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The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline?
Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,548 Views)
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Chapter 5: Rosalina

Princess Rosalina was a beautiful girl.She was princess of Dream Island. She was blonde and nice and everyone loved her. She loved the attention. Rosalina got special attention from a fan-boy. He would follow her and send her notes saying he only had eyes for her. Rosalina was happy, too. Until one day, when a space monster killed her parents. Rosalina almost didn't make it out alive. She traveled space, seeking revenge on the monster, whose name was Echo. One strange day, Rosalina heard a strange noise, and saw a man with a mustache. She reacted insanely thinking he was there to hurt her. But, he was on his own quest, and needed to rest. Rosalina grew fond of him. His name, well, you know his name. They grew in love and lived together for a year. That's when he took her back to their planet. Mario and Rosalina were shopping, when three psycopathic women jumped out of no where and attacked Rosalina. They dragged her away and Mario didn't seem to object.

Chapter 6: Ninjas of Broken Hearts

"Help!!!!!" Rosalina shouted. "HUSH! We're helping you." The blonde one said. Rosalina became quiet. The three sat her up in a chair and tied her up. "If you want to help me, then why are you tying me up to a chair?" Rosalina asked. The women removed their masks. The blonde spoke. "I'm Princess Peach of the Mushroom Kingdom, and Mario's my boyfriend." Rosalina's eyes were wide. The one with black hair spoke next. "I'm Pauline, who has become princess of the Atlantis Water Temple, and Mario's my boyfriend." Rosalina freaked out. The brunette was last to talk. "I'm Princess Daisy of Sarasaland, and Mario's my boyfriend." Rosalina laughed. "So all you have to do is marry that bigamist Mario to be in this club?" The princesses didn't laugh. "Who are you?" Peach asked with an angry face. "I'm Princess Rosalina of Dream Island, and Mario's my boyfriend." Rosalina mocked. Daisy walked up to her, and everything went black.

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Good one the 6th chapter is soooooooooooooooo funny
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!
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YAY! I'm glad you guys liked it! I'll post more pics soon along with two new chapters. I'm also going to make the chapters longer. ;)
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I'm glad! I'll post them tonight or tomorrow. :) You have a lot to look forward to.
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yay! I love it!
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btw, where did u get those sprites? they r SO cute!
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I got them at pixelbee.com, it's a doll making site and they have THOUSANDS of doll makers!
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Sorry it took a little longer than expected!

Chapter 7: Rosalina's a Weird Name

When Rosalina woke up, she was tied to a chair in a dark room.
"What do you want with me!?" She screamed.
Someone came on speaker.

"We want you to know that Mario's been playing you! When Daisy and Peach first saw each other, they were dating Mario at the same time! And Mario abandoned me for years! We want you to know what you're getting into!" It was Pauline.

"Well I'm happy with Mario and I'm going home!" Rosalina shouted.

Daisy opened the door, "I thought you might say that." Daisy walked up to Rosalina and smacked her. OW! Rosalina thought. Daisy spoke again, "Now will you cooperate with us?" Rosalina went through a long time of smacking before she agreed.

"Fine! Do I get a cool costume like you guys?" Rosalina asked. All of the girls walked in and smiled. "Yeah, and a cool nickname!" Peach beamed.

"Yeah, Rosalina's a weird name. Let's just call you Rue." Daisy smiled. "Well, I'm Rue, and who are you guys?" Rosalina asked smilingly. "Peach is Penny, Daisy is Darla, and I'm Puke-face. But, you can call me Paula."

Pauline said as the other girls snickered. Rosalina cracked up. "PUKE FACE?!" Pauline looked down, "I didn't have a choice in my name." Then she glared at Daisy.

Daisy laughed. "I call them as I see them!" Everyone laughed. Maybe this isn't so bad after all... Rosalina though to herself. But, she didn't know what happened next. Something green and shiny hit her in the face, and everything went black.

The pictures and the next chapter will be posted later today!
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yay!!!!
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This chapter is soooo weird but I like it I LOVE IT.
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I really suck at deadlines!

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Hey, before I post the next chapter, I was wondering if you guys prefer the script format.

Just tell me whether or not you'd like me to start writing like that.
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OK, since no one will ANSWER, I'll write the chapter tonight. ;)
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Yay! I don't care what form you use! It's a great story!
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Thanks. I'll post the chapter in about 2 hours, possibly. If anyone would like a cameo please tell me. Or any recomendations to further chapters? Anything will be accepted. :D
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