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My Little Pony Goonies; These ponies are on an adventure!
Topic Started: Aug 25 2012, 12:42 PM (1,703 Views)
JusSonic
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Author's note
To Mr. Anonymous, no, no fanmake of that film in the future or right now.

Chapter 12: Musical Death

The Lulamoons arrive where the Goonies were a while ago, the same wishing well area. Merluck frowns as he spoke up, "Dad, once we deal with those ponies and get that sword, how do we get back? We didn't leave any breadcrumbs or anything. I don't see those ponies anywhere."

"Those ponies has to be here somewhere, I can smell their frosting!" Smaug snaps in annoyance as he looks around. The villains has got to be close to those Goonies, they have to be here somewhere!

"Hey, father, look at this." Trixie said as she spots something near a hole nearby. The criminals came closer though Merluck almost tripped on what his sister just found. "Three guesses whose left this behind and all of them count."

Trixie has spotted hte rope that the Goonies use to get into the lower tunnels. The bad guys use their horns to shine light to get a better look and to find any trace of the ponies.

It's by that time that the Goonies are leaving the tunnels below, Shining looks horrfied as he saw something up ahead. Cadance smiles as she came up to him and motion him to head on.

"What, are you crazy? They're here!" Shining whispers to Cadance, pointing a hoof to the cave that the Goonies came out of.

Cadance gasps in horror, that means that the Lulamoons are here! The pink alicorn exclaims, "They're here, they're here, they're here..." The stallion covers her mouth in hopes to quiet her.

"We can only hope that they don't see us." Ben Mare whispers to the others quietly. Maybe if the Goonies are lucky, the Lulamoons won't see them and they will go away.

"Uh oh..." Spike yelps in alarm as he stood by Rarity who stay where she's at. "I don't think the others got it."

"Hey, father." Trixie said from above, smirking evilly as she points her horn to the bottom of the rope. "Look, they they are, right down there!"

"Oh no!" Rarity screams in terror and for a good reason: Twilight, Starlight, Rainbow and Applejack are heading to the rope and didn't realize that the Lulamoons are in the upper tunnell...and that allows those villains to find them all! "Everyone, they found us!"

"Quickly, run, follow me!" Shining calls out frantically. The ponies at the rope look up and saw the Lulamoons, much to their shock. The others follow Shining and the others down the center tunne, the only way out now. "Don't fall behind, come on!"

As the Goonies rush through the tunnel, their lanterns light them all up, lighting up as if making a giant skull. They rush/flew on like mad, doing their best to escape those insane criminals chasing them.

"Oh my goodness, oh my goodness!" Fluttershy exclaims in terror.

"Keep running, don't look back!" Ben Mare yells out to the Goonies quickly and frantically.

The villains use the rope to get into the lower tunnel and head to the center tunnel in hopes to get to the ponies.

"Watch your step, dad!" Trixie exclaims to Smaug who almost trip on a rock during the rock.

"You watch it!" Smaug snaps at Trixie in annoyance as the crooks now rush into the center tunnel. The good ponies quickly rush through the tunnels, doing their best not to look back (though some did by accident). The criminals are still behind them a few bits, gaining onto the Goonies fast.

"Come on, move it, let's go!" Starlight calls out to his friends frantically.

"What do you think I am doing?!" Rarity exclaims to Starlight in annoyance.

The Goonies rush into a cave, finding a little river that has a fallen log over it. Shining exzclaims, "Oh great! What now?"

"Keep going, keep going!" Twilight exclaims quickly, looking back and hope that the Lulamoons didn't catch up to the gang just yet.

"This looks like a drawbridge, I think!" Spike exclaism.

The Lulamoons are gaining onto the Goones fast. Rainbow, who saw them, screams out, "Pony Jerk Alert!"

"Move, move, move!" Ben Mare exclaims as the ponies begin o make their way across the bridge. They yelp as the handle that the gang are using broke fall, falling into the river. "Keep going!"

"Hurry!" Starlight exclaims as the ponies made it across, arriving tothe other side...all but Applejack who is doing her best to get across the log bridge.

"Somepony's coming!" Soarin' exclaims in alarm as he spots two familiar villains arriving with their horns glowing like mad.

"Hurry, hurry!" Shining exclaims to Applejack, urging her to get moving.

"I think I can see them, father!" Trixie exclaims to Smaug as the Lulamoons are now arriving at the opening. They are almost upon the Goonies.

"Come on, AJ! Stop wasting time!" Fluttershy exclaims to Applejack in concern.

"Let's go, come on!" Cadance exclaims in worry. Of course, Applejack stops, having an idea on her mind.

"Applejack, what are you doing?" Twilight ask Applejack in alarm. "Come on!"

"Hang on, ponies! Ah got an idea 'ta slow those vermins down!" Applejack exclaims witha smirk. "Slick shoes!"

"Slick shoes? Are you crazy?" Starlight and Rainbow ask Applejack in disbelief. What is their friend doing?

Applejack grins as she push another button, causing weird shoes to appear on her hooves. As she moves across, oil came out of the shoes and right onto the bridge. The ponies cheer her on, encouraging the Earth pony to move on.

"Hey, I think I can see their horns." Shining said, glancing up a bit.

Soon, Trixie and Merluck arrives with their horns glowing. The female unicorn smiles and waves innocently while saying, "Hey there ponies. Remember me, the Great and Powerful Trixie?"

"Sorry, but we must be going." Rarity said as, once Applejack made it across, the gang made a run for it.

"Come back here, we just want to get out of here!"

The Goonies ignore him while they run on. Merluck furiously got his gun out while yelling, "Stop moving or I'd shoot!" Of course, his gun went off, causing it to shoot into the ceiling, sending rock and such right onto the siblings.

Merluck opens fire again and hits a rock, missing Starlight's hoof. Spike screams, "Run, run! Those jerks are shooting at us!"

"I know, I know!" Starlight exclaims to Spike frantically.

"Merluck, stop that! You will start a cave in!" Trixie exclaims to her brother in alarm to stop Merluck from any further shooting.

"Cave in? What do you think that was?" Merluck scowls angrily as he points at the ceiling that the male unicorn shot at earlier.

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The Goonies end up in another cave, stopping to get some air in. They knew that they themselves won't be safe for long. Those bad guys will make it across the bridge one way or another. Applejack's oil may not slow them down for long.

"Oh dear, is there another way out of here?" Fluttershy ask scared as she looks around the cave.

"Twilight, get that lantern, it's dark in here." Ben Mare said with a nod.

The ponies got some candles from Applejack, missing the dynamite that they are still unaware of. Twilight asks a bit, "Hey Applejack, you got a light?

"Not on me, nnope." Applejack answers Twilight with a shrug.

"Let's try the lantern." Shining remarks as he held the lantern to the candle to at least get a better look at the cave.

"Right, right, good idea."

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"Get going, get across!" Trixie snaps at Merluck as she pushes him onto the log, unaware of the oil now on it.

"Stop pushing it, I'm going!" Merluck snaps at his sister, annoyed by his impatience.

"Come on, Trixie demands that you go!"

"Stop using your name like that and stop pushing!"

"Hurry up, come on!" Trixie snaps to Merluck as she pushes her brother right onto the log. The villains cannot waste any time. Those Goonies are going to get away.

Merluck begins to cross the log, heading to the same spot where Applejack has poured oil on earlier. Suddenly, the unicorn slips and did a complete heads over hooves flip, sending him right onto the log very hard...along with a certain something.

"Merluck! Are you okay?" Smaug ask his son in alarm.

Merluck stood up, eyes crossed and his 'keys' hurt. The villain groans in a high-pitchd voice, "No..."

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Once all the candles are lit, the Goonies check to see where they are now: a huge room but there's no other exit. How will they get out of here and escape the Lulamoons?

"How will we get out of here?" Fluttershy ask her friends meekly.

"These walls are solid, look." Shining said as he pounds a hoof onto a wall. There must be another opening to this room but how to find it.

Applejack turns, her eyes widen as she exclaims, "Whoa! Check 'dat out! What is it?"

Everyone else turns and saw something shocking and horrifiying: there is a piano in the center of the room but this one is made out of skeleton bones, most likely of Flint Jones's crew.

"Ugh, gross, man!" Soarin' exclaims in disgust.

"Well, leave t to Flint Jones to be creative in making his booby traps." Ben Mare said in amazement.

"Cool." Twilight and Starlight said at once ith grins.

"Not cool." Rarity said with a frown at the skeleton piano. "That Flint Jones is a heartless monster to do this."

"Still, wow." Shining said in amazement. Despit ehow horrifying the skeleton is, the piano does look good.

"Whoa." Rainbow said in amazement as well.

"This is nuts." Applejack mumbles while nodding a bit.

"And how." Spike admits with a shiver. The dragon turns and looks puzzled.

"What's wrong, Spike?" Twilight asks Spike puzzled. Her baby dragon brother looks like he saw something.

"I could've sworn that someone besides those Lulamoons are following us. Weird."

"How did they put all these bones..." Shining said, shaking his head in disbelief while looking at the bone piano. Unknown to the ponies, Spike is right. Someone is following the Goonies, waiting and watching...

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"Trixie, go on and help your brother, be quickly!" Smaug snaps as he pushes Trixie right onto the bridge. No way is her son going to ruin things for him now!

Trixie hesitates then trots right onto the bridge to help Merluck. Unfortunately, APplejack's sabotage causes her to lose her balance and fall right onto the log. Smaug cringes at this sight, why must he has these two as his kids?

The siblings, trapped on the log, screams in fear. That's because the water is rising very fast, looks like they won't stay down for long.

"Father, father!" Trixie screams frantically as water splashes onto her.

"You idiots, what are you doing?! You're letting those foals get away! What's wrong with you two, don't you remember having teleportation magic or anything?!" Smaug exclaims to Trixie and Merluck in frustration and more annoyance.

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"So Rainbow...what's the story on this trick?" Spike ask Rainbow nervously. This is obviously another one of Flint Jones's booby traps which can be found on the map.

Rainbow nods as she begins to translate the map some more, "To move on, play the tune as each note said. If you make too many mistakes, ye will surly be..."

Rainbow stops, looking horrified at the last part of the translaton. Soarin' ask, not liking the look on her face at all, "What's wrong? What?"

"Be what?" Cadance ask, getting scared by Rainbow's look. The pony gulps as she said the last part in African, not wanting to translate it at all.

"What is it? What's wrong?" Ben Mare ask Rainbow in worry.

"What does the last African part mean?" Twilight urges Rainbow on in concern. Something tells the unicorn that she's going to regret even asking that question.

"I'm afraid to ask...but tell us." Rarity said to Rainbow nervously.

Rainbow gulps a bit. His pals won't like what she's about to translate. The female Pegasus pony then translates in hesitation, "Dead..."

"What?! Great?! Oh man!" Soarin' exclaims with a groan.

"Dead." Cadance said meekly at the 'dead' part of the translation.

"We will have to play the bones to get out of here." Shining said in concern. The only way for the Goonies to move and escape the Lulamoons is to play the bones on the bone piano.

"Right, but which notes shall we play?" Starlight ask her friends in concern. The ponies must play the right notes to move on but which ones without failing.

Applejack rush up to her friends, Shining has gave her the task to keep an eye out for the Lulamoons. Spike asks his friend, "Any progress on those jerks?"

"Ah done think they're out there." Applejack reports to her frieds in concern.

"Well, keep watching and hurry up!" Shining insists. Applejack nods as she rush back to keep on watching.

Just then, Twilight turns the map, spotting something that she hasn't seen until now. Ont he back are musical notes. The purple unicorn exclaims, "Look! Musical notes! That must be what we can use to put in!"

"Cadance, your aunt gave you piano lessons, right?" Soarin' ask Cadance with a smile.

"Yes, of course! Mom gave lessons to Cadance, my cousin is sure to act this!" Ben Mare exclaims with a laugh.

"I am not sure, Ben! I was 4 at the time so I am not sure if I remember the whole thing correctly." Cadance said in worry. Now her friends are depending on her now...and unless she remembers those piano lessons, it's all over for the gang!

"Trust me, if you wanna live to be another age, hit it!" Rainbow insists with a nod as Twilight put the map onto the piano. Cadance trembles while going up to the piano and reading the map. She must remember those piano lessons to save them all.

"Okay, fine. Let's see...I need to hit a middle C. This isn't like my aunt's piano."

"Listen, it's okay, Cadance, we believe in you." Fluttershy said to Cadance gently.

"Right, so do your best, anything!" Spike exclaims in agreement as he encourages Cadance onward.

"First chord...okay..." Cadance said, looking at the piano notes nervously. The alicorn found a chord, pushing it.

A bright tone is heard from the piano, that means that she hit the right note. The Goonies turn to see a wall opening up. Shining laughs eagerly, "Yes, yes, it's working! Good work, Cadance! Keep on doing it!"

"Right, the wall isn't down enough." Ben Mare said in observation. "You need to keep on pushing the right notes to save us here."

"Yes, yes, it's coming back to me now!" Cadance exclaims with a smile. Perhaps she could do this after all. "Now...A, C sharp, D."

"Oh...remember those lessons. Play them right, please!" Rainbow exclaims while freaking out like mad.

Cadance hits a chord. Unfortunately, instead of a bright note, a buzzing tone is heard if the pony got it right. A horn is soon heard.

Rainbow screams as the floor behind her drops out, causing her to yell as she's about to fall. Luckily, the ponies grab her and pull the Pegasus back to the safely of the platform. There is a big pit below. Rainbow would've been dead if she hasn't been saved in time.

"I thought Pegasus ponies don't need to worry about falling!" Rarity exclaims frantically to Rainbow.

"I panicked, okay?!" Rainbow exclaims to Rarity in alarm and worry. "You try not getting out of here alive!"

Applejack head back to the tunnel entrance to check on the Lulamoons. The Earth pony yelps as she saw two familiar villains moving through the river like mad.

"They're still down there, ponies!" Applejack calls out to her friends. "An' coming in fast! What can Ah do?!"

"Cadance, quickly! Play the next note!" Fluttershy exclaims to Cadance frantically.

"All right, all right!" Cadance exclaims. The alicorn is under pressure from what's going on and needs to focus on the right notes. "I'm trying!"

"Better try harder, sugar cube!" Applejack remarks with a frown. "Those bad guys are really madder than a King Cobra!"

Cadance plays another chord, but unfortuantely, it's the wrong one as well. The floor drops off behind Shining who screams in alarm. The gang manages to catch her in time before he could fall to his doom.

"Cadance, what the hay were you thinking?!" Soaring demands in shock by her friend playing the wrong note. "What was that?!"

"I'm sorry! I hit the wrong note!" Cadance exclaims to Soarin' in despair. "I am not one of my aunt's famous piano players!"

"Cadance, calm down, calm down." Shining said while calming his love down. "You're doing all right."

"Right, I believe in you, Cadance, we all do." Ben Mare said to his cousin calmly. "Even Goonies make mistakes at times."

"Right, but whatever you do, don't make any more." Twilight said to Cadance with a gentle smile. Her cousin and the mare's calm words has calmed the alicorn right, they're right. She can do this.

Sniffing a bit, Cadance goes back to what she's doing, saying, "Okay...A...A flat..."

"Play it, play it." Rainbow and Starlight said quietly this time. Soon, Cadance hit a chord. The Goonies cheers as the right one is played, causing the door to open a little more. "Yes!"

Applejack rush back to the entrance to see the situation. The Earth pony sighs a bit. For a moment, it looks like the Lulamoons are gone.

"Good news, ponies, they're gone, we're safe!" Applejack announces to her friends eagerly.

Of course, Applejack gasps as a familiar hoof appears, grabbing the pony. It's Trixie. The pony screams a bit and an alarm noise is heard. Applejack push a button, causing a boxing glove to come out and hit Trixie. The female vilalin yelps in pain, bumping into Merluck as the two crooks fell down the rocks.

Applejack rush back to her friends, screaming, "Ponies, they're coming, they're coming!"

Applejack of course ends up running into her friends, sending them all onto the piano. This causes a wrong note to be hit as the floor behind the cowpony falls out. Her friends were able to save her in time.

"Oh dear, this isn't good!" Rarity exclaims frantically. The Goonies are trapped on the only rock left: the small island with the piano on it.

"One more note and we're history!" Starlight exclaims in alarm.

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Merluck recovers from his fall, getting up and angrily pulls a dagger out. One certain cow Earth pony is going to be dead when he gets through with her...

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"Okay, what's the next note?" Ben Mare ask Cadance who looks at the map for the next note. The Goonies need one more note to get the door opened all the way.

"Oh I am not sure." Cadance said while looking at the next note. It's hard to tell what it is due to the burnt part of the map that ended up when Prince Jewel tried to burn it earlier. "Is that an A sharp or a B flat?"

"Cadance, let me put it this way: if you hit the wrong note, we'll al lbe flat." Twilight remarks, making a joke much to Shining's annoyance. That joke is wrong.

"Cadance, I believe in you. You can do this. Just look in your heart and find that note that you're looking for." Starlight said hugging Cadance a bit, calming the pink alicorn down. "You're our only hope down."

Cadance breaths in and out: the life of everyone depends on the right note. The pony braces herself, hitting the chord on the bone piano.

Soon a bright note is heard, Cadance has hit the right note causing the door to open up all the way. Fluttershy cheers on wildly, "She hit it! She did it! Yahoo!"

Just then the Lulamoons arrived on the scene, ready to get to the Goonies...but Trixie yelps as she almost fell into the pit screaming, "Holy horsecrap!"

"Let's go, come on!" Twilight exclaims quickly. The Goonies has found their chance to escape.

"Let's go, move, come on!" Shining excalims as the ponies rush through the open door. The unicorn hold a hoof out to Cadance while yelling, "Cadance, my hand, grab it!"

"Trixie, toss me the gun, now!" Merluck snaps to his sister, wanting to shoot the ponies. Trixie uses her magic to toss the gun over to him but her brother ends up dropping it, causing it to get tangled up in some dry moss.

Merluck quickly grabs for the gun, trying to get it. Cadance gasps as she lets go of Shining's hoof, rushing back to the piano while yelling, "Wait, Shining!"

"Cadance, what are you doing?" Shining asks as Cadance grabs the map off the piano.

"I got to get the map!"

"Come on, let's go!"

Cadance, grabbing the map, rush back to the door just as Merluck grabs the gun and prepares to fire, aiming carefully. But to his anger, the last of the Goonies escape through the door in time.

"Blast it!" Merluck yells furiously at his failure.

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The Goonies arrives at a series of waterslides. The ponies has no idea where they led to but it's the best way to escape the Lulamoons now.

"Cowabunga!" Spike laughs as the ponies and dragon jump onto the waterslide, sliding down the rapids like mad. The gang yell and laugh while having fun or sorts. It's either scary or fun. You take your pick.

Eventually, the waterslides ends at a lagoon in some sort of huge cave. Shining slides off the waterslide while falling into the water, yelling, "Geromino!"

"Oh horsecrap!" Rainbow screams as she fall off her slide while landing in the water below. One of by one, the ponies and dragon fall right into thewater.

"Blah!" Rarity groans in disgust as the gang rose up in the water, safe and wet. "That is one insane experience!"

"You okay, Rainbow? Cadance, how about you?" Soarin' asks as the gang check to make sure one another is okay.

"Yes, we're okay, all of us." Fluttershy said with a sigh. The ponies hug one another after making sure that they have survived that crazy experience. The worst is over.

As Applejack and Starlight hugs, the colt gasps as he saw something. The mare, puzzld, asks, "Starlight, whatcha seeing?"

The rest of the ponies turn and saw a shocking yet amazing sight: there in front of them is a big ship...One-Eyed Flint Jones's ship, the Nightmare Moon!

"Wow! Rainbow exclaims in amazement. There is is, the Nightmare Moon ship itself!

"Yeehaw, Ah don't believe it, we found it!" Applejack laughs excitedly. The Goonies has made it this far but now, they found the Nightmare Moon, Flint Jones's ship and the location of the treasure.

"Yes, yes, all right!" Ben Mare laughs as the Goonies laugh and cheers. Their journey will soon come to a big end! Shining ditches the useless lantern and hugs Cadance. Twilight smiles as she and Ben hugs each other.

Rainbow and Soarin' meanwhile are hugging each other, the Wonderbolt exclaims, "Oh Celestia!" He saw what he himself and the mare Pegasus is doing, making both blush> Soarin' push Rainbow into the water while looking at the ship once more. "Oh Celestia!"

As the Goonies cheers on, the shadowy figure came out of the water, heading to the ship with a smile on his face. He didn't think to see the ship itself at last...but now...

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"Get going, come on." Smaug said back in the piano cave. "Follow me."

The door may seems inaccessible but the villain found a ledge nearby, safe enough for herself, Trixie and Merluck to walk across safely. The father got to the door safely though his daughter is hesitating. Her brother groan as he grabs Trixie by the horn and pulls her along, getting to the safely of the doors.

"Idiots. It will all be worth it once I get the magical sword." Smaug groans while going through the door. Soon, the treasure of Flint Jones, along with the magical sword, will be his...and those ponies will be in for it, along with all of Equestria!

Author's note
The Goonies has found the ship, but the Lulamoons are still after them. And who is that shadowy figure following them for a while? In the next chapter, which is another deleted scenes from the actual movie, the Goonies ran into a huge octopus! Read, review and suggest.
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Three more chapters to go and this story will end. Billy Arratoon, I believe I already gave an answer to you for your suggestion through PM earlier.

Chapter 13: Octopus Problem

The Goonies grins as they trot/swim over to the ship. There it is, the Nightmare Moon in the lagoon and with the rich stuff waiting for them. They have made it all this way and now, the ponies can save the Goon Docks!

Of course, not one of them spots a tentacle slipping off a floating mermaid statue in the water. Something else is in the lagoon with them. As Soarin' and Rarity kept moving, the two yelps as something touch them both.

"Rainbow, stop it!" Soarin' snaps at Rainbow in annoyance as the mare and Spike are behind the two.

"Spike, honestly, don't touch my flank without asking." Rarity said to Spike in disapproval.

"Huh? What did I do?" Rainbow ask in confusion. She didn't even go anywhere near Soarin' and already the guy is accusing him of touching him!

"I didn't do anything, my claws are here the whole time!" Spike exclaims to Rarity in innocence.

"Let's get going." Soarin' mumbles a bit in annoyance. As he and Rarity kept going however, a tentacle in the water touch their legs, angering them both. The Wonderbolt turns to Rainbow while yelling, "Stop that!"

"Honestly, Spike, you're taking your crush on me too far!" Rarity exclaims to Rarity angrily.

"What's going on here?" Ben Mare ask the four arguing in a puzzled way.

"Rainbow and Spike are touching both me and Soarin'!"

"What are you two talking about?! We aren't doing anything to you two!" Rainbow protest to Rarity and Soarin' innocently. This is crazy, why are her friends acting angrily at them?

"Right, come on, Rarity, you're being crazy here." Spike said, getting a bit hurt by the accusation towards him by Rarity.

"I'm warnign you both, we know it's you two!" Soarin' exclaims with a scowl. "One more touch from any of you two and we will smack you both!"

Rainbow and Spike groans but do their best to keep away as the two follows Soarin' and Rarity. Unfortunately, the same tentacle touch them both, much to their further anger. That's the last straw!

"We warned you, STOP THAT!!" Rarity yells furiously as she and Soarin' turns and smacks the two hard, almost knocking them into the water.

"Hey, why are you hitting us for?" Rainbow protests to Soarin' and Rarity while Spike looks stunned.

"You two know what you did!" Soarin' snaps furiously. Cadance, Ben Mare, Starlight and Applejack watch as the Pegasus ponies, unicorn and dragon are arguing about what the two didn't do. "Who do you two think you are anyway?!"

"I swear, we didn't...." Spike then gasps as he saw something behind Soarin' and Rairt, raising up...a huge octopus. The dragon gulps along with Rainbow, who saw the monster as well, as they point to behind the two upset ones.

"What is it? What?"

Soarin' and Rarity saw their friends screaming in alarm, causing them both to turn around and saw the octopus. The mare screams as the water monster growls and got closer.

"Holy Celestia, it's an octopus!" Applejack screams in alarm. Soarin' and Rairty screams as the octopus grabs them both with a tentacle, dragging them both underwater. Then it opens its own mouth, intending on eating them both.

"HEEEELP!" Rarity screams as she and Soarin' dive up a few times in the octopus's clutches, breathing for air.

"Let go of them!" Rainbow exclaims as she and Spike quickly attacks the octopus in hopes to force it to let go. But the monster growls as he drags his hostages underwater, causing the two to dive in after them.

"Hurry, help them!" Ben Mare exclaims as he, Shining, Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy swims over to save their friends.

Rainbow hits one of the octopus's tentacles, causing it to yelp but the sea creature still kept his hold on Soarin and Spike. Cadance gasps as she points to what's going while Twilight and Shining do their best to get over.

Fluttershy suddenly swam down to the octopus....and gave him a mean looking stare, causing it to yelp in fear. The Pegasus pony is giving the sea creature her Stare, a power that causes anyone to back off and do what she says or else.

The Stare forces the octopus to release his hostages. Meanwhile Applejack swam to the sea creature and put a Wakepony with a tape in there into the octopus's mouth after pushing the play button.

The octopus closes its mouth and suddenly felt relaxes. The Wakepony is playing the song 'Eight Arms to Hold You' by the Pony Goon Squad. The seac reatures backs away and was driven off by more of Fluttershy's Staring.

Spike and Rainbow quickly helps Soarin' and Rarity to the surfance, the gang swam to the ship while Shining watch the ocopus leave, the thing waves his tentacles in the air, moving to the music while diving into the water a few times while leaving.

"Spike...you save me!" Rarity said as she happily kiss Spike on the cheek. The dragon sighs lovingly as he fell into the water, making the white unicorn giggle a bit.

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Pinkie's group arrives at the wishing well part of the tunnels, looking for their pals. Golden Heart said, "Our friends shouldn't have gotten far. We can only hope to get to them before the Lulamoons do."

"Right, Ah sure hope mah sister does okay." Apple Bloom said in concern.

"You know, Derpy, for a pony/dragon hybrid, you aren't so bad." Pinkie said to Derpy who looks around the wishing well area playfully. "Heck, back in Ponyville, we have this big white Pegasus pony who likes to shout out 'YEAH' at times."

"Wow, really?" Derpy ask her friends happily. "Cool!"

"Yeah, we also got this friend named Dinky Doo, oh, you would've love her." Scootaloo said with a grin. "She can do magic but got this strange thing growing out of her neck. Weird, huh?"

Derpy howls like a lost little puppy, Sweetie sighs, "Poor, Derpy." The others agree with her train of thought. The cross-eyed hybrid has never been out of that room that the Lulamoons chained him up in. What a pity.

"You know, you need a better family than those meanie Lulamoons." Pinkie said to Derpy with a grin. "Know what I mean?"

"Look, there's a rope." Golden Heart said as the group spots a rope near a hole. "Our friends must've went down there."

"Anyway, there is this one pony who is weird and acts like a zombie pony." Pinkie said as she and her friends look down a hole. "I guess this is because he sleeps at day and goes out to play at night."

"Ain't nothing. Ah once arrived at 'dis here village where 'de ponies wit' no Cutie Marks turns into zombies at night! It was scary!" Apple Bloom exclaims with a shiver. "Ah done almost didn't git outta there alive!"

"So you told us. Derpy, do you go out to play at night?"

"Maybe...sometimes..." Derpy said confused while flying over to the hole where her friends are at now.

"Hey you guys!" Pinkie calls out into the hole for any respond from her friends.

"Hello! Anyone down there?" The CMC calls out into the hole loudly.

"Hey you guys! Yahoo!" Derpy exclaims, smiling happily while shouting out into the hole.

"I fear they are too far ahead...and the Lulamoons probably caught up to them by now." Golden Heart said seriously as no one heard a response from their Goonie pals. "I shall have to teleport us to make this faster. Our friends need our help moreso than ever!"

Author's note
Good deleted scene, eh? In the next chapter, the Goonies found the rich stuff and meet someone who they thought to be dead. But when they are all captured by the Lulamoons, it's up to Pinkie, CMC, Golden Heart and Derpy to save the day! Read, review and suggest!

Apple Bloom in the second part of the deleted scene is referring to the fanmade game 'The Story of the Blanks'.
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Okay, two more chapters to go and this fanmake will soon be done. To D.J. Scales, I'm sticking to my guns (plus the Sea Serpent isn't a bad guy). As for your ideas, not sure about the Good Burger one, but the KH series is a possibility.

Also, a ship version is much better than the real one.

Chapter 14: Battle for the Treasure

The Goonies climbs onto the Nightmare Moon, all of them are excited. The treasure of Flint Jones is on this ship, ready for the taking.

The Goonies, upon getting on board, looks around the ship, apparently empty for years. The rich stuff must be on the Nightmare Moon somewhere.

"Come on, let's go." Twilight said as the gang begins searching the ship.

"I wonder where Flint Jones would hide his treasure." Rarity said thoughtfully as she looks around the ship. "Most likely in the hold...or in his cabin."

"Twilight, Starlight, do you really think there's treasure here?" Cadance ask the siblings hopefully as they and Ben Mare search a part of the ship.

"Cadance, this whole ship is a treasure." Starlight said to Cadance with a smile.

"Starlight's right. Why, any musuem would love to have a ship like this in their collection...even Mr. Sparkle's." Ben Mare said with a smile. Then he notices something at the helm, dead and a skeleton. Must be one of Flint Jones's old crew members. As Cadance goes around him, Ben Mare spoke, "Twilight, look!"

"Oh relax, there's nothing to worry about. It's only a dead skeleton." Twilight said as she turns the skeleton around. The group then yelps in shock as they saw that its eyes got two daggers in them. "Gah!"

"Oh crud!" Starlight exclaims in alarm. "Must be One-Eyed Flint Jones's handy work no doubt!"

Applejack goes onto a grate that lets you look into the deck below, looking around while saying, "Dang, there got 'ta be gold around here."

"Applejack! Be careful! I think the grate is..." Fluttershy begins to say, but her warning came too late as the grate gave away and breaks. Applejack screams as she fell into the deck below. "Oh my goodness!"

Applejack groans a bit, landing on something hard but she's all right. The Earth pony mumbles, "All right, Ah am fine, Ah am okay. Yeah..."

As Applejack got up, she then screams in terror for the the pony has landed on a skeleton. Applejack looks around, seeing more skeletons almost all over the place. Obviously Twilight and Starlight weren't kidding when they say that Flint has killed all his crew members!

"Applejack!" The Goonies exclaims as they look at Applejack through the hole via the upper deck.

"You okay down there?" Rarity ask Applejack in concern.

"Yer're dang right Ah am okay! But Ah is sick an' tired o' falling an' skeletons!" Applejack exclaims to her friends in frustration.

"Why didn't you use the stairs?" Shining ask Applejack. Sure enough, there's a set of stairs nearby that they used. This annoys the Earth pony some more.

"Oh fer 'de love o' Celestia! Use 'de stairs, some digit told me 'ta use 'de stairs when Ah is falling! No pony cares what happens 'ta me anymore! Ugh!"

"Sorry, I try to warn you but it was too late." Fluttershy said to Applejack meekly.

"Applejack's okay, everyone." Twilight said as the ponies look around, seeing more victims of the dead alicorn pirate.

As the gang search the place, Applejack snaps, "Then some ponies told me 'dat mah inventions don't work well, though Ah done practice fer months! Honestly! What fun Ah have!"

"I wonder if that guy whom was following us has made it yet too." Spike said with a ponder as the gang continues their search. Most likely whoever was following the ponies has made it to the ship as well.

"If he did, we would've saw him by now." Twilight said with a nod. Then she spots Starlight taking a sword right out of a skeleton nearby. "Starlight, what are you doing?"

"Don't touch that." Cadance said to Starlight in concern.

"Come on, the guy's dead. I betcha he won't mind." Starlight assures Cadance. After all, the skeleton is now dead, taking his sword without asking isn't an issue, right?

"Put it down, come on." Shining said to his brother sternly.

"Right, show some respect for the dead." Cadance said, agreeing with Shining. Starlight sighs as he put the sword back into the skeleton.

"Right, you will hurt yourself with that thing." Twilight said to her brother as the gang moves on through the deck. "Plus, it's not even the magical sword that Flint Jones stole. I doubt even he would use it like that."

"So how many ships you said there were?" Shining ask his sister curiously.

"Billions!"


"Billions? Oh my!" Fluttershy exclaims as the gang moves up some stairs. "One-Eyed Flint Jones must've have a lot of enemies in his time."

"Well, pirates aren't popular with the authorities." Rarity admits to Fluttershy with a shrug. "The princess must've send a lot to get that pirate."

"Be careful, the stairs are slippry, try not to slip. Don't slip..." Shining warns the other ponies and Spike, yelping as the stallion almost slip down himself.

The Goonies enters a cannonball with your usual cannons and their ammos. As they look around, Cadance and Fluttershy spots a doll on a barrel, the pink alicorn smiles while picking the thing up.

"How pretty." Fluttershy said, smiling at the doll.

Twilight gives the map to Rainbow, saying, "All right, Rainbow, translate. See what we have to do next."

Rainbow looks at the map, then frowns angrily as she push it back, snapping, "Translate nothing! It's just a sketch of the old cannonball chamber! Where's the gold?!"

"Where's the gold, Starlight?!" Soarin' demands furiously as he grabs Starlight, making him yelp.

"Hey, leave him alone!" Ben Mare exclaims to Soarin' with a frown. "Don't rough him up just yet!"

"I didn't give up my day and risk my life to find nothing!"

"Stop that, eough!" Spike protest. The ponies begin arguing amongst themselves. For a moment, it looks like the whole treasure hunt is for naught after all!

That is until Cadance stood up and pulls on a cord unknowingly, causing a noise to be heard. Fluttershy gasps in shock as a chain of reactions if happening, "Oh no!"

"What? What's wrong?" Starlight ask Cadance as he got out of the angry Soarin's hold.

"I think I may have set off another booby trap!" Cadance exclaims in worry.

Suddenly a small door above the gang explodes open, sending out dust all over. The ponies coughs a bit while Rarity groans, "My Celestia! There's so much dust."

"What did you expect? This ship has been down here for a long time." Spike said to Rarity with a groan.

"Everypony okay?" Cadance ask her friends in worry. "Sorry."

"What's that?" Fluttershy ask curiously. She and her friends look up to see what the door has revealed: a couple of boards that can be broken to. That must lead to another room in the ship.

Twilight and Starlight got their brother and friends to carry them upward. Shining instruct carefully, "All break through." The purple mare uses her magic to break the boards, allowing her and Starlight into a shaft which they begin to climb through.

Twilight and Starlight reach a lid at the top of the shaft and opens it, finding themselves peeking out a chest in another room. They look amazed as what they're looking at here: this must be the captain's quarters.

"What's up there?" Shining ask curiously as he and the others look up from the cannonball, wondering if his siblings has found something up there.

"Twilight, Starlight?" Ben Mare calls out in concern. "Did you two find anything?"

Twilight and Starlight has limbed out of the chest with the colt peeking in, saying, "It's all right, guys. Just...give us a second."

"Okay."

The siblings now look at the captain's quarters. It has a table with more skeletons, more of Flint Jones's crew members, sitting at their chairs, killed in certain ways.

"Wow...now we know how these guys died." Twilight said with a shiver. A lot f skeletons look like they either died of poison, sword stabs, gun shots, magic blasts, anyway that Flint Jones has killed them is shown.

The two siblings then saw one certain skeleton at the head of the table and gasp. This skeleton is of an alicorn all right, with a red hat, a silver medallion, a green shirt under a black coat, and he appears to be wearing an eyepatch as well. There is a sword right through him with a note attached to it.

"One-Eyed Flint Jones." Twilight and Starlight gasps a bit as they recognize the skeleton. It's Flint Jones, all right, dead for years. The two got closer, finally meeting hte one who made the map and stole the treasure...even though it means doing so after his death.

"Hi...my name is Twilight Sparkle and this is my brother Starlight." Twilight said as she introduces herself and her brother. "You have been expecting us, right? Well, we did it. We all got here without a scratch...so to speak."

Starlight glances at Flint Jones's eye patch and lift it, the colt yelps for there's an eyeball that was pokedhard with a sword, causing him to cover it.

"So that's why your name is One-Eyed Flint Jones...One-EYed FLint Jones." Starlight said with a sigh. He chuckles a bit while continuing, "Well, we both got a lot in commong...so to speak. Flint Jones, believe it or not, you were the first Goonie, rejected by society..."

"Could this be..." Twilight ask in amazement as she saw the sword, which is golden and sparkling. The female unicorn removes it, causing the weapon to flash a bit. "This must be the magical sword, the same one that Flint Jones has stolen."

Glancing at the note, Starlight took the note and read it, "'To those who read this, I have did the most unforgivable sin ever: I have turned on my crew and killed them all. I regretted doing this for it was greed and paranoidia that was my undoing. I cannot live knowing of what I did. I decided to kill myself with the magical sword as a result. If you read this, please. Do not let greed consume you. Take any treasure but don't take it all. As for the magical sword, return to Princess Celestia, never let it end up in the wrong hooves. May you have a better life than I have wasted. One-Eyed Flint Jones.'"

The two siblings look down in sadness. Flint Jones has finally came to his senses and regretted his actions, warning those to not share the same fate as he did. The alicorn has learned his lesson...up to his own death taken by his own hooves. What a world.

Just then Twilight and Starlight turns, seeing their friends (who obviously climbed up the shaft) watching, apparently hearing every word. The mare smiles as she said, "Hey, ponies. This is Flint Jones, One-Eyed. Say hi, Flinty. They are my friends, the Goonies."

"So how long have you all been standing there?" Starlight ask the group curiously.

"Long enough, Starlight, long enough." Shining said with a smile, amused by his siblings talking t a dead pirate.

"Wow..." Spike said eagerly as the others came closer, seeing what's on the table. Thee are gold, diamond, rubies, emeralds...everything that was stolen by Flint Jones is on the table. "Look at all this stuff!"

"There is enough to save the Goon Docks after all." Fluttershy said while giggling.

"Hope, you saved enough for me." Someone spoke up.

"Oh, we will, we...wait, whose that?"

The Goonies look alarmed. They don't recognize that voice from them or the Lulamoons. Soon the gang saw someone in the shadows, glaring at them. It's the same individual who was following them, like Spike suspected.

"Who are you?" Ben Mare ask the figure in concern. "We were under the expression that no one else is down here...alive anyway."

Spike took a closer look, his face looks shocked as he begins to ask, "Is that..."

"Come on, bro. Ya don't recognise me?" The voice spoke up. The Goonies gasps as the figure came out...to be none other than Lorcan! The dragon is now wearing some clothing like a long Black overcoat, red shirt, brown pants, boots and fingerless gloves.

"Eeek! Lorcan has come back from the dead to haunt us!" Fluttershy exclaims in fear as she hid behind her friends.

"Wait, he isn't dead." Twilight said, glancing at Lorcan carefully. "That dragon is alive."

"I was never...dead." Lorcan admits to the group with a shrug.

"But we saw a dragon that looks like you back in the tunnels!" Cadance exclaims in shock and disbelief.

"Oh, that was another dragon who came into the tunnels looking for the treasure...and fail to find it. I left my wallet with him to scare off anyone to avoid sharing his fate...and mine."

"Oh, that makes sense to me." Rainbow said, blinking his eyes a bit in realization...sort of.

"Why did you leave me?" Spike ask Lorcan, a bit hurt and saddened when Lorcan left years ago.

"I was looking for the treasure of Flint Jones...to give us all a better life. I got the skeleton key but I couldn't figure out the clues." Lorcan explains to Spike in sadness. "I couldn't bare returning as a failure so I just let the world think I have disappeared...I was in the tunnels for years, climbing in and out at times...when I saw you and your friends with the map, figuring it out, my hope returns so I followed you all in secret. I'm sorry that I made you worried, Spike."

"It's okay, now I know that you're all right."

"Lorcan, listen." Ben Mare said to Lorcan seriously. "We need the treasure to save the Goon Docks...and to return the magical sword to the princess. Let us do this task, help us in making it possible."

Lorcan pauses a bit then shrugs, saying, "I will...but only if I get 10% of the treasure."

"Deal."

"Well, whatcha all standing there for?" Twilight ask her friends with a grin. "Come on, grab some rich stuff, put anything you can in your pockets..."

"Except..." Starlight said as he stops Applejack from grabbing a tin of gold that is in a balance. "...that. Don't touch that."

"What, why?" Shining ask puzzled.

"That belongs to Flint Jones, we can't be greedy. Let him keep that, take anything else."

"Shoot yourself." Rarity said with a smile. She and her friends don't need to take all the treasure in this room, after all.

The Goonies begins to take their treasure that is on the table, making sure to stay away from the balance that Starlight told them to touch. Loran grabs some coins, exclaiming, "All these years! They are not wasted after all! Spike, try not to eat any of the gems."

"What, me?" Spike remarks sheepishly as he takes whatever gems that the baby dragon can take.

"Bye bye, marbles!" Starlight exclaims, dumping all the marbles out of his marble bag, beginning to load jewels in there.

"Wow, oh wow!" Cadance exclaims while putting on some gorgeous necklace. The alicorn looks pretty in them.

"Oh, you look good in that, Twilight!" Ben Mare exclaims to his crush as Twilight smiles, blushing by her love's compliment.

"Guys, I think we better hurry. Those creeps are still after us." Soarin' said in concern. He's right, the Lulamoons are probably still chasing the gang and would've still be in the ship cave by now.

"What, those jerks?" Lorcan ask the ponies with a scoff. "What will those goons do?"

"Still, Soarin' got a moment. What shall we do wit' those vermins?" Applejack ask, agreeing with Soarin's worry.

"I don't know...and I don't care." Shining said as he kept on looting a bit.

"But we should!" Fluttershy exclaims in alarm. "They got guns and could hurt us."

Twilight pauses then smiles as she exclaims, "Wait! I got an idea!"

"What, what is it?" Spike ask Twilight curiously. If his adoptive sister got an idea, the others want to hear it.

"I saw this on 'The Hardy Colts' one time. We can lead a trail of jewels into one cave and hide out in another. And when the Lulamoons go into that cave, looking for us...then we can make a break for it."

"Now that sounds like a great idea!" A familiar evil voice exclaims with a augh. The Goonies gasps in shock as they saw the Lulamoons in the doorway right now, Smaug, the one who spoke, is pointing a gun at all of them.

"Oh, I knew it was too good to last." Starlight said with a groan.

"Outside!"

"Oh dear, oh dear!" Rarity exclaims in fear and alarm. Not good, the bad guys got the doubt on the heroes.

Applejack frowns, tipping her hat while scowling, "All righty, these vermins take 'de bull by 'de horns, it's time 'ta give them y'all a ride! Ah is going 'ta kick some flank!"

"Applejack, no, no!" Twilight exclaims in alarm.

"Are you crazy, don't you even think about it!" Ben Mare exclaims to Applejack, agreeing with Twilight. Is that Earth pony wanting all of the gang to get killed here?!

"Outside now!" Smaug demands, keeping his gun right n the Goonies.

"Forgit it, Twilight, we ain't being taken alive here!" Applejack snaps, preparing to attack but Starlight grabs her by the tail, keeping her still. "Let go, Starlight!"

"What do you mean 'we'?" Rainbow ask Applejack in alarm.

"Are you crazy?!" Rarity screech at Applejack frantically. "That guy got a gun!"

"A gun? Ha!" Lorcan exclaims, laughing as if being told a dumb joke. "I'm afraid of no gun! I..."

"Outside now!" Smaug exclaims furiously as his horn flash madly. The Goonies yelp as they head to the cabin door. It's hard to agree with an evil unicorn when he's like that big time!

"Applejack!" Cadance exclaims in worry as Applejack kept trying to charge at the villains, only to be kept going. Fluttershy stood near her friend, both mares look at the jewely on each other. "Oh, that looks good."

"Thanks." Fluttershy said meekly.

"Come on!" Smaug demands furiously to the two mares, making them gasp while heading outside of the ship.

Trixie and Merluck are outside with swords, preparing to use them and such. The two back away as their father forces the ponies outside, but both yelp as they trip over something, falling downward.

The two villains got up as Merluck snaps, "Oh, try to sneak up on me, eh? Not this time!"

"Give me that, Twilight!" Spike snaps as he grabs the magical sword from Twilight. The hero held it to Merluck while snapping, "All right, creep, let's go!

Spike and Merluck got into a sword duel, a surprisingly good one. The dragon appears to be holding on his own. Lorcan exclaims, "Go get them, bother!"

"Yeah, whip his tail, Spike!" Ben Mare exclaims with a smile.

Suddenly Smaug hits Spike with a powerful magic zap from behind, knocking him out. The villain grabs the magical sword, taunting, "Thank you for your kind donation. When Equestria is mine, I will make sure to remember you."

"Hey, you can't do that!" Rainbow protests to Smag but yelps as the villain hold the sword at her.

"Any one of you ponies want to go at me next? Come on, I dare you!"

Applejack frowns as she goes up in front of her friends, snapping, "All right, ponies, Ah shall ahndle 'dis! Ah know what Ah is doing." The Earth pony then push a button, causing her boxing glove to come out, but it ends up hitting her in the face. The others watch as she put the thing back in. Merluck laughs cruelly at this. "Ah is all right, Ah is a bit tired!"

Suddenly Applejack throw a hoof out as the Pinchers of Peril come firing out, hitting Merluck right in his Yahoos, the evil unicorn screams in pain as he tries to get himself freed.

"All right, nice work!" Fluttershy cheers on for Applejack's victory.

"Oh, let me help!" Trixie snaps to Merlck as she uses her sword in an attempt to get the teeth off of her brother's 'sensitive area', only to make things worst.

With a smirk, Applejack shot a dart right at Smaug's gun in hopes to take it away...but the Earth pony screams as she ends up getting pulled towards him. Both of them collide, causing Smaugg to drop his hole that fell into a hole, right into the lower part of the ship.

"My gun!" Smaug exclaims furiously.

"Well, you ask for it, jerk!" Ben Mare exclaims to Smaug with a laugh but a scowl from the villain forces him to shut up.

"Enough, that's it!" Merluck exclaims furiously. Enough is enough, time to put an end to this!"

"Come with me!" Trixie demands as she grabs Rarity, dragging her as the ponies are forced into the center of the ship. Smaug uses his new sword to threaten the ponies further.

"Empty your pockets ,now!" Smaug demands furiously as he waves his sword at the Goonies who ends up, with no choice, emptying all their treasure they found in Flint Jone's scabin, right onto the cabin. The villain spots Lorcan and exclaims in anger, "You!"

Lorcan brightly remarks, "Long time no see, Smaugie!"

"You know him?" Starlight ask Lorcan as he empty his own treasure.

"I used to be his partner but the villain kept cutting me out of the loot. He also broke one of our agreements that we cannot hurt one of the innocent."

"Well, that agreement was broken when you told on me to the Royal Guard about how we blew up that town!" Smaug snaps to Lorcan furiously. "At least you weren't wrong when we kidnapped that idiotic filly, making her what she is today, a freak!"

"And when I though you couldn't make me more sick...well, hello again." Lorcan remarks in disgust. He turns his back on Smaug, examining the ship. "So you took a innocent Pegasus and took her away from friends, family, robbed her of her life, her plans for the future, beat her," The dragon turns to face Smaug again, his nostrils snorting with smoke. "AND FOR WHAT?!" With the last three words, small sparks emit from his mouth. "For some sort of secret final experiment?"

"You don't scare me, Lorcan. You may have driven your other foes like Dr. Lizardo, the Film-Flam brothers and the Diamond Dogs to madness but I don't fear you."

"You should."

"Fear this then!" Merluck snaps as he held up Spike, holding a sword to his head. "Try anything and your little brother will meet Tartarus the hard way! Go ahead, I dare ya!"

Lorcan grunts angrily by Merluck using threats but his brother's life is in anger. With no choice, he backs off and empty his own treasure.

"All right, all of it, keep on giving us the treasure!" Smaug demands to the ponies. He then glances to Rainbow who appears to have empty all her treasure. But something is suspciious here. "You're quiet all of the sudden. Aren't you Rainbow Dash, the loudmouth?"

Rainbow shakes her head meaning 'no'. But Smaug is still suspicious so the villain reaches into her mouth, pulling something out. It's a long pearl necklace that the Pegasus pony has tried to hide in her mouth.

"h my Celestia." Smaug said in disbelief as he pulls the necklace all the way out of the mouth. "Is that all of it?"

"Mmmhmm." Rainbow said with a nod. Unfortunately, Smaug is still suspicious so he hits the pony on the head, causing her to spit out 5 more jewels.

"Oh horse feathers!"

Rainbow sheepishly spits out one more jewel. As the Goonies are being tied together with certain magical ropes that kept their magic and flying at bay, Ben Mare comments, "So much for that idea."

Spike woke up, being tied together with a rope and right near Fluttershy who ask, "Spike, how did you learned to swordfight so well?"

Spike answer, "Well, I figured I needed to keep in practice for when the author gets around to his 'Pirates of the Equestrian Seas' stories, given I AM playing Will Turner in that series."

Rarity ask, "Why haven't you used that sword to control Spike? It could control dragons."

Smaug explains, "Well there are six more artifacts needed to make the sword work. Unfortunately for Captain Flint a ninja stole the all but the sword. But luckily for me I know where they are hidden."

"Yeah, I am glad for that." Lorcan remarks sarcastically and angrily.

"You are a monster. Let us go!" Twilight snaps furiously as she and Ben Mare are tied up, their magic can't work very well with these kinda ropes.

Smaug can tell Twilight "We're sparing you, the young alicorn and your boyfriend simply because you three may still be useful to us as hostages, but the rest of your friends don't get off so easily."

"You nasty evil warlock!" Cadance exclaims angrily after Merluck has tied her hooves together then kicks the villain in the shin.

Being insulted and kicked in the shin made Smaug furious as he grabs Cadance by the mane, snarling, "Oh, you want to play pirates?! Well, okay! We'll play pirates!"

"No!"

"I was going to spare you but I decided one less hostage doesn't matter!"

"Leave my cousin alone!" Ben Mare protests to Smaug as the villain drags Cadance right to the direction of the plank, the most dangerous torture device ever.

"Smaug, have you no dignity?!" Lorcan demands to Smaug in disgust. "Forcing ponies to walk the plank, I mean, really!"

"Tough, Lor-on!" Smaug laughs evilly as he forces the terrified Cadance onto the plank. The villain waves the magical sword at her while remarking, "Go on, keep going, say goodbye to your friends!"

"No, I can't swim or flies with my hooves tied!" Cadance protests in horror as she looks at the dangerous water waiting for her below. With the ropes tied all around, the magic kept her from using her own as well as keep her from flying!

"Argh, you horrible, horrible unicorn!" Rarity exclaims to Smaug as she struggles to escape but Trixie held the white unicorn back.

"Walk the plank, say goodbye!" Smaug remarks as he swings the magical sword at Cadance some more.

"Shining!" Cadance exclaims. Then the alicorn screams as she was pushed off the plank, landng in th ewater below.

"Cadance! No!" Shining screams. The unicorn wasn't tied up yet so he rushes forward and push Smaug aside. "Get out of the way! Cadance!" Shining jumps off the ship, landing in the water below to save his love.

Smaug laughs in triumph. He turns around while remarking, "Two down! Who's next?"

Shining swam down into the water towards Cadance who can't swim due to her hooves tied. The unicorn manages to grab the alicorn and pulls her to the surface in time. Upon reaching it, the two gasps for air.

Rainbow, Soarin', Spike and Rarity screams as the crooks force the four right onto the plank to fall off next. The white unicorn protest, "Ouch, stop it!"

"Hey, let go of my mane!" Soarin' protest as he, Rainbow, Rarity and Spike are now on the plank, ready to be forced off. "Look, push me off, but leave Rainbow alone, l beg of ya!"

Rainbow looks surprised...and touched by Soarin' offering himself to save her. It's like he is saving her life.

"If you harm my brother, Smaug, I swear I will break your neck!" Lorcan roars furiously to Smaug.

"Join your friends, you little brats!" Smaug laughs evilly to the four on the plank. Looks like this is it, the villain has finally won.

"HEY YOU GUYS!" A voice yells out from out of nowhere, surprising everyone. They all look up and saw a familiar cross-eyed pony/dragon hybrid, wearing a coa of some kind, stabbing the sail with a knife to slid down with a familiar pink pony and three fillies on her back, all of them wearing pirate stuff, laughing.

"Scootaloo!" Rainbow and Soarin' exclaims upon seeing Scootaloo on Derpy's back.

"Sweetie Belle!" Rarity and Spike exclaims happily, relieved to see the little filly all right.

"Pinkie Pie!" Twilight and Ben Mare exclaims in amazement.

"Apple Bloom!" Applejack and Fluttershy exclaims with smiles on their faces.

"Derpy! How the hay did she get out?!" Smaug ask in shock as she, Trixie and Merluck looks stunned. Derpy was supposed to be chained off in that room back at the restaurant!

"Hurry, Derpy, save them!" Pinkie exclaims to Derpy. The cross-eyed pony nods as she grabs a rope and swings around. Before the bad guys could do anything, Derpy grabs Rainbow, Soarin', Rarity and Spike, pulling the four to safely.

"Spike!" Lorcan exclaims with a smile. That pony that saved him must've been the same one that Smaug has kidnapped and experimented on! Well, now it came back to bite him in the butt!

"All right, Derpy!" Scootaloo cheers on Derpy excitedly.

"Pinkie Pie!" Starlight exclaims to Pinkie Pie with a smile.

"No, it's Captain Pinkie Pie!" Pinkie exclaims, speaking in a rough like a voice.

"Dad, give me the sword." Merluck said to Smaug, motioning him to hand over the magical sword. The villain however hits his hoof with the weapon, causing him to yelp in pain.

"What are yew orders, Captain Pinkie Pie?" Apple Bloom ask Pinkie with a grin.

"Captain Pinkie Pie said....it's time we get out of here!" Pinkie exclaims quickly.

"No need to tell us!" Sweetie exclaims as she and her friends jump down from the sail, knowing a losing fight when they see one.

Derpy quickly untie the Goonies as they make a run for it. Trixie protests, "Hey, get back here!" Of course, the crossed-eyed Pegasi got in her and Merluck's way as the ponies jump ship as did Spike and Lorcan.

Suddenly Smaug yelps as something flew by him. The villain gasps as the magical sword is no longer in his hooves. He glares as a familiar alicorn flew by, hoof in mouth as Golden Heart manages to say, "I will be taking that, Smaug!"

"Gah! Blast you Golden Heart!" Smaug exclaims furiously. He got into Soarin's way while snapping, "Oh, no you don't! I am not losing this battle!"

"Look, up there!" Soarin' exclaims as he points at something, causing Smaug to look away. This distraction allows the Wonderbolt to hits him in the face, sending the villain to the deck. "Ha!"

Soarin' quickly jumps ship as well, landing in the water below. Lorcan spits out water while saying to Spike, "This isn't how I imagine our family reunion to turn out."

"Relax, Lorcan, at least we're safe ofr now." Lorcan said with a smile.

Back on deck, Derpy saw her adopted sisters on each side of her. Trixie uses her magic to get a piece of rope, tossing on end to Merluck as if planning to tie her up. Well, this hybrid isn't going down without a fight!

"The rope, Merluck, come on!" Trixie instructs her brother either.

"Wait, wait! Derpy, Derpy! Jump rope, Derpy! Jump rope!" Merluck exclaims, getting a better idea. Derpy chuckles happily though Trixie looks puzzled. What is her brother up to?

"What do you mean 'jump rope'?"

"You know! Jump rope!"

Merluck mades a motion as if jumping rope, giving Trixie the idea. The pony nods while saying, "Oh yes, yes, jump rope!" Derpy laughs mischievously as she plays a game of jump rope while the two siblings sang.

Trixie & Merluck: Ring around the rosie,
Pocket full of posies…


The two villains took advantage of Derpy's distraction, running towards and under each other. The rope is now wrapped around the Pegasus pony's waist, for a moment it looks like they got him.

But Trixie and Merluck yelps as Derpy grabs each end of the rope and pulls them, sending them both pulled forard, causing the two to end up where they were, freeing Derpy as a result.

Trixie and Merluck watch on as Derpy smirks and rips off her jacket. The bad guys looks startled as it's revealed that she's wearing a T-shirt with Celestia's picture on it.

"Derpy! Derpy!" Derpy exclaims while pointing his shirt to his dumbstruck villainous family.

Trixie groan to Merluck, "You just HAD to capture that pegasus as a test subject for Dad's experiments, didn't you? Now we've got a cheesed off half-Night Fury with the muscle and willingness to kick our flanks."

"Don't start." Merluck groans in worry. Derpy smirks as she pulls Trixie's end of the rope to pull her forward. The female unicorn got to think of something and fast.

"Now, Derpy, remember the time we went to that zoo? Dad and Merluck wanted to leave you there, but I stood up for you."

"We never went to any zoo!"

Derpy is glancing at Merluck now, Trixie smirks as she continues trying to get the Pegasus pony to go after her brother in hopes to save herself, "And remember how I wanted to help you find an antidote to those experiments and transform you back into an ordinary pony? But we couldn't because Dad spent the money we needed for the antidote ingredients on Merluck's false eye?"

"You lying brat! I DON'T USE A FAKE EYE!" Merluck exclaims furiously while releasing his end of the rope. He then tries to jump Trixie and, the two are struggling with each other, Derpy just casually smacks their heads together hard enough to knock them both out.

In the water, Shining swam Cadance to a nearby rock, saying, "Grab a rock, quickly." Once they are there, the unicorn works on untying the alicorn's rope.

Shining stops to look at Cadance, blushing to her...with her blushing right back. The stallion has saved her, he is her hero. With a loving smile, Shining pulls Cadance's upper froelegs around his head then they begin to kiss each other deeply.

The lovers part lips and smile at each other. Of course, Cadance looks puzzled as she ask, "Shining, what happened to your horn? It was smaller when I kissed you last iin the caves and now it's longer again."

"Huh? My horn never shrank! Starlight's the one with the small horn when I send..." Shining stops as he realizes a shocking fact. No wonder Cadance wanted to speak to him earlier...and both realize whom the alicorn was really kissing. "Starlight! That little..."

Cadance of course cuts Shining off, kissing him once more. Fluttershy, watching, squeals, "Awww, how romantic."

"Yeah, until Shining talks to Starlight about kissing Cadance earlier." Twilight said with a chuckle.

Back on the ship, Derpy laughs happily as she begins tying her siblings up with the same rope then the Pegasus pony begins lifting the two into the air, causing them to scream and freak out.

"Hey you guys!" Derpy laughs a bit. She then ties the rope to something, leaving Trixie and Merluck, powerless and hanging in the air. Even the pony/dragon hybrid can't bring herself to harm anyone. Smaug looks on as his adoptive daughter turns to him, saying, "Daddy."

Smaug knew that he must find a way to keep Derpy away from her. The villain cooes a bit while saying, "Coming to daddy, Derpy, come on." The Pegasus pony came over to her father.

"Daddy, you've been bad!"

"Now, now, Derpy! Yes, I was bad, have you kidnapped and experimented on ya, as well as keeping you chained up in that room...but it was for your own good." Smaug insists to Derpy. The pony laughs happily, looks like she's falling for it. "Remember when I sang to you when you were little? Want me to sing that song to you again?"

Derpy laughs happily. Smaug hugs her as she begins to sing.

Smaug: Rock a bye baby, on the tree top.
When the wind blows your cradle will bob.
When the bow breaks the cradle will fall…


"AHHHHH!" Derpy exclaims in terror, interrupting Smaug while looking at her own face. "Break...fall!"

"Wait, Derpy, I only dropped you once!" Smaug protest nervously. The reason why Derpy has her crossed-eyed was because the villain has dropped her when she was young. It even affected Derpy's mind further. The pony/dragon hybrid growls angrily, making Smaug yelp. "Okay, so I dropped you twice! You can't blame that on me!"

Derpy has had enough. She grabs Smaug and takes him over to the edge. The villain protest, "No! Put me down, put me down! Derpy, put me down!"

So Derpy put Smaug down...by throwing him over the edge of the ship, sending him splashing to the water below. The Goonies cheers happily while Apple Bloom exclaims, "Yahoo!"

"Nice work, Derpy!" Golden Heart calls out to Derpy as he flies overhead. "I can see some land over there. Get the Goonies over to where I am!"

"It's okay, we will be all right!" Merluck exclaims in worry as he and Trixie held onto each other in worry. Derpy then jumps into the water to join her new friends. "Get the rope!"

"I am going to fall!" Trixie exclaims in horror.

"Oh calm down, you fool! We will make it through this!"

During this time, Smaug climbs up the Nightmare Moon to get back on board.Derpy happily swims over to Pinkie and the others. The other ponies look amazed. This is the same creature that was chaiend up in the restaurant earlier!

"Derpy, hey, these are our friends!" Pinkie exclaims with a smile to her friends while introducing Derpy to the Goonies. "Guys, this is Derpy!"

"Hey, Derpy, hi!" The Goonies exclaims as they introduce themselves. Perhaps Derpy wasn't so bad or scary after all.

The Goonies prepare to swim on, Twilight and Starlight stops Shining and Ben Mare, the purple unicorn protest, "Wait, Shining! We can't go! We can't leave all that gold, that's our future!"

"Right, we can't throw it all away like that!" Starlight exclaims in worry. If the ponies leave all that gold and such, they won't be able to save the Goon Docks.

"Twilight, Starlight, I'm sorry but if we stay here, we won't have a future." Shining said with a sigh.

"He's right, the Lulamoons are here and who knows what dangers awaits us here. We can't risk our lives any more." Ben Mare said as he and Shining swam on off. Twilight sighs sadly as she swims after the two. Perhaps they are right, the ponies and dragons' lives are in more peril should they all stay here.

"Come on, we will come back for it later."

"Oh, all that rich stuff." Starlight groans as he watch the ship in sadness, feeling that the Goonies won't be able to save their homes now.

"Come on!" Shining snaps as he uses his magic to grab Starlight while swimming off with him.

On the deck, the Lulamoon siblings gasps as they look to the deck below, Trixie exclaims, "Father, let us down easy, okay?"

Smaug has grabbed another sword and is using it to cut the rope. The villain is ticked off as he lost the only thing that can help Smaug take over Equestria now, along with a clone of Derpy monsters. The villain is now ready to resort to the last measure to cut at the rope, swinging right at it.

"No! Not the sword, don't do that!" Meruck exclaims in horror. But it's too late as Smaug cut the rope all the way. The villain cringes as his kids end up crashing to the deck below.

As Merluck and Trixie recovers, the sister ask her brother, "You all right?"

"Yeah, I'm afraid. You?"

"Yeah, me too..."

Soon Trixie and Merluck angrily goes back to fighting each other, still upset over what happened with Derpy before. Smaug looks annoyed. He has no time for this foolishness!

"Will you two get up?!" Smaug snaps as he kicks the fighting siblings. "Come on, let's find that gold!"

The Goonies found a beach nearby. Lorcan sighs as he mumbles, "Well, that was unpleasant."

"There has to be another way out of this place." Rarity said in concern.

"Look, a light!" Shining exclaims as he points a hoof to an opening in a cave nearby. The others cheers in excitement, they are in luck!

"It's a way out!" Cadance exclaims with a smile.

"All right!" Scootaloo exclaims eagerly as most of the gang continues cheering. Now the ponies can make their escape from these tunnels of caves and go home!

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Smaug smiles sinisterly as he looks at the skeleton of Flint Jones, saying, "Thank you, Mr. Jones, thank you. Yes, you made my day. This is a real treat."

Smaug made an evil laugh as he, Trixie and Merluck got into the gold still on the table. Despite the Goonies getting away and the loss of the magical sword, at least the villains got something for all their trouble, right?

Of course, Smaug grabs a tray that Starlight told the others not to touch earlier. Suddenly a click is heard as a chain of events begins, with devices and such being activated. The Lulamoons on't like the sound of that.

Turns out Flint Jones, not wanting anyone to share his path of greed, has decided to leave one more booby trap...and Smaug set it off!

"What's that?" Trixie ask in shock and alarm.

"Oh no..." Smaug said in alarm. "It's another one of those..."

"BOOBY TRAPS!" Smaug and Merluck both yell at the same time.

"Let's get out of here!" Merluck exclaims frantically as he tries to get as much treasure as possible.

"Booby trap? What booby trap?" Trixie exclaims in worry, not liking what's going on.

"Booby trap, haven't you seen the movie?!"

"Oh, let's get out of here! Argh! I wouldn't be in this mess if you let Trixie do what she wanted to do."

"Are you still going on about that stupid filly dream? Grow up!" Smaug snaps to Trixie in annoyance. With what's going on, the Lulamoons were forced to drop what they're holding and make their escape.

Trixie scowls, "No, Trixie wants to be a-"

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Most of the ponies sat on rocks, waiting and watching Twilight, Starlight, Shining, Lorcan, Ben Mare and Applejack goes over to an opening. Golden Heart lands as he said, "Look at this. There's indeed an entrance here."

"Right, a cave in must've happen here at some point." Shining said as he looks at the opening carefully. "We can get out this way."

"It's too dark to see." Ben Mare said with a frown. "Hey Applejack, can you give us a light?"

"Got 'de last handle, here yew go!" Applejack said ass he got out the candle, unaware of what it's trully is.

Lorcan uses his fire breath to light the thing, saying, "Hurry up!"

"Hey, are we getting out of here or what?" Pinkie ask her friends impatiently.

"Right, come on!" Spike exclaims in agreement.

"Is there an opening over there?" Cadance ask the other ponies in worry.

The candle is now lit, but the ones near it notice that the thing is beginning to sparkle. Lorcan said in concern, "Uh oh. I don't like the look of it."

"Yeah, 'dis here's 'de weirdest candle Ah ever saw!" Applejack said puzzled. "It's sparkling."

Shining took a look at the side of the 'candle' and looks horrified as he realized what it truly is. The unicorn begins to say, "That isn't a candle, it's..."

"DYANMITE!" The Goonies scream at once, the last candle is really a stick of dynamite!

Quickly, Shining throws the dynamite away before he and the others rush into the water, diving in in the nick of time. The TNT explodes, cauing more rocks to fall. As the gang resurrected, they saw to their horror a bigger boulder blocking the opening.

"Oh no!" Fluttershy gasps in horror and sadness.

"It appears that fate has deal us a bad hand!" Golden Heart exclaims grimly. With that boulder blocking the opening, everyone is trapped in this cave!

Speaking of which, as things continue crazy, the Lulamoons prepare to jump ship. Smaug push Trixie and Merluck into the water while yelling, "Mares and foals first!" The villain then jumps in himself as things continue happening.

Thanks to the explosion made by the dynamite, rocks are falling into the lagoon and the boat. The Goonies must get out of there! Twilight, Shining, Golden Heart and Lorcan grabs hte boulder and tries to move it.

"Ugh! This thing is heavy!" Lorcan groans a bit, trying to lift the boulder to no success.

"Keep moving it, we can make it!" Golden Heart exclaims to the ponies in determination.

Starlight, worried, came up while askinng, "Shining, Twilight, what about the gold?"

"What about our lives?" Shining groans heavily to his brother. He's right, with their lives on the stake, the treasure is the last thing on the ponies' mind.

The ponies kept on working to move the rock but it's too big. Spike exclaims, "No good! We're struck in here! It will take a miracle to save us now!"

"You got it! Derpy, help with the miracle!" Sweetie exclaims to Derpy. The pony/dragon nods as she flew in and grabs the boulder. The ponies look amazed as Derpy begins to lift the thing up with her back.

Pinkie comment, "Whoa. I didn't know Derpy was THAT strong."

Twilight admit, "She isn't. I'm just using my telekinesis to help her lift that rock enough for all of us to have a real chance at escaping. Now, please keep quiet so I can concentrate."

Soon the boulder is lifted up all the way, Rarity notices more rocks blocking the way, exclaiming, "Oh no!"

"I can deal with this!" Pinkie exclaims in determination. She then pulls out her party cannon and use it to blast away a few of the other bigger rocks. Soon a path is clear.

"There's our way out, come on!" Golden Heart exclaims in determination.

"Right!" Fluttershy exclaims as she and her friends quickly rush through the opening.

"Come on, let's go, you all right?" Shining calls out as Starlight, Soarin', Cadance and Ben Mare are the first few ponies to go through.

"Let's go, Lorcan!" Spike exclaims as he and his brother rushes through the opening.

"I'm going as fast as I can!" Lorcan groans as he follows Spike quickly.

The Lulamoons looks trapped and scarped as they swam in the water, helplessly. Smaug calls out frantically to Derpy, "Derpy! Help us!" The Pegasus pony looks up as she and Twilight kept the boulder up to allow Applejack, Rainbow, Rarity, the CMC and Shining to go through.

"Daddy!" Derpy exclaims in worry as he spots the villain trapped in the water. Even the Pegasus pony can't allowed them to leave them behind, even after what they did to him.

"Come on, we must go!" Golden Heart exclaims as he, Pinkie and Twilight rush through the entrance.

"Derpy, come on, let's go!" Pinkie exclaims to Derpy in worry.

"Can't do, sorry." Derpy said to Pinkie with a sad smile on her face. "Derpy loves Pinkie like a friend!"

"Yeah, same here but come on, or you will be crushed!"

"Pinkie Pie, let's go!" Golden Heart exclaims as he uses his magic to pull Pinkie Pie through the opening, leaving Derpy the only one behind in the cave.

"Derpy, Derpy!" Smaug exclaims frantically as he, Trixie and Merluck continues their helpless swim with nowhere to go.

"Daddy!" Derpy exclaims. Soon she drops the boulder, trapped but must help his adopted father.

"No, Derpy! She's alive, don't leave him!" Pinkie exclaims sadly as Shining pulls her out of the opening and into the sunlight.

"I'm sorry, but we must go." Ben Mare said in sadness once the Goonies are out of the tunnel. The stallion doesn't want to leave Derpy but there is no choice. The others will miss her even if they have known her for a few minutes or so.

The booby trap continues its chains of reactions. The turning wheel turns wth the ropes being raised. The anchor is lifted from the bottom of the lagoon. Suddenly the explosion of the dynamite makes a huge opening in one part of the cave...allowing anything, even a ship to escape...

Author's note
Whoa, what a showdown! But is Derpy gone fo good? And will the Goon Docks be saved? In the final and next chapter, the fate of everyone will be determined. Read, review and suggest.

Spike's brief fight with Merluck mentions my future 'Pirates of Equestrian Seas' stories.

Derpy is wearing a Celestia T-shirt, which reference to the fact that she will be playing Superman in my upcoming 'Transformers vs. My Little Pony' story AND 'the Harmony League of Equestria' stories.

Trixie's argument with her father about what she wanted to be is a reference to the Jimmy Neutron series (which is ironic since Smaug was voiced by Tim Curry who did the voice of Professor Calamitious in the same show).
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Here we go, folks, the final chapter of this fic and afterwards, I will announce the next fanmake in line. D.J. Scales, I don't know that yet. And no crossover, I don't enjoy those kind of shows at all.

Also, NotDr-J33inasuit, those two roles doesn't seem to make sense to me.

Chapter 15: A Good Ending for All

On a sandy beach, two Royal Guard ponies named General Spanish Steel and Lauren Faust is on their usual patrol. Normally the Pegasus and the alicorn don't see unusual sights. But soon they did, a bunch of ponies and two dragons running up the beach, waving and yelling to get their attenton.

"Well, I'd be a pony's uncle. It's those ponies!" Spanish Steel exclaims with a grin. The Royal Guard got reports of the Goonies and others' disappearance and now, there they are.

"They weren't here a minute ago!" Lauren exclaims in disbelief.

"Well, they are here now. Call Sir Spell Nexus."

"Yes, sir."

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The Goonies' safety and location has been reported as cars arrives in the parking out, ponies, including the Goonies' parents and guardians came out. They are relieved that they themselves has been found.

"Where are my foals? Are they okay?" Twilight Velvet ask in worry.

"Look, there they are!" Mr. Sparkle exclaims with a smile. The parents rush over, reuniting with Twilight, Shining, Starlight and Spike, relieved that they are safe and sound.

"Twilight, Starlight!"

"Shining, Spike!"

"Hi mom, hi dad." Starlight said to his mother with a sheepish smile. "I guess we are in deep ho..."

"Oh never mind! Starlight, look at you!" Twilight Velvet cries while hugging her son. "You are an awful mess!"

"You are safe!" Mr. Sparkle laughs while hugging Shining and Spike. He glances at Lorcan while asking, "Is this..."

"This is my brother, Lorcan!" Spike exclaims, introducing his long-lost brother. "Say hi, Lorcan."

"I can't do that. Lorcan is my name." Lorcan scoffs a bit, making a joke. "That pony got to have another name."

"Lorcan!"

Pinkie grins as her family, along with the Cakes rush over to her, her parents hug the pink pony as Mr. Pir exclaims, "Pinkie!"

"All right, Spitfire!" Soarin' grins as he hugs with Spitfire, reuniting with his Wonderbolt pals. Cadance cries as her parents few over, happy to see her okay. Ben Mare hears that his mother Celestia will be arriving shortly so he isn't in any hurry to reunite with her.

"Mommy, daddy!" Sweetie giggles as her parents hug both her and Rarity. Fluttershy smiles as her animal pals, whose has been brought along, has over, hugging the Pegasus pony eagerly.

"Dad!" Rainbow exclaims as her father Timothy hugs the Pegasus pony along with Scootaloo. The father is happy to see them alive.

"We knew you would be hungry so we got you this!" Mr. Cake exclaims as he and Mrs. Cake brought out a huge cake.

"Oh boy, oh boy, a chocolate super duper cake!" Pinkie exclaims with glee as she open the cake box. "Thank you!"

"We know you like it." Mrs. Cake said to Pinkie with a smile.

"Yes, my favorite!"

"Oh, we were doing so well in our adventure." Fluttershy said to her animal pals with a smile.

"We were trapped underground in the tunnel, so cool." Scootaloo explains what happened to her and Rainbow's father.

"Hey, sorry about my contacts." Soarin' said to his Wonderbolts sheepishly while pointing to his missing goggles. "I broke them."

"It's okay." Spitfire remarks with a chuckle. "We will get you another new pair."

"Can I take piano lessons?" Cadance ask her mother hopefully. After the adventure in the tunnels, the pink alicorn wants so much to take them again. The parents look surprised but nods, allowing her to do so anyway.

"Come on, don't make a fuss over us." Rarity said as her parents put some towels over her and Sweetie. "Come on!"

As Twilight Velvet put towels over the wet Twilight and Starlight, Granny Smith hold Apple Bloom. Applejack saw Big Macintosh backing away as he said, "Hold it right here."

Big Macintosh put on some device and push a button on it, causing a camera attached to come out, obviously about to take this picture to remember this by.

"Yeehaw, nice, Big Mac!" Applejack exclaims to Big Macintosh with a rin.

"Hey, watch this." Ben Mare said to Cadance and his aunt and uncle in amusement. Big Macintosh is about to take a picture.

Big Macintosh press the flash button on the camera...but the back of the thing opens up, causing the film to fall out. The stallion groans, "Oh shoot. I hate it when that happens."

"Hee hee! Come here, Big Mac!" Applejack giggles a bit as Apple Bloom was given to Big Macintosh so that he can hold her.

"Oh brother, it runs in the family." Cadance said with a smile as her parents laugh a bit.

"It's okay, Big Mac." Apple Bloom said with a grin to her big brother. "Yew can't hug a photograph anyway."

"Eeyup! Yew got us 'ta last a last time!" Applejack remarks as she hugs Big Macintosh and Apple Bloom eagerly.

Big Macintosh grins as he hugs his sister, saying, "Shucks, you two are ma and pa's best invention." At least this is something that the siblings can do right. Maybe someday, they can get their own inventions.

Rainbow paws the groun a bit as she came over to Soarin', saying, "Hey Soarin'...listen, I wanted to...err, thank you for offering to save my life."

"Wow, wait, what?" Soarin' ask Rainbow in surprise, both Pegasus ponies are blushing.

"Yeah...thank you for all your help and...well, yeah..."

"Geez, that sounds so cool and awesome. You know, your voice is kinda nice when your mouth isn't messing it up."

"Thanks." Rainbow said with a blush on her face. "That's cool. "To be honest, you look face...err, when your flying and face doesn't mess things up."

"Cool." Soarin' said with a grin as he hug Rainbow then kiss her, much to her surprise. "I think there's an opening for you in the Wonderbolts yet!"

"Spike." Rarity said to Spike, batting her eyes at the baby dragon who blushes to her. "Thank you again...for saving my life during that octopus scene."

"You're...you're welcome." Spike said with a happy sigh, making Lorcan chuckle a bit.

"Listen...if you are available...when we could meet again...I like to date you...if you enjoy that."

Spike yelps, blushing then he faints away. Lorcan remarks, "That's my brother." Rarity giggles a bit. The baby dragon is so cute when he's like that.

Cadance saw Starlight, looking a bt awkward. Shining has told her about whom she really kissed earlier in the caves. Of course, the pink alicorn smiles, going over to the colt.

"Hey, Starlight." Cadance said to Starlight, making the colt blush in concern. He overheard Shining tell her whom she really kissed before. Starlight is worried that she would be upset about that. To his surprise, Cadance put a hoof on his shoulder, saying, "You are a great colt...person and all. Listen, you keep kissing fillies the way you do and those parts that don't work so well...well, they will catch up to the ones that do."

Cadance kiss Starlight on the heek, making him blush. The colt has no idea as to what the alicorn meant but he likes it already.

"Twilight..." Ben Mare said to Twilight with a smile. "It's great being with you...and I like to know that...well, oh, horse feathers, I may as well say it with actions!"

Ben kisses Twilight on the lips, making her smile as she kiss back. Cadance goes back to Shining and the two lovers hug each other then gave each other a soft kiss. After another look, the two couples kiss each other with passionate.

"What..." Mr. Sparkle said, surprised by this. His two children are kissing Cadance and Ben Mare!

"Let their parents worry about it." Twilight Velvet said to Mr. Sparkle with a chuckle. Who are the parents to get in the way of true love, right?

Starlight comment, "Mom and Dad have each other; Shining has Cadance; Twilight has Ben; even Spike has scored some serious points with Rarity. It seems like everybody in this family has somebody except me. Oh, well, maybe in a few years - now that I know we'll actually HAVE at least a few more years."

Starlight is about to take a puff on his aspirator then pause upon looking at his siblings and their loved one. The colt pauses a bit then shrugs while tossing his aspirator away.

"Who needs it?" Starlight remarks with a shrug.

"Hey, wait." Fluttershy said as she and the animals notice something coming up on the beach, much to the surprise of Nexus. "Is that..."

"It's the Lulamoons!" Nexus exclaims in alarm as the Royal Guard came down the beach.

The Goonies smile as they are both surprised and happy. It's the Lulamoon who has escaped the cave in. But the reason for their happines is that leading them is Derpy, she's alive!

"Royal Guard, some help here!" Merluck remarks sheepishly to the Royal Guard sheepishly. With what happened, the villain no longer cares if he and his family are locked up.

"Yes, get us away from here, please!" Trixie exclaims frantically.

"Okay, you are all under arrest!" Spainish Steel snaps as he and the Royal Guard point their weapons at the Lulamoons...and Derpy. "Come on, let's go!"

"No, don't hurt her!" Pinkie screams as she and the Goonies, even Lorcan and Golden Heart, rush over to get in front of Derpy. The Royal Guard look surprised as the pink pony is using the cake box as a shield. "Don't hurt her!"

"Wait, are you ponies nuts?" Lauren ask in shock and confusion. What are these ponies doing?"

"Someon get these ponies out of here!" Nexus orders the Royal Guards.

"No! Leave him alone!" Sweetie exclaims as the Goonies stay where they are at in frotn of the pony/dragon hybrid. They refused to let Derpy get hurt no matter what.

"Yeah, Derpy isn't 'de bad guy!" Apple Bloom exclaims as she points to the criminals. "Those vermin are 'de bad guys! They kidnapped an' done experimented on Derpy!"

"Right, leave her alone!" Ben Mare exclaims in determination, keeping Derpy safe as well.

"No more!" Nexus scowls in annoyance. "I..."

Nexus was cut off as Derpy grabs him and lift him into the air, much to his surprise as well as the others. Pinkie exclaims as she calms her friend down, "Whoa, easy Derpy! Put him down, it's all right!"

"Dang nab!" Applejack exclaims before speaking in a language. Whatever he say is too offense to translate.

"Put Sir Spell Nexus down, Derpy, come on." Golden Heart said gently. Derpy nods as she put the cop down. "Sir Spell Nexus, I will vouch for the Goonies and Derpy. Do you remember the reports of an orphan Pegasus pony who went missing years ago? This is her and Smaug has been experimenting on her, turning the poor mare into a pony/dragon hybrid for an insane takeover."

"Right, Derpy isn't the bad guy." Spike said in agreement.

That is enough for the Royal Guard to be convinced that Derpy isn't the villain. Spanish Stell nods as he orders, "All right, let's go." The Royal Guard takes the Lulamoon villains and take them away.

"Do you know who I am?!" Merluck snaps as he gets taken away with his family, minus Derpy. "Do you want to lose your job?!"

"Permission to treat prisoner as hostile." Lorcan said to the Royal Guard sternly.

"Granted." Nexus said. Lorcan punches Merluck in the face.

"That's for hurting my brother!"

Trixie remarks furiously, "Trixie never wanted this. You know what Trixie wanted?"

"No and I don't care." A Royal Guard said dryly as he takes Trixie away. Derpy watch as the ponies who she once considered family be taken away. But who will take care of her now? The poor pony/dragon hybrid is all alone now.

That is until Pinkie spoke up to Derpy, making her turn to her, "Derpy...listen, you're going to live with me now."

"What, really?" Derpy ask Pinkie hopefully.

"Yeah, I'm going to take care of you...because I'm your family now. I love ya, Derpy."

"Awww! I love ya too, Pinkie Pie!"

Derpy and Pinkie hugs each other, much to the approval of their friends. The crossed-eye pony has a new family now, one who will care for her always.

"So, Lorcan...what are you gonna do now?" Twilight ask Lorcan in concern. The dragon's treasure hunt is finally over, but what awaits him now.

Lorcan sighs as he said, "Oh, I don't know...I guess I could travel but...I feel empty inside...alone..."

"You can stay with us, Lorcan." Spike, who woke up, said as he hugs his adopted siblings. "Become a Sparkle, one of us! You will never be alone again!"

"So how about it, Lorcan?" Starlight ask Lorcan who pauses to think about this. The dragon then smiles, perhaps a family is what he's missing.

"Yeah...I think I will like that." Lorcan said as he joins in on the hug. The dragon finally got his real treasure: a family.

Of course, just when things got happy, they are dashed as two familiar alicorns appears, intending on knocking down the Goon Docks.

"All right, Sparkle." Lord Wealth said as Prince Jewel watch from nearby. "Today's the day so it's time to get this over with."

"Honey..." Twilight Velvet said in sadness. With what happened to the Goonies, no one was able to find a solution to the original problem: saving te Goon Docks from being destroyed.

"I'm sorry, honey, I know I did." Mr. Sparkle said with a sigh. The unicorn has done his best to save everyone's home but it's too late.

"Come on, Sparkle! We don't got all day!" Prince Jewel remarks to Lord Wealth with a snort. "We got 50 more houses to tear down after yours!"

Shining looks furious over what happened as he tries to attack Prince Jewel for the insults. His friends held him to keep the unicorn from attacking the jerk who hid behind his dad like a coward.

"He ain't worth it, Shining! Jewel never was!" Golden Heart exclaims to Shining with a sight.

"It's okay, calm down." Applejack said, upset like Shining is.

"Sir Spell Nexus, I need you to witness this." Lord Wealth said with a sly grin while taking out the foreclosure papers that will spell the end of the Goon Docks forever.

"Dad, we're sorry." Twilight said to Mr. Sparkle sadly. "We have our hands on the future...but have to throw it away to save our lives."

"I'm sorry too." Starlight said with a sigh. Mr. Sparkle gave a sad smile, knowing that his son and daughter were referring to the treasure of One-Eyed Flint Jones. Once he saw the map missing from the attic, the unicorn knew that his foals and their friends went out for it.

"That's all right." Mr. Sparkle said as he hugs Twilight and Starlight. "You two, Shining and Spike are back with your mother and me...Lorcan has joined the family. As far as I'm concerned, that makes us the richest ponies in Equestria."

Of course, Lord Wealth chuckles while saying, "Sparkle, you're lookig at the richest ponies in Equestria. Now sign it!"

"What a way to ruin a tender moment." Rarity groans a bit. Lord Wealth turns around so that Mr. Sparkle will sign the foreclosure papers on his back. The father pauses a bit, hesisting.

"Boy golly." Applejack said in sadness while looking to her pals. "It's going 'ta be sad no longer being a Goonie."

"Ah done going 'ta miss being one." Apple Bloom said while hugging her Cutie Mark Crusader friends.

"Us too." Scootaloo and Sweetie said as they hug her friend right back.

"I will miss you all." Ben Mare said as he hugs Twilight, fearing that this will be the last time that the Earth pony will see there.

But just as things are about to be hopeless, something unexpected happen. Zecora was checking Starlight's stuff and found his marble bag. Out of curiosity, the zebra opens it and looks inside.

Zecora gasps in shock as she closes the bag. Then the zebra begins yelling in African, causing others to hear her. Fluttershy ask puzzled, "Zecora?"

"Rainbow, what is she saying?" Shining ask Rainbow puzzled. Zecora looks excited for some reason. "What is she saying?"

"Uh, no pen...no write..." Rainbow said as she does her best to translate what the zebra is saying. Zecora's shouting is distracting Mr. Sparkle who looks puzzled by what's going on. She kept shouting while pointing at the bag, making Rainbow realize what she's saying, "No sign, no sign!"

"Wait, no sign! No sign!" The CMC exclaims in surprise and excitement.

"Wait, don't sign, Mr. Sparkle, don't!" Lorcan exclaims as Rainbow flew over and grabs the pen from Mr. Sparkle, stopping him from signing in time.

"Hey!" Lord Wealth exclaims in annoyance as he turns around upon this happening. "How dare you!"

"Don't sign, don't sign!" Rainbow exclaims while pointing to Zecora who rush over with Starlight's marble bag.

"There's something in Starlight's marble bag!" Twilight exclaims with a smile. Zecora continues speaking in African and takes Twilight Vevlet's good hoof, holding it into position.

"What's in the bag?" Shining ask in curiosity.

Zecora opens the bag and dumps the contents right into Twilight Vevlet's hoof. The ponies and dragons look amazed, with Lord Wealth and Prince Jewel look stunned, as rubies, emeralds and diamonds are poured out.

"Wow!" Everyone exclains in amazement and excitement. Those jewels must cost a fortune.

"But I thought we gave up every treasure to the Lulamoons!" Spike exclaims in surprise. "But how unless..."

"Dad, my marble bag!" Starlight exclaims excitedly. Of course, now the colt remembers putting some jewels in his marble bag back on the Nightmare Moon. "Dad, the Lulamoons forgot to check it! I emptied my marbles out and put the jewels in my bag! That's worth enough so we don't have to leave the Goon Docks!"

Pinkie reveal, "And *I* grabbed a few of the gems too on the way out," Thee pinky pony pull two good-sized bags of gold and jewels out of her mane before admitting, "Okay, Rarity did, but she gave them to me for safe keeping. But the important thing is, that is enough gold and jewels to keep the entire neighborhood all paid off on their bills for the next two years. And we STILL left MOST of the treasure for One-Eyed Flint Jones."

Golden Heart comment, "There is a 60 thousand bit reward for the capture of the Lulamoons (five thousand each for Trixie and Merluck and 50 thousand for Smaug himself). Between that AND those three bags worth of gold and jewels, well, I would say that is a more than sizeable profit."

"Indeed it has." A voice spoke up. The ponies gasps, some of them as someone arrives on the scene. It's a very beautiful female alicorn with long flowing light blue/green, and purple mane and tail, a golden tiara on her head, a golden collar with a jewel in the middle around her neck, and golden hooves. She is Princess Celestia, Twilight's teacher, Cadance's aunt and Ben Mare's mother.

"Mother!" Ben Mare exclaims as he rush over to nuzzle his mother. "You're here! We did it, we saved the Goon Docks!"

"As well as this." Golden Heart said as he came over, presenting a familiar sword to Celestia. "I have recovered the magical sword that was stolen many years ago. My mission is a success."

"And so it is." Celestia said with a smile as she takes the magical sword. The alicorn spoke to the many, "Because of the gems and the recovery of the magical sword along with the Goonies saving Equestria from evil, I hereby decree that the Goon Docks are now a historical landmark! No one will ever tear it down."

Mr. Sparkle grins as he uses his magic to tear up the papers, exclaiming, "That's enough for me! There will be no more singing today...tomorrow...or ever again!" The unicorn the remains into the air, making most of the crowd cheer excitedly.

Pinkie exclaims while bouncing up and down, "Hey, you know what this calls for?"

"Let me guess; a party!" Sweetie exclaims with a smile.

"Not just ANY party; a 'we just saved the Goon Docks AND possibly even all of Equestria' party."

Scootaloo pauses to think then said, "You know, Pinkie, that's - actually a VERY good idea."

Everybody Else (except, obviously, the Lulamoons and the would-be developers) nod and cheer in agreement.

The news ponies came onto the scene, one of them ask eagerly, "Are those jewels real? How did you find them?

"What happened out there?" Another reporter pony ask eagerly. "Were your lives in any danger?"

"Oh, we went through a lot." Fluttershy said meekly.

"Yeah, 'dat octopus creature we ran into was nuts!" Applejack remarks with a shiver.

"Octopus?" The first reporter pony ask in bewilderment.

"Yeah, very dangerous!" Rarity exclaims in agreement.

"The scariest incident is walking the plank." Cadance said with a shiver of her own.

"Walking the plank?" The first reporter pony ask puzzled as well.

"We also found this pirate ship." Shining said with a smile.

"Yeah, this ship got this super duper treasure on it!" Pinkie exclaims while bouncing up and down. "Those meanie Lulamoons were chasing us and..."

"Argh, okay, that's enough." Nexus groans a bit as he pushes through the reporters. "Honestly, Pinkie Pie. Is this another one of your stories?"

"No, no, Nexus, I'm telling the truth this time!"

"Yes, I will vouch for her." Golden Heart said seriously to Nexus. "What we're saying is true."

Nexus groans as he is about to speak but saw something that made his eyes go widen. The unicorn exclaims, "Holy Mag'ne, foster mother of Celestia! Look at that!"

Everyone on the beach turns to see an amazing sight: a familiar pirate ship is appearing in the ocean, a most beautiful sight ever.

"It's...it's wonderful." Lorcan said with a smile.

"Folks, we are at Pony Cedar Point. And we're looking at what appears to be...a pirate ship." The first reporter pony reports in amazement.

"Yes...Celestia, Flint Jones has learned his lesson...and now his pirate ship can set sail once more." Golden Heart said to the princess with a smile.

"Yes, I didn't want to close his ship in that cave years ago...but it's the only way for him to learn his lesson." Celestia said with a smile. "But now...he has learned in the end."

Golden Heart point out. "And, now that we actually see the pirate ship, it wouldn't be hard to get a crew assembled to get after the ship and recover the rest of the treasure. And since the kids found the treasure, they would get a ten percent finder's fee AND the remainder of that treasure would be an excellent attraction to Mr. Sparkle's museum. All in all, I would say things worked out great for everybody except the greedy developer and his son; of course, the Lulamoons."

"Yes, indeed."

The Goonies and Derpy go to sit on nearby rocks and watch as the Nightmare Moon continues its sail. The vessel is freed of the cave where it was trapped for many years, to set sail once more.

"Bye Flint." Twilight said while waving goodbye. "And thanks."

Derpy grins as she yell out her excitement, the Goonies grin as they yell along with their new friend. The gang watch on as the Nightmare Moon sail away into the sunet, the sight of the Goonies' great adventures that allows thm to save their home.

The End

Cast list
Tara Strong: Twilight Sparkle
Amy Palant: Starlight
Andrew Francis: Shining Armor
Andrea Libman: Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy
Asheligh Ball: Rainbow Dash, Applejack
Britt McKillip: Princess Cadance
Matt Hill: Soarin'
Tabitha St. Germain: Rarity, Derpy Hooves, Mrs. Cake
Michelle Creber: Apple Bloom
Claire Cortlett:
Madeline Peters:
Cathy Weseluck: Spike the Dragon
Jason Marsden: Ben Mare
Kathleen Barr: Trixie Lulamoon
Brian Cox: Merluck
Tim Curry: Smaug
Scott McNeil: Prince Jewel
Brenda Crichlow: Zecora
Lauren Faust: Herself
Orlando Bloom: Golden Heart
Vic Mignogna: Lorcan
Tim Allen: Timothy Taylor
Harvey Atkin: Lord Wealth
Corey Burton: Sir Spell Nexus
Nicole Oliver: Princess Celestia
Frank Welker: ORV announcer, store clerk, Arrow Flynn, Reporter pony 1
Tom Kane: Cracker Roll
Rob Paulsen: Slimmy Lenny, Reporter pony 2
Scott Menville: Thomas the Rat
Kevin Michael Richardson: General Spanish Steel
Brian Dummond: Mr. Cake
Peter New: Big Macintosh
With special guest voices by
Olivia d'Abo: Jane Porter
Sarah Natochenny: Ash Ketchum

Author's note
What a great fic, eh folks? Whatcha think? I hope this gets some great reviews when the time comes.

Ben Mare: We enjoyed it.

Twilight: (nuzzles Ben) So did we.

Ponies: You rule!

Me: Well, Twilight, Spike, don't you two go anywhere because you're both in my next fanmake.

Spike: What is it?

Me: It's a fanmake of the Bugs Bunny short called 'Operation: Unicorn'. Here's the short cast list...

Bugs Bunny-Twilight Sparkle and Spike (sharing the role)
Wile E. Coyote-Doctor Lizardo (my MLP: FIM OC)
Exploding rabbit decoy-Booby-trapped robotic lookalike of Ben Mare
Exploding coyote decoy-Boobytrapped robotic duplicate of a MLP OC anthro-reptile

Twilight: Dr. Lizardo's in it this, eh?

Me: Right, so get ready. Well, folks, that's it for now. Until next time...

All: Read, review and suggest!

General Spanish Steel is another OC Of the same one who made King Spykoran the Old.
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