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| The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,538 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM Post #1 |
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I'm going to start a new story called The Crystal Quad. It's about the four leading ladies in Mario's life: Daisy, Pauline, Peach, and Rosalina. It tells all of their tales (fiction-wise). I'm not using any of the old stories about the characters, so it's a clean slate! The Legend... Years ago, the Crystal Goddess was dying. She transfered all of her power into the Goddess Crystal. She hid the Goddess Crystal in Death Desert. The Crystal was said to have held four powers: Power of Earth, Power of Fire, Power of Wind, and Power of Water. The powers all combined together could destroy the universe if used unwisely. Many explorers have searched for such an item, but none have succeeded. One day, by natural disaster, the Crystal shattered into four pieces that spread throughout the world. If the pieces get into the wrong hands, who knows what it could unleash on the world. Character Pictures Go here to request characters, and to see the characters. |
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| Deleted User | Feb 29 2008, 08:00 PM Post #2 |
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Chapter One: Pauline Pauline Gaffes was an ordinary girl with ordinary problems. She studied hard in college and was so good, she got a job as a scientist! One day Pauline was sent to the animal testing room to get a new job. Pauline saw animals all around her. She was going to test medicines on animals to help find cures for terrible diseases. She thought she was going to help future animals, but this job was the beginning of her emotional trainwreck. An ape was sent in one day with heart worm. Pauline knew what to do. She performed right away and ended up saving him. That's when things went wrong. The ape attacked! The medicine she gave him had an affect on his brain. He grabbed her and took her to the highest building. Inside the building, a carpenter named Mario Brockway felt the commotion. He ran out to see what was happening, and saw a poor girl in peril. He raced up with his hammer and saved the girl. It was "love at first sight." The two had dinner and were growing feelings for each other. But on the second date, Mario didn't show up. Pailine tried to call him but he had moved and disconnected his number. She was so hurt, she went into hding. |
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| Deleted User | Mar 3 2008, 01:12 AM Post #3 |
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WOW! i like it so far!! keep going GG! :lol: |
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| Deleted User | Mar 3 2008, 09:02 PM Post #4 |
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That was good but I don't support MarioXPauline I support DKXPauline |
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| Deleted User | Mar 3 2008, 09:55 PM Post #5 |
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LOL! I actully support the DaisyxDK! :D Yeah and I know some other people made up WaluigixPauline! I know pretty weird!
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| Deleted User | Jun 9 2008, 09:54 AM Post #6 |
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Hey! Sorry it's been a while, but I've been really busy. Here's the next chapter! Chapter 2: Peach Peach was so excited. Tomorrow, she would become ruler of the Mushroom Kingdom! And to top it all off, she was going to go on a wonderful shopping spree for "royal" clothing. Peach got a good night's sleep that night. Except when the nightmares came. It was all kind of fuzzy. All Peach could see was blackness. She fell to the ground and looked up. A giant turtle and a plumber were fighting. It was wierd. That's when she awoke. She hurriedly got dressed and ran out for the crowning ceremony. That's when the trouble occured. At first, it was just the ground shaking, but then it turned out to be the turtle from her dreams! He grabbed her and took her away. Peach was imprisoned for weeks, it seemed. Until that fate-chaning day. The turtle was getting upset and saying that a man named Mario was coming. A plumber burst through the door and the battle began. It was the same plumber from her dream! When the plumber, Mario, had won and rescued her, the two were in "love at first sight." Of course, this wasn't the first time it happened to Mario and it wouldn't be the last. |
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| Deleted User | Jun 10 2008, 07:49 PM Post #7 |
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To awsome |
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| Deleted User | Jun 13 2008, 01:34 PM Post #8 |
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Oh please, please, please, please, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!! I wanna hear Daisy's and Rosalina's story!!!!!
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| Deleted User | Jun 30 2008, 09:43 AM Post #9 |
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I'll continue soon. Don't worry. :D |
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| Deleted User | Jul 3 2008, 01:40 PM Post #10 |
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Okay, the long awaited chapter is finished, along with another special chapter and some special pics I've made for the characters.
Chapter 3: Daisy Daisy. Princess, and soon to be queen, of Sarasaland. She gazed out her window across her soon to be kingdom. She loved it here, but something was missing. Daisy knew she'd be married against her will. But he was a nice guy. Together as king and queen, they'd be perfect. She was a kind girl, with the best intentions for her people. And he was stern, for all of the troublemakers. A rock hit the window, almost giving Daisy a heart attack. "YIPES!" She screamed. Another one hit the window, cracking it. Daisy became very angry. She opened the window and yelled at the person below........and stopped. THOSE EYES. Daisy started spacing out....and fell out the window. Luckily, the man below caught her. Love at first sight. They were inseperable. Daisy threw away her role as queen and ran off with him. Maybe he'd stay with her, maybe not. His name was Mario, the plumber....... Chapter 4: Peaches, Daisies, and Two-Timing Plumbers Peach and Mario were taking a stroll through Defino Plaza. A romantic getaway with moonlight swims and candles. Every girl's dream. Peach and Mario sat down for dinner and watched the sunset. They reached in to kiss, but Mario ran to the beach and bent over. He held up a sea shell, peach colored. Peach giggled. On his way back, a woman stopped him. She was tall, beautiful, and had a sunny-yelllow-colored dress. And she kissed Mario. Peach stood up, stomped over, and smacked the woman. "Why are you kissing him??" The woman's violet eyes stared at her in confusion. "He's my boyfriend!" She yelled. Peach's eyes got wide and she smacked her again. "NO HE'S MY BOYFRIEND! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE???" The woman tackled Peach and pinned her against the ground. "I'm Princess Daisy." The two were in a full-on braw. SMACK PUNCH KICK! The dresses were ripped, the jewelry flying off. Thats when Daisy tackled Peach again, and pinned her down. "Wait, why are we wasting this senseless violence on each other? Mario's the one two-timing!" Daisy said. Peach shrugged and got up, looking for Mario. Daisy got up and pushed Peach down. "I don't see him." Peach tackled Daisy and they were at it again. That's how it went until security came and took them to jail for the night. The two never saw Mario or each other for the next year. But would they really meet again? Pics will come later in the story after a special event. (hint: the backgrounds show what crystal they will get, and all the crystals are totally unrelated to the characters we know of) |
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| Deleted User | Jul 3 2008, 02:57 PM Post #11 |
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Keep going Keep going KEEP GOING |
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| Deleted User | Jul 3 2008, 05:03 PM Post #12 |
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I really like this story. Please continue.
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| Deleted User | Jul 7 2008, 02:26 PM Post #13 |
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OMG!!!!!!!! What happens next I LOVE it!!! |
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| Deleted User | Jul 7 2008, 10:12 PM Post #14 |
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I LOVE YOUR PICTURE WITH DAISY,ROSELINA,PAULINE, AND PEACH ON IT! YOU SHOULD BUT TOADETTE SO IT WOULD LOOK COOLER! :lol: |
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| Deleted User | Jul 8 2008, 01:13 PM Post #15 |
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Hey thanks guys! I'll post the pictures here soon, after I finish the Rosalina chapter....today! When, I post them, I'll also put them up on the first post so you don't have to scroll to find them! Here's a list of the pictures I'll post: Peach Pauline Daisy Rosalina Mario Luigi Crystal Goddess The Crystal Shards The four shards are: Air, Water, Fire, and Earth, right? Well........the main shards anyway. The shards are each made up of 5 pieces. These pieces either find a host, or remain hidden. The ones that are hidden are protected by demons. The pieces are made up of the knowledge of the Crystal Goddess. Just trying to clear that up a bit. Stay tuned! |
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