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| The Crystal Quad; Peach, Daisy, Rosalina, Pauline? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 27 2008, 07:44 PM (5,541 Views) | |
| GoombaHead | Nov 19 2008, 09:26 PM Post #121 |
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Power Star!
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Yay!! I've been waiting for your return for a few weeks!!! -; |
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| Deleted User | Nov 19 2008, 09:46 PM Post #122 |
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Good to be back! |
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| GoombaHead | Nov 19 2008, 09:48 PM Post #123 |
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Power Star!
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I'm hoping the next chapter is posted today. |
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| Deleted User | Nov 19 2008, 10:43 PM Post #124 |
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Chapter 14: The Crystals and the Punk Holding Luigi's hand was like a relief for Peach. She finally had someone to love, who unconditionally loved her back. Buzzzzz Buzzzzzz She let go of Luigi's hand and reached for her cell phone. Text Message from Daisy: Hey u! Rosie and I r goin 2 the library 2 find out more about the Goddess and the Crystals! Don't catch up, have fun making out! xP Peach rolled her eyes but was grateful for the privacy. She smiled and turned her phone off, leaning into Luigi's chest. "Daisy over here!" Rosalina called over the bookshelves. Daisy flew over to Rosie. "What is it?" Rosalina picked up a book that had the words Crystal Goddess scratched out and the words Employees Only was written underneath. The manager ripped it from Rosalina's hands. "You can't check out that book ma'am." He was just about to put it back when Daisy grabbed his wrist. She glanced around making sure no people were around. "Listen Punky, I want, no I need that book and I don't want to have to force you." Seeing what Daisy was getting at Rosie suddenly said, "Earth Crystal Power!" and transformed. "Waters Crystal Power!" Both girls looked like princesses, about to attack this man. "You.....you.....crystals...." Was all he managed to say. Daisy clawed the book from his fingers saying, "Oh you have read the book then?" They ran out laughing as the scared man fainted. They jumped over a wall and headed to Nintenda's house. Rosalina kicked the door open and saw Nintenda and Mario kissing on the couch. "UGH!" Daisy yelled throwing the book at them. "Get a ROOM!" Mario smiled smugly, catching the book. "We already had one, until you kicked the door in." Rosalina returned to normal with Daisy and then the studying began. The pair had gotten 53 books related to the Goddess. And the hoped the secrets lied within one. They each grabbed a book and began speed-reading. Daisy smiled as they flipped through books. Having superpowers wasn't so bad, especially since they all could anything ten times faster and better than an average human. Peach and Luigi soon arrived with 20 more books and some old newspapers and drawings along with it. Apparently they did more searching than loving. The super-powered teens worked harder than any test they'd ever taken. Figuring out the secrets about the crystals would help them know why this was happening. |
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| ♫PeaceLoveNintendo♫ | Nov 19 2008, 11:17 PM Post #125 |
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I'll be your Princess if you be my Toad <3
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Awsome! I'm glad you came back! |
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| Deleted User | Nov 20 2008, 05:40 PM Post #126 |
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More! |
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| Deleted User | Nov 21 2008, 09:57 PM Post #127 |
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Luv it. Heaps glad you're back. Keep writing! |
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| Deleted User | Nov 22 2008, 06:08 AM Post #128 |
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Yeah write more read my fan-fic Mushroom Kingdom ten years later I am on Chapter 2 right now. |
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| GoombaHead | Nov 22 2008, 12:40 PM Post #129 |
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Power Star!
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I can't wait for ch 15! This is better than my fanfic. |
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| Deleted User | Nov 25 2008, 04:25 AM Post #130 |
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I wise person once told me (Guinea Pig) Do not put yourself down like that. I wrote the same thing once. Anyway, if you think this is better, then look at it. See what makes it different to yours. See what you enjoyed in this story, that lacks in yours, and then apply it to yours. Thats how we all learn, but don't ever give up. It's nice to compliment others, but you shouldn't say that you are worse than them. Instead, say that you really enjoyed it. Something like that. Peach Fan (P.S. If you think this is a looong lecture, I can tell you I've heard worse) (P.P.S. This story is good GG. Keep writing. |
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| GoombaHead | Nov 29 2008, 10:36 PM Post #131 |
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Power Star!
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It may be long but I was thinking more like encouraging there when I typed the post. Keep writing. |
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| Deleted User | Jan 7 2009, 06:34 PM Post #132 |
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I feel like such a leech. Hah. I'll begin posting the next chapter after I recollect. Scarlet Diaries is also getting a new chapter if you'd like to check that out. And look at all the typos in the last chapter! *gag* I'll need to fix that too. **GG** |
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| GoombaHead | Jan 7 2009, 06:54 PM Post #133 |
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Power Star!
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I will be waiting as a happy reader! (waits) |
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| Deleted User | Jan 7 2009, 07:00 PM Post #134 |
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May I join in? *waits* |
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| GoombaHead | Jan 7 2009, 07:01 PM Post #135 |
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Power Star!
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Ok!!!!! Not one, but two happy readers waiting! I hope it comes today, I'm impateint. |
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