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The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline?
Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,539 Views)
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The story will probably end at chapter 20, but that really depends on how things go lol. The next chapters will all be full of twists
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CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT! CAN'T WAIT!

SO EXCITED!!!!!!

Peach fan ;)
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I just read this story for the first time.!
Wow its good ^___________^
and im happy peach is a active character. yay cant wait for nexty chapty.
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Oh hurry hurry hurry!!!

Peach Fan ;)
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I'm getting there lol
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I can't wait to see me and Bre's characters!
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Yay yay yay! Can't wait!

*Clasps hands together expectantly*

Peach Fan ;)
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Chapter 17: Help I'm Alive

It had been three weeks since Nintenda's accident. She was still in the hospital, healing from her concussion, which had given her amnesia. She had been having flashes every hour or so from her old life, and her friends. Nintenda only had one keepsake that survived the fire, which was a picture of them.

Nintenda touched the faces on the scorched photo, willing herself to remember what had happened that night, and who these people were. A nurse walked in just then, telling Nintenda that she had a visitor. She set the photo down, wondering who would be visiting. She had no family and Nintenda couldn't remember any of them anyway.

A woman about her age walked in, dressed in a deep blue. Her long black hair flowed gracefully and she walked so quietly you couldn't hear footsteps. Nintenda felt like the woman's eyes were so deep that they looked into her soul. It was uncomfortable to look at them.

"Nintenda?" Her lovely voice asked. Her voice was like a million angels singing a perfect harmony with just that one word. Nintenda bobbed her head once. "They say that's my name." Her voice sounded hoarse and monotone and ugly compared to this goddess in front of her.

Just then, Nintenda got a flash of memory just then of reading about a Crystal Goddess with her late friends, and the description matched perfectly. The woman smiled gently.

"I cannot tell you my name, but I can tell you that you're in danger. Somehow you survived the accident, and the girl wasn't able to take your crystal, though she does not know yet."

None of those words meant anything to Nintenda. She crinkled her nose trying to understand. "I guess I can help a little. Or try to. This girl's name was Celestica." She told Nintenda. That struck a chord. Every muscle and bone in Nintenda's body went numb as it came back to her.

Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, and Mario's faces all flew by. The party. The strange girl they brought home. Her smile that never left. Mario, bewtiched and attacking them. Celestica stealing the crystals, all but Nintenda's, and then wiping her memory.

A tear escaped Nintenda's eye and flowed down her cheek as she remembered Mario's face again. The Crystal Goddess smiled and handed her a piece of paper. Nintenda glanced down at the address written on this parchment.

"But wait how are you alive??" Nintenda asked urgently as she looked back up. But the Crystal Goddess was no where to be seen, and all that was left was a tiny piece of paper.
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Oh my gosh! But I thought she was- OMG.
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They all died! *blows nose on tissue noisily* I'm gonna get back a Celestia!

Peach Fan ;)
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New chapter coming this weekend

(I made some tweeks to the characters to fit the storyline, my apologies.)
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Can't wait!
*is very very very very VERY excited*
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Power Star!
I wonder why some characters haven't shown up yet,



http://z15.invisionfree.com/peachTECH/inde...wtopic=1290&hl=


Like Brenda (character I asked for) and Lara.


R they bad guys? Sweet. I'm a bad guy then! I call being the other main one!!!!!!!!
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Brecheez
Sep 19 2009, 04:09 PM
I wonder why some characters haven't shown up yet,



http://z15.invisionfree.com/peachTECH/inde...wtopic=1290&hl=


Like Brenda (character I asked for) and Lara.


R they bad guys? Sweet. I'm a bad guy then! I call being the other main one!!!!!!!!

I have many cameos to fit in the main story somehow, and it's a little difficult. I have 4 new characters to get into the four final chapters.

Wish me luck ;)
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*Jumps up and down out of sheer excitement*
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