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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 14 2008, 06:28 PM (1,049 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Jan 14 2008, 06:28 PM Post #1 |
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This didn't happen too long ago. It was a little memory that Daisy remembers. At the time, there many things going on and were very tough for Daisy. Many terrible things were happening at her castle. It all started when she was socializing in her garden. When she heard a huge crash! Daisy just froze, and thought she was imagening things. But no, there was another crash. Daisy just walked slowly trying to figure out, on what was going on. She noticed that two of her sculptures were broken. But after the scene, things gotten worse. Most of her servants were missing, things were stolen, mystrios notes, whispers coming from places. So that's when Daisy finally decided to call for help. So she called, of course everybody's favorite hero, Mario. So Mario was rushing to Sarasarah land to see what was going on. Once he got there he saw Daisy sitting down on her picnic table. Mario: Hey, Daisy. What's going on? Daisy: Mario! I'm so glad you're here!!! Many things have been going on lately. Right now I'm thinking someone is planning to capture me. And we need someone to watch the castle, so that's why I called you. Is that okay with you? Mario: It's fine I do this all the time! Anyways Peach has not been captured for months, so that wouldn't be a problem. Daisy: Thankyou! Now grab your stuff, I'll show you where you'll be sleeping, and make yourself at home..... for now. Mario: Cool. Daisy was happy enough that Mario came. She hope they could catch the suspect who has been torturing her castle lately. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 15 2008, 04:04 PM Post #2 |
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Nice start, who could that be? Is it Tatanga again? Bowser? I'll be waiting for the next part to see. Nice job, great start. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 15 2008, 06:57 PM Post #3 |
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So it has been a few days later while Daisy and Mario were talking about what happened from the past month. Mario: Well who do you think is trying to capture you? Daisy: Probably Tatanga, of course. Mario: But he only captured you once. Daisy: Well..... Mario: Why don't we think outside the box, like it could be.......King Boo. Daisy:Waluigi. Mario: Maybe it could be Petey Piranah. Daisy: You know Wario may want to capture me. Mario: Or it could be Bowser. Daisy: Hehehe!!!! Mario you have a sense of humor! :lol: Mario: I'm seirous! :unsure: I mean BowserJr. could be spying on us. Daisy: C'mon Mario, Bowser........ having intrest in ME!!!! Yeah that would happen in a dream! Bowser thinks about Peach more than he thinks about me! Infact he thinks about her 24.7 Mario: It could happen. Daisy: Like, in a billion years!!!! Mario: I'm just saying, who knows. Daisy thought for a while, on what Mario said. She was thinking that Mario could be right, but then feeling went away. Daisy: You know.......you could be right. But I'm sure Bower or Bowser Jr. won't even attack at us. Mario: I guess so :o Daisy: Yeah :unsure: After that dicussion, Mario and Daisy were catching up on things, and didn't see anything going wrong. But they knew that this mysterios suspect will attack. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 16 2008, 11:15 AM Post #4 |
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Good job so far, but I wonder who it'll be? don't keep us waiting now =) |
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| Deleted User | Jan 16 2008, 05:53 PM Post #5 |
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As for now, you have matched Daisy's expression ways, the "cool" talking, and the joking stuff. Nice fanfic you're cooking up. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 16 2008, 05:58 PM Post #6 |
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Mario and Daisy went on a walk. Daisy was talking to Mario about what was her secret on how to make the most perfect garden. Daisy: And so that's.............Ahhh! The castle! It's......it's on.......FIRE!!!! Mario: Augh!!! I'll go check to see if anyone's around. Daisy: Okay. Mario was looking around to see what was going on. He didn't find anybody. Though he only saw was a servant lieing down on the ground. The servant was dead. Daisy:AHHHHH!!!!!! Mario:Daisy!!! Daisy: Mario its nothing.......my garden is ruined!!!! Mario: You just worry about your flower problem, I'm gonna check aroung the castle a bit more. Daisy: Right. Mario was still looking around he didn't find anybody else. Daisy: Mariio did.....AHHHH!!!!!! Someone grabbed Daisy. Mario couldn't tell who grabbed her. Daisy just kept on hitting the suspect. Daisy: LET GO OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!! Mario kept on running after Daisy, but the suspect was too fast. Daisy tried to make the suspect put her down. After a while he finally put her down, but Mario was no where to be seen. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 16 2008, 08:45 PM Post #7 |
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Mario was running as fast as he can to catch up to Daisy, but he couldn't see her anymore. The only things he could see was Goombas, Goombas, and more Goombas. Mario: Awww come on! Can't you guys take a break, I have a princess to save. Of course you idiots won't understand, cuase it's like we both speak different languges! Goomba: Your callin' us idiots! Your the idiot! One we speak both languges! Your english, and our english! We'll only let you go, if you pay us more than the kid did, when he was holding a girl with a yellow dress to keep you distracted! Mario: Who was the person? Goomba: Well..... Scene filps to Daisy. Daisy: Who are YOU!!!! What's your problem! Why did you cause trouble in the first place!!! Why'd you capture me! Why aren't you answering ME!!!!! :angry: Suspect: You're not letting me answer YOU!!!!!! Daisy: Tell me WHO YOU ARE!!!!! Suspect: You SHOULD know who I am, but I'll introduce myself! I'm...... Daisy: Just SAY IT!!!! Suspect: Fine I'm Bowser Jr. Happy NOW! <_< :angry: Daisy: You gotta to be kidden me! BowserJr: I'm not kidding. Daisy: Why would YOU even want to capture me! BowserJr : We tried SO hard to capture Peach, so we'd thought you be easier. Anyways we're going to capture Peach next. Mario has NO chance getting to the Mushroom Kingdom on time. Daisy: Ha! I'd bet he'll make it before you! :rolleyes: BowserJr: Look down at the ground ! There was a tile that said trap door on it. A few moments later there was a huge crash!!!! It was Mario. Mario: Your days are over, Bowser Jr!!! Bowser Jr: Mario! How did you get through that big crowd of Goombas? Mario: It cost me a huge allowence :unsure:
:o *sniff,sniff* Anyways I would like Daisy back. Mario was taking a few steps closer. Daisy: Mario, NO!!! But it was to late, Mario fell in the trap door. Mario: I've should have known!!!! BowserJr. grabbed Daisy. Daisy kept on hitting BowserJr as always. At the same time Daisy, had to find a way to Mushroom Kingdom to alarm Peach, on what was going on. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 17 2008, 03:07 PM Post #8 |
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It felt like if Mario fainted for a while, but he woke up. He almost forgot that he was trapped in the trap door. It was dark and quiet. Mario: Uh, where am I? Oh yeah I remeber now <_< *Sigh*. At least I have my emergancy kit with me. * Opens the box and looks through it.* Expired food, half a bottle of warm water......TEDDY!!!! My stuffed animal! It has been so long! Oooh! A flashlight! That barely works, this will have to do. Mario was looking around, but all he saw was a dead plant. He looked at it, and shaked his head. Mario: This is gonna be easy! I just have to climb with no one attacking me. Mario climbs up the wall, then he suddenly feels something grabbing on his foot. Mario turned around, it was that dead plant. Exept it was huge! Mario: Mama Mia!!!! Do I have to go through this :angry: Well, I'm gonna get this overwith. Mario kept on biting, kicking, and punching the plant. But it didn't work. The vines on the plant, kept on pulling, Mario down, away from the exit. Mario was struggling his way through the door. Suddenly the plant just let go. Mario was thinking what to do. He couldn't climb back up or else the plant's vine would just pull him back down. Until he noticed...... Mario: My emergancy kit! * Grabs the box* What happens if I poor water on you. Once the water was in the plant's roots, it gotten worse. The plant just grew bigger. Mario: How about, if I......wave...... the flash......light :blink: As he was shinning the light, at the plant, it grew smaller and smaller. Then it didn't look dead as it was before. Instead it was a beatiful red rose. Mario: Eh, that can keep the flash light. I'm gonna go on climbing...... oh I forgot :rolleyes: *grabs the stuffed animal* I'm not gonna lose you again! Now I'll go on and find Daisy. * Sigh* Maybe this is a dream. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 17 2008, 06:53 PM Post #9 |
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Mmm, the story has a slight touch of humor, i like that...still, i don't like the part of Daisy worrying more about her garden than her castle, i don't think she's that way, remember, she's tomboyish, she should kick in the castle to see what to do. Still, what's done it's done...i just hope it doesn't get worse... The Teddy bear just cracked me up, nice humorous story. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 17 2008, 07:05 PM Post #10 |
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Bowser Jr. was tired and let go of Daisy. Daisy just starred at Bowser Jr. She was looking at him for a few minutes, then frowned. BowserJr: *pant, pant* What are you looking at me for? :blink: Daisy: Listen, before you think of grabbing me, and taking me away, I just wanna talk some sense into ya. Bowser Jr: I don't need any of this little talk, lady! <_< Daisy: Aww c'mon, Bowser Jr. You don't HAVE to listen to your dad I mean, I'm sure you can do great thing for the world, so why don't you do for us, instead of working for the bad. Bowser Jr: I think you're right. :unsure: I shouldn't work for the bad side.......But it's just too bad that I'm not changing my mind about it....... Suddenly a car just stopped, where Bowser Jr. and Daisy were at. The door opened and a beatiful young lady walked out of the door. young woman: I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself, but why would a kid and......I know you, your Princess Daisy! Daisy: The one and only. young woman: Hi, it's a pleasure to meet a nice princess like you, I'm Pauline. Daisy: Hi it's ni..... BowserJr: Okay, well Daisy and I are in a hurry, so..... Pauline: Well, I never knew. :unsure: I was just going to ask if you guy want a ride. And, ummm...... what's your name? Bowser Jr: Bowser Jr. Pauline: Well you look fimiliar, but this guy is evil, and he is way older than you. Bowser Jr: Right. Pauline: You guys can get in the car. Daisy: Wait, can I talk to you for one moment. Pauline: Sure. What is it? Daisy: * whispering* Bowser Jr, he is capturing me and he is evil, and the guy you were talking about earlier ago, that is his father. Pauline: No wonder that is kid's SO selfish! And I'd be happy to help you out. Just get in the car. Pauline saw Bowser Jr. sitting in the front seat looking at himself in the mirror, Pauline turned on the car, and rolled down her window. Then just picked Bowser Jr up and smiled. Pauline: Did I mention, that you are the cutest thing EVER!!!! Bowser Jr: Many people tell me that! Now, put ME DOWN!!!! :angry: Pauline: I'll put ya, down! * Throws Bowser Jr. out of the window, and starts driving.* Bowser Jr: You'll SO regret this! :angry: " Hello, my dear freind!", a voice called out. It was Mario. Bowser Jr: Aww Mario, love to chat but I'm in a hurry. Mario: Where is Daisy! :angry: Bowser Jr: Somewhere, where your not GOING!!! Bowser Jr starts running, and jumps on the roof of the car. Scene flips to Daisy & Pauline. Daisy: Did you here something? Pauline: No I didn't. Daisy: Well, drive as fast as you can, cuz that kid can run faster than the wind! Pauline: Got it. Mario was chasing the car where Bowser Jr. was on. He didn't know of course that Pauline and Daisy were in there, but he kept on running. Mario: Oh, whoever is driving that car, is REALLY gonna get!!! :angry: |
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| Deleted User | Jan 18 2008, 04:02 PM Post #11 |
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Pauline was driving the car, and stopped. Daisy and Pauline got out seeing a huge lake, and spotted that Peach's castle was about 7 miles away. Pauline: Hey look! A motor boat! Daisy: That's awsome......but.....we need a for it to work. <_< Pauline: Oh...... "Hello." A voice called out. "Nice to see, you guys!" Pauline and Daisy turned around. It was Bowser Jr. On top of the car. Bowser Jr: That was some fun ride wasn't it? Daisy: How did YOU........ Augh. :angry: Why....... Pauline: How are you gonna take us away? Bowser Jr: Oh you'll see about that, he..... " Oh we will see abo.......PAULINE!!!! :angry: It was Mario, yet of course who came to rescue Daisy. Mario: Did you drive that car! Pauline: Yeah. Mario: HOW COULD YOU!!!! You broke up with me, and now you're in cahoots with, Bowser Jr!!! WHY!!! :angry: Daisy: Mario, she was helping me! We didn't even know that he came along with us!!!!! Bowser Jr: Ehem! :angry: Mario: Oh, :unsure: Sorry. :mellow: But, I brought Teddy with ME!!!
:D :lol: Daisy: Aww, Teddy is cute! Bears ROCK!!!! :D Pauline: * Gasp* You're still in love with that teddy bear that I got you for Valentine's Day! :angry: You love that thing more than ME!!!! <_< You don't even care about me so why should I worry about YOU!! Bowser Jr: STOP!!!!!!!!!!! I have a job to do, and it's to capture, 2 people :angry: ......... or maybe 3! <_< But I'm not givin, up so............ Mario: This time I'm gonna win, and there is no cheatin, Bowser Jr. Bowser Jr: This will be the fight you'll never forget! Mario and Bowser Jr kept on fighting and fighting. Pauline: Daisy, we should swim in the lake to get away! Daisy: Oh, uh :unsure: about that........ Pauline: Do we have a CHOICE!!! * Grabs Daisy's hand and jumps in the lake.* They started swimming away, Daisy gotten used to the water, and forgot what happened, when her mother drowned one day. That was when Daisy was afraid that she might drown herself, but she kept on swimming. Mario noticed that Daisy and Pauline were swimming away, but he kept on fighting Bowser Jr, so he could him distracted. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 19 2008, 05:54 AM Post #12 |
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Wow, I got so enthusiastic when Daisy and Pauline were speeding away. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 22 2008, 06:01 PM Post #13 |
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Mario and Bowser Jr. were fighting quite a bit. Mario was trying to get him to stop somehow, but everything he tried, it never worked." This kid never gives up, does he?" Mario thought in his head. Mario kicked Bowser Jr. Bowser Jr: Do your worse, Mario!!! You know you'll never defeat, ME!!!!! Mario: Well you never stop do you? Bowser Jr: Of course, cuz I get whatever I want, whenever I want! And since I DO get whatever I want, I want you not to follow ME, while I capture a couple of damsels, like I planned!!! Mario: Well, this time you're not getting what you want! Instead I'll be the one who saves those couple of damsels, that you hidious mind is planning to capture! Bowser Jr: ME!? Not getting MY way!!!! Hahaha!!! Mario, you're just TOO funny! We'll see about that. *Grabs Teddy* Mario: Put Teddy DOWN!!!!! :angry: :mellow: :wacko: :blink: Bowser Jr: Oh, I'm sure you're not going to need this! :lol: *Firmly grabs the stuffed animal, and tears it apart* Oops! Looks like this NEEDS to be fixed!! Mario: Te.......Tedd........TEDDY!!!!! That......bear......was something......something very speacial to.....me!!! It was something...... that made me....... never forget...... about......P......Pau....Pauline!!!! Now....Suddenly there was a loud sound. It was Bowser Jr. on the motor boat that, Pauline and Daisy were trying to escape with. Bowser Jr: I'd love to chat, but I have some "plans" to suceed! Bowser Jr. drives away with his motor boat. Mario just frowns, and grabs his torn up bear, and jumps in the water and starts swimming, as fast as he could to catch up to Bowser Jr. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 25 2008, 01:09 AM Post #14 |
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WOW i loved it! very good but u just have a bit of missing words and stuff. other than its all good! :D |
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| Deleted User | Jan 30 2008, 07:12 PM Post #15 |
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Pauline and Daisy were somewhat resting, and just slowly swimming through the water. They had some for about 4 miles. Pauline: Wow, I haven't seen any signs of Bowser Jr. lately. Do you think they are still fighting? Daisy: Eh, Mario probably defeated BowserJr. a long time ago. Mario is probably getting close to where we are, by now.....Hey look down there!! Daisy swam down, under the water. Pauline just shrugged and went down with her. Daisy was pointing at a statue, that looked like a mermaid. Daisy went up to catch her breath, as Pauline just starred at the statue, for a while. Suddenley Daisy was pulling Pauline up, so they could go on with their, journey. Daisy: Come on Pauline let's go! Pauline: I don't know why, but I thought I saw the mermaid statue blinked at me! Daisy: It's probably your imagination, you're probably need some sleep. But we should be at the Mushroom Kingdom in a few more hours. They swam for a couple of hours, so they had just about 1 more mile left. They rested for a little while again. Daisy: We're SO close to the Mushroom Kingdom, so hang in......AHHHHHHHH!! Suddenly something pulled Daisy down. Pauline: DAISY!! Pauline swims down, and tries to find Daisy. She suddenly sees Daisy, and two hands that were grabbing her. Pauline grabs Daisy, but also noticed that the person who was pulling Daisy down, looked very fimiliar. But she couldn't think of who it was a the time. Suddenly that person sctrached her, and finally let go of Daisy's feet. They swam back up. Daisy: *pant, pant* OMG!! That was WEIRD! Pauline: I don't know, who just decided to pull you down to drown you, but she just scrated me REALLY hard, and now I'm bleeding! Daisy: *stares at her in a weird way* You...know what that..means? :blink: Pauline: What? Daisy: SHARKS!!! Suddenly 3 sharks were swimming towards Pauline and Daisy. Pauline: AHHHH!!!!!!!!!! They were trying to swim as fast as they could, away from the sharks. The sharks were really fast though. It happened for a couple of minutes, until the sharks suddenly swam away(as in a couple of feet away). Pauline and Daisy just turns around, and saw something, something very dreadful, that they didn't wish to see.....it was BowserJr. BowserJr: Hello ladies, aren't you glad I came here in time! Pauline: And I rather get eaten by the sharks! BowserJr: Well, today's your lucky day, you have a choice. To come with me, or you would be eaten by those bloodthirsty sharks!! The sharks came closer to Daisy and Pauline. Daisy: Let's go, Pauline. Pauline: What! Why would we go with BowserJr. ! Daisy: Well we don't wanna get eaten by sharks DO we!? :angry: Pauline: *Sighs* Okay. They got on the motor boat, and Bowser Jr. smiles at them. BowserJr: I'm gald you guys see it my way! BUT just incase you are thinking to throw me over board..... Bowser Jr. ties them up. And then he turned on the motor boat, and they were heading to the Mushroom Kingdom. |
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:o *sniff,sniff* Anyways I would like Daisy back.
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