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| JusSonic | Aug 25 2012, 12:42 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note All right, time to begin this MLP fanmake of the 1980s film Goonies, which features a cast of ponies, regular or OC. Also, Billy Arratoon, maybe for Lorcan. Who knows? Prologue: The Great and Powerful Escape The story begins as we close in on a pony skull and crossbones, going into one of the eyes. "JusSonic Presents" We hear a noise as if a cell door is opening. "A JusSonic Fanfiction" We now zoom back out as the pony skull and crossbones is now part of the fic's title. "My Little Pony Goonies" In Ponyville, there is a jailhouse where the prisoners are allowed to leave their cells for lunch. A pony guard named Cracker Roll pushes a button to open all the doors to do so. "All right, it's time for lunch! The more you bark, the colder your meal gets!" Cracker Roll snaps as the prisoners leave, heading out to lunch. The guard then notices that one prisoner is not in sight. Turning to the open cell at the end, Cracker Roll snaps, "Hey prisoner in the last cell! Time for lunch!" Weird, the prisoner isn't coming out. Cracker Roll heads to the cell and looks in. To his sight, he saw her hanging by a rope near the top of the cell as if she has committed suicide. This is a blue coated female Unicorn with a light mane and tail, light violet eyes, she has a magic wand sprinkling pixie dust as a cutie mark. The prisoner is also wearing a collar to keep her from using her magic to escape. Her name is Trixie Lulamoon or the Great and Powerful Trixie, per her stage name before she became a criminal. Cacker Roll shook his head in shock. Trixie has obviously committed suicide by hanging herself. The guard, seeing a note taped to her which said ' To whom it may concern', takes it, suspecting it to be a last confession. The guard turns the note over, reading the back, "'You foalish guard. You actually think that I, the Great and Powerful Trixie', will go and kill myself?' Wait, kill myself?" Cracker Roll looks up and to his surprise, Trixie is smirking, aive and well. She quickly hits the guard, sending him to the cell door unconscious. "Ha! These ponies are easy to fool!" Trixie taunts as she took the fake rope off her neck before getting down to remove a pipe she has put around her back. The suicide plan has work! She took the keys from Cracker Roll and use them to remove the collar off herself. After getting the last of her things, like her magician's hat and cape, Trixie drops the pipe near Cracker Roll and takes her leave, taunting, "Time for the Great and Powerful Trixie to make hr daring escape!" ----------------------------- Outside the jailhouse, another pony is using his magic to pour a ring of gasoline at the front entrance, planning to help in Trixie's escape. He is a dark blue coated unicorn with blood red eyes, a blood red mane and tail. The unicorn has an eye patch over his right eye and is wearing a star like cape and wears black shoes on each hoof. Underneath the cape itself is a cutie mark of a snake that goes through a skull. His name is Merluck, Trixie's brother. Another unicorn is waiting behind the wheel of a ORV nearby. It's a male unicorn with a mid-night black coat, blood red eyes, and a blood red mane and tail. He has a dragon skull for a cutie mark. The villain is also a blood red outfit with yellow stripes at the hooves part as wll as blue and yellow stars blood red cape. His name is Smaug, Trixie and Merluck's father. "Merluck, come on!" Smaug snaps to Merluck. The son threw the gasoline can into the car's back and goes into the passenger side. He smirks evilly as Merluck's horn begins to glow. "All right, here she comes!" As Smaug got the ORV started, Trixie rush out of the jailouse, not slowing down since the guards are after her. Seeing the car, the female unicorn rush over to the back seat and tries to get in...but to her frustration, the door is locked and this is the kind of vehicles that you can't teleport into. "Merluck, open the door, it's locked!" Trixie snaps to her brother in annoyance. "Let go of the handle you idiot!" Merluck snaps to Trixie impatiently. "I don't even have the handle, just open the lock!" "Trixie, we don't got time for this foolishness!" Smaug scowls at his daughter impatiently. It won't be long before the guards would come out of the place. "Sunroof, now!" "Dad, come on!" Trixie protests to Smaug in annoyance. "Trixie, get in now, get going!" "The sunroof is open, come in, get going!" Merluck snaps impatiently as Trixie quickly climbs onto the car as she prepares to go into the back of the car via the sunroof. "Come on, get down!" Smaug yells at his kids impatiently. "Thanks, dad." Trixie remarks sarcasticall as she got into the car's back seat safe and sound. The guards are now leaving the jailhouse. Merluck uses his magic to roll down his window and fires a magical blast at the gasoline that he poured onto the ground. Sure enough, a ring of fire appears at the entrance, blocing the guards from getting to the villain. Merluck laughs madly as he roll up his window. Merluck got the car into gear while driving off in a big hurry. "Starring Tara Strong" "Amy Palant" Only one guard escapes being trapped as he turns his vehicle around, beginning to chase the Lulamoons through Ponyville. "Andrew Francis" The guard fires magic blasts at the car while chasing it. Smaug was eating some cupcakes as he dodge the bullet shots while driving. "Andrea Libman" Soon more of the Ponyville's best join the chase, firing at the cars in hopes to take the Lulamoons down. They got a few hits but the chase still continues onward. "Ashleigh Bell" During this time at a footfield, a football is thrown into the air, one of the jock Pegasi ponies caught it. "Britt McKillip" One female alicorn put a tape into the player. music plays as the tryouts begins. It's female alicorn that had a long dark violet, moderate rose, and pale gold mane, grayish purple eyes, her coat is pale, light grayish cerise, and her cutie mark is a teal heart within gold lace. She is also wearing a tiara and a necklace. Her name is Princess Cadance. "Okay, time for the victory pyramid, everypony!" Cadance exclaims to the ponies, helping them out for the victory pyramid. "We're going to start on this movie. Now next row, put your hooves up, put your ooves up..." As this goes, the alicorn fails to see the police chase rushing by, even when the sirens are heard. "Smile good...yes, you got it!" "Matt Hill" The chase goes down the streets, the villain rush around a street corner with the guards chasing, going through a red light while going by someone trying to cross. It is a female zebra with turquoise eyes, a striped mohawked mane of white and dark gray, and a coat that is striped of dark and light gray. She wears ornate jewelry and has a spiral sun for a cutie mark. Her name is Zecora. Zecora yelps as the guard cops rush by. She rush across the street to avoid any more chance of the chase happening. "Tabitha St. Germain" Another car chase is happening but it is happening on TV in another house. Some pony is making driving noises while watching the action. It's a light blue female Pegasu pony with a rainbow mane and tail, pink eyes and a marking of a cloud and a rainbow shaped lightning bolt on her flank. Her name is Rainbow Dash. Rainbow's father Timothy Tyler, a big dark blue pony with brown eyes, a brown mane and a lightning bolt through a heart as a cutie mark, is working under the counter, doing some plumbing. He is doing work on a client's pipes but the TV is making it difficult for him to work. "Rainbow, turn that TV off, I'm trying to work." Timothy insists to Rainbow with a sigh. "I can't hear myself think!" "Fine, yeah." Rainbow groans as she roll her eyes before turning the TV off. But the pony looks surprised to hear sirens still, unaware that the Lulamoon car chase is rushing by. Rainbow hits the TV a few times, wondering if the thing is broken. "Weird." Rainbow flies over to the counter and looks into the sink as her father calls out, "Is the water going down, Rainbow?" "No..." Rainbow suddenly yelps as water came out of the sink like mad, getting her wet. "Going down now?" Timothy ask as he came out from under the sink but yelps upon seeing what's happening. The father works on turning the water off. "Oh, my bad!" "Also starring Michelle Creber, Claire Corlett and Madeline Peters as the Cutie Mark Crusaders" "Cathy Weseluck" "Jason Marsden" "Kathleen Barr" As the chase goes by a dock, Merluck blast magic right out his window, with Trixie doing the same thing. The bad guys and guards goes by a stallion who has dunked his head in a bucket. "Brian Cox" "Tim Curry" The stallion got his head out with a crab in and before tossing it. He is a male Pegasus pony with moderate emerald green eyes, a dark grayish phthalo blue mane, a very pale cornflower blue coat, and a yellow lightning bolt with wings for a cutie mark. The pony is also wearing goggles on his head. His name is Soarin', a member of the Wonderbolts, who also didn't notice the chase going by. In an alleyway, another pony turns around. It's a orange female Earth pony with green eyes, blonde mane and tail, both in a ponytail, wears only a cowboy hat and has three apples marking on her flank. Her name is Applejack. Applejack is wearing a device that she activates, causing it to stick a drum nearby. The mare is working out some devices to help make things better for her life. She smirks as Applejack herself saw the drum being towed towards her. "Casting by JusSonic C.S.A., Anonymous But Interested C.S.A., and Billy Arratoon C.S.A. Suddenly without warning, the drum stops...and Applejack screams as she finds herself being towed towards the drum nonstop. The pony fell in headfirst. As she struggles and yell, the guard chase rushes by. In fact, of all the ponies in Ponyville, only one took notice of the chase, being at an arcade eating cupcakes and drinking a milk shake. It's a female pink Earth pony with dark pink curly mane and tail, bright blue eyes and two blue and one yellow balloons marking on her flank. Her name is Pinkie Pie. "Wow, a guard chase!" Pinkie giggles, seeing the chase going by and rushing over to a window to watch. "Music Score by V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G." "Magic even!" Pinkie exclaims, pressing against the window as she saw magic blasts being used. But unfortunately, the pony press against the window so hard that her food and milkshake that she's using got smear against the window and burst open, spilling all over herself. The pony look at the mess, groaning, "Aw, horse feathers!" "Film Editor JusSonic A.C.E." Eventually, the Lulamoon almost crash into a truck while going by it. The guards were forced to stop their vehicles to avoid crashing. That gave the crooks a chance to escape. Smaug drives his car down a road to a nearby bench. The villain laughs as his daughter ask puzzled, "Dad, what are we doing in this dry and wet place?" "Trust your daddy, kids!" Smaug insists to his kids evilly. "Throw this thing into 4 wheel drive and hang on to your capes and hats!" "Production Designer Neros Urameshi" Merluck nods as he throw the car into 4-wheel, causing it to rush forward. At this opponent, a ORV beach rally is being held at the beach, a lot of ponies in their vehicles are waiting, not noticing an extra ORV joininh the thing. "Let's begin the 3rd annual ORV rally!" An announcer exclaims excitedly. "Director of Photography acosta perez jose ramiro" "Get set...and go!" The announcer booms as some pony waves a flag to begin the race. A lot of ORVs rush by as the rally is now in motion. "Executive Producers JusSonic, Julayla Beryl and KingHuffman" Now due to so many ORVs, it's hard for anyone to find the Lulamoon's vehicle. Plus the crooks rush through to the crowd to escape those wanting to get them. "Original Screenplay by Chris Columbus" "Original Story by Steven Spielberg" "Produced by JusSonic and Anonymous But Interested" And thus, the Lulamoon also got to the head of the packing and leaving the race, making their big escape. Author's noe The Lulamoons has got away, but they will be back. In the next chapter, we meet Twilight Sparkle, Spike, Shining Armor and Starlight, all of them are reuniting for what could be their last day at the Goon Docks. Read, review and suggest. 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| V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G. | Aug 25 2012, 03:38 PM Post #2 |
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Hi Jus, me here. ~ I'm wondering? Since you put my name in the script board, do you want me to help get some music lyrics for you or try to make the scene? Cause I'm a little lost here, so I thought I ask and find out? If you were still gonna put the music thing down and just posted my name to fill in a void spot, then hey, I guess that makes sense? I just was wondering, this way, I can be filled in about what's going on? |
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| JusSonic | Aug 25 2012, 03:47 PM Post #3 |
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Well, I kinda put your name in the music slot since you came up with the music for your Kingdom Hearts fic. Hope you don't mind. |
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| V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G. | Aug 25 2012, 04:29 PM Post #4 |
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Wha? You kidding me? ~ Heck, I don't mind at all. I just wanted an answer, and I got it, so it's all good. Why, if you thought I was someone to fit in a script title cast, you can go right away and use it. (As many other future stories as you like) After all, we're good pals, we give one another reviews, and I help in some of your work I'm attracted to. So please, I just feel so honored, is all, and now that I know of this, I couldn't be more happier then to be apart of your, in a way of speaking 'Opening & Closing Names List' category for any future works. ~ So, continue the good work, and it'll be something to see more of your future works, in the future. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 27 2012, 02:01 AM Post #5 |
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Author's note Well, good reviews, folks. To PMD-Rokon, probably doesn't matter if I get the name right. It's still the same voice actress, right? Right. And to cornholio4, if you read the last chapter of the previous fanmake, you will know. Chapter 1: The Final Weekend In a part of Ponyville is a house that belongs to the Sparkles. This is of course also the usual hang out of a group of pony misfits who called themselves the 'Goonies' who get into interesting adventure that get them into trouble at times. Sadly, this is going to be the last Goonie weekend. Inside, a mare sat on her bed in her room with a sigh, "Wow, feeling depressed, Starlight?" She is a violet unicorn with a black-purple mane and tail that had Pink stripes on it, purple eyes and a pink star marking on her flank. Her name is Twilight Sparkle. "I know, nuts, huh?" An unicorn colt remarks with a sigh as he does some last weekend homework. The colt himself has a blue and white striped mane and tail, a gray coat and an adventure hat for a cutie mark. His name is Starlight, Twilight's brother. "Honestly, who cares about what happens to this dump?" "Starlight, you don't mean it." "Who cares about the Goon Docks and this house? I really can't wait to get out of here!" "Oh really?" Another voice remarks as an unicorn stallion is working with weights nearby. He had a moderate sapphire blue, moderate cerulean, and dark phthalate blue mane and tail, moderate cerulean eyes, a turquoish white coat, moderate sapphire blue hooves. He also has a purple shield with a pink six-pointed star and has three small light blue stars above it cutie mark. His name is Shining Armor, Twilight and Starlight's big brother. "Twilight's right, you don't really mean it." "Nah." Starlight said with a sigh. "To be honest, I was trying to dilate...err, I mean dictate myself. I..." "Delude yourself, Starlight." Twilight explains to her little brother with a sigh. Starlight has trouble with his words that his sister usually corrects him. "Yeah, I knew that. I was trying to get used to leaving my house tomorrow." "Man, this stinks." A familiar voice remarks as someone came into the room, putting papers into Twilight's suitcase. It's a baby light purple with a light chartreuse dragon with moderate sap green scales, a greenish gray underbelly and light lime ears and chartreuse green eyes. His name is Spike the Dragon, Twilight's assistant and adoptive brother. "I wish we didn't have to leave." "I know...but we have to have courage." Twilight remarks as Starlight puffs on his aspirator, the colt is using it due to him having asthma attacks. The colt trots over to Shining's room, where the stallion is exercising from, and jumps onto the stallion's chest, causing the weights to nearly go down onto him. Twilight and Spike enters as the mare said, "Listen, try to be brave, little brother." "I know, thanks for your words of encouragement." Starlight said then turns to Shining. "And thanks for always being there for us at..." "I know how you feel, I'm going to miss this place too." Shining said while smiling. Then mischievously, the stallion lifts the wrights up, making Starlight yelp as he got lifted up too. "Ha!" "Whoa, careful!" Spike exclaims quickly. Just then a knock s heard at the door, causing the brothers to try to get to it but Shining devilishly push Starlight aside. "Adopted colt!" "Hey, I am not adopted!" Starlight protest in annoyance as he, Twilight and Spike chases their brother downstairs. "I will get you for that, Shining!" "Relax, Shining's only joking." Twilight said with a sigh as the siblings downstars. As Shining goes into the living room, he peeks around the corner to see a familiar mare combing her mane and her adoptive sister at the screen dpor. The stallion roll his eyes while saying, "Oh, it's Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo." "Oh, Spike, can you open the door please?" "What am I? Your slave all of the sudden?" Spike groans in annoyance. As Shining goes over to do spring-type chest exercises on a device in an armchair, the baby dragon opens the screen to let Rainbow and her adoptive sister in. The adoptive sister has an orange coat, grayish purple eyes, and a ragged, pale short pink mane as well as a pink tail. Her name is Scootaloo whose exclaims, "Hey everypony!" Rainbow, drinking a Pepsi, smirks while imitating Rocky Bullboa, "Yo, Twiley! Twiley, see Ape-drian?" "Hey, Rainbow, Scootaloo." Starlight comments as Rainbow put one hoof onto the coffee table. "What's up?" "Rainbow, get your hoof off the table." Shining sighs to Rainbow in annoyance while exercising a bit. Rainbow roll his eyes while saying, "Right, right. Come on, have you ponies gone lame or something? This isn't a nuclear Saturday, it's our last weekend! You know, our last Goonie one?" "Yeah, every since those developers develop to foreclose on our homes, things has gone sad all over." Spike said while eating chips from a bag. The baby dragon has a point: this is the Goonies' last weekend at th Goon Docks due to some rich ponies deciding to foreclose on their homes, planning on destroying the community to make way for a golf course! "Twilight, couldn't you send a letter to Princess Celestia, asking her to do something?" Scootaloo ask Twilight in concern. The filly of course is preferring to the purple unicorn's mentor and teacher, the princess and ruler of Equestria. "You think I didn't already? The princess has no control as to what the council of Ponyville does! I must've send a lot of letters." Twilight said with a sigh. No matter what happens, no pony, not even the Sparkles' father, can save the Goon Docks. "We should be go out in style, cruising the coast and every awesome thing! But nooo, we couldn't, because why?" Rainbow ask as she leans towards Shining, exercising with his springs while trying to ignore hr. "Some stallion got to go and mess it up!" Shining frowns as she swings at Rainbow, but misses her. Spike sighs, "Rainbow Dash." "Wow. You flunk you driver's test? You must be lamer than I thought!" Shining comment, "You know, you can fly faster than most land vehicles under your own steam anyway, so it's not like you couldn't have gone there anyway." Rainbow admit, "Yeah, but I'm not strong enough to carry all of you with me, and I wouldn't want to go if I couldn't bring my little sis, all of my friends and their siblings. I may be a jerk, but at least I'm a loyal jerk." Suddenly a familiar voice is heard from outside, calling out, "Ponies, girls, oh, I got to best! You wouldn't believe me in a super-duper zillion eyars! Let me in!" "Jerk pony alert!" Scootaloo booms as she and Rainbow goes outside, seeing a familiar pony hopping up and down near the closed gate of the place. With her is another mare who looks at her in concern. She's a pale yellow Pegasus pony with a long pink mane and tail, cyan eyes. Her cutie mark is three butterflies. Her name is Fluttershy. "It's Pinkie Pie...and Fluttershy is with her." "Ponies, ponies, I ain't telling a story this time, I saw the coolest thing ever, right Fluttershy?" Pinkie ask Fluttershy eagerly. "Well, I guess, if you say so." Fluttershy said to Pinkie Pie meekly while turning to the gate, "Uh, Rainbow Dash? Can you let us in?" "Only if you two do the Flankey-Wankey." Rainbow said devilishly, much to the two mares' dismay. They know what 'Flankey-Wankey' is...and don't like it at all! "Oh, come on!" Pinkie whines to Rainbow in protest. "Do it." Scootaloo said to Pinkie and Fluttershy with a smile to Rainbow. "Come on, don't make me do it too." Fluttershy said to the Dash sisters meekly and worried. "Do it!" Rainbow and Scootaloo exclaims madly to the two mares by the gate. Pinkie and Fluttershy sighs, they have no choice. The two ponies got on two tree stumps nearby then turns around. The two mares made weird faces and shake their flanks to Rainbow, jigglign themselves while making lunatic noises, much to their embarrassment. Both Rainbow and Scootaloo laughs like crazy hyenas. They are obviously enjoying this lack of dignity! Twilight groans as she said, "Rainbow, cut it out." Her friend always do this to Pinkie or any pony with her. Twilight got up from her seat and heads outside, using her magic to pull on a cord. This causes a tiny bucket to raise up and release a bowling ball. Pinkie and Fluttershy stops what they're doing and climb down their tree stumps. The bowling ball rolls across the railing, falling into another bucket. This causes a chain reaction which involve inventions, chicken and such. Soon the sprinkler is turned on, causing a rope to open the gate. Pinkie squeals, "Thanks, everypony, thanks!" She and Fluttershy rush up the pathway to the door. "Oh, oh! You ponies won't believe me when I tell you this but do so anyway, it's the truth! And..." Of course, Rainbow closes the screen door onto the two ponies, making Fluttershy exclaims, "Rainbow Dash!" "Starlight, feed the fish." Shining said to Starlight who nods and goes over to an aquarium to fish the family's fish. "You really flunk you driver's test?" Spike ask Shining with a sigh. "Honestly, it's like I don't know you anymore." "Spike, shut up!" Pinkie opens the door as she and Fluttershy came into the house, the yellow Pegasus pony said meekly, "Uh, well. Pinkie said that she got something important to say and wanted to wait to come here to do so." "Yeah! This is going to sound weird but it's true!" Pinkie squeals as she bounces up and down in the house. "Okay, I was in the arcade when I saw two guard vehicles chasing this super duper four wheel deal, an ORV, a real one! There is magic blasts all over! It's the most amazing thing I've ever seen - at least in THIS continuity." "More amazing than when Bugs Bunny came over to your house to use the bathroom?" Rainbow ask Pinkie in amusement as Starlight is finished feeding the fish. The pink pony has told so many tell tales, it's hard to believe her anymore even when Pinkie tells the truth. "More amazing than the time you saved fifteen ponies from a bakery fire?" Shining ask Pinkie with a smirk of amusement while shaking his head. "More amazing than the time you single-handedly fought and defeated Nightmare Moon, Discord AND the Changeling Queen all at once?" Scootaloo ask with a giggle. "More amazing than the time you ate twenty times your own weight in cookies, pies and cakes?" Twilight ask Pinkie, arching an eyebrow at Pinkie's 'tall tale'. "More amazing than the time you threw a party for ALL the major world leaders and their families?" Fluttershy ask Pinkie with a nod. "And I'll bet it was even more amazing than the time you successfully sued a certain fan fiction writer who shall remain nameless for the damage a certain story did to your reputation?" Spike ask Pinkie with a chuckle as he break a gem into pieces before eating it. Pinkie groans while saying, "Okay, Rainbow. I admit it, Bugs Bunny DIDN'T come over to my house to use the bathroom - but BUSTER Bunny did." "Honestly, telling tall tales again?" Another voice spoke up as two more ponies came into the house. One of them is a purple mane light azure grey unicorn with light blue eyes and three diamonds on her flank. Her name is Rarity. The other pony is a filly who is small, adorable-looking and has a whitish-coat, big sap-green eyes, a unicorn horn and a purple and pink mane and tail. Her name is Sweetie Belle, Rarity's sister. "Oh, Rarity, hi!" Spike exclaims eagerly as he cleans up a part of the room. "I am happy to see that you made it!" The other ponies chuckles a bit. The baby dragon got an obvious crush on Rarity. "You look more beautiful than ever!" "That's nice of you to say, Spikey-Wikey." Rarity said with a smile as Sweetie goes over to play with Scootaloo. "So are we all here?" "Not yet, we're waiting for Applejack to show up." Starlight said with a nod. "I wonder what's keeping her." -------- As if to answer Starlight's question, on a balcony of a house next door, a familiar pony is putting a casette into a walkman strapped to her back while she is preparing to use a hook on a cable to get to the Sparkle's next door. Another filly is riding in a strappack on the mare's back. She had golden yellow fur and a red mane that had a big red bow in it. Her name is Apple Bloom, Applejack's sister. As the tape plays, so does music as Applejack exclaims, "Yeehaw, time fer 'dis pony 'ta time 'dis right! All righty, Apple Bloom, git ready fer 'de Wings o' Flight! Hold on!" "Ready, sis!" Apple Bloom giggles as she held onto her sister. Applejack then begins to slide down the cable, heading to the house quickly. Twilight looks up to see the Apple sisters heading to the house. The mare yelps, "Horse apples! Not again! Rainbow, the screen door, open the screen door!" "Whoa, Twilight, girls! Open 'de screen door, open 'de..." Applejack begins to yelp in alarm, the screen door is closed. Too late for Rainbow to open it. The Apple sisters crash right through, crashing into their friends and knocking them all over. As this happens, Pinkie collides with a tall porcelain statue of a stallon that is on a table, but luckily she caught it in time. Starlight groans, "Aw, geez, Pinkie Pie." "Honestly, Applejack, you need to work on those gadgets of yours, they aren't appropriable when it comes to little fillies!" Rarity complains to Applejack while getting back up. "Sorry about 'dat. Yew okay, Apple Bloom?" Applejack ask her sister who is still in the strap pack. "Let's do 'dat again!" Apple Bloom giggles to Applejack as she clibms out of the bag, safe and sound. "Wow, that is great! You gotta let us ride sometime!" Scootaloo exclaims to Apple Bloom with Sweetie laughing in agreement. The ponies glare at Pinkie who smiles while putting the statue back onto the table. The pink pony giggles, "Hee hee! You thought I was going to drop it? Betcha you think that from Pinkie Pie!" Unfortunately, the statue itself fell off the table, crashing onto the floor. "Pinkie Pie!" Shining exclaims in anger to Pinkie. "Oh horse feathers!" Twilight and Starlight exclaims as they jump towards the statue, helping Pinkie pick it right up. "Look, not even broken! Isn't that amazing?" Pinkie laughs happily. Of course, the pink pony didn't see that Twilight and Starlight are shocked and/or horrified, especially the colt who held the aspiration in his mouth. "Oh Celestia!" Twilight screams as she use her magic to quickly grab something off the floor. "What, what's wrong?" "Pinkie Pie, that is mom's favorite's piece!" Starlight groans in despair as Twilight found the piece that she's looking for and try to put it back onto the statue. Looks like Pinkie has made...a certain piece fall off. "What is it, what?" Pinkie ask in confusion. "Oh, mom is going to freak." "What is it? What?" Sweetie ask puzzled as she and her filly friends try to get a closer look as to what broke off. "What broke off?" Apple Bloom ask, curious as well. "Err, trust me, fillies, you're too young to understand!" Spike yelps as he block the Cutie Mark Crusaders', the name of the fillies' group, sight from the statue. They are too young to see what Twilight is trying to fix. "Right, it involves something that you three shouldn't see just yet." Rarity said in agreement. "We all wouldn't be here if it wasn't Mrs. Sparkle's favorite." Rainbow jokes while smiling like Groucho Donkey. "Shut up, Rainbow Dash!" Twilight, Starlight and Rarity snaps to Rainbow in annoyance. "Right, shut up, Rainbow." Shining remarks bored as he hang upside down on an exercise pole while doing exercises. "Yew ponies heard of Decolt?" Applejack ask her friends while looking at a map nearby. "I don't know." Starlight groans as he watch Twilight working on fixing the statue some more. "Oh, sure. That's where Potown got started." Scootaloo explains to Applejack with a smirk. "Rainbow Dash said that that city got the highest murder rate in Equestria." "Yeah, I know, awesome ain't it?" Rainbow remarks to her friends with a nod. "Oh dear, sounds too dangerous and...bloody." Fluttershy gulps nervously by Rainbow and Scootaloo's explaination. "Eeyup, but our family is done moving there when we lose our farm tomorrow." Apple Bloom explains to her friends with a sigh. "Of course, we have 'ta find another farm outside 'de city but until then..." "Forget it, it won't happen, Apple Bloom! My dad will fix it, I know it!" Twilight snaps, refusing to believe that the Goonies will have to leave the Goon Docks, never to hang out together again. Their father is the most respected members of the community, trying his best to figure out a way to stop their homes from being destroyed. "Sure, dad can do it...if he gets 400 paychecks by tomorrow afternoon." Shining remarks sarcastically while exercising some ore. "Come on, dad can do it and so can you, Shining." Starlight snaps in determination. "As well as Princess Chest...Trestia..." "Celestia, Starlight." Twilight corrects her brother while working on the statue repairs some more. "Right, Celestia! They will do their best to save the Goon Docks!" Pinkie Pie comment, "I thought Shining was supposed to be doing the 'word correction'." She then remember, "Oh, right. The "'word correction'" stuff is more in character for Twilight anyway." Twilight admit, "And the main reason Dad and Shining have a hard time raising the money needed to save the house is because my every attempt to use my magic to help with the bills has ended up backfiring miserably, leaving us even deeper in debt than before." "Plus, the princess can't control the council's decisions." Spike remarks with a sigh. "Nothng else for her to do anyway." Just then, a mare came into the house with stuff on her back. It's a gray coated unicorn with a purple and white striped mane and tail and blue eyes. She also has three purple stars on her flank. Her name is Twilight Velvet Sparkle, Twilight's mother whose horn is in bandages due to an accident so she can't user any magic until then. "Uh oh, heads up!" Spike exclaims upon seeing Twilight Velvet coming into the house. Twilight yelps as he, Starlight and Pinkie hide the statue from view, the siblings exclaims, "Oh, hi mom!" "Hi, mom." Shining said to Twilight Velvet with a nod. "Hey, nothing wrong, yeah, nothing." Pinkie said nervously. She will get into big trouble if Twilight's mother sees the statue broken. Glancing at the screen door, Twilight Velvet sighs while saying, "Looks like Applejack and her sister dropped by." "Howdy, Mrs. S. How yew doing!" Applejack exclaims to Twilight Velvet with a grin. "Right, hey Mrs. Sparkle!" Rainbow remarks with a nod. "I must say, you look more better than ever." Rarity said to Twilight Velvet. The white unicorn then spots a familiar zebra coming in with some stuff, the same one who was almost ran down by the police chase earlier. "And you are...?" "Ponies, this is Zecora. She will help with the packing until my horn gets better." Twilight Velvet explains to the ponies while motioning to Zecora. "Hey, Miss Zecora. Glad to meet you." Fluttershy said with a smile. "Howdy, Zecora, Ah done feel like we're going 'ta be good friends!" Apple Bloom exclaims while holding a hoof to Zecora. The zebra of course looks at her oddly. "Uh, did Ah say something wrong?" "My litle ponies, Zecora here doesn't speak our language, she comes from another country that speaks African." Twilight Velvet explains to the ponies. "Now then, I know that one of you ponies at least study that language in school." "Well, you're in luck, Mrs. S, I can understand African, havingdoing some travelling." Rainbow said with a proud smile on her face. "Yeah, it's true, Rainbow is a wiz when it comes to that language!" Scootaloo exclaims to Twilight Velvet eagerly. "She can help you out with translating to Zecora!" "Really? That's reat, Rainbow, you're a true loyal pony." Twilight Velvet said wih a smile of approval. "Come with us." "Sure, no problem." Rainbow remarks. But as she follow the mare, the pony gave a devilish smile to the other ponies, having more than 'translation' in mind here. "Starlight, I told you, no more potato chips. Didn't I tell you already? Oh, hey Shinning." "It's Shining, mom." Shining corrects Twiight Velvet, the mare has passed down the bad habit of messing up words to Starlight. Once Twilight Velvet, Zecora and Rainbow has left, Twilight, Starlight and Pinkie goes back to work on the statue. Hopefully they can fix this before the mother's group gets back. "I just know that Rainbow is going to say the wrong things to Zecora." Rarity said with an annoyed sigh. "At least Zecora will have a good tour of the house...well, minus the bad translation." Fluttershy said meekly while blowing a part of her mane out of her face. "You think your mom would notice?" Pinkie mumbles a bit to Twilight ad Starlight, due to having food in her mouth. "Uh, what?" Twilight ask Pinkie blinking, having trouble understanding her. "You think your mom would notice?" "I am worried. I wonder if my mom would notice." Starlight said in concern. Pinkie swallows her food, asking the two unicorns, "Isn't that what I said?" "Well, of course mom would notice, she noticed everything!" Twilight snaps in concern. Her mother would lose her cool if she sees the statue. "Come on, we got to fix this thing before she gets back!" "Right, hopefully Rainbow can slow things for us too." Starlight said with a sigh as he, his sister and Pinkie goes back to work on fixing the statue. --------------- In one room, Twilight Velvet give out instructions to Rainbow to translate to Zecora, showing a chest of drawers while explaining, "The pants and shirts go into the second draw. But throw them into the boxes and no worries about the suitcases. Rainbow? Translate if you please." "Sure, no problem." Rainbow said with an innocent look. "Right, good." As Twilight Velvet leaves, Rainbow turns to Zecora, speaking to her in African. But instead of the instructions told to her by the unicorn, the Pegasus pony remarks, "The joint goes into the top drawer, the Pony Caine and Sonic Rainbow goes into the second, the Heroin is in teh bottom. Make sure to separate the drugs!" Rainbow leaves while holding in her laughter. As she does, Zecora looks at the drawers in shock. Is that pony serious? -------------------- "Okay, got it, it should be fixed now!" Pinkie exclaims, pleased as she held the statue. "What do you think?" "Oh, Pinkie Pie, you silly pony!" Twilight exclaims in annoyance as she saw the statue and the condition that the 'thing' is in now. "You glue it upside down, oh, embarrassing!" Starlight exclaims uneasily at the 'thing'. "Oh...my." Fluttershy said, stunned as her wings pop up suddenly. "Oh, Pinkie Pie, honestly!" Shining laughs a bit. "If the Mag'ne herself made us stallions that way, we would be peeing on our faces!" "Come on, give me a break, it looks funny!" Pinkie insists to her friends as the gang works on the statue once more. "Ah don't git it." Apple Bloom said puzzled as she and her CMC friends look at the statue in curiosity. "What's so darn important about 'dat thing anyhow?" "Err, just wait until yer're older, Apple Bloom." Applejack said nervously. "Wow, is it long and hard?" Sweetie ask in amazement making Rarity gulp and chuckle uneasily. Her sister has weird ways of finding out things! ------------- Twilight Velvet's group goes to a hallway, approaching the attic stairs which is half open. As the unicorn uses her head to push it close all the way, she continues, "Zecora, that is the attic. Mr. Sparkle doesn't want any pone up there...ever!" Twilight Velvet say the next part sarcastically. "Make me wonder what else he got up there." As Twilight Velvet heads on, Rainbow translates to Zecora (not really), "Never ever go up there. That is where Mr. Sparkle keeps his Filly Messing Torture devices." Rainbow leaves as Zecora looks at the attic in disbelief, wondering if any devices are up there. Suddenly the zebra yelps as the Pegasu pony taps her on the left shoulder, startling the animal. Zecora gave an awkward chuckle as she follows the two. ------------- As Twilight Velvet moves around the supply closet, she continues, "This is the closet were I held my cleaning supplies like brooms, dustpants, insect spray, etc. This house must look good before it's torn down. Rainbow? Translation, please?" Rainbow chuckles as she gave the 'translation' to Zecora, "If you do a bad job, you will end up locked in this room with the cockroaches for 2 weeks with no food or water." "Right, Zecora? You are going to be happy here. Come on, Rainbow, there's still more to show! You are good in language, did you know that?" Twilight Velvet and Rainbow head off, leaving Zecora still shocked by what she heard. The zebra, following, mumbles to herself in her African language, "By Celestia, this is insane. I am in a crazy house!" --------------------- The tour group head downstairs after the instructions and 'translation' is done. Twilight Velvet, smiling, hugs Rainbow while saying, "You are really good in African. How nice of you to help!" "Thanks, I am like that." Rainbow remarks with a proud smile. Twilight Velvet has no idea that the mare is messing with Zecora with the translation. "They're back, act natural." Spike whispers to the ponies who haven't got the statue fixed yet. "Now then, I will be taking Zecora to the supermarket." Twilight Velvet spoke to the other ponies."Now listen..." "Howdy, Mrs. Sparkle!" Apple Bloom greets to Twilight Velvet sweetly, pretending that nothing is right. "How are you today?" Sweetie ask Twilight Velvet, giving an innocent smile. "Doing fine, fillies, thank you." Twilight Velvet remarks with a smile then continues speaking to the other ponies. "Now then, I will back in an hour. Starlight, stay inside. Shining, if it rains, I don't want him outself because of his asthma attacks." Shining, still exercising, roll his eyes while remarking sarcastically, "While you're at it, why don't you have me put him in a plastic bubble?" "Shining, I am very serious, that isn't funny! If your brother goes outside even once, you will be in the deepest, absolutely the deepest..." Shining comment, "Trouble, mom." The mother reply, "Thanks for minding your language. But, that's still what you're going to be in if Starlight steps one hoof outside." Pinkie explain, "So, Twilight will correct Starlight and Shining will correct the mother. Well, yeah, that does make sense, actually." "Twilight, you watch him with Shining too. Starlight is your responsibility." "Sure, mom, not a problem." Twilight said with a nod. "Right." Twilight Velvet said before turning to Applejack. "And Jackapple..." "Applejack, madam." Applejack corrects Twilight's mother. "Okay, from now on, use the back door from now one. We don't need you to break anymore screen doors." "Eeyup. Okay." Suddenly Twilight Velvet looks shocked as she saw something...right in the direction of the statue. Pointing a hoof towards it, the mare demands, "What is that?!' "Oh horse feathers, what?!" Pinkie exclaism in horror. Not good! Did she saw the state and the thing's condition?" "What is that?!" Of course, the ponies saw that she actually pointing at the floor. Looking downward, they saw the broken potato chips in front of the statue. "That is a mess! I want that cleaned up when I get back, girls!" "Oh sure, sure!" "Right, no problem!" Rainbow exclaims with an relieved smile, seeing that the mare didn't saw the statue at all. "Sure, we will clean it up. Squee!" Fluttershy exclaims with a happy squee, relieved to escape her wrath. "And Spike, you will help them out in the cleaning progress. It's your mess too!" Twilight Velvet remarks as she kiss Twilight and Starlight on the forehead each. "Okay, I will be back in a hour. Bye foals. Zecora?" "Sure, later, Mrs. Sparkle." Spike said as he helps Starlight in cleaning up the potato ship miss. "See ya later, Mrs. Sparkle!" Scootaloo exclaims, waving innocently to Mrs. Sparkle. "Bye!" Apple Bloom and Sweetie exclaims with smiles on their faces. "Bye, mom!" Shining exclaims wih a nod. "See ya later, Zecora." Rainbow remarks wickedly to Zecora, making her nervous as she leaves the house. Once Twilight Velvet and Zecora are gone, Spike asks Rainbow, "So, did you give out the 'instructions' to Zecora like Mrs. Sparkle told you?" "Like I could keep secrets!" With a devilish smirk, Shining grabs Starlight, pulling him into the chair, holding him in a wrestling hold while joking, "Oh, want a breathing problem? You got one, little brother!" "Shining, cut it out." Twilight giggles to her older brother in amusement. "Say, Twilight? Quick question, what is your dad going to do with that stuff in the attic when the house is gone?" Rainbow ask Twilight abotu the stuff that her father kept in the attic. Mr. Sparkle is the assistant curator of the Ponyville museum so he often keep the stuff for the place up there. "Yes, what will become of that stuff?" Rarity ask Twilight curiously. "Oh, well, dad is going to give the stuff back to the museum." Twilight answers her frends with a sigh. "Right or whoever they get to be the new assistant curly...err...kerney..." Starlight said, trying to think of the word for his father's job. "Curator, Starlight." "I know, that's what I said." "Wait, hang on! I just have a cool idea!" Scootaloo exclaims eagerly. "Why should that museum get all the cool stuff? We can find some of it up there, some stuff that we can keep from the oldsiders, like rich stuff!" "Yeah, good idea, Scoots!" Rainbow exclaims with an excited smile. "Who want to join me in doing some raiding?" "Wait, hang on!" Starlight protests. Unfortunately, most of the others are excited at Raibnow's idea, liking the idea of keeping stuff from the museum and others for themselves! "Yeah, food!" Pinkie giggles with a happy smile. "Last pony up there is a Manticore!" "Sweet, let's go raid us some stuff!" Spike laughs as he hold his claws together in excitement. "YAY!" The Cutie Mark Crusaders exclaims excitedly. Shining throws his brother to Twilight as he and most of the others rush upstairs to the attic, leaving Twilight, Starlight and Fluttershy behind. "Oh, oh my goodness!" Fluttershy exclaims in alarm as she follows after the others heading to the attic. "Wait, guys, stop, that stuff is dad's responsibility! The museum probably got a list for it and he will get into trouble if anyone steals anything!" Twilight protests as she and Starlight rush after their brother and the other Goonies. "Guys, listen, stop it, that's his stuff!" Starlight protests in agreement while chasing as well. Author's note Well, that's the rest of the Toonies and now they are raiding the attic. In the next chapter, they explore the place and find a treasure map, learning the story of the treasure of Flint Jones and a possibility of saving the Goon Docks. Read, review and suggest. Starlight's description is a combination of Mr. and Mrs. Sparkle. Scootaloo is Rainbow's adoptive sister for this fic. Edited by JusSonic, Aug 27 2012, 05:42 AM.
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Author's note To D.J. Scales, they do got a dragon's help, his name is Spike. No humans in this one. Now to cornholio4, please give it a chance. And read ABI and nobodiez's suggestions about Derpy. Chapter 2: Treasure Story Because the stuff in the attic is priceless or important to the museum, Mr. Sparkle forbids anyone, even his own family, from coming to this place to disturb anything that he is storing. Of course, Shining uses his magic to open the stairwell and climbs up intoi the attic, his horn glows to get a good look around. "Wow, I didn't know that dad has a lot of this stuff up here." Shining said as he and the Goonies came into the attic. "Ugh, this place is a mess!" Rarity exclaims in disgust while looking around the attic. "Doesn't your father ever learn to clean up?" "Well, dad wants to make sure that he remembers everything what museum stuff is where." "Whoa, all right, cool!" Rainbow exclaims with a smile. "Yeah, this is super duper awesome!" Pinkie Pie giggles as she, Applejack, Spike and Fluttershy came into the attic folowed by the CMC. ""Ponies, come on!" Twilight protests as she and Starlight came up into the attic. "This is where dad stores the museum stuff! He doesn't want anypony up here, that is what mom said to the housekeeper." "Well, sort of. Rainbow sure didn't mention it." Starlight remarks sheepishly, suspecting that Rainbow has messed up the translation during the tour earlier. "Twilight, Starlight!" Scootaloo exclaims as she hugs Twilight eagerly. "This is the most awesome place that I have ever seen! Your dad got a lot of great stuff up here!" "Yeah, come on, we could look fer our cutie marks in museum collecting!" Apple Bloom exclaims to her friends with a smile. "Yeah!" Sweetie exclaims as she and her friends quickly begin poking their noses into some stuff, much to Twilight and Starlight's dismay, along with the others. "Come on, knock it of." Twilight said while trying to get her friends and siblings out of the attic before they ruin stuff. "Mom said...Pinkie, put that outfit back!" "Wow, very nice, Twilight!" Pinkie giggles as she is in a pirate outfit. "We got some stuff back home that the Cakes never threw away!" "No offense, Pinkie Pie, but I don't care what..." Starlight begins to scold Pinkie...but thunder is heard, making a loud echo throughout the attic and scaring the ponies. The colt takes a puff from his aspiration. "Well, okay, you saw the attic, you have fun. Now let's get out of here." "Shucks, yew are like yer sister." Applejack jokes a bit as she fools with an museum items. "Try 'ta lighten up an' live a little." "No, we can't do so!" Twilight protests in annoyance. "If mom or dad catches us up here..." "What's wrong, getting scared you two?" Shining taunts as he picks up a book to look through it. Rainbow notices something htat made her smirk mischievously as if having a funny item. "No! I just don't want to get into trouble!" "Ah ha! I got you where I want you!" Pinkie taunts as she plays hold a sword, waving it to Fluttershy who yelps a bit. "Oh dear, be careful where you swing that thing." Fluttershy said to Pinkie nervously. The Earth pony's fun soon came to an end as Shining uses his magic to take the sword away but put Pinkie Pie in a hold. "Come on, let's get out of here. I'm going to sneeze and you ponies probably going to break something." Twilight groans a bit. She wants to get out of here, her parents will be upset should they catch her up here! "Right, the place is indeed dusty." Rarity comments as she uses her own magic to use a broom to sweep the place. "Honestly, I haven't seen a lot of dust in one place!" "As far as you know, sis." Sweetie comments while putting a hat on. "Look at me, I am a Cutie Mark Explorer!" "Starlight!" A voice spke up, Starlight saw a hole that is through a sensuous painting of a filly at the mouth. The colt frowns as real lips are talking as if in a silly falseotto saying. "Starlight, come over here and make me feel like a mare, give me a nice, wet lickery kiss! Nah, nah!" The tpngue wiggles out of the hole at Starlight, much to his uneasiness and Twiight's, who noticed, notice. "Hey AJ, check this out!" Apple Bloom giggles to Applejack as she shows something to her sister. "'Dat looks good, Apple Bloom!" Applejack exclaims impressed. Twilight scowls as she uses her magic to take the painting away, revealing Rainbow doing the voice and tongue thingie. The mare snaps, "Gotcha! Now get away from there, you're ruining the painting!" "Hey, you're ruining my joke!" Rainbow snaps to Twilight in anger. "The painting was ruined by the time that hole was there!" "And you mess it up!" "So?!" "And we told you not to touch it, enough already!" Starlight snaps at Rainbow in frustration. As the argument continues, Shining was looking through an old book which is about pony pirates. It shows some of them journying to Ponyville a long time ago. "Hey, Twilight, Starlight!" Pinkie bounces over to Twilight and Starlight happily, still in the pirate outfit. "Yeah?" Twilight ask Pinkie with a frustrated sight. "So what is this stuff for? Looks super duper fun!" "Something that the museum did for a show on time." Starlight explains to Pinkie. "It's a retropakum...and it was..." "Retrospective, Starlight." Twilight explans to Starlight with a sigh. "Yes, that's what I said! Don't contradict me! I know all about it. It's about the history of Ponyville...these are the rejects." Kinda like us, the Goonies, right?" Pinkie ask her friends with a smile. It's true kind as the Goonies are rejects who lived in the Toon Docsk. "Applejack, how did you turn it on?" Shining ask Applejack as they and Apple Bloom look at an lightball ball. "Turn it off." "Shrugs, come on, we are having fun wit' it." Apple Bloom remarks to Shining wiht a pout. "Well, it's something like that." Spike, who is reading a book, spoke up, joining in on the conversion. "Hey, I am not a reject!" Rainbow protests, a bit annoyed by the reject remark. "Nearly am I, just because I hang around you, doesn't make me a reject." Rarity insists to her friends sternly. The beautiful unicorn doesn't want to be confused of being a reject or anything either. "Pinkie ie, take that off, you're going to get me into trouble." Twilight sighs as she takes the pirate hat off of Pinkie's head, making her frown a bit. "Cool! Want to see how this work?" Scootaloo exclaims as she and some of her friends look at the lightball ball. "You put one hoof there..." "All right, laser beams!" Pinkie exclaims, seeing a big round lightnign ball nearby and rush over to it, making blaster sounds while doing so. "Hey, Spike!" Tiwlight exclimas as she spots something on the floor and pick it up with Starlight's help. "When you drop something, make sure you put it back up." "Wait, what's this?" Starlight ask as he saw a dusty picture frame on the floor and picks it up. "Hang on..." "Starlight, what did you find?" Twilight took a look to see the picture that Starlight just picked up. The glass on it is dusty but the mare uses her magic to wipe it off. There's a parchment behind the glass itself, calling for them apparently, wanting Twilight and Starlight to read it. Twilight and Starlight must read the parchment but the thing is behind glass. Luckily, a solution happens to be nearby. The colt calls over, "Pinkie Pie?" "Eee, I didn't touch it!" Pinkie yelps as she moves away from the lightning ball, worried that the pink pony is in trouble. "Yeah, I don't you didn't touch it, get over here, please." Twilight insists to Pinkie with a nod. Of course, the purple unicorn knew that her friend has touched the lightning ball but chose not to make it a matter right now. Eeyup, don't touch it, Pinkie Pie!" Applejack remarks to Pinkie who came over to Twilight and Starlight, wondering what her friends want. "Listen, do me a favor and hold this." Twilightand Starlight gave the frame to Pinkie, who blinks a bit while asking, "Why me, Twilight? Say, thanks for taking us up here! The stuff up here is super duper, like this real big ball..." During this time, she didn't notice that she herself is about to lose hold of the frame with the parchment, her two unicorn friends are anticipating as to what will happen next. "5, 4, 3, 2, 1..." Twilight and Starlight did the countdown as the frame is about to fall out of Pinkie's hooves..." "And it got this great big thing..." Soon what Twilight and Starlight was expecting happens: Pinkie drops the frame to the floor, causing it to break upon impact and getting the others' attention upon the grass breaking. "Oh my, must you break everything?" Fluttershy ask Pinkie in worry. "Ugh, honestly, I...hey, what's this?" Spike ask puzzled as he saw the pachment and removes the broken grass and then the thing. "Spike, what are you doing?" Starlight ask Spike in pretend shock. "Hey, look! Twilight and Starlight has found a map!" "Wow, an ancient old map!" Pinkie giggles happily as she look at the parchment that Spiek is holding. "A map?" Shining ask puzzled as the others came over to check out what was found behind the parchmetn. "Right, a map! Isn't that amazing?" Twilight ask her brother with a smile. "Let us see, let us see!" Apple Bloom remarks anxiously as she nd her friends look at the map. The filly points to the date marked on it. "Check 'dis out. It said 1632." "1632?" Fluttershy ask Apple Bloom in surprise. "Oh brother." Shining remarks with a frown as he notices the map at last. The unicorn remembers this and is not thrilled or interested at all. "So what's that, some kind of year?" Scootaloo ask her friends about the '1632' date. "Nope, it's how often yew get hit by a frying pan while flying, Chickenaloo!" Apple Bloom jokes to Scootaloo, making Sweetie giggle a bit. Needless to say, the filly Pegasi isn't thrilled at all. "That isn't funny!" "Of course, it's a year!" Twilight exclaims with a smile as she points at the map itself. "Look, girls, it's a map of our coastline!" "What's this?" Shining ask puzzled as he points to some writing on the map. "What's all that African stuff right there?" "Hmmm, hey Rainbow, you said that you know African, right?" Starlight ask Rainbow thoughtfully. "Any chance that you can translate?" "Translate, translate!" Pinkie and the CMC insists to Rainbow as Twilight points at the African stuff on the map. This parchment must be very important, why? "And try to say it right, not the nonsense that you gave Zecora." Rarity points out to Rainbow sternly. "Fine, all right." Rainbow remarks as she begins to translate the African text. "Ahem....'Ye intruders bewar. Crushing death and grief, soaked with blood, of the trespassing thief.'" "I told you none of that nonsense!" "Hey, that's what it said, Rarity, really!" "Oh my! This must be a pirate map!" Fluttershy gulps a bit. "It must be centuries ago before we were born...of an important treasure." "That isn't that important, Fluttershy. This map is old news, I know it." Shining groans a bit. "From what I recall, everyone and their grandparents went looking for that when they were our ages and gave us eventually. Even our parents. I mean...this map was made by...oh, who is that pirate pony guy? Let's see...One-Eyed Flint Jones." Twilight and Starlight's eyes widen excitely upon hearing the name. The mare exclaims, "One-Eyed Flint Jones! Yes, yes, of course! I remember him, the most famous pirate of his time! Dad told me and Starlight about him one time!" "Wow, there is a pirate who lived to roam Equestria?" Sweetie ask Twilight in amazement. "Face it, dad would say anything to get you two ponies to sleep." Shining remarks to Twilight in amusement as Rainbow laughs at the joke. "No, no!" Starlight insists eagerly. "You see, the story say that Flint Jones got his nicknamed 'One-Eyed' after losing his eye during a magic fight, he is supposed to be an alicorn whose menaced the princesses! One time, he stole this treasure that is supposed to the biggest ever! It is full of rubies, emeralds and..." "Diamonds?" Pinkie ask Starlight eagerly. "Oh my...that must be the biggest treasure!" Rarity exclaims with a happy smile at the thought of the treasure that is stolen by Flint Jones. "That is definitely enough to keep this dragon happy for years!" Spike exclaims eagerly, though notices the others glaring at him. "What?" "Anyway, yes, diamonds. Flint Jones and his crew loaded it from his ship after robbing it from Canterlot, sailing away into the sunset." Twilight explains as she continues the story. "Princess Celestia found out and set up an armada to go after Flint because the pirate has also stolen a sword that she must recover or all is lost!" "What's so important about that sword anyway?" Fluttershy ask Twilight puzzled. "It's no original sword, it's a magical one. You see, it's one of the several magical artifacts that can let anyone, even Earth ponies, to control all the dragons and monsters in the world. With that sword, Flint Jones could rule all of Equestria!" "Wow. And Flint Jones didn't know about his prize?" Spike ask Twilight in amazement. "Flint does know about it but why he has yet to use the sword, no one knows." Starlight said seriously. "Anyway, Princess Celestia, it took a couple of weeks, but she and the armada finally caught up with Flint Jones and there was this huge war between the forces of Canterlot and Flint's own ship, the 'Nightmare Moon'. There is a lot of magic blasts firing as well as cannons, it was so amazing! During the battle, Celestia cut off the pirate pony's horn, plus Flint couldn't use magic again even if he wanted to." "A while later, Flint Jones decides to get away with the sword, because he knew that he himself would get killed if he chose to stay around." Twilight explains the story. "The priate pony ended up in this big cave, the armada cornered her there. Princess Celestia, to keep Flint Jones from becoming a further menace to Equestria, has her armada blew up the walls around, caving the pirate in. He has been there ever since?" "Forever?" Applejack ask Twilight in amazement. "Forever!" "And ever?" Pinkie ask in amazement by the story. "Trapped." Starlight said with a grim nod. "Wowie..." "Wait, how come Flint didn't uses 'dat sword o' his 'ta escape since his horn got broken off?" Apple Bloom ask Twilight puzzled. "Well, the sword itself was made to control monsters and dragons, it doesn't have the ability to teleport or use magic blasts." Twilight explains to Apple Bloom with a nod. "Face it, you two are corny as dad is." Shining sighs, a bit annoyed that his siblings even belied that story that Mr. Sparkle has told them. "Hey, dad tells us the truth!" Starlight snaps to Shining sternly. "You know what else he said?" "What?" Rarity ask Starlight curiously. "Dad told us that Flint and his men were down in those caves for 5 and 6 years. They were digging tunnels and more caves. They also set up booty traps..." "Yew mean booby traps, right?" Applejack ask Starlight curiously. "That's what I said 'booby traps'." Starlight admits, a bit annoyed that Applejack is correcting him now."They set up these booby traps so that any pony who goes into those tunnels will perish! And you know what? Right after it was all done and over, Flint Jones killed all his men!" "Whoa!" Spike exclaims in shock by what he just heard. "Seriously? That is creepy!" "What, really?" Applejack ask in shock. "Why did he kill all of his men?" Pinkie ask in stun and disbelief. Why would Flint Jones kill all his men after everything they did for him. "Well, Flint Jones is a greedy pirate and doesn't want them to get his treasure, as well as the sword." Twilight answers Pinkie's question. "Wait a minute, hang on a moment." Scootaloo remarks with a skeptic frown. "One thing I don't understand. If that broken horn alicorn killed all his men, how did the map or the story got out in the first place?" "Yeah, and how did he kill his men without a horn?" Sweetie ask Twilight and Starlight, a bit puzzled by the fact that Flint Jones has killed all his men without the use of magic. "Despite the loss of magic, Flint Jones still got his wings and he is a clever, sneaky pirate. That alicorn killed his men quick and nasty." Twilight explains as she answers Sweetie's question. "And Scootaloo, Starlight and I asked that same question to dad. He told us that one of Flint's own men suspected that sooner or later that his own captain would backstab him so he must've gotten out with the map and..." "Right, sure." Raritty remarks, rolling her eyes as she got back up. "I believe ya, Twilight, Starlight!" Pinkie giggles happily, siding with Twilight and Starlight. "Ha, I don't believe ya, I don't at all!" Rainbow snaps right back at her frown. "That story of yours dad is full of horse crap!" "I agree, plus, how do we know that the treasure even exist at all?" Rarity ask Twilight in disbelief. "Hey, Ah believe them, ponies!" Applejack snaps to Rarity and Rainbow, defending Twilight and Starlight along with the story. "So do we!" The CMC exclaims with a smile. "Dad told us..." Starlight begins to say but was cut off as Spike bumps into another frame, causing it to fall down to the floor. "Spike, you are worst as Pinkie! What did you drop?" Shining ask Spike in annoyance as the baby dragon picks the frame off the floor. Luckily, it wasn't broken so Spike is safe from trouble. "Holy cupcakes, look!" Spike exclaims as he saw that the frame is of a newspaper page. The baby dragon takes it to his friend, "Look, look at this! Do you remember him? It's my brother, Lorcan!" "Lorcan?" Applejack ask as she and the others look at the newspaper page. It shows a photo of a dragon similiar to Spike except he has a scar across his face on front. "Spike, isn't he yer brother?" Apple Bloom ask Spike in amazement. "Yep, I haven't seen him in a long time but look. Spike said as he begins to read the article involving his lost brother Lorcan. "Lorcan: a local dragon who was declared missing while pursuing a local legend of Equestria. He once claims that 'I have the key...to One-Eyed Flint Jones'." "Wow." Twilight exclaims eagerly. Looks like even Spike's brother believe the legend as well. "You realize what we could do?" "Yeah...wait, what could we do?" Pinkie ask, a bit confused as she wonders what Twilight is talking about. "Never mind, no pony has found anything." Shining snaps to his sister sternly. The older stallion still finds the whole map thing pointless. "Why else would this map be in this attic instead of a safely deposit box?" "Uh, because it's a rare antique?" Fluttershy ask Shining who glares at her. "Just trying to help." "Yeah, I gotta agree with your brother on this." Rainbow said with an agreeng frown. "Anyway, if Spike's bro couldn't find that treasure, what makes you think that we can?" "But, ponies, what if...what if this map really could lead to the rich stuff of One-Eyed Flint Jones?" Starlight ask his friends anxiously. "Perhaps." Applejack said, thought she shows a little doubt on her face. "If we find that treasure, we can stay together, we wouldn't have to leave the Goon Docks! You ponies got to back me and Twilight up on this!" "Well..." "Yeah, we could do look fer it!" Apple Bloom exclaims with an eager smile. "Mah friends an' I could be...Cutie Mark Crusader Treasure Hunters!" "YAY! CUTIE MARK CRUSADER TREASURE HUNTERS!" The Cutie Mark Crusaders cheers wildly at the idea. "Well you can count me and Sweetie Belle out." Rarity snaps with a frown on her face. "Come on Rarity." Sweetie Belle protest to her sister but Rarity still kept up her refusal. "No, everytime we go on these Goonie adventures we get into trouble." "Oh that's not true. When have we ever gotten into trouble?" Rainbow ask Rarity doubtfully. Rarity scoffs as she answers, "Let's answer your question with this one; when have we never gotten into trouble. Remember the time you tried collect the bounty on that Duah that escaped from the zoo? Or that time we took Time Turner's time machine to find the lost sword of Tirek? Or the time we snuck into that Maleficent's castle? And who could forget the time Twilight accidently teleported us to another dimension, in the middle of a war between the Alliance and the Horde?" "Ah miss Thrall." Apple Bloom remarks with a shrug. "The point is that we almost died during these 'adventures.' I do not want to tempt the fates again." "Right, sorry, Twilight, but even I don't want to go on anymore of your Goonie Adventures." Fluttershy said meekly. Suddenly a buzzer is heard, someone is at the front door. Scootaloo calls out, "Ding dong!" Most of the ponies rush for the stairs and hope that Mrs. Sparkle and Zecora or Mr. Sparkle aren't back yet. "Wait, ponies, come on, you don't want to do this?" Starlight protests in disappointment. This is bad, none of his friends or brother want to try to save the Goon Docks at all. "Come on, let's see who is at the door." Twilight said as she got up and put the map on her back. The filly heads out. As Starlight is about to follow, he spots something on the floor, picking it up. The item is an old doubloon which has a familiar date. "1632." ------------- The ponies arrive at the front porch, Rainbow saw something as she snaps, "Senior Pony Jerk alert!" Outside the gate are two stallions, one of them is using an umbrella via magic to keep himself dry. This stallion is an alicorn that has a long white mane and a short gan, wearing a black suit and a matching tie. He also has blue eyes and a money sign for a cutie mark. His name is Lord Weath, one of the greedy developers who wish to destroy the Goon Docks for the golf course. "Yes, may I help ya?" Shining ask Lord Wealth as the other ponies frown at him. "Yes, my name is Lord Wealth, Prince Jewel's father." Lord Wealth answers with a smile. "Dang, we y'all know 'dat creep! A cheap an' a jerk!" Applejack scowls in annoyance. Prince Jewel is a jerk, always pestering the Goonies whenever he can. That alicorn is bragging about how they will end up homeless once the time comes. "Right, and he is a brute!" Rarity complains a bit. "Why, just the other day..." "Rarity, please, please, let me handle this!" Shining interrupts Rarity before speaking to Lord Wealth, "Sorry, Lord Wealth, my dad isn't home if that's why you're here." "I see. Well, if your mommy here?" Lord Wealth ask Shining curiously. "Nah! She is at the market buying Pampers for us ponies!" "Yeah, you look like you could use them yourself!" Spike jokes a bit, making the other ponies laugh along with his joke. Lord Wealth laughs slightly then roll his eyes at the bad joke towards him. Turning to his associate Filthy Rich, he spoke up, "Papers." The Earth pony gave his boss the paper before continuing, "These are your father's, I want him to read through them and to sign." Shining sighs as he leaves the porch and goes into the rain to take the papers. Lord Wealth continues, "We will be by in the morning to pick them up." "Yeah, thanks." Shining remarks dryly to Lord Wealth. Lord Wealth and Filthy Rich took their leave. As Shining heads back to the porch, Twilight ask her brother in worry, "Shining, what is that stuff?" "It's dad's business." "Well, what is it?" Starlight ask, getting worried as well. "I already said that it's dad's business!" "Are those foreclosure papers?" Pinkie ask curiously, getting a frown on Shining's face. "What? It's obvious that is what they are, right!" The Goonies sigh as they watch Lord Wealth and Filthy Rich heading back to their car. Shining groans, "Look at those two guys, smiling it up." "Eeyup. Betcha they can't wait until tomorrow until they foreclose on our homes an' everything we know of." Applejack said in sadness. "Trash the Goon Docks." Rainbow remarks with a sad nod. "I hope that when they turned our house into a big mess, those jerks will turn it into a sand trap!" Shining snaps angrily towards the two developers. "And never get their balls out!" Twilight snaps angrily in agreement. It would serve those monsters right for that to happen to them. "Yeah, wouldn't that be fun?" Spike remarks with a mumble. "You know, going through that with those meanies made me lose my appetite." Pinkie said sadly as she goes back into the house. "Us too." Sweetie agrees as she, Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, Shining, Applejack, Rainbow, Rarity, Fluttershy and Spike goes back into the house. Twilight and Starlight are the only ones who remain outside. They look at the whole community in sadness. The mare saw her brother sighing sadly, making her ask, "Are you feeling what I'm feeling?" "Yeah...this place has been our home for years and now...it's going to be gone." Starlight said in sadness. "It's not fair, Twilight." "I know, I know..." The two ponies walk down the veranda as they look at their homes. Just then, they spot their brother who came out the side door. With tears in their sides, Twilight and Starlight rush over to Shining, hugging him while crying. "Twilight, Starlight." Shining said with a sad sigh. "Come on...let's go inside before Starlight catches a cold." The three head inside. Back at the car, Filthy Rich ask Lord Wealthy, "So, you sure that it will happen." "Trust me, the foreclosure is a definite." Lord Wealth answers with a proud look on his face. Soon, the Goon Docks will be destroyed and the golf course can begin construction. ------------- In the kitchen, Pinkie took out a can of whipped cream out of the fridge while saying, "Wow, I feel depressed." The Earth pony squirts the good stuff into her mouth. "Oh, I know." Fluttershy said with a sad sigh while eating an apple. "I just wish we could do something." "You know, my little ponies." Twilight sighs sadly as she got onto the counter. "If only I can find One-Eyed Flitn Jones's rich stuff...then we can pay off dad's bills. Then he could sleep at nights, instead of staying up, trying to figure out how not separate all of us." "Yeah, wouldn't that be something?" Starlight ask with a sad sigh. "It won't be fair if we won't do anything about it." "Yeah, Ah done agree." Applejack remarks with a nod while sighing. Looking for the treasure could solve the answers to everypony's problem. "Right, count me in." Pinkie remarks with a nod. "Yeah, me too." Rainbow said thoughtfully, now wanting to find the treasure as well. "Don't forget me!" Spike insists to Twilight with a smile. "You ain't leaving me out of this adventure, not a chance, no way!" "Forget it, Twilight, you and your friends aren't going anywhere!" Shining snaps at Twilight as he drinks some apple cider. "If I tell Starlight out of the house, mom will ground my flank! I got a date with Cadance this weekend and I am not going to let your adventure ruin it!" "Oh please, no way, because your mom would be driving!" Rainbow teases Shining, reminding Shining of the fact that he doesn't have a driver's license. "Then you would have to make it with both Cadance and her mom! Ha!" "Oh shut up, Rainbow." "Yeah, shut up, Rainbow." Twilight and Applejack said to Rainbow in agreement. "Shut up, Applejack!" Rainbow snaps, being told to shut up and decided to say that to somepony else for once. Shining, frowning, uses his magic to turn the faucet on at the sink that Rainbow is sitting at, causing water to spill right onto the Pegasus pony as she is too close to it. Rainbow screams as she got off the counter, getting a towel to dry herself off. "Sorry, Rainbow, you asked for it." Starlight said to Rainbow with a shrug. As Shining leaves the kitchen, Twilight took the map out and look at it. With a sigh, she said, "Fillies, Starlight, we got to do something about that country club, our parents are getting crushed by it." The rest of the gang came over to look at the map as well. "Unless we find a way to do something, there's going to be a golf course right where we're standing!" Thunder is heard as the ponies look at each other. Scootaloo remarks, "Well, I am really in!" "Yeah...this sounds dangerous but I don't want my home to be gone as well." Fluttershy said meekly. "I will go if you want me to." "Forget it! I told you, Sweetie and I are out of this!" Rarity snaps, standing by her earlier decision. "Rarity, look." Sweetie said as she hugs Apple Bloom and Scootaloo. "This could be our chance to save our homes and for me to stay with my friends. I don't want the Cutie Mark Crusaders to be separated forever, do you?" "Yeah, pleeeease?" Apple Bloom and Scootaloo pleads to Rarity hopefully, they and Sweetie gave puppy dog eyes to her. The white unicorn hesitates a bit then groans, "Ooooh, all right, fine! You win. We will go...but this will be our last Goonie adventure if this ends up being a dead end!" The other ponies cheers on. Rarity is on board. Now it's time to find Flint Jones's treasure! Author's note Time to find the treasure of One-Eyed Flint Jones. In the enxt chapter, after taking care of Shining, the Goonies head on out. In a scene deleted from the actual movie, they stop by a store, getting stuff as well as into trouble with Prince Jewel himself along with the escaped Shining. Also, we meet Ben Mare, Twilight's crush. Read, review and suggest. Flint Jones is a combination of Captain Flint (the pirate in Treasure Island) and Davy Jones, the villain in the Pirate of the Caribbean films. Lorcan is of course the OC brother of Spike. Rarity's protest is a reference to the World of Warcraft games. Edited by JusSonic, Aug 28 2012, 08:34 PM.
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Chapter 3: Pit Stop The storm is soon over. Shining is sitting in a chair using his chest exerciser while a Cyndi Marer music video plays on TV. Unknown to her, his siblings are putting marbles in Twilight's bag as they prepare on their big adventure with their friends. The Goonies knew and agree about one thing: they must find Flint Jones's treasure to find the Goon Docks. Of course, the ponies knew that Shining will never let Starlight out, even with Twilight. So there's only one thing left to do. "Hey, Shining!" Applejack spoke up as she and her friends goes over to Shining. "How far can yew stretch 'dat there thing?" "Not so hard." Shining remarks as she he stretch it the full reach of his arms. "Thought so. Get him!" Scootaloo orders. Suddenly the ponies jump onto Shining. Pinkie and the Cutie Mark Crusaders pin him to the chair while the rest rush over ehind the trapped stallion, pulling his upper forelegs's behind himself. "Hey, what are you doing?! Get off me, Pinkie, little fillies!" "Sorry, forgive us!" Fluttershy apologizes to Shining frantically. "We have to do this for the good of the Goon Docks!" "Got you now!" Rainbow laughs as she, Starlight and Rarity manages to entangle Shining's springs, keeping him trapped in his chair. Twilight comment, "I REALLY hate doing this to Shining, but mother will free him once she gets home and we ARE trying to save the Goon Docks." "Come on, let's get out of here!" Spike laughs eagerly. The Goonies rush out the door and head to the bikes waiting for them. Twilight put Spike in the basket on the back part of hers bie and prepares to get on herself when she saw Rainbow doing something to the tires of Shining's bike. "Wait, Rainbow Dash, what are you doing?" Twilight ask in shock as Rainbow removes the air pumps on the tires, deflating. "It took my brother a lot of lawn mower jobs to pay for that. It's his most favorite thing in Equestria!" "Well, now it's his flattest, let's go!" Rainbow laughs as she got on her own bike to ride off. "Twilight, Starlight,you both get back here or I will hit you both so hard, your pony coats will get out of style!" Shining exclaims angrily, trying to escape the chair trap that he's in. "Hey! You two!" The ponies of course got on their bikes and head off to their big adventure, ready for anything. ------------- A while later, Twilight Velvet and Zecora came back with the groceries, seeing a weird sight: Shining's chair has toppled over as the stallion is on his back, trying to escape. "Mom, ma, thank goodness that you're here!" Shining exclaims in relief. "Get me out of here!" "Shining, for the love of Celestia!" Twilight Velvet said with an annoyed sigh, putting a bag of groceries down for a moment, not seeing anything wrong with this picture at first. "Can't you exercise like a normal pony for once?" "Mom!" "You're obviously hyper-ventrilocating here! Where's your brother and sister!" Twilight Velvet grabs the groceries and heads off, much to Shining's dismay. The stallon exclaims, "Mom! Oh, for crying out loud. What's wrong with you ponies?!" He spots Zecora pushing the groceries that she dropped by accident with her hooves. Trying to communicate, Shining calls out, "Hey, Zecora! Zecora, you got to get me out of here!" Of course, Zecora just laugh and said something in African, not helping due to trying to get the groceries into the house. Shining calls out in dismay some more, "Zecora, wait! Help me out of here! Zecora!" --------------- As the ponies rode theirbikes down the streets, they went by the local museum where a stallion is hanging the flag for the day...or for the last time anyway. He is a unicorn with a blue coat, a slate blue mane, and green yellow eyes. The unicorn himself has a yellow waxing crescent moon with a smaller waning crescent moon inside. His name is Dusk Shine AKA Mr. Sparkle, Twilight, Shining and Starlight's father. "Hey, Mr. S!" Applejack exclaims to Dusk as she rode by. "Hey, Dusk!" The CMC exclaims to Dusk with smiles. "Right, hey." Dusk said as he kept on doing his job for what could be the last time in Ponyville. "Hey, Mr. Sparkle!" Rainbow calls out to Dusk with a smirk. "Hi, Twilight! Hi, Starlight! Hi, Spike!" "Hi, dad!" Twilight and Starlight remarks as they wave to their father. "Hi, Mr. Sparkle!" Spike exclams as he waves to his adoptive father. "Hey, wait up, ponies!" Pinkie exclaims, peddling to keep up with her pals. ------------ Twilight Velvet finally got around to freeing Shining from his trap before he rush out of the house. The mare isn't happy to find out that Starlight and Twilight has gone out and wants Shining to bring them both back. She is also ticked off when Twilight Velvet finally found out what happened to her statue. "Shining, don't you dare return without your sister and brother or I will commit Hare Krishna!" Twilight Velvet snaps at Shining from inside the house. "That's 'Hara-Kari', mom." Shining corrects his mother as he got on his bike, preparing to ride off. "That is exactly what I said!!!" Of course, Shining notices that he isn't going anywhere. He looks down and saw, to his anger and shock, that his tires are now flat. It didn't take the stallion long to figure out what has happened. "What, no! My new tires, they popped my new tires!" Shining yells angrily as he toss his bike aside. "Those little...I'm going to..." Just then Shining heard a squeaking noise, turning to see Twist riding on her bike nearby. It's a small and would make him look foolish but it's the only vehicle of transportation to use now. Shining rush over and takes Twist off the bike as he apologizes, "Sorry, I got to do this!" "My bike, my bike!" Twist protests in alarm as she was put back onto the ground. Shining got on the bike and rode off in hopes to catch up with the other ponies. "I owe you one, Twist!" "He took my bike, I want my bike!" --------------- The ponies quicky stop by the local convenience store to get some supplies. After putting ther bikes aside, they rush into the place while Twilight calls out, "Okay, let's not stay here too long, everyone! We don't know how long before Shining gets freed of the trap that we put him in!" Inside, Rarity, Twilight and Starlight goes over to get some magazine. The white unicorn calls out, "Sweetie, don't eat any snacks before we can pay for them!" "Yes, mom!" Sweetie snorts sarcastically as she and her friends continue going through some snacks to get their teeth onto. Starlight then spots the map section, saying, "Twilight, wait...look!" Twilight, seeing what her little brother has spotted, takes a map from the section and takes it over to an ice cream display. With Starlight's help, she unfolds it then unfolds Flitn Jones's treasure map, comparing both. "Let's see...Crimson Beach...wait, these are identified. Where's the X?" Twilight mumbles as she compares the maps. "The X is here...hang on! I know these rocks and I know where they are!" "What did you find?" Fluttershy ask curiously as she came over to take a look at what her friend just discovered. "Girls, boys! Look! I know how to get there, check this out! This is Ponyville where the rich stuff is at!Yes, if we go now, we will get the rich stuff!" "Cool!" Rainbow exclaims eagerly as she looks at the map as well. "This is going to be awesome!" "Hey, what's with that guy?" Spike ask as he and the ponies saw some pony in a trench coat and hat, glaring at them. "He's been looking at us oddly." "Don't worry, Spike." Twilight said to Spike with a sigh. "Ponies like him...are weird." "Uh oh, Pony Jerk Alert!" Scootaloo yelps as she looks up form her comic, seeing someone coming into store. "Okay, tell you what, you go over there and take any 3 candy bas that you want." The clerk of the store said to Applejack who turns and saw 4 figures coming out of a car parked outside. "Aww, horse apples. It's Prince Jewel." Applejack groans, going back to what she's doing while talking to the clerk. "Any three of those candy bars." "Great, what we done don't need." Apple Bloom groans as Pinkie Pie happily digs into the ice cream. Turning to the clerk, she helps her big sister out, "We done want 4 bits please." Four ponie came into the room, Cadance and Soarin' are two of them. One of them is a short blonde maned and tailed alicorn with black eyes, a black coat and a crown and jewel cutie mark on his flank. His name is Prince Jewel, Lord Wealth's son and one of the biggest jerks in Ponyville. The second new pony is a brown coated stallion with a spiky like brown mane, green eyes, a long tail and a red collar. His cutie mark consists of three golden triangles…like the Triforce in the Legend of Zelda games. His name is Ben Mare, Cadance's cousin whom Twilight got a crush on. "Hey Jewel." Cadance said as her group goes over to an arcade machine. Prince Jewel gave her some bits to buy stuff or to play the games. The pink alicorn is wearing a yellow jacket with his name on it. Obviously, he wants Cadance for himself. As Cadance and Soarin' plays some games, Prince Jewel goes over and takes the magazine from Rainbow, much to her annoyance. He reads it while the mare snaps, "Ugh, jerk!" "Hey there, Twilight." Ben Mare said as he trots over to Twilight who blushes a bit. "What are you doing? Having your Goonie weekend with your pals before..." "Yes, sort of...we got something planned." Twilight said, blushing a bit. "Err, how are you and your mother, Princess Celestia?" Ben Mare's mother of course is Princess Celestia herself so this is an amazing moment. "Mom's doing fine. She is still trying to figure out how to save your home...no success. I am hanging out with my cousin in the meantime." Pinkie happily chuckles while licking some of the ice cream, Starlight has to pay for them to avoid trouble. Spike remarks, "Pinkie Pie, honestly." With a devilish smirk upon seeing Pinkie, Prince Jewel came over and push her into the ice cream thing. The Earth pony struggles as the mean pony remarks, "Hey, guess what! Mom is making a Goonie Pizza Tonight!" "Hey, Jewel, leave her alone!" Ben Mare snaps at Prince Jewel in annoyance. Rainbow and Soarin', who is playing the game, looks over to see. "Come on! Mom needs some frozen dough! Perhaps this pink pony can be a good fine! Ha ha ha!" Starlight growls angrily as he came over and grab Prince Jewel, forcing him to release Pinkie. As the pink pony tries to escape, the colt demands, "Stop that, you jerk, leave Pinkie Pie alone!" "Aww, what's this?" Prince Jewel taqunts as he grabs Starlight, sneering. "Did I hear that some Goonie is telling me what to do?" "You sir are a barbarian!" Rarity snaps to Prince Jewel furiously. "Picking on us as well as little colts like Starlight. You have no matters!" "Now let Starlight go right now!" Fluttershy demands to Prince Jewel, making the alicorn glare at her. "Err, if that's all right with you." "I don't take orders from you pests!" Prince Jewel snaps at Fluttershy making the yellow Pegasus pony whimpers a bit. "And you, little mare, stop getting into matters that don't concern you!" Twilight use a magic blast to knock Prince Jewel off of Starlight, commenting. "Leave my brother alone, you bullying jerk!" Jewel comment, "Not bad, Sparkle, I actually FELT that blast AND it knocked me back about two feet. But even the most powerful unicorn in Equestria comes up short against an alicorn. I guess that namby-pamby Celestia never taught you how to avoid fights you know you can't win." "Don't insult my teacher that way!" "Twilight, look out!" Spike exclaims. Too late as Prince Jewel uses his magic to grab Twilight, then he evilly grabs the map from the purple unicorn. "Hey, give that back! That belongs to Twilight!" "Make me, lizard boy!" Prince Jewel scoffs as he kicks Spike aside, laughing evilly. "Cut it out, Jewel, ouch, stop that!" Twilight demands to Prince Jewel who begins holding the map while using his magic to keep his hold onto the purple unicorn. Rainbow frowns as she came over, ready to help her friend out. "You know, they don't roll paper like this anymore." To the ponies' horror, Prince Jewel use his magic to set the map on fire then puting it to his mouth as if smoking a cigarette. Starlight protest, "Stop that, leave my sister and the map alone!" Prince Jewel laughs evilly, denying the demands. Just then Rainbow cam eover while saying, "You know, when you puffed that thing, it reminds me of something." "Yeah? What?" Prince Jewel scoffs to Rainbow in amusement, wondering what she has in mind. "The time I puffed your mama!" Outraged by the insult, Prince Jewel release Twilight and drops the burning map onto the floor. The alicorn angirly tackles Rainbow to the floor, getting into a fight with her. Twilight rush over to put the fire out with her hoof when the stranger's own hoof stomps right on it for her. The purple unicorn looks worried but then the disguised pony use his magic to give the map back to her. "Thanks, sir." Ben Mare said with a sigh then glances at the new map that Twilight has. "What is that, Twilight?" "Nothing, nothing to be concerned about, Ben." Twilight said as she check the map over. The pony sighs in relief, not much damage done. "Better be careful with that, Twilight Sparkle." The stranger said to Twilight with a hidden smile, startling both her and Ben. "Items like that are very important." "Wait, how did..." "Hey, guys, some help!" Rainbow exclaims as she struggles with Prince Jewel. Cadance and Soarin' watch on in worry. This alicorn jerk is going too far here! Twilight and Starlight jumps onto Prince Jewel's back, struggling with him as the purple unicorn snaps, "You poor excuse for an alicorn! Stop it!" Prince Jewel got back up and uses his magic to grab the two siblings, putting both in front of him. He prepares to hit the two while snapping, "Little Goonies! Get ready!" Suddenly, a familiar unicorn appears and grabs Prince Jewel's hoof, stopping him in time. It's Shining! The angry brother grabs the alicorn by the collar while snapping, "Listen you! No one, and I mean no one, hit by siblings except me, got it?!" "And when he said 'hit', more like a playful matter, not like what you did, jerk!" Spike snaps furiously. The alicorn got out of Shining's hold and look at him angrily as the Goonies, along with Pinkie Pie who got out of the ice cream section, surrounds him. Not good, Prince Jewel is surrounded. Of course, with an evil grin, Prince Jewel remarks, "Oh, I cannot wait until Monday. Then I will laugh my flank off when dad toss all you freaks out onto the streets where you all belong, like the other trash! And while you Goonies piled your junk out of the moving van, I will be playing golf on what used to be the Sparkles' front yard!" "Yeah, I wouldn't be surprised if you lose your golf ball there!" Fluttershy snaps to Prince Jewel. Then she said meekly, "Sorry, I'm trying to be assertive." Prince Jewel scoffs as he takes his leave, going by Cadance, Soarin' and Ben Mare. "Come on, let's get out of here, come on! That includes you Ben, I didn't want to bring you but your cousin forced me to!" Prince Jewel leaves the store, Soarin' shrugs as he follows him. Cadance and Ben prepars to leave, looking at Shining and Twilight, making the two ponies sigh sadly. "Cadance, Ben, let's go!" Prince Jewel yells out impatiently as he and Soarin' got into the car. "See you later, Twilight." Ben said sadly, Cadance sighs as the cousins took their leave. "Oh, that Prnce Jewel is just a bully!" Sweetie remarks with a frown as her friends agree with her. "Yes, and worst yet, his father is abotu to destroy our homes." Rarity remarks in disgust. "Hey, thanks, Shining." Twilight said to her big brother nervously, but she isn't out of the woods yet and so is Starlight. Sure enough, the angry big stallion took the map from her before grabbing his siblings along with Spike. "Don't bother thanking me, Twilight! Mom is waiting for you, Starlight and Spike! You just went and blew your whole life, little sister! You know that Starlight wasn't suppose to leave the house!" Shining snaps to Twilight, then turns to the rest of the Goonies. "As for the rest of you, you are all history! We don't need ponies like you in our lives!" "Shucks, don't be like 'dat." Apple Bloom said to Shining as Rainbow pats him on the shoulder. "We were done fooling." "Right, we just want you know that..." Rainbow said as she, Pinkie and Applejack begins to sing. Rainbow, Pinkie and Applejack: Here's to good friends Tonight is kinda special "Oh, get out of here!" Shining scowls while pushing Rainbow away. Unknown to him, during the song, Scootaloo snuck the map right away from him. "Right, if you want." Rainbow remarks with a shrug. "Come, Scootaloo." "Right, Rainbow Dash." Scootaloo said, giving a wink to Twilight, Starlight and Spike while showing them the map. Once the other ponies leave, Twilight manages to get herself, Starlight and Spike out of his hold, the purple unicorn said, "I'm going!" "Right, later!" Spike exclaims quickly. He, Twilight and Starlight rush out of the store and join their friends...who are making their getaway on their bikes. "He's going to get us, run!" Pinkie screams in worry and alarm. "Oh my goodness, oh my goodness!" Fluttershy squeaks a bit as the ponies quickly make their getaway. "We're dead!" "Never mind, keep riding, keep riding!" Rainbow screams as she and her friends ride away, the ponies yell stuff while making their escape from the store. By then, Shining realizes that the map is no longer on his person, making him realize that he has been had. The stallion rush outside in time to discover that Twilight and her friends are gone! "Shining, Shining!" The clerk exclaims as he follows Shining outside, the stallion groans as he saw his siblings and their friends making their escape. "Don't you need anything?" "Later, okay? I gotta go!" Shining exclaims as he got back onto Twist's ride, riding off quickly to rejoin the chase. "Horse feathers!" "Shining, wait! Hang on!" Shining of course ignores the clerk as he rides on to go after Twilight's group once more. They are in bigger trouble when the stallion catch up to them again! Unknown to him, a familiar stranger was watching the scene...and began to show his wings, flying off. "Celestia, my mission continues." The mysterious pony said quietly. "The sword will be returned." Author's note Dang, the ponies got away that time and are on their way to the treasure. Of course, trouble comes as they find the first location which is a restaurant that is being a hideout for the Lulamoons! Crazy, eh? Read, review and suggest! Prince Jewel is of course an OC that I made up. Ben Mare is of course my very own OC. The stranger will be revealed shortly. |
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| JusSonic | Aug 31 2012, 12:25 AM Post #8 |
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Chapter 4: Lulamoon Problem As the day goes into the late afternoon, the ponies are on their road, riding away to escape Shining while heading to the destination mentioned by Twilight. "You mean galloping, right Mr. JusSonic?" Pinkie ask the author happily. What? "You know, 'galloping'." Pinkie explains to me. "We may be on bikes but we are still ponies, so it should b 'galloping'." ...Dang, you're random, Pinkie Pie! Anyway, Fluttershy calls out, "Uh, you sure this is the right way, Twilight?" "I'm sure of it, I know where we're going! Crimson Beach is around this corner, it has the three rocks!" Twilight explains to her friends earlier. "Oh, I got a good feeling about this!" "Beg yer pardon, Twilight, but everytime yew got 'dat there feeling, we always end up getting into big trouble." Applejack points out to Twilight with a frown. "Twilight getting us into trouble?" Rarity scoffs to Applejack in disbelief. "Excuse me, but you're the one who always get into trouble, Fruit Loop." "It's Applejack, not Fruit Loop!" "Hey come on, let's not fight!" Sweetie insists to her sister and Applejack in concern. "The Goon Docks is at stake here." "Right, we can't mess this up!" Spike exclaims in agreement. "Ponies, I'm hungry." Pinkie said as she feels a tremble in her stomach. "And that's one of my Pinkie Senses going off. Whenever my stomach growls, there's going to be trouble. "Be quiet, Pinkie Pie!" Most of the ponies snaps at Pinkie in annoyance. "Okay, stop here!" Starlight orders as he, his sister and hteir pals stop at a part of a hill to get off their bikes to take a look at a scenery. Pinkie complains, "One time, you made me go up this big hill and promised me a twinkie! I am going to be late for dinner and Mr. and Mrs. Cake will yell at me! They probably won't let me eat dinner and they are going to punish me! Anyone got a cndy bar or a Foal Ruth?" "Relax, Pinkie Pie, we will cover for you." Twilight insists as she and her friends look to the distance a beach. The purple unicorn got the map out and looks at it. She then points at the rocks excitedly while exclaiming, "I knew it! Look, that must be where the rich stuff are at!" "Yew sure about 'dat?" Apple Bloom ask Twilight hopefully. "I know it! Come on, to the beach, every pony!" ----------------- Shining groans as he continues to 'gallop' on the pink bicycle on the back road, mumbling, "Twilight. Starlight." The stallion should catch up to his siblings and their friends soon. Unknown to Shining at first ,a familiar vehicle is almost upon him with Prince Jewel doing the driving. Cadance is in the front sitting next to him, sitll upset over what happened at the convenience store. Ben and Soarin' are in the back. Prince Jewel smirks devilishly as he adjust the rear view mirror as if to look behind his car. Of course, the other knew that he's trying to get a...'naughty' look at Cadance. And of course, the pink alicorn doesn't like it at all. "Jewel!" Cadance snaps angrily to Prince Jewel at what he's doing. "I swear to my aunt that if you adjust that mirror once more to look me over there like that again, I'm going to blast you right in the face!" "I don't see why Cadance hangs with you." Ben snaps to Prince Jewel in disgust. "Bad enough you cause trouble for Twilight and her friends back at the store but I will tell my mother if you do that to my cousin again!" Prince Jewel of coure snicker while Soarin' roll his eyes. The Wonderbolt looks up ahead and saw a familiar stallion on the bike. He comments, "Hey, that's Shining on the bike up ahead." "Oh, I love the bike." Prince Jewel snorts in an insensitve way. He wonders what Shining was thinking. He is too old to ride a kid's boy, let alone a filly one. "I wonder what he's doing." Cadance said puzzled as Prince Jewel honks his horn to get Shining's attention. "My guess is that one of Twilight's friends has let the air out of his regular bike and he has to borrow someone else's bike for a while." Ben said in observation. "No wonder he couldn't get a license." Soarin' said with a shrug. Upon hearing the horn honking, Shining turns and looks dismay upon seeing Prince Jewel's group in his car, making him groan, "Oh terrific." After what happened at the store earlier, the stallion wants to avoid another confrontation again. The car stops near Shining as Cadance spoke up in concern, "Hey Shining. Do you want a ride somewhere?" "What?" Prince Jewel ask Cadance in annoyance while frowning. To him, the pink alicorn is his and not Shining's. "Yeah, we want to make up for what happened at the store earlier." Ben said to Shining in agreement. "Speaking of which, where's Twilight? I was hoping to speak with her." "I'm about to catch up with her now. But anyway, no thanks, I'm good." Shining said with a groan. The last thing that the unicorn wants is to get into the same car as the same alicorn who wants Cadance fo himself. "Oh, yes Armor." Prince Jewel said evilly as he grabs Shining's hoof firmly against the car door. The jerk wants payback for what happened at the store earlier. "How about a little ride?!" "Hey, let go!" "Hang on, loser! Ha ha ha!" Prince Jewel then begins driving very fast, forcing Shining to come along in tow due to the alicorn holding him by the wrist, resulting in the unicorn to peddle on the filly bike very fast, not controlling himself. "Hey, let go of Shining, Jewel!" Ben protests in shock. "Let go, let go of my hoof!" Shining exclaims frantically. "Jewel, let Shining go, you will hurt him!" Cadance snaps angrily as she, Soarin' and ben hit Prince Jewel in hopes to save Shining. Even the Wonderbolt knew that this kind of entertainment is crossing the line. "Leave Twilight's brother alone!" Ben exclaims as he hits Prince Jewel some more, but the alicorn ignores him and the other two as he kept going faster. Just then, the training wheels broke off the bike, much to Shining's horror as he exclaims, "No!" Soon the last training wheel came off before the car and bike came up to a road in the road, along with the wheels. "Holy Celestia!" "So long, freak!" Prince Jewel laughs evilly as he release Shining's hoof before turning his car. The unicorn can only scream as he goes flying off the road on the bike itself. --------------- After a while of going across the beach and climbing up a steel hill by carrying their bikes (the ride is rough and the hill is too step to ride), the group arrives at the top. "Oh forget it." Rainbow groans as she and her friends drop their bikes upon reaching the top. They will have to trot the rest of the way. "Wow, that ride and carrying is tough." Pinkie said breathing in and out. "Twilight, this better be worth all this trouble." Rarity complains to Twilight. "My mane is getting a bit messed up from what we're doing." "Rarity, I'm sure Twilight wouldn't go through all that trouble for nothing." Spike said as he held his love's hoof. "I'm sure of it." Starlight took out the doubloom from the attic and hold it up caefull. The colt smiles eagerly as he saw three items that fit through the holes in the doubloon itself in a crticial alignment. "Ponies, I got a match, I just know I do!" Starlight exclaims excitedly. "The lighthouse, the rock and the restaurant all fit the doubloon!" As Starlihgt put the doubloon down, Scootaloo exclaims, "All right! That must mean that we're on the right track! This is going to be awesome." Twilight got the map out as she said, "Therefore, we can safely presumed that the rich stuff is near the restaurant. Rainbow, I will need your help in translating this. I don't understand a word of African. Right here." "Right." Rainbow said with a nod as she reads the next part of the map in African. "What 'de hay does 'dat mean?" Apple Bloom ask Rainbow curiously. "10 times ten of course." "All right, that means a hundred." Twilight said as she and Starlight prepares to figure out the clue on the map. Rainbow continues translating as she said, "...stretching feet to nearest northern point." "Okay, which way is north?" Starlight ask his friends as Spike points to the direction of north. "That is where you'll find the treat." "The treat...wait, of course, that must be where the rich stuff is at, the treat! That's it!" Spike exclaims eagerly. "Do you know what means?" "Eeyup, north is 'dat way." Applejack said, pointing northward while looking at her compass just to make sure that Spike is indeed right about his direction. "The rich stuff is near the restaurant, come on!" Twilight squeals in delight. Twilight, Starlight, Fluttershy and Applejack begins counting paces as they head to the restaurant, all eager for that rich stuff. Well, minus a Pinkie Pie or a frowning Rarity. After reaching 60 paces, the Goonies saw something as they head to hide behind some rocks to avoid being seen. The Goonies took a peek, seeing two stallions in trench coats heading into a restaurant, a car is parked nearby. Fluttershy comments, "Somepony is there. Why?" "60 and another 40 is even 100, right to the old restaurant." Twilight said thoughtfully. "The rich stuff is there, I just know it." "I don't know about this, ponies." Pinkie said worried. Just then, she frowns. "Hang on, is it getting late? And that place is a summer one! What is it doing opening in the fall?" "Well, maybe the owners decide to extend the opening hours to the fall." Sweetie suggests to Pinkie. "Rarity and I have been here before, the folks here are nice." "Although the service that they have is slow." Rarity adds with a sigh. "I don't know, something here doesn't feel right." Spike said nervously. "Relax Spike, nothing 'ta be concerned about." Applejack assures Spike. "Obviously those two ponies who went into 'de restaurant are customers. Just two regular stallions." "Wait, what if they aren't customers?" Pinkie ask, getting a bit scared. "What if they are drug dealers?!" "Oh come on! Drug dealers, in Equestria?" Scootaloo scoffs a bit at Pinkie. "Come on, look at their clothes. Rainbow Dash and I saw a lot of movies. You don't catch drug dealers wearing polyster wags, that's for sure! They won't be caught dead in those things!" "Still, just to be safe, we need to check the scenery." Twilight said while looking at the map. "Applejck, can you check out the scenery?" "Sure thing, check 'dis out!" Applejack exclaims as she steps back and looks to a machine that can activate her devices. "Let's see....which one are mah binoculars?" Applejack suddenly press a button..as a pair of teeth appears from her person, catching Rainbow's tail and biting into it. The Pegasus screams in pain, Pinkie and Fluttershy has to cover her mouth to avoid giving the group away. "Aww, dang it! 'De Pinchers o' Peril! 'Dat happen!" Applejack apologizes to Rainbow, the Pegasus pony mumbles angrily to her friend. "Yew should git those devices o' yers fixed, big sis." Apple Bloom comments as Applejack came over to get the teeth back. "Calm down, Sally. 'Dis won't hurt fer 5 minutes." Applejack then grab the pinchers and gently removes them from Rainbow's dead. After putting them back, the Earth pony comment, "Back in yew go, Pinchers ' Peril. All right, sorry, Rainbow! Okay, mah binoculars. Got it!" As the ponies watch on, Applejack's binoculars appears from her person on a metal extending arm, she prepares to use them...but yelps as the thing broke right, landing right onto the grass. "Aww, horse feathers! Ah done got 'ta fix mah devices!" Applejack groans in despair. "Applejack!" Starlight groans as Applejack put her devices away before going back to the others. "Honestly." "Shucks, 'dis is going 'ta cost me when Ah git home." "Wait, I just have a thought." Raitiy said with a frown of realization. "How do we know if Flint Jones's treasure is still in its place? How do we know that somepony didn't follow this map and found what's buried?" "Yeah, she's right, let's go!" Pinkie exclaims as she tries to leave tu Applejack pulls her by the tail, causing her to stay put. "Hold it right there, Pinie! No one is going nowhere!" Applejack snaps to Pinkie with a sigh. "Well, that could be the case but then again, if someone has followed this map, we didn't hear of any pony finding more stuff than what is at the museum." Twilight points out to Rarity thoughtfully. "She's right, Rarity. No offense." Spike said with a nod. "If someone has found the treasure, it and the sword would've been reported already." "Right, to some pony, this map is a treasure." Starlight said with a smile."Why else did some pony finds a map that is 100 years old, put a frame around and called it art?" "Right, after all, the map was made by one of the most dangerous pony pirates of all time." Sweetie said eagerly. "Hey, look at this." Twilight said upon discovering somethign different about the map. "It's like a magazine folded!" "Really?" Applejack ask Twilight curiously. The purple unicorn uses her magic to fold and unfold the map to prove her point. "Yeah, look. One half, two halves, together make a fold." "Look." Starlight said as he points to some landarks on the map. "There's the lighthouse, the rock and the restaurant which is above the X! X marks the spot!" "All right, Cutie Mark Crusaders, time we go in an' get 'de rich stuff!" Apple Bloom exclaims eagerly. The map proves that the rich stuff is at the restaurant. "Wait, hang on. How are we going to do this?" Scootaloo ask her friends as Twilight fold the map back up. "You think we should go up to the door, knock and say 'hey there, all right if we dig up your floors'? The owners ain't going to let that happen." "Relax, Scoots. We won't be going down that route." Rainbow assures her adoptive sister with a smile. "Right, the place is open for business even in the fall, right?" Starlight points out with a nod. "We just go in, make it look up we're ordering something and begin digging." "And hope to Celestia that no pony get wise as to what we're doing." Twilight said in agreement. As long as the owners are out of the loop about what the Goonies are truly doing, they should be fine. "Come on, let's go." Spike said as the ponies and dragon got up, heading to the restaurant. "Okay, okay." Fluttershy mumble a bit nervously. The Ponies continue heading to the restaurant with smiles on their faces. But suddenly two noises are heard from inside the place, causing the gang to stop in alarm and concern. Rarity yelps, "What is that?' "Twilight, Starlight, those sounded like gunshots!" Pinkie exclaims in horror as she runs up to her pals. "Not the ones you hear in the films, real gunshots! They're going to kill us!" "Eeew!" Fluttershy exclaims as some of her pals look scared. "They're going to kill us?!" "Pinkie Pie, turn your brain on, okay?" Twilight snaps to Pinkie in annoyance. "Someone dropped a pot or something." "Right, yeah." Applejack said, calming down a bit. "Right, somepony dropped a bit." Rainbow, calmed down as well, said with a nod. "I don't know, that doesn't sound like a pot being dropped." Spike said nervously as the Goonies continue heading to the restarant as if nothing went wrong. "I don't think we should go in yet!" "Spike's right, you sure that's a pot?" Pinkie ask nervously as she follow her friends. "Because if you're sure, then I'm sure. I mean, they may pick up the pots and...AAARGH! THEY'RE GOING TO KILL US! THEY'RE..." "Pinkie Pie!" Twilight snaps as she goes over and covers Pinkie's mouth as he group reach the front steps. "Calm down! If you're so worried, we will peek inside. But until then, keep quiet!" Twilight lets go of Pinkie as she follows Rainbow, Applejack, Rarity, Spike, Starlight and the CMC around a corner of the restaurant to find a window to peek in, making sure that it's safe to go. As Fluttershy stays with Pinkie, she saw her friend spotting a soda cooler in front of the restaurant. The pink pony rush over while exclaiming, "Yay, soda! I am thirsty!" She opens the thing and peeks inside, only to find nothing. "Aww, horse apples!" As Pinkie closes the lid, Fluttershy comments, "You don't need more sugar than you do already." Twilight's group and found a window, peeking in to see 3 figures inside the restaurant. One of them is carrying something into the kitchen. "What's going on?" Rainbow ask puzzled. "Come on, get going, Merluck!" A pony who appears to be a stallion snaps to another pony. The Goonies are curious as to what the other is holding but due t othe dirty window, it's hard to see. "'Dat cook is carrying something in 'dat there kitchen." Applejack said, reassuring herself and the others. "Yeah, food or trash." Starlight said as he took a puff onto his aspirator nervously. "Weird, that is 'de largest food item or trash 'dat Ah ever saw." Apple Bloom said nervously, not liking the look of what the othr pony is holding. "I guess that they must have a lot of trash." Sweetie said nervously. "What are you, a garbage pony?" Scootaloo ask Sweetie with a scoff. "Better not let them see us." Twilight suggests as the ponies and dragon leave the window. "I think I saw those three somewhere before but what?" Pinkie and Fluttershy during this time wander sto the side and found a garage that has a door that is a bit opened. The two opens the said door and found a car inside. The pink pony is beginning to get scared as if she has seen this vehicle before. "Hey, Fluttershy, look..." Pinkie said with a nervous chuckle. "It's an ORV..." "Yes, and this is magic blast holes." Fluttershy said as she observes magic blast holes in a side of the ORV itself. The two ponies' eyes widen in horror as they both scream, "Magic blast holes?!" This is the same ORV that Pinkie saw in the police chase earlier toda. "Oh my goodness!" Fluttershy screams in terror. "You're right, you're right!" The two ponies rush up frantically to the doorway as the others are about to head inside. Pinkie jumps up and down, trying to warn the others but Applejack hush her as the Goonies goes inside. Pinkie kept on yelling until Twilight grabs both her and Fluttershy with her magic, snapping, "Let's go, you two!" The Goonies enter the restaurant, looking around. It looks trashed and hasn't been used in years apparently. How could it still be opened for business like this is any pony guess. "What a dump." Spike remarks with a frown. "Tell me about it. This is a summer place?" Rainbow ask in amusement as she looks at the inside of the place. "It look like it hasn't been opened for 10 summers." "Well, forgive me for not being a lady for saying this, but this restaurant is starting to smell like..." Rarity begins to say with a frown as if she's about to curse, which is very un-lady like. "How long have you ponies been at that window?!" A voice demands causing the group to scream and turns around to see a stallion glaring at them. Of course, what they don't know is that this said stallion is none other than Smaug himself. He and his kids are using the restaurant as a hideout. He, Merluck and Trixie; knowing thay they are easily recognizable wanted fugitives; use their magic to disguise themselves so that they look like average, non-descript restaurant operators. "Wait, just enough to see that this place needs 10 roach motels." Rainbow chuckles to Smaug nervously yet still kept up with her attitude. Suddenly, Trixie, disguised with the same magic but is lacking her hat and cape right now, storms out of the restarant while yelling, "This is ridiculous! How am I, the Great and Powerful Trixie, is supposed to create with that stupid piece of..." The blue unicorn stops upon seeing the Goones, not expecting any unexpected guests. Soon Trixie, in concern, spoke to Smaug in some weird language, much to their confusion. Spike whispers, "Scootaloo? Does Rainbow know what language this is?" "Unfortunately, no." Scootaloo said worried quietly."But from the way that they're talking, it doesn't sound good." "Trixie, come on, these ponies are customers after all." Smaug said to Trixe gently. As far as the villain is concerned, Twilight and her friends think that this place is just that, a restaurant. Perhaps if he were to serve them something, they won't be suspicious and will leave. Trixie frowns as she spokes to her father in the language of Parseltongue, a forbidden language, "Dad, this isn't a restaurant." Smaug snaps back at his daughter in the same language, "Just do what I told you to." "Sorry, dad." Trixie apologizes in Parseltongue. Then in English, she spoke to the ponies slyly, "How about you ponies and dragon make yourself at home? My dad can make you something." "What would he make us?" Apple Bloom ask nervously. "Ah sure hope 'dat...." Trixie came near the fillies, pinching Sweetie's cheek while saying nervously, "Rarity, make her stop before I scream." "What do you all want?!" Smaug demands impatiently, causing the Goonies to scream as they turn to face him. "Err, we want water." Applejack said to Smaug nervously. "Right, right, water." Pinkie agrees as the other ponies and Spike nod, all wanting the same thing. "A couple of waters." Smaug said, giving out a fake smile. "Anything else?" "No, I'm sure that we're good." Twilight said with a quick nod. "Right, nothing else for us, sir." Starlight said in agreement as Applejack gave a nervous chuckle to Smaug. "No! I want the Veal Scallopine!" Rainbow said with a smirk while stepping forward. The others gasp in horror. "Rainbow Dash, stop it, no, no!" Twilight whispers nervously to Rainbow. That pony is going to get them all into trouble! The Goonies jump with anxiety, signaling Rainbow to shut up by mime-zipping their mouths and turning the key motions. "Stop it, please." Fluttershy said quietly and scared. Rainbow ignores her friends as she goes to Smaug, continuing, "I want the Fettucinig Alfredo, a bottle of Fettucini, a 1981." Of course Smaug scowls as he uses his magic to grab Rainbow, holding her tightly and forcing the Pegasus pony's mouth opened. He snaps, "We only serve tongue here, Miss Mouth." To prove his point, Smaug made a dagger appears and forces Rainbow to stick her tongue out. The ponies and dragon gasp as they cover their mouths in horror. "Ha ha ha! Do you like tongues?" The ponies and dragon shake their heads nervously, even Rainbow knows that she should stop when she herself is ahead. Smaug laughs evilly and put his dagger away before releasing the Pegasus pony who flew back to her friends. The villain has got his point across. "Now then, would that be all, my little ponies?" Smaug ask darkly as the group backs away from him. "No? THEN SIT DOWN!" The ponies and dragon scream as they quickly sat at in some chairs at a table. Smaug nods as he heads into the kitchen. Pinkie, scared beyond all relief, falls over. "Oh dear, what a horrible pony." Fluttershy whimpers a bit. "The service went terrible since Sweetie and I were here last." Rarity said as she breaths in and out. "Rainbow Dash, you should've kept your mouth shut." "Shut up." Rainbow groans as she breaths in and out, recovering from the incident that almost got her tongue cut out by that restaurant operator. "Yew all right, Pinkie Pie?" Applejack ask Pinkie in concern. "Yes, sure am." Pinkie said while breathing in and out. "Ponies, listen, I..." "Hey, big sis, ponies, where are those two stallions, 'de ones in the polysester suits 'dat came in before we did?" Apple Bloom ask worried as she looks around the restaurant. There is no sign of those mentioned stallions anywhere. "Maybe they went out the back?" Spike ask nervously. "Or went to the bathroom? Man, I'm getting freaked out." "Ponies, ponies..." Pinkie said, gulping a bit. "What is it, Pinkie Pie, what's wrong?" Twilight ask Pinkie, noting how freaked out her friend is. "We should leave now. If we don't, there's going to be..." Pinkie was interrupts as the others interrupt her by hushing her. She then lowes her voice while still scared, "...to be a hostage crisis. At the garage...Fluttershy and I...saw an ORV, four wheel drive, bullet holes the size of..." Rainbow of course groans as she covers Pinkie's mouth, saying, "Honestly, Pinkie Pie, you are really random. I'm going to O.D. on those bullcrap stories of yours." "Yeah, shut up!" Applejack remarks as Rarity nods in agreement. The ponies has no time for stories for today. "But I saw the ORV, really." Fluttershy said meekly. "It's in the garage...and I think..." Fluttershy was cut off as a couple of glasses are slammed onto the table, startling he ponies. Smaug has came back with the water that they ordered. "Okay, here is your water." Smaug snaps impatiently. "Thank you, thank you!" The ponies and Spike exclaim as they took the waters from the 'restaurant operator' quickly. "Thank yew madam...err, sir." Applejack said, correcting himself. "Right, sir...madam...I mean sir!" Starlight exclaims, correcting himself like mad as Smau glares at him for his mistakes. "Hey, is this supposed to be water?" Scootaloo ask puzzled as she look a ehr glass. The water inside looks pinkish, as if it came out of old pipes or was stuck in a drty tank for years. "I don't think I want to know what this stuff is." Spike said uneasily. "It's wet, isn't it? Drink it!" Smaug snaps at Scootaloo and Spike causing them to yelp in alarm. They don't want to make this stallion more upset. Starlight got an idea on how to look for the treasure without Smaug realizing it. The colt shakes around a bit while exclaiming, "Sir, sir! Where's your restroom?" "Can't you hold it?" "Well, no." "Right, my brother needs to go here." Twilight said with a quick nod. "And I hope you let me escort him. Can't let him go to the bathroom all by himself, after all." Of course, that isn't true. Twilight and Starlight are pretending to go to the bathroom to check out the rest of the restaurant as well as figure out the rest of Flint Jones's map. Plus, this Smaug guy is scary and getting more familiar. "Err, Starlight? Bad idea. This isn't the kind of place where you want to go to the bathroom." Pinkie said to Starlight, unaware of what he and Twilight are planning. "And why not?" Smaug demands to Pinkie with a frown. "Well, I guess there may be daddy long legs in the bathroom and..." Pinkie turns and yelps upon seeing someone, Merluck, carrying 'the trash' through a window. The Earth pony turns to the siblings, whispering, "...or dead things!" "Relax, Pinkie Pie. I will make sure that my brother won't fall in or get hurt." Twilight assures Pinkie with a sigh. "Hey, Starlight!" Rainbow jokes, pouring dirty water alternatively between glasses to coax the colt into going to the bathroom faster. "Want to use the restroom?" "Twilgiht, killer dead things...big...meanie..." Pinkie hisses to her friends frantically. "Sir, please, please!" Starlight exclaims as he jumps up quickly, wanting to leave. "You better tell Twilight and Starlight where the bathroom is at." Spike said to Smaug in precaution. "You don't want them to make an accident now, would you?" Smaug groans a bit then said, "Fine, it's downstairs. First door on the right." "Thank you, thank you so much!" Starlight exclaims quickly as he and Starlight head for the stairs that goes downstairs. "Twilight, Starlight, no!" Pinkie exclaims frantically to the departing two. "Stay to the right!" Smaug reminds the two siblings ahrshly. "Right, got it, got it!" Twilight exclaims in agreement, trying her best not to look back at Smaug at all. "Dead things, big dead things!" Pinkie screams out in terror like a manic. "Stay to the right!" Smaug reminds Twilight and Starlight once more as they got to the stairs. "Rght, no problem, to the right." Twilight said as she and her brothers head downstairs as fast as they could. "Horse feathers, that guy is scary." The two siblings reach the basement level, Twilight got the map out while unrolling it. Starlight yelps as he hit his head on a light bulb hanging overhead. The two siblings reach the bottom of stairs, looking around. "Well, this looks like the right place to find Flint Jones's treasure all right." Starlight mumbles a bit. "Okay, One-Eyed Flint Jones, you are down here. I just know you are..." The two ponies looks to the right and saw the bathroom that Smaug is mentioned which is the first door to the right. Twilight and Starlight groans a bit. That place smells like no pony bothered cleaning it in years! "Ugh, that stinks!" Twilight gags a bit. Suddenly a roar is heard, getting her and Starlight's attention. "Starlight? Did you hear that?" "It sounded like it's down here." Starlight said quietly to Twilight. Something is down here...something un-pony. Out of curiosity, the two siblings goes down the hallway, reaching a door that is slightly opened at the end. They peek in and saw an unusul room. Trixie is inside singing in Parseltongue...and by that, I mean she is doing horribly enough to torture anyone! Trixie of course is singing to some sort of Pegasus pony groaning and cringing, sitting in a chair while being chained to the wall. The prisoner roars again, causing Trixie to stop her singing. "Oh, argh! You went and ruin Trixie's song again, you always do that!" Trixie scowls at the pony as she hits the creature, making Twilight and Starluck cringes at this. They feel sorry for the treatment that Trixie is giving that poor pony. The blue unicorn points to the dinner plate that she's floating via magic. "See what I made you? Here, have some, you cross-eyed freak!" Trixie throws some food right at the poor pony's face, causing it to yelp and for Twilight and Starlight to shake their head sadly. Poor pony, it must've suffered a lot. "Oh, forget it, forget it, you left me no choice!" Trixie snaps furiously as she drops the dinner plate onto the floor and leaves the room, closing the door on her way in. Twilight and Starlight are in plain sight but luckily the criminal didn't see them. "Horse feathers, you are worst as dad and Merluck. You never let me finish." "Food please!" The creature spoke through the door in a female voice. It's hungry. Trixie pauses then sang in Parseltongue as if to taunt the Pegasus pony. Suddenly Starlight yelps. He accidentially activated a mousetrap that snaps on his behind. Twilight covers her brother's mouth, hoping that Trixie didn't hear him. Lukily, Trixie didn't as she head back upstairs. Twilight sighs as she uses magic to get the mousetrap off her brother's behind. The purple unicorn mumbles, "You got lucky, little brother. That mean mare would've heard you." The prisoner in the other room cries some more, "Hungry, I am hungry! Food, please!" The two siblings open the door to the Pegasus pony's room, looking inside. Thepoor thing is crying while pulling her chains. "Oh, Twilight, we can't let her go hungry like this." Starlight said sadly as she spies the dinner plate out of the imprisoned mare's reach. "Right." Twilight said. She spies a broom nearby and uses her magic to grab it. The pony then uses the handle to push the plate near the Pegasus pony that is chained up. The prisoner heard the commotion and turns around, growling at Twilight and Starlight. The two siblings gasp in shock and alarm. It's a Pegasus pony all right...but there's something different about her, something that is half pony, half something else! Twilight drops the room and ran out of the room with Starlight just as the creature grabs the dinner plate and laughs madly as she held the meal to her mouth. Twilight and Starlight, freaked out, ran out of the basement, only to be grabbed from behind upon reaching the top of the stairs by two hooves. The good news that it isn't Smaug or his kids. The bad news is that it's a familiar stallion that the siblings tried to avoid all day. "Honestly, can you two stay home like I told you?" Shining scolds his siblings. The stallion has survived the bicycle crash and made his way ovr here. As he takes Twilight and Starlight to the door, Shining snaps to the other Goonies, "Let's get out of here, come on!" "Right, coming!" Spike exclaims as he and the others follow the Sparkles out of the restaurant. The group got faster as Smaug chases them all out, yelling, "Get out of here, get out and stay out!" Once the Goonies are out of the restaurant, the villain closes the door. Turning around, Smaug scowls, "I really hate foals..." Unknown to Smaug, a familiar figure from the store peeks in, nodding before disappearing, no pony knew that he was there... Author's noe Yikes, that is crazy! What did Twilight and Starlight found? And who is that mysterious figure following the Goonies? In the next chapter, once the Lulamoons leave, they sneak back into the restaurant while Cadance, Soarin' and Ben Mare joins them. Read, review and suggest. Parseltongue is the wicked language used by Voldemort as well as Harry in the Harry Potter book series. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 1 2012, 05:31 AM Post #9 |
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Author's note To answer your question, Nobodiez, the villains are bad unicorns and I need a language for them to speak in (like the crooks in the actual movie speaking Italian at times). Parseltongue is the best language that can work here. And billy arratoon, yes, he is someone you know. Chapter 5: New Goonies The Goonies are now at a safe distance from the restaurant, stopping to take a breather. While doing so, Twilight explains what she and Starlight saw in the basement, "I mean it, we saw it! They got...some sort of Pegasus pony down there but she looks different, like the mare was fused into something! The pony was chained to the wall!" "Wow, really? You saw something?" Spike ask Twilight in surprise. "Oh give me a break!" Shining scoffs a bit. A Pegasus like monster chained in the basement? Please! "No, no, we saw her! This pony has cross-eyed and looks gross and dragon like!" Starlight explains to his brother and the others frantically. "Wow, and I thought I told just tall tales!" Pinkie exclaims in amazement, still her friends went 'ooh' and 'awe' at what they heard "Yeah, right, like your brain, right?" Shining snaps to his brother. "Come on, say goodbye to your friends!" "Shining, why won't you believe us?" Twilight ask Shining in frustration. "I mean, when Pinkie tells the tall tales, it was hard for you to believe her. But when Starlight and I do, it always happen!" "Hey look! Something's going on!" Fluttershy exclaims as she saw something happening at the restaurant. The Goonies duck as they watch Smaug and her sons leaving the restaraunt, bringing a black bag with something into the parked ORV. Whatever is inside the bag itself is very heavy. "Dad, honestly, why did you have to shoot him?" Merluck groans as he carries the body to the ORV. "Because he's a Secret Service agent for the princess that's why!" Smaug snaps to his son in annoyance. "If that guy and his pal were to realize whom we really are, they would report us to Celestia herself!" "The last you could've done is take the pony into the car, bring him to the side of the road and then shoot the bum! It would've saved us a lot of trouble!" "Just put him in the car!" "Over her, Merluck." Trixie said to her brother as she takes the bag from him. "Don't tell me what to do!" Merluck snaps at his sister in annoyance. "Dad, give me over..." "I'm the one who always gotta..." "Gotta what?" Trixie snaps to her brother as if challenging Merluck to repeat what he just said. "What are they saying over there?" Rarity ask her friends in concern. Since the crooks are too far away, the Goonies can't figure out what they're saying or doing, but whatever it is, the whole thing isn't right at all. "Ah wonder what is in 'dat bag 'dat they're holding?" Applejack ask a bit worried. "Maybe trash." Starlight suggest hopefully. "Yeah, that's it, trash from the restaurant!" "Really?" "Yeah, I think." "Starlight, I am beginning to doubt that is the case here." Twilight said in concern. The purple unicorn is starting to think that whatever is inside the bag isn't trash at all. "I mean, they can't have a lot of trash to put in one bag!" "Right, I think we are getting inside something that we shouldn't be getting into here." Sweetie said, scared. "You see why I didn't want to go on this adventure in the first place, Sweetie?" Rarity ask her sister in concern. "It's because of something like that!" "Ponies, look, Fluttershy and I saw magic blast holes in their car about this big." Pinkie said as she motions as to show how big the blasts are. "Those ponies are bad news!" "Right, I agree. Besides, our parents and friends are probably worried sick about us by now." Fluttershy whimpers to the other ponies, wanting to get out of this adventure. "And it's almost dinner time!" "Yeah, I agree." Rainbow said with a frown. "When are we going to go home?" Pinkie ask Twilight and Starlight in worry. "Home, what home?" Twilight ask with a sigh. "Why in a couple of more hours, we won't have a hour anymore." "Twilight's right, this is our last chance to see if there's any rich stuff to find." Starlight said in agreement. If the ponies can find any rich stuff, there is still a huge chance of saving the Goon Docks. "That I agree." A voice spoke up, startling the Goonies who turn to see a familiar pony, the same trench-coated and hat wearing one from the store, nearby. "Oh, jeez, don't do that!" Spike exclaims, almost scared to death. "Wait, hang on...you're that pony from the store!" "Have you been tailing us?" Twilight ask the pony in concern. "Never mind that. Listen, the story of Flint Jones's treasure is true. The way to it lies in that restaurant." The pony said with a nod, hiding his face under his hat. "Find it and the sword, save the Goon Docks and Equestria." "Wait, how did you know about Flint Jones?" Scootaloo ask Flint skeptically. "Were you also spying on us?" "That's not important right now. Just go on, find your treasure..." "Wait, who are you?" Shining demands to the pony seriously. "My name is Golden Heart...and that's all you get for now. I will be watching." The pony known as Golden Heart said. Suddenly wings appears as he flew off. "What 'de hay?" Apple Bloom ask, blinking her eyes a bit. "Is 'dat feller a Pegasus pony?" "Must be." Applejack said thoughtfully. "But then, why was he tailing us?" "They're leaving, they're leaving!" Spike exclaims quickly. The other Toonies saw what the baby dragon just saw: the ORV is starting up as the Lulamoons are about to leave with what they just packed in there. "Every pony, get down!" Twilight exclaims as the Goonies duck to avoid being seen as the ORV begins to leave. "See, what did I tell you?" Pinkie insists as she points to the holes in the ORV. "There are magic blast in the back of that thing!" Suddenly a hoof grabs Rainbow from behind, causing her to scream. The ponies jump as they turn around, fearing more trouble or if it's the same Golden Heart from before. Forunately for them, it isn't either case. "Oh, horse feathers! Warn a pony before you do that!" Rarity exclaims in annoyance. Trns out that the ones who scared the Goonies are none other than Cadance, Soarin' and Ben. "Are you wanting to give me a heart attack?!" "Sorry abotu that, you look so distracted, we couldn't resist." Soarin' said with a devilish grin before turning to Rainbow. "Yo, Rainbow! Look better from behind, babe!" "Yeah, well, you think that's scary? Wait until you see what I'm going to throw up in the next few minutes!" Rainbow challenges Soarin' in annoyance. "How did you know we were here?" Twilight ask Cadance, Ben and Soarin' in bewilderment. "Oh, sorry. Listen, we followed you right after the incident with Shining." Ben explains, blushing a bt to Twilight who smiles at him. "Oh really?" Shining ask a bit sheepishly by what happened. "You see, earlier we were out driving with Prince Jewel. Oh Shining, sorry about your face." Cadance said in regret as she saw a scrap on her love's face which he must've gotten after the incident. The unicorn brush it with a foreleg sheepishly. "It isn't to worry about, I was born with it." Shining remarks making Cadance giggle slightly. "Ha! Made you laugh, I'm off the hook." "What Jewel did to you wasn't right. He was an obnoxious creep. That alicorn even has some nerve to tilt the mirror to look at me badly. So I elbow his lip." "You elbow his lip?" "Sure did." Cadance laughs along side Shining. "Awesome, very awesome." Soarin' laughs a bit with his pals. While the conversion is going on, Twilight and her friends head back to the restaurant now that the Lulamoons are no longer around. It's now safe to search it. Ben decides to follow them to see what they're up to. "What are you all doing here in the first place?" Ben ask the Goonies curiously. "Well, we didn't want to tell anyone else about this but seeing how we could trust you...we're looking for the treasure of Flint Jones." Twilight explains, blushing a bit as she knows that she herself could trust her crush about the treasure. "You mean the same stuff that he took from my mom generations ago? Including the powerful sword?" "You got it!" Spike exclaims with a grin. "We found his map in the attic earlier! We're going to find it so we can save the Goon Docks." "If we can get inside." Starlight said as Rainbow and Scootaloo tries to open the door but to noprevail. "No good, the whole door is locked." Scootaloo said with a frown. Twilight try teleporting herself and the others into the Lulamoons' restaurant, but it didn't work. The purple unicorn groans, "No good! The restaurant is magically shielded. Looks like the owner doen't want anyone but themselves getting into the place." Applejack and Apple Bloom hit the door with the back feet but it won't open. The little one groans, "Aww, shucks. 'De door must be resistance 'ta bucking." "Oh well, so much for that." Pinkie said with a sigh, thinking that perhaps the gang can forget trying to get inside now. But then Rainbow got an idea, it's a crazy one but it may just work. Turning to Pinkie, the Pegasus pony exclaims, "Hey, Pinkie Pie, wait, hang on." "Yeah?" Rainbow tell Pinkie, "Hey, Pinkie. You know how you are about Pinkie Promises? Well, I broke one." "WHAT?!" Pinkie demands furiously as her eyes grow fire red with steam coming out of her ears. Rainbow broke a Pinkie Promise?! Rainbow finish, "Yeah, I deliberately broke a Pinkie Promise AND I'm telling you about it. REAL bad." In fury, Pinkie took out her party cannon and try blasting her Pinkie Promise breaking friend with it, but Rainbow dodges and the cannon blast hits the door instead. This causes the thing to open up. "Well, that's one way to get into a place." Ben comments in amazement as he and some of the ponies got into the restaurant. "Thanks, Pinkie Pie, you're a saint." Fluttershy said with a nod. Rainbow comment, "Okay, Pinkie, confession time. I did NOT actually break a Pinkie Promise. That's a level of stupidity even *I* would never actually reach. I only SAID I did to get you mad enough to blast the door open. I'm sorry, Pinkie." Pinkie calm down immediately and cheerfully say, "Apology accepted." ---------- By this time, Shining, realizing that his siblings and their friends has went back into the restaurant, came over there with Cadance ad Soarin' so that the stallion can get Twilight and Starlight. "Wait out here, I will be right back." Shining insists as he goes into the restaurant, the last two follow part way. "This shouldn't take too long." "I don't think you should go in there. You're going to get into trouble." Cadance said to Shining in concern. "Just don't leave, okay?" "Ugh, no way! I ain't staying in this dump!" Soarin' groans as he and Cadance begins to trot away while Shining goes into the restaurant. There's nothing that will convince these two to stick around. ------------------- As Shining enters the restaurant, the Goonies talk about what to do, most of them argue about the map. Starlight takes charge, exclaiming, "Quiet, quiet! We got to get the lowest point of the floor!" "Lowest point nothing, Starlight!" Shining interrupts sternly, causing the ponies to jump. "We are leaving now!" ----------- Back outside, Soarin' unknowingly steps on a rake, causing it to spring up a foot from his face. There's something on the other end of the rake: some rotten rags and a dead fish stuck to it! Soarin' and Cadance screams in alarm and horror as they rush back to te restaurant. ---------------- "No, Shining!" Twilight refuse back inside the restaurant. The mare can't go back after everything they did just to get here. "Twiley!" Shining scowls in annoyance as he trots forward. Without warning, Soarin' and Cadance rush into the restaurant, still terrified as the alicorn rush over to Shining's side. Sweetie exclaims in alarm, "Whoa! What's going on?!" "Turn the lights on!" Scootaloo exclaims as Rainbow ruh over to a light switch nearby. "Oh Celestia!" Soarin' exclaims. Then the Wnderbolt yells in alarm as Rainbow turn the light switch on, causing lights to explode like mad, scaring the Goonies some more. "Eeek, don't do that again!" Fluttershy exclaims to Rainbow in alarm. "Shining, you should've seen what we just saw! It's freaky! I almost jumped out of my feathers!" "It came out of the bushes and almost killed us!" Cadance exclaims in worry. "I swear, it's the most terrifying thing that I ever saw." "Shining, come on, please." Starlight insists to his brother hopefully. "Right, y'all." Applejack said with a nod. "Let us search the place, will ya?" Twilight insists to her brother wih a nod. "Just a couple of more minutes! What if we found something? Give it a chance!" "Yeah, come on." Ben insists to Shining in agreement. "This could be our chance!" "No, Twiley, Starlight, we are not going to do this." Shining said sternly to his siblings. "We are going home right now." "Oh man!" Spike groans a bit. What is it going to take to convince Shining to agree to let the Toonies do some searching? "Right, let's listen to Shining." Fluttershy said, a bit scared. "Hey Shining." Cadance said gently as she took Shining's hoof, making the unicorn blush a bit at this. "Give your siblings and their friends a few minutes. That way, you can stay here with me." "Well, I..." Shining blush a bit as he gave out an awkward chuckle. "Amazing." Rarity said with a smile as Cadance pulls Shining's hoof to her face, making the unicorn blush redder. "Come on, listen to Cadance, she knows what she's talking about!" Twilight exclaims with a smile. "Look, I will make it a Pinkie Promise that if we don't find anything, we can go right home! Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!" "Right, no one can break a Pinkie Promise after doing that, not even Twilight!" Pinkie exclaims as Twilight did the Pinkie Promise. Not even the purple unicorn would dare break it, not even to save the Goon Docks. "Right, my cousin knows what's best...and I get to hang with Twilight some more!" Ben exclaims, making Twilight blush a bit. "Right, yeah!" Rainbow exclaims excitedly. "Right, I think." Fluttershy said happily but uneasy. "Listen to her!" Scootaloo exclaims eagerly. "Let's go!" The Toonies exclaims as they head downstairs excitedly. Time to find that treasure! Author's note Well, the Goonies has got Cadance, Soarin' and Ben joining them. In the next chapter, they search the basement, finding amazing, shocking and/or terrifying discovering. Read, review and suggest. Edited by JusSonic, Sep 1 2012, 10:42 AM.
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| JusSonic | Sep 2 2012, 02:00 AM Post #10 |
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Chapter 6: Secrets in the Basement The Goonies head downstairs, preparing to find what could be the next part to where to find the tunnel leading to Flint Jone's treasure. As they move onward, a grunt is heard, causing the gang to scream to fright. Soarin' pauses as he said, "Pinkie Pie, I hope that was your stomach." "No, that's the Pegasus pony...or what is supposed to be one." Starlight said with a smile. Looks like this proves him and Twilight right, that creature does exist! "Sounds like Cerberus." Pinkie said with a shiver. "Come on, it's just a pony like all of us. Want to see her?" Twilight ask her friends though some of them shake thei heads in fear. "Come on, she's harmless. The pony is chained to the wall, just be quiet." "You're crazy, absolutely nuts." Rarity groans as they head down the hallway in worry. "We don't even know if that thing is even safe!" "Well, if Twilight said that she's safe, that's enough for me. We just need to take a quick peek at her then move on." Ben Mare assures his friends though some of them looks doubtful. As the ponies and dragon got closer, the creature in that room makes another groan while rattling her chains. Rainbow whimpers, "I don't want to go, Twilight, please don't make me go." "You're usually brave when it comes to monsters." Fluttershy said to Rainbow gently. "Yeah, but there are some expections!" "Come on, she's chained to he wall, calm down." Starlight assures Rainbow, he can't believe how scared his pony friend is. "You sure about that?" Spike ask Starlight as he hangs onto Twilight in worry. "You and the others wnated to go right?" "Yeah...at least I want to." "Good, let's get going." Tiwlight said as the gang got to the door to the creature's room. As she uses her magic to pen it, most of the Goonies and Soarin' enter. "Now, try not to scream. We don't want to frighten her." "Oh great. Not frighten something like whatever you saw!" Scootaloo groans a bit. "Oh man!" "Do we have to go, do we have to go?" Rarity ask, scared out of her mind apparently. "Come on, sis." Sweetie said with a sigh as she got Rarity to follow her. "Don't be scared. "To be honest, Shining, I rather not see it." Cadance gulps as she and Shining decides to wait outside. A pause as the the two look at each other and smile, leaving forward as if about to kiss... The creature in room screams so loudly that the ponies scream and ran off, colliding with Shining and Cadance and sending them all falling into another room. Most of them fell to the floor, minus Soarin' who kept his balance, and Shining and Cadance who fell onto a couch, the alicorn is on top. Shining and Cadance smiles at each other and is about to kiss. But then Pinkie laughs as she and her friends saw this, "Shame, shame!" "We y'all know yer name!" Applejack giggles a bit, much to Shining and Cadance's embarrassment. "Oh wow, Cadance, I always knew you got a thing for Twilight's brother." Ben Mare said teasingly. "Come on, give her the tongue, Shining, go on!" Rainbow laughs at Shining. "Oh, that is so sick, I don't think I wanna look!" Soarin' exclaims in disgust. "Get me up, get me up!" Apple Bloom demands as the ponies got up to their hooves, Scootaloo helps her fellow CMC up. "Thanks." "Not a problem." Scootaloo said with a grin. "So what is this place, a lounge?" Spike ask as he and Rairt looks around the room. "It is dusty, I don't know why those restaurant ponies didn't bother to clean it up." Rarity remarks in disgust at the place. "Oh, girls, every pony, I can feel it for sure!" Twilight exclaims eagerly. "Flint Jones is really down here, I just know he is!" "Right, we just need to find a way to get into his caves!" Starlight exclaims with a smile. "You two think so?" Ben Mare ask Twilight and Starlight curiously. "We know so!" "Boy howdy, 'dat's good, nice pad!" Applejack exclaims as she looks around the place. "Ah done gotta build one just like 'dis." "Okay, so according to the map, we're trotting above here..." Spike said as he glances at the map that Twilight is now lookign at. "Water, yay!" Pinkie giggles as she saw a water cooler nearby and put her face under it. The Earth pony press the valve only to end up spilling water right on her eye. "We can do it, okay, come on." Cadance said as she hit Soarin' on the back, much to his annoyance. The two ponies are figuring out what to do next. "Hang on, no way!" Soarin' snaps to Cadance in annoyance. "There has to be a way..." Twilight said as she and Ben looks around for a place to dig up the treasure or to find the passageway. "Right, Twi, though it may not easy since we have no idea where to start." Ben Mare said in agreement. "You two love girls talking?" Rainbow jokes a bit to Twilight and Ben Mare, making them plus. The Pegasus pony yelps as Starlight grabs something, nearly nicking her with it. "Ouch, hey!" "Sorry." Starlight apologizes sheepishly. "Starlight, what the hay are you doing?!" The ponies gasps as Starlight uses some sort of tool in his hooves and raises it above his head. Twilight screams, "Starlight, stop! You're going to hurt yourself!" Starlight however hits the floor in an attempt to crack it open. But all that happens was him getting vibrated by the tool. Fluttershy yelps, "Oh my!" "Oh, for the love of the Herd!" Shining groans as he uses his magic to seize the tool from Starlight before he hurts himself or anyone."Stop that!" "Shining!" Starlight exclaimsto his brother in annoyance. "Don't Shining me! Knock it off, there's nothing buried under there!" "There has to be, there has to be something buried under there!" "Will you wake up, it's the 21st Century, no one uses tools like this anymore!" Shining snaps as he got rid of the tool. "Look, we didn't find anything, okay? Twilight, you Pinkie Promise that if we don't find anything, we will leave so..." "There has to be something buried under there, I swear it! The map says so!" Twilight insists to her brother. "Oh give me a break!" "Well, if the treasure is somewhere underneath this room, how will we get it?" Ben Mare ask the others curiously. "I doubt even magic can't break through this floor and it would take forever if that wasn't the case!" "Wait, I got an awesome idea!" Rainbow exclaims excitedly to her friends. "How about we pour chocolate all over the floor?" "Yeah, that way, Pinkie can eat her way through it!" Scootaloo remarks, joining in on her adopted sister's funny idea. Pinkie, who stops trying to get water from the cooler, frowns upon hearing what Rainbow and Scootaloo just said, her two friends went and make fun at her and her eating habits for the last time! No more! "Okay, Dashie, I can stand your jokes so many times before....but I can't stand it anymore!" Pinkie screeches as if ready to kiss butt. Suddenly, the pony bumps into the cooler, causing it to wobble. Pinkie gasps as she tries to catch it, "I got it, I got it, I got it!" Of course, Pinkie ends up causing the stand to tip over, sending the cooler right onto the floor, causing it to break and for water to be spilled. The pony said sheepishly, "Oopsie, don't got it." "You klutz!" Some of the Goonies groans a bit. "Honestly, Pinkie Pie, you tend to break things that aren't yours." Spike remarks to Pinkie dryly. "Maybe if we're lucky, it isn't a deposit bottle." Pinkie said with a sheepish smile on her face. "This is insane, I feel like I'm holding tryouts for rookies for the Wonderbolts except no one is paying me to do so." Soarin' said with an annoyed sigh. For a moment, it looks like Twilight is going to believe that the search is for nothing and she is about to call it quits. Just then, the purple unicorn's ears perk up, making her say, "Wait, everypony, listen." "Huh? To what?" Rainbow ask puzzled. The ponies kept quiet as they hear water that was spilled draining away to someplace. "It sounds like...water draining away to somewhere." Fluttershy said thoughtfully as she listens to the water draining carefully. "Yeah, and?" Shining ask his sister puzzled, wondering what point that Fluttershy is making here. "Sounds like my grandpa using the restroom, so what is your point?" Rainbow ask Twilight a bit puzzled. "Wait, Twilight may have something. It sounded deep." Ben Mare said thoughtfully. The water draining noise sounds deeper. "I think there may be a hole or passageway." "Look, over here!" Spike exclaims as he saw that the water is heading to the fireplace nearby, logs and all. "I think there's something underneath it." "Move it, I'm going to see." Shining said as he trots over to get a better look to see if Twilight, Ben and Spike are right, that there may be a secret passage leading to somewhere. Cadance sighs lovingly at the stalllion she loves, commentating, "Oh, Shining is so sweet to me...not like Jewel at all..." "Oh come on, are you kidding me?!" Soarin' exclaims in disbelief by what Cadance is saying. "Where in Equestria are you?! Your mind is in the clouds and we're in a basement!" Soarin' saw something odd about the fireplace along with something underneath the logs. The unicorn uses his magic to pull them away and saw a grate that was in hiding. "Ha ha ha! I told you, see?! I was right, I told you!" Twilight exclaims with glee. She was right all along, there was a secret passageway in this room! "Come on, Shining, help me get his grate open!" Starlight exclaims to his big brother. The two brothers manage to get the grate up and took a look, seeing rotted boards underneath the thing. "Say, what is 'dat weird air?" Apple Bloom ask curiously as she felt some air coming from the fireplace. "I can feel it too, there's something down there!" Shining amazingly exclaims. Perhaps his siblings and Golden Heart are right all along! The treasure of Flitn Jones is real! "See? Didn't I tell you that there is something?" Twilight ask every pony with a wide smile on her face. "All right, this is going to be awesome!" Ben Mare exclaims eagerly. "It got to be the treasure, I just know it!" Scootaloo exclaims. She can already smell that treasure already and it should be by these powers. "Hey, Apple Bloom, check 'dis out." Applejack said as she spots some sort of machien nearby. "What did yew find, sis?" Apple Bloom ask her big sister as Applejack push a button, causing it to start. "Wow! Neat!" "Careful, Shining." Twilight said to Shining as he kicks at the boards, breaking them and sending them downward into a tunnel below. "You okay?" Sweetie ask Shining in concern. "I'm fine, look." Shining said as he and the ponies look down to see some sort of tunnel below. "That must be..." "Yes, there's a passageway under there, that must lead to the rich stuff!" Starlight exclaims excitedly. "Right, we should follow it and maybe find out what happened to Lorcan!" Spike exclaims eagerly. The tunnel could hold a clue or so as to what happened to Lorcan and why he disappear while looking for Flint Jones's treasure. "If he's still alive." "There's the tunnel start." Rainbow said with a nod. "Yeah, I saw." Fluttershy said meekly. Applejack watch the machine which print out stuff. The pony took a paper out of curiosity and looks at it, seeing something familiar. She mumbles, "50 dollar bit, 50 dollar bit. 50 dollar bit?!" "50 dollar bit?" Cadance and Soarin' both ask puzzled, wondering if they heard Applejack right. "Wait, what are you talking about over there?" Rarity ask Applejack curiously. "Yeehaw, ponies! 50 dollar bit, we got hundreds o' 'dat stuff right here! We got money needed 'to save 'de Goon Docks!" Applejack exclaims eagerly. The others look surprised and rush over as she passes sheets to them. If what the Earth pony said is true, maybe the Goonies don't need to go after Flint Jones's treasure after all! "Billions!" "Yeah, we got what we need!" Spike exclaims excitedly. "All right, yeah!" Rainbow cheers wildly along with the others. Looks like the ponies' troubles after over! That is until Shining frowns as he looks at the pages that he's holding and interrupts, "Hold it, hang on!" "Why, what's wrong?" Ben Mare ask Shining puzzled, the latter groans as he throw his sheet away. "They're fakes! Nothing but phonies!" "What?! No they aren't!" Sweetie exclaims in shock and alarm as some of the Goonies crumples up their pages in realization. They are holding counterfeit bills all along! "I'm serious! They're nothing but counterfeits!" Shining exclaims in disgust while crumpling up his page. "Big phonies!" "No they ain't!" Applejack protests but looks down, knowing that Shining is right. This money won't work and it could get the ponies in trouble! "I knew those folks upstairs are evil!" Twilight exclaims as she and the other ponies ditch their papers. Those so-called restaurant operators are counterfeiters the whole time! "No...aww, who am I kidding?" Scootaloo groans a bit. "Yeah, they are!" "You got 25 years for counterfeiting!" Cadance exclaims in a fright. If the Goonies try to do this counterfeit move, they won't save the Goon Docks. Heck the gang won't even save themselves! "Ooh, not even I am not that desperate to save the Goon Docks!" Rarity exclaims in disgust. "Oooh!" The Goones groans in disappointment. So much for getting their money already. "Ponies, everyone, look!" Soarin' exclaims in horror as he brings a newspaper over to his friend. "I know these creeps!" The ponies took a look at the front page and gasps upon seeing the prison photos of none other than than Smaug, Trixie and Merluck. The headline reads 'The Lulamoons Strike Again! Wanted for counterfeiting, grand theft, kidnapping, murder and attempted world domination'. "It's the Lulamoons!" Shining gasps upon recognizing the criminals. All of Equestria knows the evil criminal activities of Smaug and his kids, known to terrorize ponies and everyone else everywhere! "Mom has been sending out her troops, looking for those creeps! Smaug and Merluck has recently released Trixie from prison!" Ben Mare explains to the others in concern. "Wait, hang on, it's the unicorn from upstairs!" Fluttershy gasps as she recognizes Trixie in the photo. "Yeah, she's the same one who tried to sing before!" Twilight exclaims as she and Starlight are still cringing from Trixie's singing. "Of course! The Lulamoons were posing as restaurant owners!" Starlight gasps in shock and horror. "But why didn't we recognize them before?" "The Lulamoons must've used magic to disguise themselves since we would've recognize them easily! That explains it, they were using the restaurant as their hideout and we stumbled upon it!" "Aha! See, see?! I told you ponies! I told you that those meanies are trouble but you didn't listen to me!" Pinkie exclaims angrily and upset, this information proves that she was right all along. "I was right but you still won't listen to me!" "Okay, okay, we're sorry, Pinkie Pie." Spike said with a sigh. "You were right this time." "The thing is, yew told so many tall tales, it's hard 'ta believe." Apple Bloom admits to Pinkie. It's true, the Earth pony told so many tall tales, it would be hard for anyone to believe her when she tells the truth for once. "You ponies are crazy, looney tunies!" Pinkie snaps as she prepares to leave the room. "There is a circus with your names written all over it! Well, I'm sorry but I'm..." Pinkie however trot by a walk-in freezers and stops upon sniffing something, making her smile. Ben Mare in curiosity ask, "Pinkie Pie?" "Do I smell...ice cream?" Pinkie goes over to the door and bounces up to look through the window into the freezer. Happily, the pony oepn the door and looks excited upon seeing ice cream all around. "Yes! They got Swansons!" Pinkie grabs some ice cream containers like mad while saying, "These ponies got 'Ponylines in Cream', 'Missy-pissy Mud'....oh, oh! They got 'Chocolate Eruption!' Ha ha!" Of course, as the Earth pony kept reading the labels, her friends can over with disrupted or scared looks on their faces...and it isn't because of Pinkie Pie's new behavior, no, it's because of something pass her that she didn't notice at first. "'Apple Cider', 'Grapes', Grape, yes! They got 'Super-Duper Chocolate Disruption' and..." Pinkie continues onward. Of course, Starlight taps her on the shoulder, makign the pony looks up and see the disrupted and scared looks on her friends' faces, their mouths hang open. "What? What's wrong?" Pinkie turns around and finally saw what her friends just saw which turns to face her in the freezer. To her horror, it's a dead body of a stallion in a suit, wearing an ID that shows her as a member of the princess's secret service. Pinkie screams as she backs out of the freezers with the body falling out. Her friends catch her and scream as the body itself fell right onto Pinke. "It's...a STIFF!" Pinkie screams in terror as the pony jumps out of her friends' hold, causing the body to fall right onto the floor. The ponies looks even more horrified, Ben Mare took a look at the body and exclaims, "I know him! He's one of my mother's secret service members! Oh my goodness, this stallion's dead!" "Hold on, maybe he isn't dead!" Sweetie exclaims in fear. "Can somepony check for his pulse?" "What are you, a doctor?!" Scootaloo ask Sweetie terrified as she points to a bullet hole through the top of the corpse's head. "Did you see that gun shot?! If that doesn't tell you that this pony's dead, then I don't know what will!" The Goonies looks horrified and worried. Now most of them understood what happened to those two stallions who came into the restaurant earlier: the Lulamoons has killed them! And if those criminals catch the Goonies down here... Suddenly the ponies gasp as they heard the sound of the front door opening upstairs, making them huddle closer to keep quiet. The floorboards are heard creaking. "Hoo doggy, 'dat's 'de door." Applejack said quietly. That could mean one thing and the Earth pony wishes that she was wrong about her guess. Unfortunately, Applejack end up being correct as Smaug is heard snapping, "The door has been blasted open! Someone is heard!" "Weird, I closed it earlier, dad! I'm sure of it!" Merluck's voice insists as the ponies kept quiet. "Who left the lights on?" "Obviously you did!" ------------- Upstairs, Merluck goes into the kitchen as he put a pizza box onto a counter. The Lulamoons brought tofu pizza after getting rid of 'the garbage'. The male unicorn smirks evilly as he opens the box, digging through it." ------------- "Tofu pizza?" Pinkie whispers hungrily upon smelling the pizza, causing her friends to hush her. "Hay fries?" They hush her once more. Does she want them all to get caught? ---------------- Suddenly a rag hits Merluck causing him to turn and saw Trixie, annoyed as she stood near her father while yelling, "Dad, Merluck is eating my hay fries pizza again." "Oh, you want this stuff, huh?! Here you go!" Merluck snaps as he grabs a slice and throws it at Trixie then makes his horn glow. "You got it, you brat!" Trixie angrily took out a gun with her magic while yelling, "Come on, let's do this! Let's settle this over the hay fries pizza right now!!!" "Put that gun away, Trixie, put that gun away right now!" Smaug snaps furiously to Trixie, causing her to put her gun away in disappointment. He isn't about to let a gunfight happened when the criminals were supposed to be in hiding. "Ugh! Honestly, father, it isn't fair that you always take his side! You always like him better than me." "That's right!" Smaug snaps at Trixie as he hits her in the face before trotting off. The female unicorn scowls a bit. He always does that to her! -------- "We better put the body back." Ben Mare whispers as the Goonies pick the body back. They got to get that thing back into the freezers before the Lulamoons notice it out of place and really suspect what's going on. "Right, let's go." Rainbow said. The ponies begin pushing the body into the freezer. Unknown to them, however they are also pushing Pinkie and the CMC in there without them knowing. "Wait, sis, ponies, wait!" Apple Bloom whispers to the other ponies in concern, but no one heard her. "Close 'de door, quickly." Applejack whispers. The Ponies quickly close the freezer door, unknowingly trapping Pinkie Pie and the CMC inside. "Uh oh." The CMC said, getting a bit scared. "Twilight, Starlight..." Pinkie hisses nervously due to the fact that she and her friends are trapped...in the freezer...with a dead pony! The Toonies prepare to make their escape, most of them head to the door that they came in as Shining whispers to his siblings, "Twilight, Starlight, come on..." Of course, neither of the two made a move, much to Shining and Ben Mare's notice. Twilight looks thoughtfully as she expalins, "The fireplace is the only way out, we can't get out that way." "What do you mean?" Ben Mare ask Twilight, noting a thoughtful look in her and Starlight's eyes. "It all starts here..." Starlight said as the Goonies heard what he just said. "Ponies...Twilight and Starlight are right. We can't get outside without the Lulamoons spotting us, they will kill us for sure. The fireplace is our only means of escape now." "Crud, you're right. Come on!" Spike groans as the gang rush out to the fireplace, the only way to escape the Lulamoons now. The ponies begin climbing down into the shaft, one at a time, Shining climb sdown first as he said, "Watch your hooves." "I know, I know..." -------------- "Ponies, ponies, help!" Pinkie screams in terror as she pound on the window in hopes to get her friends' attention. "We're stuck in here with the stuff, help!" Suddenly the corpse fell onto the four, causing them to push it back into place. Apple Bloom scolds the dead pony, "Stay, stay!" "Hey, come on, ponies, we're in here, help!" Sweetie exclaims as she calls out for the ponies to hear her and hopefully come to rescues them all. "Oh horse feathers!" Scootaloo yelps as the dead body fell onto the four trapped ponies again. -------- "Come on, let's go, you're next Cadance." Starlight as she motions Cadance to get going. "Right, right." Cadance said nervously as she climbs down after Shining as fast as she can. --------------- The Lulamoon head downstairs to get the other body out of the freezer, not one of them are aware of the Goonies making their escape from the hideout now. "Forget it, Trixie, not a chance." Smaug snaps to Trixie in hopes to end another pointless argument between his kids. "Sorry, dad, geez." Trixie groans then she begins to argue with her brother once more. ------ "Help, help, ponies, help!" Pinkie and the CMC screams frantically as they have to end up fighting off a dead pony in the freezer that the four are still trapped in. ------------- "Come on, you two idiots!" Saug snaps angrily at his arguing kids as he heads onward to get the body. "Okay, dad!" Trixie and Merluck said at once, ending their arguing while going after their dad. --------------- "I hope it's safe." Twilight said in worry. The ponies got to get on going fast enough or they are all dead should the Lulamoon catch them all in here. "It's safe, I know!" Rainbow exclaims while climbing into the tunnel next. -------------- "Stop messing around, hurry up!" Smaug snaps at his kids as they arrved at the room where the Goonies are laugh. The unicorn kids laugh madly as they all enter what seems to be an empty room. ------------- "Not kidding, look in the window, help!" Pinkie exclaims horrified in the freezer. She and the CMC are having one tough time with the body that is falling on them like mad. Hoo boy! ------------------ "Let's go, come on!" The Goonies exclaims quickly as Fluttershy came down into the tunnel, safe and sound. "Okay, I think that's all of us." Spike said with a nod. "Wait, where's Pinkie Pie?" Shining ask, noticing that the pink Earth pony. "An' mah sister an' her friends!" Applejack gasps as she, Rarity and Rainbow saw that their siblings (real or adopted) are nowhere in sight. "Oh no! Don't tell me that they are still up there!" Rarity exclaims frantically as she looks up to the entrance. Not good, the ponies are in big trouble, especially Pinkie and the CMC. The Lulamoons are probably up there by now! Shining climbs back up and peeks out of the opening. Upon seeing the Lulamoons, the stallion quickly pulls the logs back into place, hiding the said opening in time. "Didn't I tell you not to touch that?!" Merluck scowls at his siter angrily. "I worked two hours on that!" "Well, Trixie say that..." Trixie begins to snap at her brother furiously. "Shut up the both of you!" Smaug snaps to his kids, shutting them up. The villain has saw something on the floor that caught his attention, getting a closer look. "I thought someone was here! The cooler's broken!" "Perhaps it's a tremor." "Go check on your adopted sister!" "Come on, that cross-eyed half dragon freak couldn't have done it." Trixie remarks to her father with a frown. "Why for all we know, it could've been a tremor!" "I will show you your tremor!" Smaug scowls as he hits his daughter once more, making her groans in pain. "Fine, all right. I, Trixie, will check on my adopted sister." As the Lulamoons head to the other room to check on the adopted sister, whose is the creature that Goonies has saw, Smaug comment, "I hope that pegasus Merluck captured for a test subject for my experiments hasn't broken her chains again. Anti-dragon chains are NOT easy to come by and I would hate to have to break into the royal palace before I have a means of controlling an army of monsters with which to aid in our takeover of Equestria." "Dad, come, let's not upset her, I prefer to do that." Merluck insists to his father while rolling his only eye. "Go on, geet going!" Smaug snaps a bit. He then hears a sneeze and thought it came from one of his children. "Gesundheit!" Of course, the sneeze came from Pinkie who is still in the freezer with the CMC. Once they are gone, the four came out at last, Apple Bloom quickly close the freezer door. "Brrr, it's cold." Apple Bloom shudders a bit. "Ah hate 'dat." "Where's everypony?" Sweetie ask in concern, seeing no sign of her sister and the others. "Psst, Pinkie, girls!" Shining's voice is heard hissing. "What, huh?" Pinkie ask puzzled. That's Shining's voice and where is it coming from? "Over here, girls!" Twilight's voice spoke up quietly. Pinkie and the CMC turns to see the purple unicorn and Shining's head peeking from underneath them. "There you are!" Scootaloo exclaims as the four rush over to the fireplace. "Quick, let us in, let us in!" "We got no time, listen, you four must get the police!" Shining insists to the only four Toonies not in the tunnel. There isn't any time to get Pinkie and te CMC into the tunnel, the Lulamoons will figure out what's going on for sure. "We're in big horsecrap here, you for. Go get the Royal Guard." Twilight said in agreement. "But how are we going to get out?" Scootaloo ask in worry as the four steps back. The fireplace and the door are no longer options, how will they get away? Just then, Pinkie bumps into a broom, causing it to knock some stuff over. Shining calls out, "The window, up there!" She and the CMC turns and saw a window nearby. "All right, there's our exit, let's go." Pinkie whispers to the CMC. Time to get the royal guard and fast! ---------- Twilight and Shining came back down the ladder as the others wait for them. Starlight ask hopefully, "Did you see them? Are they okay?" "Wait, where's Pinkie Pie, Scootaloo and the others?" Scootaloo ask in surprise upon seeing that Pinkie, Apple Bloom, Sweetie and Scootaloo are nowhere in sight. "We send them to get the Royal Guard." Shining explains to the ponies. "You send three mischievous ponies and 1 mare who tells tall tales to the Royal Guard?" Spike ask the siblings skeptically. "You know how crazy that idea sounds?" "At least we got a chance, right?" Fluttershy point out, "Hopefully this works. Pinkie IS the fastest out of all of us when she is completely focused, as evidenced by all the times she has beaten Rainbow Dash to areas she was heading for no matter how high or fast Rainbow tried to fly. "And I hope my sister and her friends can get there as well." Rarity said, worried about her sister. "The Lulamoons are up there, we must get going, come on!" Twilight insists to her friends, not taking any chances that the bad guys may find the opening sooner or later. "Come on, let's go!" Shining insists as he motions the ponies down the passageway, hopefully to make their escape. "Right, Pinkie and the Cutie Mark Crusaders went to get the Royal Guard, let's go!" Starlight insists frantically as the Goonies and the non-members make their escape. ------------ Pinkie helps Sweetie out of the window, she and the CMC got out in time just as the Lulamoon came back into the room. "Dad, what did I tell you? There's nothing to worry about, she's okay." Merluck insists to his father with a smile. "I knew that she wouldn't break those chains." Smaug snaps with a scoff. Pinkie and the CMC took a quick look before rushing off. "Come on, get the other body." Author's note The adventuresa has begun. The Goonies are making their escape while looking for Flint Jones's treasure, but what happens when you combine these ponies (and dragon) with plumbing? Bad idea! Also, Pinkie and the CMC rush off to get the Royal Guard but ran into big trouble. Read, review and suggest. Edited by JusSonic, Sep 2 2012, 07:38 AM.
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Author's note Note to nobodiez, Pinkie isn't with the group when they went through the cavern so I will have to change your suggestion involving Jane Porter around a bit. Chapter 7: Plumbing Madness The Goonies continue walking down the tunnel in hopes to get away from the Lulamoons or find Flint Jones's treasure. Cadance groans, "Ponies, how long have we been talking? It's like we're walking forever. How long is this tunnel?" "No one knows." Spike admits. "Flint Jones and his pals made a lot of these things. Probably a hours worth." Suddenly Soarin' yelps a bit due to Rainbow stepping on one of his hooves by mistake, causing his goggles to fall off his head as a result. The stallion snaps, "Rainbow, you stepped on my hoof! My goggles fell off! Where are they?" A crunch noise is heard. "Huh?" "Err, are these goggles yours?" Starlight ask nervously as he holds up a pair of broken goggles off the floor, giving them to a shocked Soarin'. "Sorry." "Oh man! You broke my goggles! What were you thinking, kid?!" "Calm down, Soarin'. Starlight didn't mean it, it was an accident!" Ben Mare exclaims to Soarin' in concern. "Besides, you can get another pair of goggles once we get back." "These are my original ones, Ben!" Soarin' scowls at Ben Mare in annoyance. "Besides, you're only defending him because he is your girlfriend's brother!" "Soarin'!" "Okay, I'm the oldest so I am in charge." Shining said as he takes charge of the group. "Okay, now..." "Hey Applejack." Twilight said as she and Fluttershy came up to Applejack. "Yeah, Twilight?" Applejack ask Twilight, wondering what she wants. "Any chance you got any light on you or in your devices?" "Right, with so many devices on you..." Fluttershy begins to say thoughtfully to Applejack. "Excuse me, but I'm in charge, you two!" Shining reminds the two ponies with a frown. He turns to Applejack while asking, "Do you got any light on your devices of yours?" "Oh...light? Eeyup, Ah got light! Coming right up!" Applejack ask with a grin as she stood back and push a button on her machine. "Bully blinders!" Two headlights appear on each side of Applejack, making Ben Mare grins as he said, "All right, now we...OUCH!" The stallion said the last part as the headlights are turned on...but they are lightning up too brightly, causing the ponies to cover their eyes in alarm. "Whoa! Ouch, hey!" Spike exclaims while covering his eyes. "Those are bright, AJ!" "Whoa, whoa! What the hay?!" Rarity exclaims as she covers her own eyes, trying to keep herself from getting blind. "I am not ready to use glasses all the time, Applejack!" "Whatcha think? Ah was walking home when two creeps try 'ta jump me!" Applejack exclaims proudly. "Makes good defense, ain't it?" "Ouch! Who did I bumped into?!" Rainbow exclaims, strugglign to see whom she's bumping into. "Oh, sorry, Soarin'. Watch it, Applejack!" "Ouch, my eyes, stop!" Fluttershy whines while covering her eyes painfully. "Watch out, ouch!" Shining exclaims while bumping into someone by mistake. The Goonies kept yelping and protesting. Applejack's lights is getting out of hand here! "Applejack, turn your lights off!" Twilight exclaims to Applejack frantically. "Come on, turn them off!" Starlight exclaims in alarm. Suddenly Applejack notices that her headlights begin to dim until they are off. The Earth pony groans in frustration, "Aw horse feathers. Forgot one little problem: batteries don't last long." "May as well." Spike groans while rubbing his eyes from the blind eye. "Any much longer and I will have to get eye surgery." "Everyone, look, I see a light up ahead!" Twilight exclaims as she saw a light up ahead, much to her excitement. "We could get out that way. Come on!" While The Goonies are walking through the cavern, they start hearing voices. "Are you sure he went this way, Jane?" A boy voice spoke. "Now Ash I'm positive he went this way." A girl's voice, obviously the one named Jane, spoke. A young british male voice complains, "I'm tired." The Goonies make a turn to see to humans and a young colt. The first human is a beautiful young woman that had long golden-brown hair and large aqua-blue eyes. she wears a long yellow dress with a purple necktie and white collar. She also wears it with white gloves, gray stockings and gray ankle boots (with black on the soles, toes and heels). Her name is Jane Porter. The human boy is a well-built teenage boy about fourteen-years-old wearing a backpack. He had black spiky hair, and he wore a red baseball cap (which had a black stripe going down the middle from the back to the front, and there was a green arc over a green dot on the front), a blue hoody with black sleeves and a dark gray hood, along with blue pants and black and dark blue sneakers. This boy was none other than Ash Ketchum. The young colt is a Earth Pony with light coat with dark brown patches. His name is Pipsqueak. Jane Porter, spying the ponies, spoke, "Excuse me, but have you seen a purple man wearing glasses, a waist coat and a pocket watch? "No not really." Twilight said to Jane oddly. Ash gasps and point at something, "Look there he goes!" "Mister Nervous! Wait!" Jane calls out. All the three go rush down another tunnel. Twilight blinks a bit as she said, "Well that was weird." "A wonder what was 'dat about?" Applejack ask while scratching her head a bit. "Oh they are just practicing for if and when JusSonic decides to an Alice In Wonderland with Jane Porter in the role of Alice." Spike spoke up. The other ponies look confused. "What? So Pinkie Pie is the only one to break the first wall?" ------------- Pinkie and the CMC rush through the floor while making their escape. Hopefully they would get back to town and inform Sir Spell Nexus, a headmaster of Twilight's school who is also the sheriff of Ponyville, about what happened. He may have trouble believing the ponies but they got to try. "Oh, I ain't afraid of the dumb, I love the dark, I adorn the dark." Pinkie mumbles as sh and the fillies goe sthrough some tree, one branch hits Apple Bloom. "Ouch! But Ah dislike nature at times, I really dislike it!" Apple Bloom whines a bit. "'Dis is nuts an' we could git into danger along 'de way!" Scootaloo comment, "You knew the job was dangerous when you took it, Apple Bloom." Apple Bloom comment, "Ah guess all those chicken jokes Ah've made are coming back 'ta bite me in 'de flank." Soon the group reach a road, seeing a car passing. Sweetie calls out, "Wait, hang on!" Too late as the vehicle rush right the four. They groan but saw another car coming, forcing them to jump out onto the road while waving to it. "Wait, we're only cute ponies!" Soon the car came to a complete stop, much to the four's delight. They rush over to the driver's side as the one in the shadows spoke up, "Is there a problem, little ponies?" "Yes, yes, any chance you can give me and the Cutie Mark Crusaders a ride!" Pinkie pleads to the driver happily. "My firends and I have ran into these super duper meanie ponies, you heard of them, right? They are the Lulamoons! We just found their hideout! Take us to Sir Spell Nexus's office! We can describe each and every one of them!" "Right." Scootaloo said with a smirk. "One of thm is a dumb female unicorn with a white mane and whose singing is enough to make everypony scream! And..." Suddenly the interior lights are turned on, revealing the driver to the four. To their horror, they saw that it is none other than one pony that the four thought no o run into again. As they back away, Apple Bloom, "Bur...yh..ta..." The driver spoke the funeral song in Parseltongue. It was Trixie who was driving, the four has stopped the Lulamoons' ORV. Pinkie screams as she and the fillies back away. Suddenly Merluck grabs the four ponies from behind, struggling with them as he drags them to the ORV back. Not good, Pinkie and the CMC just got captured! As Trixie sang in Parseltongue softly, Merluck opens the ORV's back and shoves the four in there. Trixie, rolling her eyes, snaps to her brother, "Merluck, come on! Are you crazy? They are only an Earth pony and three filies. Can't you know how to handle those/" Pinkie's group loks around in the back and made a terrified face as they are reunited with an 'old friend'...AKA the dead stallion corpse from the freezer. The four ponies knew what to do: they all scream in terror. ------------- "Look, a lantern! Does it work?" Starlight ask hopefully. The ponies found some sort of lantern on a wall and takes it. Perhaps they can get some light that way. "Hang on, let me try..." Rainbow mumbles as she works on turning the lantern on. The ponies cheers as it lights up. "All right, some light!" Fluttershy cheers on happily. "I love light in the darkness. Yay." As the ponies continue, they saw a bunch of pipes all over, Ben Mare looks around, saying, "Look at all these pipes. They must be connected to the sewer lines above." "Man, there are a lot of pipes here." Soarin' mumbles while looking at the pipes puzzled. "Say, Rainbow, your dad's a plumber, right? Can you tell us what these pipes are all about?" The ponies argue amongst one another as Rainbow check the pipes out, inspecting them. The Pegasus pony remarks, "Let's see...water pipes...gas pipes, drainage...ponies, hang on, be quiet!" The other kept quiet to aloow their friend to continue, "These pipes must lead to something, like a building or a foundation, right? So maybe if we were to hit them hard enough.." Rainbow quickly begins hitting the pipes with her back feet hard, Starlight gets the idea as he exclaims, "Of course! If we make enough noise, someone up there could hear up!" The other ponies and Spike got the same idea. They got some stuff out and begin yelling, hitting the pipes hard in hopes to communicate to someone at the surface. --------------------------------- Unknown to the Ponies, the pipes that they're attacking lead to the Ponyville Country Club, the members are the ones out to destroyed the Goon Docks. At a tennis court, one unicorn named Jet Set is heading to a drinking fountain to get a drink while Upper Crust watch on. Without warning, as Jet Set leans down, the unicorn yelps as the fountain lurchs down like mad as he tries to get a drink. This is due to the trouble that the Goonies are causing down below. The thing goes down further until it springs up, hitting Jet Set and send him crashing into the tennis court fence. ------------- In the stallion's shower, the male ponies are taking showers while greeting one another. One of them, Ace, grabs for a faucet...but suddenly it burst back through the tiles, much to his surprise as they broke. Bruce Mane looks startled before trying to grab for some faucets. But he was too late, they burst back through the tyles. The other stallions watch in shock as every faucet in the shower burst back through the tiles, leaving them shocked and dumbstruck. ---------- Prince Jewel, his father is a member of the country club of course, goes into a stall in a restroom and prepares to do his business while reading 'Alicorn Montly', a magazne, as he whistles to himself. ------------- The pipes begin makign a strange sound back in the tunnel, much to the Goonies', who stop what they're doing, notice as they took a look. They all look concerned, especially Rainbow who has heard this sound before. "Uh oh...not good." Ben Mare mumbles in worry. Something is about to give here. ---------------- Prince Jewel heard a noise making him look up from his reading in confusion. What is that noise? -------------- "REVERSE PRESSURE!" Rainbow screams back in the tunnel in horror. The Goonies yelp as they prepare themselves for the worst. ------------- Before Prince Jewel realizes it, a high-powered jet of water burst out of the toilet that he's on, sending him flying into the ceiling and making a big hole in the progress. The arrogant alicorn was then send packing through he door and broke it before crashing onto the floor. Prince Jewel, terrifies, looks up as water gush all around him. He screams frantically, "Daddy!" ----------------- Something's terrible is about to happen. Twilight screams, "Let's..." "Get out of..." Cadance exclaims in horror too. "Here!" Applejack exclaims in alarm. "Right now!" Soarin' exclaims in alarm. Suddenly, a water pipe breaks, shooting out water like mad against the dirty wall. The ponies yelp as they try to escape the madness that they themselves just cause. Rarity screams, "Oh, my mane!" "Go, go, go on!" Shining exclaims to the other ponies ina larm. Rainbow tries to stop the water but to no prevail, all she's doing is getting herself wet. "Look, another passageway!" Ben Mare calls out as he saw a passageway with a thin dirt wall, with a blaster of water erodes around a boulder. The Goonies took a look, seeing an opening a cave. The gang quickly rush through the opening, making their mad escape from the chaos. Author's note Wow! Looks like the Goonies aren't your natural plumbers, huh? In the next chapter, Pinkie Pie and the CMC are being held by the Lulamoons who want them to tell them everything or else. Also, the Goonies found Flint Jones's first booby trap and discover what may have happened to Lorcan. Read, review and suggest. Nobodiez's suggestion references a fanmake of Alice in Wonderland, Jane Porter is in the role of Alice with Ash Ketchum as an extra. Mr. Nervous is in the role of the White Rabbit. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 3 2012, 01:14 PM Post #12 |
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Author's note Uh no, Greenrob, no, because that would keep Pinkie and the CMC from meeting Derpy and it wouldn't be right. But Golden Heart will show up after they befriended her. Chapter 8: Booby Traps A tomato is put into a blender as a familiar hoof push a button, causing the thing to slice anddice the vegetable like mad. A familiar voice laughs evilly, "We will then put in the hooves...and the rest of the fore legs if we have to...and maybe the rest of the filly bodies!" Sure enough, Pinkie and the CMC are back in the basement of the Lulamoons' hideout, being held by Trixie and Merluck right after the corpse was gotten rid of. Smaug now knows who is snooping around earlier and is going to force the hostages into telling them where the other ponies are. The criminal doesn't want any of them to inform Celestia or the Royal Guard! Once Smaug turns the blender off, he demands, "All right, pink pony, tell us where your friends are at and your filly friends won't be turned into cupcakes the fast way!" The CMC gasps in terror upon hearing that. The villain is threatening to slice them up and make their remains into cupcakes unless Pinkie tells him where the others are! "Oh, yew are sick, sir!" Apple Bloom exclaims in terror. "Even Pinkie Pie an' I wouldn't resort to that mess!" "Don't care! Now Miss Pie, spill!" "All right, all right, they are in the fireplace!" Pinkie exclaims frantically upon motioning to the fireplace. "Don't lie to me!" Smaug snaps at Pinkie, thinking that the pink pony is trying to decieve him. "No, honestly! We went over to Twilight's place and found a map that said that there's buried treasure under this place!" "Right and you better leave us and my friends alone!" Sweetie snaps to the bad guys. "Twilight is the personal student of Princess Celestia and Cadance and Ben Mare are her niece and son!" "Good, more the reason to get them so I can have more hostages to bargain with the princess with!" Smaug laughs evilly. Perhaps holding Twilight, Cadance and Ben Mare hostage can be a good bargaining chip with Celestia. "Oh, nice going!" Scootaloo groans to Sweetie in annoyance for giving Smaug the idea. "Listen here, pink pony, the Great and Powerful Trixie has had enough! No more bullcrap stories, got it?" Trixie snaps to Pinkie angrily. "Right, now tell us everything you know personally right now or this won't end well for your filly friends." Merluck snaps to Pinkie darkly, preparing to drop all three CMC members into the blender and let Smaug push the button at any given moment. "Everything?" Pinkie ask Merluck meekly. "Everything!" "Okay, you win, I'll tell!" Pinkie, taking one hoof out of the ropes that she and the CMC are in, pull a massive case of books out of her mane. Trixie of villains ask in shock, "How did you she managed to hide a case that big in her mane AND get your hoof out of the ropes?" Pinkie answer, "That is none of your blasted business." She pulls out a large book and prepares to read out of it. Pinkie Pie comment, "Okay, when I was six, I used a time machine to give myself an unfair advantage in history class. When I was seven, I stole my Uncle Clyde's toupee and glued it to my face when I was playing Moses in a school play. When I was eight, I accidentally knocked my sister Inkie down the stairs and I blamed it on the dog - but then I remembered we didn't even HAVE a dog." The Cutie Mark Crusaders giggle though the bad guys look dumbstruck upon hearing what's Pinkie telling them. Not what the criminals were going for here! ---------- The Goonies continue moving through the tunnels, Soarin' mumbles, "Oh horse feathers, it's hard to see anything down here. Heck, I am not sure I want to know what I step on." "Me either, disgusting." Rarity remarks with a groan of disgust. "Ponies, look! A lantern!" Twilight exclaims as she saw a lantern nearby and turn it on. "Someone was here before we did!I just know!" "Boy howdy, Ah betcha they're still here now!" Applejack exclaims with a smile. "I sure hope not." Soarin' groans a bit. If anyone is still here, that could be trouble. "Relax, I'm sure that whoever was here could be friendly...I hope..." Starlight assures as the ponies move on through the tunnel. "Look at the cigarettes, someone must've been a heavy smoker!" Rainbow exclaims as she notices the cigarettes on the ground. Of course, no pony else notices as their attention is on a certain alicorn freaking out. "Cadance, are you okay?" Fluttershy ask Cadance in worry. "No, I am not okay! 10 minutes ago, oh dear, oh dear..." Cadance said, freaking out like mad. "Cadance, it's okay, cousin. Everything's going to be all right." Ben Mare said as he tries to calm his scared cousin down. "Oh, a while ago, Jewel was looking at me oddly! I mean, there isn't anything wrong with that, right? I wish I didn't leave him but if I haven't, that creep would stil be looking at me funny!" "Oh boy, she is totally freaked." Shining said in concern. "What's wrong with Cadance?" Spike ask Ben Mare in concern, not liking what Cadance is doing. "My cousin is freaking out here, Cadance has done this so many times." Ben Mare said in worry. "I have seen this happen, it isn't pretty." "Dang, Cadance is losing it like gum losing favor." Applejack said while shaking her head in concern. "Shining, it's going to be okay, seriously." Shining said as he tries to comfort Cadance who is walking ahead of the group, sitll freaked out. "Is she going to be all right?" Starlight ask his sister and the others in worry. "Cadance, it's all right. Cadance?" Cadance doesn't seem to be hearing the others as she continues ranting while freaked out. Applejack calls out, "Dang, calm yerself, girl!" "Shining!" Shining said as he touch Cadance on the shoulder, but this causes her to freak out. "Perhaps I should let him keep looking at me! I got a beautiful body!" Cadance exclaims frantically. "Shining, do I have a beautiful body?!" "Yeah, of course, you look beautiful!" "Yeah, we all agree to that, Darling." Rarity said as the others nod in agreemtn. Cadance of course kept on ranting like mad in terror, "I got a beautiful body, wings and all! But how long before I do got one?! How many years do I have before I became old and fat?! Before my mane fall out...and...I ended up looking like him!!!" Sure enough, Cadance now points a hoof at something that gang stumbled upon. To their horror, it appears to be a skeleton of a dragon that is half buried in the dirty, bugs crawled all over it. Every pony and Spike screams in terror, backing away as Cadance, screaming louder, turns to Shining while screaming, "Shining!" "Oh man! That's sick!" Spike exclaims in sickness and alarm. -------------- The CMC listen on with the criminals as Pinkie continues to confessing while saying, "Then there was this one time, I went to this fat cap to lose weight. But then I end up pigging out on everything to the point that they kicked me otu!" "Wow, 'dis is a good show!" Apple Bloom exclaims with a giggle. "Don't you criminals agree?" Sweetie ask the Lulamoons with a grin. The Lulamoons don't share the CMC's POV. They are listening in, regretting even forcing Pinkie to confess in the first place! ------------ Once the Toonies and the non members calm down, Twilight, Starlight, Shining, Starlight and Rainbow check the skeleton which is undereath the boulder with a broken chain on it. Obviously, it was hanging on from above until it fell and kill this dragon. "Wow, look at him." Shining said as he reaches a hoof over to the skeleton. "Whoa, don't! We don't know what done happened 'ta him!" Applejack exclaims to Shining in worry. The ponies don't know if it was the boulder that did this dragon in or if it was something else. "But...who is it? How did this happen?" Fluttershy ask scared. Twilight and Starlight stood up, frowns as the mare spoke to no one in particular, "So...is this one of your tricks, One-Eyed Flint Jones?" Starlight took a puff hile adding, "It must be Why else did you go through all this trouble if you weren't hiding something?" "Cadance, relax, it's going to be all right." Ben Mare said as he is hugging Cadance who buried her head in his shoulder, still freaking out about how she's acting and what she herself just saw. "Right, we can get through this okay." Soarin' insists, helping Ben Mare in calming Cadance down. "I know, but I'm so scared! I reall am!" Cadance exclaims while crying a bit. "It's okay, Cadance, Twilight and her friends will get us out of here...I hope." Ben Mare said to his cousin with a nod. "Well, 'dis skeleton comforts it, he's done dead all right." Applejack said grimly as the Goonies and Shining kept looking at skeleton. "Ah betcha 'dat's Lorcan." "What?" Spike ask Applejack, shocked by what the Earth pony is suggesting. "Wait, what?" Twilight ask in worry and alarm, not liking what her friend is suggesting. "Who?" Rainbow ask Applejack a bit puzzled. "Dang nab it, don't yew remember? Fro' de news article we read about in 'de attic, Spike's brother!" Applejack exclaims with a frown, reminding her friends of the article that the Goonies read about in the article. "I know what you mean, I brought it alone!" Spike exclaims as he holds up a familiar newspaper article, sighing sadly at Lorcan's article. "You still reading that article Spike?" Starlight ask Spike in surprise. "Hey! It's my only link to the brother who left me!" "Anywho, Lorcan's 'de last person 'ta come looking fer 'de rich stuff. He went in but never came back out." Applejack explains to her friends in concern. "O' course, 'dat happened a while ago." "Oh Celestia, if Lorcan's expert and didn't make it out, what chance that we have of doing so ourselves?!" Rarity asks in terror and alarm. "We could be shuck here forever!" "Not sure." Shining said, even the stallion has no answer as to how to get himself and everyone else out of here. Fluttershy ask Twilight, "Can't you teleport all of us out of here?" Twilight admit, "I'm trying, but this cave seems to be magically-shielded." "Relax, don't worry." Soarin' said with a nod. At least he and Ben Mare has succeeded in calming Cadance down a bit. "Really?" Cadance ask while sniffing a bit. "Yes, we're sure, okay. I'm going to see how the others are doing, okay?" Ben Mare spoke as he leaves to check out Twilight's group is doing with the corpses. "You two sure?" "Yeah, we both are." Soarin' said to Cadance with a smile as he pats her on the back. "Thanks, I'm fine now. So how are we going to get out?" Cadance ask Soarin', now calm down and getting down to the subject of getting out of these caves. "Twilight, what's your research on this dragon here?" Ben Mare ask his crush as he came over to inspect the skeleton remains, wondering whom they once belong to. "According to Applejack, the skeleton is that of Lorcan, Spike's missing brother who went to find the treasure of Flint Jones years ago." Twilight explains to Ben Mare. "No, this can't be Lorcan, it just can't!" Spike said worried. This can't be his missing brother, could it? "Ah know it's him, Ah read 'de article!" Applejack insists frantically. "But dragons can't be killed easily...even by boulders!" "Well, how will we be sure whom the skeleton is?" Rarity ask in concern. How will the ponies see if this skeleton's really Lorcan or not? "I think I saw a wallet on this skeleton. Rainbow, can you get his wallet?" Shining ask Rainbow though the Pegasus pony is too scared to even go near the skeletn remains. "I ain't touching! Fluttershy?" Rainbow ask Fluttershy, wanting her to check the skeleton's wallet. "Eeep! I don't want to it! Violating the dead remains is scary!" Fluttershy exclaims to Rainbow meekly. Starlight took out an old sport card on the body and look at it, asking, "Mule Gerrig?" "You get it, Twilight! Please?" "Oh geez." Shining said with a groan of disbelief. "Go ahead, Twi, git it already!" Applejack insists to Twilight frantically. "Go on, Twilight, get his wallet." Ben Mare motions to Twilight to go ahead and get the wallet from the skeleton. "May as well see if this skeleton is really Lorcan or not." Twilight uses her magic to get a wallet from the skeleton's pockets. The mare looks inside and found some sort of identify. The pony frowns grimly as she shows the ID, announcing, "The body...is Lorcan." "What? No..." Spike whispers in shock and sadness. That dragon corpse...is really his brother Lorcan? "See, told yew!" Applejack insists to her friends who look at the ID, shaking their heads in shock and sadness. Lorcan has been killed by one of Flint Jones's booy traps. "Oh dear, oh dear, we're doomed!" Fluttershy whimpers sadly. If Lorcan, who is an expert dragon, got killed while trying to find the rich stuff, what's the odds that the Goonies can do so without any dead?' "You know, it's funny." Ben Mare said as he inspect the skeleton carefully while looking at the article that Spike is holding. "It usually take a lot of years for a dragon's body to decay...but Lorcan seems to have disappear sometime ago." "So you're saying that this body isn't Lorcan's?" Rarity ask Ben Mare curiously. "Does that mean that my brother isn't dead?" Spike ask, wiping off the tears off his own eyes. If that's the case, where is Lorcan then? "Spike, we won't know until it's official." Starlight said as he search the body for anything for the Goonies can use. The colt found a few things, holding up some candles. "Hey, I found some candles!" "Yeehaw! Ah will take them! Ah am sure Lorcan or whoever 'dis dragon is won't mind!" Applejack laughs as she takes the candles. Unknown to the ponies, one of them is labeled 'dyynamite', but not one of them notice. "Sure, the dragon's dead, may as well take what we can, right?" Rainbow remarks to Applejack, making a funny joke out of the situation. "Oh, right, 'dat's funny." Applejack got up and head back the way that the Goonies came from. Rarity puzzled ask, "Applejack, where are you going?" "Setting boody traps." Applejack explains to Rarity with a nod. "Don't you mean 'booby traps'?" Starlight ask Applejack puzzled. "How ironic, now Starlight is correcting Applejack. Talk about your role reversal." Spike jokes a bit, chuckling at his own joke though the ponies just roll their eyes at this. "Dang nab it, 'dat's what Ah said, Starlight!" Applejack snaps to Starlight at the role reversal. "Ah am doing so in case o' any vermin following us like 'de Lulamoons. 'Dat way, we will know 'dat they're coming." "Good idea." Twilight said with a nod. After all, the ponies must take precautions in case of trouble like the Lulamoons if Pinkie and the CMC didn't get the Royal Guard by then. "Right, get it done and hurry." Shining said with a nod. "Go on, hurry." Starlight said while agreeing with his older brother for Applejack to hurry up. Applejack trots past Soarin' and Cadance, the Wonderbolt ask puzzled, "Applejack, what are you doing?" "Uh, you mean 'booby traps', right?" "Argh, that's what Ah said! Ugh, some ponies!" As Applejack trots off, Cadance sighs as she buries her face in Soarin's shoulder. The Wonderbolt does his best to comfort her. Ben Mare blinks a bit as he saw something on the corpse, saying, "Hey, Twilight! Look what I found!" "What is it?" Twilight asks as she saw what Ben Mare just saw: a large key with a pony skull on top. There are triangular holes representing the eyes and nose. "I wonder if this is the key to Flint Jones that Lorcan mentioned in the newspaper article." Fluttershy said thoughtfully. "It must be, the skeleton thing is supposed to look like Flint Jones!" Spike laughs as he looks at the newspaper article while glancing at the skeleton thing. "My brother must've left it here for us or something!" "If he's still alive." Rainbow remarks, making Spike sighs a bit. "Sorry, but until we find out otherwise, we will have to presume that your bro bit the dust." "Right, I'd take that." Starlight said with a nod, motioning Rainbow to give him the skeleton key. Rainbow nods as she gives the skeleton key to Starlight. But as the unicorn took it to ake a better look, it turns out that the cord that is attached to the key is attached to something else: the neck. The Goonies screams as Starlight ends up causing the dragon's head to come off the dead owner. Twilight exclaims as she looks at what her problem is holding., "Horse feathers!" "Oh, oh, don't touch it, don't touch it!" Rainbow exclaims frantically while looking away from the dead corpse's head. "Put it back, put it back, put it back!" Rarity and Flutterhy both cry at once. Shining quickly put the head back into place. The dead should at least have some dignity left. "Oh dear, oh goodness!" "Okay, ponies, now we've got..." Twilight stops upon seeing something concealed by the sand. She begins to pull it out, revealing the object to be a wire. "Hey, everyone! Did you see what I found?" "Uh, Twilight?" Ben Mare ask Twilight, a bit worried by what she's doing. "Perhaps we should leave that alone. Because if this boulder is one of Flint Jone's traps, then..." But Ben's warning came too late: Twilight pulls the wire a little hard and a noise is heard, followng by something sharp being cut. The purple unicorn drops the wire in horror. "Oh no!" Starlight yelps in alarm. His sister has off one of One-Eyed Flint Jones's booby traps! The ponies look up to see a scythe swinging back and forth, cutting at the chains holding the boulders in place overhead! That doesn't look good! "Ponies, don't move...don't move..." Twilight said in precaution then looks up to see Cadance, Soarin' and Applejack, the Earth pony is furthe down the tunnel. "You three back dare, don't move, don't move!" "Huh?" Applejack ask puzzled as she turns around after setting her booby traps. "Don't move, stay where you are!" Starlight exclaims to Applejack, Cadance and Soarin'in alarm. "We set off a booby trap, don't move!" Applejack looks up, gasping as she saw the boulders hanging over there, they are close to breaking off and crush onto anyone who is under them! The Earth pony screams as she rush to her friends like mad. "Oh horse feathers!" Shining exclaims in alarm, so much for the ponies holding still. "Let's get out of here!" Soarin' screams as he and Cadance saw the boulder and begins galloping/flying out of here. "Forget the freezing, run!" Spike screams in alarm. Most of the gang rush over to a ledge nearby, jumping into it for safely. Applejack trips and fell to the ground. The pony looks up to see a boulder about to be cut loose from the ceiling. She screams, "Horse apples!" Applejack ot back up in time and gallops like crazy. Soon a boulder broke free, hitting the ground hard. The Earth pony continue galloping, barely dodging the boulder that landed behind herself. She jumps into the small ledge in time as more boulders fall in sequence. "The lantern!" Starlight, remembering the lantern, screams as he jumps out to go back for it. "Starlight, are you crazy?! Come back!" Shining exclaims in alarm. Even if his brother was a pain, he and Twilight cares for too much and doesn't want to lose him! "Forget the lantern, come back!" Twilight cries out to her little brother frantically. Starlight quickly grabs the lantern and gallops back into the ledge, jumping in the nick of time as the last boulder crashed to where he was a while ago. "Man, that was a close one!" Ben Mre exclaims with a sigh. "You okay, Starlight." "I am, thanks." Starlight said with a sigh then yelps as his siblings hug him tightly. "Whoa!" "Don't do that again, that was a close one!" Shining groans a bit as he hugs his little brother. "Yeah, Ah know." Applejack said as she calms down or trying to anyway. "Don't do that again, Starlight." Twilight said to Starlight in worry and sadness. "I...I don't know what would happen if I were to lose you, little brother." "Oh, I'm not having any fun at all." Fluttershy whines a bit, freaked out from the near death experience. "I know, same here." Rarity whimpers a bit as some of the ponies sigh in relief. They have survived the first of Flint Jones's booby traps but there will be more to come. "Wait, hang on." Shining said as he heard a noise nearby, making him to see that it's coming from a rock that is covering something. The stallion came over to get a better hearing. "Somepony's down there, listen." "Maybe it's a way out." Cadance said hopefully. "Maybe it's the Lulamoons." Soarin' said in worry. "Maybe Pinkie, mah sister an' their friends has found the Royal Guard." Applejack said hopefully. "Maybe it's another one of Flint Jones's booby traps." Rainbow said in worry. "Well, only one way to find out." Spike said as Shining begins to move the rock, which isn't heavy, as he roll it aside. The dragon gulps while saying, "Though I'm scared of the answer. "Uh, Shining? Celestia put that rock there for a reason." Soarin' said, getting a bit worried. "I don't think you should...I don't think..." "Hello?" Shining calls out into the darkness of the cave that he just found. Suddenly noises of squeaking are heard. That doesn't sound good. Suddenly the ponies and dragon screams as flying creatures flew out of the cave, screeching like mad while heading to them. It's bats! Everyone yell as they wave their hooves or claws to keep them away. "Whoa, git back, git back, little rats wit' wings!" Applejack exclaims while waving at the bats with her hooves. "Eek, get back, get back!" Fluttershy screams as she run around, trying to keep the bats away from her. "Get them off, get away!" Shining exclaims while waving the bats away from her. "Whoa, Shining, Ben, Cadance, they're in my mane!" Twilight screams as she uses her magic to keep the bats away from my mane. "Get away from my mane!" "Rabies, rabies! They're going to give me rabies! ARGH!" Rarity screams as she uses her own magic to get rid of the bats. "Stay away from Rarity!" Spike screams as he swipes the bats away from Rarity in hopes to save her from them. "Go move, get back, move!" Ben Mare orders frantically as more of those bats kept on flying right at the ponies and dragon right out of the same cave that Shining has opening. "Rabies, they're going to give me rabies!" Rarity screams in terror some more. "Oh grow up!" Rainbow groans in annoyance while swiping at the bats frantically. --------------- Smaug and Merluck frowns as Pinkie kept confessing what she did back at the basement. In fact, the only ponies who are entertained by her is of course Trixie ad the CMC, they are enjoying her stories and not to where the rest of the Goonies, members or non, are at. "But the worst part that I did...was I mixed a bunch of stuff to make some vomit at Sugarcube Corner...then went to the movies later on that night, hiding the stuff in my mane." Pinkie explains to those listening. "Then I go up to the balcony and made a noise like this." Pinkie then makes a noise as if she's going to puke. Scootaloo gags a bit while saying, "Gross!" "Yeah, 'dat's sick." Apple Bloom remarks in agreement. "Okay, after I did that, I dumped the stuff over the side onto the audience and then..." Pinkie cringes a bit then she continues, "Now this next part is both horrible and very sickening. Every pony in the theater begin to get sick and threw up all over. I got to admit, I felt pretty bad about nothing that." "Oh, I was there. Rarity threw up all over her date." Sweetie giggles a bit. "That was funny actually." "Boy, father, I am starting to like this pink pony." Trixie chuckles in amusement. "We should keep her around more often." "Hit puree!" Smaug exclaims, having enough. Merluck then turns the blender on then he and Trixie grabs the CMC and held them forcefully to the machine, causng the fillies to scream in terror. "No! I wanna live! I wanna sing! I wanna scoot!" The trio of fillies scream at once as Smaug and Merluck held them closer to the bleder. Pinkie struggles in Trixie's hold as she triesto escape to help her friends. "No! Don't do it, leave them alone!" Pinkie excmalims frantically to Smaug and Merluck. Her friends are about to get turned into cupcakes and she can't do a thing about it! "Well, do we get the truth or does your friends get turned into cupcakes?!" Smaug demands angrily to Pinkie to tell him and his kids the truth or it's all over for the CMC. "Please, I told you the truth!" "Ha! Tell us the real truth, NOW!" Just when it looks like it's all over for the Cutie Mark Crusaders, something unexpected happen: the fireplace explodes, alarming the ones in the room. They turn and yelps as a bunch of rats flew right into the room from out of nowhere! "What the hay is that?!" Smaug exclaims in alarm as he dodges a bat comign at him. "The fireplace blew up! That pink pony is right, there is a tunnel under there!" Merluck screams in alarm as he looks to the fireplace. Pinkie is right, there is a secret passageway after all! The unicorn yelps as he uses his magic to keep the bats away from him. "The mane, watch the mane! Those things are going for it!" "Watch your veins, father, careful!" Trixie screams as she uses her own magic to shoo the bats away from herself. As the crooks are distracted, Pinkie turns to the fireplace, screaming, "Twilight, ponies, if you can all hear me, run! Run! They're coming after you!!" Author's note The Goonies escape one of Flint Jones's traps but now the criminals has found out about the tunnel! In the next chapter, the ponies found a cave full of coins that are under a well. And when they found a way out, will the Goonies take it or will they continue looking for Flint Jones's treasure? Sweetie: And what about us? Me: Also, Pinkie and the CMC finally meets the pony/dragon hybrid known as Derpy Hooves! Is she friendly? Read, review and suggest! |
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| JusSonic | Sep 4 2012, 10:04 PM Post #13 |
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Chapter 9: The Wishing Well The Goonies has escaped at the bats, continuing their journey throughout the tunnels. Ben Mare comments, "Luckily those bats left though I got a bad feeling as to which direction they're going." "We should be away from any chance of the Lulamoons chasing us, Ben." Fluttershy said to Ben Mare with a nod. "Yew think if we done go down like 'dis, we could reach Neighna?" Applejack ask her friends thoughtfully. "Applejack, that isn't how it works." Rarity said to Applejack with an annoyed frown. "Oh man, my hooves are killing me here." Soarin' said with a groan, getting tired from all the trotting that he was doing. "This is why I prefer flying than this." "We could always visited some o' mah relatives who grow apples there." Applejack said with a chuckle. Starlight glances at Cadance who is still freaked by the situation. The colt spoke up, "Cadance, this could get dangerous. Perhaps you better hold my hoof.." "Thank you." Cadance sighs as she takes Starlight's hoof. The pony couldn't help but blush a bit. The alicorn is sure beautiful, it's a wonder Shining loves her. Starlight wonders what would happened if he hasn't or if the colt himself is older. "Twilight, take my hoof." Ben Mare said as he and Twilight held hooves. "I will protect you." "Thanks." Twilight said to Ben Mare gently. "You are always there for me..." Just then the gang took a look around the bend, their eyes became wide upon seeing something. Twilight, Ben, Starlight and Cadance are exclaim at once, "Oh wow!" "YEEHAW!" Applejack exclaims as the group enters another cave. "It's a huge waterfall, look!" Twilight squeals in delight. The ponies enter a shallow pond, going through a waterfall. They saw shiny stuff all over the place. After a closer look, it turns out that the shiny stuff is actually bits, lots of it. "Wow." Spike said in amazement. "Oh my goodness, it's a huge piggy bank!" Applejack squeals excitedly. "We found it, we're rich, I don't believe it!" Cadance exclaims as the heroes run through the pool. They found Flint Jones's treasure at last! "Yes, yes, we found it, we found Flint Jones's treasure!" Twilight exclaims with an eager smile. This is a lot of bits to definitely save the Goon Docks. "Oh yeah, there is a lot of gold all over the place!" Shining exclaims as the gang begins taking bits and such like mad. This is so incredible. "Odd." Spike said, looking at the bits puzzled. "We only made it through one booby trap. You would've thought that Flint made more than that." "Yeah, something isn't right here." Ben Mare said, getting suspicious like Spike is. Finding Flint Jones's treasure can't be this easy, can it? "All right, we finally we did it!" Rainbow exclaims while taking some bits that are in the water. "Hey, hold 'dis, will ya Starlight?" Applejack ask Starlight as she gave the lantern to Starlight. "Rich stuff, yeah!" Ben Mare however check out some of the bits, getting more suspsicous. Something odd about these coins. The stallion spoke to Rainbow, "Rainbow, out of curiosity, what year was the map made again?" "Hay if I know. Probably a couple of years before...." Rainbow said, glancing at the bits in curiosity. Something is odd about these bits when one thinks about it. "Wow." Applejack said in amazement yet puzzled while glancing at the bits now. "President Lincolt...George Ponyington...uh...Muletin Sheen." "Muletin Sheen?!" Cadance, Soarin' and Spike exclaims in shock and confusion as the Wonderbolt swipe the bit from Soarin' that said to have 'Muletin Sheen' on it for a closer look. "Ugh! That's President Buffalendy you idiot!" Soarin' scowls at Rainbow in annoyance while throwing the bit at her. "Oh, is there a difference?!" Rainbow snaps at Soarin' in annoyance. "I mean, Mueltin played Buffalendy once!" "Oh, very nice, Rainbow Dash. I'm glad that you're using your brain!" "At least I have a brain!" "Horse feathers, you are so stupid, Rainbow!" Soarin' snaps to Rainbow in frustration. "Oh yeah?" Rainbow asks Soarin' suspiciously. "Yes!" The two arguing Pegasus ponies blushes a bit, the others can tell how perfect Rainbow and Soarin' are for each other. The Wonderbolt, noticing the looks, quickly yell at the mare, "Shut up!" "Wait a minute. I just realize something: I don't think this is cold at all." Fluttershy said in realization. Shining pauses a hole in the ceiling, trotting over to take a look up it. "Yes, this must be the bottom of a wishing well!" Rarity exclaims, coming to the same conclsuion as her friend. "Ponies, look! We must be at the bottom of the Old Pony Berry Wishing Well!" Shining exclaims in surprise, seeing a bucket at the top. "Oh, I knew that it wouldn't be this easy to find the treasure after one booby trap." Spike said in realization. The dragon and Ben Mare's suspicions were correct about the bits not being Flint Jones's treasure at all. "You know, my parents told me that if you ever threw your bits into this well, it turns into your wish." Cadance said in disappointment in looking down. "I can't believe after so many years..." "Cadance, I'm sure your parents didn't mean to, they were trying to help you with your dreams." Ben Mare said to Cadane softly. "Ben's right, you can help your wishes by making them come true yourself." Twilight said in agreement, making Cadance smile a bit by the words of encouragement. Some of the ponies gather coins around, Starlight spoke up, "Now, I'd take two bits, you take that one. I'll take all your bits and..." "Hold it, why should you get the most bits?" Rarity ask Starlight with a pouty look on her face. "Not fair, dawg! Let's done try it simply!" Applejack scowls to Starlight. "Hey, stop, what are you doing?" Soarin' ask, giving a disapproval look to the other ponies while trotting over, stopping what they are doing. "Well, we are trying to divide our money." Fluttershy said meekly. "Is that right?" "No! You can't do this!" "An' why not?" Applejack ask Soarin' puzzled. "Because this is somepony's wishes, somepony else's dreams!" Soarin' exclaims in agreement. "He's right." Twilight said with a sigh while trotting over to the ponies. "It wouldn't be right if we take ponies' wishes and dreams away, even if they have to do them themselves to make the dreams come true." "Yeah, well, you want to know something?" Rainbow snaps as she held up a bit. "This bit right here...this was my wish, my dream! And it never came true. So I'm taking it back! I'm taking them all back." With that, Rainbow dives into the pool to look or more of her 'dreams and wishes'. Starlight sighs as he looks around, speaking to Flint Jones (although the pirate isn't around), "Come on, One-Eyed Flint Jones! What does this place got to do with the map? Is this another one of your tricks?" ------------- The Lulamoons think up their next plan while sitting around back at the restaurant eating ice cream. They of course are planning on going after the Goonies to deal with and held hostage...and maybe get their hooves on the treasure of One-Eyed Flint Jones. Smaug sure wants to find it, that's for sure! "Father, perhaps we should keep the pink one and the fillies alive...you know in case the Earth pony ins't lying." Trixie suggests while motioning to Pinkie Pie and the CMC, the pink one is looking at the ice cream hopefully. "We could always do with more hostages." "Yes, good idea, gad to see that you got one for once." Smaug said thoughtfully. In case that Pinkie Pie isn't lying about the treasure, the villains coul always uses more hostages. "Put them in with your adopted sister." "Okay." Trixie said with a nod. Pinkie and the CMC look worried. Smaug must be preferring to that creature in the other room! The female unicorn put her ice cream down while snapping, "All right, come you four!" "Hey, go easy!" Scootaloo snaps as Trixie uses her magic to pull the four to their hooves. Suddenly something fell right off of Pinkie's person and onto the floor. It's doubloon that Starlight found earlier, which he gave to his friend for safe keeping...and Trixie herself just notice it. "What's this? Did you drop something?" "What did she drop?" Smaug asks puzzled upon seeing the doubloon. Merluck leans down to take the doubloon with his sister taking a look. Both siblings however yelps in pain as Merluck pulls up too quickly, causing both o them to hit heads. "What's that, a cracker jack prize?" "Holy Equestria!" Merluck gasps in amazement as he glances at the doubloon, seeing the year printed on it. "We found it with the map, it has something to do with the buried treasure!" Pinkie snaps as she tries to get the doubloon back from Merluck. "Treasure? So there's really one?" Trixie ask in amazement, pushing Pinkie and the CMC away to get a closer look at the thing. "Trixie, look! Check out the date on this thing!" Merluck exclaims amazed as Trixie takes the doubloom from ehr brother while rubbing the surface. "Father, this is a real doubloon! This proves that the treasure you wanted to find as well is on it!" "Give that back, come on!" Sweetie protests to the criminals in worry. "Let me see that!" Smaug snaps as he takes the doubloon from Trixie, looking at it and smirks. "Yes, the treasure is real! I knew it! There's more where that came from...as well as the sword that I was also planning on finding!" "Told ya so." Pinkie spoke up. The crooks and CMC saw that the Earth pony helping herself to Trixie's ice cream. "See? You all never believe me. I told you that there's going to be buried..." Trixie frowns as she takes the ice cream container from Pinkie. The pony shrugs as she tries to lick the ice cream still on the spoon that the Pinkie still has. Trixie of course takes tht away as well, making her groan in disappointment. Not fair! -------------- Prince Jewel sighs as he hangs around in the Old Pony Berry Park with his pals Slimmy Lenny and Thomas the Rat. The alicorn has recovered from the toilet disaster back at the Country Club, the place has to be shut down until the source of the plumbing problems is discovered. The three ponies hang around the well, Slimmy ask his boss, "So Jewel, how far have you gone with Cadance?" "Right, come on, all the way?" Thomas ask Prince Jewel with a devilish smile as he and his pal laughs a bit. "Honestly, you two dumb ponies are so immature." Prince Jewel remarks to his goons, rolling his eyes in annoyance. "Give us the details, Prince Jewel!" "Yeah, come on!" Slimmy said, eager for the details from Prince Jewel. Prince Jewel shrugs, well, they pull his hoof. The alicorn remarks, "I will say it, I didn't make it with Cadance yet...and I stress on the word 'yet'." The alicorn chuckles while tossing the bit into the well. Unknown to Prince Jewel, the bit falls downward into the well's bottom, landing on the rocks in the underground cavern where the Goonies are still at. Shining happens to be sitting nearby when it happened. "What the..." Shining ask in surprise. The others glance over as he looks upward. "I think somepony is up there." Rarity said in surprise. Someone is on the surface right now...perhaps he or she could help the ponies! Back up, Slimmy ask Prince Jewel, "So what did you wish for...if you don't mind me by asking?" "To make it with Cadance of course." Prince Jewel remarks, chuckling with his pals. But as if by some unknown force, his bit flew out of the well, landing in his open hoof. The ponies look confused by this. That isn't supposed to happen! Prince Jewel peeks into the well, demanding, "Hey! Who's down there?!" At the bottom of the well, Soarin' looks surprise as he exclaims, "It's Jewel!" "Ponies, it's Jewel!" Applejack exclaims eagerly to her friends as they rush over to the hole in excitement. "Yes, he can help us!" Fluttershy exclaims as the ponies cheer wildly. For once, they are happy to see the alicorn creep. "You want help from the same guy who hassle us many times before as well as almost kill Soarin' in that incident earlier?" Spike ask the ponies skeptically, disbelief that the ponies would want Prince Jewel's help despite what happened before. "Well, better him than the Lulamoons, right?" The ponies calls out excitedly. Back up above, Prince Jewel's goons said at once, "That sounds like Cadance." They and Prince Jewel laughs in amazement as they realize that Cadance is down the well. "Cadance, is that you?" Prince Jewel ask as he looks down the well, seeing Cadance at the well's bottom as well. "Yes, of course, it's me!" Cadance exclaims eagerly. "We're stuck down here, can you git us a bucket?" "What are you all doing at the bottom of the well?" "Come on, don't ask questions! Just bring down the bucket, come on!" Ben Mare point out to Prince Jewel, "Cadance doesn't REALLY need that bucket. She IS an alicorn too, after all, AND can fly." Prince Jewel comment, "Yeah, but she will still appreciate me saving her the trouble. However, all the others down there except for Soarin', Ben (who can, for some reason, fly despite being an Earth pony) and Rainbow Dash are in pretty deep doo-doo, though." The jerk finish with a snicker, his pals laugh in amusement. "I guess it's true what they say, boys. Wishes do come true." ------------- "Alright Mahodies, follow me!" Arrow Flynn's character in a movie exclaims on TV. The Lulamoons took Pinkie Pie and the CMC into tthe same room where their adopted sister is at, she is watching the movie right now. "Okay, we got you some food, eat up much. Here you go." Trixie said, giving her chained up adopted sister some food for her to eat while the Lulamoons are busy with their evil task. "Okay, is his tight?" Merluck asks the prisoners as he finish tying them all up in a chair to make sure that not one of them, even Pinkie Pie, can slip out. "Yeah, a bit tight." Apple Bloom cringes a bit nervously. "I warn all four of you. Try to escape and I will break your legs...or the fillies' necks, got it?" Pinkie and her friends gulp nervously. Merluck sounds seriously in his threat! Trixie glances at the creature, who is too close to the TV, making her say, "You are too close to the TV. You will screw up your enima more than usual." The sister growls at Trixie, swiping at her. Merluck snaps at his moving sister, "Come on, leave her alone, Trixie!" "Hey, come on! Trixie didn't do anything to her!" "Hare Krishna, Hare Krishna, hare Krishna!" The Lulamoon siblings leave the room, satisfied that Pinkie and the CMC won't try to escape anytime soon, leaving them alone wiht the creature. Sweetie whines, "Come on, let us go!" "Yeah, we will tell our sisters!" Scootaloo exclaims angrily to the bad guys who didn't bother to come back to do what the ponies requested. The movie now shows a pony, using a knife to slide down a sal to avoid breaking himself. The four ponies turn and saw the creature, who didn't seem to notice them. The CMC gulp a bit, looking worried then smiles nervously. Perhaps this Pegasus pony is harmless...maybe they could be nice to her. "Hey there, miss!" Pinkie greets the Pegasus pony. "My name is Pinkamena Diane Pie, but my pony friends call me Pinkie Pie!" The creature turns to Pinkie, allowing her and the CMC to get a first glance at the adopted sister. It is a gray-coated Pegasus pony with a yellow mane and bubbles for a cutie mark. Oddly enough, this sid pony has dragon scales, claws on her hooves and some fangs are in her mouth. She has gradient from pale, light grayish apple green to moderate gamboge eyes which appears to be cross-eyed. Her name is Derpy Hooves, Merluck found and captured her as a young filly many years ago. Since she was an orphan and no one would be looking for her. Smaug had decided to use her for his experiments, which made her into a half pony/half Night Fury creature. Derpy roars at the four causing them to yelp in fear. When she does so aain, Pinkie and her friends scream, hobbling in their chairs while yelling, "Help! Get us out of here, help!" Derpy, surprisingly, looks at the four ponies and laughs happily, hobbling in her chair as well like a little filly. What they are doing is so funny to her! ---------------- The Lulamoon goes over to the tunnel entrance at the fireplace, using their horns to glow to help see better once they get down there. Trixie peeks into the entrance while saying, "Father, we don't know what could be down there. For all we know, there could be something unnatural." "Let's not stall! Those ponies will get away, now get down there!" Smaug orders eagerly, wanting to find both those ponies, the treasure and the magic sword he was looking forward to. "Looks deep down there." Merluck comments, shining his horn light down the entrance. "Right." Trixie said, agreeing with her brother. "Trixie, you go first." Smaug orders his daughter, motioning the blue unicorn down the tunnel. "You must be mad! The Great and Powerful Trixie shouldn't go down there! Why, it could be dangerous and..." Smaug uses his magic to make a gun appear, pointing it at Trixie while snapping, "Get going!" "Right, can't argue with that, father." Trixie said nervously, climbing down into the tunnel. The mare knows that it's better not to argue with Smaug when he has a gun pointing at something, especially at his own kids! -------------------------- The Goonies, members or none, cheer as Prince Jewel and his pals begin lowering the bucket into the well. This is great, they can finally escape this madness! "Throw some money too, will ya Jewel?" Applejack jokes a bit eagerly. "All right, Jewel, keep going, I can see it!" Shining exclaims with a smile as the bucket is getting closer to the Goonies. "Oh my, we can finally go home." Fluttershy saidh with a sigh. She saw the bucket reaching the bottom. The mare is about to get it while saying, "All right if I go in first? Because if one of you wants to go first..." "Fluttershy, I am in charge, remember? I'm the oldest, so I called the shots. Cadance will go first, I go second. Soarin', Twilight and Starlihg will go third, Applejack will go forth..." "I don't know, Ben." Spike said as he and Ben Mare stood in the pool while glancing at the scene. "I still don't trust that Jewel jerk. How do we know that he won't take Cadance and leave us down here?" "I never trusted Jewel for a moment." Ben Mare remarks with a groan as he watch his cousin get into the bucket, beginning to hope the rope. The stallion notices Twilight and Starlight, doing some thinking. "Twilight, Starlight?" "Lorcan...Lorcan..." Twilight mumbles a bit as she begins to whisper, coming to the same conclusion as her brother. "What? Why are you saying my brother's name for?" Spike ask puzzled. Twilight and Starlight turns around, both are excited, getting the others' attention as the mare begins to shout to them. "Lorcan! Don't you all understand? Lorcan's a pro, he didn't make it this far! See how far we came? We still got a chance!" "A chance at what? Getting killed, Twilight?" Cadance snaps to Twilight angrily. The pink alicorn only came into this tunnel to escape the Lulamoons, not to risk her life! "If this goes on, one of us could get hurt...even worst." "I gotta agree with Cadance here." Rarity said with a sigh. "Anyway, we must get the Royal Guard." "How do we know that Pinkie and the Cutie Mark Crusaders didn't got the Royal Guard already?" Starlight points out to Cadance. For all the ponies know, Pinkie and the CMC may have gotten the Royal Guard already. "Maybe they are dead!" Cadance exclaims angrily and without some hope. "Hey, watch what yew suggest about mah sister an' her friends!" Applejack snaps to Cadance, upset that the alicorn would even suggest that Apple Bloom could be dead along with Sweetie, Scootaloo and Pinkie Pie. Even Rarity and Rainbow doesn't like what Cadance is suggesting. "Don't say that, never say 'dead'! Goonies never say die!" Twilight protests to Cadance angrily. "I am not a Goonie. I just want to go home." Cadance points out, getting scared and sad. "Oh yeah. Cadance, Soarin' and I are never Goonies, are we?" Ben Mare ask Twilight with a sad sigh. "Though I wish I can be one." "Maybe so...but still!" Twilight said, realizing the same fact as Ben Mare. But the purple unicorn can't allowed her friends to up and leave their adventure! It's time that she and Starlight reminds their friends and siblings. "Still, don't you realize...it will be all over unless we do something! The next time we see sky, it will be over another town. The next time you take a test, it will be in some other school." Starlight continues, "Our parents...they want what's best for us. But right now, they themselves must do what's best for them, because it's their time. Their time,up there. Down here, it's our time, our time down here!" "Once we ride up Jewel's bucket, it's all over." Starlight shakes the bucket as he implies it to be the easy way out. The other ponies look at each other, thinking about what Twilight and Starlight just pointed out. They are right. Should the ponies abandoned their adventure now, their homes and everything that they cherished...will be gone forever and the gang will never see one another. Of course, should the ponies move on, they could get killed. "It's your choice. Choose wisely, my little ponies." Ben Mare said as Starlight take a puff from his aspirator. It's up to the ponies as to what to do now... -------------------------- Prince Jewel and his pals laughs while they begin to pull the bucket to the top o the well via rope. Spike and Ben Mare's suspections are right: the jerk of an alicorn doesn't want to save the others. He's going to take Cadance and abandoned the rest of the Goonies, even Soarin' and Ben Mare! But to the four's surprise and shock, something appears once the bucket got to the top but it isn't Cadance. It's her jacket that has Prince Jewel's name right on it. The pink alicorn decides not to bother and put that there as if slapping the jerk right in the face. Slimmy and Lenny back away nervously as their boss took the jacket, looking furious. He's going to explode at any given moment. And sure enough, Prince Jewel looks down the well in anger and betrayl whie screaming, "Cadance! You Goonie!" The last word 'Goonie' echoes throughout the night. Author's note Looks like the Goonies are continuing their adventure and serves Prince Jewel right! In the next chapter, Pinkie and the CMC befriends Derpy while the Lulamoons continue searching for the Goonies and the treasure. The heroes themselves found the next clue as to where to go to next, only to set off another one of Flint Jones's booby traps. Will they survive? Read, review and suggest. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 6 2012, 01:35 AM Post #14 |
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Chapter 10: The Skeleton Key "Okay, now spread it around and make your frosting look a little rugged." A griffin chef known as Gustav said as he is demonstrating frosting on a chocolate muffin. The prisoners watch on at this show. "Chocolate muffins? They both taste good." Derpy said with a smile on her dopey looking face. "Wow, this pony sure likes chocolate, doesn't she?" Apple Bloom ask her friends in amazement. "Right, perhaps the pony isn't so bad after all." Sweetie said thoughtfully. "After all, the only ponies she has known are the nasty Lulamoons. Perhaps we could try to be friends with her." "Yeah, but how?" Scootaloo ask puzzled, wondering how being friends with Derpy can be done. "Hey, I got a candy bar!" Pinkie calls as she takes something from who knows where. "What you do know..." Gustav continues as Pinkie pulls out a candy bar from herself. "Good thing we stopped by that store. Do you want a Foal Ruth?" "Ruth? Foal? Ruth! Ruth!" Derpy exclaims eagerly. One of her eyes drift away but one of them focus on the candy bar in the pink pony's hooves eagerly. "All right, maybe we won't go hungry after all!" Sweetie exclaims with a smile. "I will toss it to Derpy and then she can give it to us!" Pinkie exclaims happily. Since she is still tied to the chair, the best that the pony can do is flick the candy bar via her wrist. Of course, Derpy look surprised as the candy bar hits her on the head, falling onto the ground right out of her reach. The cross-eyed pony looks upset as the CMC fillies all said at once, "Uh oh." Even Pinkie is worried. What is Derpy going to do after what happened? Eventually Derpy roars in frustration causing Pinkie and the foals to scream in horror. The four then hobbles their chairs over to the candy bar in hopes to kick it over to her. The pony/dragon hybrid meanwhile tries to grab the candy bar but the chains kept her hooves from getting it, much to her frustration. "Oh sorry, sorry! I try to give it to you, sorry!" Pinkie exclaims in worry as she tries to get the candy bar to Derpy, the Pegasus pony growls as she got more upset. "I'm really sorry!" Derpy growls as her frustration increase, she then begins to pull on her chains, much to the alarm of the four ponies. Apple Bloom ask, "Hey, what are yew doing?" Derpy focuses all her strength on one chain as she pulls hard. Pinkie's group look amazed as she pulls it out of the wall like mad. Scootaloo exclaims, "Wow!" This Pegasu pony is powerful! Derpy tries once more to get the candy bar but the other chain kept her from doing so. The hybrid growls once more as, wildy driven obsessed, she concentrate her weight on the other hand, causing it to break out of the wall as well. Derpy, now freed of her chains, picks up the candy bar and unfurls the wrapper. She smiles at the group while saying, "Chocolate. Not muffin but it's good." "Wow, you are hungrier than I am!" Pinkie exclaims in amazement. "Yeah." The CMC said, agreeing with Pinkie's line of thought. This Derpy goes crazy just to get chocolate, that's for sure! ------------------------------------ The Lulamoons made it past the out of control water pipes while following the ponies' trail in the tunnel. Trixie walks on but yelps in alarm as sparkles on the ground made her jump. The criminals has set off Applejack's booby trap that she elft behind. "Oh, geez, booby traps, gah!" Merluck exclaims in surprise and alarm. "Booby traps, those ponies left booby traps!" Trixie exclaims, yelping while jumping to avoid the sparkles. "For crying out loud, you two are being sissies! They are only booby traps!" Smaug snaps to his kids, annoyed by how her kids are acting. "Ugh." The Lulamoons stops as they came what could be the skeleton remains of Lorcan under one of the boulders. Trixie check his wallet and looks through it before shaking her head. "This wallet is empty. Those ponies must'v cleaned him." "Oh sure! Right before they ate him!" "Honestly, that is so stupid." Merluck snaps at Trixie, causing the female unicorn to frown at him for the insult. Just then the male's horn illuminated something in the dirt: a small hoof. "Follow those small hooves." Smaug said evilly as the criminals continue. "Yes, soon we will find that treasure...as well as the sword." "Father, if you don't mind me by asking, what's so important about a sword anyway?" "Think, Trixie! The REAL reason that I am looking for the treasure is because of that magical sword. It is one several magical artifacts that allows anyone who owns them to control all the dragons and monsters in the world. I gave up after some searching...but this new turn of events will allow me to finally get my hooves on it!" Smaug explains with an eager laugh. He then comment, "How oddly ironic; we were this close to the magic sword all this time and didn't even know it until now." "And the treasure?" Merluck ask his father quizzably. "Is the treasure nothing but a bonus?" Smaug comment, "As for the rest of the treasure, I suppose it could go toward paying off an army of the most formidable mercenaries in all of Equestria." ---------------------------- Derpy stood before her new friends, sitll tied to their chairs. The Pegasus smiles as she strike her chest saying, "Derpy!" "Oh, that must be your name." Pinkie said in realization. With a nervous nod, she points to herself while saying, "Pinkie Pie." "Apple Bloom." Apple Bloom said while pointing to herself then to her two friends. "And this is Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo." "And we're the Cutie Mark Crusaders." Scootaloo said with a nervous chuckle. "Derpy..." Derpy said hitting herself again. She then playfully hit the four tied up ones in the chest while exclaiming, "Pinkie and Cutie Mark Crusaders!" The pony/dragon hybrid has hit them too hard, sending them backwards to the floor. "Whoa, careful!" Sweetie exclaims in alarm. Derpy lauhgs playfully as she find what she herself did funny. Derpy then proceed to pull the chairs back in place to face Pinkie's group who doesn't say anything. The Pegasus pony pulls back the candy bar some more, feeding some pieces to Pinkie Pie and the CMC, eating a part for herself. The four are enjoying the candy bar, obviously becoming good friends. With a smirk, Derpy became excited and shouts for joy. The fillies scream in fear as she picks them all up, putting the four face to face. Derpy then plants a big kiss each on Pinkie, Apple Bloom, Sweetie and Scootaloo, grossing every one of them out. "Ugh!" Scootaloo exclaims as Derpy laughs a bit. "You smell like gym class!" "Excuse me, am I interrupting things?" A familiar voice spoke up as the five saw a familiar pony in a trench coat and hat appearing. "Golden Heart, thank goodness!" Pinkie exclaims to Golden Heart, happy to see him. "Get us out of here, please!" "Please, miss. Set them down. Derpy nods as she put her new friends down. To the tied up ones' surprise, a horn came from Golden Heart's hat, glowing and soon the ropes are cut, freeing Pinkie's group. "Wow!" Apple Bloom exclaim in surprise but then she looks puzzled. "Wait, how could yew have done 'dat? Yer're a Pegasus, ain't ya?" "Close but I'm half of one." Golden Heart spoke as he finally got rid of the trench coat and hat, revealing his true self: a male brown alicorn with green/red mane and green/light brown tail with a gold heart cutie mark, wearing a golden plated chest armor, gold bracelets with green jewels and silver anklets with green jewels. "An alicorn!" The CMC exclaim in surprise and amazement upon seeing Golden Heart. "Correct. Now tell us, Miss Pie. What has happened...and this time, try not to turn it into a tall tale." --------------------- The Goonies recently made a initation right after Prince Jewel and his goons has left when Cadance refuses to go into the bucket. Soon it was over, the pink alicorn, Soarin' and Ben Mare are now official Goons. "Okay, hold 'dis will ya, Rainbow?" Applejack ask Rainbow, giving the map to translate. It's time to go back to the adventure that is at hoof here. "Right, and translate for us." Starlight adds with a nod since Rainbow is the only one who can translate the African. Rainbow nods as she begins to translate what is on the map, "Copper bones, westward foams..." "Westward foam." Twilight said thoughtfully. "Triple stones." "Triple stones, of course!" Starlight exclaims as he held up the skeleton that was on Lorcan before. "This must be the Copper Bones that Lorcan is talking about! "The Key to One-Eyed Flint Jones!" Spike exclaims excitedly. "But where are the triple stones at?" During the group's translation, Shining stood with Soarin' and Cadance near a cave wall waving. The unicorn begins growing fatigued as he begins to dozee off, preparing to snuggle to Cadance. The pink alicorn looks surprised while the Wonderbolt gave Shining a weirded out look. That's because Shining was dozing off in Soarin's direction. The unicorn realized his mistake and said nervously to the Pegasus pony, "Oh, sorry, sorry!" He then turns to Cadance, snuggle in closely to her and making her smile, caressing her love's mane. "Hey, look what I found." Fluttershy said as she spots something behind some growth nearby. Rarity uses her magic to move the stuff, revealing a wooden wheel with stone patterns in it. "Look, look!" Ben Mare exclaims eagerly. "What is it, what?" Rainbow ask as she flew in to take a closer look at what the group just found. "Triple stones, triple stones!" Starlight exclaims excitedly. "Triple stones, well, what do yew know, we found it!" Applejack exclaims excitedly. The ponies has figure out the next part of Flint Jones's map. "We must've found 'de way out." "Triple stones? What in Equestria are you talking about?" Rarity ask her friends puzzled. "We got you now, One-Eyed Flint Jones, we're coming right to you!" Twilight exclaims excitedly to no one at all. Yes, the gang are almost to the treasure. "All right, this is exciting!" Starlight chuckles as he jumps up and down, unlike a certain pink pony that we know of. "Ugh." Shining groans, shaking his head while feel embarrassed by his brother's enthusiasm. "Why couldn't I been a lonely colt, instead of having something like those two?" Ben Mare chuckles then turns to Starlight, saying, "Starlight, try that key that we found. Perhaps you need to put it in there for the triple stones part." "Right." Starlight said as he took the key necklace out, beginning to look for the stones on the wheel to fit it in. "Now what does the 'westward foams' part mean. "Counter clockwise, of course." Twilight points out to her brother with a nod. "Now be careful, Starlight." "Okay..." Applejack said as she and her friends look for the stones for Starligh to fit the key into, but no luck so far. "Nah, too big! Try 'de middle one." "This is crazy." Rainbow mumbles a bit in disbelief. "The middle, try the middle!" Fluttershy insists to Starlight who did what the mares suggested and fit into the middle stones. Soon the ponies smile as the key fits perfectly. "Squee! It fits, it fits!" "Yes, we got it, we got it!" Twilight exclaims excitedly. "Yes, we got it, yeah!" Spike laughs excitedly. "So which way do we turn?" "Oh, we definitely got you, One-Eyed Flint Jones." "So which way do we turn?" Applejack ask the question as to which direction to turn the skeleton key in the wheel to for the westward foams part. "I said west of course." Twilight points out to Applejack with a grin. "So that means..." "Counter clockwise!" Rarity suggests with a smile. "Try going clounter clockwise!" "Right, counter clockwise, try it Starlight." As Starlight begins turning the wheel counter clockwise, Applejack exclaims, "Yeehaw! Things are turning well fer us!" Applejack spoke too soon. Suddenly a clicking is heard as a pair of wooden stocks appear, closing on Starlight's wrist. The colt yelps as a result of this. Twilight and Ben Mare works on getting Starlight free as the clicking kept on going. Suddenly the ponies and dragon heard another noise: it's the sound of a cannonball being release and rolling down an elevated at the top of the room. Soarin' doesn't like the sound of the noise as he exclaims, "What the Tartarus is that?!" "Yikes, oh my goodness!" Fluttershy gasps. She, Cadance, Soarin' and Shining spot the cannonball passing over themselves. The pink alicorn watches the thing going past, making her gasps in fright. "Yikes, look out!" Starlight exclaims, realizing what's going on. They obviously set off another one of Flint Jones's booby traps! "Oh man, it's going to fall on us!" Rainbow exclaims in horror. "It's another one of Flint's tricks, get out of the way!" Twilight exclaims as she and some of her pals got out of the way in time, getting ready for the worst. "What, what's going on?" Applejack exclaims in confusion as she and Spike stayed where they're at. Soon the cannonball reaches the end of the track, falling off it and landing in a net at the bottom. Once that happen, it causes a rope to be yanked. The floor underneath Applejack and Spike opens up, causing the two to scream as they fell through a new hole in the floor. "Applejack/Spike!" Cadance and Rarity both exclaims in horror as they watch the two fall to their doom. Applejack kept on crying, freaked out. But Spike manages to push a button, causing a familiar pair of teeth to come out and be send flying above, grabbing onto a rock in time. The two ends up stopping their fall and a good thing too. There are a bunch of pointed rocks below which could've stabbed them should the baby dragon haven't pull the button in time. The others came to the opening, worried for their fallen friends. Cadance exclaims in horror, "Applejack!" "Spikey-Wikey, no!" Rarity cries as she hugs Fluttershy who comforts the poor unicorn. "Applejack! Spike!" Twilight and Starlight exclaims, looking for the two but to no prevail. "Guys, where are you two?" Shining exclaims in alarm and worry. "Applejack, Spike!" Rainbow exclaims, getting scared of fearing the worst. "Oh man, where are you two, please?" Ben Mare ask in sadness and worry. "No, no, they're gone, both of them!" Fluttershy sobs with tears coming out of her eyes. Applejack and Spike has been done in by one of Flint Jones's booby traps. "No, no." Cadance cries while hugging Shining and sobs sadly for the possible loss of their two friends. "They're gone, both of them are." Rainbow cries as she and Soarin' held each other in sadness. "Don't be gone..." "It's okay, we're saved!" Spike calls out as she held onto Applejack while the two were stretching up and down from the teeth keeping them safe. "Mah pinchers o' peril! Yahoo! We have been saved by mah pinchers o' peril!" Applejack exclaims to her friends eagerly, assuring them that the two are safe and sound. The Goonies gasp in surprise and laughs happily, "They're alive, they're both alive!" "My Spikey Wikey is alive! He's alive!" Rarity exclaims in happiness and glee. "Oh, I can kiss him when we see him again." "Yeah..." Spike said, sighing happily upon hearing what Spike just said. "Ponies." Applejack said as she looks around the room that the Earth pony and Spike were almost killed in. "We are in another room!" Author's note That was a close call for AJ and Spike. In the next chapter, Pinkie tries to call the Royal Guard to get help but to no prevail. Of course, the pink pony, Golden Heart and the CMC follows Derpy who goes into the tunnels. Meanwhile, Cadance decides to sneak a kiss to Shining...but ends up kissing a certain colt instead. Starlight: (blushing) Wow... Me: And of course, Ben Mare also sneaks a kiss of his own, but this time to the right mare. Twilight: (blushing) Oh, Jus. Me: Read, review and suggest. |
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| JusSonic | Sep 7 2012, 01:11 AM Post #15 |
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Chapter 11: Pony Kissing Pinkie and the CMC was able to explain everything to Golden Heart who now got the whole story. The alicorn breaks open the freezer to allow Derpy to help herself to some ice cream. Meanwhile, Pinkie spots a phone and uses it to dial for the local sheriff Sir Spell Nexus. "Spell Nexus, I am at the old Lighthouse Lounge!" Pinkie spoke into the phone. "I want to report a murder, it's serious and nasty! You need to get over here right now!" At the sheriff's office, the sheriff himself is doing some magic while on the phone. It is a dark blue unicorn with slate gray eyes, a light gray mane and tail, and has a spell star for a cutie mark. His name is Spell Nexus, the headmaster of Twilight's school and the local sheriff. Of course, the unicorn is frowning as he know who is calling right now, having been told tall tales from her before. "Hold it, hang on. Is this you again Pinkie Pie?" Nexus ask to Pinkie Pie in annoyance through the phone. "Are you telling me another one of your tall tales? Must I call your family again about this?" "Okay, Sir Nexus, this time I'm telling you the truth for real! The Cutie Mark Crusaders and I are locked in the basement of those meanie crooks the Lulamoons! We are with this crossed-eyed dragon Pegasus." Pinkie said as she glances to Derpy who came out of the freezer while eating from an ice cream container. "Hey, Rocky Road! Yahoo!" Derpy calls out happily and eagerly. "We are also with some alicorn who is hired by Princess Celestia to hunt down the Lulamoons and get a magical sword back!" Nexus roll his eyes while speaking on the other end of the phone, "Right, like the time you told me that funny story about the griffin agents who took over all the Flower Sandwiches houses in the city. Yeah, I remember that one." "Pinkie Pie, perhaps you should let me talk to him." Golden Heart said to Pinkie seriously. "If anything to prove that your story is true and I can back you up." Pinkie was about to hand the phone over to Golden Heart when Sweetie rush up, exclaiming, "Pinkie Pie, Golden Heart! Derpy is about to do something wrong!" The mentioned two ponies look up from the phone...and saw Derpy happily heading to the tunnel near the fireplace. The group chases after her whiel Pinkie, trying to stay on the phone, exclaims, "Derpy, wait, stop! Come back!" "What are you doing?!" Scootaloo exclaims to Derpy in worry. "Don't go down there!" Nexus, unware of what's going on at the restaurant, continues, "As well as that cute little prank about parasprites that multpily when you throw water on them." "That isn't how that work, Nexus!" Pinkie snaps to Nexus on the phone then speaks up to Derpy, "Derpy, come back here!" "Yeah, stay away fro' 'de fire place!" Apple Bloom exclaims to Derpy frantically. By this time, Pinky has stretched the phone cord too long, causing the thing to come right out of the wall and to end the phone conversion. Nexus hears a dial tone, looking puzzled as he ask, "Pinkie Pie?" Weird, why did she end the conversion like that? Derpy, back at restaurant, happily got into the tunnel and yells into it, hearing a voice that made her curious. Pinkie exclaims while she and her friends try to stop her from going into the tunnel, "Wait, wait, Derpy! That's just your own echo!" "Don't go down there!" The CMC exclaims to Derpy in worry. "Echo! Whoa!" Derpy exclaims happily as she climbs into the tunnel while ignoring her friends' attempt to stop her. "It's your echo, we'd show you!" Sweetie exclaims as she rush over to get a lantern and came back. "Stay away, it's dark and creepy! It's your only echo, Derpy! Echo!" "Plus, we gotta git 'de Royal Guard!" Apple Bloom exclaims in agreement. "Doesn't matter." Golden Heart said as he points a hoof to the broken phone cord. "Plus, Sir Spell Nexus doesn't believe Pinkie Pie anyway. I think it's best for us to go down there and save our friends ourselves...and stop the Lulamoons ourselves." "Hoo boy." Scootaloo groans as she and her friends goes into the tunnel. Looks like another Goonie adventure for them. ---------------- The Goonies found a rope that they used to climb into the room found by Applejack and Spike. The group stood around, trying to figure out what to do next. Twilight, Spike and Starlight looks at the map carefully. Spike blinks as he looks around. Starlight, noticing this, ask, "Spike, what's wrong?" "I don't know...but for some reason, I got a feeling that someone is following us...and I don't think it's the Lulamoons." Spike mumbles a bit. "Don't be silly. Those criminals are behind us, no one but us is down here." Or so Starlight thought, but no one spots a shadowy figure peeking from behind some rocks, glancing at them, mostly Spike, then goes back into hiding. Twilight pauses a bit then felt something. "Hoo boy, I gotta go." Twilight mumbles a bit as she turns around to the others. "Pee break. Who wants to go?" "Me." Rainbow said as she held up a hoof. "Me." Applejack, Rarity and Fluttershy said while holding up their own hooves. "Me." Cadance and Ben Mare said while holding up their own hooves, also wanting to use the restroom. "Me." Soarin', Spike and Starlight said while holding their hooves up. "Me." Shining said while holding a hoof up with a grin. It's official, everypony has to go. Twilight spots some tunnels nearby and then points to the left tunnel, "Okay, that will be the little colt and dragon's room." The mare then points to the right tunnel, "And that will be the filly's room." "Right, come on." Rarity said as the ponies head into specific bathrooms as chosen by Twilight. The purple unicorn prepares to go into the right tunnel but spots Cadance heading into the center room. "Cadance? Where are you going?" "To the mare's room, I am a grown alicorn after all." Cadance giggles a bit as she goes into the center tunnel. Twilight pauses then shrugs a bit as she prepares to go into the right tunnel. But to her surprise, she saw the rest of the Mane Six leaving, making her ask, "Where are you all going?" "Where else? 'De mare's room." Applejack said as she leaves the tunnel, entering the one that Cadance went into. "Right, the mare's room." Rainbow remarks while following her cowpony friend. "We are grown mares too." Fluttershy said shyly. The rest of the Mane Six follows Cadance, much to Twilight's dumbstruck. Then she shrugs it off. Who is Twilight to argue about who wants to use which bathroom, right? --------------- Pinkie's group goes through the tunnels, entering the one with the pipes moving up and down like mad, much to their amazement. Derpy made amazed noises of her own. "Oh yes, looks like Twilight has been through here all right." Pinkie said while looking at the pipes in amazement. When things are shown going crazy, it's only because of the Goonies. "Awww, and I miss out on the fun!" Scootaloo exclaims with a pout. "I love these crazy situations." "So I see." Golden Heart said with a nod, then he spots Derpy about to fly up. "Derpy, leave those pipes alone! Otherwise you will cause..." Too late. Derpy flew up and grabs one of the moving pipes, causing ehr to be shoved all the way to the ceiling and making the rest of the pipes stop moving. A car is heard screeching before crashing into something, a scream is heard soon after. "...an accident." Golden Heart finish too late. Police siren sounds are heard, much to Derpy's embarrassment. "Oops, my bad." Derpy said to her friends sheepishly while rolling her eyes around at what she just cause. ------------ "Honestly, Cadance, this isn't the time or the place!" Soarin' exclaims to Cadance in annoyance. The two and Ben Mare has got their business done, the pink alicorn decides to do something crazy. "Oh, this is indeed the right place. I know what I'm doing." Cadance said to Soarin' with a grin. "Besides, Ben Mare wants to do this as well, right cousin?" "Right." Ben Mare said with a blush. Cadance clears her throat. "Shining! Twilight!" In the 'colt's room', Shining, still doing his business, groans as he said to Starlight, "Starlight. Go see what she wants." The stallion is still doing his business and can't stop now. Starlight got his business done and leaves the tunnel to see what Cadance wants. Twilight came out of the mare's room, the colt ask, "I guess you heard your name too, huh?" "Right, may as well see what Cadance wants." Twilight said with a nod. Whatever she wants for Shining and her, must be something important, right? Starlight went ahead of his sister and goes into the darkness as Cadance calls out, "Shining, I'm in here, with my eyes closed!" The colt enters, looking around. He can't see what's going or what's about to happen. Sure enough, Cadance appears, grabbing Starlight and did the most surprising thing ever: she kiss him deeply. The colt looks surprised but chose to allow her to kiss him instead of pulling back. "Cadance?" Twilight calls out as she enters the dark, her horn glows to see what's going on. The purple unicorn looks shocked as she saw what's going on: Starlight and Cadance are kissing. "What the..." "Twilight." Ben calls out. Twilight turns and got grabbed by him. The stallion then kiss her happily, much to her shock. The mare closes her eyes and happily kiss her crush right back. She has been waiting so long for this. Soarin' shows up with a lantern and laughs quietly upon seeing what's happening. While Ben is kissing Twilight, Cadance is kissing Starlight, thinking that the colt is Shining! Hoo boy, how hilarious! Won't the pink alicorn be surprised when she finds out! Soarin' leaves quielty once Cadance and Ben Mare are done kissing Starlight and Twilight, the two heads off in a wrong direction while looking dazed. Both of them received their first kiss...and for intention and unintetion reasons! Soarin' came up and taps the two on the shoulders, pointing to a direction while chuckling, "Wrong way, you love ponies. It's this way." "Thanks. Come on, Starlight." Twilight said with a loving sight as she pulls Starlight along. Cadance and Ben Mare came back with their kissing experience. "Well, you two kiss. Now start telling." "Wow, it was amazing." Ben Mare said with a happy sigh. "That Twilight..." "As for me...there's something weird." Cadance said, frowning to Soarin' and Ben Mare in a puzzled way. "What? What's wrong?" Soarin' ask Cadance curiously, suspecting that his friend suspect something's wrong with kissing 'Shining'. "Did Shining's horn suddenly shrunk? It became shorter than usual?" Cadance ask curiously. This causes Soarin' to laugh wildly. "Soarin', why are you laughing? It's the most beautiful experience ever!" "Here's a tip, Cadance. Next time you kiss, try doing it with your eyes open, it's a whole difference experience. As for you Ben, though, keep on trucking!" "Yeah, I will take your advice." Ben Mare said, a bit puzzled by what Soarin' just said. Weird. "Oh, you two better be careful." Cadance said, trotting away while looking at the floor carefully. "There's a hole here, I think. I think Shining was standing in it." Author's note Wow, Starlight and Twilight has gotten their kisses...and with Cadance thinking that she's kissing Shining! Funny! In the next chapter, the Lulamoons appear, chasing the gang through the tunnels. Soon they came to a new booby trap in which they must play the right notes on a piano to survive or else. Read, review and suggest. Sir Spell Nexus is Penstrokepony's OC in the fanfiction "Past Sins'. |
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