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Matthewsmind; Being bad is good!
Topic Started: Sep 16 2012, 02:32 AM (1,440 Views)
V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G.
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Hi Jus, got some other scenes here for later scenes for your story. Check them out! I think you'll like how the story of the scenes go, very exciting.

PREVIEW #1

(After Cree fails to convince Control Freak to cease his actions, and is cornered by the van.)

"Alright, you made your choice, now here's ours!" Nigel snapped at the Control Freak with a stern face, as he, the KND, and even the Freelance Police group took out their weapons to aim against the rouge hero.

"Hahaha, you expect me to be afraid of a couple a kids and two Trogs?" Control Freak laughs at this scene, what can these wimpy heroes do to him?

"HEY!" Stitch and Angelilo snapped at the creep for calling them that name.

"No Control Freak…." Cree spoke with a serious face in no longer going to let this stand. "You should fear two New Trogians, and….." When Cree was speaking, the gang, even Control Freak saw something unfolding on the girl's body from the back was some suit of multi-purpose ninja armor? The unfolding armor that encased Cree seems, to be a nod to the armor that jaffa warriors, are known to waer from like a Scifi show called Stargate-sg1. "Us Kids Next Door Operatives!" Cree spoke with a determine attitude, and lifted her right wrist that sported off a laser.

"WHa….!" Control Freak, in a word of his name, FREAKED out, that Cree suddenly changed into some cool looking armored ninja teen? "You just…where did you get….dugh, THAT Never happened in the original film?" Control Freak was so baffled and couldn't bleeive this, this part wasn't from the original Megamind film?

"Don't you know, Fanmake stories tend to get away with things not seen in the originals, such as….change of EVENTS!" Cree remotely remarked off to the ex-hero that in this case, her being a bad girl of the KND, had it's perks to have some surprises nobody expect to find. "PRsuvhmm…." Then in quicker then a flash, she fired off her laser to hit the former camera guy that's turned evil.

"GAAaaugh….MY EYES?" Control Freak yelped out loud to hold his eyes, Cree has gone and blinded him…temporally?

"BLAST HIM TEAM!" Nigel shouted to everyone to fire with everything they got.

And you can imagine how many weapons of KND items were brought out, and besides Stitch's extra arms and Angelilio's antenna airlocks wielding blasters, Cree's armor brought out a load of hidden arsenal weaponry. "Bang-Bang-Boom-Boom/THrusvhm-PRsuvhm/Brizizivhmm…." And lets say, that was a lot of blasting and explosive work that was covering the villain were he stood? Once the group ceased fire, they were pondering…did that beat their foe?

"Think that's the end of bad guy, Hoagie?" Stitch asked his partner if they managed to defeat Control Freak by just this action?

"Stitch, in this line of work, the villain's don't go down except by their own hero of justice?" Hoagie spoke in explaining to his partner that things don't always work out like that way.

"But Silver Sentry beat Alan, and we're good guys that beat a bloomin' crook like Control Freak?" Wally stated out that while they couldn't win against a super villain like Alan Matthew, the Control Freak was at first, a not so threatening villain?

"Still, best to see when the smoke clears to be sure? He might be…" Nigel rubbed his chin in pondering the thought that they best see the results, to be safe, however….

"Still standing?" The voice of Control Freak was heard behind the smoke cloud that surprised everyone here.

"Gripvhm…." Then a hand reached out to grab Stitch who was closest without the koala guarding in time? "Gaaugh….meega see this failed?" Sttich gagged out from his choking state, as the gang see the Control Freak, still standing and unharmed.

"Time for a little ball game?" Control Freak proclaimed out with a sly smile in now squashing Stitch's body into a ball form, and was rubbing the koala against his suit…creating a charge? "And I got a perfect game…static electricity…plus ball shape koala, and pin line kids equal one thing!" The villain exclaimed out in having something new to try, he's gonna first strike down the KND & Freelance Polcie..with their own pal. "You're out of here!" Control Freak roared out loud before twirling the ball form Sttich back like a pitcher and...
"Frisvhmm…" From a mighty throw after first jumping backwards to make this be more drama. "YEEAAaahhh…." Stitch was screaming out with panic, as he was heading for his pals by the van.

"Everyone, dodge before…" Nigel almost tried to warn the group to get away, but…

"BOomfruvhmm…." To little, to late, as the charged Stitch ball impacted the sight and covered the area with an explosive light flash along with steaming smoke. "Frisvhmm…." Then coming out of the smoke cloud, was a shooting off Hoagie, Stitch, Wally and Nigel?

"Oh man, he just knocked us into the air?" Wally yelped out in noticing, they are soaring in the air…without a parachute or jet packs?

"And we left Cree & the girls alone with a majorly crazed super-power villain?" Hoagie exclaimed out in fear, the boys are leaving the girls behind with a lunatic foe.

"Guess there is only one thing to do that fits this scene?" Stitch spoke off in sensing he knows whats to come next here.

"Stitch, this is no time to drift off the subject?" Nigel protest out with a serious manner that they are still being thrown out, and Stitch wants to try something when they are still having critical situations that need their attention.

"WEEGA ARE BLASTING OFF AGAAAAAAIN!" Stitch shouted out while he and the rest are going farther in the air until they are disappeared from sight?

"STIIIITCH!" The boys shouted out to their friend in such a loud distance?

"WHAAAAAAT?" Stitch's voice was heard shouting, just as we see a twinkle light in the sky.

Back on the ground, the dust cloud cleared, as we see Kuki and Angelilo on the floor, while Cree leaned herself on her van and Abigail tried to stand up near her sister?

"Oh man, that meany sent our guys up to the stars?" Kuki groans from rubbing the aching headache she has from looking up, their pals were gone, like a shooting star?

"I doubt that's possible, but for their landing, might be painful?" Angelilo exclaimed off from knowing that the boys will not leave the planet, they'll come back down again, just the question of 'how' they land in a spot, is the question?

"But Control Freak, where is….?" Abigail was about to state in not seeing much pass this dust of smoke, the ex-hero has gotten be somewhere, but where?

"Surprise?" Control Freak's voice is heard off from behind the seen that no one saw? "PRsuvhmm…." Then from two smoking clouds, rushed down to where two of the four girls were at…with those on the ground?

"OOOuch!" Kuki and Angelilo yelped in pain of the ex-hero stepping on their backs with his boots.

"Girls? WAaah?" Abigail was amost about to act, but something snatched her up

"Abby..gauge…" Cree was almost about to act, but something cut her off that a hand gripped her shoulder to the van?

The picture is seen clear when the dust vanished, Control Freak had pressured his feet under Kuki and Angelilo, held Abby in his left hand up in the air by her shirt, and kept Cree pressed against her van. The kids weapons were lost, and by the time Cree would have brought out her weapons, the Ex-hero used his laser vision to blast them off, including the damage of the girl's helmet that broke off to reveal Cree's face while she still dune her Battle Ready Armor suit.

"Ohhh, so sorry, but like all stories, what happens in original films, gets done, despite the change in Fanmakes!" Control Freak slowly toyed with the beaten girls, as far as anyone knows, the outcomes for Fanmakes, will always be the same, even now.

"Ugh…you let my sister & us go now, you big block-headed TV freak!" Abby struggled to pull herself free while threatening the villain, despite the situation she herself is in.

"Oh so scary, maybe I should just end you brats and take Cree afterwards?" Control Freak pretended to act all scared, and smirked with a wicked expression to just end the bratty kids here now.

"What! You can't do that?" Cree responded off shock, Control Freak wouldn't actually try to kill these kids, including her sister?

"Why not, you wanted to destroy your sister, maybe I should save you the trouble?" Control Freak looked to Cree in recalling how the teen girl tried to due in her own sister and her pals. "How's about laser vision to remind you all of my burning anger?" The guy had his eyes glowing and was preparing to use them….to burn right through his foes.

"You expect us to think you kill us off?" Abigail remarked off at the villain, not being scared one bit of this guy.

"Wanna try it?" Control Freak looked to Abigail in his hand, eyes looking ready to launch the laser vision, but….

"No please! It's me you want, not them?" Cree pleaded out to the crazy super power villain to not harm Abigail or her friends, but to take the teenager instead.

"Hugh…." Kuki and Angelilo responded very puzzled that a KND teenage foe operative, wanted to save them?

"Cree…?" Abigail responded with much confusion, her sister sounded very…caring & protective just now?

The ex-hero heard such a plea, and thought it over with much vile and wicked expressions with a sly smile. "Very touching, but I got a better idea? Just in case Alan Matthew or your other friends get wise to face me?" Control Freak stated out in thinking that, if anything, he still has to deal with the guy that ruined his chances with Cree, Alan Matthew, not to mention, the KND of Sector V & Freelance Police team that are far away. "I've seen villains do it all the time? Time for you all to play…the damsel in distress?" The newly evil Ex-hero proclaimed how he'll get the villain, Alan Matthew, but using…bait, and who better then the expert of kidnapped villain plots then; Cree Lincoln.

"Oh man, sis, this guy's up to something nasty? I got that bad feeling about it?" Abigail signs in feeling that what Control Freak had plans for them, were not gonna be good ones.

"I know, and for once….I'm actually afraid of this kidnapping?" Cree responds with much worry, it's one thing if Alan Matthew kidnapped her and the girls, he's predicable and in a way, not so much scary to be his hostage? But with Control Freak being the new villain, and having Silver Sentry's powers, and a angry attitude to cross the line, now maybe the time to panic.

As quick as a flash, Control Freak kicked up Angelilo and Kuki, thrown Abigail up, and while keeping a grip on Cree's wrist, used his super speed, to snatch the pink koala's antennas' to use as rope to tie the three girls together. Then the vile ex-hero tosses the four girls in the van, picks it up and flies off with a wicked motion on his face saying….vengeance all over. This will take a miracle for anyone to stop this new villain now…but the question remains…where can the city find a new hero to stop the new and even more dangerous villain?
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(Scene of Alan getting out of jail with Bob and Number 4's help)
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(Note: Have Alan say that the only friends he now has besides his robotic minions, are just the Freelance Police & Kids Next Door? Who even right now, are out there while he's stuck here, moping?)

Suddenly without warning, and much more to Alan's confusion, his cell door was opening up? And there, standing outside with his noble expression, warden Feral looked to the prisoned villain.

"Apology accept." Feral responded to hearing Alan's apology while going for a watch on his left wrist hand that seemed familiar? Then from a simple twist, the warden glowed and standing in place was Number 4 with Bob in his bowl on the cat's shoulder. The two smiled at Alan with joy, as they used their friend's disguise watch to hid their appearance.

"Oh Bob? Number 4?" Alan smiles with much relief and happy feelings to se his two closest friends have return to him, even after their fight. "You fantastic fish & cat, you both are." The sappy villain exclaimed from seeing how sly his two closest friends are, trying to deceive him like this.

"What are we waiting for?" Bob stated out in seeing they don't have to sit here any longer now. "We better get going? Right Number 4?" Bob pointed behind their backs in stating it's time to go, even asked for a response from Number 4 here.

"Meow..wreath..rrRRrii-Right, pals…." Number 4 suddenly without warning, replied forth his first REAL words besides the sound of a cat.

"Number 4! You..you can speak?" Alan spoke off surprised, his friend can talk, how?

"Well you did promise him a speaker collar, and there it is." Bob stated from where Number 4 revealed on his neck, a shiny new collar of silver coloring and light-blue flashy button design. "Now he can speak more then 'meows' now." Bob stated out that with this new collar, even Number 4 of their group can talk like they do.

"And I missed Alan, we both did." Number 4 responded a sentence next, stating how he and Bob had missed their leader and friend very much.

Now the cell bars moved away, allowing Alan, Bob and the now talking Number 4, to leave out.

"Mwuhahahaaaah, you got me?" Alan laughed off while pretending to throw a few punches to Number 4's left arm.

"Whohohohoooh!" Bob also let off a laugh to join in on this jolly feeling right now.

Now the trio laughed off more heart-filled, as Number 4 placed his left arm over Alan with the other held Bob. They went down the right side of the hallway, but as they were laughing out on their leaving, the real warden Feral, was seen left behind…tied up?

"Good luck, fellas!" Feral responded off to Alan's group with a smile, even though he's been hard on Alan Matthew all this time….he's actually seeing something from the inmate not seen offend, a reflection from his mistakes, to see the future; a none-evil ife even.

"We're gonna die!" Alan Matthew proclaimed out with a heart emotion manner in what will happen to the group here when they leave to stop the Ex-hero. "Gahaahahahaaa!" Even with his own laughter, it's clear to see what Alan meant, even warden Feral nods a bit in thinking, that much might be true?

"WAaaahahahah…." Bob was heard laughing off in joining his friend in their jolly feeling, but that was soon cut short from realizing something?

"Wait! What?" Number 4 asked off a bit puzzled in hearing Alan say they would die, did he mean about when they go to save the city from Control Freak?

Soon the scene shows the trio exiting the jail house, and a lot was being discussed about what to do with Control Freak? With that guy having the Silver Sentry's powers, and recalling how Alan never could win as a villain against the hero, the way to win won't be from a switch of roles? Control Freak would be too powerful for Alan Matthew, even with his latest advanced tech, so brute force might not be the key…but maybe brains can? Yes, perhaps with the right planning, there could be a way to out smart Control Freak, save the city and the kidnapped Cree & the other girls? They just need something to pull it off without a hitch, make it seem believable, but it's not like an answer will fall from the sky?

"WAAAughh…." From above, the trio of villain and close minion friends heard a cry, and above saw the down casting of Stitch, Hoagie, Nigel and Wally heading for them?

"Number 4! Grab them!" Alan issued out to his trusted cat with the robotic suit to save their friends from hitting the ground.

"I gotcha! I gotcha!" Number 4 shouted, as he extended his arms to catch the falling boys. "POwvhm-Powvhmm…." Of course, he missed the catches and the four boys impacted into the ground? "Ooooh, I don't gotcha?" The cat sheepishly spoke in seeing he missed, that was rather embarrassing?

"I think we forgot to work on fixing that extension arm when Alan messed with it?" Bob spoke from a puzzling thought in forgetting to fix that one part of the arms in Number 4's suit?

"Right, I'll work that out later?" Alan spoke in assuring Bob he get to work on fixing whatever he did to Number 4's suit later on. "Guys, how you end up like this?" Alan asked in wanting to know, what happened that the Freelance Police team fell right outside the jail house?

"Oh you know, we just dropped in, unannounced?" Stitch lifted his head out of the ground to happily exclaim a subject on how they came by in such a manner.

"Stitch, quit stealing my bad joke lines!" Hoagie lifted himself out of the ground to snap at his partner for once again, trying to be the funny man instead of him. "Well, I guess you guys are back together again, hugh?" The fat boy stated in seeing Number 4 and Bob were with Alan, which meant they are friends again.

"Boy, did that Control Freak hit us with something alright?" Wally groans a bit to sit up and rub his head, that ex-hero they faced really was not a lightweight fighter brute?

"Control Freak did this to you?" Alan asked in shock, so this was why Control Freak wanted the him and the others, cause he knew they would try to stop the ex-hero again.

"Yes, and I dare say, we left our friends behind to deal with them?" Nigel stated off with a serious motion of the fact of what happened while dusting himself off. "Quickly! Tell us what happened?" The kid with the shades asked in wanting to be brief up on what's happened while he and the others were 'thrown' across in the skies before dropping back to the earth?

"Well do you want the news that Control Freak is still on the loose, or that he's holding Cree and your girls captive as hostage?" Bob exclaim doff the choices the others would wanna hear, both cases are bad news no matter how one looks at it?

"WHAH!" The boys responded instantly to this piece of news with concerning fears. Kuki, Abigail, Angelilo, even Cree were endanger?

"He's got Abby!" Hoagie asked off in shock to believe the ex-hero's got his girl.

"He's taken my boogji-boo!" Stitch snarled off in rage, that Control Freak has SOMEW nerve.

"The guy took Kuki too!" Wally stated off with an angry demand in not liking what he's heard.

"And he's taken Cree as well, typical villains?" Nigel stated with a serious expression, it figures the ex-hero would try to hold hostages, that's so like a villain. "No offense?" Nigel held up his hands to not mean any bad feelings towards Alan Matthew, who is also a villain, sorta speak?

"None taken?" Alan nods back in letting Nigel know that the statement on that comment meant no harm done to him, as he completely understands it.

"Do you have any leads to where they are?" Nigel asked in hoping Alan or his friends know where Control Freak is holding his hostages?

"They're at the place where Cree dumped Control Freak, we can direct you there." Number 4 spoke off that answer in letting the kids and koala know of the destination to find the others.
Suddenly, it was there the gang got a sudden realization that strike them; Number 4, the cat on Alan's side, spoke!

"AAAAAAH! EVIL SPIRIT POSSESSING CAT!" Stitch screeched out in horror and terror, the cat must be taken control of by an evil spirit?

"No, that's just Number 4's new collar, he can speak now." Bob spoke in assuring the rest that Number 4 can just speak from a device around his neck, which the latter showed the group to understand better.

"Oh, never mind what meega said then?" Stitch responded off with a stump face, as he now sees things are alright now.

"So then, what's the plan to save Kuki and the others?" Wally asked the gang here about how to save the girls fro that super-powered Rouge-hero; Control Freak.

"Wally's right, we couldn't even bring the hurt on that ex-hero, he's as strong as Silver Sentry?" Hoagie shrug off in feeling that without the right attack, they can't even be comparing themselves to stop someone who's that strong a new villain?

"Your design protection weren't enough Alan, we need something to deal more that's harmful." Nigel spoke to Alan, while they made their weapons stronger to fight a foe like Control Freak all super powered, but it looks like they were still not powerful enough?

"How's about the satellite laser he used on Silver Sentry?" Stitch suggest they use the laser satellite in space that Alan used to blow up the observatory that was used in the act to finish off the Silver Sentry?

"Stitch, the guy didn't die from that, we don't even know if that would work or do any harm at all?" Hoagie sternly explain to his partner that the laser satellite was a bad idea, as they have no idea if that plan would harm the new foe or just cause more destruction in it's wake?

"Not to mention, besides the uploading could be slow, we end up blowing up a city block, like we did at the observatory?" Bob pointed out that using such a powerful weapon in space without giving it more thought would just be a waste of time, and time is something they need a lot of.

"Aww, we can still try, right?" Wally groans to state off that they could maybe still try and see if something like that would work?

"No, listen to me, to defeat Control Freak, we've tried to discuss a way to change the tactic steps of approach." Alan spoke in wanting these kids and their koala alien pal to hear the ex-type villain out in how they can stop the rouge hero. "I've always used my brain over Silver Sentry's strength, but even my old foe had brains to know how to handle him." The man explained forth that from many of his battles (and defeats), the Silver Sentry used his strength, will of heart, and mind.

"So Alan here thinks that with Control Freak only being more of just brute force and not much on brains, we can beat him." Number 4 stated the plan out in how they can win, brains trumpeting over brawn.

"That plan's not bad at all?" Nigel rubbed his chin in hearing this plan out, and by the sounds of it, there was plenty that was right about Control Freak. "In fact, that could very much help us stop Control Freak?" Nigel declared out with a smile, the plan may very well be the answer they were seeking.

"Yes, precisely what I believe!" Alan nods in agreement with Nigel in seeing the plot of his idea. "Bob, call in the Combat Bots, the rest of the Toy Minions, and the Exterminators to meet us back at our Hideout!" Alan commanded out to his best pals to get things set for the next stage to commence. "We're about to perform….Code: Saving The Day!" The man proclaimed out the next code name phase of what they are going to call this operation, and it truly does fit the plot.

"Right away, sir!" Bob nods in hearing his leader's command, and will follow it. "Number 4." The guy turned to his cat friend to do that honor for them.

"Got it!" Number 4 nods before pressing some buttons on his other wrist for a communicator to start sending out a signal to their HQ.

With things set in motion, the gathered forces of evil, along with the forces of the males of the KND & Freelance Police going with this. As luck had it, when the Freelance Police wondered where the get a ride, their red space cruiser fell from the sky. Most of the group wondered how that happened, which Stitch replied that he asked, and received. Though in Bob and Number 4's mind, thought Control Freak was throwing stuff cause he was still letting off steam and trying to cause destruction, etc. But never the less, this was perfect, they got in the Freelance Police ride, and drove straight to Alan's hideout without being spotted by Control Freak. Once they made it to Alan's HQ spot, many of villain's Combat Bots, Toy Minions, even his back online Exterminators were their to greet their creator's return. Now the Freelance Police team smiled in seeing that they have a chance, with an army of 10, no 100,000 Combat Bots all awaiting, added the Toy Minions and the powerful Exterminators, they got a chance, and now it's time to get things for Alan's new plan…into motion.

(You can take over from here if there are any lines you want the group to do, or if someone made a suggestion to you?)

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Well how did you like this, I managed to get two scenes up for some after works to fill in the blanks that were not explained from the original movie.

~Plus: The line "Blasting Off Again!" was a line used by Team Rocket from the Pokemon TV series from Season 1 to 13, then by Season 14, they became more serious professional agents & not seen like laugh offs from the past. It's also to think back to those old times in how much these villains were seen a lot for their goofy acts, before a new change came to make things 'interesting' in the new Season & so forth.

Also, the nuclear missile strike is from when Stitch recalls how he used the Presidential power to launch and blow up a country, mountain, even a giant robot from Season One of Hoagie & Stitch.

And the idea of dropping a Moon Base came from Operation: Zero, from Kids Next Door Movie Special, which stared the super-adult villain; Grandfather.

Now, I'll probably try to get some presentation scene of when Alan & the Freelance Police team show up from an image of the guy's head from many (explained) numbers of robot minions. And then, I'll present a scene so 'surprising' that almost happens before the dehydrated Alan & Freelance Police arrive on the scene to really save the day. You'll go crazy for the last part (and hint-hint; a little surprise for afterwards, but I won't say more, that would ruin it.) Till then, you can trust me, I never failed you yet, and I'm hoping to get the scenes I wanna give my thoughts quickly before I go somewhere this Saturday & be out for about a week. So, good luck here Jus., the story here is going to reach an epic-mark that'll be perfect for a Hoagie & Stitch CROSSOVER, till then, I'll try to work out the last two scenes...good luck now & happy trails to you on what happens next...!
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Chapter 8: From Hero to Villain

At this time, Alan Matthews, pushes open a door to his secret hide-away. It's all dark, gloomy, missing a bit of life, kinda like what the villain is feeling. After what he experienced his date with Cree gone to shambles, Alan was not too pleased about the results of the relationship. And along with him, the Freelance Police decided to tag along to see how this guy is taking it, which was easy to see how. Cree's act of being upset of the matter really didn't set in well with the KND or Freelance Police members that fought the bad girl, it was a side unseen to them until recently.

"Okay Bob, Number 4." Alan called out with a mop expression on his face to those he knows. "You both were right." The villain admits his faults of what happened between him and his two close friends. "I was…Less right…" Alan looked to the floor to admit off with a guilt written expression about saying who was right from his and his two pals in their argument.

"That's it buddy, let it all out." Hoagie nods in letting Alan know that by admitting his wrongs, he'll feel a bit more better.

"You'll feel better when you admit your mistakes." Stitch also nods in agreement, keeping that feeling lock up won't help nobody.

"Listen, we should just stick to what we're good at." Alan called out into the hallway of the evil lair, trying to say that the villain's group should stick with the task that they do best. "Being bad." He hung his head low in feeling that this was a case, that Alan, Bob, and Number 4 are only good when they are being the bad guys.

"Well, you could use the term of 'bad', as in the new sense of 'good' that's used as the new sense of the word." Kuki tried to think of a more positive outlook on the villain's use of being bad, as in being the old sense of the meaning.

"Kuki, I REALLY don't think this guy wants to hear about that." Wally moans off to say that the girl is not actually being very positive on this outlook for Alan.

"Bob? Number 4?" Alan called out to Bob and Number 4's name, looking around for any signs of his close friends.

It was here, that Alan felt a bit more sadden to know, his closest henchmen are really gone and there is no one else around. The villain looks up ahead, seeing the messy spot of written papers with plans, one that had a '?' mark on a red paper center. Then a picture of Alan Matthews in a giant robot, duking a right hooker upper cut shot against a black figure man with a '?' on the body, with the words 'Good VS. Evil', expressing the villain against an unknown hero.

It was at this time Alan's eyes were focusing on the facts in front of him. He held a gloom mood of his expression, realizing that he himself was drifting off to become something that he is not. Even the Freelance Police team see that the guy was showing a stern face of seriousness, this could only mean one thing; it's time that Alan Matthews goes on being the bad guy. Then Alan puts his fingers together to make a whistle noise, as if making a calling sound to something.

"Waugh, you got a dog here?" Stitch asked off in not seeing any signs of a dog nearby or if Alan even got one.

"No Stitch, he's calling…them!" Hoagie exclaimed off from pointing out what he and the others see who the villain just called forth.

Without any delay, all of Alan Matthews's minions, Combat Bots, even the Exterminators came out to greet their leader without question.

"Are we glad you're okay, boss." Merc spoke off first in seeing his leader was back with them.

"We were worried." Green spoke with much concerns and for good reasons why.

"Especially after we saw by security footage of what happened to your date." Shellshock spoke off in letting the evil villain and his pals know that the others that stayed here saw everything that happened.

"I've been there, I lost a girl when I stuck with helping kids learn while being a school teacher." Reactor nods with a gloom expression, understanding the lost of the girl one likes.

"You were a school teacher?" Abigail asked off in hearing one of the bigger bots say this out. "Now I'm curious about what jobs you Exterminators might've had." The KND girl responded off with curiosity in what other task Reactor, Shellshock and Eviscerator had before Alan got these guys on his side?

"Shellshock was said to be some war hero, but Eviscerator, that…might be a hard one." Angelilo spoke off a Fourth Wall sense in recalling a bit about these Exterminators when Alan Matthews built them.

"Hisisiss…" Eviscerator hissed a bit under the response about what job life he had, was his own business.

"Alright. Time to remember the task at hand. You there, RoboSnail!" Alan suddenly pointed at the minion before him with a serious expression, wanting this guy's attention.

"Hugh?" The other bots and minions were puzzled, before Shellshock back patted the RoboSnail forward. "Uagh…" The snail toy pointed at himself with a 'me' expression in wondering if his boss wanted him.

"Yes you, who else here is named RoboSnail?" Alan exclaimed off to state that he wanted this minion.

The Freelance Police watched as RoboSnail came before Alan Matthews, but the gang can notice that the villain misses Bob and Number 4 who were like the guy's second in command of ordering the troops.

"Bring out…." Alan slowly was beginning to say with a blank face in trying to say in what he wants before… "The THE NIGHTMARE MOON!" The villain proclaimed out with a dramatic expression and grip his left hand up.

"Yes sir!" The Minions and Combat Bots along with the three Exterminators responded off before rushing off to perform their duty. RoboSnail had a key as he was approaching a room with a glowing blue aura and unlocked a closet door as Mr. Fiend and Boppo helped him open the doors. Soon Alan approached the center step stool, arms opened as his forces aline themselves, including the Freelance Police group to see what was coming next for the guy. As things go dark before what was coming up next was…a change of style!

Alan nods as he puts on some sort of dark outfit with armor on it with wicked looking stars on it, an armor on his own had and a cape that is dark like the night. This is definitely the Nightmare Moon all right.

Now standing before the toy and robot minions, was their master, their leader, their creator in his grand glory of an appearance…EVER! Four of the minions AKA Goober, Dust Bunny, Ickypus and Stinger held the villain's cape from the bottom edges to help since it was a really long cape.

"Oh yeah, that looks nice." Abigail said with a nod.

"Ih, sounds like you're going to be kicking butt in style...or was it our butts?" Stitch ask in concern.

"Most likely he wants Control Freak to kick hiss, little buddy." Hoagie comments to his partner with a shrug.

"Does it matter?'

Wall glances at the outfit while commentating, "Uuuh you don't have to be so extreme."

"Oh, I don't, I WANT to be extreme. Time to show this town whose BOSS!" Alan exclaims in determination. "Listen careful! While the other minions stay behind, a few Combat Bots & his Exterminators, along with the Freelance Police, can come along to watch the show….and in case something should go wrong. They will help the hero fight me as long as they go down."

Then without another moment, a large curtain was dropped and was soon revealed what was underneath it. Big, metallic, and almost looking really mean?

"Okay Control Freak!" Alan waved up his arms to proclaim out loud the name of his new super hero foe. "It's TIME to go DOWN…In STYLE!" The villain proclaimed out loud for the heavens to hear as he rants about fighting his new enemy in a style all heroes and villains go forward with. "Wah-hah-hah-hah-hah…" As Alan laughed off, the screen zooms away to see the villain, his toy and robot minions along with the Freelance Police, watch this guy send out a glow charge from his gloves' electronic device. The electric feedback brings to life, an large 80 foot tall humanoid lion with sharp talons off the wrist, a built in core chamber, jet packs off it's back where a loose tail hung off from, and other functions. This creation was called Land Zuzoon, or just Black Zuzoon from the gray, black and wicked green lightning bolt designs along with some gangster spike mix. "Wha-hahahahAAaahhh!" As Alan laughed in a maniacal sense, his own giant was moving it's body to perform the same movement as it's controller, almost like it was laughing on it's own, but with a roaring sense.

"Oh YEAH! That looks SOOO COOL!" Stitch grinned wide in looking at this, that newest bot Alan Matthews made looks like it can rock this joint!

"Let's hope things don't go bad for us." Abigail sighed in hoping from watching Alan choose this life, that things can go a bit back to normal…or does she really want that for her, for this villain, and most of all; her sister, Cree?

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Soon the scene changes, where some rocking background music is heard playing 'Back In Black' by Brian Johnson for all to hear. At this moment, the police cars were zooming away from the scene on the road,like they were fleeing in terror And the Freelance Police were driving by with their pals in their red space cruiser.

"Attention all citizen! Get away before Godzilla eats you!" Stitch was using his megaphone to give out a warning to many of the citizens to get away from here.

"Wrong warning, Stitch." Hoagie corrected what his partner was doing, he was giving the wrong alert sign of notice.

"Stompvhmm…" SWuddenly, a large left foot broke into the road street, breaking it from the stomping weight. Many of the citizens were panicking and step out of the way. In a restaurant, many customers saw more citizens running away in blinding terror of the giant feet stomping onwards.

Soon Merc and Green are seen hovering around with some floating camera bots as they brought forth the live broadcast.

"Introducing Black Zuzoon!" Merc spoke off to announce to the crowd, the giant bot by name.

"Piloted by Alan Matthews!" Green stated out in who was controlling the giant robotic suit in question.

Back In Black

"WAh-hahahahaaaah!" Alan Matthews's laugher was heard from the moving Black Zunoon that waved it's arms up in sounding pleased.

I Hit The Sack

"WOHHh-hahahaaaaaah!" Alan continues the maniacal laughter, even pounding his giant bot's chest like he was a gorilla.

I've Been Too Long I'm Glad To Be Back

"Wohwoh-hahahaaaahhh!" Soon Black Zuzoon leaps into the air, and ignites it's thrusters on it's back to take flight while Alan continues to laugh wickedly.

Yes, I'm Let Loose

"POWWVHMM…" The thrusters boosted the launched and Black Zuzoon went up over near the city hall place.

From The Noose

Many watchers saw this, wondering what was happening though the Freelance Police team and the joined Combat Bots; Merc & Green knew otherwise. Soon Black Zuzoon landed right on the top of the city hall building, it's left hand gripping the pole part.

That's Kept Me Hanging About

"I hear there's a new hero after the last batch was dealt with." Alan swung his giant robot around the building like swinging the arm around the pole from exclaiming the news of someone arrived in town sounding quite redounded by the tone of learning this.

I've Been Looking At The Sky
Cause' It's Gettin' Me High


"Someone, who dares to challenge my EVIL!" Alan tapped his right hand to his chest to smirk off in boasting of himself in learning some newbie hero wants to fight him after what happened to the others he's dealt with.

Forget The Hearse 'cause I Never Die

"Where is the one they call…Control Freak?" Alan pointed his right hand's index finger to demand this answer as he flex his arms up in wanting to meet his new foe.

I Got Nine Lives
Cat's Eyes


"Wah-Hahahaaaaah!" Soon from Alan's evil laughter, he swing Black Zuzoon around the building pole without a care as some nearby helicopter was observing this act.

Usin' Every One Of Them And Running Wild

"Poff-Poff-Poffvhmm…" Then from the right wrist, Alan's bot unveiled a gatling gun inside the palm to shoot a few shots. "Challenge me…" Alan boasted out from his bot twirling from his shot off display. "Bam-bam-bam-bam-bam…." The villain pulled off a nice little firework display to spin over to the other side now. "If you dare!" Alan remarked off to the new hero if he dares to challenge the villain that has been running this city.

Many of the spectators were watching this with much puzzling concerns, what was gonna happen now.

Then in a roaring engine noise, Alan had his Black Zuzoon leap up high in the air, did a spinning ball form towards the ground. "Cluspfruvhmm…" The giant bot smack its feet to the ground,and soon stood up for all to see.

Cause' I'm Back

Then from out of the shoulders, appeared buzz-saw blades, buzzing off while Alan made himself look totally pumped and raring to go. The screen showed off that move three more times to show off that special effect.

Back In Black

Now there was a large amount of folks nearby, all seeing that there was gonna be a big show down with Alan Matthews going up against this new hero, Control Freak.

Of a Cadillac

The Freelance Police, their pals, even Merc & Green were on standby to see how this all would go down.

Number one with a bullet, I’m a power pack…

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It was around the moment, the background music cease at this time. Time passed with the sun being about noon hour and the number of people were decreasing. Many of the others were leaving, the Freelance Police team and the Combat Bots duo wondered what was going on. Even Alan lost his focus to keep a cool fighter's pose. It was also around the time, another song was being played at this passing of the hour.

I see you shining through...

The next scene shows Black Zuzoon lying it's feet out over the water by city hall. Alan Matthews was just sitting around, him and those with him were still waiting around as the giant bot dip it's feet in the river.

"Wow...that sounded like...a cool fight so far." Wally said with a yawn, getting bored.

"Odd, that's not how I remember it." Kuki said puzzled. So far, Control Freak didn't show up to fight Alan at all, what's with that?

"Maybe he's late?" Angelilo suggests to her friends with a shrug.

"I wonder if he's going to show up at all." Hoagie remarks with a sigh. Stitch fiddles with his thumbs, all this waiting is boring!

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Now by near sunset, the short vers of that song ended, and we see that Alan Matthews is having Black Zuzoon actually playing with a red car, which was not a toy either.

"Oh no, we're gonna crash!" Alan Matthew spoke off in pretend voice in lifting the red car up and splashes it into the river. "Waaahhaaahhh!" Then he has his giant body wave out it's hands in pretend panic over the accident that happened. The car begins to sink deeper into the water as it's a wonder how the villain took that off from the owner.

"Yo Green, how long's it been?" Merc looked to his pal from them sitting on a pavement, wondering what the time was.

"Um, an entire half day." Green spoke off in knowing that pretty much, a near entire day has gone by.

"Aw man, the boss wanted this to be remembered too." Merc sighs in disbelief, how could this have even happened to the bad guys?

"Gee, wonder what caused the delay?" Green spoke with some thought, what was so important that the new hero wasn't here?

Even the Freelance Police and their team of pals were wondering, what was taking Control Freak so long to get here.

"Shouldn't that hero arrived by now?" Nigel ask with a deep frown. "Or if he's really a hero at all?"

"Or maybe he didn't bother to show up!" Stitch groans in annoyance. "Stitch hates being kept waiting!"

"Yeeeah, I'm starting to think that I was right, that maybe giving that lazy jerk the Silver Sentry powers was really a terrible idea." Abigail fumes a bit.

"I agree with you." Kuki said with an annoyed sigh. "Why is he keeping us waiting like this? The Silver Sentry would never do that when he was alive."

"Uaagh…" But then Black Zuzoon dropped it's arms down, like it's pilot lost all feeling or caring from when we heard Alan sigh. "This is embarrassing!" Alan moans off in seeing what he's come down to, he's now reduce to playing with city cars like a child, all cause of waiting for Control Freak to show up.

With nothing else to do, Alan Matthews pilot his giant bot to stand up. "ROOUURRAARRRUGH!" Soon Black Zuzoon made a roaring mecha noise as it waved up it's arms in just…giving up with the waiting deal and soon was walking on down the right side of the road with the gang watching this. Then Alan had his giant bot kick off some mail box while no one was around or cared to bother with that.

The Freelance Police and the Combat Bots saw this, knowing where this might lead to; trouble of the lazy late kind.

"Uh-oh, boss man is really steamed now!" Merc responded off in seeing that Alan go off while looking pretty ticked off, this won't be good.

"Oh boy, he might blow a circuit!" Green spoke a bit worried in how this might end so both Combat Bots hovered off after their leader.

"Okay everyone, we better follow, find out why Control Freak never show up!" Nigel turned to issue his friends about the matter of Control Freak not showing for action and leaving Alan alone without a foe to face.

"And this was an important day for Alan too." Angelilo sternly stated with a frown, why that lazy camera guy have to go and ruin this for the villain Alan?

"Yeah, and it better be an excuse worth using, if not, he'll be sorry!" Abby proclaimed out with a frown, bad enough Alan could have had a good life with being a bad guy, but at least when he's doing the villain part, good guys never leave them bored outta their mind.

"How we gonna beat Alan to beat the creep for leaving us hanging?" Wally asked off his friends in noticing that Alan has a bigger lead, thanks to his giant robot taking faster steps.

"Simple, we take take a shortcut down Short Avenue!" Kuki pointed to the side where a sign labeled 'Easy/Short Avenue' were there, knowing that's the fastest route to get to Control Freak's place.

"Meega love easy problem solvers like those." Stitch smiled to nod how the gang got that answer solved in no time flat.

"Especially when it beats traffic, come on!" Hoagie nods in liking how this problem was solved in the most easily pattern plot of ideas.

With that, the Freelance Police drove their red space cruiser off to beat Alan Matthews to Control Freak's place by a short cut path. And when the entire gang get to the destination, boy is there going to be some serious discussion about what's happened here.
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The scene finally shifts towards a bridge spot where underneath it was a neighborhood and one building in particular. From the dirt falling off the bridge along with a few heavy cracks of pressure, Black Zuzoon stood over the edge, something was going on.

"Of all the inconsiderate!" Alan exclaimed off to wave his giant bot's arms up in stating out the situation of the matter while getting Black Zuzoon to lean over the bridge to hang off the edge. "Bone-headed…" Alan remarked off the next part of the insult of what he was saying before he let his hold off the bridge's edge. "Stompfruvhmmm…" Soon Black Zuzoon's feet stomped on the ground that shook the place, but even before that, many of the citizens nearby were running away from the danger. "Irresponsible!" Alan was snapping off in fury about 'who' he was talking about. "RUDE!" While a car alarm went off, Alan had his Black Zuzoon near the building in question pointed the bot's finger in talking to the structure. "Unprofessional…That's what this iiiis!" As Alan was stating this part off, he was whirling Black Zuzoon's right fist for the toss and soon let it go forth.

"Boomgruvhmm…" Soon a giant robot's fist just breaks through the wall that had a little hole to begin with of a familiar 'new' hero's room of the building.

"Would the Silver Sentry have kept me waiting?" Alan demanded off from climbing down his giant bot's resting hand to enter the place in credisizing in anger the act that if his old foe was around, would that guy do what just happened to him?

"Well, did you bother to know when it was his potty or coffee break?" Stitch's voice was heard over a com-link that Alan had set to overhear those on the same frequency.

"Now's not the time to sound so sarcastic, little buddy." Hoagie's voice was heard on the same com-link to stop his pal from making things worst.

"Of course not!" Alan sarcastically stated off with the upmost annoyance that even his old foe never be so rude to not even bother to show up. "He was a PRO!" Alan thrown down his arms in exclaiming how the Silver Sentry was never one to do things like that, and now Control Freak, despite the training, couldn't show up on a schedule time of a hero/villain clash up, WHY?

"Hey there!" Control Freak's voice called out to the speechlessly upset villain in question. "Alan Matthews!" And speaking of the new hero in question, we see Control Freak happily sitting on his coach with a game controller and playing a video game of a BIG Screen TV with back speaker sounds? "You're actually the guy I wanna see!" He stated off with a happy little face in actually glad to meet the villain of the city. "Also, there's a door here." The guy pointed to the door behind him which the villain could have used instead of breaking down his own.

"Breakfruvhmm…" Just then, the door to the guy's room just got busted down to see the Freelance Police team busting on inside.

"Okay, used to be a door, now that the Freelance Police broke it." Control Freak shrug off to say from seeing who else showed up but the guy doesn't really seem bothered.

"Oh, old space alien arcade games! Meega wanna try!" Stitch responded with a sly grin, seeing the game Control Freak playing look like fun.

"Not now little buddy, first it's down to business!" Hoagie sternly told his partner, much to the koala's disappointment to hear that.

Being enough with patience, Alan stepped off his robot's giant hand. "Do you have any idea…" The villain was looking really upset at Control Freak as he came up to the game screen that the guy was watching. "How LONG I waited for you?" Alan Matthews stopped to wave out his right hand, looking disappointed that Control Freak never arrived for them to meet, do their clashing of Good VS. Evil, only for it to be a no show and everyone just gone home from getting tired of nothing exciting happening.

"No-no, I totally understand what you and the rest are saying." Control Freak spoke off pretty quickly while trying to look pass Alan to focus on the TV. "Could you just…Just…hold on for one second? I'm trying to beat this level." The guy stated from looking to finish playing his video game than rather be talking with Alan and the group.

"Oh brother, he's into the video games instead of beating the crud outta bad guys!" Wally smacked his forehead in seeing what Control Freak chooses to be.

"Honestly, do you know that Alan was counting on you and you let him down." Angelilo sternly was scolding this guy for his lack of authority on the matter.

"Right, even villains like a little respect of their adversaries in some cases." Abigail nods in full agreement, what this 'new' hero did was not cool.

"Despite some issues, at least the good guys bother to make it worth their wild to respond to villain's calling of a challenge." Nigel stated off with a serious face, no matter the situation, good guys at least try to respect their foes, not disrespect them.

"Well hey, what can I say, I got distracted." Control Freeak shrug off his shoulders to let the KND & Freelance Police groups know that he was only distracted, not a big deal to make out of.

"Where you even planning on showing up?" Alan waved off his left arm in almost starting to wonder if this new hero would have even bothered to come fight him in the first place.

"Hey guys, you should take a load at this!" Kuki spoke in having her pals turn away to see something surprising was nearby.

Soon Alan turned his head towards the other direction opposite of the wall he made to find…something surprising.

"What's this?" Alan asked off from when he and the Freelance Police group stared at something with blank puzzlement expressions. They at first didn't bothered wondering how Control Freak got some nicely set up speakers and a large TV screen, but near the kitchen and bathroom, there was more. For within the small apartment room, there was arcade games of based on 2012 animated movies, such as 'The Pirates: Band of Misfits', 'Madagascar 3: Europe's Most Wanted', 'Ice Age: Continental Drift', 'Dr. Seuss's the Lorax', 'Hotel Transylvania', the upcoming 'Frankenweenie' and 'Wreck-It Ralph' by the toilet spot, an AIM machine for where money is kept, a red bicycle, and packs of sack money dough and dollar bills all over the place. This was definitely not the sorta stuff you find in a hero's room.

"Sweet! This new hero got a serious pay day! How come wedge don't cram our office with junk like this, Hoagie?" Stitch spoke off in loving this, Control Freak has got it made and was complaining why he and Hoagie never did.

"First off Stitch, we collect souvenirs on our cases, second of all, we don't take in the money off the bad guys." Hoagie explained to his partner of the things they do, yes they take stuff as trophies from their cases, but the two never took any money that the bad guys had around. Besides, if they ever did, the Freelance Police spend it on something useless and not keep it around forever without a real purpose.

"Hoagie's right, something ain't right here." Abigail stated with a serious face on her mode, no hero would take in all the expensive rewards for their good deeds, it ain't the honorary type.

"Where did you get all this stuff?" Alan asked Control Freak with a blank look as the new hero stood up to come near the villain with a smily expression for some weird reason.

"It doesn't belong to me." Control Freak whispered off that was still heard by everyone in the room, the guy admits that this stuff he's got…was not of his own, by a legal claim.

"You STOLE It?" Alan Matthews exclaimed off to look at Control Freak with utter shock and disbelief. This guy the villain picked, who he created to be a hero, stole some things?

"Pretty cool, right?" Control Freak nods in thinking how a villain like Alan Matthews, would be impressed that the guy managed to steal all these neat things and got away with it. The villain picks up a weird looking remote as he comment, "And I even broke into the police impound to grab my old special remote. Admittedly, I'm powerful enough now where I don't need it much, but hey, I was feeling sentimental. Besides, if the Justice League and/or the Avengers show up, the remote might be handy for summoning some heavy-duty monsters."

"Hmph, meega would try taking the gum ball machine outside gas stations," Stitch tapped to his chin in speaking of terms of something else that he would have gladly like to been stolen,

"Stitch, you're not helping!" Hoagie silently snapped to his partner for trying to say something that was not being helpful here.

"No-no-no-NO, you're a HERO!" Alan shook his head and squeezed his eyes in not believing this, Control Freak isn't supposed to do these things as a hero, good guys aren't suppose to do bad things like bad guys do.

"And heroes don't steal things!" Nigel pointed out what Control Freak has done, no hero by their title name steals from anything, they are too good.

"Yeah, except for villains." Abigail dryly remarked off under her breath, the only ones that do these criminal acts are just the bad guy villains.

"Well guess what people? Being a hero is for losers!" Control Freak remotely snapped off with an annoyed expression from the good guys to Alan as this 'hero' business was just not his style. "It's always work-work-work, 24/7? At least when I was a villain, that career was easy." The guy was complaining about the job of being a hero was too much, it was annoying. "And for what? What was it all for in the end?" The guy turned to the puzzled Alan and Freelance Police team on that one subject in mind. "The only reason I ever took the gig to get the girl I like! And it turns out…" Control Freak held up a magazine in stating why he ever wanted to be a hero in the first place. "Cree doesn't want anything to do with me!" As Control Freak stated this, half the picture was ripped to show Cree saved by the Silver Sentry, but the head was missing being show it fit fine with a baffled Alan Matthews.

"Powfruvhmm…" Soon Control Freak used his heat vision to burn that magazine to cinders from his argument.

"Wait, Cree, as in Cree Lincoln as in, Abigail's older sister Cree?" Alan held up to slowly point out his right index finger to ask in confusion if this rouge hero was referring to the girl that he was dating.

"The one and only, boy I can see how this guy was upset over Cree." Abigail spoke off in knowing how that info is true and is kinda annoyed that this guy got this way…cause of Cree not liking him.

"You mean that's why you're so mad?" Kuki asked with a blank of innocence in trying to figure out if this was why Control Freak…is acting this way.

"Yeah guys, Cree Lincoln and Abigail's older sister to boot!" Control Freak nods in responding to the villain while explaining a few things to the guy. "I saw her having dinner!" The guy was going into some details that made the group feel a familiar pattern. "And making goggly eyes at some…hunky yet moronic teenager!" The guy made a silly expression when he discuss the fact in recalling seeing someone hang out with Cree.

"Ohhhh…" Alan made a tiny yelp response with a low voice with his eyes narrowing away in seeing what happened here. Control Freak musta saw him as Maurice and believes that the guy has taken the girl this guy is upset that he lost getting, this might not sound good.

"Now just a minute, that guy was a respectable member of the KND. Everyone liked him, you can't just insult him without really knowing him!" Nigel protest in seeing that this guy was bad mouthing a friend of the Kids Next Door.

"Yeah! Well who needs all that noise?" Control Freak shrug off with a not so caring manner about the idea. "But you know, that's why I think…" The guy made a freaky smile that didn't seem to look to nice here. "We, Alan…should team up!" Control Freak came a bit close to Alan, suggesting a partnership, of EVIL!

"What?" The Freelance Police team responded in utter shock, this situation has gone from bad to worst now.

"You…wait? What?" Even Alan flinched a bit in realizing what Control Freak was asking and this was not something he liked the sound of.

"With me power and your…genius-ness." Control Freak wiggled his hands in the air in describing how the two bad guys could be. "We can RULE…the city!" He grabbed Alan by the shoulders, smirking like a whack out villain in what they can do here if they join forces.

"Whoa, looks like Control Freak wants to team with Alan!" Hoagie comments in alarm and concern.

"Would've been trouble for us...if Alan wanted to accept the lunatic's offer." Stitch remarks dryly.

"Yeah, and only one of the bad guys wished to be all bad." Angelilo comments, preferring to Control Freak of course.

"You want to team up?" Alan asked off when Control Freak left him a moment, this guy wants the two to work together, this was never apart of Alan's plan.

"Check it out! I even drew up some new costume designs, see!" Control Freak smiled to bring forth to show Alan and the others, a picture.

"Costume designs?" Alan repeated off while still being baffled about this whole thing.

"Whoa!" The Freelance Police exclaims in alarm as Control Freak shows what appears to be bad drawings of himself and Alan. Those costumes don't look cool but the psycho doesn't seem to notice or care.

"Yeah! You will be the brains so you get a little brain wearing glasses on your coustme or whatever!" Control Freak explains to Alan eagerly. "Since I'm cool, I would have maybe two swords and..."

"Ugh, please, stop!" Wally exclaims with a groan of annoyance. "You must be color blind because this doesn't work at all!"

"Right, what kind of costume designer are you?" Angelilo ask Control Freak in annoyance. "Not cool at all!"

"Someone rip them up, please!" Stitch pleads in annoyance.

"Right and put a stop to this scene before it gets freaky!" Angelilo gulps a bit in worry and concern. Alan is getting upset by the moment, it seems.

Suddenly, during the discussion of what Control Freak wanted for his new costume, Alan quickly snatched the paper away and step away from this…lunatic of a hero. Of course, during the moment, Stitch snatched the paper from Alan and ate it with a burp afterwards.

"I can't believe you." Alan at the moment gazes at Control Freak…with utter disbelief eyes at what he sees clearly. "All of your gifts…all your powers, even your villain abilities, and you…" The man was trying to explain the situation of what's happening here and it was shocking still. "And you squander them. For your own...personal game." Alan glared at Control Freak, the guy here isn't a hero, and with these powers makes the super being nothing but a big jerk.

"Yes! That's right!" Control Freak held his nose with the left and pointed with the right, saying Alan was right on about this.

"No! I'm the villain! Your the good guy like the Freelance Police & friends!" Alan snapped in anger to point this subject out to the puzzling Control Freak. "I do something bad! And you come and get me." He stared puzzled at Alan, not getting the guy, but the villain wanted this moron to be the hero, not the other way around. "That's why…I CREATED you!" The villain snapped to point and explained that he was the one who made Control Freak into who he is today.

"Boy was that ever a mistake." Abigail silently remarked under her breath to which her pals agreed with her.

"I'll say." Kuki nods with a sterny face in nodding to this fact.

"We're in agreement there." Angelilo also made a frown in agreeing with the rest, this guy was no hero, never was.

"Yeah right!" Control Freak rolled his eyes in hearing that claim of some excuse by Alan. "Your NUTS!" The guy could just laugh at the villain making a sorry-excuse that was so not true without knowing the real truth. "Space Dad told me…" Control Freak would have gone on to say what he was once told, except for one thing getting cut off.

"Look! I'm your Space Dad!" Alan snapped off with an angry tone to gaze at this guy for missing the point here. Then in the next moment, the man touched his watch, turn some dial to suddenly change…into the familiar space being Control Freak knows. "You should be more like the Silver Sentry." Alan performed his Space Dad routine to speak in telling Control Freak this advice.

"Waaaugh!" Control Freak yelped out loud with wide eye shock, his space dad was actually…Alan Matthews, who changed back to his real self then.

"Yeah, and to think we were part of it." Wally shrug off to mention out without actually thinking straight.

"NUMBUH 4!" Nigel shouted to snap at his friend for revealing that part to Control Freak.

"You tricked me. You guys too!" Control Freak glared at the group, Alan tricked him with this act and the Freelance Police were in on it.

"Yeah, but it's not like we didn't like it." Hoagie shrug off his shoulders to say that during the time, the heroes weren't enjoying trying to teach Control Freak how to control his new-found powers.

"Ih, weega said not to, but weega just ignored." Stitch shrug off as well that the Freelance Police's group wanted to change minds of making this guy a hero, when clearly he was not hero-quality material in the first place.

"Oh, so we don't like that and being tricked now, do we?" Alan spoke in trying to mock a bit of this guy finding out this news was not to his liking as the villain moves closer to his giant bot's hand. "Well guess what, there's more!" The villain proclaimed from jumping back on the hand, preparing to set the watch dial for another disguise to show this terrible hero.

"Um Alan, I wouldn't push your luck too far, it might just…" Abigail tried to warn the villain about the crossing the line with a guy that's got major powers over him.

Soon Alan turn the dial, glowed, and then soon the stumped Control Freak gasped wide eyed in seeing…this villain's next disguise.

"I'm also the hunky yet moronic teenager dating with Cree Lincoln." Alan spoke while in the Maurice disguise to say about himself, being the very person dating with Cree who was finding him attractive to know at that stage.

"No!" Control Freak shook his head in trying to disagree to this, this can't be real, it just can't be!

"And we…were SMOOCHING up a storm!" Alan touched his watch dial, changed back to his villain form in explaining what he was doing with Cree while backing up to his giant robot. The guy even went so far as to make 'kiss' & 'smoochy' face expressions to describe the event.

"He's lying, right?" Control Freak looked to the Freelance Police with a horrid face, wanting to know, the villain was lying to him, right? But that wasn't going to be the case here.

"Believe me, I wish it was, we and everyone else saw them kiss." Wally shrug off his shoulders to say, it was no lie, it did happen.

"Which from somebody it got exposed." Kuki spoke to gaze at her love for recalling how he ruined that moment for Cree and Alan.

"Hey, I said sorry, okay?" Wally protest out to explain in his defense that he was sorry for the deed.

That's when Control Freak was starting to REALLY get mad in learning all of this, Alan, even the Freelance Police, used him and tricked the former cameraman, mostly the villain did the wicked stuff. "Oh…when I get my hands on you, I'm gonna…" Control Freak was declaring off with a raging fire in his eye as he was gonna go forth and tear this guy to shreds.

"YES!" Alan cheered "Yes, I know!" Alan cheered from stepping back into the chrome dome glass on the Black Zuzoon's forehead which closed in on the guy. "Bring me to justice!" The villain asked out as he made the giant bot step back, clash his fist in wanting the 'new hero' to bring it on. "Merc! Green! Roll the footage!" The villain shouted for his two bots nearby to get the camera bots to get the footage here.

"Rolling boss man!" Merc spoke in stating the two are good to go.

"We're recording!" Green nods off to say that the two robots were getting this.

"Oh, how I waited for this day!" Alan announced out with a smiling gleam as he was in position to really go forth in clashing with a hero, just like the old days with Silver Sentry.

"Powvhmm/Gruvhmm…" Then in a fast motion, as Alan made the Black Zuzoon mimic his moves, Control Freak launched out of his floor and delivered an upper cut…which sent the 8o foot giant flying backwards.

And just like that, Black Zuzoon screeched across the pavement streets on it's backside with a wide eyed surprised Alan holding on from what was happening. "Bashfruvhmm…." And then the big bot smacked against a pipe of some factory, at least that stopped him. "Oh, and the hero strikes the first blow!" The villain stands up again to state what Control Freak did was something all good vs evil perform on their dueling clashes. "But evil returns with a backhand!" Alan announced with a smiling gleam again as his raring to go once more. The mad new villain flies in but is blind to see Black Zuzoon gripping it's fist to prepare for something. "Powvhmm…/Gahahaaaahaaah!" Which the giant bot smacked Control Freak down the right sided street from not seeing that fast knock out while the villain laughs for joy at seeing this display coming out.

The Freelance Police watched the sight from afar in Control Freak's home and they gotta get out there.

"I don't like where this is going at all." Kuki said with a worried gulp.

"Yeah, I think Control Freak with powers is a bomb ready to go off!" Wally exclaims in alarm. From the looks of things, Control Freak looks like he will kill than take Alan to prison.

"We better get out of here." Hoagie said in concern. The gang don't want to be around since it's most likely that Control Freak can come back and get them for being a part of Alan's plan.

"Wanna play games, rig the ridge or takes the sacks of money while weega are here?" Stitch ask his friends mischievousl. Of course, the others just glare at him. "Okay, maybe another time."

"Powwvhmm…." At the moment, Control Freak smacks across the streets, going under and cracking the pavements until he stops on a four way traffic. Control Freak breaks out in the center, gazes at Alan's direction with really angry eyes.

"Oh yes!" Alan proclaimed from afar to pump his arms up, which the robot mimic, the villain was smiling and enjoying this so much.

"Graaaughhh!" Control Freak launched out like a torpedo raging forth to impact the creep with such brute force. The bad hero flew off to get the villain, but something was a miss here. If Control Freak paid attention, he would have seen Alan hid himself and Black Zuzoon behind a building with a painted sign.

"Waaaugh!" A sign painter yelped out a cry in seeing the villain in hiding while on his window wiping cart.

"Shhh, I'm hiding!" Alan hushed the person with his right index finger which the robot mimic for him to have this citizen get his message. "Haha-hahahaaaah!" Now Alan was tip-toeing himself away down another city block and this action was really starting to catch a few people's attention.

In the red space cruiser, the Freelance Police saw this action going on so far.

"I think Alan maybe taking this too far." Hoagie comments as he and his pals watch the action from inside the red space cruiser.

"Right and with Control Freak's background combines with this...I don't think Alan realizes what he's getting himself into here." Nigel said seriously.

"Fight, fight, fight, fight!" Wally, titch and Angelilo cheers wildly, making their friends sigh at what they are doing.

"Come out, you little freak!" Control Freak flew around some buildings, calling for Alan to show himself while unknowing, the villain tip-toeing from the behind. "I wanna see what that big brain looks on the pavement!" The rogue hero pound his fist in wanting to really smack this guy Alan for making him mad.

Just then, Control Freak didn't notice a giant hand, which tapped his right shoulder, to turn around, but…"Powvhmm…" And with that, Black Zuzoon delivered a right hook shot against the unexpected Control Freak "Wahahahaa…" Alan laughs evilly at this, as he sent Control Freak straight on over towards a nearby building home.

A couple, Tex A. Wolf and Red Hot Riding Hood, was having Chinese but both were startled by Control Freak's head in their wall, spitting out the content.

"Hey, would you get lost, pal?! We're trying to eat dinner here!" Tex scowls at Control Freak. The couple yelps as the rogue hero snaps at them furiously.

Once Control Freak angrily blew what was in his nose out, he went off to catch his running target; Alan Matthew, which the villain used his robot's speed acceleration design to speed off towards a direction.

"You fell for the easiest trick in the book!" Alan taunted to look back at Control Freak following him, did some skip dance moves before stepping aside as the raging blind hero missed hitting the guy.

"You little…brainy nitwit!" Control Freak snarled off to run off another street block as he saw from passing buildings with open spaces that the psycho was chasing Alan in his Black Zuzoon. "Graaarruughhh!" He let off a roar as Control Freak made enough speed to go around the next open block to cut the running villain off.

"CLUNK!" Just then, Control Freak impacted against a street lamp post that came out of nowhere.

"Un-Guard!!" Alan announced off a fencer's challenge line for the two foes to duke it out. "Wohohohohhooooh!" He chuckled in how Alan welded a weapon in his mighty robot's hands, and was he enjoying this. "Guuvhm…" But then this guy yelped back from Control Freak punching the guy back to skid back across the streets again.

"Rarrugh!" Control Freak roared in rage, and ripped off his own street lamp post to wield as a weapon. And now, the two opponents were now duking it out, weapon to weapon clashing, a classic style of fighting.

"Hahaha, woooh!" Alan spoke off from being in a fencer's battle pose to fight against Control Freak. "Now THAT'S the spirit!" The villain proclaimed out with a jolly attitude while his foe tries to keep hitting him. "Take that! And again!" The villain declared off to keep this battling up as Control Freak kept on trying to hit him while the guy was defensive. "Now it's time for some witty back and forth banter!" The villain proclaimed out in what shall come next, the oldest tradition know to heros and villains alike; the taunting routine. "Being new, you can go first!" The villain offered his foe a chance to try to tease and taunt him at this hour of their clashing.

"RAARRUUUAARRRGHHHH!" Control Freak however was just rapidly throwing a tantrum to throw in a few more hitting against the villain as he was not up for banter.

"Okay then, look. I'm not sure where to go with just that." Alan responded off a bit puzzled and confused to hear that response. Control Freak was suppose to make a banter, why was he not going along with this display of hero VS. evil, everyone should know this, even the Freelance Police group know.

"Graarrughhh!" Control Freak soon dives in and pushes Alan's Black Zuzoon that now was using both hands to hold off the strength of this super-powered foe.

"Yo Green, looks like it's about to reach the climax!" Merc spoke to his pal from filming this from a good distance and can sense where this be going.

"Oh my, already, that sure was fast! Rolling now!" Green responded surprised, he wasn't expecting the battle to end this soon, but who are they to question the outcome?

Even the Freelance Police finally caught around to see what action was about to happen here.

"This one's for stealing my girlfriend!" Control Freak snapped off to Alan before he pushed the bot's weapon off from their clashing force.

"SHE WASN'T YOURS TO BEGIN WITH!" Abigail shouted out to let that rogue hero know that her sister Cree and him never became such a thing.

But at that moment, Control Freak tripped Black Zuzoon's legs from a swing slash that knocked the target upwards.

"Woohhaaauuuaghh…" Alan was making a slow scream from staring wide eyed in seeing what his new foe was doing. "Gaugh…" Then a smack under the robot's head, he sent it up into the skies where everyone stared up at watching this. But then Control Freak flew up after the villain, not done yet.

Then while Black Zuzoon was souring upwards, Control Freak zoomed pass the big bot to be in front…to deliver the receive end!

"This one's for Space Dad making a fool outta me!" Control Freak declared out the next thing he do as he looked really tearful to see that Alan fooled him into being his space dad, that was heartbreaking.

Then once Alan and his bot were up in the right spot before Control Freak, the angry hero delivered!

"Rarrugh!" Control Freak delivered a double punch onto the bot and sending them both downwards. "Gaauuaaaaghh!" Even Alan was screaming from how they were going down at a rapid pace.

"They're going to hit, after them!" Nigel issued to the Freelance team as they soar by the red police cruiser to catch up.

Soon the falling foes were coming up to a building before...the impact. "Boom-Boom-Boom-Boomgrvuhmm…" They smashed through a copy of floors, just before they finally hit the real solid ground bottom as Control Freak landed away from his foe.

"And Alan Matthews!" Control Freak stood back up as Alan stood up himself to see the hero near the chrome glass with his right fist held back. "BREAKISVHMM…" The angry hero broke the glass that was shielding the villain before Control Freak grabbed him by the cape. "This one's for Space Step Mom & Brother…YOU LIED TO THEM!" Control Freak lashed out to Alan in knowing that this guy pretended to be his space dad and he even lied to the guy's space step mom and step brother and finds that really low!

"THEY WERE ALSO BAD GUYS IN DISGUISE, STUPID-HEAD!" Stitch's voice was heard off in the distance in telling the block-headed hero the truth.

"Oh, well done." Alan sighs to say with a cheeky smile before going on with what he had to say. "I thought that battle went really-REALLY well and on film to record your moment." The man held up his arms to say how their fight truly was one for the record books of a villain/hero clash showdown. "Hugh, I mean…I have a few notes…" He pinched his left hand's index and thumb in stating about having some notes about this sorta battle.

"NOTES?" Control Freak snarled off to the villain as what he was hearing this guy say stuff that was interrupting him some more.

"Well from what we could have done next or even for a more dynamite event. But they can wait for another time." Alan genlty patted the angry hero's cheek when stating the villain's notes can wait for now. "Haah, you can take me to jail now. We'll have lots more fun the next time around, I must warn you, I have some experience in this game." Alan sighs happy to let Control Freak know that with this battle over the hero can take the bad guy to jail. Finally, Alan is pleased with having the feeling of hero/villain clashes of the same way he and Silver Sentry had it.

"Oh no-no-no-no-no!" Control Freak shook his head in opposing to that idea while strangely his eyes were glowing. "You see, I was thinking more along the lines like the graveyard." The guy exclaimed off in stating where Alan Matthew would be going was not to a jail house, far from it. "YOUR DEAD, pal!" The guy lashed out with boiling anger as he was gonna really rip this guy to shreds…LITERALLY!

"Wooh-wooh-wooh, wooh!" Alan responded off a bit surprised to lean his head back in hearing this strange claim. "This isn't how you play the game of hero & villain conflict! Villains either get away or get taken to jail by the hero." The man explained out with a cautious look, that last bit Control Freak said kinda was going over the line. Heroes don't kill the bad guys short, the villains try to do away with the good guys, but even heroes know never to cross the line of no return, it's like a moral rule that they follow.

"Well guess what, it's GAME OVER, for you!" Control Freak stated out with his gazing eyes as he was letting the villain know this, Alan's game, was gonna be over…PERMANENTLY! He comment, "That's another advantage villains have over heroes; heroes can only kill in clear-cut self-defense or the direct defense of others and still BE heroes. Villains don't HAVE that handicap."

"Huuagh!" Alan gasped with wide eye shock, Control Freak really means to kill him, he doesn't show any restrainment! The man looks at the controls of his giant robot, hopping to find something. Which he did, sticky notes labeled…'In Case Of Emergency, Push This! Sign: Bob & Number 4!' with an arrow pointing to a red button. Somehow, the villain's two best friends musta known this could happen eventually and set this up. "Huugh! Hah-haaah!" Alan was starting to breath in quickly in seeing that he has to get out of here before he's killed by a lunatic hero. "Press!" The villain pressed the big red button, which activated a hidden escape suction tube beneath Alan's feet. "Waaaugh!" He yelped from just barely getting pulled down and out of the way of Control Freak's laser heat vision, but as he was sucked down, his cape got ripped off.

"Powwfruvhmm…" Then from out of a secret escape tube from the tail of Black Zuzoon, Alan Matthew was shot out.

"Waaaughh…" Alan screamed out from being shot out of his giant robot at a speeding rate.

"Boomgrvuvhmm…" There was also an explosion that came from the building's bottom, somehow something exploded, it might have been his Black Zuzoon that might have gotten destroyed by an angry Control Freak when his target escaped. But, we don't really know, we're only guessing here.

"Combat Bots!" Alan called out to his robot minions while yelping a bit from soaring off in mid-air.

"Boss!" Merc & Green responded in seeing their leader…go flying by, what just happened?

On the streets, a red car was in front of a bus, but stopped when seeing the villain falling towards them.

"Waaaugh…" Just as Alan screamed in seeing that he was going to be road pizza when…. "Crusvhm…." From behind the villain, Alan was saved by Merc and Green that lifted him up before the bus clashed against the red car. "Waugh-WAaaugh!" The villain yelped from when he was thrown in the air by the duo Combat Bots to avoid collision. "Gaugh…" Then finally after that daring escape, Alan was caught by his loyal Combat Bots; Merc & Green.

"Boss, what happened back there? What about your grand finale?" Merc asked off in not getting what happened to his boss back there during the fight.

"Look! Your cape is ruined & so much work went into it!" Green spoke in noticing that the nice cape Bob & Number 4 made for Alan was ruined, how?

"It's a not to pretty picture, boys!" Alan shook his head in stating that at this moment, the entire situation was not a pretty sight to believe; a hero gone bad.

"Alan!" Spoke a voice which Alan and his traveling the street Combat bots saw the Freelance Police driving up to them. "What happened?" Nigel spoke again in wanting to know what was happening that Alan was here now suddenly.

"Meega can guess…HIM!" Stitch interrupts to point that the gang got company, Control Freak was flying towards them.

"I'm calling a time out!" Alan waved up his hands to say that he wants to call for a time out break while he, his Combat Bots, even the Freelance Police, fly off for their lives.

"I don't think he'll listen!" Hoagie shouted out to Alan, Control Freak is now in an out of control state of rage.

"RarrrughhhAAaaaahh!" Control Freak was growling, he held out his arms in wanting to grab the little villain…and murderize him!

"Time out here!" Alan repeated the step while he and his group dodged a car, but so did Control Freak. "Time out! Time out! Time out!" Alan yelped from his feet walking on the road from how he was carried.

"Hoagie, watch that tanker!" Abigail pointed from seeing that a tanker made a wrong turn and blocked the group about to enter a tunnel.

"Waaughh/Gaaaugh!" Kuki and Wally screamed and hug each other, this won't be looking pretty.

"Daugh…" Control Freak smacked into the tanker which tipped it over while Alan & the Freelance Police dodged over it, but… "Boomfrvuhmm…" The explosive tank exploded from the reaction force, blasting throughout the tunnel towards them.

"MAX SPEED!" Angelilo shouted to the others, they gotta get out of here as Hoagie step on the gas.

"KURPOWWVHMM…" Soon out of the tunnel, the flames exploded off that sent out not only Alan and his Combat Bots but knocked the Freelance Police far out of sight for the time being.

Merc and Green were tossed out from the force and let go of Alan by mistake. "Gaugh.,..guuugh..Gaaag!" The villain yelped from hitting the ground to a sliding stop with his face on the ground. Hen pushes himself up a bit, wondering if he was okay, or for that, if the Freelance Polcie team made it out okay.

Soon, Control Freak walks out of the blazing flames and smoke cloud cover, many other by standers saw this and began to worry.

"Hugh!" Alan yelped in seeing the evil hero was here, he tapped into his watch to activate the com-link. "Exterminators! Code RED! As in short for 'REAL ENDANGER EMERGENCY' here!" Alan stated the call of what he needs now is some help to stop this hero gone wrong.

"Oh there's gonna be red, when I wipe you all over the…" Control Freak stated off, as he was about to rise up a fist to crush this villain when…

"Slissvhmmm…" At a fast speed the rouge hero didn't see, something slashed Control Freak up into the air.

"Waaaaugh…" Control Freak wailed out in surprise as he saw what was on the ground that slashed at him…Eviscerator.

"Rarrrughh…" Then some roaring battle cries are heard that made Control Freak to turn to see something unexpected…" Powwvhmfruvhmm…" Soon Shellshock and Reactor made a double fist attack that caught the evil hero off guard. "Bommgruvhmm…" And the bad hero goes straight into a crumbling box factory, lucky thing nobody was inside.

"Time we show supey here how we roll!" Shellshock declared off in bringing out all of the bots' weapons.

"Prepare to fire all weapons! Lock on and firing!" Reactor stated off in activating his reactor core.

Then before one could blink, a lot of shots from the Exterminators weapons were launched out. "Powvhm-Powvhm-Powvhm.../Bam-Bam-Bam-Boomgruvhmm…." So much blasting and destruction was happening in that area, many wondered if somebody would have survived that before the bots cease firing.

"Whelp, them bouncers took care of him sir." Merc spoke to his leader in seeing the danger seems to have been averted now.

"Oh, thank heavens, now I don't feel so bad about making my robots so strong to fight on pair with the Silver Sentry anymore." Alan sighed with much relief, maybe making his robots so strong against normal heroes wasn't a total bad thing after all.

"Well now, maybe while he's out cold, you can take away his powers." Green stated an idea on what they can do next here, get the powers Control Freak has so he'll be less dangerous then.

Just as the three Exterminators were walking over to the destroyed factory to see that their opponent was down for the count.

"RUUARRRRGH!" Suddenly, Control Freak rushes through the cloud and what happens next…"Powwfruvhmm…/Bashfruvhmm…" The rogue hero delivered an a straight pinch and upper cut moves against Shellshock and Reactor.

"Waauuuaghhh…" Shellshock & Reactor made a shout out while being launched upwards into the air.

"Gripvhmm…" Then just as Eviscerator was about to slash at this guy, the rogue hero grabbed his blades. "Hsiishh…." The last Exterminator hissed at Control Freak, not even his strength or the others seem to left much damage to the evil hero.

"Go hiss somewhere else!" Control Freak snapped back at the giant bug for trying to hiss in his face. "Fruspvhmm….." Then with a strong spinning effect, the rouge hero tossed off the last Exterminator in the air.

"Auuughh…" Back with Shellshock and Reactor, they were heard screaming before they came towards the city's school house where they impacted on. "Bashfruvhmmm/Bangruvhmm…" That brought down a lot of the structure of the building to only half remain standing. "Hisisis…" And even the Eviscerator wasn't far before he too came bashing into the same place. "Gooongnnnvhmm…" Then the last Exterminator hit the school bell from the school tower, that didn't feel good to hear. "Clsupfruvhmm…." And in a nut shell, the entire school was tumbled down to pieces. As for the students of young kids, they were cheering for the demolition of the school.

"Ugh, well they sure seem happy to be outta school." Merc spoke off puzzled to seeing that this sorta thing ended up happening all of a sudden.

"Oh my, the bouncers just got…bounced." Green spoke with worry, the Exterminators were bested by an evil hero with the Silver Sentry's powers.

"Combat Bots, you two, initiate the failsafe!" Alan stated to issue an order to his Combat Bots to plan a failsafe plan, in case this plan got…out of hand.

"Roger!" Both Green and Merc responded to leave the scene pronto to perform the 'failsafe' operation.

But back with Alan, he turns to yelp away when Control Freak was now hovering over him.

"This ends now!" Control Freak brings up his fist, ready to finish the villain off when…

"Clupfruvhmm…" From out of the behind, Merc and Green dropped in a chrome ball sphere that imprisoned the rogue hero Control Freak and saving Alan from a deadly fate. Many of the citizens gasped in surprise, what was that about with whoever Alan Matthews was fighting?

"One bad omelet, scrambled boss!" Merc saluted to his leader in what the two robots were able to do here.

"And good thing we kept it close by." Green nods in knowing they kept this prison dome for emergency use afterwards.

"Wahahahahaaa, excellent work boys!" Alan laughed with a wicked sense when he stood up on his on feet again. "Guess WHAT, Control Geek!" Alan teased to Control Freak from looking at the sphere ball that held his dangerous foe. "This little thing you're in is made from copper!" The villain leans his right elbow against the surface to brag out this info fact on what he's got the killer hero in. "You're powerless against it." Alan waved off his left hand in stating, this prison will keep Control Freak weaken. "And it's also the very same metal used to defeat…" He was about to go on with a prideful brag remarks in how this was the same thing that defeated his old foe, but...

"POWCRUVHMM…" But then in a sudden moment, Alan yelped wide eyes in noticing that Control Freak's right fist just broke through the wall seal.

"Silver Sentry?" Alan finished off his sentence while stepping away from this with horror written over his face.

"Ugh, that wasn't supposed to happen to the guy with the same powers, right boss?" Merc asked a bit skeptical in seeing that this wasn't supposed to happen by their knowledge.

"Oh dear me, this does not bold well for the situation at hand here!" Green yelped a bit in knowing this was not going to look good if the prisoner escapes.

"YOU…" Soon Control Freak was ripping the copper lair off to snarl at Alan. "Should STOP comparing me to the Silver Sentry!" The evil hero broke free of his prison while snapping at Alan, always trying to make this guy be on pair to a dead hero.

"Okay-okay, chill man, no need to have a cow!" Merc held up his arms to try and have Control Freak not go bonkers over being compared to a great hero of the same powers.

"Or break us down into tiny scraplits!" Green nervously stated the thought of what was going to happen to the bots, after this rogue gets Alan first.

Alan backs away from seeing this, not good, this was not good. What could have happened that this failsafe plan of his failed him, it was fool proof, FOOL PROOF!

Then Control Freak flew up, grabbed the copper dome and held it up high in the air.

"Boys, I think this calls for…a TECHNICAL RETREAT!" Alan exclaimed off from staring at the evil hero he's created and was turning to run.

"I'm down with that!" Merc shouted out in agreeing to his leader on what to do from here.

"Wait for me, guys!" Green shouted back with him and Merc hovering after their fleeing leader.

"RUUARRUGH!" Control Freak lash out as he hurled the copper dome off to hit the target; Alan Matthews.

The copper dome was rolling on after Alan who yelped in seeing this and he, Merc., and Green were running straight for the city's subway tunnel.

"Dive! Uvhmm…." Alan soon jumped to dive in, followed by Merc and Green as they went down the subway stairway tunnel.

"Cluspvhmm…" Soon the copper dome smashed through the subway entry, bashed through a building behind it, burring the entrance and letting the villain escape.

"You can run, Alan Matthews! But you can't hide!" Control Freak snapped off to the villain that got away, he'll find the guy and make him pay, oh so dearly. But during the motion of leaving out the destruction, the blazing flames, the evil atmosphere, the town citizens were cheering for Control Freak's victory over Alan Matthews.

"Oh, we're saved, finally!" Mayor Whoo exclaims eagerly as he goes up to Control Freak. "What is your name?"

"Control Freak."

"Oh, must be that former enemy of the Teen Titans...but nevertheless, thank you! You have freed from evil!"

"Oh, on the contrary, don't call it being 'freed'." Control Freak remarks as he gave a sinister smile to the mayor. He and the other citizens' smiles fade as they saw his look. "Consider it...'under new management'!"

Control Freak then flicks the mayor, sending him right to the ground and making the crowd gasps in terror. The evil reign of the rogue hero has begun...
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Meanwhile, below the city, Alan and his two Combat Bots; Merc & Green were fleeing through the tunnels. They have to get away from the killer hero, but what can save them from the one who holds Silver Sentry's powers? Just then, a familiar red cruiser space ship drove near the villain.

"Need a lift, pal?" Hoagie offered a ride for Alan to take, seeing he was in need desperately.

"How you all get here?" Alan asked off surprised that the Freelance Police team are here, how they get into the city's subway system?

"Same way you did silly! The stairs!" Kuki smiled off to say that they came here by the stairs route, easy right.

"Well meega hate to say told you so, but…WEEGA TOLD YOU SO!" Stitch was slowly saying before he shouted out in telling this guy that the decision to make Control Freak have super powers was a bad idea.

"Alan, Control Freak is a loose cannon! We need to stop him!" Nigel stated with a serious motion, the gang got to stop the rogue hero from going out of anymore control than he is.

"But we saw what that guy did to that Black Zuzoon suit and the Exterminators! How can we stop him?" Wally stated out in recalling what they saw Control Freak did to both Alan's big bot; Black Zuzoon, even the guy's Exterminators couldn't stop the hero gone bad.

"Look, I can't discuss things, but I need as much help stopping Control Freak as you all do." Alan stated off to ask that the gang save this talk for later, they have other issues to think about.

"Well why not go get more of your robots?" Angelilo asked if maybe they need Alan Matthews's robot and toy army minions.

"They can only hold that kinda evil hero off for so little, even with my Silver Sentry Protection 57!" Alan exclaimed off the offset of this situation as there were possible chances that even his own forces won't hold Control Freak back.

"Excuse me?" Hoagie asked a bit puzzled to hear Alan say that he made some protection 57 something.

"The boss coated our armor so we could be more defensive as we are offensive when battling the Silver Sentry." Merc. exclaimed off to say what his boss was saying about what the bots are coated with.

"Yes, after many failed plans against the good hero, Alan's been trying to improve our designs when facing powers of Silver Sentry level." Green nods in explaining how the villain here managed to make his robots be stronger then the last.

"That explains why weega never won those times or any other hero." Stitch spoke off in seeing how the heroes never defeated Alan's robots, only those near Silver Sentry level could ever bring any real harm to them.

"Perhaps you can coat that stuff on our weapons giving us a fighting chance." Nigel requested out that maybe Alan could let the heroes here use that to give them the edge against the loose Control Freak.

"Even you all couldn't stop me, what chance could you do against a POWERFUL being like that?" Alan exclaimed off to let the group here know that what they are asking is crazy if they think that'll save the day.

"Well why not go to get my sister to help ya out of this mess?" Abigail rolled her eyes to suggest to Alan that they get her big sister, Cree.

"That's right, maybe she has something about Silver Sentry's powers that we missed." Angelilo nods in getting the idea, maybe Cree can help them on their missing facts.

"But our fight..." Alan spoke with a narrow eye expression, after his break up with Cree knowing the truth, would going to her be okay even now?

"You wanna be alive against what you made, then we need to get my sister on the action while figuring out this whole thing." Abigail remotely told Alan that if they wanna survive Control Freak, they need any and all the help that they can get, including the KND's teenage foe.

"Oh, alright, move over please!" Alan sighs to give in as he steps into the red cruiser of the Freelance Police to sit in the back. Then the man looked to his Combat Bots with something to say. "You two, get the other Combat Bots & my Toy Minions to get the Exterminators out of the school rubble." The man issued this order out, he'll have a feeling that they'll need much help in whatever comes their way.

"You got it boss man, we're on it the clock!" Merc saluted to his leader in hearing and willing to obey that command.

"And maybe we can try coating ourselves with that new Protection Number 58." Green spoke with a positive thought about what the robots can do afterwards?

With that, both sides were going their separate ways writhe objective task. Merc and Green would get Alan's forces to get the Exterminators that were beaten back on line and try to do something to protect themselves from the threat of Control Freak. While The Freelance Polcie drive under the city's railroad system to by pass things with Alan in tow, destination; Cree's place. If anything, they need some inside fact help about how to defeat one who wields the powers of the Silver Sentry.

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Cree sighs back in her apartment, things are really going to heck big time, she knows what's going on via the news. Just then, the woman heard the doorbell rang.

"Oh great." Cree groans as she goes over to answer the door to see who has arrived. The woman looks through the peephole and saw some familiar faces ringing the doorbell. She sighs and open the locked door slightly, "Oh, what do you all want now?"

"Control Freak has turned evil...again." Alan said sheepishly to Cree.

"No surprise there since it's over the news."

Sure enough, Cree motions to a news report being shown on TV, including some video footage shown with Control Freak fighting the Incredibles, Frozone, the American Dragons and the Teen Titans at the start of his crimewave and winning (the fact that they were busy trying unsuccessfully to fight Control Freak when Alan made his 'challenge' is be the reason they didn't show up to fight him themselves). Now present footage shows them trying to stop him again, but to no prevail.

"Once again, Alan, good work. Another one of your genius plans backfired on you. And how did my doorman let you up?" Cree ask puzzled as she gave the doorman instructions not to let Alan or anyone else up here.

"Well..." Hoagie said with a chuckle as Alan holds up a dehydration cube, making Cree gasp. It didn't take long for her to figure out what has happened.

"Carlos!"

"Ih and weega did it after stupid head insulted you." Stitch remarks to Cree with a nod. "Of course, the landlord didn't bother as stupid head wants to leave city because of some lunatic psychopath stupidhero!"

"Get out of here, now!" Cree exclaims furiously as she tries to close the door. The woman doesn't want anything to do with Alan, her sister or their pals anymore!

"Cree, no, please! We need your help!" Alan pleads to Cree, trying to keep the door from closing on him and the others.

"Right, we are in a big bind and only you can assist us." Nigel said desperately to Cree.

"And why would you need my help anyway?" Cree demands to Alan in annoyance more than ask. Why would this jerk want her help to fix a problem that he has caused.

"Fine, I'll say it." Alan said with a sigh. "You're the smartest person I know."

"Plus, I'm your sister and you should help us. You know a few things and...please, Cree." Abigail said to Cree sadly, pleading for her sister's help.

Cree sighs but she unlocks the door and open it, the girl snaps, "Fine, but you all can't hide here."

"We ain't saying anything about hiding. We need your help in stopping that stupid head villain." Angelilo said to Cree with a sigh.

"I don't understand it, the copper should've worked. Why didn't it work this time?" Alan ask in concern and disbelief. The Silver Sentry was weakened against copper before...so why didn't it work this time? "It worked perfectly well the last time!"

"Maybe copper isn't the Silver Sentry's weakness?" Stitch suggests to Alan with a shrug.

"Copper? Man, you all aren't making any sense than usual." Cree groans in disbelief, wondering what Alan and the heroes are talking about.

"At least we agree on something." Wally remarks while rolling his eyes at this.

Alan takes a page down while saying seriously to Cree, "Unless we find Control Freak's weakness, he'll destroy the entire city...and maybe the whole world too if he doesn't stop there." The gang looks out a window at the entire city being attack. Sirens are heard like mad. Control Freak is really going out of control with no chance of stopping him.

"Maybe meega can get a nuclear missile to launch and take stupid-head out?. Stitch made a random idea thrown out into the discussion in how to stop Control Freak.

"Bad move, that total the city, and US along with it, Stitch!" Hoagie sternly told his partner that the idea had setbacks, BIG ONES!

"Then how about we drop the moon base on the bloomin' creep? That worked against Grandfather when he almost ruled over the world." Wally made another randomly suggestion on how to beat Control Freak, this one even stranger.

"If we did that, you know how much trouble we get with Kids Next Door Moon Base?" Nigel sternly snapped at the others for even thinking they use that idea to beat this enemy. "Moon Base Treehouse HQs are not easily substitutable as the last one! Number 363 would never let any of us hear the end of it, even as crazy as anything the Freelance Police here would think of!" The kid explained the very offset if they did something as that rash and stupid of that level.

"Which is as crazy as the next!" Kuki cheerfully stated off on the subject itself, much to anyone's confusion.

"Okay, we're getting off the track here." Angelilo stated from seeing where this discussion was getting off towards.

"Right, Numbuh 5 thinks we need a way that ain't gonna blow us up and the city to bits." Abigail stated in thinking the same thing, they wanna beat Control Freak, not level the city anymore then it is.

"Well...fine, how can I help?" Cree ask the group in concern.

"We need to find answers..." Hoagie said thoughtfully.

"I will help in any way possible, depending on what you're looking for here."

"Cree, you knew the Silver Sentry best." Alan said to Cree seriously. "Does he got some hideout, cave, or something? A solitary fortress, anything that can give us clues?"

Cree hesitates a bit then nods while saying, "Well...there's one place that I do know..."

Author's note
Control Freak is going out of his mind and Alan's group must stop him somehow. In the next chapter, they meet up with the Incredibles and Frozone at a familiar site to Alan (the heroes came there to strategize) and found out what really happened when the Silver Sentry has died! As if that's bad enough, Alan has given up and goes back to prison. But when Cree and some hostages get captured by Control Freak, can the villain really be a hero? Read, review and suggest.

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PREVIEW #1

(Scene Of Alan & Team Rescuing the captive hostages.)

Cree and the hostage girls yelped from the tower tipping a bit, anymore and they'll fall to their doom?

"Okay, what are our chances to surviving this?" Angelilo asked from feeling a bit worried about their situation.

"Number 5 says, zip to none?" Abigail dryly stated this off as an easy answer, but wasn't to happy about it.

"Oh, well those are good odds, right? Right…?" Kuki responded in thinking what she heard was good news, but to her confusion and the others faces…not so much.

"Control Freak!" Cree shouted out the name of the guy that's trying to bring down the building tower, with her, her sister and friends along with it?
Soon Control Freak flew back up and stomped on the tower where Cree and her friends were still tied to the pole.

"Please, don't do this? Especially not to my sister, she didn't do this to you or her friends." Cree tried to plead to this power-lunatic being to not do this act, if not for her, then for her sister's friends at the very least. "And as much as this might sound weird coming from me, I still wanna believe there's some shred of good in you?" The teen girl tried to speak some reason to get Control Freak to see that the guy is not all evil, that some part of him was once good?

"Yeah, like how you and Cree were together on the news crew? You weren't that bad, back then!" Kuki tried to bring up her cheery side to have Control Freak think of the times with Cree…but that only fueled the guy's rage.

"You are so naive, Cree? Even for a bad teen gone rouge from refusing to be decommissioned from the KND?" Control Freak signed with a disapproved expression in seeing how Cree was trying to talk reason into the guy, not happening, really. "You say you see the good in everybody, kids, teens, adults, even when it's not there while you be bad? Is that how you were lead to believe before you left the Kids Next Door?" The new villain glared at Cree in stating that the teen girl says such things, it's nothing but words, nothing more, as it's only a foolish & delusional belief on the rouge teen's part.

"What's he talking about?" Angelilo asked a bit lost and puzzled, what was this villain talking about?

"He's saying about when Cree left the Kids Next Door, something changed her when she got older?" Abigail stated to explain about something that connected with her sister. "But what that was, she never said?" The girl shook her head in not knowing what cause Cree to leave their KND in the first place?

"Do you think she only left because she was afraid of losing all her memories, including the times with you, and fought even against you to keep those memories alive?" Kuki spoke out a really farfetched random idea in why Cree did such a thing in the first place, as betraying the KND when it came to becoming decommissioned.

"Kuki, that's got to be…." Abigail also said this out except, she thought about this with wide eyes. "Wait….is that, really true?" The sister looked to Cree in surprised eyes, if this piece of fact was true, that her older sister left…cause of that reason?

"I…didn't wanna forget, so I took the only thing left for me, even if that meant being an enemy to the Kids Next Door and living a new life?" Cree looks guilty while admitting the deep-dark truth of herself, to protect her memories of her other KND life, she gone rouge.

"Oh boo-boo, like that's even believable?" Control Freak pretended to make a false sorrow face while dryly stating with annoyance in hearing that claim.

"Hey! You can't be that mean when a girl shows her feelings!" Angelilo snapped at the really big jerk for insulting Cree's feelings of what happened to her.

"Why shouldn't I? It's cause of those feelings, despite being bad, she never loved me back. And even if she wants to change a bit, even to be a news reporter, she's still the same, just like me!" Control Freak remotely stated a rhetorical remark about how Cree never cared for him, even when being bad once before while trying to live a normal little teen life, it'll never happen.

"You're crazy! My sister…" Abigail snapped at the creep with anger for now insulting Cree by saying the two are alike, when this sister knows her sibling, ain't now derange monster like Control Freak is.

"Is nothing but a hollow part of who she once was, both good, and bad, and even trying to live a normal life." Control Freak cuts off Number 5's statements to say nothing Cree does, even matters in the slightest, as she'll always be bad. "You're just living in a fantasy Cree?" Control Freak remarked off to state this fact, which Cree lowered her head with such sorrow on her expression. "There is no Easter Bunny!" The new villain exclaimed forth to say in trying to tell this fact out. "There is no Tooth Fairy!" He got his hands out of a grip to wiggle them around, like some 'pretend' magical fantasy act. "And there is no Queen of England!" The guy shook his head while he whispered off this message for Cree to get, all of those things…are not real!

"Hey wait! There are so those people!" Kuki spoke out in protest in recalling knowing that such fairy tale creatures exist.

"Right, and there's even a queen in England even as we speak!" Angelilo spoke out in stating that Control Freak's knowledge of such things was very limited.

Cree however, only seem to look within more sorrow before looking up to Control Freak in hearing his hurtful words.

"This is the Real World, you guys!" Control Freak sternly stated off for Cree, even her friends being hostage to know, that the real world is different from how they see it. "And you need to WAKE up! And Grow Up to see, no child dream can EVER come true!" The guy glared at Cree to conclude his statement that Cree needs to wake up and see the truth, as he has, but in the wrong way. What this new villain was saying, was that it was time that Cree face the reality facts of what she believes against everything else, as nothing can change for the better, as the teen girl who feels and lives in a fantasy within her heart to see what is true, and let the dreams…be destroyed by reality's cold grip.

However, as Control Freak was ranting, he failed to see what was behind him? Dark clouds were creeping up from behind, and they were not way above either? Just then, some background of rock music was heard called 'Welcome To The Jungle' by Guns N' Roses was being heard? This got a puzzled Control Freak's attention, even the puzzled looks of Cree & the other hostages stared up at…something? Just then, as Control Freak turned to see, thunder booming sounds was heard, as they were surrounded by clouds? Then a flash of lightning was seen, but from the front, there was a weather machine that appeared during the Silver Sentry's museum opening that was lighting up the sky with neon blue lights. Control Freak flew up to stare at what was gong on here?

Below, the citizens saw a dark cloud shaping like a crescent trying to go around the tower with it's lights flashing outward like it was a stage show? Then there was some other energy source coming from below the ground and going into the storm?

At that time, the tower that was almost tipping, cease with Cree and the girls yelping from the sudden stopped motion? Then from the blind neon lights, some surprises came from the hostages, as from below, the energy light source was some of Alan's Combat Bots?

"Ohhh, pretty light show?" Kuki spoke with a smile, liking the little show here.

"Lights nothing, those are Combat Bots?" Angelilo spoke off in recognizing the lights being Alan's Combat Bots.

"Then Alan is behind this little stunt show?" Abigail stated out in realizing, who has come for them…and maybe not alone neither?

"You DARE Challenge me, Alan Matthew?" Within the cloud while the glowing energize Combat Bots went in the dark clouds, some light was shown above to made the feature shadow head that was speaking to those below…it was Alan Matthew! Control Freak and Cree along with the hostage girls recognize that feature, even after a little lightning strike flash from above the shadow image of the savior?

"This town ain't big enough Two Super Villains!" Control Freak snapped off to declare with an annoyed and angry expression to let Alan Matthew know that there can only be one of them that stays in this city.

The girls smiled, but none more bigger then Cree, Alan has come to save them, to save her, everyone, from Control Freak.

"Oh, you're a villain alright?" As Alan Matthew spoke this out with echoey voice sounds off all sides to hear, from out of the storm clouds, the guy's head appeared, but was glowing & seemed dotted out? "Just not a…SUPER Villain!" Alan's GIANT head got closer to declare this fact out about what Control Freak is not really of the Super Villain part even while as being a Villain. And strangely, the giant head seem pretty much looking like a dotted light pattern?

"Oh Yeah?" Control Freak spoke off to challenge that remark claim in hearing what Alan Matthew was saying about him. "Tell me then? What's the BIG Difference?" He flew up with a snarling face, demanding to know, what is the difference of being a 'Villain' & a 'Super Villain' from this city's old villain foe of the Silver Sentry?

Then suddenly, the giant head of Alan Matthew opened it's mouth to let out his tongue? And from a small difference, it looked like there was someone else inside coming out? But wait, not just one, one, two, three, four, five figures were coming out? But the one leading down the tongue that glowed, as the person held up his arms to approach Control Freak, Cree & the rest of the girls for them to see…who this was! And soon, it was none other then Alan Matthew, in his own outfit, as he, along with Nigel & Wally on the right while Hoagie & Sttich on the left, stops on the edge of the tongue display.

"PRESENTATION!" Alan Matthew shouted off in announcing with prideful decree that Super Villain's, know how to present themselves, in the most flashiest of styles! Even the Freelance Police and the KND of Sector V pose with their knees bent and guns held by both hands to point up and vertically to make a really cool pose here along with Alan being the center.

"Oh Yeah! The Boys Are BACK!" Stitch pronounced off like a rocker of a band.

"And we're here to say this…" Hoagie declared off in what the others are here to do now.

"We're gonna KICK…YOUR….BUTT!" Wally shouted off to snap in what they plan to do to Control Freak.

"Save the City & Save The Girls!" Nigel exclaimed out the final statement that they'll fight, save the day, and free their captive friends.

"Guys!/Hoagie!/Wally!/Stitch!" Cree, Abigail, Kuki and Angelilo shouted out with a cheer in seeing the entire gang was here to save them.

Then in another awe struck moment, the light dotted image of Alan Matthew's open mouth head got flashy blue, light-blue, emerald green and white light shows coming out fro the back of the head projection along with flashy violet spark effects. Say whatever you may want of the guy, but Alan Matthew knows how to make a presentation of an entrance to the party, and that's the key element to have when being..a 'Super' Villain class!

"WAUUHHAAAAAHhhh…." Control Freak lashed out his battle cry, as he soon begins to dive for the guy he wants to murderize.

"Bye-bye, stupid-head!" Stitch taunted with a little wave in what the five got plans to do here.

Then Alan and the team dived down where Control Freak missed them and gone deeper into the mouth of the projected head.

"What the?" Control Freak yelped from not stopping and whirl around deeper in the mouth. And soon there waiting for the villain, were Alan's Extermanitors, the Toy Minions, along with the entire Combat Bots forces of the entire projectile head.

"It's PAY Back Time, girly-man!" Shellshock snarled off at the creep for what Control Freak did to the bots last time, with more weapons out then weever he can count.

"This time, we're more upgraded! To teach you a lesson!" Reactor declared out with his reactor core now going up to critical mass.

"Hisss…." Eviscerator hissed with his talon blades glowing extra sharp, the bot is ready to deliver the pain.

"And with 100,000 of us, to do it!" Merc proclaimed out in showing their buds here are all gun ready.

"Wait…how many?" Control Freak asked out from finally paying closer attention to his surroundings, and two words came to mind. "Uh-no?" Even this guy, with super powers, might have a harder time fighting out this much opponents?

"Close the Mouth!" Green shouted to the ones in the front to seal off the exit and keep the villain here in.

"CLUfruvhpvhmm…." Soon the image of Alan's head slam shut it's mouth, keeping Control Freak inside. "Bang-Bang-bang…." And the battle inside the holo-projection of Alan's head commenced to keep the villain distracted while 'other' steps are taking into motion. Such as when Alan and the good guys dropped from the mouth, what was waiting below them was the red cruiser police car for the Freelance Police, and swell galactic looking hover-cycle ride for Alan himself to ride. And boy are they gonna need them, cause now the tower was losing it's last bit of strength to hold up, and begins to tip more over then before. And just at that moment, the music in the background begins to have the artist sing at this time.

Welcome To The Jungle

"WAAaughhAAaahhh!" Cree and the girls were screaming in fright, as they were starting to descend forward on the pole of the tower. And while they fell, Alan's projection head was still chewing on Control Freak while the bots & Toys inside were blasting the creep.

We've Got Fun N' Games

"Secure that tower!" Alan issued to his spare Combat Bots, when he and the Freelance Police saw the distress. Soon the other Combat Bots flew down, and each grabbed a part of the tower structure to slow the descent.

We Got Everything You Want

"Heroes To The Rescue! YEEHAAAH!" Sttich shouted for joy, as he, the gang, and Alan rev. up their engines to floor it down to save the girls.

Honey, We Know The Names

Soon, coming to the tower, the heroes raced to the rescue without delay.

We Are The People That Can Find

Cree & the girls looked up to see the determine Alan and team of heroes driving to the max to come to their rescue.

Whatever You May Need

The girls looked over the edge for fear of falling, but then Alan and the boys arrive near them with assuring expressions.

"Boy, are we glad to see you fellas?" Abigail spoke when Stitch came off to untie the antenna's of Angelilo holding the three girls together.

If You Got The Money, Honey

"Alan, somewhere in my heart, despite me being evil, I knew you come back." Cree signs with relief on her face, feeling glad Alan was here while speaking of which, the guy tried to pull the metal off the teen girl holding her to the tower?

"Well, besides the Freelance Police gang, that made one of us?" Alan exclaimed off in feeling that someone had some fate he come to save the day?

We Got Your Disease

Soon Alan took out a freeze gun, and froze Cree's metal rope binds that soon broke and freed the girl, just one problem?

In The Jungle

"Waaugh?" Cree yelped from when she almost was going to fall, but then Alan grabbed her ankle to pull her on his ride.

Welcome To The Jungle

Once Cree, and the rest of the girls got secured on Alan and the Freelance Police's rides, it was time to book it. And behind them, Alan's head projection was looking puzzled, from in it's mouth, some fighting was going on?

Watch It Bring You To Your Knees, Knees

Suddenly, the head projection was not looking too good from it's stuff mouth, as something was glowing red that looked ready to…. "POWWvhmmm.../WAAAaughh…." Well lets say that the projection head of Alan imploded from a powerful force that also sent a lot of the Toy Minions, Combat Bots, even the three Exterminators outwards? And in the center, it was Control Freak with his glowing red eyes, he's had enough of Alan so much that the weak villain sent his bots to try and stall him. As the bots were flying and falling dotards, Conrol Freak glares out to see that Alan & the Freelance Police saved Cree and the girls, they fooled him.

"Oh man, he BEAT them all ALREADY?" Hoagie yelped from seeing that Control Freak defeat Alan's ENTIRE Evil Force, even other heroes never managed that, unless they were the Silver Sentry?

"What's he gonna do now, throw a building at us?" Wally shrug off his shoulders to ask what else was gonna happen now?

I Wanna Watch You Bleed

Then in a fast flight path, Control Freak doves downward to the falling tower that once held the captive news girl and friends, and he…was in position to catch it?

Welcome To The Jungle

"POWcrufhvm…." And just like that, Control Freak stopped the half broken tower from going further with 'his' (Silver Sentry's powers) to stop the heavy building.

We Take It Day By Day

"RARRRrrRAARrugh!" Then Control Freak pushed with a lot of his force upwards with his back into it.

If You Want It You're Gonna Bleed
But It's The Price You Pay


"Um Wally, I think he heard you?" Kuki pointed back for the Freelance Police team to take notice of what's happening.

"Oh Crud?" Wally looked back and cursed himself, him and his big mouth?

True to work, Control Freak was lifting up the building tower like it was a giant missile?

And You're A Very Sexy Girl

"CLASHPowfruvhmm…." Of course, Control Freak didn't watch what he was doing when turning the broken half tower, and bashed a portion of it against another building without a care.

That's Very Hard To Please

While Alan and the Freelance Police were driving, Cree and the girls saw what was happening and gone wide eyes at seeing what was happening.

You Can Taste The Bright Lights
But You Won't Get Them For Free


"He's planning to launch an entire building at us? That's just crazy, baby?" Abigail yelped off to state that from seeing this, not even the Silver Sentry used his powers to go 'that far' to beat an opponent?

"Tell me? What's the plan?" Cree asked Alan if he or the Freelance Police or KND had some plan before Control Freak does something…crazy!

In The Jungle
Welcome To The Jungle


"Well in truth…it mostly involves us…Not-Dying!" Alan spoke from when he looked back at seeing the danger threat gone up max by the crazy stunt by Control Freak, and saying that for them, it's best they don't die.

It's Gonna Bring You To Your

"I like that plan!" Cree exclaim doff with a small tremor of fear and held Alan closely while he rides, even if the plan was not technical or whatever, it's still better then nothing, right?

"So do we!" The other girls responded too, Abigail held Hoagie, Angelilo held Stitch, Kuki held Wally, and Nigel just continued to watch the insane villain to warn the group when to watch out for the big danger coming.

It's Gonna Bring You Down-HA!

"RAARRUUARRRrugh!" Soon Control Freak was in position, and soon hurled forth the towering building forward with all his might. The half broken tower was launched off like a spear, and it's heavier bottom dropped while still moving forward. And pretty much, it was around this time, the song in the background cease, to bad that it happened, RIGHT, with something ACTUALLY falling down towards our group?

"EVERYONE! MAX THRUSTER POWER, NOW!" Nigel shouted from seeing the danger of a falling building approaching, even Alan looked back to see this and they all knew…they gotta get out of that thing's range.

(You can take over from here. Add a bit of fleeing work, yelping from a building torpedo after the gang, someone commenting that if the tip of that building pole hits them, it'll be the second biggest needle they ever saw (which someone can ask, "What Was The Biggest?" & the response being "My Last Flu Shot!") And that the gang sees the building charging for them and tries to speed up, but then there's a problem (Both rides are in the 'E' sector), and someone warns them "Were on the E Gag?" & someone makes a funny "Maybe E Stands for 'Extra' Fuel?" which someone snaps stating "No! E stands for Empty!" & someone complains about who forgot to refuel their rides before they left to save the day? And then Alan sees something, a cushion roof they are passing, and tells the boys that they came to save the girls, and save them they shall, just before Alan, along with the Freelance Police team, throws the girls off their rides to safety. Then suddenly, Alan's ride trips and smacks the Freelance Police's ride, sending them all flying off before…things grow dark? Then when Cree and the girls come to, they suddenly see that destruction. Nigel, Wally, Hoagie and Stitch are scattered on the ground, groaning and complaining about that plan could have gone better? But before the rest, they see Alan's body in a sat up stage, with the building's pole looking like it stab the guy? The gang tries to quickly go to him, only for Control Freak to fly in and interrupt behind them. and on the 'Loose End To Take Care of', make a funny comment that he says "Time You all to catch the Bus…OUTTA Life!" which Hoagie can remark "Oh sure, NOW, he learns to do the banter talk?" Just before the villain kicks the bus heading straight for the girls and the injured Freelance Police, which of course, they try to duck, and Stitch jumps in to plan of stopping the thing, and….I think you know what happens next. (Otherwise, I think you have Stitch break the pole in half that seem to be stuck in the fallen ex-villain when the gang gets to Alan, only to realize…it was Bob & Number 4, with the cat's suit busted a bit and Bob's bowl cracked.))
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Okay, there you go, I think you can follow up what ideas could work in the next few parts of the story. And near the last minute save, I'll post something interesting to happen, which will be explained in the final chapter to come (a little Author Organization, if you catch my drift). But for now, I gotta get a chapter of my own ready, but I have the basic set lines from the film done, now comes the improvising extra bit to spice it up. Sit tight, I'll bring out the next big surprise a little after (hopefully in evening or night time?), till then, keep up the good work.
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Yo Jus, I got that other scene up, and the special scene of mystery to spice up the works. It'll be explained at the end, trust me.
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PREVIEW #2

(Scene Of Where Control Freak Corners Cree?)

Soon Cree & the gang were running a bit back while the KND team tried blasting their weapons at Control Freak without much success as the last time? They had to yelp from the falling car door from Alan's car, as Cree steps over into the fountain, followed by the others. Control Freak was gaining closer and closer to them as he was flaoting?

"Waugh…Haaugh?" Cree yelped from seeing that they were getting cornered, with nowhere else to go?

"Keep him back as much as you can! Here's trying to finish off Cree" Nigel signaled to the others to keep on hammering Control Freak no matter what, they can't let him get to Cree.

"Try telling HIM that?" Wally shouted off a remark to keep blasting his blaster at the super-powered villain, that was not going down.

"Back you creep-super-powered villain jerk!" Kuki snapped off to keep blasting a few shots from her hands to keep Control Freak away from them.

"Keep this up, Hoagie and Stitch have to get Alan and that Defuser gun here as fast as they can!" Angelilo stated to the rest, unless they can buy enough time, she hopes, that the others will be able to stop Control Freak and take away his powers.

"They better, or this villain will finish us off!" Abigail stated off from seeing how close Control Freak was getting, the guy was pushing himself against the KND 2x4 technology no matter how much a heavy pounding the heroes dish out.

"Alright, you know what, I'm done playing with you loser kids?" Control Freak snapped off in having just about enough of these kids and pink koala freak from getting to the last person he wants to give payback to. "CLUPOWwfruvhmmm…." Then he made a hand motion of his hands, that sent off a shockwave wind pressure against the small attackers.

"WAaaughh….." The KND of Nigel, Wally, Kuki, and Angelilo were sudden blown off and landed a bit far away from the fountain.

"WOooh….." Abigail was almost about to be blow away too, except for one thing? "Gripvhm…." And that would be, a familiar evil hand that grabbed the girl around the neck? "UAagh….?" Abby yelped to use her hands to struggle herself free from the Control Freak.

"Abigail!" Cree cried out in horror, as Control Freak hovered before the teen girl with her sister in the villain's grip. "Control Freak, let her go!" Cree spoke in demand, trying to put on a brave face, despite the situation involves this guy wanting to kill her for breaking his heart.

"Oh, I'll let her go, the place where that loser Alan & Freelance Police went to…their end!" Control Freak spoke off with a sly smile in what he plans to do with Number 5 of Sector V, make her join those that are gonna be dead.

"GUAgh…uuuagh?" Abigail yelped struggle harder, as she felt the 'squeeze' being pressured in on her neck.

"What do you think Cree?" Control Freak asked Cree with a blank emotionless expression towards Cree. "The death by choking, or my personal favorite, the laser beam eyes?" The villain was thinking on how to end this kid right now, and right in front of Cree too.

"Let her go, I'm the one who broke your heart, not Abby!" Cree pleaded with much concern, she can't let her only sister be killed by a psycho like Control Freak, Cree still cares for her sister deep inside.

"Oh you broke it alright, now I'm about to break something of yours?" Control Freak remarked off in knowing how Cree broke his heart, now he intends to do the same…right now. "And I think I know which choice to go for; both crushing & laser vision!" The villain stated with a little wicked expression in how he intends to finish off the girl here, by crushing and laser vision together.

"Number 5!" The KND & Angelilo shouted off in seeing the next horror that was about to take place here.

"Say bye-bye, to little sister here, Cree? She's ka-poof!" Control Freak exclaimed from increasing his grip and eyes glowing to fire his laser vision to finish off poor Abigail Lincoln.

"WUuaagh…." Abby gasped in fear in seeing this, and shut her eyes for the worst?

"Abby! Nooo…." Cree cried out with tears in her eyes, she can't lose her sister, but what can save Abigail from Control Freak in the mere seconds before….

"Poofvhmm…." But then, a sudden smoke cloud covered Control Freak's view, but the laser beams shot out? The smoke cloud cleared from that attack, and the villain got to react to that? "What the? Hugh!" Control Freak soon took a bigger notice from within his captive he had was…gone. "Where she go?" Control Freak angrily demanded, he had Number 5, but where did she go, she couldn't have escape, so how?

"Gaaugh-Haauugh-haaah?" Suddenly from a splash, with Cree she saw Abby on her knees and rubbing her throat, it felt soar from her almost getting the life choked out of her.

"Oh Abby? You're alive!" Cree exclaimed for a brief joy and hugged her sister in a tight hug.

"Ugh, easy sis., I've been choked enough for today?" Abigail exclaimed to push a bit of Cree off of her from feeling too much being squeezed to death was enough already.

"How'd you do that, are you some magician?" Control Freak asked off in disbelief, how did his captive escape, that girl has no super powers, right?

"Does Number 5 look like a magician to your coach-potato eyes?" Abigail rolled her eyes off to remark the villain thinking she was some sorta magician?

The rest of the KND & Angelilo signed in relief, they thought the worst, but it passed over. Now if they can just deal with one last loose end.

"Very funny, now let's try this again…with the stage of the stakes higher!" Control Freak dryly and annoyingly stated the next step, was to really finish off the last ones before him.

"Haugh…." Cree yelped from how much now Control Freak was closest to the teen girl and her sister, as he hovered and cease movement?

"Say bye-bye, Cree? You, your sister, and your Friends!" Control Freak declared out in preparing to use his laser vision eyes to toast this teen girl that broke his heart.

But then without warning, something fell into the fountains water that caught Control Freak's bizarre attention? It was the same gun used by Alan Matthew, except why did it fall here, and where was the guy along with the Freelance Police? Cree, Abigail, and the rest looked up to see a familiar glowing cube fall into the water? And then in another weird nut-shell twist, the glow flashed the water out and standing to protect their love ones, was Alan Matthew, along with Hoagie and Stitch, looking dashingly bold of their uprising moment.

"We're Back Again!" Hoagie announced that they have returned once again to take the villain Control Freak, by surprise.

"From Our Dying Moment!" Stitch proclaimed out that they returned from another event where they would have been dead, but that's another story.

Then what should fall into the ex-villain's arms then his own device that held Silver Sentry's super powers. "(A hello greeting language)" Alan greeted with a sly and confident expression, as the 'Warming Up' gauge read 'DEFUSE' on it, meaning it was ready to separate the powers within Control Freak.

Suddenly, Control Freak's eyes suddenly became that of fear, the guy Alan & the Freelance Police are here, and alive when they should be dead? "AAAughh…." Just as Control Freak fired off his laser vision, Alan stuck his Fusion weapon up the villain's nose while Cree & her sister duck down from the laser beams almost getting them.

"Oh yeah! PICK HIS NOSE! PICK HIS NOSE!" Stitch cheered in seeing this action, it was sweet to see Alan make the jerk look stupid.

"WAAAUugh…." Control Freak wailed out from this, as Alan actives the defusing process. "WAAUUGhh…." Control Freak yelped before he knew it, he was glowing a golden color, the same as the pill that was used from Silver Sentry's powers. "Nuagh-AAauuugh…." The villain was feeling strange, he can feel his powers fading, leaving him? "Ugh-UAAauugh…." As Alan was looking good, Control Freak's body began to change within the suit he wore? "Gaauugh…." Finally, the process was over, Control Freak fell on the ground on his back, his cloths looking strangely….loose? Alan, Cree, and the rest of the Freelance Police & KND Ops soon came to see the ending results.

(Note: If you wanna add a scene where Stitch ask if he can beat the living day lights outta the non-super-powered villain, and Hoagie says "Not Yourself Out?", then that could be funny to see. Neck, maybe even add a scene of Wally joining the party, and for another surprise twist, all of Alan's Forces Show up, okay after they got blasted away, and like to have a shot. They can each say what they like, maybe make a claim about 'third times the charmer' kinda statement, which makes Control Freak, make a nervous little laugh, before...you know the rest.)

(Scene for after Cree tries to assure the crowd that Alan was not used to a positive feedback (plus, if you want the other characters to have a love-scene moment of this happy moment, you can?))

At the moment, Abigail Lincoln turned from her sister's state with Alan, to the crowd and…noticed something? There was someone in the back of the crowd in an ally that was only wearing some yellowish blue cloak hooded outfit that covered the face? When the girl tried to focus on the mysterious person, other people walked by which by the time the opening reappeared, the mysterious hooded being was gone before Number 5?

"Hugh?" Abigail responded puzzled in seeing this, who or where did that person disappear to?

"Something wrong, Abby?" Hoagie patted his girl from sensing something bothering her?

"Ugh, no, I'm fine, just tired?" Abigail shook her head off with a little smile to say she was fine.

"After what you went through, I'm glad your safe." Hoagie smiled to happily state that he's just glad his girlfriend is okay.

"Ah, thanks, Hoagie, that's mighty sweet of you to say." Abigail smiled back at her man while giving him a hug, which Hoagie chuckled nervously by this surprise, but didn't say no for it either.

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Well now Jus, I'm working on a special offset scene to be seen for later in this story. But if there is something of what I posted you wanna change, then by all means, change a bit of it if you must. And as for the mysterious savior, it's our Author buddy; nobodiez, with the power to teleport, and the special ending scene I'm working on will star a bit of Author Organization stuff, etc. So be prepared for the next exciting stuff coming your way.
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Hey-hey, I got the last scene bit here for a secret closure ending scene, and it won't effect the other scenes you wanna have plans out for later. So without further adue, here it is, a secret ending, which explains a bit, but not much, and another apeparance of...the Author Organiztion.
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Epilogue Secret Ending PREVIEW

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(Scene To Appear Somewhere for the Epilogue.)

Soon we see the Freelance Police & their friends getting ready to leave this city, now that Alan Matthew is protecting it. Though the gang will come visit their friends here, and that includes when seeing how Alan's doing on the hero business, even to see how Cree is working things out. The gang decided that when they leave, to let Global Kids Nest Door Command Base give Cree the chance to not be decommissioned for the reasons were of losing memories of those she holds dear, it would be a long shot, but anything can happen, right? At this time, we see the Freelance Police driving their red space curser down the road with the rest of the KND Sector V gang along for the ride. But while the rest were chatting, Abigail had some serious thoughts on her mind.

"You know, something don't sit right with Number 5?" Abigail spoke off with herself feeling very distracted, something wasn't sitting right with her?

"Really, what's that?" Kuki asked off from seeing something was distracting her friend for thought?

"How I got out from being crunched or burned off by Control Freak when he had me?" Abigail rubbed her noggin in not completely understanding what was going on from when the villain had her?

"Maybe the guy had slippery hand grips?" Wally shrug off to say that Control Freak lost his grip.

"No, we all saw some smoke that blinded the view of Number 5's position, and that suddenly, she was with her sister in the fountain?" Nigel spoke in rubbing his chin, finding the strange actions to be very mind puzzling, something wasn't making any sense here?

"You're right Number 1, something is fishy about that?" Hoagie nods from his driving seat, something was bothering the group on what happened?

"Is that with, or without the fish part?" Stitch asked off randomly about the question itself.

"Oh Stitch?" Angelilo shook her head at hearing her blue koala love make such a silly claim.

"Look, alls I'm saying is, that from the other heroes I've asked, they were not near the spot where the scene happened?" Abigail held up her hands to point out, that no other super hero that was around, stated that neither was there to have saved her. "And Alan, Hoagie and Stitch were dehydrated cubes?" The girl reminded the group in recalling how three of their pals fell from the sky…as cube-shaped objects before returning to normal when they got wet.

"So what did feel like being one, you guys?" Kuki asked out suddenly in how her pals felt from being dehydrated cube figures?

"It felt…squishy at best?" Hoagie rubbed his left eyebrow in quoting off a puzzled claim on how such a feeling felt?

"Meega believed to be nothing, and yet every where at once?" Stitch expressed out with a smile in thinking he had the answer.

"Guys, what I'm trying to say is…." Abigail spoke off from almost losing her cool, she's trying to state a subject, and the gang was too busy thinking of something else when...

"BREAKS!" Wally shouted out with fear in what he had was an expression of panic.

"Number 4, that's not what we're discussing, we're…" Angelilo was about to tell Wally that the group was chatting about another subject, but….

"No, LOOK!" Wally snapped off to point ahead of the gang to look out into the road to see what he sees.

"WAAAughh…." The gang screamed out, as Hoagie tried to force the breaks, but they were already coming up to close to the hooded figure? "Trupvhm-POofruvhmm…." But the moment the ride came into contact with the pedestrian, he vanished and only smoke escaped from the spot. "Frsuvhmm….." The red space cruiser pulled to a drifting stop, and the clouds of smoke vanished to where the gang looked around, and saw…nothing? Almost like there was nobody there, but they know they say something?

"Uh-Oh Hoagie, you'll get a life sentence for this? If that the case, can meega drive ride in your place?" Stitch yelped in believing they did a hit and run scene, and Hoagie, as the driver, has to pay the price?

"Stitch, I can't go to jail and no, you can't drive, and secondly on the first subject for that, where's the body?" Hoagie responded out to say those things before focusing on the bigger question at hand?

"It just…vanished?" Angelilo stated from looking around, no sign of anybody around?

"We were going over the speed of sound in this space ship, how could he have dodged or for that matter, why we didn't take notice of his appearance sooner?" Nigel exclaimed off the impossibility of the situation, they never saw the person on the road till now, and more then that, there was no sign of the being anywhere, like he wasn't here at all?

"It's like he appeared from thin air, and nobody noticed him till now?" Kuki spoke out with a spooky expression mood in how this was starting to feel like to them?

"Wait a second here?" Abigail spoke off from a deep thought in hearing that last thing spoken, it somehow triggered…a memory?

FLASHBACK

The moment Control Freak fired his laser vision at Abby in his grip, a smoke cloud appeared? At a sudden slow motion, Abby saw some things, the image of the yellowish blue cloak guy dashing through, held the girl, and vanished in some teleportation technique? Then in the next instant, Abigail was in the water near her sister, but the savior vanished without a trace just as the event of Control Freak's confusion was noticed? Then lastly, the same hooded figure was hidden the ally, and from a image zoom in motion, saw a bit of the face that seemed…not so human but…robotic?

PRESENT

"GUYS! That's it!" Abigail snap out to get her friends attention on her. "That's the guy that might have saved me from Control Freak's clutches." The girl exclaimed out a theory that whoever they saw, she just remembered that he was the one who saved her on a close call?

"Whah!" The others responded to this news in big time surprise, they weren't expect that one?

"You're kidding me? That nobody was the one who saved your life? I'm not buying?" Wally exclaimed off in feeling that was rubbish, if that was true, how come the guy they thought they hit, wasn't around or to even claim that proof?

"Abby, are you certain, did he look like maybe he did somehow help rescue you?" Nigel asked for Number 5 to concentrate, maybe the person they missed showed signs that maybe the girl recalled seeing and knew, the person hiding his identity was the real deal?

"Well Number 5's memory is fuzzy on how that all happened without being that noticeable?" Abby rubbed her head, the moment she was saved happened in a ninja flash, sorta speak, so there were only pieces she could get. "But he moved like a ninja, and looked to be in his 20s of an adult, and stranger thing is…he looked like a robot?" The girl described her definition of her savior by his looks, and boy was that harder to swallow.

"A Robot Ninja, that's the dumbest thing I ever heard?" Wally proclaimed out in never hearing something as ridiculous as that.

"Sounds cool to Stitch though?" Stitch smirked in liking the sounds of ninja robot, that's something really interesting to see.

"Maybe it was one of Alan's robots that came to help out?" Angelilo spoke out a thought of a theory, maybe Alan Matthew made a robot that would be sneaky and helped the gang from the shadows?

"Impossible? I went over the plan of attack with the bots that were in the role of the projection head?" Hoagie shook his head in stating that the idea of that happening was close to zip. "The only ones there were the Toy Minions, the Exterminators, and all those Combat Bots? If there were any spare robots Alan made, I would have been brief on it?" The fat kid pointed to himself, being the tech genius, he and Alan shared a few things, so this thing about a ninja bot should no way been an oversight?

"Not to mention, the way Alan himself works, is that he shows off his likes to be flashy, so we can rule him out?" Nigel stated off with a serious expression in knowing Alan might not have been the creator of that ninja bot? "Yet I don't recall any records of a robot ninja in the Kids Next Door Data Base for any of our design or our enemies have teenage robots?" Nigel shrug off his shoulders in knowing, none of the KND records say they or their enemies, even have such technology to use?

"Maybe he was a nice person that didn't wanna be seen and just helped out Number 5 cause she was in trouble?" Kuki smiled off to say a positive thought that was being forgotten by the whole 'who the savior was & if he was friendly' question.

Everyone stared puzzled at Kuki's theory, that was so farfetched, some could almost wonder if that was even the answer? But then again, there was no reason why it couldn't be?

"You know what, you're right Kuki. If it was an enemy, he let Control Freak finish me off, not save me?" Abigail nods with a smile to agree with her friend on the idea that whoever saved her, was a good person at heart. "Tell you guys what, when we get back to Sector V, Number 5's gonna treat us all to my special secret candy supple." The girl decided to offer her special candy out to the entire group here to enjoy.

"Alright!" WAlly, Hoagie, and Kuki cheered for the idea, they'll love Number 5's special candy supple.

"Oh boy! Stitch always wanted to try some of Abby's candy!" Stitch smiled widely in loving this piece of news to eat some tasty sweets.

"We heard it's very tasty!" Angelilo smiled in liking the idea to have some of Abby's candy, just as much as Stitch was.

"Oh it is, it certainly is." Nigel nods with a smile in letting the koala aliens know, that the facts of Number 5's candy, is very tasty.

"Well then what are we waiting for, lets hit the road!" Hoagie smiles in starting up the Freelance Police's ride to hurry them back home so they can eat.

"But what about that Mr. Nobody Guy we thought we ran through?" Kuki rubbed her head puzzled, weren't they trying to find someone?

"Well he's not here, and besides, nobody would believe us even if we told them?" Wally shrug off to exclaim that searching for something not here is useless, and that even if they report about it, none of their Sector buddies ever believe it?

"Well Hoagie, lets get going!" Abby patted her guy on the back to have the gang get going then if the subject here's been settled.

"Aye-Aye, Abby!" Hoagie salutes to his girlfriend while fishing the last few settings.

With that, the red space cruiser hovers off the ground and then zooms off at a fast speed. Whatever the mysterious of the case here be, can be figured out later for the Freelance Police and friends. After all, Alan and Cree & their friends are happy, the gang are happy to have helped where trouble was growing, and done a lot of other stuff they know they've achieved. So, what happens next time, Hoagie and Stitch's adventures won't be stopped so easily.

"Frusvhmm…." Then at that same time moment later, the mysterious cloaked being that vanished fro the group's eyes return after their leave was assured to come out. "GRsupvhm-Frsupvhmm…." Then two corridor portals opened next to the being, and who should come out but two other characters. One in an Aqua-Blue color and the other, Green & Blue color, as they were known as VISION-KING & JusSonic. These members were apart of their famous, if not secret order; the Author Organization, filled with many Author characters.

"They say that Nobody would believe them?" VISION-KING spoke to JusSonic while the two lowered their hoods to show their faces out, recalling what the Freelance Police team said.

"Well they are not further from the truth?" JusSonic smiled to nod before looking back at their other member pal. "And from our friend, nobodies, the Good Nobody, is the proof of that." JusSonic proclaimed out the fact that was the truth from what the Freelance Police team was over-talking about.

And the being removed his head to show that he was precisely as Cree described the guy, someone in his 20s in adult size, was a ninja, and his appearance was that of robotic.

"I suppose they'll never know, that the Nobody, was indeed me." Nobodiez stated that the team that left, was in truth, all of it being around him, a real Nobody type creature. "My ability to Teleport proved very useful on this cause." The man exclaimed off in knowing that from his ability, he helped save someone, namely, Abigail Lincoln.

"I would say, a good call on having you come here on such short notice." VISION-KING nods with a smile to say this on behalf of nobodies' effort. "The scene seemed to almost be….getting a bit out of control? What Control Freak almost tried to do someone or someone(s) in, was pretty much crossing over the line." The man nods in feeling that such an event would not have been a good thing for them to have.

"They say, with Great Power, comes Great Responsibility, correct?" JusSonic stares off to the sun in the sky, reciting some wisdom of thought about a subject topic. "But in the opposite terms, Great Power can Corrupt Others, make them do things from being swallowed up by that power they enjoyed." Even a powerful Author knows, that give a character too much power that's beyond their control or understanding, and it'll just create problems.

"That's the thing about heroes and villains…never knowing who's gonna play that role when they get an extra power boost without caution?" VISION-KING nods with a serious expression with his arms crossed for the moment to think the thought for a minute.

"If Control Freak had won, what would happen?" Nobodiez asked in being curious if he didn't lean a hand, what would the outcome have been?

"From what my ability, the VISION Sight, the things of a villain that powerful on the loose, spells the end of many story worlds and cast." VISION-KING looked to his friend to explain the best known state of such an event that seem a bit unsightly to picture. "But luckily, he was dealt with, but we gonna be careful this don't happen too often. Even us Authors, are not perfect?" The man exclaimed off in feeling that even beings like themselves, aren't perfect and can make mistakes, and the bigger the mistake, the bigger the disaster to it.

"To true, everyone makes mistakes." JusSonic nods with a thought on such a subject that was discussed. "And if Control Freak was let loose with that power, he would have ruined my own stories concerning the next Hoagie & Stitch Freelance Police work." Even this Author knows, that a villain that uncontrollable, would cause problems in this universe that he had Hoagie & Stitch be apart in.

"Do you know what the next project of those two Freelancers are going to be?" nobodies asked in being curious to wonder, what will happen next for those particular characters JusSonic enjoys suing.

"Hey now, lets relax, when the next work comes, we'll be there to watch those guys, and any other story to be sure." VISIN-KING assured out that there was no rush, when the time comes to see the Freelance Police, they'll be there to see how it all happens.

"I'll have other works that need tending to, until then…." JusSonic nods to simply state out about other matters that need his attending to. "It's time that we returned to our own HQ." He was now walking forward with the other two now following him, preparing for their trip to their secret place.

"Yep, our realm to chat about what's gonna happen next. Should be exciting." VISION-KING responds off in feeling that when they get back, they'll be in another of their usual discussion; what story to plan out next. "Makes me wonder, if Alan Matthew, his forces, and Cree, might appear in Hoagie & Stitch in Season 3, for the final episode?" The man rubbed his chin in thinking of a farther topic of a subject, something of which might become a possibility for the future, who knows?

"Hmm, even I'm curious to know that answer?" nobodies spoke from looking to JusSonic, finding that kinda idea…intriguing from curiosity?

"As I spoken, my fellow Author friends…." JusSonic slowly spoke while looking back with a little smile on his grin. "Just wait…and see…" The man simply stated, as he'll tell what will happen, when the time is right that is.

"Grupvhm-fruvphm…" Soon more corridors of darkness appeared and allowed the Authors entry before vanishing from sight once again. Looks like a lot more adventures are being cooked up, and who's to say what the next excitement will be? We only know who's running the show in hidden secrecy, and will remain unknown to Hoagie and Stitch's little gang until the time comes. For now, we just settle on a fact, don't matter what a person is on the outside, it's what's on the inside, that counts the most for any person, hero, villain, even cartoon characters all alike. And for the Freelance Police…they're probably in the middle of that somewhere, oh well?

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And there you have it Jus, a special ending for this special story of yours.

~The plot of the lines 'Great Power Comes Great Responsibilities' was a Marvel note fact from any Spider-Man series, and the 'Power Corrupts' was from some series (Marvel & otherwise) of beings that lose control over themselves and become things they are not.~

The explanation of Abigail Lincoln, AKA Number 5, does have a secret special stash of her candy, which was the first time it introduced Sticky Beard into the Kids Next Door series.

Now this here, is some nice work, hopefully, it'll be a nice little thing to see that happens in the story Jus. After all, stars you, stars me, and even our pal nobodiez who is also reviewing this story. Boy, will that guy be surprised to see he got a bit of an ending cameo for this. Till then, I'll be working on my side here from stories I gotta get ready and done before my leave on Saturday, so, good luck on the next chapter pal, I can tell, it's gonna be another great one!
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This story has 3 more chapters left to go and it will be done. Seriously, Guest, watch Swat Kats sometimes.

Chapter 9: Hero's False Death

Fortunately Control Freak kept his attack on the downtown area so the gang were able to leave Toon Town City safe and sound in the woman's van with the Freelance Police taking their red cruiser, going to a place far away from it.

"You gave him these powers, right?" Cree ask Alan with a frown. "Can't you just take them away?"

"Argh, if only I could but I can't! I lost my diffuser gun when I misreplaced my invisible car." Alan said with a slight groan. "On the night you dumped me...alone...in the rain..."

"We get the idea." Wally said to Alan with a sigh.

"To be honest, we would've told you that you forgot your car but you felt so sad, we didn't have the heart to tell you." Kuki explains to Alan in pity and sadness.

"Why don't you send this guy to, I don't know, the Ghost Zone? It worked with General Zod." Numbuh 5 proposed Alan.

"One, that zone is not that hard to escape these days... thanks, Mr and Mrs Fenton..." Alan groaned a bit. "And two... who do you think I am? Marlon Brando?"

"Say...out of curiosity, sis, did you ever look back?" Abigail ask her sister curiously and sadly. "I mean in a literal sense."

"Right, on our relationship, what you said to your sister and..." Alan begins to say, wondering if Cree ever think back at what happened on that night.

"No!" Cree snaps as she steps on the brakes, making the gang yelps as they almost fell out of their seats and/or hit the windshield, though Wally hit the thing and almost broke right through it.

"Where are you taking us?" Hoagie ask Cree curiously.

"Where it started with the Silver Sentry and Alan Matthews, from what I heard."

"Oh man, my cute head." Wally groans as he rubs his head from when the boy has crashed into the wind shield earlier.

"Well, we're here." Cree said with a nod as the gang came out of their vehicles to see where the girl has taken them.

"What is this place?" Angelilo ask puzzled.

"Wait, this is his hideout?" Hoagie ask Cree in surprise and amazement. The others look a bit skeptic at where they are at: this place is the Silver Sentry's hideout?

Alan looks amazed as the gang are now at a familiar building: his old schoolhouse where he was at as a child, years ago before he was expelled. Incredible.

"So this is where he it, after so many years, my old schoolhouse." Alan said with a nod. "I got poor memories of this place..."

"Any kid would've. Come on, let's go inside and..." Stitch was able to go to the school but yelps as some sort of invisible forcefield blocks him. "What the heck?"

"Hey, where did the force field came from?" Hoagie ask in surprise.

"Not any further!" A familiar voice snaps as Violet Parr of the Incredibles appear, along with her family and Frozone. "Alan, we don't know what you're doing here but..."

"Wait, what are the Freelance Police and their friends doing?" Elastigirl ask in surprise upon seeing the Freelance Police's group. "And with Cree Lincoln and Alan?"

"Relax, Alan is kinda on our side right now." Nigel explains to the Incredibles and Frozone. "What are you doing here?"

"This was my son's school...and where his fortress is at." Frozone explains to the good guys sternly. "We came here to figure out a plan to stop Control Freak when our efforts are failing."

"What I don't understand is why you are here...with Alan." Dash remarks with a suspicious glare to Alan. "We got enough trouble with Control Freak without him causing things worst!"

"Well, that's the thing...Control Freak was kinda my fault. I gave him the powers of the Silver Sentry." Alan explains sheepishly to the Incredibles and Frozone.

"Oh, you got some explaining to do." Frozone snaps to Alan in annoyance.

"Hey, I was trying to get a good guy okay?"

"Can we save it for when we get inside?" Cree ask the others in annoyance. "Right now is not the time for this!"

"Fine, but we better hope you aren't going to blow this place up when we're done here." Mr. Incredible said with a sigh of annoyance.

The gang goes inside the building. Abigail blinks a bit while saying, "Not much of a hideout."

"It's hidden." Cree explains as she goes to a dusty table and press some sort of button underneath it. A doorway opens up, revealing some sort of passageway. "I snuck in here all the time so that's how I know how to get in."

"Were you planning on blackmailing the Silver Sentry?" Violet ask Cree suspiciously. What's to say that this reporter girl won't be using the Silver Sentry's secrets to her advantage?

"Later, okay, come on!"

The gang goes down the passageway into a long hall that led to a long hallway. Nigel comments, "I hope all the answers are in here."

"You know, I think an apology is in order for the other night." Cree said to Alan with a sigh.

"Fine, that would be nice, but make it quick! We got more pressing matters to deal with!" Alan snaps impatiently as the gang reach the doorway.

"I mean for what you did to me, Mr. Matthews! Wanna bet you remember what it was?"

"You know, you two make a nice couple." Elastigirl said to Alan and Cree in amusement. "Of course, now is not the time for romance."

Cree opens up a door. The gang looks amazed as they enter a place full of museum artifacts of the Silver Sentry. Everything about the hero is in cases or in certain places of the hideout.

"Wow..." Most of the group said in amazement.

"I know, it amazes us everytime we come here." Mr. Incredible said with a grin on his face.

"This is a school!" Wally exclaims eagerly.

"Can't believe he kept all this stuff." Alan said in awe. Amazing. The villain spots a ceremonial cape nearby. "Yeah, I remember when he wore that."

"Here's articles of the Supers' adventures past and present." Frozone said, glancing at the articles in the room. "Interesting, some of these are today..."

"Oh, I remember that one!" Angelilo exclaims as she points to an article. "This is when Hoagie and Stitch became the Freelance Police after we defeated the Shadow Queen!"

"How the heck did those news people get an article and so like that?" Stitch ask in confusion, wondering how anyone would get an article of the Freelance Police's first adventure. The mind boggles.

"There's that time when we defeated Grandfather." Nigel said with a sigh as he glances an article of the Kids Next Door's defeat of Grandfather. "Yes, my dad was quite a hero before his memory was erased."

"And there's us teaming up with June, Jake, Gir, Ah Mah and Heavy to take down Lotso, the Goody Bandit!" Hoagie exclaims while pointing to another article. "Oh yeah, that was awesome!"

"Yeah, can we stay focused here?" Cree ask the others with a sigh of annoyance.

"Right, we must find anything that could help us stop Control Freak...or explain what happened has happened." Elastigirl said in agreement. Cree then spots something, much to her surprise.

"Wait, come over here and check this out."

"What is it?" The others ask as they came over to see what Cree has found.

"What did you find?" Alan ask curiously as he trips over something before getting up. The gang saw him wearing the Silver Sentry's ceremonial cape. "Err, what?"

"Come and check this out." Cree said as she point at what she herself just found.: a glass of water with ice in it. "This glass has ice cubes in it."

"Yeah, that's what happens when water gets cold. So?"

"Oh come on, think! Don't you think it's a little odd that the ice hasn't melted yet?"

"And that's another one of life's greatest mysteries." Alan remarks with a shrug, not getting what Cree is getting at.

"Wait, Cree is onto something. I got ice powers and these cubes are still frozen." Frozone said in realization. "If this water was here before or after he died, both the ice cubes and the water itself would've dissolved by now."

"Yeah, and this water is still full." Abigail said in suspicion. "What is going on here?"

Suddenly the group heard a creak noise, startling them all. Kuki ask puzzled, "Huh?"

"There's someone else in here with us." Hoagie said in concern.

Everyone turns and saw an African man with familiar hair who was trying to leave the room quietly, but the creaky floors gave him away. He turns and nervously spoke to them, "Errr, hi."

Most of the gang suddenly screams in alarm and terror as did Stitch though not so fearfully. When the others look at him oddly, the alien asks, "What? Stitch thought weega are doing a thing here."

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Control Freak smiles evilly as he continues attacking Toon Town City with his laser eyes. The villain comment, "I have to admit, fighting the Teen Titans, Frozone, the Incredibles and the American Dragons all at once IS fun exercise, but that's ALL it is to me now - exercise!"

Evan Baxter's voice is heard, "Reports are coming in. Control Freak, who folks thought to be a former villain now the city's nwewst heroes, is still an evil jerk." Bob and Number Four are watching this report from their apartment, looking shocked. "Toon Town City has never seen this kind of destruction! If only the Silver Sentry was still alive..."

Bob and Number Four looks worried. They knew that this would happen and giving Control Freak the Silver Sentry's powers to begin with was a terrible mistake. Something must be done to stop that mad villain.

But what these two do?

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"You're alive?!" Cree and Alan exclaims in shock at the sight before them: the Silver Sentry is alive and right in front of them the whole time!

"You're alive?" Violet ask in shock while the others look stunned and disbelief.

"Err...yeah, I'm alive." The Silver Sentry said a bit sheepishly.

"But we...we saw your skeleton!" Cree exclaims while stutering a bit. "You were dead! I saw you..."

The Silver Sentry comment to Alan and Cree, "Yeah, I'm lucky that nobody ran a DNA test on the bones or they'd have found out that I was still alive."

"Are you a ghost?" Kuki ask in worry as she looks at the hero. "Are you dead?"

"The Silver Sentry said that he's alive, Kuki." Wally points out to Kuki with a sigh. "What does that tell you?"

"Nothing much!"

"There has to be an amazing explaination for this." Cree said in concern and disbelief. If the Silver Sentry was never dead to begin with, how is it that he never return to stop Alan or Control Freak?

"Speak apparition...and tell us..." Kuki said in amazement while waving a hand to the superhero, making the others sigh a bit.

"Kuki...I am not dead, I am still alive." The Silver Sentry said with a sigh to Kuki along with those who discovered him alive.

"But we all...the copper was supposed to have drained your powers." Angelilo points out to the Silver Sentry, recalling what happened on the day that the hero has 'died'.

"It was a lie. Copper was never my weakness."

"You owe us an explanation...why did you leave us?" Dash ask the Silver Sentry. The hero looks at the others' faces then sighs a bit. They all deserve the truth.

"Very well...you all deserve the truth." The Silver Sentry said with a sigh. "You see, it all started back at the observatory..."

Flashback

In the past, we see the Silver Sentry glaring at his enemy ranting with Cree tied up. It was supposed to be the usual thing that day...but something happened that changes everything forever.

The Silver Sentry's voice narrates, "Cree was kidnapped and I was going to stop Alan. But my head wasn't in the game that day for some reason."

The hero sighs as he looks at the whole thing as if in slow motion.

"We were going through the motions, so with the help of my super-speed to go faster than time, I went out to clear my head."

Sure enough, the Silver Sentry uses his super speed and opens the doors while the word 'Fire' is heard.

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The superhero was able to go to Alan's lair as if time was standing still, making some modifiations to make the charger go down and force itself to charge up on purpose to do some thinking.

"I made sure that the charger wasn't fully charged to give myself time to think..."

The Silver Sentry glances at his enemy then sighs a bit.

"It was then that I made the most important discovery. We have done this same silly charade our whole lives now..."

The Silver Sentry watches Cree smirking, knowing that Alan will be foiled soon, and signs the scene.

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As the folks enjoy their day in the park in slow motion, the Silver Sentry was sitting on the grass, looking down the play with a child's kite.

"I tried to get my mind off my feelings but I felt stuck. I soon discovered that...no matter my powers, each and everyone of Toon Town City had something that I don't...a choice."

Stitch's voice is heard, "What, as in to breath or not?"

The Silver Sentry's voice remarks, "Yes, but I recommend the first part. Moving on..."

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The Silver Sentry reads a book in the library, looking concerned as he did some thinking.

"Anyway, as long as I can remember, I have always been someone that the city wanted me to be and that's a superhero."

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At a restaurant, as customers are eating and talking in slow motion, the superhero took some food items and such while thinking some more.

"But what about what I wanted to do, huh?"

Mr. Incredible's voice comments, "I see what you mean. Sometimes choices are forced on us without us having a say so."

The Silver Sentry's voice said, "You're right, Uncle Bob. What about how I felt and how I wanted to escape the status quo?"

Stitch's voice remarks, "Boring! Skip to the end! Geez, and Stitch thought superheroes don't feel anything but heroic."

"Stitch, let him finish!" Angelilo's voice scolds Stitch, annoyed by the alien's interruption.

The Silver Sentry's voice continues on with the story, "Suddenly, as if out of the blue, it hit me. I DO have a choice!"

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The Silver Sentry returns to the sight of the museum, glancing at his statue.

"I mean, I can be whatever I wanted to be. No one said that this hero had to be a lifetime gig! I mean, the Freelance Police are heroes but only do their heroic things for fun...and because they are for people."

The Silver Sentry smiles eagerly but looks down at the folks watching the action, unaware that he's there, faster than time itself.

"But..I realize that I can't quit either. Those folks down there are depending on me and quitting would dash their spirits and...well, you get the idea."

The Silver Sentry sighs then he has an idea, one that can guarantee that the super being can get out of the superhero business...and without people bugging him to want him back!

"It was then that I got the most brilliant idea...to fake my death..."

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Back at the familiar scene, the Silver Sentry strains as he explains why he is weakening, "Copper...drains my powers!" But the truth is, the hero was pretending to be weaken to fool his enemy.

"Wait, your weakness is copper?!" Alan asks in shock and surprise. All this time, copper can drain the Silver Sentry's powers? "Uh, you're joking, right? This is a joke."

The Silver Sentry chuckles secretly to himself. Alan has fallen for it. Soon the death ray was activated and is about to hit the observatory with him in it.

"Once Alan's death ray has hit, I never felt so alive."

Now it's time for the Silver Sentry to make his next move. The superhero flew away as the death ray hits the observatory. Under the cover of the explison, the Silver Sentry quickly came back with a familiar skeleton with his own cape attached to it then send it flying towards the villain's hideout.

"So I borrowed a prop from a nearby nursery school."

Hoagie's voice points out, "You mean 'stole', right?"

"Doesn't matter! And so, after that, the Silver Sentry was dead." The Silver Sentry's voice explains as he finish his story right up.

End Flashback

The gang looks stunned and disbelief. The Silver Sentry has faked his own death so that he can retire in peace! The former superhero then adds, "And the Singing Sentry was born!"

"Wait, 'Singing Sentry'?" Cree ask in shock and disbelief. Is she hearing what this guy saying?

"Yeah, that way, I can keep the suit and the logo with the new name!"

"Wait, cause of what?" Some of the heroes exclaims in shock and disbelief.

"Say again?" Cree ask with a deep frown. The Silver Sentry decides to be a singer instead of a superhero, seriously?

"Yeah! I finally got to be in touch with my true power...weaving lyrical magic! I even came up with one right now." The Silver Sentry said as he took out a guitar before the former superhero begins to sing. "My eyes caaan seee through leaaaad!"

Everyone smiles uncomfortably while looking at each other with nervous eyes.

The Silver Sentry stops singing as he ask the stunned crowd, "Huh? What did ya think?"

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA UGH!" Everyone exclaims in shock and disgust.

"Oh, you're horrible!" Cree exclaims furiously to the Silver Sentry.

"Tell me about it, even Hoagie wouldn't have sang that badly!" Nigel exclaims in annoyance.

"Hey, not cool!" Hoagie protests at his leader's comment towards his singing.

"It isn't that!" Cree exclaims with a scowl while frowning some more.

"I think my sister is saying that what's the idea of pretending to be dead, making us grieve for a superhero who wants to retired without doing the right thing?" Abigail ask with a frown to the Silver Sentry. She can't believe that the hero didn't bother to just do the right thing and retire normally.

"Granted you have talent." Violet said with a sigh. "But now is not the point!"

"The point is, there's a madman out there destroying our...your city!" Alan exclaims with a groan, looking upset and frustrated.

Cree breaths in and out, getting more intense and upset. Then the girl scowls as she throw some items at the Silver Sentry, the former superhero just stares while not affected at all.

"You cowardly jerk! How could you do this?! Ugh! The folks of this city relied on you and you deserted them!" Cree exclaims furiously then points to Alan. "And worst yet, you left us in the hands of him! No offense."

"Not taken, I'm with you on this one." Alan said to Cree with a nod, confirming that it was stupid for the Silver Sentry to fake his own death and allows the folks of Toon Town City to suffer at the villain's hands like this.

Angelilo comment, "You know, I can ALMOST understand why you didn't come out of hiding to stop Matthews; he's far more mischievous than actually evil. But Control Freak? Even after he proved powerful enough to fight a dozen super-heroes single-handedly and win? Well, it kind of docks sympathy points in a major way when your mid-life crisis ends up almost costing innocent lives (the only reason it hasn't yet is because at least the Incredibles, Frozone, the American Dragons, the Teen Titans and the Freelance Police have managed to do a decent job protecting innocent bystanders, if nothing else)."

"Please understand my POV, I don't want to be a superhero forever, having the job forced onto me. I mean, can you imagine doing the same thing like that all your life? Not that I hate the job but...it's just felt like I didn't have a choice before." The Silver Sentry explains to his family, his enemy and his former fans in sadness. "Do you go through that, wanting to be someone other than you are?"

"Well...okay, we get the idea. You didn't want to be what people expect you to be and not what you want to be." Nigel said with a nod. "But still, you should've done the right thing and retire normally instead of making everyone grief for a death that never happened."

"Right now, the main point is, we need your help!" Alan excalims to his enemy in concern.

"Sorry, I...I really am. I'm done. Alan...I'm sorry for everything I did, preventing you from the life that you deserved, acting like an arrogant girl when we were young, craving for attractive...I was doing what others wanted me to be." The Silver Sentry said, apologizing to his former foe for his life being ruined all because of him. "There's a yin to every yang. If there's bad, good will rise up against it. It has taken me a long time to find my true calling. Perhaps it's time for you to find yours."

"I will be honest...your calling isn't a good one." Kuki said to the Silver Sentry with a sigh.

Alan sighs, looking down, then leaves with Cree and the Freelance Police's group. The Silver Sentry looks down, feeling guilty about abandoning the folks to a monster like Control Freak...as well as Alan before.

Frozone comment, "Look son, for what it's worth, I'm sorry if I suggested, even subconsciously, you had to follow in my super-hero footsteps. I never meant to do that. And your Uncle Bob, Aunt Helen and I know better than most the kind of burden powers like ours can carry. On that token, I can understand why you did what you did. But, well, that understanding does NOT make me any less upset that you led even ME and my friends into thinking you were dead and it does NOT excuse abandoning innocent people when there's REAL danger."

"Dad...I'm sorry that I let you, mom and everyone else down...I really do...but...I don't want to go back to a life that I am no longer comfortable with." The Silver Sentry said as he looks at an article of himself. "Besides, a new hero can stop Control Freak...Alan is that hero."

"That villain?" Elastigirl ask the Silver Sentry in disbelief. "Alan Matthews?"

"Alan can be a hero, he doesn't have to be a villain all his life. He's Toon Town City's only hope left."

Violet comment, "Well, if you won't help us stop Control Freak, then the LEAST you can do is babysit Jack-Jack while WE head out to try again."

The Silver Sentry put in, "Well, yeah, I suppose that IS the least I can do."

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Alan's group looks down in sadness as they left the school. The Silver Sentry had turned his back on everyone, there's no hope left.

"Awww, who needs that jerk, right?" Cree groans in annoyance. "How about we kick that jerk's butt ourselves? We go back to the evil lair, grab some ray guns, hold the nerd sideways and go gangster all over him."

"Yeah, that's a good idea but can it work?" Abigail ask Cree in concern, wondering if the idea would stop someone like Control Freak.

"We may as well try." Nigel said with a frown. "We just need to keep him locked down until we find Alan's invisible car along with the defusing gun."

"Right, so how about it, Alan buddy? Wanna go kick that stupid head in the head?" Stitch ask Alan mischievously, ready for action. However, the others saw that the vilalin sighs as he removes his cape, giving it to the group. "Alan?"

"No...we just can't..." Alan said in sadness. The others look stunned. The villain is ready to give up and not do a thing about it?

"So that's it? You're just giving up?" Cree ask Alan in disbelief and worry. "What about..."

"I may as well face facts, Cree! I am the bad guy and always will be! I don't save the day, I don't fly off into the sunset and I don't get the girl!"

"Alan...come on, sure I was hard on you before but..."

"The point is, Alan, you can be someone other than a bad guy." Angelilo said to Alan gently. "Just..."

"Forget it, just don't bother trying...it will never work." Alan said in sadness as he turns around. "It doesn't matter...I'm going home..."

Alan walks away in sadness while Cree looks down and pick up the white cape that was dropped. The woman's eyes shed with tears. The city is under siege, the Silver Sentry has retired...and Alan just give up without a fighting chance.

"Alan...oh man." Hoagie said with a groan as the gang looks back at the city. "Now what?"

"We got to go back and try to stop Control Freak." Cree said seriously. "Maybe try to talk to him and end his mayhem...I won't let my city down this way..."

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A prison bus stops at the local prison, Alan's home since his childhood. The villain got off the said bus and heads to the prison. The guards yelp, worried that he's going to attack them since a mad Control Freak is attacking the city.

To the guards' confusion, Alan just goes by the guards and goes up to Feral who glares at him, wondering what this villain wants. Alan sighs as he held his hands up.

Feral nods a bit. Alan has given himself up for his own crimes. Good. The cat warden put handcuffs on the boy's hands then leads him to his cell while the officers hold Alan to keep him from escaping.

Not that Alan wants to anytime soon...

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The Silver Sentry sighs sadly as he looks at his old costume while keeping an eye on Jack-Jack. Did he do the right thing in not returning to save the city? Or is the former superhero being selfish?

Evan Baxter's voice is heard on the radio, "Unless someone comes to help us soon, all may be lost. Thousands have left the city in a mass exodus."

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Sure enough, Cree's group and the Freelance Police are in their van and police cruiser, passing the folks who are leaving the city to escape Control Freak.

Evan Baxter's voice continues, "The folks who remained in the city are warned to stay indoors until further notice. Also, the authorites warn everyone to stay out of the downtown area at all costs."

While the citizens are heeding the warning, only a few didn't: Cree and the Freelance Police's group. They look around carefully while the woman mumbles, "Where is that super powered nutcase?"

"He should be here somewhere." Nigel said sternly.

Sure enough, Control Freak is in the sky, using his lasers to make some words in the ground. The villain smirks as he saw the ruined smokey fiery that spells 'Control Freakville'. Sounds like a good name, doesn't it?

Control Freak say, "Kneel before Control Freak." Then he pauses and giggles. "I always wanted to say that."

"Hey!" A few voices are heard, getting Control Freak's attention.

"Control Freak!" Another familiar voice is heard, making Control Freak looks down and saw them: Cree and the Freelance Police's group. "Control Freak!"

Control Freak scoffs as he lands on the ground, slamming onto it. Glaring at the group, he snaps to Cree, "Oh, let me guess. After seeing how cool and awesome I am now, you came to your senses now, eh? Well, guess what! Forget it! I'm over you!"

"Hey, I never liked you in the first place!" Cree snaps to Control Freak in annoyance.

"Can we at least talk a bit instead of fighting?" Kuki ask to Control Freak playfully, trying to reason with the villain. He just snarls at her. "Err, maybe not."

"Well, anyway, we came here to stop you."

"Oh, you? Oh, yeah, that's funny, very really! Whatcha going to do? Report me to death?" Control Freak chuckles in amusement as if Cree just told a very dumb joke to him. Then he snap to Stitch and Sector V, "And as for the rest of you, what makes you think YOU SIX could stop me when literally a dozen super-heroes have TWICE tried and failed? The space koala is the only one of you that has super-powers. Yes, those powers include super-strength, near-invulnerability and super-agility, but I have those powers too, and more. And at an even higher degree."

"We can still try!" Nigel exclaims sternly. "Give up or we will have to use force!"

"I like to see you try!"

"Look, I am going to try to reason with you." Cree said to Control Freak in a bit of concern. "We both worked together for a long time. I know you."

"Yeah right, you don't know me, heck you didn't even take the time to do so!" Control Freak scoffs while walking to Cree's group. "As far a sI kno, this is the first time we hung out socially and it's when I about to destroy everything!"

"I want to talk to the real Control Freak!" Cree pleads to Control Freak in concern. "The one who loves being a cameraman, eating dip, being a nerd and likes to sit on his fat butt all day watching TV."

"You know, that isn't cool when you say it to him like that." Angelilo points out to Cree in concern.

"Oh, you're too late, all of you are too late!" Control Freak remarks evilly as he backs Cree up to the van with fear.

"Alright, you made your choice, now here's ours!" Nigel snapped at the Control Freak with a stern face as he, the KND, and even the Freelance Police group took out their weapons to aim against the rouge hero.

"Hahaha, you expect me to be afraid of a couple a kids and two Trogs?" Control Freak laughs at this scene, what can these wimpy heroes do to him.

"HEY!" Stitch and Angelilo snapped at the creep for calling them that name.

"No Control Freak…" Cree spoke with a serious face in no longer going to let this stand. "You should fear two New Trogians, and….." When Cree was speaking, the gang, even Control Freak saw something unfolding on the girl's body from the back was some suit of multi-purpose ninja armor/ The unfolding armor that encased Cree seems to be a nod to the armor that jaffa warriors, are known to waer from like a Sci-Fi show called Stargate-SG1. "Us Kids Next Door Operatives!" Cree spoke with a determine attitude and lifted her right wrist that sported off a laser.

"Wha…!" Control Freak, in a word of his name, FREAKED out, that Cree suddenly changed into some cool looking armored ninja teen. "You just…where did you get…dugh THAT never happened in the original film!" Hek was so baffled and couldn't bleeive this, this part wasn't from the original Megamind film.

"Don't you know, Fanmake stories tend to get away with things not seen in the originals such as….hange of EVENTS!" Cree remotely remarked off to the ex-hero that in this case, her being a bad girl of the KND had it's perks to have some surprises nobody expect to find. "Prsuvhmm…" Then in quicker then a flash, she fired off her laser to hit the former camera guy that's turned evil.

"Gaaaaugh…MY EYES!" Control Freak yelped out loud to hold his eyes, Cree has gone and blinded him…temporally.

"BLAST HIM TEAM!" Nigel shouted to everyone to fire with everything they got.

And you can imagine how many weapons of KND items were brought out, and besides Stitch's extra arms and Angelilio's antenna airlocks wielding blasters, Cree's armor brought out a load of hidden arsenal weaponry. "Bang-Bang-Boom-Boom/Thrusvhm-Prsuvhm/Brizizivhmm…" And let's say, that was a lot of blasting and explosive work that was covering the villain were he stood. Once the group ceased fire, they were pondering…did that beat their foe?

"Think that's the end of bad guy, Hoagie?" Stitch asked his partner if they managed to defeat Control Freak by just this action.

"Stitch, in this line of work, the villain's don't go down except by their own hero of justice." Hoagie spoke in explaining to his partner that things don't always work out like that way.

"But Silver Sentry beat Alan and we're good guys that beat a bloomin' crook like Control Freak!" Wally stated out that while the gang couldn't win against a super villain like Alan Matthews, the Control Freak was at first a not so threatening villain.

"Still, best to see when the smoke clears to be sure. He might be…" Nigel rubbed his chin in pondering the thought that they best see the results, to be safe, however…

"Still standing?" The voice of Control Freak was heard behind the smoke cloud that surprised everyone here.

"Gripvhm…" Then a hand reached out to grab Stitch who was closest without the koala guarding in time. "Gaaugh…meega see this failed!" Stitch gagged out from his choking state as the gang see the Control Freak, still standing and unharmed.

"Time for a little ball game." Control Freak proclaimed out with a sly smile in now squashing Stitch's body into a ball form and was rubbing the koala against his suit…creating a charge. "And I got a perfect game…static electricity…plus ball shape koala, and pin line kids equal one thing!" The villain exclaimed out in having something new to try, he's gonna first strike down the KND & Freelance Police...with their own pal. "You're out of here!" Control Freak roared out loud before twirling the ball form Sttich back like a pitcher and...

"Frisvhmm…" From a mighty throw after first jumping backwards to make this be more drama. "YEEAAAAHHH…" Stitch was screaming out with panic as he was heading for his pals by the van.

"Everyone, dodge before…" Nigel almost tried to warn the group to get away, but…

"Boomfruvhmm…" Too little, too late as the charged Stitch ball impacted the sight and covered the area with an explosive light flash along with steaming smoke. "Frisvhmm…" Then coming out of the smoke cloud was a shooting off Hoagie, Stitch, Wally and Nigel.

"Oh man, he just knocked us into the air!" Wally yelped out in noticing, the boys are soaring in the air…without a parachute or jet packs.

"And we left Cree & the girls alone with a majorly crazed super-power villain!" Hoagie exclaimed out in fear, the boys are leaving the girls behind with a lunatic foe.

"Guess there is only one thing to do that fits this scene." Stitch spoke off in sensing that he knows whats to come next here.

"Stitch, this is no time to drift off the subject!" Nigel protest out with a serious manner that the boys are still being thrown out and Stitch wants to try something when they are still having critical situations that need their attention.

"WEEGA ARE BLASTING OFF AGAAAAAAIN!" Stitch shouted out while he and the rest are going farther in the air until they are disappeared from sight.

"STIIIITCH!" The boys shouted out to their friend in such a loud distance.

"WHAAAAAAT?" Stitch's voice was heard shouting, just as we see a twinkle light in the sky.

Back on the ground, the dust cloud cleared as we see Kuki and Angelilo on the floor while Cree leaned herself on her van and Abigail tried to stand up near her sister.

"Oh man, that meany sent our guys up to the stars!" Kuki groans from rubbing the aching headache she has from looking up, their pals were gone like a shooting star.

"I doubt that's possible, but for their landing might be painful!" Angelilo exclaimed off from knowing that the boys will not leave the planet, they'll come back down again, just the question of 'how' they themselves land in a spot is the question.

"But Control Freak, where is…" Abigail was about to state in not seeing much pass this dust of smoke, the ex-hero has gotten be somewhere but where.

"Surprise!" Control Freak's voice is heard off from behind the seen that no one saw. "Prsuvhmm…" Then from two smoking clouds, he rushed down to where two of the four girls were at…with those on the ground.

"OOOUCH!" Kuki and Angelilo yelped in pain of the ex-hero stepping on their backs with his boots.

"Girls! Waaah!" Abigail was amost about to act, but something snatched her up.

"Abby...gauge…" Cree was almost about to act but something cut her off that a hand gripped her shoulder to the van.

The picture is seen clear when the dust vanished, Control Freak had pressured his feet under Kuki and Angelilo, held Abby in his left hand up in the air by her shirt and kept Cree pressed against her van. The kids weapons were lost, and by the time the former opeative would have brought out her weapons, the Ex-hero used his laser vision to blast them off, including the damage of the girl's helmet that broke off to reveal Cree's face while she still dune her Battle Ready Armor suit.

"Ohhh, so sorry, but like all stories, what happens in original films gets done, despite the change in Fanmakes!" Control Freak slowly toyed with the beaten girls, as far as anyone knows, the outcomes for Fanmakes will always be the same, even now.

"Ugh…you let my sister & us go now, you big block-headed TV freak!" Abby struggled to pull herself free while threatening the villain, despite the situation that she herself is in.

"Oh so scary, maybe I should just end you brats and take Cree afterwards!" Control Freak pretended to act all scared and smirked with a wicked expression to just end the bratty kids here now.

"What! You can't do that!" Cree responded off shock, Control Freak wouldn't actually try to kill these kids, including her sister.

"Why not, you wanted to destroy your sister, maybe I should save you the trouble!" Control Freak looked to Cree in recalling how the teen girl tried to do in her own sister and her pals. "How's about laser vision to remind you all of my burning anger?" The guy had his eyes glowing and was preparing to use them….to burn right through his foes.

"You expect us to think you kill us off?" Abigail remarked off at the villain, not being scared one bit of this guy.

"Wanna try it?" Control Freak looked to Abigail in his hand, eyes looking ready to launch the laser vision, but…

"No please! It's me you want, not them!" Cree pleaded out to the crazy super power villain to not harm Abigail or her friends but to take the teenager instead.

"Hugh…" Kuki and Angelilo responded very puzzled that a KND teenage foe operative wanted to save them.

"Cree…" Abigail responded with much confusion, her sister sounded very…caring & protective just now.

The ex-hero heard such a plea and thought it over with much vile and wicked expressions with a sly smile. "Very touching, but I got a better idea. Just in case Alan Matthews or your other friends get wise to face me." Control Freak stated out in thinking that, if anything, he still has to deal with the guy that ruined his chances with Cree, Alan Matthews, not to mention the KND of Sector V & Freelance Police team that are far away. "I've seen villains do it all the time. Time for you all to play…the damsel in distress." The newly evil Ex-hero proclaimed how he'll get the villain, Alan Matthew, but using…bait and who better than the expert of kidnapped villain plots then; Cree Lincoln.

"Oh man, sis, this guy's up to something nasty. I got that bad feeling about it." Abigail sighs in feeling that what Control Freak had plans for them were not gonna be good ones.

"I know, and for once…I'm actually afraid of this kidnapping." Cree responds with much worry, it's one thing if Alan Matthews kidnapped her and the girls, he's predicable and in a way, not so much scary to be his hostage. But with Control Freak being the new villain, and having Silver Sentry's powers, and a angry attitude to cross the line, now maybe the time to panic.

As quick as a flash, Control Freak kicked up Angelilo and Kuki, thrown Abigail up, and while keeping a grip on Cree's wrist, used his super speed to snatch the pink koala's antennas' to use as rope to tie the three girls together. Then the vile ex-hero tosses the four girls in the van, picks it up and flies off with a wicked motion on his face saying….vengeance all over. This will take a miracle for anyone to stop this new villain now…but the question remains…where can the city find a new hero to stop the new and even more dangerous villain?

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Alan looks depressed as he changes channels in his cell. The villain is now wearing the usual prisoner garb. Perhaps some TV can get his minds off what happened to him...for the rest of his life, yeah. Not like he cares.

As Alan changes channels, one of them shows a familiar villain on the screen yelling, "Alan Matthews! Freelance Police and friends!" The prisoner changes the channels then realizes something. He changes more channels until Alan found the one with Control Freak on it. "We got unfinished business, everyone! I will be waiting at the Toonmpire State Building! Oh, and in case you get cold feet..."

Control Freak then moves the camera as he shows Cree, Abigail, Kuki and Angelilo all tied up. Alan gasps in shock while exclaiming, "Cree!"

"Well, girls! Come on, call your hero and his friends to rescue you all."

"Alan, you gotta come for us and help our boys save us too!" Kuki calls out to Alan in worry.

"Right, Control Freak is out of his mind some more." Abigail remarks to the camera with a nod.

"Right, guys, you gotta save us!" Angelilo calls out as well.

"Alan...not sure if you're listening but if you are...you can't give up." Cree said to the camera in sadness. "Heck, the Alan Matthews that I know would never ran off from a fight, even if he knew that he has absolutely no way that he himself can win. It's your best quality. Please, be that guy right now. The city needs you...'I' need you."

"Cree..." Alan said, touched by this. Cree really needs him right now.

"Alan, you and your pals have one hour, don't keep me waiting!" Control Freak snaps to the camera before it was turned off.

Alan pauses a bit. The girls and the city are in danger by this mad man...and he has to save them. The prisoner then remembers what the Silver Sentry has told him back at the hideout and what he's on about. Alan doesn't have to be the villain that people made him out to be. He can be a hero...and Alan knew why. He has to save Cree and the whole world from Control Freak, as well as fix his own mistake that he has made.

Quickly, Alan rush over to the cell door and pounces on it, calling, "Feral, daddy, please! You gotta let me out! Please, it's important! The whole city is in danger! You got to listen to me and let me out now! Control Freak must be stopped!"

Feral, who happens to be nearby, peeks through the window while snapping, "First off, stop calling me 'daddy'. And second, not a chance! You still got 100 life sentences left to go! Maybe that will give you plenty of time to think about what you've done."

"What, you want me to say it, do you?"

"Say what?"

"Fine, I'll say it. Here you go, from the blackest part of my heart..." Alan sighs then pounds the window while exclaiming, "I...AM...SORRY!"

Alan sighs down the door, falling to the door. Feral pauses then remarks, "Sorry, not buying it." The former villain got up, sighing at this.

"Who could blame you? I've terrorized this city a lot of times, created a former villain turned hero who ended up being a villain who is a complete monsteer one, I lied to Cree and...my best friends Bob and Number Four...I treated them all like dirt."

For some reason, Feral raise his brow in interest while asking, "Hmmm?"

Alan sighs in sadness while adding, "My only friends now, besides my robotic minons, are just the Freelance Police and the Kids Next Door who even right now are out there while I'm stuck here, moping. Please...don't make this, Cree and everyone else pay for my wrongdoings. I am truly and really sorry..."

Alan pauses and sighs as he got no response from Feral. It looks like the villain is going to be locked up here forever...while Control Freak is out there, destroying everyone and everything...even Cree.

Suddenly without warning, and much more to Alan's confusion, his cell door was opening up. And there, standing outside with his noble expression, warden Feral looked to the prisoned villain.

"Apology accept." Feral responded to hearing Alan's apology while going for a watch on his left wrist hand that seemed familiar. Then from a simple twist, the warden glowed and standing in place was Number 4 with Bob in his bowl on the cat's shoulder. The two smiled at Alan with joy as they used their friend's disguise watch to hid their appearance.

"Oh Bob. Number 4." Alan smiles with much relief and happy feelings to se his two closest friends have return to him, even after their fight. "You fantastic fish & cat, you both are." The sappy villain exclaimed from seeing how sly his two closest friends are, trying to deceive him like this.

"What are we waiting for?" Bob stated out in seeing that the trio don't have to sit here any longer now. "We better get going! Right Number 4?" Bob pointed behind their backs in stating it's time to go, even asked for a response from Number 4 here.

"Meow..wreath..rrrrrii-Right, pals…" Number 4 suddenly without warning, replied forth his first REAL words besides the sound of a cat.

"Number 4! You...you can speak?" Alan spoke off surprised, his friend can talk, how?

"Well yew did promise him a speaker collar an' there it is." Bob stated from where Number 4 revealed on his neck, a shiny new collar of silver coloring and light-blue flashy button design. "Now he can speak more than 'meows' now." Bob stated out that with this new collar, even Number 4 of their group can talk like they do.

"And I missed Alan, we both did." Number 4 responded a sentence next, stating how he and Bob had missed their leader and friend very much.

Now the cell bars moved away, allowing Alan, Bob and the now talking Number 4 to leave out.

"Mwuhahahaaaah, you got me!" Alan laughed off while pretending to throw a few punches to Number 4's left arm.

"Whohohohoooh!" Bob also let off a laugh to join in on this jolly feeling right now.

Now the trio laughed off more heart-filled as Number 4 placed his left arm over Alan with the other held Bob. They went down the right side of the hallway, but as they were laughing out on their leaving, the real warden Feral was seen left behind…tied up.

"Good luck, fellas!" Feral responded off to Alan's group with a smile, even though he's been hard on Alan Matthews all this time…he's actually seeing something from the inmate not seen offended, a reflection from his mistakes to see the future; a none-evil life even.

"We're gonna die!" Alan Matthews proclaimed out with a heart emotion manner in what will happen to the group here when they leave to stop the Ex-hero. "Gahaahahahaaa!" Even with his own laughter, it's clear to see what Alan meant, even warden Feral nods a bit in thinking that much might be true.

"Waaaahahahah…" Bob was heard laughing off in joining his friend in their jolly feeling, but that was soon cut short from realizing something.

"Wait! What?" Number 4 asked off a bit puzzled in hearing Alan say that the trio would die, did he mean about when they go to save the city from Control Freak?
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Soon the scene shows the trio exiting the jail house and a lot was being discussed about what to do with Control Freak. With that guy having the Silver Sentry's powers, and recalling how Alan never could win as a villain against the hero, the way to win won't be from a switch of roles. Control Freak would be too powerful for Alan Matthews, even with his latest advanced tech so brute force might not be the key…but maybe brains can. Yes, perhaps with the right planning, there could be a way to out smart Control Freak, save the city and the kidnapped Cree & the other girls. They just need something to pull it off without a hitch, make it seem believable, but it's not like an answer will fall from the sky.

"Waaaaughh…" From above, the trio of villain and close minion friends heard a cry and above saw the down casting of Stitch, Hoagie, Nigel and Wally heading for them.

"Number 4! Grab them!" Alan issued out to his trusted cat with the robotic suit to save their friends from hitting the ground.

"I gotcha! I gotcha!" Number 4 shouted as he extended his arms to catch the falling boys. "Powvhm-Powvhmm…." Of course, he missed the catches and the four boys impacted into the ground. "Ooooh, I don't gotcha!" The cat sheepishly spoke in seeing he missed, that was rather embarrassing.

"I think we forgot 'ta work on fixing 'dat extension arm when Alan messed wit' it." Bob spoke from a puzzling thought in forgetting to fix that one part of the arms in Number 4's suit.

"Right, I'll work that out later." Alan spoke in assuring Bob that he get to work on fixing whatever he did to Number 4's suit later on. "Guys, how you end up like this?" Alan asked in wanting to know, what happened that the Freelance Police team fell right outside the jail house.

"Oh you know, we just dropped in unannounced!" Stitch lifted his head out of the ground to happily exclaim a subject on how they came by in such a manner.

"Stitch, quit stealing my bad joke lines!" Hoagie lifted himself out of the ground to snap at his partner for once again, trying to be the funny man instead of him. "Well, I guess you guys are back together again, huh?" The fat boy stated in seeing Number 4 and Bob were with Alan, which meant that they are friends again.

"Boy, did that Control Freak hit us with something alright?" Wally groans a bit to sit up and rub his head, that ex-hero they faced really was not a lightweight fighter brute.

"Control Freak did this to you?" Alan asked in shock, so this was why Control Freak wanted the him and the others, cause he knew that they would try to stop the ex-hero again.

"Yes, and I dare say we left our friends behind to deal with him." Nigel stated off with a serious motion of the fact of what happened while dusting himself off. "Quickly! Tell us what happened?" The kid with the shades asked in wanting to be brief up on what's happened while he and the others were 'thrown' across in the skies before dropping back to the earth.

"Well do yew want 'de news 'dat Control Freak is still on 'de loose or 'dat he's holding Cree an' yer girls captive as hostage?" Bob exclaimed off the choices the others would wanna hear, both cases are bad news no matter how one looks at it.

"WHAH!" The boys responded instantly to this piece of news with concerning fears. Kuki, Abigail, Angelilo, even Cree were in danger?

"He's got Abby!" Hoagie asked off in shock to believe that the ex-hero's got his girl.

"He's taken my boogji-boo!" Stitch snarled off in rage that Control Freak has SOME nerve.

"The guy took Kuki too!" Wally stated off with an angry demand in not liking what he's heard.

"And he's taken Cree as well, typical villains!" Nigel stated with a serious expression, it figures the ex-hero would try to hold hostages, that's so like a villain. "No offense." Nigel held up his hands to not mean any bad feelings towards Alan Matthews, who is also a villain, sorta speak.

"None taken." Alan nods back in letting Nigel know that the statement on that comment meant no harm done to him as he completely understands it.

"Do you have any leads to where they are?" Nigel asked in hoping Alan or his friends know where Control Freak is holding his hostages.

"They're at the place where Cree dumped Control Freak, we can direct you there." Number 4 spoke off that answer in letting the kids and koala know of the destination to find the others.

Suddenly, it was there the gang got a sudden realization that strike them; Number 4, the cat on Alan's side, spoke!

"AAAAAAH! EVIL SPIRIT POSSESSING CAT!" Stitch screeched out in horror and terror, the cat must be taken control of by an evil spirit.

"No, that's just Number 4's new collar, he can speak now." Bob spoke in assuring the rest that Number 4 can just speak from a device around his neck, which the latter showed the group to understand better.

"Oh, never mind what meega said then." Stitch responded off with a stump face as he now sees things are alright now.

"So then, what's the plan to save Kuki and the others?" Wally asked the gang here about how to save the girls fro that super-powered Rogie-hero; Control Freak.

"Wally's right, we couldn't even bring the hurt on that ex-hero, he's as strong as the Silver Sentry." Hoagie shrug off in feeling that without the right attack, the gang can't even be comparing themselves to stop someone who's that strong a new villain.

"Your design protection weren't enough Alan, we need something to deal more that's harmful." Nigel spoke to Alan, while the heroes made their weapons stronger to fight a foe like Control Freak all super powered, but it looks like they were still not powerful enough.

"How about the satellite laser he used on Silver Sentry?" Stitch suggest they use the laser satellite in space that Alan used to blow up the observatory that was used in the act to finish off the Silver Sentry.

"Stitch, the guy didn't die from that, we don't even know if that would work or do any harm at all." Hoagie sternly explain to his partner that the laser satellite was a bad idea as they have no idea if that plan would harm the new foe or just cause more destruction in it's wake.

"Not to mention, besides 'de uploading could be slow, we end up blowing up a city block like we did at 'de observatory." Bob pointed out that using such a powerful weapon in space without giving it more thought would just be a waste of time and time is something the gang need a lot of.

"Aww, we can still try, right?" Wally groans to state off that they could maybe still try and see if something like that would work.

"No, listen to me, to defeat Control Freak, we've tried to discuss a way to change the tactic steps of approach." Alan spoke in wanting these kids and their koala alien pal to hear the ex-type villain out in how they can stop the rouge hero. "I've always used my brain over Silver Sentry's strength, but even my old foe had brains to know how to handle him." The man explained forth that from many of his battles (and defeats), the Silver Sentry used his strength, will of heart and mind.

"So Alan here thinks that with Control Freak only being more of just brute force and not much on brains, we can beat him." Number 4 stated the plan out in how the gang can win, brains trumpeting over brawn.

"That plan's not bad at all." Nigel rubbed his chin in hearing this plan out, and by the sounds of it, there was plenty that was right about Control Freak. "In fact, that could very much help us stop Control Freak." The bald kid declared out with a smile, the plan may very well be the answer they were seeking.

"Yes, precisely what I believe!" Alan nods in agreement with Nigel in seeing the plot of his idea. "Bob, call in the Combat Bots, the rest of the Toy Minions and the Exterminators to meet us back at our hideout!" He commanded out to his best pals to get things set for the next stage to commence. "We're about to perform….Code: Saving The Day!" The man proclaimed out the next code name phase of what they are going to call this operation, and it truly does fit the plot.

"Right away, sir!" Bob nods in hearing his leader's command, and will follow it. "Number 4." The guy turned to his cat friend to do that honor for them.

"Got it!" Number 4 nods before pressing some buttons on his other wrist for a communicator to start sending out a signal to their HQ.

With things set in motion, the gathered forces of evil, along with the forces of the males of the KND & Freelance Police going with this. As luck had it, when the Freelance Police wondered where the get a ride, their red space cruiser fell from the sky. Most of the group wondered how that happened, which Stitch replied that he asked and received though in Bob and Number 4's mind thought Control Freak was throwing stuff cause he was still letting off steam and trying to cause destruction, etc. But never the less, this was perfect, they got in the Freelance Police's ride, and drove straight to Alan's hideout without being spotted by Control Freak. Once they made it to Alan's HQ spot, many of villain's Combat Bots, Toy Minions, even his back online Exterminators were their to greet their creator's return. Now the Freelance Police team smiled in seeing that they have a chance, with an army of 10, no 100,000 Combat Bots all awaiting, added the Toy Minions and the powerful Exterminators, they got a chance, and now it's time to get things for Alan's new plan…into motion.

Hoagie ask Alan, "Hey, how did you manage to score 100 life sentences? I mean, until relatively recently, you've never actually killed anybody."

Alan admits, "Well, numerous counts of prison break, kidnapping, robbery, destruction of private property and technically-attempted murder DO add up, to be fair."

Author's note
All right, Alan has decided to be a hero and team up with the heroes to stop Control Freak and save the girls as well as the city. In the next chapter, it's the final battle. Can the gang stop Control Freak? Read, review and suggest.

This chapter has references to the second Superman movie, with Christopher Reeve as the hero, and Marlon Brando playing his father, Jor-El.

The line 'Blasting Off Again!' was a line used by Team Rocket from the Pokemon TV series from Season 1 to 13, then by Season 14, they became more serious professional agents & not seen like laugh offs from the past. It's also to think back to those old times in how much these villains were seen a lot for their goofy acts, before a new change came to make things 'interesting' in the new Season & so forth.
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Only two more chapters to go and this fanmake will soon be done. It's been a long time but...you get the idea, right?

Chapter 10: Rage against Control Freak

Control Freak hold a camera back at the Toonpire State Building, waiting for Alan and the others to arrive. The villain broadcast while exclaiming, "Hey dorks! This here is the Toonmpire State Building, a symbol of our city's strength..." The crowd watching look worried as he continues. "But as for me, it's only the reminder of the day that this woman ripped my heart out viciously...and I hate reminders!"

Control Freak tosses the camera away, the girls gasps as he flew downward and begins bashing the pieces of the tower. The villain is going to destroy this place with them still on it!

Cree and the hostage girls yelped from the tower tipping a bit, anymore and they'll fall to their doom.

"Okay, what are our chances to surviving this?" Angelilo asked from feeling a bit worried about their situation.

"Number 5 says zip to none." Abigail dryly stated this off as an easy answer, but wasn't too happy about it.

"Oh, well those are good odds, right? Right…?" Kuki responded in thinking what she heard was good news, but to her confusion and the others faces…not so much.

"Control Freak!" Cree shouted out the name of the guy that's trying to bring down the building tower, with her, her sister and friends along with it.

Soon Control Freak flew back up and stomped on the tower where Cree and her friends were still tied to the pole.

"Please, don't do this! Especially not to my sister, she didn't do this to you or her friends." Cree tried to plead to this power-lunatic being to not do this act, if not for her, then for her sister's friends at the very least. She comment, "Look Control Freak, I speak from personal experience. Just as there proved to be good in ME, even after the nastiness I myself have committed in the past, there MUST be SOME good in YOU, Control Freak." The teen girl tried to speak some reason to get Control Freak to see that the guy is not all evil, that some part of him was once good.

"Yeah, like how you and Cree were together on the news crew. You weren't that bad, back then!" Kuki tried to bring up her cheery side to have Control Freak think of the times with Cree…but that only fueled the guy's rage.

"You are so naive, Cree even for a bad teen gone rogie from refusing to be decommissioned from the KND!" Control Freak sighed with a disapproved expression in seeing how Cree was trying to talk reason into the guy, not happening, really. "You say you see the good in everybody, kids, teens, adults, even when it's not there while you be bad? Is that how you were lead to believe before you left the Kids Next Door?" The new villain glared at Cree in stating that the teen girl says such things, it's nothing but words, nothing more, as it's only a foolish & delusional belief on the rogue teen's part.

"What's he talking about?" Angelilo asked a bit lost and puzzled, what was this villain talking about?

"He's saying about when Cree left the Kids Next Door, something changed her when she got older." Abigail stated to explain about something that connected with her sister. "But what that was she never said." The girl shook her head in not knowing what cause Cree to leave their KND in the first place.

"Do you think that she only left because she was afraid of losing all her memories, including the times with you and fought even against you to keep those memories alive?" Kuki spoke out a really farfetched random idea in why Cree did such a thing in the first place as betraying the KND when it came to becoming decommissioned.

"Kuki, that's got to be…" Abigail also said this out except, she thought about this with wide eyes. "Wait….is that, really true?" The sister looked to Cree in surprised eyes, if this piece of fact was true, that her older sister left…cause of that reason.

"I…didn't wanna forget, so I took the only thing left for me, even if that meant being an enemy to the Kids Next Door and living a new life." Cree looks guilty while admitting the deep-dark truth of herself, to protect her memories of her other KND life, she gone rogue.

"Oh boo-boo, like that's even believable!" Control Freak pretended to make a false sorrow face while dryly stating with annoyance in hearing that claim.

"Hey! You can't be that mean when a girl shows her feelings!" Angelilo snapped at the really big jerk for insulting Cree's feelings of what happened to her.

"Why shouldn't I? It's cause of those feelings, despite being bad, she never loved me back. And even if she wants to change a bit, even to be a news reporter, she's still the same, just like me!" Control Freak remotely stated a rhetorical remark about how Cree never cared for him, even when being bad once before while trying to live a normal little teen life, it'll never happen.

"You're crazy! My sister…" Abigail snapped at the creep with anger for now insulting Cree by saying that the two are alike, when this sister knows her sibling ain't not a derange monster like Control Freak is.

"Is nothing but a hollow part of who she once was, both good and bad, and even trying to live a normal life." Control Freak cuts off Numbuh 5's statements to say nothing Cree does, even matters in the slightest as she'll always be bad. "You're just living in a fantasy Cree!" Control Freak remarked off to state this fact, which Cree lowered her head with such sorrow on her expression. "There is no Easter Bunny!" The new villain exclaimed forth to say in trying to tell this fact out. "There is no Tooth Fairy, no Sandman, no Jack Frost, no St. Nick, no Leprechaun with his own cereal, no talking books with a kid from a Christmas movie and there is definitely no singing and dancing mouse with his own amusement park!!" He got his hands out of a grip to wiggle them around, like some 'pretend' magical fantasy act. "And most of all there is no Queen of England!" The guy shook his head while he whispered off this message for Cree to get, all of those things…are not real!

"Hey wait! There are so those people!" Kuki spoke out in protest in recalling knowing that such fairy tale creatures exist.

"Right, and there's even a queen in England even as we speak!" Angelilo spoke out in stating that Control Freak's knowledge of such things was very limited.

Cree however, only seem to look within more sorrow before looking up to Control Freak in hearing his hurtful words.

"This is the real world, you guys!" Control Freak sternly stated off for Cree, even her friends being hostage to know that the real world is different from how they see it. "And you need to WAKE up! And grow up to see, no child dream can EVER come true!" The guy glared at Cree to conclude his statement that she needs to wake up and see the truth as he has, but in the wrong way. What this new villain was saying, was that it was time that Cree face the reality facts of what she believes against everything else as nothing can change for the better as the teen girl who feels and lives in a fantasy within her heart to see what is true and let the dreams…be destroyed by reality's cold grip.

However, as Control Freak was ranting, he failed to see what was behind him. Dark clouds were creeping up from behind and they were not way above either. Just then, some background of rock music was heard called 'Welcome To The Jungle' by Guns N' Roses was being heard. This got a puzzled Control Freak's attention, even the puzzled looks of Cree & the other hostages stared up at…something. Just then, as Control Freak turned to see, thunder booming sounds was heard as they were surrounded by clouds. Then a flash of lightning was seen, but from the front, there was a weather machine that appeared during the Silver Sentry's museum opening that was lighting up the sky with neon blue lights. Control Freak flew up to stare at what was gong on here.

Below, the citizens saw a dark cloud shaping like a crescent trying to go around the tower with it's lights flashing outward like it was a stage show. Then there was some other energy source coming from below the ground and going into the storm.

At that time, the tower that was almost tipping, cease with Cree and the girls yelping from the sudden stopped motion. Then from the blind neon lights, some surprises came from the hostages, as from below, the energy light source was some of Alan's Combat Bots.

"Ohhh, pretty light show!" Kuki spoke with a smile, liking the little show here.

"Lights nothing, those are Combat Bots!" Angelilo spoke off in recognizing the lights being Alan's Combat Bots.

"Then Alan is behind this little stunt show!" Abigail stated out in realizing who has come for them…and maybe not alone neither.

"You dare to challenge the mighty Alan Matthews?!" Within the cloud while the glowing energize Combat Bots went in the dark clouds, some light was shown above to made the feature shadow head that was speaking to those below…it was Alan Matthews! Control Freak and Cree along with the hostage girls recognize that feature, even after a little lightning strike flash from above the shadow image of the savior.

"This place ain't big enough for TWO super-villains! !" Control Freak snapped off to declare with an annoyed and angry expression to let Alan Matthews know that there can only be one of them that stays in this city.

The girls smiled, but none more bigger than Cree, Alan has come to save them, to save her, everyone, from Control Freak.

"Oh, you're a villain all right." As Alan Matthews spoke this out with echoey voice sounds off all sides to hear, from out of the storm clouds, the guy's head appeared, but was glowing & seemed dotted out. "Just not a super one." Alan's GIANT head got closer to declare this fact out about what Control Freak is not really of the Super Villain part even while as being a Villain. And strangely, the giant head seem pretty much looking like a dotted light pattern.

"Oh, yeah?" Control Freak spoke off to challenge that remark claim in hearing what Alan Matthews was saying about him. "Well...what's the difference? " He flew up with a snarling face, demanding to know, what is the difference of being a 'Villain' & a 'Super Villain' from this city's old villain foe of the Silver Sentry.

Then suddenly, the giant head of Alan Matthews opened it's mouth to let out his tongue. And from a small difference, it looked like there was someone else inside coming out. But wait, not just one, one, two, three, four, five figures were coming out. But the one leading down the tongue that glowed, as the person held up his arms to approach Control Freak, Cree & the rest of the girls for them to see…who this was! And soon, it was none other then Alan Matthews, in his own outfi, as he, along with Nigel & Wally on the right while Hoagie & Stitch on the left, stops on the edge of the tongue display.

"PRESENTATION!" Alan Matthews shouted off in announcing with prideful decree that Super Villain's, know how to present themselves in the most flashiest of styles! Even the Freelance Police and the KND of Sector V pose with their knees bent and guns held by both hands to point up and vertically to make a really cool pose here along with Alan being the center.

"Oh yeah! The boys Are BACK!" Stitch pronounced off like a rocker of a band.

"And we're here to say this…" Hoagie declared off in what the others are here to do now.

"We're gonna KICK…YOUR….BUTT!" Wally shouted off to snap in what the boys plan to do to Control Freak.

"Save the city & save the girls!" Nigel exclaimed out the final statement that they'll fight, save the day and free their captive friends.

"Guys!/Hoagie!/Wally!/Stitch!" Cree, Abigail, Kuki and Angelilo shouted out with a cheer in seeing the entire gang was here to save them.

Then in another awe struck moment, the light dotted image of Alan Matthews's open mouth head got flashy blue, light-blue, emerald green and white light shows coming out fro the back of the head projection along with flashy violet spark effects. Say whatever you may want of the guy, but Alan Matthews knows how to make a presentation of an entrance to the party and that's the key element to have when being..a 'Super' Villain class!

"WAUUHHAAAAAHhhh…" Control Freak lashed out his battle cry as he soon begins to dive for the guy he wants to murderize.

"Bye-bye, stupid-head!" Stitch taunted with a little wave in what the five got plans to do here.

Then Alan and the team dived down where Control Freak missed them and gone deeper into the mouth of the projected head.

"What the?" Control Freak yelped from not stopping and whirl around deeper in the mouth. And soon there waiting for the villain were Alan's Exterminators, the Toy Minions, along with the entire Combat Bots forces of the entire projectile head.

"It's PAY Back Time, girly-man!" Shellshock snarled off at the creep for what Control Freak did to the bots last time with more weapons out than whenever he can count.

"This time, we're more upgraded! To teach you a lesson!" Reactor declared out with his reactor core now going up to critical mass.

"Hisss…" Eviscerator hissed with his talon blades glowing extra sharp, the bot is ready to deliver the pain.

"And with 100,000 of us, to do it!" Merc proclaimed out in showing their buds here are all gun ready.

"Wait…how many?" Control Freak asked out from finally paying closer attention to his surroundings, and two words came to mind. "Uh-no," Even this guy, with super powers, might have a harder time fighting out this much opponents.

"Close the mouth!" Green shouted to the ones in the front to seal off the exit and keep the villain here in.

"Clufruvhpvhmm…" Soon the image of Alan's head slam shut it's mouth, keeping Control Freak inside. "Bang-Bang-bang…." And the battle inside the holo-projection of Alan's head commenced to keep the villain distracted while 'other' steps are taking into motion. Such as when the new hero and the good guys dropped from the mouth, what was waiting below them was the red cruiser police car for the Freelance Police and swell galactic looking hover-cycle ride for Alan himself to ride. And boy are they gonna need them, cause now the tower was losing it's last bit of strength to hold up and begins to tip more over than before. And just at that moment, the music in the background begins to have the artist sing at this time.

Welcome To The Jungle

"Waaaughhaaaahhh!" Cree and the girls were screaming in fright as they were starting to descend forward on the pole of the tower. And while they fell, Alan's projection head was still chewing on Control Freak while the bots & toys inside were blasting the creep.

We've Got Fun N' Games

"Secure that tower!" Alan issued to his spare Combat Bots when he and the Freelance Police saw the distress. Soon the other Combat Bots flew down and each grabbed a part of the tower structure to slow the descent.

We Got Everything You Want

"Heroes to the rescue! YEEHAAAH!" Stitch shouted for joy, as he, the gang and Alan rev. up their engines to floor it down to save the girls.

Honey, We Know The Names

Soon, coming to the tower, the heroes raced to the rescue without delay.

We Are The People That Can Find

Cree & the girls looked up to see the determined Alan and team of heroes driving to the max to come to their rescue.

Whatever You May Need

The girls looked over the edge for fear of falling, but then Alan and the boys arrive near them with assuring expressions.

"Boy, are we glad to see you fellas!" Abigail spoke when Stitch came off to untie the antenna's of Angelilo holding the three girls together.

If You Got The Money, Honey

"Alan, somewhere in my heart, despite me being evil, I knew you come back." Cree sighs with relief on her face, feeling glad Alan was here while speaking of which, the guy tried to pull the metal off the teen girl holding her to the tower.

"Well, besides the Freelance Police gang, that make one of us!" Alan exclaimed off in feeling that someone had some fate he come to save the day.

We Got Your Disease

Soon Alan took out a freeze gun and froze Cree's metal rope binds that soon broke and freed the girl, just one problem.

In The Jungle

"Waaugh!" Cree yelped from when she almost was going to fall, but then Alan grabbed her ankle to pull her on his ride.

Welcome To The Jungle

Once Cree, and the rest of the girls got secured on Alan and the Freelance Police's rides, it was time to book it. And behind them, Alan's head projection was looking puzzled, from in it's mouth, some fighting was going on.

Watch It Bring You To Your Knees, Knees

Suddenly, the head projection was not looking too good from it's stuff mouth, as something was glowing red that looked ready to… "Powwwvhmmm.../Waaaaughh…" Well let's say that the projection head of Alan imploded from a powerful force that also sent a lot of the Toy Minions, Combat Bots, even the three Exterminators outwards. And in the center, it was Control Freak with his glowing red eyes, he had enough of Alan so much that the weak villain sent his bots to try and stall him. As the bots were flying and falling dotards, Conrol Freak glares out to see that Alan & the Freelance Police saved Cree and the girls, they fooled him.

"Oh man, he BEAT them all ALREADY!" Hoagie yelped from seeing that Control Freak defeat Alan's ENTIRE Evil Force, even other heroes never managed that, unless they were the Silver Sentry.

"What's he gonna do now, throw a building at us?" Wally shrug off his shoulders to ask what else was gonna happen now.

I Wanna Watch You Bleed

Then in a fast flight path, Control Freak doves downward to the falling tower that once held the captive news girl and friends and he…was in position to catch it.

Welcome To The Jungle

"Powcrufhvm…" And just like that, Control Freak stopped the half broken tower from going further with 'his' (Silver Sentry's powers) to stop the heavy building.

We Take It Day By Day

"RARRRRRRAARRUGH!" Then Control Freak pushed with a lot of his force upwards with his back into it.

If You Want It You're Gonna Bleed
But It's The Price You Pay


"Um Wally, I think he heard you!" Kuki pointed back for the Freelance Police team to take notice of what's happening.

"Oh crud!" Wally looked back and cursed himself, him and his big mouth.

True to word, Control Freak was lifting up the building tower like it was a giant missile.

And You're A Very Sexy Girl

"Clashpowfruvhmm…" Of course, Control Freak didn't watch what he was doing when turning the broken half tower and bashed a portion of it against another building without a care.

That's Very Hard To Please

While Alan and the Freelance Police were driving, Cree and the girls saw what was happening and gone wide eyes at seeing what was happening.

You Can Taste The Bright Lights
But You Won't Get Them For Free


"He's planning to launch an entire building at us? That's just crazy, baby!" Abigail yelped off to state that from seeing this, not even the Silver Sentry used his powers to go 'that far' to beat an opponent.

"Tell me. What's the plan?" Cree asked Alan if he or the Freelance Police or KND had some plan before Control Freak does something…crazy!

In The Jungle
Welcome To The Jungle


"Well in truth…it mostly involves us…Not-Dying!" Alan spoke from when he looked back at seeing the danger threat gone up max by the crazy stunt by Control Freak and saying that for them, it's best they don't die.

It's Gonna Bring You To Your

"I like that plan!" Cree exclaim doff with a small tremor of fear and held Alan closely while he rides, even if the plan was not technical or whatever, it's still better then nothing, right?

"So do we!" The other girls responded too, Abigail held Hoagie, Angelilo held Stitch, Kuki held Wally, and Nigel just continued to watch the insane villain to warn the group when to watch out for the big danger coming.

It's Gonna Bring You Down-HA!

"RAARRUUARRRRUGH!" Soon Control Freak was in position, and soon hurled forth the towering building forward with all his might. The half broken tower was launched off like a spear, and it's heavier bottom dropped while still moving forward. And pretty much, it was around this time, the song in the background cease, to bad that it happened, RIGHT, with something ACTUALLY falling down towards our group.

"EVERYONE! MAX THRUSTER POWER, NOW!" Nigel shouted from seeing the danger of a falling building approaching, even Alan looked back to see this and they all knew…they gotta get out of that thing's range.

The group continues fleeing, trying to dodge the edge of the building that the villain has send right at them. Wally comment, "If that tip of the building hits us, it'll be the second biggest nedle that we ever saw!"

Kuki ask, "What Was The Biggest?"

Wally response with, "My last flu shot!"

The gang sees the building getting closer and tries to speed up. But then there's a problem. Both rides are in the 'E' sector. Angelilo warns the the others, "Were on the E gauge?"

Angelilo remarks, "Maybe E Stands for 'Extra' Fuel!"

Hoagie snaps stating, "No! E stands for Empty!"

Nigel complains, "Who forgot to refuel our rides before we left to save the day?"

Then Alan sees something, a cushion roof that the gang are passing. He tells the boys, "Guys, we came to save the girls, and save them we shall."

Alan, along with the Freelance Police team, throws the girls off their rides to safety. The latter screams as they land on the cushion roof.

Then suddenly, Alan's ride trips and smacks the Freelance Police's ride, sending them all flying off before…things grow dark.

When Cree and the girls come to, they suddenly see that destruction. Nigel, Wally, Hoagie and Stitch are scattered on the ground, groaning and complaining. The bald boy groans, "That plan could have gone better."

"So where's Alan?" Wally ask with a groan.

Suddenly a stabbing noise is heard, makign the group gasps. Cree in horror said, "No..."

"Alan!" Most of hte group exclaims in horror. In front of a fountain, they see Alan's body in a sat up stage, with the building's pole looking like it stab the guy. The new hero is badly injured.

"Alan...oh man!" Abigail groans as the gang begins to rush up to him in hopes to help the former villain.

The gang tries to quickly go to Alan, only for Control Freak to fly in and interrupt behind them after landing on the ground. Angelilo exclaims furiously, "You monster! You are even worst than before!"

"That was easier than I thought. Looks like there's only one loos end to take care of now." Control Freak said darkly. The villain says as he flies to a nearby bus, "Time You all to catch the Bus…OUTTA Life!"

Hoagie remark, "Oh sure, NOW, he learns to do the banter talk?"

Just before the villain kicks the bus heading straight for the girls and the injured Freelance Police, which of course, they try to duck, and Stitch jumps in to plan of stopping the thing. Control Freak does so as the gang brace themselves...

But without warning, lasers came from out of nowhere and split the bus into the two. The group looks confused, what just happened? They gasps as they themselves saw a familiar face landing on the scene!

"Silver Sentry!" The gang exclaims in amazement as the Silver Sentry lands on the group. Cree couldn't believe it. The superhero who retired has returned! Could it be that he decided to come out of retirement to stop Control Freak after all?

As the Silver Sentry dust himself off, he spoke to the stunned Control Freak, "Please, try to have a little respect for the public transportaiton."

"You came back!!" Cree exclaims to the Silver Sentry in amazement. She has lost faith in the hero but it appears to have returned.

"Cree, you were right. I shouldn't have left."

"No way! I thought you were dead!" Control Freak exclaims in shock and horror. The Silver Sentry is alive? Oh boy, this isn't good.

"In the words of a famous author, my death was...greatly exaggerated." The Silver Sentry remarks as he clashes his fists. "Well, so you must be the punk that I've heard about."

The Silver Sentry flies after Control Freak, causing the villain to scream like a girl as he flies off. Even with his new powers, even Control Freak knows that he's no match against the previously thought dead superhero!

"Well, Control Freak is getting his butt kicked big time." Wally remarks with a chuckle.

"Serves Control Freak right." Hoagie remarks with a happy chuckle. Cree on the other hands looks worried at the injured Alan, he doesn't look so good.

Stitch break the pole in half that seem to be stuck in the fallen ex-villain . The alien asks in concen, "Alan?"

"Sorry, everyone...we did everything we could..." Alan groans to everyone while couging a bit.

"Oh, I'm so proud of you." Cree sniffs in sadness. The woman then looks confused as she realizes something. "Wait, 'we'? But you were the one who got stabbed, not..."

The group looks surprised as Alan holds up a familiar watch and removes it. To their surprise furhter, he transformed back to a familiar fish riding on a humanoid cat, the cat's own suit busted a bit and Bob's bowl cracked.

"Bob? Number Four?" Cree ask in surprise.

"Surprise!" Bob chuckles a bit.

"Wait, so you two were pretending to be Alan?" Kuki ask Bob and Number Four in surprise. "But..."

"He's the real hero." Number Four explains as he points to the flying Silver Sentry. The others standing turn and saw another watch on the hero as he zooms past them. It didn't take long for them to realize what the cat meant.

"Alan!" Cree gasps in surprise. So Alan is impersonating the Silver Sentry. But something else confuses the reporter. "Wait, Number Four can talk?"

"Long story, I assure you." Abigail chuckles to her sister with a grin. "I guess that's what Alan was talking to Bob and Number Two in secret."

"Right, go get them!" Hoagie calls out to the disguised Alan eagerly.

"Ih, beat Control Dork up but enough so weega can get some shots in!" Stitch laughs excitedly at the battle.

Alan chuckles in his Silver Sentry form. Control Freak frantically does his best to escape the hero whom he thought has returned. The villain apparently is scared of the Silver Sentry.

"Hey, going somewhere?" Alan calls out to the yelping Control Freak as the good guy follows him dangerously close. "Other than jail?"

Control Freak tries to escape but Alan flew in front of him, grabbing him. The villain screams, "Not in the face, anything but that, come on!"

"Listen, Control Freak, if you know what's good for you, you stay out of this stupid city, as well as the citizens, Cree and my friends for good!"

"Right, no problem, got it!"
"Good, and make sure you return the stuff that you stole, along with those arcade games based on the movies of this year in your bathroom!" Alan snaps to the villain sternly.

"Sure, will do!" Control Freak exclaims quickly as he zooms away after Alan lets go. The crowd belows cheers eagerly as the hero flew down. The Silver Sentry has returned, they can't believe it!

Cree smiles as she and her friends came up to the disguised villain. Mayor Whoo exclaims, "The Silver Sentry has returned! It's a miracle!"

Nigel chuckles a bit while saying, "Actually, Mayor...it isn't the Silver Sentry. Cree?"

"Right...isn't that right, Alan?" Cree ask Alan slyly as she motions the fake Silver Sentry's hand which he allows her to take.

Cree then takes the watch off, changing the former villain back to his normal self wearing a jet pack. The crowd gasps, this time in surprise. They were saved by Alan Matthews? A baby giggles a bit.

"Looks like you did good, Al." Hoagie remarks to Alan with a smile. "You are definitely a true hero."

"Yeah, I like to see the look on that stupid fat butt's face now!" Stitch laughs madly, wanting to see the look on Control Freak's face for his defeat.

"Well, guess waht? You got your wish!" A familiar voice snaps furiously. The gang gasps as they saw Control Freak returning, looking ticked of. "Well, well, pretty sneaky, pal, but there's only one person who would called this city 'stupid', something that even the Silver Sentry won't do...as well as know what I stole before!"

"Uh oh." Alan gulps a bit in worry. Not good, maybe he shouldn't have gave himself away.

"YOU!"

"Oh boy, maybe we should've beat him down with Alan." Angelilo gulps a bit, not liking this one bit.

The citizens scream as they ran from Control Freak, this won't be pretty. Nigel yells as he punches the villain but the boy yelps in alarm as his fist is wincing in pain.

"Oh, you think it's pretty funny, eh?" Control Freak remarks as he grabs Alan and the Freelance Police and tossing them right into some car, the trio crash into them. "Let's all laugh at the cool guy, eh?" Control Freak fires his lasers at Nigel and Abigail, almost hitting them. "Well, the time for laughter is over!"

Kuki comment, "How dare you?! HOW DARE YOU?! Look here, Mister. Just because you're super-powerful doesn't mean you get to be a bully! You might be able to bench press skyscrapers, fly to Mars and back in an hour, withstand heavy artillery and shoot lasers from your eyes, but you do not - I repeat, you DO NOT HURT MY FRIENDS!"

Control Freak snort sarcastically, "And just what are you going to do? Try to stare me down until I break into tears and fly off in shame? I'm not some dragon and this isn't Equestria."

Cree looks worried as her new love and her friends are dodging Control Freak's attacks. This isn't good. How will they stop him? Just then, the girl notices something, some dirt floating in mid-air...then she recognizes this area as to where Cree dumped Alan in the rain that night. Of course, that's it!

"The invisible car." Cree said with a smile. Turning to Alan, she exclaims, "Alan! Remember that night when I dumped up?"

Alan dodges a car being blown up, looking annoyed to Cree while snapping, "Blast it, you're bringing this up now?!"

"Right and it was Wally's fault, not Alan's!" Abigail exclaims to Wally in agreement with Alan's thought. Now is not the time for this!

"I said I was sorry, okay?!" Wally exclaims in annoyance while dodging another destroyed car. "Just drop it!"

"Everyone, split up so that he can't hit all of us!" Nigel orders the others as the groups separated with Hoagie, Stitch and Alan in one group and Nigel, Wally, Kuki, Abigail and Angelilo in the other, dodging the villain's attack.

"To tell you the truth, I did look back!" Cree exclaims to Alan, trying to get his attention to his car.

Control Freak toss a police car to Alan's group as they dodge it. Alan asks Cree in surprise, "Wait you did?!"

"Right...and it's time for you to look back right now!"

Alan's group looks confused...until they turn around and saw dirt floating in mid-air. Of course, that's it! Cree must've found the invisible car...where the defuser gun is in!

"Right, right, I get it now!" Alan exclaims in realization. "Guys, to the car!'

Alan's group flew/rush over to the invisible car, but one laser hits the former villain's jet pack, knocking him right to the ground. Control Freak laughs sinisterly while exclaiming, "Escape is no option! Death is!"

"Guys, get away from him!" Abigail exclaims to Alan and the Freelance Police in alarm. The former villain prepares to jump to his car but Control Freak kicks him down then grabs him, preparing to finish Alan.

"Now, this is the last time you make a fool out of me!"

"Ha, shows what you know! I only made you a hero, you did the fool thing by yourself!" Alan scoffs to Control Freak, pointing out the truth as well as insulting Control Freak at the same time.

Control Freak then punches Alan to the Freelance Police, sending them crashing into a wall nearby the invisible car. The trio groans a bit while Hoagie remarks, "Okay, that guy, I really hate him now."

"Stitch always hated him." Stitch remarks dryly to Hoagie with a shrug.

The trio grunts as they struggle to the invisible car. Control Freak exclaims madly, "You, Alan, are pathetic! You are always the loser no matter what side you're on!"

"There's a benefit to losing, Control Freak. You gotta learn from your mistakes!" Alan snaps to Control Freak in determination.

"FYI, there's still loserdom, buddy! Learning is for losers!"

Cree's group watch what's going on as Nigel comments to Cree and his friends, "Yeah...now you can see why we're against him having powers in the first place."

"Don't remind me." Angelilo said with an annoyed sigh.

Quickly, Alan's group opens the door and hops it, closing the door in time. Control Freak looks confused as he looks around, asking, "Where did those idiots go?!"

Alan and his group waste no time as they look around the backseat of the car and found the defuser gun. The former villain grabs the weapon, preparing to use it...until Alan saw that it's charging right now.

"Ugh, you got to be kidding me!" Alan exclaims in annoyance and disbelief. "Bob, if I live, I swear, I'm going to kill you!"

Suddenly a familiar arm grabs the doorway and rips it open, forcing the car to turn invisbile. Control Freak glances and saw his enemies holding onto the door that he's holding. Stitch smiles sheepishly while clicking the lock, saying, "Weega forgot to lock it..."

"ENJOY YOUR FLIGHT, LOSERS!" Control Freak exclaims as he toss Alan and the Freelance Police right into the air, much to the horror of those watching.

"ALAN!" Cree screams in horror.

"HOAGIE!" Abigail exclaims at the sight of Numbuh 2 getting tossed into the air.

"STITCH!" Angelilo exclaims in horror as her own love is being tossed into the air.

"GUYS!" Nigel, Wally and Kuki exclaims in worry. The heroes saw Control Freak glaring at them, forcing the six to run off with the furious super being chasing them.

Meanwhile, Alan and the Freelance Police continues flying into the air before the door came down. The trio looks down and screams as they begin falling downward to their doom...

End Flashback (the story's)

As the former villain and the Freelance Police continues falling, Alan is heard narrating, "Well, this is where you came in. This is how it ends, I guess. I'd chalk this one to be my last big failure...I'd do this as a final request..."

Stitch comment, "Water coming up. I might be durable enough to survive the fall, but I'll still sink like a large stone when I hit the water." Alan's eyes widen as he saw that he himself, Hoagie and Stitch are about to land in a fountain below. That's it!

"...but not this time! What can I say? Old habits really die hard!"

Alan smirks as he takes his Dehydrator gun while calling out to the Freelance Police, "Boys, get ready! I got a crazy idea!" The Freelance Police, suspecting that their former enemy has an idea, prepare themselves as a zap sound is heard.

Soon Cree & the gang were running a bit back while the KND team tried blasting their weapons at Control Freak without much success as the last time. They had to yelp from the falling car door from Alan's car as Cree steps over into the fountain, followed by the others. Control Freak was gaining closer and closer to them as he was floating.

"Waugh…Haaugh!" Cree yelped from seeing that the group were getting cornered with nowhere else to go.

"Keep him back as much as you can! He's trying to finish off Cree!" Nigel signaled to the others to keep on hammering Control Freak no matter what, they can't let him get to Cree.

"Try telling HIM that!" Wally shouted off a remark to keep blasting his blaster at the super-powered villain, that was not going down.

"Back you creep-super-powered villain jerk!" Kuki snapped off to keep blasting a few shots from her hands to keep Control Freak away from them.

"Keep this up, Hoagie and Stitch have to get Alan and that Defuser gun here as fast as they can! That is if the trio survived their fall!" Angelilo stated to the rest, unless they can buy enough time, she hopes that the others will be able to stop Control Freak and take away his powers.

"They better or this villain will finish us off!" Abigail stated off from seeing how close Control Freak was getting, the guy was pushing himself against the KND 2x4 technology no matter how much a heavy pounding the heroes dish out.

"Alright, you know what, I'm done playing with you loser kids!" Control Freak snapped off in having just about enough of these kids and pink koala freak from getting to the last person he wants to give payback to. "Clupowwfruvhmmm…" Then he made a hand motion of his hands that sent off a shockwave wind pressure against the small attackers.

"Waaaughh…" The KND of Nigel, Wally, Kuki, and Angelilo were sudden blown off and landed a bit far away from the fountain.

"Woooh…" Abigail was almost about to be blow away too, except for one thing. "Gripvhm…" And that would be, a familiar evil hand that grabbed the girl around the neck. "Uaagh…" Abby yelped to use her hands to struggle herself free from the Control Freak.

"Abigail!" Cree cried out in horror as Control Freak hovered before the teen girl with her sister in the villain's grip. "Control Freak, let her go!" Cree spoke in demand, trying to put on a brave face, despite the situation involves this guy wanting to kill her for breaking his heart.

"Oh, I'll let her go, the place where that loser Alan & Freelance Police went to…their end!" Control Freak spoke off with a sly smile in what he plans to do with Numbuh 5 of Sector V, make her join those that are gonna be dead.

"Guagh…uuuagh!" Abigail yelped struggle harder as she felt the 'squeeze' being pressured in on her neck.

"What do you think Cree?" Control Freak asked Cree with a blank emotionless expression towards Cree. "The death by choking, or my personal favorite, the laser beam eyes." The villain was thinking on how to end this kid right now and right in front of Cree too.

"Let her go, I'm the one who broke your heart, not Abby!" Cree pleaded with much concern, she can't let her only sister be killed by a psycho like Control Freak, Cree still cares for her sister deep inside.

"Oh you broke it alright, now I'm about to break something of yours!" Control Freak remarked off in knowing how Cree broke his heart, now he intends to do the same…right now. "And I think I know which choice to go for; both crushing & laser vision!" The villain stated with a little wicked expression in how he intends to finish off the girl here, by crushing and laser vision together.

"Numbuh 5!" The KND & Angelilo shouted off in seeing the next horror that was about to take place here.

"Say bye-bye to little sister here, Cree! She's ka-poof!" Control Freak exclaimed from increasing his grip and eyes glowing to fire his laser vision to finish off poor Abigail Lincoln.

"Wuuaagh…" Abby gasped in fear in seeing this and shut her eyes for the worst.

"Abby! Nooo…" Cree cried out with tears in her eyes, she can't lose her sister, but what can save Abigail from Control Freak in the mere seconds before…

"Poofvhmm…" But then, a sudden smoke cloud covered Control Freak's view but the laser beams shot out. The smoke cloud cleared from that attack and the villain got to react to that. "What the? Hugh!" Control Freak soon took a bigger notice from within his captive he had was…gone. "Where she go?" Control Freak angrily demanded, he had Numbuh 5, but where did she go, she couldn't have escape, so how?

"Gaaugh-Haauugh-haaah!" Suddenly from a splash, with Cree she saw Abby on her knees and rubbing her throat, it felt sore from her almost getting the life choked out of her.

"Oh Abby! You're alive!" Cree exclaimed for a brief joy and hugged her sister in a tight hug.

"Ugh, easy sis. I've been choked enough for today!" Abigail exclaimed to push a bit of Cree off of her from feeling too much being squeezed to death was enough already.

"How'd you do that, are you some magician?" Control Freak asked off in disbelief, how did his captive escape, that girl has no super powers, right?

"Does Numbuh 5 look like a magician to your coach-potato eyes?" Abigail rolled her eyes off to remark the villain thinking she was some sorta magician.

The rest of the KND & Angelilo sighed in relief, they thought the worst, but it passed over. Now if they can just deal with one last loose end.

"Very funny, now let's try this again…with the stage of the stakes higher!" Control Freak dryly and annoyingly stated the next step was to really finish off the last ones before him.

"Haugh…" Cree yelped from how much now Control Freak was closest to the teen girl and her sister, as he hovered and cease movement.

"Say bye-bye, Cree! You, your sister, and your friends!" Control Freak declared out in preparing to use his laser vision eyes to toast this teen girl that broke his heart.

But then without warning, something fell into the fountains water that caught Control Freak's bizarre attention. It was the same gun used by Alan Matthews, except why did it fall here, and where was the guy along with the Freelance Police? Cree, Abigail and the rest looked up to see a familiar glowing cube fall into the water? And then in another weird nut-shell twist, the glow flashed the water out and standing to protect their love ones was Alan Matthews, along with Hoagie and Stitch, looking dashingly bold of their uprising moment.

"We're back again!" Hoagie announced that they have returned once again to take the villain Control Freak by surprise.

"From our dying moment!" Stitch proclaimed out that the trio returned from another event where they would have been dead but that's another story.

Then what should fall into the ex-villain's arms then his own device that held Silver Sentry's super powers. "Ollo."" Alan greeted with a sly and confident expression as the 'Warming Up' gauge read 'DEFUSE' on it meaning that the gun was ready to separate the powers within Control Freak.

Suddenly, Control Freak's eyes suddenly became that of fear, the guy Alan & the Freelance Police are here and alive when they should be dead. "Aaaughh…" Just as Control Freak fired off his laser vision, Alan stuck his defusion weapon up the villain's nose while Cree & her sister duck down from the laser beams almost getting them.

"Oh yeah! PICK HIS NOSE! PICK HIS NOSE!" Stitch cheered in seeing this action, it was sweet to see Alan make the jerk look stupid.

"WAAAUUGH…" Control Freak wailed out from this as Alan activates the defusing process. "WAAUUGHH…. Control Freak yelped before he knew it, he was glowing a golden color, the same as the pill that was used from Silver Sentry's powers. "Nuagh-Aaauuugh…" The villain was feeling strange, he can feel his powers fading, leaving him. "Ugh-Uaaauugh…" As Alan was looking good, Control Freak's body began to change within the suit he wore. "Gaauugh…" Finally, the process was over, Control Freak fell on the ground on his back, his clothes looking strangely…loose. Alan, Cree, and the rest of the Freelance Police & KND Ops soon came to see the ending results.

There's Control Freak on the ground, no longer muscled and back to his normal self. Alan smirks while he explains, "Y'know, I forgot to tell you one very teensy weensy little detail about bad guys... They always, without fail, no matter how hard they try, LOSE! Trust me, I should know."

Numbuh One comment, "Your choice. You can surrender peacefully or you can opt to fight without your unearned powers. And keep in mind that you ARE outnumbered more than twenty-to-one, and, out of that number, a dozen have super-powers and most of the rest are either well-trained fighters, have access to advanced technology or both."

"Can weega beat the living day lights out of Control Freak now?" Stitch ask his friends hopefully, wanting to beat Control Freak for the trouble that he causes the good guys.

Hoagie says, "Knock yourself out." With that, Stitch pounces Control Freak, beating up the villain like mad.

"Hey, don't leave me out of this!" Wally laughs, joining the party as he beats up Control Freak, helping Stitch in all of the sudden.

All of Alan's Forces Show up, okay after they got blasted away, and also like to have a shot. They each say what they like, maybe make a claim about 'third times the charmer' kinda statement, which makes Control Freak, make a nervous little laugh.

After a while of this, Control Freak is now a huge mess on the ground. Cree smiles while exclaiming to Alan, "Alan, you did it, you won!"

"I finally had a reason to do so...you." Alan said to Cree with a smile. The woman hugs him, the former villain cringe a bit from the pain but warmly smile and hugs her right back.

The crowd cheers wildly. Control Freak has been defeated! Kuki exclaims happily, "We're heroes...and so is Alan!"

"Yeah, sure are!" Nigel exclaims with a smile.

"Wait, what about Bob and Number Four?" Hoagie ask his friends in concern. It's occur to the gang that there's two allies of theirs who seems to have fallen: Bob and Number Four.

Author's note
Control Freak is defeated but what about Bob and Number Four? In the next and final chapter, the story ends with Alan being a new hero...as well as some mysteries involved. Read, review and suggest!

The three things mentioned by Control Freak that he claims to not exist are obvious references to the Lucky Charms commercials, the Pagemaster and you-know-who, Mickey Mouse.

This chapter has reference to My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
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Here we go, the final chapter of this fanmake. After this, I will announce the next story in line.

To michael.mcjunkin.5, I did not know that. Thanks for pointing that out.

Epilogue: The New Hero of Town Town City

Alan heard coughing, making him gasps in alarm, "Bob! Number Four!" The boy rushes over to the fish and the cat groaning.

As Kuki picks up Bob, the gold fish groans, "Ah done can't see...it's cold, dark...an' warm...an' light..."

"Oh yeah, light, good to hear, go for it." Numbuh 3 exclaims happily.

"Wait, that's not good!" Abigail exclaims in alarm. "Get away from it, run off!"

"I think I used up all my nine lives..." Number Four groans in sadness and injury as if he's about to die.

"It's okay, Bob, Numbuh Four, I'm here." Alan said to to Bob and Number Four with a smile.

"Shucks, we done had a lot o' adventures together, me, Number Four an Ah..." Bob remarks to Alan with a sad smile.

"Yeah, sure have." Number Four said with a smile of his own, sad.

"Course, most o' them ended in horrible failure...but at least we won today, right sir?"

"Yes, Bob, Number Two. We did it, thanks to you two." Nigel said to Bob and Number Four with a sad smile while some of the group got tears in their eyes.

"Thanks, Bob." Angelilo said to Bob and Number Four with a sad sigh. Looks like her new friends are going to perish soon.

"Code...we're 'de good guys now." Bob said with a cough.

"Code: yeah, we are the good guys." Number Four coughs a bit as he and Bob are closer to dying.

"Code: I guess we are." Alan said with a sigh. It's true. He, Bob and Number Four are good guys now and nothing will change that ever again.

"Oh, oh! 'Dis is it, Ah done think it's 'de one!" Bob gasps like mad with Number Four gasping in horror. "We is going far away! Time fer us 'ta go..."

Bob gags and stutters, then went limps as Number Four closes his eyes for the last time. Most of the heroes sighs in sadness. Their new friends...are gone.

Alan sighs as he picks up Bob and...throws him into the fountain. The new hero roll his eyes while remarking, "He's such a drama king."

The heroes look surprised as Bob came out of the water, smiling with the fishes while remarking, "Oh! Ah done feel much better now! Guess Ah done needed a swim!" The crowd begins to applaud a bit.

"Wait, Bob was faking the whole thing?" Wally ask Alan in surprise and annoyance. The KND boy can't believe that he's feeling grief for a fish who was faking the whole thing.

Alan shrugs while remarking, "Eh, he had you going, didn't they? Oh, and Number Four? Get back up. You aren't really dying, that new armor I gave you is supposed to keep you from getting stabbed to death.

Number Four opens his eyes, looking confused as he ask, "But why do I feel so..." The cat suddenly made a huge burp, making the heroes cringe in disgust. "Oh, right. Sorry, I guess that tuna fish I had earlier has caught up with me."

"Whooo!" Cree exclaims excitedly. "Yeah, I can imagine!"

"Yeah, very Classic Bob. Awww, don't give me that face." Alan chuckles a bit, a few of the heroes laughs a bit as Bob gave a cute like face to them. "Come on, he will reel you in with that little face! Look at that face!"

"We did it!" Bob exclaims happily.

"Yeah, all right!" The Freelance Police cheers while high-fiving one anothr.

"You guys did it!" Cree exclaims with an excited smile. Control Freak is defeated, the city is saved and it's all thanks to the Freelance Police, their friends and the city's newest hero.

"Yeah, we did it, together!" Kuki exclaims while hugging Wally making the boy blush a bit.

"Yeah, we won, we won, we won!" Alan laughs with Cree as he twirls around with his new love.

"All right, everyone, let's hear for Alan Matthews!" Nigel exclaims with a smile. The crowd cheers as they gather around the group...until Alan yelps in alarm and pulls out his gun, causing them to gasp and back off in alarm.

"Hold it, no one move! Get back you savages!!"

"Whoa, whoa, sorry, sorry about that!" Cree exclaims to the crowd, getting in front of Alan while calming the folks down. "Alan is not use to positive feedback."

"Hey, you know what this calls for?" Angelilo ask her friends excitedly.

"Let me guess; a party!" Abigail guess with a wide smirk on her face.

"Well, yeah. How did you know?"

"I know you're trying to keep in practice for a certain role, well, an older version of half of you, will be playing in another one of this author's series."

Angelilo chuckles a bit while admitting, "Yeah, you got me there." The couples, even Wally and Kuki surprisingly, hug and kiss each other, to celebrate the defeat of Control Freak and Alan's new status as a hero to Toon Town City.

At the moment, Abigail Lincoln turned from her sister's state with Alan to the crowd and…noticed something. There was someone in the back of the crowd in an ally that was only wearing some yellowish blue cloak hooded outfit that covered the face. When the girl tried to focus on the mysterious person, other people walked by which by the time the opening reappeared, the mysterious hooded being was gone before Numbuh 5.

"Hugh?" Abigail responded puzzled in seeing this, who or where did that person disappear to?

"Something wrong, Abby?" Hoagie patted his girl from sensing something bothering her.

"Ugh, no, I'm fine, just tired." Abigail shook her head off with a little smile to say that she was fine.

"After what you went through, I'm glad you're safe." Hoagie smiled to happily state that he's just glad his girlfriend is okay.

"Aw, thanks, Hoagie, that's mighty sweet of you to say." Abigail smiled back at her man while giving him a hug, which Hoagie chuckled nervously by this surprise but didn't say no for it either.

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Time has passed and the city is being restored with a new hero. As the song "Fat by Weird Al' plays, the former villain's Combat Bots and Toy Minions begin making repairs to the city, which is getting better and better.

"Funny, I guess destiny isn't the path given to use but what we choose for urselves."

Soon a crowd is cheering as they are now celebrating the opening of a new museum, dedicated to their newest hero, Alan Matthews. The Freelance Police and their pals are on a stage with Cree and Mayor Whoo to welcome the new hero.

Cree ask ,"How did you manage to get everything set up so quickly for this museum party?"

Stitch puts in, "Three words: Angelilo's party cannon."

Soon a blast destroys a prop brick wall. The crowd cheers as Alan, in a new suit, came out with his laser gun, exclaiming, "All right, everyone! Put your hands in the air!" This makes them cheers wildly.

Some time later, at the restoring city, while the song "Fat by Weird Al" was playing, the Para Troop with Lakitus were repairing pieces of the city.

Your butt is wide, well mine is too
Just watch your mouth or I'll sit on you


"Now give me your wallets!" Alan exclaims madly as he points his gun at the crowd, making them gasp in alarm. The hero laughs a bit while remarking, "Ha ha ha! Just kidding! Come on, I ain't bad all the time!"

The crowd continues cheering some more, relieved that that what Alan said was a joke.

Your butt is wide, well mine is too
Just watch your mouth or I'll sit on you


Alan smiles as Cree hugs him. The girl then grins as she took out a familiar white ceremonial cape, like the one that the Silver Sentry has worn.

"And I gotta admit, being the good guy has its perks after all."

Ham on, ham on, ham on whole wheat, all right

"Gotta admit, Al, you look pretty good in white." Cree said to Alan with a gentle smile.

Wally ask, "How did Alan get acquitted for killing the Silver Sentry? Though the Sentry actually faked his own death so he could retire in peace."

Nigel admits, "The Silver Sentry sent a letter to the mayor confessing that he faked his own death so that he could retire in peace. The authorities were able to figure out that the letter was legit because it WAS in HIS hand writing AND had samples of his DNA that were from MONTHS after his supposed death."

"All right, if you plea..." Mayor Whoo yelps as Alan points a gun near him, the owl ducks in time as the super hero destroy the ribbon that is holding a curtain. Soon the latter fell, showing a statue of Alan, Toon Town City's newest hero. Bob and Number Four, their goldfish and armor repaired, are in the Black Zuzoon, repaired and better than ever.

"Yeah, that statue rocks!" Stitch cheers wildly at the sight of the statue.

My zippers bust, my buckles break
I'm too much man for you to take


The Incredibles and Frozone are also in the crowd in their civilian identifies to cheer on the city's newest hero. Frozone notices a figure in a trench coat and hat in front of him, making him ask, "Uh, son, mind moving? We can't see."

The figure turns around, revealing himself to be the Silver Sentry in his civilian identify. The man apologizes, "Sorry, dad." The retired hero moves and smiles to his former enemy right on stage. The Silver Sentry whispers, "Way to go, little buddy. I knew you would find your true calling..."

"Ladies gentlemen, the defender of Toon Town City, Alan Matthews!" Mayor Whoo exclaims as he motions Alan to the crowd.

The pavement cracks when I fall down
I've got more chins than Chinatown


The crowd cheers wildly as Alan smiles while saying, "Yeah, I like the sound of hat. Beats being a villain any other day of the week."

Well, I've never used a phone booth
And I've never seen my toes
When I'm goin' to the movies
I take up seven rows


Alan smiles while exclaiming to Bob and Number Four, "Hit it, guys!" The former villain begins to dance as his pals turn the volume up in the Black Zuzoon before the two dance, the huge robot is imitating what Number Four is usign.

Because I'm fat, I'm fat, come on
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it
(Fat, fat, really really fat)


You know I'm fat, I'm fat, come on you know
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
Don't you call me pudgy, portly or stout
Just now tell me once again who's fat


The crowd cheers wildly as did the Combat Bots and Alan's minions, "Alan! Alan! Alan! Alan! Alan! Alan!"

When I walk out to get my mail
It measures on the Richter scale
Down at the beach I'm a lucky man
I'm the only one who gets a tan
If I have one more pie a la mode
I'm gonna need my own zip code


The chanting moves on as Number Four did a moon dance while twirling the radio, causing the Black Zuzoon to do the same thing.

When you're only having seconds
I'm having twenty-thirds
When I go to get my shoes shined
I gotta take their word


Back at the prison, the guards and Feral were bopping their heads while enjoying the show on the TV in Alan's former cell which now has a new inhabitant: Control Freak who is now serving the former villain's life sentences for his own crimes.

Still, the villain himself dance while Control Control cheers, "Yeah, "I'm bad, I'm bad! That's right! Yeah!"

Because I'm fat, I'm fat, sha mone
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it you know
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
And my shadow weighs forty-two pounds
Lemme tell you once again who's fat


If you see me comin' your way
Better give me plenty space
If I tell you that I'm hungry
Then won't you feed my face


The crowd dance together back at the ceremony as the couple hop around excitedly.

Because I'm fat, I'm fat, sha mone
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it, you know
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
Woo woo woo, when I sit around the house
I really sit around the house


The couples twirl with Alan holding Cree, spinning around with her with smiles on their faces.

You know I'm fat, I'm fat, come on
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it, you know it
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know, you know, you know, come on
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
And you know all by myself I'm a crowd
Lemme tell you once again


As the song came to an end, the group hops together and pose together. Cree, on who's 'fat', kiss Alan as a photo of the gang is taken.

You know I'm huge, I'm fat, you know it
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, you know, hoo
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
You know I'm fat, I'm fat, you know it, you know
(Fat, fat, really really fat)
And the whole world knows I'm fat and I'm proud
Just tell me once again who's fat


We see a paper twirling as it shows the article 'Alan Matthews: One of the new Defenders of Toon Town City'. Yes, sir. Things got more interesting!

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Soon we see the Freelance Police & their friends getting ready to leave this city, now that Alan Matthews is protecting it though the gang will come visit their friends here, and that includes when seeing how Alan's doing on the hero business, even to see how Cree is working things out. The gang decided that when they leave to let Global Kids Nest Door Command Base give Cree the chance to not be decommissioned for the reasons were of losing memories of those she holds dear, it would be a long shot, but anything can happen, right? At this time, we see the Freelance Police driving their red space curser down the road with the rest of the KND Sector V gang along for the ride. But while the rest were chatting, Abigail had some serious thoughts on her mind.

"You know, something don't sit right with Numbuh 5?" Abigail spoke off with herself feeling very distracted, something wasn't sitting right with her.

"Really, what's that?" Kuki asked off from seeing something was distracting her friend for thought.

"How I got out from being crunched or burned off by Control Freak when he had me?" Abigail rubbed her noggin in not completely understanding what was going on from when the villain had her.

"Maybe the guy had slippery hand grips?" Wally shrug off to say that Control Freak lost his grip.

"No, we all saw some smoke that blinded the view of Numbuh 5's position and that suddenly, she was with her sister in the fountain?" Nigel spoke in rubbing his chin, finding the strange actions to be very mind puzzling, something wasn't making any sense here.

"You're right Numbuh 1, something is fishy about that," Hoagie nods from his driving seat, something was bothering the group on what happened,

"Is that with or without the fish part?" Stitch asked off randomly about the question itself.

"Oh Stitch," Angelilo shook her head at hearing her blue koala love make such a silly claim.

"Look, alls I'm saying is that from the other heroes I've asked, they were not near the spot where the scene happened," Abigail held up her hands to point out that no other super hero that was around, they stated that neither was there to have saved her. "And Alan, Hoagie and Stitch were dehydrated cubes." The girl reminded the group in recalling how three of their pals fell from the sky…as cube-shaped objects before returning to normal when they got wet.

"So how did feel like being one, you guys?" Kuki asked out suddenly in how her pals felt from being dehydrated cube figures.

"It felt…squishy at best." Hoagie rubbed his left eyebrow in quoting off a puzzled claim on how such a feeling felt.

"Meega believed to be nothing and yet everywhere at once." Stitch expressed out with a smile in thinking he had the answer.

"Guys, what I'm trying to say is…" Abigail spoke off from almost losing her cool, she's trying to state a subject and the gang was too busy thinking of something else when...

"BRAKES!" Wally shouted out with fear in what he had was an expression of panic.

"Numbuh 4, that's not what we're discussing, we're…" Angelilo was about to tell Wally that the group was chatting about another subject, but…

"No, LOOK!" Wally snapped off to point ahead of the gang to look out into the road to see what he sees.

"WAAAUGHH…" The gang screamed out as Hoagie tried to force the breaks but they were already coming up to close to the hooded figure? "Trupvhm-Poofruvhmm…" But the moment the ride came into contact with the pedestrian, he vanished and only smoke escaped from the spot. "Frsuvhmm…" The red space cruiser pulled to a drifting stop, and the clouds of smoke vanished to where the gang looked around and saw…nothing. Almost like there was nobody there but they know that they themselves saw something.

"Uh-oh Hoagie, you'll get a life sentence for this! If that the case, can meega drive ride in your place?" Stitch yelped in believing that the gang did a hit and run scene and Hoagie, as the driver, has to pay the price.

"Stitch, I can't go to jail and no, you can't drive, and secondly on the first subject for that, where's the body?" Hoagie responded out to say those things before focusing on the bigger question at hand.

"It just…vanished!" Angelilo stated from looking around, no sign of anybody around.

"We were going over the speed of sound in this space ship, how could he have dodged or for that matter, why we didn't take notice of his appearance sooner?" Nigel exclaimed off the impossibility of the situation, the heroes never saw the person on the road till now, and more than that, there was no sign of the being anywhere like he wasn't here at all.

"It's like he appeared from thin air and nobody noticed him till now!" Kuki spoke out with a spooky expression mood in how this was starting to feel like to the heroes.

"Wait a second here." Abigail spoke off from a deep thought in hearing that last thing spoken, it somehow triggered…a memory.

FLASHBACK

The moment Control Freak fired his laser vision at Abby in his grip, a smoke cloud appeared. At a sudden slow motion, Abby saw some things, the image of the yellowish blue cloak guy dashing through, held the girl and vanished in some teleportation technique. Then in the next instant, Abigail was in the water near her sister, but the savior vanished without a trace just as the event of Control Freak's confusion was noticed. Then lastly, the same hooded figure was hidden in the alley and from a image zoom in motion, saw a bit of the face that seemed…not so human but…robotic.

PRESENT

"GUYS! That's it!" Abigail snap out to get her friends attention on her. "That's the guy that might have saved me from Control Freak's clutches." The girl exclaimed out a theory that whoever they saw, she just remembered that he was the one who saved her on a close call.

"Whah!" The others responded to this news in big time surprise, they weren't expect that one.

"You're kidding me! That nobody was the one who saved your life? I'm not buying!" Wally exclaimed off in feeling that was rubbish, if that was true, how come the guy that the gang thought they hit wasn't around or to even claim that proof.

"Abby, are you certain, did he look like maybe he did somehow help rescue you?" Nigel asked for Numbuh 5 to concentrate, maybe the person they missed showed signs that maybe the girl recalled seeing and knew, the person hiding his identity was the real deal.

"Well Numbuh 5's memory is fuzzy on how that all happened without being that noticeable." Abby rubbed her head, the moment that she was saved happened in a ninja flash, sorta speak, so there were only pieces she could get. "But he moved like a ninja and looked to be in his 20s of an adult and stranger thing is…he looked like a robot." The girl described her definition of her savior by his looks and boy was that harder to swallow.

"A robot ninja, that's the dumbest thing that I ever heard!" Wally proclaimed out in never hearing something as ridiculous as that.

"Sounds cool to Stitch though!" Stitch smirked in liking the sounds of ninja robot, that's something really interesting to see.

"Maybe it was one of Alan's robots that came to help out." Angelilo spoke out a thought of a theory, maybe Alan Matthews made a robot that would be sneaky and helped the gang from the shadows.

"Impossible! I went over the plan of attack with the bots that were in the role of the projection head!" Hoagie shook his head in stating that the idea of that happening was close to zip. "The only ones there were the Toy Minions, the Exterminators and all those Combat Bots! If there were any spare robots that Alan made, I would have been brief on it!" The fat kid pointed to himself, being the tech genius, he and Alan shared a few things so this thing about a ninja bot should no way been an oversight.

"Not to mention the way Alan himself works is that he shows off his likes to be flashy, so we can rule him out." Nigel stated off with a serious expression in knowing Alan might not have been the creator of that ninja bot. "Yet I don't recall any records of a robot ninja in the Kids Next Door Data Base for any of our design or our enemies have teenage robots." Nigel shrug off his shoulders in knowing, none of the KND records say they or their enemies, even have such technology to use.

"Maybe he was a nice person that didn't wanna be seen and just helped out Numbuh 5 cause she was in trouble!" Kuki smiled off to say a positive thought that was being forgotten by the whole 'who the savior was & if he was friendly' question.

Everyone stared puzzled at Kuki's theory, that was so farfetched, some could almost wonder if that was even the answer. But then again, there was no reason why it couldn't be.

"You know what, you're right Kuki. If it was an enemy, he let Control Freak finish me off, not save me." Abigail nods with a smile to agree with her friend on the idea that whoever saved her was a good person at heart. "Tell you guys what, when we get back to Sector V, Numbuh 5's gonna treat us all to my special secret candy supply." The girl decided to offer her special candy out to the entire group here to enjoy.

"Alright!" Wally, Hoagie, and Kuki cheered for the idea, they'll love Numbuh 5's special candy supply.

"Oh boy! Stitch always wanted to try some of Abby's candy!" Stitch smiled widely in loving this piece of news to eat some tasty sweets.

"We heard that it's very tasty!" Angelilo smiled in liking the idea to have some of Abby's candy just as much as Stitch was.

"Oh it is, it certainly is." Nigel nods with a smile in letting the koala aliens know that the facts of Number 5's candy is very tasty.

"Well then what are we waiting for, let's hit the road!" Hoagie smiles in starting up the Freelance Police's ride to hurry them back home so they can eat.

"But what about that Mr. Nobody Guy that we thought we ran through?" Kuki rubbed her head puzzled, weren't they trying to find someone.

"Well he's not here, and besides, nobody would believe us even if we told them!" Wally shrug off to exclaim that searching for something not here is useless and that even if the heroes report about it, none of their Sector buddies would ever believe it.

"Well Hoagie, let's get going!" Abby patted her guy on the back to have the gang get going then if the subject here's been settled.

"Aye-Aye, Abby!" Hoagie salutes to his girlfriend while fishing the last few settings.

With that, the red space cruiser hovers off the ground and then zooms off at a fast speed. Whatever the mysterious of the case here be can be figured out later for the Freelance Police and friends. After all, Alan and Cree & their friends are happy, the gang are happy to have helped where trouble was growing and done a lot of other stuff they know they've achieved. So, what happens next time Hoagie and Stitch's adventures won't be stopped so easily.

"Frusvhmm…" Then at that same time moment later, the mysterious cloaked being that vanished fro the group's eyes return after their leave was assured to come out. "Grsupvhm-Frsupvhmm…" Then two corridor portals opened next to the being and who should come out but two other characters. One in an Aqua-Blue color and the other, Green & Blue color as they were known as VISION-KING & JusSonic. These members were apart of their famous, if not secret order; the Author Organization, filled with many Author characters.

"They say that Nobody would believe them." VISION-KING spoke to JusSonic while the two lowered their hoods to show their faces out, recalling what the Freelance Police team has said.

"Well they are not further from the truth," JusSonic smiled to nod before looking back at their other member pal. "And from our friend, nobodiez, the Good Nobody, is the proof of that." JusSonic proclaimed out the fact that was the truth from what the Freelance Police team was over-talking about.

And the being removed his head to show that he was precisely as Cree described the guy, someone in his 20s in adult size was a ninja and his appearance was that of robotic.

"I suppose they'll never know that the Nobody was indeed me." Nobodiez stated that the team that left was in truth all of it being around him, a real Nobody type creature. "My ability to Teleport proved very useful on this cause." The man exclaimed off in knowing that from his ability, he helped save someone, namely, Abigail Lincoln.

"I would say, a good call on having you come here on such short notice." VISION-KING nods with a smile to say this on behalf of nobodiez' effort. "The scene seemed to almost be….getting a bit out of control. What Control Freak almost tried to do someone or someone(s) in was pretty much crossing over the line." The man nods in feeling that such an event would not have been a good thing for them to have.

"They say with Great Power comes Great Responsibility, correct?" JusSonic stares off to the sun in the sky, reciting some wisdom of thought about a subject topic. "But in the opposite terms, Great Power can corrupt others, make them do things from being swallowed up by that power they enjoyed." Even a powerful Author knows that give a character too much power that's beyond their control or understanding and it'll just create problems.

"That's the thing about heroes and villains…never knowing who's gonna play that role when they get an extra power boost without caution." VISION-KING nods with a serious expression with his arms crossed for the moment to think the thought for a minute.

"If Control Freak had won, what would happen?" Nobodiez asked in being curious if he didn't lean a hand, what would the outcome have been?

"From what my ability, the VISION Sight, the things of a villain that powerful on the loose spells the end of many story worlds and cast." VISION-KING looked to his friend to explain the best known state of such an event that seem a bit unsightly to picture. "But luckily, he was dealt with but we gonna be careful this don't happen too often. Even us Authors are not perfect." The man exclaimed off in feeling that even beings like themselves aren't perfect and can make mistakes and the bigger the mistake, the bigger the disaster to it.

"Too true, everyone makes mistakes." JusSonic nods with a thought on such a subject that was discussed. "And if Control Freak was let loose with that power, he would have ruined my own stories concerning the next Hoagie & Stitch Freelance Police work." Even this Author knows that a villain that uncontrollable would cause problems in this universe that he had Hoagie & Stitch be apart in.

"Do you know what the next project of those two Freelancers are going to be?" nobodiez asked in being curious to wonder what will happen next for those particular characters JusSonic enjoys using.

"Hey now, le'ts relax, when the next work comes, we'll be there to watch those guys and any other story to be sure." VISION-KING assured out that there was no rush, when the time comes to see the Freelance Police, they'll be there to see how it all happens.

"I'll have other works that need tending to, until then…" JusSonic nods to simply state out about other matters that need his attending to. "It's time that we returned to our own HQ." He was now walking forward with the other two now following him, preparing for their trip to their secret place.

"Yep, our realm to chat about what's gonna happen next. Should be exciting." VISION-KING responds off in feeling that when the trio get back, they'll be in another of their usual discussion; what story to plan out next. "Makes me wonder, if Alan Matthews, his forces, and Cree might appear in Hoagie & Stitch in Season 3 for the final episode." The man rubbed his chin in thinking of a farther topic of a subject, something of which might become a possibility for the future, who knows?

"Hmm, even I'm curious to know that answer." nobodiez spoke from looking to JusSonic, finding that kinda idea…intriguing from curiosity.

"As I spoken, my fellow Author friends…" JusSonic slowly spoke while looking back with a little smile on his grin. "Just wait…and see…" The man simply stated as he'll tell what will happen, when the time is right that is.

"Grupvhm-fruvphm…" Soon more corridors of darkness appeared and allowed the Authors entry before vanishing from sight once again. Looks like a lot more adventures are being cooked up, and who's to say what the next excitement will be. We only know who's running the show in hidden secrecy and will remain unknown to Hoagie and Stitch's little gang until the time comes. For now, we just settle on a fact, don't matter what a person is on the outside, it's what's on the inside that counts the most for any person, hero, villain, even cartoon characters all alike. And for the Freelance Police…they're probably in the middle of that somewhere, oh well.

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Bob hums as Number Four was holding his goldfish bowl while wearing an apron. The two are preparing to do the laundry back at the hideout now that everything's calm down and settled.

Number Four did some pretend ait guirar as he came to washer to put some laundry n there into the dryer, singing, "I'm going up the rail on a crazy-"

But when Number Four opens the washer when it dinged, the two yelps in alarm as a familiar teenager came out, groaning a bit. Alan has left the dehydration that Maurice was turned into in his PJs and has forgotten to empty his pocket.

"Ugh! Sir, yew oughta clean out yer pockets more!" Bob snaps to Alan in another part of the hideout in annoyance.

"Ugh, that was horrible, the most worst day of my whole life." Maurice groans a bit, wanting to forget everything that happened to him...though the teenager didn't know what happened recently.

"Shucks, no worries. Yew won't remember a thing o' it soon. Number Four!"

"Yes, sir!" Number Four laughs as he held out a familiar stick and hit Maurice over the head, knocking the teengar right out.

The End

In Loving Memory of
Ernest Borgnine, one of the greatest heroes of our time
1917-2012


Author's note
Great story, eh folks? I hope you all enjoy how I worked on it, I sure as heck did! Can't wait to do another Hoagie and Stitch story! But until then, it's time for Halloween and that means Halloween story! Spooky stuff, eh?

So for the next fanmake in line, I am doing a fanmake of The Corpse Bride, which is called 'Muppet Corpse Bride'. Not only does it stars the Muppets but it will be a part of Julayla's Nack and Psycho timeline.

And now, the cast!

Victor-Kermit
Victoria-Miss Piggy
Barkin-Johnny Fiama
Emily-Camilla
Victor's Parents-Jim the Frog & Alice the frog (OC Muppet Frogs)
Victoria's Parents-Mr. and Mrs. Hamish (OC Muppet Pigs)
Bonejangles-TK Takaishi (Digimon; he will be referencing his role as Jack Skellington in my first series of Nightmare Before Christmas fanmakes)
Everglot's dead relative-Jack the Boar (OC Muppet Pig)
Maggot-Pepe the King Prawn
Black Widow-Rosie (A Bug's Life)
Pastor Galswells-Sam the Eagle
Scraps-Animal
Dead Kids-Elmo, Zoey and Abby (Sesame Street)
Elder Gutknetch-Convincing John (Fraggle Rock)
Emil-Bobo the Bear
Mayhew-Beauregard
Extras-Gonzo, Sal (Cameo)
Angelilo and the gang was referencing Lilo's role as Pinkie Pie in my fanmake of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

Yeah, that should be it. Can't wait for this story to begi soon. Until next time, read, review and suggest!

The plot of the lines 'Great Power Comes Great Responsibilities' was a Marvel note fact from any Spider-Man series, and the 'Power Corrupts' was from some series (Marvel & otherwise) of beings that lose control over themselves and become things that they are not.

The explanation of Abigail Lincoln, AKA Numbuh 5, does have a secret special stash of her candy, which was the first time it introduced Sticky Beard into the Kids Next Door series.
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