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The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline?
Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,546 Views)
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wow!! cool!!!
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Penny, Rue, Paula and Darla those are crazy nicknames
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Chapter Test:


This is a test.

I'll write the next two parts(with 3 pics) tonight if 7 people reply today.

I'll write one part (with the 3 pics) tonight if 4 people reply to this today.

If less than 4 people reply all you'll get is 3 more pictures.


HOWEVER: All posters must be different!

Good Luck! I'll be back on at 7 pm to check how it went.
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please! continue!
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hah okay I'll post 3 pics and then I'll write the next part tomorrow. The test will continue today.

Pics will come later!
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OMG!!! I CAN'T wait!!!!!
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I'll go ahead and post all of the previous pics as well. :)

Posted Image Pauline

Posted Image Peach

Posted Image Daisy

Posted Image Rosalina

Posted Image Mario

Posted Image Paula

Posted Image Penny

Posted Image Darla

Posted Image Rue


Thank You Everybody!! ;)
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I'll be your Princess if you be my Toad <3
awsome!
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Daisy is the prettiset, Rosalina is the second prettiest, then it's Pauline, and the it's Peach...
The other ones Penny is first, Darla is second, Rue is third, and Paula is forth!!! Good job!!
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It's FINALLY COME! dun Dun DUN! The next two parts are here! These will be especially long. :)

Chapter 10: The Full Moon

Part 2: The Story

Darla watched her three friends fighting.These were the fates arranged. Darla would eventually grow weak in the fight and die. Rue, being utterly useless, would be killed by Penny. Then the final battle would begin. Paula for the good, or Penny for the evil. However, Paula had no power against Penny. Darla wasn't afraid to die, for she knew this was her destiny. To die, leaving the world to be engulfed in flames......

Daisy jumped up in her sleep. "Where am I?" Daisy looked around but saw nothing but rocks and broken walls. She saw a figure in the distance. "PAULINE!" She screamed as she ran towards the body. Daisy picked her up and carried her away from the rocks. "I'll find help for us, Paula." Daisy stopped in her tracks. What did I just call her?

Not too far away, Peach and Rosalina were in the hospital.An old woman came in and a nurse said, "You two have a visitor." Peach and Rosalina sat up. "I know who you are." The old woman managed. Peach got a confused look. "What do you mean?" The lady set a big dusty bood on the bed. "It'll explain everything." Then she left.

How strange. Peach thought. She opened the book, but the pages were blank. "What crap is this?" Peach shouted as she showed the emptiness to Rosalina. Rosalina grabbed the book and stared at it. "Words are appearing!"

The pair read the words appearing on the page......

Daisy ran and ran with Pauline in her arms. "What can I do if I don't know where I am?" Daisy cried. She looked everywhere, but she didn't know how to get help. A few feet away, a dark figure took his aim, and pulled the trigger.

Peach heard a gunshot. She gasped and looked outside. Peach saw ruins, and a dark figure with a gun. Two girls were running away. "The story is becoming reality Rosie!" Peach grabbed the book and kept reading.

The figure had missed, but he was not far behind, and pretty soon, he'd have his chance. Daisy ran and ran all she could, but she was slowing down. Daisy had always been a great runner, but it felt as if something was pulling her back. Daisy tripped and screamed as the dark figure approached her and stood over her. He aimed his gun at her face.

Rosalina heard a scream and rushed to the window. "Daisy! No!" Peach jumped out of the three-story window and was followed by Rosalina.
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MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you everyone! Here's the final part of chapter ten! very exciting.

Chapter 10: The Full Moon

Part 3: The Powers

"Daisy! No!" Peach jumped out of the three-story window and was followed by Rosalina. They fell and fell, and it seemed like they didn't have a chance.The ground was getting closer and the dark figure looked up at the two girls. Peach saw his eyes.I know those eyes. Is that.....Mario?! They hit the ground.

Daisy looked over at them. Peach was unconscious and bleeding through her mouth. Rosalina was wailing around, and both of her legs were broken. Rosie also had a huge slice on her arm.

Daisy looked up and saw the lone figure of Pauline, asleep and arms broken. Pauline wasn't breathing now. Daisy felt the sting of her tears on her eyes. Daisy turned around and faced the figure, despite her fractured ankle.

"What do you want from me?" Daisy cried. The figure laughed and Rosalina gasped. "This is exactly what I want. You alone." He smirked. Daisy recognized the voice. Rosalina started crying right before all went black. "Why me?" Daisy wept as she fell to the ground.

"You don't remember me Daisy?" He asked. Daisy looked up at the man who broke her heart. "Mario why?" She screeched at him. Mario snickered. "You mean, you don't remember me Darla?" Daisy quivered at the name. Her eyes flashed from purple to aqua.

"No........no.....I'm Daisy....I'm...."Daisy was having trouble keeping hold on herself. "All that power you have, being able to let your friends take care of the world, sacrificing yourself for the world. All that power...."Mario said. Daisy looked at him, "No, you're wrong! I'm Daisy! And I won't end my life for such a silly thing!"

"The world's being is meaningless to you? Then maybe you'll join me Daisy. Join the dark side, and you will have power and everlasting life! Join us." Mario seemed desperate. He wanted Daisy more that natural people would. Something was wrong. Daisy saw his eyes flickering from blue to black.

"Mario, forgive me." Daisy said. That was the real Mario for a minute there. Maybe I can help him. Daisy took a breath and pushed her hands outward. Ice shot from her fingertips towards Mario. Mario gasped as they cut his arms and face. At the moment he ran away, his eyes were blue.

Daisy turned towards her hurt friends. Daisy looked at her hands. What if.... Daisy walked to Peach's side and set her hands on her face. Water spilled out her fingers and over Peach and Rosie's body. They glowed and sat up.

"Daisy!" Peach and Rosalina said together. They all hugged and Daisy smiled to herself. She could control water and heal people. Peach looked at Daisy's eyes. Her eyes were aqua, but nothing bad was happening. "I've learned to control myself and my powers." Daisy stated proudly.

The girls looked over to Pauline. She still wasn't breathing. Rosalina walked over to Pauline and hugged her. All the girls were crying now. Daisy crawled her way over and dripped water onto Pauline's body. Pauline glowed and floated into the air.

Pauline was still floating when she opened her yellowing eyes. Pauline smiled and joined her friends in a group hug. All the girls' eyes were closed and watering, except Peach's. Peach's smile was disturbing and lifeless, and her eyes glowed red. Penny has made her way back.
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I can't wait to see more
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I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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I'm glad everyone liked the chapter! I'll start the eleventh one sometime tomorrow. I have a barbecue today and it's going to be super busy! ;)

There are some of you you haven't sent in your cameo profiles to me yet! And I can't put them up without them!

You know who you are if you've sent in a request already. PM me with profiles!


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(altered the name a little bit. :P)
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