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| The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,544 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Aug 28 2008, 09:03 PM Post #76 |
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I can't wait!! :D |
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| Deleted User | Aug 28 2008, 10:15 PM Post #77 |
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Hey I'll post them today. I feel so bad when I miss a deadline! Chapter 11: The Reunion Part 2: The Jewels Penny laughed. "You think you can defeat me? Even with your numbers, I'm unstoppable!" Rue laughed along. Mario slapped his knee with enjoyment. Darla raised one eyebrow. "What a bunch of nerds." Said Nintenda. Pauline was the first to strike. She sent light arrows at the three. The laughing group didn't notice, and Rue was knocked to the ground. So was Mario. With Penny caught off guard, Daisy shot next. Daisy shot icicles out of her fingertips. Penny dodged them. With Rue and Mario out of the way, Penny might be an easy defeat. Nintenda waved her song wand and sent a beam at Penny. Daisy shot icicles and Pauline shot arrows. The attack was almost impossible to dodge. Penny was hit by the beam and fell helplessly to the ground. Nintenda smiled proudly to herself. Daisy looked at her. "Feeling good about yourself?" Nintenda nodded. Daisy and Pauline laughed. "Look new girl, just because you defeated our enemy doesn't mean you're on the squad." Pauline giggled. Nintenda shot a beam at her, and the two battled it out. "Stop! We need to get these trouble-makers out of here and somewhere safe." Daisy interrupted. They dragged them away to a hospital, where the doctors sealed them away. "We need to find a way to stop them from using their powers in a bad way." Nintenda suggested, looking through books. "I think I know where to find it." Pauline said, rushing out the room. "Pauline where are you going?" Daisy shouted. "I'm going to Rue and Penny's old room." Pauline ran into door. No one had been there since the incident. There it was on the bed. The book. The girls tried to find a way to cure their friends, but they didn't know. All they could do was look in books. Little did they know, that they needed three jewels to do the trick. These jewels were not too far away. They were actually inside the hospital, in the chemical room. Nintenda laughed. "That's where they've been?" Pauline and Daisy rushed out of the room, transforming into their power costumes. Pauline busted the chemical room door open. Daisy rushed in and froze the people who got in her way. They were serious. Nintenda searched too. It must've been an hour before Nintenda spoke up. "I found them!" Nintenda grabbed the jewels and handed them to her new friends. Each girl had one. They ran to the place where their friends were being held. Pauline came in and threw her jewel at Penny. Penny became Peach again, and Pauline cried tears of joy. "Thank goodness. Guys they work!" Daisy jumped in and threw hers at Rue. Peach and Rosalina woke up and hugged their friends. "Come on Nintenda!" Daisy cried. Nintenda walked in and tossed her jewel at Mario. Mario stood up and looked her in the eye. Tears were coming. Mario and Nintenda joined in a kiss, shocking the rest of the girls. And angrying Peach. Chapter 11: The Reunion Part 3: The Cliff Peach jumped up and shoved Nintenda. "What's wrong with you? Mario is mine and always will be mine!" Peach pushed Nintenda to the ground and threw flames at her. Nintenda tackled her and started scratching her with her wand. "Damn!" Pauline said, pulling Peach off of Nintenda. Daisy and Pauline dragged her away. "We'll try calling you later!" Daisy shouted at Nintenda. Nintenda turned around to kiss Mario, but he declined. Apparently, Mario had some unfinished business with Peach. Nintenda always knew Mario had dated those girls, but she didn't know he never broke up with them. Nintenda sat on the dock letting her feet trail through the water. She looked up and saw Mario walking towards her. "What do you want?" Nintenda asked, tears in her voice. Mario walked pver and sat down next to her. "Nintenda, Peach is a little unstable about me dating you. She still has feelings for me, and I don't want to hurt her. Nintenda stood up. "What about my feelings!? You can care for her, but not for me!?" Mario looked down. "You're being stupid." Nintenda started crying. "Do you know how serious this is for me? I love you Mario, and you repay me by not caring for my feelings!" Mario stood up. "Maybe Peach loves me too! Maybe I love her! You've got to get used to these kinds of things!" Mario stormed off. Nintenda fell to the ground crying. Mario's mine.....he'll always be mine.......then why did he leave me? Peach was laying in her bed waiting for Mario. He walked in and Peach was overjoyed. Then she calmed down, trying to face reality. "You want to dump me, huh?" Mario put his arm around her. "Peach, I don't know. I think I have feelings for you, but then I remember how Nintenda loves me. And how I love her." Peach looked up at him. "You didn't tell her the same thing did you?" Peach asked. Mario looked down. "Peach I'm very confused. I told her the same thing because I need a break to think about who I want." Peach nodded. Daisy and Pauline brought Nintenda to Peach's castle. "Listen Peach, Nintenda is sorry, but happy for you and Mario." Pauline said to her. Peach looked at Nintenda and hugged her. She whispered in her ear. "Mario told me he needs a break from both of us to see who he really wants. When I looked in his eyes, I saw your reflection." Nintenda had tears in her eyes when she looked at Peach. "I think we're going to be great friends. The girls all got in the car and drove to the cliff outside the town. It's a great place to be with friends, especially when there's a full moon. The cliff overlooked the ocean. They four girls heard footsteps and looked behind them, seeing Mario. Nintenda and Peach stood up, both hoping he'd pick her. Mario looked at both of them, then looked down at Daisy and Pauline. Mario took Daisy's hand and pulled her up. The two walked away. Peach thought he had chose Daisy. So did Nintenda. But when Daisy walked back, she handed Nintenda a ring, a wedding ring. Peach sat down next to Pauline and looked at the ocean. Nintenda ran to Mario and kissed him. Peach now knew that she had lost Mario, possibly forever. On the Next Chapter of the Crystal Quad: A new princess envies the love of Mario and Nintenda. Peach gets a special visit from a special someone! Daisy learns more about the Crystals they possess. Crystal Goddess Luigi Pinky
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| Deleted User | Aug 30 2008, 01:53 PM Post #78 |
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OMG! I want to BRAKE UP with Mario...Peach can have him! |
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| Deleted User | Aug 30 2008, 02:32 PM Post #79 |
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^LOL.We'll see what happens. Hah. If you read the previews then you can make a pretty good prediction!
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| Deleted User | Sep 1 2008, 04:34 PM Post #80 |
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This is going to be good |
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| Deleted User | Sep 2 2008, 07:06 PM Post #81 |
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^I'll start writing again this Friday or sooner if I get enough publicity lolz. |
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| Deleted User | Sep 2 2008, 07:43 PM Post #82 |
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That is exactly what I imagined her to be! She is sooooo cute!!!!! ^ ^ |
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| Deleted User | Sep 2 2008, 07:46 PM Post #83 |
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I can't wait to see what happens with me and Mario! |
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| Deleted User | Sep 13 2008, 04:44 PM Post #84 |
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^ YEAH! That's the reaction I was waiting for! I'll write my chapter tonight, if possible. |
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| Deleted User | Sep 14 2008, 12:39 PM Post #85 |
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^Thanks! I'll go ahead right now! Chapter 12: Mr. L Has Arrived Peach awoke to the sunlight right in her eyes. "Ugh!" Peach threw the covers over her head. Peach remembered the night before, how Nintenda had stolen Mario from her. She lost Mario, to that red-haired bimbo. Peach got up and threw on her dress. She started chanting "I hate that bimbo I hate that bimbo...." Daisy opened the door. "Hey bimbo!" Peach looked over at Daisy with an angry look on her face. "What? You're the one chanting about Nintenda!" Daisy explained. Peach rolled her eyes. "You don't get it Daisy. I loved Mario, and he loved me. I don't know what went wrong." Daisy looked at her feet. Riiiing Riiiing! Daisy picked up her phone. "Hello?.......Oh hi.......I'm with Peach.......okay!..... Who?..... Be right there!........ See ya!" Peach glanced over. "Pauline wants us to meet her and Rosie at the mall. Apparently there's some big celebrity." Daisy and Peach arrived at the parking lot, only to see it was filled with screaming girls. "Must be some guy..." Peach said over the voices of the fans. "Are you kidding? Mr. L is the hottest guy in the Kingdom! He's been in like 25 movies!" A young teen said. Peach grabbed Daisy's hand and they made their way to the front. There was Rosalina and Pauline right next to the stage. They were both screaming with joy when they saw Peach and Daisy. Out of no where, a fan yelled, "He's coming out!" That's when the crowd started roaring. Out of the curtain walked Mr. L, all decked out in green. Peach gasped. It was Luigi. Mario's brother. Peach did a face-palm. Daisy pulled her over and mouthed: What's Wrong?. Peach mouthed: That's Mario's Brother!. Daisy did a face-palm. Then she started mouthing to Pauline and Rosie. They both face-palmed. Rosie mouthed: What should we do?. Luigi was waving to his fans and then looked down at the four ladies in the front row. That's when he stopped smiling. That's when he did a face-palm. That's when he mouthed the word: Crap. |
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| Deleted User | Sep 15 2008, 03:33 PM Post #86 |
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red-haired bimbo! RED-HAIRED BIMBO! THAT BLONDE BI*TH! I sooo want Luigi! Peach better watch her back at night! |
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| Deleted User | Sep 15 2008, 06:41 PM Post #87 |
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^^^HAHA! That's the best thing I've heard alllll day. I'll write more tomorrowz. :D |
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| Deleted User | Sep 16 2008, 02:39 PM Post #88 |
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Ha ha how cool is that that (nice story GG) |
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| Deleted User | Sep 16 2008, 05:45 PM Post #89 |
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Thanks! Tonight at around, um.......7ish? Yeah it depends on geometry hw. **GG** |
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| Deleted User | Sep 20 2008, 11:48 AM Post #90 |
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Tonight I will post two chapters! I will get some time hopefully, because I'll be at my friend's house. But who knows? |
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