This is more than Raven to stand, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY WOODS?!" Everyone stops as they went silent and gasped in horror. A kid wearing a pink hat and having buck teeth named Timmy Turner yelped as he and his fairies Cosmo and Wadna went to hide in a nearby tent. Glaring angrily, Raven exclaimed, "Everyone, leave now! Get outta here! Move it! Now!" Raven tries to forced everyone out, but then she sees some toons, demons, etc. running into her home. "Oh no, you don't! Not in there!" She runs after them but they close the door in her face and locked her out. Raven growled, then she turns and looks accusingly at an innocent June. "Don't look at me! I didn't invite them!" protested June. "Duh. No one invited us." Lilo said rolling her eyes as she sighs. "Yeah. We forced to come here." agreed Stitch. "What? By who?" asked Raven wondering. "It was Princess Morbucks." Mickey Mouse, one of the trio turned in by Saix. "Gawrsh, she huffed and puffed and she...signed an eviction notice." agreed Goofy sadly. "That's the Big Bad Wolf, Goofy!" snapped Donald in annoyance. "Either way, she is mean and evil like Dr. Hamsterviel." said Mickey with a frown. Raven groans in annoyance. Apparently, this Princess Morbucks has become so much a trouble that she went and dumped her prisoners on her front lawn. This has to stopped. "Okay. Does anyone know where I can find this Princess Morbucks?" Raven demanded more than she asked. She is going to go over to where she lives and demands that the toons, demons, etc. be removed. Everyone looked nervously. Although they know, they dare not said for fear of Princess's wrath. "I know! I know!" said June jumping up and down through the crowd. "Does anyone else knows where to find her?" asked Raven desperately. She really does not want to hear June. Waffle raises his hand but Mr. Blik slaps it down and gave him a look. "Anyone?" "Me, me, pick me!" Looking around, Raven can see that no one but June would offered to say. She groans as she said, "Very well then. Listen up all of you. Do not think you would be comfy because you won't be here for long! In fact, I'm going to see this Princess brat right now and get you all off my property and back to where you alll came from!" The crowd pauses, then they cheered happily. "All right! We can go home!" cheered Lilo. "Aloha!" agreed Stitch. Raven groans. She is not used to cheering. She glances at June and said, "June, you're coming with me?" "Why?" June asked. "Because 1) you know where to find this Princess brat. 2) I don't trust you to be here by yourself besides these guys. And 3) I will blast you right here if you don't come!" June paused, then she said, "Gimme another reason?" "Just come on!" snapped Raven as she passed through the crowd. Cosmo and Wanda places a flower necklace as thanks but Raven got rid of it as she heads out of her home. June followed with a smile. "This is going to be great. Raven and June, two stalwart friends, on a big major adventure! I liked it!" June exclaimed. Then she begins to sing as they are away from the area. June: On the road again. "Sing it, Raven!" June said to Raven as she continues. I can't wait to get on the road again. "Didn't I asked earlier for you to stop singing?" snapped Raven annoyed as she continues going on her way. "Can I whistle?" June asked concerned. "No!" "How about hum?" Raven sighs as she said, "Fine, you can hummed." June smiles as she hums the song she was singing as the two heads off on their way to Princess Morbuck's castle. Princess Morbucks's castle lies in the city of Cartoonville where she rules with an iron fist (sometimes literraly). Somewhere in the castle, a girl is seen walking somewhere. She is a seven year old girl with poofy red hair, black beady eyes, freckles, a gold tiara with a ruby in the middle of the tiara, black gloves that covered not only her hands, but her forearms as well, a yellow sleeveless dress with a black stripe around the middle, white pants, and black boots. Believe it or not, she is the infamous Princess Morbucks who ordered the Purge. Passing her guards, she went into the torture room. A man is in there. He is a muscular tan-skinned man with curly black hair, and wearing an executioner's outfit and the typical black mask. His name is Kronk and right now he is dunking something in a bucket of water nearby. "Oh hey, Princess! Glad you came here! The show is about to start!" said Kronk happily. "Never mind the show! That's enough, Kronk. He's going to talk." said Princess as she came forward with a smirk. "Aren't I supposed to be an annoymous?" Needless to say, Kronk takes out what he is dunking. A little two-tailed fox spits out water as Kronk slammed him on a table and locked him down. His name is Miles "Tails" Prower. Princess laughs as she walks up to the table. She stops when she reaches the table, which is higher than she is. "Ahem!" snapped Princess glaring at Kronk. "Huh?" Kronk asked puzzled. Then noticing the situation, he said, "Oh," and goes over to a set of levers nearby. Princess nodded as she said, "Pull the lever, Kronk". Kronk did so, pulling the left lever. Suddenly a trapdoor opened under the brat and she fell in. "Wrong leveeeeeerrrrrr!" yelled Princess as she fell in screaming. "Huh?" asked Kronk confused. Princess came back into the room all wet and angry as a crocodile bit on her behind. "Why do we even have that lever?" asked Princess angrily as she kicks the crocodile off, making it whimpered off. She comes over to Kronk and said, "Move aside!" She pulled the right lever, causing the table with Tails on it to lowered. "Wow! So that's why they called it the right lever!" said Kronk amazed. Ignoring Kronk's stupidity, Princess comes over and then lifts up Tails' tails which was tied together. "Run, run, as fast as you can. You can't catch me, I'm the two-tailed man!" Princess said mocking Tails as she sneered at him. "You may be a princess but you're really a monster!" yelled Tails angrily. "I am no monster, you are! You and the rest of those freaks, whatever they are messing up my perfect world!" Princess glanced at Tails as she continues, "Now tell me where the others are!" "Eat me!" snapped Tails as he spits in Princess's eyes. Disgusted as she cleans her eyes, she said, "I try to be nice but now no more Ms. Nice Princess! Tell me or I'd do this!" She then grabs Tails' tails and pulled harder as if trying to rip both off. "Not my tails! Not my great tails!" yelped Tails as she pulled harder. "Then tell me! Tell me the name of the person who's hiding this!" yelled Princess as she pulls out a hot lamp and lights it on Tails making the fox sweat. "Okay, okay, you win." groaned Tails. He sighs as he said, "Do you know the echidna tribe girl?" "The echidna tribe girl?" "The echidna tribe girl!" "Yes. I think I know the echidna tribe girl, who lives in the past." Princess said thinking. "Well, Eduardo's married to the echidna tribe girl." Tails explained. "The echidna tribe girl?" "The echidna tribe girl!" Princess paused to think then she frowns, "What kind of nice girl like Tikal be doing with an ugly smelling monster like Eduardo is beyond me!" Suddenly the door opened and Bowser ran in all excited. "Princess Morbucks! We found it!" said Bowser excited. "What? Well, bring it in!" Bosser move aside to let his sons Iggy and Lemmy carrying something covered in sheets. As Princess Morbucks waited impatiently, the two koopalings hanged whatever it is and removed the sheets. Once it is revealed, everyone looked in awe. "Awwwwwww." said everyone smiling. I said 'awe'. A-W-E. "Oooooh." said everyone in the room correcting themselves. That's better. Anyway, as whatever it is looked at them, Princess walked up as said, "Magic mirror..." "Don't tell her anything no matter what!" yelled Tails interrupting Princess. Annoyed, Princess grabs the two-tailed fox and throws him into a nearby cell with no windows, slamming the door closes, locking himself. Turning around, she then said, "Good evening. Mirror, mirror on the wall. Is this not the most perfect kingdom of them all?" "Uh, Princess? That's not the magic mirror." said Kronk interrupting. Princess blinks and she realizes that she was talking into a real mirror! "Where's the other one?!" snapped Princess angrily. "We gave it to Dr. Hamsterviel's vultures, remember?" Bowser pointed out. "Then what did you bring in?!" "A sponge." Princess turned and sure enough she sees a yellow weird looking sponge wearing a white shirt, black tie, and square pants. He looked nervously. Princess sighs as she said, "He'd have to do." She walked up to the sponge called SpongeBob SquarePants and said, "Okay, same question! Is my kingdom perfect what?" "Tell, to tell you the truth, you are not a queen." SpongeBob pointed out. "Kronk." Princess said to her henchman. Kronk holds out a small sponge and rips it apart making the big sponge gulped. Princess looked back with an evil grin and said, "You were saying?" "Actually what I meant is you are not a queen yet! But hey, I know how you can become one. All you have to do is marry a prince." said SpongeBob laughing his trademark laugh nervously. "Really?" asked Princess interested. "Sure. That is how it's done in stories nowadays." "Tell me more." SpongeBob chuckles nervously then he pulls out a monitor from outta nowhere and said, "Sit back and relax, Princess, because it's time to meet today's eligible bachelors! Here they are!" On the monitor, it shows three silouettes of each boy. He said, "The first bachelor is a prince from Twilight Town. He has been known for hanging out with three kids and can hold mean Keyblades. Please welcome, Roxas!" He then shows a picture of a well-built fifteen-year-old boy with piercing blue eyes like Sora's and blond hair that seemed to be standing up. He wore a black shirt t-shirt underneath a white jacket, green pants with white at the bottom of his legs, and gray, black, and red sneakers. He was known as Roxas. Looking at him, Princess's eyes widen in excitement. SpongeBob continues, "Bachelor #2 is a purple-haired prince who dreams of being a movie director. Although once known for carrying a toy screwdriver in his diaper, he is no pushover. Give it up for Tommy Pickles!" SpongeBob now shows a picture of the boy who was in the coffin back at Raven's home causing Princess to drool a little. "And last, but luckily not least, Bachelor #3 is a black-haired prince from a castle guarded by a red dragon and hot boiling lava! But don't let that cool you off. He's a big gun who likes pina dolada and getting caught in the rain. Yours for the rescuing, Danny Fenton!" He shows some pictures of a dragon in a castle surrounding by boiling lava then a picture of said boy. He is a fourteen-year-old boy. He had black hair and blue eyes, and he wore a white shirt (on which the rims of his sleeves were orangish-red, as was the collar of his shirt, and a horizontal oval shaped symbol on the front of his shirt), along with blue jeans, and red and white tennis shoes. He is Danny Fenton. Everyone else cheered wildly as SpongeBob concluded, "So will it be Bachelor #1, Bachelor #2, or Bachelor #3?" Princess paused to think then looked at her men who are shouting out choses. "Pick 2, pick 2!" exclaimed Iggy. "1, 1!" yelled Bowser. "3, 3!" exclaimed Lemmy. "3! Pick #3, my princess!" said Kronk holding up two fingers by mistake. Princess pauses then she said, "Okay! I choose...number 3!" SpongeBob smiles nervously as he said, "Princess Morbucks, you have chosen...Prince Danny Fenton!" SpongeBob now shows Danny's picture once more. Princess smirks widely as she looked at him as a song plays. Chorus: If you like Pina Coladas And getting caught in the rain "Oh yes. Prince Danny Fenton. He's perfect. Now I need someone to who can do this job." said Princess making plans. "Uh, perhaps I should mentioned something that happens at night." SpongeBob said. Ignoring SpongeBob, the princess continues, "I'd do it!" "Yes, but after sunset..." "Shut up!" Princess snapped silencing the sponge. She smirked as she said, "Danny will be my king and Cartoonville will have the perfect queen!" She laughed madly then turned to Bowser. "Bowser, get your finest female koopa warriors! We're going to have...a tournament!" She laughs madly as SpongeBob groans. 'The princess has no idea what will be in store.' thought SpongeBob as he looks down. Author's note What does SpongeBob knows that Princess doesn't? We may find out later but right now, on to the tournament and Raven and June's arrival in Cartoonville. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 26 2007, 09:10 PM Post #4 |
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Author's note Okay, here's the next chapter. Here, things get a bit crazy. Also, Neros. I can't use the characters you suggested because 1) they aren't important to the plot and 2) there's too many! But I will put in four characters from a movie I liked despite the bad reviews it got. Chapter 3: A Rumble in Cartoonville Meanwhile, our two arrives came out of a field onto a parking lot, a part of it is labeled "Princess section". June points to a castle up ahead. "There it is! Told ya I could find it. Cartoonville." said June smiling. Raven notes the castle. It is 40 stories high. She can tell that whoever this Princess is is shorter than she expected. "So this is where she lives, right?" asked Raven smirking in secret. "Yep." June said nodding. "Do you think maybe she's compensating for something?" Raven chuckled at her joke. Then she notices June looking at her puzzled, obviously not getting the joke. Raven frowns as she floats through the parking lot. "Wait up, Raven!" said June as she runs to catch up to Raven. "Don't forget us!" The two turned to see four figures approaching. One of them looks like a hairbrush of a dog. The second figure is a tall rabbit wearing a yellow shirt, blue vest, and blue pants. The third is a cow with red spots, yellow, and is wearing a blue hat. And the last one is a yellow outfit wearing snail with a hat and a red shell riding on the cow's back. Their names are Doogal the dog, Dylan the rabbit, Ermintrude the cow, and Brian the snail. "Doogal! Guys! What are you doing here?" asked June surprised. "Coming with you, duh." said Dylan in a hippie like voice. "That mean princess forces us outta our homes and we came to give her a piece of our minds!" agreed Ermintrude. "Don't stay with us because you won't when I'm done with Princess." remarked Raven as she floats on. "What's with her?" Brian asked June. "Her home got invaded by toons, demons, and stuff." said June with a shrug. As the group, Doogal and his pals added, walked through the parking lot, they came up to an admission area where a guy wearing a giant princess like costume is clipping tickets given to him by a couple. "Come on, we're going to be late." said the man as he takes his wife's hand and went into Cartoonville. As Raven's group came in, Raven spoke up. "Excuse me?" The man in the costume gasped in horror as he sees them. He remembers descriptions of Raven and compared them to her coming right now! He screamed and runned through a bunch of ropes to the front gate. "Hey come back! I won't hurt you! I..." But Raven sees that the man isn't listening as he passed another row. "Come on..." But it's no use. The man kept on running. Raven sighs in annoyance as she floats on, over the ropes. The attendant, meanwhile, wasn't watching where he was going and went straight into a wall. He fell back onto the ground and went unconscious. "Looks like his union break." said Doogal as they looked at him. The group came to a rail turning thing. Raven and Dylan passed through. Doogal and June went under it. They heard a noise and turned to see Ermintrude having trouble getting through the rail turning thing. She then fling out of it onto the floor. "Man, I got to lose some weight." groaned the cow as she got up. Raven sighs in annoyance as the group heads into Cartoonville. They looked around and noticed the whole town is not only empty but quiet. "It's quiet...too quiet." Raven commented. "And I thought Euro-Disney was empty." Dylan said. "Where is everyone?" Doogal asked puzzled. "Hey, check this out!" June goes over to an Information Booth nearby and pulled a lever. After a moment, music begins to wound up and the box doors opened up. Inside are wodden puppets appearing and beginning to sing to the music. Puppets: Welcome to Cartoonville, such a perfect town Here we have some rules Let us lay them down Don't make waves, stay in line And we'll get along fine DuLoc is perfect place Please keep off of the grass Shine your shoes, wipe your... The puppets bend down and looks like they were going to say the next word. That is until they show their faces as they turned around. Face Cartoonville is, Cartoonville is Cartoonville's a perfect place! As the annoying song ends, the puppets went back in as the door closes. A flash happens and a photo came out of the booth. It is of the group looking at the booth very awkwardly. Sure enough, that is what they're doing right now. "Wow...that's neat." June said awkwardly. "Let's do it again!" said Dylan as he jumps back to the lever about to pulled it. Raven uses her power, however, to stopped him, and snaps, "No, no, no, no, no! No!" "Same here. That music is so bad, I can't stand bad singing." Ermintrude said in agreement. "Oh, and you do?" smirked Doogal. Ermintrude's singing was bad enough to break glass. The group then hears a trumpet fanfare. "Where's the music coming from?" Brian asked puzzled. "Maybe it's coming from that not so hard to overlook arena over there." Dylan said pointing to the arena. "Is Russell Crowe still alive?" asked Doogal as the group heads over there. Inside the arena, on a balcony overlooking the crowd, Princess, with Bowser standing next to her, speaks to the people of Cartoonville who has came in. A group of Bowser's finest female warriors are standing down below as they listened in. "My finest female warriors, you are the best and strongest in the land! Today, one of you will prove herself..." Princess began. In a tunnel going into the arena, Raven's group is walking down it. June, meanwhile, is humming the song from the information booth. It is getting on Raven's nerves. She then have enough as she turns to June and snapped, "Okay, you are this close to be send to the fiery pits of Heck!" "Sorry." said June sheepishly. As the group went into the arena, they arrived in time to hear what Princess is saying. "The champion who wins the tournament will have the honor, scratch that, the privilege to go and saved the handsome Prince Danny Fenton from the wicked keep of the dragon. If by any chance the winner failed and/or died, the first runner-up will take his place and so on and so forth." said Princess in a uncaring tone of voice. "I know some of you won't come back alive, but it's a sacrifice I'm willing to make." A man nearby holds up a sign labeled "Cheer" causing the audience to cheer. "Let the tournament begin!" boomed Princess. Raven frowns as she and the group comes forward. As the warriors turned around, they gasped in alarm. So did Princess and the crowd when they saw this for Raven and her 'allies' has shown themselves. "Who is that?" Princess demanded glaring at Raven. "It's her! Raven, the half demon and daughter of Trigon!" yelped Bowser whispering in Princess's ear. "That's Raven, huh? Ugh. She's hideous." said Princess in disgust. Upon hearing that, Raven frowns and said, "That isn't nice." She glares at the others and turned back saying, "It's just a bunch of dumb animals." "Excuse me?" said June annoyed. "Indeed." Princess said rolling her eyes. "Let me get her!" laughed Iggy as he points his wand at Raven. But he misfires and almost hits Princess by mistake. "Gimme that!" snapped Princess angrily as she grabs the koopaling's wand and hits the koopaling over the head with it. She turned back to her warriors saying, "You know what? I changed my mind! The person who kills Trigon's daughter Raven, the cloaked freak, as well as the dumb animals will be named champion. Take her down!" Raven and her group gasped as Bowser yells out, "Get them!" The female warriors advances on Raven and her group forcing them to back up. "Hey, come on! Hold it!" yelped Brian nervously as he hides in his shell. Dylan backs away and sees a barrel labeled "Pepsi" near a table with already poured Pepsi in mugs. "Whoa. This is the joy of cola." joked Dylan. "Get them!" yelled one of the people in the crowd. "Yo, can't we settled this over a pint?" asked Dylan picking up a mug of Pepsi and smiling innocently. Of course, the females pay no attention as they kept on advancing, murder on their eyes and minds. "No? Okay, then." He drank the Pepsi in one gulp. He burped then yells out, "Let's go!" Using the mug, Dylan smashed the spigot off the barrel causing a bunch of soda to rush out and drenching some of the warriors. As the warriors struggled and the ground got muddy, Ermintrude slid past them, Brian grabbing one of the spears using it to knock one of the female warriors down. Woman voice: I don't give a damn about my reputation You're living in the past It's a new generation Both June and Doogal got on one of the barrels and caused it to break free. It begins to rolled, squashing female Goombas. As it does, some of the remaining female warriors goes after Raven. They chased her into a nearby ringed kettle, chasing two horses off. A girl can do what she wants to do And that's what I'm gonna do Raven bounces off the ropes and then knocks two of the female warriors as the crowd watches. And I don't give a damn about my bad reputation Oh, no, no, no, no, no. Not me Me, me, me As the crowd watches, Raven performs some wrestling moves she learned while watching Cyborg, the smashing, headlocking, etc. taking them all down. She holds onto one of them. "Tag me, Raven! Tag me!" said June yelling. Raven drags the warrior over. June then bangs her head against the warrior's knocking the fighter out. And I don't give a damn about my bad reputation Never said I wanted to improve my station The crowd, liking this, cheers wildly for Raven who stood on top of the ropes interacting with them. And I'm always feelin' good when I'm having fun "That's what I'm talking about!" cheerd Raven waving her arms up. Another one of the female warriors try to sneak up on her but Dylan jumps in and body slams her in time. Princess groans in disbelief as she watches the finest warriors in her kingdom get their butts kicked by a half demon and a rabbit. And I don't have to please no one "The chair! Hit her with a chair!" yelled out Nami (from One Piece) Raven uses her power to bring in a chair and slams some of the warriors over their backs. Dylan kicks some down. And I don't give a damn about my bad reputation Oh, no, no, no, no, no. Not me Me, me, me Oh, no, no, no, no, no. Not me, not me Soon Raven and Dylan took all everyone that came into the ring. June kicked one of them int he head and a bell sounds, ending the match. The crowd goes nuts as Raven and Dylan comes out, waving to them. Ermintrude, Brian, and Doogal comes over as this happens. "Thank you! Thank you! You're very kind!" said Raven. For the first time ever, she suddenly got used to the cheering. "We're here until Thursday, yo!" said Dylan laughing. "Try the veal!" "Hey, that's probably one of my relatives you're suggesting!" said Ermintrude in annoyance. With a smirk, Princess gave a signal and suddenly Bowser's men shows up pointing their weapons at Raven's group. "Hey, give peace a chance!" protested Dylan given a peace chance. "If that didn't worked on Sam, I doubt it'd worked this time." said Doogal in concern. "Ermintrude, if we don't lived through this," said Brian beginning to talk. He, a snail, is in love with the cow for a long time. Now's probably the best to say it. "There's something I ougha tell you." "Shall I have my men killed them now, madame?" Bowser asked Princess smirking. The brat pauses to think then smiles, "Hold it. I got a better idea." She then holds up her hands as she points at Raven and Dylan, "People of Cartoonville, I give you our champions!" "What?" asked Raven surprised. "Uh, are we going to live or die?" asked Doogal confused. "Congratulations, daughter of Trigon, and rabbit. Because of your success, I'd give you both the honor of going on a great and noble quest." said Princess continuing. "Quest? Are we going for the Triforce or what?" asked Ermintrude confused. "Or are we going to Daventry and speaking to King Graham?" asked Brian confused. "Hold it, Princess! Let me get this clear: I'm already on a quest, a quest to get my woods back!" yelled Raven angrily. "Your woods?" asked Princess in disbelief. "Yeah, you know! It's where you throw those toons, demons, freaks, whatever!" "Oh really?" asked Princess smirking. It's true she dumps them there, only because she didn't know who lives there. She got an idea how to killed two birds with one stone. Or in this case, get rid of the freaks she has send onto Raven's home and get the pricne. "Tell you what, I can make you a deal. Do this quest for me along with the rabbit and I'd return your woods to you." "The same as it was?" asked Raven. "Down to the last slime-covered toadstool." "And the squatters?" "As good as gone." Princess asked with a smirk. "What are squatters?" Doogal asked Dylan who just shrugs. Raven pauses to think, then notes Bowser's men preparing to fired if she were to refused. She turned to Princess and asked, "Tell me. What quest is this?" After Princess explains the quest to Raven and send them on their way, Raven and her group walks through the field away from the castle, heading into the direction to where they need to go. Raven is eating some onions. "Let me see if I get this straight." June asked with a frown. "You have to fight some sort of dragon and rescue a prince so Princess brat can give you back your woods which isn't yours to begin with because she filled it up to the brim with freaks in the first place. Is that it?" Raven sighs in annoyance as she takes a bite, "Now I know why animals aren't supposed to talk." "Well, this is a reverse. A prince needing rescue." said Ermintrude surprised. "Hey, who knows what they do in these reverse gender stories." Brian commented. "Well, Raven, why didn't you pulled off that half demon stuff like you did on me? Throttle him, lay siege to her fortress, grind her bones to make your bread, the whole half demon stuff." June pointed out. "Uh, yeah. About the grinding part, that's a giant, genius." Dylan said with a frown. "Oh really? Maybe I should cut off the heads of a whole village, puts their heads on a pike, get a knife, cut open their spleen and drank their fluids. Does that work?" Raven said sarcastically." "Uh, actually that's a no-no and disgusting." June said in disgust. "Look, there's more to half demons than people believe." "Like what?" Doogal asked. Raven pondered a bit. She looks at her onion and said, "Half demons...are like onions!" June sniffed the onion and said, "They stink?" "Ye...no!" "They make you cry?" Brian asked. "No!" Raven yelled. "Oh I got it. You leave them in the sun, they get all brown and start making little white hairs." Ermintrude suggested. "You're all wrong! Layers!" snapped Raven as she uses her powers to peel the onion. "Onion have layers and so do half demons! Onion have layers! Got it?! We both got layers!" An upset Raven throws the onion as she sighs and walks off. "Oh, you both have layers." June said, nodding in understanding. As the group walks on, Doogal sniffs the onion and gagged. He said, "Not everyone likes onions." He thought a bit, smiles, and runs up to the group. "Cake! Everyone loves cake! They have layers right!" "I don't care what people like! Half demons are not like cakes!" snapped Raven rolling her eyes. "You know what else everyone likes?" June asked getting into the subject. "Parfaits. Have you known everyone, you say, 'Let's get us some parfait', and they say, 'No way! I hate parfaits'? I loved those things." "No, you stupid, annoying little mutt!" snapped Raven as she grabs June and picks her up. "Half demons are like onions! End of story! Goodbye! End of subject!" Raven dropped June harshly and walks on. "Geez. Someone should switch to decaf." commented Dylan. As the group walks on, Brian continued the subject, "I liked parfaits. They got to be the most delicious things on this world!" Raven sighs in annoyance as she said, "I think I'd preferred June's humming over this." As they walked on, Ermintrude looks back at Brian and groaned. She said, "Hey, anyone got a tissue? Brian is slobbering because of his thought of parfait and he's making a mess bigger than me." Author's note So Raven and her group is on their way to saved Danny Fenton. What's in store for them? Find out in the next chapter coming soon. BTW, if you noticed the references, it's because the movie Doogal did the same thing a lot. Read and review and no bashing! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 27 2007, 07:05 PM Post #5 |
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Chapter 4: Jake Long the dragon The group walked through a field near sunset. Raven pushed a branch and lets it go as she passed it, knocking June down. The dog got up, rubs her jaw, and follows quickly. Man: I'm on my way from misery to happiness today Uh-huh,uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh At night, the group sleep underneath the full moon sleeping. I'm on my way from misery to happiness today Uh-huh,uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh The next morning, Raven yelps as she tries to put the fire out on her robe. Ermintrude uses milk (don't knock) to put the whole thing out. And everything that you receive up yonder Is what you give to me the day I wander I'm on my way I'm on my way I'm on my way Soon the group arrives at a huge mountain like place leading up. "So this is where what's his name threw the ring in, right?" Doogal asked looking up. "Not really but close." June said. "Hey, wait up!" yelled a voice. "Oh, what now?" groaned Raven as she and the others turned. To June's surprise, two familiar cats run to them. "Gordon and Waffle?! What are you two doing here?" asked June. "We have to go somewhere!" Gordon said as he stops to catch his breath. "Plus, Princess woulda turned us into rugs!" Waffle added. "Say what?" Dylan asked puzzled. "Something happened to the others, did it?" June asked in concerned. "Aye. Princess and her men invaded the woods while you were gone and begins transforming and/or kidnapping the others! We managed to get some of them out before we got away!" Gordon explained. "She turned Mr. Blik into a rug, a rug!" Waffle yelled frantically. "That witch!" yelled Doogal in shock. "Well, she's sorta a witch." added Brian. "She mentioned something about doing her side of the bargain for someone going to a volcano to rescued a prince so we came here as fast as we can. We saw you and you know the rest." Gordon concluded grimly. "Well, you guys can come with us." June offered. "Excuse me?" yelled Raven in annoyance. "Come on! They can help out. Besides they have no other place to go!" Raven sighs in annoyance then continued onward to the mountain. As they do so, June sniffs and gagged. "Geez, Raven! Tell us before you let one out! My mouth was opened and everything!" yelled June. "June, if it was me, you would be dead!" snapped Raven as she looks at the dog. "Plus, I don't it's her, lad." agreed Gordon. Raven sniffs the air and said, "Brimstone. We're getting close." As the group walks up the mountain, June rolled her eyes and crossed her arms saying, "Ha! No way it's brimstone. I know what I smell and it isn't no brimstone and nothing that can come off a stone either!" The group climbed up with their bare hands. "This is fun!" said Waffle in glee. "Geez, is there ever an elevator around at one point?" groaned Ermintrude. "Well we're climbing up the mountain and here she comes." remarked Dylan. "We're getting close to saving the prince! Only a boiling river of lava can stop us now!" laughed Doogal. When they got to the top, they looked and gasped. They saw an island with a center in the middle. Except this castle is surrounded by boiling lava! "No...way." said Doogal in disbelief. "Well it may be big but the location's great." said Raven with a chuckle. As the group moves on, Dylan remarked sarcastically, "Oh yeah. Funny. I hope Dracula isn't up." As the group heads to the bridge leading to the castle, June notes a skeleton and yelps. Then she runs up to Raven. "Hey Raven. Remember that talk about half demons having layers?" June asked nervously. "Yes, I do." Raven said nodding. "I got something to confess...dogs don't have layers! We wear our fear right there on our sleeves." "Sleeves?" Doogal asked puzzled. "Hold it. Dogs don't have sleeves." Raven pointed out. "You know what I mean." June said looking sternly. "Are you afraid of heights, June?" asked Brian amazed. "No. Just a little uncomfortable about going on a rickety bridge over a boiling lake of lava!" said June as she looked down at the lava. "Good thing we have nine lives!" said Waffle happily. "Not everyone, Waffle." said Gordon. "Don't worry, June. We'd be right beside you to help out." Raven said. June looked and is surprised to see a smile on her face. "We'd give ya emotional support. We can take this together one little baby step at a time." Doogal said. "Really?" June asked hopefully. "Really, really." said the others. "Okay. I think I'm fine now." The group heads to the bridge with June right in front of them. "Remember, no matter what, don't look down." Raven instructed. June walks in baby steps as she and the others walked across the bridge. "Okay. I don't need to look down, I shouldn't look down, I won't look down. Get going and don't look down." June said to herself. Suddenly she steps on a bad board and it fell forcing June to moved back. Then she did something she wasn't supposed to. "Uh, guys...I'm looking down!" yelped June alarmed. Dylan looked down and yelped too. "AHHH! I just pooped my pants! I don't think we should do this anymore." "But we're halfway there." Doogal said with a frown. "But we know that half is safe." June protested. "Look, I don't have time for this. If you want to coward out, go back!" Raven snapped as she walks. Doing so shook the bridge a little. "Raven, don't! Stop!" June protested. Raven paused, then smirked having an idea. "Okay. Let's stand here and have a dance." She smirked as she begins to sway the bridge. "Don't do that, Raven!" yelped Dylan. "Oh, sorry. Do what? Oh, you mean this?" Raven said smriking wickedly as she shook the bridge again "Yes, that!" snapped June. "You saying yes?" Ermintrude asked smirking, getting the idea. "Yes do it? All right then." Raven said as she and Ermintrude shook the bridge. Brian, Doogal, Waffle, and Gordon watched in amusement as June and Dylan back away ot the path of the castle. "No! Raven! Stop it!" yelled June alarmed. "Stop it, Ermintrude!" yelled Dylan. "You said do it!" Ermintrude said laughing. "We're doing it!" agreed Raven. As the group gets close to the end of the bridge, Dylan freaks out, not knowing where they are at. "We're going to die, man! Game over! Game over!" yelped Dylan. Suddenly he tripped and fell. When he got up, he, along with June, are shocked to see that they are on solid ground. "Hey, we're here." June said in amazement. Ermintrude helps Dylan up as Raven smiles. "That'd do, guys. That'd do." Raven said then she watches forward. June looked back at the bridge and smiles. "Cool." She walks after the group as they toward the castle. "So where is this fire breathing pain in the butt?" "In the castle waiting to be rescued." Raven said chuckling. "I meant the dragon, Raven." The inside of the castle is deserted. The only things in there are skeleton remains of the female warriors who went in before and failed, getting burned to a big crisp doing so. The group looks around trying to avoid a battle with the dragon as well as looking for the prince. As Doogal looked around, he yelled out, "Hey!" The others gasped in alarmed as he continued, "Did you guys found the prince?" "Hey, you want the dragon to hear us?" snapped Raven angrily. "Yeah, use your inside voice, man." Dylan said in agreement. "I don't think this dragon is a very good decorator." Brian said observing everything. "You guys afraid?" June asked. "No, lass." said Gordon. "But..." Raven interrupts June as she said, "Shh!" "Oh. No one is afraid? Me neither." June saaid with a smile. As the group walks on, Ermintrude with Brian still riding on her yelps as she saw a skeleton remains on a certain Final Fantasy girl. (Author's note: just imagined it to be Aerith, okay?) "Yikes!" yelped Ermintrude as she runs up to catch with the others. "Now, now, Ermintrude. There is nothing wrong of being afraid." Brian said calming his cow love down. "Fear's a sensible response to an unfamiliar situation. Unfamiliar dangerous situation, that is." "You're right. Even though there is a scary dragon that can breath fire and eat people and breaths fire, that doesn't make me a coward if I'm scared. I am not coward. I know that." Ermintrude said. Raven turned around and glares angrily. She said, "Two things, Ermintrude." She counts to two as she said, "Shut...up." "But that's two words!" protested June. Ignoring June, she said to her, "Now go find us some stairs." June looks confused as Raven goes through a skeleton to get some armor. "Uh, stairs?" asked June puzzled. "Aren't we looking for the princess?" asked Waffle confused. "Well," Dylan begin to say as Raven picks a helmet up, "The princess should be up the stairs in the highest room int he tallest tower." "Are you sure the lad would be there?" Gordon asked. "I know. It always this way." "He's right. I read a book about it once." Raven said in agreement. As the others left, June stay behind looking around for the stairs. "Well you guys can get the dragon, I'd do the stairs. I'd get those stairs. I'd kicked their butt. Thoser stairs won't know what step on them when I'm through with them." said June smiling as she walks off. As the others looked around, both Raven and Dylan puts on some armor that either fit or they wanted to wear anyway. With June, she is speaking to herself up to the limit with confidence. "I'm going to take some mean steps. Kick it to the curb. Don't mess with me. I'm the stair master. I've defeated the stairs! If I had a step right now, I'd step all over it!" said June with a smirk. As she speaks, she was standing in front of a window. Unknown to her, an eye appears in it glaring at her. She didn't noticed until she got a creepy feeling someone is watching her. The group looks around hoping to find (or not find) the dragon. Gordon looks up and said, "Hey lads and lass. I found something!" The group looked as they see a tallest tower nearby. "Well, we found out where the prince is at." Raven said nodding. But where's the..." "DRAGON!" yelled June as she sees the eye and makes a run for it as the dragon begins speaking at flames at her. It roared angrily. June managed to return to the group just as the dragon appears. He is a muscular dragon with black hair (which was lined with a green rim), a yellow-striped chest and stomach, and blue claws. "June, look out!" yelled Dylan grabbing her in time. The dragon rorared as it goes after him. Raven flies behind the dragon and grabs its' tail. "Got you!" yelled Raven. Annoyed by this, it swings its tail trying to get Raven off. "I'd help ya, Raven!" yelled Ermintrude as she runs over to help but the dragon just knocks Raven off right in Ermintrude sending both of them (and Brian still riding on Ermintrude) right into the air screaming. "Ermintrude! Brian!" yelled Doogal and Dylan in horror. "Raven!" yelled June, Gordon, and Waffle. The three's trip ended when they crash through the roof where the prince is at. As they landed, their arrival is detected by a familiar boy waking up and looking at them three, groaning. Outside, Waffle freaked out, pushed June to the dragon. "You can have him, June! We'd find Raen!" yelled Waffle. "Waffle!" Gordon yelled. But it's too late as Waffle make a run for the tower. Gordon groaned, "That brother of mine." He, along with June, Doogal, an Dylan looked scared as the dragon stomps towards him. They try to escape but the dragon destroys most of the bridge except for the part they're on, trapping them. Nearby, a shadow figure was watching. "Please, don't eat us!" yelped Dylan begging. The dragon just roared on. June thinks of something and fast. "Uh, what big teeth you got." June said quickly. The dragon looked puzzled, as is the figure watching. It goes back to roaring. "Wait! I mean white, clean teeth! You probably having heard this all the time from your food but you must bleach or something. You got one heck of a smile." said June the dog quickly. "You know, for a dragon, you looked kinda cool. And do I detect a hint of minty freshness?" As he hears this, the dragon blushes. The figue notes this. "Huh. First time the dragon got a comment like that." said the figure in amazement. "And you know what else? You're..." The dragon did something that surprises June. He spoke. "Whoa, that is a first time someone said something nice about me, dog! That's so touching! Despite being a dog, you looked cute." "Whoa! A talking dragon!" said June amazed. Then she quickly said, "Of course you're a talking dragon! You, sir, are just reeking of handsome beauty." "Aw, call me Jake Long." said Jake with a smile. "Your friend really hit it off with Jake." Gordon, Doogal, Dylan, and June turned to see a boy appearing from outta nowhere. He is a short 10-year-old boy with blown back blonde hair, and who wore a purple sweater with a green stripe around the chest section. "Who are you? Quicksilver?" Doogal looked puzzled. "Nah, I'm faster than that guy. My name is Dash Parr, a Super and Jake's keeper." Dash explained. "You know, your friend here is lucky. Jake never have himself a girlfriend before." "What are you saying, lad?" asked Gordon puzzled. Jake gave a flirty smile towards June as she looks puzzled. "What's with you? There's something in your eyes?" June asked. "You know? I think he really likes you, kid." said Dash smirking. "Oh, well that's weird." said Dylan confused. Jake then blew a smoke ring shaped like heart around June. Upon seeing this, she got the mesaage. "Oh, oh yeah." said June nervously as she backs away. "I'd like to stay and talk and all, but I'm...uh, I'm asthmatic and I don't think it'd work if you keep blowing smoke rings at me." She turned and yelled, "Raven!" "Come with me, beautiful!" said Jake cheerfuly as he grabbed June by the tail with his mouth and stomps off with her. "Oh boy." Gordon said frowning. "No! Raven! Ermintrude! Brian! Waffle!" screamed June struggling uselessly as Jake takes her away for some private time. "We'd better get her." Doogal said beginning to walk forward. But suddenly Dash runs forward and grabs Doogal, Dylan, and Gordon. He said, "Hold it, you three! There's still matter of tresspassing! Time for your punishment!" "Ahh! I pooped my pants again!" yelped Dylan in shock. Back in the tower, Waffle climbed up the tower and got in via the hole Raven, Ermintrude, and Brian has made. He sees the latter three getting up groaning. The boy, unnoticed by the four, sees them. He smiles, takes a bunch of roses from nearby, and places it on his chest as he pretends to get some sleep. "Anyone alright?" Brian asked with a groan. "I'm fine. I broke the fall with my face." said Ermintrude groaning. "Neat! Can I go next?" said Waffle stupidly. Raven turned and sees the silouette of the boy. She got closer and moves the curtain. Sitting on the bed is the boy himself. Raven concluded that this boy is Danny Fenton, the one Princess Morbucks send them to find. 'Well, for a prince, he sure is cute.' thought Raven. 'But not's now the time for that.' She leaned forward...and shakes Danny alarming him. "What?" yelled Danny in annoyance. "You must be Prince Danny Fenton, right?" asked Raven as the others came over. "That I am. I was trapped in this tower waiting for a brave and bold female warrior to come rescue." said Danny with a smile. Raven was wearing a smile so Danny couldn't tell what she looked like. "That's good. Let's go!" said Raven as she grabs Danny by the arm impatiently. She and the others head to the door in an attempt to leave. "Wait! Fine female maiden, cow, snail, and cat. This be-ith our first meeting." Danny protested. "Hee hee. You talk funny." Waffle said giggling. "Should it not be a wonderful, romantic moment?" "No offense, pal, but there is no time for that!" snapped Raven annoyed. The group heads to the door and tries to get it open. "Oh com on! What are you doing? Fine maiden in purple, can you at least sweep me off my feet out yonder window and down a rope on your valiant speed?" asked angry getting upset. "Man, this door won't opened." yelled Ermintrude as she tries to get the door open to no prevail. "Do we have to look for keys?" asked Brian. "You have time to think about this, do you Prince?" Raven asked Danny with a sigh. Danny nodded. Raven turned and uses her powers to force the door open. She then drags Danny down the stairs as the group runs down a couple of stairs. "But we gotta savour this moment! You could recite an epic poem for me! A ballad? A sonnet! A limerick! Or...something!" yelled Danny protesting. "Forget it." snapped Raven. As they reach the bottom of the stairs, Danny got his hand freed and snapped, "Well, can I at least know my champions' names?" "My name is Ermintrude the cow." said Ermintrude. "My name is Brian the snail and Ermintrude is not available!" yelled Brian being protective. "And neither am I, Waffle." Waffle said stupidly, forgetting that he's a boy. Raven hesistates to say her name at first but then said, "Raven". Danny nods smiling. Since Ermintrude is a cow as he can clearly see, Raven is the girl he would want. Or so he thinks. He takes out a handerkerchief and clears his throat. "Fine Raven, fine Ermintrude, sir Brian, and sir Waffle, I pray that you would take this favour as a token of my gratitude." Danny said smiling. Raven looks at the handerkerchief and takes it. "Thanks." She said as she uses it to clean the parts of her face that's showing. She then gives it back to Danny, who frowns a bit. "I like hankies! I used them to sneeze!" said Waffle happily. Suddenly a familiar roar is heard. Danny looks shocked. "Hey, you didn't killed the dragon?!" yelled Danny in disbelief. "I'd get around to it!" yelled Raven in annoyance. She then grabs him again. "Come on, stupid!" As the group runs down a hallway, Danny yelled, "Hey, this doesn't make sense! You were supposed to charge in with your weapon with a banner flying! That is what the other female warriors did." "Not me. I don't carry weapons." Ermintrude said. "Oh yeah, kid. They did right before they burst into flames!" said Raven sarcastically as she glances at a skeleton as they paased by. "That isn't what I mean!" yelled Danny. Suddenly Raven stops causing the others to run right into him. "Now what?" Danny asked. She noticed Raven going to a wooden door nearby. "Raven? Where are you going?" asked Brian puzzled. "What do you think you're doing?" asked Danny with a frown. "What do you think? I'm saving my butt." Raven said with a shrugg. "Can I saved mine too?' said Waffle excited. "What kind of warriors are you?' said Danny in annoyance. "One of a kind." Raven said with a hidden smile. Then she opens the door and hurry in hopes to find June and the others before it's too late. Author's note Raven has met Danny while June met Jake the dragon. Could love be in the air? Even so, the group has to escape the castle. I'd be back with another chapter. Read and review! |
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| JusSonic | Jan 29 2007, 07:45 PM Post #6 |
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Chapter 6: The Trouble With Differences Raven entered a room looking very carefully for the others. As she came in, she hears a familiar voice. "Whoa, slow it, big guy! Come on, I think it's better if we get to know each other a long period of time, you know?" chukcled June. Raven got to a top of a stairs and looked down. There's June in the center of the room with Jake the dragon nearby cuddling her. "Oh come on. You're just playing hard to get, beautiful." said Jake with a smirk. "I just don't want to rush into a relationship righjt now. I'm not emotionally ready for a commitment of this...magnitutde." "Oh boy. Looks like the dragon is in him." mumbled Raven with a hidden smirk. "Sorry. What were you saying?" Jake asked looking lovingly into June's eyes as he reaches over. "Whoa, whoa! That is unwanted physical contact, Jake! What do you think you're doing? All right, let's back up a little and take this one step at a time. We should get to know each other as friends or pen pansl first." June insisted nervously. "Aww, but June..." "I'm on the road a lot. I liked receiving cards and I would stay but..." June yelped alarmed as Jake touched her tail. "Hey buddy! That's my personal tail you're touching! You're going to tear it off! I didn't allowed you to...hey, what are you doing?! Stop it! Hey! No way! No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no! Ahh!" 'Well, she suffered enough.' thought Raven who then sees a chain connected to a chandelier nearby. She takes it and begins to swing towards Jake. She misses and has to swing back. 'Why am I doing this instead of just flying I'd never know?' thought Raven as she sees she is on top of Jake flirting with June. Suddenly three figures run in covered in a bunch of paints. It is Doogal, Dylan, and Gordon. They run from Dash who is chasing them. "Knock it off, lad! I am not interested in playing paint wars!" yelled Gordon. "Yeah, why don't you bug Calvin, Dennis the Menace, or the Beaver?" agreed Dylan. "But I have to punished you for intruding!" yelled Dash as he is almost on them. With a sigh, Raven uses her power to make a statue float from nearby and knocks Dash down. "Hey, good timing, Raven!" said Doogal with a smile. "Aye, lad." said Gordon in relief. Doing what she did however, she wasn't watching where she was going and she bumps into June knocking her outta the way. And it was at the worst time as Jake closes his eyes and leans over to kiss. And worst yet, Raven's pants fell down and Jake ended up kissing her rear. Jake opens his eyes and, to his horror, realized what he's kissing. He leans up and roared angrily, "Yo! You're going to pay for that!!!" Raven releases the chain he held and the chandelier fell on Jake's head. Of course, the chandelier itself was too big and it just made a collar around his neck. "I think we'd better take our leave!" yelped Doogal. Dylan grabs Doogal and Gordon while Raven grabs June and they quickly make their get away up the stairs out of the room with a ticked off Jake with his new 'collar' in pursuit. Dash groans and recovers. He looks around and sighs in annoyance. "Why is it it's hard to get victims these days?" said Dash in annoyance. Raven, June, Gordon, Dylan, and Doogal catches up to Danny, Ermintrude, Brian, and Waffle. Raven grabs Danny while Ermintrude grabs Waffle and runs off with Jake still in pursuit. "Hey, Prince!" said June waving. "Hey lad!" added Gordon with a smile. "They can talk!" said Danny in amazement. "The problem is shutting them up!" yelled Raven. The group stops when they come to a slide in front of them. Upon seeing Jake still in pursuit, they begin sliding down. While sliding, Dylan looks to his horror as he sees that they're coming up to a crack in the stone. Raven and Ermintrude avoided it okay but the crack just hits Dylan right in his area, making him yelped and crossing his eyes. When they reach the bottom, Dylan stumbled off walking lightly while the others set their riders (except for Brian) down. "Ugh. My little fireguy." groaned Dylan as he followed the others in their escape. The group runs through the castle with Jake chasing after them. The chain that attached to the chandelier Jake is in begins making links. The group then saw Jake in front of them who shoots out flames which they managed to dodged. Raven spots the entrance she and the others came out and pointed, "There's the exit everyone. Get going. I'd deal with the dragon." "You sure you can deal with Eragon over there?" Ermintrude asked glancing at Jake. "I sure will." said Raven grabbing a sword and headed back. Of course, instead of fighting, she just stabs the sword in between several overlapping chain links attached to the chandelier still around Jake's neck. Raven run back to the others yelling, "Run!" The group runs for the exit with Jake in hot pursuit. Jake starts breathing fire to everything including the bridge the group started to run across. They hung on as the ropes holding the bridge collapses and they swing to the other side. As they slammed, June lets go accidentally and is about to fall to her doom but Gordon grabs her by the tail in the nick of the time. The group looks up and gasps in horror when they see Jake is about to fly over the lava after them. However, due to the sword in the chain links left begin, the dragon finds himsef begin jerked back. Despite all he can, he cannot escaped. "All right! Spleen!" cheered Waffle happily as they climbed up to safely and begin making their leave. "Yes! Heroes 1, Dragon 0!" laughed Brian as Jake roared in anger. As the group makes their leave, Jake begins watching sadly as he sees June leaving. "Oh, my love..." said Jake, tears in his eyes. The group made their way down to the bottom of the volcano. Danny landed safely and laughed. "All right! You did! You all rescued me! You were all amazing!" cheered Danny happily. Behind him, June fell down the hill. Danny continued, "You were all wonderful. You're..." Danny turns and sees Ermintrude, Brian, Doogal, Gordon, and Waffle falling down the hill and down onto June. Dylan meanwhile lands on a rock at the bottom and on his 'keys'. "Oh, second time today. Not cool." groaned Dylan as he fell down onto the ground. Raven just floated down mumbling, "I am not going to make myself like a fool." Danny chuckled, "Okay, you're all a little unorthodoz, I'll admit. But thy deed is great, and thy heart is pure." "Try telling us again in 10 years." snapped Ermintrude. "Let's do it again!" cheered Waffle stupidly. Ignoring Ermintrude, Danny continued, "I am eternally in your debt, heroes." "Uh, excuse me, forgetting someone." said June with a frown. "All right. Where would a brave female warrior be without her loyal dog?" said Danny smiling at June. "I hope you guys heard that. He said it. He called me a loyal dog." said June. Then she blushes adding, "He thinks I'm a loyal dog." "Actually you are." Doogal pointed out. With a smile, Danny looked at Raven and said, "The battle is won. You may remove your helmet, good Fine Female Warriors." "Are you sure? Perhaps I'd do it later." said Raven, not really wanting to show herself to a boy. She is not sure he is ready for a shock. "How come?" "Helmet hair. Not a pleasant sight." "I gotta look at the one who just rescued me." said Danny with a smile. "Lad, I don't think it's a good idea." warned Gordon in concern. "No, no, you wouldn't...'st." agreed Raven. "Come on. How would you kiss me?" Danny said. What he said caught Raven by surprise. "What?! This isn't what I was asked to do!!!" "Perhaps it's a perk. Human Kimberly gives Gordon one all the time." said Waffle stupidly. "Waffle, no one needs to hear that." said Gordon blushing because he has a crush on a human. "Actually, it's destiny. You got to know how it goes. A prince locked ina tower and beset by a dragon is rescued by a female warrior, and then they share true love's first kiss." said Danny with a happy sigh. "I thought it was the other way around." Dylan said puzzled. June then realized, "Oh wait. With Raven? You think..." She begins to chuckled. "Hold the phone. You think Raven is your true love?" "Well, isn't it obvious?" said Danny puzzled. Raven and the others (except Waffle) looked at each other and laughed. "Oh! This is too much! He thinks Raven is her true love!" laughed Gordon. "Uh, what's so funny?" asked Waffle confused at the joke. "I agreed. What is so funny?" asked Danny frowning. "I should tell you, Danny. She isn't your type." said Doogal. "She has to be. She rescued me." Danny said not wanting to believe a word to it. Then he said to Raven, "Now remove your helmet." "I warned you. It isn't a good idea." warned Raven. "Just take it off." "I am not going to." "Just do it!" "No!" "NOW!!!!" Raven growls. She isn't used to being yelled at by anyone, let alone a prince. "Fine. If you want the helmet off, you got it, your prince." snapped Raven. With a sigh, she removed her helmet, revealing herself. Danny, upon seeing her, looked shocked. "Wait. You're...a paranormal thing?" asked Danny in disbelief. "Actually I am a half demon, daughter of Trigon." Raven explained. "What? You were expecting a beautiful princess?" "Well, you're beautiful, but not the kind I..." Danny groans as he sits down. "This isn't right! You aren't supposed to be a half demon!" "Look, Daniel. We were sent to saved you by Princess Morbucks. She wants to marry you." said Ermiontrude. "Then why didn't she rescued me herself?" "That's a good question. Why don't you ask her when we get to Cartoonville?" said Raven with a frown. "Besides that, she's probably a lazy brat." said Brian with a frown. "Who cares? I have to be rescued by my true love, a female warrior or a beautiful princess who kicks butt, not some half demon, animals, and their...their mutt!" "What happened to loyal dog?" said June in annoyance. "This isn't making my job any funner!" snapped Raven annoyed. "That is not my problem! Go tell that princess if she want to rescue me propertly, she has to do it himself!" snapped Danny crossing his arms. Raven got very mad as she yelled, "I am not a messenger! I'm a delivery girl! You're coming with me!" "Don't you dare!" snapped Danny. But Raven just grabs Danny and puts him over his shoulder. "Hey! Put me down!" "This is a tribute to the cavewoman days." observed Dylan as Waffle luahged stupidly. "You all coming?" Ravfen asked the others. "Right behind you." June said as she and the others following Raven who is holding a struggling Danny hitting Raven's backside. "Put me down or I'd make you regret it! This is not fair! Put me down!" yelled Danny angrily. He keeps on yelling and hitting. Later Danny finally stopped and got bored as he just stays where he's at over Raven's shoulder. "Here's another question, Danny." said June who was talking to him during the whole trip. "Suppose there's a guy who really likes but you don't like him back. How do you explain it to him and let him down without his feelings aren't hurt and you aren't burned to a crisp or eaten?" Danny sighs and said, "Tell him she's not her true love. Everyone knows what happened after that." Danny yelped as Raven bumps him up a bit. Danny yelled, "Watch it." Danny sighs in annoaynce as he said, "Well, the sooner we get to Cartoonville, the better. Man, and I thought Julayla Beryl has it this easy." "You're going to like it, Prince Danny." said Gordon with a smile. "Yeah! It's very great despite the problems." said Doogal. "Tell me, what is my bride to be like? This Princess Morbucks? Is she cool or what?" asked Danny. After all, he wants to know. "Well, let us put it this way..." Ermintrude begins to say. Raven chuckles as she sets Danny down and said, "Women of Princess's stature is in short supply." Raven and the others except Doogal begin to laughed as Raven splashed water on herself from a lake nearby to clean herself. "I donm't know, there are those who think little of her." giggled June joining in the making fun department. "Seriously though. Princess doesn't seem to like toons, demons, etc. very much and wants her kingdom to be perfect like Dr. Hamsterviel's. And even if she gets that, she just wants some more." explained Doogal. "Well, she can't be all bad right?" asked Danny. Of course, Raven and the others continued laughing. Danny frowns as he said, "Knock it off! Knock it off, okay? You people are just jealous that you will never be great like Princess Morbucks or Dr. Hamsterwheel." "IT'S HAMSTERVIEL!" yelled a far off voice from somewhere. Brian looks confused. "How does he do that?" Raven shrugged as she said, "Maybe you're right, Danny. We'd let ya do the measuring when we see her tomorrow." When Raven said it, Danny gasped and sees the sun about to set. "Tomorrow? It will take tomorrow to get there?! Maybe we should stop to make camp!" said Danny in concern. Doogal looks puzzled. 'Why does he looks concerned?' "That will take too longer. Let's keep on going." insisted Raven as she floats on. "But, but...there are robbers in the woods!" exclaimed Danny. "Robbers?! I don't like robbers!" yelled Waffle stopping the others. "I see Danny's point. Perhaps we should stop to make camp for tonight." Ermintrude agreed. "Oh forget it. I'm scarier than anything we can see in this forst as well as that idiot Fuzzy Lumpkins." said Raven in dismissal. "I NEED SOMEWHERE TO CAMP NOW!" yelled Danny very angrily. For the 'who knows when' time ever, Raven got a little freaked out as she backed off. In a mountain cliff, the group looks around for a place to stay. "Hey! I think there's a cave here!" said Gordon pointing to a boulder blocking a cave nearby. Raven uses her powers to move the boulder out of the way. "Oh come on, guys. We can do b etter than that." said Raven with a frown. "Yeah, besides it wouldn't be cool for a prince." agreed Dylan. Seeing the sun going down further, Danny gasped and said, "No! It's pefect! It just needs a few homey touches!" "'Homey touches'? Like?" asked Raven. They hear a noise and turned to see Danny tearing a bark off a tree. "A door for one." explained Danny. He puts the door over the mouth of the cave and then said, "Well, ladies and gentlemen, I bid thee good night." "Speak more words! Speak more words!" laughed Waffle stupidly. Ignoring him, Danny goes into the cave and closes the bark like adoor. "Hey Danny? You want a bedtime story or something while we're here? I can tell you one." said June with a smile. "I said good night!" snapped Danny from inside the cave. Raven frowns deeply. 'How did I ever get struck with this struck up prince?' Seeing the boulder, she smirks evilly and uses her power in an attempt to roll it back into place with Danny still inside. "Raven! What are you doing?" exclaimed Doogal alarmed. "What is this? The Passion?" demaned Brian. Raven sees the looks everyone is giving him and chuckles. She frowns. "I was kidding!" Raven floats off with the others looking at her frowning. Later that night, the group (except Danny still in the cave) were sitting around the campfire looking up at the stars. "And there is Throwback, the only demon who could spit over three wheat fields." said Raven pointing into the guy. "Neat!" said Waffle happily. "So what future can you tell from the stars?" June asked. "Future? From stars? That's crazy." scoffed Ermintrude. "She's right. The stars don't tell the future, they tell stories." Raven then points up to the sky once more as she said, "That is Bloodnut the Flatulent." She chuckles. "You can tell why she's famous." "Raven, I think you're making this up, girl." said Dylan with a frown. "No! Really!" insisted Raven as she points once more. "There she is and there's the mob running from her stench." "Okay, too much than we needed to know." said Gordon almost gagging. "There is nothing up there but a bunch of dots." said Doogal with a frown. "Doogal, guys, sometimes things are more than they appear. Correct?" asked Raven. She noticed a confused look on their faces, then she sighs. "Never mind." June then remembered something and said, "So Raven, what's next after we get our forest back and we part from these guys?" "What do you mean, 'our forest'"? asked Raven with a frown. "Well, after we rescued the princess." Raven scoffed as she said, "There is no 'we', June, nor will there ever be a 'our'. It will only be me and my forest. And when this is over, I'm building a barriet around my land!" snapped Raven. "You are really cutting us deep, you know." Dylan said with a sigh. June paused then frowns, "You know, I'm starting to expect this whole barrier is a way to keep everyone out." "Oh, you think." said Raven sarcastically then she turns over in an attempt to get some sleep. "Are you hiding something?" "Forget it. I don't wanna talk about it." "I see. This is another one of those onion things, right?" asked Brian. "No, it's more of a 'drop it and leave it alone' th ings!" snapped Raven annoyed. "Why don't you want ot talk about it, lass?" asked Gordon. "What makes you think I wanna talk about it?" "You're blocking." said Ermintrude, onto something. "I am not blocking!" yelled Raven angirer. "Darn right you are, Goth Girl." exclaimed June. "This is your only warning, June!" said Raven narrowing her eyes. "Who are you trying to keep out?" asked Waffle confused. "EVERYONE!!!!" Raven's yells knocked the others back a bit. June pauses then said, "Now we're getting somewhere." As they talk, none of them noticed that the 'door' to Danny's cave is slowly opened. All but Doogal who hears it. He turns and noticed Danny was watching. He also noticed something else. Danny somehow has a white glove, white hair, and glowing green eyes. Doogal was about to say something but the prince just made a shush sign. Doogal nodded in understanding and goes back to listening to the others. "Just drop it, okay?!" snapped Raven as she got up and floats over to the edge of an cliff and sat down. The others walked over in concern. "What is wrong with you?" asked June concerned. "I mean what is your problem with the whole world?" asked Waffle also concerned. Raven sighs as she said, "It isn't me having a problem with the world. It's the world that has a problem with me." She looks at them as she said, "People hear and talk about me. The moment they see me, they went, 'Everyone run! It's the half demon, the daughter of Trigon! She'd killed us with her dark magic!'" Raven sighs once more as she looked down. "They just judge me before they know me. My fellow Teen Titans are the only ones who understood my problem, but that's it, just them. That is why I'm better off alone." The others looked sad. They understood what Raven is going through. Princess Morbucks was persuating them all because of what they are, not because of who they are. "You know, Raven, when we met, we didn't think you're a monster." Doogal said as he and the others sat down next to her "Besides, you aren't like your dad Trigon. You're kinda cool." said June with a smile. "I guess." Raven siad with a sigh. Danny, listening in, sighs sadly. He knows what Raven is going through. She became one of those who judged Raven before knowing her. 'Perhaps I can make it up to her tomorrow.' thought Danny as he closes the door and goes back into the cave to get some sleep. June looks up and said, "So any dogs up there?" Raven pauses to think, then smirks as she points up, "There's Spot, the Small...and Annoying." "Oh yeah! I see it! It's big and shiny right up there!" said Waffle pointing at something. "Waffle, that is the moon." Dylan said pointing out that Waffle is looking up at the moon itself. "It is?" Doogal looks concerned as he looks back at the cave Danny is living in. He saw something on Danny when looks out. Just what it is he is trying to hide? Back in Princess Morbucks, the mean brat herself is surrounded by inanimated objects she made out of toons, demons, etc. while she and her men invaded the forest, including a rug made of Mr. Blik. She smirks as she looks at the monitor with Danny's face on it with soft music playing from it. "Again! I want to see it again!" laughed Princess. "But it's 1:00 in the morning and this is the 40th time you madfe me do it. Can I get some sleep?" groaned SpongeBob, bags under his eyes. "Don't question me! Show him to me! Show me the prince!" With a sad and tired sigh, he rewinded the whole thing starting fromt he beginning again. Princess smirks as she takes out a Pepsi and drinks it. "Ah...he is so perfect." Author's note Danny got a secret he doesn't want everyone to show while Raven has some problems of her own. What more is in store? Find out in the next chapter coming soon. Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 7 2007, 09:30 PM Post #7 |
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Chapter 7: Ember and her Not So Merry Ghosts The next morning, Danny came out of his cave smiling. He sees Raven, June, Doogal, Dylan, Ermintrude, and Brian sleeping. Danny decides to take a walk into the woods before they woke up. He didn't go far as he came across Gordon and Waffle, wide awake, listening to a yellow bird named Woodstock singing. Of course, Woodstuck seems to be singing terribly. "Ugh. Someone make this thing stop!" groaned Gordon covering his ears to close out the sing. With a smile, Danny begins to sing saying 'la's'. Woodstock was singing along with him. He sang higher and higher as Woodstock tries to catch up. Suddenly, as if out of nowhere, a wail came out of Danny's mouth and causes Woodstock to exploded. Danny stop singing as he sees the remains of Woodstock. He chuckles sheepishly as Gordon and Waffle looked on in shock. "Wow...do it again, do it again!" said Waffle happily. "How did ye do that?" asked Gordon dumbfounded. Danny sees some eggs in a mess. He said, "This must be the bird's nest I guess." "I can see that. So what are we to do with the eggs?" Danny paused then got an answer. Later, Danny, Gordon, and Waffle were cooking the eggs while Gordon tried not to complain. Raven and the Magic Roundabout gang woke up and looks at June who was talking in her sleep. "Oh yeah. You know I like it like that." mumbled June as she grabs Raven freaking her out. "Come on, handsome. I said I like it." "June!" yelled Raven freaked out. "Hey." Doogal said shaking June. "Huh?" asked June waking up. Raven got June off as she said, "Wake up." June did and stretched and yawned. As she did, Danny came up to them with their breakfast. "Hey everyone! How do you like your breakfast? With or without Green Eggs and Ham?" asked Danny smiling. "Oh hey prince." said June with a smile. As Danny set the eggs in front of the group, Raven looks puzzled. "What on earth is this?" asked Raven. "Well, to tell you the truth, I was asking like a jerk yesterday so I thought I could make it up to all of you. I mean, you did saved my life and all." said Danny with a smile. "Oh, thanks." "What? No sugar canes?" Doogal asked in disappointment. "Aw, who needs sugar canes? I'm hungry!" said June as she licked her lips hungrily at the food. "Eat up, guys. We got a big day ahead of us." said Danny as he walked off leaving the gang to eat. Gordon glared at Waffle and the others as they eat what used to be bird eggs. He shook his head and said, "How can ya lads be so heartless?" "Since when we did ended up in Kingdom Hearts?" asked Brian confused. Later, the group were on their way once more to get to Princess Morbuck's palace via the forest. As they did, Raven belched a bit. "Raven!" said June in annoyance. "Oh come on, it's a compliment. Better in and out like I always say." said Raven giggling. Then Waffle burped loudly. "Waffle!" yelled Gordon upset. Next Doogal burped. "Doogal!" Brian yelled in annoyance. Next it was Dylan's turn...except he farted instead of burped. "Eew! Dylan!" yelped Ermintrude covering her nose. "Oops. Sorry. Came out wrong." said Dylan sheepishly. "Still, that is no way to behave in front of a prince!" June scolded everyone but Danny. Then to their surprise, Danny belched. As everyone stares, he chuckles. "Thanks." said Danny as he walks on, leaving the others shocked at what he did. "Geez, he's nasty as you are." June told Raven commenting on this. She always thought princes were supposed to be, well, princes. Even Raven thought so as she followed Danny and said, "You aren't exactly what I expected. You know that, right?" Danny smirked as he looked at Raven saying, "Well, maybe you shouldn't judge people before you get to know them." Raven was stunned. Did Danny overheard her last night? As she ponders this, Danny walked away farther singing softly. Suddenly, a voice yells out and something flies in outta nowhere and swooped Danny into a tree. "Danny!" yelled Raven in shock. The group looks up towards the tree Danny was swooped into. His swooper is a a sixteen-year-old ghost with white skin, green eyes, and Goth make-up. Her hair is flaming (and I mean flaming) blue rolled in a ponytail. She was clad in a black midriff, black pants, gray boots, and a gray belt. Her name is Ember and right now, she is fondling him. "Hey, what are you doing?" snapped Danny annoyed. Ember smirks as she said, "Calm down, dipstick. I am saving ya from this half-demon..." She then kissed Danny up to his arm grossing the boy out. Then she points at Raven finishing, "...dipstick!" "Hey, that's my prince! Get your own, goth girl!" snapped Raven as she and the others run up to the tree. "Cool! Is there a concert nearby?" asked Dylan eagerly looking Raven over. "What's with the flaming blue hair?" Waffle asked confused. "She's a ghost, Waffle. She must be a ghost of a dead rock star." sighed Gordon. "And it seems she has her eye set on Danny." "Spleen!" said Waffle happily. "Yet creepy." Doogal said cringing. "You got that right. I hate to be her rival right now." remarked June. "Get lost, dipsticks! Can't you see I'm busy with handsome boy over here?" asked Ember as she smirked seductively at Danny. Annoyed, Danny got free of Ember's clutches as he snapped, "Hey lady, who do you think you are?!" Embewr laughs as she said, "Oh. I think I am a total dipstick. Let me introduce myself." She turned and shouted, "Hey Youngblood! It's you and your pirates' cue! Old fashion style!" Suddenly a noise like an accordian being played is heard. Then a ghost boy pirate named Youngblood and his ghost pirates came out from the bushes and begins to sing. Youngblood and the pirate ghosts: Ta, dah, dah, dah, whoo. Ember: I steal from the dipsticks and give to the needy. Ember uses her guitar to make an apple appeared and throws it to Ermintrude, which ended up in her mouth. Youngblood and the pirate ghosts: She takes a wee percentage, Ember: But I'm not greedy. I rescue handsome hunks Man, I'm unlame She flirted with Danny making him disgusted some more. Youngblood and the pirate ghosts: What a gal, Ember McLain "Break it down!" said Ember as she, Youngblood, and the pirate ghosts begins whistling and dancing old fashioned style. "Why is a rock and roll star singing 19th century songs?" asked Dylan confused. "Who knows? Maybe the author couldn't think of any rock and roll ones." sighs June as Ember continues. Ember: I like an honest fight and a saucy little prince, man made Youngblood and the pirate ghosts: What she's basically saying is she likes to get - - Ember: Paid So When an dipstick in the bush grabs a guy by the tush That's bad Youngblood and the pirate ghosts:That's bad Ember: When a hunk's with a beast it makes me awfully mad Youngblood and the pirate ghosts: She's mad She's really, really mad With a smirk, she gets her guitar ready planning on using it to strike down Raven who is getting concerned as she gets closer. Ember: I'll take my blade and ram it through your heart Keep your eyes on me, boys 'cause I'm about to start... Before she could attack, Danny came out nowhere and kicks Ember knocking her into a tree, knocking her out. Everyone else gasped in shock, some in amazed while Raven looks at him in admiration. "Man! That was annoying!" said Danny with a frown. "Tell me about. Shoulda stick to rock and roll." remarked Gordon in agreement. "Why you big..." yelled a ghost pirate about to fire a spear from his ghost gun. He fired but Danny got out of the way. It was heading towards June but she jumped into Raven's arms in the neck of time. Meanwhile, the spear continues its flight, bouncing off a nearby tree. "Hey Dylan! Don't you know any martial arts?" asked Ermintrude turning to Dylan. "Sure. I was taught by Morpheus. I know Kung Fu, John Woo, AnythingYouCanDo, and...Chai Tea." said Dylan counting off what he knows. "Dylan, can you beat them up?" "Call me Neo." said Dylan smirking at Ermintrude. Dylan then begins punching some of the pirate ghosts as Danny gave out a karate yell. "There is no spoon." remarked Dylan as he, Danny, and Ermintrude fought the pirate ghosts kicking, biting, and using what they knock to knock most of them out. During the fight, Danny paused in mid-air between two of the pirate hosts Miatrix style to comb his hair. Then he kicked the two down. Meanwhile Youngblood chases him around playing the accordion. He has the boy cornered when Ermintrude taps him on the shoulder. He turned around. "It's Hammertime!" remarked Ermintrude as she punches right through the according knocking the ghost pirate out. She smirked and said, "You can't touch this." Soon when all is quiet, the others looked at this in amazement. "Neat! They are taken down!" squealed Waffle in delight. "Holy McGonagall." said Gordon in amazement looking at Ember and her crew knocked out. Danny smiles as he walked up to a still disbelief Raven still holding June. He said, "So, shall we?" As Danny walked off, Raven looks after him still in disbelief. "Wait a minute." said Raven as she dropped June and follows Danny, the others following. She said, "Wait a minute, hold it. Where did that come from?" "What?" asked Danny confused. "That!" said Raven pointing back to where the fight scene has happened. "Back there! That was incredible! When did you learn that?" Danny chuckles as he turned to Raven. "Well, when one like me lives my himself, one learn these things in case there's a..." He sees something behind Raven and shouted, "There's a spear in your butt!" "Huh?" Raven looks and sure enough, a spear is sticking out of Raven's butt. Raven chuckles as she said, "Well, what do you know?" Raven tries to get the spear out with her powers but she just flinched each time she tried to do so. "Oh man! This is my fault, I'm so sorry!" "Hey, what's wrong?" asked June puzzled as she and the others caught up. "Raven was hurt." explained Danny in concern. "Ouch. Must have got in there during the fight." cringed Brian looking at the arrow. "What?!" gasped Waffle freaking out seeing the spear in Raven. "Raven's hurt?! On no! Raven's going to die!" "Relax, I'm okay." said Raven with an annoyed sigh. Waffle grabs Raven's cloak and yelled, "Don't do this, Ravne! I'm too young for you to die! Keep your legs elevated! Turn your head and cough!" Turning to the others, he added, "Who knows the Heimlich?!" "Waffle, aren't you exaggerating a bit?" asked June in disbelief. "Calm down, Waffle." said Danny. Then he said, "If you want to help Raven, go into the woods and find me a blue flower with red thorns." "Gotcha! Blue flower, red thorns!" exclaimed Waffle as he lets go and heads off to find the flower. "We're on it." June said as she leaves to help Waffle. "Hey, don't die, okay Raven? If you see a long tunnel, stay away from the light!" exclaimed Dylan. "Dylan!" yelled Danny and Raven at once in annoyance. "Oh yeah! Right! Let's go!" "Geez, what's with it with flowers and thorns?" remarked Ermintrude as she, Brian, and Doogal left to help the others. Once everyone else is gone, Raven turned to Danny puzzled. "Stupid question. What are the flowers for?" asked Raven. "To get rid of them." said Danny with a smirk. "Oh. Good mover." "Now hold still so I can yank this thing out." Danny pulled the arrow a bit but Raven yelped and jumped away from her. "Watch it with the yanking!" yelled Raven. Danny tries to get the spear but Raven kept dodging. "Knock it off! It has to come out!" yelled Danny trying to get the spear but kept missing. "No, it's tendr!" "Hold still!" "What you doing is the opposite of helping!" snapped Raven. "Stop moving!" "Hold it, time out!" "Will you..." Raven uses her powers to interrupt Danny and stop him from reaching the spear. He frowns and he said, "Well, do you have other idea what to do?" June and her group are still looking around for the flowers Danny has asked for. They were in the area with what they're looking for but they didn't noticed them. "Blue flower, red thorns. Blue flower, red thorns." mumbled Doogal as he looks around. "Woulda been easy if I wasn't so colorblind!" said Waffle. "Hey, we found them." June said finally noticing them. "We must be flowerblind. We didn't see these earlier." said Dylan frowning at the obvious. Then they heard a familiar scream. "Raven!" yelled June alarmed. "Hang on, lad! We're coming!" yelled Gordon as he grabs a flower. He and the others run back to where they left Danny with Raven. Back in that area, Raven groans as Danny pulled harder to get the spear out. "Ouch. That hurts." groaned Raven trying not to scream. "Hold on. I can see that head." said Danny as he continues to look at the spear he managed to almost puled out so far. Danny groans as he pulled harder. "It's almost." Raven yelled, then she jerked and fall over. The two are in an awkward spot: Danny is right on top of Raven. The two looked at each other and blushed like mad. "Ahem." The two looked up and sees the others coming back, staring and looking amused at the two. Embarrassed, Raven got Danny off of her as she said, "Uh, nothing happened, okay. We were just, uh..." "You know, if you really wanted to be alone, just tell us, okay?" asked June with a grin. Raven groaned as she rolls her eyes. "Look, you, that is the last thing I wanted that is on my mind! The prince and I was..." Suddenly Raven yelps as Danny finally got the spear out. She turned and looked at Danny who smiles as he held the spear in his hand. Raven just groaned. "Hey, what's that?" asked Ermintrude in concern as she thought she saw something. "Is that blood? Because I am not good in the sight of blood and I always..." Suddenly Ermintrude fainted, making her fall right on June and Doogal making them yelled. "Get her off! Get her off!" yelped June struggling to get free. "Holy McGonagall." groaned Gordon looking at the scene in disbelief. Chuckling, Dylan came over and picked up Ermintrude getting her off of June and Doogal. The group, June and Doogal, recovered, then continued on their way back to the castle. "You make sure not to dropped her or I'd dropped you like a ton of bricks!" scowled Brian as he rides on the unconscious Ermintrude. He doesn't like his girl being hurt and always make a useless threat or so. Author's note So there is more to Danny than meet the eye. And is this love we're seeing between Danny and Raven? Find out in the next chapter. Read and review. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 8 2007, 11:33 PM Post #8 |
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Chapter 7: Danny's Ghostly Secret As the group continues on their way to Princess Morbuck's castle, the rest of them notes looks Danny and Raven are giving each other, including smiles. "Okay, I guess this is when the mysterious guy offscreen begins to sing." notes Brian. "I think you're right, lad." responded Gordon as a song begins. Man: My beloved monster and me We go everywhere together Using her powers, Raven pull a tree over a river so Danny won't get wet. Danny gave her a smile, making the daughter of Trigon blush as he come across. Wearin' a raincoat that has four sleeves Gets us through all kinds of weather Once Danny got across, Raven looks at Danny as if some sort of trance and then moves away just as June and the others were about to cross. Suddenly the tree went back into its upright position, sending the group flying in the air screaming before they landed back on the ground with a grunt. He will always be the only thing That comes between me and the awful sting A bit later, Raven was trying to swat a bunch of flies and mosquitoes that is bugging her as of Ermintrude. Seeing this, Danny pulled off a branch holding a spiderweb and then runs around catching the bugs, then he wrapped it up like a cotton candy. Smiling, he gave it to Raven who takes it happily. She eats it much to the disgust of some of the others. As they walked away, Danny licked his fingers and smiled at Raven. That comes from living in a world that's so damn mean A bit later once again, Raven grabs a toad named Toadman and blows it up like a balloon. She gave it to Danny, making the boy plsued. Grabbing a snake named Nagini, he blows it like a balloon as well then makes it into a balloon puppy. Blushing, he gives it to Raven. Smiling, the two held hands making the others smirked a bit as they walked off. Oh, oh-oh-oh-oh With a smirk, Danny pushed Raven. "Hey!" yelled Raven laughing a bit. La-la, la-la, la-la-la-la The two pushed each other while laughing. Then Danny gave Raven a big push and runs off laughing, letting his balloon go. Raven lets her balloon go and chases after him laughing as well. The 'balloons' they once held floated off into the sky. La-la, la-la, la-la Soon the group arrives at a windmill which is not far from their destination: back to Cartoonville. "Well, there it is, prince. Your new home." said Raven with a sad sigh as she points at the castle in Cartoonville. "So that's Cartoonville, eh?" asked Danny surprised. "It's huge!" June nodded as she said, "Tell me about it. Raven here thinks Princess is compensating for something and I think means she has a really..." Dylan kicks June, stopping her. "Yo, cool it." Raven looks at Danny, who looks back, both longingly. Blushing, Raven turns away as she said, "I think we better get going." "Aye, lass." agreed Gordon as he pulls a thorn out of his paw. "The sooner we get over th is, the better. That tree gave me a nasty prick." As the group prepares to continue on, Danny looks concerned. He doesn't want to leave Raven, not yet. Then he smiles, getting an idea. "Yeah, but Raven? Guys? I...I'm worried....about Waffle!" exclaimed Waffle. "Huh?" asked Raven puzzled as she looks back. "What do you mean?" June asked puzzled. Danny points at Waffle exclaiming, "Look at him! He doesn't look so hot!" Confused, Waffle said, "What are you talking about? I'm fine, I think." Kneeling down, he looked Waffle in the eyes and said, "That is what they all say like you just said, then before you know, you're on your back." Waffle paused confused, not getting it. Danny added, "You know, dead?" Raven suddenly realized what Danny is up to...and she likes the idea. The others got it as well. "You know, Waffle, he got a point." Doogal said with a smirk. "You do look awful, Waffle. You better sit down." suggested Raven. "I can make you some kool aid." offered June smiling. Now convinced, so to speak, Waffle said, "I didn't want to say anything before but I got this twinge in my neck and when I turn my head, watch!" He turned his neck in a very sharp way until his head was completely sideways. "See?" "Waffle." said Gordon with a groan. "Okay, too much than we needed to know." said June sticking her tongue out in disgust. "Who's hungry?" Dylan asked getting ready to cook some food. "I'd go look for some dinner." Raven said as she leaves. "I'd get the firewood!" exclaimed Danny as he heads out to do so. As the others leave to do something or another, Waffle is all alone and confused. "Where are you going? I can't feel my fingers! Spleen!" yelped Waffle. He looked down and screamed. "Yikes! I don't have fingers!" Then sadly, "I need a hug." At sunset later that evening, the whole gang has since made a fire and is cooking their dinner. Danny is hearing his happily. "Man, this is good. I can't believe I didn't have this until now." said Danny as he bites into his food. "So what is this?" "Oh, it's weed rat. Paranormal style." said Raven sheepishly. "Oh really?" "All I am eating is candy." remarked Doogal as he hides into his boiled candy. "That is all you want to eat." chuckled Brian as he bites into some walnuts. "Eh, what's up, doc?" remarked Dylan as he chow down on carrots like a certain wasically wabbit. Danny took another bite and smiles, "Man, this is so tasty! You are a good cook for someone who is Trigon's daughter." "Trigon's daughter can cook?" asked Waffle confused. Gordon and June hushed him. Raven chuckles as she said, "Believe it or not, this can be good in stews. I know it isn't normal for a half-demon to brag but I can make a mean weed rat stew." Raven and Danny laughed story. Then Danny, once he's done laughing, tunrns to the castle faraway and sighs. "Tomorrow night, I will be dining differently." said Danny sadly. As Raven gulps, she thought of something. Then blushing, Raven said, "Well, if you want...you can come over to my home. I can cook everything you want. Swamp toad soup, fish eye tartare, you name it." Gordon nearly choked on his food and yelped, "Lass! We are trying to eat here!" Despite this, Danny smiles as he said, "That would be great. Thanks." Raven slurped up her rat tail and smiles. Man: See the pyramids along the Nile As the two looked at each other smiling and into each other's eyes, Brian smiles happily and then turned to Ermintrude. "Ah, love. Does it sounds familiar to you, Ermintrude?" Brian asked his cow love. "Yeah...I wondered if that guy from Barnyard available?" sighed Ermintrude nearly resulting in Brian falling down. Then, leaning closer, Raven then said, "Uh, Prince?" Watch the sunrise from a tropic isle "Please....call me Danny." said Danny with a warm smile. Blushing, Raven then said, "I was wondering..." Just remember, darling all the while "Are you..." Raven said, struggling to say something. Recently, she has grown feelings for the boy but it seems she chokes up whenever she tries to explain it. You belong to me But finally, Raven gave up and pointed to the rat, "Are you going to finish that? It doesn't look like you want it." But the rat is soon forgotten as Danny and Raven stared at each other. The two leaned forward and forward. It looks like they were about to kiss... Suddenly June pops up, chuckling, "Man, this is romantic! And a perfect sunset to do it in!" Then Doogal notices something odd about Danny. His hair becomes to turned white...like he saw last night. Alarmed, Danny sees the sunlight and yelps. He hides his hair and yells, "Sunset already?! Oh crud!" Realizing what he just said, he quickly continued, "Well, it's getting late, so, uh..." "What are you doing?" Raven asked puzzled and disappointed. Things were getting better until Danny started acting up. June pauses then narrows her eyes, "You know what? I think I know what's going on here." Danny widen his eyes in fear, thinking he has been found out. Then June smirks as she said, "You're afraid of the dark, aren't you?" Realizing that the danger has passed, Danny sighed then chuckled sheepishly, "Well, you found me out. I'm so scared..." He walks backwards to the stairs of the windmill, going up them to the door. "I think I should go inside. Good night!" Danny then quickly opens the door, runs in, and closes it, puzzling the others. "Okay, Mike Myers, Eddie Murphy, Cameron Diaz, and John Lithgow...what was the name of that movie?" Dylan asked, trying to think. "Not now, Dylan!" said Gordon annoyed. "Aw, don't feel too bad, Danny." said Waffle cheerfully. "I used to be afraid of the dark until..." Then Waffle gasped and freaked out, "Wait! I am still afraid of the dark! AHHHH!" He runs behind Gordon, who rolls his eyes at this. Raven sighs. Then she looks up and smiles as Danny poked his head out and smiled at her. "Good night, Raven." Danny said. "Good night, Danny." responded Raven. After that, Danny went inside the windmill and closes the door once more. The others then looked at Raven who smiles happily at where Danny used to be. They soon put two and two together and looked amused. "I get what's going on here." said June with a smirk. Raven, snapping out of it, said, "What are you on about?" "Nah, forget it. Look, I'm the Te Xuan Ze and I got instincts. And even I know you two liked each other." "She's right. I can see it too!" said Waffle happily. "You're both crazy. I am taking him back to that bratty princess!" snapped Raven as she walked away in frustration. "Raven, girl, I know crazy and June and Waffle ain't crazy. We all can tell you are like the prince." said Ermintrude smirking. "Come on, Raven. Get back to reality. Go in and tell Danny how you feel!" insisted June. "What is there to tell? Even if I do tell him that that, well you know but I am not saying I do because I don't...he's a prince and I'm..." Raven hesitated, wondering what she should say. Then she sighed and sat down on the hill looking at the kingdom. "A half demon who is the daughter of Trigon?" said Doogal concerned. "Yeah. Something like that." said Raven sadly. Then she got up and walked away. "Where are you going now?" asked June. "To get more firewood." Raven answered. As Raven walks off, the group looks concerned and turned to a pile of firewood that hasn't been used yet. "Uh, couldn't we..." Dylan begins to say. "Nah. Let the lass get some alone time." said Gordon nodding his head in concern. "Yep." said June nodding in agreement. Later, the group (except for Raven) decides to check in on Danny as they went inside the windmill. Looking around, they could see no hide or hair of the prince. "Hey, Danny?" asked June looking around. "Prince Daniel!" called out Gordon in concern. "Where are you, kid? You're too old to play hide and seek, man." said Dylan. "Princess!" yelled out Waffle. The others looked at him confused. He then realized what he just said, "Oops! Wrong story!" Unknown to the group, someone is looking at him from the shadows, trying his best to avoid being seen. "Okay, is it just me or is it getting creepy inside here?" asked Brian in concern. "Danny, come out! This is no time for games!" yelled out Ermintrude. As the group walked on, the figure continues watching. Suddenly he bumps into something and fell onto the floor, alarming the group. The group looks alarmed as the figure stood up. "It's a g..g..g.." June begin to say, trembling in shock. They see what the figure is: a being with white hair, glowing green eyes, and a black and white suit with the initials DP written on it. His name was Danny Phantom. "A ghost!" yelled Ermintrude in horror. "Wait, hold on!" yelled Danny Phantom alarmed as he grabs the group before they run off. "Oh no! They got us!" June yelped alarmed. "Ssh!" hushed Danny Phantom as he looks up nervously. "Raven, Raven, Raven!" yelled Doogal hoping Raven is nearby. "Guys, calm down! It's okay!" June then quickly gets into a fighting position as she exclaimed, "Okay, ghost boy! Who are you and what did you do with Danny?!" "Guys, I am Danny." "Oh sure. Pull another one." scoffed Gordon in disbelief. "No, really! It's me, Danny Fenton...in this body!" explained Danny Phantom. Brian looked at Danny and yelled out, "Oh my gosh...you ate the prince!!!!" "Holy cow!" yelled Ermintrude ironically. "Danny, can you hear me from in there!" June yelled at Danny Phantom's stomach. "Keep breathing, we'd get you out!" yelled Gordon, getting a sword out about to attack. "Hey, give peace a chance, man!" exclaimed Dylan stopping Gordon before he hurts someone with that sword. "Raven! Raven!" yelled June calling for Raven once more. "Guys, guys! Please!" yelled Danny Phantom as he managed to covered all of their mouths. It is me...as a ghost." The group looks confused, then they looked into the ghost's eyes. There is something familiar about them. Suddenly June is the first to know as her eyes widen as she gets her mouth out of Danny's grap, "Danny?" Danny sighs sadly as he said, "Yes, it's true." "Holy McGonagall! I don't believe it!" said Gordon as he gets his mouth free. Once everyone else's mouths are freed, Doogal groans as he said, "I thought there was something odd about you when you were hiding at night." "Danny? What happened to you?" June asked in diselief. "You are, well...kinda different." Waffle said stupidly. "I'm a halfa, okay!" groaned Danny as he floats away from the others sadly. "Half human, half ghost!" "You mean, you're half dead?" asked Dylan confused. "I bet it was something you ate!" Brian said alarmed. "I knew it! I told Raven those rats was a dumb idea. You are what you eat, Monroe told me." Now..." June begin to say. "No, it isn't that! I have...always been this way. When I was little, I got exposed to a ghost portal that changed my lifestyle forever." said Danny sadly. "A ghost portal accident?" gasped Gordon in shock. "We haven't seen you like this before." June added. With a sigh, Danny looked into a barrier with water in it and sees his reflection. "The only time I become my ghost self when the sun goes down. When it's sun up, I am my prince self. It's what Clockwork, the ghost master of time once told me." Danny sighs, then he said, "'By night one day, by day another. This shall be the norm...until you find true love's first kiss...and then take love's true form'." "Wow. I didn't know you liked poetry, man." said Dylan, wiping off a tear. "Actually that is what Clockwork told him." June pointed out in concern. "She's right. Like I said before, the ghost portal accident made me who I am now." Teras formed in his eyes as he said, "Every night I become this, "Angrily, he punches the water, squashing it, "This horrible, disgusting ghost!" The group watched Danny as he walked away. "I have to stay in a tower and wait for the day when my true love come rescue me. Which is why I have to marry Princess Morbucks before the sun sets and she sees me like this." Danny then begins to cry. "Wow. That's deep, Danny." said Doogal sadly as Ermintrude gives the halfa handerchief to get rid of his tears. June pauses then he said, "Okay, calm down, Danny, calm down. It's not all that bad. You're not ugly ugly. I am not going to lie to you. Sometimes halfas can be big hunks. You only think that because you're afraid of ghost hunters." "June!" said Gordon annoyed. Then to Danny softly, "What she means is you only look like this at night." "Yep! And Raven is a paranormal, kinda like a ghost boy." Waffle said in thought. "You must understand. I'm a prince and this isn't how princes are meant to look!" said Danny with a groan. Dylan pauses to think. Then he snapped his fingers as he got an idea. He said, "You know, Dann, you don't have to marry Princess Morbucks you know." "I have to! Only my true love's kiss can break the spell!" "Dylan got something though." said June as she sat down next to him. "You're a half ghost, which is a paranormal thing. And Raven, she's a half demon. You two got something in common." "Raven?" asked Danny. Unknown to the group, Raven has returned holding some flowers that consists of a rose, sunflower, and dandelion. She thought about what the others has said and realized they were right. She got to admit how she feels to the prince. The question is, how? "Well, uh, Danny...How is it going? Good? Yeah, same here." said Raven practicing what she has to say to the boy she has grown feelings for. "I found these flowers and since you're kinda...handsome and all...well, I don't like them but I figure you would since you're handsome. But I liked you the same. I....uh..." Then Raven groans. "Man, I am in deep crud." With a sigh, she goes up to the door and is about to kncok. "Here goes." Before she could knock, she hears Danny speaking inside the windmill. She stops short to listen in, since she has supernatural hearing. "I can't marry whjo I want! Look at me for crying out loud! Who could love someone so ugly, mean, and paranormal?! 'Prince' and 'ugly' don't mix very well. That is why I can't stay with Raven!" yelled Danny from inside the windmill. Raven looked shocked and backed away. She can't believe what she is hearing. Danny is badmouthing her! "My only chance to live happily ever after is to marry true love." continued Danny. Raven sighs sadly. She then drops the flowers to the ground as she floats off very upset. "Who am I kidding? I may as well get that brat and get rid of that idiot once and for all." said Raven angrily. Inside the windmill, unaware of Raven listening in in misunderstanding, Danny continued, "That is how it has to be. It's only way to break the spell." "I see. At least do the right thing and tell Raven the truth." insisted June with a frown. "Well I suppose..." said Danny hesitating. Then he gasped, "No way! I can't say anything! And you guys shouldn't ever! Never let anyone know!" "Come on. What's the use of being able to talk if you have to keep secrets?" protested Brian. "Yeah, what is this? The Da Vinci Code?" asked Doogal frowning. "Guys, promise me. Promise you won't tell, please!" pleaded Danny. "Oh, very fine, lad." sighed Gordon. "We won't say anything." agreed Waffle. As the others walked out, June turned back to Danny and said, "But I still think should tell Raven before it's too late. In the end, you got to do the right thing." Danny pauses to think as June joins the others outside. "Well, I got to say, before this is over, I'm going to need one heck of a therapdy. Look at my eye twitching." remarked Dylan, his eye twitching just like he said. Danny looked outside as they walked away. He then sees the flowers, unknown to him, Raven has dropped before she left. He picked up the sunflower and looked at it as he goes back inside the windmill. 'Well, if I can't decide, maybe this sunflower will.' thought Danny with a smile. Author's note The secret is out but it seems Raven misunderstood what Danny is saying. Could things turned out bad? Read and review, folks. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 10 2007, 01:53 PM Post #9 |
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Author's note Here's where things get sad...or better, take your pick. Chapter 8: Prelude to a Wedding The next day comes. Before the sun would rise, Raven's group (except for Danny) is sleeping outside. Meanwhile inside, Danny Phantom was plucking the last pedals of the sunflower. "I tell her." said Danny as he plucks a pedal off. He then plucks off another. "I tell her not." He plucks off another. "I tell her." Again. "I tell her not." Then he smles widely as he plucked off the last pedal. "All right! I tell her!" Smiling, Danny goes outside the windmill to speak with Raven, not caring what he looks. If Raven is concern about how she looks, then she would understand the prince's problem, right?" "Raven! There's something I gotta..." Danny stops short when he sees that only the others are still sleeping. All but Doogal who just woke up. Raven is nowhere in sight. He then notices that the sun is rising. Sighing, Danny waits as the sun came completely out. Suddenly he transforms and when he's done, he's back to his human self. "Well I guess you're back, Danny Fenton." observed Doogal. Danny nods then sees something that made him smiled. Raven is floating back u[ the hill towards the windmill. He came down the stairs and approaches her. His smile fades when he notices Raven has an upset look on her face. "Hey Raven, are you okay?" asked Danny in concern. "Oh fine. I am always better." said Raven sarcastically, passing Danny without looking at him. "Well...listen. There's something I got to tell you." Raven turns around and snapped harshly, "Forget it! I heard everything last night!" "You overheard what we said last night?" asked Danny surprised. Does this she means she knows? "Every word!" "So you understand, huh?" asked Doogal surprised. "Oh yeah. It's what the prince here has said, 'Who could love someone so ugly, mean, and paranormal?'" said Raven, mocking what Danny has said. "Oh geez!" Doogal suddenly expects what Raven is thinking. She musta misunderstood what she heard Danny said! "Raven..." "But I figure it wouldn't matter to you!" said Danny worried. "It does to me!" snapped the half demon. As Danny and Doogal looked at him in shock, trumphet sounds and hoofs noises are approaching. Raven turned to the direction and remarked, "Well, they're here. I got a surprise for you, prince." Soon the source of the noises are revealed: it's Bowser and his men approaching, followed by Iggy, Lemmy, Kronk, and riding on a horse in iron pants that seems to make her look big is Princess Morbucks herself. "Princess Morbucks!" yelped Doogal alarmed. Dylan, Ermintrude, Brian, Gordon, and Waffle woke up and gasped as they see a familiar princess and her men arriving. "It's Princess Morbucks!" yelled Gordon alarmed. "We gotta hide before she transforms us like Mr. Blik! Spleen!" yelped Waffle as he and Gordon runs behind the windmill. June woke up groaning, "Hey what's going on? Did I miss something?" She looks up and yelped as she sees Bowser's men passing by her, one of them looking at her funny. She quickly muffled her voice sounding like someone else was talking, "Who said that? Couldn't have been the dog." She then runs off to hide with Gordon and Waffle. "Well, well, if it isn't Ms. 'Tall and Mighty'." said Ermintrude sarcastically. "Don't give me an excuse to make you into a steak, heffer!" snapped Princess. "Just be glad you got me what I asked you all to get me!" She then looked at Danny and smiles. "Ah, Prince Danny Fenton." "Okay, Princess, a deal's a deal! Hand it over!" Raven snapped angrily. Princess sighs in annoyance and snaps her fingers. Lemmy hands her of a piece of documented paper in which she handed over to Raven. "Here, the deed to your forest. I cleared it out earlier like I agreed. Take it and get out of my sight!" snapped the bratty princess. Without a word, Raven grabs the deed. She then floats away without looking at any of the others. "Wait, Raven...couldn't we..." Dylan said struggling to say something. Then he gave up as he sighs. "Oh, and good work to you and the others, rabbit." said Princess without a tone of care in her voice. With a smirk, he turned to Danny who just stares at her. "Forgive me if I startled you, Prince, but you startled me! I have never seen a handsome man like you before." She then takes Danny's hand and kissed it. "I am Princess Morbucks, at your service." "Princess. Oh, no, no." said Danny as Princess snapped her fingers. Bowser begins to pick up the princess as the prince continues, "Forgive me, for we were just saying a short..." He stops as Princess is lifted out of her iron pants and put gently onto the ground. "Farewell." Then he thought, 'Geez, when they did the short jokes, I didn't realize what Raven and the others were meaning.' Princess laughs cruelly as she said, "Oh, how disgustedly sweet. But you don't have to waste good manners on that stupid daughter of Trigon." As she floats away, Raven cringes hearing the insult. "After all, it's not like she has any feelings." Doogal and his pals looked upset at this insult. Danny however just sighs as she said, "No you're right. She doesn't." Princess smiles and kissed his hand once more. June and the cats watched on, June getting a bit disgusted. "Prince Danny, handsome, fair, flawless Daniel. I ask for your hand in marriage." said Princess with a smile. Danny looks surprised as she continues, "Will you be the perfect groom for the perfect bride?" 'Oh man. Me getting married to a kid? Just great. I wonder if that crazy hamster scientist is asking the same question to whoever he's after.' He looked up as he sees Raven looking back a bit, then floating off once more. He frowns, then he said, "Princess Morbucks, I accept. Nothing would make..." "Good!" said Princess wickedly, interrupting Danny. "Time to make the plans for tomorrow will be the wedding!" "No!" yelled Danny. Raven looked back as he continues, "I mean, why should we wait? I am not patient like other grooms. Let's married right now before the sun sets." "Oh, an anxious prince. I liked that." chuckled Princess. "You're right, the sooner we wed, the better! We got a much to do! Get a caterer, cake, a band, a guest list." Then she speaks to Iggy and Lemmy. "You two! Go round up some guests!" "Yes, madame!" said Iggy and Lemmy in salute. Bowser placed both Princess (back in her iron pants) and Danny on Princess's horse. Danny looks at Raven worried as he rode off towards the castle. "Fare-thee-well, half demon." said Danny. As Princess's group with Danny heads back to Cartoonville, June and the cats came out of hiding. In concern, they followed Raven who was leaving. "Raven, are you crazy? You're letting him get away!" yelled June in disbelief. "Who cares?" mumbled Raven. "The Care Bears?" asked Waffle stupidly. "Lass, there is something about him you don't know about!" protested Gordon. "We all talk to her last night, she's..." Raven snapped, interrupting Brain, "I know what you're talk about last night! You're all great pals! If you are pals with her, why don't you follow him home?!" As she storms off (with a storm appearing over her), June looks sad, her eyes with tears in them. "But...I wanted to go you, Raven." June said sadly. "I told you! I told you all! None of you are coming home with me! I live alone! My forest! Only the daughter of Trion! No one else! Got it?! No one! Especially useless, pathetic, annoying, talking mutts!!!!" "Ouch." Brian said with a cringe. "Yo, not cool." Dylan said with a frown. "But Raven, I thought..." June begins to say. "Yeah, you know what? You're wrong!" yelled Raven as she floats on back to her home. "Raven..." Raven stormed/floated off, leaving the others alone. "Poor Danny." said Waffle with a sigh. "Poor Danny? What about Mr. Blik and the others!" Gordon pointed out. "This is badder than a part of that film I cannot recall what happened." said Dylan thinking again. June sighs sadly as she leaves the group, not bothering to look back. As a man sings, Raven finally returns home. She looks up and sighs. It's true, Princess and her men has rid her homeland of the toons, demons, etc. she has put there. It looks like a struggle took place. But at what cost? Man: I heard there was a secret chord That David played and it pleased the Lord But you don't really care for music, do ya In a room back at Princess's castle, Danny was getting help from a servant who is helping him into his suit. He sighs sadly. It goes like this the fourth, the fifth The minor fall the major lift The baffled king composing hallelujah Back at Raven's home, Raven floats on then stops to looked at a broken mirror on the ground, showing her reflection. She cringes at this. Hallelujah, hallelujah Hallelujah, Hallelujah Back at the castle, Danny looks at himself in the suit in the reflection in the glass of the chandelier. He sighs sadly. Is this what he really wants? He then straighten his tie. In a special room, Princess was looking in a mirror held by a sad SpongeBob. She smirked and looked at Kronk who gave his boss the thumbs up. She turned back to the sponge who grins nervously trying to make himself looke like he was agreeign with her in the wedding dress. Baby, I've been here before I know this room I've walked this floor At a river in the forest, June was looking down at her reflection sadly. Then she hears some crying and turned. To her surprise, Jake Long the ragon was crying sadly with Dash near her looking glum. Feeling sorry for Jake, June comes over and begins to comfort the dragon. Jake looks at June and smiles. I used to live alone before I knew you Inside her home, Raven sees that the whople place is mostly now. Except for a sunflower in a jar. She picks it up and looks at it. With a deep frown, she threw the flower into the fireplace, burning it. I've seen your flag on the marble arch But love is not a victory march It's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah Back at the castle, Danny eyes the top decoration of the wedding cak with a man and a plush of Princess trying to make her look taller. The halfa frowns and pushed the plush down to half her size. Hallelujah, hallelujah Halleujah, halleujah Raven tries to eat her food back. But then she sighs sadly and covers her face, moaning. For the first time ever, she was really alone. She now regrets even letting him go. And all I ever learned from love Is how to shoot at someone Who outdrew you Meanwhile with Danny, he was eating his soup alone, looking very sad. And it's not a cry you can hear at night It's not somebody who's seen the light It's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah He places his face down, shredding tears. He is now regret even letting her go. Hallelujah, hallelujah Hallelujah, hallelujah Back at Raven's home, she sighs trying her best to forgot what has happened. Suddenly she hears a noise outside her home. She goes outside to investigate what it was. To her surprise, she sees a familiar and upset dog placing some wood onto the ground. "June?" asked Raven surprised. She however ignored the half demon as the Te Xuan Dog continues with what she's doing."Okay, what in blazes are you doing?" "What do you think? I am making a wall, stupid!" snapped June angrily as she looked up. "I see. But isn't the wall supposed to go around my property, not through it." said Raven frowning. "Actually your half!" snapped June pointing at one side and at another. "Your half is on the right, my half is on the left!" "Your half?" "You forget, I helped saved the prince. I did half the work so I get half of this place!" She then points to a rock, remarking, "Now give me that rock that looks like your ugly head!" Anger by the insult, Raven snapped, "Get lost, dog girl!" "No, you ger lost!" yelled June. "This is my property!" "You means ours!" Raven grabs the tree branch June was using in an attempt to get rid of it, but June grabs it. "Let go!" Raven ordered. "You let go!" responded June in a nsap. "Stubborn dog-faced woman!" "Smelly demon!" "Okay, fine!" snapped Raven as she let go of the branch and floated off. June is not done with her yet as she followed her angrily. Meanwhile, Doogal, Dylan, Ermintrude, Brian, Gordon, and Waffle arrive on the scene and watched this. "Come back here! I am not done with you yet!" yelled June as she continues following the half demon. "Guess what? I'm done with yiu!" snapped Raven not bothering to look back. "Okay, listen! With you it's always, 'me, me, me!' Well, guesds what? It's my turn now!!! So shut up and listen! You were mean to me, insulted me, and don't care for anything I do no matter how much I try!!!! You are either pushing me around or away!" Raven turned and glares angrily. "Oh is that so? If you I treated you like that, why in your right mind did you come back?" "Because I'm your friend and friends forgive each other!" exclaimed June. "Oh yeah, sure. Right, June. I forgive you...FOR STABBING ME IN THE BACK!" Then she wents into the outhouse and slams the door. The others continued looking on in disbelief. "Why does a half demon needs a outhouse for?" Doogal asked puzzled. "Never mind that, lass. Raven is being herself again." sighs Gordon. June groans as she said to Raven still inside the outhouse, "Oh bother. You are so wrapped in layers like an onion, you are afraid of your own feelings!" "Go away!" yelled Raven inside the outhouse. "You're doing it again! You are trying to push me away like you did Danny! Heck all he ever did was like you!" "Why, he may even love ya, girl." Ermintrude said as she and the others, not wanting to watch any more, walked off. "Love me? Ha! He said I was an ugly, mean, and paranormal thing!" snapped Raven angrily. "I heard you talking!" "Huh? Did he said that?" asked Waffle confused. "Okay, let me get this clear: he wasn't talking about you!" snapped Brian. "He was talking about..." June paused, remembering her and the others' promise to Danny. "Someone else." A pause as Raven didn't respond. Then the door opened and Raven came out surprised. "Wait. He...wasn't insulting me? Then...who was he talking about?" Raven asked hopefully. "Probably Doogal." Dylan joked." Hey! I am not a paranormal thing!" protested Doogal annoyed. "June..." Raven said turning to the Te Xuan Ze dog. June turns around angrily as she said, "Forget it! Why should I tell you anything when you don't wanna listen?" "June..." "No!" snapped June as she sat down on the ground crosshign her arms. "She's upset, Raven." Waffle said concerned. "I'd apologized if I were you." added Gordon nodding. "Look, I'm sorry, everyone, okay?" snapped Raven. June and everyone else looked at her and frowned. Raven sighs, realizing that she didn't mean it. She tried again as she looked down, "I'm sorry...I guess I am a ugly, mean, and paranormal thing." Raven looked up hopefully with a smile. "Can you ever forgive me?" June paused, then turned to a smile. "Aw, why not? We're friends so I should. That is what we're for, right" said June chuckling. "True." Raven said smiling as she place out her hand hoping June would shake it. "Friends?" June smiled as she place her paw onto Raven's hand. "Friends." "Friends." said Gordon placing out his paw. "Pals!" squealed Waffle happily as he placed out his head. "Friends." said Doogal, Ermintrude, and Brian placing out their paw, hoove, whatever onto the others' hands, etc. "Jennifer Aniston, Courteney Cox, Lisa Kudrow, Matt LeBlanc, Matthew Perry, and David Schwimmer!" said Dylan as he places his hand onto the others' hands, etc. The others looked at him oddly as Dylan shrugs innocently. "What? They're friends." Everyone, getting the reference, just laughs. Soon they stopped as Raven got a thought. "So, uh, what did Raven say about me?" asked Raven nervously. "Aw, don't ask us." said June with a smile. "Yeah, just asked Danny yourself." added Gordon with a smile. Raven gasped in horror as she realized something, "The wedding! We will never make it in time!" June laughs as she said, "Don't worry, like some movies, for where there's a will, there's a way. And buddy, I j ust got it!" She then whistled and suddenly, a familiar dragon appeared with someone on his back and landed onto the ground. "Yo, June, guys! What up?" exclaimed Jake with a smirk. "Come on! We got a wedding to stop!" shouted Dash laughing. "The dragon!" yelped Waffle as he hides behind Gordon. "Relax, Waffle. I think they are our friends now." said Gordon calmly. "June?" asked Raven in amazement. "Hey, what can I say? It's my animal magnetism." said June with a smirk. The others laughed as Raven grabs June. "Come here!" laughed Raven as she gave June a noogie. "Okay, okay. Knock it off. Don't get all liek that. No one likes a messy dog." chuckles the dog. Everyone got on the dragon. "Hang on, dogs and other things! This is going to be a whacked out flight!" exclaimed Jake. "Yeah and I never insult seat belts on Jake." added Dash. Everyone on Jake's back held on as the dragon flew up into the air very fast. Then he make his way to Cartoonville. Their mission? Stop the wedding. Author's note The race against time begins! Can the good guys arrived in time to stop Princess's wedding to Danny? And will the halfa finally revealed his secret to the one he really loves? And what was Dylan talking about? Dyan: Hey, I was referencing Friends, JusSonic. Me: Whatever. In either case, review this story but no flames! Bye now. |
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| JusSonic | Feb 11 2007, 03:04 PM Post #10 |
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Author's note Here it is, folks! The happy ending of this story! Here's the chapter. Also, Neros, I changed my mind. I will used what you suggested after all. Chapter 9: A Paranormal Happy Ending In Cartoonville, the guests (forcefully) goes to the church where the wedding of Danny and Princess begins. As they watch, a badger named Friar Tuck was speaking. Kronk was nearby holding the cue cards, one of them say "Be Quiet" on it. "People of Cartoonville, we are here to witness the union of..." As Friar Tuck speaks, Danny looks out the window and is nervously upon seeing the sun was setting. "...our new king and queen." "Uh, excuse me?" Danny said interrupting the friar. "Can we go to the 'I do's'?" Princess chuckled. This boy is more anxious than she thought. "Okay, for you." Princess said with to a smirk, then she said to Friar Tucker, "Just get to the 'I do's' and make it snappy!" Outside in the courtard, Bowser's men are on patrol on orders to let no one need the church. That is until Jake lands on the ground alarming. The henchmen took one good look a the dragon, panic, and fled immediate.ly. "Ha! Run you cowards! Run at the sight of Jake Long the dragon!" laughed Dash pointing at the men running in fear. "Yo, June, what's going to do?" asked Jake to his girl as she and her friends got up. "You and Dash have some fun. If we need you, we'd whistle! Okay?" asked June with a smirk. "Good! I am hoping for butt whooping!" said Dash chuckling evilly. "Be careful, June." Jake said then he leans down forward to give June a kiss making her blush. With a smile, he and Dash runs off to have some 'fun' by chasing more of Bowser's me off. "Lasses and lads, you deal with the Princess brat! We'd find whatever turned Mr. Blik and the others into what they are now and restore them back to normal!" exclaimed Gordon. "Then can we played with the newts?" asked Waffle stupidly. "Come on!" Gordon said as he grabs Waffle by the arm and runs off. "Let's hope someone stopped Hamsterwheel as well." remarked Doogal. "THAT'S HAMSTERVIEL!" yelled the familiar voice from somewhere once more. "How does he keep doing that?" asked Brian confused. The group make their way towards the church where the wedding is at. Before Raven can stepped into the place, June stopped her. "Hey guys, wait! Raven, wait a minute! You got to do this the right way!" said June. "What are you talking about?" Raven asked puzzled. "There's a line you have to wait for. The preacher or what they are using will say 'speak now or forever hold your peace'. Then you go in and say, 'I object'!" "This is ridiculous! There is no time for this!" snapped Raven as she tries to go into the church once more. "Hey, Raven. Come on! Stop!" "Raven, do you care for him?" asked Ermintrude. "She's right. You love Danny, don't you?" asked June with a smirk. "Yes." Raven said with a sigh. "You wanna hold her?" asked Doogal. "Yes." "You wanna please her?" Brian added. "Yes!" yelled Raven in annoyance. "Then you got, got to try a little tenderness!" Dylan said singing like a recently dead rock star. "What is that all about?" asked Ermintrude to Dylan with a frown. "Hey, I saw it on a James Brown special before he died. At least guys like that romantic crap." "Fine. Whatever." Raven said with a groan. She may as well go along with what they're suggesting. "When does this preacher or what they are using say this line?" June paused then said, "Better check and see." Inside the church, Friar Tuck was about to conclude the wedding. No one notices June at one of the windows being floated up there to watch by Raven's power. "And so, by the power vested in me..." began Friar Tuck. "Did you see anything?" Doogal asked calling up to June. "Everyone is in there!" exclaimed June trying to look through a strained window. Inside, Danny is getting anxious as Friar Tucker continues, "I now pronounce you husband and wife..." "They're at the altar." said June continued to look through the window. Soon Friar Tucker spoke loud enough as he said these words, "...king and queen." "Oops. Too late." said June sheepishly. "Oh forget the love of my father!" yelled Raven angrily. She storms to the doors forgetting June who fell onto the ground. Before Danny and Princss were about to kiss, the doors flew opened. Everyone turned and gasped in horror and/or surprise as Raven, Doogal, Dylan, Ermintrude, and Brian runs inside the church. "I object!" yelled Raven enough for everyone to hear. "Raven?" asked Danny shocked and surprised. "Intruders!" yelled Iggy and Lemmy as they pulled out their wands. They fired at the intruders but the group dodged. The blasts meanwhile went firing all over the place, Princess forcing to dodged some of them. Finally the blasts ends as it hits the cake the Princess plush causing parts of it to exploded. "Give me those!" snapped Bowser taking the wands away from his sons. "That's the last time I let you two used those!" "Awww..." said the two koopalings in disappointment. Recovering from the incident, Princess glares at Raven in annoaynce and snapped, "What does this freak want now?" Raven and her group looks around at the scared audience as they walked up to the altar. "Uh, hey everyone! Are we having a good time?" asked Ermintrude chuckling nervously. "Yo, I liked Cartoonville. Cleanest place ever." said Dylan "What are you doing here?" Danny asked Raven in concern. "Oh, it's bad enough being alive when no one smart enough wants you, but you have to show uninvited to a wedding..." Princess begins to say. Raven ignores the bratty princess as she said to Danny, "Danny, we gotta talk. "Oh, now you wanna talk? Too late, Raven, now if you don';t mind..." "You can't married him!" yelled out Raven. "And why shouldn't I?" "She's only interested in you so she can become queen!" "How did you know that?" asked Doogal puzzled. "Hey, why else Princess does not bother to go saved Danny herself?" Raven said pointing it out. "That's crazy!" protested Princesss innocently. "Danny, ignore this half demon!" "She is telling the truth!" Brian yelled angrily at the villainess. "Kronk, pull the lever and get rid of the freaks!" Princess snapped at Kronk nearby. "Right, Princess!" said Kronk as he pulls a set of levers that seems to come out of nowhere. He pulls the left one...and suddenly a trapdoor opens under Danny causing him to fell yelling as he fell in. Raven, Princess, Kronk, and everyone else looked on in confusion as the trapdoor closes. Soon another door opened and in came Danny all wet and annoyed, his suit almost ripped to shreds as a crocodile bit on his behind. "Okay, tell me why she even have that lever?" snapped Danny annoyed as he kicks the crocodile off, making it whimpered off. Danny went back to where he stood before he fell in and said, "Okay back to kissing my true love." "That's the thing! She's not your true love!" yelled Raven. "And what do you about it?" Raven looks nervous as she blushed saying, "Well, to tell you the truth, I..." Princess laughs wickedly as she figured it out, "I don't believe it! The half demon daughter of Trigon has fallen in love with the prince! Oh goodness!" Princess waved to Kronk who then held up a card that said, 'laugh and point'. Everyone in the audience did as the card said as they laughed and pointed at Raven. Princess laughed as she said, "This is the dumbest version of Beauty and the Beast ever!" Raven looks embarrassed. She wished she is somewhere else now. Of course, the only ones not laughing are Raven's group. And a certain surprised prince. "Raven...is this true?" Danny asked Raven. Before Raven could say anything, Princess interrupts, "Oh forget it! It's stupid! Danny my love, we are but a kiss away from our 'happily ever after'. Now kiss me!" Pirncess puckers us expecting Danny to kiss her. Danny, on the other hand, looked out the window seeing that the sun is about to set. He knew what he must do. Yet he is not sure he would regret doing it. Still... "'By night one day, by day another'." Danny said, repeating what Clockwork told him before. He then nodded as he turned to Raven saying, "There is something I wanted to show you before..." As everyone else watched, Danny stepped back. Soon the sun sets completely. Suddenly Danny transforms to the surprise of everyone. When he's done, he is back to his other form, Danny Phantom. Everyone looked shocked and/or surprised. A lady in the audience fainted. Danny smiles sheepishly. Raven is the most surprised of them all and looked sheepishly as well. "Well, that explains everything." Of course, someone else isn't so understanding. "A ghost?!" yelled Princess furiously. "I hate ghosts, they're ugly! Bowser! Iggy! Lemmy! Guards!" Bowser, the koopalings, and their men run forward as they separated Raven from Danny. Princess yelled out as she points at Raven's group, "Get those things out of my sight now! Get them all!" The group finds themselves struggling as Raven tried to reach the boy she loved. "No!" screamed Raven. "Raven!" yelled Danny in horror as Bowser's men grabbed him. "That stupid magic stuff is nothing!" snapped Princess as she grabs a crown from a podium nearby and puts it on. "This marriage is binding, and that makes me queen! See?!" "Let go of me!" yelled Danny. "Raven!" "No!" Raven cried out alarmed. Inside Princess's quarters, Gordon and Waffle came in and sees the decorations that used to be toons, demons, and other stuff, including Mr. Blik and a certain two tailed fox. "We got to find a way to change them all back!" yelled Gordon. "How about that device that we saw her used right over there?" asked Waffle stupidly as he points at a device near a wall. "Waffle...you're a genius!" "I am?" Gordon takes the device and switched it to 'normal'. Then he and Waffle gathered the objects into one place. Then Gordon aims the device correctly. "Okay...now!" yelled Gordon as he pushed a button. A blast hits the objects. And when all is clear, the objects soon turned back into the creatures from the forest. "Hey, what? What just happened?" yelled Mr. Blik alarmed. "Man, why are my tails feel like someone is using them for a comb?" groaned Tails feeling his tails. "Is everyone okay?" asked Gordon happily. "Wow! They're all back! Spleen!" said Waffle happoily. "I will once my neck and the fact that Dr. Hamsterviel let me get turned into something by that brat princess clears uo." groaned Pete feeling his neck. Inside the church, Raven and her friends begin fighting off the guards. "I got ya now!" laughed a Hammer Brother as he gets ready to hit Raven with his hammer. Suddenly a blast came outta nowhere and knocks him down. "Huh?" asked Raven confused, wondering whose fired. "Yo, Raven! Need some help? The half demon turned and smiles as four familiar friends of hers appeared. "My friends, the Teen Titans!" said Raven with a smile. Then he said, "But who, how?" "Sorry we didn't see ya earlier but we have trouble finding your beautiful home." said Starfire happily. "And when we came into Cartoonville, a superhero boy told us a cloaked half demon is trying to stop a wedding. So we decided to crashed too." explained Robin with a smirk. "You won't stop me, you idiots!" yelled Princess. "I am more superior than everyone one of you all!" "You aren't superior to anything, you brat!" Suddenly more familiar figures appeared behind the Teen Titans. It is Lilo, Stitch, Mario, Luigi, Peach, Daisy, the Drawn Together gang (except for Wooldoor and Xandir since they are busy elsewhere), Sora, Donald, Goofy, Mickey, Minnie, Riku, and Kairi. "Oh, did we mentioned we bought backup?" asked Beast Boy with a smirk. "You have perscuted us because of how we look for the last time." said Peach angrily. "It's a-payback time!" agreed Luigi getting his vacuum cleaner out. "Don't stand there! Get rid of them!" ordered Princess. Bowser's men goes after the ones opposing Princess. Of course, the heroes managed to knock them down. "This is-a for forcing me-a to give up my adopted daughter!" yelled Mario as he kicks Bowser in the shin, knocking him back. Stitch meanwhile slammed Iggy and Lemmy's heads together. Meanwhile, Raven tries to push her way through the goons trying to get to Danny. "Get out of my way!" yelled Raven angrily as she tries to forced her way in. But more of Bowser's men piled on her. "I'd make you regret the day we met! I will see to you that you all be drawn and quarters and only death can save you!" screamed Princess furiously. Then taking out a knife, he held it near Danny's thrat. "And as for you, my so-called husband..." "Danny!" yelled Raven in horror. "I'd make sure you go back into that tower in pieces! I am the queen!" Raven got a hand free and she quickly whistled. Princess continued ranting, "I will have order! I will have perfection! I will have..." Suddenly a roar is heard and the front altar window opened up. Jake with Dash and June riding him barges in. Jake smirked evilly as he leans down on Princess. All she could do is looked and screamed as Jake swallowed her up in one gulp. "Okay, no one moves! My boo here is a dragon and I am not scared to use him!" June yelled viciously. "I am a dog on the edge." Jake soon belched as he spit out Princess's crown that soon fell onto the ground. "Man, she needs to bathe." said Jake with a frown. The good guys laughed as Cyborg laughed, "Man, these celebrity weddings never lasted, do they?" Everyone in the church cheered. With Princess now gone, they no longer have any reason to fear her and her men. Gordon, Waffle, and everyone that was changed back cheered as they came in. "Hey! Everyone's back to normal!" said Waffle happily. "Yep." Gordon said with a smile. "Uhhh...what happened?" asked Iggy stupidly. "The witch got eaten! Ding dong the witch is dead!" laughed Lemmy stupidly. "All right! It's about time!" cheered Bowser with a smirk. "Huh? I thought you were on her side?" asked Lilo puzzled. "Nah! She forced me to do what she said. Besides, she's a spoiled brat always calling me up at 2 in the morning to make her chocolate pudding! Personally, I am glad she is dragon food!" With a smile, Robin said to Raven, "Go ahead, Raven." "Yeah, tell him." said June smiling as well. Blushing, Raven comes forward to Danny and begins to say, "Uh, Danny?" "Yeah, Raven?" asked Danny smiling. "I...I love you." Danny blushed. "Really?" "Really, really." said Raven with a smile. "I love you too." said Danny smiling back. Looking at each other, the two lovers leaned foreard...and kissed lovingly. Smiling, Kronk takes out a card, wrote something on the back, and hold it up to the audience. It said, 'Awwww'. And yes folks. This time I mean it. "Awwww." said the audience with a smile. Suddenly the magic of whatever Danny is under pulled him away into the air. As everyone watched, Danny begins to shines brightly. One could hear a familiar voice of someone who once told Danny something. "Until you find true love's first kiss and then take love's true form." said Clockwork's voice echoing. Danny's eyes widen open as he gets consumed by the break. He soon makes a big flashed breaking every framed glass window that has Princess on it in the altar. Soon all is done and Danny landed back on the ground. Jake noticed that one of the glass windows with Princess on it is still standing and he elbowed it, breaking it. "Jake!" said Dash rolling his eyes. "What? I didn't get a chance to break things all day, yo!" protested Jake as June laughed. Raven comes over to helped Danny up. The boy, as he recovers, looked confused as he looks himself over. He is still in ghost form! "Danny? Are you okay?" asked Raven hopefully. "I...I don't get it. I am supposed to be handsome." said Danny surprised and disappointed. Raven smiles lovingly as she said, "You are handsome." Soon both Raven and Danny blushed as they smiled at each other. "Ohhhh...I was hoping this would be a happy ending." giggled June on Jake's back happily. The two leaned forward to kiss. Then, as if to break the fourth wall, they looked at us. Raven smiles and covers the camera as she and Danny then kissed. Later, everyone in the crowd cheered as Raven and Danny, in new wedding clothes, got married in the forest. As they smiled after they kissed, a song played from outta nowhere. Man: I thought love was only true in fairy tales Nearby, the Rugrats are in a band performing as Dylan plays the guitar. They all shouted, "Oy!" Everyone in the crowd cheers, including those who weren't at the wedding. Meant for someone else but not for me Danny and Raven runs through the crowd as SpongeBob and the Teen Titans watched happily and smiling proudly. Love was out to get me That's the way it seemed Disappointment haunted all my dreams Cosmo and Wanda turned and onion into a carriage and two mice into horses. "I liked Cinderella!" squealed Cosmo stupidly and happily. And then I saw her face Now I'm a believer and not a trace Of doubt in my mind Raven with a smile tosses her bouqet. Roxas and Tommy, full awake, fights as they each try to catch up. But Jake came out of nowhere and catches it with his mouth. He is standing next to June looking at her. Jake and June blushed as Danny and Raven smiles and waved to them. I'm in love Ooh-aah I'm a believer I couldn't leave her If I tried The whole audience, friends and whatnot, waved goodbye to Danny and Raven as they go on their go on their honeymoon. Kronk holds Tails as the two waved goodbye. "God bless us, every one!" said Tails happily. "Man, I think I heard that a several times in parodies. As the band begins to strike up, Jake said to June, "Yo, is it alright if I sing this? The song would make sense coming from a guy!' "Go for it, Jakey Wakey!" laughed June. "Come on, yo!' exclaimed Jake as he begins to sing and looked at June happily. Jake: Then I saw her face Ha-ha Now I'm a believer A few characters, the Catscratch trio and Stitch included, are in a chorus line kicking. Listen! Not a trace Of doubt in my mind With the dancers, Ermintrude was dancing with Brian who smiles happily at her. June then sings along with Jake as they smiled at each other. I'm in love Ooh-aah I'm a believer I couldn't leave her if I tried The Mousekewitz was dancing on a piano nearby. Papa Mousekewitz wasn't watching where he was going as she knocks his wife and daughter down by accident. Then I saw her face Now I'm a believer Hey! A few of the audience were playing limbo with Lilo and Stitch holding both ends of the limbo stick. The guy wearing the princess costume was next and tried to go under but his costume head was too big and he fell to the ground. Not a trace Uhh! Yeah. Even Ember and her ghost pirates were there for the wedding as they danced along with Riku. Of doubt in my mind "One more time!" exclaimed June excited. I'm in love I'm a believer Tails meanwhile, in revenge, pushed down the Princess plush down until only the top of her head is visible. Jake then dances like mad in front of the band and Dylan. Come on! I believe, I believe, I believe, I believe, I believe, I believe, I believe, I believe, I believe, hey On a mat, Mickey, Donald, ands Goofy were all making dance moves and spinning. They stopped and posed making the crowd cheered. "Y'all sing it with me!" Jake said calling out to the crowd. Tails was laughing while he dance with the toy bridge. The crowd begins to sing along happily. Crowd: I Believe I believe "People in the back!" Jake yelled as the crowd in the out waved their hands in the air like they just don't care. I believe I'm a believer I believe I believe I believe I believe As for Danny and Raven themselves, they rode off in their onion carriage into the sunset. And they lived ugly ever after. June wearing slades laughing madly as he said, "Man! That is so hiliarious! You are so cute!" She hugged Jake tightly making him blushed and unable to breath. "Oh boy. I can't breathe. I can't breathe." laughed Jake trying to breath. The End Author's note The story is finally over. Yes, Neros, as you can see, I did used the characters you asked for in your reviewes. If anyone asked if I'm going to parody the Shrek swamp karaoky party, we'd wait and see. Until then, thank you for reading this and review away. |
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