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Matthewsmind; Being bad is good!
Topic Started: Sep 16 2012, 02:32 AM (1,439 Views)
JusSonic
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Author's note
JusSonic here, ready to do work on my fanmake of the movie Megamind at last, with Hoagie and Stitch guest-starring. I have been waiting to do this for a long time now and soon, my wait will pay off.

First off, to D.J. Scales, no plans for that trilogy but who knows?

To the Newcomer, I may look at them ASAP.

And to NoctisStella20, I can make the fourth wall if I want to, it's my fics. Also, I am not interested in being a better writer, I am in this for fun, that's all.

And now, the fanmake. This story takes place after the 'A Very Big Sleep' chapter of 'Hoagie and Stitch Cruising the Highway'.

Prologue: The Life of Alan Matthews

It's a normal life in Toon Town City...if you ignore the fact that an insane super villain is attacking the city, threatening everyone and three figures are falling right now through the sky and in slow motion too.

Two of those figures are of course the Freelance Police Hoagie and Stitch and they are falling for their lives right now. Who's the third individual you ask? Well, it's a man with a Dib-like haircut, who wear black sunglasses, a black shirt, blue pants, and black shoes. His name is Alan Matthews, and believe it or not, he's a criminal who is trying to save the day...and is about to die.

Alan narrates, "Well, folks, here's my day so far. I went to jail, lost the girl that I cared for and got my butt kicked all over the place. Well, things could've gotten a hole lot worst. Oh yeah, me and the heroes known as the Freelance Police are about to land and die. Guess they can't, huh?"

Hoagie, as he, Stitch and Alan are falling, narrates, "Well, little buddy, looks like this is the end. My whole life is flashing before my eyes. I WONDERED where I left my wallet!"

Stitch's voce remarks, "I can't even remember how we got into this mess."

"Come on, Stitch. Don't you remember? We were in our office, just back from London, when we got the call about Matthews offing the Silver Sentry."

Alan's voice in annoyance points out, "Hey, guys. Let ME handle the flashback. I DO know more of the story than you do."

"Fair enough." Hoagie's voice admits. This is Alan's story after all. May as well let him tell it, right?

"We'll just wait until next time." Stitch's voice remarks in agreement.

Alan's voice continues, "Thank you. Now then, how did it all come to this, you ask? Well, my story starts at the beginning...the very beginning, that is."

Flashback

Years ago, before Alan became the well known criminal that he is, the would-be villain/hero was an infant in his mother's arms. Yes, it was something that would last forever, right? WRONG!

"To be honest, I had a fairly standard childhood."

Alan's baby self was sucking his thumb a bit.

"Where I came from, I was in as you might call a Broken Home...literally!"

Sure enough, Alan is held by his mother as filks run over the place like crazy. Why? You see, the boy was from another one...one that is about to be sucked into a black hole and destroyed! The radar flashes 'PANIC' like mad as the alert button is rang.

"I was eight days old from my mother's womb and I'm still living with my parents. How pathetic is that, right?"

His mother, Coco La Bouche, gave him to his father Stan Matthews. The two must save their baby boy even at the cost of their own lives! Stan put his son right into a spacepod waiting for Alan.

"Obviously, it's time for this baby to move on."

Alan looks confused as his parents put him in the rocket. He has no idea that this will be the last time that the infant would see his parents...alive that is. They must give him the resources to help their son survive, no matter what.

"Here is your goldfish, Bob, son. He will take care of you." Coco said quickly as she put something in the spacepod with her son: it's some sort of goldfish in a bowl. Then the mother put a kitten in there that mewos. "That is Bob's friend Number One. Careful, he may no have much time left to live."

"And here is your binkie." Stan said as he put the binkie into Alan's mouth. The man smiles as he hug his wife. This is the last chance that they will see their baby boy, it's time to say their final goodbyes and for the father to say his father. "Alan....no matter where you go, remember: you are destined for..."

Of course, the dome closes over Alan, Bob and Number One, blocking off what Stan is saying. The baby looks confused at this.

"Err, what was that last part? I didn't hear it but that part sounded important. Destined for what? Argh!"

Soon the rocket is off, sending the boy right off the planet and in the nick of time.

"I was soon set out to find what may be my destiny."

Soon the planet was sucked into the black hole, destroying it and everyone on the planet. But it wasn't the only world to be destroyed, another planet is being swallowed too but another before someone on it send out another rocket, saving another infant from certain death.

"It turns out that another kid from a neighborhood world got the same idea."

The rocket flew through the galaxy like mad, the one with Alan in it was hit by a lot of meteors, being knocked around like mad. The infant and his pals yelp and tumbling around.

Soon Alan was slammed to the window and saw the other rocket.

"And that's where I met him, Mr. Goody Two-Shoes, the same one who would be my mortal enemy."

In the robot tube, on a glass tube, a baby black baby with black/blue hair who is holding a bottle holder. Upon seeing Alan, he gave him a raspberry and put on his binkine.

"And thus, our amazing rivalry has begun."

Both rockets continue heading through space until they arrived at a familiar planet: Earth itself. They are heading to what could be either one's destination: some sort of mansion.

"Look at that mansion, could that place be the one that I am destined for?"

We can see baby Alan peeking, giggling in delight. He's about to get a new home!

"A life that is a dream...and filled with luxury?"

It looks like Alan is going to get his better life...until the other baby's rocket hit him, sending him right off course. And add it to add insult to more tragedy, the future super hero is heading right to where Alan was going to!

"Unfortunately not!"

The other baby's rocket slid into the house, sliding down the hallway until it stops in the living room where a couple is celebrating Christmas while they were reading.

"Even faith picks favorites apparently!"

And what will happen to Alan, Bob and Number One, you ask? Well, the trio's rocket are heading to the city of Toon Town, obviously to another course...not a good one apparetly.

"Not a big deal, a much better different fate awaits me."

The rocket bounce around the city until it soon crashed into the yard...the jailyard that is of the Toon Town City Prison. The prisoners and officers working looks surprised and confused. What is this?

"Move aside, move aside!" The warden of the prison, Commander Ulysses Feral, snaps as he push through the crowd gathering around the rocket. "What is this?!"

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At the mansion itself, the woman known as Honey Best saw the rocket opening...and saw the baby and picks him up. Smiling, Honey turns to her husband Lucius who is reading, "Oh my...a baby! How amazing!"

"Yeah, yeah." Lucius said who wasn't paying attention. "I saw it and thought of you."

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"A baby?" Feral ask in confusion as he can hear cooing back at the prison coming from the rocket!

Soon the rocket fell down, revealing Alan, Bob and a crushed Number One that died during the crash.

"Fortunately for yours truly, I found a lovely place which I would call home."

A random prisoner, once the hatch opens, took Alan while asking eagerly, "Can we keep it?"

"Ugh, whatever!" Feral groans in annoyance. "May as well since I got no idea to call an orphanage...and you dopes are attached to the thing already...and whatever that fish and dead kitten is. Someone get that boy a new cat."

"Number One died at the crash so Feral, my adopted 'daddy', was nice enough to get me a new one which Bob labeled 'Number Two'. Don't ask me why."

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Inside a cell, Baby Alan watches as the prisoners teach him some lessons with Bob and the new kitten Number Two watching on in interest.

"It was there that my home taught me the the difference between right..."

One criminal grins as he shows an Enforcer card to Alan, he and the other criminals shake their heads no. To their delight, the baby shake his head meaning that the Enforcer isn't good!

"...and bad."

The criminals now shows Alan the criminal card and nod in approval. The baby nods, liking it.

"As for Mr. Goody Two Shoes, he had life handed to him on a silver plater apparently!"

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Sure enough, Lucius is reading the paper as Honey is flying...literally as she is holding onto her new baby child who is flying in the air as if by powers! Amazing!"

"Lucius, our baby can fly as if he has super powers like you!" Honey exclaims to Lucius with a smile.

"Oh yes, yes, honey, you get the best, darling. He has the power of a Super." Lucius answers, again not paying attention. He is used to seeing babies with powers so it's nothing new, right? The baby flew around to Honey's amazement.

"That guy got the power of flight, invulnerability and great hair. Ugh! It ticks me off even thinking about it!"

The baby's hair shines a bit, smiling happily.

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Now Alan on the other hand is spending his new life in prison, hammering some of the license plates with Number Two assisting and Bob keeping an eye on him to make sure that the growing up boy doesn't hurt himself or worst.

"But me? I got something far, far even greater!"

Number Two uses a torch on the plates, helping Alan in making them, whatever it's cruel work or not.

"My incredible genius!"

We now see Alan putting an item on the machine being built.

"As well as the ability to making machines of mass destruction, one that got me into trouble with 'daddy' and made be lose another friend."

Alan smiles a bit. His machine built with approved his life forever...or make things worst. Take your pick.

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Sure enough, the big day comes: Alan was on his bike with Bob and Number Two rollign through the hallways with a few criminals...as a laser came out of it, blowing up a hole in a wall! It's an escape!

The criminals cheers as they rush out of the prison, making their escape. Alan, Bob and Number Two would've joined them...but were stopped by a familiar upset warden: Feral and he isn't happy indeed.

As if that wasn't enough, one of the rocks from the explosion fell right onto Number Two, crushing him flat big time, killing off the kitten.

"Number Two died that day and I was put into another cell by Feral...of course, he gave me another kitten to make up for my loss which Bob dubbed 'Number Three'. Seriously, we keep going through these guys."

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Years has passed and Alan is now 9 years old, wearing an orange jumpsuit, carrying Bob's fish bowl with Number Three and the officer whose chained him up following the boy. Today is a big day...which will end up being a bad one for Alan.

"So after a few years and with some time off for good behavior, or whatever counts as good in Feral's book, I was given an opportunity to improve myself via learning...whatever I like it or not."

The prison bus came to prison as Alan was escorted into the place. It soon heads off, taking the boy to where he will be learning when not in prison: a place called...school.

"At a certain place called...'school'."

Soon the bus stopped as Alan saw a sign that reads 'Toon Town City's Gifted School for Little Gifted Kids'. Maybe here, the boy can make some new friends and maybe improve his life, right? WRONG AGAIN!

"Unfortunately, by bad luck, it was there that I ran into Mr. Goody Two Shoes once again."

Alan, Bob and Number Three was taken into the schoolhouse by the officers. Upon entering, the boy gasps as he saw a sight that he himself didn't think to see again: that baby, now a grown boy in white and black clothes, is spinning the desk with the teacher in it, much to the amazement of the kids watching.

Of all the places to go to, why must Alan ran into the one who ruined his chance of a truly good life here?

"Already, he has master the huge army of soft soft headed groupies, don't ask me what it means."

The kids cheers as the desk was tossed down, but then they saw Alan looking meek, blushing in worry as Bob frowns a bit. Number Three of course looks on blnakly. The kids of course look away, obviously frightened of him.

"Hey look at what the cops dragged in: another freak from the pit." A school child known as Big Brother taunts, making the other kids laughs. Alan looks down a bit, he can tell that he himself is going to hate school.

The young boy who would be Alan's rival looks concerned and prepares to fly to him but a girl named Vicky push him aside, taunting, "Yeah, do us a favor and idea. Ha ha ha!"

"Boy howdy, yew kids are dumb!" Bob exclaims furiously. "Number Three, go out there, destroy, destroy, destroy!!!"

Of course, Number Three just sat there and plays with a ball of yarn. Bob sighs in annoyance. Why does he even try?

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At Show and Tell, the boy uses his heat ray eyes to make popcorn pop a bit, heading to the students who cheers for this. They are loving this super kid!

"The hero brought their affection with showmanship, along with great gifts of deliciousness."

The kids cheers a bit as Alan looks at the popcorn, grinning a bit. Maybe there's a way to get the other children to like him.

"So I figure, even I can make this popped corn and win those mindless fools over!"

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It was nighttime as Alan was at work, sketching on his plans to win approval at school. Bob and Number Three look at the prints, helping their friend/master out.

"Hey, Alan! Lights out!" Feral snaps to Alan as he passed the cells. "That goes with the rest of you garbage!"

All ofthe lights are turned out in their cells. Alan of course waited until Feral is gone then takes out his binkie. Number Three helps his master out while Bob decides to head to sleep for the night. The machine looks good but the arms may need work.

Alan pause a bit, maybe he could put a heat laser inside the machine, make the popcorn more hotter...

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Alan is at school shouting off his invention to the class: a walker for Bob his goldfish. The class watch as the would-be villain press a button on his remote, causing Bob himself to hum amd walks around in his robotic body. For a moment, it looks like Alan is finally going to gain popularity points.

That is until Alan press another button, causing the walker to shoot out a laser and hit a bucket of corn...and then it blew up like mad.

"Whoa!" The kids scream and ran from the danger, the bucket is on fire, the walker is going out of control! Alan does his best to stop the thing as he works the button. Number 3 just sat there, looking blankly.

Of course, the future superhero flew over to the fiery bucket and uses his breath to absorb the fire into himself, saving the day from Alan's accident.

"I've learned a very hard lesson that day. Good get all the prison and adleation while evil gets sent to quiet time in the corner."

Sure enough, Alan yelps as the boy takes him to the corner and place him down. The bad boy was obviously being punished for something that isn't even his fault...being like the bad guy. The good guy then flew up to the teacher who gave him a gold star on his shirt for defeating Alan.

And once again, Alan is rejected by the class...and that makes things worst!

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A class photo is taken as the kids and teacher are gathered by the hero...while Alan, Bob and Number Three stood on the other side, outcasted and alone. No one wants to be near with them or even be their friends.

"Obviously, fitting in wasn't really an option.

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The goody good boy was playing the guitar, being loved by the class and teacher some more. Alan on the other hand is at a table, alone with only Bob and Number Three to keep him company.

"While they all were learning the song 'Itsy Bitsy Spider', I was learning how to dehydrate animate objects and rehydrate them at will."

A sad Alan uses a ray gun on Bob turning him into a cube then pours water right into the goldfish hanging him back to normal though a bit dizzy. Alan gasps and taps the glass, waking his friend up and causing him to grin.

"Some days, I felt like it was just me, Bob and Number Three against the whole world especially since the cat begins to walk on his own two paws."

Sure enough at Dodgeball class, the superhero boy glances at the remaining kids to pick from....then chose Vicky to be on his team.

"It seems like no matter how much I tried, I am always the odd man out, the mad genius that everyone grows to hate, the screw-up and the black sheep."

Alan sighs as he stands a bit, preparing for the worst: once again it's him...against the whole class. Sure enough, Big Brother yells out, "Come on, get the runt!" The boy yelps in pain as the kids throw dodgeballs right at him.

"Yes, the bad boy."

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Alan decides on a new tactic to win at dodgeballs as well as getting payback. He put his binkie on a strange helmet, putting it on. The other kids laugh cruelly to him, finding him more pathetic than usual as they throw dodgeballs at him.

But Alan became prepared as the helmet is a machine. Lightning appears around him, sending the balls right away from the future villains. Of course, this causes a window to get hit along with a man that is about to get into a car.

The teacher would've gotten hit have the boy having blocked the remaining dodgeball in time.

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And like before, Alan was send to the corner as punishment while the hero got more stars on his shirt as a reward for stopping him. Yeah, kinda unfair, is it?

"Was this my destiny?"

The kids applaud the superhero while Alan sat alone by himslf, rejected and unwanted by them as well as the rest of the world apparently.

"Wait, hang on. Maybe it was!"

Alan looks back furiously at the class and the superhero, growling in hatred. Perhaps the future villain doesn't need acceptance...but fear! If these fools can't treat him like an equal, then he will treat him cruelly right back!

"Being bad is the one thing that I'm good at all along. And then it hit me and it was like this: If I was the bad boy..."

Alan smirks evilly as he glances at some dangerous chemicals. Time for payback.

"Thus, I'm going to be the baddest boy of them all! Ha ha ha!"

And so it was done, blue smoke blew up in the school like mad. Alan got his payback right back...but he was expelled forever as a result. The boy nevertheless smirk in triumph as the officer hauls him away from the school.

"I was destined to be a supervillain. And me and that idiot? We were destined to be rivals!"

The class and the teacher, covers in blue stuff, glares at the villain, they are glad that he is gone forever. The black boy raspberries at his rival and scoffs at him> The kids cheers while he lifts the school and took off with it.

"And thus, the die has been cast and so began an enduring epic life long career...and I loved it! Ha ha ha ha ha ha!!"

Time goes on as Alan and the superhero grew up, becoming rivals in Toon Town City, one paper shows 'Hometown Boy Makes Bad'. More papers shows the boy as a teenager fighting against the boy, now an adult and in a superhero outfit with a new name.

Alan's voice explain, "And, just to satisfy any curiosity, the Silver Sentry ages three times more quickly than I do in this story. Hence the reason we can both arrive on Earth as infants and he can already appear to be an adult while I'm still a teenager. Our battles grew more and more intense. He would win, I...would almost win others. My opponent picked the name 'Silver Sentry', but I stuck with my given name of 'Alan Matthews' for two reasons. One: It was slightly more humble and Two: All the really good super-villain names were already taken anyway. Anyway, ALAN MATTHEWS...Incredible Handsome Criminal Genius, the master of all villany! MWA HA HA HA HA!!"

"Matthewsmind"

Author's note
And thus, we hear Alan's backstory before becoming a villain. In the next chapter, the villain escapes prison and begins his latest plan to get rid of the Silver Sentry, which involves kidnapping reporter Cree Lincoln on an important day for the superhero. Read, review and suggest.

The opening of this story references the third episode of 'Hoagie and Stitch Season 2' as wel as the actual second season of Sam and Max (the former takes place long after this midquel).

Coco La Bouche is the evil villaines from Rugrats in Paris while Stan Matthews AKA the Shadow Man is an OC of Froggofan whose let me used him.

Lucius is the superhero Frozone and Honey is his wife, both are from The Incredibles.

Do I need to explains where Feral came from?
Edited by JusSonic, Sep 16 2012, 04:41 PM.
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VISION-KING, I was preferring to Alan about the villain part, I think. Heck, been a long time since I've finished that fic. Also, I believed I mentioned whom I got in the previous fanmake. Extras may be another story.

sonic213514, Alan's eyes are the same as his father's. Maybe black or something.

Chaper: Escape and Planning

Feral mumbles a bit as he hold up a gift box behind his back at the prison. The warden is told to deliver this to a certain inmate whose has lived here for years since he was an infant. Feral wishes that he got a new promotion after the capture of Lotso, the Goody Bandit.

Feral frowns as a guard is reading a paper which has a certain article 'Silver Sentry Museum Opening', meaning the day has come for the museum dedicated to the superhero of Toon Town City to be opened. But the guard is supposed to be on duty.

"Hey, read on your own time!" Feral snaps to the guard. The man yelps and jumps to his feet, saluting his boss. "Open up!"

Ralph nods as he press a button to open a window to the cell of one Alan Matthews. Feral peeks through, the cell has wall of cutesy animals with a rainbow on it, along with the words 'Happy Thoughts Make Happy People'. The cat warden ordered it this way to drive Alan insane. Must've worked so far, right?

"Hmmm?" Feral ask puzzled. Something's wrong here: this room is too quiet. The cat glances to Alan's chair...but then it twirls around, revealing nothing in, much to his shock. "What the...?!"

For a moment, it looks like Alan has escaped...but then a familiar pair of eyes appear, booming, "Boo!"

Feral screams in alarm as he jumps back. The warden groans as Alan, wearing his prison clothes, laughs a bit. Why must that criminal always do that to him? The villain sat in his twirling chair with a smirk, he love doing that.

"Good morning, daddy." Alan taunts Feral, much to the Enforcers leader's annoyance.

"I told you before, Alan, stop calling me that!" Feral scowls at Alan angrily. "Just because I let you stay here in this heckhole, doesn't make me your adoptive father! I am the warden here, I've already got a niece of my own, thank you very much!"

"Whatever, Feral! I got great news for you. I am a changed man an dof course, I'm about to re-enter society as a solid, true citizen."

"Oh ha ha, how many times have I heard that, Alan? Forget it! You are a villain and you always will be, you will never changed, inside or out, and there's no chance of you leaving this place EVER!"

"Oh as usual, you are so much fun." Alan said with a smirk. He kinda figures that Feral would never fall for his 'changed man' line after so many itmes. "So whatcha got there?'

Feral roll his eyes as he hold up the box, explaining, "You have a present in the mail, Alan." The cat opens the box to see who in their right mind would give a criminal like Alan anything.

"So what is it? A puppy? A new mechanical ding-a-ling machine that I could use? That new Nintendo Wii U that I've heard so much about?"

"No, no, no, and I ain't getting you that thing because there's no plug or whatever to hook that game system up to!" Feral snaps in annoyance at Alan. The cat warden takes out some sort of watch, much to his confusion. There's a note which he takes. "Hmmm? 'From Silver Sentry. To count every second of your 100 life sentences." The cat scoffs as he tosses the card away. "How odd, never thought that Silver Sentry would be a gloating type."

"Clearly you don't know him as well as I do." Alan remarks to Feral with a smirk. The warden however smirks as he places the watch on, obviously the cat isn't going to let his 'son' keep the thing.

"Well, I will give him credit: the hero got nice taste. I hope you don't mind if I'll keep it."

"Oh, sure, why not?" Alan remarks as if not scaring that Feral is keeping his present. The villain begins to ponder a bit. "Say, Feral? By any chance, could you give me the time? I don't want to be late for the opening of the Silver Sentry Museum after all."

Feral scoffs but decides to humor the villain by looking at the watch mockingly. As he does, the Enforcer warden fails to notice the watch recording and doing some scanning of Alan.

"Oh, bad news, Alan, looks like you're going to miss it...by several thousand years!" Feral taunts Alan, unaware of what's going on. "If you're luck, until the end of time!"

Feral laughs as he leaves the area. Of course, the warden fails to see a secret grin on Alan's face as he ask slyly, "Oh am I? Ha ha ha!"

The villain laughs cruelly as the window closes. Alan is about to make his latest escape...and Feral is going to help him without realizing it!

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In a part of the screen, a voice is heard on the radio as the screen begins beeping as the words 'Disguise Generator Activates' is seen, "Happy Silver Sentry ay, Toon Town City!"

A feline arm appears, pressing the 'Stealth Mode' button on the car and pulls a lever, allowing the vehicle and its riders to become invisible. The plan to escape has bgun.

The voice on the radio continues speaking, "It's going to be a beautiful day in this downtown as we are here to honor a great man, the Silver Sentry!"

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The folks of the city gathers at a gigantic museum which will soon be open. Jets zoom in the sky, making smoke clouds that looks like an insignia of the Silver Sentry himself in the sky.

The voice continues, "His heart is like an ocean that is inside a bigger one. He has been watching us for years with his super vision, saving us with his super strength and got a heart that is super to care for us with."

The one speaking is a reporter who is talking in front of a camera while holding a microphone. It is a black woman who has brown eyes and curly black hair. She has a pink t-shirt, baggy blue jeans and white shoes. Her name is Cree Lincoln. What's interesting about her is that she's a villain herself, a former member of the Kids Next Door until she escapes decomission.

"Now it's time for us to give something back. This is Cree Lincoln reporting out from the dedication of the Silver Sentry Museum." Cree said into the camera....then she made a cut motion. "Okay, that's a wrap!"

The camera man turns his camera off while smiling. He was a fat man with black eyes and long red hair. He wore a brown coat, yellow shirt, orange shorts, white socks, and red shoes. He was known only as Control Freak.

"Wow, that stuff that they made you read on the air, very un-stinking-believable!" Control Freak remarks to Cree with a chuckle.

"Watch it, fatso, I made that stuff." Cree snaps to Control Freak. The camera man yelps in alarm, fearing that he made a big mistake.

"Wait, wait, I meant to say 'I can't believe that in our world today, they let...err...actual art get onto the news.'"

"Goood save. Yeah, I don't like doing this camera stuff but I do it for the money anyway."

"So what are we doing later?" Control Freak ask eagerly. The fat man got a crush on Cree for some time though she pretends not to notice. He points while adding, "Let's get a coffee or something!"

"Come on, where's your Silver Sentry, Control Freak?" Cree ask with a chuckle as the two walk off together. Control Freak frowns a bit. How is he going to prove himself to this girl?

"Well, if I was Silver Sentry himself, that jerk Alan Matthews and other villains wouldn't kidnap you all the time, that's the first thing that I would've done!"

"Ugh, I don't get kidnapped all the time, I got a...side job other than that. I mean, I can imagine how many times he kidnaps others. But still, very sweet of you to offer anyhow."

"And I would be watching you like a dingo watching a human baby!" Control Freak remarks to Cree excitedly. Yeah, the last part sounds a bit gross but this is Control Freak himself that we're talking about here!

"Uh, right." Cree said with a nod.

"Okay, that sounded...maybe htat sounded a little weird..."

"You got it, a little bit. Yeah."

Cree winces by the thought of what Control Freak just said. Even now, a kidnapping is enough to get her away from this loser. Unknown to her, a familiar car appears behind her.

"Cree, you're making a weird face and that's making me feel weird!" Control Freak exclaims as he walks out. Cree heard a can shaking and turns just in time for some spray to hit her in the face. The woman fell unconscious as a pair of feline arms grabs her. Control Freak, not noticing, rants on, "Point is, I would watch you like someone I...wait, not love. No, we ain't in love! Ain't saying that I love ya!"

Once Cree is pulled into the car, the vehicle turns invisible and droves off, hitting a man with balloons and causing the latter to float off. Cree once again is kidnapped and Control Freak didn't even realize it!

"Okay, I love you, whatever. But heck, I'm not saying that I'm IN LOVE with you, I'm saying..." Control Freak turns around to speak to Cree, but saw that she is gone, much to his confusion. "Err, Cree? Cree honey? Where did she go?"

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Feral walks by the prison cells, like the arrogant warden that he is. As the cat does Feral fails to notices that his watch is scanning him right now. It took a few moments but the scan mode is done...the watch turns a bit and shows a familiar man's picture automatically.

The prisoners looks alarmed as Feral is suddenly transformed into Alan himself. One of them exclaims, "Huh? What the...?"

"Hey!" The second prisoner exclaims in confusion.

Feral, unaware of what's going on, saw two guards named Ralph Wolf and Sam the Sheepdog eating lunch. He frowns while snapping in Alan's voice, still unaware, "Hey, get back to work, you idiots! The city doesn't pay you to sit on your butts!"

Ralph and Sam the Sheepdog looks shocked upon seeing Feral...as Alan. How did he escape? The two Enforcers jump up and tackles the 'villain', yelling, "FREEZE!" The warden looks shocked as he was grabbed. What is this?!

"Wait, what are you two doing?! Stop!" Feral orders but Ralph hits the cat warden with a tazer. "It's meeeeee!" Feral groans, "It's Commander Feral..."

The guards hit Feral with a tazer once more, unaware of what's going on. Luckily they caught 'Alan' or their boss would be furious! Once they got the 'prisoner' subdued, they dragged him to 'his' cell.

"Hey you!" Ralph orders the guard with a frown.

"Open up!" Sam the Sheepdog orders the guards in determination. "This one almost made a break for it."

The guard, seeing the fake Alan being dragged, stood up and opens the cell door. Ralph and Sam the Sheepdog drags their 'prisoner' in. But have they look carefully in the cell area, they would've saw the real Alan hiding behind his chair, smirking sinisterly.

Now for Alan to put his next part of his escape plan into moment: while Feral is being strapped into the chair, the vllain snatches his watch quickly and rush to the exit. Ralph and Sam the Sheepdog looks shocked as Feral is transformed back to his real self.

"You idiots, he tricked us." Feral groans a bit. Ralph and Sam the Sheepdog turns just in time to see Alan, having knocked the guard outside, closing the cell door and trapping the trio inside.

"Well, 'daddy', you are right about me." Alan taunts as he press some buttons on his watch. The villain taps it and soon he transforms into Feral. Then he spoke in his voice, "I will always be a villain. Ha ha ha ha!"

Satisfied, the diguised Alan leaves the area, dashing out of the prison area as the three prisoners look stunned by this.

"MATTHEEEEEEEWS!!" Feral exclaims furiously. He can't believe it, Alan is escaping again!

Alan, disguised and out of the prison, walk by a few officers who are heading to the prison itself for a disturbance. During this time, a song begins to play.

Bad to the bone
Bad to the bone


Alan, once he's out of the prison, salutes to the gate guard while smirking. His disguise is doing so well! No one knew that he is about to making his latest escape.

B-B-B-B-Bad
B-B-B-B-Bad


Once Alan arrives at the exit, he grins and looks at the screeching area as if waiting for someone to pick him up.

Bad to the bone

Soon Alan smiles as an invisible dome opens up. Bob is in the front seat, much older now, as his cat assistant Number Four is doing the driving. The cat is wearing some sort of armor (like Ratchet from "Deadlocked') and is a furry humanoid, having gone through some change evolution from a crazy experiment.

"Well, howdy, good looking!" Bob exclaims with a smile. "Need a lift?"

"Ha ha ha! Sure do, you wonderful fish you!" Alan laughs to Bob eagerly.

"Come on, get in 'de car, yew!"

"Ha ha ha ha!" Alan laughs evilly as he jumps into the cart with the dome closing. "YES, FREEDOOOOOOOOM!"

The vehicle soon took off from the prison, it turns visible as Alan turns his disguise off, being restored to normal. It's great to be back in his real form...and great to be out and about, ready to rid the world of his archenemy once and for all.

"Right, heh heh heh." Bob chuckles a bit while Number Four kept on driving.

"Hey, nice work in sending me the watch, Bob." Alan remarks as he playfully punch Bob in the bowl while punching Number Four in the shoulder, getting a big 'meow' from him. "You too, Number Four."

"Shucks, ain't nothing!"

"Punch it, it's time for definitely to be with us today! Ha ha ha!"

With that, Number Four drives the car throughout the city, heading to the villain's HQ. Now that they got their prison and Alan escape, it's time for the next part.

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The celebration begins as the Silver Sentry punches through a wall prop, smirking while saying, "All right, hands in the air!" The hero is now wearing a black-white suit with a black cape and blue insignia on the chest, the uniform of the superhero.

The crow cheers wildly with the song 'Little Less Conversion (Remix) being played ith a boy dancing. The Mayor of the city, Bert Whoo, to announce, "Ladies and gentlemen, your Silver Sentry!" The hero flew into the air while smiling.

"Who is your Silver Sentry?"

"The Silver Sentry!" The crowd cheers out wildly for the hero.

The Silver Sentry flew downward, doing a pose while exclaiming, "Oh yeah, TOON TOWN!" The hero is smiling as the crowd cheers and whistles. He is enjoying this! The Silver Sentry flew above the crowd all right, "Oh yeah, gimme some!"

The Silver Sentry held a hand out, wanting high-fives, exclaiming, "Come on, give it now!" He manages to high-fived a lot of people. "Give it to me, right one, give me the good stuff! All right."

A little less conversation a little more action, please

The Silver Sentry then grabs three babies and juggle them around. Despite the fact that he's putting folks in danger, the infants were laughing happily.

All this aggrevation ain't satisfactionin' me

The hero then grab and toss the two babies back into their carriers, safe and sound.

A little more bite and a little less bark
A little less fight and a little more spark


The Silver Sentry catch the last baby and kiss its forehead before tossing it back into the last empty carriage. He is so good!

Close your mouth and open up your heart
And baby, satisfy me


When all is said and done, a microphone is tossed to the hero. The Silver Sentry grabs the thing and toss the microphone, turning to the folks while calling out with his voice echoing, "Hey there, Toon Town City!" The crowd cheers happily with some ladies weepign. "Hey..." He then points. "And hey."

Two cops shot their guns into the air in ewxcitement and salute throughout the crowd. The Sivler Sentry chuckles a bit, he is enjoying this kinda attention. It's good being the good guy.

"Yes, yes, you know...I wanna bring it down a bit. Boys, can you bring it a little lower?" The Silver Sentry requests a DJ who turns the music down. The hero floats a bit while continuing. "Thank you. Okay, folks, let's get real for a moment. Right, that's right, that's really right."

Kim Possible kisses Silver Sentry's boot as he floats on by with a smile. The hero lands on the waters, walking on it while continuing, "Even though it's super-cool to get a whole museum, super cool, you want to know what's the greatest honor that you have given me is? Do you really wanna know? Really?"

The crowd cheers a bit. The Silver Sentry looks around, saying, "Well, I will tell you. The greatest honor that you hve given me is letting me serve you all, the helplessly folks of Toon Town City. At the end of every day...I often ask myself...who woud I be without you?"

A dog named Goofy calls out, "Hyuk! I love ya, Silver Sentry!"

"Right, and I love you, random citizen!"

The hero laughs as the crowd whistle an cheer, then he twirl around, flying up into the sky before splashing into the water, most of it splashes right onto the crowd. That Silver Senry is always a showoff.

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Alan smiles as he arrives at his hideout with Bob, Number Four and Cree, unconscious and with a bag over her head. The time has come for his greatest victory and no one will stop him, not even the Silver Sentry!

Alan and his goons leaves the car, the villain remarks, "Gotta tell ya, Bob, there isn't anything like an evil lair."

"Welcome back from yer 'vacation', sir. Number Four an' Ah kept it cold an' damp just fer yew." Bob explains to Alan with a proud smile on his face.

That is all Alan wanted to hear. He ditch the prison clothes before getting soap water splashed onto him. The villain cleans himself quickly and sighs. Finally, a good bath after his time in prison!

Alan then grabs his normal clothes, putting them all on along with his sunglasses. Great to be back in his usual clothes. Turning to the waiting Bob (whose is being held in the goldbowl by Number Four), the villain said, "All right, there. So how do I look? Do I look bad or what?"

"Disgusting horrifiying, boss! Yeehaw!" Bob exclaims as Number Four gave Alan a thumbs up with his arm arm.

"Eh, you always know what to say, Bob." Alan said as he smiles upon Number Four dragging the unconscious Cree out of the car. "Good, it's her..."

"Boss!" Voices exclaims. Alan turns and saw a bunch of his troops of Combat Bots, along with a few toys named Robosnail, Catbot, Mr. Tippy, Dust Bunny, Mr. Fiend, Boppo, Stinger, Goober, Ickypus, Tharg, and two weird ones named Merc & Green, saluting. "Sir!"

"We missed you, boss!" Catbot exclaims to Alan with a smile.

"Oh, did you all miss me? Who's my menacing troops? Yes, you are, yes you are!" Alan cooes to his minions eagerly.

Mr. Tippy spots a muffin being held by Merc and tries to eat it, only for his Combat Bot pal to pull it away, snapping, "Hey, hey! No biting, get your own muffing!"

"Come on, I'm hungry!" Mr. Tippy whines to Merc pathetically. "I got a low paycheck this week!"

"I don't care!" Merc then shows some muffins to the dumb toys. "You want these muffins?" The hungry ones gasps eagerl. "Well, go get them, idiots!"

Merc toss some of the muffings away, causing the hungry ones to chase of after them. Green chuckles a bit, "What a bunch of morons. Give them muffins and they would do anything you want them to do."

"Heh heh, look at that. Right, now back to laughing. Come!" Alan laughs evilly as he pulls the lever. The villains laughs as they were raised onto a platform with the kidnapped girl, the time has come to begin the biggest plan ever!

"All right, 'de chair is done ready." Bob announces as Number Four, who is carrying Cree, with his free arm, approaches a chair which is fixed up nicely. By this time, some muffling is heard, Cree is about to wake up.

"She's awake, quick, to girl!" Alan orders Number Four quickly put Cree into the chair, strapping her down and tightly. The villain got into his chair and grabs Catbot who arrived, pettign him like a cat from spy films.

Alan waits a moment as Cree, woke up, muffling as she finds herself with the bag over her head. The woman finally gasps as it was finally lifted, allowing her to see what's going on.

Alan then begins, turning his chair around while saying as he is petting Catbot, "Well, well, Miss Lincoln...we meet again. Heh heh heh."

"Honestly, Alan, would it kil you to wash the bag any now and again?" Cree ask Alan in annoyance. He has stuffed her in the bag before and it smells worst each time!

"Ha! Scream all you want, Cree, no one will hear you!" Alan stops and blinks a bit. Cree is only glancing at him boredly. "Uh...okay, I know you have been in these situations before...but will it hurt for you to scream?"

"Yeah, lady would yew mind?" Bob ask Cree impatiently. "Number Four, scream!"

Number Four then screams loudly at Alan, making him yelp in alarm by how loud his minion is, causing him to almost fall out of his chair. After recovering, Alan snaps, "Number Four! I didn't want you to scream, I wanted her to..."

"Muffin!" Catbot exclaims, seeing muffin crumbs on his boss's hand and bite into it. The villain screams loudly and pain, beginnign to struggle with the cat robot. He twirl and grunt, tumbling a bit before tossing the idiot to Merc. "Sorry, boss! There was a muffin on your hand and..."

"Shut up, you, I will deal with later!"

"Uh, excuse me, Mr. With The Weird Hairdo?" Cree ask, not a bit intimidated by this whole thing. The woman has gone through the kidnappings before so it's no big deal to her. "Any chance you can tell me if there's some kind of dorky super-villain website where you got these Tesla coils, blinky dials and other stuff?"

"Shucks, actually, most o' it comes fro' am outlet store in..." Bob begins to explain, happy to explain things to Cree.

"No! Don't you dare answer that, Bob!" Alan exclaims angrily to Bob who pauses a bit.

"Uh...Romania."

"Bob! Don't you know what she's doing?! Cree is using her Kids Next Door skills, along with her nosy reporting stuff, on your weak minds to find out all our secrets!" Alan explains to Bob making him and Number Four gasps a bit in fear. Looks like their boss is on to something. He walks around Cree while continuing, "Those tricks won't work on me, Miss Lincoln..."

"Can you talk slower?" Cree ask a bit slyly to the villain.

"Temptress, nice try."

"What secrets do you got? Come on! Like my kid sister and her dork friends, you are sooo predictable, it's funny!"

"Predictable? Predictable?!" Alan exclaims in shock as if insulted by Cree's accustion. No one calls him 'predictable'! The villain goes to a lever while snapping, "Would this count as predictable?!"

Alan pulls the lever causing a pit to open up below Cree, showing water and a bunch of sharks beneath it. The girl however roll her eyes while saying, "Oh yes, shark, yeah. Seen them!" The shark tries to bite into near. "Yeah, thinking about it on the way over.

"Oh, really? Oh, what's this? A BOOM in your face!" Alan snaps as he pulls another lever, causing a huge gun to appear near her. Of course, Cree is still isn't impressed.

"So cliche."

"No, no, watch this!"

Alan pulls another lever, causing spikes to dangle forward and goes right near Cree. She rolls her eyes however and scoff, "Juvenile!"

"Shock and awe!" Alan tries again as he pulls another lever to send buzz saws right near the former KND girl.

"Very tacky and LAME!"

"This is where it gets so scary!"

Alan taps some buttons, trying his best to prove to Cree that he isn't so predictable. Spike boots twirl near the girl who yawns a bit, saying, "Already seen it, Alan Loser."

"What is this one?!" Alan exclaims desperately. He can't let Cree looks at him like a loser any longer! The villain twirls some wires causing more devices to appear, the flame thrower blow passed her. And still...

"Garish." Cree remarks with a shrug. Alan sighs in annoyance. Looks like there's nothing he can do to prove that he himself isn't so predictable. "Oh...the Dokugumon looks new."

"Dokugumon?" Alan asks in confusion, opening his eyes and turns to see a Dokugumon dangling near Cree. The villain turns to Bob who shrugs with Number Four. May as well go with it. "Uh, yes...YEAH! Oh, the Dokugumon..."

Alan walks to Cree, smirking a bit as if he finally got her. The villain said slyly, "Even the smallest bite of arachnis deathicus of the Digital World will instantly paralyze..."

Of course, without warning, Cree blew the Digimon right onto Alan, causing him to yelp in alarm. Number Four quickly tries to hit at the Dokugumon but hit his boss by mistake, sending him to the groudn in pain.

"ARGH, GET IT OFF!" Alan screams frantically as he twirls around a bit. "Ouch, I think it bit me!" Number Four quickly hit his boss as Bob groans in annoyance as did Cree.

"Ugh. Face it, Alan, may as well, give up." Cree remarks to Alan with a frown. "Your plans never work, whatever they are or were...trust me, I saw dumb plans failed before.

Number Four helps Alan to his feet, groaning and fixing himself and his glasses. The villain is trying to be strong. No way is he going to be made a fool out of, ever again! Time to get this plan a-going!

"Enough of wasting time!" Alan snaps to Cree sternly. "Time we call your boyfriend in tights!"

"Yeah, yeah, he will so kicked your butt, it's so funny." Cree said to Alan with a chuckle.

"Oh, it will be funny..to me!"

Alan laughs evilly as he grabs a muffin...only to be attacked by Catbot who bit into his muffin, causing him to scream in more pain. What is up with his stupid minion today?!

Author's note
Alan has escaped from prison and kidnapped Cree...with some awkward moments. In the next chapter, the villain makes his attack as the Silver Sentry speeds off to the rescue. And just when it looks like the hero will win again, something...odd happen. Read, review and suggest.

Ralph Wolf and Sam the Sheepdog are two stars of Looney Tunes.

Bert Whoo is the owl mayor from Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog.
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To be honest, KingHuffman, I already did a fanmake that has the ponies as the Oompas in a fanmake of the Tim Burton film. Who knows? I may think on ths one.

To D.J. Scales, no, there's another fic after this one. The MLP one you mentioned is in my schedule of MLP fics.

To answer your question, VISION-KING. the minions (they aren't extras) are toys found on Rugrats shows and movies, which are terror in the imaginations in the mind of the babies. They are brought to life by the Shadow Man (An OC based on a monster in one episode) and most of them are very stupid.

Chapter 2: A Shocking Death

The celebrations over at the new museum continues onward. As the celebration continues, the Freelance Police AKA Hoagie and Stitch arrives with their girlfriends Angelilo and Numbuh 5.

"Well, little buddy, looks like after the craziness in London, we arrived just in time to see this." Hoagie remarks in amusement.

"Ih, but when in blazes are they going to give out the free coffee?" Stitch complains a bit, the alien came to this celebration just for the coffee!

"Settle down, Stitch, you will get it soon enough." Angelilo said to Stitch playfully.

As the crowd cheers on, Mayor Whoo spoke up, "And now, it is with great pleasure that I present the new museum to the Silver Sentry! Ahem, Silver, if you please?'

"No problem." The Silver Sentry remarks with a smile.

The Silver Sentry then fires his heat vision at the ribbon, cutting it to officially open the museum. The crowd cheers on as the marching plays. Someone removes a cover that is covering something big, revealing it to be one huge statue of the hero itself.

"Wow, that Silver Sentry got one big statue." Numbuh 5 said with a nod.

"Big deal, Stitch got bigger." Stitch remarks with a shrug. Just then a big coated figure came up in front of the two. "Hey, stupid head, move out of the way! Weega can't see!"

The figure turns...revealing himself to be Robosnail who snarls at the hero, causing them to scream in alarm. It's one of Alan's goons! A baby cries as the monster is revealing, smoke clouds appear with thunder gathering arond.

A blimp with a symbol on it appears, making the crowd gasps. The Silver Sentry frowns deeply. Of course, it all make sense that he has to go and try to ruin everything and on an important day too.

"Looks like the show's cancelled." Numbuh 5 remarks in concern.

"Wanna go and kick some butt, Hoagie?" Stitch ask Hoagie, the alien is eager for some butt kicking since there could be only one villain who would try to ruin everything on the Silver Sentry's big day.

"Just chill, little buddy. Something tells me that this is the Silver Sentry's show." Hoagie assures Stitch with a nod. The fat boy is right, this is the Silver Sentry's moment, not the Freelance Police's for now.

Soon Robosnail, Tharg, Ickypus and more Combat Bots leave their disguises, those wearing jet packs hold their pals as they flew to the Silver Sentry, obviously attacking.

"Hmmm...." The Silver Sentry said sternly. What is Alan up to?

"Yikes! The bad guys are attacking!" Billy exclaims stupidly at what's going on. "And I forget where I am."

"Doesn't matter, the Silver Sentry will beat them...again. How pathetic." Mandy said boredly. She has seen that hero beat Alan so many times, it's not funny or good anymore to her.

The sky continues swirling around as the whole city goes dark. Then evil laughter is heard as the screen turned on the framed side that has giant projection screens. Alan's image is on it, laughing sinisterly.

"Alan Matthews!" Silver Sentry exclaims as he flew up to the screen.

"Well, well, old friend. I'm glad you remember me." Alan taunts to the Silver Sentry as he applauds his enemy mockingly.

The crowd of course boos as they throw stuff at the screen, along with the good guys. Stitch throws some stuff of his own but kept missing, hitting a few people.

"Knock it off, Stitch!" Angelilo exclaims to Stitch in worry. "You're going to hurt someone else!"

"Why not, it's fun?" Stitch ask Angelilo with a mischievous grin.

"Yeah, too bad I left my weapon back at the office!" Hoagie comments with a shrug. "That would've been fun."

Alan of course mockingly boos, remarking, "Naaaah, boo yourselves! Ha! I can play along too, Silver Sentry. Booo! Ha ha ha!"

"I should've known that you would try to crash the party." The Silver Sentry snaps to Alan sternly.

"Well, it's your fault for not inviting me. I am hurt enough. But I'm intending to do more than crash the party. For this is the day....that you and this stupid city will not forget!"

"This city has a name, Matthews, and it's Toon Town City, one of the greatest cities on the planet."

"Oh, whatever. Who cares?" Alan scoffs a bit to the Silver Sentry, not truly caring what the city is called as long as he gets his victory.

"Well, we all know how this ends, folks. It will be Alan Matthews behind bars as usual!" The Silver Sentry exclaims to the crowd as he points to Alan, making them cheer. It's true, the hero has always beaten him and he will do so again!

"Ooooh, here I am shaking in custom baby seal leather boots!" Alan taunts as he shows his boots to mock his enemy further. Anyway, you will leave Toon Town City or else!"

"Or else what?"

"This will be the last! You ever hear of..." Alan was declaring this statement towards Silver Sentry as he pushed the button from what was seen on his view screen to change the one on the left.

"Arff-Arff!" The picture shows of a familiar dog of tales.

"Gaaaugh!" The crowd gasp in horror at this image.

"He's kidnapped poor Lassie!" A woman cried out in seeing this vile act.

"Lassie come home!" A man cried out in begging the dog to return.

"What? Nooo!" Alan yelped in seeing that was the wrong image. "Who I meant was..." Just as the villain thinks he fixed the image, we get something else.

"I love you, you love me..." Then on the screen appeared a familiar singing dinosaur.

"Haaaugh!" Another woman gasped in shock and horror to see this. "He's taken Barney prison to torture children's souls!" The woman held her child close as many mothers did from this evil act.

"No-no, that's the wrong one, give me a second here!" Alan protest out to fix things but then we got another wrong image.

"You're not Marcus, your his evil twin, Lucas!" A dramatic woman explained to point at the man that she thought was her lover.

"So, you figured me out." The man revealed to be evil stated to the woman.

"Oh no, a spoiler for a soapy-film! I don't wanna know this!" A random guy yelps out in not wanting to see this episode yet...it's too soon.

"You fiend, spoiling the moment for others is..." Silver Sentry declared off in seeing what vile work that his arch-enemy is up to.

"Wait-wait, I'm still trying to get the right camera on." Alan stated off to try to get the right picture, but...

"Yo, Sugar Mama in the House, you better watch out boys, bum-bum-bum-BAM!" The next image shows an old black woman dancing at an old people's bachelor party and what she wore...well, you can only imagine.

"WAAUUGH!" The entire people of Toon Town yelped, shock & disgust to shield their eyes.

"GAAAAUGH! Old lady trying something harmful, Hoagie, claw out meega's eyes!" Stitch yelped to shield his eyes while asking for something in demand.

"Forget you! I'm clawing my own eyes out first!" Hoagie shield his own eyes to not see the un-holiness.

"I always knew you were delirious, treacherous and vile, Alan, but a psycho freak is just topping over it!" Silver Sentry exclaimed with a stern tone in seeing what this guy brought out.

"Believe me, I'm all those things, except the psycho freak, even I have a sense of taste!" Alan exclaimed to protest about the fact of who he is. "What's wrong with the picture?" The villain looked back of him at his minions, what's happening here?

"Sorry boss, one of the minions chased a muffin and pulled out our wires." Merc stated from where he, Green, and a bunch of the rest were pulling & untangling wires.

"Right, we're trying to put the right ones in!" Green exclaimed from trying to fix things, but in the worst case scenario, not much progress.

"Well hurry it up, I got an evil message to announce!" Alan exclaims to his minions impatiently.

"Okay, maybe this one." Mr. Fiend pointed in thinking this was right.

"No no, this one!" Stinger protest in saying what he got was the right choice.
Suddenly, the screens were showing a bunch of other off weird images, like Pokemon evolution, cars crashing into stuff, anvils dropping onto toonsm etc. Then what came later was a bunch of violet behavior patterns Hoagie has done to Stitch during their race to pick up the phone.

"Hey! It's us! Must be home movies!" Stitch spoke from noticing what came on the other screen now.

"I don't get it, and how this guy get images of us?" Hoagie stated out from noticing this strange act here.

"Hey look, there's you slapping my rear out the National Memorial in Washington with a paddle board!" Stitch spoke from seeing what happened to him on that place by Hoagie.

"Oh yeah, and there's the one were someone dared that I couldn't put you in my mouth, boy was that an off day's image!" Hoagie laugh off before seeing another image of what he & Stitch did.

Finally, the images were starting to fizzy out until they blew a bit and shut down.

"Boss, we got a problem, we blew a core." Bob spoke in alerting his boss of a problem.

"Don't blame us, it was Mr. Tippy's doing!" Merc spoke off in putting the blame on somebody.

"Nah, it musta been Goober's fault!" Green waved off to say it was somebody else's fault.

"Okay, look, just fix it!" Alan held his head to simply state this. "Number Four, please just use the camera for the clip." He issued this order for his close friend to deal with this problem.

"Meow!" Number Four saluted while holding a camera in his hands.

"Ha! What kinda villain has his pet kitty sound like that?" Hoagie laugh off in thinking this guy was weak, having a minion that made a cute sound.

"It's so cute, he's not so dangerous." Stitch playfully stated about Number Four's voice.

"Alright, whoever said that, I'm working on a voice box collar to make my cat sound fearsome!" Alan snapped in hearing someone make fun of his cat minion & tried to explain the case.

"Okay boss, it's set up!" Bob spoke from stating they got everything all set up...again, no more glitches, hopefully.

"Finally, let's see...evil ploy, evil rant, yes-yes, oh now I remember!" Alan tried to look over the off sets of what happened. "This will be the last you ever see of..." The villain declares out as he sets up the stage again. The camera was moved, showing a smug Cree. "Cree! Huh?"

"Wait, my sister?" Numbuh 5 ask, unimpressed. "Okay, if I was someone who doesn't know better, I would be worried. But considering my rivalry with her during the fights in the Kids Next Door."

The Silver Sentry glances and exclaims in shock, "Cree! No worries, I'm on my way!"

"Oh, I am not panicking." Cree remarks with a shrug. After all, the woman isn't upset or anything.

"Come on, try 'ta panic, will ya? Number Four?" Bob instructs Number Four who screams off camera.

"Hey, girls don't scream like that."

"You should've saw Nani screams when she wake up from a nightmare." Angelilo remarks to Hoagie and Stitch, making them chuckle a bit.

Alan cotinues taunting the Silver Sentry, "If you want to stop me, you gotta find us first, Silver Sentry!"

"I'm at the abandoned observatory near the Toonson River." Cree said with a shrug, making the villain yelp in alarm. She has went and given the location away.

"Aha!!" The Silver Sentry exclaims in determination. So, his enemy is holding Cree at the observatory! Time for him to go down there, take him down and save the day.

"Crud! Wait, no, we aren't!" Alan protests to the Silver Sentry but it's too late, the hero is already flying off to the observatory. "Ignore Cree, she is crazy!"

"Oh man, Alan is up for a butt kicking today." Stitch remarks with a smile as the crowd cheers on. Alan is going to be foiled and beaten again.

Numbuh 5 however looks a bit suspicious as she secretly leaves the scene. Alan couldn't be so obvious to use an observatory as a hideout...plus, the girl has already track down his new one earlier, so...

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The Silver Sentry flew out of the clouds, looking above the city. There's the part of the city where the Freelance Police are at, then there's Toonhattan, Toonklyn, the Bronx, Toon Broadway...then the hero saw it, the Toonson River and there's an observatory on a high cliff near it! Perfect!

"All right, Alan, time to be defeated." The Silver Sentry declares as he flew off, going past all the buildings, city and right over the river.

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On a monitor, Alan and his goons are watching the Silver Sentry approaching the observatory right now. Number Four meows a bit as Bob announces, "'De Silver Sentry is approaching, Alan. Shall Ah send 'de troops 'ta destroy?"

"Yeah, we're ready, sir!" Green exclaims with a smirk. Cree of course gave out a mock 'ha' to Alan, believing that the day will be saved. The Silver Sentry will fly in, beat the villain as usual and send him to prison. Oh, and probably tried to sweep Cree off her feet most likely.

Of course, Alan mocks right back and puls the lever, lowering the weapons. Cree looks confused. Why did he do that? Doesn't Alan wants to torture her before the good guy gets here?

It's like...Alan isn't worried at all!

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The Silver Sentry flew upward and heads towards the observatory with a date of a fight against Alan.

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Cree leans down inside Alan's HQ, closing her eyes while smiling as if ready for the big moment.

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The Silver Sentry crashes into the observatory and knocks away the giant telescope. Wait, something isn't right here. The whole place is empty. Alan, Cree and the flunkies are nowhere in sight.

"What's this?" The Silver Sentry ask in alarm. Soon the whole dome is closed, trapping him inside. "Wait a second..."

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Cree goes back into position, looking confused. Why isn't the Silver Sentry here, saving her by now? Something isn't right here!

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The Silver Sentry begins to suspect something's wrong when he saw a red X painted on the ground. It was then that the hero came to a big conclusion: Alan isn't at the observatory at all! This is a trap!

"Oh, good heavens!" Alan mocks a bit as Cree looks confused. The villain press a button, showing a screen that shows his enemy in the observatory.

"Ha ha ha! What a dummy!" Goober laughs stupidly. "He fell for it!"

"Yes, you don't think we were in the REAL observatory, do you?!"

Sure enough, the telescope door of the lab opens up, showing the observatory at the cliffs. Cree looks stunned as she realizes that the place that the woman thought was the observatory...is near a bunch of ruined-looking docks!

It was a trick! Alan knew that Cree would tell the Silver Sentry as to where they are so he made it looks like the hideout is at the observatory, when it isn't! And Cree led the superhero right into a trap!

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"Wow." Hoagie said, blinking a bit as he and his group saw what's happening in the shocked crowd. "Gotta admit, that was a nice touch."

"Figures it was too good to be true." Angelilo remarks with a groan.

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"Well, then, time we stop standing around here like idiots!" Alan laughs evilly. His biggest triumph will soon be his! Turning to Bob, he orders, "Get the death ray ready!"

"Death ray, readying! Number Four, pull 'dat there lever an' destroy!" Bob exclaims evilly as Number Four pulls the lever.

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In space, a satellite transforms into a ray gun of sorts and begins to charge up. Soon, it will fire a death ray, so powerful that not even the Silver Sentry himself could escape, if ever.

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The Silver Sentry looks around, looking for a way to escape. His enemy has made a nasty trap this time. He spots a small light in the sky and knew that within minutes or so, a death ray will destroy the observatory and with him in it!

"Old friend, right over here." Alan is heard taunting. The Silver Sentry turns and saw his enemy on a screen nearby. Figures that the villain would want to taunt him some more.

"Actually, I am an adult, you're still a teenagfer." The Silver Sentry points out to Alan sternly.

"Well, not this point. In case you haven't forget it out, you have fallen right into my trap!"

"You cannot trap justice! It's an idea and a belief!"

"Well, even the most heartfelt belief can be coordedd over time!" Alan snaps at the Silver Sentry, playing a game of battle of wits with the superhero.

"Justice is a non-corrosive metal!" The Silver Sentry exclaims while standing proudly to defy Alan.

"But metals can be melted by the heat of rahvahge."

"It's 'revenge', Alan...and it's best served cold."

Alan scoffs a bit then continues on, "Yes, but it can be easily reheated in the microwave of evil!"

"Well, guess what, your warranty is going to expire soon!" The Silver Sentry exclaims to Alan in defiance.

"Ha! Maybe I got an extended warranty, ever thought of that?!"

The folks watching the two argue pointless are getting bored, even Cree is by now. This is getting dumb. They should be fighting, not acting like children at a playground!

"Girls, girls, girls, come on, you're both pretty!" Cree exclaims to Alan with a groan. "Can I go home now?"

"Of course, you will....if the Silver Sentry can withstand the full forced power of...THE SUN!" Alan exclaims as he clenches his fire. The villain pointed while snapping, "FIRE!!!"

Alan pauses while waiting eagerly for...nothing to happen. The villain looks a bit annoyed. Why is nothing happening?

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"Uh, is it always suppose to be like this?" Hoagie ask the others who shrug a bit. The fat boy turns and notices that Numbuh 5 is gone. "Hey, where's Numbuh 5 at?'

Alan groans a bit, what is taking so darn long? The villain goes up to Bob who is glancing at the 'still loading window'. Alan spoke, "Bob...I believe I told you to fire."

"Hang on, it's still warming up." Bob explains to Alan, much to the villain's dismay and disbelief.

"What?"

"He said that it's warming up." Merc explains to Alan with a nod.

"Warming up?! How could the sun be warming up?!" Alan exclaims in shock and annoyance. The sun can't be warming up! It's the blasted sun!

"Uh, I think the machine is warming up, boss." Catobt explains to Alan who chose to ignore him, not in the point for the cat robot's stupidity today.

"Okay, one second more...a tippy-tappy tippy-tap-tap, tip-top more...." Bob explains as the villains wait a moment. Of course, by now, the Silver Sentry is getting bored, along with the crowd watching.

"This is boring." Stitch remarks with a groan. "Can weega go over there and kick some butt?"

"Why bother? The Silver Sentry will beat Alan before we get there anyway." Hoagie remarks with a shrug. Mayor Whoo looks at his watch bored. This is...pathetic.

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Alan taps his foot in annoyance as Bob continues, "We should done be ready in just..."

"Oh for crying out loud!" Alan exclaims as he hits himself on the face in annoyance. Why couldn't things be better around here for once? Come on!

"Hold on, Cree, I should be on my way!" The Silver Sentry exclaims in determination. May as well forget waiting and go on to going to the real hideout to save Cree.

"I thought you all time and again, get stuff ready! I told you countless times, you morons! Honestly, why do I even bother?!" Alan exclaims in annoyance. Of course, as he continues, no one notices that the Silver Sentry is trying to fly but kept boucning back. The hero tries again. "Ugh, sorry. I think that spider-bite is acting up on me."

"Face it, your planning is failing, admit it." Cree remarks to Alan with a chuckle.

"Forget it, he will never done admit it." Bob exclaims with a scoff with Number Four meowing in agreement. This make the minions yelps as they back away. This could get very ugly

"Idiot, who side are you on?!" Alan exclaims furiously to Bob and Number Four angrily.

"Obviously the losing side." Cree remarks with a giggle.

"Thank you!" Bob exclaims to Cree with Number Four meowing in agreement. Alan sighs a bit. Why can't it be so simple to make things right for the bad guys for once?

"So can someone stamp my 'Frwquent Kidnapping Card'? I think I am up to 10 kidnappins."

"Ha, nice try! You should know that we discontinued that promotion!" Alan snaps to Cree in amusement, playing along with the girl's joke so to speak.

"Beisdes, it's lame and it was someone else's idea anyhow." Merc explains to Cree with a chuckle.

"Ciao-chao, all."

"Well, same time next week?" Cree ask the bad guys with a shrug. Bob sighs as he takes the spray out, ready to use it and knock the girl out to either shut her up or take her home. Looks like nothing for the bad guys is going to get done today.

"Oooh, dang, crab nuggets!" A familiar voice exclaims as if in pain or agony. Alan hears the words and looks confused. That sounded like the Silver Sentry...using the word 'crab nuggets'?

"What did he just say?" Alan ask his minions in confusion.

"'Crab nuggets'?" Bob ask in surprise and confusion. Number Four blinks a bit. "Never done heard him say 'dat before!"

Alan's group turns and saw a shocking sight. The Silver Sentry is trying to break the dome...but is tumbling back some more as if weakening and not escaping! What's this?

"Hey, what's wrong with him?" Green ask the other minions in confusion.

"Fackled fish cracker!" The Silver Sentry curses again, pouncing on the ground as if defeated. Alan looks confused. His enemy should be confident, ready to fight him again...so why is he acting like this?

"10 seconds 'to full power!" Bob exclaims as he saw that the death ray is closed to being ready. Alan, the crowd especially the Freelance Police, and everyone else saw the SIlver Sentry tumblng back a bit.

"Oh no...no, this can't be, I'm trapped!"

"10...9...8..."

"Uh, wait, what's going on?" Hoagie ask in the crowd as he, Stitch and Angelilo looks alarmed and confused. Why is the Silver Sentry weakened all of the sudden?

"What kind of trickery are you pulling on me?" Alan ask the Silver Sentry in confusion.

"You are... a mad genius!" The Silver Sentry cringes as he looks back at the confused gift. "Your dark gift...has paid off at last!"

Bob continues with the coutndown, "7...6...5...4..."

"Wait, it has?" Alan ask in shock and confusion. What is the Silver Sentry talking about? How has it paid off for the villain?

"It has?" Alan's minions ask in shock and confusion. Their boss is finally...winning for once?

"Yes, this dome is obviously...lined with...copper!" The Silver Sentry exclaims while looking around the dome area.

"Uh, sir?" Merc ask Alan dumbstruck. What is the Silver Sentry getting at her?

"3...2...3...4...5.." Bob announces though he is having a bit trouble with the countdown for some reason or another. "Oh shucks, hit the button!"

Number Four nods as he reach to hit the button. The Silver Sentry strains as he explains why he is weakening, "Copper...drains my powers!"

"Wait, your weakness is copper?!" Alan ask in shock and surprise. All this time, copper can drain the Silver Sentry's powers? "Uh, you're joking, right? This is a joke."

Number Four then hits the button hard, causing Bob exclaims, "YEEHAW! Sir, full power activated!!"

Soon the ray, aiming at the location, opens fire right at the specific spot. As everyone watch, the place was hit, getting blown up and destroyed. An explosive wave appears, causing anyone to brace themselves.

More explosions occurs with smoke and ash flying around. The last blast send the bad guys and the minions back. They groan a bit and soon, all is settled. Alan and his minions got back up, Cree coughs a bit while smoke appears around here.

"Boy howdy, Ah done doubt even he could survive 'dat." Bob said in concern. With a full blast of the sun, not even the Silver Sentry would've survive something as powerful like that.

"Let's try not to get our hopes up just yet." Alan said to Bob with a frown. His enemy has survived his death traps before. This can't be any different.

"Sir, look!" Green gasps as he points at something coming to the hideout. The villains took a look and saw what appears to be a familiar sight. Could it be...?

"The Silver Sentry!" Alan and the vilalin exclaims in shock and worry. Obviously the Silver Sentry has survived the blast...and thus, it's time for the beating to begin!

"Ah....Silver Sentry." Alan said with a nod...then gasps a bit along with Bob and Number Four. "Silver Sentry!"

"Run, run, run!" Boppo screams as the bad guys prepare to run. This won't end up very good for them all!

Alan prepares to run to prepare to fight but the figure hits him in the chest, knocking him down. The villain groans and got up to remove what looks like the Silver Sentry...then asps upon seeing a shocking and horrifying sight...a skeleton!

Alan yelps and tumbles a bit before his allies looks stunned and disbelief. This looks like the skeletal remains...of the Silver Sentry! Merc exclaims, "Wow...you think..."

"Yeah, it looks like it..." Green said with a slow nod. Cree gasps in shock and disbelief. "You...you did it."

"I did it?" Alan ask in surprise and disbelief. He has finally destroyed the Silver Sentry at last?

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"He did it." Mayor Whoo said stunned as the crowd looks shocked. The SIlver Sentry has been...destroyed by Alan.

"He did it!" The Freelance Police exclaims in shock and disbelief.

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"I did it?" Alan ask on the channel as a stunned Feral and his guards still trapped in the villain's cell watch on as to what is the fate of the Silver Sentry.

"He did it..." Feral said while shaking his head in disbelief. The cat warden didn't think that it was possible but there it was: the Silver Sentry's demise and at the hands of Alan Matthews!

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"Yew...yew did it, sir!" Bob exclaims as Number Four meows to the smiling Alan. Their boss has did it, he has finally destroyed the Silver Sentry!

"I did it!" Alan exclaims with an eager smile on his face. The minions cheers on for their buss who laughs evilly as he hugs them.

"You did it!" Merc and Green cheers on while hugging Alan right back.

"HA HA HA HA! YES, I DID IT! Toon Town City is officially and finally mine! Ha ha ha ha!"

Suddenly, as Alan and his group of minions of evil were absorbing this triumphant moment in their life's work, something un-expected was seen. Numbuh 5 is seen sneaking in and quickly getting her sister loose.

"What took you so long?" Cree snaps to her sister in annoyance. "I have to watch and...oh man, this can't be happening."

"Never mind, just be glad I came to save your butt!" Numbuh 5 snaps to her sister. Once Cree got out of the chair, the two quickly make a break for it. Their escape didn't go unnoticed though.

"Yo boss, that reporter girl is splitting the scene!" Merc spoke off to tell his boss Alan something from what he, Green, and the rest just noticing...Cree's escaped scene with her not in her chair.

"Wait! What?" Alan yelped out surprise, how could the reporter how gotten loose?

"How she escape?" Bob asked in how this happened and just when they were witnessing the end of a hero.

"Oh dear, it might have been the work of some little girl." Green spoke a bit nervous in recalling how some child helped get the teen girl free.

"How in the world could a little girl find our location?" Alan asked off shocked, no one, not even Silver Sentry or Cree knew where they truly were, so how? "Nevermind that, gather the troops!" The man issued out to his allies of evil that saluted him. "It's time that evil, makes it's up-start approach...on this new day!" Alan smiled wickedly in knowing...today was a good day...for him.

Author's note
Looks like Alan has done it, he has destroyed the Silver Sentry at last. Now Toon Town City is his! In the next chapter, Alan begins his takeover of Toon Town City with no one, not even the Freelance Police, stopping him. But as time passes, even the villain begins feeling depressed. Read, review and suggest.
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Yo Jus, got something nice for your work on this story.
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And now, here's my idea for a Freelance Police show up.
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"Oh no, we're doom!" A random citizen cried out in horror.
"Who can save us now?" Another random citizen cried out in panic.
"Wait...do I hear...a alien police car's engine?" Cree spoke off in hearing a sound of something approaching...very familiar?
Then from out of nowhere, something dives into the pit of fire of Alan Matthew's army, as it was....the red spaceship drove by the Freelance Police? And the heroes leaped out of the ride, blasters in hand and aimed at the foes.
"Freeze!" Angelo snapped to the villain's side from out of the police cruiser.
"Hands where we can see them!" Number 5 issued out to the crooks before the team.
"Look out Alan Matthews, you got some company in town!" Stitch tauntingly stated out to the villain to look out for some new heroes in town.
"Cause the Freelance Police & our gals are here to stop your raid!" Hoagie issued off to point to the group ready to stop this villain in his tracks.
"Bob? I thought the only hero was Silver Sentry? Who are these children?" Alan spoke off surprised, who are these children that stand before him?
"Give me a moment sir?" Bob stated from having Number 4 bring a lab-top to do a little research part on the new heroes here. "Okay, says here, the Freelance Police, are Freelancers. By a Kids Next Door agent boy and a koala alien, their job is to take on crazy cases when no one else will? They're described as Heroes, Anit-Heroes, reckless, destructive, senseless officers that make no logic seem clear?" From how this guy was talking about, there was a lot about the Freelance Police they never knew till now. "And it also reads out that their hygienic background isn't too clean?"
"Hey! Stitch had a bath last week!"
"To true, and he rarly takes one without being force to?" Hoagie nods his head in agreement to that part.
"Also, their girlfriends, one was a little Hawaiian girl named Lilo who was mutated with an alien merge named Angel, who goes by the name, Angelo? The other girl, Abigail, is human, and get this, she's not only a KND Agent, but the little sister of Cree Lincoln." Bob finished off to explain who else they have here, and boy, was the news just as surprising.
"The reporter we kidnapped?" Alan exclaimed off in not believing this, Cree had a little sister, who knew? "Then that explains how she escaped, she had a little help doing so?" The villain muttered under his breath in getting the full picture now?
"You know it, buster!" Number 5 pointed out to say to the villain leading his troops.
"Now we'll ask you nicely to give up, or else!" Angelo order this crooked villain and his army to stand down.
"Please intrigue Stitch by saying 'Or Else' what? Meega love it when that's explain." Stitch stated off with a sly grin on his face.
"Believe me little buddy, we know all too well!" Hoagie made a sly smirk in understanding his partner's comment.
"Please, don't even bother trying to stop me?" Alan spoke with a cocky attitude towards this new foes. "After all, if you try to shot me? (Unknown 1) has orders to shot you." The mentioned name salutes with a blaster gun in his hands. "And if you somehow get (Unknown 1)? Then (Unknown 2) has orders to shot you instead." Around the left corner, was the other mentioned name with a blaster in his own clutches. "And if you shot (Unknown 2), then (Unknown 3) has orders to shot with (Unknown 1), (Unknown 2) & myself will blast you all." Alan explained off from the switching screen in how the system works. "Oh, and along with the rest of my minions joining the fun afterwards." The villain declared which his forces pose themselves in preparing for action. "Each of them has a designated target." The man explained which to the Freelance Police's team, were starting to look puzzle at this? "And should you think that you can take us all on? (Unknown 4) has orders to electrocute the ground floor once we're in the air." Like the villain explained, someone stood by a generator pulsing billions of voltage inside, one flick of the switch, and it's ZAP-City for our heroes. "And if that fails, then I carefully placed bombs to blow up this block...at a touch of a button." Alan gazed with a serious expression, as he's really went all out here.
"Wooh, little much?" Angelo responded off in seeing this as something that's quite much?
"Ehh, meega seen worser threats?" Stitch shrug off his shoulders to say this.
"Uh boss? Am I suppose to shot after (Unknown 5) or (Unknown 1)?" (Unknown) asked off in puzzling wonderment of what he should do first?
"I should shot after (Unknown 1)?" (Unknown) asked a bit puzzled while requesting that he should take that position of when to attack.
"No! You shot after (Unknown 6)." Alan explained off with a stern tone, how could this guy ask a question at this time?
"Well then, who shots after (Unknown 1)?" (Unknown) asked off in looking around in who's got that job?
"I can shot myself?" (Unknown) responded dumbly in what this guy could do to help, but that just sounded stupid?
"That won't be necessary." Alan sternly explained to his minion here about such a blut suggestion with putting the explosive button away. "(Unknown 7) shots after (Unknown 1). (Unknown 2), to (Unknown 8) will follow suit." The villain stated to end the discussion here.
"Yes sir!" (Unknown 2) saluted before accidentally fired a shot too close to (Unknown 8)?
"Owwww!" (Unknown 8) yelped and cried out in pain from where that shot woulda been hurtful to him?
"No! Not yet?" Alan turned to shout at his minions for seeing they acted too quickly here?
Then around that time, all of Alan's army were setting up their blasters to fire...but at which way the heroes come from?
"Okay heroes, drop your weapons!" (Unknown) snapped off to demand the Freelance Police drop their weapons.
"No, I say they drop their weapons first!" Then (Unknown 2) snapped at his partner in wanting to heroes to follow his orders.
"No, me first!" Of course (Unknown 3) snapped at his two buds in wanting to be the one first to get the guys.
"Your mine, Freelance Police!" Shouted off another minion of the group while our heroes stared at this, awkwardness?
"I'm not taking my eyes them first, (Unknown 1)!" (Unknown?) snapped off in looking at the heroes, then at (Unknown 1) in wanting to get the first shot.
"Drop your weapons! Dirtbags!" (Unknown 1) snapped off to the heroes in wanting them to drop their blasters first.
Pretty much, everyone of Aln's forces were so preoccupied in who gets to shot first, left the villain in the center puzzled out, along with the Freelance Police team?
"Okay, this is weird?" Hoagie spoke off bizarre out that Alan's minions...really are not that coordinated?
"Look, just don't do anything rash, and maybe we can get by this...?" Number 5
"BEEEP!" Of course, Stitch bumped his rear into the duo boys' ride which had it's alarm set, and went off that surprised folks?
"STITCH!" The other heroes shouted at their koala friend for starting them?
"Ooops?" Stitch responded off sheepishly, that was his bad?
"WAaauuhhh-Aaaaauh!" Green yelped out a cry, as he was suddenly blasting without warning from being alarm.
Now a lot of Alan's forces were blasting in all random directions? Some of the citizens duck down, so did our Freealnce team too?
"BUM-ZIIIIeeeee!" Then (Unknown?) made a battle cry to charge against the odd storm, and duck behind a crate? That's where this minion was taking aim and was shooting off against his own team?
"WAAAauughhhhh!" Another battle cry was heard, and during the wild shot out, someone shot off Mr. Tippy's top, which made him turn to fire back at who got him?
"Um sir, we seem to have a slight problem?" Bob spoke from sensing that things were looking a bit...hectic, about now?
"No kidding? Hold your fire!" Alan soon shouted off to have his troops cease firing right now, this was getting out of hand?
"What he say?" Green asked Merc from hearing their boss say something, but what?
"I don't know?" Merc remarked off from being too busy by the noise to have heard?
"PULL THE SWITCH!" Stitch thrown his voice into the mix, as he wanted to see what happens next here with a sneaky smile.
Then without warning, (Unknown 4) soon pulled the switch of the electrocute generator to turn it on...oh boy?
"Dihihihaaahhhh!" Now the volts were creeping around the ground, effecting only the villain's side? "Blob-blob-blob-blob...." (Unknown?) was making a few blobby sounds while firing off his blaster while another minion was doing the same?
"Grrrrrrruuaaagh...." At this rate, we see Alan growling in getting angry at this stated event while being electrocuted?
"Goh-hoyhoyhoyhoy...." (Unknown?) was making weird shocking faces while firing off at nothing?
"Diaahahhauuughh...." Now even Merc & Green were being electrocuted by the voltage feedback, as our Freelance team just watch that only the villains side was...beating itself?
Finally, enough was enough, as Alan had to take charge. "HOLD...YOUR...FIIIIRE!" Alan struggled from the shocking feedback to snap out loud against his minions for doing this to themselves.
Finally, at this time, (Unknown 4) finally pulled the switch to the electro generator up, ceasing the voltage shock of all of Alan Matthew's forces. "Gaaugh...." Then after that, a lot of Alan's forces toy minions dropped hard on the ground?
"Bob! Number 4! Get everyone here some medical treatment?" Alan groanly issued an order to his closest minions about their army here.
"Right away sir!" Bob spoke from getting up, same with Number 4, a bit shock, but alright, as they & Merc & Green tried to help get their forces back up.
"Ugh, you're not thinking this was all our fault, right?" Number 5 asked off puzzled if the villain here thought this was the heroes doing, when they didn't do anything yet?
"Oh come on, we barely acted?" Hoagie remarked off that this guy would blame heroes for something that backfired on him?
"Well if you want to play games, so can I?" Alan remarked off from bringing up a remote device, and pressing it.
Then what came spinning into action, literally, were weapons of mass-destruction known as....Spinning Tops Of Doom!
"Oh goody, meega love spin tops!" Stitch replied off with a smile at seeing this.
"Stitch, these are Spinning Tops of DOOM, you're stating here?" Number 5 remarked off to her bud in not seeing the dangers here.
"So? Villain-bum here got the idea from a Kim Possible series?" Stitch shrug off his shoulders to say he didn't mind one bit.
"Worry about that later! In-coming!" Angelo cut off the discussion, as the four little heroes were dodging some spinning tops trying to smash through and bash while shredding to pieces of anything in their way.
"Please pal, you expect this to stop us?" Hoagie remarked off in seeing this villain was not even doing much, the gang can handle a few spinning tops, as they blasted some near another, to shred the other to pieces.
"No, but this next treat will, it was something I planned to use against Silver Sentry, my new additions to my forces." Alan remarked off with a sly smirk, as he soon pressed a new button on his device to end up smirking all the more. "Meet my own bouncers to bounce your hids around? Bob, play a good track number for this, presentation." The villain slyly made to the little heroes before issuing this to Bob, as he and Number 4 held their boom box stereo to start playing a new rocking beat track. (If you like, you can use like Manowar 'Die For Metal', cause that's got a good beat for any villain state, especially for robots.)
Suddenly, something flashed in the skies, and during the little gangs distraction, something zoomed so fast, it stole the heroes weapons?
"Hey, who took meega's blaster?" Stitch snapped at suddenly being robbed of his guns?
"Stomp! Stomp! Stomp!" Suddenly, there were three heavy stomp nosies that shook the ground for the gang to see, robots of nearly over 6'6" to 7 of their height. One was a green robot that specialize in ammunition, yellow eyes, and had a cigar in his mouth. Next was a huge robot with a nuclear reactor built into his body and had green eye visor. Last one that swiped the gang's weapons, was an illegal robot-tremor hybrid of an insect type, and it's razor sharp titanium blades off it's wrist were something to fear.
"Meet my Extimnators! Shellshock! Reactor! & the Eviscerator!" Alan introduced the names of his latest recruited forces of creation by order, truly a work of an evil mind.
"You had to ask, sock-head?" Hoagie dryly remark to his partner for even asking for an answer to this?
"Eh, weega can take them!" Stitch waved off in feeling there was nothing to worry about, right?
But before the coppers duo could act, they were grabbed by Shellshock & Reactor?
"Waaah!" Stitch yelped at suddenly finding his situation...in grips?
"Hey, put us down?" Hoagie snapped at the bots that were holding them roughly.
"Ha, you two are sissies, we show you what REAL man power is like!" Shellshock insulted the Freelance guys with an extremely distinct Austrian accent.
"Right, let's show them a little maneuver we like to give for the fans?" Reactor exclaimed off to his best pal, as the two bots had a plan to perform.
Suddenly, both robots were spinning around at a fast rate with the Freelance Police trying to not lose their lunch. "WAAUUUghh...." Then Hoagie & Stitch were sent flying off a distance, as Alan smiled to watch, Abigal, Angelo, even the crowd with Cree saw were these Extimantors thrown the boys? "BOMm-zizizvhmm...." And the Freelance Police duo ended up smacking almost 40 blocks away and into a neon sign board that sparked off before the boys fell?
"WAAUUUGGhhh....CURSE YOU ALAN MATTHEWS! AND YOUR LITTLE MINIONS TOO!" Stitch shouted out loud a scream to be heard all over the city while he & Hoagie descended very slowly from nearly 88 feet height limit.
"Stitch, that's from the Wizard of Oz's film line you used." Hoagie remotely told his partner that what he used was something used in a film already.
"WHAT-EEEEEVEEEER!" Stitch snapped out loud in not caring much for that fact.
"Gaugh....." Then both boys sounds were heard from when they landed behind a district 40 blocks away, creating a cloud of dust in their waking.
"Wooohhh...." The crowd gasped in surprise shock, now even the famous Freelance Police failed to stop the evil Alan Matthew and his evil forces.
"Weega okay? In incredible PAIN, but weega alive?" Stitch's voice was heard calling out to tell the others that they were fine, a bit in pain, but they'll live.
"That's what you said the last time, pickle brain?" Hoagie's voice remarked off to his partner, as the last time Stitch said that, they were really in a sorry state.
"Oh man, we gotta find our men?" Number 5 groaned off in seeing this, Hoagie & Stitch are down, the girls gotta go get them.
"But what about Alan and his army?" Angelo asked her friend about their situation here, they can't leave with the villain still at large.
"Hiisss....." Suddenly, Eviscerator was in front of the girls, hissing at them, like he was about to strike them in a blink of an eye.
"You wanna tussle with Alan's so-called Exterminator bodyguards without a hope of winning?" Abigail dryly rolled her eyes to remark the fact to this alien fusion girl, that the so-called villain has now powerful bodyguards, it take the strength of Silver Sentry to clobber these guys...which they ain't got.
"Good point." Angelo nodded in seeing reason from rash behavior, and both girls leaped over to their boyfriends ride.
Then after the girls got into the Freelance Police's red cruiser, started it up and then took off. Flying pass the Exterminators that didn't chase them or some of Alan's army now standing up from recovering their electrocuted moment.
"Sir, you did it! You won again!" Bob exclaimed with a smile on his face, his friend beat another group of heroes.
"Yes Bob, it's truly good...to be bad." Alan remarked off with a sly superiority in feeling pleased with himself. "Excellent work Exterminators! You made me, your creator, very porud." The man looked to his giants, who saluted in pure obedience and respect to Alan Matthew's, their master and creator, just like the Combat Bots respect the guy.
"Hah, them girly men were all talk, no action!" Shellshock laughed off to tease how it was so easy to beat the Freelance Police team.
"Yes, in a way, two outta four were girls." Reactor stated off the fact that they bested two guys, and the two girls just split the scene.
"Hiisss..." Eviscerator hissed in response, this guy can't talk cause he's mute, so he only hisses in responding.
"Now that your little line of defense is gone citizens, back to what we were doing." Alan turned to the surprise crowd that saw his display, with Silver Sentry gone & the Freelance Police shown powerless against this villain, there is nothing to stop the guy from ruling.
"Don't threat boss man, with us by your side, you won't end up like the last villain." Merc waved off to pat his boss, Alan on the back, giving him good confidence in himself, which he liked.
"Oh I hope so, I still have nightmares about how far a super-hero went from good, to renegade?" Green spoke from shedding the thought of the last time a villain they knew got bested...and it turn out ugly too.
"Suck it up Green, this guy's got the work, hands down!" Merc told off his bud to get with the program, as their guy won't lose.
"Ri-right!" Green nods a bit slowly in responding to that claim, he'll just keep thinking that.
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And there you have it, not bad right? I used the Planet 51 Military confession scene during the military's step to stop any mind controlling which backfired. And the smashing into a bbillboard sign from a city block, was from Shark Tales. I hope this scene can be useful to you, if you like to stretch out some scenes, be my guess? (I think any extra action & chats on the spinning tops might work?) But for any scenes you wanna add off after Alan feels sadden, focusing on the Freelance Police, maybe some background about how Alan brought forth his other minions besides having Bob & Number 4, might serve some helpful needs...maybe? Otherwise, things here are about to get interesting indeed.
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To sonicfighter21354, yes, I know that but I'm using her codename regardless.

Chapter 3: Victory or Depression?

The folks of Toon Town City were terrified, some of them close their windows while locking their doors. With the Silver Sentry now dead, there's no one who could stop Alan from running amok!

Speaking of which, Alan is walking down the street with his goons, unchallenged and undeter. Bob, his goldfish bowl is hovering on a hovering device while Number Four walks nearby, laughs as he spoke in a singy-songy voice, "Yew did it, sir. Yew did it, sir!"

"Yeah, I did it, yeah, me me me!" Alan exclaims while laughing like mad. "Oh yes, I did it."

"Yeah, we all did it to be precise."

"Not us, I of course!"

"Yeah, a little more than us, but still, come on." Merc points out to his boss with a chuckle. While Alan was ranting, his minions was the one who operated the death ray and other stuff.

"It was done Number Four who done hit 'de button." Bob remarks in agreement with Merc.

"A heck of a lot more than you." Alan said with a chuckle as he and his forces skillfully walk down with pride.

"Dang, when they done give out 'de award, we're going 'ta be right there next 'ta yew, Alan."

"Oh yes, what awards? What awards, for what?" Alan notices a stunned crowd waiting up ahead at the town hall. Perfect. "Track 7, hit it!"

The radio that was carried by Numuh Four was turned on. The radio played 'I Wanna Spend My Lifetime Loving You' by Marc Anthony and Tina Arena. Number Four listened to this song, sighing relaxingly, while Alan was shocked and a bit annoyed.

"I said 'Track 7!'" Alan scowls at Number Four in annoyance.

"Sorry." Bob apologizes to Alan as the song was changed to a familiar song by AC-DC. As music plays, the minions and Combat Bots dance a bit in sync as did Alan.

As the song begins, helicopters surround the city with the crowd and cops, gathering while waiting for the bad guys. The police hold up their guns, nervous and prepared. The Silver Sentry is gone forever so it doesn't look like anyone can stand a chance against these guys.

Just then, a blast was seen splashing into the lake.

Living easy, living free

The cops aim their guns with misty smog engulfing the nervous enforcers of Toon Town City.

Season ticket on a one-way ride

As lasers flash around the area, a blast is seen much to the worry and fear of the crowd.

Don't need reason,
Don't need rhyme


Alan came up to the scared crowd with a grin while cheering, "YEAH! WHO LOVES YA, BABY?!"

Ain't nothing I'd rather do

Alan chuckles in amusement by the cops aiming their weapons at them. Are they kidding him?

"Drop them!!" Alan orders the cops. Many of them gasps in terror as they drop their weapons. Even they are no match for the powerful villain and his wicked army. Alan laughs as he and his pals pass by the helpless cops.

Going down, party time
My friends are gonna be there too, yeah


Alan smirks as he grabs the mayor's cheeks and pinch them before tossing him aside. The villain head up the stairs to a waiting podium. The crowd of reporters look at him, what is Alan going to do now?

I'm on the highway to hell

"Okay, Number Four, cut the music!" Alan orders Number Four sternly. The humanoid cat knocks as he press a button on the boombox to turn it off...but another song begins to play instead.

I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves,
Everybody's nerves, everybody's nerves


"Gah, no! Turns that junk off!" Alan exclaims to Number Four in alarm. The humanoid cat tries to turn the boombox off but the first song plays again.

On the highway to hell

"Number Four!" Bob exclaims to the humanoid cat who tried again but the second song plays again.

I know a song that gets on everybody's nerves

The cat yelps as he hits the boombox to turn it off frantically.

Highway to hell

Bob, finally, having enough, press a button in his goldfish bowl, sending a lasser that hits the boombox and finally shutting the thing off. The fish groans, "Dang nab it. We need 'ta get 'dat thing fixed."

Alan sighs as he takes a mike from Robosnail, tapping the thing before speaking to the crowd, "Okay, first off, what a turnout, eh? How wild is this? Huh? Ha ha ha ha! You are speechless and why not? I did eliminated the most powerful man in this universe. So anyone got any questions for your new ruler of Toon Town City?" Cree, still with burns on herself, frowns near Control Freak who is videotaping this. "Come on! Anything at all! Don't be shy!"

Cree raise a hand, much to Alan's notice as he points, saying, "Yes, Miss Lincoln. In the back."

Cree came through the crowd, demanding, "Yeah, Alan! I'm sure that we would love to know what you and your pals would plan to do with us and this city!"

"Oh yes, good question, glad you can asked that...so imagine the most horrible, terrifying, evil thing that you can possibly think of...and mulitply it by six!"

"Oh no, we're doom!" A random citizen cried out in horror.

"Who can save us now?" Another random citizen cried out in panic.

"Wait...do I hear...a alien police car's engine." Cree spoke off in hearing a sound of something approaching...very familiar

Then from out of nowhere, something dives into the pit of fire of Alan Matthew's army, as it was....the red spaceship drove by the Freelance Police. And the heroes leaped out of the ride, blasters in hand and aimed at the foes.

"Freeze!" Angelilo snapped to the villain's side from out of the police cruiser.

"Hands where we can see them!" Numbuh 5 issued out to the crooks before the team.

"Look out Alan Matthews, you got some company in town!" Stitch tauntingly stated out to the villain to look out for some new heroes in town.

"Cause the Freelance Police & our gals are here to stop your raid!" Hoagie issued off to point to the group ready to stop this villain in his tracks.

"Bob? I thought the only hero was Silver Sentry. Who are these children?" Alan spoke off surprised, who are these children that stand before him?

"Give me a moment sir." Bob stated from having Number 4 bring a lab-top to do a little research part on the new heroes here. "Okay, says here, 'de Freelance Police are Freelancers. By a Kids Next Door agent boy an' a koala alien, their job is to take on crazy cases when no one else wil.? They're described as Heroes, Anti-Heroes, reckless, destructive, senseless officers 'dat make no logic seem clear." From how this guy was talking about, there was a lot about the Freelance Police they never knew till now. "An' it also reads out 'dat their hygienic background isn't too clean."

"Hey! Stitch had a bath last week!" Stitch protests to Bob, annoyed by the fish's comment.

"Too true and he rarely takes one without being forced to." Hoagie nods his head in agreement to that part.

"Also, their girlfriends, one was a little Hawaiian girl named Lilo who was mutated wit' an alien experiment named Angel who goes by 'de name Angelilo. 'De other girl, Abigail, is human, an' git 'dis, she's not only a KND Agent, but 'de little sister o' Cree Lincoln." Bob finished off to explain who else they have here, and boy, was the news just as surprising.

"The reporter we kidnapped?" Alan exclaimed off in not believing this, Cree had a little sister, who knew? "Then that explains how she escaped, she had a little help doing so." The villain muttered under his breath in getting the full picture now.

"You know it, buster!" Numbuh 5 pointed out to say to the villain leading his troops.

"Now we'll ask you nicely to give up or else!" Angelilo order this crooked villain and his army to stand down.

"Please intrigue Stitch by saying 'Or Else' what. Meega love it when that's explained." Stitch stated off with a sly grin on his face.

"Believe me little buddy, we know all too well!" Hoagie made a sly smirk in understanding his partner's comment.

"Please, don't even bother trying to stop me." Alan spoke with a cocky attitude towards this new foes. "After all, if you try to shot me, Stinger has orders to shot you." The mentioned name salutes with a blaster gun in his hands. "And if you somehow get Stinger, then Ickypus has orders to shoot you instead." Around the left corner was the other mentioned name with a blaster in his own clutches. "And if you shot Ickypus, then Boppo has orders to shot with Stinger, Ickypus & myself will blast you all." The villain explained off from the switching screen in how the system works. "Oh, and along with the rest of my minions joining the fun afterwards." The villain declared which his forces pose themselves in preparing for action. "Each of them has a designated target." The man explained which to the Freelance Police's team were starting to look puzzled at this. "And should you think that you can take us all on, Robosnail has orders to electrocute the ground floor once we're in the air." Like the villain explained, someone stood by a generator pulsing billions of voltage inside, one flick of the switch and it's ZAP-City for our heroes. "And if that fails, then I carefully placed bombs to blow up this block...at a touch of a button." Alan gazed with a serious expression as he's really went all out here.

"Wooh, little much!" Angelilo responded off in seeing this as something that's quite much.

"Ehh, meega seen worser threats." Stitch shrug off his shoulders to say this.

"Uh boss? Am I suppose to shot after Dust Bunny or Stinger?" Mr. Tippy asked off in puzzling wonderment of what he should do first.

"I should shoot after Stinger?" Catbot asked a bit puzzled while requesting that he should take that position of when to attack.

"No! You shoot after Mr. Tippy." Alan explained off with a stern tone, how could this guy ask a question at this time?

"Well then, who shots after Stinger?" Goober asked off in looking around in who's got that job.

"I can shoot myself." Mr. Fiend responded dumbly in what this guy could do to help but that just sounded stupid.

"That won't be necessary." Alan sternly explained to his minion here about such a blut suggestion with putting the explosive button away. "Catbot shoots after Stinger, Ickypus to Goober who will follow suit." The villain stated to end the discussion here.

"Yes sir!" Ickypus saluted before accidentally fired a shot too close to Goober.

"Owwww!" Goober yelped and cried out in pain from where that shot woulda been hurtful to him.

"No! Not yet!" Alan turned to shout at his minions for seeing that they acted too quickly here.

Then around that time, all of Alan's army were setting up their blasters to fire...but at which way the heroes come from.

"Okay heroes, drop your weapons!" Tharg snapped off to demand the Freelance Police drop their weapons.

"No, I say they drop their weapons first!" Ickypus snapped at his partner in wanting to heroes to follow his orders.

"No, me first!" Of course Boppo snapped at his two buds in wanting to be the one first to get the guys.

"Your mine, Freelance Police!" Shouted off another minion of the group while our heroes stared at this, awkwardness.

"I'm not taking my eyes them first, Stinger!" Dust Bunny snapped off in looking at the heroes, then at Stinger in wanting to get the first shot.

"Drop your weapons! Dirtbags!" Stinger snapped off to the heroes in wanting them to drop their blasters first.

Pretty much, everyone of Aln's forces were so preoccupied in who gets to shoot first, left the villain in the center puzzled out, along with the Freelance Police team.

"Okay, this is weird." Hoagie spoke off bizarre out that Alan's minions...really are not that coordinated.

"Look, just don't do anything rash and maybe we can get by this..." Numbuh 5

"BEEEP!" Of course, Stitch bumped his rear into the duo boys' ride which had it's alarm set and went off that surprised folks.

"STITCH!" The other heroes shouted at their koala friend for starting them.

"Ooops!" Stitch responded off sheepishly, that was his bad.

"Waaauuhhh-Aaaaauh!" Green yelped out a cry as he was suddenly blasting without warning from being alarm.

Now a lot of Alan's forces were blasting in all random directions. Some of the citizens duck down so did our Freelance team too.

"BUM-Ziiiieeeee!" Then Catbot made a battle cry to charge against the odd storm and duck behind a crate. That's where this minion was taking aim and was shooting off against his own team.

"Waaaauughhhhh!" Another battle cry was heard, and during the wild shot out, someone shot off Mr. Tippy's top, which made him turn to fire back at who got him.

"Um sir, we seem 'ta have a slight problem." Bob spoke from sensing that things were looking a bit...hectic, about now.

"No kidding. Hold your fire!" Alan soon shouted off to have his troops cease firing right now, this was getting out of hand.

"What he say?" Green asked Merc from hearing their boss say something, but what?

"I don't know?" Merc remarked off from being too busy by the noise to have heard.

"PULL THE SWITCH!" Stitch thrown his voice into the mix as he wanted to see what happens next here with a sneaky smile.

Then without warning, Robosnail soon pulled the switch of the electrocute generator to turn it on...oh boy.

"Dihihihaaahhhh!" Now the volts were creeping around the ground, affecting only the villain's side. "Blob-blob-blob-blob...." Ickypus was making a few blobby sounds while firing off his blaster while another minion was doing the same.

"Grrrrrrruuaaagh...." At this rate, we see Alan growling in getting angry at this stated event while being electrocuted.

"Goh-hoyhoyhoyhoy...." Tharg was making weird shocking faces while firing off at nothing.

"Diaahahhauuughh...." Now even Merc & Green were being electrocuted by the voltage feedback as our Freelance team just watch that only the villains side was...beating itself.

Finally, enough was enough, as Alan had to take charge. "HOLD...YOUR...FIIIIRE!" Alan struggled from the shocking feedback to snap out loud against his minions for doing this to themselves.

Finally, at this time, Robosnail finally pulled the switch to the electro generator up, ceasing the voltage shock of all of Alan Matthews's forces. "Gaaugh...." Then after that, a lot of Alan's forces toy minions dropped hard on the ground.

"Bob! Number 4! Get everyone here some medical treatment!" Alan groanly issued an order to his closest minions about their army here.

"Right away sir!" Bob spoke from getting up, same with Number 4, a bit shocked, but alright as they & Merc & Green tried to help get their forces back up.

"Ugh, you're not thinking that this was all our fault, right?" Numbuh 5 asked off puzzled if the villain here thought this was the heroes' doing when they didn't do anything yet.

"Oh come on, we barely acted!" Hoagie remarked off that this guy would blame heroes for something that backfired on him.

"Well if you want to play games, so can I." Alan remarked off from bringing up a remote device and pressing it.

Then what came spinning into action, literally, were weapons of mass-destruction known as....Spinning Tops Of Doom!

"Oh goody, meega love spin tops!" Stitch replied off with a smile at seeing this.

"Stitch, these are Spinning Tops of DOOM that you're stating here!" Number 5 remarked off to her bud in not seeing the dangers here.

"So? Villain-bum here got the idea from a Kim Possible series." Stitch shrug off his shoulders to say that he didn't mind one bit.

"Worry about that later! In-coming!" Angelilo cut off the discussion as the four little heroes were dodging some spinning tops trying to smash through and bash while shredding to pieces of anything in their way.

"Please pal, you expect this to stop us?" Hoagie remarked off in seeing this villain was not even doing much, the gang can handle a few spinning tops as they blasted some near another to shred the other to pieces.

"No, but this next treat will, it was something I planned to use against Silver Sentry, my new additions to my forces." Alan remarked off with a sly smirk as he soon pressed a new button on his device to end up smirking all the more. "Meet my own bouncers to bounce your hides around. Bob, play a good track number for this presentation." The villain slyly made to the little heroes before issuing this to Bob as he and Number 4 held their boom box stereo to start playing a new rocking beat track which is Manowar 'Die For Metal'.

Suddenly, something flashed in the skies, and during the little gang's distraction, something zoomed so fast, it stole the heroes' weapons.

"Hey, who took meega's blaster?" Stitch snapped at suddenly being robbed of his guns.

"Stomp! Stomp! Stomp!" Suddenly, there were three heavy stomp nosies that shook the ground for the gang to see robots of nearly over 6'6" to 7 of their height. One was a green robot that specialize in ammunition, yellow eyes, and had a cigar in his mouth. Next was a huge robot with a nuclear reactor built into his body and had green eye visor. Last one that swiped the gang's weapons was an illegal robot-tremor hybrid of an insect type and it's razor sharp titanium blades off it's wrist were something to fear.

"Meet my Exterminators! Shellshock! Reactor! & the Eviscerator!" Alan introduced the names of his latest recruited forces of creation by order, truly a work of an evil mind.

"You had to ask, sock-head." Hoagie dryly remark to his partner for even asking for an answer to this.

"Eh, weega can take them!" Stitch waved off in feeling there was nothing to worry about, right.

But before the coppers duo could act, they were grabbed by Shellshock & Reactor.

"Waaah!" Stitch yelped at suddenly finding his situation...in grips.

"Hey, put us down!" Hoagie snapped at the bots that were holding them roughly.

"Ha, you two are sissies, we show you what REAL man power is like!" Shellshock insulted the Freelance guys with an extremely distinct Austrian accent.

"Right, let's show them a little maneuver we like to give for the fans." Reactor exclaimed off to his best pal as the two bots had a plan to perform.

Suddenly, both robots were spinning around at a fast rate with the Freelance Police trying to not lose their lunch. "WAAUUUGHH...." Then Hoagie & Stitch were sent flying off a distance, as Alan smiled to watch, Abigail, Angelilo, even the crowd with Cree saw were as these Exterminators has thrown the boy and the alien "Bomm-zizizvhmm...." And the Freelance Police duo ended up smacking almost 40 blocks away and into a neon sign board that sparked off before the boys fell.

"WAAUUUGGHHH....CURSE YOU ALAN MATTHEWS! AND YOUR LITTLE MINIONS TOO!" Stitch shouted out loud a scream to be heard all over the city while he & Hoagie descended very slowly from nearly 88 feet height limit.

"Stitch, that's from the Wizard of Oz film line that you used." Hoagie remotely told his partner that what he used was something used in a film already.

"WHAT-EEEEEVEEEER!" Stitch snapped out loud in not caring much for that fact.

"Gaugh....." Then both boys sounds were heard from when they landed behind a district 40 blocks away, creating a cloud of dust in their waking.

"Wooohhh...." The crowd gasped in surprise shock, now even the famous Freelance Police has failed to stop the evil Alan Matthew and his evil forces.

"Weega okay. In incredible PAIN, but weega alive." Stitch's voice was heard calling out to tell the others that they were fine, a bit in pain, but they'll live.

"That's what you said the last time, pickle brain." Hoagie's voice remarked off to his partner, as the last time Stitch said that, they were really in a sorry state.

"Oh man, we gotta find our men." Numbuh 5 groaned off in seeing this, Hoagie & Stitch are down, the girls gotta go get them.

"But what about Alan and his army?" Angelilo asked her friend about their situation here, they can't leave with the villain still at large.

"Hiisss....." Suddenly, Eviscerator was in front of the girls, hissing at them like he was about to strike them in a blink of an eye.

"You wanna tussle with Alan's so-called Exterminator bodyguards without a hope of winning." Abigail dryly rolled her eyes to remark the fact to this alien fusion girl, that the so-called villain has now powerful bodyguards, it take the strength of Silver Sentry to clobber these guys...which they ain't got.

"Good point." Angelilo nodded in seeing reason from rash behavior and both girls leaped over to their boyfriends' ride.

Then after the girls got into the Freelance Police's red cruiser, they started it up and then took off, flying pass the Exterminators that didn't chase them or some of Alan's army now standing up from recovering their electrocuted moment.

"Sir, yew did it! Yew won again!" Bob exclaimed with a smile on his face, his friend beat another group of heroes.

"Yes Bob, it's truly good...to be bad." Alan remarked off with a sly superiority in feeling pleased with himself. "Excellent work Exterminators! You made me, your creator, very proud." The man looked to his giants, who saluted in pure obedience and respect to Alan Matthew's, their master and creator, just like the Combat Bots respect the guy.

"Hah, them girly men were all talk, no action!" Shellshock laughed off to tease how it was so easy to beat the Freelance Police team.

"Yes, in a way, two outta four were girls." Reactor stated off the fact that they two robots that they bested two guys and the two girls just split the scene.

"Hiisss..." Eviscerator hissed in response, this guy can't talk cause he's mute so he only hisses in responding.

"Now that your little line of defense is gone citizens, back to what we were doing." Alan turned to the surprise crowd that saw his display, with Silver Sentry gone & the Freelance Police shown powerless against this villain, there is nothing to stop the guy from ruling.

"Don't threat boss man, with us by your side, you won't end up like the last villain." Merc waved off to pat his boss, Alan on the back, giving him good confidence in himself which he liked.

"Oh I hope so, I still have nightmares about how far a super-hero went from good to renegade." Green spoke from shedding the thought of the last time that a villain they knew got bested...and it turn out ugly too.

"Suck it up Green, this guy's got the work, hands down!" Merc told off his bud to get with the program as their guy won't lose.

"Ri-right!" Green nods a bit slowly in responding to that claim, he'll just keep thinking that.

"Okay, as you can see, that's what happens if you tried to get in my way, especially to any heroes in this dump." Alan explains to the stunned crowd eagerly. "Now then, right now, we want you all to carry on with your dreary, normal lives that you folks do, have fun with this, come on. And...we will get back to you."

Alan covers himself and rush into the office, followed by Bob and Number Four, the goldfish whispers, "All righty, Number Four, close 'de door very hard."

Number Four slams the door shut, of course his silhouette can be seen throughout the window. Alan whispers, "Hey, they can still see you?" Number Four moves away a bit while meowing as if asking, 'Now'? "No, no, your elbow's still in."

Number Four moves until the bad guys's silhouettes with gone, the crowd watch stunned as Alan whispers, "Good, good, heh heh heh."

Peter Parker, the one who saved the world from the aliens, suggests, "Can't we make a DNA test on the skeletal remains to confirm the Silver Sentry's death?"

His boss, J. Jonah Jameson, comments, "Forget it, Parker. It's too obvious that the victim is Silver Sentry so there's no use on making this test."

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The main office's doorknob surged with electricity until the door bursts open, destroyed. Alan blows the smoke off his gun that he used, being carried by Number Four like a bride. Bob sang out, "There he is, Mr. Evil Overlord."

Alan got out of Number Four's arms and came in while saying, "Bob, level with me. Did you ever think that this day would ever come?"

"Well, no way, not at all, boss. Nope, not in a million..." Bob yelps as Alan gave him a death glarres. "Err, what Ah done meant 'ta say was...yeah, we did...sorta..."

"Good save. Wow...look at the intricate modings."

"We're looking, we're looking."

"And what is this?" Alan ask in amazement. He jumps onto the desk and glances at the windows as if the villain has never seen them before until now. "It's like having one giant monitor like back in the lair...but this one carries one station!"

"Shucks, 'dat is called a window." Bob explains to Alan proudly.

"A...window?"

"Eeyup! All 'de kids look through them, o' course."

"Wow...I never had a view before." Alan said, touching the glass in amazement. Normally, the villain only look at the outside through another way but now...he is looking at the entire city in anxiety. "Oh, Toon Town City, Bob and it's mine. If only my parents...my real ones...could see me now..."

"Shucks, Ah done betcha they're smiling fro' evil heaven right now." Bob assures Alan with a smile, believing that Stan and Coco are smiling from wherever they are right now, liking their son's victory.

"Well, since Mr. Goody Two Shoes is gone..." Alan said eagerly, sliing back in his new chair and put down a plaque which says 'Alan Matthews, Evil Overlord' onto the desk. "Everything I want, I shall have! And no one will stop me now!"

Alan laughs wickedly, spinning the chair around. The city is his oyster and he's going to eat it!

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A song begins to play as Alan and his pals begins their reign of terror. At a local museum, they grab some paintings while twirling around in shopping carts, though Bob fell while laughing like a fool.

All aboard
Mental wounds not healing
Life's a bitter shame


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Even though the Freelance Police has failed to stop Alan, there are other heroes who tries to like the Incredible and Frozone. The ice hero comment, "Well, this guy did - at least seemingly - kill my adopted son. It wouldn't be in-character for me to let that go unpunished if I can help it." Of course, even they can't stop them as the robots successfull fought them off while Alan, Bob and Number Four stood nearby, drinking slurpees.

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Alan laughs as he and his minions paint themselves with different colors of paints while doing the same thing to the town hall.

I'm going off the rails on a crazy train

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One of the crimes that the villains commit is more of a childish prank than a crime. Alan and his goons run up to a house, the group snickers before Alan quiets them, "Shh!', then rings the doorbell on the house. The group then all ran off mischievously before an old man named Old Man Nebbercracker opened the door, annoyed.

He angrily shook his cane, yelling to the group, "I'll get you crazy kids!"

The citizens watch on in worry as Phil DeVille ask, "Man, why no other herot rying to stop Matthews now that the Sentry is goen?"

Susie comment, "Phil, there are other super-heroes who tried to stop Alan after the Silver Sentry was gone (failing, but still trying) - namely Frozone, the Incredibles, both the American Dragons and the Teen Titans. Even Feral and his Enforcers can't do a thing about it since they ain't a match for his robot pals."

"I thought there's a law in town that only allows registered heroes, those with a public identity, to operate within the city's limits, and since most of the heroes have secret identities, Feral and his enforcers would try to catch them as if they were criminals."

"Dream on, Phil."

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We now see Alan laughing as the two hit each other money bags with cash being tossed upward, the minions catch them.

I'm going off the rails on a crazy train

Alan yelps as he was hit by the bag but still having fun as if this would last forever for him...

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In reality, the fun only lasted a few days. The almost empty city is now trashed with koopa paint, attire, cars crashed into stuff with posters of Alan being hung onto certains. As a different song is heard, the thrill...appears to be gone.

We may as well go home
As I did on my own
Alone again naturally


In his office, Alan sighs as he looks at a lot of items throughout the office. The villain has everything he wanted...so why is he so unhappy? That...is easy to answer.

To think that only yesterday
I was cheerful, bright, and gay...


Alan sighs as he glances at a drinking bird, mumbling, "Yes, I know, always thirsty but never satisfied. You, little well dressed bird, I understand: purposeless, emptiness...it's a vacuum, right? What is your vacuum, right?"

Just then the door bursts open as Bob and Number Four came in, the cat hold a drill while the gold fish sang, "Going off the rails, on a crazy train, sir."

"Bob, not now, okay?! I'm busy moping!"

"I thought we heard moping in here." A familiar voice spoke up. Alan, Bob and Number Four saw the Freelance Police and their girlfriends coming in.

"Intruders!" Bob exclaims as Number Four growls, preparing to fight the four.

"Whoa, whoa, chill, big guy! We ain't here to fight!" Numbuh 5 insists to Numbuh Four, holding her hands up. "We know that we can't win against Alan."

"So...what are yew here for?"

"Simple, we just wanna hang." Stitch remarks with a smile. "May as well since this city has gotten...boring. Why is it boring? Can someone make it excitedly?"

"Oooh, may as well. I mean..." Alan sighs a bit as he looks out at the class. "I'm in a heated existential discussion with this dead-eyed plastic desk toy thingie."

"Uh, is something wrong, Alan?" Angelilo ask Alan in concern. "You don't...act like youself lately."

"Freelance Police, Bob, everyone, just think about it. Us villains have it all...but at the same time, we have nothing. Why it's too easy now."

"Uhhhh...afraid you lost me an' Number Four, sir." Bob said in concern, wondering what Alan is trying to say to the group.

"I think what Alan is trying to say is that things...aren't exciting for him anymore." Hoagie explains to Bob with a shrug.

"He's right, we did it." Alan said with a sad sigh.

"Yeah, yew did it sir...well, actually Number Four but still...yeah, yew made that perfectly clear." Bob said to Alan with a nod in his goldfish bowl.

"So why do I feel so...Mel-on-cholly?" Alan ask his minions and the heroes, his eyes full of sadness.

"What?" Stitch ask, confused by what the villain just said.

"He means 'unhappy', Stitch." Angelilo explains to Stitch with a sigh.

"Ooooh, still don't get it."

"Stitch, in other words, Alan has killed off his enemy...but there's no point in continuing without an enemy...and well, us other good guys just make things kinda too easy for him." Hoagie remarks with a shrug. It's true, with the Silver Sentry gone and the other heroes not being able to stop Alan, his life is...sad and meaningless now, right?

Alan comment, "I'll admit, having Frozone, the Incredibles, the American Dragons AND the Freelance Police on my trail trying to stop me DOES make things A LITTLE more interesting. Actually makes me regret how well I equipped and reinforced my robots over all the years I've been fighting the Silver Sentry."

"Well, say...how about tomorrow, we could kidnap Cree Lincoln?" Bob offers to Alan, hoping that kidnapping Cree would cheer Alan up.

"Yeah, that seems to life your spirits and we can bust in, try to save her, we fight and...well, you get the idea!" Numbuh 5 exclaims to Alan, agreeing with Bob's idea. Even Number Four is nodding at the whole thing.

"Eeyup! We could go get her..."

"Yeah, great idea..." Alan begins to say, his spirits brightened a bit...but then his expression when sour as he turns around and looks out the window while looking to the statue of the Silver Sentry. "But...without him...what's the point?"

"Him?" Some of the group ask a bit confused and worried.

"Nothing."

Bob and Number Four begins to get worried. Perhaps their boss needs some alone time. The goldfish mumbles, "Right, all right...err, 'dat's something 'ta...consider an'...Ah done think Ah will just power down fer a while then...Number Four?"

Number Four nods as he press a button on the goldfish bowl, a castle pops up in the thing as Bob goes inside, having trouble squeezing in until he's inside. The castle went down as the cat humanoid carries the whole thing out of the office.

"Hmmm, we should leave alone for a while." Angelilo said with a sigh. The others agree as they leave the saddened Alan to his thoughts and the whatnot as the sun went down.

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It was nighttime as Cree is on the news on TV, looking sad while standing near the statue of the dead hero. The girl reports, "He was always there for us, so...dependable. Yeah, perhaps we truly did take him for granted. Never knew how good we have it until it's gone..."

Alan, in his PJs and night caps, watch the news with the Freelance Police and their girlfriends. Hoagie comments, "Even for a bad girl whom the Kids Next Door usually fight, she kinda preaches it."

"Yeah." Numbuh 5 said with a nod.

"We miss you...I miss you." Cree said with a sigh as Alan sat down. The girl frowns at the camera while continuing, "If Alan Matthews is watching, I have just one question for you, jerk...are you happy now? Huh? Are you happy?"

Alan sighs in sadness as he looks back at the museum. If the villain was his usual self, he would've laugh and ignores her. But what's the point? Cree is right...he isn't happy at all.

"This is Cree Lincoln reporting from a city without one of its heroes. Coming up next: are you ready to be a slave army? What you need to know." Cree said as her news segment came to an end.

Alan got up and takes his night cap out, leaving the room. The others notice as Angelilo ask, "Where's Alan going?"

"Want to follow him and find out?" Stitch ask his pals playfilly.

"May as well since we got nothing else better to." Hoagie said with a shrug. "Numbuhs 1, 3 and 4 are at the museum and I betcha Alan is heading there right now."

The Freelance Polices and their girlfriends follow Alan, keeping an eye on him. Despite him beating them before, the villain needs some support right about now.

Author's note
Wow, even if Alan has beaten the Silver Sentry, his victory is...empty. How will he move on? In the next chapter, as Alan prepares to blow up the museum of his enemy, he runs into Cree, forcing him to disguise himself as a worker and former Kids Next Door operative Maurice to avoid a problem. As everyone makes their (unknown to Cree) escape from the place, Alan is stuck with an idea to restore balance to his life. Read, review and suggest.

The song, I Wanna Spend My Lifetime Loving You, was from the 1998 Antonio Banderas film, The Mask of Zorro. Ironically, Marc Antony, who sang it, just had a birthday recently.

This chapter has references to the 'Planet 51' Military confession scene during the military's step to stop any mind controlling which backfired and the smashing into a billboard sign from a city block which was from 'Shark Tales'. The Spinning Tops was from 'Kim Possible'.

One of the crimes made by Alan and his goons is a reference to the SpongeBob episode, 'Mermaidman and Barnacleboy V'.
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Yo Jus, here's another idea you can use for your next scene chapter. It's just some extras that can be fit after 'mostly' the other stuff, has been done, ya know? Anyway, check this out!
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Soon after the museum came tumbling down, the Freelance Police, their girlfriends, and the rest of the KND members were seen in an alley. Seeing the destruction of the museum will rise up in the media, but for right now, there were other matters to concern with. And by that, we mean discussing how in the world that even happened and were just lucky enough to escape from it all. And luckily, Alan never knew that this group was spying on the super villain.
"Blimmeny, how the heck did that even happen?" Wally snapped off to say from seeing that any closer calling, and the good guys here bite the dust?
"My guess, Alan Matthew went ahead to blow up the museum." Abigail pointed out a fact, that this destroying a museum, was by a certain super villain they know. "Poor guy musta felt that seeing the place that reminds him of his old enemy was too heartbreaking?" The girl explained that Alan couldn't live to have a building that reminds him of Silver Sentry around, jsut brings more pain and memories to the guy's head.
"Aww, hearing that makes me feel sorry for him?" Kuki spoke with a little sad face in seeing what was said about Alan.
"Number 3, the guy just try to blow us up?" Wally protest out in thinking that the same guy they wanna feel pity for, almost blew them up?
"Never the less, we were lucky to get out?" Nigel stated with a focus expression in seeing they got out of that on time.
"But Number 1, we saw something strange?" Hoagie stated out in wanting to let his sector leader know something.
"What's that Number 2?" Nigel looked to his friend, seeing he had something worth telling.
"Does the terms, villain saving damels, sound odd to anybody besides meega?" Stitch playfully twiddled his fingers to say something that when put two-to-two together, it spells a picture out.
"Stitch is right, you guys. During the escape, Alan Matthew lead Cree to safety in that disguise of that former KND guy Maurice, and without her knowing that he was going to blow the place up?" Angelilo took over to explain what else had happened in the museum that really left much of the rest here shock that they never knew that happened.
"You've gotta be pulling my leg? Gaaagh...." Wally exclaimed off to say, but also yelped when Stitch actually pulled his left leg? "Stitch! I didn't REALLY mean that!" The Austrian kid snapped at the koala for getting that idea of his words messed up.
"Sorry, meega get literally and figuratively confessed sometimes?" Stitch shrug off to say sorry in his own goofy way?
"Well now this is puzzling, why would a super villain save my sister? Not that I'm glad or anything?" Abigail tapped her forehead in trying to understand this mystery, while also not trying to care too much of his own sister.
"Of course you are, it's not like you wanted Cree to stay, and that if we attacked them in confusion, be rid of both enemies, right?" Kuki smiled off happily to state something so bizzare, much of the gang looked at her like she was either fooling around, or dead serious...either was scary to think?
"Ugh, yeah, sure...?" Abigail slowly responded a bit to the girl, just trying to pass that off as an answer.
"Well whatever Alan Matthew's is up to, it's definitely the sneakiest plot of mystery I've ever heard?" Nigel rubbed his chin in deep thought now, what would Alan's game be to pull off a stunt to destroy something, but rescue Cree in disguise...it's really mind boggling?
"Maybe he likes her, at least he have a better shot at Cree then Hoagie did!" Stitch spoke off a smirky answer of the thought of what Alan managed to pull off.
"Hey! I told you Stitch, I'm over that crush!" Hoagie snapped in protest against his partner even bringing up something that long ago.
"So what now Number 1?" Wally asked his leader of a sector in what else they're gonna have to do from now on?
"We alert other Kids Next Door Operatives & any Heroes around about this matter, and try to unravel this case Alan is up to from that latest stunt?" Nigel spoke with a serious thought that if anything, Alan's latest work might be in need of further investigating on their side.
"Well sure, it's not like we got dirt on the guy and by telling, it'll harm him?" Kuki made a lightly joke about the subject in what would hurt to tell.
"But first, will you quit hissing a tune in my ear, Stitch?" Wally spoke off to turn to the koala, hearing someone near him was hissing by his ear.
"Naga, Stitch don't hiss, he hums a tune!" Stitch shook his head and stated with a jolly mode that he hums things, but never hisses them like a snake does.
"Well then who else is hissing like a snake?" Angelilo asked around to see who else within their group, was doing that?
"The last person we know that hisses is....uh oh?" Hoagie spoke with a thought, and then began to panic in knowing just 'who' was the hisser here?
Then from out of the shadows, who should show up but…Eviscerator!
"Hiss....." The Eviscerator showed up his talons to the gang before him, looking ready to fight.
"AAAAahhhh! Giant BUG!" Kuki screamed out like a little girl from seeing this Exterminator's face.
"That ain't now bug, it's one of Alan's bouncer boys, he's an Exterminator!" Abigail exclaimed off to say in recalling this was one of three Exterminators that Alan Matthew's made that are bodyguards of the toughest kind, even Hoagie & Stitch were treated like beach balls from these bots.
"Everyone! Fallback!" Nigel ordered out to the group, as they turn to try and get away from fighting this tough foe….
"Stomp! Stomp!" But then from around the corner, came another surprise? Shellshock & Reactor came from the opening of the alley that would have lead the gang to escape, but got cut off instead.
"Hah, who do we got here? Skimpping around where your nosy-cozy arn't wanted?" Shellshock taunted off in seeing the little heroes were here, and nosy around an area they shouldn't be.
"Sorry, but you're coming with us…for some questioning." Reactor stated to these kids and their alien koalas that the bots under Alan's bodyguard deal, the gang are gonna be questioned.
Well this just spells one thing that comes to our little gang's mind.
"Well, this wasn't totally the escape plan I had in mind?" Hoagie shrug off to remark in seeing how their chance to get out this mess, wasn't suppose to end up with the gang getting caught.
At that time, everything went dark when the hands and claws of the Exterminators reached to grab the gang…what's gonna happen to them?

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Suddenly, during Alan Matthew's moment of getting together his thoughts…he is interrupted by another presence? As who should come into the picture then Merc & Green, and boy were they in a hurry.
"Yo boss man!" Merc waved out to his leader in getting some attention.
"We have news!" Green spoke with much concerns over the matter here.
"Oh what is it now, you two?" Alan signed in really not feeling he needs to hear other bad news about other things or complains from the citizens.
"We got some intruders trying to crash your game." Merc informed the man of what's happen, much to his alarm.
"Yes, they said of revealing your secrets to the world." Green informed his leader of who they got wanted to ruin Alan Matthew's name.
"My secrets! What secrets? Which secrets?" Alan yelped out in not believing this, who or how did someone come across something to blackmail him? "An-anyway, bring them in here, and I'll deal with those that want to ruin me!" The villain pointed his finger down, wanting whoever dares to challenge him, shall face his judgement.
Soon the Combat Bots moved away, and soon all the Exterminators were coming into the room. In Shellshock's hands, was Hoagie & Stitch, Reactor was holding Nigal & Wally, and then Eviscerator came pushing Kuki, Abigal, and Angelilo in. And when Alan saw that who came into the picture were half of those he knows, boy did he get a shocking reaction out of this?
"You people?" Alan pointed out in shock, what were the Freelance Police & their group doing here…were they the intruders?
"Hey Alan, how's it hangin' there?" Stitch made a little hello wave to the villain with a cheery sign.
"Stitch, leave the witty pun marks to me, kay!" Hoagie pointed to himself to tell his partner about using the bad jokes.
"Hissisisis…." Eviscerator made a hissing nosie, as if telling something to his creator.
"They did WHAT!" Alan yelped out in shock, he just heard something shocking from this Exterminator.
"He lies, we were not spying on you?" Stitch snapped off in protesting the very thing was not at all, what the gang did.
"Actually bro., he just said that they saw you snooping around the trash can?" Merc. translated the Eviscerator's language, that it was about Stitch sticking his nose in their trash.
"Oh, right? Meega saw a half eaten hogdog there!" Stitch responded goofy while smiling at the thought of that hotdog moment.
"And…you just told the super villain what you said we didn't, but actually did do…for nothing." Hoagie signed in seeing that Sttich just blurted out a secret that was suppose to be kept, oh well now?
"We caught the Freelance Police in the alley after your plan to blow up the museum, sir." Reactor explained off to let his boss know what the Freelance Police & friends were doing.
"They spoke in knowing your dirty secrets and we took them in before they wuss out of sight." Shellshock explained off to wiggle his captives, taunting them in what they tried to get away with, failed.
"Now I find that offensive!" Wally snapped at the big green bot for daring to say that about them.
"We saw what you did, you destroyed the museum to a hero." Nigel pointed to the super villain, recalling that this guy blew up something as a memorial to Silver Sentry.
"I can do what I like! Um…who are you…m?" Alan was almost about to protest, but he had no idea who this boy was, he wasn't seen with the group?
"I'm number 1, and these are number 3 and 4!" Nigel introduced himself and the others by their KND code numbers.
"But you can call him Nigel, Number 4 Wally, and me Kuki." Kuki happily told off their real names to the villain here without a second thought.
"Um, okay…." Alan slowly responded to this weird action, before focusing here. "Anyway….What were you all doing near the museum, I decided issue that it was to be torn down after my visit!" Alan stated off to the group that he sent word for everyone to leave, yet somehow, some didn't get the message.
"Give us a break, we know why you did it?" Abigail rolled her eyes up in talking to this guy here. "Why I like to know is, why did you save my sister?" The girl asked off a question that was bugging in the back of her mind.
"What! I did no such thing…that was…" Alan yelped in thought of what he heard, and tried to make an excuse, but….
"The guy you pretended to be by using your watch to disguise yourself?" Angelilo pointed to the watch which made Alan yelp to hid it, somehow, these people saw him do that?
"Ugh…you all…SAW that?" Alan yelped off before responding slowly, if these kids saw that, what else they may have seen was…oh boy, not good?
"Oh dear, he gets very sensitive when his secrets are known?" Green responded off with worry, their boss gets a bit upset when someone teases about their secret.
"Aw great, this won't be good?" Merc signed off to slap his forehead, what's gonna happen next here?
"Should be make mince meat out of them, your lord-ship!" Shellshock asked off to his leader, if the children are bothering Alan, the Exterminators can fix that for him.
"No, no, that won't be necessary!" Alan held up his hand to cease his bodyguards from doing such a thing. "Okay now, Exterminators, you can let them go, they're cool…they are…on the level, sorta speak." Alan spoke while getting himself together, saying that these intruders and spies are not threats, they are…on the level with them.
"Yes sir/Hississ!" The Exterminators responded with a salute before dropping the gang that was held in their hands & claws on the ground, only the boys felt the worst of that.
"How's about a gentler release next time?" Hoagie rubbed his soar spot from where he landed.
"Listen to me, please don't let anyone know of what I did?" Alan clapped his hands to beg that these people don't mention what happened to anyone.
"What, you blew up the museum, FYI, folks pretty much guess you did it?" Stitch shrug off to say that everyone will know that this villain did it, why hid that?
"No…the other secret!" Alan shook his head before going into more detail about this. "Me saving Cree was…a fluke? It just suddenly came to me that…she was at the wrong place, and at the wrong time?" The villain explained off that what happened during his moment saving Cree from dying in the explosion was…by accident, not intentional.
"And how it feel when you did something nice?" Kuki asked with a smile in how this guy like saving someone, instead of kidnapping them.
"It felt…." Alan was trying to ponder that thought, but then waved it off from suddenly recalling where this was going. "Daugh, stop trying to push the subject! The point is, if word gets out, my image as a Super Villain with a Reputation will be ruined!" Alan sternly stated this out to the heroes here, that if anyone knew of what he did, it be bad alright…for the villain's ranking that is.
"And we care, why?" Wally asked off remotely with a dry tone before saying this. "You already were shown to be predicable?" The Austrian kid was not lying, from much of Cree's kidnappings, the guy's torture traps were predicable at best.
"Hugh, that's what Cree said too?" Alan singed in regret in recalling how much Cree said that about him too. "But never the less, I want you to promise me…you won't tell a soul about this! Anyone in this room must not tell, not even Cree should know of it!" The man pointed to the Freelance & KND Ops. to not let word of this good deed be heard out, and especially not for Cree to know about this.
"How's about we agree to that…for a price?" Sttich spoke with a sneaky and sly smile, as he wiggled his hands out in 'wanting' something for such service.
"RRRruaaarrghh!/Hisisisss…." Suddenly, a lot of the Exterminators growled and hissed, even Merc & Green joined in to aim their weapons on the target, aka, Stitch.
"Hehehehe, or not?" Stitch chuckled nervously at seeing that was a dumb move, black mailing the super villain who has bots with guns that could kick their sorry butts, definitely a bad move.
"Cease my minions." Alan held up his left hand, and the robotic minions heard and obey him to stand down. "Okay, how's about this, you can hang out with us, and I'll give you the spare secretary's room to crash yourselves in as my guest." The man stated off an alternative reward for the group here to not spill the beans about him, and they get to relax in this place he's taken over.
"Why should we get the small room of fine service?" Wally asked off in finding that was a ripe-off, secretary rooms aren't that important.
"Yo, don't you know, secretaries got extra payment for taking on heavier responsibility then the mayor?" Merc stated to the crew about the extra payment that job has to offer.
"It's true, our leader has a nice room, but the other one is still just as nice." Green nods to give a psotiive look that the gang here of heroes have a better deal then they thought.
"Sweet, lets go make it our playground!" Stitch smiled off to wave his fingers in the air, they get to make the mayor's secretary room their own sleeping and party palace.
"Okay, we'll cooperate, for now…." Nigel approached this villain with a serious look, even behind his glasses. "We might not know what you're up to, but we'll eventually uncover the truth, until then….we'll be glad to take your offer." He held up his right hand, expecting Alan to take it as a shaking agreement.
"Yes, thank you." Alan nods with a sign of relief expression, as he and Nigel shook on the deal they've come to agree upon.
"Come on guys, lets leave Alan alone with his thoughts." Angelilo stated to her friends that maybe now's the time to let the super villain have a moment of peace.
Once that group left, Alan was left with his robot minions from the two combat bots & the Exterminators.
"Why did we let them off the hook?" Shellshock shrug off his shoulders in being puzzled, that was actually a 'nice' deed, by not hurting the hero types?
"We heard them say things, we acted for your protection?" Reactor spoke confused in recalling things they heard, or more in the line, what it was almost meant to have been, by mistake?
"It's okay, they may have saw me…do something that was surprising, especially me saving Cree?" Alan held up to explain this out to his robotic minions about his situation. "Listen, I'm trusting you all here to not let this information reach out, not even the rest of our group outside our circle here." The man pointed to the ground, stating that besides the Freelance Police's group, only they alone here, know the truth of the matter.
"Hisissi…." Eviscerator hissed under his breath in responding to this order as something very strange, even the other bots found it odd?
"Wooh, not even Bob and Number 4 should know?" Merc asked off surprise, they can't even tell their boss' most trusted guys?
"But didn't we just let Number 4 know already?" Green spoke off puzzled in recalling they did tell this to a 'Number 4' person?
"No, no, that was the kid by his code name…gauaugh?" Alan tried to explain about the 'Number 4' being different from the kid and his cat, and just struggled with the two. "Okay, just to spare confusion, call him Wally, call them by their real names to save on the confusion." The villain stated that any of the KND Ops will be spoken about by their true name. "In truth, I have things on my mind, that I don't want the other minions, even Bob & Number 4, to know I did good?" The man doesn't want the others of his forces to know what he did, it might shake their feelings about working for this guy?
"Um sir, is doing good, really bad?" Green asked something puzzling him, was Alan worried that by doing good, it was a bad thing to actually do?
"Nah, can't be, just means something else to experience." Merc waved off to mention that by doing something 'good', ye get something else outta it.
What Alan heard made him think deeply about that statement even more so then ever. "Alright, you are all demise, and remember our talk, 'mums the word', got it!" Alan spoke out while issuing this order while making a smiling face and zipping his lips with his finger, to signal the slang code phase that was used about keeping this secret…a secret.
"Yes sir! Your secret is safely secure with us by your side!" The bots responded off while Eviscerator 'hissed' at every word, as they saluted in promising never to tell this secret out, for their beloved creator.
Now the bots from the Combat Bots duo and the three Exterminators left the sight, leaving Alan Matthew to his thoughts of the situation he's come to terms with. From Silver Sentry's destruction, to him ruling over this city, blowing up a museum to saving Cree's life, also getting those that know of what he did on the latter, won't tell a soul, things come into picture. It's time to bring a change to things, and Alan Matthew's knows precisely how to do it.

Alright Jus, hope you like this, it's got some of the right stuff? Best of all, is that it won't cut in parts of what others would like, sorta? Now while one scene, is mostly after the museum got blown up, the other one...is something where you can decide when it takes effect, etc. Till then, good luck on this story, it's looking really good. And while I didn't see it on the Fanfiction place, I was smart to check it out here. So, happy trails to how you like the next chapter to go, it's really starting to look very interesting now, and that's jsut peachy good to me.
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Chapter 4: A Heroic Idea

Cree was finishing the report at the museum as Control Freak was recording it. The girl gave a 'cut' motion and sighs while looking at the museum. The whole city misses that hero. If only the Silver Sentry was alive...

"And wrap that junk up, give it to a child on Christmas! We're done!" Control Freak exclaims eagerly. Unlike most of the city, the cameraman doesn't seem bothered that the Silver Sentry is gone. More than that, he's happy to get more chances with Cree.

"Right, whatever, see ya tomorrow, Control Freak." Cree sighs as she heads over to the museum. Control Freak of course tries to follow her. He ain't letting an opportunity like this slip away from him!

"Hey Cree, babe! Listen, I got one cool party at my house, it's going to be so off the hook! You should come over! I got a DJ, rented a bouncy house, made a bunch of dip. It's going to be sick!"

"Ick, I bet. Anyway, don't know. I don't feel like being more people than usual right now."

"Nah, no way! It will just be you and me!" Control Freak explains to Cree eagerly, much to the girl's further discomfort. She can tell where this is going: another pathetic attempt by the fat nerd to hit on her.

"Well, err, that's very tempting and all, but..." Cree begins to say uneasily but Control Freak continues onward eagerly.

"I also hire a wedding photographer! In you know...in any something crazy were to happen and we'd want a picture of it. I mean, maybe we should have this for a memory or something, Cree! And it isn't about the Teen Titans this time, really!"

"Right, I'm going to pass. I got some work here that I still need some done. Bye."

Cree gave the mike to Control Freak who looks down. Turn down again, what a dork! Still the cameraman heads back to the van while saying, trying to smile, "So would Thursday work? Soft...Thursday?"

"Goodnight, Control Freak." Cree said, rolling her eyes at this. As if Numbuh 2's dumb crush on her was bad enough, this other fat nerd's own crush was creepy!

"Soft yes...on Thursday." Control Freak said with a grin. As Cree heads into the museum to be alone, the fat cameraman goes to the van, looking more upset. He punches the van a bit while scowling, "Gah! What the heck is wrong with me?! 'Rented a bouncy house', that's stupid! Chicks don't dig that stuff, I mean they like clowns!"

Control Freak punch the van but yelps as he ends up hurting himself. Cree, close to the entrance, glances back at him while he groans, "Ouch! Ugh, stupid van, you broke my fingers!"

ControL Freak got back into the van and drove off, hitting a garbage can as he departs. Cree sighs a bit while going into the museum. She has a lot to think about, involving Alan's takeover and the death of the Silver Sentry.

This city needs a hero to stop Alan but there's no one...

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Cree enters the museum, heading to an escalator that goes to the same level. Unknown to her, Alan was entering the place on the other side, using another escalator, feeling more depressed...and wanting to say goodbye to the enemy that he has destroyed.

The two came into different elevators, going upward to the top of the place which shows the whole statue of the Silver Sentry, both of them looks at the fallen hero in sadness. Neither of them can believe that the Silver Sentry himself is really gone....and by Alan's hand no less.

Once at the top floor, both sides lean on different rails, with a sigh each. Alan mumbles, "Oh man, I've made a horrible mistake...I didn't mean to kill you. Okay, that's kinda not true, I meant to do so...but I never thought that it could really work..."

On the other side, Cree sighs while asking, "Now what are we suppose to do? With you gone, evil is running more rampant throughout the city. Not that I mind being a bad girl myself...but...well, you know..."

Alan in sadness hold a bouquet of yellow roses, groanning, "I'm sick and tired of running rampant through the streets just like the other villains. What's the point of being the bad guy...when no good guy besides those you beat easily can try to stop you?"

"Someone must stop Alan Matthews somehow. He's an evil jerk, more so than Father. Evil has no empathy on good whatsoever."

"Hey!" A voice exclaims in annoyance. Cree yelps as she turnd to see someone passing with a tray full of books. It's an African boy with white-black striped shirt, green jacket, blue jeans, and brown shoes. Cree knows him as Maurice, a former member of the Kids Next Door who was decommissioned when he became age 13 (she doesn't know that he's also a spy for the same heroes, helping the KND all this time). "We're closing soon."

"Oh, Maurice! You scared me!" Cree sighs in embarrassment. "Err, I didn't know you...what are you doing here?"

"I worked here, Cree, as a summer job. The question is what are you doing here?"

"Oh, well, Maurice, I was just talking to myself and...yeah, you probably think I'm a little bit nuts, huh?"

"Sorry, not allowed to insult guests directly even we do know one another." Maurice remarks to Cree dryly.

"Right, thanks." Cree remarks to Maurice with an annoyed sigh. "Listen, Maurice, I will just be another minute, okay?" The teenager groans as he push the books, heading away.

"Fine, okay. Just don't take too long."

"Thanks. Okay, so what do I do now?

Alan looks down in sadness, sobbing a bit as he looks up to the statue, "Oh...I have so many evil plans in the works too...I mean, look at what I got. The illiteracy beam. Typhoon cheese. Robo crooks. Making stories of cute ponies as murdering monsters...oh...Silver Sentry, I had all planned and now...I will dream of only the battles that we will never have..."

Unknown to the villain. his voice is echoing throughout the building...and a familiar girl has heard him, much to her puzzled state as she ask, "Huh?" Who could that be? The girl heads off to where she is hearing the voice coming from.

"You know...I...I never had the chance to say goodbye...oh well, it's good that we have this time now. Especially before I blow this place up." Alan, leaning across the rail, sighs in sadness as he took out a time explosive. The villain is going to blow the Silver Sentry museum up. "Nothing against you old friend, it brings back too many painful memories. If you're listening from heaven, you will understand. Well, time to do this."

The villain activates the bomb and drops it downward to the floor below where his minions have planting explosives and more bombs like it, all enough to blow this place sky high.

"Okay, come on, let's go, you runts!" Robosnail orders to the other minions. "This place is going to blow up, let's move!"

Alan sighs as he prepares to make his escape before this place is blown up high sky, but then a familiar voice spoke up, "Hello? Anyone there? Hello?"

Alan gasps in horror as he turns and saw Cree coming his way, not seeing him. Not good! The villain looks at himself frantically. Cree can't see him in his PJs or here at the museum that is going to blow up! Not only would that give her another reason to be angry t him, but she will laugh and embarrassed as his un-evilness.

Alan makes a run for the elevator. Maybe if he's lucky, the villain can make it, go down to the last floor and make a quick escape before Cree can catch wise to what he's doing. Alan was almost there when he bumps into a familiar tray being pulled by a familiar employee.

"Hey, watch it!" Maurice snaps to Alan in annoyance. He glances at the villain before saying, "Man, sorry for pointing this out but that costume of yours is so tasteless and lame."

"Costume?" Alan ask frantically as he looks behind himself. Cree is coming closer by the moment. She can't see him like this or what's going on!

"I mean posing as Alan Matthews, get real!"

Alan looks frantically as he knew that the villain will never get by his guy and escape into the elevator before Cree sees him! There's only one option left. Alan got his watch out and began to record Maurice's voice and features.

"Yeah, even his hair isn't that grossly big." Maurice adds as he crosses his arm. Alan, once he records what he himself needed, got his dehydration gun right out, setting it to 'dehydrate'. "Oh, man, you even made a cheap knockoff of that dehydration gun! How in..."

Before Maurice could continue, Alan quickly shot the teenager with one blast from his gun, changing him into dehydrated cube.

Cree was approaching to where she heard the source when the girl spots some glowing near the elevator. The girl calls out, "Hey, anyone there who isn't wasting my time in coming here?"

Alan, hearing Cree, yelps as he ducks behind the tray and catch the cube while grabbing Maurice's cellphone that fell out of his person when he transformed. Then the villain quickly activates the watch, glowing like mad.

"Come on, who's there?" Cree ask in frustration heading to the tray. The girl saw Maurice standing up and freezing...only it isn't the real Maurice, but Alan disguised as him. "Oh, you again, Maurice."

"Oh...hey." Alan said in Maurice's voice, turning sheepishly to Cree.

"Whoa, hey, hey, again, it's you, Maurice."

"Yes, yes! It's me...Maurice, yeah, just your regular teenager working here...and about to leave. Yes!"

"Thanks for letting me stay. I know we don't know each other much even...before, but you get the idea." Cree said with a smirk, under the expression that Maurice has lost his memories of his Kids Next Door days after decommission...unaware that this isn't the real deal or the real deal never lost his memories at all.

Alan hit the elevator button in worry as he spoke, "Listen, I don't want to stay here for more than 2 minutes and 37 seconds if I were you. We're...having the walls and ceiling removed." That's of course true...only the disguised villain isn't going to tell her that more than the walls and ceiling themselves are going to be removed.

"Oh, that sounds like quite the renovation. Listen, I hope you don't mind but I'll catch a ride down with you then."

The disguised villain chuckles nervously, but knew that he has to chance it, taking Cree down with him to avoid detection and more. Once the elevator has arrived, the two got on it and rode downward.

Alan and Cree waits a moment then sighs as the disguised villain looks a bit awkward towards her. He has never been this close to her without Cree attacking or yelling at him. Very weird when you're someone other than the villain, huh?

"You know...before his death, I was thinking that he was going to do one of his last minute escapes." Cree said sadly. Alan blinks and realizes that she is referring to the Silver Sentry. The villain looks down in sadness.

"Yeah, the Silver Sentry...was good at those." Alan said in regret. Even when the villain fought the Silver Sentry many times before, he always respected his enemy. Now...the superhero is gone forever all because of Alan himself.

"I just wish that the world had a reset button then this whole sadness and madness would never happen."

"Don't bother, I've looked into the reset button...the science is impossible and the only ones who has that technology are aliens, those who won't share!!!"

Alan sobs a bit, if only the world does has a reset button...but no, that isn't the case. As the elevator arrives on the ground floor and the doors open, he and Cree came out with the concerned girl saying, "Wow, Maurice. Didn't know that you had feelings. You all right?"

"Oh, if only I was but let's face facts. The Silver Sentry is gone. And with the heroes proven worthless, there's no one left to challenge Alan Matthews himself." Alan said in sadness. He felt sad that none of the other heroes could stop him before. The two came to the escalator heading downward.

"Come on, Maurice. Now, I know that I rarely say this kinda thing, but as long as there's evil, good will always rise up against it. Heck, I should know. I just know that someone will stand up to Alan Matthews."

"You...you really think so?"

"I know so." Cree remarks with a chuckle. "I mean, don't forget the saying: 'heroes aren't born, they're made'. That's how it's proven with science."

Alan scoffs and was about to explain to Cree that it's the other way around...when what she said made him stop, realizing something that made him grin excitedly. Of course, that's it!

"Heroes...can be made! That's it!" Alan exclaims with a smile. Yes, it's so simple! "You just need the right ingredients after all!"

"Yeah."

"Bravery."

"Yes." Cree said with a nod.

"Strength." Alan said with a grin, thinking of what makes a hero.

"Of course."

"Leadership, with a dash of determination thrown into the mix!"

"Determination!" Cree exclaims, adding in a suggestion to the hero thing herself.

"Imperative." Alan said then came to the DNA stand, having a though. "Along with a smidgen of DNA...why, with that, anyone can be a hero."

"Yeah!"

"Ha ha ha ha!" Alan laughs as he grabs Cree, lifting her up for a while before putting her down. She has inspired him, given his hope and determination back and with a new plan to boot. Alan's watch beeps, making him yelp. It's time. "Oh, I think...we should run, yeah..."

"Agreed." Cree said with a smile, unaware that Alan meant that the museum is about to blow up soon and the two can't be inside when it happened.

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Alan has hailed a taxi right outside the building, which is going to blow up soon, and helps the girl inside the thing.

"Bye." Alan said, waving goodbye to Cree as she leaves in the taxi. Once the girl is gone, he turns to the building and touch his watch, changing back to normal. "Yes, time for the past to be behind myself once and for all. Only the future..."

Alan was cut off as the entire building blew up, causing the villain to yelp and scream while dodging the debris, "WHOA, TOO CLOSE, I'M TOO CLOSE! I'm genuinely scared right now! I'm outta here!" The villain rush off, not wanting to be around when people find out about this.

Soon after the museum came tumbling down, the Freelance Police, their girlfriends, and the rest of the KND members were seen in an alley. Seeing the destruction of the museum will rise up in the media, but for right now, there were other matters to concern with. And by that, we mean discussing how in the world that even happened and were just lucky enough to escape from it all. And luckily, Alan never knew that this group was spying on the super villain.

"Blimney, how the heck did that even happen?" Wally snapped off to say from seeing that any closer calling and the good guys here would've bite the dust.

"My guess, Alan Matthew went ahead to blow up the museum." Abigail pointed out a fact, that this destroying a museum up plan was by a certain super villain that the group know. "Poor guy musta felt that seeing the place that reminds him of his old enemy was too heartbreaking." The girl explained that Alan couldn't live to have a building that reminds him of Silver Sentry around, it just brings more pain and memories to the guy's head.

"Aww, hearing that makes me feel sorry for him." Kuki spoke with a little sad face in seeing what was said about Alan.

"Numbuh 3, the guy just try to blow us up!" Wally protest out in thinking that the same guy they wanna feel pity for almost blew the heroes up.

"Never the less, we were lucky to get out?" Nigel stated with a focus expression in seeing that the group got out of that on time.

"But Numbuh 1, we saw something strange," Hoagie stated out in wanting to let his sector leader know something.

"What's that Numbuh 2?" Nigel looked to his friend, seeing he had something worth telling.

"Does the terms 'villain saving damsels' sound odd to anybody besides meega?" Stitch playfully twiddled his fingers to say something that when put two-to-two together, it spells a picture out.

"Stitch is right, you guys. During the escape, Alan Matthews lead Cree to safety in that disguise of that former KND guy Maurice, and without her knowing that he was going to blow the place up." Angelilo took over to explain what else had happened in the museum that really left much of the rest here shocked that they never knew that happened.

"You've gotta be pulling my leg. Gaaagh...." Wally exclaimed off to say, but also yelped when Stitch actually pulled his left leg. "Stitch! I didn't REALLY mean that!" The Australian kid snapped at the koala for getting that idea of his words messed up.

"Sorry, meega get literally and figuratively confessed sometimes." Stitch shrug off to say sorry in his own goofy way.

"Well now this is puzzling, why would a super villain save my sister? Not that I'm glad or anything." Abigail tapped her forehead in trying to understand this mystery while also not trying to care too much of her own sister.

"Of course you are, it's not like you wanted Cree to stay and that if we attacked them in confusion be rid of both enemies, right?" Kuki smiled off happily to state something so bizzare, much of the gang looked at her like she was either fooling around or dead serious...either was scary to think.

"Ugh, yeah, sure..." Abigail slowly responded a bit to the girl, just trying to pass that off as an answer.

"Well whatever Alan Matthews is up to, it's definitely the sneakiest plot of mystery I've ever heard." Nigel rubbed his chin in deep thought now, what would Alan's game be to pull off a stunt to destroy something but rescue Cree in disguise...it's really mind boggling.

"Maybe he likes her, at least he have a better shot at Cree than Hoagie did!" Stitch spoke off a smirky answer of the thought of what Alan managed to pull off.

"Hey! I told you Stitch, I'm over that crush!" Hoagie snapped in protest against his partner even bringing up something that long ago.
"So what now Numbuh 1?" Wally asked his leader of a sector in what else they're gonna have to do from now on.

"We alert other Kids Next Door Operatives & any Heroes around about this matter and try to unravel this case Alan is up to from that latest stunt." Nigel spoke with a serious thought that if anything, Alan's latest work might be in need of further investigating on their side.

"Well sure, it's not like we got dirt on the guy and by telling, it'll harm him." Kuki made a lightly joke about the subject in what would hurt to tell.

"But first, will you quit hissing a tune in my ear, Stitch?" Wally spoke off to turn to the koala, hearing someone near him was hissing by his ear.

"Naga, Stitch don't hiss, he hums a tune!" Stitch shook his head and stated with a jolly mode that he hums things, but never hisses them like a snake does.

"Well then who else is hissing like a snake?" Angelilo asked around to see who else within their group was doing that.

"The last person we know that hisses is....uh oh." Hoagie spoke with a thought and then began to panic in knowing just 'who' was the hisser here.

Then from out of the shadows, who should show up but…Eviscerator!

"Hiss....." The Eviscerator showed up his talons to the gang before him, looking ready to fight.

"Aaaaahhhh! Giant BUG!" Kuki screamed out like a little girl from seeing this Exterminator's face.

"That ain't now bug, it's one of Alan's bouncer boys, he's an Exterminator!" Abigail exclaimed off to say in recalling this was one of three Exterminators that Alan Matthews's made that are bodyguards of the toughest kind, even Hoagie & Stitch were treated like beach balls from these bots.

"Everyone! Fallback!" Nigel ordered out to the group as they turn to try and get away from fighting this tough foe…

"Stomp! Stomp!" But then from around the corner, came another surprise. Shellshock & Reactor came from the opening of the alley that would have lead the gang to escape but got cut off instead.

"Hah, who do we got here? Skimping around where your nosy-cozy aren't wanted?" Shellshock taunted off in seeing the little heroes were here and nosy around an area they shouldn't be.

"Sorry, but you're coming with us…for some questioning." Reactor stated to these kids and their alien koalas that the bots under Alan's bodyguard deal, the gang are gonna be questioned.

Well this just spells one thing that comes to our little gang's mind.

"Well, this wasn't totally the escape plan I had in mind." Hoagie shrug off to remark in seeing how their chance to get out this mess wasn't supposed to end up with the gang getting caught.

At that time, everything went dark when the hands and claws of the Exterminators reached to grab the gang…what's gonna happen to them?

Author's note
Alan got a plan on how to fix his world but the heroes got captured. In the next chapter, both sides agreed to team up to make a hero that could fix everything. But when Cree found the secret hideout, Alan and the Freelance Police must keep her from finding out the plan...which got complicated when the powers ended up in the most unlikely candidate. Read, review and suggest.
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To JJB88, I don't know on that one. Who knows?

Chapter 5: Sneaky Undercover Work

Alan sat in his chair back at the office. Yes, if what he thinks go well, then the villain has a way to get his life back into order. Yes, it will acquire sacrfice, but...

Suddenly, during Alan Matthew's moment of getting together his thoughts…he is interrupted by another presence as who should come into the picture than Merc & Green, and boy were they in a hurry.

"Yo boss man!" Merc waved out to his leader in getting some attention.

"We have news!" Green spoke with much concerns over the matter here.

"Oh what is it now, you two?" Alan sighed in really not feeling that he needs to hear other bad news about other things or complains from the citizens.

"We got some intruders trying to crash your game." Merc informed the man of what's happen, much to his alarm.

"Yes, they said of revealing your secrets to the world." Green informed his leader of who they got wanted to ruin Alan Matthews's name.

"My secrets! What secrets? Which secrets?" Alan yelped out in not believing this, who or how did someone come across something to blackmail him? "An-anyway, bring them in here and I'll deal with those that want to ruin me!" The villain pointed his finger down, wanting whoever dares to challenge him shall face his judgement.

Soon the Combat Bots moved away and soon all the Exterminators were coming into the room. In Shellshock's hands, was Hoagie & Stitch, Reactor was holding Nigel & Wally and then Eviscerator came pushing Kuki, Abigail, and Angelilo in. And when Alan saw that who came into the picture were half of those he knows, boy did he get a shocking reaction out of this.

"You people?" Alan pointed out in shock, what were the Freelance Police & their group doing here…were they the intruders.

"Hey Alan, how's it hangin' there?" Stitch made a little hello wave to the villain with a cheery sign.

"Stitch, leave the witty pun marks to me, kay!" Hoagie pointed to himself to tell his partner about using the bad jokes.

"Hissisisis…" Eviscerator made a hissing noise as if telling something to his creator.

"They did WHAT!" Alan yelped out in shock, he just heard something shocking from this Exterminator.

"He lies, we were not spying on you!" Stitch snapped off in protesting the very thing was not at all what the gang did.

"Actually bro., he just said that they saw you snooping around the trash can." Merc. translated the Eviscerator's language, that it was about Stitch sticking his nose in their trash.

"Oh, right. Meega saw a half eaten hogdog there!" Stitch responded goofy while smiling at the thought of that hotdog moment.

"And…you just told the super villain what you said we didn't, but actually did do…for nothing." Hoagie sighed in seeing that Sttich just blurted out a secret that was suppose to be kept, oh well now.

"We caught the Freelance Police in the alley after your plan to blow up the museum, sir." Reactor explained off to let his boss know what the Freelance Police & friends were doing.

"They spoke in knowing your dirty secrets and we took them in before they wuss out of sight." Shellshock explained off to wiggle his captives, taunting them in what they tried to get away with failed.

"Now I find that offensive!" Wally snapped at the big green bot for daring to say that about the group.

"We saw what you did, you destroyed the museum to a hero." Nigel pointed to the super villain, recalling that this guy blew up something as a memorial to Silver Sentry.

"I can do what I like! Um…who are you…m?" Alan was almost about to protest, but he had no idea who this boy was, he wasn't seen with the group.

"I'm Numbuh 1 and these are Numbuhs 3 and 4!" Nigel introduced himself and the others by their KND code numbers.

"But you can call him Nigel, Numbuh 4 Wally and me Kuki." Kuki happily told off their real names to the villain here without a second thought.

"Um, okay…" Alan slowly responded to this weird action, before focusing here. "Anyway…What were you all doing near the museum, I decided issue that it was to be torn down after my visit!" Alan stated off to the group that he sent word for everyone to leave, yet somehow, some didn't get the message.

"Give us a break, we know why you did it!" Abigail rolled her eyes up in talking to this guy here. "Why I like to know is, why did you save my sister?" The girl asked off a question that was bugging in the back of her mind.

"What! I did no such thing…that was…" Alan yelped in thought of what he heard and tried to make an excuse, but…

"The guy you pretended to be by using your watch to disguise yourself." Angelilo pointed to the watch which made Alan yelp to hid it, somehow, these people saw him do that.

"Ugh…you all…SAW that?" Alan yelped off before responding slowly, if these kids saw that, what else they may have seen was…oh boy, not good.

"Oh dear, he gets very sensitive when his secrets are known." Green responded off with worry, their boss gets a bit upset when someone teases about their secret.

"Aw great, this won't be good." Merc sighed off to slap his forehead, what's gonna happen next here?

"Should we make mince meat out of them, your lord-ship!" Shellshock asked off to his leader, if the children are bothering Alan, the Exterminators can fix that for him.

"No, no, that won't be necessary!" Alan held up his hand to cease his bodyguards from doing such a thing. "Okay now, Exterminators, you can let them go, they're cool…they are…on the level, sorta speak." The villain spoke while getting himself together, saying that these intruders and spies are not threats, they are…on the level with them.

"Yes sir/Hississ!" The Exterminators responded with a salute before dropping the gang that was held in their hands & claws on the ground, only the boys felt the worst of that.

"How's about a gentler release next time?" Hoagie rubbed his soar spot from where he landed.

"Listen to me, please don't let anyone know of what I did." Alan clapped his hands to beg that these people don't mention what happened to anyone.

"What, you blew up the museum, FYI, folks pretty much guess you did it." Stitch shrug off to say that everyone will know that this villain did it, why hide that?

"No…the other secret!" Alan shook his head before going into more detail about this. "Me saving Cree was…a fluke. It just suddenly came to me that…she was at the wrong place and at the wrong time." The villain explained off that what happened during his moment saving Cree from dying in the explosion was…by accident, not intentional.

"And how it feel when you did something nice?" Kuki asked with a smile in how this guy like saving someone, instead of kidnapping them.

"It felt…" Alan was trying to ponder that thought, but then waved it off from suddenly recalling where this was going. "Daugh, stop trying to push the subject! The point is, if word gets out, my image as a Super Villain with a Reputation will be ruined!" The villain sternly stated this out to the heroes here that if anyone knew of what he did, it'll be bad alright…for the villain's ranking that is.

"And we care, why?" Wally asked off remotely with a dry tone before saying this. "You already were shown to be predicable." The Australian kid was not lying, from much of Cree's kidnappings, the guy's torture traps were predicable at best.

"Hugh, that's what Cree said too." Alan sighed in regret in recalling how much Cree said that about him too. "But never the less, I want you to promise me…you won't tell a soul about this! Anyone in this room must not tell, not even Cree should know of it!" The man pointed to the Freelance & KND Ops. to not let word of this good deed be heard out, and especially not for Cree to know about this.

"How's about we agree to that…for a price?" Sttich spoke with a sneaky and sly smile as he wiggled his hands out in 'wanting' something for such service.

"Rrruaaarrghh!/Hisisisss…." Suddenly, a lot of the Exterminators growled and hissed, even Merc & Green joined in to aim their weapons on the target, aka, Stitch.

"Hehehehe or not." Stitch chuckled nervously at seeing that was a dumb move, black mailing the super villain who has bots with guns that could kick their sorry butts, definitely a bad move.

"Cease my minions." Alan held up his left hand and the robotic minions heard and obey him to stand down. "Okay, how's about this, you can hang out with us and I'll give you the spare secretary's room to crash yourselves in as my guests." The man stated off an alternative reward for the group here to not spill the beans about him and they get to relax in this place he's taken over.

"Why should we get the small room of fine service?" Wally asked off in finding that was a rip-off, secretary rooms aren't that important.

"Yo, don't you know, secretaries got extra payment for taking on heavier responsibility than the mayor?" Merc stated to the crew about the extra payment that job has to offer.

"It's true, our leader has a nice room, but the other one is still just as nice." Green nods to give a psotiive look that the gang here of heroes have a better deal than they thought.

"Sweet, lets go make it our playground!" Stitch smiled off to wave his fingers in the air, they get to make the mayor's secretary room their own sleeping and party palace.

"Okay, we'll cooperate, for now…" Nigel approached this villain with a serious look, even behind his glasses. "We might not know what you're up to, but we'll eventually uncover the truth, until then….we'll be glad to take your offer." He held up his right hand, expecting Alan to take it as a shaking agreement.

"Yes, thank you." Alan nods with a sigh of relief expression as he and Nigel shook on the deal they've come to agree upon.

"Come on guys, let's leave Alan alone with his thoughts." Angelilo stated to her friends that maybe now's the time to let the super villain have a moment of peace.

Once that group left, Alan was left with his robot minions from the two combat bots & the Exterminators.

"Why did we let them off the hook?" Shellshock shrug off his shoulders in being puzzled, that was actually a 'nice' deed, by not hurting the hero types.

"We heard them say things, we acted for your protection." Reactor spoke confused in recalling things that the robots heard, or more in the line, what it was almost meant to have been by mistake.

"It's okay, they may have saw me…do something that was surprising, especially me saving Cree." Alan held up to explain this out to his robotic minions about his situation. "Listen, I'm trusting you all here to not let this information reach out, not even the rest of our group outside our circle here." The man pointed to the ground, stating that besides the Freelance Police's group, only they alone here, know the truth of the matter.

"Hisissi…" Eviscerator hissed under his breath in responding to this order as something very strange, even the other bots found it odd.

"Wooh, not even Bob and Number 4 should know?" Merc asked off surprise, they can't even tell their boss' most trusted guys.

"But didn't we just let Number 4 know already?" Green spoke off puzzled in recalling they did tell this to a 'Number 4' person.

"No, no, that was the kid by his code name…gauaugh!" Alan tried to explain about the 'Number 4' being different from the kid and his cat and just struggled with the two. "Okay, just to spare confusion, call him Wally, call them by their real names to save on the confusion." The villain stated that any of the KND Ops will be spoken about by their true name. "In truth, I have things on my mind that I don't want the other minions, even Bob & Number 4, to know that I did good." The man doesn't want the others of his forces to know what he did, it might shake their feelings about working for this guy.

"Um sir, is doing good really bad?" Green asked something puzzling him, was Alan worried that by doing good it was a bad thing to actually do?

"Nah, can't be, just means something else to experience." Merc waved off to mention that by doing something 'good', yet get something else outta it.

What Alan heard made him think deeply about that statement even more so than ever. "Alright, you are all dimissed, and remember our talk, 'mums the word', got it!" Alan spoke out while issuing this order while making a smiling face and zipping his lips with his finger to signal the slang code phase that was used about keeping this secret…a secret.

"Yes sir! Your secret is safely secure with us by your side!" The bots responded off while Eviscerator 'hissed' at every word as they saluted in promising never to tell this secret out for their beloved creator.

Now the bots from the Combat Bots duo and the three Exterminators left the sight, leaving Alan Matthew to his thoughts of the situation he's come to terms with. From Silver Sentry's destruction to him ruling over this city, blowing up a museum to saving Cree's life, also getting those that know of what he did on the latter won't tell a soul, things come into picture. It's time to bring a change to things and Alan Matthew's knows precisely how to do it.

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"Say what? Create a hero?" Bob ask in shock by what Alan told him, Number Four and the Freelance Police's group of his plan the next morning.

"Say what? Why would you wanna do that? It's dumb!" Wally exclaims to Alan in disbelief.

"Don't you see, it's perfect! I will have someone to fight!" Alan explains as he writes behind a board and wrote some notes, passing a few of his minions and gave a document to each one. He grabs a donut while explaining, "Everyone, you must face facts. I'm a bad guy with a hero. A ying but no yang. A bull fighter without a bull to fight!"

"Sonny without Cher!" Stitch exclaims to Alan, making him blink a bit.

"Yeeees, let's go with that. Anyway, long story short, without a hero to give me a challenge, I have no purpose."

"So wait...you want to make a hero to give you a challenge, right?" Abigail ask Alan skeptically.

"Yes! So ask me how I'm going to do it? Come on!" Alan insists to Bob and the heroes eagerly.

"All right, how are yew going 'ta do it?" Bob ask with a groan of annoyance with Number Four nodding. The villain snatch the donut box and toss it aside, sending donuts into the air.

"All right, free donuts!" Hoagie laughs eagerly.

"Grab them, yay!" Kuki exclaims happily as she and her friends grab some of the donuts, Stitch grabs one from Nigel eagerly.

"Okay, so you want to make a hero." Nigel comments while chewing onto his donut. "What is your idea of doing so?"

Alan got onto the roller ladder as he slide towards some posters explaining, "I will use someone, not sure who yet, and give him or her the Silver Sentry's powers!" The villain then goes over to the drawings os a mystery hero. "Then I will train that hero to be a new hero of Toon Town City!"

"An' why is 'de Freelance Police an' their pals here?" Bob ask suspiciously while glancing at the Freelance Police and the rest of Sector V. "Ah mean, besides hangin'."

"They will help me find the right person and train him well."

"Right, after all Alan is no hero person so may as well give the new guy some experience, right?" Wally ask Bob with a shrug, finishing his donut right off.

"Follow me, come on!" Alan exclaims as he goes over to a pair of curtains and remove them, it shows a poster of a mystery hero fighting him. Obviously the villain made it a few minutes ago. "Then I will fight that hero with the Freelance Police and their pals helping. They will go down of course but it will be the hero who will fight me in an epic battle of good and evil."

"So you're willing to get defeated just to be satisfied and happy, right?" Angelilo ask Alan as he slides down the ladder.

"Right, that will put everything back to the way it was, when the world was pefect and rosy."

"Ih, and weega helped." Stitch remarks. "But that leaves one problem: how can we create a hero at all?"

"Yes, you need super powers to give to a hero to even fight you at all." Hoagie agrees with a frown on his face.

"Radiation? Adamatium? Give us something to work with here!" Angelilo exclaims to Alan with a frown. After all, if he wants to make a hero, then the villain must have something to use!

"Behold, my friends! The cape of Silver Sentry!" Alan exclaims as he takes out a familiar cape which the villain took right after the Silver Sentry's death. Alan puts it on the table as he uses a magnfiying glass on it. "All right, everyone, look closely! What do you see?"

The gang check out the cape, seeing white stuff on it. Bob guess, "Dandruff?" Number Four meows a guess as well.

"Ick, you would've thought that the Silver Sentry would've clean his hair more often." Wally groans in disgust.

"Can weega eat it?" Stitch ask the others hopefully and eagerly.

"For the love of the game, no!" Hoagie snaps to his partner in annoyance by the crazy suggestion.

"Guys, it's more than just dandruff...it's his DNA!" Alan explains, eagerly scooping some of the white stuff right off the cape as he head sto the lab. "With this stuff, we will extract the source of the Silver Sentry's awesome power."

Alan goes over to a laser grid and put the DNA in before activating the machine. If this works, he can make one pill that can be used to give anyone the power of the Silver Sentry himself.

"Ah done say 'dat 'dis is a bad idea." Bob points out to Alan with a frown.

"Oh yes, it's a very wickedly bad idea, Bob! But it's for the greater good of man!" Alan laughs evilly and in determination.

"Shucks, Ah done saying 'dis is a kind o' bad dat'....okay, maybe yew may think it's good fro' yer bad percepticon. But fro' a goods one, it's just plain bad."

"Bob, we couldn't fight our usual enemies because we are busy dealing with Alan." Abigail explains to Bob as the machine begins powering down. "Trust me, we need this to happen, we need someone to keep Alan busy so we can get back to our fighting lives!"

A yellow essence in pill form came out, landing on a metal plate. Alan chuckles while saying, "Bob, you don't know what's good for bad."

"Right so come on, don't be a worry wart!" Kuki giggles to the worried Bob. Alan goes over to some sort of huge gun nearby, placing the pill in the weapon and load sit up, the logo 'Infuse' is seen glowing.

"Now then, we only got one shot at this. I must find a suitable subject. Someone who has a noble ehart and mind, ptuting the welfare of others above his own."

"No offense, but it's hard to find someone like that in Toon Town City." Abigail remarks to Alan with a frown. She's right, some folks in this town are selfish or wouldn't know welfare if it bite them on the butt.

"Plus, some of the heroes who do got powers already." Hoagie explains to Alan with a nod. "You need someone who would do so, someone no one would suspect to be a hero."

"Oh, do Stitch, do Stitch!" Stitch exclaims eagerly.

"Sorry, Stitch but you got powers already." Angelilo points out to Stitch in concern. "Plus, if you get those powers, you would go crazy and do things for your own amusement."

"Soooo, what's your point, Angelilo?"

"So why not any of us?" Nigel ask Alan with a frown. "We can do good with our powers."

"Look, we need someone who is an unknown, you kids are known throughout Cleveland and here!" Alan explains to the Freelance Police's group. "We need someone who..."

Alan was cut off as some sort of theme song is heard playing, much to the confusion of the heroes. Wally exclaims, "What the world is that?!"

"Where is that tune coming from?" Alan ask as he looks around for the source of the theme song playing.
Number Four meows while glancing to Alan's pocket, Bob explains, "Number Four done said 'dat it's coming fro' there, sir." The villain takes something out, it's Maurice's cellphone. He has forgotten that he himself still has it.

"Why do you have Maurice's cellphone?" Kuki ask Alan curiously.

"A torphy, I guess." Alan said as he answers the phone. Who could be trying to call him. "O-llo?"

"Uh, it's done pronounced 'hello', Alan." Bob explains to Alan, correcting him on his 'hello'.

"Right, right. Hello, like that?"

"'O-llo' is much better." Hoagie remarks as he and his partner chuckles a bit.

"Alan, it's me, Cree." A familiar voice spoke on the other end, much to Alan's surprise as is the others. Cree is on the other end calling! But how?

Alan quickly put on a device to speak in Maurice's voice, "Oh, Cree. Hello? How did you get this number?"

"Your former bosses gave it to me. Didn't you hear? Someone blew the museum up last night and I think Alan is behind it."

"Oh, right, right, you know Alan, always trying to get rid the world of anything Silver Sentry, dead or alive." Alan said, trying to sound sincere. He turns to the others, whispering in his real voice, "It's Cree."

"We kinda figure that one out." Hoaige whispers to Alan right back.

"What does my sister want?" Abigail ask Cree puzzled.

"I wanna thank you for inspiring me last night." Cree's voice said on the other end of the phone eagerly.

"Oh yes...you've inspired me too." Alan said in Maurice's voice with a smile on his face. The others couldn't help but note the goofy smile on his face.

"I can see where this is going." Kuki giggles playfully though made sure to be quiet so that Cree doesn't hear her.

"Good to her that, it's time for us to stand up to that creep Alan and show him that he can't push us around." Cree's voice exclaims in determination, Alan push through the others to listen better.

"Oh, really?" Alan ask with a slight chuckle. Cree wants to stand up to her.

"Looks like Alan wants her." Kuki giggles to her friends eagerly.

"Yeah, but would she wants him?" Angelilo ask her friends quietly. The question remains if Cree would want to be Alan after all he has done like killing the Silver Sentry, conquer the city and blowing up the museum.

"I;n hot on his trail as it is." Cree's voice said excitedly on the other end of the phone.

"Oh really? What gives you that idea?" Alan ask slyly to Cree, wondering if the girl really is hot on his trail.

"Err, sir?" Bob ask in worry as he saw something. The others turn and yelps a bit as they saw what the goldfish just saw. Not good!

"Yours truly has found his secret hideout." Cree's voice said slyly. Bob gulps as Number Four points to a camera which shows her outside the hideout already!

"Crud!" The Freelance Police exclaims in alarm and worry. "We're dead!"

Alan turns and looks horrified upon seeing Cree's image on the monitor, asking, "How did she find my hideout?!" The villain, remembering that the phone is on, quickly ask, "Err, how did you find his hideout?"

Cree, outside the place, looks excited as she remarks, "Come on. It's so obvious. It's the only place in Toon Town City with a fake observatory on the roof." Indeed, the woman recognizes the fake observatory from when she was kidnapped.

Inside, Alan looks stunned as Kuki ask, "Should've taken it down first chance you get, huh?"

"Yeah, you made a huge boo-boo, Alan." Stitch chuckles to Alan, much to the villain's annoyance.

"Shut up. Okay, no problem, no problem." Alan said, trying to assure himself and the others. "On the plus side, she couldn't find the secre entrance..right?"

Alan ended up eating his words however when Cree gasps as she saw a mat on the ground on the camera. The woman comments, "Look! I found a doormat here that says 'Secret Entrance'! How crazy is that?!"

"Bob!"

"Shucks, sorry! Number Four an' Ah kept forgetting where it was!" Bob protests to Alan sheepishly. The heroes gasp as they saw Cree entering the entrance though the secre entrance. Not good! If she finds out what Alan is doing...

"Blast, she will discover all our secrets!" Alan exclaims in alarm and worry.

"Yikes, we're busted!" Angelilo exclaims in alarm, freaking out a bit.

"Oh no, not good!" Bob exclaims, freaking as Number Four meows in horror.

"Dim witted creations of science!" Alan snaps furiously to Bob and Number Four as he slams both into a locker in frustration before closing the door, trapping the two inside along with the infuse gun. This causes the two to yelp in pain and such.

"Huh? What's that?" Cree's voice is heard on the cellphone, making Alan yelps in alarm as he quickly regains control of the situation through the voice changing device.

"Err, nothing, just yelling at...my friends!" Alan exclaims as the heroes quickly close the curtains. "Do not do anything, I will be right there."

Alan hangs his phone up while turning to the Freelance Police's group, snapping, "Listen, you guys must pretend to fight me while saving my Maurice disguise. We can't let Cree figure out what's going on?"

"Oh yeah, sure, that oughta be easy." Wally remarks in sarcasm. How the heroes would pull the wool over Cree's eyes is anyone's guess.

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Cree wasn't alone, she has brought Control Freak with her to show some filming...and the cameraman looks confused as he looks at the wall where she disappeared through a while ago.

"Cree?" Control Freak ask in confusion before groaning in disbelief. "Argh, not again!"

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Cree looks around the hideout, seeing various gadgets around. She hates to see what Alan is planning to do with this stuff for the city and more.

Just then, Cree felt a tap on her arm with a familiar voice saying, "Hey, Cree." The girl yells as she grabs the arm of who was tapping her, tossing him to the floor. Cree calms down as she saw who it was, groaning. "Ouch."

"Oh great, it's my sister's boyfriend who used to crush on me." Cree groans in annoyance at Hoagie. "And what are you doing here?"

"Good question..."

Suddenly Maurice, or rather Alan impersonating him, appears with the others (minus Bob and Number Four) as he spoke in the teenager's voice, "Cree." Suddenly Cree yelps and almost hit him. "Whoa, whoa!"

"Honestly, do you always hit people who startled you?" Nigel ask Cree in annoyance.

"Oh shut up, Nigel. Anyway, Maurice, I'm glad that you're here." Cree said to Alan with a sigh, unaware of who she's really talking to. "Wait, how did you get here so fast?"

"Ih, I was...speed walking nearby when you called." Maurice said to Cree quickly to cover up how he really got here so far.

"In those clothes?"

"Oh yes, it's called 'Formal Speed Walking'."

"And we happened to be hanging out when we oerheard his conversion with you." Angelilo said to Cree, explaining the others' presence here. "So we came with Maurice to give out support to stopping Alan."

"Right and ready to kick some butt too!" Stitch exclaims eagerly with his blasters out. "Ready to blast4 this place sky high! Ha ha ha!"

"Err, let me take the lead." Alan said quickly. He doesn't want Cree to find out his secret plan or Stitch to destroy his hideout like mad. The disguised villain saw the 'Exit', saying, "Oh yeah. This way looks exciting."

"That says 'exit'." Kuki points out to Alan in a puzzled way.

"But that's the abbreviation for 'Exciting', right?"

"Whoa!" Cree exclaims. To Alan's alarm, the woman saw the curtains and open them up. "It's the mother load."

"Aaah." Some of the heroes pretend to be amazed at what Cree just found: Alan's plans, clues and the whatnot on making his own superhero.

"Yeah, wow." Alan groans as he and the others head over to her. Not good, now this whole thing is getting complicating by the moment.

"Eh, it's something." Wally remarks with a shrug.

"Man, look at this thing." Cree said with a smile. Of course, it's hard to describe what this stuff mean or what's going on here. "I could really all of your help in figuring this all out."

"What?" Abigail ask Cree dryly. "You need the help of your sister whom you tried to destroy every now and again in your other line of work?"

"Hey, I got a line outside of that!"

"So, you really need my help?" Alan ask Cree a bit uneasily.

"Sure, you're an expert in everything that involves Alan Matthews, right?" Cree ask Alan with a grin, making the villain nervous.

"Sure, I am..."

"Good, then together, we could figure out what he got planned for the city and stop it. Are you in?"

"Sure, why not? What fun!" Alan exclaims with a pretend grin. Not good, he got to stop Cree and get her out of here before she gets wise and figure out what's going on.

"Cool, that's what I want to hear." Cree said. As the woman begins to take a few pictures of what she's seeing, Alan took out his walkie talkie and speaks into it. Cree must go and now!

"Boys, Code: Send Out The Robots Now..."

"Yew know, Alan, 'de whole point o' a code is..." Bob begins to protest to Alan through a walkie talkie while being held by Number Four.

"Code: Just do it, idiot!" Alan snaps to Bob impatiently, making Angelilo and Abigail, who overheard the villain, frowns to him. "What?"

"Yeah, you know what." Abigail remarks to Alan dryly, wondering how the villain goes around, insulting his boys like that.

Bob sighs in annoyance back in the locker. His boss can so difficult. He signals Number Four to press a button which the cat did. Soon an alarm sounds off as Alan's toy minions charge into the room, ready to attack any intruders.

"Intruders, get them!" Goober exclaims stupidly as the battle flew on...and grabs Alan, snatching him away. Apparently, they don't recognize him in his Maurice disguise.

"Hey, it's me you idiots!" Alan exclaims in annoyance.

"Kids Next Door, Battle Stations!" Nigel exclaims quickly as he and his group attack Alan's minions, along with the Combat Bots to create confusion and a distraction.

"One butt whooping coming up!" Stitch exclaims as he grabs Robosnail, throwing him away right into the locker. It opens up and frees Bob and Number Four, but the cat yelps as he drops the gun, the whole locker crash right onto the two villain.

"Maurice!" Cree exclaims in alarm. She then spots the gun, frowning a bit. What is this?

Alan, meanwhile, quickly changes back to his normal form once he's away from Cree. The villain yells angrily, "Idiots, it's me, it's me!"

"Oops!" Mr. Tippy exclaims in alarm upon seeing Alan. Not good.

"Sorry, boss!" Catbot exclaims sheepishly as he and the other minions release Alan right near a tin door.

"Ugh! Idiots, why did I ever brought you to life, I would never know!" Alan scowls as he got back up to his feet, dusting himself off.

"Sorry, boss! Your disguises look too real too us, we didn't know!"

"Just be glad that Cree isn't here to see this or..."

"Or you'll what, Alan?" Cree is heard snapping as Alan turns to see her and the Freelance Police's group arriving. Luckily, she didn't see him transform so his secret is safe. "All right, what did you do to Maurice?"

"Maurice?" Alan ask then remembers what she's talking about. "Oh yes...I'm doing horrible things to that boy. Oh, I don't wanna go into it, but I got a lot of torture."

"Oh, you are a terrible monster, are you?" Hoagie ask Alan, pretending to be angry with him.

"Someone oughta slap you silly, stupid head!" Stitch remarks in pretend anger as well.

"Where is Maurice? What did you do to him?" Nigel demands to Alan sternly.

"He's in here." Alan said as he goes over to an opened door and spoke inside. The villain uses his voice changer to make it sounds like Maurice is in there. "No, stop, anything but that! You're a mad man, a mad man!"

Alan removes his voice changer while saying to Cree evilly, "You know the drill." He leans close to the door, using the device once more. "No, not, not the drill!"

"Wow, Alan sure got this guy downpat." Hoagie whispers to his friends, minus Cree, who nod in agreement.

"All right, Alan, let him go or..." Cree begins to demand sternly to Alan.

"Or else what?" Alan ask Cree slyly. Suddenly the woman frowns as she holds up a familiar gun right at him.

"Or maybe I will find out what this weird looking gun does!"

"Gah!" The heroes exclaims in alarm. Cree got her hands on the infuse gun!

"Whoa, not cool!" Hoagie exclaims in worry. If Cree were to hit anyone with that gun, who knows whom would get the Silver Sentry's powers?

"Gah, no, don't shoot, no! I will go get him!" Alan exclaims in horror. He quickly opens the door and went in, closing behind himself. The villain got to make this look real. He spoke in Maurice's voice, "Let go of me, you monster!" Alan then spoke in his normal voice, "NOT A CHANCE!"

The door opens briefly as 'Maurice' is seen peeking out, the villain is tapping his watch to transform himself halfway to make it look like that Alan and the real Maurice were fighting.

"His strength is too much." Alan remarks in Maurice's voice as he 'got pulled' back in. The villain's real head peeks out, showing the teenager's hand while saying, "Oh, I work out."

"Oh brother." Wally mumbles a bit. Alan goes back in, coming out as Maurice who appears to be fighting the villain.

"Argh, no, it's paying off, you are so...fit...and strangely charismatic."

The disguised villain ducks down, some fighting noises are heard, or pretend ones, anyway. Soon the door bursts open as 'Maurice' was pushed out, crashing into a wall.

"Whoa, you okay?" Cree ask Maurice as the disguised boy got back up, pretending to be hurt as to fool the reporter further.

"Yeah, I did my best but he's too cool and fantastic." Alan said with a sigh. Of course, not him or Cree saw the others frowning or rolling their eyes at this.

"Yeah, Alan is definitely a good actor. Too good." Angelilo remarks dryly.

"Well, at least we were able to keep the whole act for long." Kuki giggles happily as Alan got up. Looks like he has fooled Cree but now, the villain got to get the gun away from the woman before she figures out what it does.

"Err, Cree? Perhaps I should carry that heavy gun for you." Alan suggests hopefully, motioning to the gun in Cree's hands.

"Yeah, thanks but I got this covered." Cree remarks with a shrug as she heads off, making Alan growls a bit, then he turns to the heroes.

"Cover her...I'm going in front."

The Freelance Police's group sighs as they follow Cree, pretending to cover her. Alan then swiftly goes to one side of where they are heading down, turning his disguise off. The villain arrives up ahead and waits...before jumping towards Cree's group.

"Give me that, it's mine!' Alan snaps to Cree as he grabs the gun, trying to pull the thing away from her.

"Maurice, idiots, run!" Cree exclaims as she struggles with Alan with the gun.

"Oh, that isn't going to give us good points for that remark, Cree." Stitch remarks to Cree, annoyed by what she called him and his friends.

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Outside, Control Freak looks around the building, calling out, "Cree? Man, where is that hot chick?"

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"Fight, fight, fight, fight!!" The Freelance Police and Wally cheers out as Alan and Cree continues fighting over the gun.

"Let go, you're going to break it!" Alan exclaims to Cree as the struggle over the gun continues.

"Let it go, give that gun to me!" Cree snaps angrily. Unfortunately, one big problem occurred: the gun went off, sending the pill flying, much to the shock of the good guys and the horror of Alan.

"Oh no!"

"Look out!" Abigail screams as the gang dodges the pull that bounces all over the place.

Bob and Number Four, who are trying to escape the locker prison, saw the pill coming, the goldfish yells out, "WHOA! DUCK!" The two minions duck back into the locker, dodging the pill itself.

The pill bounces around and went into a nearby pipe leading outside.

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Control Freak was looking for Cree and heard something coming from a pipe, making him peeks inside, calling, "Cree?"

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What happened next caught Alan and his group by surprise as they listen to the pill bouncing in the pipe, followed by someone yelling, "Ouch!" A thud noise is heard soon after.

"Oh boy, you're in trouble, Alan." Hoagie remarks to Alan in amusement.

"More so than usual." Stitch remarks with a chuckle.

"Shut up, I got to find out who that pill hit!" Alan exclaims in annoyance as he and the others goes up to the camera along with Bob and Number Four who escaped the locker. They got to find out whom got hit by the pill and find out who got the shocking mispleasure of now having the Silver Sentry's powers.

"Who 'de Sam Hill is 'dat?" Bob ask in confusion as Number Four points to what appears to be a groaning Control Freak on the ground outside the hideout.

"Oh great, it's that fat annoying idiot who has a crush on my sister!" Abigail groans in annoyance upon seeing Control Freak on the monitor.

"Hey, I told you that I got over my crush!" Hoagie protests to Abigail in annoyance.

"Not you, him!"

Cree meanwhile chose that time to make her escape, dodging the Combat Bots who are flying bu. She found the exit and opens it...but yelps as the woman finds herself in a pit area with disco music playing. Cree screams as she almost fell to where a bunch of Feraligatrs are above, snapping right at her.

"Cree!" A familiar voice exclaims as Alan, in his Maurice disguise, quickly pulls the girl away from the pit area, closing the door in time. That was a close one. The villain normally uses that room to deal with pests (but he has forgotten about it until now).

"You okay?" Kuki ask Cree hopefully.

"Wow, Maurice, you were right, that room was exciting...too much for my taste." Cree pants a bit. At least she now knows that door is not to be trusted.

The group turns and saw some of Alan's toy minions appearing, spotting them as Dust Bunny exclaims, "There she is!"

"Attack!" Merc and Green orders as the bad guys charge at the group (but mostly Cree as they know about Alan and the Freelance Police's group).

"This way!" Alan exclaims. He grabs Cree's arm and runs off with her as the other heroes follow, the minions chases after them.

Cree look up to see the Exterminator blocking the group's way, Shellshock snarls, "Not so fast!"

"Aha!" Cree exclaims as she saw something and pulls it out. The heroes yelps as they saw that Cree has found a stick of dynamite

"Wait, what are you up to?" Angelilo ask Cree as she lit the fuse of the dynamie.

"This will stop them!" Cree laughs. She kicks the Exterminators down, sending them all to the ground. "Here, catch!"

Cree tosses the dynamite to the heroes, obviously wanting them to toss it at the minions chasing them. As they run off, Alan protests, "GAH, wait! Isn't this a bit extreme?" The villain does his best to blow the fuse out but to no prevail. He doesn't want to harm himself or his minions.

"Come on, stop doing that!" Abigail exclaims to Alan in alarm.

"You're making it worse!" Angelilo remarks in agreement.

"Throw the darn thing, Maurice!" Cree exclaims to Alan, making the villain groans in regret. He hates doing this but Alan has no choice.

"Daddy's sorry." Alan whispers to his minions then throws the dynamite right at the robots who stops upon seeing it.

"Oh, crud." Robosnail yelps upon realizing what the item is.

The whole area blew up as the group ran. They jump to the secret exit outside and escape just as the explosion caught up, destroying part of the area. Alan regrets doing that.

After a while, everyone coughs a bit as they got back to their feet. Cree smiles while saying, "Wow, that was really exciting."

"Yeah, I know." Alan remarks with a sigh. He will make a note to make repairs to his hideout and apologize to his minions for what he himself has to do later some more.

"You were really cool in there."

"Yeah...I know..."

Cree comment, "You're the first individual I've seen other than the Silver Sentry that actually SUCCESSFULLY stood up to Alan Matthews. I mean, sure, the Freelance Police and assorted super-heroes have been TRYING TO stand up to him again and again since the Silver Sentry's death, but without much success. His weapons and robots have just been too formidable for them."

"Hey, we're doing our best you know!" Hoagie protests to Cree in annoyance.

"Ih, give us credit for some trying, lady!" Stitch remarks with a groan.

Just then, Control Freak arrives, holding his nose painfully while groaning, "Hey, what's going on?" The group notes how swelling that the nerd's nose is. That pill really hit him hard.

"Control Freak? What happened to you?" Cree ask Control Freak puzzled by the condition that her cameraman is in.

"Some sort of bee flew up my use. I was about to use a frontal assault to rescue you but...well, 50 ninjas tried to fight me so I have to beat them all up. I did...they were like crying."

"Oh bother, give me a break!" Wally groans as the heroes look rather annoyed. Control Freak is obviously making up a story to impress Cree, and even the woman knows it too.

"Tell me about it." Kuki remarks with a shrug. "You all right, Mr. Control Freak person?"

"Okay, the Freelance Police, their pals and Cree's sister I know of, but who are you?" Control Freak ask suspiciously as he glances at Maurice, obviously not seeing him before.

"Oh, I'm..." Alan begins to say but Cree beats him to it.

"Oh this is Maurice, my partner." Cree said with a smile, much to the surprise of everyone else. Alan AKA Maurice is the reporter's partner?

"Partner?" Control Freak ask in shock and disbelief. The cameraman was under the impression that he is Cree's own partner!

"Err, yes, partner." Alan said uneasily and concerned, following along with what Cree's saying.

"Well, 'partner', I'm her partner. I don't know what she's saying but the woman doesn't know what she's saying. She has been through one traumatic experience."

"Control Freak! Listen, Maurice, I'm going to take her home. Thanks again." Cree said then turns to the Freelance Police group. "Yeah, even you guys too, even my own little sister. For a pest and a sometimes enemy, you are really all right."

Cree hugs the Freelance Police, the rest of Sector V as well as Abigail. The young sister looks amazed. This is a real hug that doesn't involve the big sister trying to stick a gun in her back. It's like she really means to care.

Cree then hugs Alan, making him blush a bit before hugging the woman right back. Once she lets go, Cree said, "I will call you and the Freelance Police tomorrow..." She playfully punch 'Maurice' in the shoulder. "...partner."

"Yeah, I'd like that." Alan said while smiling. He really likes that.

"Us too." Nigel said while scratching the back of his neck. Weird.

"Ugh, got hugged by the enemy...not sure how to respond." Wally groans a bit while Kuki giggles while patting the boy right on the back.

As Control Freak was led to the van by Cree, the cameraman frowns while saying, "Now this is weird for everyone, but you accidentially hug everyone else besides me."

Once Cree and Control Freak are in the van, the two drove off from the scene. Stitch ask Hoagie, "Hoagie, what is that?"

"A tender moment between two bad guys, little buddy...or what could be a reformed reporter and a disguised villain." Hoagie explains to Stitch with a shrug.

Alan sighs as he watch the van leaves. Just then, Bob's voice is heard on the walkie talkie, "Sir? Alan! Code: Did yew found out who it was?"

"Huh? Oh yes, yeah." Alan said with a nod as he transforms back into his normal self. The villain then continues speaking into his walkie talkie. "First off: Code: Get the Car. Second: Code: Find out more about this fat nerd who has crush on Cree Lincoln."

"Right away, sir. Come on, Number Four."

"Okay, so we got Control Freak who now has the Silve Sentry's powers." Angelilo said in concern. "Do I sense some trouble coming out of this?"

"Or maybe a new hero coming up." Alan said with a sly smile. Perhaps Control Freak having the Silver Sentry may be a blessing in disguise after all.

"And weega going to help him, right?" Stitch ask with a slight smile. "And kick some butt while doing so!"

"As usual, you crack me up, little buddy." Hoagie remarks to Stitch with a smile.

Author's note
Well, that was an amazing chapter. Alan got closer to Cree, so to speak, and Control Freak has the Silver Sentry's powers. In the next chapter, the villain, pretending to be the nerd's space dad, begins training him with Bob, Number Four, and the Freelance Police's group's help while Alan himself as Maurice bonds and get closer to Cree. But things get a big troubling that puts a strain on the villain's friendship with Bob and Number Four. Read, review and suggest.
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To Billy Arratoon, I don't watch much of Fullmetal Alchemist, so that's going to be hard.

Chapter 6: The New Superhero?

It was a while later Alan and his minions has gotten the lair repaired from the madness earlier. Now that's one, the villain can get to the next part of the plan.

At this time, the Freelance Police & their group arrive back to Alan's place, making a surprise visit.

"Honey, weega home!" Stitch called out to get a response, like a husband coming home to his wife.

"Yeah, nobodies buying it, little buddy." Hoagie sadly busted Stitch's bubble of that thought.

"Aww!" Stitch groans in hearing this, he wanted to live a little like that.

"So Alan, how are your minions doing?" Angelilo asked the villain in recalling what happened to this guy's minions from their adventure in keeping Cree in the dark.

"Oh, my toy minions & other Combat Bots are getting a good fixer-up treatment." Alan nods to respond that he's getting some patch work done in fixing his minions, especially after explaining the situation of things to them. "At the very least, Shellshock took most of that blast and so he is getting a polish job, and Reactor and Eviscerator are right now, trying to improve my security to make sure,no nosy reporters can get in next time." Alan explained off this next part, trying to make sure that no one else can find his evil hideaway.

"The way my sister found some of that, I'm stumped Wally here didn't manage to do the same." Abigail nods in knowing the feeling, the place to find entry was so easy, even her pal Wally Beetles could do it if he tried.

"Hey! What's that suppose to mean?" Wally snapped off in finding that comment highly offensive.

"So you wanted to go over this objective plan of creating this new hero? What is it?" Nigel asked off in getting to business, the group with Alan know that Control Freak got hit by the DNA of the Silver Sentry, so what next?

"Just follow me, Bob and Number 4 and we'll explain." Alan signaled the group to follow him and all will be explain to them.

"Weega follow Wally?" Stitch asked to point and wonder in confusion if that's smart.

"No little buddy, he means his cat." Hoagie correctly told his partner in what Alan really meant.

"Oh, the smarter number 4!" Stitch nods with a smile in now getting the idea.

"What do you mean by that?" Wally snapped off towards Stitch, is the koala saying that he can't lead?

"Come on Wally, let's go!" Kuki patted Wally on the back with a smile as they decided to just move along.

With that, the group followed Alan to meet up with Bob and Number 4 for the next phase of their plan.

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It was a while later as Cree takes Control Freak to his home, an apartment building underneath the freeway bridge. The girl lets the cameraman off as he sighs, "Bye."

"Yeah, see you tomorrow, CF." Cree said with a nod as Control Freak closes the door.

"Say, I will leave the door unlocked...you know, in case you want to come by to check on me later."

Cree roll her eyes as she drover her van away. Control Freak sighs as he heads off to enter the building. Argh, what is wrong with him? Is there no way to get the woman's attention at last?

Unknown to him, a familiar invisible car drove up, peeking out from outside at him. Alan ask curiously, "Soooo, who is this man that we gave godlike powers to?"

"Like we said, his name is Control Freak, real name unknown." Abigail explains to Alan. Control Freak yelps and hits over the car, due to him not seeing the invisible thing. After tumbling a bit, he fell to the ground wiht a groan. "And unfortunately, not much to look at."

"He's right, sir, his name is Control Freak, currently going 34." Bob explains while looking up Control Freak on his laptop carefully. "'De cameraman was a fat TV obsessed freak show who was an enemy o' 'de Teen Titans but was released on parole released, apparently reformed. Other than 'dat, no records whatsoever."

"Minus the medical records." Stitch said with a nod.

"Geez, this guy is probably a hue bomb waiting for go off." Wally remarks dryly. Control Freak, being a villain, is not a good candidate to be given powers to.

"'Ta be honest, 'dis guy hasn't accomplished anything." Bob explains with a shrug. "His defeats by 'de Teen Titans don't give him much 'ta go fer here."

"Hey, what happened?" Control Freak ask with a groan, getting up and looking confused. He is not sure as to what happened that causes him to tumble around like that.

"Oh not yet, my friends, not yet." Alan said with an evil grin. If this reformed cameraman can be a hero, then maybe it's worth the accident earlier.

"Could this day become even more fun-tastic?"

"'Fun-tastic'? Do folks any that anymore?" Angelilo ask her friends with a frown.

"Right, look, how about we go ahead and defuse him?" Hoagie suggests as he and Stitch takes the fusion gun. "Because this is clearly a mistake that must be fixed."

"Ih, only idiots are crazy enough to give a psycho like Control Freak any powers." Stitch remarks in agreement.

"No, stop, absolutely not!" Alan snaps as he grabs the gun away from the Freelance Police. "Don't you see what we got here? Something more powerful is at work here! Why, this is no mistake, it's destiny!"

Alan toss the gun into the back seat, Nigel frowns while saying, "This is crazy! You want to train someone who has a crush on Numbuh 5's sister and who was once an enemy to the Teen Titans?!"

"Let's look at the facts, shall we? There's Scarlet Witch, Quicksilver, the Sandman, the Swordsman, even Plastic Man and Sandman! What do they got in common? They were former criminals that has reformed!"

"Sandman went back to being evil." Kuki points out to Alan in concern.

"Doesn't matter! The point is if those bad guys can reformed and be good guys, then so can a fat nerd with no accomplishments!" Alan exclaims with an evil laugh. His friends and the heroes look worried. They hope that the villain knows what he's doing.

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Control Freaks as he held his nose in his room. Injured and rejected once more. How could his day get even worst? Without warning, sparks flew at the door and blow up, causing the bed that fat nerd was on to fling him upward and right behind it, it's one of those beds that folds into the wall.

"Control Freak, get ready for...your density!" Alan laughs evilly as he and his group came into the room.

"Ugh, you mean 'destiny', right?" Abigail ask Alan as her pals chuckle a bit by his mistake. The villain roll his eyes as Number Four puts a replacement door up. Alan looks around, seeing no sign of Control Freak.

"Errr, Control Freak? Freaky? Hello?"

"Hey, in here!" Control Freak is heard mumbling right behind the bed.

"Did you say it right, Alan?" Angelilo ask Alan puzled.

"Hey, I am in the bed!"

"It's Control Freak...and I think he's right behind here." Nigel said as he motions to Control Freak's bed.

Number Four meows as he pulls down Control Freak's bed to speak to him. Of course, the fat nerd screams in terror upon seeing the group. He held a pillow while asking, "Is this a robbery? If so, rob the lady down the hall instead! Seriously, she got way better stuff than I do! Leave me alone!"

"Hmmm, tempting." Stitch said, liking the idea of robbing a lady of her stuff instead.

"Focus, Stitch." Hoagie said, reminding his partner of what the group has came here to do.

"Look, everyone, it's Control Freak." Alan said eagerly. Yes, this fat nobody will be his superhero somebody! "Quick, the spray!"

Bob nods as he motions Number Four to use the spray but nothing came out. The goldfish yelps, "Dang nab it! We must've forgotten 'ta refill it after using it on Cree when 'de Silver Sentry was killed!"

"Well, quick! Use the forget me stick instead!"

"Right, Number Four!"

Number Four quickly takes out a huge stick and hits Control Freak over the head with it, knocking the hero right out and onto his bed.

"Wow, that thing can really give a hit!" Abigail remarks as the group glances at Control Freak unconscious.

"Oh...just look at him, everyone." Alan said eagerly.

"Shucks, not sure. He doesn't look like 'de hero-type 'ta me." Bob said as Number Four meows in agreement.

"Right, I am not sure if giving Control Freak powers is a good idea." Angelilo said in concern. Control Freak looks like someone who could destroy the whole world or something.

"Well, maybe the reaction didn't activate his powers yet." Kuki suggests to her friends thoughtfully. "This take time, you know."

"Oh, meega know! Let's hang him like a pinata and see him squirm!" Stitch exclaims to his pals excitedly. "Meega want to hit something!"

"You're an insane psycho who likes to take the bright side of things, Stitch." Hoagie chuckles to his partner in amusement.

"Oh, you guys are so much worry warts." Alan remarks with a scoff. After all, if his plan works, Control Freak will be the right candidate.

"But Control Freak is crazy, what if something goes wrong?" Abigail ask Alan in concern as the bed with Control Freak in it was flipped back up. "Alan, I don't think..."

"Abby, relax, a potter couldn't ask for finner clay....yes, I smell a hero."

"You sure because all I can smell here is dirty underwear." Hoagie remarks, holding his nose in disgust. "Man, doesn't this guy ever does his laundry?"

"If he does, it's probably in the sewer." Stitch remarks, gagging at the smell.

"Wait, Ah smell something else...something burning." Bob comments as he and the others sniff a bit. Everyone turns and saw smoke coming from behind the bed where Control Freak is at.

"I think it's working!" Alan gasps in excitement. Control Freak's new powers must be coming to surface. "Quick, everyone, to your places!"

The heroes quickly got into places as did the three bad guys. Alan then ask, "All right, the heroes are going to be my allies....Bob, Number Four, did you got your disguises?"

"Right here!" Bob exclaims with a nod. Number Four quickly put on a wig along wiht an apron while the gold fish puts on a mustache.

With a grin, Alan activates his watch, going through many transformations, like a panda bear, a green ogre, a one-antlered mule deer, a wacky man wearing a green mask, a green dodo,a sea sponge in square pants, a giant reptilian monster (who played Megamind in another fanmake), a french skunk, a green round cyclops, a green elephant who likes nachos, a basket-loving bear, a two-tailed fox, a flying squirrel, a World War I Flying Ace Beagle, a western gunslingin' chameleon, a space ranger toy, a detective of some sort with random gadgets that pop out and a big, beefy yet simple-minded Incan henchman. Son the villain transform into an old man with white hair and a space suit.

"What kind of a disguise is that?" Wally ask Alan with a frown.

"The best that I can find on a TV show." Alan explains to Wally in an old man voice. The group glances at Bob and Number Four in their disguises, the two minions saw the others looking.

"What? Whatcha looking at?" Bob ask the others with a frown on his face.

"Oh, you two...look fantastic, that will do..."

The gang watch then saw two beefly arms bursting through the walls before the bed fall to the ground. There's Control Freak, now muscular and powerful. Most of the others are more worried by this sight. Alan on the other hand doesn't seem that worried.

"Yes, rise my glorious creation...rise and come to daddy." Alan spoke omniously to Control Freak in an eerie like way.

"Yeees, come to us." Stitch remarks eagerly, making his friends look at him. "What? So Stitch can't do the eerie voice too?"

"That's weird, Stitch." Angelilo said with a frown.

Control Freak got himself from the wall and looks at his muscular self in confusion. The cameramn ask, "What's...what going on?"

"Relax, my child." Alan said to Control Freak in a gentle like voice. "You have awakened to be the newest hero that this world has ever seen..."

"Who...who are you? I know the Freelance Police and his pals...but..."

"I have send you to this world to learn about justice, honor and nobility...I...am your father."

"Oh brother." Wally groans a bit as he and some of the others slap their foreheads in annoyance. Only an idiot can believe that stupid line.

Surprisingly, Control Freak is that idiot as he ask Alan, "Wait, so you're like...my space dad?"

Alan pauses a bit then said slowly, "Yes...I'm like your space dad."

"Wait, if I was supposed to have these powers...why didn't I have them before?"

"Oh well, they are supposed to come on when the time comes when you are worthy to wield them...and that time is now!"

Well, Control Freak has brought that line from Alan. He turns to Bob and Number Four, asking puzzled, "And you two are..."

"Shucks, Ah done be yer space step brother an' dis here is yer space step-mom." Bob said as Number Four gave a curtsy to Alan. "Mum here had some work done recently. "We're doing this because..."

"Not now, not now!" Nigel whispers to Bob then turns to Control Freak, speaking normally, "And your father found us and ask us to assist you in being this world's hero."

"Right, and have lots of fun too!" Kuki giggles to Control Freak playfully.

Control Freak looks amazed and disbelief, he is going to be a hero? The new superhero ask, "Is this...a dream?"

"Oh yes...a dream come true." Alan said with a smile while holding his hand out. "As said before, you have been blessed with unthatomable power."

"What kind?"

"Unfathomable...you know, it's the uh but without the fathom."

"Whoa." Control Freak said in amazement. So he really does got powers now.

"Yes, we have come to guide you on your path to be the newest hero of this city." Alan explains as he hold up a magazine with the Silver Sentry right on it with the hero holding Cree. The disguised villain then tear the head page off and holds it up to the mirror. Control Freak saw himself in the said mirror with the picture below the head part as if he's in it in the Silver Sentry's body. "They will help you battle the super-genius of Alan Matthews."

"Yes, we need your help, Control Freak." Hoagie said to Control Who looks stunned. "Only you have the power to stop Alan now."

"Ih, now Stitch knows that this is a lot to take in..." Stitch begins to say as Control Freak begins to float, looking excited. "It could take weeks, months, or whatever before you can come to grips..."

"No stinking way! YAHOO!" Control Freak laughs excitedly. Super powers? No way! The villain flew out of the building, making a big hole in the progress, much to the gang's surprise.

"Hey, Stitch wasn't finished!"

The gang heard car crashes and look through the window, seeing cars crashing to one another like mad. Kuki exclaims, "Wow!"

The car pile were tossed away, revealing Control Freak stuck in one, hopping happily while cheering and dancing, "Sweet! I'm going to be a cool hero! Yes, I'm going to be one!!!"

"Uhhh, you sure that it's still a good idea to make him a hero?" Hoagie ask Alan skeptically. "It isn't too late to change him back, you know."

"Come on, he's perfect." Alan said with a chuckle as more crashes are heard. "Granted, Control Freak needs some training and lessons but once he's done, this guy will be the most powerful being in the world!"

"That's what I'm worried for." Nigel said with a frown, fearing the worst.

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The training of Control Freak begins. At a stage set, Alan sat in a director's chair as he shouts into a megaphone, "All right, action!"

The gang watch a simulation of Alan's lair with Number Four and Bob in a strap chair each. The goldfish calls out, "Someone heeeeeelp us, please!!"

Soon the roof burst opens though Control Freak falls to the ground, groaning while getting back up, "Okay, I'm fine, really."

Control Freak saw the prop of Alan and prepares to attack it...but his arm got stuck on a prop wall, sending him falling back...and for his laser eyes to hit the fake villain, sending it to the floor while the chair that Bob and Number Four are in tumble down.

"Whoa!!" Bob exclaims in alarm as he and Number Four hits the floor.

Control Ticks off, begins beating up the prop madly while yelling, "You bad..." He then uses the lasers on the prop's head, melting it. "Zap, zap, ha ha ha ha!"

Control Freak chuckles madly while the others look shocked with Alan becoming horrified. For a moment, teeh villain is having second thoughts about this.

"Why do I know that giving powers to this nut is a bad idea?" Wally ask uneasily.

"Come on, seeing this bum beat up props like that is cool!" Stitch exclaims eagerly. "Again, again!"

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Alan wore a mask that looks like his bad self, speaking semi-menacingly, "The flames of my evil shall burn bright!!!" He then spoke in the space dad voice, "Now then, you say something back to me, son."

Of course, Alan and the others notice that Control Freak is flying in the chair, giving himself a wedgie. The super being laughs, "Yeah, it doesn't even hurt! Finally!" He snaps his underwear back. "Not a thing! I like to see those dumb jocks hurt me now!"

"You think if weega kick him in the yahoos, this guy wont' feel it?" Stitch suggests curiously to his pals.

"Only if we could run from the mad weirdo." Angelilo said uneasily, knowing that Control Freak gets nasty when he's mad, especially on powers now.

"What a nerd." Abigail said with an annoyed sigh while glancing at Control Freak makign a fool out of himself per usual.

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Alan rides on Control Freak's back, gliding him through the city while instructing, "No, no! Stomach down and hands up, like the Silver Sentry! Or Superman!"

The two yelps, almost tumbling while flying in the city. Control Freak exclaims, "Hang on, wait!"

"Watch out!"

The two scream as they crash right through a poster of the Silver Sentry, breaking the teeth part in the progress.

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Alan, back to normal, hold a bag of ice to his head, groaning to the others watching, "Ugh, let's face it. That idiot is hopeless, completely hopeless!"

"Should've gave one of us that power." Wally remarks with a scoff.

"And what would you do with those powers? I hate to know why." Abigail remarks to Wally while following her eyes at the suggestion that her fellow KND operative has made.

As Number Four brushes his curly wig, Bob remarks, "By 'de way 'dat he lives, maybe we oughta change tactics."

"Or take his power away since Control Freak is really hopeless." Hoagie remarks with a frown. "Perhaps we should find someone else to be the good guy."

"Yeah, you know how those big boys are." Angelilo comments. Just then Alan's phoen rang as he picks it up. "They love their video games."

Alan spots a text message coming from the cell phone that said, 'Meet @ Library. Brings Friends If You want. CL.'. The villain smiles eagerly. Cree wants to meet him!

"Eeyup! We can done throw a few parts together." Bob comments with a nod, not seeing what his boss is doing right now.

Alan smiles as he texts back on the phone, saying, "'Cannot wait. LOL Smiley face'." Of course, Bob overheard what his boss is saying,

"Err, can't wait fer what?"

"Oh ignore him, none of your business anyway." Stitch said to Bob with a shrug. The gold fish looks concerned and suspicious. What is Alan up to?

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Alan in his disguise as Maurice were with the Freelance Police's group at the library, meeting up with Cree. The woman laughs with them a bit, having a great time even with her enemies in the Kids Next Door.

"Ha ha ha! Oh yes, that was a funny story! Which was brilliantly told, of course." Alan said in Maurice's voice with a smile. "Okay, you tell me one."

"Wow, Maurice, never knew you were so funny." Cree laughs a bit to Alan in amusement.

"Well, I have never heard you laugh before."

"Been a while, yeah. Feels pretty good..."

Cree picks up a book that is marked 'Matthews Wars' while the disguised villain takes one htat is marked 'Alan Matthews Unmasked?' which has a picture of his super villain face.

"Why do I sense some confusion?" Angelilo ask her friends in amusement.

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The next day, Alan, as Space Dad, smiles at the next scene as he holds a cell phone, exclaiming, "And action!"

"All right, let's see if all those times playing 'Donkey Kong' can work!" Hoagie laughs as Stitch begins to hum the music from 'Donkey Kong'.

"All right, Jumpman, come forth!" Nigel orders Control Freak with a nod.

Stitch kept humming as Control Freak burst through the wall and saw a laser firing at him. he laughs and blew it up with his own laser eyes, "Yeah, gotcha, stupid laser!"

Control Freak flew to another platform, punching away an oncoming car. Then the future super being avoid and jumping the flaming barrels being rolled down by Number Four who is tossing them right at Control Freak with Bob in some sort of damsel dress.

"Why is Ah in this role again?" Bob ask Number Four who meows while tossing more barrles down at Control Freak. "Though...Ah will give mahself credit. It brings out 'de best in me!"

"Okay, I didn't wanna hear it...ever!" Abigail groans in Bob in annoyance while backing away a bit.

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Alan goes back in his disguise as Maurice as he, the heroes and Cree rode on bikes. The woman chuckles at 'Maurice' himself trying to keep up with him.

"Wow, don't get out much, huh?" Cree teases Alan a bit as the disguised villain continues riding his bike.

"Oh, this is really fun!" Alan laughs eagerly in Maurice's voice. He has never have this much fun before outside of being the bad guy!

Suddenly Cree and Abigail stops, much to the notice of the others who stop. Kuki ask in concern, "Uh, Abby? Cree? What's wrong?"

"Something happen?" Wally ask puzzled.

Abby sighs sadly as she and Cree motions to a sad sight in front of the group: the park is a trash and no one bother to clean it up.

"To be honest...mom used to take Abigail and I here when we were little." Cree said sadly. "It's one of our favorite things to do before we ended up having an intense rivalry."

"One of the greatest times before we tried to kill one another." Abigail explains in sadness. "Now look at it, it's a dump like our rooms."

Alan looks at the two sisters and looks down in concern. Perhaps there's a way to make them both happy...

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That evening, Alan and his pals got to work: zapping trash as well as a cat with dehydration weapons, turning them into cubes. Alan and his goons are in their tank rolling through the city.

"Uh, sir, 'dis is confusing." Bob said as Number Four kept on zapping. "Why is we cleaning up 'de city?"


"Oh, well, we don't want to battle the new hero in a dump like this now, do we?" Alan ask Bob nervously. The truth is, he wants to impress Cree big time.

"Did we miss something here?" Merc ask Green as he and the other minions shrug in confusion.

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At the local museum, Alan (as Maurice) is with Cree and the Freelance Police's group, the disguised villain covers the woman's eyes to give her a surprise.

Alan removes his hands, making Cree gasps upon seeing the impossible: all the artifacts stolen by the villains and his goons are back in the museum as if they were never stolen in the first place!

"Whoa, they are back? Why, how?" Cree ask in amazement and disbelief.

"What can we say? We Freelance Police cops can be sneaky." Hoagie fibs to Cree a bit, giving an innocent smile.

"Ih, Numbuh 362 send us mission and weega got the items back." Stitch explains to Cree, following along with the story.

"Well, who knows? Maybe Alan isn't so bad after all." Alan remarks to Cree with a smile as if wanting to prove that his real self isn't so much a bad idea.

"Right, maybe Alan isn't much of a bad guy as one could figure, sis." Abigail adds to Cree. The big sister is not sure whatever or not she would listen to her...but Cree is glad that the artifacts are back, nevertheless.

The group moves on. Of course, no one spots familiar toy minions putting paintings back onto the wall. Obviously Alan has ordered them to return them.

"Come on, let's go." Catbot whispers to his fellow minions quietly.

"Why is the boss asking us to do this again?" Tharg ask Catbot in confusion.

"Hey, let's not question the boss's orders. Let's just send more of these babies back to this museum. Come on."

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Alan, as Space Dad, smiles as Control Freak flew around gracefully. The new super being is getting better.

"Yes, that's it!" Alan exclaims in the Space Dad voice. "Come, my beautiful bird, be free!"

"Yeah, YAHOOO!" Control Freak cheers wildly while the two flew away.

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A while later, Alan (as Maurice), Cree and the Freelance Police group are having a picnic, lying down on the grass, having great fun. They are now getting to a part of telling one another interesting secrets.

"Okay, you want to know? Fine." Cree said then sighs a bit. "That rumor of me and the Silver Sentry being a couple? Not true, we were never together."

"Whoa, seriously?" Hoagie ask Cree in surprise and disbelief.

"Well, obviously. No hero would be seen with you bad guys." Angelilo remarks to Cree, making the reporter frowns at her. "I mean that in a 'tough girl', not your way."
"Wait, you really...?" Alan ask in surprise and disbelief. So Cree and the Silver Sentry were never a couple? And after all these years. "I thought..."

"Yeah, so did everyone else." Cree remarks to Alan with a scoff. "To be honest, the hero isn't really my type at all. Plus, the guy is years older than I am. Wouldn't work anyway."

"Oh really?"

"Yeah, tell me about it. Okay, you guys tell me something."

"You know much about us anyway, what's more to tell?" Nigel ask Cree with a frown since it's likely that Abigail's sister knows about the Kids Next Door along with Hoagie and Stitch.

"What about you, Alan?" Kuki ask Alan with a smile. "Do you got any secrets?"

"Yeah, go ahead, tell us me something, something you never told anyone." Cree insists to Alan with a smile. The boy sighs a bit, perhaps it's time to give out a secret that he kept hidden for so long.

"Well, okay...you see, when I was school, none of the other kids really liked me." I was always the last one picked for everything...and even then, I wasn't involved in anything." Alan said in sadness, admitting a secret that has been on his mind for years.

The heroes look surprised and gave pity. Most likely the reason that the villain became what he is today is became today is that other kids teach him differently. Perhaps Alan did bad because he thought that's what he himself was meant to do.

"Wow, sad. Shame that we didn't go to the same school where you were picked on...I would've treated you better." Cree said slyly as she and Alan held hands, making the two smile warmly. The two are getting closer.

"Wow, he's soooo lucky!" Stitch exclaims eagerly.

"Stitch, you got Angelilo, remember?" Hoagie points out to Stitch in amusement.

"Oh, right."

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It's a while later as Alan, as Space Dad, sat with the Freelance Police's group and Control Freak. The time has come for all that training that they did to be put to the test. Tomorrow is a big day for everyone.

"Control Freak, you are ready for this." Alan said as he gave a gift to Control Freak. He opens, pulling out some sort of small uniform that is blue and green with the initials 'CF' along wiht black gloves, boots and a cape.

"Wow...do I have a son?" Control Freak ask his 'Space Dad' eagerly yet stupidly.

"No, heh heh, that's funny. It's for you. The thing stretches so you can fit in without worry."

"Right, it's for you, dummy." Abigail remarks with a slight chuckle to Control Freak.

Control Freak smiles as he wears his new outfit as a bib on his sweatshirt. This is going to be great! The super being saw the 'CF' symbols on the superhero, asking, "CF? What does that stand for?"

"Well...Control Freak to be honest." Nigel explains to Control Freak with a shrug.

"Control Freak? Why are you using my name instead of something cool and amazing?"

"To be honest, most of the other names are used so this is the only one we can trademark." Alan explains to Control Freak with a shrug. "Don't worry about it. Mr. Fantastic's secret identify is well known and no one knows your real name anyway so it's no big deal."

"Oh." Control Freak said with a sigh. So he has to still use his name that he himself goes by? How sad.

"Control Freak, got anyone in your life?" Kuki ask Control Freak, making him brighten up a bit. "Anyone worth fighting for?"

"Oh, not yet...though there's this cute chick that I got my eye on currently."

"We already know that you like Cree, Control Freak, there's no reason to keep it a secret." Abigail remarks to Control Freak. The super being put his hand on his cheek, using his vision to see Cree herself hanging some posters of sort on a way, obviously still trying to figure out what Alan is up to.

"Oh, very good, very good." Hoagie said to Control Freak with a nod. "Just, uh, don't end up like I was on a hoepless chase."

"Romance is very inspiring." Stitch comments in amusement.

"Oh, that's what I hear." Control Freak said with a hopeful nod.

"Yeah...and if you save her from a very terrible situation, she will end up in your arms somehow." Wally said to Control Freak, making him more hopeful than ever.

"Ugh, I'm not sure if that's a good idea." Abigail said in worry and annoyance. The last thing she wants is for her sister to be saved by this so-called superhero who was once a villain to the Teen Titans.

"Awww, you worry too much. ANyway, what can go wrong?"

Soon Bob and Number Four arrives to the group with some food, the goldfish calls out, "Howdy! Who wants churros?"

"I do, I do!" Most of the group exclaims, raising their hands eagerly.

"So do I!" Control Freak exclaims eagerly as the churros were given to the group. "Thanks, Space Stepmom and Space Stepbrother!"

"Churros all around!" Nigel exclaims to the group as they held their churros.

"Okay, let's do this. On the count of 3, unsheath your churro." Alan instructs the others with a grin. "1, 2, 3..."

The group held up the unwrapped churros, all of them exclaims at once, "To Control Freak!!"

"Control Freak, you will fight Alan Matthews tomorrow...and the city will know your name as a true hero at last."

"But try to get some rest, okay?" Angelilo suggests to Control Freak with a smile. "You have a busy day and there's no reason to waste so many energy before tomorrow."

Of course, Abigail looks worried as she glances at the eager Control Freak. Why does the girl got a bad feeling of what tomorrow may bring?

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Cree is on the news once more as she announces, "Amazingly, the parks are restored to their original glory, the streets are safer than they've been and the banks are reopened! Did something happened to Alan Matthews? Did someone finally tame this monster? This is Cree Lincoln, cautiously optimistic yet pleasantly confused at the same time."

Alan's group was watching the news at the hideout, the villain sighs a bit lovingly. Kuki giggles happily while saying, "Wow! You must really like Cree, huh?"

Numbuh Four meanwhile is measuring Alan carefully for a cape to wear for the big fight tomorrow. Bob notes his boss's eager face, commentating, "Well, boy howdy! Yew seems 'ta be in a good mood tonight, sir."

"Huh? Oh." Alan said, paying attention to what's going on. "Right, so, how long is this going to take?"

"Right, we got dates with our girls tonight." Wally said to Alan who gave him a skeptic look. "Okay, if you mean me with Kuki, she pressured me into it, really!"

"Yeah, yeah...." Hoagie remarks as he and Stitch laughs a bit for the obvious reasons. Something tells them that Wally wasn't pressured to go on a date with Kuki at all.

"It's only a few alternations an' we be done wit' yer most terrifying cape yet!!" Bob explains to Alan proudly.

"How terrifying?" Stitch ask Bob curiously.

"We got a cape name. I is calling it...'de Nightmare Moon!"

"Isn't there a villain who has a name by that already?" Angelilo ask Bob, the fused girl is puzzled by the choice of name.

"She is a filly now by what Ah done heard." Bob remarks to Angelilo in annoyance. "It ain't an issue!"

"Perfect, yes." Alan said with a chuckle. He glances at his watch then yelps in alarm. "Crud! I'm late! I better go, see ya!" The villain prepares to leave but a concerned Number Four stops him in time, obviously ordered to by Bob.

"Wait, hang on, not so fast. Where are yew going, Alan?"

"Well..."

"Oh, Alan is taking us to where our dates are going to be at." Hoagie said, covering up Alan's reason for going. "After all, we thought it be best to..."

"Alan never done like doing favors fer anyone!" Bob snaps suspiciously by the excuse. "Anyhow, we have our debut battle wit' Control Freak tomorrow morning! We didn't even tested 'de new battle suit just yet!"

"Come on, you attend to the details anyway." Nigel said to Bob in dismissal. "We just need to be elsewhere...well, not me, I don't have a date since Lizzie and I broke up."

"Anyway, I have...a quick errand to run after dropping these guys off at the diner." Alan said with a quick nod. He got to get away before Bob and Number Four gets suspicious as to what he's doing.

"Hang on just a dang minute! Ah done know 'dat yew don't run errands! Shucks, Ah have been wit' yew fer years an' even Number Four here knows better!" Bob exclaims suspiciously. Even Numbuh Four is getting suspicious by Alan's strange behavior. "What's going on, Alan?"

"What? What?"

"Can't Alan do stuff by himself anymore?" Stitch protests to Bob and Number Four in annoyance. "This is his life after all!"

"Right, butt out!" Angelilo exclaims in agreement.

"Hold on..." Bob said as he begins to sniff Alan a bit. "Alan, are yew wearing Jean Paul Gaultier's Pour Homme?"

"What, so I got to explain what I smell like now?! It's my natural musk, okay?! Now where are the car keys?" Alan snaps in annoyance to Bob and Number Four. The cat points to the keys on the desk. "Found them."

"Number Four!" Bob orders Number Four, the big cat yelps as he grabs the keys, pulling them away from Alan. "Ah knew it! 'Dis is about Cree, ain't it?!"

"Uh oh..."

"Hoo boy, he's losing it." Abigail remarks in concern. "And it looks like a fight between pals is breaking out here."

"All right, spill! What are yew doing, Alan?!" Bob snaps angrily to Alan who frowns at him. This is enough to make the goldfish realize something. "Argh, o' course! Yew're going on a date wit' Cree Lincoln, ain't ya?"

"What, me? Come on, my main gold fish, get out of town." Alan chuckles a bit to Bob. Of course, the goldfish looks worried. He has observed his boss's weird behavior lately and to him, it doesn't look good.

"Oh, 'dis is bad, very bad. Yew've fallen in love wit' her, Alan!"

"Come on, what's the big deal? Cree is a minion of evil and Alan is a bad guy." Kuki said to Bob with a shrug. "It's nothing to make a fuss about."

"But yew kidnapped her all yer life an' even caused her trouble!" Bob screams to Alan as Number Four looks worried by how his conversion is heading. "'Dat doesn't make yew a couple especially wit' yer performance!"

"Now you're being unreasonable and why are we defending bad guys all of the sudden?" Hoagie ask while pondering why he and his pals are defending the same type of group that the good guys fight on a daily basis.

"Maybe Alan isn't much of a bad guy?" Stitch suggests to his pals hopefully.

"Dang nab it, Alan is so a bad guy an' done ain't going to allow him 'ta do 'dis!" Bob exclaims frantically as Numer Four kept the keys from going out of place.

"Bob, Number Four, you two are forgetting your places!" Alan exclaims furiously to Bob and Number Four, making both nervous and worried. "Now give me the keys or else..."

Alan grabs the curtains and pull them down, knocking a bunch of stuff down. As the Combat Bots work to fix what happened, the villain tries to grab the keys but Numbuh Four quickly push a button on his belt, giving him an arm stretching power to put the keys out of Alan's reach.

"Think, what will done happen if Cree finds out whom yew really are?" Bob ask Alan in worry. "Did yew forget 'dat she may not be so understanding like 'de rest o' us are?!"

"Oh come on, she will never find out. That's the idea of lying." Alan scoffs by Bob's question and worry. As long as nothing bad happens, Cree will never find out the truth, right?

"Yew are going it over yer head 'dis time, Alan!"

"Hey, come on, Alan was miserable all his life." Wally explains to Bob with a frown. "I mean, the guy became a villain because of mistreatment and misunderstandings."

Alan, ahving enough, press a button on Number Four's belt, zapping the cat and causing him to drop the keys before returning his arm back to normal. The villain grabs the keys themselves while snapping as he is heading to the car, "Honestly, if I didn't know any better, I say that this was your first day of being evil. Ugh."

"No!" Bob exclaims as he motions Number Four who press a button on a remote. The car turns invisible, resulting in Alan to yelp as he hit the front. The cat grabs the keys back as Bob snaps, "'Dis has gone far enough!" Number Four toss the keys right into his goldfish bowl, Alan looks annoyed as his minion ate them.

"Now that's so grown up!" Alan snarls. He then pounces at Bob. Number Four grabs the goldfish and ran around with him, going around the car while keeping away from the boss.

"Sir, please! 'Dis is fer yer own good an' yew know it!"

"What about Alan's date?" Kuki protests as she and the others watch Alan chasing Bob and Number Four around the car, trying to get the keys back.

"Yeah, you two are not being fair!" Nigel exclaims to Bob and Number Four with an annoyed scowl.

"Anyway, what do you know?" Alan challenges Bob angrily while the mad chase continues.

"Ah may not know much but Ah do know 'dis! 'De bad guys don't git 'de girl, not anyhow!" Bob snaps to Alan, pointing out a big fact to the villain.

"Well, maybe I don't want to be the bad guy anymore! Did you ever think of that?!"

Bob and Number Four gasps in shock and disbelief as did the toy minions, the Combat Bots and the Exterminator. Did they hear right? Alan doesn't want to be the bad guy anymore?

"Uh oh." The Freelance Police said at once, not liking this at all.

"Not good, not good at all." Angelilo said worried.

Bob and Number Four looks stunned by what Alan just said, the villain trembles while saying, "Yeah...you heard right."

"Who are yew?" Bob ask Alan in shock and disbelief very quietly. His boss looks like he's no longer the Alan that the minions once knew.

"Give me the keys, now."

"No!" Bob snaps as Number Four turns the visibility cloak, making Alan hits the car. "Mah soul purpose in life is 'ta look after yew wit' Number Four helping! Don't make us throw 'dat away over some dumb dream!"

"First off, it isn't dumb...and second, I don't need you two to look after me anymore!" Alan exclaims furiously to Bob and Number Four. That is enough to drop the needle, making Bob and Number Four more stunned.

"What...what did yew just say? No...'dat....yew don't need us anymore?"

"All right, let me make it clear to you two stooges...Code: I don't need you anymore!"

"Fine...yew know what, fine! Fine!" Bob snaps heartbroken. If Alan doesn't need him and Number Four anymore, then what's the point in staying here? The goldfish spits out the keys with the saddened key taking them out of the bowl, handing them to Alan who takes them.

Number Four sadly brings Bob over to a table, they begin to pack as the goldfish snaps hurt, "Dang it, Code: We will just pack our things an' just go!"

"Fine!" Alan snaps angrily as, once the two minions finish packing, Bob and Number Four got on a wheelie, bumping into a mirror and break it. "Let's go, Number Four."

"Oh man...not good." Abigail said sadly. Alan's friendship with Bob and Number Four is now over, all because of Cree of all people.

As Number Four drives off on the wheelier, Bob turns back while snapping, "Ah wish yew luck on yer date!"

"I will!" Alan exclaims, trying to keep tears from coming out of his eyes.

"Dang it! 'Dat doesn't even make any sense!"

"I know!"

Soon the gate closes, the remaining one sighs with Stitch remarking, "Good one, Alan..."

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Outside, Bob and Number Four hesitates then departs down the streets. They don't want to look back, it's too depressing.

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Akan sighs in sadness as he looks back in the mirror then turns on his hologram turning into Maurice. He gets to go on a date with Cree...but at cost of two of his closest and oldest friends...

Author's note
Poor Alan, his friendship with Bob and Number Four is apparently over and things are going to get worst. In the next chapter, Cree finally figure out what Alan's up to, just to be saved by Control Freak who wants to impress her again...but is turned again in one major way. And when the dates happen, things turn out worse when Alan is finally revealed, making way for more heartbreak. Read, review and suggest.

Some of the heroes mentioned by Alan earlier were former villains (though the Sandman has gone back to villainy while Quicksilver and Scarlet Witch went villains again temporarily).

Alan's disguises are references to the Kung Fu Panda series, Shrek, Open Season, The Mask, Tiny Toon Adventures, SpongeBob SquarePants, Super Mario Bros, Looney Tunes, Monsters Inc, the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy, Yogi Bear, Rocky and Bullwinkle, Sonic the Hedgehog, Peanuts, Rango, Toy Story, Inspector Gadget and The Emperor's New Groove.

This chapter has references to My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic as well as Penstrokepony's OC Nyx and the fic 'Past Sins'.
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Hi, here's a little scene I mentioned Jus, hope it's to your liking for an ending.

Once Cree had gotten up, she begins to leave. The Freelance Police group looks a bit worried, what should they do about this situation?

"Ugh, looky, it's Alan? Should weega arrest him?" Stitch spoke off in total fake act of being surprise?

"Drop it little buddy, now might not be a good time?" Hoagie remarked off with a dry tone, now's not a good time to do their official business of crime busting.

(Anything else, you can put in? Maybe some stuff about a joke like, put the tab bill on KND account, etc. when the group leaves to chase after Cree?)
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(Scene where Alan comes out of his invisible vehicle)

Just then, Cree yelps from hearing a car's engine and the brakes sounding off, but there was no signs of it within this rain? Except, it was from this rain, that left trails of of vehicle that was invisible to the naked-eye, and who should open the door out of it to appear but...Alan?

"I can explain!" Alan called out before shutting the door to try to hopeful, have Cree understand himself.

"Yeah sis, just..." Soon Abigail and the rest of the Freelance Police also came out of Alan's invisible ride from the other side, shut the door from there to be in front of Alan.

"Wait a second? Abby, why are you and your friends with...him?" Cree responded a bit surprised to see her sister and friends here?

"Ugh, well?" Angelilo yelped and rubbed the back of her head, how do they explain themselves here?

"It isn't like we knew you were dating Alan Matthew this whole time and didn't tell you, if that's what you...Haaugh!" Kuki tried to say something as a positive joke about their situation, only to gasp in shock from what she just let slip out the truth.

"You mean you knew...ALL OF YOU?" Cree spoke off a bit stumped, and looked from the KND, Freelance Polcie, and alien koalas, they all knew about this and never said a word?

"Oh crickey, now she knows?" Wally slapped his forehead in seeing the gig is up?

"Ugh...I can't believe this?" Cree turns away looking even more sadden, even to let off a growling tone of her frustrated voice.

"Cree wait, I ask them to keep this a secret? And what about everything you just said?" Alan spoke off to try and speak reason to Cree while bringing up something in what went on back at the restaurant. "About judging a book by it's cover?" Alan asked a bit sad that Cree would act this way, after stating how never to judge something from the outside appearance, did that mean nothing now?

But that just made Cree angrier, and here's the answer why? "Well then, lets take a look at the context then? Shall we?" Cree turned around to chat with Alan about the facts inside of the 'book' subject besides the covers. "You Destroyed Silver Sentry!" Cree poked at Alan with a gloom face in reminding this villain of what he's gone and done. "You took over the City!" Alan flinched a bit back when Cree was hammering him down with these bad facts about himself. "Beat up a bunch of other heroes, with your bots, even my sisters group!" What Cree said almost made the Freelance Police group cringed a bit in knowing that was true, but it was much worst for Alan. "And then...You actually got me to CARE About you?" Cree concluded off the final part of what Alan has done, he made the girl actually wanna care about this villain, she just couldn't believe it?

"Well it's not like you felt the same when Hoagie was Hank in teenage form?" Stitch shrug off to bring up another subject that happened to this teenage's life.

"Stitch, drop it!" Hoagie snapped at his partner for bringing up more painful, embarrassing, and disgusting facts that they said never to bring up again.

"Uagh....Why...Are You So...EVIL!" Cree signed before glaring at Alan, wanting to know, why this guy was being so like this. "Tricking me? Tricking even my sister and her friends? What could you possibly hope to gain?" Cree was very heartbroken, why did Alan deceive so much of her that the villain was trying to gain something out of it? What was it?

"Cree listen, he didn't trick us, we just gotten to know him." Nigel tried to help Cree realize this is getting a bit out of hand.

"Yeah, Alan's not bad once you hang out with him." Kuki nods to try and also speak for the vilain's behalf.

"Right, you hang out with him, shouldn't that tell you something?" Wally tried his best that Cree gotten to feel like knowing Alan meant a difference, right?
Alan was silent, he lifted his eyes up to look to Cree with sympathy and sorrow in what he's trying to express out.

"Wait a minute?" Cree suddenly spoke off in wide eyes in know seeing what was going on? "Aaaugh....I don't believe this?" She shook her head in seeing this was something that was impossible to be?

"What don't you believe?" Stitch asked puzzled and confused, where was this going now?

"Stitch, that might not be the best thing to ask?" Angelilo whispered to her love in sensing a bad moment here?
Alan continued to stare with what he was showing, the face of what is speaking for him....compassion from someone that loves him?

"Do you all really think, that I would ever be with him?" Cree shook her head in disbelief and stated off to point towards Alan Matthew about what this guy wants, her and him to be together.

"Well...it's a maybe?" Hoagie shrug off his shoulders to think, a possible maybe involved?

Alan stared at Cree, seeing her response clearly answered his own. "No...?" He silently spoke before letting his eyes drop to the ground, in deeper sorrow.

Then a sad Cree takes off to pass Alan Matthew and the Freelance Police group.

"Cree, listen, I..." Abigail tried to reach her hand up to cheer her sister up, feeling that even Cree shouldn't feel this much miserable?
But Cree only turn around to snap at her dear little sister. "Save it! As far as our 'old' bond of sisterhood may have almost spark back into our lives, we're just enemies again! Weather it's here, or at home, the word 'love', means nothing to me now?" Cree exclaimed off with such a stern tone to declare this out, just before turning away again.

Now it was Abigail's turn to feel sad and gloomy, she seen Cree get mad before, but nothing like this? And to say those things, well, in truth, compared to the other insults Number 5 dealt from her sister, this one may have actually hurt the most?
Alan continued to watch Cree leave him, as he looks away to the street, feeling; empty. The villain turns to leave with his back turn and the raining poring down, on a heart broken being?

"Um, should we remind him about his ride?" Kuki pointed out about Alan forgot his invisible vehicle?

"No, I think we've all feel a terrible burden on us all?" Angelilo shook her head to state that this moment, they're too much feeling depression.

"Right, lets go follow him?" Nigel nods with trying to keep his cool and collective side image noted, but in truth, he senses much of his teammates & friends...feeling heavy burdens.

With that, even the Freelance Police group was turning to leave to follow Alan Matthew just leaping his away across the street. The one person from this group that felt even sadder, was Abigail Lincoln? She & Cree almost had their old spark of being sisters brought back that they thought was lost, only to lose it again...this really was a sad day?

Now it was Cree's turn to look back from trying to hold her hands to her shoulders from the poring rain? She watched Alan & the Freelance Police leave before doing so herself. She felt betrayed, lost, and very much heartbroken from what those she thought of believing in...could do this to her? Her sister Abigail, her annoying bunch of friends, but most of all, she actually felt something for Alan Matthew, but now, the old feelings of the pass overweight the recent ones of the villain's vile deeds....it's truly, a sad and lonely day for the teenager to have almost fallen in love?

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And there you go Jus, a nice little ending for the next chapter, full of tear-jerks, heartbreaks, it just gets to ya? In any case, I got a good scene story for the battle and escape scene for Alan Matthew & Control Freak's first confrontation. I got a nice idea of the big battle suit from a Power Rangers Turbo scene, it can be Land Zuzoon (Japanese Version Name), AKA, Catzord (English Version Name) to be used, it'll make things interesting. And there's more when the Exterminators try to save their leader, but Control Freak punches, smacks and tosses them while they destroy a school, much to little kids happiness (an idea I got from Megas XLR), before the villain makes his escape scene. Till then, look forward to it, and I hope this helps out, & if you wanna add or cahnge a few things, be my guest.
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Hi Jus, I got about the good beginning of the villain scene of returning to his old way. Still working on the music portion, which will follow, the no show, then a shocking truth of the rouge hero, then the battle, followed by a narrow escape. So for now, enjoy this little setting for the next opening of another chapter.
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PREVIEW #1

(Big Bot Battle Scene, & Hero Gone Bad!)

At this time, Alan Matthew, pushes open a door to his secret hide-away? It's all dark, gloomy, missing a bit of life, kinda like what the villain is feeling? After what he experienced his date with Cree gone to shambles, Alan was not too pleased about the results of the relationship? And along with him, the Freelance Police decided to tag along to see how this guy is taking it, which was easy to see how? Cree's act of being upset of the matter really didn't set in well with the KND or Freelance Police members that fought the bad girl, it was a side unseen to them until recently?

"Okay Bob, Number 4?" Alan called out with a mop expression on his face to those he knows. "You both were right?" The villain admits his faults of what happened between him and his two close friends. "I was…Less right…." Alan looked to the floor, to admit off with a guilt written expression about saying who was right from his and his two pals in their argument.

"That's it buddy, let it all out." Hoagie nods in letting Alan know that by admitting his wrongs, he'll feel a bit more better.

"You'll feel better when you admit your mistakes." Stitch also nods in agreement, keeping that feeling lock up won't help nobody.

"Listen, we should just stick to what we're good at." Alan called out into the hallway of the evil lair, trying to say that the villain's group should stick with the task they do best. "Being bad." He hung his head low in feeling that, this was a case, that Alan, Bob, and Number 4, are only good when they are being the bad guys.

"Well, you could use the term of 'bad', as in the new sense of 'good' that's used as the new sense of the word." Kuki tried to think of a more positive outlook on the villain's use of being bad, as in being the old sense of the meaning.

"Kuki, I REALLY don't think this guy wants to hear about that?" Wally moans off to say that the girl is not actually being very positive on this outlook for Alan.

"Bob? Number 4?" Alan called out to Bob and Number 4's name, looking around for any signs of his close friends?

It was here, that Alan felt a bit more sadden to know, his closest henchmen are really gone, and there is no one else around? The villain looks up ahead, seeing the messy spot of written papers with plans, one that had a '?' mark on a red paper center. Then a picture of Alan Matthew in a giant robot, duking a right hooker upper cut shot against a black figure man with a '?' on the body, with the words 'Good VS. Evil', expressing the villain against an unknown hero?

It was at this time, Alan's eyes were focusing on the facts in front of him? He held a gloom mood of his expression, realizing that he was drifting off to become something he is not. Even the Freelance Police team, see that the guy was showing a stern face of seriousness, this could only mean one thing; it's time that Alan Matthew goes on being the bad guy. Then Alan puts his fingers together to make a whistle noise, as if making a calling sound to something.

"Waugh, you got a dog here?" Stitch asked off in not seeing any signs of a dog nearby, or if Alan even got one?

"No Stitch, he's calling…them!" Hoagie exclaimed off from pointing out what he and the others see who the villain just called forth.

Without any delay, all of Alan Matthew's minions, Combat Bots, even the Exterminators came out to greet their leader without question.

"Are we glad you're okay, boss." Merc spoke off first in seeing his leader was back with them.

"We were worried?" Green spoke with much concerns, and for good reasons why.

"Especially after we saw by security footage of what happened to your date?" Shellshock spoke off in letting the evil villain and his pals know, that the others that stayed here saw everything that happened.

"I've been there, I lost a girl when I stuck with helping kids learn while being a school teacher?" Reactor nods with a gloom expression, understanding the lost of the girl one likes.

"You were a school teacher?" Abigail asked off in hearing one of the bigger bots say this out. "Now I'm curious what jobs you Exterminators might've had?" The KND girl responded off with curiosity in what other task Reactor, Shellshock and Eviscerator had before Alan got these guys on his side?

"Shellshock was said to be some war hero, but Eviscerator, that…might be a hard one?" Angelilo spoke off a Fourth Wall sense in recalling a bit about these Exterminators when Alan Matthew built them?

"Hisisiss…." Eviscerator hissed a bit under the response about what job life he had, was his own business.

"You there, RoboSnail!" Alan suddenly pointed at the minion before him with a serious expression, wanting this guy's attention.

"Hugh?" The other bots and minions were puzzled, before Shellshock back patted the RoboSnail forward. "Uagh…." The snail toy pointed at himself in wondering if his boss wanted him?

"Yes you, who else here is named RoboSnail?" Alan exclaimed off to state that he wanted this minion.

The Freelance Police watched as RoboSnail came before Alan Matthew, but the gang can notice that the villain misses Bob and Number 4, who were like the guy's second in command of ordering the troops?

"Bring Out…." Alan slowly was beginning to say with a blank face in trying to say in what he wants before… "The BLACK MAMBA!" The villain proclaimed out with a dramatic expression and grip his left hand up.

"Yes sir!" The Minions and Combat Bots along with the three Exterminators responded off before rushing off to perform their duty. RoboSnail had a key, as he was approaching a room with a glowing blue aura and unlocked a closet door, as Mr. Fiend and Boppo helped him open the doors. Soon Alan approached the center step stool, arms opened, as his forces aline themselves, including the Freelance Police group to see what was coming next for the guy. As things go dark before what was coming up next was…a change of style!

(Fill in whatever the outfit Alan is suppose to look like before his big battle.)

Now standing before the toy and robot minions, was their master, their leader, their creator in his grand glory of an appearance…EVER! Four of the minions (you can choice which?) held the villain's cape from the bottom edges to help since it was a really long cape.

(Any lines the heroes wanna say? Maybe Alan stating that while the other minions stay behind, a few Combat Bots & his Exterminators, along with the Freelance Police, can come along to watch the show….and in case something should go wrong.)

Then without another moment, a large curtain was dropped, and was soon revealed what was underneath it? Big, metallic, and almost looking really mean?

"Okay Control Freak!" Alan waved up his arms to proclaim out loud the name of his new super hero foe. "It's TIME to go DOWN…In STYLE!" The villain proclaimed out loud for the heavens to hear, as he rants about fighting his new enemy in a style all heros and villains go forward with. "Wah-hah-hah-hah-hah…." As Alan laughed off, the screen zooms away to see the villain, his toy and robot minions, along with the Freelance Police, watch this guy send out a glow charge from his gloves electronic device. The electric feedback brings to life, an large 80 foot tall humanoid lion, with sharp talons off the wrist, a built in core chamber, jet packs off it's back where a loose tail hung off from, and other functions. This creation was called Land Zuzoon, or just Black Zuzoon from the gray, black, and wicked green lightning bolt designs along with some gangster spike mix. "WHA-hahahahAAaahhh!" As Alan laughed in a maniacal sense, his own giant was moving it's body to perform the same movement as it's controller, almost like it was laughing on it's own, but with a roaring sense.

"Oh YEAH! That's look SOOO COOL!" Stitch grinned wide in looking at this, that newest bot Alan Matthew's made looks like it can rock this joint!

"Lets hope things don't go bad for us?" Abigail signed in hoping from watching Alan choose this life, that things can go a bit back to normal…or does she really want that for her, for this villain, and most of all; her sister, Cree?
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Well there you have it, a little scene to help the first little much, I'll try to get around the next ACTION Pack scene. I got a few things to wrap around my side, but I will get this interesting story's chapter get done soon.
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Hi Jus, I got about the good beginning of the villain scene of returning to his old way. Still working on the music portion, which will follow, the no show, then a shocking truth of the rouge hero, then the battle, followed by a narrow escape. So for now, enjoy this little setting for the next opening of another chapter.
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PREVIEW #1

(Big Bot Battle Scene, & Hero Gone Bad!)

At this time, Alan Matthew, pushes open a door to his secret hide-away? It's all dark, gloomy, missing a bit of life, kinda like what the villain is feeling? After what he experienced his date with Cree gone to shambles, Alan was not too pleased about the results of the relationship? And along with him, the Freelance Police decided to tag along to see how this guy is taking it, which was easy to see how? Cree's act of being upset of the matter really didn't set in well with the KND or Freelance Police members that fought the bad girl, it was a side unseen to them until recently?

"Okay Bob, Number 4?" Alan called out with a mop expression on his face to those he knows. "You both were right?" The villain admits his faults of what happened between him and his two close friends. "I was…Less right…." Alan looked to the floor, to admit off with a guilt written expression about saying who was right from his and his two pals in their argument.

"That's it buddy, let it all out." Hoagie nods in letting Alan know that by admitting his wrongs, he'll feel a bit more better.

"You'll feel better when you admit your mistakes." Stitch also nods in agreement, keeping that feeling lock up won't help nobody.

"Listen, we should just stick to what we're good at." Alan called out into the hallway of the evil lair, trying to say that the villain's group should stick with the task they do best. "Being bad." He hung his head low in feeling that, this was a case, that Alan, Bob, and Number 4, are only good when they are being the bad guys.

"Well, you could use the term of 'bad', as in the new sense of 'good' that's used as the new sense of the word." Kuki tried to think of a more positive outlook on the villain's use of being bad, as in being the old sense of the meaning.

"Kuki, I REALLY don't think this guy wants to hear about that?" Wally moans off to say that the girl is not actually being very positive on this outlook for Alan.

"Bob? Number 4?" Alan called out to Bob and Number 4's name, looking around for any signs of his close friends?

It was here, that Alan felt a bit more sadden to know, his closest henchmen are really gone, and there is no one else around? The villain looks up ahead, seeing the messy spot of written papers with plans, one that had a '?' mark on a red paper center. Then a picture of Alan Matthew in a giant robot, duking a right hooker upper cut shot against a black figure man with a '?' on the body, with the words 'Good VS. Evil', expressing the villain against an unknown hero?

It was at this time, Alan's eyes were focusing on the facts in front of him? He held a gloom mood of his expression, realizing that he was drifting off to become something he is not. Even the Freelance Police team, see that the guy was showing a stern face of seriousness, this could only mean one thing; it's time that Alan Matthew goes on being the bad guy. Then Alan puts his fingers together to make a whistle noise, as if making a calling sound to something.

"Waugh, you got a dog here?" Stitch asked off in not seeing any signs of a dog nearby, or if Alan even got one?

"No Stitch, he's calling…them!" Hoagie exclaimed off from pointing out what he and the others see who the villain just called forth.

Without any delay, all of Alan Matthew's minions, Combat Bots, even the Exterminators came out to greet their leader without question.

"Are we glad you're okay, boss." Merc spoke off first in seeing his leader was back with them.

"We were worried?" Green spoke with much concerns, and for good reasons why.

"Especially after we saw by security footage of what happened to your date?" Shellshock spoke off in letting the evil villain and his pals know, that the others that stayed here saw everything that happened.

"I've been there, I lost a girl when I stuck with helping kids learn while being a school teacher?" Reactor nods with a gloom expression, understanding the lost of the girl one likes.

"You were a school teacher?" Abigail asked off in hearing one of the bigger bots say this out. "Now I'm curious what jobs you Exterminators might've had?" The KND girl responded off with curiosity in what other task Reactor, Shellshock and Eviscerator had before Alan got these guys on his side?

"Shellshock was said to be some war hero, but Eviscerator, that…might be a hard one?" Angelilo spoke off a Fourth Wall sense in recalling a bit about these Exterminators when Alan Matthew built them?

"Hisisiss…." Eviscerator hissed a bit under the response about what job life he had, was his own business.

"You there, RoboSnail!" Alan suddenly pointed at the minion before him with a serious expression, wanting this guy's attention.

"Hugh?" The other bots and minions were puzzled, before Shellshock back patted the RoboSnail forward. "Uagh…." The snail toy pointed at himself in wondering if his boss wanted him?

"Yes you, who else here is named RoboSnail?" Alan exclaimed off to state that he wanted this minion.

The Freelance Police watched as RoboSnail came before Alan Matthew, but the gang can notice that the villain misses Bob and Number 4, who were like the guy's second in command of ordering the troops?

"Bring Out…." Alan slowly was beginning to say with a blank face in trying to say in what he wants before… "The BLACK MAMBA!" The villain proclaimed out with a dramatic expression and grip his left hand up.

"Yes sir!" The Minions and Combat Bots along with the three Exterminators responded off before rushing off to perform their duty. RoboSnail had a key, as he was approaching a room with a glowing blue aura and unlocked a closet door, as Mr. Fiend and Boppo helped him open the doors. Soon Alan approached the center step stool, arms opened, as his forces aline themselves, including the Freelance Police group to see what was coming next for the guy. As things go dark before what was coming up next was…a change of style!

(Fill in whatever the outfit Alan is suppose to look like before his big battle.)

Now standing before the toy and robot minions, was their master, their leader, their creator in his grand glory of an appearance…EVER! Four of the minions (you can choice which?) held the villain's cape from the bottom edges to help since it was a really long cape.

(Any lines the heroes wanna say? Maybe Alan stating that while the other minions stay behind, a few Combat Bots & his Exterminators, along with the Freelance Police, can come along to watch the show….and in case something should go wrong.)

Then without another moment, a large curtain was dropped, and was soon revealed what was underneath it? Big, metallic, and almost looking really mean?

"Okay Control Freak!" Alan waved up his arms to proclaim out loud the name of his new super hero foe. "It's TIME to go DOWN…In STYLE!" The villain proclaimed out loud for the heavens to hear, as he rants about fighting his new enemy in a style all heros and villains go forward with. "Wah-hah-hah-hah-hah…." As Alan laughed off, the screen zooms away to see the villain, his toy and robot minions, along with the Freelance Police, watch this guy send out a glow charge from his gloves electronic device. The electric feedback brings to life, an large 80 foot tall humanoid lion, with sharp talons off the wrist, a built in core chamber, jet packs off it's back where a loose tail hung off from, and other functions. This creation was called Land Zuzoon, or just Black Zuzoon from the gray, black, and wicked green lightning bolt designs along with some gangster spike mix. "WHA-hahahahAAaahhh!" As Alan laughed in a maniacal sense, his own giant was moving it's body to perform the same movement as it's controller, almost like it was laughing on it's own, but with a roaring sense.

"Oh YEAH! That's look SOOO COOL!" Stitch grinned wide in looking at this, that newest bot Alan Matthew's made looks like it can rock this joint!

"Lets hope things don't go bad for us?" Abigail signed in hoping from watching Alan choose this life, that things can go a bit back to normal…or does she really want that for her, for this villain, and most of all; her sister, Cree?
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Well there you have it, a little scene to help the first little much, I'll try to get around the next ACTION Pack scene. I got a few things to wrap around my side, but I will get this interesting story's chapter get done soon.
Hi Jus, here's the second part I the scene, the music scene work's done, the next work will be the discovering the truth, etc.
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PREVIEW #2

Soon the scene changes, where some rocking background music is heard playing 'Back In Black' by Brian Johnson for all to here? At this moment, the police cars were zooming away from the scene on the road, like they were fleeing in terror? And the Freelance Police were driving by with their pals in their red space cruiser.

"Attention all citizen! Get away before Godzilla eats you!" Stitch was using his megaphone to give out a warning to many of the citizens to get away from here.

"Wrong warning, Stitch?" Hoagie corrected what his partner was doing, he was giving the wrong alert sign of notice.

"STOMPvhmm…." SWuddenly, a large left foot broke into the road street, breaking it from the stomping weight. Many of the citizens were panicking, and step out of the way. In a restaurant, many customers saw more citizens running away in blinding terror of the giant feet stomping onwards.

Soon, Merc and Green are seen hovering around with some floating camera bots, as they brought forth the live broadcast.

"Introducing, Black Zuzoon!" Merc spoke off to announce to the crowd, the giant bot by name.

"Piloted by, Alan Matthew!" Green stated out in who was controlling the giant robotic suit in question.

Back In Black

"WAh-hahahahaaaah!" Alan Matthew's laugher was heard from the moving Black Zunoon that waved it's arms up in sounding pleased.

I Hit The Sack

"WOHHh-hahahaaaaaah!" Alan continues the maniacal laughter, even pounding his giant bot's chest like he was a gorilla.

I've Been Too Long I'm Glad To Be Back

"WOhwoh-hahahaaaahhh!" Soon Black Zuzoon leaps into the air, and ignites it's thrusters on it's back to take flight while Alan continues to laugh wickedly.

Yes, I'm Let Loose

"POWWvhmm…." The thrusters boosted the launched, and Black Zuzoon went up over near the city hall place.

From The Noose

Many watchers saw this, wondering what was happening, though the Freelance Police team, and the joined Combat Bots; Merc & Green knew otherwise. Soon Black Zuzoon landed right on the top of the city hall building, it's left hand gripping the pole part.

That's Kept Me Hanging About

"I hear there's a new hero after the last batch was dealt with?" Alan swung his giant robot around the building, like swinging the arm around the pole from exclaiming the news of someone arrived in town, sounding quite redounded by the tone of learning this?

I've Been Looking At The Sky
Cause' It's Gettin' Me High


"Someone, who dares to challenge my EVIL!" Alan tapped his right hand to his chest to smirk off in boasting of himself in learning some newbie hero wants to fight him, after what happened to the others he's dealt with.

Forget The Hearse 'cause I Never Die

"Where is the one they call…Control Freak?" Alan pointed his right hand's index finger to demand this answer, as he flex his arms up in wanting to meet his new foe.

I Got Nine Lives
Cat's Eyes


"WAh-Hahahaaaaah!" Soon from Alan's evil laughter, he swing Black Zuzoon around the building pole without a care, as some nearby helicopter was observing this act.

Abusin' Every One Of Them And Running Wild

"POff-Poff-Poffvhmm…" Then from the right wrist, Alan's bot unveiled a gatling gun inside the palm to shoot a few shots. "Challenge Me…" Alan boasted out from his bot twirling from his shot off display. "Bam-bam-bam-bam-bam…." The villain pulled off a nice little firework display to spin over to the other side now. "If you dare?" Alan remarked off to the new hero, if he dares to challenge the villain that has been running this city.

Many of the spectators were watching this with much puzzling concerns, what was gonna happen now?

Then in a roaring engine noise, Alan had his Black Zuzoon leap up high in the air, did a spinning ball form towards the ground. "CLuspfruvhmm…" The giant bot smack it's feet to the ground, and soon stood up for all to see.

Cause' I'm Back

Then from out of the shoulders, appeared buzz-saw blades, buzzing off while Alan made himself look totally pumped and raring to go. The screen showed off that move three more times to show off that special effect.

Back In Black

Now there was a large amount of folks nearby, all seeing that there was gonna be a big show down with Alan Matthew going up against this new hero, Control Freak.

I Hit The Sack

The Freelance Police, their pals, even Merc & Green were on standby to see how this all would go down.

I've Been Too Long I'm Glad To Be Back

It was around the moment, the background music cease at this time? Time passed with the sun being about noon hour, and the number of people were decreasing? Many of the others were leaving, the Freelance Police team and the Combat Bots duo wondered what was going on? Even Alan lost his focus to keep a cool fighter's pose? It was also around the time, another song was being played at this passing of the hour?

(Song lyrics)

The next scene shows Black Zuzoon lying it's feet out over the water by city hall? Alan Matthew was just sitting around, him and those with him, were still waiting around, as the giant bot dip it's feet in the river?

(If you wanna add in any chat scenes, be my guest?)

Now by near sunset, the short vers of that song ended, and we see that Alan Matthew is having Black Zuzoon actually playing with a red car, which was not a toy either.

"Oh no, we're gonna crash?" Alan Matthew spoke off in pretend voice in lifting the red car up and splashes it into the river. "WAaahhaaahhh!" Then Alan has his giant body wave out it's hands in pretend panic over the accident that happened. The car begins to sink deeper into the water, as it's a wonder how the villain took that off from the owner?

"Yo Green, how long's it been?" Merc looked to his pal from them sitting on a pavement, wondering, what the time was?

"Um, an entire half day?" Green spoke off in knowing that pretty much, a near entire day has gone by?

"Ah man, the boss wanted this to be remembered too?" Merc signs in disbelief, how could this have even happened to them?

"Gee, wonder what caused the delay?" Green spoke with some thought, what was so important that the new hero, wasn't here?

Even the Freelance Police and their team of pals were wondering, what was taking Control Freak so long to get here?

(Anything of a discussion you wanna use?)

"Uaagh…." But then Black Zuzoon dropped it's arms down, like it's pilot lost all feeling or caring from when we heard Alan sign. "This is embarrassing?" Alan moans off in seeing what he's come down to, he's now reduce to playing with city cars like a child, all cause of waiting for Control Freak to show up?

With nothing else to do, Alan Matthew pilot his giant bot to stand up. "ROOUURRAarrrugh!" Soon Black Zuzoon made a roaring mecha noise, as it waved up it's arms in just…giving up with the waiting deal. And soon was walking on down the right side of the road with the gang watching this. Then Alan had his giant bot kick off some mail box while no one was around, or cared to bother with that?

The Freelance Police and the Combat Bots saw this, knowing where this might lead to; trouble of the lazy late kind?

"Uh-oh, boss man is really steamed now?" Merc responded off in seeing Alan go off while looking pretty ticked off, this won't be good.

"Oh boy, he might blow a circuit?" Green spoke a bit worried in how this might end, so both Combat Bots hovered off after their leader.

"Okay everyone, we better follow, find out why Control Freak never show up?" Nigel turned to issue his friends about the matter of Control Freak not showing for action and leaving Alan alone without a foe to face?

"And this was an important day for Alan too." Angelilo sternly stated with a frown, why that lazy camera guy have to go and ruin this for the villain Alan?

"Yeah, and it better be an excuse worth using, if not, he'll be sorry!" Abby proclaimed out with a frown, bad enough Alan could have had a good life with being a bad guy, but at least when he's doing the villain part, good guys never leave them bored outta their mind?

"How we gonna beat Alan to beat the creep for leaving us hanging?" Wally asked off his friends in noticing that Alan has a bigger lead, thanks to his giant robot taking faster steps.

"Simple, we take take a shortcut down Short Avenue!" Kuki pointed to the side where a sign label 'Easy/Short Avenue' were there, knowing that's the fastest route to get to Control Freak's place.

"Meega love easy problem solvers like those." Stitch smiled to nod how they got that answer solved in no time flat.

"Especially when it beats traffic, come on!" Hoagie nods in liking how this problem was solved in the most easily pattern plot of ideas.

With that, the Freelance Police drove their red space cruiser off to beat Alan Matthew to Control Freak's place by a short cut path. And when the entire gang get to the destination, boy is there going to be some serious discussion about what's happened here?
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Well here's another scene I promised, hope you like a bit of this, most of it will need your own hand to decide who will say some lines if you wanna add them, or some additions you wanna thrown in? Your choice, till then, I'll try and get the hero gone rouge, the fight off, then the escape scenes as soon as I can. Till then, enjoy yourself Jus.
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Chapter 7: A Broken Villain Heart

Cree sighs as she glances at the photos of the papers that the woman has made a few days ago at the hideout. There must be something to give a clue as to what Alan is doing, but what?

"Oh, I am so close I can feel it." Maybe if I were to take a step back." Cree mumbles as she goes over to the window to fix her hair. It's a big mess, the woman wants to get ready for her date with Maurice tonight. But as Cree looks up, she saw something in the reflection. "Hang on..."

The reflection is showing some sort of image made by the pages. Cree open the window and backs away towards the edge of the balcony outside. She gasps as she herself saw that the pages themselveas are making some sort of image of a super being with one word 'Superhero' in it.

"Superhero? What in the world?" Cree ask in surprise and disbelief. Could this mean that...

"Hey, my super ears are burning." Someone spoke up. Cree turns and saw a familiar man wearing a mask with a uniform that is blue and green with the initials 'CF' along with black gloves, boots and a cape.

Cree screams in alarm while Control Freak smirks, "Well, well, normally I would hear just criminals. Have you been a bad girl lately?"

"Gah, who the heck are you?! You're going to freak me out here!" Cree exclaims in alarm at this weird crazy guy.

"Ha ha ha! Just messing with ya, really, I am." Control Freak laughs as he flies upside down. "I am this city's newest superhero." The girl's eyes widen in surprise as she looks at the papers then to Control Freak. Of course, it all make sense now!

"'Superhero'..."

"Yeah, your very own heroic guard of pure awesome! So what is your name? Ha ha ha, kidding! I know everything about you! Oh, oh!" Control Freak exclaims as he flew down and came up, twirling some sort of flower cart. "Got you some flowers. Not asure what you liked so I grabbed all of them. Cool, huh?"

"Err..." Cree said uneasily. If this is Alan's idea of a plan, she isn't amused at all.

"Oh, don't like flowers? I'm cool, forget them!" Control Freak exclaims as he tosses the flower cart away. A crashing sound is heard followed by a scream, but the super being doesn't seem to notice or care. As he flies to Cree, Control Freak ask, "So whatcha want? Maybe we could go for a little flight around town...get to know each other..."

"Don't you dare."

"Too late!"

Without warning, Control Freak grabs Cree, causing here to scream in alarm, "Whoa, what are you doing?! You can't go and kidnap me, I do that!"

Control Freak ignores Cree as he flies off with her, laughing as he twirls her around. The wannabe hero exclaims, "Yeah! This must be thrilling for you!"

"What are you doing?!"

"Oh, am I moving too fast? You're probably right. I should just rescue you a few times before we get too romantic. Whoops!"

Control Freak drops Cree, on purpose, causing her to fall. She screams in terror while falling downward to be her doom. Of course, Control Freak flew down and grabs her in time by the leg, though a bit too roughly.

"Oh yeah, I saved ya!" Control Freak laughs as he toss Cree up. "You are lucky to have a great hero like me here!"

"Idiot! Don't you ever..." Crre scowls as she shoves Control Freak a bit. That ends up being a mistake as the girl ends up falling out of his hold, causing her to scream like more.

"Oh no! Someone do something...oh, yeah!" Control Freak exclaims in pretend shock before slapping his forehead in realization. "Right, I gotcha!" The weirdo flew down towards Cree. "I gotcha!"

Control Freak grabs Cree and carefully hold her, dodging traffic. The so-called superhero toss the woman around, catching her at random before she fell right into his arms. This ain't a superhero, this is a lunatic!

"Whoa, close one! You almost died but I saved you." Control Freak said to Cree with a smirk on his face.

"BUILDING!" Cree screams in alarm and for a good reason, the two are heading to a building.

Control Freak gasps then toss Cree upward over the building. She screams while her so-called savior just flew through the said building, not even caring about the damages, life or otherwise. Once Cree is on the other side falling downward, the super ego man came through one of the windows, catching her in time.

"Gotcha, oh yeah! Oh, sorry, what were you saying?" Control Freak ask eagerly as Cree screams. "Can't hear you over the sound of me saving your life!"

"Put me down right now, you idiot!" Cree scowls furiously at Control Freak.

"All right, all right, hold on. Geez."

Control Freak flies over to the top of the Toompire State building, landing on top of the peak before putting Cree down. The woman tries to catch her breath. What is this lunatic super being thinking? Even the Silver Sentry wouldn't do this to her!

"Are you crazy?!" Cree scowls in annoyance to her so-called hero.

"Yeah, I suppose I am a little bit crazy..." Control Freak remarks with a shrug then he leans towards Cree slyly, "About you, Cree."

"Ugh, I know that I should be asking for this but who are you really?"

"Okay, fine, well get ready to have your mind blown!" Control Freak remarks with a smile, Cree waits as the superhero removes his mask. "Ta-da!"

Cree gasps in shock and disbelief at the identify of the lunatic superhero. The woman ask, "Control Freak?" Alan's new superhero is her fat nerd of a cameraman who was a former villain...and has a crush on her?

"Yeah, is this great or what? Now nothing can keep us apart! I feel so great!"

"Okay, now you totally lost it, CF. It isn't great at all!"

"Oh yeah, our first fight!" Control Freak laughs excitedly. The super being, in his own head, thinks that the two are having a quarrel couple. He hold her, "That is really us, we are like a married couple, you and I!"

"Get it through your fat head, Control Freak! There is no 'us' okay? There will never be an 'us' at all!" Cree exclaims furiously to Control Freak, much to his shock. She isn't supposed to talk to him like this. "And quite frankly, I think you are going more crazier than ever."

"But...but I have powers...you...I have a cape and I'm the good guy!"

"Yeah, well, newsflash, I am a bad girl fighting a kids organization and besides that, your crush on me is weird and capes are known to kill heroes at times! Anyway, you may be a good guy but you don't understand! We got to find out why..."

"No, no, no, this isn't right!" Control Freak exclaims frantically and disbelief. Cree is supposed to fall for him, not reject him again! This isn't supposed to be right!

"All right, Control Freak, calm down. Take a deep breath and listen to me for a moment." Cree said with a sigh. But apparently Control Freak isn't having it as the mad hero back her near the edge.

"You are supposed to be with me!"

"Hey, I'm trying to warn you, Control Freak! You were never going to have me in the first place so just stop it!"

"No, no, NO! I AM THE SUPERHERO, ME! YOU CAN'T TURN ME DOWN, YOU CAN'T!" Control Freak exclaims furiously. Thus, he flew away in a sonic boom, causing the windows of the building to break and for Cree to be left up.

Cree looks up in concern, perhaps she should've let Control Freak down easily. Of course, that leaves to one more question...

How is Cree going to get down from this building?

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Alan waits at a restaurant, glancing at his watch carefully. The Freelance Police and their dates, with Wally and Kuki dating while Nigel is there to observe, are waiting for Cree to show up.

"I wonder how long it is going to take for Cree to get here." Nigel said with a frown. "Honestly, it's the men who are supposed to kept girls waiting, not vice versa."

"I'm sure there's a good reason." Alan said in his Maurice disguise. "There is a thing called 'patience', Nigel."

"Yeah, live a little, try to be patience." Kuki giggles to Nigel while eating some peppermint. "Yum!"

"Betcha your sister is figuring out outfits." Hoagie said to Abigail with a smirk.

"Knowing my sis, that is only the case." Abigail remarks, while tapping her fingers on the table.

"Can weega order? Stitch is hungry." Stitch said impatiently, wanting to order something already.

"Not yet." Angelilo said to her boyfriend, patting him on the back. "Just wait a while."

The diguised villain looks around then fix the candle a bit. After looking around some more, Alan then pulls it close and uses a torch to light the candle back up.

"Well, that oughta do it." Alan remarks with a nod.

"Oh brother." Wally remarks while rolling his eyes a bit at this.

"He just want to make sure that the candle is well-lit, Wally!" Kuki giggles to Wally playfully.

"Maurice!" A familiar voice spoke up. The group saw Cree, her hair is messed up, arriving at last.

"Cree!" Alan exclaims with a smile as Cree sat down at the table. "There you are, I was worried."

"Sorry about that. I know that I'm late but I got a good reason to.

"Wow...your hair looks exciting."

"What did you do? Got a fight with the hair dryer?" Hoagie jokes a bit as Stitch roll his eyes at the bad joke that his pal just made.

"Long story. Anyway, my hair ain't the only exciting development of the night." Cree said with a grin. "Alan just made a new hero and I know why!"

"Let's face this during dinner." Nigel said as he and the others look a bit uneasy. Cree has found out what Alan's doing but now is not the time to worry. Now is the time to to eat. "I rather not discuss strategy over an empty stomach."

"Right, come on, bring in the grub!" Angelilo calls out to a waiter anxiously. "We're ready to order!"

"Can weega get discounts for being the Freelance Police?" Stitch ask anxiously a bit.

"Not a chance." Hoagie remarks with a shrug, much to Stitch's disappointment."

"Awwwww!"

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A while later, the dates and Nigel got drinks, Alan pops open a wine bottle to serve himself and Cree who looks excited about what she found and is telling the others right now.

"It all make senses now! Alan missed getting his butt kicked so he made and the other heroes can't kick it. So he made a new hero to kick it for him!" Cree explains eagerly to Alan.

"Well, yeah, good point." Alan said with a nod, trying to pretend to be surprised.

"But what I don't get is why he picked Control Freak."

"Yeah, good question." Angelilo said with an annoyed frown.

"Control Freak is the worst possible person that you could pick!" Cree remarks with a frown. "The guy is a fat nerd who is obsessed with both TV and me and he got villain issues."

"Yeah, I mean, why pick Control Freak? That guy is a complete nut!" Abigail remarks, agreeing with her sister while making Alan uneasy by the statements.

"Yeah, CF, nutty nutty fruit loop!" Kuki remarks while giggling a bit slyly.

"Wow, that's a lot to take in." Alan said with a slight chuckle.

"Yeah, boggles my mind too." Cree said with a sigh. She wonder if what Alan was even thinking, chosign Control Freak of all people to be a superhero. At this point, the group's food shows up.

"Oh yeah, I am extremely boggle. You know, I'm sure we will get to the bottom of who's butt will be kicked soon, but right now...let's enjoy each other's company."

"Yeah. let's not worry about that now." Nigel said with a nod as he and his group took soda bottles while Alan and Cree took the wine glasses.

"Sorry, Maurice. You're right, I could use a breather." Cree said with a slight chuckle. Perhaps the girl is a bit under stress right now.

"THANK YOU!" Most of the Freelance Police group exclaims at once. Cree chuckles while waving her wine glass as did Alan.

"To Maurice...for being the only normal thing in my crazy, upside down world."

"To....being normal." Alan said with a sigh. It's great being on this date with Cree. The two cling their glasses while drinking together.

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Unknown to the group, a familiar super being is outside watching Alan and Cree. Control Freak sniffs in sadness before flying off. How can he complete with someone like Maurice?

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Cree blinks as she turns to the window. For a moment, the woman thought that she saw someone outside, a familiar person whom she herself rejected. Cree looks down, a bit concerned.

Alan on the other hand looks concerned himself, remembering what Bob warned him about before. Will Cree still want to be the disguised villain when the truth comes out? There's only one way to find out.

"Cree?" Alan ask Cree nervously.

"Yes?" Cree ask Alan, wondering what he wants to say.

"Well..."

"If you're going to say what I think you're going to say..." Abigail begins to say, realizing what Alan is about to ask Cree and it has her worried.

Alan holds a hand meaning 'be quiet' then continues speaking to Cree, "Let's say...I wasn't so normal. That my hair is black and weird, I wear sunglasses and have the complexion of a teenager...or someone you may or may know."

"And hangs out with robots, a goldfish a huge gang and..." Wally was cut off as Kuki kicks him, shutting the boy up. "Ouch!"

"If any of those would be the case...would you still enjoy my company?"

"Awww, of course, I would." Cree remarks with a slight chuckle. "You don't judge a book by its cover or a person on the outside."

"Yeah, that would be silly." Kuki said playfully. Alan and the others sigh, thinking that Cree would understand the truth.

"Well, that's a relief to hear." Alan said with a sigh to Cree.

"You judged them based on their actions." Cree said, making Alan and his pals a bit worried and concerned. That doesn't sound good.

"Err, that sounds a bit petty...don't you think?"

Cree just giggles a bit then she and Alan looks at each other. The others watch in amusement as, after a moment of this, the couple then lean to each other...and kiss.

"Whoa, way to go!" Stitch cheers wildly. Looks like Alan and Cree are going to be all right! The other smiles happily as Alan and Cree hold hands.

"How romantic." Angelilo giggles happily. Of course, not every one of the others are happy.

"Ugh! Enough, I cannot take this crud anymore!" Wally exclaims in disgust. He wants it to stop right now so the boy grabs the cup that Nigel was holding.

"Numbuh 4, no!" Nigel protests to Wally in horror.

Too late, Wally splashes the contents of the cup right onto Cree's hand. This causes her to yelp as she, without realizing it, touch Alan's watch...causing him to transform back to normal and changing him back, without Cree realizing it.

"Uh oh, not good." Hoagie said with a gulp of worry.

The other customers turn, gasps in shock and horror as they saw a shocking sight: Cree kissing Alan of all people! A baby is heard crying upon seeing this sight too.

Cree, whose eyes was closed during the kissing, open her eyes then gasps in shock upon seeing that...she's kissing Alan. The girl shove the villain while gasping, "What the heck?!"

"Err, what?" Alan ask in his normal voice. The villain gasps and held his voice before looking at himself. Not good! He's back to his normal self! Alan screams and tries to hide himself unsuccessfully, "No, no, don't look at me! It's just...a technical glitch!"

"What are you doing here, Alan Matthews, and...ARGH!" Cree screams in shock and horror. Alan was Maurice all this time?!

"Wait, Cree, you got to understand!" Nigel exclaims to Cree, trying to get control of his situation.

"Don't look, just yet!" Alan exclaims as he tries to change back to Maurice, but ends up transforming into Feral. In the cat's voice, the villain remarks, "Wait, strike that!" Alan dries the watch then changing, unknowingly, into the Space Dad. He turns to Cree and said, "All right. Where were we?"

Cree screams as she splash the villain with her own vine bottle. The watch shorts out, changing Alan back to normal. The villain said, "Hoo boy."

"You!" Cree exclaims in fury and anger. She still can't believe it! Alan was Maurice all this time, obviously lying and tricking the woman into being nice to him!

"Wait, Cree! I can explain!"

"You..."

Once Cree had gotten up, she begins to leave. The Freelance Police group looks a bit worried, what should they do about this situation?

"Ugh, looky, it's Alan! Should weega arrest him?" Stitch spoke off in total fake act of being surprise?

"Drop it little buddy, now might not be a good time." Hoagie remarked off with a dry tone, now's not a good time to do their official business of crime busting.

Alan yell after Cree unsuccessfully, "Cree!!"

"Wally, why did you go and ruin everyone else's dates for?" Kuki scolds Wally, upset over what her date just said.

"Hey, it went too far when they kissed! I gotta draw the line somewhere!" Wally protests to Kuki while crossing his arms in annoyance.

"Uh, put the tab bill on the KND account, okay?" Nigel ask a waiter sheepishly as the group leaves to chase after Cree.

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It is now pouring rain as Cree walks through the rain, looking upset. Alan was disguised as Maurice the whole time. Oh, how could she let him deceive her after all this time?!

Cree yelps as garbage and a cat suddenly appear. The woman groans in annoyance, the garbage wasn't clean up. Alan and his goons dehydrate them into cubes and now the rain is rehydrated them!

"I can't believe that I kissed him. Ugh!" Cree exclaims in anger and disbelief. "The Silver Sentry is gone, Alan has taken over and is using that idiot Control Freak to be a hero...why was I so stupid to think that everything is going to go back to normal just like that?!"

Just then, Cree yelps from hearing a car's engine and the brakes sounding off, but there was no signs of it within this rain. Except, it was from this rain, that left trails of of vehicle that was invisible to the naked-eye, and who should open the door out of it to appear but...Alan.

"I can explain!" Alan called out before shutting the door to try to, hopefully, have Cree understand himself.

"Yeah sis, just..." Soon Abigail and the rest of the Freelance Police also came out of Alan's invisible ride from the other side, they shut the door from there to be in front of Alan.

"Wait a second. Abby, why are you and your friends with...him and after finding out that he was impersonating Maurice back at the restaurant?" Cree responded a bit surprised to see her sister and friends here.

"Ugh, well." Angelilo yelped and rubbed the back of her head, how do they explain themselves here?

"It isn't like we knew that you were dating Alan Matthews this whole time especially when we were at the restaurant and didn't tell you, if that's what you...Haaugh!" Kuki tried to say something as a positive joke about their situation, only to gasp in shock from what she just let slip out the truth.

"You mean you knew...ALL OF YOU?" Cree spoke off a bit stumped, and looked from the KND, Freelance Police and alien koalas, they all knew about this and never said a word?

"Oh crickey, now she knows!" Wally slapped his forehead in seeing that the jig is up.

"Ugh...I can't believe this!" Cree turns away looking even more sadden, even to let off a growling tone of her frustrated voice.

"Cree wait, I ask them to keep this a secret. And what about everything you just said?" Alan spoke off to try and speak reason to Cree while bringing up something in what went on back at the restaurant. "About judging a book by it's cover?" He asked a bit sad that Cree would act this way, after stating how never to judge something from the outside appearance, did that mean nothing now?

But that just made Cree angrier and here's the answer why. "Well then, let's take a look at the context then, shall we?" The woman turned around to chat with Alan about the facts inside of the 'book' subject besides the covers. "You destroyed the Silver Sentry!" Cree poked at him with a gloom face in reminding this villain of what he's gone and done. "You took over the city!" Alan flinched a bit back when she was hammering him down with these bad facts about himself. "Beat up a bunch of other heroes with your bots, even my sister's group!" What Cree said almost made the Freelance Police group cringed a bit in knowing that was true but it was much worst for Alan. "And then...you actually got me to CARE about you!" She concluded off the final part of what Alan has done, he made the girl actually wanna care about this villain, she just couldn't believe it.

"Well it's not like you felt the same when Hoagie was Hank in teenage form." Stitch shrug off to bring up another subject that happened to this teenage's life.

"Stitch, drop it!" Hoagie snapped at his partner for bringing up more painful, embarrassing, and disgusting facts that they said never to bring up again.

"Uagh....why...are you so...EVIL!" Cree sighed before glaring at Alan, wanting to know, why this guy was being so like this. "Tricking me? Tricking even my sister and her friends? What could you possibly hope to gain?" She was very heartbroken, why did he deceive so much of her that the villain was trying to gain something out of it? What was it?

"Cree listen, he didn't trick us, we just gotten to know him." Nigel tried to help Cree realize that this is getting a bit out of hand.

"Yeah, Alan's not bad once you hang out with him." Kuki nods to try and also speak for the vilain's behalf.

"Right, you hang out with him, shouldn't that tell you something?" Wally tried his best that Cree gotten to feel like knowing Alan meant a difference, right?

Alan was silent, he lifted his eyes up to look to Cree with sympathy and sorrow in what he's trying to express out.

"Wait a minute." Cree suddenly spoke off in wide eyes in know seeing what was going on? "Aaaugh....I don't believe this." She shook her head in seeing this was something that was impossible to be.

"What don't you believe?" Stitch asked puzzled and confused, where was this going now?

"Stitch, that might not be the best thing to ask?" Angelilo whispered to her love in sensing a bad moment here.

Alan continued to stare with what he was showing, the face of what is speaking for him....compassion from someone that loves him.

"Do you all really think that I would ever be with him?" Cree shook her head in disbelief and stated off to point towards Alan Matthews about what this guy wants, her and him to be together.

"Well...it's a maybe." Hoagie shrug off his shoulders to think, a possible maybe involved.

Alan stared at Cree, seeing her response clearly answered his own. "No..." He silently spoke before letting his eyes drop to the ground in deeper sorrow.

Then a sad Cree takes off to pass Alan Matthews and the Freelance Police group.

"Cree, listen, I..." Abigail tried to reach her hand up to cheer her sister up, feeling that even Cree shouldn't feel this much miserable.

But Cree only turn around to snap at her dear little sister. "Save it! As far as our 'old' bond of sisterhood may have almost spark back into our lives, we're just enemies again! Wheather it's here or at home, the word 'love' means nothing to me now!" The woman exclaimed off with such a stern tone to declare this out just before turning away again.

Now it was Abigail's turn to feel sad and gloomy, she seen Cree get mad before, but nothing like this. And to say those things, well, in truth, compared to the other insults Numbuh 5 dealt from her sister, this one may have actually hurt the most.

Alan continued to watch Cree leave him as he looks away to the street, feeling; empty. The villain turns to leave with his back turned and the raining pouring down on a heart broken being.

"Um, should we remind him about his ride?" Kuki pointed out about Alan forgot his invisible vehicle.

"No, I think we've all feel a terrible burden on us all." Angelilo shook her head to state that this moment, the gare are too much feeling depression.

"Right, let's go follow him." Nigel nods with trying to keep his cool and collective side image noted, but in truth, he senses much of his teammates & friends...feeling heavy burdens.

With that, even the Freelance Police group was turning to leave to follow Alan Matthews just leaping his away across the street. The one person from this group that felt even sadder was Abigail Lincoln. She & Cree almost had their old spark of being sisters brought back that they thought was lost only to lose it again...this really was a sad day.

Now it was Cree's turn to look back from trying to hold her hands to her shoulders from the pouring rain. She watched Alan & the Freelance Police leave before doing so herself. She felt betrayed, lost and very much heartbroken from what those she thought of believing in...could do this to her. Her sister Abigail, her annoying bunch of friends, but most of all, she actually felt something for Alan Matthews, but now the old feelings of the pass overweight the recent ones of the villain's vile deeds....it's truly a sad and lonely day for the teenager to have almost fallen in love.

Author's note
Poor Alan, his secret has been exposed and his heart has broken, with the others' feelings hurt especially Cree. In the next chapter, the villain decides to fight Control Freak with the heroes' help...but the 'super hero' didn't show up but instead decides to use his powers for his own gain.

Stitch: Then things got worst.

Me: Yeah, especially when Alan reveals his disguises to Control Freak and got him to fight the villain...but like the other plans of Alan Matthews, this one backfires with dangerous results. The villain and his group must get Cree's help. Read, review and suggest.
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After pass twelve, I'm gonna post the entire finalized work for the chapter, and any parts that need filling in, I'll leave it to you. So hang tight, it's coming!
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Hi JusSonic, I got the final scene work, as Promise, so...here it is!
PREVIEW #3

The scene finally shifts towards a bridge spot, were underneath it, was a neighborhood, and one building in particular? From the dirt falling off the bridge, along with a few heavy cracks of pressure, Black Zuzoon stood over the edge, something was going on?

"Of all the inconsiderate?" Alan exclaimed off to wave his giant bot's arms up in stating out the situation of the matter while getting Black Zuzoon to lean over the bridge to hang off the edge. "Bone-headed…" Alan remarked off the next part of the insult of what he was saying before he let his hold off the bridge's edge. "STOMPfruvhmmm…" Soon Black Zuzoon's feet stomped on the ground that shook the place, but even before that, many of the citizens nearby were running away from the danger. "Irresponsible?" Alan was snapping off in fury about 'who' he was talking about. "RUDE!" While a car alarm went off, Alan had his Black Zuzoon near the building in question, pointed the bot's finger in talking to the structure? "Unprofessional…That's what this IIiis?" As Alan was stating this part off, he was whirling Black Zuzoon's right fist for the toss and soon let it go forth.

"Boomgruvhmm…." Soon a giant robot's fist just breaks through the wall that had a little hole to begin with, of a familiar 'new' hero's room of the building?

"Would Silver Sentry have kept me waiting?" Alan demanded off from climbing down his giant bot's resting hand to enter the place in credisizing in anger the act that if his old foe was around, would that guy do what just happened to him?

"Well, did you bother to know when it was his potty or coffee break?" Stitch's voice was heard over a com-link that Alan had set to overhear those on the same frequency.

"Now's not the time to sound so sarcastic, little buddy?" Hoagie's voice was heard on the same com-link to stop his pal from making things worst.

"Of Course Not!" Alan sarcastically stated off with the upmost annoyance that even his old foe never be so rude, to not even bother to show up. "He was a PRO!" Alan thrown down his arms in exclaiming how Silver Sentry, was never one to do things like that, and now Control Freak, despite the training, couldn't show up on a schedule time of a hero/villain clash up, WHY?
"Hey there!" Control Freak's voice called out to the speechlessly upset villain in question. "Alan Matthew!" And speaking of the new hero in question, we see Control Freak happily sitting on his coach, with a game controller, and playing a video game of a BIG Screen TV with back speaker sounds? "You're actually the guy I wanna see!" Control Freak stated off with a happy little face in actually glad to meet the villain of the city? "Also, there's a door here?" The guy pointed to the door behind him which the villain could have used instead of breaking down his own.

"BREAKfruvhmm…" Just then, the door to the guy's room just got busted down, to see the Freelance Police team busting on inside.

"Okay, use to be a door, now that the Freelance Police broke it?" Control Freak shrug off to say from seeing who else showed up, but the guy doesn't really seem bothered?

"Oh, old space alien arcade games! Meega wanna try!" Stitch responded with a sly grin, seeing the game Control Freak playing look like fun.

"Not now little buddy, first it's down to business!" Hoagie sternly told his partner, much to the koala's disappointment to hear that.

Being enough with patience, Alan stepped off his robot's giant hand. "Do you have any idea…" Alan was looking really upset at Control Freak, as he came up to the game screen that the guy was watching. "How LONG, I waited for you?" Alan Matthew stopped to wave out his right hand, looking disappointed that Control Freak never arrived for them to meet, do their clashing of Good VS. Evil, only for it to be a no show and everyone just gone home from getting tired of nothing exciting happening?

"No-no, I totally understand what you and the rest are saying." Control Freak spoke off pretty quickly while trying to look pass Alan to focus on the TV? "Could you just…Just…hold on for one second? I'm trying to beat this level?" The guy stated from looking to finish playing his video game then rather be talking with Alan and the group.

"Oh brother, he's into the video games instead of beating the crud outta bad guys?" Wally smacked his forehead in seeing what Control Freak chooses to be?

"Honestly, do you know that Alan was counting on you, and you let him down." Angelilo sternly was scolding this guy for his lack of authority on the matter.

"Right, even villains like a little respect of their adversaries in some cases." Abigail nods in full agreement, what this 'new' hero did, was not cool.

"Despite some issues, at least the good guys bother to make it worth their wild to respond to villain's calling of a challenge." Nigel stated off with a serious face, no matter the situation, good guys at least try to respect their foes, not disrespect them.

"Well hey, what can I say, I got distracted?" Control Freeak shrug off his shoulders to let the KND & Freelance Police groups know that he was only distracted, not a big deal to make out of?

"Where you even planning on showing up?" Alan waved off his left arm in almost starting to wonder, if this new hero, would have even bothered to come fight him in the first place?

"Hey guys, you should take a load at this!" Kuki spoke in having her pals turn away to see something surprising was nearby.
Soon Alan turned his head towards the other direction opposite of the wall he made to find…something surprising?

"What's this?" Alan asked off from when he and the Freelance Police group stared at something with blank puzzlement expressions? They at first, didn't bothered wondering how Control Freak got some nicely set up speakers and a large TV screen, but near the kitchen and bathroom, there was more? For within the small apartment room, there was an arcade game by the toilet spot, an AIM machine for where money is kept, a red bicycle, and packs of sack money dough and dollar bills all over the place? This was definitely not the sorta stuff you find in a hero's room?

"Sweet! This new hero got a serious pay day? How come wedge don't cram our office with junk like this, Hoagie?" Stitch spoke off in loving this, Control Freak has got it made, and was complaining why he and Hoagie never did?

"First off Stitch, we collect souvenirs on our cases, second of all, we don't take in the money off the bad guys?" Hoagie explained to his partner of the things they do, yes they take stuff as trophies from their cases, but they never took any money the bad guys had around. Besides, if they ever did, they spend it on something useless and not keep it around forever without a real purpose?

"Hoagie's right, something ain't right here?" Abigail stated with a serious face on her mode, no hero would take in all the expensive rewards for their good deeds, it ain't the honory type?

"Where did you get all this stuff?" Alan asked Control Freak with a blank look, as the new hero stood up to come near the villain with a smily expression for some weird reason?

"It doesn't belong to me." Control Freak whispered off that was still heard by everyone in the room, the guy admits that this stuff he's got…was not of his own, by a legal claim?

"You STOLE It?" Alan Matthew exclaimed off to look at Control Freak with utter shock and disbelief? This guy the villain picked, who he created to be a hero, stole some things?

"Pretty cool, right?" Control Freak nods in thinking how a villain like Alan Matthew, would be impressed that the guy managed to steal all these neat things and got away with it.

"Hmph., meega would try taking the gum ball machine outside gas stations?" Stitch tapped to his chin in speaking of terms of something else that he would have gladly like to been stolen?

"Stitch, you're not helping?" Hoagie silently snapped to his partner for trying to say something that was not being helpful here.

"No-no-no-NO, you're a HERO!" Alan shook his head and squeezed his eyes in not believing this, Control Freak isn't suppose to do these things as a hero, good guys aren't suppose to do bad things like bad guys do.

"And heroes don't steal things!" Nigel pointed out what Control Freak has done, no hero by their title name, steals from anything, they are too good.

"Yeah, except for villains?" Abigail dryly remarked off under her breath, the only ones that do these criminal acts, are just the bad guy villains.

"Well guess what people? Being a Hero, is for losers!" Control Freak remotely snapped off with an annoyed expression from the good guys to Alan, as this 'hero' business, just not his style. "It's always work-work-work, 24/7? At least when I was a villain, that career was easy." The guy was complaining about about the job of being a hero was too much, it was annoying. "And for what? What was it all for in the end?" The guy turned to the puzzled Alan and Freelance Police team on that one subject in mind. "The only reason I ever took the gig to get the girl I like? And it turns out…" Control Freak held up a magazine in stating why he ever wanted to be a hero in the first place. "Cree, doesn't want anything to do with me?" As Control Freak stated this, half the picture was ripped to show Cree saved by Silver Sentry, but the head was missing, being show it fit fine with a baffled Alan Matthew?

"Powfruvhmm…" Soon Control Freak used his heat vision to burn that magazine to cinders from his arguer.

"Wait, Cree, as in Cree Lincoln, as in, Abigail's older sister Cree?" Alan held up to slowly point out his right index finger to ask in confusion, if this rouge hero, was referring to the girl he was dating?

"The one and only, boy I can see how this guy was upset over Cree?" Abigail spoke off in knowing how that info is true, and is kinda annoyed that this guy got this way…cause of Cree not liking him.

"You mean that's why you're so mad?" Kuki asked with a blank of innocence in trying to figure out if this was why Control Freak…is acting this way.

"Yeah guys, Cree Lincoln and Abigail's older sister to boot!" Control Freak nods in responding to the villain while explaining a few things to the guy. "I saw her having dinner!" The guy was going into some details that made the group feel a familiar pattern. "And making goggly eyes at some…(Insult liner!)" The guy made a silly expression when he discuss the fact in recalling seeing someone hang out with Cree.

"Ohhhh….?" Alan made a tiny yelp response with a low voice with his eyes narrowing away in seeing what happened here? Control Freak musta saw him as Maurice, and believes the guy has taken the girl this guy is upset that he lost getting, this might not sound good?

"Now just a minute, that guy was a respectable member of the KND. Everyone liked him, you can't just insult him without really knowing him?" Nigel protest in seeing this guy was bad mouthing a friend of the Kids Next Door.

"Yeah! Well who needs all that noise?" Control Freak shrug off with a not so caring manner about the idea. "But you know, that's why I think…." The guy made a freaky smile that didn't seem to look to nice here? "We, Alan…should team up!" Control Freak came a bit close to Alan, suggesting a partnership, of EVIL!

"What?" The Freelance Police team responded in utter shock, this situation has gone from bad, to worst now.

"You…wait? What?" Even Alan flinched a bit in realizing what Control Freak was asking, and this was not something he liked the sound of?

"With me power and your…(something)-ness?" Control Freak wiggled his hands in the air in describing how the two bad guys could be. "We can RULE…The City!" He grabbed Alan by the shoulders, smirking like a whack out villain in what they can do here if they join forces.

(Any Freelance Police lines)

"You want to team up?" Alan asked off when Control Freak left him a moment, this guy wants the two to work together, this was never apart of Alan's plan?

"Check it out! I even drew up some new costume designs, see!" Control Freak smiled to bring forth to show Alan and the others, a picture.

"Costume designs?" Alan repeated off while still being baffled about this whole thing?

(Chatter moments and picture of the scene? Maybe even add in the Freelance Police trying to stop them, or something?)

Suddenly, during the discussion of what Control Freak wanted for his new costume, Alan quickly snatched the paper away and step away from this…lune of a hero? Of course, during the moment, Stitch snatched the paper from Alan, and ate it with a burp afterwards.

"I can't believe you?" Alan at the moment gazes at Control Freak…with utter disbelief eyes at what he sees clearly. "All of your gifts…all your powers, even your villain abilities, and you….?" The man was trying to explain the situation of what's happening here, and it was shocking still. "And you squander them? For your own..personal game?" Alan glared at Control Freak, the guy here isn't a hero, and with these powers, makes the super being nothing but a big jerk?

"Yes! That's right!" Control Freak held his nose with the left and pointed with the right, saying Alan was right on about this.

"No! I'm the villain! Your the good guy? Like the Freelance Police & friends?" Alan snapped in anger to point this subject out to the puzzling Control Freak? "I do something bad! And you come, and get me." Control Freak stared puzzled at Alan, not getting the guy, but the villain wanted this guy to be the hero, not the other way around. "That's why…I CREATED You!" The villain snapped to point and explained that he was the one who made Control Freak into who he is today.

"Boy was that ever a mistake?" Abigail silently remarked under her breath to which her pals agreed with her.

"I'll say." Kuki nods with a sterny face in nodding to this fact.

"We're in agreement there." Angelilo also made a frown in agreeing with the rest, this guy was no hero, never was.

"Yeah right?" Control Freak rolled his eyes in hearing that claim of some excuse by Alan. "Your NUTS!" The guy could just laugh at the villain making a sorry-excuse that was so not true without knowing the real truth. "Space Dad told me…?" The guy would have gone on to say what he was once told, except for one thing, getting cut off.

"Look! I'm your Space Dad!" Alan snapped off with an angry tone to gaze at this guy for missing the point here. Then in the next moment, the man touched his watch, turn some dial to suddenly change…into the familiar space being Control Freak knows. "You should be more like the Silver Sentry?" Alan performed his Space Dad routine to speak in telling Control Freak this advice.

"WAAaugh!" Control Freak yelped out loud with wide eye shock, his space dad was actually…Alan Matthew, who changed back to his real self then?

"Yeah, and to think, we were part of it?" Wally shrug off to mention out without actually thinking straight?

"NUMBER 4!" Nigel shouted to snap at his friend for revealing that part to Control Freak.

"You tricked me? You guys too?" Control Freak glared at the group, Alan tricked him with this act, and the Freelance Police were in on it?

"Yeah, but it's not like we didn't like it?" Hoagie shrug off his shoulders to say that during the time, they weren't enjoying trying to teach Control Freak how to control his new-found powers.

"Ih, weega said to not to, but weega just ignored?" Stitch shrug off as well tat they wanted to change minds of making this guy a hero, when clearly, he was not hero-quality material in the first place.

"Oh, so we don't like that and being tricked now, do we?" Alan spoke in trying to mock a bit of this guy finding out this news was not to his liking, as the villain moves closer to his giant bot's hand. "Well guess what, there's more!" The villain proclaimed from jumping back on the hand, preparing to set the watch dial for another disguise to show this terrible hero.

"Um Alan, I wouldn't push your luck too far, it might just…" Abigail tried to warn the villain about the crossing the line with a guy that's got major powers over him?

Soon Alan turn the dial, glowed, and then soon the stumped Control Freak gasped wide eyed in seeing…this villain's next disguise?

"I'm also the (insulted liner), dating with Cree Lincoln." Alan spoke while in the Maurice disguise to say about himself, being the very person, dating with Cree who was finding him attractive to know at that stage.

"No!" Control Freak shook his head in trying to disagree to this, this can't be real, it just can't be?

"And we…were SMOOCHING up a Storm!" Alan touched his watch dial, changed back to his villain form in explaining what he was doing with Cree while backing up to his giant robot. The guy even went so far as to make 'kiss' & 'smoochy' face expressions to describe the event.

"He's lying, right?" Control Freak looked to the Freelance Police with a horrid face, wanting to know, the villain was lying to him, right? But that wasn't going to be the case here?

"Believe me, I wish it was, we and everyone else saw them kiss?" Wally shrug off his shoulders to say, it was no lie, it did happen.

"Which from somebody, it got exposed?" Kuki spoke to gaze at her love for recalling how he ruined that moment for Cree and Alan.

"Hey, I said sorry, okay?" Wally protest out to explain in his defense, that he was sorry for the deed?

That's when Control Freak was starting to REALLY get mad in learning all of this, Alan, even the Freelance Police, used him and tricked him, mostly the villain did the wicked stuff. "Oh…when I get my hands on you, I'm gonna…." Control Freak was declaring off with a raging fire in his eye, as he was gonna go forth and tear this guy to shreds.

"YES!" Alan cheered "Yes, I know!" Alan cheered from stepping back into the chrome dome glass on the Black Zuzoon's forehead which closed in on the guy. "Bring me to justice!" The villain asked out, as he made the giant bot step back, clash his fist in wanting the 'new hero' to bring it on. "Merc! Green! Roll the footage!" The villain shouted for his two bots nearby to get the camera bots to get the footage here.

"Rolling boss man!" Merc spoke in stating the two are good to go.

"We're recording!" Green nods off to say they were getting this.

"Oh, how I waited for this day?" Alan announced out with a smiling gleam, as he was in position to really go forth in clashing with a hero, just like the old days with Silver Sentry.

"POwvhmm/Gruvhmm…." Then in a fast motion, as Alan made the Black Zuzoon mimic his moves, Control Freak launched out of his floor and delivered an upper cut….which sent the 8o foot giant flying backwards?

And just like that, Black Zuzoon screeched across the pavement streets on it's backside with a wide eyed surprised Alan holding on from what was happening? "BAshfruvhmm…." And then the big bot smacked against a pipe of some factory, at least that stopped him? "Oh, and the hero strikes the first blow?" The villain stands up again to state what Control Freak did was something all good vs evil perform on their dueling clashes. "But evil returns with a backhand!" Alan announced with a smiling gleam again, as his raring to go once more. Control Freak flies in, but is blind to see Black Zuzoon gripping it's fist to prepare for something? "POWvhmm…./Gahahaaaahaaah!" Which the giant bot smacked Control Freak down the right sided street from not seeing that fast knock out while the villain laughs for joy at seeing this display coming out.

The Freelance Police watched the sight from afar in Control Freak's home, and they gotta get out there.

(Chatter lines you wanna use before the group plans to leave the apart? Maybe make a joke of some of the kids goofing around to play games, rig the fridge, or taking the sacks of money, you decide.)

"POwwvhmm…." At the moment, Control Freak smacks across the streets, going under and cracking the pavements until he stops on a four way traffic?? Control Freak breaks out in the center, gazes at Alan's direction with really angry eyes.

"Oh Yes!" Alan proclaimed from afar to pump his arms up, which the robot mimic, the villain was smiling and enjoying this so much.

"GRAaaughhh!" Control Freak launched out like a torpedo raging forth to impact the creep with such brute force. The bad hero flew off to get the villain, but something was a miss here? If Control Freak paid attention, he would have seen Alan hid himself and Black Zuzoon behind a building with a painted sign?

"Waaaugh?" A Sign painter yelped out a cry in seeing the villain in hiding while on his window wiping cart?

"Shhh, I'm hiding!" Alan hushed the person with his right index finger, which the robot mimic for him to have this citizen get his message. "Haha-hahahaaaah!" Now Alan was tip-toeing himself away down another city block, and this action was really starting to catch a few people's attention?

In the red space cruiser, the Freelance Police saw this action going on so far?

(Any lines you wanna add?)

"Come out, you little freak?" Control Freak flew around some buildings, calling for Alan to show himself while unknowing, the villain tip-toeing from the behind? "I wanna see what that big brain looks on the pavement!" The rouge hero pound his fist in wanting to really smack this guy Alan for making him mad.

Just then, Control Freak didn't notice a giant hand, which tapped his right shoulder, to turn around, but…."POWvhmm…" And with that, Black Zuzoon delivered a right hook shot against the unexpected Control Freak "Wahahahaa…." Alan laughs evilly at this, as he sent Control Freak straight on over towards a nearby building home.

(Note: Scene of Control Freak breaks in on couple eating chinese?) Once Control Freak angrily blew what was in his nose out, he went off to catch his running target; Alan Matthew. Which the villain used his robot's speed acceleration design to speed off towards a direction.

"You fell for the easiest trick in the book?" Alan taunted to look back at Control Freak following him, did some skip dance moves before stepping aside, as the raging blind hero missed hitting the guy.

"You little….(insult)?" Control Freak snarled off to run off another street block, as he saw from passing buildings with open spaces, that he was chasing Alan in his Black Zuzoon. "GRAAarruughhh!" He let off a roar, as he made enough speed to go around the next open block to cut the running villain off?

"CLUNK!" Just then, Control Freak impacted against a street lamp post that came out of nowhere?

"Un-Guard!!" Alan announced off a fencer's challenge line for the two foes to duke it out. "Wohohohohhooooh!" He chuckled in how he welded a weapon in his mighty robot's hands, and was he enjoying this. "Guuvhm…" But then this guy yelped back from Control Freak punching the guy back to skid back across the streets again?

"RArrugh!" Control Freak roared in rage, and ripped off his own street lamp post to wield as a weapon. And now, the two opponents were now duking it out, weapon to weapon clashing, a classic style of fighting.

"Hahaha, woooh!" Alan spoke off from being in a fencer's battle pose to fight against Control Freak. "Now THAT'S the Spirit!" The villain proclaimed out with a jolly attitude while his foe tries to keep hitting him. "Take that! And Again!" The villain declared off to keep this battling up, as Control Freak kept on trying to hit him while the guy was defensive. "Now it's time for some witty back and forth banter!" The villain proclaimed out in what shall come next, the oldest tradition know to heros and villains alike; the taunting routine. "Being new, you can go first!" The villain offered his foe a chance to try to tease and taunt him at this hour of their clashing?

"RAARRUUUAARrrghhhh!" Control Freak however, was just rapidly throwing a tantrum to throw in a few more hitting against the villain, as he was not up for banter?

"Okay than, look? I'm not sure where to go with just that?" Alan responded off a bit puzzled and confused to hear that response? Control Freak was suppose to make a banter, why was he not going along with this display of hero VS. evil, everyone should know this, even the Freelance Police group know.

"GRAArrughhh!" Control Freak soon dives in and pushes Alan's Black Zuzoon that now was using both hands to hold off the strength of this super-powered foe.

"Yo Green, looks like it's about to reach the climatic?" Merc spoke to his pal from filming this from a good distance, and can sense where this be going.

"Oh my, already, that sure was fast? Rolling now!" Green responded surprise, he wasn't expecting the battle to end this soon, but who are they to question the outcome?

Even the Freelance Police finally caught around to se what action was about to happen here?

"This one's for stealing my Girlfriend!" Control Freak snapped off to Alan before he pushed the bot's weapon off from their clashing force.

"SHE WASN'T TO BEGIN WITH!" Abigail shouted out to let that rouge hero know that her sister Cree and him never became such a thing.

But at that moment, Control Freak tripped Black Zuzoon's legs from a swing slash that knocked the target upwards?

"Woohhaaauuuaghh…." Alan was making a slow scream from staring wide0eye in seeing what his new foe was doing? "Gaugh…" Then a smack under the robot's head sent it up into the skies where everyone stared up at watching this. But then Control Freak flew up after the villain, not done yet?

Then while Black Zuzoon was souring upwards, Control Freak zoomed pass the big bot to be in front…to deliver the receive end!

"This one's for Space Dad making a Fool Outta Me!" Control Freak declared out the next thing he do, as he looked really tearful to see that Alan fooled him into being his space dad, that was heartbreaking.

Then once Alan and his bot were up in the right spot before Control Freak, the angry hero delivered!

"RARrugh!" Control Freak delivered a double punch, onto the bot and sending them both downwards. "GAAUuAAAaghh!" Even Alan was screaming from how they were going down at a rapid paste?

"They're going to hit, after them!" Nigel issued to the Freelance team, as they soar by the red police cruiser to catch up.

Soon the falling foes were coming up to a building before..the impact? "Boom-Boom-Boom-BOOMGrvuhmm…." They smashed through a copy of floors, just before they finally hit the real solid ground bottom, as Control Freak landed away from his foe?

"And Alan Matthew!" Control Freak stood back up, as Alan stood up himself to see the hero near the chrome glass with his right fist held back. "BREAKISvhmm…." The angry hero broke the glass that was shielding the villain, before Control Freak grabbed him by the cape. "This one's for Space Step Mom & Brother!…YOU LIED TO THEM!" Control Freak lashed out to Alan in knowing that this guy pretended to be his space dad, and he even lied to the guy's space step mom and step brother, and finds that really low!

"THEY WERE ALSO BAD GUYS IN DISGUISE, STUPY-HEAD!" Stitch's voice was heard off in the distance in telling the block-headed hero the truth?

"Oh, well done." Alan signs to say with a cheeky smile before going on with what he had to say? "I thought that battle went really-REALLY well, and on film to record your moment." The man held up his arms to say how their fight, truly was one for the record books of a villain/hero clash showdown. "Hugh, I mean…I have a few notes…?" He pinched his left hand's index and thumb in stating about having some notes about this sorta battle.

"NOTES?" Control Freak snarled off to the villain, as what he was hearing this guy say stuff that was irrupting him some more?

"Well from what we could have done next, or even for a more dynamite event? But they can wait for another time?" Alan genlty patted the angry hero's cheek when stating the villain's notes can wait now. "Haah, you can take me to jail now. We'll have lots more fun the next time around, I must warn you, I have some experience in this game." Alan signs happy to let Control Freak know, that with this battle over, the hero can take the bad guy, to jail. Finally, Alan is pleased with having the feeling of hero/villain clashes of the same way he and Silver Sentry had it.

"Oh No-no-no-no-no?" Control Freak shook his head in opposing to that idea, while strangely, his eyes were glowing? "You see, I was thinking more along the lines, like the graveyard." The guy exclaimed off in stating where Alan Matthew would be going was not to a jail house, far from it. "YOUR DEAD, pal!" The guy lashed out with boiling anger, as he was gonna really rip this guy to shreds…LITERALLY!

"Wooh-wooh-wooh, wooh?" Alan responded off a bit surprised to lean his head back in hearing this strange claim? "This isn't how you play the game of hero & villain conflict? Villains either get away or get taken to jail by the hero." The man explained out with a cautious look, that lkast bit Control Freak said kinda was going over the line? Heroes don't kill the bad guys, short, the villains try to due away the good guys, but even heroes know never to cross the line of no return, it's like a moral rule they follow?

"Well guess what, it's GAME OVER, for you!" Control Freak stated out with his gazing eyes, as he was letting the villain know this, Alan's game, was gonna be over…PERMANENTLY!

"Huuagh!" Alan gasped with wide eye shock, Control Freak really means to kill him, he doesn't show any restrainment? The man looks at the controls of his giant robot, hopping to find something? Which he did, sticky notes label….'In Case Of Emergency? Push This! Sign: Bob & Number 4!' with an arrow pointing to a red button. Somehow, the villain's two best friends musta known this could happen eventually, and set this up? "Huugh! Hah-haaah!" Alan was starting to breath in quickly in seeing he has to get out of here before he's killed by a lunatic hero? "Press!" The villain pressed the big red button, which activated a hidden escape suction tube beneath Alan's feet. "WAAaugh!" Alan yelped from just barely getting pulled down and out of the way of Control Freak's laser heat vision, but as he was sucked down, his cape got ripped off?

"POWwfruvhmm…." Then from out of a secret escape tube from the tail of Black Zuzoon, Alan Matthew was shot out?

"WAAAughh….." Alan screamed out from being shot out of his giant robot at a speeding rate?

"BOOMgrvuvhmm…" There was also an explosion that came from the building's bottom, somehow, something exploded, it might have been his Black Zuzoon that might have gotten destroyed by an angry Control Freak when his target escaped? But, we don't really know, we're only guessing here?

"Combat Bots!" Alan called out to his robot minions while yelping a bit from soaring off in mid-air?

"Boss?" Merc & Green responded in seeing their leader…go flying by, what just happened?
On the streets, a red car was in front of a bus, but stopped when seeing the villain falling towards them?

"WAAaugh…." Just as Alan screamed in seeing he was going to be road pizza when…. "Crusvhm…." From behind the villain, Alan was saved by Merc. and Green that lifted him up before the bus clashed against the red car? "Waugh-WAaaugh!" Alan yelped from when he was thrown in the air by the duo Combat Bots to avoid collision? "Gaugh…" Then finally after that daring escape, Alan was caught by his loyal Combat Bots; Merc & Green.

"Boss, what happened back there? What about your grand finale?" Merc asked off in not getting what happened to his boss back there during the fight?

"Look! Your cape is ruined, & so much work went into it?" Green spoke in noticing, the nice cape Bob & Number 4 made for Alan was ruined, how?

"It's a not to pretty picture, boys?" Alan shook his head in stating that at this moment, the entire situation was not a pretty sight to believe; a hero gone bad.

"Alan!" Spoke a voice, which Alan and his traveling the street Combat bots saw the Freelance Police driving up to them. "What happened?" Nigel spoke again in wanting to know what was happening that Alan was here now suddenly?

"Meega can guess…HIM!" Stitch interrupts to point that the gang got company, Control Freak was flying towards them?

"I'm calling a time out!" Alan waved up his hands to say that he wants to call for a time out break while he, his Combat Bots, even the Freelance Police, fly off for their lives.

"I don't think he'll listen?" Hoagie shouted out to Alan, Control Freak is now in an out of control state of rage.

"RARrrughhhAAaaaahh!" Control Freak was growling, held out his arms in wanting to grab the little villain…and murderize him!

"Time Out here?" Alan repeated the step while he and his group dodged a car, but so did Control Freak. "Time out! Time out Time out!" Alan yelped from his feet walking on the road from how he was carried?

"Hoagie, watch that tanker!" Abigail pointed from seeing that a tanker made a wrong turn and blocked the group about to enter a tunnel?

"WAAughh/GAAaugh!" Kuki and Wally screamed and hug each other, this won't be looking pretty?

"Daugh…." Control Freak smacked into the tanker which tipped it over while Alan & the Freelance Police dodged over it, but… "BOOMfrvuhmm….." The explosive tank exploded from the reaction force, blasting throughout the tunnel towards them?

"MAX SPEED!" Angelilo shouted to the others, they gotta get out of here, as Hoagie step on the gas?

"KURPOWwvhmm…." Soon out of the tunnel, the flames exploded off that sent out not only Alan and his Combat Bots, but knocked the Freelance Police far out of sight for the time being?

Merc and Green were tossed out from the force and let go of Alan by mistake? "Gaugh.,..guuugh..Gaaagh?" Alan yelped from hitting the ground to a sliding stop with his face on the ground? The villain pushes himself up a bit, wondering if he was okay, or for that, if the Freelance Polcie team made it out okay?

Soon, Control Freak walks out of the blazing flames and smoke cloud cover, many other by standers saw this and began to worry.

"Hugh!" Alan yelped in seeing the evil hero was here, he tapped into his watch to activate the com-link. "Exterminators! Code RED! As in short for 'REAL ENDANGER EMERGENCY' here!" Alan stated the call of what he needs now is some help to stop this hero gone wrong.

"Oh there's gonna be red, when I wipe you all over the…." Control Freak stated off, as he was about to rise up a fist to crush this villain when….

"SLISsvhmmm…." At a fast speed the rouge hero didn't see, something slashed Control Freak up into the air.

"WAAaaugh….." Control Freak wailed out in surprise, as he saw what was on the ground that slashed at him…Eviscerator.

"RARRrughh…." Then some roaring battle cries are heard that made Control Freak to turn to see something unexpected…. "POWWvhmfruvhmm…." Soon Shellshock and Reactor made a double fist attack that caught the evil hero off guard. "BOMMgruvhmm…." And the bad hero goes straight into a crumbling box factory, lucky thing nobody was inside.

"Time we show supey here how we roll?" Shellshock declared off in bringing out all of the bots weapons.

"Prepare to fire all weapons! Lock on and firing!" Reactor stated off in activating his reactor core.

Then before one could blink, a lot of shots from the Exterminators weapons were launched out. "Powvhm-Powvhm-Powvhm.../Bam-Bam-Bam-Boomgruvhmm…." So much blasting and destruction was happening in that area, many wondered, if somebody would have survived that before the bots cease firing?

"Whelp, them bouncers took care of him sir?" Merc spoke to his leader in seeing the danger seems to have been averted now.

"Oh, thank heavens, now I don't feel so bad about making my robots so strong to fight on pair with Silver Sentry anymore" Alan signed with much relief, maybe making his robots so strong against normal heroes wasn't a total bad thing after all.

"Well now, maybe while he's out cold, you can take away his powers?" Green stated an idea on what they can do next here, get the powers Control Freak has so he'll be less dangerous then.
Just as the three Exterminators were walking over to the destroyed factory to see that their opponent, was down for the count?

"RUUARRRrgh!" Suddenly, Control Freak rushes through the cloud and what happens next…."POWWfruvhmm…./BAShfruvhmm…." The rouge hero delivered an a straight pinch and upper cut moves against Shellshock and Reactor.

"WAAUUuaghhh…." Shellshock & Reactor made a shout out while being launched upwards into the air?

"Gripvhmm…." Then just as Eviscerator was about to slash at this guy, the rouge hero grabbed his blades. "Hsiishh…." The last Exterminator hissed at Control Freak, not even his strength or the others seem to left much damage to the evil hero?

"Go hiss somewhere else!" Control Freak snapped back at the giant bug for trying to hiss in his face. "Fruspvhmm….." Then with a strong spinning effect, the rouge hero tossed off the last Exterminator in the air.

"AUuughh….." Back with Shellshock and Reactor, they were heard screaming before they came towards the city's school house where they impacted on? "BASHfruvhmmm/BAngruvhmm…." That brought down a lot of the structure of the building to only half remain standing? "Hisisis…." And even the Eviscerator wasn't far before he too came bashing into the same place? "GOOONGnnnvhmm…." Then the last Exterminator hit the school bell from the school tower, that didn't feel good to hear? "Clsupfruvhmm…." And in a nut shell, the entire school was tumbled down to pieces? As for the students of young kids, they were cheering for the demolition of the school?

"Ugh, well they sure seem happy to be outta school?" Merc spoke off puzzled to seeing that this sorta thing ended up happening all of a sudden?

"Oh my, the bouncers just got…bounced?" Green spoke with worry, the Exterminators were bested, by an evil hero with the Silver Sentry's powers?

"Combat Bots, you two, initiate the failsafe!" Alan stated to issue an order to his Combat Bots to plan a failsafe plan, encase this plan got…out of hand?

"Roger!" Both Green and Merc responded to leave the scene pronto to perform the 'failsafe' operation.

But back with Alan, he turns to yelp away when Control Freak was now hovering over him.

"This ends now!" Control Freak brings up his fist, ready to finish the villain off when….

"CLUpfruvhmm…." From out of the behind, Merc and Green dropped in a chrome ball sphere that imprisoned the rouge hero, Control Freak and saving Alan from a deadly fate. Many of the citizens gasped in surprise, what was that about with whoever Alan Matthew was fighting?

"One bad omelet, scrambled boss!" Merc saluted to his leader in what they were able to do here.

"And good thing we kept it close by." Green nods in knowing they kept this prison dome for emergency use afterwards.

"Wahahahahaaa, excellent work boys!" Alan laughed with a wicked sense when he stood up on his on feet again. "Guess WHAT, (tease nickname)!" Alan teased to Control Freak from looking at the sphere ball that held his dangerous foe. "This little thing you're in, is made from Copper!" Alan leans his right elbow against the surface to brag out this info fact on what he's got the killer hero in. "You're powerless against it." Alan waved off his left hand in stating, this prison will keep Control Freak weaken. "And it's also the very same metal used to defeat…." Alan was about to go on with a prideful brag remarks in how this was the same thing that defeated his old foe, but...

"POWCRUvhmm…." But then in a sudden moment, Alan yelped wide eyes in noticing, Control Freak's right fist just broke through the wall seal?

"Silver Sentry?" Alan finished off his sentence while stepping away from this with horror written over his face?

"Ugh, that wasn't suppose to happen to the guy with the same powers, right boss?" Merc asked a bit skeptical in seeing that this wasn't suppose to happen by their knowledge?

"Oh dear me, this does not bold well for the situation at hand here?" Green yelped a bit in knowing this was not going to look good if the prisoner escapes?

"YOU…." Soon Control Freak was ripping the copper lair off to snarl at Alan? "Should STOP Comparing me to Silver Sentry?" The evil hero broke free of his prison while snapping at Alan, always trying to make this guy be on pair to a dead hero.

"Okay-okay, chill man, no need to have a cow?" Merc held up his arms to try and have Control Freak not go bonkers over being compared to a great hero of the same powers.

"Or break us down into tiny scraplits?" Green nervously stated the thought of what was going to happen to the bots, after this rouge gets Alan first.

Alan backs away from seeing this, not good, this was not good? What could have happened that this failsafe plan of his failed him, it was fool proof, FOOL PROOF!

Then Control Freak flew up, grabbed the copper dome and held it up high in the air.

"Boys, I think this calls for…a TECHNICAL RETREAT!" Alan exclaimed off from staring at the evil hero he's created, and was turning to run.

"I'm down with that!" Merc shouted out in agreeing to his leader on what to do from here.

"Wait for me, guys!" Green shouted back with him and Merc hovering after their fleeing leader.

"RUUARrugh!" Control Freak lash out, as he hurled the copper dome off to hit the target; Alan Matthew.

The copper dome was rolling on after Alan who yelped in seeing this, and he, Merc., and Green were running straight for the city's subway tunnel.

"Dive! Uvhmm…." Alan soon jumped to dive in, followed by Merc. and Green, as they went down the subway stairway tunnel.

"CLuspvhmm….." Soon the copper dome smashed through the subway entry, bashed through a building behind it, burring the entrance and letting the villain escape.

"You can run Alan Matthew! But you can't hid!" Control Freak snapped off to the villain that got away, he'll find the guy, and make him pay, oh so dearly.
But during the motion of leaving out the destruction, the blazing flames, the evil atmosphere, the town citizens were cheering for Control Freak's victory over Alan Matthew?

(You can fill in the lines from here of what happens next on Control Freak's take over?)

Meanwhile, below the city, Alan and his two Combat Bots; Merc & Green were fleeing through the tunnels. They have to get away from the killer hero, but what can save them from the one who holds Silver Sentry's powers? Just then, a familiar red cruiser space ship drove near the villain.

"Need a lift, pal?" Hoagie offered a ride for Alan to take, seeing he was in need, desperately.

"How you all get here?" Alan asked off surprised that the Freelance Police team are here, how they get into the city's subway system?

"Same way you did silly? The stairs!" Kuki smiled off to say that they came here by the stairs route, easy right.

"Well meega hate to say told you so, but….WEEGA TOLD YOU SO!" Stitch was slowly saying before he shouted out in telling this guy that the decision to make Control Freak have super powers was a bad idea.

"Alan, Control Freak is a loose cannon! We need to stop him!" Nigel stated with a serious motion, they got to stop the rouge hero from going out of anymore control then he is.

"But we saw what that guy did to that Black Zuzoon suit and the Exterminators? How can we stop him?" Wally stated out in recalling what they saw Control Freak did to both Alan's big bot; Black Zuzoon, even the guy's Exterminators couldn't stop the hero gone bad.

"Look, I can't discuss things, but I need as much help stopping Control Freak as you all do?" Alan stated off to ask that the gang save this talk for later, they have other issues to think about?

"Well why not go get more of your robots?" Angelilo asked if maybe they need Alan Matthew's robot and toy army minions?

"They can only hold that kinda evil hero off for so little, even with my Silver Sentry Protection 57?" Alan exclaimed off the offset of this situation, as there were possible chances that even his own forces won't hold Control Freak back?

"Excuse me?" Hoagie asked a bit puzzled to here Alan say he made some protection 57 something?

"The boss coated our armor so we could be more defensive, as we are offensive when battling the Silver Sentry." Merc. exclaimed off to say what his boss was saying about what the bots are coated with.

"Yes, after many failed plans against the good hero, Alan's been trying to improve our designs when facing powers of Silver Sentry level." Green nods in explaining how the villain here managed to make his robots be stronger then the last.

"That explains why weega never won those times or any other hero?" Stitch spoke off in seeing how they never defeated Alan's robots, only those near Silver Sentry level could ever bring any real harm to them?

"Perhaps you can coat that stuff on our weapons, giving us a fighting chance?" Nigel requested out that maybe Alan could let the heroes here use that to give them the edge against the loose Control Freak?

"Even you all couldn't stop me, what chance could you do against a POWERFUL being like that?" Alan exclaimed off to let the group here know that what they are asking is crazy if they think that'll save the day?

"Well why not go to get my sister to help ya out of this mess?" Abigail rolled her eyes to suggest to Alan that they get her big sister, Cree.

"That's right, maybe she has something about Silver Sentry's powers we missed?" Angelilo nods in getting the idea, maybe Cree can help them on their missing facts?

"But our fight?" Alan spoke with a narrow eye expression, after his break up with Cree knowing the truth, would going to her be okay even now?

"You wanna be alive against what you made, then we need to get my sister on the action while figuring out this whole thing?" Abigail remotely told Alan that if they wanna survive Control Freak, they need any and all the help they can get, including the KND's teenage foe.

"Oh, alright, move over please!" Alan signs to give in, as he steps into the red cruiser of the Freelance Police to sit in the back. Then the man looked to his Combat Bots with something to say. "You two, get the other Combat Bots & my Toy Minions to get the Exterminators out of the school rubble." The man issued this order out, he'll have a feeling that, they'll need much help in whatever comes there way.

"You got it boss man, we're on it the clock!" Merc saluted to his leader in hearing and willing to obey that command.

"And maybe we can try coating ourselves with that new Protection Number 58?" Green spoke with a positive thought about what they can do afterwards?

With that, both sides were going their separate ways writhe objective task. Merc and Green would get Alan's forces to get the Exterminators that were beaten back on line and try to do something to protect themselves from the threat of Control Freak. While The Freelance Polcie drive under the city's railroad system to by pass things with Alan in tow, destination; Cree's place. If anything, they need some inside fact help about how to defeat one who wields the powers of the Silver Sentry.

(Lines to be used when the gang meets Cree?)

"Maybe meega can get a nuclear missile to launch and take stupid-head out?" Stitch made a random idea thrown out into the discussion in how to stop Control Freak?

"Bad move, that total the city, and US along with it, Stitch!" Hoagie sternly told his partner that the idea had setbacks, BIG ONES!

"Then how's about we drop the moon base on the bloomin' creep? That worked against Grandfather when he almost ruled over the world?" Wally made another randomly suggestion on how to beat Control Freak, this one even stranger.

"If we did that, you know how much trouble we get with Kids Next Door Moon Base?" Nigel sternly snapped at the others for even thinking they use that idea to beat this enemy. "Moon Base Treehouse HQs are not easily substitutable as the last one? Number 363 would never let any of us hear the end of it, even as crazy as anything the Freelance Police here would think of?" The kid explained the very offset if they did something as that rash and stupid of that level.

"Which is as crazy as the next?" Kuki cheerfully stated off on the subject itself, much to anyone's confusion.

"Okay, we're getting off the track here?" Angelilo stated from seeing where this discussion was getting off towards?

"Right, Number 5 thinks we need a way, that ain't gonna blow us up and the city to bits?" Abigail stated in thinking the same thing, they wanna beat Control Freak, not level the city anymore then it is?

~

Okay Jus, there you go! Oh, and you know, I think I'll I got an excellent idea for the Control Freak taking Cree captive along with other girls in distress, and the scenes to make it so 'EVIL', that it's almost too good, in a way of speaking. Then a little liner for Alan to get a surprise when he needs to get out of jail, gets his own allied forces from the Freelance Police male team, I even got a plan for the presentation scene for the rescue. And when it looks like the hero gone bad might harm Cree before the villain-gone hero ends up appearing, I got a special 'surprise' scene that'll KILL, in the ratings. Till then, good luck with what I presented to you. Anything you wanna change or add in, just be my guest, pal.
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