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| JusSonic | Oct 14 2012, 05:38 PM Post #1 |
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Author's note Hey folks! Time for a Nightmare Night fic, starring Nyx, Princess Luna and the villain of the first series of My Little Pony pilot Tirek. This one takes place on the last day of the 31 Nights of Nightmare Night, after the upcoming first arc of the comic book series, and after the short stories after 'Lorcan's Wrath'. It's been a long time coming so let's do this. Chapter 1: The Last Night It's a dark night in Equestria...and ponies are ready for trick or treating on what is the last night of Nightmare Night. It's part of the 31 Nights of Nightmare Night started by Celestia as a way to celebrate the night and get candy, plus it's allows Princess Luna to get out more, mingling with the ponies. Twilight and her friends were having fun, from going to parties, going trick or treating or getting involved in stories. Tonight is the last night where it's going to be on major party...with the princesses attending, alongside King Spykoran the Old, the grandfather of Spike who loves this kind of holiday. Of course, back then, he celebrated Halloween as introduced by his human friends who are celebrating it back on Earth. Twilight smiles, dressed in her costume which is the Mare Do Well (an identify that she and some of her friends took to teach Rainbow a Lesson), getting ready. She calls out, "Ben, Nyx, Spike, Phobos! Come on, it's time to get going! We want to go out trick or treating before hitting the party!" Ben came in, wearing an outfit of Link from the Legend of Zelda games. He bows to her, saying, "I'm ready, willing to serve ya, my lady." "You are just a flatterer, Ben. Let me guess, the costume is based on your Triforce Element." "Yes...though why the Mare Do Well outfit? Won't ponies suspect that you and some of your friends were in that identify?" Twilight giggles while explaining, "Nah! If anypony ask, I will tell them that I'm in costume. After all, I did see more costumes like this in shop." Spike came in, wearing a Yoshi outfit with a stuffed Baby Mario doll on his back, saying, "I'm here and ready...and with a baby that won't cry." "Nice outfit, Spike." Ben chuckles a bit to Spike. "And very appropriable too. I thought you would come up with something better after the incident with Lorcan though." "Yeah...but I kinda like the Yoshi character, mostly because of the video games that I saw from Earth. Is Nyx and Phobos ready?" "Sure am!" Phobos exclaims a bit as he came in, dressed like a Martian from 'Mars Attacks'. "Give me all your candy, Equestrians, or Phobos will eradicate your face!" The others laugh a bit by Phobos's outfit and joke. Nyx came in, smiling as she is in her outfit from when she was playing her Nightmare Moon self in the school play. The filly chirps, "I'm ready, ponies! I'm dressed up and everything." "My, that's an appropriable outfit, especially on Nightmare Night." Ben said with a smile to his daughter, nuzzling her a bit. "Where did you get the outfit?" Twilight ask Nyx curiously. "Oh, it was the closet all this time. Mr. T told me to wear it just for tonight." "Who's 'Mr. T'?" "He's my new friend who lives in this box!" Nyx holds out a box, smiling as her family looks at it oddly. Spike opens the box and peeks in, chuckling, "How cute, an imaginary friend...though this box was hidden." "Huh?" Nyx ask confused as she peeks into the box. "Weird, he was in there earlier!" "Maybe he went out for candy, I sure want to!" Phobos remarks, making Nyx frowns at him. "What?" "Come on, we want to meet the others for Nightmare Night." Twilight chuckles as the family heads on out. Nyx prepares to trot off, but begins to groan a bit. Weird, she was feeling fine before... --------- The ponies are out, trick or treating before the big party tonight. Twilight's group trots up and smiles upon meeting a familiar pony: Rainbow dressed up like Daring Do. "Hey, Rainbow!" Twilight greets her friend with a smile. "Nice costume you got." "Thanks! Oh yeah, do I feel awesome or what?" Rainbow ask her friends with a smile while folding up her things. "I'm so going to get candy this year...or tonight. As long as it isn't the lame candy like from Cranky's house." "We did kinda trick or treat on short notice. Are the others coming?" "I'm waiting for Pinkie Pie right now. Hey, what's with Nyx?" The others notice Nyx groaning a bit, mumbling, "Can you lend me a bit? Any bit..." "Nyx, who are you doing?" Spike ask Nyx in concern. "That doesn't sound like Nightmare Moon." "Err, I'm fine, really." "You sure?" Ben ask his daughter in concern. "Are you feeling sick? Perhaps I should take you home. It's only one Nightmare Night." "No, I'm fine, daddy." Nyx said with a chuckle, then she groans and turns her head around, creeping the others out. "Ha ha ha ha!" "Hey no fair! How come I don't get to do that?!" Phobos asks Nyx with a pouty look. "Nyx! Cut it out!" Twilight exclaims to Nyx, causing her to go back to normal. "Sorry, don't know what came over me." Nyx said sheepishly to her mother. "I'm fine, really..." "Hey ponies! I'm ready for Nightmare Night!" Pinkie's voice is heard, much to her friends' notice. "About time! What too...AAAAAARGH!!!" Rainbow screams in terror as she turns around to see Pinkie...dressed in her outfit from 'Cupcakes', fake skin and all. "Pinkie Pie! I told you not to wear that!" "Awwww, why not?" Pinkie ask Rainbow with a pouty look. "It's scary!" "Yeah, and it reminds me of one mistake that I rather not talk about! Ever!" "You're no fun." "Come on, we need to meet with the others." Spike said before turning to Nyx. "Nyx, are you going to be okay?" "Yeah, I'm fine, really. I'm fine." Nyx said with a groan. "We're going but Pinkie Pie, go home and change!" Rainbow snaps to Pinkie in annoyance. "I am not going to be seen with you all night in an outfit like that! Find a costume that doesn't want me to hurt myself!" "Okie dokie lokie!" Pinkie exclaims happily as she bounces away to go home and change. Twilight sighs a bit. It's going to be a long night... ----------- |
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| Toonwriter | Oct 14 2012, 08:06 PM Post #2 |
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"Trick or Treat!" Three familiar foals said as they held up their bags to a pony at its front door. It was three of Nyx's fellow Cutie Mark Crusaders; Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. "Nice." A pony said with a smile as she saw the CMC dressed like like monsters, with Apple Bloom as a zombie, Scootaloo as a vampire and Sweetie Belle as a witch. "Scary outfits!" "Yep! Kinda appropriable, too!" Apple Bloom exclaims as well. The fillies got their candy as they head out. Scootaloo asks her friends, "What did you guys got?" "I got a Tootsie Roll!" Sweetie exclaims happily. "Ah done got a lolly!" Apple Bloom remarks with a grin. "How about yew, Scoots?" "I got a rock...full of Butterfingers!" Scootaloo chuckles while showing her Butterfingers. "I hope we meet up with the others. I heard Nyx got a killer outfit this year." "Yeah, at least from what she told us." Sweetie said with a giggle. "We are supposed to meet them over at Rarity's. Come on!" ----------- Twilight's group meets up with Rarity who is dressed like Marelyn Monroe. Spike grins while saying, "Love your outfit, Rarity." "Why, thank you for the compliment, Spiky-Wikey." Rarity said as she batted her eyes at the purple dragon. "Yeah...who are you supposed to be? Some loose pony?" Phobos ask Rarity confused. "How vulgar! I'm Marelyn Monroe, of course!" Rarity insists to Phobos with a frown. "What, never heard of her?" "Nah! Never been outside the Void much." Phobos admits to Rarity with a shrug. "I love your outfit, Auntie Rarity!" Nyx chirps to Rarity happily. "Oh, thank you, Nyx, darling!" Rarity said happily, loving the compliment from her honorary niece. "Sure, if yew being so froufrou-like." Applejack remarks, dressed up like Jessie from the Toy Story films, as she trots up with Fluttershy, dressed like a cat. "Hey, cool outfits, you two!" Rainbow exclaims to her mare friends with a smile. "Thanks." Fluttershy said meekly. "Uh, where's Pinkie Pie?" "I send her home. She was wearing that outfit that I told her not to wear." Rainbow remarks with a scowl on her face. "Eek! You mean... THAT outfit?!" Fluttershy squeaked in fright. "Does an Ursa Minor eat fish?" Rainbow ask Fluttershy dryly. "Uhh... yes?" "Bingo." Rainbow said while chewing on some candy. "Pinkie better come up with better ideas." "That's a neat outfit, Nyx." Applejack comments on Nyx's outfit. "What made yew go in 'dat school play one?" "Mr. T told me to wear it!" Nyx exclaims happily to Applejack. "Uh, who's Mr. T?" Applejack ask a bit puzzled. "My friend." "Something imaginary and all that..." Ben remarks then he notices Nyx twitching and growling. "Nyx?" "Hey, are you all right?" Fluttershy ask Nyx in concern. The filly then spoke in a different voice, "You're all going to die tonight!.!.!.!" Then she grabs Phobos's drink that he was drinking. "Hey, that's my drink!" Phobos protests to Nyx as the filly opens the thing and pour the remains out. The others stare in confusion or shock while the Cutie Mark Crusaders, as well as Twist (dressed like a piece of candy), Dinky (as Harry Trotter) and Pipsqueak (Mad Hatter) arrives. Pipsqueak looks surprised as he ask, "Nyx?" "What the...?" Dinky ask while blinking her eyes. Nyx finished pouring the drink while chewing on the cup. Twilight said in embarrassment, "Sorry, Nyx is acting weird tonight." "I'll say! I've never seen her like this!" Scootaloo remarked in surprise. "Not since 'de times she was Nightmare Moon." Apple Bloom said with a nod. Nyx snaps out of it, looking confused while asking, "What? Why are all staring?" "You owe me a drink, Nyx!" Phobos remarks to Nyx with a frown. "Come on, let's get going before all the good candy's gone." Rainbow said impatiently. "Right, I wanna try out the grave ride later!" Twist exclaims happily. "'Grave ride'?" Fluttershy yelps meekly while following her friends on the trick-or-treating. ------------- The ponies arrive at the house which belongs to Cheerilee. She answers, dressed like Tinker Bell, as the gang exclaims, "Trick or Treat!" "My, what interesting outfits tonight!" Cheerilee exclaims as she gave some candy to the ponies, even Nyx. "And nice use of the Nightmare Night outfit." "Thanks, Miss Cheer..." Nyx twitch a bit then growls, roaring while climbing up a wall, snarling. "Nyx, get down from there!" Ben exclaims to Twilight in annoyance. Nyx snarls while biting into Cheerilee's house. Spike exclaims, "Whoa! How come I don't get to do that?!" "You don't." Twilight said with an annoyed sigh. "Nyx, knock it off or you can forget going out for the rest of tonight." Nyx snaps out of it, looking confused while asking, "Err, mommy? Everyone? What am I doing up here? And how did I get up here?.?.?" "You crawled up, that's a bit weird." Sweetie said as Nyx climbs down, looking confused. "You got into some weirdness? I missed that!" Pinkie is heard. The group turns and saw their friend in a clown outfit. "Nice outfit." Rarity said to Pinkie with a smile. "And much better than that one you were wearing earlier." "That's for sure!" Rainbow remarked in relief. "Everyone loves a clown, so why don't you?" Pinkie ask happily to her friends. "Sure, everyone loves clowns!" Nyx exclaims happily. Suddenly, she twitched and then spoke in her weird voice, "They are tormentors of innocence and will break the freewill of many in the pits of Tartarus! HA HA HA HA HA!" The other ponies look at her uneasily, until Nyx snaps out of it. The filly ask confused, "What? What?" "Okay, you definitely need to stay out of character for a while." Phobos said to Nyx in concern. "You may be in the Nightmare Moon outfit but that's too creepy even for me." "Perhaps we should talk to the princesses and King Spykoran about this." Cheerilee said in concern. "It looks like she's acting...oddly." "I'm sure Nyx is doing okay." Twilight said but glances at her daughter warily. "But we will talk to them when we see them at the party later." "Yeeeah." Rainbow said as Nyx smiles happily while talking to her friends. "We don't know when your kid would turn from Dr. Jekyll to Ms. Hyde all over again." |
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| JusSonic | Oct 15 2012, 12:52 AM Post #3 |
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------------------- After that recent incident at trick or treating, Nyx seems to have stopped acting weirdly enough for the gang to finish their thing. Since the party isn't for a while yet, they hit the grave ride. "BWA HA HA HA HA HA!" DJ Pon 3 laughs into a microphone as she stood in the wagon with the ponies which is being pulled by Big Macintosh, who is dressed like a vampire, for the grave ride. "Welcome! I am your host DJ Pon 3, your host for this ghostly ride! We are about to touring the undead who would be 'dying' to meet you! BWA HA HA HA HA!" "She never get tired of doing that." Pinkie said to her friends while Fluttershy cowardly covers her ears due to the mad laughter that DJ Pon 3 is doing. "Relax, Fluttershy. The undead isn't really coming out!" "Oh, I know...but the laughter is creepy." Fluttershy said with a yelp. "You know, long before Nightmare Night came along, an evil being once tried to make it Eternal Night...a monster by the name of Tirek the Abominable!" DJ Pon 3 laughs, making the foals laugh or scream. "Back when Equestria was once Ponyland, he plague the land with his demons and monsters, kidnapping ponies and turning them into evil dragons...until the Mag'ne herself came and destroy him! But according to legends, his spirit refuse to go to Tartarus...but is still haunting Equestria, ready to seek his revenge!" DJ Pon 3 opens a can, shooting out snakes at the ponies who screams or laugh. Applejack exclaims, "Boy howdy! Ain't 'dat freaky!" "Thank you! And now, let's meet the rest of the undead!" It took a few minutes for the ride to be done, which got a bit longer with each stop. Diamond Tiara, wearing a Princess outfit, scoffs while turning to Silver Spoon, dressed like Jester, "What a joke. That Tirek is a fake." "Like that of the Elements?" Silver Spoon ask Diamond Tiara with an arch of eyebrow. "No, I mean the whole spirit thing! As if some half horse, half whatever is roaming." "Well, I don't know, Diamond Tiara." Nyx spoke up, trying to speak reason to her. "We have seen weird possibilities in Equestria like..." "Like you, Nightmare Brat?" Diamond Tiara taunts Nyx making her frowns a bit. "What, couldn't find an asylum outfit? Have to dig that out of your closet?" "Hey, watch it, Diamond!" Phobos growls to Diamond Tiara in annoyance. "Diamond, must we tell your father?" Rarity ask Diamond Tiara with a sigh. "Oh, right. Come on, it's Nightmare Night. Nyx's big night...of acting like a freak!" Diamond Tiara laughs meanly. Needless to say, Nyx's eyes grow as the mean filly continues, "Both her and Loony are failures just like Tirek. If he lets some god like thing and a couple of ponies beat him, I'm glad not to be ruled by him! Ha ha ha ha!" "You will perished!" Nyx roars as she pounces to Diamond Tiara. The filly screams as the alicorn filly attacks her, trying to bite her. The riders yelp in alarm as the struggles is happening. "Nyx, whoa, honey!" Ben Mare exclaims in alarm as he and Twilight tries to stop their daughter who is trying to bite into Diamond Tiara. "Nyx, calm down! What are you doing?!" Twilight asks in alarm as she tries to pull Nyx right off of the struggling Diamond Tiara. "Someone get her off me! She's biting me, she's biting me!" Diamond Tiara exclaims frantically as Nyx tries to bite her but is finally pulled off. "What is wit' yew tonight, Nyx?!" Applejack ask Nyx who snaps out of it, looking confused. "Ah done know yew got a problem wit' Diamond Tiara but this is too much!" "I'm sorry, I'm sorry! I don't know what came over here!" Nyx protests to her family and friends in worry. "It's like something is trying to take me over!" "I say! You looks like you took the Tirek part personal!" Spike exclaims to Nyx in concern. "Ugh, I think she bit me!" Diamond Tiara exclaims as she glances at where Nyx tries to bite her before. "Oh relax, Nyx didn't bite you." Fluttershy said to Diamond Tiara gently. "I mean, there's no reason to bring lawsuit involved, right?" The Cutie Mark Crusaders is beginning to get scared, their friend Nyx is acting weird...as if she isn't weird...as if someone else is in her role and not the real Nyx! As the ride goes past some graves, not one of them saw a few Changelings peeking out. Fred remarks, "Oh boy! Looks like Tirek is doing well tonight." "Yes, he is working on that filly happily!" Ed exclaims with a stupid laugh though Seto hits him. "Ouch!" "Shut up, you idiot!" Seto snarls to Ed in annoyance. "Nyx keeps coming out at times but soon it will be time for the master to take over fully. When the time comes, he will have access to his fully powers...and Equestria will belong to us. Now come, Queen Chrysalis will want us to get ready for our places." The Changelings nod as they quickly gallop off into the night. The time of Tirek is at hand... Author's note What's wrong with Nyx and what are the Changelings talking about? Read, review and suggest. Until next time... |
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| V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G. | Oct 15 2012, 01:35 PM Post #4 |
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Hi Jus, love this work. And here's the scene to fill in Billy's Request of Grimmore seeing Tirek has return. ~ SCENE ~ Meanwhile, we see the battle against Tirek is going on, but the question is, that this was only being seen through a magical portal image? And the one who was watching it sat in his thrown, observing the battle, seeing the ponies struggle against the newest foe. This was none other then Grimmore, the Overlord King, as he looks somewhat in a surprise shock, but tried to keep his expressions in check. "So....he has return, this is truly a shocking surprise?" Grimmore rubbed his chin in seeing this action taking place overside the gates of Tartarus. "My lord? What troubles you?" Ji-Ga-No spoke from hovering nearby, as he senses something disturbing his lord. "And old villain from ages pass has return my general, and it is none other...then Tirek the Abominable." Grimmore spoke diligently in addressing the matter, the return of one of the ponies oldest foes. "You can't be serious? He was destroyed by the Mag'ne long ago?" Ji-Ga-No spoke off in utter disbelief that Tirek has somehow come back? "That's the funny thing? Bodies maybe turn to dust, but spirits are a tricky sort?" Grimmore spoke off from noticing the outcome of the battle happening, Tirek was just a soul without a body. "I have wondered some time, why he was never within Tartarus, and it proves he was slowly planning his return?" The Overlord King exclaimed the cause of reason why such a villain was never seen in this prison, and this was the answer. "Then we mustn't waste time! Send me, and I'll personally GRINDE him to the Bone!" Ji-Ga-No came up to his master, and humbly suggest he, the most brutal general, go to face and annilate this enemy. "Wait!" Grimmore held up his left hand, as he saw something happening within the viewing portal. "Frsisivhmm..." The magical portal imagine changed with a glowing red, and soon showed forth the imagine of...a familiar human woman the ponies recall from legends? "Well-well, another blast from the past has shown up...the very first human of another plain that defeated Tirek has return?" Grimmore spoke with interest to see that someone else has shown up, the one known by the legendary Mag'ne, or otherwise known as Megan, is back. "The Mag'ne is there too? Then it's all the more reason we must strike?" Ji-Ga-No responded a bit more surprised to hear this, and suggest they need to act. "Patience, my general, I do agree, we can't let such an opportunity go by? Fate has given us the key, and for my own plan to play out it's act, I'll need the one from legends...the Mag'ne?" Grimmore spoke in foreseeing how he can turn what is happening, into a work of his own plot for future planning. "I Summon You Into My Chambers! Come to me, my minions! Black Clays!" The Overlord King held up his arms, and bellowed his voice around, as he was calling for the minions of his choice. Suddenly, something was seen slipping across the ground floors, some fast, others a bit slow, and some even leaped up? They were a liquid that moved so steadily until they reached the thrown of where Grimmore and Ji-Ga-No were. Then the next moment started to happen, as these were no ordinary liquid puddles? "WRAaaugh-RUUUAaaruuugghhhh!" These liquid things were stretching themselves up, and made an eerie sound and soon took shape? They were now black liquid-base clay creatures with no feet, height about 10 feet tall. They took human shape with long arms, bald heads and they have no eyeballs or color. They also appear muscular and had a red 'Y' symbol on their chest fronts. These were some of Overlord King's troops from the Grimmore Army; The Black Clays. They're known abilities are from scaling and sticking to any surface, even the ceiling, without feet, they are quick and agile to stroll across any surface. They can take any shape, as they use their bodies to form weapons like arm whips, become big puddles of glop to press their heavy weight on anything, and to change into some form of a disk to gather energy's of magic to unleash a strong force on an opponent for damage result. The hardest in facing these creatures, is that without much strong force, will repel their targets off, only stronger strength or fearsome attacks of magic will manage to weaken them. "Hmm, excellent? Where is your captain?" Grimmore smiled in seeing his troops are here, and now wonders, where the captain is? "Right here!" One Black Clay came forth from the others, this one wore blue shoulder pads and a helmet with spike off the middle sides, and wears a white neck-band with a golden emblem with the letters 'G' & 'M', standing for his master. "Captain Clay, reporting to you, my lord!" The captain of these troops saluted with upmost resect to his master and lord. "Frsusvhmm...." Then from Grimmore's left hand, was magically carved crystal with a halo ring in the center. "Take this Halos Crystal! And when you get the chance, place it within the Mag'ne's belongings, make it be noted that it's a gift from the ponies to alue suspicion." The Overlord issued out his orders before the item in question, floated down to Captain Clay's hands. "Yes my liege. Alright troops, lets get going, we have an objective!" Captain Clay bowed in full understanding, and soon turn to his troops with orders of their mission. "Yeeaaahhh!" The Black Clays cheered and pumped up their hands before they slipped on out of the room…to complete their mission objective. "Hmm-hmm-hmmm, using those that are so conspicuous to hid within the smallest of places and in the darkest of night, as mere clay puddlings, is intriguing?" Ji-Ga-No chuckled wickedly in seeing his master's plan, the Black Clays will do well in this stealth approach part of their objective, all eyes won't know of their presence, which makes it perfect for Grimmore's side. "But what was that trinket you gave them?" The Metallix Dragon asked in not fully understanding the point of making a gift for the Mag'ne if she's return once more? "When the Mag'ne returns to her home, it'll act as a beacon, allowing us to find her." Grimmore slowly stated in what his little 'gift' is for, to locate any of those it's with and their location. "And if someone realizes it's power?" Ji-Ga-No asked with a sudden ponder, if someone should learn of what that crystal can do, what then? "Hardly, I crafted it to be so much of a normal crystal, that even the royal princesses themselves or even their friend Golden Heart, couldn't tell it possesses magic." Grimmore spoke with a sly smile before looking to the portal imagine of the battle going on while explaining the ideal point of the Halos Crystal and it's purpose. "And when the time is right, it will be used when on the other side." The Overlord King declared with much confidence, the Halos Crystal shall be used on the place Megan comes from, and by that time, no one will know of the truth until the timing. "And should Tirek manage to win and kill the Mag'ne, what then?" Ji-Ga-No asked with wonder if his lord's plan to use the Mag'ne fail because Tirek might kill her in the process? "Hmph, less difficulty for me to bother, but we needin' worry?" Grimmore remarked off with a not too worried expression, as he has all things under control. "All an all, the events ahead cannot be change, no matter who is around?" Grimmore spoke with such confidence in knowing all goes according to his plan. "After all, I have eyes all around, and even within Equestria, another plot thickens?" The Overlord King decreed forth with a sly smirk coming from his expression, as if sounding so sure. Things went quickly silent from there, with the eyes of the Overlord King before they faded and in another small part…we almost could sworn we saw eyes from behind a hooded cloak figure? But then all things went blank, as if leaving this mystery to solve for another time. As for right now, the main focus, is on the threat of Tirek. ~ Okay Jus, there's the scene to satisfy Billy. Plus, this could be used as a secret way to use a plot during Grimmore and Smaug's plot where Megan is suddenly taken to Equestria, her brother & sister taken, an incident happens that they change into their younger forms now when in Equestria, etc.-etc. you get the idea. Also, if you wanted to have some fun with my Black Clays, like someone accidentally stepping on a puddle on the ground which yelps, and leaves others confused, you can. (And if you want some action with them, you can do that also, but they'll mostly be surviving and returning back to where they came by the end.) So till then, good luck here. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 15 2012, 08:25 PM Post #5 |
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Author's note Yes, Billy Arratoon, I have seen your ideas and will try to use them when the time comes. Kaiju and Ponies United, those two will be used at a later time. The Shadow Syndicate, one idea of my fics is tied the current generations of ponies with the previous series (yes, even the third and third.five ones) as best as I could, even some of the other fics out there. Chapter 2: Party Time with Nyx Despite what happened on the grave ride, Twilight decides to let Nyx go to the party...in hopes to speak to the princesses about her recent behavior. Something doesn't seem right with her for some reason. Ponies are there in their costumes, talking, eating snacks and drinking punch. Caramel, dressed like a ghost, smiles while saying, "I'm glad to be invited to the parties once more...even though I kinda ruin the first day of Nightmare Night." "'Kinda'? Yer story is plum depressing, Caramel. But...we can't hold it against yew anymore." Applejack said with a chuckle while patting a hoof on Caramel's shoulder, making him smile a bit. "Just don't end 'de stories like 'dat again, okay?" "Yeah, sure." Derpy is smiling as she is showing off her outfit, while saying, "Behold, The Muffin Princess! Mmmm, muffins." "Very lovely costume, Derpy." Time Turner, dressed like some sort of past incarnation of someone. "Yours definitely shows off your love for muffins." "Thanks! I like your costume, Time Turner. What are you supposed to be?" Time Turner, rather nervous, said, "Well...err...how to tell you this." Derpy interrupts Time Turner as she exclaims happily, "No worries, Timey! You don't have to say if you don't wanna!" "Thank you, that's nice of you to say." Time Turner said with a sigh. He is not sure how to tell her of his past lives and all that...or if the stallion should at all. The Cutie Mark Crusaders head out to mingle with their fellow foals while Twilight, Ben and Spike heads up to where the princesses are at, Celestia is dressed like Mickey Mouse from 'The Sorcerer Apprentice' while Luna is dressed like Darth Vader. "Very much love your costume, sis." Celestia compliments Luna's costume. "Very appropriate." "Well, as long as no pony thinks I'm going crazy again." Luna remarks with a scoff. "Maybe in another lifetime but..." "Mom, Aunt Luna!" Ben exclaims as he trots up and nuzzles his mother and aunt. "Glad that you made it! Are you going to be judging the costumes this night?" "We sure are, Ben!" Celestia exclaims to her son with a smile. "I cannot wait to see what costumes that you ponies will be wearing. And of course, we aren't going to deal with trickery like Rainbow pulled on one Nightmare Night." "Yeah, Rainbow promised not to do that this time." "First, we shall watch the Monster Battle!" Luna explains to everyone else with a smile. "A very interesting one where foals make robots to pit against one another in battle." "Where's grandpa?" Spike ask Celestia and Luna in concern. "He will show up, Spike. I promise you that." Celestia assures Spike with a smile that his grandpa, King Spykoran the Old, will indeed show up for the party. "He is just running a bit late, that's all." "Mommy, daddy...I don't feel so good." Nyx groans as she trots up to her parents with a groan. "I think Mr. T is out to get me." "Nyx? What's wrong with her?" "Nyx, calm down." Twilight said to Nyx with a sigh. "We don't have to go through your weird behavior tonight! Now get yourself fix up so..." Suddenly Nyx throws up right onto the princesses, making some ponies nearby yelp in shock. The filly roars furiously, "DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO, FOOLISH PONY!!!" "Okay, you need to lie down, Nyx. This crazy behavior of yours has got to do, now go." Ben orders Nyx who begins to float off. The ponies watch on, getting very uneasy looks. "She's a very weird filly." Spike said uneasily. Twilight looks embarrassed as she gave some towels to her aunt-in-law and Luna. "Sorry, just send us the bill for those costumes...if they are rentals." Twilight apologizes to Celestia and Luna, shameful of what Nyx just did. "It's okay, we made them ourselves." Celestia said, looking concerned. "How long has your daughter been acting like this?" "Since we left earlier. I don't know what's going on with her. It's like she isn't the same filly I know!" "Yes, that is unusual." Luna said, giving a suspicious look to Nyx, who lay down on a bench. "What is her symptoms?" "Roaring at ponies, spilling liquids from cups, biting, crawling up stuff, then forgetting about it." Phobos said in recollection of what Nyx did so far. "Why?" "Hmmm...something tells me that this isn't usual behavior for Nyx at all." "Are you saying that my daughter could be turning into Nightmare Moon again?!" Twilight gasps to Luna in horror. The last thing that the purple unicorn wants is for that to happen again! "No, I'm saying something else altogether." Luna said seriously. "As in possession. We need to check on her as soon as possible." "I can only hope it doesn't interefere with Megan's arrival." Celestia said with a sigh, much to the surprise of Twilight, Ben, as well as Pinkie and Rarity coming over. "Wait, Megan is coming?" Rarity ask Celestia hopefully. "As in your friend who help taught you what you know and all that???" "Yes, she promises to make a special appearance...and if anyone knows anything that were to go on, it's Megan." "I can't wait to meet her." Ben said with a smile at the idea of finally meeting Megan at last. "After hearing so much about Megan, this is a great opportunity to be doing so." Meanwhile, Rainbow is talking to Soarin', dressed like the Flash, the mare smiles while asking, "So what did you think of my performances of performing the Sonic Rainboom, Soarin'? And are you surprised that you're hanging out with a non-Wonderbolt?" "Nah, we do this all the time." Soarin' said with a slight chuckle but saw something, looking puzzled. "Is something wrong with Twilight's kid?" Rainbow glances to see Nyx floating up a bench. The mare blinks a bit while shrugging it off, saying, "Nah, she's an alicorn. What did you expect? Unless you count on some weird behaviors of hers..." "Aaand, if she supposed to be shoot out lightning unconsciously?" Soarin' ask, more confused as lightning came out of Nyx...and without the filly being conscious at all! "How should I know? She has been acting weird all night!" The Mane Six and their friends aren't the only ones who note Nyx's weird behavior. A familiar creature in the shadows while wearing a cloak and hood observes this, saying, "Hmmm, Nyx is acting odd...better do some research." He grabs a book and starts reading it. His eyes widen in horror. "Oh, no!" 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| Toonwriter | Oct 15 2012, 10:59 PM Post #6 |
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The Mayor, in an outfit of the current president, spoke into the speaker, "Welcome to the last night of Nightmare Night, every pony! Did we enjoy our 31 Nights this year?" "Yeah!" Mostly everypony in costumes cheers out, having a good time. "Good to hear that! We like to thank Princess Celestia for introducing this idea to Equestria as well as her sister Luna for coming out tonight. The ponies cheer as the princesses wave. Celestia smiles to her sister while saying, "Wave, Luna. This night is mostly for you after all." Luna smiles while waving though kept an wary eye on Nyx who appears to be glowing. Something is not right with her. "We shall begin tonight's activities with Monster Battle! This round pits the Cutie Mark Crusaders!" The Mayor exclaims as the ponies cheer for Apple Bloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie near some sort of goblin robot. "Against Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon!" Some ponies cheer for the two bullies, some just boo. Diamond Tiara remarks devilishly, "You're going down tonight, blank flanks!" "Yeah, well, we'll see!" Apple Bloom growls at Diamond Tiara for her remark. "And now, let the fun begin!" The Mayor exclaims. The ponies cheers as the Snotty Duo starts off their Frankenstein robot, sending it at the goblin one. "All right, Franky, do your stuff!" Diamond Tiara taunts madly as the two robots collide. "Maybe then we will stuff this like your heads, blankers!" "Not if we take ya down first, bub!" Apple Bloom remarked back. "Hey Cutie Mark Crusaders!" A voice called out, getting everypony's attention. It came from Jakk Checkers (dressed as a knight) along with Colby Lollygagger (dressed as a gargoyle) and Matelda (dressed as a princess), "Knock those Gob Snobs' blocks off!" "Yeah, show them!" Matelda cheered in agreement. The ponies cheer on. With the princesses' group, they cheer on. Rainbow remarks, "I just know that Scoots and her pals would win." "Eeyup!" Applejack exclaims with a smile. "They done have 'de heart an' determination. Those snotty duo just have their mean nature." A weird noise is heard, much to the group's notice. Fluttershy, trembling, asks in worry, "Did you hear that?" "What is that noise?" Ben ask, getting a bit concerned. "Must be rats, ugly ones. We should set traps down." Phobos remarks with a shrug, not noticing Nyx glowing nearby, the real source of the noises. The ponies saw a cloaked figure coming to the box, speaking, "Excuse me? Am I late?" She removes her hood, revealing a familiar blonde haired girl. "Megan, you're here!" Celestia exclaims to her grown up friend while nuzzling her. "I was worried." "I got my children's trick-or-treating done earlier, so I managed to teleport myself here." Megan said with a smile to Celestia. "Megan, hey." Twilight said while nuzzling Megan right back. "Happy Nightmare Night." "Thanks, Twilight." Megan said as she hugged the purple unicorn, "Nice costume." "Thanks to you." Twilight said while motioning to Ben. "Megan, I like you to meet the love of my life, Ben Mare." "Hi." Ben Mare said sheepishly to Megan. "Mom told me all about you." "Who's your mother?" Megan ask Ben curiously. The stallion smiles as he motions to Celestia, much to the human's surprise. "Celestia? You have a colt???" The alicorn giggled as she replied with a nod, "An adopted colt, to be precise." "It's kinda a long story, but it involves a rival of mine turning me into a monster, a long exile, reunion with Twilight and all that." Ben said while scratching his mane. "But...it was worth the pain, so to speak." "I also must introduce you to my own foal, her name is Nyx!" Twilight exclaims to Megan happily. "You will love her. She is a little black alicorn filly." "Is that her glowing while floating?" Megan asked in concern. The others turned to see Nyx floating, she appears to be glowing red. "Nyx, get down! You're being rude for your friends' performance in this thing!" Twilight exclaims to Nyx, getting upset. "There is no Nyx, only me!" Nyx snarls to Twilight in a different voice. "Okay, you need to knock off the act, little filly." Rarity scolds Nyx. "Now, seriously, let us talk to the real Nyx." "THERE IS NO NYX, ONLY ME!" Nyx snarls to Rarity, causing her mane to go flying back a bit. "Oh, god! That voice!" Megan gasped in horror, recognizing the different voice Nyx spoke with. "I say, she needs to tone down the volume a bit." Rainbow scolds a bit before flying up to pull Nyx down. "Now quiet down! You're making us miss the..." An explosion occurs, making everyone turns to see that the Frankenstein bot is down. Diamond Tiara frowns as the Mayor announces, "The Cutie Mark Crusaders win!" The CMC cheers happily for their win. Scootaloo exclaims, "Yeah, all right!" "Awww, man! See what you made us do, Nyx?!" Rainbow scolds Nyx, not seeing her glow like mad. "You made me miss it! Why..." Suddenly, Nyx roared as she flew upward, making the activities stop. The ponies turn as they gasps at what's happening. "Gah!" Lyra, dressed like a devil, exclaims in shock. "What is going on with that filly?!" Bon-Bon, dressed like an angel, yelps while holding Lyra. "Yikes! Twilight, Ben! Call me more random than usual, but I think Nyx's possessed!" Pinkie gasps in fear at what's going on with Nyx. "I think you might be right, Pinkie!" Twilight said in worry. "Took you long enough, right?" Nyx spoke in the evil voice. "This is what happens when you miss the signs, all of them!" "What is that freak doing now?!" Diamond Tiara asked in annoyance while glaring at the glowing Nyx. "Is she trying to steal my show again?" "I think something is taking over Nyx!" Silver Spoon gulps while trembling in fear. "Oh, bother, don't tell me you're one of those kooks." Diamond Tiara scoffs to her best friend by what she's saying. "No, Diamond Tiara! I mean it!" Silver Spoon said in fright, "Some kind of evil monster is using Nyx's body!" "Who are you?" Luna demands to Nyx in anger. "Why are you possessing Nyx's body?!" "What? Have you forgotten the legends? Does my presence no longer matters to you ponies?! Then perhaps my name will be enough to put fear in your hearts once more!" The possessed Nyx exclaims sinisterly to the ponies. "I am...Tirek the Abominable!.!.!" "Oh, no!!" Sweetie Belle cried. "Not him!!" Megan screamed in fear. "Okay, guards, seize him...or her...or whatever!" The Mayor exclaims frantically as she rush up ahead...but turns around and gasps as the Royal Guards with her turned into Changelings. "What?!" "And I am not alone." Tirek chuckles evilly. Sure enough, some of the ponies changed into their real forms, that of the Changelings. Even one of the guards near Celestia changed into a familiar foe. "Surprise! Miss me?" Chrysalis taunts her enemies with a cruel laugh. "Chrysalis!" Twilight shouted in anger. 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| JusSonic | Oct 16 2012, 05:45 PM Post #7 |
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"Chrysalis...what are you doing here?" Celestia demands to Chrysalis angrily. "And why are you with Tirek?" "Tirek the Abominable is my master." Chrysalis said as she bows to the evil centaur possessing Nyx's body. "Wait, what?" Phobos ask a bit confused. "When the...did I miss something?!" "Try not to let it hurt your head, Phobos." Fluttershy said to Nyx gently while glaring at Tirek. "I have been their master for some time now." Tirek explains to the villains sinisterly. "It was me who helped them get into Canterlot to begin the plan of taking it over so they can feed off the love. It was me who assists them in their previous plot." "Dang it! It's thanks to you that Shining was hypnotized by that evil Changeling Queen and almost destroyed all of Equestria!" Twilight exclaims furiously at the one who started the mess at the Canterlot Wedding like Chrysalis impersonating Cadance in the first place. "Yes, they all served me in a little exchange: they get all the love they can feed as long as I'm in charge. But you...you ponies went and ruined everything twice! Well this time, I shall control those mistakes once and for all." "By taking over a little filly's body?!" Megan demands to Tirek furiously. "What are you hoping to gain by doing so?!" "Ah, yes. The human who saved the ponies from me...the Mag'ne or is it Megan? I can never tell nowadays." Tirek chuckles to Megan evilly. "I waited all this time to avenge myself on you...once Equestria is mine again, you will watch your pony friends die before you beg for death to take you." "No, not a chance! You have fallen before, and you will so again!" "If you mean the Rainbow of Light which is now the Elements of Harmony, don't bother! My Changelings Army is spreading throughout Ponyville, even by sky. My magic will make a forcefield within seconds! Now, to answer your question, I took Nyx's body because she was once the essence and hatred of Luna herself. Her powers and memories may be gone, but mine still are...enough to take the filly over..." "So that's it. You gain Nyx's trust by pretending to be her friend...then take her over when she least suspects it." Luna said furiously. "How can you live with yourself?!" "Unlike you, Luna, I do not waste time and am not overconfident the second time. I've learned my lesson the last time...perhaps you should've as well. Oh, sorry. You can't." Tirek taunts Luna sinisterly, making the former villanness glares at him. "Okay, Tirek the Jerk a naught! Get out of Nyx's body and face me like a fighter!" Rainbow snaps as she waves hooves in the air. "I've heard stories about you but I am not afraid to kick your tail to Tartarus and back if I have to!" Tirek comment to Rainbow Dash, "So you are Firefly's most direct descendant. I am going to enjoy crushing you for what your ancestor and Megan did to me." "Blah, blah, blah. You're old fashioned, Tirek. Admit it, you should've went to Tartarus and just stay there. The new century can kick your sorry flank big time and we got what we can to prove it!" "Well, I see that you have Firefly's ego." "What? I do not have a ego!" Rainbow exclaims in annoyance to Tirek, upset by the insult. "Yeah, instead she has a robotic double." Pinkie said happily and more randomly. "Enough of this." Megan said sternly as she stood alongside Celestia and Luna. "You have made us drop our guard, but as you have foolishlly exposed yourself..." "...just like Chrysalis has done." Celestia said sternly to the evil Tirek possessing Nyx, making Chrysalis glare at her. "We will do what it takes to protect my subjects from you." One pony scoffs at Celestia, "What are you going to do, suppose you actually do anything this time?" Some of the ponies nod, looking resentful at Celestia. "What is that about, Celestia?" Megan ask Celestia in concern, not liking the comment. "There has been some mean critics of my sister, due to her inability to fight me and Discord...as well as fallen to Chrysalis before." Luna explains to Megan with a sigh. "It's kind of a long story." "Face it! You have an opportunity to stop Tirek before and you failed!" Chrysalis screeches at the ponies and their allies. "You have seen the signs but fail to act!" "Now be ready to suffer for this night shall be your last!" Seto laughs evilly as Tirek waves a hoof up and shot out something into the sky. The ponies gasps in shock as some sort of forcefield appears, spreading throughout the area, covering all of Ponyville and the Everfree Forest. Unlike the ones made by Shining, it's dark and sinister. "My forcefields shall keep you all trapped in here...until my Changelings have fed." Tirek said sinisterly while motioning to Chrysalis. "Chrysalis?" "Attack!" Chrysalis roars to the Changelings as the evil ones hiss while preparing to attack the ponies, much to their horror. They are all surrounded. Lilly yell, "The horror! The horror!" The ponies scream as they run from the Changelings. Twilight and her friends look frantically. It's like the invasion of Canterlot all over again. "Nyx, Nyx! Fight Tirek, please!" Twilight pleads to her daughter in worry. "Don't let me take you, please!" "We can't do anything fer her, Twilight!" Applejack exclaims to Twilight who looks saddened at Nyx. Her daughter is being possessed by a monster from centuries past, being controlled like a puppet. It's not fair! "We must escape!" Megan exclaims as she got onto Celestia, the two prepares to make their escape. "But how are we going to..." "Leave it to me...Ben!" Celestia exclaims to her son sternly. "Right, monster!" Ben exclaims as he begins to glow. Suddenly a flash appears, covering the entire area. When the flash disappears. the Changelings looks confused as the ponies and their friends have disappeared, gone from sight. Tirek roars in fury, "What is this?! Where did they go?!" "Uh...I give up. What's our prize?" Fred ask Tirek in confusion, making Ed laughs stupidly. "Idiots." Seto groans a bit at the idiot Changelings. "Apparently, those ponies have teleported out of here. But how?" "Maybe they teleported away from Ponyville." Chrysalis said with a frown. Great, just great. Her enemies has escaped once more, obviously ready to make the next move. "No, nothing can get by the forcefield. They must either be in Ponyville or in the Everfree Forest. Find them. Absorb the love, fear and misery if you have to...but bring Megan, the princesses and the new holders of the Elements of Harmony to me. Beat them all to the inch of their life if you have to...I want to end their existence on Equestria personally for my defeat years ago. If I had my Rainbow of Darkness, I would turn those ponies into evil dragons, but for now..." "Yes, I understand. It shall be done." Tirek watch as his Changelings trot and fly away, looking for the ponies. The villain cringes as his body appears to be struggling. Despite his taking over, Nyx is still inside her body, trying to fight a way. He must put an end to it somehow...and watching Twilight die in front of her would end Nyx's struggling once and for all... Author's note Yikes! Tirek is revealed and everyone is trapped in a game of cat and mouse. What shall happen now? And what will Megan do to help? Read, review and suggest. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 17 2012, 07:39 PM Post #8 |
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Author's note To answer your question, cornholio4, I say at the end of this story. Chapter 3: The Eternal Night Fight Twilight's eyes open as every pony in Ponyville find themselves in some sort of secret hiding place somewhere in the Everfree Forest. The unicorn ask in sadness, "Nyx?" "Celestia, where are we?" Megan ask Celestia in concern as she got off of the alicorn. "What is this place?" "This place has been used against a battle not so long ago." Celestia said seriously to Megan. "It will serve our purpose once more...but we don't know how long." "Well, while we're done doing 'dat, Nyx is being possessed by a monster fro' generations ago, Changelings are out looking fer us...dang nab it!" Applejack groans as she stomps the ground in frustration. "'Dis is turning out 'ta be one crazy Nightmare Night." "You know, this comes to show that the princess is also a coward." Another pony remarks while some of the ponies mumble in agreement. "She chose to flee instead of letting that creep ruin our night and take control of a former evil!" "My little ponies! It is not my sister's fault!" Luna insists to the critics in concern. "We are caught off guarded and are outmatched against the Changelings. It would be foalish to fight them without a plan." "Celestia would've deal with them, but noooooo!" "Okay, that's enough, ponies!" Megan exclaims to the critics sternly. "Celestia is not a weakling or a bad princess. Yes, she has some problems like falling to an enemy or not confronting, but Celestia is doing her best! She cares for her subjects and is willing to fall just to keep you all safe!" "That's right and one thing you also must remember." Ben said as one of his hooves glow, making the critics yelp a bit. "She's my mother! Mess with her and you get the butt kick!" "Besides...don't we got another problem right now?" Sweetie calls out to the ponies in sadness. "Nyx is being possessed by that monster Tirek! We got to find a way to get that creep out of her!" "Please? Put 'dis aside fer now? Fer Nyx's sake? Ah know she was once Nightmare Moon...but Nyx once saved us, remember?" Apple Bloom pleads to the critics. The critics of Celestia sighs but reluctantly leaves for now, deciding to not bother criticizng the princess for now. Megan looks concerned as she ask Luna, "'Once Nightmare Moon'?" "She was once the chains that binded me...but my sister and Twilight will tell you more." Luna said to Megan in concern. "Right now, we got a more pressing business." "We need an old priest and a young priest!" Pinkie exclaims frantically while galloping around in a circle. "Are there any priests here?!" "Knowing Tirek, he would go after the princesses, me...and the Mane Six since they are the holders of the Elements of Harmony." Megan said seriously. "As well as descendants of some of your closest friends." Celestia said with a sigh while glancing to the Mane Six. "You know that Twilight is the descendant of the original Twilight, Rainbow is Firefly's descendant, and Applejack is the descendant of the original Applejack. Fluttershy is the descendant of Posey, Rarity is descended from Sparkler and Pinkie Pie herself is desecended from Surprise." "Huh, weird." Spike said puzzled by the facts being revealed. "I'm surprised that they are descended from different types of ponies." "Come on! Different pony genetic patterns were pass on or taken over when new blood relatives were born." Phobos exclaims mischievously to Spike. "kinda like how the Cakes for Pound and Pumpkin Cake when the parents are two Earth ponies and their kids are an unicorn and a Pegasus pony." "Going back to Ponyville is not safe. We need the Elements to stop Tirek." Celestia said in concern. "But we may need more than just that. We need to get stuff from The Armory." "Armory?" Some of the ponies ask a bit puzzled. "Yes. To those that may not know, that is where the machines of war from Lorcan's Brotherhood mechanics, Flim & Flam, made were stored away in case of another war emergency." "Yes, of course, I just got a plan!" Rarity exclaims with a grin on her face. "As in an idea! some ponies have to distract the Changlings while others head to Canterlot, find the Armory to bring forth the mechanical creations to help save Equestria once again!" "Nice idea, Rarity!" Sweetie exclaims happily. "I want to go to the Armory!" "Yeah, we want to play with that Gazookis again!" Dinky exclaims happily, the Cutie Mark Crusaders look so eager to use the Gazookis once more. "As long as a grown-up pony is with you that is." Megan said to the little foals with a giggle. "But can the Changelings take the forms of only ponies?" "That is yet to be determined at tis point." Ben answers Megan with a concerned look on his face. "We don't know how powerful these guys are. And where is King Spykoran and the Dragon Army?" "They are in hidden places in Equestria. We don't know if they are in the forcefield or out at this time." Luna said in concern to the ponies. "We can only hope some are inside as we need the help we can get." "Wait, hang on!" Scootaloo exclaims in realization. "The Armory is in Canterlot...which is outside the forcefield!" "Scoots is right!" Apple Bloom exclaims, realizing what her friend is pointing out. "How are we going 'ta git 'de Elements an' 'de machines wit' us in here?" The ponies look down. With the forcefield over Ponyville and the forest, it's impossible for a win. Celestia pauses then smiles while saying, "I think I got an idea. Golden Heart!" Suddenly a familiar voice is heard telepathically, "Princess Celestia. I heard you." "Yes, you saw what happened, correct?" "I saw the forcefield from here in Canterlot. What's going on?" "Who is that?" Bon-Bon ask a bit alarmed. "Who's talking?" Soarin' ask in alarm and worry. "That's Golden Heart, he's talking to me telepathically and is outside the forcefield." Celestia explains to the surprised ponies before continue speaking to Golden Heart, "Golden Heart, I got bad news. The evil known as Tirek has returned....and is possessing Twilight's daughter Nyx right now." "What? How is that possible? Tirek has been dead for centuries." Golden Heart's voice ask in surprise and disbelief. "His spirit lives on...and he has allied himself with the Changelings. Listen, we need you to bring the Elements and the machines from the Armory to the edge of the forcefield. I will send someone there to help." "Right, will do so." Eventually, Golden Heart broke contact. Fluttershy looks puzzled as she ask, "'Someone'? You mean one of us, right? But how can we get by..." "It won't be one of you." Luna said to the ponies much to their surprise. "We can't tell you, trust me. You aren't ready to know." "Well, I want to know." Megan said sternly to the Royal Sisters, making them a bit nervous. "You aren't keeping secrets from me...I want to meet your new friend." "Fine...but try to brace yourself." ------- The door to the library is knocked down as the Changelings came in. Chrysalis trots in while snapping, "This is where Twilight Sparkle and Ben Mare lives. Ransack the place, find them!" The Changelings quickly begin search the place, tearing the place apart. Seto approaches Chrysalis while saying, "No doing, Queen Chrysalis. No one is here." "Blast it, where can they be? Tirek is getting impatient." "Queen, we found something." A Changeling hiss as he brings out some sort of black and spikey book labeled 'Forbidden Book of Spells'. "I realize this..." "Yes, so did I." Chrysalis said with an evil grin as she glances at the book. "Tirek will be pleased..." ------------------------- Megan and her 'daughters' reach a part of the Everfree Forest where they will be safe to speak to the figure alone. The human sighs while saying, "All right, who is this figure who is going to meet Golden Heart at the forcefield?" "Celly? Luna?" A figure in the shadows spoke upon seeing them. He notice Megan and frowns. "I thought you were going to meet me alone." "Yes, I apologize for this but she insisted. This is our friend and the one who taughts us everything we know...Megan." Celestia said to Lorcan with a smile. "So, you are the 'Mag'ne', eh? You are prettier and nicer than the legends describe you to be." "Yes, thank you." Megan said, flattered while giving a curtsy to the guest. "Listen, we need your help..." "If it involves Tirek, I am willing to do what it takes, as long as no one else sees me. I can't let my presence be known yet." The figure said in concern and worry. "You won't be seen just yet. This task will acquire secretacy and trickery." Luna explains to the figure, making him smile. "'Trickery', eh? Now that I can do. Tell me what I must do." ---------------------- "Where are they?! Why are you wasting my time by not bringing what I ask for?!" Tirek demands to Chrysalis as she came over to bow to him. "Please forgive me, but we got a solution to your body problem, along with that of the Rainbow of Darkness." Chrysalis said while motioning to the book that Fred and Ed are carrying. "Seto?" "Ugh, I hate this book." Fred groans under the weight of the book itself. "Yeah, it's so...heavy." Ed cringes a bit, keeping himself from collapsing. Seto clears his throat and begins to read from the book, "'The Body Rejuvenation Spell. This spell which involves carving a stone of one's likeness, followed by an unknown incantation (which allows the soul to enter the body), and while the body is in a large crystalloid from lava which courses it's hot magna in the stone like veins of life. Then when all is done, the crystal will shatter, along with the stone body of the figure in question, and be replace, fresh living once again and all traces of magic return." "You see? You don't have to be in Nyx's body, Tirek." Chrysalis explains to Tirek with an evil grin. Tirek pauses then gave a smile on Nyx's face, saying, "Perfect...and the Rainbow of Darkness?" Seto continues reading, "There is also a spell that brings forth lost items of long forgotten passings of time, to which it's a vile potion where the owner of something lost declares what must be before him, then smashes the vile on the ground. It will release sparkly smoke screen that blinds view. Then hovering from the potion, is the return item in question." "How pray tell did you find this book?" "We find it from Twilight's library." Chrysalis explains with an evil chuckle. "Apparently, Celestia must've send it to her to study or something...or the unicorn has taken the book. Either way, mistake on both of their parts." "Chrysalis, I am giving you the task of making the spells possible. Once I get my body, then we shall get the Rainbow of Darkness from a sack." Tirek exclaims eagerly. Yes, soon he will have a new body and the Rainbow of Darkness will be here again. "Seto, the rest of you, continue the search!" The Changelings bow as they trot off. Tirek smiles then frowns a bit. Nyx is still trying to fight his control. His body must be made if he is to begin his rule a-new. --------------- |
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| Toonwriter | Oct 18 2012, 11:16 PM Post #9 |
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The ponies get ready to gear up for a distraction so that Golden Heart and whoever their friend is can get the Elements and machines in to help deal with Tirek and the Changelings. Ben notices Twilight sitting on the ground, looking down in sadness. "Twilight, honey? What's wrong?" Ben ask Twilight in concern. He saw that she's holding Nyx's glasses, which the mare hasn't gave back to Nyx yet. "It's about Nyx, is it?" "I...I fear that I'm losing her, Ben." Twilight sobs sadly as she looks at Ben. "I remembered when I lost her to darkness before and now...I fear that I lost her again, maybe forever." "Oh, Twilight..." Ben said in sympathy as he comforted his mare-friend. "I should've done something...I should've taken Nyx to the princesses before...now Tirek has possessed her and..." Twilight sobs while hugging Ben. "Our little filly is gone...I stood there and didn't do a thing! What kind of mother am I to let that happen?!" "It's okay, Twilight. We will save her. After all, do you still care for our daughter?" Ben ask Twilight gently. "Of course I care for her." Twilight sniffled. "Then I promise, I won't rest until Tirek is out of Nyx's body and our little filly is back in our arms again." Ben said to Twilight in determination. The mare sniffs and smiles while nuzzling her. "Ben, you always know how to cheer me up." Twilight said with a sigh. "Come on, you two! We got a distraction to make!" Rainbow exclaims to Ben and Twilight as she flew on past. "Hopefully some of us will do the distraction right." "And maybe, we can find a way to get Tirek out of Nyx's body." Ben said with a smirk. "You ready, Twilight?' "You bet I'm ready!" Twilight replied with a determined nod. ----------- King Spykoran lands in Canterlot to catch his breath before heading off to Ponyville for the celebration. As he does, the dragon notices that Golden Heart and his troops are getting stuff out of the Armory. "Golden Heart." King Spykoran the Old spoke, getting Golden Heart's attention. "King Spykoran the Old, what an honor to see you again." Golden Heart said while bowing to the king of the Dragon Clans. "Are you on your way to the festivities?" "Yes, but I stop to take a rest. It's a long flight from the lands to the west. Tell me, why are you getting weapons from the Armory?" King Spykoran ask Golden Heart puzzled. Isn't tonight the last night of the 31 Nights of Nightmare Moon? "An old enemy from your past has returned, Spykoran." Golden Heart said to King Spykoran seriously. "He has trapped Ponyville and its citizens, along with the princesses in a force field. We are bringing the machines and meet up with someone who could help get us in." "Old enemy from my past? Who is it?" King Spykoran ask Golden Heart in concern. What enemy could be returning after all these years that the dragon knows of? "You remember him: Tirek the Abomination." Golden Heart said to King Spykoran seriously. The old dragon's eyes widen in shock. Tirek has returned? The old Spike's memory goes back to his past with the monster, who tries to harm and punish him if it weren't for Scorpan. Now that evil centaur has returned to attack Equestria a new. "Golden Heart, I shall help you all out. This is personal." King Spykoran said, clutching a fist. He shall help the ponies fight off Tirek, just to get back at the monster for all the years of what the old dragon has gone through centuries ago. "Thank you, Your Highness." Golden Heart said as he bowed to King Spykoran, glad that he's going to help the ponies against Tirek. ------------- The Changelings are in troops, looking for their enemies. Unknown to them, a small group of them is watching right now. "All right, we got to distact these guys so that Golden Heart can get in here somehow with the Elements and the machines." Big Macintosh said with a nod. "Not sure about how he will get by the forcefield though." "We will try to distract some other way." Cheerilee said with a nod, before turning to her group of ponies. "You ponies ready?" "Ready!" The group of ponies nodded in reply, ready to distract the Changelings. Pinkie smiles as she got her party cannon out then say quietly, "Ready, aim...FIRE!" The Earth pony opens fire on the Changelings, sending out decorations and stuff onto the bad guys. They yelp as the ponies rush in, fighting them off. "Go to red alert!" Ed exclaims to his fellow Changelings in alarm. Fred looks confused as he ask Ed, "Whatvare you doing?" "My squad, my rules." Ed said to Fred with a shrug. Fred frowns as he snaps, "I thought it was our squad. Go to megenta alert." "There's no such thing as megenta alert." Seto said, a bit annoyed by the Changeling's stupidity as usual. "Yes there is. It's like red alert, but softer!" Fred insists to Seto, making the consort of the queen slap himself on the forehead. "Is there an alert for annoying bug who won't shut the buck up alert?" Seto ask the Changelings dryly. "Yeah, it's called a 'your face' alert!" Ed exclaims stupidly. Seto slaps him. Fred spits in Seto's eye, making him yelp. Eventually, all three Changelings end up in a sissy fight, slaps, spits, etc. The squadron members shook their heads in disgust. "Nah, nah!" Pinkie exclaims while waving her tail at the Changelings. "You guys can't hit the broad side of a barn!" "Get them!" Seto orders his troops as they begin their assault on the ponies who quickly fight them off. The Changelings were a bit startled as this is different than the Canterlot invasion. During the distraction, Twilight, Ben, Spike, Phobos, Megan and the princesses watch on. Celestia whispers, "Perfect, these ponies will keep them busy until Golden Heart arrives with the Elements and the machines." "Meanwhile, we must try to get to Nyx." Megan whispers hopefully. "Maybe if we're lucky, Tirek didn't destroy her yet." "You believe that Nyx is still in there?" Twilight ask Megan hopefully. The mother hopes that her daughter is fighting Tirek's control. "What if..." "Don't lose faith, my little pony. Your daughter wouldn't give up without a fight and neither should you." Megan said gently while petting Twilight. "She would want you to save her somehow." "Oh, I hope you're right, Megan." Twilight said as she nuzzled her human friend. Rainbow flies to the group while saying, "All right, no sign of Tirek in Nyx's body yet but he should be in town somewhere." "We must keep searching then. Come on." Luna said as her group heads off to look for Tirek/Nyx. Rainbow flies to the group while saying, "All right, no sign of Tirek in Nyx's body yet, but he should be in town somewhere." "We must keep searching then. Come on." Luna said as her group heads off to look for Tirek/Nyx. The ponies kept on with their distraction while Seto and the two idiots try operating a weapon system, but struggle a little. They decided on the tutorial...which is in French along with a French instructor, who teaches them on the instructions while speaking French, confusing the Changelings. "I hate French!" Seto complains angrily and in frustration. Pinkie, meanwhile, bounces all over, dodging the Changelings happily. The pink pony teases, "Come on, you slowpokes! Is this how you play tag? Don't you know how to play?" The Changelings growl as they chase her but the pink pony kept bouncing around, while sticking her tongue out, exclaiming, "Nah nah!" In a hidden spot, Fluttershy find herself surrounded by Changelings, the Pegasus pony is too scared to use her Stare at the moment. They growl, preparing to suck the fear and misery out of her. "Please, don't hurt me, please?" Fluttershy ask nervously but scream as they attack... But then, a shadowy figure jumps in and blast the Changelings away, his hood fell as he yells, "Fluttershy, run!" "What?! It's you?!" Fluttershy gasps in shock as she saw the figure's head. "But...but how?" "Never mind, please don't tell anyone else that you saw my face! I am not ready for the other ponies to know!" The shadowy figure insists while blasting at a Changeling. "Just go, go!" Taking no second thoughts, Fluttershy nodded and flew off, escaping from the Changelings. The figure smirks as his claws sparkle, turning to the Changelings while saying, "All right, boys, come to papa..." |
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| V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G. | Oct 19 2012, 06:08 PM Post #10 |
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Yo JusSonic man, remember that last suggestion of how Tirek is defeated scene? Well I got a bit of that one worked out for ya, so here you go...CHECK IT OUT! ~ (Tirek's Defeat Scene) Soon the Mane Six were powering up the Elements of Harmony, the lights begin to flash a bit with sparkles. This was the slow beginning to what was soon to happen, however… "Oh no you don't! The Rainbow of Light may have changed, but I know it's flaw lies in being used by others." "Now behold!" Tirek appeared while preparing his familiar sack bag before the others. "The renewed power of Darkness…at it's PEAK!" Tirek's soon opened his sack, and unleashed the Rainbow of Darkness to sweep downwards. Many saw this, and yet many could almost but do nothing but watch? As they soon saw it, the Mane Six & the Elements were soon getting inter-twine before the Rainbow of Darkness covered them all; encasing the ponies and their last hope. (Panicky reactions!) During the entire course, the Rainbow of Darkness soon finished what seemed to be the devouring of the Mane Six and the Elements of Harmony, and soon stood upwards as a symbol of 'Infinity' with a sphere pulsating, as if proclaiming it's unstoppable force of dark power. "Gwuhahahahaaaahhh!" Tirek cackled out with a wicked smirk of trumpet victory, seeing the display of his win. "At long last, now the only light & six ponies are NO MORE! I've WON! GWUHahahahahaaahhhh!" The mad villain laughs out in insanity, seeing that long last, he's defeated the power that once beaten him. This looked to be it, it seemed that there was now no hope left and that Tirek's would regain the power to rule Equestria with an iron fist!…Or so it would seem? Just then, without any warning what so ever, the center within the 'infinity' shape Rainbow of Darkness…began to change with…pretty colorful lights? "Look! Our friends are fighting back!" Megan pointed out in renewing everyone's hope, and truth be told, it was so. From within the sphere, it was glowing pretty colorful colors to slowly spread out to cover the darkness, including the rest of the Rainbow of Darkness. "WHAT! It' Can't Be?" Tirek exclaimed out with wide eyed surprise, seeing that his Rainbow of Darkness was losing…to this? "" Soon, the entire entity of what was once the Rainbow of Darkness, was completely transformed into the Rainbow of Light? It spread itself around, and from within the sphere, revealed the Mane Six, activating the Elements of Harmony to spread out their own rainbow to join the other. Both rainbows were inter-twine in more harmony before stretching themselves forth towards the unnatural cause of evil disharmony; Tirek. Tirek could only watch, as he rode within his chariot with his dragons, as the two Rainbows soon were trying to intangible him."No! No! GRAAUUUGh…NOT AGAAAAAAAIN!" Tirek cried out and held up his arms in protest, he can't lose, not again, after so many centuries to return; not again? "KRsisvhmm…KURPOWwwfruvhmmm….." Then without warning, a giant explosion of light flashed across Tirek's appearance, as the others below duck down from the explosive wind pressure blowing their way, as they hang on for something BIG. Tirek's entire palace of darkness was being devastated by the Rainbow of Light's power combined with the Elements of Harmony. "GRUUAARRAAAauughhh…." Tirek made one last cry, has the power of two rainbows united flew towards him once more, inducing him and his chariot of drak dragons in a spiraling light? Within the spiraling light, any who saw it was almost speechless, Tirek's body was de-crippling it's structure to dust, and soon when it reached it's head, only his black pitch soul remained until…? "NOUUARRUUAaawwwhhh…." Yes, even the evil dark soul of Tirek, was eviscerating from not one, but two powerful Rainbows forces that shredded the evil out of mere existence….this time, for keep sakes. At this time, much of the Changlings that served Tirek were being pulled in to the Rainbow cyclone? "Oh no, oh no? What's happening?" Ed yelped from trying to fly away, but the force was pulling him. "Do you think it'll get us?" Fred asked his pal if this storm will get them, seeing they are the targets? "Qucikly, grab onto something!" Seto passed over the two in suggesting they grab something to hold to not get sucked in. Too bad what came next was the Queen of the Changlings; Chrysalis, as soon as she was under the others, Ed & Fred reached down to hold onto their queen, much to her surprise. "WAIT! NOT ME, YOU FOOLS!" Chrysalis yelped off to snap in annoyance, the message Seto meant was of solid, not of their own, especially their queen. "MY QUEEN!" Seto yelped to help aid Chrysalis, but soon the lack of flying away pulled them all and any Changling into the Rainbow Cyclone? That just left one thing for them to do now…? "WAAAHAAAA…./WAAHAAUAAGHUAAGH?" Yep, Fred and Ed were screaming their heads off, as they, Seto, Chrysalis and all the Changlings soon vanished upwards in the Rainbow Cyclone. "POwwvhmmm…." And then as if reliving deja vu, a bright explosion blasted these guys off in different direction, it was the same thing that happened in the Canterlot Wedding Event. Now these followers of Tirek were now scattered and out of the picture. Soon after Tirek's defeat, the dragons that pulled his chariot were being swept into the cyclone storm. Many ponies on the ground looked up in surprise, the rainbow vortex was impacting the very dark cloudy skies, lightning and thunder clash out before it vanished completely until… "KURPOWvhmmm…." One mighty burst of implosive light, shines across all that were there to bare witness this feat. Some dragons on the ground fell back in yelping pain in the strange glow until….when the loud booming noise faded…they were turn into butterflies? And soon, even his created dark warriors from long again, were bathed in the light that pained them until….they were changed back into innocent birds. Even the entire dark palace and structures surrounding what became Tirek's new rule of dominance..was changed too? The land returned to it's appearance of beauty of greeny, clear blue skies, and the light of the warm sun that has not been seen in this place until now. By the last moment of miracles, the dragons of darkness that Tirek made to pull his chariot, were falling from the skies as if unconscious? But then from their earlier glows, they returned to the ponies that were turned into dark dragons. (Note: in case you wanna list out who they were, etc.-etc. to fill this part?) They were falling from the air while regaining their senses to know what was happening? However, there was no cause for panic, as they reached the ground, as if by some invisible magical force, stopped them, some spinned around in midair before gently tucking the firm ground. They were puzzled from what happened, but only knew that they were returned to their normal selves. It was only here, that the Mane Six soon landed on the ground, looking a bit tired out after their magical rainbow vanished soon after. Many of their friends and family came over to see if they were alright. (Any chatter you wanna add?) "Look? Tirek's sack?" Megan pointed up in spotting something falling from the skies? Truth be told, the sack fell on the ground near the human girl, to which her puzzled mind went to pick it up? "Looky there! The Rainbow of Darkness now turned to Light?" Phobos pointed out something strange, one rainbow was still folicuring around, like it was lost? The moon dragon knows that the Elements of Harmony's rainbow already disappeared when it did it's job, so why was there one more rainbow unaccounted for? Then without warning or know how, Megan held opened the sack, and the new Rainbow of Light soon dives towards her? Soon before anyone knew it, the Rainbow had gone into the sack, which it glowed for a few moments before transforming it's appearance? Soon within Megan's hands, was a new red heart locket, only with a golden lining on the outside for the opening & closing. The human girl was in utter silence, not just her, but practically any other pony as well? Could this be….a 'New' Rainbow of Light, in this modern day of Equestria, since the Elements of Harmony were still around. "Megan, is that what I think it is?" Celestia spoke when she and Luna approached their friend, being so completely puzzled in what they saw happened with Tirek's evil rainbow? "It is, it's a new Rainbow of Light? Maybe from that last display of the two…our friends strength was stronger then the darkness." Megan nods from holding the new Rainbow Locket, and feeling a more warmer glow flashing from it, the same feeling from the Elements from the time she had them as one before they split into six. "So in short, from the Elements of Harmony that not only aided in conquering the Rainbow of Darkness…it changed it into the new Rainbow of Light?" Luna exclaimed out in nearly surprise wide-eyes to hearing this, they have…a new rainbow? "Right, that's what I think too. At least this way, all of Tirek's dark powers are gone." Megan nods with a smile while looking at the new locket, finding it almost hard to believe…this item was the holder to the Rainbow of Darkness, but now it's changed for the better. "That's amazing? Now we got two times the power of Rainbows on our side!" Spike responded with a big smile, if they have two magic rainbows, then they got double the power to protect their home from evil "Indeed, if this was the past, I can't imagine how many other enemies would feel facing two Rainbows of Light instead of just one?" King Spykoran exclaimed off in agreement, as he sees this as more surprising then anyone else. "And I feel this power, should be safely kept in your hands, Megan." Celestia spoke from holding the new Rainbow Locket, and presenting it to be around Megan's neck. "Really, are you sure?" Megan spoke in puzzling wonder, as she held the locket up, wondering if she should do this? In the past, she was the holder when the old elements of Harmony were one, but is she okay to keep the second one? "We are sure, we have the Elements of Harmony, but if we are in need, we know of another power to reach…from the chosen wielder once again." Luna spoke with a brighten smile on her face, assuring Megan, that she would be perfect to hold the new Rainbow of Light, as it would keep her safe from harm, and those close to her, and be used if the ponies are in need of their friend. "In that case, I promise to help whenever I can." Megan nods with a smile in happily accepting this task of being the keeper of the Rainbow of Light. In truth, it's just like the old days, only now the ponies have two powerful rainbows to help them in their aid of need. "Now that everything is settled, I do believe we have some late festivities to wrap up?" Celestia spoke with a gentle tone in recalling where and what they were doing before all this craziness happened? ~ Just something I cooked up during some spare time? You can do with it however you like. And as for what happens in-between to the final closing curtain...hehn, that's all you. The scene of Tirek's defeat is very much similar to what happened in the first My Little Pony (G1) pilot; Rescue At Midnight Castle. With a few additional changes to what was seen then to being seen now, sorta. The scene of what happens to the Changlings was what happened to Taurus Bulba's three henchmen from the Darkwing Duck series in the pilot work. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 19 2012, 10:34 PM Post #11 |
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--------------------- While the Changelings are spread throughout Ponyville, looking for their targets or trying to fight them off, their leaders are oddly enough at the Ponyville school where Chrysalis was preparing for some sort of spell. Tirek was watching, unaware of a familiar group hiding from nearby. Rainbow mumbles, "Weird, why the hay would Tirek be holding out here?" "I think I know. This is one of Nyx's favorite places." Twilight said with a smile. Nyx loves to hang out at school, despite Diamond Tiara's bullying and the events from before. "Tirek must've taken it without a choice. "What is Chrysalis doing, sister?" Luna ask, noticing that Chrysalis is preparing a spell in front of a cauldron. "I don't know...but I think I recognize the book that she has." Celestia said with a frown as Chrysalis is reading through a familiar book. "It's the Book of Forbidden Spells which my troops has confisticated from Boris home which I send Twilight to study." "Oh, I'm sorry! Chrysalis and her troops must've stole it from my library!" Twilight exclaims to Celestia in worry. "Not good, who knows what they could read from in there?" "No worries, Twilight. As long as Tirek doesn't find out anything to use, everything shall be fine." Ben said to Twilight with a smile. "We must wait until Chrysalis is away then somehow strike at Tirek. You think, Twilight, Ben, you could reach to your daughter?" Megan ask the couple hopefully. Our daughter appears to be fighting so far, so maybe." Just then, one Changeling appears, hissing to his leaders, "Masters, the ponies are fighting us off, we're having trouble. We need reinforcements." "Oh you will, eventually." Tirek said to the Changeling with a chuckle. "Once I get my body back and the Rainbow of Darkness." "Also, we got reports that someone is going to the force field, some sort of figure in a cloak and hood..." "Hmm, this requires an investigation. Chrysalis! Keep the first spell going!" "Yes, master." Chrysalis said as Tirek begins to fly off with the Changelings continuing what they're doing. "'Body'? 'Rainbow of Darkness'?" Phobos ask in concern and confusion. "Okay, I know about the Rainbow of Darkness part but what body?" "I just remember something: there are two spells in that books, one that can make a new body...and the other that brings forth lost items of long forgotten passings of time, to which it's a vile potion where the owner of something lost declares what must be before him, then smashes the vile on the ground." Twilight said as she recalls what the unicorn herself has read from the book. Then she gasps in horror, "No! Tirek is planning on getting himself a new body!" "And regaining the Rainbow of Darkness!" Luna exclaims in alarm and worry. "We cannot allow this to happen!" "And that we won't." Celestia said sternly as she trots right out of the hiding. "It's time that Chrysalis and I have our rematch once and for all..." -------------- The guest has taken out the Changelings then heads for the force field. He looks at it carefully then remarks, "Well, if I can take down Shining Armor's force field before..." "Then you won't again." A familiar voice remarks as Tirek in Nyx's body lands nearby. He glances at the figure up and dpwn, recognizing his face. "Hmm, so your still alive?" "Yep. Like you." "Only Grimmore doesn't know. Why are you not dead?" "Unlike you, Tirek, I don't act like a coward and uses a filly's body like a puppet." The guest said as he puts his hood back up. "Question is, why did you use Nyx of all ponies?" "It was Chrysalis's idea. While Nyx's powers were gone, she can access to them without a choice. And as she was once Nightmare Moon, the former evil of Luna, that made her a perfect candidate." Tirek explains to the figure. "Nyx is trying to regain control, but once I kill her mother right in front of her..." "Oh, I get it. You get control fully...but not on my watch." "Right, not on yours..." Tirek fires a blast at the guest who dodges it. The opponent slashes at Tirek but was careful not to go lethally. Nyx is still in that body and Twilight won't be happy if her daughter is killed in the conflict. The guest knew that he has to take the force field in hopes to get Golden Heart into Ponyville with the Elements and the machines...not so easy, is it? Author's note Looks like things are heating up big time. Celestia must stop Chrysalis before she completes the spell while the guest deals with Tirek him (her?) self? And what happens when Luna confronts Tirek as well? And what happens when Grimmore finds out that the evil centaur's still around as well? Read, review and suggest. |
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| V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G. | Oct 20 2012, 08:41 AM Post #12 |
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Hi Jus, saw that chapter, loved it! Got another scene for you to use, course had to change it around from the Forbidden Book being found out, but hey, no problem. We learn to adjust, right? So, CHECK IT OUT! ~ (Scene for later, pass Tirek's defeat!) The scene now changes to another area where it's only showing us two ponies; Twilight and Celestia. They are at a hidden spot where they can discuss something in private for the moment. "You wish to see me, Celestia?" Twilight Sparkle responded with her most humble tone in addressing her ruler. "Yes Twilight, you recall that the Forbidden Book of Spells was in your home?" Celestia nods to her loyal student and family member, as she asked if the mare recalls a certain 'spell book', within her captivity. "Oh, about that? I can explain!" Twilight yelps a bit in surprise, she figured that the princess of the sun would later on realize that the Book of Forbidden Spells was within reach of the enemy, cause it was in her home unproductive. "I would have written saying something about it, but then I became interested in it's pages, and lost track of time, so…." As Twilight was trying her best to explain the matter of the book of such spells was in her possession without secretly securing it, the princess cut her off. "It's okay Twilight, in truth as you know, I sent that Book of Forbidden Spells to be with you personally." Celestia held up her left hoof to calmly let her student know, that she knew about the matter, being the one who did the deed. "Well…yes? But…why?" Twilight slowly responded a bit puzzled while curious on the matter, why would Princess Celestia send her the Forbidden Book of Spells, something that once caused trouble for ponies in the past to even now? "To have you be up to date in what spells you may come across when trouble arises..anew." Celestia spoke from looking out over a field that was quiet and peaceful, but kept a stern focus face, as if suggesting to be cautious. "So…it's not over yet? There's still some evil to face?" Twilight looked to her princess with a puzzled face, thinking that their times of peace might not last again? "Yes, some even more powerful then we can imagine? Yet they haven't made their move…?" Celestia spoke with a stern and serious face, knowing that Tirek's evil maybe gone, but there will certainly be others to take his place to try and cause harm to her ponies. "There was one spell I wanted you to understand the most, so that it maybe use to give you aid in the greatest threat you're situated with." The princess of the sun looked to Twilight, as if explaining the importance of knowing of one 'certain spell' out of the others, that can do the most good. "And..which one is that?" Twilight curled her left eyebrow in confusion, she seen some of the spells form the Forbidden Book, but nothing that hasn't been seen that would be of much help? "A powerful spell, known as…the "Xros-Fusion" Spell!" Celestia slowly spoke, and then held her head up high in declaring the name of the spell in nature, and the power it can call forth. "The…Xros…Fusion…Spell?" Twilight slowly noted with a much more puzzling face then before, as if not completely following that word or name of the spell mentioned? "Forgive me for asking, but what preciously is that spell?" "It's a spell to fuse two beings together. Such is the different term of speaking it, 'crossing' with 'fusion' put together." The princess slowly stated in speaking how the mentioned spell can be noted to be label as before explaining it's properties. "The spell that crosses different breeds to fuse them. Like taking a Pegasus & a Unicorn to become an Alicorn, both gaining the skill of another and increasing their other skills more then before." Celestia stated out with a much focus expression, explaining the much important detail of the spell brings two creatures and make them into one. "Wait…is this like that Talent Swap Spell Boris used?" Twilight stop for a moment to ask a question, this spell almost sounds like what Boris the Red Devil used during the Demon Pony event? "No, unlike that spell, this doesn't take, it merges. Once more, it's up for more then just two chooses, the number of mergence is limitless." Celestia shook her head while explaining that for this particular spell, there's not much of bad, but of good uses from it. "The spell can be used to make someone be the core member, to hold the others together. They must be strong of mind and body, and work what they have to their advantage." From what the princess explained, if someone like Twilight, was the core member during the meting, she would have the power of those that fused together with her. "So….if me and my friends did this spell?" Twilight slowly was speaking out in trying to match up what Celestia was getting to. "Would we be as strong as you and Luna, princess?" To the smart mare's theory, if she and her friends did become one strong being from this fusion spell, would they almost be strong as the Royal Sisters? "Perhaps…even stronger?" Celestia made a sly smirk in suggesting a possibility that seem to jump up Twilight's hopes a bit. "The spell allows one to get stronger, if another strong individual allows themselves to fuse with you, and gain their strength and abilities." The princess stated out; for those in Twilight's group, all the facts of their talents would be merged together, all for one, and one for all, in that sorta understanding of what's to happen. "There's one thing I'm not following?" Twilight asked off from feeling something tugged in the back of her head? "Why was this spell put in the Book of Forbidden Spells?" The smart mare wanted to know, if this spell, 'Xros-Fusion', was to aid them in their toughest time of need, why was it hidden to never be seen again? "Because…a lot of evil minded hearts would force others to merge with them, giving them greater power without a care. They would even choose to remain that way permanently." Celestia explained with a very serious and stern expression in what she spoke, was very true. Evil villains would use this spell to gain more strength and power, without caring for others they use to get that way, and even wanting to never return to normal. "Then…what about us?" Twilight asked a bit hesitated, now seeing the dangers of this spell, was it assuring to say…if she and her friends did this, would they be stuck as one person instead of six? "You have nothing to fear, the spell will stay active, but it can be undone on two accounts." Celestia smiled when she shook her head to assure Twilight of other matters that would be different for if the Mane Six wanted to know if they could return to normal. "One, is if the core member is willing to split those in the spells fusion to return to their original selves, and another is if they are overpowered to the point, they lose focus and break apart." The princess explained out the conditions in which, even when the spell is being effective of fusing others into one being, the core member of the merger has the will to separate, or if something causes those fused to de-fuse, then those are the only ways of returning to one's original self. "Wow, I had no idea?" Twilight spoke out with a wide smile in feeling like she's learned something extra new here. "So then…how could I make this Xros-Fusion Spell work for us?" The mare questioned off in how such a spell could be worked well with the Mane Six? "That's the easy part, if you all have the will to do it, and let your strengths become one." Celestia nods with an honest smile in how the spell in question, can be done willingly, and not by force. "Also, when fused, you may not look the same, you may even take on an entirely different form? Perhaps to even go under a knew name." The princess pointed out one major detail, those that fuse, especially a large number, can create a new being to show characteristics almost similar to those used to merge with. "Really, that's amazing?" Twilight responded in surprise, this does indeed sound like something that would catch anyone's attention. "Yes, and even though you will fight in a new fusion body, remember, those of your friends are with you inside, and I do mean truly." Celestia nods to state, that even if Twilight & the Mane Six are only of one body from fusing, they are still connected, able to talk and speak suggests while they are merged. "Oh course princess, I also want to know?" Twilight nods in understanding, but also had another question she had to ask. "Could we even use this spell, with the elements?" This was a good question, would they have the elements, would their forms changed to fit their fusion creation? After all, the elements did do something of becoming accessories to be worn all over Spike when he was fighting Lorcan that time a while back. "Yes, that is why I believe you and your friends can do this." Celestia nods once again with honesty as her witness in responding to the question. "Perhaps by using the elements and the spell, you can create something of 'Unity', and with that, approach any danger without fear." This piece of news sounded almost too good to be true, a spell this strong, and use of the elements of harmony, the Mane Six with those were strong enough, sure, but imagine…if they were fused into an even stronger individual to conquer the task at hand. "But do try to practice it, saying and doing are completely different things." The princess issue that Twilight and her friends first try to practice and learn how to perform the deed, it may not come off so easily at first, but only after practicing, will the time to use it be known if they got it down? "I'll inform my friends right away, until then, thank you Princess Celestia." Twilight nods with a humble bow before she and Celestia nuzzled each other's heads. "Take care, my beloved little pony." Celestia nods with a smile, as she watches her prized student now rush off to tell her friends the news while planning to enjoy herself with the last bit of the festivities. ~ Now this part helps to later on, bring forth the talk of what we once discussed on PM Talk, remember? How to use an idea from the series, Digimon Xros Wars anime series, could be perfect to make such an interesting part when facing evil far stronger then ever. (And you can imagine the chatters about fusing a couple of ponies together, it'll be a crazy kinda moment alright?) 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| V.I.S.I.O.N.-K.I.N.G. | Oct 20 2012, 08:54 AM Post #13 |
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Hi Jus, I got the last work in what happens with Grimmore's forces & the aftermath of things when the battle of Tirek is long over. So check it out, plus the little appearance to 'The Superior' of your order? CHECK IT OUT! ~ (Scene of what happens with Grimmore's Group after the events of Tirek's defeat have passed?) The scene returns us to the place where evil still lies within the Gates of Tartarus, within the center reign, where Grimmore's palace lies. And within the chambers, the Overlord King sits on his throne, resting his chin on his right hand, as he, and even Ji-Ga-No by his side while he hovered, saw the Black Clays enter and bow before their lord and master. "I can tell, the mission…was successful?" Grimmore spoke from looking down at his Black Clays that have return to tell him the news he wishes to hear. "Yes master, the crystal, is within the human called Megan's possession." Captain Clay responded with a humble arm cross bow in acknowledging his lord's question with an answer. "Excellent, as a show of my thanks, I shall create something 'special' to join my army base upon you all?" Grimmore smiled ever still to hear this, and now he wishes to present something as what will be apart of his army; using the pattern structure similar to his clays. "Oh really, and what precisely, would it be?" Ji-Ga-No asked with a raised attention to what 'new' soldier would be made within the Grimmore Army. "Look and see?" Grimmore spoke, as he sat up straight, and soon forged within his left hand, a sphere made of metal. "Here, I hold but a simple forged of strong metal alloy in the form of a sphere?" The Overlord King exclaimed in showing something that his followers are understanding. "Fissiivhmm…." Then without warning, the sphere was bulky and stretching out in a wobbly matter, like it was alive? "And I can change it's form to liquid, but when forged again becomes a strong metal object?" Grimmore explained the basic concepts in which he can control even the properties and structures of metal objects, even before or after they have made made. "And what are we getting at with this display?" Ji-Ga-No asked once more, being avoided of his earlier question to what the point was here? "This right here?" Grimmore smirked with a wicked sense, as he brought forth something in his right hand that glowed and forged a familiar green triangle form; It was the copied TriForce he obtain a while back. "I shall infuse a small sample of the copied TriForce's power, into this metallic sphere…to create…a Living Weapon!" The Overlord King proclaimed his next step to creating, 'stronger' creatures to serve him, and cause some mayhem. "Life-Creation - FORMATION!" Grimmore chatted forth, as he let the two items hovered in his hands, before the copied Triforce of the smallest force, was brought to the metal sphere? "Spzizizivhmm…." Sparks flew off when the two items touched each other, the Black Clays flinched from seeing such power while Ji-Ga-No, never flinched even once. "Frusvhmm…" Soon the small copy of the TriForce & metal sphere merged with only the latter remaining, all seemed quiet until… "Grugrusvhmm…." The metal soon turn to goop and slipped pass the Overlord King's hand onto the floor. "Nothing has happened?" Ji-Ga-No responded in being surprised, usually, something amazing would happen, even if that was only a small portion of the TriForce infused, so why? "Wait for it?" Grimmore held up his left hand to signel his general to give this time, it's only just starting. "Grusvhmm-Fruspvhmm…." Soon the metal goop began to move on it's own, and more so, shape it's very being? "MWRUAAaaaaughhh!" From the eerie voice, it sounded like the wailing of a soul from a creature? By then, all in the room took notice of what was created and given life by Grimmore's magic. An amoeba-like creature that was gray and has no eyeballs, with his body looking to be made of liquid mental. He took the form generally assumed of a hairless, legless humanoid, which was similar to the Black Clays. Once he gotten to look at his surroundings, he saw the being who created him; the Overlord King himself. "Welcome to the world, you shall be called: Metal Jell!" Grimmore responded like a king, welcoming into arms, a new warrior to his cause. "You are the first, of my Elite Warriors." The Overlord King proclaimed in announcing the rank this 'new' creature shall be in apart of the other soldiers within the Grimmore Army. "Hmmm…heheh?" The creature called Metal Jell heard this, and chuckled a bit in liking the sounds of this. "And what is this Elite Warriors you speak, my lord?" Ji-Ga-No asked from looking at Grimmore and curious puzzlement at this Metal Jell creature, as this new system of rank is new to him? "That is simple to say, of what I mean. Creatures I create by taking something strong, and use my magic to make them stronger beings out of the rest of the army I made." Grimmore smiled in resting his head again on his right hand while stating how any creature he creates that are the Elite, are stronger then the others in the army. "But why listen, when a display is in order. Black Clays, attack Metal Jell!" The Overlord King exclaimed out, as he looked to his awaiting Black Clays with an order, to attack his creation, their new comrade. "Whah?" The Black Clays yelped in hearing this order, Grimmore wants them to fight this one creature against their large numbers? "Master, are you sure?" Captain Clay was about to ask if his master was certain of this, usually none of the army captains question their lord, but this one might be heading towards disaster? "Yes, do it!" Grimmore spoke while a close zoom of his eyes made a darken narrow move of focus, as if saying 'do it, OR ELSE' in the most slyest and unexpected way to threaten someone? "Hmhmhmhmmm…" Captain Clay flinched by that last tone, it's enough to send shivers down even spineless jelly creatures like the clays? "Men! Attack him all at once!" The captain quickly turned to his troops and pointed the target in front of them, they are to attack Metal Jell, without question. "YAAAaahhhhh!" The Black Clays roared their battle cries, as they were charging, or leaping up in the air, arms to whips, they were going out. "Hmph., an entire large troop brigade, now that hardly seems fair?" Metal Jell spoke with a little smile in seeing this, as he was being attacked from all sides while making this claim? "For you?" Of course, on that last note, it sounded like the direct opposite before his right arm became a long expending whip. "Whipvhmm….BASHhfruvhmm…." And then in an amazing feet, lashed that one weapon that impacted all of the Black Clays, stopping them in their tracks. "WAAAUugh…GAAaugh…." The Black Clays were shot back, even their captain, scattered across the ground, a bit wounded, but alive. "MWahahahah, you'll have to do a to better then that, to stand against me!" Metal Jell laughed off at what he's done, as if seeing that was barely much of a challenge to him. "Incredible, he took them out with a single blow of an attack?" Ji-Ga-No spoke out interested in that display of power, one warrior bested out an entire platoon, it's some achievement. "Is this the power that just a small dosage of the Triforce can give?" The Metallix Dragon questioned his lord in thinking, that just a little sample of the TriForce makes one being this strong, then what's to say of a full dosage? "Yes, and I'll soon create more Elite Warriors like this one here." Grimmore responded with a pleased expression, he'll create others just as like Metal Jell, but different in every meaning. "Not to mention, create even more powerful beings to be on closer pairing with you, my general? They shall be known, as my Elite Warlords." The Overlord King proclaimed out to Ji-Ga-No, that soon, he'll have created those that are even stronger then the Elite Warriors class, those closer to this dragon's term of power and strength; the Elite Warlords. "As strong as me, HA! You'll be luckily to create them by tapping in the item in question, to bring out more then a small bit of that copied Triforces power?" Ji-Ga-No responded off in a sarcastic tone that the only way any new creation his master makes that can almost be on pair with him, is by getting more power from the TriForce itself, even if he makes copies of it from smallest to largest qualities. "Indeed, it will take a few tries, but while I'm at it, a few powerful creatures to serve me is just as nice." Grimmore closed his eyes to look away while chatting a bit on how to imagine having stronger creatures in his army, would make this all the sweeter. "And when my next creations, with their power near to yours Ji-Ga-No, Equestria shall fall under a 'new' might." The Overlord King declared forth, soon, very soon, he'll have forces not only in numbers, but those who's strengths are no laughing matter, and will spell 'doomsday' to all who challenge them and him. "To which, I think of letting my Elite Warriors take charge in causing some mayhem for the ponies? By giving them access to travel from here to Equestria, and use whatever of the troops in the army as they see fit." The man in the thrown declared out, as he stared down to Metal Jell, telling him, that he and others like him, shall take charge of causing some mayhem chaos to the ponies of Equestria. "You are too kind, Lord Grimmore." Metal Jell humbly bowed before his king and lord, smiling in accepting this task to ruffle up some ponies. "Hahahaaaah, so it's about time we started?" Ji-Ga-No laughed out in seeing they can finally act now in lauching their attack, but... "Not yet, too much power over-clasping our targets would hardly be, 'sporting', in the sense?" Grimmore held up his right hand to stop his general, and smiled with his ego in wanting to be 'fair' in his vocabulary. The Overlord King likes to have a good show, entertainment is what he seeks, so why go all out, when some showing of his army's might is just the first approach. "For now, we'll cause some upsides and roars, even a bit of my magic can cause some damage? But all in all, it's all for show…for the grand-moment that shall be…the curtain downfall of Equestria." Grimmore exclaimed with a darken tone in knowing all to well, a few bits of his army to show their strength to bring a new threat to Equestria, and maybe at times, show off himself, but this is all but the 'Main Openings', as the 'Main Event' to the final will come when the time is right. The gathered members in the chamber laughed wickedly before Grimmore ordered them to leave him be. Ji-Ga-No soar out of the room, Metal Jell passed the recovered Black Clays, that stood up, even the captain before following their next leading commander. Once the coast was clear, a portal of flames appeared before Grimmore, but the imagine was a bit fuzzed out? The only distend characteristic was this person hid himself in a cloak, the coloring wasn't showing right…almost like the other user was trying to keep his appearance as much secret as possible. "I can tell, you saw who was putting on a show for us, and is…no more?" Grimmore spoke slyly to his mysterious calling, stating some facts about Tirek. "Yes, to believe Tirek was alive, it took us by surprise?" The mysterious being responded in being all to surprising to learn, of Tirek's involvement in this day and age? "Just so you know, my side is beginning to move a few steps into the play-field, not all at once, but just as nice…how about yours?" Grimmore spoke casually in stating what his side shall soon be doing, and ponders the thought in what this person individually is up to? "I've gathered my members for the Organization, and the latest recruits….one of them being my daughter and her associate friends." This mysterious being responded with a solitude tone in mentioning how he's creating an 'organization', and something of involving his own daughter? "My, my, bring family into the business? Isn't that nice, and should I address you, for having connections with Smaug?" Grimmore smirked to learning and knowing of what this mysterious being was saying, and he was almost going to say his name relating to a terrible dragon of long ago; Smaug. "No, just…Superior, will be fine." The mysterious hooded figure in cloak responded, as he just wanted to be responded; as the Superior. "Hmph., very well Superior. You do what you must on your side, and I'll stir up something on my side?" Grimmore nods with a easy going smile, seeing that the Superior wants to have things his way for the time being, as both of them have plans it seems. "Everyone believes I'm cocky, but they'll say anything to move pass their fears…that I'm someone to be feared? You and I both are the types, now aren't we?" His eyes stretched out in a most wickedly vile and threatening manner, as if stating to all the fools out there, to never bite off more then they can chew when opposing something they should fear, both the Overlord King, even the Superior here, are those type of beings themselves. "Yes, we'll begin a few steps here for our cause, and soon…all will be within our grasp of the destiny that awaits us." The Superior nods before stating off that all of his efforts and organization are working towards the same goal. "I wouldn't have it any other way….yes?" Grimmore nods in hearing this, and smiles in absorbing all of that, for it means…the time of the grand-finale will come that will spell 'The End' for Equestria. The only thing about this, while some villains argue it can't come sooner, this one…wants to have some 'fun' before the darken hour arrives. "MWahahahahahah-WAAAhahahahaHAAaa!" Soon the mad laughter echoed out from the thrown chamber and across the entire prison of Tartarus. As the threat to Equestria is not being brought by the Grimmore Army, but by another force, things will not be as quiet and settled as others may think? For in truth, evil never sleeps, it lies within the shadows of every corner…preparing….TO STRIKE! ~ Well Jus, hope you like some of this, cause it's got crazy stuff in it. Including something of the 'connections' Grimmore and the Superior have for one another we once discussed on PM Talk. Also, if you've seen my Profile, I've added a list of a lot of cast to be apart of the Grimmore Army. In short, about 90% of characters from the famous Monster Rancher series. If you've played the game, or perhaps seen in a better look of such cast from the TV Series. Think of it this way, if you wanted to show of soldiers from the Grimmore Army, there's a choice list to see which would be perfect to be seen in any MLP Fanmake event? I've picked out some good ones fitting such a theme, so if you wanna use some creatures being seen or causing an event uproar, that be fine, it'll be interesting to see. (Not to mention, if you've seen the Monster Rancher TV Series, it'll help tons on what's going on and who was doing what with abilities, etc.) Not to mention, I got some strange ideas in using the Elite Warriors for some exciting scenes. Plus, if you're still considering the story ideas I gave you, I know I'll post one OC has an EX-Member of the Grimmore Army, the one in which it's a flaming pony, you know the one. Till then, good luck, I'll be catching up with completing some of my other stories now that I got all the requested scenes out of the way. Chow for now, and hope these things help you out Jus. |
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| JusSonic | Oct 22 2012, 05:32 PM Post #14 |
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Author's note Hey folks, JusSonic here, ready to resume this fic, sorry for the delays so far. Also to D.J. Scales, read 'The Elements of Harmony and the Savior of Worlds' for that Megan and ancestors part. Chapter 4: The Return of Tirek The ponies keep on fighting off the Changelings, getting better, chasing them off. But with each Changeling that fell, another comes by. Another group of the Changelings where coming untill they are stopped by a mysterious figure that is blocking their way in the shadows. "You bugs will wish you never came back." The figure said as she then draws her blade and stands her ground, ready to fight. "Come and get some bugs." The Changelings hiss as they assault the figure but she jumps around, slashing and kicking some butt. The results are too gruesome and horrible to explain in detail, but let's say those scum never stood a chance. One Changeling saw what happen to the others that where coming to help hunt the ponies.and saw all of them beating down even the stronger ones but not dead and saw the figure still standing. Before he could get away, the Changeling bumps right into the figure. He was about to scream when the figure then puts her hoof in his mouth and says "Shhh wouldn't want you to ruin the surprise and warn Tirek now, do we bug?" With that she hits him in the head and he is out cold. The figure says, "The bugs are dumb and will not remember what has happened." The figure then sigh, "I hope my friends and Goldie are ok and even the human Megan that I have heard of. I need to think of a nickname for her in later time." And after that the figure goes into the forest untill she could no longer be seen. -------------------- Chrysalis smiles sinisterly as she put in yet another ingredient, the whole progress is now a stone. The evil Changeling queen remarks, "Soon, the spell will be complete...and Tirek will be reborn." "Chrysalis, I doubt that." A familiar voice spoke up, making Chrysalis turn to see Celestia and her group nearby, the Sun Alicorn is glairng at her. "Ah, Celestia...how nice to see you again...though I wish it was under better circumstances." "I know what you're up to...I will not allow you to make a body for that monster Tirek. We don't want him back after so many centuries ago." Chrysalis just laughs a bit while remarking, "You may not want him but us Changelings do! Once Tirek takes all of Equestria, we will have all the love, misery and fear that we want! Plus, if I'm lucky, the master will allow me to co-rule sometime." "You are a fool! You think Tirek would keep you and the Changelings around?" Celestia demands sternly to Chrysalis. "Tirek would keep you around until he has no further use for you. You are nothing more than pawns to a monster." "Please. Tirek has respect for us even if we have fail him before. You, on the other hand, he doesn't. You didn't bother to fight your sister and Discord...you couldn't even beat me!" "I have reasons...and the reason why I couldn't beat you before is because you were super-strength by Shining's love for Cadance. Well, not this time. It's time I put a stop to you and your evil once and for all." "Then have at it!" Chrysalis hiss as she fires a familiar blast at Celestia who blocks it with her own. The others watch on as the blasts collide. Both fighters go at it while Ben cheers on, "Go on, mom! Beat that evil witch!" "Go take her down, Princess!" Twilight exclaims with an smirk on her face. "Be careful that she doesn't beat you this time!" "Has Celestia fought her before?" Megan ask Twilight in concern upon hearing the last part. "Yes...but with no love to strengthen her, Chrysalis doesn't stand a chance!" "Right, this proves that mom isn't a weakling or a coward." Ben Mare said in determination while standing proudly. "My mom will fight to protect those she cares for if she must." Chrysalis sure enough is having trouble. Unlike the last chance when the Changeling Queen has the advantage, the witch is having major trouble. She didn't have the advantage like the last time. Chrysalis screams as Celestia head butts her and send a blast at the villainess, sending her away from the school, but not too far. The alicorn lands near her opponent, winning easily this time. "Without any love to help you, you must give up now." Celestia said sternly to Chrysalis before turning to the stone. "But first, I shall destroy this stone so that Tirek won't return." Chrysalis hiss as she quickly uses a spell, sending the stone away from Celestia then teleports it. Luna gasps, "No!" "Oh yes, I send it away from me so I can finish it in peace. I think you better go check on whoever is trying to take down the force field." Chrysalis taunts her enemies sinisterly as she flew off. "He is in danger." "No..." Chrysalis flew away, Rainbow is about to chase her when Celestia stops the Pegasus pony, exclaiming, "No! Listen! Rainbow, you, Twilight and Megan goes help the ponies fight off. Luna and I must save our friend!" "Who is your friend?" Spike ask Celestia in curiosity. The dragon wants to know who is helping the ponies with the force field. "Never you mind. Only Luna, Megan and I shall know for now. Just go, please!" With that, the alicorns quickly flew off quickly. Twilight looks worried, fearing that Nyx, whose Tirek is possessing, is at the force field right now. Megan put a relaxing hand on her friend's shoulder, saying, "It's okay, Twilight. Celestia and Luna won't hurt your daughter. They know how important she is to you and Ben." "I hope you're right." Twilight said with a sigh. She can only hope that the princesses won't be forced to kill Nyx to stop Tirek. If that happens, the purple unicorn will never forgive herself. ------- The cloaked figure groans as Tirek slams him to the ground, for someone possessing a filly's body. The villain fires a few more blasts at the figure who dodges him. "Hmmm, shame you insist on wearing that hood." Tirek remarks to the figure in amusement. "I thought you hated being small." "I am...but I do not want the ponies and their friends to know that I'm alive...not yet." The figure said to Tirek with a groan. "Just like you, I like to surprise them at the last second." "What a shame that I must ruin that surprise." Tirek then rush at the figure and pounds him a few times. He groans in pain, the hooded one is being beaten by someone who was destroyed centuries ago and is in Nyx's body. The figure backs away to the force field. "If I'm going down, then I won't without success!" The figure slams as he quickly fires a huge blast at the force field...kinda like Lorcan's attack on Shining's force field not so long ago. Soon the force field begins to crack like mad, going throughout until it breaks, dissolving in thin air. -------- "The force field is downn!" Golden Heart exclaims as he, King Spykoran and the troops saw that the force field is no down. "Time we attack!" King Spykoran nods as he made a huge roar. Soon familiar dragons, who used to be parts of Lorcan's army, appears. The Dragon King orders, "My fellow dragons, it's time to save Ponyville and Nightmare Night from the most legendary of evils! Redeem yourselves for your mistakes!" The troops and dragons charge to Ponyville with the machines ready to be used. ------------------ "Well, well, whatcha think now, Tir-nerd?" The figure taunts but was stabbed in the side by Nyx's order via Tirek. "I think it's time for you to face your demise at last for that stunt, dragon." Tirek hiss furiously at the groaning figure. "FAREWELL!" "No!" A familiar voice exclaims angrily as a blast of wind knocks Tirek away from the figure. Luna, in rage, appears with Celestia standing nearby. "Celly, take the guest and run!" Celestia nods as she takes the figure and flies off with him, getting away from Luna and Tirek. The two fighters remain, glaring at each other. "Princess Luna." Tirek said with a sinister chuckle. "How appropriable of you to show up...and to die on your most famous of Equestrian holidays." She say. "Tirek, let Nyx go! It's me you want not her! "Oh, I will...once all is in preparations. Then, your sister, the Mag'ne and your allies will be executed by my orders." "I know of the spell that Chrysalis is working on! You will not succeed...we won't let you. You will fail, just as you did before!" "Overconfident, just like your sister. I like that! Have at you!" Tirek laughs as he prepares to fight Luna by getting into position. "Hope you don't mind fighting a filly who is the daughter of one of those who saved you." Luna frowns, fearing that Nyx would be hurt severely. But she must fight to stop Tirek...and hopefully the alicorn can get him out of the filly's body without harming or killing her. ------------- Meanwhile, we see the battle against Tirek is going on, but the question is that this was only being seen through a magical portal image. And the one who was watching it sat in his throw,e observing the battle, seeing the ponies struggle against the newest foe. This was none other then Grimmore, the Overlord King as he looks somewhat in a surprise shock, but tried to keep his expressions in check. "So....he has return, this is truly a shocking surprise." Grimmore rubbed his chin in seeing this action taking place overside the gates of Tartarus. "My lord. What troubles you?" Ji-Ga-No spoke from hovering nearby as he senses something disturbing his lord. "And old villain from ages pass has return my general and it is none other...than Tirek the Abomination." Grimmore spoke diligently in addressing the matter, the return of one of the ponies' oldest foes. "You can't be serious! He was destroyed by the Mag'ne long ago!" Ji-Ga-No spoke off in utter disbelief that Tirek has somehow come back. "That's the funny thing. Bodies maybe turn to dust, but spirits are a tricky sort." Grimmore spoke off from noticing the outcome of the battle happening, Tirek was just a soul without a body. "I have wondered some time why he was never within Tartarus and it proves he was slowly planning his return!" The Overlord King exclaimed the cause of reason why such a villain was never seen in this prison and this was the answer. "Then we mustn't waste time! Send me and I'll personally GRINDE him to the bone!" Ji-Ga-No came up to his master and humbly suggest that he, the most brutal general, go to face and annilate this enemy. "Wait!" Grimmore held up his left hand as he saw something happening within the viewing portal. "Frsisivhmm..." The magical portal imagine changed with a glowing red and soon showed forth the image of...a familiar human woman that the ponies recall from legends. "Well-well, another blast from the past has shown up...the very first human of another plain that defeated Tirek has returned." Grimmore spoke with interest to see that someone else has shown up, the one known by the legendary Mag'ne, or otherwise known as Megan, is back. "The Mag'ne is there too? Then it's all the more reason we must strike!" Ji-Ga-No responded a bit more surprised to hear this and suggest they need to act. "Patience, my general, I do agree, we can't let such an opportunity go by. Fate has given us the key and for my own plan to play out it's act, I'll need the one from legends...the Mag'ne." Grimmore spoke in foreseeing how he can turn what is happening into a work of his own plot for future planning. "I summon you into my chambers! Come to me, my minions! Black Clays!" The Overlord King held up his arms and bellowed his voice around as he was calling for the minions of his choice. Suddenly, something was seen slipping across the ground floors, some fast, others a bit slow and some even leaped up. They were a liquid that moved so steadily until they reached the throne of where Grimmore and Ji-Ga-No were. Then the next moment started to happen as these were no ordinary liquid puddles. "Wraaaugh-Ruuuaaaruuugghhhh!" These liquid things were stretching themselves up, and made an eerie sound and soon took shape. They were now black liquid-base clay creatures with no feet, height about 10 feet tall. They took human shape with long arms, bald heads and they have no eyeballs or color. They also appear muscular and had a red 'Y' symbol on their chest fronts. These were some of Overlord King's troops from the Grimmore Army; The Black Clays. Their known abilities are from scaling and sticking to any surface, even the ceiling, without feet, they are quick and agile to stroll across any surface. They can take any shape as they use their bodies to form weapons like arm whips, become big puddles of glop to press their heavy weight on anything and to change into some form of a disk to gather energy's of magic to unleash a strong force on an opponent for damage result. The hardest in facing these creatures is that without much strong force will repel their targets off, only stronger strength or fearsome attacks of magic will manage to weaken them. "Hmm, excellent. Where is your captain?" Grimmore smiled in seeing his troops are here, and now wonders where the captain is. "Right here!" One Black Clay came forth from the others, this one wore blue shoulder pads and a helmet with spike off the middle sides, and wears a white neck-band with a golden emblem with the letters 'G' & 'M', standing for his master. "Captain Clay, reporting to you, my lord!" The captain of these troops saluted with upmost resect to his master and lord. "Frsusvhmm...." Then from Grimmore's left hand was magically carved crystal with a halo ring in the center. "Take this Halos Crystal! And when you get the chance, place it within the Mag'ne's belongings, make it be noted that it's a gift from the ponies to alue suspicion." The Overlord issued out his orders before the item in question floated down to Captain Clay's hands. "Yes my liege. Alright troops, lets get going, we have an objective!" Captain Clay bowed in full understanding and soon turn to his troops with orders of their mission. "Yeeaaahhh!" The Black Clays cheered and pumped up their hands before they slipped on out of the room…to complete their mission objective. "Hmm-hmm-hmmm, using those that are so conspicuous to hid within the smallest of places and in the darkest of night, as mere clay puddlings is intriguing." Ji-Ga-No chuckled wickedly in seeing his master's plan, the Black Clays will do well in this stealth approach part of their objective, all eyes won't know of their presence, which makes it perfect for Grimmore's side. "But what was that trinket you gave them?" The Metallix Dragon asked in not fully understanding the point of making a gift for the Mag'ne if she's return once more. "When the Mag'ne returns to her home, it'll act as a beacon, allowing us to find her." Grimmore slowly stated in what his little 'gift' is for to locate any of those it's with and their location. "And if someone realizes it's power?" Ji-Ga-No asked with a sudden ponder, if someone should learn of what that crystal can do, what then? "Hardly, I crafted it to be so much of a normal crystal, that even the Royal Princesses themselves or even their friend Golden Heart couldn't tell it possesses magic." Grimmore spoke with a sly smile before looking to the portal image of the battle going on while explaining the ideal point of the Halos Crystal and it's purpose. "And when the time is right, it will be used when on the other side." The Overlord King declared with much confidence, the Halos Crystal shall be used on the place Megan comes from and by that time, no one will know of the truth until the timing. "And should Tirek manage to win and kill the Mag'ne, what then?" Ji-Ga-No asked with wonder if his lord's plan to use the Mag'ne fail because Tirek might kill her in the process. "Hmph, less difficulty for me to bother, but we needin' worry." Grimmore remarked off with a not too worried expression as he has all things under control. "All an all, the events ahead cannot be change, no matter who is around." Grimmore spoke with such confidence in knowing all goes according to his plan. "After all, I have eyes all around, and even within Equestria, another plot thickens." The Overlord King decreed forth with a sly smirk coming from his expression as if sounding so sure. Things went quickly silent from there with the eyes of the Overlord King before they faded and in another small part…we almost could sworn we saw eyes from behind a hooded cloak figure. But then all things went blank as if leaving this mystery to solve for another time. As for right now, the main focus is on the threat of Tirek. ---------------- |
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| Toonwriter | Oct 24 2012, 12:03 AM Post #15 |
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The Changelings growl as they turn the tide with some new members. Seto roars out, "Kill them all!.!.!" Suddenly, a blast knocks some of the Changelings aside. Sure enough, there's laser shots coming from the Scoot Falcon 4300. "Look, it's Golden Heart and the army!" Caramel exclaims as Golden Heart and company arrives on the scene. "And the dragons, too!" Bon-Bon exclaims as the Dragon Army arrives. "Take no prisoners...and I mean the Changelings!" Golden Sword orders the troops and dragons as they begin joining in the fight against the Changelings. "Yay! It's Garoozis!" Sweetie exclaims happily as they quickly got onto a dragon's back. "Fly us up there, will yew?" Apple Bloom ask the dragon. He nods and fly the CMC up to the thing before they got up. "Time fer us 'ta take Garoozis into action!" "Yeah!" Twist exclaims happily as the fillies and colt got into the thing. Twilight, Ben, Rainbow and the dragons rush onto the scene. The purple mare smiles a bit as Golden Heart appears. She exclaims, "Golden Heart! You're here! Did you get the Elements?" "Yes, Twilight. I got them right here." Golden Heart said as he held up a familiar box with his magic. "Good. Then hopefully, the Elements can zap Tirek right out of Nyx." Ben said seriously. "We just found out that Tirek has recruited the Changeling Queen into making a new body for him!" Spike explains to Golden Heart frantically. "Chrysalis has escaped to who knows where in Ponyville to finish the spell...and the princesses went off to save a friend of theirs." Megan said to Golden Heart in concern. "We can only hope that they can tire Tirek out so the Elements can be used to take him out of Nyx." "Then we must get to where Chrysalis is fast before Tirek makes his full return!" Golden Heart said determinedly. Twilight comment, "Okay, girls, for some reason I can't resist saying this - Let's get dangerous!" The girls and their friends join in fighting off the Changelings. Hopefully, they can force one of these guys to tell them where Chrysalis is. ----------- Celestia found a hiding place where he put down the beaten figure. She ask her friend, "Are you all right?" "Never better." The figure said, groaning a bit. "Is the forcefield down? Are the machines and Elements in?" "Yes, it is." Celestia said with a sigh of relief. "You did it, though you almost got killed while doing so." "Anything to make up for my own sins." The figure said with a groan. "I feel like I was close to dying there." "Shhhh." Celestia said, comforting the figure. "There, there, it's all right. Did you remember when I use to foal-sat you when you were little?" "Celestia, I remember..." The figure said with a sigh. "I remember how you take care of me...now it's my turn to take care of you. Go out there, your subjects need you." "I don't know...after all, some of them still see me as a coward, a fool and...a worthless princess." Celestia said, looking down in sadness. "Remember our talk the other day? Yeah, you have some bad times but you aren't worthless." The figure points out to Celestia. "As long as you still care for your subjects and willing do whatever it takes to save them...you are no coward." Celestia kept looking down, but after taking the figure's words into consideration, she raised her head up with a determined look on her face as she said, "You're right. I do care for my subjects, and I will save them no matter what they think of me." "Then get going, I will take care of myself. I did before." The figure insists to Celestia. "Hurry, even your granddaughter needs you." Celestia nods as she flew off. The figure is right, another innocent life is at stake here: her own granddaughter who is being possessed by that monster of centuries past. Nyx must be saved. ----------------- Luna dodges an attack by Tirek who fires a huge wave at her. The possessed filly taunts, "Nice day for shooting ponies, ain't it? Heh, here I am making a joke and I don't normally do that!" "Don't be a fool! I must stop you!" Luna snaps as she fires a blast at Tirek who blocks it with his own. "Even if I have to risk hurting my half sister to do so!" "You are a joke, Luna. Centuries ago, from what I remember during my spirit form, you were the terror known as Nightmare Night. Now...you're nothing more than a whiny filly who would be lucky to get out of bed every night." Tirek taunts Luna in amusement. "I may once been Nightmare Moon...but only because of the jealously and hatred in my heart..." Luna remarks with a frown to the villain. "I made some mistakes in my life but letting you stay in Nyx's body won't be one of them!" "BWA HA HA HA! So what are you going to do, Loony?" Tirek taunts Luna sinisterly. "Do a cute little dance? Turn candy into gold?" "I am going to do whatever I can." Luna snaps as she flies right at Tirek, but yelps as the villain made a wardrobe appear from who knows where, slamming the alicorn to a building. "Argh!" "What do you think of that classic, Loony?" Tirek remarks to Luna in amusement. "Never call me Loony! I only let one person call me that." Luna said with a cringe as she fires a blast at Tirek who blocks it with his own then charges through it. "What?!" Luna screams as Tirek headbutts while hitting her with her own attack, sending her crashing to the ground. "And here I thought you were going to be a challenge. Why don't you give up?" Tirek remarks to Luna who got back to her hooves. "I cannot. Everyone...even my sister...depends on me." Luna said while coughing a bit. "Amazing. You are stubborn like some ponies I know." Tirek said in amusement as he prepares for another strike. -------------------------- The Changelings appear to be on the run. Fred and Ed kept on firing their weapons when a familiar unicorn lands near them. The two Changelings yelp, "Gah! Oh no!" "Oh yes. I haven't forgotten how you two idiots brainwash me and impersoned me during the Canterlot Wedding incident!" Twilight snaps sternly to Fred and Ed. "You made me say those horrible things, even though it was a fake Cadance at the time, and when your queen was defeated, one of you nitwits even try to impersonate me to take over the kingdom for your queen!" "You gotta admit, we came close with each try!" Fred protests to Twilight nervously. "Yeah, real close!" Ed agreed, also nervous about Twilight and her anger. "Yeah...well, guess what?" Twilight asked the Changelings as she goes into her rage form. "No one makes a fool in front of me, my friends and my family, getting away with it as well!.!.!" "Run, run, run!" The Changelings screams as they run off from the angry Twilight. "Twilight, Twilight, you scared them off, honey." Ben said to Twilight with a chuckle. "Turn off the fire." Twilight shrugs as she 'turns herself off', going back to normal while saying, "Sorry. What those two did to me, I have never forgotten." "Yeah, so I noticed." Ben Mare said to his love with a chuckle as the two rush in to attack. "HEEHAW!" Applejack exclaims as she uses some rope to tie down some Changelings. "Git along, little changing doggies!" "Rabbitchu, I choose you!" Fluttershy exclaims as she send the yellow rabbit/mouse robot at the Changelings. "Use Thunderbolt...uh, please?" The yellow hybrid robot then unleashed a thunderbolt on some Changelings. "Good boy." Fluttershy said to the yellow hybrid robot, making him smile to her. "Say hello to my Party Cannon!" Pinkie giggles as she uses her Pinkie Cannon to shoot out Nightmare Night stuff at the Changelings. "Happy Nightmare Night!" "Dragon Rage!" Spike roars as he shoots out an energy blast from his mouth, sending a lot of Changelings through the wall. "Whoa! That's more awesome than before!" "Whoa, watch out, Twilight!" Rainbow exclaims in alarm as a huge Changeling is about to attack her...but a familiar blast appears, knocking him aside. "Princess!/Mom!" Twilight and Ben exclaims at once as Celestia joins in on the battle. "Princess, we have them on the run. Where's Luna?" Golden Heart ask the princess in concern. "Fighting off Tirek so I can help our friend escape." Celestia said, giving a nod to Megan who nods right back. "Have you found Chrysalis yet?" "I don't know, we were busy fighting to...wait, hang on." Golden Heart said as his ears pick up something, "Yes, I can hear her!" "Where is she?" Twilight demanded, wanting to know where the Changeling Queen is so she could give her a pounding. "She's right over..." Golden Heart said, heading over to a direction. "...there." "Of course, that's where Nyx was turned into Nightmare Moon." Celestia said, recalling the area where the cult has changed Nyx into Nightmare Moon that time ago. "We must get up there before the spell is done." "Yeah, and fast!" Ben said urgently and angrily, "I will not let a legendary beast from Tartarus harm my daughter!" "Neither will I!" Twilight agreed, feeling the same way as her colt-friend. "Crashfire, can you make us a path?" Rainbow calls over to Crashfire who send out flames at a Changeling. "You got it, Rainbow Dash!" Crashfire replied before he gets on his hind legs and puts his front hooves together as he shouted, "KAMEHAMEHA!!" Then the red unicorn launched a giant beam that sent a bunch of Changelings flying out of the way. "METEOR BLAZE!!" As Crashfire shouted that, he conjured up a big fireball and lets it fly before more Changelings get hit by the attack and knocked aside. "RAINBOW ETHEREAL BLAST!!" Finally, with the use of his horn, the red fighting unicorn launched a rainbow-colored beam that sent yet another bunch of Changelings flying, enough to make a path for Twilight, Ben and the others to use. "Okay, thanks, Crashfire!" Rainbow exclaims as the Mane Six, Ben, Spike, Phobos and Celestia started going down the path their friend made. "Happy Nightmare Night, BTW!" "Same to you, pal!" Crashfire said before he resumed fighting the Changelings that surround him. |
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