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The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline?
Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,540 Views)
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Chapter 15: Fly into the Stars

The first thing that happened was Daisy's phone vibrating. Her eyes opened in shock and flew down to her pocket. It was a text message from an unknown number.

The secret lies within the sky, too dark for one to see, so you must see with your heart.....very celestical

Daisy wiped her eye and looked around at open books across the floor.Pauline wasn't very happy, and her hair was in knots. "Mmmm!" She protested when Daisy shook her awake. "Wake up you big baby!" Daisy whispered to her. Pauline sat up and swallowed, looking at the clock. The red numbers couldn't be right.

"...Noon?" Pauline asked groggily. She ran her fingers through her hair. Daisy picked up a small pile of papers and pelted it across Peach's face. "Up!" She squelched. Peach jumped up and tried hitting the paper away. Soon, everyone was up.

"We stayed up too late." Daisy explained to the annoyed and tired people. "And so we slept in." Peach rolled her eyes and pushed against Rosalina's shoulder to help herself up. Rosalina stretched.

"Anyways, I got a weird message that said we should look in the stars for the secret. And that it's celestical." Daisy continued. Nintenda glared at her. "Well, that's helpful." Nintenda said sarcastically.

Daisy yawned. "Well, we'll continue research and look at the stars tonight." Peach looked at Luigi. "Sounds romantic..." She said, too low for anyone but Luigi to hear. Nintenda gazed up at Mario, who was looking out the window. He pulled his hat over his face.

"Well I'm going back to sleep then." Mario grumbled. Rosalina smiled a little, then closed her eyes and leaned back. Peach curled into Luigi's arms, and Nintenda did the same with Mario. Pauline looked over anxiously at Daisy, who shrugged back at her.

Daisy had found something in a book while the others were sleeping. She woke them up quickly. "Apparently there's a crystal that has the power to draw attention to the wearer from the oppostie gender. The crystal gives the person great beauty and power to destroy worlds. It is said to be in the sky!"

"What does getting attention have to do with it?" Peach asked. Daisy looked at the book again and back up. "Apparently the celestial beauty is so powerful it can cast a spell over men and control their minds." This was a problem.

Later that night, the group spent the entire night searching the sky without any sign of anything, no crystals. They tried the next night as well, without any progress. It was Monday again, and Nintenda went to the store to get some chips.

She saw the last bag of what she wanted, and reached for it. But there was another hand there. Nintenda looked up at the girl. They looked about the same age. The girl had long brwn hair and wore purple.

Nintenda frowned and the girl handed her the chips. "Sorry....who knew these were so popular?" Nintenda gladly took the bag and looked at the girl again. She was really beautiful. "No prob....hey do you go to college nearby?"

The girl laughed. "I'm actually a freshman in high school." Funny. The girl looked older than that. "I'm Nintenda." She reached out her hand. The girl took it and smiled brightly. "I'm Celestica. Nice name." Nintenda flinched. Why was her name familiar?

"Hey, my friends and I are hanging out and we wanted these chips. You can share them with us if you want." Nintenda didn't know what it was, but something about Celestica was drawing her in. Celestica smiled with perfect teeth. "Sure."

Peach heard the door open behind her. "Nintenda you better have gotten those chips." Peach said coolly. She turned around and saw not just Nintenda, but an angel-faced girl about their age. "Who's this?"

The girl stepped forward gracefully and took Peach's hand. "I'm Celestica. I'm a little young to be with you guys, but being 15 doesn't harm our friendship, right?" Peach felt like someone had slapped her. This beautiful girl was younger than her? By four years no doubt.

"I'm Peach." Peach was careful to not stare at Celestica. Rosalina was standing at the door in that moment. "I'm Rosie. Nice to meet you Celestica. This is Pauline." She gestured to the woman behind her. Celestica seemed completely overjoyed to meet these people.

There was definately an akward silence. Mario burst through the door with Daisy just then. "Hey, every......" Mario stopped when he saw the girl before him. He couldn't take his eyes off of her. It was like she was glowing. All the girls noticed, especially Nintenda. "I'm Celestica." She smiled at Daisy.

Daisy didn't smile back and you could almost hear the click in her head. Celestica? "You guys. We don't need the stars. We need the girl." Daisy pointed a finger at Celestica. Everyone stared at her in horror, but Celestica's smile didn't leave.

At that moment, Mario stood straight as a board and pulled a knife out of his pocket. He aimed it at Daisy. Mario and Celestica's voices blended as they spoke together robotically. "Give up. The crystals belong to us." Her smiled never faded.
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Oh my god...... Keep writing!
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WOWWWW :D did not see that coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Whoa Cool
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Oh man... the last chapter came so long ago that I've forgotten the story. Now I have to re-read it (that'll be pleasant) but why aren't you writing anymore GG?

Peach Fan ;)
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I wanted some chips XD
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What chips? You didn't need to bump this, because I think GG is gone, and so is this story. Sadly... boo hoo.

Peach Fan ;)
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Peach Fan
Apr 27 2009, 02:51 AM
What chips? You didn't need to bump this, because I think GG is gone, and so is this story. Sadly... boo hoo.

Peach Fan ;)

Um...Nintenda in the story ya thats me!
I'm Nintenda
Me and GG use 2 talk all the time!
I havent been on in a while
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Ya I know, but GG is obviously not writing, so this topic needn't have been bumped...

Peach Fan ;)
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Don't worry, I think she'll come back this summer....
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If you are disappointed about the story not being written, HAVE NO FEAR. I will return once my computer is fixed.

The computer I am currently using cannot load this site very well and frequently crashes when I am on.

It will be only a few days to a week.

**GG**
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I can't wait!
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I can't wait GG!!
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Chapter 16: Faded Memory of a Disaster

It went so fast, it was all just a blur now. Nintenda's vision grew weaker until everything around her was hazy and distorted. There were vague flashing lights and loud noises that gave her a headache. She tried looking around for her friends. Nintenda was having trouble breathing, and felt like something was crushing her.

She felt around the ground for something to help her. The ground was wet and cold and hard. She reached around and felt someone near her. Nintenda tried to focus on the person.

At first she didn't believe it, but a closer look confirmed her fears. It was true: This still, cold body's brown hair and blue eyes matched Daisy's features. Nintenda pulled herself over to her friend and felt a sharp pain in her leg. Daisy had no heartbeat.

Nintenda then started to cry, huge, ghastly weeps. Shivering and shaking, she reached down to the pain in her leg and felt warm liquid. She looked down to find that her leg was cut open.

Nintenda's vision then became very sharp suddenly, and she no longer felt any pain. Nintenda got to her feet and gasped as she looked around her. All of her friends, laying on the concrete. Her hope faded as she looked closer at their lifeless bodies.

Tears streamed down her face and she tried to look away. She heard faint laughter behind her and turned to see. Celestica stood behind her, a humored look on her face. "Beautiful, isn't it?" Celestica asked and she made a gesture towards the quiet bodies on the ground before her.

Nintenda closed her eyes and fell to her knees. Celestica folded her arms and walked slowly forward. "You know the only way to get someone's crystal is to murder them, right?" Nintenda looked up, shocked. Celestica was humored by her lack of knowledge. She admired the sparkling bracelet on her wrist.

"That's right, Nintenda. I murdered your friends. And I took all of their crystals." She shook her shining bracelet at Nintenda. "I'm going to have all the power in the world. I only have one crystal left to collect you know. The Death Crystal, held by a demon under the sea. Or at least, that's what the books say."

"The only bad news is, you won't get to remember this lovely monologue. I can't have you trying to ruin my plans, so I'm going to use the Memory Crystal to erase it all. Up to a point at least. Say goodbye to your memories Nintenda."

Celestica smiled gently and bent down next to Nintenda. Nintenda was shaking and whimpering. "Hush hush now, sweetie." Celestica whispered as she kissed Nintenda's forehead. Everything went black.

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They all died? That's just too sad! But the adventure is just beginning! So Celestica was the ad guy all along.... Who knew? Other then GG.
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